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Whitmer
Science
Fair
Manual
Compiled through the combined efforts of the
Science Department
Whitmer High School
Toledo, OH 43613
Gerald Dunaway (Ret.)
Mark Figliomeni
Jodi Fryman-Reed
Jane Gomersall (Ret.)
Lorie Johnson
Bernadette Terry
Table of Contents
Goals
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Time Line
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What science fair projects should be
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Selecting a Topic and Problem Statements
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Project Categories
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Mentors
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How Parents Can Help
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Literature Review and Science Article Summaries
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Plagiarism
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Hypotheses
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Experiment
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Ethics and Safety
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Animal Handling Guidelines
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Log Book/Research Journal
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How to Write a Scientific Research Paper
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Display/Science Fair Board
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Oral Presentation
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Judging Criteria
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Northwest District Science Day Rules
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District Awards
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Grading Check Sheets
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Goals
п‚· To give students the opportunity to conduct scientific research
using available resources.
п‚· To give students the opportunity to display their talents and
provide recognition of their work.
п‚· To provide students with an opportunity to gain confidence in
setting and accomplishing realistic, individual goals.
п‚· To provide students with an opportunity to exchange, both
orally and in writing, scientific data with other students,
teachers, parents, and the community.
п‚· To have students gain valuable research, problem solving, and
communication skills.
п‚· To gain awareness of and participate in the development of
science and technology policies and the utilization of science in
everyday life.
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Time Line
September
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review science fair book and view samples
select topic
propose research question
begin research on topic
find a mentor
science article summaries
research plan
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gather materials for experiment
set up log book
continue research on topic
conduct experiment
make entries in log book
develop outline for paper
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continue experiment
log book check
mid-project conference
work on rough draft of paper
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finish experiment
make final entries in log book
analyze results
draw conclusions based on data
TURN IN ROUGH DRAFT
draft of board design
pick up science fair display board
gather supplies needed for display board
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make revisions to rough draft
TURN IN FINAL PAPER
work on display board
prepare oral presentation to be given in class
TURN IN COMPETED DISPLAY BOARD
ORAL PRESENTATIONS
January 11, 2012
• all projects on display for Whitmer Science Fair
• each student presents project to a judge
March 10, 2012
• UT District Science Fair Day
May 5, 2012
• State Science Fair Day
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Science Fair Projects
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art projects based on scientific topics
book reports
information copied from encyclopedias
models and mock-ups without further investigation
collections without further research
simple answers to problems without further explanation
Science Fair Projects
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problem centered
inquiry oriented
based on using the processes of science to solve problems
a controlled experiment
based on easily accessible and often simple materials
testing of hypotheses
collecting data
recording data
based on conclusions from collected data
able to be replicated by others
repeated experiments to verify results
preparing a research paper
preparing an exhibit
making a presentation
exploring the unknown
knowing you have reached a goal
experiencing how to live with ambiguity
not always knowing the answers
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Getting Started
Selecting a Topic
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Choose a topic you are interested in
Choose a topic you like
Choose a topic your parents will approve of
Narrow down the topic to a single aspect
Plan ahead of time to allow for completion
Have teacher approval for the entire project
Make arrangements for all needed materials
Be original – do not do a redundant project
Choose a topic that has realistic implications
Use all available resources as sources for ideas
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Problem Statement
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Gives direction
Is reasonable – able to be investigated through the collection and
analysis of data
Has theoretical or practical significance
Should include the variables of interest, the relationship between the
variables, and the subjects involved
Included in the introduction section of your paper along with a
justification for the problem, its significance, etc.
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Project Categories
Behavioral and Social Science:
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Science that studies human psychology, behavior, and development.
Studies of attitudes, behaviors, or values of a society or groups within a
society, and of the influences of society on group behavior. Studies of
learning, memory, and perception in humans. Studies of the effects of
chemical or physical stress on cognition.
Examples of topics in this category include subliminal perception, optical
illusions, trigger of fear, learned behavior, effect of color on choice,
pecking order, group size, and the interaction of different senses.
Biochemistry:
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The branch of chemistry relating to the processes and
physical properties of living organisms.
Topics might include: properties and reactions of carbohydrates, lipids,
proteins, enzymes, vitamins, hormones, poisons, and drugs. As well as,
the chemistry of adsorption, digestion, metabolism, respiration, and
photosynthesis.
Botany:
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Science that deals with plants with reference to their structure,
reproduction, physiology, growth, classification, and disease.
Some topics included in this category are: specialization in
plants, functions of various plant structures, reproduction, and
heredity.
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Study of matter, its composition and its interactions. Includes
inorganic and organic matter, natural and man-altered materials.
Some examples of projects in this category might include:
materials, plastics, fuels, pesticides, metallurgy and soil chemistry.
Earth and Space:
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Studies in geology, seismology, weather, marine geology, coastal
processes, mineralogy, oceanography, meteorology,
climatology, petrology, soils, volcanoes, fossils,
atmosphere, hydrology, natural resources, astronomy,
including the universe, galaxies, stars, the sun, planets,
earth and moon interactions, and comets.
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Environmental Sciences:
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The study of the interactions of organisms with one another
and their physical surroundings.
Topics include: biomes, interaction between biotic and
abiotic factors, food chains, food webs, cycles in nature
(water, nitrogen, etc.), population growth, symbiotic
relationships, greenhouse effect, pollution, conservation,
aquatic ecology, and terrestrial ecology.
Medicine and Health:
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The study of disciplines such as medicine, dentistry, ophthalmology,
nutrition, speech, hearing, and related areas of science.
Some topics may include: laboratory medicine and techniques,
histology (study of tissues), cytology (study of cells), causes of
diseases, effect of diet on health, any and all bodily processes
such as digestion, excretion, reproduction, respiration,
circulation of blood, nerve impulses, and the effect of hormones.
Microbiology:
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The study of the activities and effects of microorganisms, such as
algae, fungi, protozoan, virus and bacteria as related to their life
processes.
Topics include: the structure and physiology of microorganisms,
bacteria in milk, water or soil, growth rates, identity of organisms.
Physics:
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Studies of the physical properties of matter, light, acoustics, and thermal
properties.
For example: forces on a falling object, trajectory of an
object, electrical circuits, optics, acoustics,
thermodynamics, semi-conductors, magnetism, quantum
mechanics, biophysics and mechanics.
Zoology:
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The science that deals with animals in reference to their structure,
functions, development, evolution, and classification.
Topics in this area include: structural and functional studies of
vertebrates and invertebrates, physiology, heredity, and
embryology.
NOTE: Use of vertebrate organisms will require the mentorship of
an animal care specialist.
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Choosing a Mentor
One of the first steps after you have chosen
a topic for your project is to find an outside
resource – a mentor – to aid you in
developing your Science Fair Project.
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be a source of expertise and encouragement
NOT be the sole source of information utilized by the student
come from a community resource, such as:
The University of Toledo
Lourdes College
Bowling Green State University
Local Industry
County Health Department
Local Hospitals
Local Doctors, Nurses, Dentists, Optometrists, etc.
Local Nursery, Landscape, or Farming Professionals
Other People who are knowledgeable about the project
(with approval of your teacher)
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Help!
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Feeling overwhelmed?
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It is not uncommon for professional researchers to seek advice from
others! Students may also need some help.
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You may need help with equipment, statistical computations, content,
library resources, etc.
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Teachers
Parents
Professionals in the field
Librarians
Universities
Naturalists
Doctors and Nurses
Veterinarians
Ohio Department of Natural
Resources
Toledo Zoo
and many, many more
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Be familiar with your topic before asking for help.
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Set up an appointment with the person you are seeking help from. Write
down questions before the appointment.
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If you contact someone you don’t know be sure to be prompt, dress
appropriately, and thank the person for his or her help. A thank you letter
might be appropriate.
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DON’T BE AFRAID TO ASK FOR HELP!!!!
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How Parents Can Help
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There are many ways in which parents can get involved in their son or
daughter’s research project!!!!
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Parents may be a valuable resource and may provide expertise on the
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Parents may assist their student by helping to locate or furnish supplies.
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Transportation – trips to the library, to resource people, to supplies, etc.
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Help your student to find a place where they can work, keep supplies and
experimental equipment, and/or find access to a reliable computer and
printer.
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Be positive about your child’s work. Encouragement from the parents goes
a long way!
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Allow your son or daughter to work on his or her own, to make mistakes,
try new things, plan different approaches, but at the same time be there
when they ask for help.
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Remind your student of deadlines.
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Proof read the drafts and final copies of the paper.
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Have them give their oral presentation to you for
practice.
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Go to the Science Fair! Take pictures!
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Be proud of all the hard work your son
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Any assistance you give is greatly
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Review of Related Literature
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Literature review is done to determine what
research has already been completed, to avoid
unnecessary duplication, and to provide guidance.
A literature review is especially helpful in
identifying potential research strategies,
procedures, instrumentation, and facilitating the
interpretation of the results.
When do you have enough? Don’t include
everything you find. You probably have enough
when there is a duplication of reference citations.
You need to have at least ten different sources.
The literature review section is approximately 20%
of your final paper. Thorough research is critical!
A Note About the
Information Superhighway…
It is very important to recognize that NOT all Internet sites contain
reliable, accurate information. Internet web pages should NOT be your sole
source of information. When web pages are used, ensure that the site is
reliable by making sure that the site address ends in .org (for organization) or
.edu (for educational institution). Many encyclopedias and databases are also
available online. A great place to start your research is to go to the Toledo
Lucas County Library at http://www.toledolibrary.com You will need a valid
library card to access most of this site.
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Can You Trust This Site?
Ask yourself questions like these ...
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Consider the source.
How did you hear about the site?
Did someone recommend the site?
Has the site won any awards?
What organization is sponsoring the site?
Why do you think the site exists?
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Is the site up-to-date?
How old is the information?
How often is the site updated?
Do the links still work?
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Double-check the information.
Who is the author of what you are reading?
Where did the author get the information?
Is the information someone’s opinion or do you think the site presents
facts?
How does the information compare with what you have learned from
books?
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Think about the quality.
Is the information clearly presented and well organized?
Is it easy to navigate?
Are the graphics so extensive that you waste time while it’s loading?
Is the information concise enough to be printed?
Adapted from ―Creative Classroom‖ Courtesy of the Whitmer Library
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Need Information?
Whitmer Library & Science Library
Card Catalog – for books in our Library
Reader’s Guide to Periodical Literature
INFOHIO – www.infohio.org
username: infohio
password: explore
EBSCO – for magazines and newspaper articles on current topics in
the news
AccessScience - science dictionary, encyclopedia articles, current
research arranged by topic, scientist biographies
Britannica - online encyclopedia
NewsBank - 30 full text newspapers providing state, regional and
national coverage
Oxford Reference - dictionaries, quotations, maps and illustrations,
timelines, encyclopedia, subject reference
SIRS discoverer - for articles on animals, environment, health,
science, technology, and more
Medline Plus - health information
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Websites that may be Helpful!
The following websites contain:
1. the rules, forms, dates, and deadlines for district and state science fairs
2. websites for research materials
п‚· The University of Toledo
www.eeescience.utoledo.edu - link to Science Day
www.cl.utoledo.edu - University of Toledo Carlson Library
п‚· Intel ISEF - international science and engineering fair
www.sciserv.org/isef/
www.sciserv.org/isef/primer links to projects, rules, suggestions
п‚· The Ohio Academy of Science www.ohiosci.org
link to State Science Day – Ohio State University
link to Science Day Standards, Guide, and much more
 Toledo Lucas County Public Library – www.toledolibrary.org
п‚· Graphing Data - create-a-graph site
http://nces.ed.gov/nceskids/createagraph/
п‚· Citation Machine - formatting for reference page
www.citationmachine.net
п‚· Highwire Press - research articles from professional journals
http://highwire.stanford.edu/
п‚· OPRR Human Subject Protections
http://www.hhs.gov/ohrp/assurances/assurances_index.html
п‚· Ohio Science Education and Research Association (OSERA) humane use of animal subjects
www.osera.org
п‚· American Association For Laboratory Animal Science
www.aalas.org/
п‚· Animal Welfare Information Center
www.nal.usda.gov/awic
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Science Article Summary
Before you begin your science fair project you will be thoroughly
researching your topic. It is required that you obtain information from at least
TEN different sources. These sources may include books, magazines or
periodicals, interviews with experts, and electronic sources. Be sure to focus
on research journals.
Your instructor will ask you to turn in six
summaries of sources that you have found for
your project, (approximately one summary per
week for six weeks). These Science Article
Summaries (SAS) will count as a grade. These
summaries will help you begin to organize your
research as you prepare to write your science
fair paper. Each summary must be typed in 12
point font and be double-spaced. A complete
copy of the article or passage must be turned in
with your SAS.
1. Two to four paragraphs summarizing pertinent parts of the article
(written in the 3rd person)
2. One concluding paragraph tying source in with your experiment
(written in the 1st person)
3. complete bibliographic information for this source
4. 3–5 new words that you found in the articles and their definitions
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Plagiarism and Referencing
in a Scientific Paper
WHAT IS PLAGIARISM?
Plagiarism means using another’s work without giving credit. You must put
the other person’s words in quotation marks, and cite your source(s). Also
give citations when using another person’s ideas, even if those ideas are
paraphrased in your own words.
A ―Work‖ includes original ideas, research, art, graphics, computer programs,
music, etc. It may also consist of writing, charts, pictures, graphs, diagrams,
data, websites, or other communication or recording media.
A ―Source‖ includes published works (books, magazines, newspapers,
websites, plays, photos, and textbooks) and unpublished sources (class
lectures, notes, or even interviews).
Plagiarism is dishonest
because it presents the work
of another as your own.
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Plagiarism Quiz
Most students know that plagiarism involves stealing someone
else's work and pretending that it is your own. Most also know
that it is wrong. That's where the clarity ends. Test your own
knowledge of what is and is not plagiarism. Answer True or
False to the questions below.
1. Plagiarism involves copying something without giving any credit.
2. Copying information and text from the Internet is not considered plagiarism.
3. It is not plagiarism if you copy the material yourself, in your own handwriting.
4. It is possible to plagiarize someone's ideas, even if you don't copy the person's
words.
5. Plagiarism is a crime. Plagiarists can even go to jail.
6. By law, a person can be fined up to $50,000 for plagiarism.
7. In some cases, students who plagiarize can flunk class or be expelled from school.
8. Writing your name on a paper written by someone else and turning it in is wrong,
but it is not plagiarism.
9. Forgetting to put quotation marks around words that someone else said or wrote is
an honest mistake and not plagiarism.
10. When you copy material from another source, changing one or two words is
enough to avoid plagiarism.
11. When you copy word-for-word from another source, it is important to put the
words in quotation marks and cite where the information came from.
12. To avoid plagiarizing it is important to paraphrase any research in your own words.
13. You are guilty of plagiarism only when you knowingly copy someone else's work.
14. You are free to copy any material that does not have a copyright symbol В© on it.
15. Teachers have web sites and computer programs that tell them if students have
plagiarized or not.
Obtained from:
DiPrince, Dawn. Twisting Arms: Teaching Students How to Write to Persuade. Fort Collins, Colorado: Cottonwood
Press, Inc., 2005, by way of Mrs. Holly Farthing, Washington Junior High.
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Developing Your Hypothesis
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A hypothesis is a statement of what the researcher expects to
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A hypothesis should state precisely what is to be tested.
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A hypothesis is a tentative explanation for certain behavior,
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A hypothesis should state the expected relationship between
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A hypothesis must be testable.
You cannot prove a hypothesis;
you can however, support one with
evidence in the form of data.
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Materials
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Experiment
Obtain all the materials you will need before you
begin to experiment.
Your list should be complete and specific:
CORRECT
12 coleus plants – 15 cm tall
10 mL H2O, every other day
300 g vermiculate
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soil
Materials should be easily obtainable.
Science ―kits‖ are NOT advised for experiments.
Materials should not pose a safety hazard to the researcher or to others.
(See the information on safety.)
Use of vertebrate organisms is discouraged. (See information on living
organisms.)
It may be necessary to order materials that cannot be obtained locally
from a biological supply company. This might include items such as
bacteria cultures, fruit flies, or certain chemicals. Decisions concerning
quantities and cost will be made at the discretion of the Whitmer Science
Department faculty.
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Do the experiment more than once.
Always have more than one control group and one variable or treatment
group.
Survey 200 people or more – 1000 is better. Grow 20 plants – the more,
the better. Use 50 seeds, etc.
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when using human or live animal subjects minimize risks
ensure the personal integrity of the researcher
be aware of school and district policies concerning research
when using human subjects ensure confidentiality
when using human subjects obtain informed consent from the individual
before doing any research
Safety -
Projects are totally poster displays
The following items cannot be displayed:
п‚· any corrosive, caustic, or dangerous chemicals
п‚· any combustible solids, liquids, or gases, open flames or matches
п‚· any organisms (either dead or alive) including animals, animal
parts, plants, plant parts, fungi, protists or culture plates
п‚· any hypodermic needles or syringes
п‚· no equipment or apparatus, including electricity, wiring or cords
п‚· no materials, except photos, may be fastened to the display boards
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ONLY research reports and log books are allowed in front of the display
The score of a student's project will be impacted or the project disqualified
by the violation(s) if the rules are not followed.
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Animal Project Rules
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NO live animals maybe exhibited at the fair. Drawings, toy animals,
charts, or graphs may be used to illustrate the conditions, development,
and results of the project.
Photographs of surgical techniques, dissection, autopsies, and/or other
laboratory techniques may not be displayed on the student’s exhibit, but
may be contained in an accompanying notebook.
A lower form of life, rather than a higher form, should be selected for the
project whenever possible. Students are strongly urged to select
invertebrate animals, plants, or tissue cultures.
All projects involving animals must be preplanned and conducted with
respect for life and the humane needs and rights of the animal involved.
These considerations must extend to the disposition of the animals after
the conclusion of the project.
Animals must be obtained through a reliable source.
All animals must be assured appropriate comfortable quarters, adequate
food and water, cleanliness, humane treatment, lighting, humidity,
temperature, and exercise as required for each species. Including over
weekends and vacations.
―Vertebrate animals‖ include vertebrate embryos and fetuses; and fowl
embryos within three days of hatching.
A qualified adult supervisor must assume responsibility for the conditions
of all living animals used.
When planning the project students must arrange for the humane
disposition of all animals involved after the project is complete. Animals
may be placed in an environment that assures them of continued humane
care; by releasing wild species into a suitable wildlife environment; or by
arranging for their humane euthanasia by a qualified adult.
Students are NOT to perform euthanasia on any animal under any
circumstance.
All appropriate forms must be completed prior to experimentation.
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Research Journal or Log Book
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A research journal should be a bound notebook or binder. It should be
something that will allow you to hold onto important information without
losing pages.
The following items may be found in a research journal: topic, hypothesis,
references, equipment needed, procedures, data, and dates of when the
data was collected.
All measurements must be in metric units; i.e.
meters, liters, grams, etc.
Write down the data as you measure them. It will
be impossible for you to remember the data or
measurements at a later time.
Video recordings, photographs, and tape
recordings are also valid ways of making and
recording observations.
Setting up Your Research Journal
It is recommended to set up your log book in the following manner:
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project title, your name, date started – date completed
project topic and question to be investigated
hypothesis
site 10 sources from your research (SAS)
list of all equipment and supplies needed to do the project
a step–by–step procedure for your experiment
dated entries outlining your experimental set up and
observations made, i.e. a recording of
all your measurable results during your
experiment (you should make 3 log
entries per week for 6 or more weeks)
a summary of your results, which
may include graphs, charts, tables,
diagrams
a conclusion tying in your results
with your hypothesis
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General Tips for
Writing Research Papers
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Make an outline of the main points to be included in your paper.
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Several revisions will be required. Rewrite, rewrite, rewrite. Your
first draft is NOT your last. Constantly backup work so changes can be
made more easily.
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You should avoid: subjective statements, overstatements, emotional
statements, and first person (I decided to ...). The report should be in
the third person.
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Avoid ―intelligent-sounding‖ wording. Write to inform, not impress.
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NO SPELLING OR GRAMMATICAL ERRORS!!! (Do not rely on the
computer to fix everything.)
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Get to the point – don’t keep the reader in suspense. It is understandable
to want to include everything. You worked hard on this project. However,
all that is needed are the facts. Don’t make the report skimpy, but don’t
make it too wordy either.
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Keep graphs, tables, and charts fairly simple – don’t confuse the reader.
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Do not mix the results (data) and the discussion section of the report.
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Computer generated graphs or charts are generally better than hand
made graphs or charts.
10. PROOFREAD YOUR PAPER! Proofread more then once. Have at least
one other person (parents, teachers, other students, etc.) read it
carefully. Reference the grading rubric as you proof your paper. Have you
met all the requirements? Included all sections? Have things in the
correct order and in the correct format?
The "How to write a scientific research paper" section is a
compilation of information from the following sources:
http://www.uaf.edu/csem/ashsss/paper_guidelines.html
http://abacus.bates.edu/~ganderso/biology/resources/writing/HTWtoc.html
http://classweb.gmu.edu/biologyresources/writingguide/ScientificPaper.htm
http://www.ruf.rice.edu/~bioslabs/tools/report/reportform.html
Patten, M.L. (2004). Understanding research methods. Glendale, CA: Pyrczak Publishing.
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How to Write a
Scientific Research Paper
Writing is easy. All you do is stare at a blank sheet of paper until drops of blood
form on your forehead. --- Gene Fowler
Scientists frequently communicate the results of their work in research
reports. They tell others what study they performed, why they did it, what
they discovered, and what it means. Regardless of the specific discipline
involved, all research reports follow a general format:
Title Page, Abstract, Introduction and Literature Review, Methods,
Results, Discussion, Conclusion, Acknowledgments, Literature Cited and
Appendices.
General Style
Your paper should follow this format, be neatly typed, using 12 point font,
printed with a letter quality printer, and carefully edited. Your paper should
not exceed 20 pages, not including appendices, tables, and figures nor should
it be less than 6 pages. Text should be double spaced on 8 1/2" x 11" paper
with 1 inch margins, and printed on one side only. Number pages
consecutively.
Person and Tense
The majority of your paper should be in the THIRD person (he, she, it, or
they). Do NOT use I, mine, me, my, you, your, us, or we in your paper. Your
paper should be written in the PAST tense.
Main Section Headings
Each section of the paper should be clearly labeled with a section title. Each
main section of the paper begins with a heading which should be capitalized,
centered at the beginning of the section, and double spaced from the lines
above and below. Do not underline the section heading OR put a colon
at the end.
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Title Page
The title page should include the title, your full name, date, course and
school. Make the title of your study concise, descriptive, and informative.
Your title should indicate the nature of your research.
The title is not a section, but it is necessary and important. The title should be
short and unambiguous, yet be an adequate description of the work. A
general rule-of-thumb is that the title should contain the key words describing
the work presented. For example, in a paper reporting on an experiment
involving dosing mice with the hormone estrogen and watching for a certain
kind of courtship behavior, a poor title would be:
Mouse Behavior
Why? It is very general, and could be referring to any of a number of mouse
behaviors. A better title would be:
The Effects of Estrogen on the Nose-Twitch Courtship Behavior in Mice
Why? Because the key words identify a specific behavior, a modifying agent,
and the experimental organism. If possible, give the key result of the study in
the title, as seen in the first example. Similarly, the above title could be
restated as:
Estrogen Stimulates Intensity of Nose-Twitch Courtship Behavior in Mice
Estrogen Stimulates Intensity of Nose-Twitch
Courtship Behavior in Mice
John Smith
Honors Biology
Whitmer High School
February 4, 2009
Mr. Jones
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Table of Contents
Typically a research report that is published in a scientific journal would not
have a table of contents. Your paper, however, must have a table of contents.
The following is the suggested order of your paper:
first page:
Title Page (this page is not numbered)
second page:
Table of Contents (this page is not numbered)
third page:
Abstract (this page is not numbered)
page 1:
Introduction
page 2-5:
Literature Review
Table of Contents
page 6–8:
Methods
page 9-12:
Results
Introduction
Discussion
Literature Review
Conclusion
Methods
Acknowledgements
Results
Literature Cited
Discussion
page 13–14
Appendices
Conclusion
Style
The table of contents should be on a page
separate from the rest of your report and
should be double spaced. Each of the section
headings should be listed in order. Page
numbers should be lined up along the right.
Do NOT write the word page in front of each
number. Include only the page each section
heading appears on. Do not list the title page,
table of contents, or abstract, even though
these are part of your paper.
1
2
7
9
10
11
Acknowledgments
12
Literature Cited
13
Appendices
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How to Write an Abstract
The abstract is the reader's first encounter with your paper, and is the chief
means by which scientists decide which research reports to read in their
entirety. The abstract should provide a brief summary of the findings of the
paper, and should be a stand-alone document that can be understood without
reading the paper.
The abstract is a very brief overview of your ENTIRE study. It tells the reader
WHAT you did, WHY you did it, HOW you did it, WHAT you found, and WHAT
it means. The abstract should briefly state the purpose of the research
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(introduction), how the problem was studied (methods), the principal findings
(results), and what the findings mean (discussion and conclusion). It is
important to be descriptive but concise--say only what is essential, using
no more words than necessary to convey meaning. The abstract must be
single spaced! Your abstract should contain no more than 150 words making
up one paragraph. The abstract should be written in the PAST TENSE. The
abstract is usually the last part of the research paper to be written.
Abstract Worksheet Example
The Abstract Worksheet that follows may be used to help you prepare the
first draft of your abstract. The sequence of sentences in the Abstract
Worksheet is ordered in a logical fashion, beginning with an introduction and
followed by your hypothesis, methods, results, discussion, and conclusion.
Think of the most important items that crystallize each part of your project.
Leave out unimportant details. Use the Abstract Worksheet, to write one or
two sentences that summarize each section. For your final draft, make sure
the abstract "flows" logically. Give it to a friend to read. Ask them to tell you
what they think you actually did and what you found. Revise as necessary.
Below you will find an example of a completed abstract worksheet.
Introduction
The food habits of larval butterflies of two related species from a zone of
overlap near Oil City, PA were examined.
Hypothesis
The theory of competitive exclusion predicts that food habits of closely related
species should not overlap significantly where species occur together.
Methods
Transects in five different habitats were used to determine food and habitat
preferences in wild populations. Two species of captive caterpillars were
offered various food in the laboratory; weight changes of foods and
caterpillars were determined daily.
Results
Food habits in overlapping habitats were significantly different between the
two species (ANOVA p= 0.001). Food habits in non-overlapping habitats were
not significantly different (ANOVA p= 0.52).
Discussion
These species are able to coexist because they are not competing for the
same, and limiting, food resources in the same area.
Conclusion
These results support the theory of competitive exclusion because the two
species did not use the same food resources from similar habitats.
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Abstract Worksheet
Use one or two concise sentences to summarize the most important aspects
of your project for each section listed below.
Introduction (What is this project about? Why is this project interesting or
important?)
Hypothesis (What did you think you would find? Why?)
Methods (Briefly explain your procedure.)
Results (What did you find when you performed your experiment?)
Discussion (Are your results consistent with your initial hypothesis? Why or
why not?)
Conclusion (What is your interpretation of what these results mean? Why
should anyone become excited about or interested in your findings?)
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Introduction
The purpose of an introduction is to acquaint the reader with the rationale
behind the work. It places your work in a theoretical context, and enables the
reader to understand and appreciate your objectives.
What problem did you investigate? Why is
this subject important? What hypotheses
did you test? Based upon your reading,
what results did you anticipate, and
why? To answer this last question, some
library research will be necessary. As
you include information from other sources
to explain what is currently known about the
topic, be sure to cite these references in
the body of your paper. Assume that the reader
is scientifically literate, but may not be familiar with
the specifics of your study.
General Style
Use past tense except when referring to established facts. Organize your
ideas, making one major point with each paragraph. If you make four points,
you will need a minimum of four paragraphs. Present background
information only as needed in order to support a position. The reader
does not want to read everything you know about a subject. This section
should be double spaced.
Structure
The structure of the introduction can be thought of as an inverted triangle the broadest part at the top representing the most general information and
focusing down to the specific problem you studied. Present the more general
aspects of the topic early, narrow toward more specific information that
provides context, and finally arrive at your statement of purpose and
rationale. A good way to get on track is to sketch out the introduction
backwards.
Begin by clearly identifying the subject area of interest
Do this by using key words from your title in the first few sentences of the
introduction to get it focused directly on topic. This insures that you get to the
primary subject matter quickly without losing focus, or discussing information
that is too general.
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Literature Review
Why do I have to write a literature review?
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The literature review helps to identify possible hypotheses.
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You may be able to avoid dead ends.
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You may find measuring tools or procedures that were
used successfully by other researchers and avoid those
that are seriously flawed.
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You can learn how to write research reports by paying
careful attention to the style and organization used by
authors of published research. Notice how research reports
are written. The importance of reading large numbers of research reports
cannot be overstated. Students who ignore this advice are likely to
struggle with both the organization and wording of their reports and
despite their best efforts produce a mediocre report.
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A well crafted review of research shows your readers the context within
which you were working. It can also help to justify your study if you use it
to establish the importance of your topic and show how your research
flows from important research conducted by established researchers.
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The literature review demonstrates to your instructor that you were able
to locate research relevant to your hypothesis, evaluate the literature,
use it in planning your research, and to cite it appropriately.
What literature should you look for in your review?
Focus your efforts on research journals - the
journals that publish original research. Although
you may read some background references (lab
manuals, encyclopedias, articles, general
textbooks, etc.) to get yourself acquainted with
the subject matter, do not cite these, because
they contain information that is considered
fundamental or "common" knowledge within the
discipline. Cite, instead, articles that report
specific results relevant to your study. The
articles listed in the Reference section of relevant
papers you find are a good starting point to move
backwards in a line of inquiry.
Establish the context by providing a brief and balanced review of the
pertinent published literature that is available on the subject
The key is to summarize, for the reader, what was known about the specific
problem before you did your study. This is accomplished with a general
review of the primary research literature with citations.
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Suggestions for Writing a Literature Review:
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Each paragraph in a literature review
should be organized around a topic. In
order to promote clarity of
communication, authors of scientific
writing typically make the first sentence
of each paragraph the topic sentence.
When a number of authors have made
the same point, they should be grouped
together in a single reference citation.
Because direct quotations break the flow
of a presentation, they should be used
sparingly.
Example: (Prevalence of Alcohol Use by Adolescents)
During the transition from adolescence to adulthood, developmental activities such as
testing limits, becoming independent, and making autonomous decisions may be manifest
in alcohol use (Baumrind, 1987). Indeed, most initiation of alcohol use occurs during
adolescence (Daughton, Daughton, & Patil, 1997). In a survey of 284 high school seniors,
84% reported a history of alcohol use (Daughton et al., 1997). Chen and Kandel (1995)
found that by age 19, 88% of students reported alcohol use. According to Johnston,
O’Malley, and Bachman (1989, 1991), 90% of students have consumed alcohol by the
time they are seniors in high school. In a study of more than 1,000 students, Kelly and
Edwards (1998) found that 62% of 7th-grade, 87% of 9th-grade, and 95% of 11th-grade
students reported having consumed alcohol.
Be sure to clearly state the purpose of your investigation
It is common to place the statement of purpose near the end of this section,
often as the topic sentence of the final paragraph. It is not necessary to use
the word "hypothesis," if you clearly state your purpose and expectations.
State the hypothesis precisely - do not oversimplify.
Example: "Our objective was to determine if the relationship between legumes and
nitrogen-fixing bacteria is species-specific. We hypothesized that legumes would grow
best when infected by the same Rhizobium species that it occurs within the field."
Provide a clear statement of the rationale for your approach
State briefly how you approached the problem. This will usually follow your
statement of purpose in the last paragraph of this section. Why did you
choose this kind of experiment or experimental design? What are the
scientific merits of this particular approach? What advantages does it confer
in answering the particular question(s) you are posing? Do not discuss here
the actual techniques or protocols used in your study.
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How to Cite Sources in the
Literature Review
It is important to cite sources in the literature section of
your paper as evidence of the claims you are making.
There are ways of citing sources in the text so that the
reader can find the full reference at the end of the
paper, yet the flow of the reading is not interrupted.
Below are some examples of how this can be done:
In the text, the last name(s) for a reference can be made the subject of the
sentence, as in Example 1 (emphasizes authorship), or referred to
parenthetically, as in Example 2 (emphasizes the content).
Example 1: "Doe (2004) has pointed out that despite being a relatively new field of inquiry;
managerial sociology has made important contributions to our understanding of this issue."
Example 2: "Despite being a relatively new field of inquiry, managerial sociology has made
important contributions to our understanding of this issue (Doe, 2004)."
Making the authors’ surnames the subjects of sentences is helpful when you
want to compare and contrast the findings (or thoughts) of two or more
authors.
Example 3: "While Lopez (2003) reported that X increased as a function of Y, Jones (2004)
reported no increase. The reason for this discrepancy is difficult to determine. However,
Jones used a larger sample and better..."
It is a good idea to group authors together when they make a common point.
However, long strings of references for a single point should be avoided. To
do this, use the abbreviation ―e.g.,‖ meaning ―for example,‖ which is done in
Example 4. Note that the author points out there are more studies but is
citing only some of the most important ones. Note also that the three sources
are ordered by publication date, so that the earliest citation comes first.
Example 4: "The superiority of X over Y in the treatment of Z has been widely reported in
the literature. The strongest evidence to date has been obtained by numerous researchers
who have used large, national samples (e.g., Solis, 2001; Wong, 2002; Smith & West, 2003;
Brett, 2004). These studies tend to confirm the principle that..."
Note that articles by one or two authors are always cited in the text using
their last names. However, if there are more than two authors, the last name
of the first author is given followed by the abbreviation et al. which is Latin
for "and others".
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Example 5: "Walnut trees are known to be allelopathic.
(Smith, 1949; Bond et al., 1955; Jones and Green, 1963)"
Make sure you give a full citation in the Reference
section for all sources mentioned in the body of
your paper.
Tips for Avoiding Plagiarism
REMEMBER... Know what plagiarism is — ignorance will not excuse a
violation.
Intentional plagiarism is deliberate copying or use of another’s
work without credit. Unintentional plagiarism can result from
not knowing citation standards (―I thought the Internet was
free!‖), from sloppy research and poor note taking, or from
careless ―cutting and pasting" of electronic sources.
Both intentional AND unintentional plagiarism are forms of
academic dishonesty!
Give credit for copied, adapted, or paraphrased material
If you repeat another’s exact words, you MUST use quotation marks and cite
the source. Paraphrase means that you restate the author’s ideas, meaning,
and information in your own words.
Avoid using others' work with minor "cosmetic" changes.
Examples: using ―less‖ for ―fewer‖, reversing the order of a sentence,
changing terms in a computer code, or altering a spread sheet layout. If the
work is essentially the same, give credit.
There are no "freebies".
ALWAYS cite words, information, and ideas you use if they are new to you
(learned in your research). No matter where you find it – even in an
encyclopedia or on the Internet – you cite it!
When in doubt, cite.
Better to be safe than not give credit when you should!
(Adapted with permission from Plagiarism Policy of the University of California – Davis web site:
http://sja.ucdavis.edu)
Answers to plagiarism quiz from p. 19: 1. T, 2. F, 3. F, 4. T, 5. T, 6. T, 7. T, 8. F, 9. F, 10. F, 11. T,
12. T, 13. F, 14. F, 15. T
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Materials and Methods
Function
How did you conduct your study? What equipment did you use? What
procedures did you follow? Relate your procedures in sufficient detail so
that someone else could repeat the experiment. In this section you explain
clearly how you carried out your study in the following general structure:
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subjects used (plant, animal, human, etc.) describe the organism(s)
used in the study. This includes giving the source (supplier or where
and how collected), size, how they were handled before the experiment,
what they were fed, etc. In genetics studies include the strains or
genetic stocks used.
if a field study, a description of the study site, including the physical
and biological features, when and where the study was carried out (if
location and time are important factors) and precise location
describe your experimental design clearly Be sure to include the
hypotheses you tested, controls, treatments, variables measured, how
many replications you made, what you actually measured, and what
form the data take. Always identify treatments by the variable or
treatment name, NOT by an ambiguous, generic name or number (e.g.,
use "2.5% saline" rather than "test 1".)
describe the protocol for your study in sufficient detail that other
scientists could repeat your work to verify your findings. Foremost in
your description should be the "quantitative" aspects of your study - the
masses, volumes, incubation times, concentrations, etc. When using
standard lab or field methods and instrumentation, it is not always
necessary to explain the procedures (e.g., sterile technique) or
equipment used (e.g., autoclave) since other
scientists will likely be familiar with them already.
When using a method described in another
published source, you can save time and words
by referring to it and providing the relevant
citation to the source. Always make sure to
describe any modifications you have made
of a standard or published method.
explain how the data were analyzed
the statistical procedures used; mean,
percent, average, modes, statistical tests,
standard deviation, or any other numerical
or graphical techniques used to analyze
the data.
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Style
Organize your presentation so readers will understand
the logical flow of the experiment. The style in this
section should read as if you were verbally describing the
procedure you employed in conducting your experiment.
DO NOT use first person. Do use the past tense. The
Methods section is not a step-by-step, directive, as you
might see in your lab manual. This section should be
written in narrative, paragraph format, not as a list of
numbered steps, and should not include any results.
Materials should not be listed separately, but should be
included in the description of the methods. Use figures,
if appropriate, to help the reader picture the equipment.
Include criteria for selection if human subjects were
used.
What to Avoid
Problem: The Methods section is prone to being wordy or overly detailed.
Avoid repeatedly using a single sentence to relate a single action; this results
in very lengthy, wordy passages. A related sequence of actions can be
combined into one sentence to improve clarity and readability:
Example: This is a very long and wordy description of a common, simple procedure. It is
characterized by single actions per sentence and lots of unnecessary details.
"The petri dish was placed on the turntable. The lid was then raised slightly. An inoculating
loop was used to transfer culture to the agar surface. The turntable was rotated 90 degrees
by hand. The loop was moved lightly back and forth over the agar to spread the culture. The
bacteria were then incubated at 37В°C for 24 hr."
Improved Example: Same actions, but all the important information is given in a single,
concise sentence. Note that superfluous detail and otherwise obvious information has been
deleted while important missing information was added.
"Each plate was placed on a turntable and streaked at opposing angles with fresh overnight
E. coli culture using an inoculating loop. The bacteria were then incubated at 37В°C for 24 hr."
Problem: You should assume that other scientists have the same basic skills
that you have, but may not know the specific details of your experiment. An
important part of writing a scientific paper is deciding what bits of information
need to be given in detail. Do not quote or cite your laboratory manual!
Example: This is describing a well known procedure in a science lab, namely measuring
liquids.
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"We poured N-free fertilizer solution into a graduated cylinder until the bottom of the
meniscus was at the 30 ml line. We poured the fertilizer onto the top of the soil in a pot and
then repeated this procedure 24 times."
Improved Example: You can assume that a scientist knows how to measure and add liquids
to pots.
"30 ml of N-free fertilizer was added to each of 24 pots."
Materials
п‚· describe materials separately only if the study is so complicated that it
saves space this way
п‚· include specialized chemicals, biological materials, and any equipment
or supplies that are not commonly found in laboratories.
п‚· do not include commonly found supplies such as test tubes, pipettes,
beakers, rulers, thermometer, balance, or Bunsen burner.
Results
General Intent
What did you find? The function of the results section is to
objectively present your key results, without interpretation,
in an orderly and logical sequence using both illustrative
materials (Tables and Figures) and text. The results
section should be organized around a series of tables
and/or figures sequenced to present your key findings in
a logical order. The text of the results section follows this
sequence and highlights the answers to the
questions/hypotheses you investigated. Important negative
results should be reported, too.
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Content
п‚· Summarize your findings in text and illustrate
them, if appropriate, with figures and tables.
п‚· In text, describe each of your results, pointing
the reader to observations that are most
relevant. Key results depend on your question;
they might include obvious trends, important
differences, similarities, correlations,
maximums, minimums, etc.
п‚· Provide a context by describing the question
that was addressed or by making a particular
observation.
Describe results of control experiments and include observations that are
not presented in a formal figure or table, if appropriate.
Report negative results! If you did not get the anticipated results, it
may mean your hypothesis was incorrect or perhaps you have stumbled
onto something unexpected that warrants further
study. Do not fall into the trap of thinking that
results contrary to what you expected are
necessarily "bad data".
Always enter the appropriate units when
reporting data or summary statistics. Likewise
place the unit after the last in a series of
numbers all having the same unit. For
example: "lengths of 5, 10, 15, and 20 m", or
"no differences were observed after 2, 4, 6, or 8
min. of incubation".
What to avoid
п‚· Do not discuss or interpret your results, report background information,
or attempt to explain anything.
п‚· Never include raw data or intermediate calculations in the results
section.
п‚· Do not present the same data more than once.
п‚· Text should complement any figures or tables, not repeat the same
information.
Style
Write the text of the Results section concisely and objectively. Use the past
tense. Avoid repetitive paragraph structures. Do not interpret the data here.
The transition into interpretive language can be slippery.
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Statistics
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The purpose of statistics is to summarize the data.
Graphing data – using a frequency distribution allows a researcher to
―see‖ the distribution of scores or values. Techniques include histograms,
polygons, and bar graphs.
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Central tendency – describes the data with a single number; average or
typical score
a. mode – the value that occurs the most often
b. median – the value that separate the top 50% from the bottom;
the middle score.
example (odd)
50, 100, 150, 350, 350,
example (even)
4, 10, 12, 26 (average the middle two)
11 is the median
c. average or mean (x) – the average of scores
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(150 is the median)
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Discussion
The function of the Discussion section is to
interpret your results in light of what was
already known about the subject of the
investigation, and to explain our new
understanding of the problem after taking
your results into consideration. The
Discussion will connect to the
Introduction by way of the hypothesis
you posed and the literature you cited.
It does not simply repeat or rearrange
the Introduction. Instead, it tells how
your study has moved us forward
from the place you left us at the
end of the Introduction.
It is never appropriate to simply state that the data agreed with expectations,
and let it drop at that. The biggest mistake that students make in discussions
is to present a superficial interpretation that more or less re-states the
results. It is necessary to suggest why results came out as they did, focusing
on the mechanisms behind the observations.
Fundamental questions to answer here include
п‚· What do your results mean?
п‚· Are data consistent with your initial hypothesis?
п‚· Do data support or reject your hypothesis?
п‚· Do you need to revise the hypothesis?
п‚· How do your results compare with the results of other scientists
performing similar experiments?
п‚· Given your conclusions, what is our new understanding of the problem you
investigated and outlined in the Introduction?
What to avoid
Watch out for wordy phrases; do not make statements that are too broad.
You should be concise and make your points clearly. Do not introduce new
results in the Discussion. Limit your conclusions to those that your data can
actually support.
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Conclusion
The conclusion allows you to have the final word on the questions you have
investigated, to summarize your thoughts, to demonstrate the importance of
your ideas, to propel your reader to a new view of the subject, and to
elaborate on the significance of your findings. It is also your opportunity to
make a good final impression and to end on a positive note.
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What conclusions can be drawn from the results of your experiment?
What is the significance of your work?
What is its benefit to mankind?
If there are ambiguities in your results, what further experiments need to
be performed?
What are possible directions for future research?
What additional questions should be investigated?
What are the theoretical implications or practical applications of your work?
Acknowledgments
If you received any significant help in thinking up, designing, or carrying out
your research, or received materials from someone who did you a favor by
supplying them, you should acknowledge the assistance of these individuals:
mentors, financial supporters, teachers, scientists, proofreaders, typists, etc.
You should keep this section brief, but be sure to identify major contributions.
Although usual style requirements (e.g., 1st person, objectivity) are relaxed
somewhat here, Acknowledgments are always brief and never flowery.
Some examples of acknowledgments include: "I
thank Backwoods Paper Company for needed
supplies, research space, and advice..." "I thank
the following for advice and guidance: Mr.
James Sprague (my teacher), Ms. Joy Adams,
Mr. Todd Reed, and Ms. Rita Smith." "I would
like to recognize the following classmates for
their participation as research subjects …"
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Literature Cited
This is the last section of the paper. Here you should provide an alphabetical
listing of all the published work you cited in the text
of the paper. This does not mean every article you
found in your research; only include the works you
actually cited in the text of your paper. All literature
cited in the body of your paper must be listed in
your Literature Cited section and all
references in the list must be cited in the text.
Sources not actually cited should not be included in
the Literature Cited section. (This is different from a
bibliography, in which you list everything you read,
whether or not you actually cited it in your paper.)
WARNING
Failure to cite the work of another scientist (that you used in writing your
paper) results in a serious offense, plagiarism, which is akin to stealing and
can have serious consequences. Therefore, all information that is not from
your experiment and is not "common knowledge" MUST be acknowledged by
a citation. When in doubt, include the citation.
General Style
All types of references should be lumped together before you alphabetize--do
not make separate lists for books, articles, etc. References should be single
spaced and left justified, with additional lines indented five spaces (1/2 inch).
Double-space between references. Works by the same person should be
arranged chronologically by the date of publication. Number the reference
page as a continuation of the research paper.
Notice the following details
п‚· the list is alphabetized by the author's last name
п‚· no first or middle names are listed (initials are used instead)
п‚· only the first word in the title of the journal article (except for proper
nouns) is capitalized
п‚· you really should not include a web site as a reference - anyone can
put just about anything on a web site, and you have no way of knowing
if it is truth or fiction
п‚· do not number the entries
п‚· do not use "p." or "pg." in front of page numbers
п‚· if there are more than two authors, list the primary author and use
et.al. for the other authors
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How to use the Citation Machine
1.
Gather the information you need on your resources.
2.
Go to the citation machine web page.
3.
Select the citation format (APA).
4.
Select the type of resource you are looking at from the two main
categories. (Print or Non-Print)
5.
Fill in the information to the best of your ability. You may want to go back
to your source if there are blanks, since that will affect the overall
accuracy of your citation.
6.
Click on the button at the bottom of the form (submit) to process.
7.
When your results come up PROOFREAD it. Click on the "Return to Form
to Correct any Mistakes" button to edit your results.
8.
Finally, you can copy and paste the resulting citations into your reference
page. You may need to do some minor formatting adjustments.
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www.citationmachine.net
Citing Resources in APA Format
Compliments of the Whitmer Library and Science Resource Center
Use the examples below as a guide when citing resources:
1. Book by one author
author
copyright
title of book
place of publishing
publisher
Godman, A. (2001). Energy supply a-z. Hillside, NJ: Enslow.
2.
Book by two authors
author (1)
author (2)
copyright
title of book
place of publishing
publisher
MacDonald, F., & Bergin, M. (2000). A Greek temple. New York: Bedrick.
3.
Book with no author
title
copyright place of publishing
publisher
Drugs in America (2000). New York: H.W. Wilson.
4.
Signed magazine article
author
date
title of article
periodical
volume pages
Reilly, R. (1999, Sept 18). Writing as contemplation. America, 15 16-18.
5.
Unsigned magazine article
title of article
date
periodical
volume
pages
Uniform improvements. (1999, October). Psychology Today, 4 35.
6.
Signed encyclopedia article
author
copyright ed.
title of article
encyclopedia
volume
Wanatee, D. (2001). Black Hawk. In World Book Encyclopedia vol. 25,
48-52. Chicago: World Book.
pages
7.
place of publication
publisher
Unsigned encyclopedia article
title of article copyright ed.
encyclopedia
volume
pages
place of publication
Llama. (2002). In World Book encyclopedia vol. 25, 125-126. Chicago:
World Book.
publisher
8.
Pamphlet with no author
title of pamphlet
date
publisher
page
Chemical Engineers. (1998). Chronicle Guidance Pub. 1.
9.
Newspaper article
author
date
title of article
Lamb, D. (2000, Sept 20). UN force arrives to protect E. Timor.
The Toledo Blade 5.
newspaper
pages
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10. Interview
interviewee
type of interview
date
S. Jones, personal interview, (January 18, 2001).
11. Videotape or film
director
copyright
title
Format
Jones, T. (Director). (1999). At home with zoo animals [Videotape].
New York: National Geographic.
place of publication
producer
12. Internet web site with author
author
date of posting
name of page
organization
access dates
Smith, J. (2003) Shakespeare. University of Toledo. Retrieved Feb.15,
2004 from http://shakespeare.utoledo.edu/
address
14. Article on a web site with author
author
date of posting title of article
name of page
organization
date of access
Russell, P. (2002) Death. Great War Interviews. P.B.S. Retrieved
March 03, 2001 from http://www.pbs.org/
address
13. Internet web site with no author
title of article
date created
name of page
access date
NASA. (2002, May 5). Space missions. Retrieved Dec. 9, 2002, from
http://www.spacescience.nasa
address
Appendices
An Appendix contains information that is non-essential to the understanding
of the paper, but may present information that further clarifies a point
without burdening the body of the presentation.
Each Appendix should be identified in numerical sequence; Appendix 1,
Appendix 2, etc. Each appendix should contain different materials.
Some examples of materials that might be put in an appendix
п‚· raw data (in the form of tables, graphs, charts, etc.)
п‚· extra photographs
п‚· explanation of formulas
п‚· specialized computer programs for a particular procedure
п‚· full names of chemicals or compounds and MSDS for such materials
п‚· diagrams of specialized apparatus
п‚· list of terms or definitions
п‚· copies of questionnaires
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The display should be done after the research paper is complete.
However, you should NOT wait until the night before science fair to begin.
The display must be able to stand on its own.
The display or exhibit is used to visually show your project.
The display should represent the sequence of the project and be well
organized.
One board will be supplied per student (usually in December). Header
boards are also available.
The display should be neat, interesting and eye-catching.
If you choose to purchase or make your own board make sure it is no
more than 36" wide and 30" deep. Displays cannot extend beyond 7 feet
from the floor. Floor projects are not permitted.
A name tag will be provided. There is no need to put your name on the
front of the display.
Items to Include on the Display
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graphs
diagrams
photos
conclusion
Display Suggestions
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TITLE - should be large enough to see easily,
but not so big that it takes up half the board
the title should be centered; a header board
may be used
computer generate - title, sub-headings, text,
graphs, EVERYTHING
cut-out letters (scrap booking), felt letters,
foam letters, shadow letters can also be used for titles or sub-headings
make text font large enough to see, it should be clear - not fancy/bold
words/headings should be straight, not at an angle
foam board behind - brings out titles
theme - clipart, letters
label tables, graphs, pictures, EVERYTHING
to improve the look of your display, it is recommended that all content
(pictures, graphs, and so forth) are mounted. Mounting a picture gives it
a border. Place the item to be mounted on the mounting material. Allow
one inch on two sides. This will allow for ВЅ inch frame on all sides.
Double-mounting looks especially nice.
mount information in the center or off to one side (shadow) - 1 style only
2 colors only - fluorescent and primary colors are good, pastels are not as
eye catching
information on white paper, not colored paper
display board (background) color, textured, painted, wallpaper, contact
paper
do NOT write directly on the board for any reason
no large empty spaces on the board
straight edges - use a paper cutter. Specialty scissors - NO!
no pencil marks, glue smears, etc.
colorful graphs, computer generated, include a title on each
spelling must be correct
board should be arranged in a logical order, same as the paper
clipart - if it compliments project; use sparingly
PHOTOS - that relate to the project; close up is better, label each
blurry pictures - don't bother
clean copy of your paper
protective cover for paper
do not make pockets or flip charts for the display. Nothing should be
hanging off of the display.
fabric, felt, poster board, corrugated paper, etc. can be placed on the
table under the display. The space in front of the display is reserved for
your research paper and logbook only.
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Oral Presentation
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Students should be knowledgeable with all aspects of their study as
presented in their paper, all data, and scientific vocabulary.
Students should NOT attempt to memorize a speech.
Organize the findings of your project and practice communicating the
results in an organized manner.
Use all available audio-visual materials as necessary. This might include:
a simple (and safe) demonstration, slide projector, power point
presentation, photos, graphs, etc. (May be done only at the school
science presentations and with teacher’s approval.)
Be prepared to answer questions. If a question is unclear, ask the judge
to rephrase it.
The oral presentation should concisely summarize the project.
The quantity and quality of your presentation will be evaluated by the
judges.
Dress neatly and be properly groomed.
Arrive on time (or even a bit early).
Introduce yourself to the judges.
Do NOT have chewing gum in your mouth.
Speak slowly and clearly; enunciate your words.
Speak loud enough for the judges to hear you.
Establish eye contact with the judges.
Practice difficult and/or new vocabulary that may be challenging to
pronounce.
Describe the implications of your research for the improvement of the
rest of society.
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Judging Criteria
Knowledge
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Has there been a correct use of scientific terms?
Does the student understand these terms?
Is there evidence of an acquisition of knowledge?
Does the student show evidence of knowing the underlying principle(s)?
In brief, has the student actually learned something through the study
and research above and beyond their level of classroom work?
Effective Use of the Scientific Method
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Does the student have a clear-cut idea of the purpose of the project, or is
it something thrown together and manipulated?
Is the student aware of other approaches or theories relative to their
problem or project?
Is there evidence of literary and experimental research?
Has the student observed any basic phenomena?
Has the student experimented sufficiently to have collected any data?
Has the student analyzed the observations in a logical manner and drawn
valid conclusions?
Has the student used an adequate sample to make generalizations?
Clarity of Expression
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questions well?
Has the student expressed themselves well in all written material? Was
the material copied or written by someone else?
Beware of misspelled words.
Does the research report include a literature review, experimental data,
statistics, results, and conclusions? Does it follow an accepted form of
technical writing?
Originally and Creativity
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significant or unique manner?
Does the student have a new approach to an old subject?
Does the student have a unique presentation or organization of
materials?
Is there evidence of initiative?
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NORTHWEST DISTRICT
SCIENCE DAY RULES
Projects are totally poster displays; no equipment, apparatus, materials, or
specimens are permitted at student tabletop displays. No materials, except
photos, may be fastened to the display boards. Only research reports and data
compilations are allowed on tables. Obviously this eliminates the need for
electricity. Battery-powered computers are permitted if necessary for
simulation, modeling or animation integral and essential to the project results;
unessential PowerPoint presentations are not permitted. The score of a student's
project may be impacted by the violation(s) if either the physical dimensions or
physical items rules are not followed.
1.
Students must be science or mathematics course participants in grades 7-12.
2.
Students must have been judged at a local Science Day and have received a
superior rating or received special permission to enter from the Director of
NWDSD.
3.
The projects should be experimental in nature and based on the student’s own
work. Some projects based on library research may also be accepted.
4.
Projects must be new or further developed, extended, or changed in one
or more aspect from that of a previous year.
5.
Each entrant will need to complete and return a minimum of five forms plus an
abstract. Signature of sponsoring teacher and parent is required on appropriate
forms. SEE REGISTRATION FORMS.
6.
Each student must give the requested information, including grade level. Field
of entry must be indicated.
7.
Each student must complete a Research Plan (1A) and display it with his/her
project.
8.
Each student must provide an abstract of less than 250 words to be sent
in with the entry and fee. A heading must contain the project title and name(s)
of the entrant(s). The purpose of an abstract is to provide a summary of the
project that will inform interested individuals of the contents. The wording
must be written in a manner that any scientifically minded individual, who may
not be familiar with the topic, can understand the project's important points.
The following should each be summarized in a few sentences:
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d.
e.
f.
9.
Background information necessary to understand the problem and its
importance.
The problem that was investigated and your hypothesis.
Outline of the materials and methods used in your experimentation.
Summary of the results obtained from your experimentation.
The conclusions drawn from your results.
The importance or potential applications your research offers.
Each student must have a copy of their research report/log book and copies of
all required forms at their project site. All projects require forms 1, 1A,1B, an
individual/team registration, and a consent/release form. If research involves
nonhuman vertebrate animals, human subjects, pathogenic agents, controlled
substances, recombinant DNA, human and nonhuman animal tissue, and/or
hazardous substances and devices additional forms are required. All forms will
be reviewed by the District Scientific Review Committee. Failure to meet the
requirements will lead to disqualification.
10. Each student is allowed a 36" wide by 30" deep table space for a poster
display. Floor projects are not permitted; projects may extend only 7 feet from
the floor. The exhibitor's name must be displayed. School identification is
permitted. Only data logs, notebooks, and other paper data are permitted on
the table top. Battery-operated computers may be used only for simulation,
modeling or animation integral and essential to the project results or data
display and not for general PowerPoint presentations. The score of a student's
project may be impacted by the violation(s) if either the physical dimensions or
physical items rules are not followed.
11. At Northwest Ohio District 2 Science Day each student/team is expected to
present the RESULTS of research; a performance or demonstration of the
experiment is not expected. Entrants should have already done an experiment
or conducted many research trials and thus have adequate RESULTS in the
form of charts, graphs, data tables, logbooks, and laboratory notebooks--all
recorded with dates--which should be with the project. Photographs or
drawings of equipment on the display backdrop, in the research report, project
notebook, or laboratory notebook should document and explain the equipment
used. Items on your display backdrop should be used as visual cues to keep
the oral presentation to the judges on track or to refer to when answering
questions. The whole project, in simple form, should be visible on the poster
boards. Abstracts, project logbooks, laboratory notebooks, research reports,
and additional data should be in folders or binders close at hand for
reference.
12. Information such as postal, web, and e-mail addresses, telephone, and fax
numbers are allowed for the exhibitor only. The only photographs or visual
depictions of identifiable or recognizable people allowed are photographs of the
exhibitor, photographs taken by the exhibitor (with permission of individuals
received), or photographs for which credit is displayed (such as from
magazines, newspapers, journals, etc.).
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13. The cost of entry is $20.00* for each student. State Science Day participants
are charged $50.00*. This money is used to run the program at all levels, to
buy trophies and other supplies, and to support the state-wide activities of the
Academy's Junior Academy Council.
14. Judges must be supplied from the participating schools; one judge for every
five students.
15. Duplicate projects from the same school will not be eligible.
16. Late entries (deadline established each year by the District Committee) will not
be accepted.
17. Two judges will judge each project for the Ohio Academy of Science ratings. If
each judge grants a total score within any one rating category (Superior,
Excellent, Good, or Satisfactory), that specific rating (Superior, Excellent,
Good, Satisfactory) will be granted to the student and no re-judging is
permitted. Re-judging is automatic and is permissible only if all three of the
following conditions apply:
a. the judges' final ratings are in different categories,
b. the average of the judges' scores is in the lower category, and
c. if the judges differ in their total points by more than five points.
18. A participant signed up for a sponsored award must remain at his/her table
until he/she has been judged by both general and special judging teams. If a
participant must leave for any reason, please return shortly and leave an
explanatory note or information with an adjacent exhibitor. Please note that
sometimes special judges may arrive before general judges. General judging is
complete when participant receives a participation ribbon. Sponsored award
judging is complete when so noted on a projection screen in the exhibit hall.
19. Participants qualifying for State Science Day must attend (or an appointed
representative must attend) the Awards Ceremony at 2:30pm the day of
Science Day to receive their State registration packet.
* subject to change
NOTE:
If parents or students need information concerning
Science Day, visit:
http://www.eeescience.utoledo.edu/
There is a link to the State Science Day.
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District Awards
All award information is based on the 2008 District
Science Fair Awards and is subject to change.
This list is to let you know what awards may be
available at the district level. Each prize listed is the
first place prize. Many categories also have second
and third place awards.
Amateur Radio Operators Award - certificate plus $100
Best project involving radio, electronics, and/or computers.
ASHRAE Energy Award - certificate plus $50
Best projects related to energy and energy conservation.
American Chemical Society Award - certificate plus $100
Best projects devoted to … focus changes annually.
Cell Biology Award - certificate plus $50
Best project in cell/molecular biology.
College of Arts & Sciences BGSU District Science Day Scholarship $1000 scholarship, renewable, dependent on BGSU enrollment with a major in any
field of science or mathematics. For the best project in science, math, engineering,
pharmacy, or science/math education.
Earth Sensitivity Award $85 scholarship to Summer Science Camp, certificate plus $25
Best project that demonstrates Earth sensitivity by researching an environmental
problem.
EEES-Ecology (Environment) Award - certificate plus $50
Best project related to ecology and/or environmental science
EEES-Geology Award - certificate plus $50
Best project relating to some aspect of geology.
Governor's Award for Excellence in Agriculture & Food Science Research Governor's certificate plus $25
Project must have a scientific application to a food or agricultural topic.
Governor's Award for Excellence in Biotechnology Research Governor's certificate plus $25
Best project in biotechnological research.
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Governor's Award for Excellence in Energy Research Governor's certificate plus $25
Best project relating to energy research.
Governor's Award for Excellence in Environmental Sciences
Governor's certificate plus $25
Best project relating to the environmental sciences.
Governor's Award for Excellence in Information Science and Technology
Research - Governor's certificate plus $25
Best project relating to information science and technology.
Governor's Award for Excellence in Litter Prevention & Recycling Research
Governor's certificate plus $25
Best projects pertaining to litter prevention and recycling of materials.
Governor's Award for Excellence in Manufacturing Sciences Research
Governor's certificate plus $25
Best project relating to manufacturing science.
Governor's Award for Excellence in Materials Science Research
Governor's certificate plus $25
Best project involving materials science.
Governor's Award for Excellence in Water Resources Research
Governor's certificate plus $25
Best project with research in water resources; aquatic ecology.
Microbiology Award - certificate plus $37.50
Demonstrated excellence in microbiology, original and creative research.
Naval Science Award - certificate, medallion, $50 gift certificate
Projects demonstrating excellence in any field of endeavor. Recipients must be
U.S. citizens.
Northwest Ohio American Industrial Hygiene Award - certificate plus $50
Recognition of outstanding research and knowledge in the area of environmental
and/or occupational health and safety.
Outstanding Chemistry Award - certificate plus $50
Best project in chemistry or biochemistry.
Outstanding Physics Award - certificate plus $50
Best physics and astronomy projects.
Outstanding Project in Health Promotion and Disease Prevention certificate plus $75
Best project in the investigation of biological systems.
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SciMaTEC Award - certificate plus $25 gift certificate to the Discovery Channel
The most creative, engaging, and educational presentation.
Science of Food, Nutrition and Health Award - certificate plus $40
Best projects based on originality and creativity that demonstrate understanding of
human nutrition and its relationship to good health.
Stranahan Arboretum Environmental Science Award - certificate plus $100
Best project using plants as the main component in a problem solving situation.
Tillotson UT District Science Day Scholarship - $1000 scholarship renewable,
dependent on UT enrollment with a major in the fields of science, mathematics,
engineering, pharmacy, or science/mathematics education.
Best project in science, mathematics, engineering, pharmacy, or science/
mathematics education.
Toledo Dental Society Award - certificate plus $75
Outstanding projects relating to dentistry or oral/dental health.
UT College of Medicine Biomedical Sciences Award - certificate plus $100
For outstanding research in one of four areas: cancer biology, infection,
immunology, and transplantation; cardiovascular and metabolic diseases; or
neuroscience and neurological disorders
UT Health Science and Human Service Award - certificate plus $100
For outstanding projects related to health science or human service
UT Department of Psychology Award - $50
Best projects related to the investigation, or demonstration, of basic processes
underlying behavioral sciences.
UT Pharmacy and Pharmaceutical Sciences Award - certificate plus $100
Outstanding projects with a pharmacy or pharmaceutical sciences orientation.
Water Environment Science Award - certificate plus $100 savings bond
Stream water quality, surface and ground water pollution, waste water treatment,
industrial pollution, chemical treatment/removal and sludge treatment/removal
projects
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Name
Science Fair Research Paper
Title Page (5)
Descriptive, contains variables, stated as a question
3
2
1
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Name, date, course, school, teacher
1
0
Centered
1
0
1
0
Lined up
1
0
Page numbers (order, just number, accurate)
1
0
TOTAL
Table of Content (4)
All sections included
2
TOTAL
Abstract (10)
150 words, single spaced
2
1
0
Hypothesis
2
1
0
Methods
2
1
0
Results
2
1
0
Conclusion
2
1
0
State problem, purpose
2
1
0
Discuss relevance, importance
2
1
0
TOTAL
Introduction (8)
Introduction to topic, background, vocabulary
4
3
2
1
0
8
6
4
2
0
Ten current sources
4
3
2
1
0
Sources relevant to topic, scientific sources
4
3
2
1
0
Logical order
4
3
2
1
0
In-text references, quotes
4
3
2
1
0
TOTAL
Literature Review (26)
Review of relevant research
10
TOTAL
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Experimental Investigation (48)
State research question and hypothesis
2
1
0
2
1
0
Experiment:
Description of materials
Research plan and all other forms submitted
4
3
2
1
0
Explanation of methods/procedure
4
3
2
1
0
Sample size, number of trials
4
3
2
1
0
Data recorded, logbook
8
6
4
2
0
2
1
0
2
1
0
Use of the scientific method:
Control, variables identified
Results:
Written in narrative form
Includes tables/graphs
4
3
2
1
0
Statistical analysis of data
4
3
2
1
0
6
4
2
0
3
2
1
0
2
1
0
Discussion, appropriate interpretation of results
Conclusion
4
Acknowledgements
TOTAL
Literature Cited (12)
10 scientific sources
4
3
2
1
0
APA style
4
3
2
1
0
Sources current (last five years)
2
1
0
Listed alphabetically by author’s last name
2
1
0
TOTAL
Format (12)
Grammar, past tense, third person
4
3
2
1
0
Double spaced, 12 pt. font, 1‖ margins, sub-headings
4
3
2
1
0
Spelling
4
3
2
1
0
TOTAL
TOTAL
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Name
Science Fair Display
Title (5)
Conclusions (6)
Centered, lettering
2
1
0
Reasonable based on data
2
1
0
Variables identified
2
1
0
Significance, implication
2
1
0
1
0
Future Research
2
1
0
2
1
0
1
0
Typed/computer generated
1
0
Items mounted or framed
1
0
No glue or tape marks
1
0
Sub-headings labeled
TOTAL
TOTAL
Abstract (5)
Photos, art work, etc. (3)
150 words
1
0
Supports project
Hypothesis
1
0
Clear, captions
Methods
1
0
TOTAL
Results
1
0
Conclusions
1
0
Neatness (9)
TOTAL
Hypothesis (4)
Variables identified
2
1
0
No eraser or pencil marks
1
0
Relationship between variables
2
1
0
Single color or two colors
1
0
No writing on the board itself
1
0
Items on the board are straight
1
0
Items are proportionate
1
0
1
0
New, unique
1
0
Interesting, eye-catching
1
0
Colorful, complimentary
1
0
TOTAL
Methods (6)
Clear, easy to follow
1
0
No large empty spaces
TOTAL
Step-by-step
2
1
0
Complete
2
1
0
1
0
Description of materials
Creativity (3)
TOTAL
Results/Data (9)
Graphs, tables (computer gen.)
2
All statistics included
1
0
1
0
Accurate
2
1
0
Agrees with the conclusion
2
1
0
Log book
2
1
0
TOTAL
TOTAL
TOTAL
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Name
Science Fair Oral Presentation
Knowledge (9)
Demonstrates content learned & background researched
3
2
Correct use of vocabulary
1
0
1
0
Shows understanding of scientific method
2
1
0
Able to answer questions about project
2
1
0
1
0
Suggestions for future research, additional questions
Organization (6)
Presentation is organized in a logical manner
2
1
0
All parts of the project are discussed
2
1
0
Use of the board as a visual aid (do NOT read from board)
1
0
3Г—5 cards for reference
1
0
Stand up straight, to the side of board (don't block the view)
1
0
Make eye contact, no chewing gum
1
0
Effective Speaking Skills (6)
Speak loudly and slow enough so that others can understand you
2
1
0
Length of presentation is appropriate
2
1
0
Pays attention during other presentations
2
1
0
Actively participates by asking intelligent questions
2
1
0
Participation (4)
Total
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Total Research Paper
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Total Display
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Total Oral Presentation
/ 25
Grand Total
/ 200
Percent and Letter Grade
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