Mohammed Alabdulwahed
108
201101550
OVERALL GRADE
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Expression Absolutely clear, accurate, appropriate, sophisticated
Ideas Relevant, explicit, engaging
Detail Developed, integrated, convincing
A+
Organization Appropriate, unified
Minor errors do not detract from effectiveness
A
Expression Clear and mostly appropriate
Ideas Relevant; Could be more explicit or engaging
Detail Developed, integrated; Mostly convincing
B+
Organization Appropriate, unified
Minor omissions
B
Expression Errors do not significantly impact on comprehension
Ideas Mostly relevant; Generally explicit
Detail Could be developed, integrated and more convincing
C+
Organization Mostly appropriate; Could be more systematic
Requires effort from the reader
C
Expression Inappropriate style or partly unclear
Ideas Limited relevance or clarity
Detail Limited development
D+
Organization Significant omissions
Not answering the question; Paragraphs not distinguished
F
COMM 1311: Written Communication
Prof. Simon N. Meade-Palmer
Section 108
Name: Mohammed Alabdulwahed
ID: 201101550
Participating in PMU Team Sports Helps to Develop Individual Character
In the university there are a lot of activates to participate in such as media club,
speech competition, and mathematics decathlon and football league organized by PMU
campus life as known as sport. Sports are the most popular activity in the university because
there are a lot of students love sports. In my essay I will focus and argue about sports, if
sports benefit us or detriment us. My thesis will be advantages of Sports, disadvantages of
Sports and my opinion about sports.
There are a lot of advantages of sport. The first advantage is that sports give you a
good health. Getting a good health is not about just eating a good healthy food; it’s all about
playing sports because playing sport is the best way to get a good health. The second
advantage of sport it will benefit you in your social life because sports can help how to
communicate with people and work as a team. The final advantage is you will have a greater
confidence because sports will make you more confident more than before.
There are a lot of disadvantage of sports such as sports will distracts from doing
homework and going to class, you may get a serious injury and overemphasis on winning.
The first disadvantage is sports will distract you from doing homework and you will always
play sports and ignoring you study. The second disadvantage it may get you in serious injury
because some sports are rough sports and there are a lot of rough tackles can get you in
serious injuries. The final disadvantage is they will be overemphasis on winning a lot of
athletic have this problem because they always want to win no one want to be a loser.
My opinion about sports, sports is very important everything have advantage and
disadvantage. I have to protect myself from the disadvantage and focus on the advantage to
have a better life. If I want a good health I have to play sports to get to my goal. I'm with
sports because it gives me a better life and sports can help me in your social life and I can get
a lot of friends and it will teach me how to deal with people and play as a team. Sometime
sports will distract me from my homework but I have to be smarter and separate between
them.
In conclusion, sports have advantages and disadvantages like everything else. I said
my opinion about sports and I choose to be with sports like I said. Sports are very important
in our life so don’t stop playing sports. Sports are so fun and too enjoyable. As I said before if
you want a better like you have to play sports and do some exercise. With sports you can
have a good health and be fit. Finally participating in PMU team sports can helps you to
develop your individual character.