PROBLEM-SOLVING IN EARTH HISTORY (GEO 204) FALL, 2015 Instructor: D. E. Fastovsky; Office: 313 Woodward Hall; Hours: Anytime MWF that you can catch me; T,Th are research days; generally, disturb only when necessary. T.A. TBA Email: defastov@uri; Phone: 401-874-2185; FAX: 401-874-2190 Time: 11:00 – 11:50 am MWF; Laboratory W 2:00 – 3:50 pm Sakai: Virtually all class business will be carried out in Sakai. This means that copies of all assignments, hand-outs, and notices will be archived in Sakai. Submission of papers, however, will be directly to me via email. Required Texts (Bookstore): Gastaldo, R.A., Savrda, C.E., and Lewis, R.D., 2006, Deciphering Earth History: Exercise in Physical Geology (4th ed): Contemporary Publishing Company of Raleigh, Raleigh, NC. Required Texts (You buy (used?) on Amazon [much more cheaply]): Winchester, S., 2001, The Map the Changed the World: William Smith and the Birth of Modern Geology: Harper Perennial, NY, 368 p. Sobel, D., 1995, Longitude: Fourth Estate Publishing, NY, 228 p. Bjornernud, M., 2005, Reading the Rocks: The Autobiography of the Earth: Basic Books, NY, 2006 p. Also: Any decent historical textbook that you can find; thirteen + are available for your use in rm. 327! Grading: Oral presentations (Group): 25% Synthesis paper (Group): 40% of grade Laboratory (Individual): 12.5% of the grade Quizzes (Individual): 12.5% of the grade Book Reviews (2) 10% of grade Grades will not be curved. Attendance: Mandatory; BUT everybody gets 1 unexcused absence; each subsequent unexcused absence costs 1%/problem in which absence occurs; absence on a presentation day costs 3%/problem/day. Late Work: Late work is not accepted. Laboratory (including field trips): All students are expected to participate; full participation is required to pass the course. Laboratory projects are all due at the beginning of the following laboratory. Field Trip: This class involves two field trips! Full participation is mandatory (which means that it will be very hard to pass this class if you miss the trips). The trips are necessary, but not sufficient, for passing this class. Check the dates carefully and be available. Make-up Policy: There will be no make-ups. In the case of legitimate conflicts, notification required at least one week in advance. In the case of deaths, accidents, or sickness, notification required within a week of the regularly scheduled due date. All excuses must be in writing. Note: Any student with a documented disability is welcome to contact me as early in the semester as possible so that we may arrange reasonable accommodations. As part of this process, you’ll need to be in touch with URI’s Office of Disability Services, located in Room 330 of the Memorial Union (874-2098). General Note: This syllabus is an outline of proposed events. It is subject to change; however, never without meaningful advanced notification. GEO 204 Problem-Solving in Earth History (Fall, 2015): Syllabus & Guidelines Page 2 GEO 204 THE POINT OF THIS COURSE GEO 204 emphasizes three geologically significant content areas: Geological time; The logic of scientific thought; and Stratigraphy. GEO 204 emphasizes other critical skills: Expository writing; Problem-solving; Research techniques; Teamwork; and Oral presentation of scientific results. General. GEO 204 is taught using four problems, corresponding to geological time, the logic of scientific thought, and stratigraphy. Here’s how it will happen: 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. Your group will be presented with a problem; First, you define the nature of the problem (e.g., make sure you understand what is being asked for); Then, you construct a strategy for solving the problem; Implement that strategy, assigning tasks where appropriate; and Finally, you present your solutions to the problem orally and in writing. In the written part, content; written expression, and format are most important. Three iterations of corrections and resubmissions – one, each, for content, written expression, and format – for each paper may be necessary per problem set. In the oral part, content, presentation style, and delivery, will be most important. Rubrics (below, p. 11 – 12; 14) highlight the key criteria. Justification. Content and written expression require no justification; their importance is self-evident. Format is important because as a professional (either an academic or working in the private sector), each of your work products will need to conform to somebody else’s template. You must learn, therefore, to imitate other styles and conform to other formats. How Does this Course Work? The class is divided into randomly selected, but permanent groups. The work is divided into Group Activities and Individual Activities. Group Activities: 1. Work through the problem set in your group. Solve it over the course of the problem set. Because this course has no lectures, you have time in class; however, you will need to take time out of class to get all the work done. I am here to help you. 2. Produce a Synthesis Paper that introduces the problem, and describes the approach and presents its solution. One of you will take the lead as Synthesizer; that person is expected to take the lead in putting together the paper based upon group discussions, input from individual group members, and feedback from group presentations. The role of Synthesizer must rotate within the group with each project until everybody has done one synthesis paper. For any paper, the group can either accept the grade or have a Reviser – a group member different from the Synthesizer – edit the paper within one week after receiving it to improve the grade. I then review it again, checking to see how the group has responded to peerreview and to my review. Everybody takes his/her turn in these roles. GEO 204 Problem-Solving in Earth History (Fall, 2015): Syllabus & Guidelines 3. Page 3 Give a 15-minute PowerPoint presentation (12 minutes, talk; 3 minutes, questions; see pages 13 - 14) explaining and defending the group’s solution to the problem. Again, one member of the group (the Presenter) is expected to take the lead in presenting the material. Everybody takes his/her turn in this role a well. Individual Activities: a) b) c) d) There will be quizzes periodically. These will cover material that has been dealt with in the most recent problem set, as well as any assigned readings. You will not be quizzed on material from an ongoing problem set. As the projects are presented, each person will be expected to participate in the general discussion. You will be graded based upon the quality/quantity of your contribution to that discussion. You will be asked to provide an evaluation of the other members’ contributions to the group for that problem. The scores from each group member will be averaged to generate an evaluation factor (ranging from 0.7 – 1.05). The final grade for the synthesis paper and presentation will be obtained by multiplying those grades by the evaluation factor (as determined by the other members of the group). There are three books to read; one is to be read by everybody; the other two are chosen from the reading list provided here. There will be a quiz on the first of these books towards the end of the semester; I am requesting written book reviews of the other two books; please check the Timetable for all of these due dates (the quiz and the book reviews). The Group Dynamic: Among the goals of this class are building skills in working together, assuming the leadership role in, and responsibility for, a project, and equitably apportioning tasks. Occasionally it comes to pass that one member consistently does not pull his/her weight in the projects, and thus relies upon the efforts of the rest of the group. Such a person could obviously let a group down by taking responsibility for work and then not carrying it out. Two solutions are available for this problem (both to be implemented at my discretion): 1. The Synthesizer or Presenter alone receives credit for what is submitted; the rest of the group is given a specified length of time to revise the work and present it as representative of their group. This option can only occur once; 2. The group may elect to vote a member “off the island” (e.g., to expel a member). This can only occur (a) by unanimous vote; (b) after the completion of the 2nd problem set; and (c) with my prior approval. The person voted out of the group must then fend for him/herself for the rest of the course. This is obviously not a decision to be taken lightly, nor is it a good place to be for either the original group or the individual voted off. Individuals “voted off the island” can and should consider banding together. Please note: In this course there is far too much work for one person to do alone. Get smart: the way to “beat” this course is to divide the labor up, and contribute total. That’s the teamwork aspect of this; you’ll need it to get by. You and your group are not in competition with anybody or anything. It’s all about the quality of the work that you do; compete against yourself and better your best effort! GEO 204 Problem-Solving in Earth History (Fall, 2015): Syllabus & Guidelines Page 4 University (and my) Policy on Original Work: Students are expected to be honest in all academic work. A student’s name on any written work, quiz or exam shall be regarded as assurance that the work is the result of the student’s own independent thought and study. Work should be stated in the student’s own words, properly attributed to its source. Students have an obligation to know how to quote, paraphrase, summarize, cite and reference the work of others with integrity. The following are examples of academic dishonesty: • Using material, directly or paraphrasing, from published sources (print or electronic) without appropriate citation; • Claiming disproportionate credit for work not done independently; • Unauthorized possession or access to exams; • Unauthorized communication during exams; • Unauthorized use of another’s work or preparing work for another student; • Taking an exam for another student; • Altering or attempting to alter grades; • The use of notes or electronic devices to gain an unauthorized advantage during exams • Fabricating or falsifying facts, data or references; • Facilitating or aiding another’s academic dishonesty; and • Submitting the same paper for more than one course without prior approval from the instructors. GEO 204 Problem-Solving in Earth History (Fall, 2015): Syllabus & Guidelines Page 5 TIMETABLE Fall, 2015 Week 1 1 Date 09/09 09/11 Problem 2 2 09/14 09/16 2 09/18 3 3 3 09/21 09/23 09/25 4 4 09/28 09/30 4 10/02 5 5 5 10/3-4/15 10/05 10/07 10/09 6 6 6 10/12 10/14 10/16 7 7 7 10/19 10/21 10/23 8 8 8 10/26 10/28 10/30 Presentations 2 Presentations 2 GEOLOGICAL SOCIETY OF AMERICA (GSA) NATIONAL MEETING – no class 9 9 9 11/02 11/04 11/06 GSA NATIONAL MEETING – no class GSA NATIONAL MEETING – no class Quiz no. 2 (Problem no. 2) 11/07-08/15 11/09 11/11 11/13 Overnight field trip to Early Jurassic of CT 10 10 10 Problem I: Science and the Kraken Lab & Readings No lab this week! Rosh Hashana – class cancelled Lab 3: Relative time and the sequence of events Lab 4: Lithostratigraphy Yom Kippur – class cancelled Lab 5: Biostratigraphy Lab 6: Radioisotopic dating techniques (two weeks) Problem 1, v. 1 Due Problem 2: The Age of Rocks Overnight Field Trip to Devonian of NY Presentations 1 Presentations 1 Quiz no. 1 (Problem no. 1) Guest Speaker: Jon Grant, Smithsonian Institution, Washington, D.C. Lab 1: Sedimentary rocks I Lab 2: Sedimentary rocks II Book Review 1 due (8:30 am, electronically, in DEF email) Paleontology I Problem 2, v. 1 due Problem 3: Breaking up is hard to do NO CLASSES; VETERANS’S DAY Paleontology II Paleontology III Book Review 2 due (8:30 am, electronically, in DEF email) GEO 204 Problem-Solving in Earth History (Fall, 2015): Syllabus & Guidelines 11 11 11 11/16 11/18 11/20 12 12 12 11/23 11/25 11/27 Presentations 3 Presentations 3 Thanksgiving recess; no classes 13 13 13 11/30 12/02 12/04 Quiz no. 3 (problem no. 3) 14 14 14 12/07 12/09 12/11 Quiz 4 (on Bjornerud book) – open book Problem 3, v. 1 due Problem 4: Dinosaur Digs Problem 4 due (no quiz on this problem) Page 6 GEO 204 Problem-Solving in Earth History (Fall, 2015): Syllabus & Guidelines Page 7 SYNTHESIS PAPER GUIDELINES You should think of this paper as you would a research or term paper; it should be a full write-up of the complete solution to the problem, especially including up-to-date, peer-reviewed references. The synthesis paper should summarize the approach, assumptions, solution(s), and sources of information used by the group in addressing the problem. The form of this paper must exactly follow the attached directions (p. 7 - 9). The synthesis paper is due on the dates posted in the Schedule and should be submitted electronically. I will read and evaluate the Synthesis Paper based upon the criteria outlined in the Synthesis Paper Rubric (p. 12 13; but see pages 7 - 11 as well). Each of my reviews of your paper will have a different focus (content, language; format) and you should respond to each of the reviews. The idea is to allow you to focus on each of these different qualities of manuscripts and make the suggested changes. Just like a published manuscript, therefore, your paper will go through several iterations as it finally gets where it needs to be. So how does the Synthesis Paper part work? 1. Submit Synthesis Paper (due 8:30 am in my mailbox ([email protected]); no exceptions without prior permission from me); 2. Evaluations of first drafts by me, usually within a week of submission; 3. Read and returned; 4. First revision is due 1 week after first drafts have been returned; 5. The cycle (1 – 4) repeats twice more; and 6. Your final grade for this work will be an average of the original and the revisions. . General: Use current pertinent literature. Use scientific or technical journals for your report. Do NOT use encyclopedias (including Wikipedia), or re-chewed popular journals (like Discovery, Natural History, or Earth). Avoid using the rehashes of original work in scientific journals by science writers. Read the original, pertinent literature in the original scientific publications by the people that did the science in the first place. Books generally - but not always - should be avoided. Most of the information in them is out of date. The web. The web can be helpful, but the web is a double-edged sword- use it sparingly. It is useful for a lot, but it also misleads. Progress in science is based on peer-reviewed publications, that is, work that has been read by other scientists qualified in that field, and identified by them as valuable and worthy of publication. It is peer-reviewed publications that you ultimately must use to support your work. A good, effective way to use the web is: 1. Get on the web, look up the subject in question, and get the general “lay of the land;” 2. Obtain peer-reviewed citations in professional journals to actually learn about the subject and to justify the claims that you make in your papers and presentations. 3. Do not quote blogs, popular magazines, or web pages; they are not peer-reviewed and do not qualify. Interlibrary loan is very strong in the age of computers. However, you almost certainly will find that you need to use either the GSO library or perhaps even the Brown University library to obtain the journals you need. Ad hominem attacks are never acceptable. That is, you quibble with the science, not the scientist (his/her personality, integrity, etc.). This isn’t politics, and you can’t strengthen your argument by impugning the personal qualities of the scientist. Format: It should be on a computer written in MS Word. I although I more or less hate this program, it is the industry standard. GEO 204 Problem-Solving in Earth History (Fall, 2015): Syllabus & Guidelines Page 8 It should be no longer than 5 pages of text including figures (but excluding references). It should be double-spaced, with 1” margins. Text should be left justified. It should be in 12-pt font with a conventional typescript. Citations and headings should be in Geological Society of America format. You can find examples of this format by reading GEOLOGY, GSA Bulletin, and GSA Today. There are copies of these common journals in rm. 312. N.B. Students go on the website sometimes, and look for the journal’s format. This can be extremely confusing; I do NOT recommend it. Subheadings within the paper are of your choosing (see “Contents” below). Sub-headings should be left-justified. Abstract should be bold-faced. Citations should be in a section entitled “References Cited,” which will include only those references that you cite. The References Cited section can be single-spaced, and hanging indents must be used. Here you must follow GSA format; the best way to do this is to imitate it by using examples from GSA journals (found in rm. 312) All pages should be numbered in the upper right-hand corner as “Page #.” Indent paragraphs; Do NOT leave a line or any extra space between each paragraph (Word automatically does this; you need to undo that command which is under Format Paragraph Spacing). Indentation should NOT be accomplished using the spacd or tab keys. The first page should contain the Problem Title (centered), the names of the group members (with that of the Synthesizer underlined), and the date (both, right justified). In the remaining space the text should begin. The first page should NOT be numbered. In short, there is no cover page. Formal Linnaean groups should be capitalized, except when not in formal form (e.g., Bivalvia; bivalves; and Dinosauria; dinosaurs) Genera and species are always italicized (or underlined); Genera are capitalized; species are not (e.g., Tyrannosaurus rex). Use of quotes: Quotes are only acceptable to use if (1) you introduce the author of the quote in some meaningful way, (e.g., D.E. Fastovsky, the worst professor in the history of the planet, was often heard to say, “Always introduce quotes!!”); (2) the quote says something in a way that isn’t really duplicable by paraphrasing; and (3) the citation includes the page number from where the quote was derived. Synthesis papers due electronically to [email protected] on or before 8:30 am on the day that they are due. The Subject Heading in the email should give your Group number, the Synthesis Paper number, and the Revision number (e.g., Group 1, Synthesis Paper 2, Revision 3). The paper should be attached as a MS Word document. Contents: Abstract Brief statement describing what the problem was about, your approach, and what you concluded (one paragraph). This is an abstraction of your paper; it says in very brief format what your paper says in extended format. It is not an introduction! Common error: people often say what they did, or how they will solve the problem in the abstract. Don’t do it! Tell us instead your results. A word to the wise: Abstract ≠ Introduction! Hint: Write the abstract after you have written your paper. Introduction Introductory material sets the stage for the work that follows. Along with presenting background, it should pique the busy reader’s interest (“Why should I care about this?”) and bring the reader to the level at which the paper will be comprehensible to the audience at which it is aimed. Exposition – the guts of your paper GEO 204 Problem-Solving in Earth History (Fall, 2015): Syllabus & Guidelines Page 9 The word “Exposition” is NOT a subtitle (like “Introduction” or “Conclusion”; it is a description of this part of your paper. Use subtitles of your choosing. Describe how you went about solving the problem and answering the questions associated with the problem. Be specific about assumptions made, the facts that support them, and the sources of information used. Lay out explicitly all calculations (when used). Remember to use and list appropriate units, and keep them straight. Equations when appropriate are expected; please number them. Use appropriate terms throughout. Conclusions Describe what you can and cannot conclude regarding the answer(s) to the problem. Identify possible approaches to those parts of the problem for which you could not reach conclusions. DO NOT summarize your paper (e.g., write a second Abstract) in the Conclusions section. Other Do not make dumb grammatical errors. For example: 1. Data are plural; datum is singular. 2. It’s is a contraction for “it is;” its is possessive. Mistakes of this type will be grounds for a week in the stocks, keel-hauling, hanging from a yardarm, execution by firing squad (without cigarette), drawing and quartering, walking the plank, breaking on the Wheel, a year in Solitary, a month in a Tiger Cage, water torture, death-by-a-thousand cuts, being thrown from a parapet, 10 years’ hard time, boiled in hot oil, and confiscation of your half-filled beer can and iPhone (not necessarily in that order). 3. Species and generic names are italicized. All formal names are capitalized. Other nouns are not (this is not German). Thus the group called “archosaurs” is not capitalized; however, if you refer to its formal name – Archosauria – then it is capitalized! How easy is that?! GEO 204 Problem-Solving in Earth History (Fall, 2015): Syllabus & Guidelines Page 10 TIPS ON HOW TO WRITE WELL Here are some really basic, good tips that will significantly improve any writing you do for the rest of your life: 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. Write a thesis statement (that is the focal point or raison d’etre) of your entire work. This statement should be at or very near the last sentence of your first paragraph. Outline your work. The outline should be composed of the topic sentences of each paragraph. Each paragraph should have a topic sentence at the beginning; the rest of the paragraph should be an explication of that topic sentence. Each sentence must precisely follow from the one before. Each paragraph must precisely follow from the one before, and relate directly to the thesis statement. Read lots of well-written literature (i.e., books) before bed each night. N.B. Good basic advice: Write succinctly, choosing your words thoughtfully and carefully. Remember the old adage: “If I had more time I’d have written it shorter!” Extra words ≠ extra quality. Nobody believes this but it’s true. And that’s why poetry is so hard to write. Write skillfully, not voluminously. HOW TO WRITE GOOD Frank L. Visco 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10. 11. 12. 13. 14. 15. 16. 17. 18. 19. 20. 21. 22. 23. 24. Avoid alliteration. Always. Prepositions are not words to end sentences with. Avoid clichés like the plague (They’re old hat). Employ the vernacular. Eschew ampersands & abbreviations, etc. Parenthetical remarks (however relevant) are unnecessary. It is wrong to ever split an infinitive. Contractions aren’t necessary. Foreign words and phrases are neither de rigeur, nor apropos, even if they give your writing that certain je ne sais quoi (but I don’t know what it is). One should never generalize. Eliminate quotations. As Ralph Waldo Emerson once said, “I hate quotations. Tell me what you know.” Comparisons are as bad as clichés. Don’t be redundant; don’t use more words than are necessary; it’s highly superfluous. Profanity sucks. Be more or less specific. Understatement is always best. Exaggeration is a billion times worse than understatement. One-word sentences? Eliminate. Also one-clause paragraphs. Analogies in writing are like feathers on a snake. The passive voice is to be avoided. Go around the barn at high noon to avoid colloquialisms. Even if a mixed metaphor sings, it should be derailed. Who needs rhetorical questions? GEO 204 Problem-Solving in Earth History (Fall, 2015): Syllabus & Guidelines Page 11 SYNTHESIS PAPER RUBRIC Format (20%) 95 Abstract; Introduction; text body, conclusions, and citations all present. Formatting as stipulated above (p. 79 above) incl. spacing, paragraph style, page numbering, section titles, quotations introduced. Package neat and well presented with no spelling errors. Figures attractive; well integrated into text; appropriately placed; appropriate captions. In proper order. Whole package seamless. Citations and appropriate to ideas; citations correctly formatted in text and in back of paper; peerreviewed articles emphasized; with minimal use of websites dominate key ideas in text. 85 Abstract; Introduction; text body, conclusions, and citations all present. Formatting as stipulated above (p. 79 above) incl. spacing, paragraph style, page numbering, section titles, quotations introduced. Figures appropriately placed; good captions. In proper order. Package very presentable, with a few minor glitches of formatting. Complete and appropriate to ideas; citations correctly formatted in text and in back of paper; mix of websites and peerreviewed articles 75 Paper missing one of the required elements (p. 7- 9 above). Nearly complete and more or less appropriate to ideas; citations generally correctly positioned; mix of websites and peer-reviewed articles 65 Paper missing more than one of the required elements (p. 7- 9 above). Incomplete and/or not appropriate to ideas; overreliance on websites and articles that are not peerreviewed. GEO 204 Problem-Solving in Earth History (Fall, 2015): Syllabus & Guidelines Language (including geosciences conventions and general correctness; 35%) Content and Ideas; Science (45%) Language fluent. Paragraphs have topic sentences; paragraphs well-connected; worduse precise; minimalist (not padded); no jargon or colloquialisms; not awkward or clumsy. Word use refined; sophisticated. Figures well-integrated in text. See p. 8 - 9 above. Good introductory and explanatory material (“Why we care!”); well-developed, detailed exposition; reaches reasonable conclusions in context of exposition. Figures present, well-chosen. Manuscript well illustrated. Point of view well argued; sophisticated reasoning. Topic approached and researched creatively and completely; evidence of original thought. Wellsupported by literature research. Generally suggests profound insights into the problem. Page 12 Language communicative. Paragraphs have topic sentences; paragraphs well-connected; worduse precise; minimalist (not padded); no jargon or colloquialisms; not awkwardly written. Complete sentences not used. Paragraphs not wellconnected; worduse imprecise; with extraneous words; jargon or colloquialisms used; awkwardly written. Language fails to communicate ideas. Words not used properly. Paragraphs lacking links; topic sentences. Complete sentences not used. See p. 8 - 9 above. Good introductory and explanatory material (“Why we care!”); welldeveloped exposition; reaches reasonable conclusions in context of exposition. Figures present, well-chosen; illustrative of points made in text. Topic approached conventionally, but completely. Wellsupported by literature research Treatment shows some depth. See p. 8 - 9 above. Introductory and explanatory material (“Why we care!”) minimal or irrelevant; exposition not strong; conclusions not well-supported in context of exposition. Figures absent, not supportive of ideas, or not germane. Lacking evidence of original thought. Literature research cursory. Subject incompletely treated. Treatment generally superficial and marginally adequate See p. 8 - 9 above. Introductory and explanatory material (“Why we care!”) irrelevant or absent; exposition weak; conclusions not supported in context of exposition. Figures absent, or not germane. Treatment missing a lot of information. Literature search inadequate. Subject treatment superficial and inadequate GEO 204 Problem-Solving in Earth History (Fall, 2015): Syllabus & Guidelines Page 13 PRESENTATION GUIDELINES General 12-minute maximum (3 min. for questions) Q & A afterwards from instructor and audience Presentation must be in PowerPoint or equivalent program Only one Presenter (to rotate among group members) All members of Group expected to participate in Q & A Presenter must inform instructor about any extra audiovisual needs (e.g., needs beyond PowerPoint) at least two days in advance of presentation; It is the group’s responsibility to bring a laptop that will satisfactorily run PowerPoint and can be used to drive the projector. Presentations will be videoed to show you see how you appear to others. Content The appropriate and effective of visual aids is expected. Presentation should contain the following: Introduction Brief description of problem and group’s understanding of problem Solution An explanation of how the group’s approach solved the problem. This should include a description of the assumptions that had to be made, as well as substantiation of such assumptions. Be explicit! Conclusion: A summary of what was solved and what remains unsolved. GEO 204 Problem-Solving in Earth History (Fall, 2015): Syllabus & Guidelines Page 14 PRESENTATION RUBRIC Format (15%) Technical Presentation (20%) Speaker (25%) Content and Ideas; Science (40%) 95 Introduction, Exposition, and Conclusions separate and complete and clearly demarked. Audience has clear sense of talk organization and where they are in talk. Slides are aesthetic; writing is clearly visible against background; letters correctly sized for viewing at back of room; not too much writing on page; slides not too complicated or cluttered; not too many or too few slides (about 1/minute of talk); a single point/slide; Presentation visually striking and effective Talk delivered smoothly; at right speed and volume; effective use of slides as illustrations of points; pointer highlights key features of slides as related to talk; speaker grabs attention of audience; ultimately compelling; 85 Introduction, Exposition, and Conclusions separate and complete. 75 Introduction, Exposition, and Conclusions muddled; unclear. 65 Introduction, Exposition, and/or Conclusions missing from talk. Slides are not ugly; writing is visible against background; letters visible; pages not too cluttered; not too many or too few slides (about 1/minute of talk); a single point/slide; Presentation effective Slides not attentiongrabbing; maybe some problems with visibility, clutter; about 1 slide/minute; presentation OK but perhaps not arresting. Slides unattractive; consistent problems with visibility, and/or clutter; slide number not correct; visual aspects of presentation generally inadequate. Talk delivered smoothly; appropriate speed and volume; general use of slides as illustrations of points; good use of pointer; speaker reasonably clear and comprehensible. Delivery a bit rough or halting; speed and/or volume perhaps not properly adjusted; general use of slides OK; somewhat comprehensible Clear relevant introduction; ideas excellent; well supported both logically and by literature. Shows creativity and profound insight into the problem. Conclusions riveting. Introduction satisfactory; treatment shows a little original thought some depth of understanding of the problem. Conclusions appropriate. Introduction inadequate; treatment generally superficial, lacking in creativity, and marginally adequate. Conclusions marginally satisfactory. Delivery rough; possibly many “uhs” breaking the flow of the lecture; speed and/or volume perhaps not properly adjusted; ineffective use of slides; ideas not completely clear. Introduction inadequate. Subject treatment superficial, lacking in creativity, and inadequate. Conclusions insufficient and/or not particularly interesting. GEO 204 Problem-Solving in Earth History (Fall, 2015): Syllabus & Guidelines Page 15 GEO 204 Readings Everybody must read: Bjornernud, M., 2005, Reading the Rocks: Westview Press, NY, 237 p. There will be a quiz on this book late in the semester (see revised Timetable in Syllabus – posted in Sakai) Please pick two of the following books, and read them. You will then be asked to write a review of each book. The due dates for each of these reviews – as well as some guidelines for them – will be posted in the revised Timetable in the Syllabus – and available in Sakai. Repcheck, J., 2003, The Man Who Found Time (James Hutton and the Discovery of the Earth’s Antiquity): Perseus Publishing, Cambridge, MA 247 p. Winchester, S., 2001, The Map that Changed the World: Harper Collins, NY, 329 p. Cutler, A., 2003, The Seashell on the Mountaintop (A Story of Science,Sainthood, and the Humble Genius who Discovered a New History of the Earth): Dutton, NY, 228 p. Sobel, D., 1995, Longitude (The True Story of a Lone Genius Who Solved the Greatest Scientific Problem of His Time): Walker Publishing Company, NY, 184 p. Fara, P., 2003, Sex, Botany, & Empire (The story of Carl Linnaeus and Joseph Banks): Columbia University Press, NY, 168 p. Lewis, C., 2000, The Dating Game (One Man’s Search for the Age of the Earth): Cambridge University Press, Cambridge, UK, 53 p. Bryson, B., 2003, A Short History of Nearly Everything: Broadway Books, NY, 544 p. All of these books are available on Amazon very inexpensively, if bought used. GEO 204 Problem-Solving in Earth History (Fall, 2015): Syllabus & Guidelines Page 16 GEO 204 Writing Your Book Reviews There are two book reviews due in this course. Please regard them as seriously as you might regard a synthesis paper; these are opportunities for you to work on individual writing skills. Format It should be on a computer. It should be no longer than 2 pages (including citations); it could be less if it covers its subject completely. It should be double-spaced (with the exception of the citations, which can be single spaced) with 1” margins. Text should be left justified. It should be in 12-pt font with a conventional typescript. It should be in GSA format. Citations should be at the end of the text, in a section entitled “Literature Cited.” At a minimum, you need to cite the book you are reviewing. All pages should be numbered in the upper right-hand corner as “Page #.” Indent paragraphs; do NOT leave a blank line (or any extra space between each [be careful; MSWord does this automatically]). The first page should contain the Title (left justified, which will be “Review of…”). In the remaining space the text should begin. The first page should NOT be numbered. In short, there is no cover page. Your name, the date, and the name of the class (GEO204) should appear left justified, but to the right side of the page, just under the title. All the basic standards of good writing, discussed on p. 9 – 10, apply here. Content Your book review should be written like an essay, without headings, or sections demarked in the text. I distinguish between a book report, which in essence summarizes what a book is about, and a review, which is minimizes summary and maximizes analysis. There are lots of places you can find high-quality book reviews (New York Review of Books, New Yorker, Atlantic Magazine, as well as many technical journals such as Quarterly Review of Biology; Paleobiology, Evolution) and if you are unsure where to begin, such places will give you a good sense of what constitutes a high-quality review. Check them out. You can assess books on their readability and their content. In the case of the former, you should be explicit and show in which way the book is well-written (or not); in the case of the latter, it should be about the treatment of the subject offered by the book. None of you is an expert in these fields, of course, but you might ask questions like whether the book left you with more questions than it answered; whether in the case of particular individuals, you developed a sense of the character (i.e., you learned something more than you would have GEO 204 Problem-Solving in Earth History (Fall, 2015): Syllabus & Guidelines Page 17 from a Wikkipedia description of names, dates, and events); whether you obtained good historical context; whether the subject really merited a biography, and etc. This work is strictly individual; however, you – individually or in a group – are welcomed and encouraged to come talk to me about this work. The rubric will follow the guidelines on p. 11 and 12. Deadlines Due dates are listed in the Timetable of your syllabus; like everything else in this class, these should be turned in by email ([email protected]) by 8:30 am on the day that they are due. GEO 204 Problem-Solving in Earth History (Fall, 2015): Syllabus & Guidelines Page 18 PERFORMANCE EVALUATION Name_____________________________ Problem no. 1 Please evaluate members of your group (including yourself – do NOT forget yourself) for Problem no. 1. Numerically rate their contribution as 0.7 (Never); 0.8 (Seldom); 0.9 (Sometimes); 1.0 (Consistent); or 1.05 (Exceptional). Only one exceptional/group/question, please. Feel free to add any explanations or comments; these are appreciated. 1. Contribution to the discussion: 2. Asking relevant questions: 3. Good listening: 4. Contribution to overall organization and group conclusions: 5. Is there anyone who worked exceptionally well on this project, doing more than his or her share, that should be singled out? Please explain. 6. Likewise, is there anyone who let the group down? Please explain.
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