System Design - EE321X
Civilizations and Cultures Reflective Essay
TEAM 2016 + BJ
Topic: Reflective Essay Testing
Dan Wanamaker
Devon Florendo
3/12/2015
Help Received: None
Testing Assignment
1)
Using the Revised C&C Rubric score the draft essay of a peer by:
1)
selecting a point score (within boxes, maximum total of 100 points) for
each of the five rubric criteria
(distinctive/artifacts/reflection/length/sources) and total the score on the
following sheet. (see the last slide for the C&C scoring rubric)
2) Provide at least two sentences of constructive feedback for each criteria
and any summary comments on the following sheet.
2)
Title this assignment “Reflective Essay Testing” with your name (and the
person’s name of the paper graded) and HR on the cover sheet; then submit
this completed template individually to the EE321X dropbox as an artifact.
3)
Give the score sheet to the person whose essay you reviewed, then go over
your comments with them to aid the in the revision of their work.
Draft Essay Score Sheet for Devon Florendo
Criteria
Point
Score
Comments
Cultural
Distinctiveness
4
He effectively identifies the distinct steps in the system design
process.Going into great detail about each. However he could use a little
more on the artifacts themselves
Analysis of
Artifacts
4
He thoughtfully reflects on how he has learned in great detail, but he is
still missing out on a bit on the artifacts themselves. Could possibly use
one paragraph reflecting on the artifacts.
Reflection on
Learning
4
He meaningfully reflects on how he learned about the artifacts, however
he needs write a little bit more about the artifacts themselves and what
they taught him about culture.
Essay Length
5
His essay exceeds the expectations for the essay length. He has 5 pages in
total with a word count of 1,555 words.
Sources and use of
MLA style
5
The Essay focuses on 4 artifacts. Which is a 5. This is counting the class
slides as an artifact.
Total Score
22/25
(88%)
Relate what he has leaned from the artifacts. Make better Overall a good
reflective essay.
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