Mohammed Alabdulwahed
108
201101550
OVERALL GRADE
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Expression Absolutely clear, accurate, appropriate, sophisticated
Ideas Relevant, explicit, engaging
Detail Developed, integrated, convincing
A+
Organization Appropriate, unified
Minor errors do not detract from effectiveness
A
Expression Clear and mostly appropriate
Ideas Relevant; Could be more explicit or engaging
Detail Developed, integrated; Mostly convincing
B+
Organization Appropriate, unified
Minor omissions
B
Expression Errors do not significantly impact on comprehension
Ideas Mostly relevant; Generally explicit
Detail Could be developed, integrated and more convincing
C+
Organization Mostly appropriate; Could be more systematic
Requires effort from the reader
C
Expression Inappropriate style or partly unclear
Ideas Limited relevance or clarity
Detail Limited development
D+
Organization Significant omissions
Not answering the question; Paragraphs not distinguished
F
COMM 1311: Written Communication
Prof. Simon N. Meade-Palmer
Section 108
Name: Mohammed Alabdulwahed
ID: 201101550
The Effects of Pressure on A PMU Student to Get Good Grades
Why does pressure effect on the students grades? Because pressure can let them tired
then don’t come to class on time then they will fail the class. Students always get on pressure
to get good grades and pass the course with high grades. If they didn’t deal with pressure very
good and might will fail the course. There are a lot of things to let you on pressure such as the
assignments; there are a lot of assignments to do in a short time and a lot more reasons. In my
essay I will talk about who the pressure will affect to the students grade by being tired, time
management and fail the course.
Pressure will let the student tired and effect on his health and let him to get bad
grades. If he gets tired from pressure that’s mean it’s a sign that the body needs some rest and
relax your mind. If the pressure gets worst and make you more tired, you will be sick and
lazy to do any homework. That will let you to lose some grades. You have to relax your mind
a little bit and get some rest. Make sure that you do all your homework and don’t let the
pressure let you to lose grades by making you tired. If you get so tired it will effect on your
time management.
Bad health and getting tired will effect on your time management. Time management
is very important in our lives and to get good grades. Sometimes time management can let
you get extra grades because you have a good attendance and your participation. Once you
have a problem in your time management you will get lower grades. It will make the
professor gets angry at you because you didn’t respect his class and come early. The solution
for time management problem is to sleep early and respect the professor by coming to class
early. If you didn’t fix your time management problem it will make you to fail the course.
Getting a lot of absence will let you to fail the course then you have to take the course
again. Failing the course can let you learn from your mistake and get high grades on the
second semester. The negative side of failing the course is your grade point average will go
down. It will effect on your future. If you want to pass the course you have to come to every
class, do all the assignments that you have to do it and study hard for the exams such as the
midterm and the final. Failing the course will get you in a lot of pressure.
In conclusion, pressure can get you in a lot of trouble such as getting tired that will
cause you to miss a lot of assignments for the course and you will get sick. Getting in a time
management problem will let you to absent and you will lose the professor respect because
you don’t respect his class. Finally you will fail the course because you didn’t deal so well
with the pressure that you are in to. If you want to be a successful man you have to deal very
good with the effects of pressure on a PMU student to get good grades.