ENGINEERING GRAMMAR (Language and Learning Online) Grammar for Engineering In Engineering, you will often be required to write lab reports and technical reports. As these form a major part of your assessment tasks, the ability to write clearly in correct academic English is important. This is not always easy, particularly for students for whom English is not their first language. These pages contain a series of grammar lessons on some common structures you will need to use when writing Engineering reports. Each unit begins with an explanation of the grammar point and rules for using it (with examples taken from actual Engineering subjects), followed by exercises to test your skill. A good follow-up exercise is to check how well you have applied the grammar point in a piece of your own writing, and correct it if necessary. Choose from tutorials on parallel structure <www.monash.edu/lls/llonline/grammar/engineering/parallelstructure/index.xml> , articles <www.monash.edu/lls/llonline/grammar/engineering/articles/index.xml> ( a and the), the passive voice <www.monash.edu/lls/llonline/grammar/engineering/passive/index.xml> , past tenses <www.monash.edu/lls/llonline/grammar/engineering/tense/index.xml> , or making transitions <www.monash.edu/lls/llonline/grammar/engineering/transitions/index.xml> using coordintors, connectors and subordinators. You can navigate through the tutorials using the menu on the left, but we suggest you work through each of the sections in the given order, using the Next button on each page. . Parallel structure This tutorial contains two sections on parallel structure: recognising parallel structure <www.monash.edu/lls/llonline/grammar/engineering/parallel-structure/1.xml> and using parallel structure <www.monash.edu/lls/llonline/grammar/engineering/parallel-structure/2.xml> . Each section contains grammar notes, examples, and exercises. Recognising parallel structure All three verbs are linked to the same subject. Therefore they must all take the same form. Part of speech Subject Sentence An engineering student Verb Verb Verb presents, analyses, and discusses data in a project report. Both adjectives describe the same subject and are linked to the same form of the verb to be. Subject verb 'to be' The lab equipment is Adjective outdated Adjective and inefficient. In the following sentences, the parallel (matching) elements are in bold. Identify the grammatical form of the words or phrases in bold from the dropdown list. The first one is done for you. Example Super T-Beams can lower costs and reduce construction time. A bridge consists of superstructure and substructure. Cycling is a healthy and environmentally friendly form of transport. The professor is an excellent teacher and a respected researcher. The aim of the experiment was to determine principal stresses and estimate the magnitude of stresses. The accuracy of results depends on the number of elements used, the size of the elements, and the construction of the model. Timeframes and site access must be considered when selecting a construction method. Now click on the verb or verb phrase that does the work of connecting the word groups marked in bold. The example below highlights the verb can which connects both lower and reduce (can lower, can reduce). Example Super T-Beams can lower costs and reduce construction time. 1. 2. 3. 4. A bridge consists of superstructure and substructure. Cycling is a healthy and environmentally friendly form of transport. The professor is an excellent teacher and a respected researcher. The aim of the experiment was to determine principal stresses and estimate the magnitude of stresses. 5. The accuracy of results depends on the number of elements used, the size of the elements, and the construction of the model. 6. Timeframes and site access must be considered when selecting a construction method. Recognising parallel structure makes it easier to understand complex sentences. Highlight the parallel elements in the following paragraph. The first one is done for you. Example Civil engineering is all around us. Industrial and commercial buildings, transport systems, water supply, and waste disposal systems are all examples of civil engineering. 1. Expanding our cities and conserving our environment depend upon the work of the civil engineer. 2. Monash graduates work in all aspects of civil engineering including technical design, computer simulation, site construction, project management, and finance. 3. In the past, civil engineering graduates have found work both in Australia and overseas. Using parallel structure Where there are two parallel elements, they must be joined with and or another suitable joining word. Where there are more than two parallel elements, the final two are joined. Examples The criteria to be considered are aesthetics, sustainability, and conservation. Students should set up the equipment, check it, then begin the experiment. Click and drag the word from the box to the correct place in the sentence. 1. Scoria was used for the project because it is suitable available locally. Drag word: and 2. The specimen was soaked in the solution placed in the box. Drag word: then 3. The next section presents a list of equipment, a description of materials, an outline of the process. Drag word: and 4. Finally, the sample is placed in the solution, soaked for at least 2 hours, dried. Drag word: then Two sentence patterns which require parallel structure are either... or and not only... but also. Either... or describes a choice. Example They will either withdraw the product or redesign it. Note that the word groups which follow both either and or must be parallel. Part of speech Sentence connector They will either verb object connector verb object or redesign it. withdraw the product Describe these two choices by writing an either... or sentence in the box below. 1. apply for a postgraduate program 2. look for a job overseas After graduation he will... Not only... but also is a more emphatic way of saying and. Example He is not only an excellent teacher but also a respected researcher. Note that the word groups which follow both not only and but also must be parallel. Part of speech Sentence connector He is not only noun phrase an excellent teacher connector but also noun phrase a respected researcher. Write a not only... but also sentence including these two points in the box below. 1. save money 2. help the environment New technology should... Items in a list must be in parallel form. Incorrect The green features include: materials should be sustainable rainwater collection tanks and recycled water installing solar panels replant trees in the construction area Correct The green features include: use of sustainable materials provision of rainwater collection tanks and recycled water installation of solar panels replanting of trees in the construction area Correct the verb form in the following example of incorrect parallelism. Example The solutions suggested include: revise the existing design, create a new design, and keeping the cost of materials down. 1. Correct form of revise 2. Correct form of create Which of the following are good ways of making a list parallel? Choose one or more options from the list below. i. ii. iii. iv. The laboratory manager's recommendations were as follows: the purchase of additional equipment to employ a casual technician training programs should be provided for students and staff The laboratory manager's recommendations were as follows: the purchase of additional equipment the employment of a casual technician the provision of training programs for students and staff The laboratory manager's recommendations were as follows: to purchase additional equipment to employ a casual technician to provide training programs for students and staff The laboratory manager's recommendations were as follows: additional equipment should be purchased a casual technician should be employed training programs should be provided for students and staff Your answer: Articles in Engineering The correct use of articles conveys precise meanings in Engineering. Deciding whether to use a, an, some, the or no article can be confusing. Examples Structural and stress analysis is a process used to study the distribution of forces through the members of a structure. Fibre reinforced plastic is an advanced composite material which has potential for the repair and strengthening of structures. Click on the highlighted text for an explanation. This section takes you through a decision making process to help you work out when an article is needed, and which article to use. You can look at the reference table for [1]countable and uncountable nouns before we begin. [1] Countable nouns Countable nouns Reference a. General Singular Plural Noun Uncountable nouns Singular a computer Plural - computers a computer Plural - computers Singular the computer Plural the computers b. Non-specific Singular c. Specific Article Uncountable nouns Reference Article Noun a. General - information b. Nonspecific - information c. Specific the information Is the noun countable or uncountable? The first step is to determine whether the noun is countable or uncountable. You can use a dictionary to check this. Countable nouns can be either singular or plural computer / computers idea / ideas information medium / information media Examples A computer can be used for the simulation The students had several ideas for the project Each group must choose one information medium for the project Most engineers use computers nowadays Uncountable nouns appear only in the singular form information (not informations) knowledge (not knowledges) research (not researches) Examples The Internet gives people access to information. The aim of the project is to gain knowledge about Global Positioning Systems. The information I found on the Internet was very useful. There seems to be a lot of research on the topic. Articles with countable nouns Click on the highlighted text to see the comments. Countable nouns can be either singular or plural as you will [1]see in the table. Countable nouns can take a, the or plural s. [1] Countable nouns Reference a. General Singular Plural Noun Singular a computer Plural - computers a computer Plural some computers Singular the computer Plural the computers b. Non-specific Singular c. Specific Article Articles with uncountable nouns Click on the highlighted text to see the comments. Uncountable nouns don't have a plural form as you will [1]see in the table. Uncountable nouns can take the or no article. [1] Uncountable nouns Reference Article Noun a. General - information b. Non-specific - information c. Specific the information Which article to use How do you know which article to use? The choice depends largely on whether you are referring to the noun in a general, non-specific or specific way. a. General reference means you are referring to a noun in a general way. b. Non-specific reference means you are referring to any one of many possible items or introducing a noun for the first time in the text. c. Specific reference means you are referring to a particular item or noun mentioned previously. General reference General reference means you are referring to a noun in a general way. Countable nouns can have a or plural s. Uncountable nouns have no article. Countable nouns Table for Countable nouns Reference a. General Singular Plural Article Noun Singular a computer Plural - computers Uncountable nouns Table for Uncountable nouns Reference a. General Article - Noun information Examples A computer is a machine which is used... Computers are machines which are used... The Internet gives people access to information. General reference is common in academic writing. It is used when giving general background or theoretical information about a topic - for example, in the introduction to a report or in a literature review. Example from a report on greenhouse gases Greenhouse gases trap heat from solar radiation, similar to the way glass panes trap heat in a greenhouse. Remove unnecessary articles Click on the highlighted text to see the tables at the bottom of the page. Correct the errors in the following sentences by clicking and dragging unnecessary definite articles to the bin. Think about whether the noun is being referred to in a specific or non-specific way. Refer to the [1]tables at the bottom for help. 1. Engineering students often have to give the oral presentations. 2. The library contains the information on many subjects. 3. In level 2, Civil Engineering students study the water systems and transportation. 4. Successful engineers have the good communication skills. [1] Countable nouns Countable nouns Reference a. General Singular Plural Noun Uncountable nouns Singular a computer Plural - computers a computer Plural - computers Singular the computer Plural the computers b. Non-specific Singular c. Specific Article Uncountable nouns Reference Article Noun a. General - information b. Nonspecific - information c. Specific the information Non-specific reference Non-specific reference means you are referring to any one of many possible items, or are introducing a noun for the first time in the text. Countable nouns can have a (single) or some (plural). Uncountable nouns have some or no article. However in scientific writing 'some' is rarely used. Non-specific reference Table for non-specific reference Singular Plural Article Noun Singular a computer Plural - computers - information Examples Most offices have a computer There are computers in the library. I need information about student services. Non specific reference is often the natural choice when describing a design, process or experimental procedure. Example from a lab report A small piece of Sample B was placed in an ignition tube with one gram of clean sodium and heated. Drag articles into place Click on the highlighted text to see the comments. Correct the errors with the following sentences by clicking and dragging an indefinite article to the right place in the sentence. Think about whether each noun is being referred to in a general, specific or non-specific way. Refer to the [1]tables for help. [1] Countable nouns Countable nouns Uncountable nouns Reference a. General Singular Plural Noun Uncountable nouns Singular a computer Plural - computers a computer Plural - computers Singular the computer Plural the computers b. Non-specific Singular c. Specific Article Reference Article a. General - information b. Nonspecific - information c. Specific the information 1. If you can't find a book, ask member of the library staff Drag word: a 2. In your report, you should give description of your experiment. Drag word: a 3. Phillip is busy this semester because he is doing double degree. Drag word: a 4. Aluminium is suitable material for aeronautics. Drag word: a Specific reference Specific reference means referring to a particular item or previously mentioned noun. Both countable and uncountable nouns use the Noun Countable nouns Reference c. Specific Singular Plural Article Noun Singular the computer Plural the computers Uncountable nouns Reference c. Specific Article the Noun information Specific reference applies when the audience knows exactly which item is referred to. Examples The computer in the department office is new. Most students use the computers in the library. The information I found on the Internet was very useful. Example from a lab report. The experiment investigated causes of corrosion using stainless steel samples. Cracks were observed in the stainless steel samples, which allowed H+ to make contact with the steel, causing the corrosion rate to rise. Superlatives are treated as specific references as there can only be one best, worst, greatest, least, most, etc. Example Two models were developed in an attempt to obtain the most accurate readings in the highest temperature range. Model 2 produced the best results. First and second reference The first time a single countable noun is introduced, use a. Thereafter, when referring to that same item, use the. Example Television is now commonplace, but few people understand how it works. Inside the television, a tiny camera breaks down pictures and sends them to a transmitter. Once the transmitter has received the pictures, it transmits them to a receiver... Fill in the blanks with a / an, the, or x (no article). Think about whether the noun is being referred to in a general, non-specific or specific way. Then check your answers by clicking on the button next to each box. Making distilled water distilling flask is attached to connected to filled with flask). source of cold water and water. beaker is placed below it. steam rises in Bunsen burner. When flask and passes through condensed steam collected in condenser is flask is partially thermometer is inserted through the stopper ( flask is heated with steam. cooled. condenser, as shown in the diagram. stopper seals water boils, it becomes condenser, where it is beaker is distilled water. (from Master, PA, (1986) Science, Medicine and Technology: English grammar and technical writing, Prentice-Hall Regents, New Jersey.) Check your understanding Check your understanding of article use with general, non-specific and specific reference. The following lines make up the introduction to a Civil Engineering project brief for the design of a hospital building. Click and drag the article in the box to the correct place in each line. 1. Sunway Medical Centre is one of most rapidly growing hospitals in Malaysia. Drag word: the 2. Due to recent population increase in the area serviced by Sunway,.... Drag word: a 3. The hospital is to build extension block adjacent to the existing building. Drag word: an 4. The extension block is to be two storeys high and will contain hospital's Radiology and Pathology departments. Drag word: the 5. Two major criteria should be considered in design: aesthetics and sustainability. Drag word: the 6. Nowadays traditional image of hospitals is changing; people expect to feel comfortable whether admitted as patients or visiting friends. Drag word: the 7. Therefore, both exterior and interior designs of the new building should be attractive and userfriendly. Drag word: the 8. Sustainable development is necessity for the future. Drag word: a 9. The new design should incorporate 'green building' technology for water recycling, energy conservation, and disposal of waste. Drag word: the The used with specified nouns The can mean "the one we are all familiar with". For example, in this country "the dollar" means "the Australian dollar". Examples the market the economy the stock exchange The is often used in science and technology to describe widely-known inventions Examples the computer the telescope the microchip the Internet The can mean "the only one" (whereas a can mean "one of many") Examples one of many the only one an engineer an industry standard a student an environmentally friendly approach a technologically advanced country another change (one of an unspecified number) the chief engineer the Building Code the best student the only successful approach the most technologically advanced country the other change (one of two changes) The can indicate that a noun is being used with a specific, countable meaning rather than a general, uncountable meaning Examples specific, countable general, uncountable the Australian Conservation Society the Japanese car industry the information industry the electronics industry Australian society Japanese industry Australian industry private industry Articles with abbreviations A useful guideline is that when a title includes a countable noun which indicates the type of entity, the is usually needed. Examples the IMF the IOC the ABC the USA the UN(O) the International Monetary Fund the International Olympic Committee the Australian Broadcasting Corporation the United States of America the United Nations Organisation However, when the abbreviation is an acronym (a group of initials that can be pronounced like a word), the is not used unless it is written out in full. Examples NATO the North Atlantic Treaty Organisation ASEAN the Association of South East Asian Nations Articles with company names Banks and newspapers usually take the. Examples the Reserve Bank The Washington Post The Age Some major companies are known only by their initials and do not take the. Examples BP IBM BHP When in doubt, consult M. Swan, (1996) Practical English Usage, Second edition, OUP, pp. 59-69. Fill in the gaps in the following paragraphs with the appropriate article: a, an or the (or x for no article). Then check your answers by clicking on the button In December, after observing next to each box. UN climate change conference in Buenos Aires, Environment Minister Ian Campbell said Australia wanted to engage in new global agreement after 2012, although its stance on signing the Kyoto Protocol, along with that of unchanged. USA, is minister also appeared to step back from Government's earlier rejection of emissions trading market. Mr Campbell also expressed a desire to get Australia in at the forefront of climate change. He told really a world leader. So why not ratify costs on Sunday Age that far from being Kyoto Protocol? global polluter, Australia was Government claims that the protocol imposes unfair economy, and that ratifying the treaty would drive industry offshore. Adapted from: The Sunday Age, 13 February, 2005. Passive voice Passive voice is used frequently in technical writing, where the focus is usually on what was done rather than who did it. It is conventionally used to report experimental procedure and to avoid constant repetition of I or we throughout the report, paper or thesis. In order to use passive voice correctly, it is necessary to fully understand, and be able to recognise, the difference between passive and active voice. Active and passive voice The active voice names an 'actor' which/who is the subject of the verb; the actor does the verb. Who/What does the verb? If the answer is clear, the sentence is active. Note that often, there is a direct object (DO) 'receiving' the action. Part of sppech Subject Verb Sentence The students tested The samples failed. Who/What is the verb done to? This is the direct object. Part of speech Sentence the samples. Subject Verb Direct Object The students tested the samples. Where possible, use the active voice. It is direct, brief, and easy to understand. The passive voice places the emphasis on the action rather than the actor.The direct object is placed before the verb, which is given in the passive form. The subject, or actor, is usually not mentioned. Example The samples were tested. Table: Formation of the passive Formation of the passive The passive can use any tense of the verb to be + a Past participle The load/s is/are was/were calculated The report/s has been have been presented The sample/s will be can be tested The result/s is/are being (should) have been (could) have been compared Reasons for using the passive 1. The 'actor' is not known. Oil was discovered off the coast of Australia. The number of Internet users was estimated to be over one million. 2. The 'actor' is not important. The report has been published. The results will be presented at the conference. 3. It is considered desirable to conceal the identity of the 'actor'. The results are invalid as the correct testing procedure was not followed. Research funding will be cut next year. 4. An impersonal tone is needed for academic writing. In this report, the stress fields in a C-shape plate will be analysed. An impersonal tone is also used for process descriptions. First, the raw materials are loaded into a container ... 5. A tactful tone is needed to smooth over an error or difficulty. Compare these two examples. Example of passive voice The samples were not checked at the second stage . . . Example of active voice We forgot to check the samples . . . Changing active to passive Example of active voice Part of speech Subject Verb Object Sentence The group will present the report next week. STEP 1: move the object to the subject position The report ... STEP 2: change the verb to the passive, making sure that BE takes the same tense as the verb in the active sentence The report will be presented ... STEP 3: drop the subject Example of passive voice without the subject The report will be presented next week. or move it to a position after the verb Example of passive voice with the subject The report will be presented by the group next week. These sentences are in the active voice. But which tense? First use the drop downs to choose the verb tense of the active sentence. 1. For the purposes of this report I surveyed six companies. Tense: 2. We tested the samples under various conditions. Tense: 3. The department will announce the results next Tuesday. Tense: 4. A company in Korea manufactures this equipment. Tense: 5. You did not inform us about the results of the survey. Tense: Now fill in the blanks to change the verbs in the sentences above from active voice to passive voice. Remember to keep the verb in the same tense. Then check your answers by clicking on the button next to each box. 1. Six companies 2. The samples 3. The results (test) under various conditions. (announce) next Tuesday. 4. The equipment 5. We (survey) for the purpose of this report. (manufacture) by a company in Korea. (not inform) about the results of the survey. Verbs which can't be used in the passive Most verbs can be changed from the active to the passive. Active voice Sentence Passive voice > We tested the samples. The samples were tested. If the verb can be followed by a direct object (a direct object answers the question who or what after the verb) it can be made passive. Part of speech Senetnce These difficulties verb direct object may delay the completion of the project. But the verb occur, for example, cannot take a direct object. Part of speech Verb Indirect object Sentence A solution occurred to him. This cannot be transformed to the passive since there is no direct object to become the subject. Some verbs which can be used only in the active are: occur, rise, happen, arise, fall, exist, consist (of), depend (on), result (from). Active and passive verbs Active (correct) Passive (incorrect) Problems may occur happen arise exist Problems may be occurred happened arisen existed They consist of They are consist of depend depend on on Note: 'They are dependent on . . .' is correct since 'dependent' is an adjective. A special case: Part of speech Subject Verb Object Sentence They lack resources. Lack can take a direct object but cannot be transformed to the passive: Resources are lacked (incorrect). However, you could write: Resources are lacking. Label these sentences correct or incorrect 1. These problems may be happened quite frequently. 2. Problems may arise in the early stages. 3. The solution occurred to him yesterday. 4. Failure may be occurred during heating. 5. Difficulties may be existed. 6. Difficulties may arise. Concern and involve Whether or not they can be used in the passive depends on the meaning. To involve has three meanings: 1. To participate, to take part 2. To include 3. To require Only the first meaning, to participate, to take part can be used in the passive form. This week, students are involved in lab work. The active voice must be used with the second meaning, to include. Example He often involves his students in his research. The active voice must also be used with the third meaning, to require. Example The project involves buying new software. Use the correct form of involve (active or passive) in the following sentences. 1. Effective group leadership 2. A good leader a variety of skills. all group members in decision making. 3. All members of the group should in project planning. Concerned about means 'worried about'. Concerned with means 'involved in'. The passive voice can be used with both meanings. Complete these sentences with the correct preposition (with or about) in the following sentences. 1. The students are concerned 2. Engineers nowadays are concerned their next assignment. the development of sustainable technology. Past tenses There are many different ways of indicating that an event took place in the past. In your writing for engineering, you can use the simple past <www.monash.edu/lls/llonline/grammar/engineering/tense/1.xml> , present perfect <www.monash.edu/lls/llonline/grammar/engineering/tense/2.xml> , present perfect progressive <www.monash.edu/lls/llonline/grammar/engineering/tense/3.xml> , or the past perfect progressive <www.monash.edu/lls/llonline/grammar/engineering/tense/4.xml> . All of these different past tenses have slightly different meanings in terms of the chronology - or the order - in which things happened. Check out these tutorials to learn more about how to use these different tenses effectively. The past simple tense The past simple describes completed actions and past situations. Examples In this experiment, two plastics and one ceramic were investigated. The results showed that both components were polymers. He graduated from Monash in 1999. NOTE: The time referred to must be clear; either specified: a year ago;from 1993 to 1995; throughout the 1980s or implied: early studies, in this experiment. In academic writing, the past simple may be used to describe research conducted in the past if it is not strongly linked to the present situation. Examples Zhao and Hancock (1995b) proposed design rules for tear-out failure in steel connections. The yield strength of steels was found by Davis (1992) to range from... In report writing, past tense verbs may be used in the description of method. Examples The researchers surveyed twenty organisations... The samples were tested under two different conditions. They may also be used in the findings. Examples The survey revealed that... Results showed that... Fill in the blanks in the following sentences with the correct form of the verb. Then check your answers by clicking on the button 1. Cook (1995) next to each box. (claim) that the solution 2. Early studies by Blake and Iwaki 3. Haberditzl (can) be improved by... (find) that... (show) that the velocity of many enzyme reactions the end product (be slowed down) if (have) an increased paramagnetism. The present perfect tense The present perfect tense links the past and the present. The present perfect tense I / We have been She / He has completed received You / They have had It is used to refer to: an action or situation which began in the past and is still current an action or event which took place in the past, where the exact time of the event is not specified or not clear an action or event which has just happened Examples He has lived here since he was young. (came many years ago, still here) For the past two years she has worked at the stock exchange. (started two years ago, still there) I have been to London, but I haven't been to New York. (at some/any time in my life) Have you found the book you were looking for? (between the time you started looking and now) She has just arrived. (a short time ago; here she is) We have finished the management report! (a short time ago; here it is) In academic or technical writing the present perfect tense is often used to report on recent research or trends. Examples Recent studies have shown that more efficient water management will be needed as global warming increases. In the past five years several car manufacturers have developed hybrid vehicles. Notes Every present perfect verb has two parts: 1. have/has always in present tense 2. past participle of the main verb (been, seen, done, found, studied, written, etc.) The following words are often used with the present perfect: since, for, recent, recently, just, ever, yet, already 1. What word does Sentence 1 use as the present perfect indicator? 2. What word does Sentence 2 use as the present perfect indicator? Change each verb to the present perfect form. Then check your answers by clicking on the button next to each box. 1. In recent years, the emphasis on sustainability in Civil Engineering significantly. 2. Engineers Without Borders is a not-for-profit organisation which countries since 2001. 3. Few researchers 4. The Kyoto Protocol countries. 5. Group 1 (increase) (work) in developing (investigate) the possibility of human-like locomotion in robots. (not achieve) the intended results as it has not been ratified by all (complete) the first assignment, but Group 2 (not start)yet. Past simple or present perfect? Click one of the two forms of the verbs in brackets to select the correct tense. The first two have been done for you. 1. All samples ( failed / have failed) under the first test condition. Reason Because we have the results, it is clear that the testing is complete; that is, past and finished. 2. Recent studies (showed / have shown) that... Reason It is unclear exactly when the studies were carried out. 1. Research conducted in the 1990s ( showed / has shown) that... Reason The 1990s are past and finished. 2. The studies ( were not completed / have not been completed) yet. Reason The word 'yet' shows that the timeframe for the studies is not past. 3. Two years ago, researchers ( demonstrated / have demonstrated) the link between... Reason 'Two years ago' is past and finished. 4. Over the past six years, there ( were / have been) several exciting developments in the field of mechatronics. Reason The exact times of the developments are not specified. 5. Lewis's (2004) investigation ( proved / has proved) the effect of... Reason The exact year is given. 6. An investigation ( was carried out / has been carried out) recently into... Reason 'Recently' is the hint. The following news report, which is an update on a major building project, uses both past simple and present prefect tenses. Write the correct tense of the verb in each gap. Where the passive voice is needed, be is given with the verb in brackets. Then check your answers by clicking on the button next to each box. The board of directors of Medway Medical Centre (announce) twelve months ago that an extension block would be built in the grounds beside the existing building. Although funding yet (be approved), ProTec Engineering Bernard Wilkes, not (complete) the design. The hospital CEO, Mr (release) the design at a press conference yesterday. While the new building is designed to blend aesthetically with the older building, Mr Wilkes (emphasise) yesterday that sustainability was one of the key design criteria. 'Green building technology (be incorporated) at all stages of the design, as we project.' (request) at the beginning of the Present perfect progressive The present perfect tense can also be used in the progressive form. This is used to refer to situations where the action is ongoing at the current time, when there is also reference to the length of time it has been ongoing. Examples Current situation: Researchers are investigating clean energy sources. Since becoming aware of global warming, researchers have been investigating clean energy sources to replace fossil fuels. Current situation: She is working on her PhD. She has been working on her PhD for the past 12 months. Sample sentences 1. He has been with Monash for seven years. 2. She has worked here since she sold her business. 3. Research funding has increased in recent years. 4. We have completed the report and will submit it tomorrow 5. The study has now been completed and a paper has been submitted for review. Refer to the numbered sentences above to answer the following questions. You can choose more than one option. 1. Which sentences describe a continuing situation? 2. Which sentences describe recent actions? Past perfect and past perfect progressive The past perfect is used to refer to an event or situation which took place before another past event. Examples Although she had considered post-graduate study, at the end of the year she decided to look for a job. By the time he arrived, the lecture had already started. The order of information in the sentence may be reversed. Example The lecture had already started by the time he arrived. Note: The past perfect is usually used in conjunction with a past simple verb. Both describe past actions or situations, but one event occurred earlier than the other. Sample Sentences 1. By the time he began writing the report, he had completed most of his experiments. 2. Before the new equipment was installed, lab work had been very slow. Here is a timeline for Sentence 1 earlier past | completed most experiments (event 1) _ more recent past | began writing (event 2) Click to select the event (subject plus verb) which occurred first in the following sentences. 1. Several senior engineers had left the company by the time the new CEO arrived. 2. It was announced yesterday that funding had been withdrawn from the project. 3. Until the new database was developed, the staff had struggled to keep student records up to date. Fill in the blanks with the correct past and past perfect verb forms. 1. When he 2. She (arrive), the meeting (tell) me that she 3. Yesterday she results. (start). (find) a job. (report) that a number of errors (be identified) in the analysis of Past perfect progressive The past perfect tense also has a progressive form. This is used to refer to situations where the earlier event was an ongoing action which had been ongoing for a period of time before the simple past event. Examples Although the students had been working on the project for six weeks, their report was not ready by the due date. Before the hydrogen project began, the engineers had been working on hybrid technology. Transition signals Compare Paragraphs 1 and 2. Both give the same information, yet one is easier to follow because it contains transition signals like for example to lead the reader from one idea to the next. Paragraph 1 A difference among the world's seas and oceans is that the salinity varies in different climate zones. The Baltic Sea in northern Europe is only one quarter as saline as the Red Sea in the Middle East. There are two reasons for this. In warm climates, water evaporates rapidly. The concentration of salt is greater than that in cold climate zones, where water evaporates slowly. In hot areas the surrounding land is dry and does not contribute much fresh water to dilute the salty seawater. The runoff created by melting snow in cold areas adds a considerable amount of fresh water to dilute the saline seawater. (adapted from Oshima and Hogue, 1999) Notice that the second paragraph is more coherent. Click on the transition signals in the paragraph below. Paragraph 2 Another difference among the world's seas and oceans is that the salinity varies in different climate zones. For example, the Baltic Sea in northern Europe is only one quarter as saline as the Red Sea in the Middle East. There are two reasons for this. First of all, in warm climates, water evaporates rapidly; therefore, the concentration of salt is greater than that in cold climate zones, where water evaporates slowly. Secondly, in hot areas the surrounding land is dry and consequently does not contribute much fresh water to dilute the salty seawater. In contrast, the runoff created by melting snow in cold areas adds a considerable amount of fresh water to dilute the saline seawater. (adapted from Oshima and Hogue, 1999) Coordinators Coordinators join two independent clauses to form one compound sentence. They cannot be used as transition signals between two sentences containing one independent clause each. Some examples of coordinators are and, but, yet, or, nor, for, so. Example 1 Example table for independent clause independent clause independent clause In cold climates, water evaporates slowly. Melting snow adds runoff to the sea. Correct In cold climates, water evaporates slowly and melting snow adds runoff to the sea. Incorrect In cold climates water evaporates slowly. And melting snow adds runoff to the sea. (adapted from Oshima and Hogue, 1999) Example 2 Example table for independent clause independent clause independent clause In hot climates water evaporates quickly. The oceans have higher salinity. Correct In hot climates water evaporates quickly, so the oceans have higher salinity. Incorrect In hot climates water evaporates quickly. So the oceans have higher salinity. (adapted from Oshima and Hogue, 1999) Select the correct method of joining the following sentences. 1. Traffic-related air pollution is a serious problem in many countries. It is getting worse. Traffic-related air pollution is a serious problem in many countries. And it is getting worse. Traffic-related air pollution is a serious problem in many countries, and it is getting worse. 2. Bicycle holding rails are now installed at many intersections. Cyclists can stop without having to dismount. Bicycle holding rails are now installed at many intersections, so cyclists can stop without having to dismount. Bicycle holding rails are now installed at many intersections. So cyclists can stop without having to dismount. Sentence connectors Sentence connectors form a bridge between two independent clauses. Some examples: however, therefore, furthermore, for example, on the other hand, in addition, still, otherwise, that is. a. to form one compound sentence, punctuated with a semicolon (;) and a comma (,) o In hot climates water evaporates quickly; therefore, the concentration of salt is greater. o Ocean salinity varies in different climate zones; for example, the Baltic Sea is much less saline than the Red Sea. b. to form two sentences, the second of which begins with the sentence connector followed by a comma (,) o In hot climates water evaporates quickly. Therefore, the oceans are more saline. o Ocean salinity varies in different climate zones. For example, the Baltic Sea is much less saline than the Red Sea. Select the correct method of joining the following sentences. 1. Many local councils have taken steps to encourage the use of bicycles. Cycling lanes have been added to many major roads. Many local councils have taken steps to encourage the use of bicycles, for example cycling lanes have been added to many major roads. Many local councils have taken steps to encourage the use of bicycles; for example, cycling lanes have been added to many major roads. 2. Cycling is being encouraged as it has the potential to ease traffic congestion and air pollution. The high number of accidents is a concern. Cycling is being encouraged as it has the potential to ease traffic congestion and air pollution. However, the high number of accidents is a concern. Cycling is being encouraged as it has the potential to ease traffic congestion and air pollution. However the high number of accidents is a concern. Subordinators Subordinators join two clauses in one complex sentence. As these words introduce a dependent clause (one which cannot stand alone as a sentence), both clauses must be combined in one sentence. Some examples: because, after, since, as, although, if, when, so that. a. Examples with the dependent clause at the beginning of the sentence, followed by a comma o Because water evaporates rapidly in hot climates, the surrounding oceans have higher salinity. o If the climate is cold, the surrounding ocean will be less saline. b. Examples with the dependent clause last, in which case no comma is used o Oceans in hot climates have higher salinity because the water evaporates more rapidly. o The surrounding ocean will be less saline if the climate is cold. Identify the correct method of joining the following sentences. 1. Holding rails can increase cyclist safety. Many cyclists prefer not to use them. Although, holding rails can increase cyclist safety many cyclists prefer not to use them. Although holding rails can increase cyclist safety, many cyclists prefer not to use them. 2. Pedestrians also complain about holding rails. They restrict space at intersections. Pedestrians also complain about holding rails, because they restrict space at intersections. Pedestrians also complain about holding rails because they restrict space at intersection. As for other subordinators, whereas and while introduce a dependent clause (one which cannot stand alone as a sentence), so both clauses must be combined in one sentence. Unlike the examples above, however, the two clauses must be separated by a comma whatever the position of the subordinate clause within the sentence. a. Examples with the dependent clause at the beginning of the sentence o While water evaporates rapidly in hot climates, in cold climates it evaporates slowly. b. Examples with the dependent clause last o In cold climates water evaporates slowly, whereas in hot climates it evaporates rapidly. Decide whether the connectors are used correctly or incorrectly in the following sentences. 1. Gasoline powered vehicles are an essential part of our transport system however there is increasing awareness that something must be done to reduce the pollutants they produce. 2. While work is progressing slowly on the development of a hydrogen fuel system, several car manufacturers have successfully developed cleaner hybrid gas/electric cars. 3. Several models are already available; however, consumers are slow to make the change. 4. Many people are unable to buy these clean cars. Because the cost is still 30% higher than that of comparable combustion engine cars. 5. Governments should take steps to make clean cars more affordable, for example by subsidising the manufacturing costs or imposing a pollution tax on older gasoline and diesel vehicles. 6. Many governments are hesitating to take such steps as they are afraid that a changeover would result in high job losses. Moreover, they are unwilling to upset the powerful oil lobbies. Acknowledgements: Oshima, A and Hogue, A, 1999, Writing Academic English, 3rd ed., Adison, Wesley, Longman, White Plains N.Y. Swan, M, 1995, Practical English Usage, 2nd ed., Oxford University Press, Oxford. 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