REFEREE REPORT FOR “HETEROGENEOUS LABOR SKILLS, THE MEDIAN VOTER, AND LABOR TAXES” (This report is written on the presumption that the paper is submitted to the Journal of Economic Theory.) This paper discusses theoretically the determination of labor income taxes in a neoclassical real business cycle model with workers heterogeneous in their skills, and the sequences of policies be decided at period 0 through majority voting. The authors first showed that in this environment, the Median Voter Theorem holds in the sense that the equilibrium policy is the one preferred by the agent with the median skill. They then characterized the properties of the equilibrium policy. In particular, the equilibrium taxes are increasing in the distance between the median and mean skills, and are also increasing in the aggregate labor supply. The existence of a median voter is proved by showing that the indirect utilities of the agents satisfy single cross condition, which comes from the monotonicity of the indirect utility on the agents’ innate skills. The equilibrium taxes are shaped by the balance of the benefits and costs from redistribution, and the distortions in efficiency that come along. Redistribution is more beneficial if the distribution of income is more skewed, in the meanwhile, it is also more costly in periods with lower labor supply. Both channels are consistent with the literature (Meltzer and Richard (1981) and Chari, Christiano, and Kehoe (1994)). Calibrated versions of the model are used to explore the cyclical properties of the model quantitatively. Overall, I think the paper answers an interesting research question. The methodology adopted in the paper is appropriate. The insights drawn from this paper contribute to the discussions of optimal taxation in theory and are potentially important in explaining long-run changes or some crosscountry comparisons of tax policies. However, there are still rooms for the paper to be improved in my opinion. Some of these are related to the content of the paper, while others are concerning the exposition of the paper. Section I summarizes those relate to the content of the paper, and section II lists those relate to the exposition of the paper. Section III concludes. I C ONTENT First and foremost, I think the paper could be more focused. The authors presented a lot of interesting results in the paper, however, some of them are not in direct support of the main subject. As a result, instead of strengthening the main points, the messages conveyed by the paper are blurred by too many loosely related results. The paper could either focus on theoretical insights from the characterization of the optimal labor income taxes, or could go further positively by emphasizing the ability of the model to explain observed patterns from the data. Since the paper appears to be marching further over the theoretical contributions, most of the rest comments are aiming at highlighting the theoretical contributions of this paper. If the authors choose to go the other way round, some of my suggestions are explained at the end of this section. 1 1. Highlighting the Theoretical Contributions.—As is stated by the authors, this paper is an extension of the work by Bassetto and Benhabib (2006). More specifically, Bassetto and Benhabib (2006) discussed the determination of capital income taxes in a similar environment where workers are homogeneous, and the only heterogeneity is on the initial capital endowment. This paper extends the analysis by introducing heterogeneous skills and labor income taxes. I think it would be nice to highlight the difference between the channels introduced by initial capital and skills heterogeneity, and those introduced by capital income taxes and labor income taxes. My understand is that in Bassetto and Benhabib (2006), the capital taxes have a Bang-bang property because finite periods high capital taxes with lump-sum transfers could completely achieve the redistribution purpose of the median voter, leaving only the efficiency consideration at work in later periods, which leads to zero capital income taxes. The difference here is that since skills heterogeneity generates persistent inequality in income stream, a Bang-bang labor income taxes will never correct all inequality perceived by the median voter. As a result, the labor income taxes are always positive, so long as the median skill is less than the mean. Regarding the intuitions in the previous paragraph, I wish to make three remarks. First, I think the authors could emphasize this intuition explicitly in the paper to help readers both understand the general logic of the paper better, and to connect with the literature closer. Second, I am not sure why the authors need to keep the heterogeneity in initial wealth and capital income taxes in their analysis. Having both taxes simultaneously is important in the optimal taxation literature (Chamley-Judd) because the insight there relies on the comparison of capital income taxes and labor income taxes. However, it does not seem to me that the interactions between the labor income taxes and capital income taxes will lead to different qualitative properties of the equilibrium labor income taxes, especially since a strong structure—affine to skills—is imposed on the heterogeneity in the initial capital. Also since in all the quantitative experiments, zero initial capital is assumed, I do not think quantitatively, the capital taxes matter for the purpose of this paper either. In fact, I think what is under explored here is the role played by leisure. While it is clear from Proposition 3 that the elastic labor supply is key to bound the labor income taxes from unity, what is less explored is how the consumption-leisure choices affect the redistribution/efficiency motives of the median voter. 2. Log-Utility.—Throughout the main body of the paper, the authors stick to the special case of log-utility as opposed to the more general case. I understand that a log-utility simplifies significantly the algebra, and makes the economic intuition much more transparent. However, if the authors would like to emphasize on the theoretical contributions of this paper, I think it would be nice to state all the main results in the more general case, and later use the log-utility as illustrating examples. According to Table 4, the intertemporal elasticity of substitution σ seems to have a significant impact on the quantitative performance of the model. Therefore, I think it worths the efforts to check whether some economic insights could be found in this more general treatment, especially given the recent contribution by Werning and Straub 2 (2015), where σ assumes a central role.1 3. Normative or Positive?—This is closely related to how the paper could be motivated, and how the quantitative results of the model should be interpreted. The way that the authors currently motivate the paper seems to suggest that they would like the theory presented here to serve as a candidate to explain (1) the simultaneous rise of labor income inequality and labor income taxes in the U.S in the last several decades, and (2) the procyclical fiscal policies observed in some developing countries. Although the model has the ability to deliver the empirical facts, to claim the theory explains these facts requires more work. More specifically, I think the empirical evidence as is in the paper now could shed light on the first fact, however, more efforts on empirical evidence are needed if the second fact is to be explained using the theory here. To state that the rising wage inequality drives the increase in labor income taxes, in the context of this paper, is equivalent to saying that the increasing redistribution motives causes the corresponding increase in the taxes. I think it is a reasonable statement, if put in a relatively long period of time like several decades. By a comparison of the equilibrium tax rates between two steady states which only differ in the wage inequality, the size of the increase in labor income taxes driven by the increase in inequality through the channel of majority voting could be isolated. This is essentially the results in Table 3 of the paper. However, I am not sure how much can be taken out of the results in Figure 2. Given the way the ρs are measured, and the way the upper and lower bounds are calculated, it is not clear to me how to interpret the fact that the actual tax path lies with in the two bounds, and what is the extra insight that we are gaining beyond the steady-state comparison. Somewhat related, since the job and wage polarization, and the inequality that follows are being intensively examined by labor economists recently, I think a connection to that literature will help the motivation of the paper. See for example the series of work by David Autor, Autor, Levy, and Murnane (2003), Autor, Katz, and Kearney (2008), Acemoglu and Autor (2011), Autor and Dorn (2013), and related work by Jaimovich and Siu (2015).2 The implications of the model over the business cycles in my opinion, should be interpreted with much more caution. While I think few people will argue that over a longer horizon, wage inequality has an important role in shaping the labor income tax policy, it is less apparent to me why over the business cycle—which usually happens in horizon measured by quarters— this is the case. It is important to show at least some anecdotal evidence which indicates deliberate changes in labor income taxes at the cyclical frequency. The work cited in this paper (McDaniel (2007)) in my opinion is not enough to justify this causal relationship. To see this, consider the following example. The way McDaniel (2007) imputed the average labor income tax rate is by dividing the tax revenue that comes from the labor income by the total labor income in the economy. Suppose that the tax rate does not change at all over the business cycles. Since the United States adopts a progressive labor income tax in reality, if we 1 A fair point though is that at 2009, Werning and Straub (2015) is yet to come. Again, I am not sure whether Jaimovich and Siu (2015) exists dates back to 2009, but the other papers certainly have been circulated back then. 2 3 assume that poor people are hit harder during recessions (Elsby, Hobijn, and Sahin (2010)), the population that has taxable labor income will turn out to earn relatively higher wages and hence are subject to higher average tax rate in recessions. Therefore, in this hypothetical example, although the actual tax rates do not change at all, the measured tax rate according to McDaniel (2007) will show up as counter-cyclical, simply due to the mechanical change of the composition of the population.3 If the above example is actually true, it would be risky to claim that the cyclical variation of income inequality is the driving force of the cyclical variation of the measured average income taxes. Even if empirical evidence could be found on the causal relationship over the business cycle, caveats must be taken with the structural assumption of the evolution of θ. If the relationship of θi (st ) = γ(st ) + ρ(st )θ0i is in fact mis-specified, how the implied statistical property of the model should be interpreted is not very clear to me. It is for the reasons above that I would suggest the author to concentrate on the theoretical contributions of the paper with numerical implications on the long-run taxes change. I think it would require some extensive amount of efforts empirically to credibly justify that over the business cycles, the redistribution-efficiency trade-off works as the driving force to shape the labor income tax rates. The section of the paper that describes how the model is calibrated (Section 7.1), however, should definitely be written in a clearer manner regardless of what the quantitative exercises in the future will be. I find it, for example, confusing of how the transition matrix is estimated. Issues like what are the filters being used, what are the criteria that A and ρ are categorized as high and low should definitely be clearly and explicitly stated, in order that the quantitative results be interpreted correctly. II E XPOSITION Overall I think the exposition of the paper is quite clear, in this section I will state some suggestions on minor issues that I think will improve the flow of the paper. 1. Conciseness.—As is explained in the last section, I think the paper could be sharper and more concise than it is at this moment by either dropping some of the results or leaving them in a separate appendix. First, if my understanding about the weak relationship between the capital income taxes and labor income taxes are correct, I think results on capital income taxes could be dropped from the main body of the paper (with a suitable modification of the model). This includes Assumption 1, Lemma 4, Lemma 5, and Corollary 1. The spaces that are saved could then be devoted to more explanation on the theoretical insights arisen from heterogeneous skills and labor income taxes. Second, I am not sure the numerical example of the cyclical properties of the model with stochastic labor skills (section 6.1) is needed, because the discussions on the directions of the each functioning channel is clear already in the preceding section. To further show that the overall effect of two channels working on opposite directions could go either way using a hypothetical numerical example seems redundant to me. In fact, given the concerns over the applicability of the model to 3 More on the recent development of the composition of the unemployed population, see Mueller (2012). 4 cyclical facts, I am not even sure about whether a quantitative investigation of the model with stochastic labor skills is needed (the second experiment in Section 7.1 and Section 7.2). 2. Related Literature.—The literature review of the paper should be considered again. The way the literature review is written at this moment contains too much description of the papers, but too little explanations on how the current paper is connected to those papers. As a result, it is somewhat difficult to locate the paper in the literature, and to understand the contribution of this paper to which strand of literature and by how much. I think this should be jointly considered with the authors’ decision about on which direction to push the paper, and how to motivate the paper. 3. Typos.—Here omitted. III C ONCLUSIONS To summarize, I think the paper studies an interesting research question with an appropriate method. The general structure the analysis is developed and delivered is clear and easy to follow. 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