M4U4 writing

Practice:(2014,安徽)
为
了帮注重学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了
“HEART-TO -HEART” 专 栏 。 假 设 你 是 该 栏 目 的 编 辑
Jamie,收到一封匿名为worried的求助信。信中该同学向
你诉说了自己的困惑;近日容易发脾气,使正常学习和生
活受到了影响。请用英文给该学生写一封120字左右的慰
问信。
内容要点如下:
1.表示理解并给予安慰
2.提出建议并说明原因
体裁
话题
时态
人称
慰问信
关注同学的困扰
现在完成时;一般现在时
I and you
content:
(1)first, state your purpose of writing this letter
(2)second, show your sympathy and encouragement
show the wish that you'll reach your hands if
needed or recommend some specific measures
(3)An the end, please express your best wishes and
sympathy
feature of language:
(1)vivid and kind(2)emotional and sincere
Three parts:
1. purpose
2. measures
What advise can you give? and why?
3. show sympathy again and best wishes
1.词汇
control your temper
控制你的情绪
physical exercise
身体锻炼
effective
有效的
get rid of
去除,除掉
be optimistic about
对...乐观
对...态度积极 a positive attitude towards
calm down
平静下来
take a deep breath
深呼吸
1. I'm shocked/sorry to hear that....
2.It was a great shock to hear that...
3. I'm writing to express my deep
sympathy/care for you.
4. I understand how you feel now./ I
know the way you feel very well now.
5. It is true that attitude decides
everything. So you should never give up
no matter what happens.
6. we are best friends so I will...
7.If I can be any help, please don't
hesitate to let me know.
8.I hope our caring will help to comfort
you.
(1)一句多译
为了不说或者不做出会让你后悔的事情,非常重
要的是学会控制自己的情绪。
The very important thing is to learn to control your
so that
temper______________you
may not do or say
anything you will regret.
The very important thing is to learn to control your
in order that
temper______________you
may not do or say
anything you will regret.
(2)一句多译
对生活积极的态度对提高你的情绪有帮助。
helpful
Such a positive attitude towards life can be
__________
in lifting your spirits.
Such a positive attitude towards life can be
__________
of help
in lifting your spirits.
2.按要求完成句子
Talk to someone. You trust someone.(用定语从句合
并句子)
Talk to someone you trust.
Go outdoors and play team games with your friends.
Physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of
anger..(用状语从句合并句子)
Go outdoors and play team games with your
friends as/because physical exercise is an
effective way to get rid of anger
You can do physical exercise, which not only
can make you get rid of the bad feelings, but
also can build up your body.
I think it's a good way for you that when you
feel angry, you can calm down by counting ten
to fifteen.
It is indisputable that attitude decides
everything.
In my view, physical exercise directly
contributes to helping to lift your spirits.
Why not take a deep breath to make you
calm down when you are extremely angry ?
To take a deep breath and think about why
you get angry can help you calm down quickly.
It is a great shock to hear that you are not
feeling well. I had the same experience with
you so I know the way you feel well now.
Obviously, it's very dangerous that you often
lost your temper because it has influenced
your study and normal life. It is urgent that
immediate measures should be taken to stop
the situation. Consequently. you can take
some measures to control your temper like
doing exercise. It can transfer pressure into
energy.
As far as I'm concerned, attitude decides
everything. An optimistic attitude will lighten your
life as it will broaden your world as well as
emphasize sharply the values of life. An
optimistic attitude is the sharpest weapon to the
problem. Only when we are aware of these can we
develop a correct attitude to overcome a series
of difficulties.
Hi Worried,
I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the
moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those
periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't
have to worry so much. The very important thing is to learn to
control your temper so that you may not do or say anything
you'll regret. Here are three useful tips.
First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a
good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or
yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your
friends as/because physical exercise is an effective way to get
rid of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future.
Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting
your spirits.
I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.
Yours,
Jamie