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(Worse) It is important to know the pros and
cons on the occasion of choosing a compact
disk (CD) recorder.
(Better) The pros and cons must be known
when choosing a compact disk (CD) recorder.
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(Worse) There is a chance that the college will
install l00Mbps cards notwithstanding the
fact that they have served the school well in
the past history.
(Better) The college might install 100Mbps
cards although they have served the school
well in the past.
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(Worse) It could happen that the college will
really keep up with the changing times on the
basis of installing 100Mbps cards.
(Better) The college could keep up with
changes by installing 100 Mbps cards.
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(Worse) To reach a decision on the manner in
which to upgrade its system , the possibility
exists for the school to replace the 10Mbps
cards with the 100Mbps network cards.
(Better) To decide how to upgrade its system,
the school may replace the 10Mbps cards
with the 100Mbps network cards.
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(Worse) It is crucial that the consumer
possesses knowledge about using either a
mouse or a track ball before making a
purchase of a product.
(Better) The consumer must know how to use
either a mouse or a trackball before
purchasing a product.
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(Worse) It is necessary that the mouse has
the ability to move around the workspace
in any direction in order to perform its
work task.
(Better) The mouse must be able to move
around the workspace in any direction to
perform its task.
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(Worse) There is a need for a trackball to stay
stationary under circumstances in which
limited space is available
(Better) A trackball must stay stationary when
limited space is available.
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(Worse) It is possible that a mouse is easier
for the beginning user to control for the
reason that a hand is easier to move in any
direction compared to a thumb.
(Better) A mouse may be easier for the
beginning user to control since a hand is
easier to move in any direction than a thumb.
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(Worse) It goes without saying that it is not
necessary for a trackball to have total hand
and arm movement in order to move the
cursor around the screen.
(Better) A trackball does not require total
hand and arm movement to move the cursor
around the screen.
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(Worse) The mouse has a sort of ball inside
that basically moves along the workspace and
controls electronic connections inside the
particular device itself.
(Better) The mouse has a ball inside that
moves along the workspace and controls
electronic connections inside the device itself.
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(Worse) It is the board of directors who make
a decision in the event that the future plan
will be accepted.
(Better) The board of directors decides if the
plan will be accepted.
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(Worse) There are laser printers that have a
slight edge over other types of printers in
terms of printing speed and cost.
(Better) Laser printers have a slight edge over
other types of printers in printing speed and
cost.