education policy analysis archives A peer-reviewed, independent, open access, multilingual journal EPAA Response Table Manuscript Number: 2521 Title: Putting Political Spectacle to Work: Understanding Local Resistance to the Common Core Manuscript re-submitted: September 11, 2016 Reviewer #1’s Comments: 1. Theory The author does a quite good job in covering issues of the theory and should be commended for the effort. The presentation is clear and complete. Including Foucault, however, represents an unnecessary diversion and fails to contribute to the paper. It should be acknowledged in the context of this study that Edelman was a realist not an interpretivist or poststructuralist. In the kind of politics theorized in the political spectacle participants are categorized in two groups. The audience receives (and constructs) the drama set upon the stage. Yet behind the curtain the actors rationally produce real benefits according to their self-interests. Responses: I removed the discussion involving Foucault and streamlined the discussion of political spectacle. The streamlining included removal of the debate regarding the relative merits of political spectacle as a theory and focus on the elements that go into the creation of a political spectacle (construction of the problem, symbols, etc.) I address Edelman as a realist who was seeking to provide an alternative theory to the reality of the conservative ascendency he experienced in the 1980’s. The theme of onstage versus backstage presence is introduced in the synopsis of Edelman’s theory and developed through the findings and conclusion sections. 2. Methods of the study need substantial work. Methods of data collection are not sufficiently detailed and quite sketchy. Qualitative studies require great care in showing exactly what was done to generate and analyze the data and to describe the context of the case. Methods of data analysis are poorly described and not at all connected to the findings. The reader My methods section is revised. Utilizing Reviewer #2’s suggestions, I re-analyzed my data utilizing a qualitative media analysis protocol (Altheide & Schneider, 2013). The protocol actually analyzes the public documents: news reports, social media posts, radio talk show appearance, governing board mintues, district communication, etc. I also utilized Stake’s work on case studies rather than Yin’s. This 1 needs to be able to track the researchers’ logic in moving from data through analysis to results. The author names the methods, but that is not enough. Coding can mean many things and the reader needs to know which one was actually used in this instance. 3. Findings The findings were presented as a narrative that was disjointed and repetitive. I had a hard time linking up political spectacle theory to the findings. It was unclear what the policy itself consisted of. Was it the adoption and implementation of Common Core or textbook adoption? Common Core, textbooks and materials, teacher training and capacity-building events as well as the research basis of the policy ought to be described. More details are needed to trace the history of what happened to determine whether political spectacle theory even applies. I agree it was a spectacle of some kind, but it seemed the audience was anything but passive recipients of the policy. Of course the Coalition failed to represent the interests of all students but members did fight back (and indeed may have exacerbated existing inequalities). The opportunities to “review” the materials fit the theory, as efforts such as these are likely to be symbolic rather than instrumental. allowed a more accurate description of my role as Stake speaks of “intrinsically motivated” case studies. Case study boundaries are also redefined utilizing Stake. I also provide much more detail regarding the study’s context. The findings section is also completely re-written and now incorporates much more specific details mainly drawn from the policy actor’s own words drawn from the aforementioned sources. The narrative is now thicker with quotes. I’ve also added much more on the federal and state contexts along with a richer description of the district itself. I restructured the findings section along the lines of a typical story outline that is consistent with the dramatic nature of this situation: exposition, rising action, climax, denouement. Additionally, I add analysis periodically with the findings thus explaining the findings as the story progresses. Finally, additional elements of the spectacle are more substantively included in the findings including quotes drawn from school documents. For example, I analyze a power point presentation I gave at a parent meeting between the text adoption and the first dramatic Governing Board meeting. These additional documents help tie together the various elements of the spectacle’s timeline. 4. Underlying these problems is a failure to provide adequate presentation of concrete details. What were the contents of memos and reports? What were the words the participants used during the meetings (yes, some are provided but probably only the juicy ones). The credibility of any report rests a great deal on representation of the concrete particulars of the case. Concrete particulars allow the reader to compare this case with other cases, make naturalistic generalizations and judge the credibility of the research. As the author acknowledges, interviews would have made an important contribution. Even though intentions and actions are likely to be only partially 2 revealed in interviews, the researcher would be in a better position to piece together inferences about what was going on backstage. Reviewer #2’s Comments: 1. Introduction and Theory The author’s introductory pages detail the elements of political spectacle theory according to Murray Edelman’s work, as well as the work of Mary Lee Smith, Linda Miller-Kahn, Walter Heinecke and Patricia Jarvis (2004), as informing the case study of a common core mathematics curriculum and textbook adoption change. The author also refers to discourse analysis and policy formation process literature as informing the theoretical framework for the case study in the theory paragraph of the article. While both of these sections (introduction and theory) are rich in detail, they somewhat resemble a literature review one would expect in a dissertation and would benefit from some more streamlining. While they provide rich details for the theoretical framework, the subsequent analysis does not necessarily reflect how the author connected all elements of these two sections to the analysis. I would recommend some more work on these two sections, so that the themes and elements discussed in them are clearly connected to the discussion of the elements and findings in the case study. The author spends a significant amount of detail on the description of the “multi-point framework” advanced by Smith et al. to analyze political spectacles (p.10p.12). Again, the subsequent discussion and analysis of the case study does not clearly connect to all the elements listed here and could use revisiting. Responses: Consistent with Reviewer #1’s comments as well, these sections are streamlined by removing detailed point-by-point summary of political spectacle framework and removal of the debate regarding the relative merits of the political spectacle theory. Instead, a synopsis of the theory is provided along with explanation regarding the parts of the theory that related to its actual construction. For example, discussion of the construction of problems including reference to Porter’s (1995) work is provided. I also incorporate Miller-Kahn and Smith’s (2001) work into the literature review as it also illustrates another example of a parent-led “spectacle.” 2. Methods The methods are well laid out and a significant amount of time is spent on the author’s own role as participant/observer in the study. The definition of the own role in the process is not completely satisfying since the author The reviewer’s suggestion to utilize the methods of qualitative media analysis (Altheide & Schneider, 2012) was very useful. I literally developed a new protocol following the methods in this work and reanalyzed the public documents that compose the case. I also 3 seems to equate the “observer” role with being “unable to speak and literally stood in the back of the crowded room, observing”. I would encourage the author to revisit the notion of the roles held in the process. As principal of the school, even the role of silent bystander may very well have been a participatory one. Edelman’s and Smith et al.’s commentary on symbolic action may be of value in revisiting this section. I also would recommend some more time spent on the trajectory of the events that unfolded. The author mentioned participation in the initial department meetings and implementation as well as parent night and yet represents those events as somewhat detached from the events the study focuses on (the Governing Board Meetings). The author also states that the “dramatic spectacle occurred primarily at two Governing Board meetings in November and December of the new material’s implementation” and that these two public discourse windows were of primary focus to the study. I would suggest to connect the context of the two meetings in more detail to the larger discourse around the material adoption impetus as well as the timeliness of those meetings in the larger context. Alternatively, I would encourage a connection between the two meetings in terms of an exploration around the building of the discourse of discourse patterns in both meetings. The author alludes to the challenges of defining political spectacle boundaries (a thoroughly discussed concept in case study methodology) and I would encourage some revisiting of that literature to more clearly define the rational for the boundaries of this case study. 3. Findings This section has many rich and detailed examples that are descriptive and paint a comprehensive picture of the case study. The author focuses mostly on the case’s particulars and occasionally draws connections to a “larger spectacle” (p. 21). utilize Stake’s work on case study methodology to better define the boundaries and better explain my researcher identity in this case, that is, as intrinsically motivated. I have also added substantive detail regarding the case’s context including national and state context along with more detail regarding the school district itself. The trajectory of events is better delineated through the reorganization of the findings and discussion section. The trajectory follows the overall chronology of the spectacle. I also revisit my own role in this spectacle in more detail. Using a power point presentation I gave to a parent meeting shortly before the first dramatic governing board meeting, I provide insight into the text’s implementation at my school, my own role and the administrative use of the globalization and pre-Common Core discourses. The event further serves to link the initial adoption with the later Governing Board meeting dramas. More attention is paid through the now embedded analysis sections addressing discourse, particularly as seen in how the Coalition and the Administration constructed the problem in very different terms. The Administration approached the problem through a discourse of educational failure. The new text was needed due to education’s current failure to adequately prepare students for globalized competition. The Coalition approached the problem from a discourse of success. They saw themselves as already successful in globalized competition, they achieved this success with the old math, and they saw no need for this massive change. As suggested, I reanalyzed the spectacle’s documents and added more detail from the actor’s own words thus providing a richer description. I removed the awkward discussion regarding interviews and instead, as my methodology suggests, utilized the actor’s public 4 In this section some re-organizing around the particulars of this case, a clear connection to the elements in the introduction (see above) and some editing around moving from the political spectacle at hand to in how far this case may or may not reflect a larger political spectacle, behind-the scenes vs. public drama, and neo-liberal discourse would make the section more succinct. It seems that a more detailed analysis of the stakeholders as well as the larger implications or conversely the key policy actors and the case particulars would create a more cohesive whole. Discussion The discussion section could also benefit from an additional dimension in the analysis of discourse patterns and political spectacle: In particular the work of Theodore Porter (1996) may add a dimension of how “rationality” is created and reinforced in the political spectacle discourse. The discussion section would also benefit from a more detailed analysis of the roles and keyholder motives and interactions during the meetings and with the larger public. The social media aspect and website as another forum for public discourse and political spectacle could underscore relevant dimensions and add to the depth of the analysis. 4. Conclusion In this section the author states that “the displays largely reflected a pattern for political spectacle previously identified by Smith et al (2004) including the use of symbolic language, casting actors as enemies, leaders and allies; elements of dramaturgy, democratic participation as an illusion; the illusion of rationality; the disconnection of means and ends; and a distinction between onstage and backstage action” (p.33) Even though the author states early on that the focus of the analysis is on the onstage action, once again a consideration of backstage action and its implications for the public part of the discourse would be helpful to create a richer and more detailed analysis. It statements to gain insight into the backstage dealings. The section is restructured along the lines of standard story elements and includes analysis woven into the narrative. Essentially, I combine the findings and discussion into one continuous narrative. I’ve referenced Porter in context with Edelman and Smith regarding how problems can be constructed. Analysis is embedded with the chronological narrative thus explaining in a more timely manner the facts presented. This organizational style is actually modelled on that used by Miller-Kahn and Smith in their similar work on parent resistance to district led changes. The conclusion is re-worked to address the various elements of political spectacle at play. Emphasis is given to the Coalition’s construction of the problem (one of educational success) and the resulting use of the new text as a symbol of a threat to their success. Attention is given to the casting of enemies and allies including how those roles can be subtle and how the subtlety can lead to changing enemy and ally roles through the course of a spectacle. I also give attention to the use of various stages particularly to gain additional allies. Distinction is made the administration is not monolithic as originally presented but includes at least two elements of district and site level administration. Likewise, the Coalition’s leadership ultimately negotiates behind closed doors with the district (not 5 would also be helpful to revisit each of the mentioned elements and build upon each on richer detail. For example: Who were the allies and leaders of each group and subgroup? How was the illusion of rationality created and communicated? How did the website and /or social media function? (as polling device? as communication platform to garner support?) How did the disconnection between means and ends express itself? I would also like to offer a quote by Edelman: “Beliefs in political enemies seem to influence public opinion most powerfully when the enemy is not named explicitly, but invoked through an indirect reference. Perhaps the most subtle evocation is the advocacy of a course of action that implies that a particular group is dangerous”. Finally, this article will contribute very positively to the body of case studies that further elucidate the implication of political spectacle theory for educational practice and policy processes. school site) leadership to resolve the spectacle. I conclude with two suggestions for further research: the extent to which parent groups represent true community involvement and the extent to which the Common Core itself might be spectacle in its own right. Accept with Revisions Original Email: Copy/paste “accept with revisions” email with date here June 21, 2016 Dear We have reached a decision regarding your submission to Education Policy Analysis Archives, “Putting Political Spectacle to Work: Understanding Local Resistance to the Common Core.” Our decision is to: Accept the manuscript pending major revisions. 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Again, we ask that you let us know as soon as possible if you plan to revise and resubmit, and we require that you resubmit your final manuscript and the revisions response table no later than 30 days from the reception of this letter. Thank you for your interest in publishing in EPAA/AAPE. We recognize the tremendous efforts made by authors and reviewers to ensure the journal maintains it status as a source for policy makers, scholars, and practitioners in the field of education. Sincerely, Audrey Amrein-Beardsley 8 Lead Editor – EPAA/AAPE Mary Lou Fulton Teachers College Arizona State University [email protected] Reviewer #1 Decision: Major revisions required This manuscript has many positive features. It addresses an important topic that is relevant to the journal and one that would be of interest to its readers. The topic of political spectacle is well-theorized in the literature but not often subjected to empirical investigation. Therefore this study could make a contribution. The author does a quite good job in covering issues of the theory and should be commended for the effort. The presentation is clear and complete. Including Foucault, however, represents an unnecessary diversion and fails to contribute to the paper. It should be acknowledged in the context of this study that Edelman was a realist not an interpretivist or post-structuralist. In the kind of politics theorized in the political spectacle participants are categorized in two groups. The audience receives (and constructs) the drama set upon the stage. Yet behind the curtain the actors rationally produce real benefits according to their self-interests. Methods of the study need substantial work. Methods of data collection are not sufficiently detailed and quite sketchy. Qualitative studies require great care in showing exactly what was done to generate and analyze the data and to describe the context of the case. Methods of data analysis are poorly described and not at all connected to the findings. The reader needs to be able to track the researchers’ logic in moving from data through analysis to results. The author names the methods, but that is not enough. Coding can mean many things and the reader needs to know which one was actually used in this instance. The findings were presented as a narrative that was disjointed and repetitive. I had a hard time linking up political spectacle theory to the findings. It was unclear what the policy itself consisted of. Was it the adoption and implementation of Common Core or textbook adoption? Common Core, textbooks and materials, teacher training and capacity-building events as well as the research basis of the policy ought to be described. More details are needed to trace the history of what happened to determine whether political spectacle theory even applies. I agree it was a spectacle of some kind, but it seemed the audience was anything but passive recipients of the policy. Of course the Coalition failed to represent the interests of all students but members did 9 fight back (and indeed may have exacerbated existing inequalities). The opportunities to “review” the materials fit the theory, as efforts such as these are likely to be symbolic rather than instrumental. Underlying these problems is a failure to provide adequate presentation of concrete details. What were the contents of memos and reports? What were the words the participants used during the meetings (yes, some are provided but probably only the juicy ones). The credibility of any report rests a great deal on representation of the concrete particulars of the case. Concrete particulars allow the reader to compare this case with other cases, make naturalistic generalizations and judge the credibility of the research. As the author acknowledges, interviews would have made an important contribution. Even though intentions and actions are likely to be only partially revealed in interviews, the researcher would be in a better position to piece together inferences about what was going on backstage. To summarize the review, it seems to me that in its present form, the paper has problems with coherence (the parts fail to fit together) and completeness of detail. Perhaps these problems might be addressed in a revision. However, in its present form I do not recommend its acceptance. Reviewer #2 Decision: Major revisions required In the abstract of “Putting Political Spectacle to Work: Understanding local resistance to the common core”, the author states that the subsequent article “provides insights to the mechanics of political spectacle, the constituencies to which spectacle appeals, and who benefits from political spectacle” (p.1). The work is far reaching and offers valuable insights into the “unique particulars” of a case of local politics, policy and community stakeholder interactions from a policy perspective. I enjoyed reading this article and would like to offer a few suggestions by addressing first several sections of the article: Introduction and Theory The author’s introductory pages detail the elements of political spectacle theory according to Murray Edelman’s work, as well as the work of Mary Lee Smith, Linda Miller-Kahn, Walter Heinecke and Patricia Jarvis (2004), as informing the case study of a common core mathematics curriculum and textbook adoption change. The author also refers to discourse analysis and policy formation process literature as informing the theoretical framework for the case study in the theory paragraph of the article. While both of these sections (introduction and theory) are rich in detail, they somewhat resemble a literature review one would expect in a dissertation and would benefit from some more streamlining. While they provide rich details for the theoretical framework, the subsequent analysis does not necessarily reflect how the author connected all elements of these two sections to 10 the analysis. I would recommend some more work on these two sections, so that the themes and elements discussed in them are clearly connected to the discussion of the elements and findings in the case study. The author spends a significant amount of detail on the description of the “multi-point framework” advanced by Smith et al. to analyze political spectacles (p.10-p.12). Again, the subsequent discussion and analysis of the case study does not clearly connect to all the elements listed here and could use revisiting. Methods The methods are well laid out and a significant amount of time is spent on the author’s own role as participant/observer in the study. The definition of the own role in the process is not completely satisfying since the author seems to equate the “observer” role with being “unable to speak and literally stood in the back of the crowded room, observing”. I would encourage the author to revisit the notion of the roles held in the process. As principal of the school, even the role of silent bystander may very well have been a participatory one. Edelman’s and Smith et al.’s commentary on symbolic action may be of value in revisiting this section. I also would recommend some more time spent on the trajectory of the events that unfolded. The author mentioned participation in the initial department meetings and implementation as well as parent night and yet represents those events as somewhat detached from the events the study focuses on (the Governing Board Meetings). The author also states that the “dramatic spectacle occurred primarily at two Governing Board meetings in November and December of the new material’s implementation” and that these two public discourse windows were of primary focus to the study. I would suggest to connect the context of the two meetings in more detail to the larger discourse around the material adoption impetus as well as the timeliness of those meetings in the larger context. Alternatively, I would encourage a connection between the two meetings in terms of an exploration around the building of the discourse of discourse patterns in both meetings. The author alludes to the challenges of defining political spectacle boundaries (a thoroughly discussed concept in case study methodology) and I would encourage some revisiting of that literature to more clearly define the rational for the boundaries of this case study. Findings This section has many rich and detailed examples that are descriptive and paint a comprehensive picture of the case study. The author focuses mostly on the case’s particulars and occasionally draws connections to a “larger spectacle” (p. 21). In this section some re-organizing around the particulars of this case, a clear connection to the elements in the introduction (see above) and some editing around moving from the political spectacle at hand to in how far this case may or may not reflect a larger political spectacle, behind-the scenes vs. public drama, and neo-liberal discourse would make the section more succinct. It seems that a 11 more detailed analysis of the stakeholders as well as the larger implications or conversely the key policy actors and the case particulars would create a more cohesive whole. Discussion The discussion section could also benefit from an additional dimension in the analysis of discourse patterns and political spectacle: In particular the work of Theodore Porter (1996) may add a dimension of how “rationality” is created and reinforced in the political spectacle discourse. The discussion section would also benefit from a more detailed analysis of the roles and keyholder motives and interactions during the meetings and with the larger public. The social media aspect and website as another forum for public discourse and political spectacle could underscore relevant dimensions and add to the depth of the analysis. Conclusion In this section the author states that “the displays largely reflected a pattern for political spectacle previously identified by Smith et al (2004) including the use of symbolic language, casting actors as enemies, leaders and allies; elements of dramaturgy, democratic participation as an illusion; the illusion of rationality; the disconnection of means and ends; and a distinction between onstage and backstage action” (p.33) Even though the author states early on that the focus of the analysis is on the onstage action, once again a consideration of backstage action and its implications for the public part of the discourse would be helpful to create a richer and more detailed analysis. It would also be helpful to revisit each of the mentioned elements and build upon each on richer detail. For example: Who were the allies and leaders of each group and sub-group? How was the illusion of rationality created and communicated? How did the website and /or social media function? (as polling device? as communication platform to garner support?) How did the disconnection between means and ends express itself? I would also like to offer a quote by Edelman: “Beliefs in political enemies seem to influence public opinion most powerfully when the enemy is not named explicitly, but invoked through an indirect reference. Perhaps the most subtle evocation is the advocacy of a course of action that implies that a particular group is dangerous”. Finally, this article will contribute very positively to the body of case studies that further elucidate the implication of political spectacle theory for educational practice and policy processes. Recommended sources: Altheide, D.L. & Schneider, C.J. (2012). Qualitative Media Analysis. Thousand Oaks, CA: SAGE. 12 Barbaros, C. (2014). Constructing the Political Spectacle, Public Agenda and Public Opinion. Adenium. Miller-Kahn, L. & Smith, M.L. (2001). School Choice Policies in the Political Spectacle. EPAA. Porter, T.M. (1995). Trust in Numbers: The Pursuit of Objectivity in Science and Public Life. Princeton, NJ: Princeton University Press 13
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