Template for comments MS Chapter/ Section (e.g. 3.1) Paragraph/ Figure/ Table/ (e.g. Table 1) DK5 All UK1 All UK2 All UK3 All ES Revision history 15th point ES Revision history DE Countries: AT, CH, CZ, DE, DK, ES, FR, IT, NL, SE, UK Type of comment1 ed Date: 2016-05-24 Comments Proposed change Resolution Some of the chapters prior to chapter 1 have headlines in clear text and no numbering. Why? – It would make the layout of the document more consistent if each chapter was assigned a number. Add a number to each chapter. Editing required to ensure all text complete (no empty headers) and remove highlighted text sections Complete text and check for odd formatting. Ensure that cross-references to other documents point to actual document fragments that provide meaning to the text. Check all cross references and external dependencies in document are ‘live’ and resolvable. Accepted. Formatting - ensure consistency in capitalization, numbering and abbreviations used. Ensure consistency in capitalization, numbering and abbreviations used. Accepted. ed Duplicate “and” Delete “and” Accepted. 29th point ed “Has bee” Include “Has been” Accepted. (all) (all) ed of the ISO 19115 of the ISO 19115; at places where ISO is abstractly mentioned; please align through the whole document Accepted DE 1.1. Introductio n third paragraph ed In the context of metadata for spatial data and Spatial Data Services, the standards [ISO 19115], [ISO 19119], [ISO 19139] and ISO 15836 (Dublin Core) have been identified as important standards. add paranthesis for ISO 15836 Accepted. DE 1.1. Introductio n sixth paragraph ed "... refers to the abovementioned Regulation." "... refers to the abovementioned regulation." Accepted. CZ 1.1.1. Figure 1 ed Double “of” in legend for grey and black circle … VII of of IR-ISDSS (incl. metadata) Accepted. NL 1.2 ed along with 19115-2, regarding the extensions for imagery and gridded data Name will be changed to Accepted. ed ed ed Project: MIWP-8 Document: TG for Metadata v2.0rc2 Accepted in principle. The document structure was harmonised with other existing TGs. Accepted. To be done once the document is in final draft. To be done once the document is in final draft. To be done once the document is in final draft. Extensions for acquisition and processing DE 1.2. XML Encoding of ISO metadata first paragraph ed "To provide an XML encoding also for the INSPIRE service metadata, XML Schemas implementing the [ISO 19119] model have been published by the OGC" reference to actual schema is missing; add reference to http://schemas.opengis.net/csw/2.0.2/profiles/apiso/1 .0.0/apiso.xsd Accepted. DE 1.3. INSPIRE Validator Service first paragraph ed "The validator accepts metadata that follow the Metadata Technical Guidelines encoded in EN ISO 19139 schema." reference to particular schema is missing Accepted with modification. 1 Type of comment: ge = general te = technical Since the validator is not supporting validation of v2.0 of the guidelines, and a new validator is currently being developed, this section has been condensed. ed = editorial page 1 of 19 Template for comments MS Chapter/ Section (e.g. 3.1) Paragraph/ Figure/ Table/ (e.g. Table 1) Countries: AT, CH, CZ, DE, DK, ES, FR, IT, NL, SE, UK Type of comment1 Date: 2016-05-24 Comments Document: TG for Metadata v2.0rc2 Proposed change Project: MIWP-8 Resolution NL 1.4 ed Typo; The purpose of this specification is to provide a standards compliant and The purpose of this specification is to provide a standards compliant and Not accepted. Standards-compliant is correct. NL 1.4 ed the section 2. Common requirements for ISO/TC 19139:2007 Change to Not accepted. The wording is fine. Not all requirements are applicable to all requirements classes. based INSPIRE metadata records, contains TG Requirements and Recommendations describing metadata elements that shall be used in the same way in more than one of the mentioned… …contains TG Requirements and Recommendations describing metadata elements that shall be used in the same way in all of the mentioned… Should the common elements not be used in all requirement classes? AT 2.1. ed Although [ISO 19115] and [ISO 19119] models allow extending of metadata, this version of the Technical Guidelines requires using the only the original, unmodified [ISO 19139] and the OGC … this version of the Accepted Technical Guidelines requires using only the original, unmodified [ISO 19139] … service metadata XML Schemas for encoding INSPIRE metadata records. DE 2.3.2. Metadata point of contact TG Requirement C.5 ed "The value of gmd:role/gmd:CI_RoleCode shall point to the value "pointOfContact" of ISO 19139 code list CI_RoleCode20." add paranthesis for ISO 19139 Accepted. ES 2.4.5 1st paragraf below TG Recommendat ion C.9 ed There is a working comment that should be deleted “Add TG Recommendation for using gmx:Anchor elements for referring to keywords which have a URI to point to.” Delete comment : Accepted. Example C7 ed The example is included before the explanations, it is confused. Move the Example C.7 to end of the section and delete the sentence “An example XML fragment with two keywords from the same vocabulary (GEMET INSPIRE themes) is ES 2.4.5 “Add TG Recommendation for using gmx:Anchor elements for referring to keywords which have a URI to point to.” Accepted. provided as Example C.7.” ES 2.4.6 Foot note 25 ed Link http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/registry/metadatacodelist/LimitationsOnPublicAccess/ does not work Include the Link correct The link should be http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/metadatacodelist/LimitationsOnPublicAccess/. ES 2.4.6 2º paragraph of page 44 ed It is not included reference to Annex D.1 “Limitations on public access” Change “an Accepted. INSPIRE code list” by “an INSPIRE code list (Annex D.1 “Limitations on public access) ” 1 Type of comment: ge = general te = technical ed = editorial page 2 of 19 Template for comments MS Chapter/ Section (e.g. 3.1) Countries: AT, CH, CZ, DE, DK, ES, FR, IT, NL, SE, UK Paragraph/ Figure/ Table/ (e.g. Table 1) Type of comment1 Comments Date: 2016-05-24 Document: TG for Metadata v2.0rc2 Proposed change Project: MIWP-8 Resolution ES 2.4.6 Example C.8 ed Link http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/registry/metadatacodelist/LimitationsOnPublicAccess/INSPIRE_Directi ve_Article13_1a does not work Include the Link correct The link should be http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/metadatacodelist/LimitationsOnPublicAccess/INSPIRE_Directi ve_Article13_1a/ DE 2.4.6. Limitations on public access first paragraph ed "Concerning providing the metadata for the data sets and services though Discovery services..." "Concerning providing the metadata for the data sets and services through Discovery services..." Accepted. DE 2.4.6. Limitations on public access sentence following TG Requirement C.16 ed "The make the references to the allowed..." "To make the references to the allowed..." Accepted. ES 2.4.7 Requirement C.19 ed Mistake in Codelist value Change “code list value Accepted. "otherConstraints” by “code list value "otherRestrictions” ES 2.4.7 Foot note 27 ed Link http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/registry/metadatacodelist/ConditionsApplyingToAccessAndUse/noCon ditionsApply does not work Wait until registry is implemented and check it then again. Accepted. ES 2.4.7 Foot note 28 ed Link http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/registry/metadatacodelist/ConditionsApplyingToAccessAndUse/conditi onsUnknown does not work Include the Link correct Accepted. ES 2.4.7 Example C.9 ed Links http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/registry/metadatacodelist/LimitationsOnPublicAccess/NoLimitations and http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/registry/metadatacodelist/ConditionsApplyingToAccessAndUse/NoCon ditionsApply do not work Include the Link correct Accepted. ES 2.5.1 Requirement C.21 ed The redaction of this requirement is not clear We propose add an example with several declarations of conformity Accepted. CZ 2.5.1. Page 49 ed Double “is” in sentence. In this specification the above Implementing Rule text is is interpreted … Accepted. CZ 2.5.1. Last paragraph on page 49 ed Wrong preposition. The specific TG Requirements for adding these conformity declarations are included in the corresponding Requirement Classes … Accepted. DE 2.5.1. Conformity third paragraph ed "In this specification the above Implementing Rule text is is interpreted to mean in that the conformity shall..." rephrase for better understanding Accepted. 1 Type of comment: ge = general te = technical ed = editorial page 3 of 19 Template for comments MS Chapter/ Section Paragraph/ Figure/ Table/ (e.g. Table 1) Type of comment1 2.5.1. Conformity TG Requirements C.21 and C.22 ed 3.1 Requierement s Class 1 ed (e.g. 3.1) DE ES Countries: AT, CH, CZ, DE, DK, ES, FR, IT, NL, SE, UK Comments Date: 2016-05-24 Project: MIWP-8 Document: TG for Metadata v2.0rc2 Proposed change Resolution "... with each INSPIRE Implementing Rule, specification document, its Requirements Class or similar part, shall be given..." clarify "similar part" Accepted. Link http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/specification/RC/TGMetadata/2.0/dataset-baselineThe does not work Wait until specifications are published and check it then again. Accepted with modification. "Similar part" has been removed. The requirements now refer to "INSPIRE Implementing Rule, specification document or Conformance Class". All conformance classes now have a unique id, which will be used to create persistent unique ids following the patterns for ATS agreed in the context of the MIWP-5 work and the implementation of the INSPIRE test framework (http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/id/ats/<atsid>/<version>). DE 3.1. Baseline metadata for data sets and data set series Requirements Class 1 ed "Metadata record fulfilling all the TG Requirements..." "A Metadata record fulfilling all the TG Requirements..." Accepted. CZ 3.1.1.1. Paragraph above TG Req 1.1 ed Missing space. … sets and data set series. The … Accepted. ES 3.1.2.1 Example 1.2 ed Link http://paikkatiedot.fi/so/1002001%3C/gmx:Anchor does not work Change it to http://paikkatiedot.fi/so/1002001 Accepted. Correct the wrong hyperlink. NL 3.1.2.1 Recommendat ion 1.2 ed In the case of HTTP URIs…. in the case of HTTP or HTTPS URIs… Accepted in principle. Include a footnote for the 1st mention of HTTP URI in the text that these also include HTTPS URIs. prevent excluding HTTPS DE 3.1.2.1. Unique resource identifier TG Recommendat ion 1.2 ed "It's recommended to make..." "It is recommended to make..." Accepted. IT 3.1.2.2. TG Requirement 1.4 Ed The content of the footnote 33 is already included in the text of the TG Requirement 1.4 Remove the footnote 33 Accepted. DE 3.1.2.2. Keywords for Spatial TG Requirement 1.4 ed "... at least one keyword from the Inspire Spatial Data Themes vocabulary..." "... at least one keyword from the INSPIRE Spatial Data Themes vocabulary..." Accepted. 1 Type of comment: ge = general te = technical ed = editorial page 4 of 19 Template for comments MS Chapter/ Section (e.g. 3.1) Countries: AT, CH, CZ, DE, DK, ES, FR, IT, NL, SE, UK Paragraph/ Figure/ Table/ (e.g. Table 1) Type of comment1 Date: 2016-05-24 Comments Document: TG for Metadata v2.0rc2 Proposed change Project: MIWP-8 Resolution Data Theme(s) DE 3.1.2.3. Spatial resolution Example 1.4 and 1.5 ed "Spatial resolution of a data sets expressed..." "Spatial resolution of a data sets expressed..." Accepted. DE 3.1.2.4. Resource language sentence following TG Requirement 1.6 ed "Table 1 contained in Part C of Regulation 1205/2008] defines..." add paranthesis for 1205/2008 Accepted. DE 3.1.2.4. Resource language TG Requirement 1.7 ed more information on multi-lingual encoding would be useful add a link to section 2.2 Not accepted. CZ 3.1.2.5. Paragraph under TG Req 1.8 ed Wrong article. … references to an external code list … Accepted. NL 3.1.2.5. Topic category ed Please add a reference to the existing mapping between topics and INSPIRE themes Add reference Accepted. ES 3.1.3.1 Example 1.8 ed Link http://data.acme.org/wfs? Does not work Acme.org seems to be a domain example. If it is, better to change it to example.com? Accepted. ES 3.2 Requieremnts Class 2 ed http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/specification/RC/TGMetadata/2.0/datasetinteroperability does not work Wait until specifications are published and check it then again Accepted with modification. Section 3.1.2.4 discusses the resource language element, i.e. the language used in the data set or service, while section 2.2 discusses how to encode textual elements in the metadata. All conformance classes now have a unique id, which will be used to create persistent unique ids following the patterns for ATS agreed in the context of the MIWP-5 work and the implementation of the INSPIRE test framework (http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/id/ats/<atsid>/<version>). CZ 3.2.1.1. TG Req. 2.2 ed Double “be” in sentence. The gmd:codeSpace element shall not be be used in this case. Accepted. CZ 3.2.2. and 3.2.4.1.1. TG Req. 2.4 ed Double “of” in sentence. gmd:MD_SpatialRepresentationTypeCode referring to one of the values of of ISO 19139 code list Accepted. CZ 3.2.2.2. Last paragraph on page 70 ed Wrong article. UTF-8 is an 8-bit variable size Universal Coded Accepted. 1 Type of comment: ge = general te = technical ed = editorial page 5 of 19 Template for comments MS Chapter/ Section (e.g. 3.1) Countries: AT, CH, CZ, DE, DK, ES, FR, IT, NL, SE, UK Paragraph/ Figure/ Table/ (e.g. Table 1) Type of comment1 Date: 2016-05-24 Comments Document: TG for Metadata v2.0rc2 Proposed change Project: MIWP-8 Resolution CZ 3.2.2.2. TG Req. 2.5 ed Double “of” in sentence. gmd:characterSet/gmd:MD_CharacterSetCode referring to one of the values of of ISO 19139 code list Accepted. ES 3.2.3.1 Example 2.5 ed Link http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/mediatypes/application/x-shapefile does not work The valid link is http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/mediatypes and application/x-shapefile is a tag. Should it be linked to the valid link? Not accepted. The id for “application/x-shapefile” in the Atom feed at http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/media-types/ is indeed: http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/media-types/application/xshapefile but this URI does not resolve. This issue needs to be addressed in the media types register. ES 3.2.4.1.1 Example 2.6 ed Link http://www.opengis.net/def/uom/OGC/1.0/unity"/ does not work Change to http://www.opengis.net/def/uom/OGC/1.0/unity Accepted. ES 4.1 Requirements Class 3 ed Link http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/specification/RC/TGMetadata/2.0/SDSbaseline does not work Include the Link correct Accepted with modification. All conformance classes now have a unique id, which will be used to create persistent unique ids following the patterns for ATS agreed in the context of the MIWP-5 work and the implementation of the INSPIRE test framework (http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/id/ats/<atsid>/<version>). CZ 4.1.2.3. TG Req. 3.5 ed Double “be” in sentence. Data Service type shall be be given using element srv:serviceType/gco:LocalName. Accepted. ES 4.1.2.4 Requirement 3.6 ed Drafting error? URI pointing… URL pointing Comment unclear Example 3.4 ed Link http://vapxgeodev.jrc.ec.europa.eu/geonetwork/srv/eng/csw?S ERVICE=CSW& does not work Domain seems not to work. Change example? Not accepted. ES 4.1.2.4 URI= URL#id In general readers should not expect URL's in examples to resolve. Even if they would resolve today, there is no guarantee they will be maintained and still resolve in 2-3 years time. ES 4.1.3.1 Recommendat ion 3.5 ed Mistake in “gmd:MD_DataIdentifier” Change by “gmd:MD_DataIdentification” This recommendation has been removed. ES 4.1.3.1 Example 3.5 ed Link http://data.acme.org/wfs? Does not work Acme.org seems to be a domain example. If it is, better to change it to example.com? Accepted ES 4.2 Requirements Class 4 ed Link http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/specification/RC/TGMetadata/2.0/networkservices does not work Wait until specifications are published and check it then again Accepted with modification. 1 Type of comment: ge = general te = technical All conformance classes now have a unique id, which will be used to create persistent unique ids following the patterns for ATS agreed in the context of the ed = editorial page 6 of 19 Template for comments MS Chapter/ Section (e.g. 3.1) Paragraph/ Figure/ Table/ (e.g. Table 1) Countries: AT, CH, CZ, DE, DK, ES, FR, IT, NL, SE, UK Type of comment1 Date: 2016-05-24 Comments Document: TG for Metadata v2.0rc2 Proposed change Project: MIWP-8 Resolution MIWP-5 work and the implementation of the INSPIRE test framework (http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/id/ats/<atsid>/<version>). ES 4.2.1 Requirement 4.1 ed Mistake duplicated“be” Delete “be” Accepted CZ 4.2.1.1. TG Req. 4.1 ed Double “be” in sentence. Spatial Data Service type shall be be given encoded … Accepted CZ 4.2.2.1. TG Req. 4.2 ed Wrong preposition. Metadata for an INSPIRE Network Services shall declare the conformity to the Network Services Implementation Rules, and it shall be encoded … Accepted CZ 4.3 Req. Class 5 ed Missing apostrophe. … amendment [Regulation 1312/2014] to [Regulation 1089/2010] adding it’s Annex V. Not accepted. “its” is correct. ES 4.3 Requirements Class 5 ed Link http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/RequirementsClass/TGMetadata/2.0/SDSinvocable does not work Wait until specifications are published and check it then again Accepted with modification. All conformance classes now have a unique id, which will be used to create persistent unique ids following the patterns for ATS agreed in the context of the MIWP-5 work and the implementation of the INSPIRE test framework (http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/id/ats/<atsid>/<version>). CZ 4.3.1.1. TG Req. 5.1 ed Double “be” in sentence. Spatial Data Service type shall be be given Accepted ES 4.3.2.1 Foot note 55 ed Link http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/registry/metadatacodelist/OnLineDescriptionCode/accessPoint does not work Include the Link correct Accepted ES 4.3.2.1 Example 5.1 ed Link http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/registry/metadatacodelist/OnLineDescriptionCode/accessPoint Include the Link correct Accepted ES 4.3.2.1 Table 5.1 ed Links do not work Review the links Accepted ES 4.3.2.1 Example 5.3 ed Link http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/RequirementsClass/TGMetadata/2.0/SDS-invocable does not work Include the Link correct Accepted with modification. Missing apostrophe. … amendment [Regulation 1312/2014] to [Regulation 1089/2010] adding it’s Annex VI. CZ 4.4 1 Req. Class 6 Type of comment: ed ge = general te = technical All conformance classes now have a unique id, which will be used to create persistent unique ids following the patterns for ATS agreed in the context of the MIWP-5 work and the implementation of the INSPIRE test framework (http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/id/ats/<atsid>/<version>). Not accepted. “its” is correct ed = editorial page 7 of 19 Template for comments MS Chapter/ Section (e.g. 3.1) ES 4.4 Countries: AT, CH, CZ, DE, DK, ES, FR, IT, NL, SE, UK Paragraph/ Figure/ Table/ (e.g. Table 1) Type of comment1 Requirements Class 6 ed Date: 2016-05-24 Comments Document: TG for Metadata v2.0rc2 Proposed change Link http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/RequirementsClass/TGMetadata/2.0/SDSinteroperable does not work Include the Link correct Project: MIWP-8 Resolution Accepted with modification. All conformance classes now have a unique id, which will be used to create persistent unique ids following the patterns for ATS agreed in the context of the MIWP-5 work and the implementation of the INSPIRE test framework (http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/id/ats/<atsid>/<version>). AT 4.4.1.1. TG Requirement 6.2 ed The gmd:codeSpaceelement shall not be be used in this case. The gmd:codeSpaceelement shall not be used in this case. Accepted CZ 4.4.1.1. TG Req. 6.2 ed Double “be” in sentence. … The gmd:codeSpace element shall not be be used in this case. Accepted NL 4.4.1.1. ed An editors comment TODO is still there Delete TODO Accepted ES 4.4.3.1 ed Link http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/RequirementsClass/TGMetadata/2.0/SDSinteroperable does not work Include the Link correct Accepted with modification. Foot note 60 All conformance classes now have a unique id, which will be used to create persistent unique ids following the patterns for ATS agreed in the context of the MIWP-5 work and the implementation of the INSPIRE test framework (http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/id/ats/<atsid>/<version>). ES 4.4.3.1 Table 6.1 ed Links http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/registry/metadatacodelist/ and http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/registry/metadatacodelist/QualityOfServiceCriteriaCode/minimumPerfo rmance and http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/registry/metadata-codelist/ do not work Include the Link correct Accepted ES 4.4.3.1 Example 6.1 ed Link http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/registry/metadatacodelist/QualityOfServiceCriteriaCode/minimumPerfo rmance does not work Include the Link correct Accepted ES 4.4.3.1 Example 6.1 ed Link http://www.opengis.net/def/uom/SI/second"/ does not work Change to http://www.opengis.net/def/uom/SI/second Accepted CZ 4.5 Req Class 7 ed Missing apostrophe. … amendment [Regulation 1312/2014] to [Regulation 1089/2010] adding it’s Annex VII. Not accepted. “its” is correct ES 4.5 Requirements Class 7 ed Link http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/RequirementsClass/TGMetadata/2.0/SDS-harmonisedThe does not work Include the Link correct Accepted with modification. 1 Type of comment: ge = general te = technical All conformance classes now have a unique id, which will be used to create persistent unique ids following ed = editorial page 8 of 19 Template for comments MS Chapter/ Section (e.g. 3.1) Paragraph/ Figure/ Table/ (e.g. Table 1) Countries: AT, CH, CZ, DE, DK, ES, FR, IT, NL, SE, UK Type of comment1 Comments Date: 2016-05-24 Document: TG for Metadata v2.0rc2 Proposed change Project: MIWP-8 Resolution the patterns for ATS agreed in the context of the MIWP-5 work and the implementation of the INSPIRE test framework (http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/id/ats/<atsid>/<version>). ES 4.5.1.1 Requirement 7.3 ed Mistake in: srv:name/gco:aName Change: srv:name/gco:Name srv:valueType/gco:TypeName/gco:aName srv:valueType/gco:TypeName/gco:Name Accepted CZ 4.5.1.1. TG Req. 7.1 ed Double “the” in sentence. … TG Requirement 5.5 shall fulfil the the invocation metadata requirements. Accepted ES Acknowled gements Contact Information ed Link http://ies.jrc.ec.europa.eu/ does not work Change to https://ec.europa.eu/jrc/en/institutes/ies Correct link added FR Acknowled gements ed French members are not listed Please add Marc Léobet and Marie Lambois Accepted NL aknowledg ements ed Missing by MIWP-8 group; Add names and check for other missing Accepted Peter Kochman, Eliane Roos, Marie Lambois, Marc Leobert, Ine de Visser,… AT Annex C 1.4. ed 1.4. Resource locator Header is not at the top of the chapter Accepted AT Annex C 4.1. ed 4.1. Bounding box Should be consistent to the document; WGS84 is requested Not clear what should be added. Current content is identical to TG v1. NL Annex C 2 1.3 ed Also the resource locator table is in this part Delete resource locator table Accepted NL Annex C 2 1.6 ed Replace the identifier lakes with a more used identifier ES Annex C.2 1.3 Resource Type ed Link http://edo.jrc.ec.europa.eu/chm/ows.php?VERSION= 1.3.0&SERVICE=WMS&REQUEST=GetCapabilities incorrect and does not work Change Example? Accepted UK10 Annex C.2 1.6 Coupled resource ed Only one example of use given add an example using URI Accepted UK11 Annex C.2 all ed In general many of the cross-references cited are incorrect or missing; also need further examples and need checked Check citation consistency and add additional examples Accepted. DE Annex C.2 Heading to 1.4 is between the tables of Resource locator for “datasets and series” and “services” Shift heading before first table Accepted 1 1.4 Resource locator Type of comment: ed ge = general te = technical Not accepted, unless alternative is specified To be done once the document is in final draft. ed = editorial page 9 of 19 Template for comments MS Chapter/ Section (e.g. 3.1) DE Annex C.2 Countries: AT, CH, CZ, DE, DK, ES, FR, IT, NL, SE, UK Paragraph/ Figure/ Table/ (e.g. Table 1) Type of comment1 1.5 Unique resource identifier, Example ed Date: 2016-05-24 Comments namespace and identifier seem to be part of MD_Identifier. Have it more clear that this is a semantic distinguishing only, but storing is in element code only. We had this shown in a much clearer way in a former draft (based on v055) Document: TG for Metadata v2.0rc2 Proposed change The Unique resource identifier semantically consisting of namespace: https://example.org/ Project: MIWP-8 Resolution Accepted and identifier: ab749859 and is provided together in element code:https://example.org/ab749859 DE Annex C.2 1.5 Unique resource identifier, Comments ed link to 2.2.6 is wrong change link to 4.1.2.4 Accepted DE Annex C.2 1.6 Coupled resource ed example does not consider both alternatives for data service coupling add an example using URI for data service coupling according to in 4.1.2.4 Accepted DE Annex C.2 1.6 Coupled resource, Comments ed link to 2.2.5 is wrong change link to 3.1.2.1 Accepted DE Annex C.2 1.7 Resource language, Comments ed reference to A.11 is not suitable; there's no corresponding content in this document delete comment Accepted DE Annex C.2 2.2 Spatial data service type, Domain ed link to 1.3.1 is wrong change link to Annex D.3 Accepted DE Annex C.2 4.1 Geographic bounding box, Comments ed link to SC13 is wrong remove this sentence due to SCxx being erased Accepted DE Annex C.2 8.1 Conditions applying to access and use, second table, Domain ed there are designated codelist values for these texts add a link to Annex D.2 Accepted DE Annex C.2 8.2 Limitations on public access, second table, Domain ed there are designated codelist values for the reasons to limit public access add a link to Annex D.1 Accepted DE Annex C.2 10.3 Metadata language, Comments ed reference to A.11 is not suitable; there's no corresponding content in this document delete comment Accepted 1 Type of comment: ge = general te = technical ed = editorial page 10 of 19 Template for comments MS Chapter/ Section (e.g. 3.1) Countries: AT, CH, CZ, DE, DK, ES, FR, IT, NL, SE, UK Date: 2016-05-24 Comments Document: TG for Metadata v2.0rc2 Paragraph/ Figure/ Table/ (e.g. Table 1) Type of comment1 Proposed change Coordinate Reference System, Domain ed The mentioned table isn't listed below! The content is in Annex D.5 now. add link to Annex D.5 Accepted Project: MIWP-8 Resolution DE Annex C.3 NL Annex C.4 Part B 1 degree ed Add a comment that the domain in this case can only have the value true Add a comment that the domain in this case can only have the value true “In this case” refers to “if conformant” ? NL Annex C.4 Part D 2 degree ed Add a comment that the domain in this case can only have the value true Add a comment that the domain in this case can only have the value true “In this case” refers to “if conformant” ? NL Annex C.5 Part B 3 CRS ed Add a comment that despite the definition of the ISO element, this is used to provide the CRS of the service Add a comment that despite the definition of the ISO element, this is used to provide the CRS of the service Comment added, but meaning unclear NL Annex C.5 Part B 3 CRS ed Codespace shall not be used if it is an well-known CRS in a register Delete in the example the codespace and add the URI Accepted. NL Annex C.6 Part B 3 connectPoi nt ed Datatype and domain are missing Add Domain? DE Annex C.7 Data type (and ISO 19115 no.) URL Domain URL (IETF RFC1738 and IETF RFC 2056) <all>, Example ed There are no XML examples for theme-specific metadata in the document. add examples or remove statement Accepted. The references to XML examples have been removed. DE Annex C.7 Digital transfer options information, Comments ed link to 2.2.4 is wrong change link to 3.1.3.1 Accepted DE Annex C.7 Extent, Domain ed link to 2.5.1 is wrong change link to 2.4.8 Accepted UK12 Annex D.1 Code list URI (general) ed Registry link does not resolve Update with correct registry URI Accepted DE Annex D.1 Code list URI ed The URI http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/registry/metadatacodelist/LimitationsOnPublicAccess is unavailable. If URI is accessable till publication of the document nothing has to be done, if not state shall be described in e.g. footer. Accepted, URI corrected DE Annex D.2 Code list URI ed The URI http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/registry/metadatacodelist/ is unavailable. If URI is accessable till publication of the document nothing has to be done, if not state shall be described in e.g. footer. Accepted, URI corrected 1 Type of comment: ge = general te = technical ed = editorial page 11 of 19 Template for comments MS Chapter/ Section (e.g. 3.1) DE Annex D.4 NL Annex E Countries: AT, CH, CZ, DE, DK, ES, FR, IT, NL, SE, UK Date: 2016-05-24 Comments Document: TG for Metadata v2.0rc2 Proposed change Project: MIWP-8 Paragraph/ Figure/ Table/ (e.g. Table 1) Type of comment1 Resolution Code list URI ed The URI http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/registry/metadatacodelist/QualityOfServiceCriteriaCode is unavailable. If URI is accessable till publication of the document nothing has to be done, if not state shall be described in e.g. footer. Accepted, URL corrected ed Not complete for instance see Service type Add requirement number and sections for service type Accepted 4.2.1.1 TG Requirement 4.1 4.3.1.1 TG Requirement 5.1 Check the other elements on completeness NL Annex E ES C.2 1.6 Coupled resource ed Be consequent, provide all IR element numbers and TG requirements. Add missing IR element numbers annex V D.1 and D.2 annex VI part A.1 and A.2 (and their requirements) ed Link http://vapxgeodev.jrc.ec.europa.eu/geonetwork/srv/eng/ Change example? expect URL's in examples to resolve. Even if they would resolve today, there is no guarantee they will be maintained and still resolve in 2-3 years time. csw?SERVICE=CSW&VERSION=2.0.2&REQUEST= GetRecordById&ID=f9ee6623cf4c-11e1-9105017085a97ab&OUTPUTSCHEMA=http://www.isotc2 11.org/2005/gmd&ELEMENTSETNAME=full#lakes does not work NL C.5 Implementi ng Rules for Interopera ble SE C3 NL Changes from the version 1.3 to 2.0 DK13 1 Chapter 1.1 ed Coordinate Reference system Para 1 Type of comment: Not accepted. In general readers should not Be consequent in the tables provided; Add table C.5 part A.1 and A.2 or C.4 provided tables for all elements, also the elements described in the metadata regulation, C5 provide only the tables with additional elements. Remove C.4 part D.1 and D.2 ed In the Domain row the text “table is listed below” needs to be edited. Update the text Accepted ed Can the changes split in different parts? split in different parts; Accepted Deleted requirements/recommendations, Deleted requirements/recommendations, Added requirements/recommendations Added requirements/recommendations Changed requirements/recommendations Changed requirements/recommendations And renumbered, moved etc. And renumbered, moved etc. In the text it is stated that some documents have been identified as important standards. However, one of them is not a standard but a Technical Specification. Adjust the text accordingly. ed ge = general te = technical Which of the 2 options do we implement? Accepted ed = editorial page 12 of 19 Template for comments MS Chapter/ Section (e.g. 3.1) DK15 Chapter 2.3.2 Countries: AT, CH, CZ, DE, DK, ES, FR, IT, NL, SE, UK Paragraph/ Figure/ Table/ (e.g. Table 1) Type of comment1 TG recommendati on A.4 ed Comments Date: 2016-05-24 Document: TG for Metadata v2.0rc2 Proposed change Project: MIWP-8 Resolution In the recommendation it is stated that the most important details shall be included in the first 100 first characters. However, if we are talking about very complex data set this can be very difficult to compress a large amount of important information into 100 characters. We suggest expanding from 100 to 256 characters. This expansion will make increase the possibility to contain the required information, even for complex data sets. Since this comment is in the EDITORIAL resolutions, I suppose it is accepted by MIWP-8? Changed in the doc. DK19 Chapter 2.3.8 Para 2 ed The answer to the question if bounding box for services only is required if there is an explicit extent is yes. It is clearly stated in table 2 in “COMMISSION REGULATION (EC) No 1205/2008 of 3 December 2008 implementing Directive 2007/2/EC of the European Parliament and of the Council as regards metadata”. Delete the question mark and the yellow marking. Accepted DK24 Chapter 3.1.4.1 TG Req 1.10, ed The wording of TG Requirement 1.10 and the associated note 33 mentions "service" but section 3 is about data set requirements classes. Likewise, Example 1.10 considers services. Reformulate the section to consider data set and data set series. Accepted DK26 Chapter 3.2 Para 1 ed There are references to section 4.1 and 4.2-4.4. We would expect it to be 3.2.1 and 3.2.2-3.2.4. Correct references. Accepted DK27 Chapter 4.1.1.1 Para 3 ed The paragraph reads "Table 2 contained in Part C of the same document defines the multiplicity of this element to exactly one for data sets and data set series". Chapter 4 in the TG draft and Table 2 in [Regulation 1205/2008] considers spatial data services. Correct "data sets and data set series" to "spatial data services". Something wrong with the numbering: 4.1.1.1 is empty. This example is in the wrong paragraph Move to 3.1.4.2. Conformity NL Example 1.10 Example 1.10 ed Content in text corrected as suggestd. What is the logic with the example numbering? Example 2.* in section 3.* etc. Section 3.1.4.2 does not exist, example moved to section 3.1.3.2 Conformity. All numbering to be checked NL Example 1.9 ed This example is in the wrong paragraph Move to 3.1.4.1. Scope No section 3.1.4.* Check numbering Example moved to the correct section NL NL 1 Example 7.1 ed Figure 1 ed Type of comment: and it's invocable at connection point address… Replace connection point with end point No example 7.1 exists. Could not find the text. Add; Metadata for Invocable Spatial Data Services Edit figure Please use the defined terms ge = general Make clear that the requirement is a metadata requirement te = technical ed = editorial page 13 of 19 Template for comments MS Chapter/ Section (e.g. 3.1) Countries: AT, CH, CZ, DE, DK, ES, FR, IT, NL, SE, UK Paragraph/ Figure/ Table/ (e.g. Table 1) Type of comment1 Comments Date: 2016-05-24 Document: TG for Metadata v2.0rc2 Proposed change Resolution SE Foreword Third paragraph ed In the first sentence. Replace “expressed” with “expressing” or similar. Accepted SE Foreword Fourth paragaraph ed In the last sentence. Replace “no that” with “to what” or similar. Accepted DE Foreword third paragraph ed "This new version aims at clarifying and expressed technical requirements" "This new version aims at clarifying and expressing technical requirements" Accepted DE Foreword fourth paragraph ed "... led to some confusion no that is actually ..." please clarify wording Accepted DE Foreword Fourth paragraph: ed “The mapping from the ISO 19115/19115 elements …” “The mapping from the ISO 19115/19119 elements …“ Accepted DE Foreword last paragraph ed "The goal has been to only to clarify the existing..." "The goal has been to only to clarify the existing..." Accepted ES Foreword to this version Foot note 1 ed Link https://iessvn.jrc.ec.europa.eu/attachments/download/780/Inspi re Change to https://iessvn.jrc.ec.europa.eu/attachments/download/780/Insp ire%20MIG%20ToR%20Update%20TG%20Metadat a%20final.pdf Accepted The mapping from the ISO 19115/19119 elements Accepted Delete last part; no that is actually required by the technical specification. Accepted are presented with the context the are presented with the context of the Accepted corresponding INSPIRE Regulations… corresponding INSPIRE Regulations %20MIG%20ToR%20Update%20TG%20Metadata% 20final.pdf does not work NL The mapping from the ISO 19115/19115 elements… Project: MIWP-8 Foreword, 4th paragraph ed Foreword, 4th paragraph ed Foreword, 5th paragraph ed NL Normative references ed Is it for readability possible to reference to the INSPIRE regulations with a abbreviation of the title instead of the number? [Regulation 1205/2008] Change [Regulation 1205/2008] to [IR Metadata] etc. Not accepted. References such as [Regulation 1205/2008] uniquely identify the reference, while references such as [IR Metadata] might lead to confusion. DE Normative references ed Work uniform with other similar documents (see e.g. Draft “Technical Guidance for INSPIRE Spatial Data Services and services allowing spatial data services to be invoked”). e.g. [INSPIRE DIRDirective] INSPIRE, Implementing Directive 2007/2/EC … or Not accepted. The proposal makes sense, but requires harmonisation over all TG’s which is out of scope for this document. The current approach is at least consistent within this document. NL NL 1 Type of comment: typo …led to some confusion no that is actually required by the technical specification. Not a correct sentence missing word ge = general te = technical [Verordnung 1205/2008/EG INS MD] Verordnung 1205/2008/EC etc. ed = editorial page 14 of 19 Template for comments MS Chapter/ Section (e.g. 3.1) Countries: AT, CH, CZ, DE, DK, ES, FR, IT, NL, SE, UK Paragraph/ Figure/ Table/ (e.g. Table 1) Type of comment1 Date: 2016-05-24 Document: TG for Metadata v2.0rc2 Comments Proposed change Project: MIWP-8 Resolution ES Other Reference s [TG SDS] ed Link http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/documents/Network_Servi ces/ does not work Change to http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/documents/Spatial_Data_ Services/TG_for_INSPIRE_SDS_3_1.pdf Add reference when v4.0 is published. ES Other Reference s [TG DiscoveryS] ed Link http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/documents/Network_Servi ces/ does not work Change to http://inspire.ec.europa.eu/documents/Network_Servi ces/TechnicalGuidance_DiscoveryServices_v3.1.pdf Accepted DE Other references ed Technical Guidance for INSPIRE Discovery Services, version 3.1, http://inspire.jrc.ec.europa.eu/documents/Network_S ervices/TechnicalGuidance_DiscoveryServices_v3.1. pdf Link is referenced incomplete and shall be fixed. Accepted. AT p. 10 ed As the structure of the document structure and the expressions have changed… As the structure of the document and the expressions have changed… Accepted AT p. 10 ed The first section of this annex contains on overview table for these elements… The first section of this annex contains an overview table for these elements… Not accepted. Don’t see the difference AT p.10 ed A new TG Requirement C.3 has been added to specify encoding the the Non-empty Free Text Elements. A new TG Requirement C.3 has been added to specify encoding the Non-empty Free Text Elements. Accepted AT p.12 ed TG Recommendation 12 has bee split into TG Recommendations 1.4 has been split Accepted AT p.15 ed Requirements class is a set is related technical requirements defining the mandatory aspects … is a set of related technical requirements Accepted AT p.15 ed Data set is an identifiable data that can be accessed separately. A datasetcanbe a partof a whole a segregated resource Not accepted. Cannot find this text in doc. (series) or a segregate resource. AT p.17 ed …and numbered as show below: …and numbered as shown below: Accepted. AT p.49 ed In this specification the above Implementing Rule text is is interpreted to mean in that the conformity In this specification the above Implementing Rule text is interpreted to mean that the conformity Accepted shall be declared at least to the following regulations depending on the described INSPIRE resource type shall be declared at least to the following regulations depending on the described INSPIRE resource type UK8 Pg 8 Acknowledgm ents ed The UK MWIP8 representative is not included Include “James Reid (UK)”. Accepted ES Reading guidance and transition period 4th paragraph ed It is not describe the section “Annex D” Include a paragraph with the characteristic of Annex D” Accepted 1 Type of comment: ge = general te = technical ed = editorial page 15 of 19 Template for comments MS Chapter/ Section (e.g. 3.1) Countries: AT, CH, CZ, DE, DK, ES, FR, IT, NL, SE, UK Paragraph/ Figure/ Table/ (e.g. Table 1) Type of comment1 Date: 2016-05-24 Comments Document: TG for Metadata v2.0rc2 Proposed change Resolution DE Reading guidance and transition period first sentence ed "As the structure of the document structure..." "As the structure of the document structure..." Accepted DE Reading guidance and transition period first sentence ed "the following sections have been to help..." "the following sections have been <filled in / added ?> to help..." Accepted DE Reading guidance and transition period third bullet point ed "... and the TG Requirements on sections ..." please clarify wording Accepted DE Reading guidance and transition period fourth bullet point ed "...TG Requirement and Recommendations of contained in the version 1.3..." "...TG Requirement and Recommendations of contained in the version 1.3..." Accepted DE Reading guidance and transition period first paragraph, fourth bullet point ed Write all references bold and be therefore uniform with other documents. …[TG SDS]… Accepted NL Reading guidance, 1th paragraph ed As the structure of the document structure and the expressions have changed… Delete 2 nd structure; As the structure of the document structure and the expressions have changed … Accepted Reading guidance, 1th paragraph ed Delete 2 nd contains; The informative annex B contains the mapping between the ISO 19115:2003 Core elements Accepted NL Not a correct sentence The informative annex B contains the mapping between the ISO 19115:2003 Core elements and INSPIRE Implementing Rules for metadata contained in the section 1.1 of the version 1.3. Project: MIWP-8 and INSPIRE Implementing Rules for metadata contained in the section 1.1 of the version 1.3. Not a clear sentence CZ Revision history 1 page 10 Type of comment: ed ge = general Double “the” in sentence (TG Requirement C.3). te = technical A new TG Requirement C.3 has been added to specify encoding the the Non-empty Free Text Elements. Accepted ed = editorial page 16 of 19 Template for comments MS Chapter/ Section (e.g. 3.1) Countries: AT, CH, CZ, DE, DK, ES, FR, IT, NL, SE, UK Paragraph/ Figure/ Table/ (e.g. Table 1) Type of comment1 Comments Date: 2016-05-24 Document: TG for Metadata v2.0rc2 Proposed change Resolution CZ Revision history page 11 in the middle ed Double “and” in sentence (TG Requirement 5). … The IR Requirement for providing both the code and and the code space has been interpreted as integrated parts of a single URI character string. Accepted CZ Revision history page 12 ed Missing letter. TG Recommendation 12 has been split into TG Recommendations … Accepted DE Revision history third bullet point ed "...to specify encoding the the Non-empty..." "...to specify encoding the the Non-empty..." Accepted DE Revision history ninth bullet point ed "The hierachyLevel element required..." "The hierachyLevel element required..."; we propose to align this font family for ISO element names through the whole document for better readability Accepted DE Revision history 15th bullet point ed The IR Requirement for providing both the code and and the code space has been interpreted as integrated parts of a single URI character string. The IR Requirement for providing both the code and and the code space has been interpreted as integrated parts of a single URI character string. Accepted DE Revision history 29th bullet point ed TG Recommendation 12 has bee split into TG Recommendations 1.4 (for data sets and data set series) and 3.3 (for Spatial Data Services). TG Recommendation 12 has been split into TG Recommendations 1.4 (for data sets and dataset series) and 3.3 (for Spatial Data Services). Accepted DE Revision history 42th bullet point ed "The TG Requirements 30, 31, 32, 33 and 34 considering the Limitations on public access and the Conditions applying to access and use elements have been revised is TG Requirements C.16 and C.17 about Limitations on public access..." please clarify wording Accepted SE Revision history, page 10 Third bullet point from bottom ed Double ”the” Replace ”encoding the the” with ”encoding of the” Accepted SE Revision history, page 11 Tenth bullet point from top ed Unclear wording Replace 2is the TG Requirement” with “is now included in the TG Requirement” or similar Accepted DK7 Terms and abbreviatio ns ed Typo in definition of “Requirements class”: .. is a set is related …” Correct typo: “… is a set of related …” Accepted DE Terms and abbreviatio ns ed Names of external documents are not flagged flag names of external documents through the whole document for a better readability Accepted. DE Terms and abbreviatio ns ed "Requirements class is a set is related technical requirements..." please clarify wording; "is a set of"? Accepted 1 paragraph on Requirements class Type of comment: ge = general te = technical Project: MIWP-8 ed = editorial page 17 of 19 Template for comments MS Chapter/ Section (e.g. 3.1) NL Paragraph/ Figure/ Table/ (e.g. Table 1) Countries: AT, CH, CZ, DE, DK, ES, FR, IT, NL, SE, UK Type of comment1 TG Recomme ndation C.9 ed NL TG Requireme nt 1.11 ed NL TG Requireme nt 2.4 ed Date: 2016-05-24 Comments Just below this recommendation the comment text “Add TG Recommendation for using gmx:Anchor elements for referring to keywords which have a URI Document: TG for Metadata v2.0rc2 Proposed change Project: MIWP-8 Resolution Remove this editor text. Accepted Can there be some repeating for readability? Repeat or resume C.21, C.22 and C.23 Accepted gmd:MD_SpatialRepresentationTypeCode referring to one of the values Replace with the correct codelist Accepted to point to.” is still present of of ISO 19139 code list MD_CharacterSetCode…. wrong codelist NL TG Requireme nt 4.2 ed Can there be some repeating for readability? Repeat or resume C.21, C.22 and C.23 Accepted NL TG Requireme nt 5.3 ed Can there be some repeating for readability? Repeat or resume C.21, C.22 and C.23 Accepted ed Option 1: All operations and the list of connect points… and Replace connect points with end points Accepted although the element itself is called And TG Requireme nt 5.4 And TG Requireme nt 5.5 NL TG Requireme nt 7.1 srv:connectPoint. Option 2: All operations and the list of connect points… Please use the defined terms NL TG Requireme nt 7.2 ed srv:connectPoint/gmd:CI_OnlineResource/gmd:URL shall contain a URL .. shall contain an endpoint URL Accepted This element shall not be the one Choose the one or same not both Accepted same used for describing conditions applying to access and use…. Change the in to to be used for accessing the service for executing the operation… be more explicit NL TG Requireme nt C.16 ed and direct below this requirement The make the references to the allowed… 1 Type of comment: ge = general te = technical ed = editorial page 18 of 19 Template for comments MS Chapter/ Section (e.g. 3.1) DE 1 Verbal forms for expression of provisions Countries: AT, CH, CZ, DE, DK, ES, FR, IT, NL, SE, UK Paragraph/ Figure/ Table/ (e.g. Table 1) Type of comment1 XML examples ed Type of comment: ge = general Comments "The location of the XML elements within the document structure is given using XPath syntax at to top of the text block in bold font" te = technical Date: 2016-05-24 Document: TG for Metadata v2.0rc2 Proposed change "The location of the XML elements within the document structure is given using XPath syntax at to top of the text block in bold font" Project: MIWP-8 Resolution Accepted ed = editorial page 19 of 19
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