Ref.: Ms. No. WRENG-1078R1
WATER NETWORK SECTORIZATION BASED ON GRAPH THEORY AND ENERGY PERFORMANCE INDICES
#Editor: Based on the reviews, it is recommended that the author should revise and resubmit the manuscript. The
author is encouraged to review the past JWRM publications on this subject and to take the reviewer comments into
consideration in improving the paper. However, please submit a list of changes or a rebuttal against each point raised
by the reviewer with your revised manuscript. Please note that the earlier we receive your revised manuscript, the
earlier we can process it. Thanks for your interest in the Journal of Water Resources Planning & Management. We look
forward to receiving the revised manuscript from you. The reviewer comments are listed below.
Following Editor’s suggestion, we have improved the English language of manuscript with the help
of American Journal Experts (AJE), a scientific language editing and cleanup service company
that is listed on the ASCE Internet homepage. We attached two certificates from AJE: the first
one refers to major revision and the second one to minor revision: in this way we hope that we
solved all “grammatical errors and poorly constructed sentences to be accepted for publication in
the Journal”.
Reviewers' comments:
#Associate Editor:
The authors have made a serious attempt to address the AE’s and Reviewers’ comments. Despite this, I feel that the
manuscript still contains many grammatical errors and poorly constructed sentences to be accepted for publication in
the Journal. I will therefore request that the manuscript be extensively copyedited to remove any lingering grammatical
problems and poorly worded sentences. I will then review the manuscript again and make a recommendation on its
suitability for publication in the Journal. Please note that if the authors do not significantly improve the writing in the
manuscript, I will return the manuscript to them without review or even reject it. That said, I think the authors are
making a worthwhile contribution to the field and I want them to produce the best possible manuscript that
communicates this important contribution. I also think the manuscript has improved significantly since the authors’
original submission.
We have improved the English language of manuscript with the help of American Journal Experts
(AJE), a scientific language editing and cleanup service company that is listed on the ASCE
Internet homepage. We attached two certificates from AJE: the first one refers to major revision
and the second one to minor revision: in this way we hope that we solved all “grammatical errors
and poorly constructed sentences to be accepted for publication in the Journal”.
EDITORIAL CERTIFICATE
This document certifies that the manuscript listed below was edited for proper English language, grammar,
punctuation, spelling, and overall style by one or more of the highly qualified native
English speaking editors at American Journal Experts.
Manuscript title:
ASCE Journal of Water Resources Planning and Management Paper
Authors:
Armando Di Nardo, Michele Di Natale, Giovanni F. Santonastaso, Velitchko G. Tzatchkov and Victor H. Alcocer-Yamanaka
Date Issued:
October 24, 2012
Certificate Verification Key:
97B7-1746-9A87-3321-ECA6
This certificate may be verified at www.journalexperts.com/certificate. This document certifies that the manuscript listed above was edited for proper English
language, grammar, punctuation, spelling, and overall style by one or more of the highly qualified native English speaking editors at American Journal
Experts. Neither the research content nor the authors' intentions were altered in any way during the editing process. Documents receiving this certification
should be English-ready for publication; however, the author has the ability to accept or reject our suggestions and changes. To verify the final AJE edited
version, please visit our verification page. If you have any questions or concerns about this edited document, please contact American Journal Experts at
[email protected].
American Journal Experts provides a range of editing, translation and manuscript services for researchers and publishers around the world. Our top-quality PhD editors are all native English
speakers from America's top universities. Our editors come from nearly every research field and possess the highest qualifications to edit research manuscripts written by non-native English
speakers. For more information about our company, services and partner discounts, please visit www.journalexperts.com.
EDITORIAL CERTIFICATE
This document certifies that the manuscript listed below was edited for proper English language, grammar,
punctuation, spelling, and overall style by one or more of the highly qualified native
English speaking editors at American Journal Experts.
Manuscript title:
ASCE Journal of Water Resources Planning and Management Paper
Authors:
Armando Di Nardo, Michele Di Natale, Giovanni F. Santonastaso, Velitchko G. Tzatchkov and Victor H. Alcocer-Yamanaka
Date Issued:
February 7, 2013
Certificate Verification Key:
81EA-A665-430B-B6AE-046D
This certificate may be verified at www.journalexperts.com/certificate. This document certifies that the manuscript listed above was edited for proper English
language, grammar, punctuation, spelling, and overall style by one or more of the highly qualified native English speaking editors at American Journal
Experts. Neither the research content nor the authors' intentions were altered in any way during the editing process. Documents receiving this certification
should be English-ready for publication; however, the author has the ability to accept or reject our suggestions and changes. To verify the final AJE edited
version, please visit our verification page. If you have any questions or concerns about this edited document, please contact American Journal Experts at
[email protected].
American Journal Experts provides a range of editing, translation and manuscript services for researchers and publishers around the world. Our top-quality PhD editors are all native English
speakers from America's top universities. Our editors come from nearly every research field and possess the highest qualifications to edit research manuscripts written by non-native English
speakers. For more information about our company, services and partner discounts, please visit www.journalexperts.com.