http://mcanda.gateway.bbc.co.uk BBC House Style and Writing Guidelines Contents Introduction 2 BBC 3 BBC logo BBC brands Radio station frequencies BBC programme titles BBC divisions and departments BBC typefaces BBC and broadcasting terms Accessibility Welsh Disability and diversity Writing copy General style Checking spelling and facts Useful books 3 3 5 5 5 6 6 7 7 7 8 8 8 8 Portrayal 9 Sexism Disability 9 9 Style points Abbreviations Ampersand (&) Capital letters Compass points Contact details Dates and events Emphasis Foreign words and characters Italics Lists Money Music 10 10 11 11 12 12 12 13 13 13 14 14 14 Newspapers, magazines and journals 15 Numbers 15 Place names 16 Postal addresses 16 Telephone numbers 17 Time 17 Titles and honours 17 Trade names 18 Websites 18 Weights, measures and scientific units 19 Punctuation Apostrophe Brackets Colon Comma Dash (en rule) Ellipsis (...) Exclamation mark Full stop Hyphen Question mark Quotation marks Semicolon Slash (/) 20 20 21 22 22 22 23 23 23 23 24 25 25 25 Spelling 26 Grammar and usage 28 Dangling/hanging participle Singular or plural verb Tautology and unnecessary words eg, ie Less, fewer May, might That, which, who 28 28 29 29 29 29 30 Introduction These guidelines set out BBC-specific style points and other more general style and grammatical points. They are designed to bring consistency to everything that is produced across all BBC divisions, but also to allow some freedom of style for differing formats and diverse audiences. The guidelines apply to all types of printed materials, from information for external audiences to internal reports. They also apply to online copy, though in some cases other guidelines take precedence when writing for the web. Some style points may also vary slightly depending on how the copy is being used. For example, small but important differences apply to Programme Information (PI) and other press materials. The following symbols show where style points differ from the general house style: PI PI and other press materials www Online copy Other guidelines • • • • BBC branding: http://mcanda.gateway.bbc.co.uk/branding BBC Editorial Guidelines: bbc.co.uk/guidelines/editorialguidelines BBC Fair Trading Guidelines: bbc.co.uk/info/policies/commercial_guides bbc.co.uk Standards and Guidelines: bbc.co.uk/guidelines/newmedia BBC House Style and Writing Guidelines page 2 BBC BBC logo The BBC logo is for branding only and must not appear embedded in text. Full guidelines are on the MC&A site on Gateway. http://mcanda.gateway.bbc.co.uk/branding BBC brands Television Television channels are written in words, for example BBC One. The exception is BBC News 24. CBBC is always written all in capitals, and note the capital B within CBeebies. BBC Learning Zone should always include BBC. When used with the channel on which it is broadcast (BBC Two), it can be referred to as BBC Two’s Learning Zone. Radio Network radio stations are written with numbers: BBC Radio 4. Note the capital X in BBC 1Xtra. BBC should be included in all radio station names. However, where a station is mentioned several times in a document, it is acceptable to leave out BBC (or BBC Radio from BBC Radio 5 Live) after the first mention. Exceptions are stations that do not have Radio in their name, for example BBC 7, BBC London, BBC GMR and BBC WM – these must always include BBC. BBC corporate style is to use initial capitals in Radio 5 Live and 5 Live Sports Extra. However, the network’s own style is to use lower case: Radio 5 live and 5 live sports extra. New media BBCi is the interactive TV service. It is always written with a lower case ‘i’. The BBC website is bbc.co.uk. It is always written all in lower case, even at the beginning of a sentence. See Websites for more on URLs. Writing brands • BBC Television and BBC Radio have a capital T and R only when being referred to as brands. • Never split channel or network names over two lines of print. Upper or lower case (see full list on following page) • In large areas of text (text-heavy leaflets, booklets, the Annual Report, etc) and in picture captions, BBC brands are written in upper and lower case, except CBBC which is all capitals. • In display adverts and posters, BBC brands – except CBeebies, BBCi and bbc.co.uk – should appear in capitals. • In press releases, television channels should appear in capitals, eg BBC ONE, but all other services should be in upper and lower case, eg BBC News. BBC Nations & Regions brands These should be written in upper and lower case: • BBC One Wales, BBC Two Scotland, etc In display materials, the channel in Nations brands may be written in capitals: • BBC ONE Wales, BBC TWO Scotland, etc BBC House Style and Writing Guidelines page 3 BBC brands Text and picture captions Display materials Television BBC Television BBC One BBC Two BBC Three BBC Four BBC News 24 BBC Parliament CBBC CBeebies BBC News BBC Sport BBC Learning Zone BBC World BBC Prime BBCi Ceefax BBC TELEVISION BBC ONE BBC TWO BBC THREE BBC FOUR BBC NEWS 24 BBC PARLIAMENT CBBC CBeebies BBC NEWS BBC SPORT BBC LEARNING ZONE BBC WORLD BBC PRIME BBCi CEEFAX Radio BBC Radio BBC Radio 1 BBC 1Xtra BBC Radio 2 BBC Radio 3 BBC Radio 4 BBC Radio 5 Live BBC 5 Live Sports Extra BBC 6 Music BBC 7 BBC Asian Network BBC Radio Kent, BBC WM, etc BBC World Service BBC RADIO BBC RADIO 1 BBC 1XTRA BBC RADIO 2 BBC RADIO 3 BBC RADIO 4 BBC RADIO 5 LIVE BBC 5 LIVE SPORTS EXTRA BBC 6 MUSIC BBC 7 BBC ASIAN NETWORK BBC RADIO KENT, BBC WM, etc BBC WORLD SERVICE Online bbc.co.uk bbc.co.uk Nations & Regions BBC Cymru Wales BBC Northern Ireland BBC Scotland BBC English Regions BBC One Wales BBC Two Scotland BBC House Style and Writing Guidelines BBC Cymru Wales BBC Northern Ireland BBC Scotland BBC English Regions BBC ONE Wales BBC TWO Scotland page 4 Radio station frequencies Write frequencies/wavelengths in the order FM, AM, LW, DAB digital radio, digital TV and online. Don’t put a space between the number and FM or LW, and use an ampersand with a list of frequencies/wavelengths. • BBC Radio 4 on 92–95FM & 198LW, DAB digital radio, digital TV and online BBC programme titles Programme titles should appear highlighted in main text in italics, eg EastEnders, Newsnight. Where the text is already italicised (for example, in a picture caption) the title should appear in roman. Press releases, however, use bold for the programme title that is the subject of the release, and italics for any other programmes mentioned. www Avoid using italics for online copy as they do not display well on a computer screen. Use roman instead: EastEnders, Newsnight. Programme titles are generally written in a mix of upper and lower case, eg The League of Gentlemen, Sports Review of the Year, with initial capitals only for the main words (not ‘a’, ‘the’, ‘of’, etc). If in doubt, check how the title appears on screen or in published press material. PI Always use initial capitals for all words in the title: The League Of Gentlemen, Sports Review Of The Year. Research shows that audiences are not always aware that what they are watching, listening to or buying is a BBC product, so it is essential that BBC is prominent throughout materials in order to bring credit back to the BBC. In promotional materials, BBC should always be included the first time the programme is mentioned, and again in new chapters or sections. Exceptions to this rule are when the context is explicitly BBC (press releases, press packs, the Annual Report, heavily branded foyer boards, posters, etc) or where the programme forms part of a list of BBC programmes. In this case it must be clear from the surrounding text that the programmes are all BBC. It is recommended, though, that each piece of material is considered individually, taking into account the space, the design, the prominence of the brand on the material and the audience. BBC divisions and departments BBC divisions and departments should always appear in upper and lower case, and the ampersand (&) should be used for ‘and’: • BBC Factual & Learning • BBC Information & Archives • BBC Marketing, Communications & Audiences • BBC Nations & Regions In internal documents it is unnecessary to put BBC in front of everything – Factual & Learning or Marketing, Communications & Audiences is enough. BBC House Style and Writing Guidelines page 5 BBC typefaces For printed materials, the BBC corporate typeface is Gill Sans. It can be used in three weights: light, regular and bold. It must not be condensed or expanded. • Gill Sans can be used in three weights: light regular bold All body copy should be set in Gill Sans. Headings should normally be in Gill Sans, although an alternative font may be used to create a distinctive style for individual projects. Some brand/channel guidelines may require a different font: for example, the CBBC font is Melt. For brand guidelines, see http://mcanda.gateway.bbc.co.uk/branding. Press releases Arial is used for press releases. The point size for press release text is 11. Correspondence, internal documents, etc Arial may be used when Gill Sans is not available, for example for correspondence, internal documents, files to be downloaded, etc. BBC and broadcasting terms • • • • • • • • • • Building public value (lower case ‘p’ and ‘v’ for the publication title) DAB digital radio Department for Culture, Media and Sport (DCMS) (not ‘of’) Director-General (hyphen) Freeview, Freesat licence fee payer (previously licence payer) BBC iPlayer (previously iMP – BBC Integrated Media Player / BBC Interactive Media Player) Ofcom set-top box (hyphen) soundbite BBC House Style and Writing Guidelines page 6 Accessibility Consider whether to produce your materials in other formats or languages in order to make them accessible to the widest possible audience. For example, you might produce versions in Welsh, in Braille, in large print, in simplified English, in audio form or as a British Sign Language video. Welsh The Welsh Language Act 1993 introduced specific provision for Welsh speakers. The BBC is committed to providing print aimed at licence fee payers in Wales in both English and Welsh. For advice on Welsh versions, in the first instance contact Prys Dafydd (Translator, Public Affairs – Wales) on (01) 23042. Disability and diversity Disability Discrimination Act 1995 The Disability Discrimination Act 1995 introduced specific provisions to prohibit discrimination against disabled people. The Act’s provisions cover any printed material that the BBC makes available to the public. This means that, wherever reasonable, the BBC makes printed material available in alternative formats so that it can be accessed by people with particular disabilities. People who are partially sighted or blind The RNIB offers information and advice on making publications accessible. It also publishes See it Right, a pack of 12 booklets with detailed practical advice. www.rnib.org.uk People who are deaf or hard of hearing The RNID offers advice and factsheets on producing information for deaf and hard of hearing people, materials for deafblind people and the best language for writing about deaf people. www.rnid.org.uk People with a learning disability People with a learning disability face extra challenges in getting the information they need, and changing the way information is written and presented can make it easier for everyone to understand. Many people find reading difficult so information on audio tape might be best, but if you have to provide written material there are ways to make it easier to understand. Mencap provides advice on how information can be made more accessible in two publications, Am I making myself clear? and Making your website accessible for people with learning disabilities. You can download these from the Mencap website. www.mencap.org.uk BBC Diversity Centre There is a lot of useful information on the Diversity Centre site on Gateway. http://diversity.gateway.bbc.co.uk BBC House Style and Writing Guidelines page 7 Writing copy Given the BBC’s commitment to the highest standards in everything it does, it is important to produce copy that is well written and accurate. General style Always think about your target audience and tailor your copy accordingly. Corporate publications such as the Annual Report are usually written in a formal style, but material aimed at the general public, for instance, can be much more informal. Whoever you are writing for, aim to make your text clear and accessible. • Use several short sentences rather than one long one. • Use active verbs rather than passive ones. • Use short words rather than long ones. Plain English Campaign awards Crystal Marks for clarity in public information. Their website has useful online guides to writing plain English. www.plainenglish.co.uk Checking spelling and facts Make sure your spelling is correct and your facts are accurate. Rather than relying on computer spell-checkers, make use of the reference sources available on Gateway. The BBC has subscriptions to many dictionaries and databases for checking spelling, English usage, facts and so on. These include Oxford Reference Online (Oxford English Dictionary and nearly 200 other reference books) and Encyclopaedia Britannica. http://research.gateway.bbc.co.uk The following online newspaper style guides are useful for checking names of people and organisations in the news, as well as spelling and grammar points: Times Online: www.timesonline.co.uk/tol/tools_and_services/specials/style_guide The Guardian stylebook: www.guardian.co.uk/styleguide Useful books • Eats, Shoots & Leaves by Lynne Truss (Profile Books, 2003) – enjoyable book that explains the basics of punctuation • Rediscover Grammar by David Crystal (Longman, 2004) – best-selling, very readable grammar reference book • New Hart’s Rules: The Handbook of Style for Writers and Editors (OUP, 2005) – completely new edition of classic reference work • New Oxford Dictionary for Writers and Editors (OUP, 2005) – focuses on names and words that cause difficulty or controversy BBC House Style and Writing Guidelines page 8 Portrayal Be careful to use inclusive language and avoid any suggestion of bias, sexism, racism and prejudice against disabled people. Sexism Don’t use ‘he’ where the meaning is ‘he or she’. Either use ‘they’ or reword the text. The same applies to ‘his or her’ – use ‘their’ or reword the text. Don’t use ‘man’ or ‘men’ where it is not accurate or relevant, and avoid specifying gender when referring to a person’s job. For example: • police officer, not policeman/woman; the police, not policemen • firefighter, not fireman • nurse, not male nurse • headteacher, not headmaster/headmistress Use common sense when words include ‘man’. For example: • the human race or human beings, not mankind or Man • working hours is better than man-hours • man-made is acceptable, or use artificial or synthetic Use words ending in ‘-ess’ with caution: ‘actor’ and ‘author’, for example, are now standard instead of ‘actress’ and ‘authoress’. Disability When describing disability, make sure you use the currently acceptable terms as advised by the main national organisations, such as blind people, deaf and hard of hearing people, people with a disability. Ideas about what is acceptable can change and can vary among different groups. Don’t use words such as ‘suffer’, ‘victim’, ‘handicapped’, ‘challenged’. Some alternatives: • suffers from, is a victim of has • handicapped/challenged with a disability • mentally handicapped (people) with a learning disability / learning difficulties • wheelchair-bound a wheelchair user • handicapped toilet accessible toilet If in doubt, check with the following: RNIB: www.rnib.org.uk RNID: www.rnid.org.uk Mencap: www.mencap.org.uk BBC Diversity Centre: http://diversity.gateway.bbc.co.uk BBC House Style and Writing Guidelines page 9 Style points The following are printing conventions/rules and, where there are options available, BBC house style preferences. PI This shows where style points for Programme Information (PI) and other press materials differ from general house style. www This shows where style points for websites differ from general house style. Abbreviations (including contractions and acronyms) Strictly speaking: • Abbreviation – formed by omitting the end of a word • Contraction – formed by omitting the middle of a word • Acronym – formed from the initial letters of a group of words; often pronounced as a word Punctuation BBC house style is not to use full stops in any kind of abbreviation, whether shortened words or groups of initials: • Mr Mrs Dr Rev St (saint/street) • BBC UK MP • etc p (page) ext (extension) • JK Rowling JRR Tolkien (no spaces between initials in people’s names) • eg ie (if preferred, these may be written e.g. and i.e., but be consistent) Exception: • no. (number) must have a full stop; no space is needed if it is followed by a numeral: no.2 Don’t assume your audience knows what a set of initials represents. Write it out in full the first time, followed by the abbreviation in brackets, and then use the abbreviated form: • The Central Religious Advisory Committee (CRAC) advises the BBC on religious broadcasting policy and programmes. You can write to CRAC with your views. This is not necessary with organisations that are usually known by their initials: • BBC BTCV CBI TUC UN Acronyms – capitals or lower case Usually, if an acronym is pronounced as a word, use an initial capital only. If it is pronounced as individual letters, use all capitals: • Aids Nato Acas Unicef • BBC CD GCSE PC • CD-Rom (pronounced partly as letters, partly as a word) But follow the preference of organisations with their own names and brands: • DfES BAFTA MORI RADA Plurals When forming a plural of an acronym, the final ‘s’ is lower case and there is no apostrophe: • CDs CD-Roms GCSEs FAQs MPs See also Weights, measures and scientific units. BBC House Style and Writing Guidelines page 10 Ampersand (&) Don’t use an ampersand as shorthand for ‘and’, except for BBC departments and divisions, when it is part of a trade name, or in radio station frequencies: • BBC Radio & Music BBC Marketing, Communications & Audiences • Marks & Spencer Tate & Lyle • BBC Radio Solent – 96.1 & 103.8 FM, 999 & 1259 AM Capital letters Use capital letters sparingly. Graphic designers sometimes set pieces of text all in upper case, but avoid doing this in documents that are mostly text because it can make them difficult to read. Headings Avoid writing headings all in upper case. Use initial capitals as sparingly as possible for headings, titles, page headings and subheads: • Review of the year Performance against objectives Job titles Use initial capitals for job titles, official bodies, etc: • BBC Chairman Director-General Board of Governors Compass points Use capital letters for north, south, etc when they are part of the title of a recognised geographical or political division or a BBC region, but lower case for more general geographical areas: • the North East (of England) South East Asia BBC East • southern England the north of Scotland west London Programme titles In general, use initial capitals for main words and lower case for small words (‘a’, ‘the’, ‘of’, etc): • The League of Gentlemen Sports Review of the Year PI For PI and press materials, use title case – i.e. initial capitals for all words: • The League Of Gentlemen Sports Review Of The Year www On websites, use title case but roman (not italics): • The League Of Gentlemen Sports Review Of The Year Some programme titles have specific combinations of capitals and lower case: • ONE life HARDtalk ‘The’ with names of bands, organisations, etc There is no need to capitalise ‘the’ with the names of most bands, organisations and so on, but follow the preferences of those that do so: • the Beatles the BBC • The Darkness The National Archives Time periods and events Use capitals for special occasions and historical periods and events, but not centuries or seasons: • New Year’s Day the Middle Ages the Fifth of November • the 21st century spring, summer, autumn, winter BBC House Style and Writing Guidelines page 11 Capitals or not • internet, net, web, website; but World Wide Web • Ltd, plc • government, parliament, party, president, etc – except when referring to a specific one: the British Government the Scottish Parliament the Labour Party the President of the United States Compass points See Capital letters and Place names Contact details The following is a recommended order for listing contact details: Name Postal address Telephone number Fax number Textphone number (note: not Minicom which is a brand name) Email Website See also Postal addresses, Telephone numbers and Websites. Dates and events Use the following style, always writing the year in full (2006 not ’06): • 1 February 2006 Monday 31 July 2006 Use ‘th’ etc only with a number used on its own: • on the 14th of the month Where used, AD comes before a date, BC after it, with a space between: • AD 410 44 BC Months, days of the week, special occasions, and historical periods and events take capital letters. Seasons and centuries do not. (See Capital letters.) • New Year’s Day the Fifth of November the Middle Ages • World Wars: use First/Second World War, or World War One/Two (not World War I/II) Write centuries in words up to the ninth, but in numerals after that. Don’t use capitals, and only use a hyphen if the phrase is used attributively before a noun. • the second century the 15th century 21st-century politics Write decades in full in figures. For the 20th century, decades may be written in shortened form in words with an initial capital. • the 1840s the 1960s the Sixties For people’s ages in decades, use words all in lower case: • she was in her forties BBC House Style and Writing Guidelines page 12 When referring to a time span, use ‘from’ and ‘to’, ‘between’ and ‘and’, or a dash (en rule) without spaces. Don’t use a mixture. • from 18 to 21 April between 18 and 21 April 18–21 April • from May to July between May and July May–July For a range of years, use a slash (oblique) where a single year covers parts of two calendar years; otherwise, use a dash (en rule). • the financial year 2006/7 BBC Annual Report 2005/2006 • the 1914–18 war Monty Python ran for six years (1969–74) Emphasis Avoid using a type style (bold, italics or underline) for emphasis. The sentence construction normally makes it clear that a word is being emphasised. If you do need to emphasise a word, use italics for preference. Foreign words and characters Use italics for foreign words and phrases not commonly accepted as part of the English language: • Zeitgeist dolce vita in vitro fait accompli Be careful to use foreign characters and accents correctly. In a Word document, use the Insert menu (select Symbol), or a keyboard shortcut: for example, Ctrl + ' followed by e gives é. See the Word Help menu (Keyboard shortcuts for international characters). Italics Use italics for titles of television and radio programmes, keeping BBC (if used) in roman: • EastEnders You and Yours BBC Top Gear But campaigns and seasons should be in roman: • BBC Children in Need Comic Relief BBC Proms Titles of BBC websites should normally be written in roman, but they may be treated like programme titles and written in italics – in either case, be consistent. (See also Websites.) • BBC History BBC Action Network or BBC Action Network Use italics for TV and radio programmes, films, books and booklets, CDs, plays, long poems, operas, paintings and so on – but roman in single quotation marks for songs, short poems, and articles in books or journals. (See also Music.) • Strictly Come Dancing The Lord of the Rings Van Gogh’s Sunflowers • ‘Here Comes the Sun’ from Abbey Road Use italics for newspapers and magazines, including ‘The’ when it appears on the masthead (see Newspapers and magazines), • The Independent the Daily Mail The Economist Use italics for foreign words not commonly accepted as part of the English language: • Zeitgeist dolce vita in vitro fait accompli www Avoid using italics altogether in online copy as they do not display well on a computer screen. See also Emphasis. BBC House Style and Writing Guidelines page 13 Lists With a list of items laid out on separate lines (with or without bullets or numbers), make sure that the points are consistent in style and that they all follow grammatically from what comes before them. Try to keep the points short, and avoid using more than one level of points. If it is not important to show the order of the points, use bullets. Only use numbers to show the order of the items, such as in a recipe. Don’t put a full stop after the numbers. 1 Preheat the oven to Gas 6. 2 In a bowl, mix together... If the points all finish a sentence, use a colon before them – capitals and full stops are not required. In 2005/2006, we will broadcast: • at least 50 live music events • a series of events to support the BBC’s Africa Season If there is no colon before the bullet points, use capital letters at the start of each point. BBC objectives for 2004/2005 • Underpin active and informed citizenship • Enrich the cultural life of the nation • Contribute to education for all If the bullet points are full sentences, put a full stop at the end of each one. BBC Two priorities for 2004/2005 • We will broadcast at least 240 hours of current affairs this year. • In addition, we will broadcast at least 100 hours of news, excluding Newsnight. If you need to write long bullet points, use normal sentence punctuation within them. Money Names of currencies are written in lower case: • pound dollar euro yen Use two digits after the currency symbol, or none if it is a round number: • £1.50 £7 €230.50 Tip: to insert a euro symbol in a Word document, hold down Ctrl+Alt+E. Million and billion should be written in full in lower case, with no space after the numerals. In documents that repeatedly mention sums in millions or billions, it is acceptable to abbreviate. • £15million £15m £2billion £2bn Music Don’t use capital letters for musical genres, except R&B (rhythm and blues) and genres that include a proper name: • reggae rock ’n’ roll country and western Tex-Mex Use italics for the titles of musical works, including operas and musicals, and for CDs, LPs, etc. Use roman in single quotation marks for individual songs. • Così fan tutte Phantom of the Opera • Vaughan Williams’ Fantasia On A Theme Of Thomas Tallis • ‘Here Comes the Sun’ from Abbey Road BBC House Style and Writing Guidelines page 14 Newspapers, magazines and journals Use italics for newspapers and magazines, including ‘The’ when it appears on the masthead: • The Times The Sun The Independent • The Economist The Spectator The Big Issue Titles without ‘The’ in the masthead include: • the Daily Mail the News of the World New Statesman If you are not referring to the newspaper itself, ‘the’ should be lower case and roman: • the Times business correspondent • he referred to the Independent article Numbers Write one to nine in words. Use numerals for numbers from 10 upwards and for all numbers that include a decimal point or a fraction. The same applies to ordinals – ‘first’, ‘second’, and so on. However, use words – even for numbers over nine – in the following cases: • when a number comes at the beginning of a sentence • for approximate numbers: about thirty people attended NB: numbers twenty-one to ninety-nine are hyphenated. Use numerals – even for numbers one to nine – in the following cases: • when the number is an exact measurement: 5 metres, 4 tonnes • when it is followed by million or billion: 2 million • for page references: see page 6 • where there are two numbers in a range and one is over ten: between the ages of 4 and 11 If the number is followed by an abbreviation, don’t put a space between them (see also Weights, measures and scientific units): • 35mm 10kg 128MB 11am Write percentages in numerals and with the % sign, with no space between them: • 2% 33.3% Write fractions less than one in words, with a hyphen where appropriate: • one-third three-quarters a twentieth Large numbers Always include commas in numbers from 1,000 upwards. Write out ‘million’ and ‘billion’ in lower case, with a space after the number except in amounts of money (see also Money). • 10,000 15 million viewers £15billion BBC House Style and Writing Guidelines page 15 Place names Britain or UK Be precise about what you are referring to. • (Great) Britain = England, Wales and Scotland (Britain usually refers to the island, Great Britain to the political unit) • United Kingdom / UK = Great Britain and Northern Ireland (political unit) • British Isles = (geographical) group of islands including Britain, Ireland, Isle of Man, Isle of Wight, Hebrides, Orkney Islands, Shetland Islands, Isles of Scilly, Channel Islands America or USA Refer to the United States of America as the USA, not America. The adjective ‘American’ is acceptable, but use ‘US’ if there is any danger of ambiguity. • America = the landmass of the continents of North and South America • North America = continent containing Canada, the USA, Mexico and the countries of Central America Regions Use all lower case for north, south, etc when they are general geographical areas, but initial capitals for recognised geographical or political divisions or regions: • the North East (of England) South East Asia BBC East • southern England the north of Scotland west London When referring to a geographical area, be specific about what it is an area of: • the north of England (not just ‘the north’, which could be the north of Britain, including Scotland) Check the spelling and, where applicable, the punctuation of place names. For example: • Middlesbrough (no ‘o’ after the ‘b’) • Newcastle upon Tyne (no hyphens) Newcastle-under-Lyme (hyphens) • King’s Lynn (apostrophe) Kings Langley (no apostrophe) Postal addresses Ideally, each of the following should appear on a separate line, with no commas: Addressee’s name Company (where applicable) Building name (where applicable) Number and street name Town County (where applicable – not essential as long as the town and postcode are given) Postcode When writing an address as part of continuous text, use commas to separate the parts of the address, except before the postcode: • BBC, Media Centre, Media Village, 201 Wood Lane, London W12 7TQ BBC House Style and Writing Guidelines page 16 Telephone numbers Don’t use brackets for dialling codes: 020 8008 2034. The dialling code should always be written in one block: • 01222 07850 For dialling codes beginning with 02, such as 020 for London and 028 for Northern Ireland, the correct grouping is the three-digit dialling code followed by the number in two blocks of four: • 020 8008 2034 028 9032 6453 For 08xx and 09xx numbers, use the grouping preferred by the owner of the number, which is often chosen to make it easier to remember: • 08700 100 222 0870 272 272 08457 48 49 50 Time In general, use the 12-hour clock. Put a full stop between the hour and minutes, but don’t use 00 for times on the hour. Don’t put a space before am or pm, and don’t use full stops in am or pm. • 2am 6.30pm Note that am is short for ante meridiem which means ‘before noon’, and pm is post meridiem, ‘after noon’, so 12 o’clock (whether day or night) cannot be am or pm. Use 12noon or 12midnight, or simply noon or midnight. PI www For PI and press materials, and websites, include 00 for times on the hour: 2.00am. BBC World Service uses the 24-hour clock, with a colon between the hour and minutes: 14:30. When writing a time span, use ‘from’ and ‘to’, ‘between’ and ‘and’, or a dash (en rule) without spaces. Don’t use a mixture. • from 10am to 3pm between 10am and 3pm 10am–3pm Titles and honours Royalty Use the full title for the first occurrence, then the shortened version: • HM The Queen or Her Majesty The Queen The Queen • HRH The Prince of Wales The Prince or Prince Charles For other titles, see the Times Online Style Guide. www.timesonline.co.uk/section/0,,2941,00.html or see the Quick Clicks at the bottom of the homepage www.timesonline.co.uk Honours and official designations As with other abbreviations, don’t use full stops in MBE, etc. Where a person is entitled to several sets of letters after their name, the order is: • decorations and honours (e.g. OBE, MBE, DFC) • appointments made by or on behalf of the Queen (e.g. QC, JP) • educational degrees (e.g. BA, PhD) • medical qualifications (e.g. FRCS) • memberships of learned societies or professional institutions (e.g. RA) • appointments or offices (e.g. MP) BBC House Style and Writing Guidelines page 17 Trade names Avoid using proprietary names to refer to general products: • MP3 player (not iPod) game console (not PlayStation) textphone (not Minicom) If referring to a trade name, be careful to use the correct mix of capitals and lower case: • iPod easyJet eBay QuarkXPress Websites The BBC website is bbc.co.uk. It is written all in lower case, even at the beginning of a sentence. Extract from the bbc.co.uk brand guidelines: Avoid using ‘online’ and ‘website’. In body copy, bbc.co.uk, bbc.co.uk/sitename or BBC Brand X are acceptable. Use of BBC with ‘online’ and ‘website’ (eg BBC News Online, BBC News website, BBC website, BBC Online) is not permitted and should be replaced by bbc.co.uk, bbc.co.uk/news or BBC News. An exception to this rule is when ‘online’ and ‘website’ are used without ‘BBC’ to refer to platforms, eg ‘on TV, on radio and online’ or ‘on AM, on digital TV and online’. For the full guidelines, go to the MC&A site on Gateway. http://mcanda.gateway.bbc.co.uk/branding Titles of BBC websites should normally be written in roman, especially the generic sites. However, titles of specific sites may treated like programme titles and written in italics. Whichever you use, be consistent. • BBC History BBC Science & Nature • BBC Action Network or BBC Action Network Website URLs Always check that a URL works by entering it in a web browser. For bbc.co.uk sites, URLs should include no more than one slash. Don’t put a slash at the end. • bbc.co.uk/history bbc.co.uk/football bbc.co.uk/cbeebies Give the shortest URL that works. It is usually not necessary to give the full path as it appears in the browser address box. • bbc.co.uk/bitesize browser shows: http://www.bbc.co.uk/schools/revision/ • bbc.co.uk/football browser shows: http://news.bbc.co.uk/sport1/hi/ football /default.stm www URLs on bbc.co.uk sites: • Unclickable bbc.co.uk URLs should appear without ‘www’: bbc.co.uk/news • Clickable URLs should include ‘www’: www.bbc.co.uk/news Non-BBC sites may or may not include www in their URL. Follow the usage of the site owner. Don’t use the http:// prefix unless there is a risk that it may not be clear that it is a URL. As a general principle, give the main website URL rather than the URL of a page further inside the site. Websites often change their structure and the URL of a ‘deep’ page may change. Most URLs are written all in lower case. However, some URLs are case-sensitive so make sure you use the correct mix of upper and lower case. When giving a URL within a piece of text, use normal sentence punctuation after it, such as a full stop if the URL comes at the end of a sentence. BBC House Style and Writing Guidelines page 18 Weights, measures and scientific units Use numerals for the quantity, even for numbers below ten, followed by a space if you are using the full word for the unit. If using the abbreviation, don’t put a space after the numerals and don’t use full stops. • 5 kilogrammes 100 metres 128 megabytes • 5kg 100m 128MB Be careful to use the correct mix of upper and lower case in abbreviations: • g, kg (gram, kilogram) • mm, cm, m, km (millimetre, centimetre, metre, kilometre) • MHz (megahertz) • KB (kilobyte), MB (megabyte), GB (gigabyte) In general, use metric rather than imperial measurements – for example, celsius rather than fahrenheit for temperatures, grams and kilograms for weights rather than pounds and ounces. But a person’s height can be in feet and inches and weight in stones and pounds If using imperial measurements, follow them with the metric equivalent in brackets: • 5 miles (8 kilometres) Online metric converters: www.sciencemadesimple.com/conversions.html http://gocanada.about.com/library/nmetric.htm BBC House Style and Writing Guidelines page 19 Punctuation Punctuation is there to help clarify the meaning of what you have written. Wrongly used, it can confuse that meaning. Here’s an example of a sentence with no punctuation: • We have one problem only I know his mistress This can have several interpretations depending on how you punctuate it: • We have one problem: only I know his mistress. • We have one problem only: I know his mistress. • We have one problem only, I know: his mistress. • We have one problem only I know: his mistress. So you can see that for the reader’s sake it is important to get it right. Punctuation is also there to make what you have written readable. For example, If you are struggling with a long sentence with several sub-clauses separated by commas, break it down into shorter sentences. • Recommended reading: Eats, Shoots & Leaves by Lynne Truss (Profile Books, 2003) – an enjoyable book that explains the basics of punctuation Apostrophe The apostrophe has two main uses: • to show possession – ‘of’, ‘belonging to’ • to show where letters have been left out Possession, belonging Add ’s (apostrophe and ‘s’) to a singular word or name, to a plural that doesn’t end in ‘s’, and to a name ending in ‘s’ where both ‘s’ sounds are pronounced: • tonight’s show the BBC’s future plans • people’s expectations children’s television • Jonathan Ross’s agent Dickens’s last novel Don’t use an apostrophe in possessive pronouns – hers, its, ours, yours, theirs: • a friend of yours theirs is not to reason why Add an apostrophe only (no ‘s’) to a plural that ends in ‘s’, and to a word or name ending in ‘s’ where this is not pronounced: • Gardeners’ Question Time MPs’ salaries • for goodness’ sake Mrs Bridges’ cooking Dumas’ novels An apostrophe is also used when referring to the length of a period of time: • one week’s time two years’ time Sometimes the names of organisations and places do not follow the rules: • Citizens Advice Bureau St Thomas’ Hospital Earls Court Be careful where you put the apostrophe with plurals that do not end in ‘s’ – women, people, children, etc. If you are not sure, think what the phrase would be with ‘of’ in it: • women’s interests = interests of women (NOT womens’ interests = interests of womens) • people’s opinions = opinions of people (NOT peoples’ opinions = opinions of peoples) BBC House Style and Writing Guidelines page 20 Where letters have been left out Common phrases with apostrophes include: • o’clock (originally ‘of the clock’) • rock ’n’ roll (NB: make sure both apostrophes print the right way round as ’, not ‘. Word will automatically put ‘ if an apostrophe comes after a space, so to insert ’, go to the Insert menu and select Symbol.) Use contractions like the following only in informal writing: • don’t (do not) we’ll (we will) it’s (it is, it has) you’re (you are) It’s or its It’s is an abbreviation of ‘it is’ or ‘it has’. Its isn’t – it is a possessive meaning ‘of it’. • it’s on BBC Two (it’s = it is) • it’s been shown before (it’s = it has) • the BBC is run in the interests of its viewers and listeners (its = ‘of it’) Who’s is an abbreviation of who is. Whose means ‘of whom’. • Terry Wogan, who’s the most popular presenter on Radio 2... (who’s = who is) • Jennifer Saunders, whose credits include Absolutely Fabulous... (whose = of whom) The greengrocer’s apostrophe So-called because it is often used wrongly in plurals on signs (banana’s, potato’s). Apostrophes are not used in plurals, even in abbreviations and decades: • bananas potatoes CDs GCSEs MPs the 1990s However, it is acceptable in a few cases to use an apostrophe for clarity: • dot the i’s and cross the t’s • do’s and don’ts (NB: not don’t’s) www On websites, use ‘straight’ apostrophes, not ‘curly’ ones: ' not ‘. Brackets Round brackets (parentheses) are used to set off an interruption to a sentence, such as extra information or an aside: • Marcel Proust (1871–1922) also died young. • BBC Casualty is not (despite speculation in the press) going to four episodes a week. Square brackets [ ] are used for words added to a direct quotation to clarify what is being said, or to keep the meaning when part of a quotation is left out: • “It [Titanic] was the best moment of my career,” said Kate Winslett. • “Sam had a relatively ordinary upbringing ... [but] the influence of her eccentric great-aunt could not be underestimated.” Never put a comma before an opening bracket. • If the sentence requires a comma (to separate two clauses), it goes after the closing bracket. If the brackets contain a complete sentence, the full stop goes inside the brackets. Otherwise, it goes outside the brackets. • GCSE Bitesize programmes begin in March. (See page 6 for more information.) • GCSE Bitesize programmes begin in March (see page 6 for more information). BBC House Style and Writing Guidelines page 21 Colon The colon points forward: it indicates that what follows is an elaboration or explanation. It can also be used to introduce a list. Never put a dash after a colon. • Part of radio’s appeal is its portability: people want to listen around the house and on the move. Comma The comma is a way of dividing a sentence into units of meaning, the equivalent of a short pause when speaking. It can be used when joining two complete sentences with a word such as ‘and’, ‘but’, ‘so’ or ‘while’. • Many people pay for satellite or cable, but increasing numbers are choosing Freeview. Use two commas to bracket off a ‘weak interruption’ in a sentence – something that can be removed without disturbing the sense of the sentence. • Steven Spielberg, one of the most successful directors of all time, is working on a new movie. Make sure that the bracketing commas are in the right places. In this example, many people would put the first comma after ‘coat’, but if you then remove the interruption between the commas, you can see that this is wrong. • He put on his coat and, being cold, added a scarf as well. Be careful not to put two bracketing commas where they are not needed. For example, if you remove the name Steven Spielberg from this sentence, it makes no sense: • The film director, Steven Spielberg, is one of the most influential people in Hollywood. It should be: • The film director Steven Spielberg is one of the most influential people in Hollywood. When using commas to separate items in a list, you only need a comma before the final ‘and’ if the meaning would be unclear without it. • The comics featured were Monkhouse, Davidson and Enfield. • The comics featured were Monkhouse, Davidson, and Hale and Pace. Dash (en rule) In print, a dash or en rule (–) is longer than a hyphen (-). When used to separate parts of a sentence, it should have a space on either side. A dash can be used to introduce a list or explanation, or as a slightly longer pause than a comma: • Radio 3 will celebrate the achievements of three composers – Beethoven, Webern and Bach It can also be used to show the title of an episode of a series: • Casualty – Full On A pair of dashes can be used to bracket off information inside a sentence: • The BBC’s no-smoking campaign – presented by Dale Winton – got more publicity than ITV’s A dash (not a hyphen) can be used to show a range, in place of the word ‘to’, ‘and’ or ‘between’. In this case, there should be no spaces on either side of the dash. • pages 16–23 0900–0925 18 September–27 November • the London–Bristol train the Tyson–Lewis fight BBC House Style and Writing Guidelines page 22 Ellipsis (...) An ellipsis is a series of points that show that words have been omitted within or at the end of a sentence or quote. It can also make a sentence trail off suggestively. Use three points only. Put spaces before and after when using an ellipsis within a sentence, but not when it comes at the end of a sentence. • He talked about his work ... and the influence of the professor. • You know what they say – the grass is always greener... • They never had any trouble with the neighbours, until now... Exclamation mark Resist the temptation to use exclamation marks, except for a genuine exclamation in direct speech. Full stop Put a full stop at the end of a complete statement. Do not connect two statements with a comma. Full stops are not required with initials in names (J Smith) or in abbreviations, eg BBC, UK, RSVP. Note the exception: no.1 as an abbreviation for number 1. When used with brackets, the full stop appears inside the brackets only if they contain a complete sentence. Where the brackets fall within a sentence, the full stop goes outside the brackets. • GCSE Bitesize Revision programmes begin in March. (See page 6 for more information.) • GCSE Bitesize Revision programmes begin in March (see page 6 for more information). Hyphen Hyphens are used to link words together. It is difficult to give clear-cut rules for them, but the main aim is to aid understanding and avoid ambiguity. Compare the following, for example: • a little used car (a car that isn’t new) a little-used car (a car that isn’t used much) • twenty odd people (twenty people who are odd) twenty-odd people (just over twenty people) Use hyphens when a compound (two or more words in a phrase) is used attributively (like an adjective) before a noun: • the award-winning series The Blue Planet • a peak-time programme aimed at 15-year-old children • he is a well-known actor • up-to-date information is available online Do not use a hyphen if the compound comes after a verb, or if the first word of the compound is an adverb ending in ‘ly’: • coverage of the Paralympics will be shown in peak time • the programme is aimed at 15 year olds • his hatred of spiders is well known • the information is not up to date • a publicly funded television service Sometimes a hyphen is used to show that two words are linked in a phrase, wherever they occur: • the injury was work-related • he was a happy-go-lucky character BBC House Style and Writing Guidelines page 23 Prefixes English has a huge number of prefixes. Some of them are normally followed by a hyphen, but most are not (and the tendency not to use a hyphen is growing). If in doubt, check in a dictionary (though different dictionaries may give different versions!). Many prefixes can be used in either way. For example: • antisocial anti-apartheid • bypass, byline, byword by-election, by-product • email e-commerce, e-learning • nonconformist non-smoker, non-speaking • semicolon, semiprecious semi-conscious, semi-detached In general, use a hyphen: • if the last letter of the prefix is the same as the first letter of the other part of the word: de-escalate pre-empt re-establish co-operate co-ordinate (but cooperate and coordinate are also acceptable) • to avoid confusion with a similar word: re-sign (sign again) resign (quit) • when the prefix ‘co’ means ‘fellow’: co-production co-author • to make a word easier to read: by-election by-product non-speaking under-developed • when followed by a capitalised word: pan-BBC pre-Raphaelite un-American • after ‘ex’, ‘ill’ and ‘pro’: ex-husband ill-advised pro-government Suffixes Many nouns that include a suffix such as ‘up’, ‘off’, ‘on’ or ‘out’ are hyphenated (or written as one word), but verbs should be written as separate words with no hyphen. • follow-up check-up runner-up sign-off knockout • to follow up to sign up to kick off to log on to knock out Recommended use (or not) of hyphens • Director-General • email, but e-commerce, e-learning • mid: mid-Atlantic, mid-seventies, mid-air, but midsummer, midwinter • multichannel, multimedia • no one • the North East, but in north-east Scotland • offline, online • programme maker, but programme-making • public service broadcasting • set-top box • website • worldwide • 24-hour news Question mark Use a question at the end of a direct question. Do not use one at the end of an indirect question. • “Do you know Ant and Dec?” he asked. • He asked if I knew Ant and Dec. BBC House Style and Writing Guidelines page 24 Quotation marks (speech marks, inverted commas) Use double quotation marks for dialogue and quoted material. (This is newspaper style; in books it is normal to use single quotation marks.) Punctuation at the end of a sentence comes inside the quotation marks if the quote is a full sentence, but not otherwise. • “I’ll be home later than I thought,” said Matt, “so don’t come till 8 o’clock.” • Halliwell’s Film Guide calls The Exorcist a “spectacularly ludicrous mishmash”. Use single quotation marks for a quote within a quote, for emphasis or for an unfamiliar or new word or phrase. • “No,” explained Sue. “What I said was ‘Go if you want to.’ It was her own choice.” • He was wearing lots of ‘bling’. For quotes of more than one paragraph, use opening quotes for all the paragraphs, but closing quotes only at the end of the last paragraph. www On websites, use ‘straight’ quote marks, not ‘curly’ ones: ' " not ‘ “. Semicolon A semicolon indicates a more distinct break or pause than a comma: • To err is human; to forgive, divine You can also use semicolons to punctuate a list which might be confusing if you used commas: • Innovations included the comedy series Marion and Geoff on BBC One; The Wire, a run of plays from new writers on BBC Radio 3; and Jetset, a new format for the National Lottery. Slash (/) (forward slash, oblique or solidus) Use a slash, with no spaces, to separate alternatives: • You must have knowledge of journalism and/or PR work to succeed in the job. When a year runs over part of two calendar years: • BBC Statements of Programme Policy for 2005/2006 (2005–2006 indicates a period of two years) To separate lines of poetry when they are run on as a single line: • Let us go then, you and I/While the evening is spread out across the sky/Like a patient etherised upon a table (TS Eliot) In URLs (see also Websites): • bbc.co.uk/pressoffice BBC House Style and Writing Guidelines page 25 Spelling Use your computer spellchecker, but make sure it is checking for UK English, not US (in Word, go to Language in the Tools menu, then Set Language). Spellcheckers also have limitations – they will highlight a word spelt wrongly, but not a word spelt correctly and used wrongly. If you want to look up a word, the BBC has subscriptions to Oxford Reference Online (Oxford English Dictionary and nearly 200 other reference books). http://research.gateway.bbc.co.uk (click on the Reference Collection tab or on Reference in the Website Directory on the homepage) General Use -ise endings (English spelling) rather than -ize (American): • centralise emphasise organise realise summarise Be careful with words that can be spelt two ways: • licence (noun): TV licence to license (verb): TV licensing • defence (English spelling) defense (American spelling) • practice (noun): practice makes perfect to practise (verb): you have to practise every day (NB: in American usage, ‘licence’ and ‘practice’ are verbs; ‘license’ and ‘practise’ are nouns) Two words, not one • a lot • all right • any more • under way Some troublesome words • accommodation (two ‘c’, two ‘m’) • adapter = writer who adapts, for example, a book for TV adaptor = electrical device • affect (verb) = make a difference to, have an influence on effect (noun) = change that is the result of something; (verb) = cause to happen, bring about • ageing (preferred, but aging is also acceptable) • biased, focusing, focused (one ‘s’) • choose = pick (present tense) chose = picked (past tense) • complementary = combining with something to make a complete whole complimentary = expressing praise; (ticket, etc) free of charge • definite (‘i' not ‘a’) • dependant (noun) dependent (adjective) • disc = used for recordings, as in compact disc disk = used in computers • discreet = careful in order to avoid embarrassment discrete = individually separate and distinct • embarrass (two ‘r’, two ‘s’) • enquire = ask; enquiry = question inquire = undertake a formal investigation; inquiry = formal investigation • ensure = make sure insure = take out insurance BBC House Style and Writing Guidelines page 26 • everyday (adjective): an everyday occurrence every day (adverbial phrase): I drink tea every day • forever = continually: I’m forever getting this wrong for ever = until the end of time: I will love you for ever • forward = direction foreword = preface to a book • fulfil, fulfilment (one ‘l’ each time) • harass (one ‘r’, two ‘s’) • home in on = aim at, focus on, move towards hone = sharpen • independent (‘e’ not ‘a’) • install (two ‘l’), instalment (one ‘l’) • judgement, acknowledgement (preferred to ‘judgment’ and ‘acknowledgment’) • led (not ‘lead’) is the past tense of ‘lead’: it led to a lot of discussion • liaison (‘i' before and after the ‘a’) • loose = (adjective) not tight; (verb) release lose = mislay; be defeated • medieval, encyclopedia (preferred to ‘mediaeval’, ‘encyclopaedia’) • meter = instrument that measures metre = unit of length • millennium (two ‘l’, two ‘n’) • principal = (adjective) main, chief; (noun) head, leading person, boss principle = (noun) rule, belief • program = computer application programme = TV, radio, etc • separate (‘a’ in the middle, not ‘e’) • stationary = not moving stationery =paper, etc Tip: a cAR can be stationARy, papER is stationERy • story = tale, narrative storey = floor of a building • their = of them there = in that place • unmistakable (no ‘e’) • worldwide (one word, except in World Wide Web and World Wide Fund for Nature) BBC House Style and Writing Guidelines page 27 Grammar and usage Dangling/hanging participle This is when the first part of a sentence, which is intended to modify a noun, doesn’t refer to the noun that is the subject in the main part of the sentence. It is left dangling or hanging. Try to avoid dangling participles by rewording the sentence. For example: • As a child, football was Billy’s favourite sport. “As a child” refers to Billy, but the subject of the main part of the sentence is “football”. This can be reworded in a couple of ways: • As a child, Billy’s favourite sport was football. • When he was a child, football was Billy’s favourite sport. A dangling participle is bad style, although the meaning is often clear. Sometimes, though, it can change the meaning or make it nonsensical: • Walking home, a tree fell on his head. (The tree was walking home?) • Riding along on my bicycle, a dog knocked me over. (The dog was riding the bicycle?) Singular or plural verb Collective/group nouns A collective/group noun (eg government, committee) takes a singular or a plural verb depending on whether it is considered as a single unit or as a group of individuals: • The committee was divided The jury has retired to consider its verdict • The public are not in favour The audience are enjoying themselves The important thing is to be consistent and not to mix singular and plural. When referring to organisations, such as the BBC, always use a singular verb: • The BBC is established under a Royal Charter Names of countries take a singular verb, even for a plural name such as the United States, but use a plural verb when referring to a country’s team or to any sports team: • The United States is bordered by Canada to the north and Mexico to the south • England have qualified for the World Cup • Renault have signed a new driver With ‘none’, ‘a number of’ and percentages, use a singular verb if the noun is a collective/group noun, but a plural verb if the noun is an ordinary plural: • None of the viewers have complained about the language used • A number of viewers have complained about scenes of violence • 85% of the population lives within the reception area for DAB digital radio • 73% of households have access to digital terrestrial television Media, criteria, phenomena The singular forms are: medium The plural forms are: media criterion criteria phenomenon phenomena Use a singular or plural verb as appropriate. However, when ‘media’ refers to the press, it is treated as singular and takes a singular verb. BBC House Style and Writing Guidelines page 28 Tautology and unnecessary words Tautology is saying the same thing twice in different words and should generally be avoided. Some bad examples are: past history, future prospects, joint co-operation, mutual agreement, new departure, pair of twins, past history, temporary respite, up until. Other words, such as ‘situation’ and ‘conditions’, are often unnecessary: • in an emergency situation = in an emergency • in bad weather conditions = in bad weather eg, ie • eg means ‘for example’ and introduces one or more examples of what comes before it: they liked guitar-based rock, eg Coldplay and Travis • ie means ‘that is’ or ‘in other words’ and introduces an amplification or explanation: a computer peripheral, ie a printer that is connected up to it Note: these can be written e.g. and i.e., according to preference. Whichever form you use, make sure you are consistent. Less, fewer ‘Less’ is the comparative of ‘little’ and ‘fewer’ the comparative of ‘few’. Use ‘less’ with singular/uncountable nouns; ‘fewer’ with plural/countable ones. • he had less money than before but fewer problems • fewer people watched Celebrity Big Brother this year than last year May, might These both refer to the possibility of something happening. They tend to be used almost interchangeably, but there is a difference between them. When talking about the present, ‘might’ suggests that something is possible but unlikely. Compare: • we may go to Spain on holiday next year • we might go to Spain on holiday next year When talking about the past there is a more definite difference – ‘may’ leaves it open whether something was the case, ‘might’ does not: • he may have been hurt in the accident (but I don’t know if he was or not) • he might have been hurt in the accident (but he wasn’t) When talking about possibilities ‘if’ something had happened, use ‘might’: • if she had gone to university, her life might have been different In indirect or reported speech, use ‘might’: • he said they might go to Spain on holiday next year BBC House Style and Writing Guidelines page 29 That, which, who Use ‘that’ or ‘which’ with things, and ‘who’ with people: • this is the house that Jack built • this is the old woman who lived in a shoe This type of usage is called ‘defining’ or ‘identifying’, because it identifies a particular thing or person. A clause that adds extra information is called ‘non-defining’ or ‘non-identifying’. Use ‘which’ or ‘who’ preceded by a comma: • this house, which Jack built, is full of rats • this old woman, who lived in a shoe, had so many children she didn’t know what to do Some troublesome words • biannual = happening twice a year biennial = happening every two years • disinterested = impartial, not influenced by considerations of personal advantage uninterested = not interested • flaunt = show off, display flout = express contempt for (flout the law) • literally = word for word, without metaphor, without exaggeration – often used as an intensifying adverb but can lead to absurdity, e.g. “she was literally beside herself” • unique = unequalled, the only one of its kind – so a thing cannot be “very unique” BBC House Style and Writing Guidelines page 30
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