OLIMPIADA DE LIMBA ENGLEZĂ ETAPA JUDEŢEANĂ – 22 februarie 2015 CLASA a VII-a BAREM DE CORECTARE ŞI NOTARE SUBJECT I (1 point x 10 gaps = 10 points) 1. will you translate; 2. was raining; 3. are climbing; 4. have not / haven’t arrived; 5. doesn’t often come; 6. did the boys spend; 7. kept; 8. will not / won’t matter; 9. are you laughing; 10. were getting. SUBJECT II (1 point x 10 gaps = 10 points) 1. B; 2. A; 3. D; 4. B; 5. C; 6. D; 7. C; 8. B; 9. A; 10. D SUBJECT III (1 point x 10 sentences = 10 points) 1. I’ve been here for three months. 2. You speak English well. 3. I didn’t meet anybody. 4. Please explain to me how to improve my English. 5. You cannot buy all that you like! 6. You are very nice, like your mother. 7. The woman whose car is red works in this building. 8. She felt bored in the class. 9. I must call him immediately. 10. I look forward to meeting you. SUBJECT IV (2 points x 10 sentences = 20 points) 1. How long will he have to wait? 2. Where have you returned from? 3. Who are you going to invite? 4. What were you doing when the earthquake began? 5. When did the course begin? 6. How often does she read magazines? 7. How many conferences are they organizing this month? 8. Who is the school’s best athlete? 9. What is Carol like? 10. Whose sister has won the competition? OLIMPIADA DE LIMBA ENGLEZĂ ETAPA JUDEŢEANĂ – 22 februarie 2015 CLASA a VIII-a BAREM DE CORECTARE ŞI NOTARE SUBJECT I. (1 point x 10 gaps = 10 points) 1. will not / won’t believe; 2. has happened; 3. wrote; 4. was walking; 5. found; 6. had probably thrown; 7. would / ‘d feel; 8. have/’ve been; 9. am/’m now telling; 10. had. SUBJECT II. (1 point x 10 gaps = 10 points) 1. B; 2. C; 3.A; 4. D; 5. B; 6. C; 7. D; 8. D; 9. B; 10. C. SUBJECT III. (1 point x 10 sentences = 10 points) 1. You can have either the cheese cake or the coconut tart. / You can have both the cheese cake and the coconut tart. 2. He warned me not to sit on that chair because it was broken. 3. There’s a little carrot cake left but not enough for all of your friends. 4. Although / In spite of the fact that the train was late, he got to work on time. / In spite of the train being late, he got to work on time. 5. Dad was right! I really wish I had taken his advice! 6. This exercise isn’t as easy as it may seem. 7. Unless you start taking your medication, you won’t feel better. 8. Could you tell me what time it is, please? 9. The children are looking forward to seeing their cousins from Mexico. 10. Robert’s father discouraged him from becoming an artist. SUBJECT IV. (1 point x 10 sentences = 10 points) 1. Why did they go home? 2. Where are the children sitting? 3. When does Peter run with his dogs? 4. How many books are you going to buy? 5. Whom was she helping when you called her? 6. Which car has he favoured for years? / What colour is the car he has favoured for years? 7. What would you do if you were rich? 8. Who asked you where your brother was? 9. How long will the journey take? 10. How much juice had Craig already bought? SUBJECT V. (1 point x 10 gaps = 10 points) 1. had not / hadn’t forgotten his wallet; 2. had their new computer installed; 3. started teaching three years; 4. were not old enough to; 5. should have helped; 6. is being served; 7. had not / hadn’t finished; 8. me not to park; 9. will probably win; 10. had / ‘d better told your parents. OLIMPIADA DE LIMBA ENGLEZĂ ETAPA JUDEŢEANĂ – 22 februarie 2015 CLASA a IX-a BAREM DE CORECTARE ŞI NOTARE QUESTION III A. (1 point x 10 gaps =10 points) 1. weren’t/ were not 2. See / Let’s see 3. have missed 4. have been prevented 5. asking 6. Do you have / have you got 7. are arriving 8. met 9. is / will be 10. would not have had B. (1 point x 5 gaps = 5 points) 1. original 2. archeologists / archaeologists 3. built 4. construction 5. concessions C. (2 points x 5 gaps = 10 points) 1. was far more 2. was put off 3. the best essay she had 4. far as I am / ‘m concerned 5. wish I had told OLIMPIADA DE LIMBA ENGLEZĂ ETAPA JUDEŢEANĂ – 22 februarie 2015 CLASA a X-a BAREM DE CORECTARE ŞI NOTARE QUESTION III A. (1 point x 10 gaps =10 points) 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10. like while/whereas/but have as because/when in between together how/why in B. (1 point x 10 gaps = 10 points) 1. funds 2. competitive 3. numerous 4. advancement 5. formative 6. instinctive 7. bilingual 8. converse 9. easily 10. advantageous C. (1 point x 5 gaps = 5 points) 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. Does this sweater need washing before I wear it? If Lucy had got the job, she would be living in Paris now. There’s hardly anyone who thinks (that) he is a good president. They have decided to cut down on / cut back on the number of phone calls they make. When my sister heard she’d failed her driving test, she broke down in / broke into tears. OLIMPIADA DE LIMBA ENGLEZĂ ETAPA JUDEŢEANĂ – 22 februarie 2015 CLASA a XI-a BAREM DE CORECTARE ŞI NOTARE QUESTION III (25 points) A. (1 point x 10 gaps =10 points) 1. did; 2. longer; 3.on; 4. which; 5. having; 6. There; 7. what; 8. to; 9 that; 10. with. B. (1 point x 5 gaps = 5 points) 1. resented being treated as if /though 2. was Cindy who objected to tidying 3. we climbed/ we climb, the harder breathing would/will 4. denied (ever) being involved in 5. have been easy to come up C. (1 point x 10 gaps = 10 points) 1. analysts 2. shelved 3. materialised 4. irreparably 5. spacious 6. residents 7. inhabitable objections 9. densely 10.architectural 8. OLIMPIADA DE LIMBA ENGLEZĂ ETAPA JUDEŢEANĂ – 22 februarie 2015 CLASA a XII-a BAREM DE CORECTARE ŞI NOTARE QUESTION III (10 + 5 + 10 = 25 points) A. (1 point x 10 gaps = 10 points) 1. In; 2. forward; 3. without; 4. worth; 5. from; 6. hire; 7. needed; 8. only; 9. certain/limited; 10. eyes. B. (1 point x 5 words = 5 points) 1. draught; 2. nip; 3. mint; 4. scoop; 5 armour. C. (2 points x 5 sentences = 10 points) 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. remains to be seen (fixed phrase) by no means uncommon (fixed phrase negative adjective) insisted on having expected to turn out for / up for / up to / up at who (had) performed faultlessly, was given CONCURSUL DE LIMBA ENGLEZĂ PENTRU LICEE CU PROFIL TEHNOLOGIC ŞI VOCAŢIONAL ETAPA JUDEȚEANĂ – 22 februarie 2015 CLASA a IX-a BAREM DE CORECTARE ŞI NOTARE SUBJECT I. (10 gaps x 1 point=10 points) 1. arrived 2. have not seen 3.had rained 4. would be 5. won 6. had won 7. boils 8. have been trying 9. had been looking 10. have been chatting SUBJECT II. (10 gaps x 1 point=10 points) 1.C; 2.D; 3.A; 4.A; 5.B; 6.C; 7.D; 8.B; 9.A; 10.C SUBJECT III. (10 gaps x 1 point=10 points) 1. will look 2. past – passed 3. who’s – whose 4. besides – beside 5. of – off 6. remember – remind 7. custom – habit 8. last – latest 9. billiard – billiards 10. poetry – poem SUBJECT IV. ( 5 gaps x 2 points=10 points) 1. The region has a lot of resources to offer in terms of natural resources. 2. Paula said that she would not wear her sister’s old dress. 3. Susan had great difficulty in persuading her boss to give her a pay rise. 4. “Excuse me madam, but does this bag belong to you?” the policeman asked. 5. Pearl is not old enough to read this book. SUBJECT V. (10 gaps x 1 point=10 points) 1. actually; 2. magazine; 3. staring; 4. vows; 5. valuable; 6. swamp; 7. grabbed; 8. fake; 9. vital; 10. giggle CONCURSUL DE LIMBA ENGLEZĂ PENTRU LICEE CU PROFIL TEHNOLOGIC ŞI VOCAŢIONAL ETAPA JUDEŢEANĂ – 22 februarie 2015 CLASA a X-a BAREM DE CORECTARE ŞI NOTARE SUBJECT I – 1x10=10 points 1. are you getting on; 2. Has anything happened; 3. ‘ve/have been; 4. Have you been doing; 5. ‘re / are getting; 6. leaves; 7. ‘ll / will probably get; 8. bought; 9. ‘ve/have bought; 10. ‘ll/will see. SUBJECT II – 1x10=10 points 1. few; 2. not to; 3. never; 4. is; 5. by (any chance); 6. incredibly; 7. getting; 8. were; 9. muddy; 10. been (advised). SUBJECT III – 1x10=10 points 1.amount; 2.on; 3.ought; 4.habits; 5.enough; 6.place; 7.plenty; 8.as; 9.If; 10.journey. SUBJECT IV – 2x5=10 points 1. a waste of time; 2. have any objection to; 3. if she had been/whether she had been/if she'd been/whether she'd been; 4. not mature enough to make; 5. far as I am concerned/far as I'm concerned SUBJECT V – 2x5=10 points 1. refusal; 2. lessen; 3. savings; 4. ensured; 5.prioritise CONCURSUL DE LIMBA ENGLEZĂ PENTRU LICEE CU PROFIL TEHNOLOGIC ŞI VOCAŢIONAL ETAPA JUDEŢEANĂ – 22 februarie 2015 CLASA a XI-a BAREM DE CORECTARE ŞI NOTARE SUBJECT II A.2x10=20 points 1. incredibly; 2. majestic; 3. keeping; 4. lifelong; 5. abilities; 6.beneficial; 7.stimulation; 8. captivity; 9. extensive; 10. daily B. 2x5=10 points 1. denied having cheated/that he had cheated; 2. you happen to be 3. had Paula reached the gate then 4. it was Mark who wrote 5. as it may be C. 2x5=10 points 1. Where will we have to get? 2. How were the roads? 3. How many of the guests were wearing evening dresses? 4. Whose friend is he? 5. What did he insist on? D. 1x10=10 points 1. ruins; 2. delay; 3. helping; 4. wound; 5. point; 6. profession; 7. vacancy; 8. perks; 9. attack; 10.winding CONCURSUL DE LIMBA ENGLEZĂ PENTRU LICEE CU PROFIL TEHNOLOGIC ŞI VOCAŢIONAL ETAPA JUDEŢEANĂ – 22 februarie 2015 BAREM DE CORECTARE ŞI NOTARE CLASA a XII-a Subject III (5+10+10=25 points) A (1 point x 5 gaps ) = 5 points 1. ...what the width.... 2. ...whether I had read..... 3. ...only a matter of time until/before... 4. ...little chance of Jim being...... 5 ...ended up doing...... B (1 point x 10 gaps) =10 points 1. ever; 2.on; 3.each/every; 4.take; 5.fact/short; 6.yet; 7.aware;8.precisely/exactly;9. could/should.; 10.getting/doing C (1 point x 10 gaps) =10 points 1.geographical; 2.serenity; 3.unimaginable; 4.unpredictability; 5.widened; 6.fascination; 7.awareness; 8.coastal; 9.reclamation; 10.urbanisation MINISTERUL EDUCATIEI CERCETARII SI TINERETULUI OLIMPIADA NATIONALA DE LIMBA ENGLEZA MARKING SCHEME FOR THE NARRATIVE ESSAY 9th Grade Analytical criteria Excellent Good 10p The essay is completely relevant to topic, describing places/events/characters/atmosphere/reach ing climax, including the final reactions of the protagonist. 8p The essay is fairly completed with all the sequencing elements of a narrative. ORGANIZATION AND COHESION There is complete logical connection of paragraphs due to a judicious use of linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. There is a fairly completion of paragraph organization due to scarce misuse of linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. VOCABULARY A wide range of vocabulary is used appropriately and accurately throughout the essay; precise meaning is conveyed; minor errors are rare; spelling is very well controlled. The register of the narrative essay is totally relevant to the task, being organically integrated all along the discourse A range of vocabulary is used appropriately and accurately in the essay ; occasional errors in word choice/formation are possible; spelling is well controlled with occasional slips. The register of the narrative essay is relevant to the task with slightly incongruent lapses within the discourse STRUCTURES A wide range of grammatical structures is used accurately and flexibly throughout the essay; minor errors are rare; punctuation is A range of grammatical structures is used CONTENT Adequate Weak Inadequate 6p The essay is partially completed with slight logical impediments in sequencing the moments of the narrative. There is partial completion of the task. Paragraphs are partially complete due to unfinished ideas and scarce use of linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. The range of vocabulary is adequately used in the essay; errors in word choice / formation are present when more sophisticated items of vocabulary are attempted; spelling can be faulty at times. The register of the narrative essay is partially relevant to the task with a narrow inconsistency of style, leading to halts in the logical development of ideas. A mix of complex and simple grammatical structures is present 4p The essay is faulty, including serious logical impediments in the sequencing of events. 2p The essay is incomplete, the sequencing of the narrative moments being inconsistent. There is serious inconsistency in the organization of the paragraphs due to the misuse of the linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements . Paragraphs are incomplete, both linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements having been disrespected. A limited range of vocabulary is present within the essay; less common items of vocabulary are rare and may be often faulty; spelling errors can make text understanding difficult. The register of the narrative is inconsistent due to the mixture of style A very narrow range of vocabulary is present; errors in word choice/formation predominate; spelling errors can make the essay obscure at times. The register used in the narrative essay is inappropriate for the type of functional writing. A limited range of grammatical structures is present A very narrow range of grammatical structures is present within the Points very well controlled. EFFECT ON TARGET READER The interest of the reader is aroused and sustained throughout. accurately and with some flexibility along the essay; occasional errors are possible; punctuation is well controlled with occasional slips. The text has a good effect on the reader throughout the essay; errors are present when complex language is attempted; punctuation can be faulty at times. along the essay; complex language is rare and may be often faulty; punctuation errors can make text understanding difficult. essay; errors predominate; punctuation errors make the text obscure at times. The effect on the reader is satisfactory The effect on the reader non-relevant The effect on the reader non-relevant. MINISTERUL EDUCATIEI CERCETARII SI TINERETULUI OLIMPIADA NATIONALA DE LIMBA ENGLEZA MARKING SCHEME FOR THE DESCRIPTIVE ESSAY 10th Grade Analytical criteria Exemplary Proficient Partially Proficient Incomplete 10p 8p 4p 2p The essay is completely relevant to topic, describing persons/places/events and objects, ascribing the whole description to an engendering idea. There is complete logical connection of paragraphs due to a judicious use of linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. The essay is fairly completed with the descriptions of persons/places/events and objects, being ascribed to an engendering idea. The essay is partially completed with slight logical impediments in the logical development of the descriptions around an engendering idea. The essay is faulty, including serious logical impediments in the sequencing of events. The essay is wholly inadequate the quality of the descriptions failing the requirements of the task. There is a fairly completion of paragraph organization due to scarce misuse of linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. There is partial completion of the task. Paragraphs are partially complete due to unfinished ideas and scarce use of linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. Paragraphs are incomplete, both linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements having been disrespected. VOCABULARY A wide range of vocabulary is used appropriately and accurately throughout the essay; precise meaning is conveyed; minor errors are rare; spelling is very well controlled. The register of the descriptive essay is totally relevant to the task, being organically integrated all along the discourse. A range of vocabulary is used appropriately and accurately in the essay ; occasional errors in word choice/formation are possible; spelling is well controlled with occasional slips. The register of the descriptive essay is relevant to the task with slightly incongruent lapses within the discourse. The range of vocabulary is adequately used in the essay; errors in word choice / Formation are present when more sophisticated items of vocabulary are attempted; spelling can be faulty at times. The register of the descriptive essay is partially relevant to the task with a narrow inconsistency of style, leading to halts in the logical development of ideas STRUCTURES A wide range of grammatical structures is used accurately and flexibly throughout the essay; minor errors are rare; punctuation is very A range of grammatical structures is used accurately and with some flexibility along the essay; occasional errors are possible; punctuation is A mix of complex and simple grammatical structures is present throughout the essay; errors are present when complex language is attempted; punctuation can be faulty at times. There is serious inconsistency in the organization of the paragraphs due to the misuse of the linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. A limited range of vocabulary is present within the essay; less common items of vocabulary are rare and may be often faulty; spelling errors can make text understanding difficult. The register of the narrative is inconsistent due to the mixture of styles. A limited range of grammatical structures is present along the essay; complex language is rare and may be CONTENT ORGANIZATION AND COHESION 6p Weak A very narrow range of vocabulary is present; errors in word choice/formation predominate; spelling errors can make the essay obscure at times. The register used in the descriptive essay is inappropriate for the type of functional writing. A very narrow range of grammatical structures is present within the essay; errors predominate; punctuation errors make Points EFFECT ON TARGET READER well controlled. well controlled with occasional slips. The interest of the reader is aroused and sustained throughout The text has a good effect on the reader. The effect on the reader is satisfactory. often faulty; punctuation errors can make text understanding difficult. The effect on the reader nonrelevant. the text obscure at times. The text has a negative effect on the reader. MINISTERUL EDUCATIEI CERCETARII SI TINERETULUI OLIMPIADA NATIONALA DE LIMBA ENGLEZA MARKING SCHEME FOR THE ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY 11th Grade Analytical criteria Exemplary Proficient 10p The essay is completely relevant to topic, all arguments are wellrounded and wellgrounded, developing the thesis of the introduction and leading to an openending. There is complete logical connection of paragraphs due to a judicious use of linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. 8p The essay is fairly completed,the thesis in the introduction being further developed with arguments and relevant ideas. 6p The essay is partially relevant to topic, there is no thesis formulated in the first paragraph, which leads to inconsistencies in the logical development of arguments. 4p The essay is faulty, including serious logical impediments in the sequencing of events. 2p The essay is wholly inadequate, there is no thesis in the first paragraph, while the arguments lack logical development. There is a fairly completion of paragraph organization due to scarce misuse of linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. VOCABULARY A wide range of vocabulary is used appropriately and accurately throughout the essay; precise meaning is conveyed; minor errors are rare; spelling is very well controlled. The register of the argumentative essay is totally relevant to the task, being organically integrated all along the discourse. A range of vocabulary is used appropriately and accurately in the essay ; occasional errors in word choice/formation are possible; spelling is well controlled with occasional slips. The register of the argumentative essay is relevant to the task with slightly incongruent lapses within the discourse There is serious inconsistency in the organization of the paragraphs due to the misuse of the linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. A limited range of vocabulary is present within the essay; less common items of vocabulary are rare and may be often faulty; spelling errors can make text understanding difficult. The register of the narrative is inconsistent due to the mixture of styles. Paragraphs are incomplete, both linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements having been disrespected. A very narrow range of vocabulary is present; errors in word choice/formation predominate; spelling errors can make the essay obscure at times. The register used in the argumentative essay is inappropriate for the type of functional writing. STRUCTURES A wide range of grammatical structures is used accurately and flexibly throughout the essay; minor errors are rare; punctuation is very well controlled. The interest of the reader is aroused and sustained throughout. A range of grammatical structures is used accurately and with some flexibility along the essay; occasional errors are possible; punctuation is well controlled with occasional slips. There is partial completion of the task. Paragraphs are partially complete due to unfinished ideas and scarce use of linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. The range of vocabulary is adequately used in the essay; errors in word choice / formation are present when more sophisticated items of vocabulary are attempted; spelling can be faulty at times. The register of the argumentative essay is partially relevant to the task with a narrow inconsistency of style, leading to halts in the logical development of ideas A mix of complex and simple grammatical structures is present throughout the essay; errors are present when complex language is attempted; punctuation can be faulty at times. The effect on the reader is satisfactory. A limited range of grammatical structures is present along the essay; complex language is rare and may be often faulty; punctuation errors can make text understanding difficult. The effect on the reader nonrelevant. A very narrow range of grammatical structures is present within the essay; errors predominate; punctuation errors make the text obscure at times. The text has a negative effect on the reader. CONTENT ORGANIZATION AND COHESION EFFECT ON TARGET READER The text has a good effect on the reader. Partially Proficient Weak Incomplete Points MINISTERUL EDUCATIEI CERCETARII SI TINERETULUI OLIMPIADA NATIONALA DE LIMBA ENGLEZA MARKING SCHEME FOR THE REFLECTIVE ESSAY 12th Grade Analytical criteria Exemplary Proficient Partially Proficient 10p The essay is completely relevant to topic, the introduction being an essay in miniature, whilst the contents offer a triadic perspective on the subject and leads to an open-ending. 8p The essay is fairly completed, the thesis of the first paragraph organizes the topic which is further developed through three perspectives that become rather relevant to the end. 6p The essay is partially relevant to topic, there is no thesis formulated in the first paragraph, which leads to inconsistencies in the logical development of the triadic approach. 4p The essay is faulty, including serious logical impediments in the sequencing of events. ORGANIZATION AND COHESION There is complete logical connection of paragraphs due to a judicious use of linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. There is a fairly completion of paragraph organization due to scarce misuse of linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. There is partial completion of the task. Paragraphs are partially complete due to unfinished ideas and scarce use of linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. VOCABULARY A wide range of vocabulary is used appropriately and accurately throughout the essay; precise meaning is conveyed; minor errors are rare; spelling is very well controlled. The register of the reflective essay is totally relevant to the task, being organically integrated all along the discourse. A range of vocabulary is used appropriately and accurately in the essay ; occasional errors in word choice/formation are possible; spelling is well controlled with occasional slips. The register of the reflective essay is relevant to the task with slightly incongruent lapses within the discourse The range of vocabulary is adequately used in the essay; errors in word choice / formation are present when more sophisticated items of vocabulary are attempted; spelling can be faulty at times The register of the reflective essay is partially relevant to the task with a narrow inconsistency of style, leading to halts in the logical development of ideas. There is serious inconsistency in the organization of the paragraphs due to the misuse of the linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. A limited range of vocabulary is present within the essay; less common items of vocabulary are rare and may be often faulty; spelling errors can make text understanding difficult. The register of the narrative is inconsistent due to the mixture of styles STRUCTURES A wide range of grammatical structures is used accurately and flexibly throughout the A range of grammatical structures is used accurately and with some flexibility A mix of complex and simple grammatical structures is present throughout the essay; A limited range of grammatical structures is present CONTENT Weak Incomplete 2p The essay is wholly inadequate, there is no thesis in the first paragraph, while the perspectives offered lack logical development. Paragraphs are incomplete, both linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements having been disrespected. A very narrow range of vocabulary is present; errors in word choice/formation predominate; spelling errors can make the essay obscure at times. The register used in the reflective essay is inappropriate for the type of functional writing. A very narrow range of grammatical Points EFFECT ON TARGET READER essay; minor errors are rare; punctuation is very well controlled. along the essay; occasional errors are possible; punctuation is well controlled with occasional slips. errors are present when complex language is attempted; punctuation can be faulty at times. The interest of the reader is aroused and sustained throughout. The text has a good effect on the reader. The effect on the reader is satisfactory. along the essay; complex language is rare and may be often faulty; punctuation errors can make text understanding difficult. The effect on the reader non-relevant. structures is present within the essay; errors predominate; punctuation errors make the text obscure at times. The text has a negative effect on the reader. MARKING SCHEME - STORY 7th / 8th Grade Analytical criteria Excellent Good 10p The story is completely relevant to topic, describing places/events/characters/atmosphere/reach ing climax, including the final reactions of the protagonist. 8p The story is fairly completed with all the sequencing elements of a narrative. ORGANIZATION AND COHESION There is complete logical connection of paragraphs due to a judicious use of linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. There is a fairly completion of paragraph organization due to scarce misuse of linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. VOCABULARY A wide range of vocabulary is used appropriately and accurately throughout the story; precise meaning is conveyed; minor errors are rare; spelling is very well controlled. The register of the narrative story is totally relevant to the task, being organically integrated all along the discourse A range of vocabulary is used appropriately and accurately in the story ; occasional errors in word choice/formation are possible; spelling is well controlled with occasional slips. The register of the narrative story is relevant to the task with slightly incongruent lapses within the discourse STRUCTURES A wide range of grammatical structures is used accurately and flexibly throughout the story; minor errors are rare; punctuation is very well controlled. A range of grammatical structures is used accurately and with some flexibility along the story; occasional errors are CONTENT Adequate Weak Inadequate 6p The story is partially completed with slight logical impediments in sequencing the moments of the narrative. There is partial completion of the task. Paragraphs are partially complete due to unfinished ideas and scarce use of linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. The range of vocabulary is adequately used in the story; errors in word choice / formation are present when more sophisticated items of vocabulary are attempted; spelling can be faulty at times. The register of the narrative story is partially relevant to the task with a narrow inconsistency of style, leading to halts in the logical development of ideas. A mix of complex and simple grammatical structures is present throughout the story; errors are present when complex language is 4p The story is faulty, including serious logical impediments in the sequencing of events. 2p The story is incomplete, the sequencing of the narrative moments being inconsistent. There is serious inconsistency in the organization of the paragraphs due to the misuse of the linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements . Paragraphs are incomplete, both linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements having been disrespected. A limited range of vocabulary is present within the story; less common items of vocabulary are rare and may be often faulty; spelling errors can make text understanding difficult. The register of the narrative is inconsistent due to the mixture of style A very narrow range of vocabulary is present; errors in word choice/formation predominate; spelling errors can make the story obscure at times. The register used in the narrative story is inappropriate for the type of functional writing. A limited range of grammatical structures is present along the story; complex language is rare and may be often faulty; punctuation A very narrow range of grammatical structures is present within the story; errors predominate; punctuation errors make the text obscure at Points EFFECT ON TARGET READER The interest of the reader is aroused and sustained throughout. MINISTERUL EDUCATIEI CERCETARII SI TINERETULUI possible; punctuation is well controlled with occasional slips. The text has a good effect on the reader attempted; punctuation can be faulty at times. errors can make text understanding difficult. times. The effect on the reader is satisfactory The effect on the reader non-relevant The effect on the reader non-relevant. OLIMPIADA NATIONALA DE LIMBA ENGLEZA MARKING SCHEME FOR THE DESCRIPTIVE STORY 10th Grade Analytical criteria Exemplary Proficient Partially Proficient Incomplete 10p 8p 4p 2p The story is completely relevant to topic, describing persons/places/events and objects, ascribing the whole description to an engendering idea. There is complete logical connection of paragraphs due to a judicious use of linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. The story is fairly completed with the descriptions of persons/places/events and objects, being ascribed to an engendering idea. The story is partially completed with slight logical impediments in the logical development of the descriptions around an engendering idea. The story is faulty, including serious logical impediments in the sequencing of events. The story is wholly inadequate the quality of the descriptions failing the requirements of the task. There is a fairly completion of paragraph organization due to scarce misuse of linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. There is partial completion of the task. Paragraphs are partially complete due to unfinished ideas and scarce use of linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. Paragraphs are incomplete, both linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements having been disrespected. VOCABULARY A wide range of vocabulary is used appropriately and accurately throughout the story; precise meaning is conveyed; minor errors are rare; spelling is very well controlled. The register of the descriptive story is totally relevant to the task, being organically integrated all along the discourse. A range of vocabulary is used appropriately and accurately in the story ; occasional errors in word choice/formation are possible; spelling is well controlled with occasional slips. The register of the descriptive story is relevant to the task with slightly incongruent lapses within the discourse. The range of vocabulary is adequately used in the story; errors in word choice / Formation are present when more sophisticated items of vocabulary are attempted; spelling can be faulty at times. The register of the descriptive story is partially relevant to the task with a narrow inconsistency of style, leading to halts in the logical development of ideas STRUCTURES A wide range of grammatical structures is used accurately and flexibly throughout the story; minor errors are rare; punctuation is very well controlled. A range of grammatical structures is used accurately and with some flexibility along the story; occasional errors are possible; punctuation is well controlled with occasional slips. A mix of complex and simple grammatical structures is present throughout the story; errors are present when complex language is attempted; punctuation can be faulty at times. There is serious inconsistency in the organization of the paragraphs due to the misuse of the linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. A limited range of vocabulary is present within the story; less common items of vocabulary are rare and may be often faulty; spelling errors can make text understanding difficult. The register of the narrative is inconsistent due to the mixture of styles. A limited range of grammatical structures is present along the story; complex language is rare and may be often faulty; punctuation errors CONTENT ORGANIZATION AND COHESION 6p Weak A very narrow range of vocabulary is present; errors in word choice/formation predominate; spelling errors can make the story obscure at times. The register used in the descriptive story is inappropriate for the type of functional writing. A very narrow range of grammatical structures is present within the story; errors predominate; punctuation errors make the text obscure at times. Points EFFECT ON TARGET READER The interest of the reader is aroused and sustained throughout The text has a good effect on the reader. The effect on the reader is satisfactory. can make text understanding difficult. The effect on the reader nonrelevant. The text has a negative effect on the reader. MINISTERUL EDUCATIEI CERCETARII SI TINERETULUI OLIMPIADA NATIONALA DE LIMBA ENGLEZA MARKING SCHEME FOR THE ARGUMENTATIVE STORY 11th Grade Analytical criteria Exemplary Proficient Partially Proficient Weak Incomplete 10p The story is completely relevant to topic, all arguments are wellrounded and wellgrounded, developing the thesis of the introduction and leading to an openending. There is complete logical connection of paragraphs due to a judicious use of linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. 8p The story is fairly completed,the thesis in the introduction being further developed with arguments and relevant ideas. 6p The story is partially relevant to topic, there is no thesis formulated in the first paragraph, which leads to inconsistencies in the logical development of arguments. 4p The story is faulty, including serious logical impediments in the sequencing of events. 2p The story is wholly inadequate, there is no thesis in the first paragraph, while the arguments lack logical development. There is a fairly completion of paragraph organization due to scarce misuse of linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. VOCABULARY A wide range of vocabulary is used appropriately and accurately throughout the story; precise meaning is conveyed; minor errors are rare; spelling is very well controlled. The register of the argumentative story is totally relevant to the task, being organically integrated all along the discourse. A range of vocabulary is used appropriately and accurately in the story ; occasional errors in word choice/formation are possible; spelling is well controlled with occasional slips. The register of the argumentative story is relevant to the task with slightly incongruent lapses within the discourse There is serious inconsistency in the organization of the paragraphs due to the misuse of the linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. A limited range of vocabulary is present within the story; less common items of vocabulary are rare and may be often faulty; spelling errors can make text understanding difficult. The register of the narrative is inconsistent due to the mixture of styles. Paragraphs are incomplete, both linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements having been disrespected. A very narrow range of vocabulary is present; errors in word choice/formation predominate; spelling errors can make the story obscure at times. The register used in the argumentative story is inappropriate for the type of functional writing. STRUCTURES A wide range of grammatical structures is used accurately and flexibly throughout the story; minor errors are rare; punctuation is very well controlled. The interest of the reader is aroused and sustained throughout. A range of grammatical structures is used accurately and with some flexibility along the story; occasional errors are possible; punctuation is well controlled with occasional slips. There is partial completion of the task. Paragraphs are partially complete due to unfinished ideas and scarce use of linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. The range of vocabulary is adequately used in the story; errors in word choice / formation are present when more sophisticated items of vocabulary are attempted; spelling can be faulty at times. The register of the argumentative story is partially relevant to the task with a narrow inconsistency of style, leading to halts in the logical development of ideas A mix of complex and simple grammatical structures is present throughout the story; errors are present when complex language is attempted; punctuation can be faulty at times. The effect on the reader is satisfactory. A limited range of grammatical structures is present along the story; complex language is rare and may be often faulty; punctuation errors can make text understanding difficult. The effect on the reader nonrelevant. A very narrow range of grammatical structures is present within the story; errors predominate; punctuation errors make the text obscure at times. The text has a negative effect on the reader. CONTENT ORGANIZATION AND COHESION EFFECT ON TARGET READER The text has a good effect on the reader. Points MINISTERUL EDUCATIEI CERCETARII SI TINERETULUI OLIMPIADA NATIONALA DE LIMBA ENGLEZA MARKING SCHEME FOR THE REFLECTIVE STORY 12th Grade Analytical criteria Exemplary Proficient Partially Proficient 10p The story is completely relevant to topic, the introduction being an story in miniature, whilst the contents offer a triadic perspective on the subject and leads to an open-ending. 8p The story is fairly completed, the thesis of the first paragraph organizes the topic which is further developed through three perspectives that become rather relevant to the end. 6p The story is partially relevant to topic, there is no thesis formulated in the first paragraph, which leads to inconsistencies in the logical development of the triadic approach. 4p The story is faulty, including serious logical impediments in the sequencing of events. ORGANIZATION AND COHESION There is complete logical connection of paragraphs due to a judicious use of linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. There is a fairly completion of paragraph organization due to scarce misuse of linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. There is partial completion of the task. Paragraphs are partially complete due to unfinished ideas and scarce use of linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. VOCABULARY A wide range of vocabulary is used appropriately and accurately throughout the story; precise meaning is conveyed; minor errors are rare; spelling is very well controlled. The register of the reflective story is totally relevant to the task, being organically integrated all along the discourse. A range of vocabulary is used appropriately and accurately in the story ; occasional errors in word choice/formation are possible; spelling is well controlled with occasional slips. The register of the reflective story is relevant to the task with slightly incongruent lapses within the discourse The range of vocabulary is adequately used in the story; errors in word choice / formation are present when more sophisticated items of vocabulary are attempted; spelling can be faulty at times The register of the reflective story is partially relevant to the task with a narrow inconsistency of style, leading to halts in the logical development of ideas. There is serious inconsistency in the organization of the paragraphs due to the misuse of the linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. A limited range of vocabulary is present within the story; less common items of vocabulary are rare and may be often faulty; spelling errors can make text understanding difficult. The register of the narrative is inconsistent due to the mixture of styles STRUCTURES A wide range of grammatical structures is used accurately and flexibly throughout the A range of grammatical structures is used accurately and with some flexibility A mix of complex and simple grammatical structures is present throughout the story; A limited range of grammatical structures is present CONTENT Weak Incomplete 2p The story is wholly inadequate, there is no thesis in the first paragraph, while the perspectives offered lack logical development. Paragraphs are incomplete, both linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements having been disrespected. A very narrow range of vocabulary is present; errors in word choice/formation predominate; spelling errors can make the story obscure at times. The register used in the reflective story is inappropriate for the type of functional writing. A very narrow range of grammatical Points EFFECT ON TARGET READER story; minor errors are rare; punctuation is very well controlled. along the story; occasional errors are possible; punctuation is well controlled with occasional slips. errors are present when complex language is attempted; punctuation can be faulty at times. The interest of the reader is aroused and sustained throughout. The text has a good effect on the reader. The effect on the reader is satisfactory. along the story; complex language is rare and may be often faulty; punctuation errors can make text understanding difficult. The effect on the reader non-relevant. structures is present within the story; errors predominate; punctuation errors make the text obscure at times. The text has a negative effect on the reader. MINISTERUL EDUCATIEI CERCETARII SI TINERETULUI OLIMPIADA NATIONALA DE LIMBA ENGLEZA MARKING SCHEME - ARTICLE Analytical criteria Task achievement Excellent 10p The content of the article is completely relevant to the task, fully responding to its requirements; the format of the article is fully observed; an introduction/ a conclusion is present; the register is appropriate throughout. Good 9p 8p The article covers the requirements of the task but the key ideas could be better substantiated; the format of the article is observed; an introduction/ a conclusion is present but not fully linked to the topic; the register is appropriate, although minor inconsistencies are possible ORGANIZATION AND COHESION There is a logical progression throughout; the paragraphs are well built, well extended, the topic sentence is clear; a wide range of cohesive devices is used effectively. There is a logical progression although minor inconsistencies are possible; the paragraphs are well built but could be more extended or balanced;; a range of cohesive devices is used effectively. VOCABULARY A wide range of vocabulary is used appropriately and accurately; precise meaning is conveyed; minor errors are rare; spelling is very well controlled. A range of vocabulary is used appropriately and accurately; occasional errors in word choice/ formation are possible; spelling is well controlled with occasional slips. Adequate 7p 6p The article addresses the requirements of the task but not all key ideas are relevant; the format may be faulty at times (e.g. the introduction or the conclusion may be missing/ unclear); there are inconsistencies in register The text is generally coherent but the internal organization of some paragraphs may be faulty; the topic sentence is not always clear or may be missing; cohesive devices are present but sometimes they are not accurate. The range of vocabulary is adequate; errors in word choice/ formation are present when more sophisticated items of vocabulary are attempted; Weak 5p 4p The article does not cover the requirements of the task; the format is faulty (e.g.the introduction and the conclusion are missing or totally irrelevant; many irrelevant details are included; there are major inconsistencies in register Inadequate 3p 2p The article does not relate to the task There is serious inconsistency in the organization of the text; the sequencing of ideas can be followed with difficulty; paragraphing may be missing; cohesive devices are limited or most of them are faulty. The text is not logically organized and does not convey a message; no control of cohesive devices. A limited range of vocabulary is present; less common items of vocabulary are rare and may be often faulty; spelling errors can make text understanding difficult. A very narrow range of vocabulary is present; errors in word choice/formation predominate; spelling errors make the text obscure at times. 1p Task not attempted 0p spelling can be faulty at times. STRUCTURES A wide range of grammatical structures is used accurately and flexibly; minor errors are rare; punctuation is very well controlled. A range of grammatical structures is used accurately and with some flexibility; occasional errors are possible; punctuation is well controlled with occasional slips. EFFECT ON TARGET READER The interest of the reader is aroused and sustained throughout. The text has a good effect on the reader. A mix of complex and simple grammatical structures is present; errors are present when complex language is attempted; punctuation can be faulty at times. The effect on the reader is satisfactory. A limited range of grammatical structures is present; complex language is rare and may be often faulty; punctuation errors can make text understanding difficult. The text has not a relevant effect on the reader. A very narrow range of grammatical structures is present; errors predominate; punctuation errors make the text obscure at times. The text has a negative effect on the reader. MINISTERUL EDUCATIEI CERCETARII SI TINERETULUI OLIMPIADA NATIONALA DE LIMBA ENGLEZA MARKING SCHEME - FORMAL/ INFORMAL LETTER Analytical criteria Task achievement Excellent 10p The letter is completely relevant to the task, fully developing all content points; the format of the letter is fully observed; the purpose of the letter is clearly and fully explained; the register is appropriate throughout. ORGANIZATION AND COHESION There is a logical progression throughout; the paragraphs are well built, well extended, the topic sentence is clear; a wide range of cohesive devices is used effectively. VOCABULARY A wide range of vocabulary is used appropriately and accurately; precise meaning is conveyed; minor errors are rare; spelling is very well controlled. Good 9p 8p The letter covers the requirements of the task but the content points could be more fully extended; the format of the letter is observed; the purpose of the letter is presented; the register is appropriate , although minor inconsistencies are possible. There is a logical progression although minor inconsistencies are possible; the paragraphs are well built but could be more extended; a range of cohesive devices is used effectively. A range of vocabulary is used appropriately and accurately; occasional errors in word choice/ formation are possible; spelling is well controlled with occasional slips. Adequate 7p 6p The letter addresses the requirements of the task but not all content points are included; the format may be faulty at times; the purpose of the letter is presented but it is not very clear; there are inconsistencies in register. The text is generally coherent but the internal organization of some paragraphs may be faulty; the topic sentence is not always clear or may be missing; cohesive devices are used but sometimes they are not accurate. The range of vocabulary is adequate; errors in word choice/ formation are present when more sophisticated items of vocabulary are attempted; spelling can be faulty at times. Weak 5p 4p The letter does not cover the requirements of the task; bullet points are attempted but many irrelevant details are included; the format is faulty; the purpose for writing is missing; there are major inconsistencies in register. Inadequate 3p 2p The letter does not relate to the task. There is serious inconsistency in the organization of the text; the sequencing of ideas can be followed with difficulty; paragraphing may be missing; cohesive devices are limited or most of them are faulty. The text is not logically organized and does not convey a message; No control of cohesive devices. A limited range of vocabulary is present; less common items of vocabulary are rare and may be often faulty; spelling errors can make text understanding difficult. A very narrow range of vocabulary is present; errors in word choice/formation predominate; spelling errors make the text obscure at times. 1p Task not attempted 0p STRUCTURES EFFECT ON TARGET READER A wide range of grammatical structures is used accurately and flexibly; minor errors are rare; punctuation is very well controlled. A range of grammatical structures is used accurately and with some flexibility; occasional errors are possible; punctuation is well controlled with occasional slips. The interest of the reader is aroused and sustained throughout. The text has a good effect on the reader. A mix of complex and simple grammatical structures is present; errors are present when complex language is attempted; punctuation can be faulty at times. The effect on the reader is satisfactory. A limited range of grammatical structures is present; complex language is rare and may be often faulty; punctuation errors can make text understanding difficult. The text has not a relevant effect on the reader. A very narrow range of grammatical structures is present; errors predominate; punctuation errors make the text obscure at times. The text has a negative effect on the reader. MINISTERUL EDUCATIEI CERCETARII SI TINERETULUI OLIMPIADA NATIONALA DE LIMBA ENGLEZA MARKING SCHEME - REPORT/PROPOSAL Analytical criteria Task achievement ORGANIZATION AND COHESION Excellent 10p The report/proposal is completely relevant to the task, fully developing all content points; the format of the report/ proposal is fully observed; the purpose of the report/proposal is clearly and fully explained, the information is appropriately categorized, a relevant conclusion is drawn; the register is appropriate throughout. There is a logical progression throughout; the paragraphs are well built, well extended, the topic sentence is clear; a wide range of cohesive devices is used effectively. Good 9p 8p The report/proposal covers the requirements of the task but the content points could be more fully extended; The format of the report/ proposal is observed; the purpose of the report/ proposal is presented; the information is appropriately categorized in spite of minor inaccuracies; the conclusion drawn could be better substantiated; the register is appropriate, although minor inconsistencies are possible. There is a logical progression although minor inconsistencies are possible; the paragraphs are well built but could be more extended or balanced; a range of cohesive devices is used effectively. Adequate 7p 6p The report/ proposal addresses the requirements of the task but not all content points are included; the format may be faulty at times; the purpose of the report/ proposal is presented but it is not very clear; there are lapses in the categorization of the information; the conclusion is not logically linked to the content; there are inconsistencies in register. The text is generally coherent but the internal organization of some paragraphs may be faulty; the topic sentence is not always clear or may be missing; cohesive devices are present but sometimes they are not accurate. Weak 5p 4p The report/ proposal does not cover the requirements of the task; the content points are attempted but many irrelevant details are included, the format is faulty; the purpose for writing/ the conclusion is missing or the information is inappropriately categorized; there are major inconsistencies in register There is serious inconsistency in the organization of the text; the sequencing of ideas can be followed with difficulty; paragraphing may be missing; cohesive devices are limited or most of them are faulty. Inadequate 3p 2p The report/ proposal does not relate to the task The text is not logically organized and does not convey a message; no control of cohesive devices. 1p Task not attempted 0p VOCABULARY A wide range of vocabulary is used appropriately and accurately; precise meaning is conveyed; minor errors are rare; spelling is very well controlled. A range of vocabulary is used appropriately and accurately; occasional errors in word choice/ formation are possible; spelling is well controlled with occasional slips. STRUCTURES A wide range of grammatical structures is used accurately and flexibly; minor errors are rare; punctuation is very well controlled. EFFECT ON TARGET READER The interest of the reader is aroused and sustained throughout. A range of grammatical structures is used accurately and with some flexibility; occasional errors are possible; punctuation is well controlled with occasional slips. The text has a good effect on the reader. The range of vocabulary is adequate; errors in word choice/ formation are present when more sophisticated items of vocabulary are attempted; spelling can be faulty at times. A mix of complex and simple grammatical structures is present; errors are present when complex language is attempted; punctuation can be faulty at times. The effect on the reader is satisfactory. A limited range of vocabulary is present; less common items of vocabulary are rare and may be often faulty; spelling errors can make text understanding difficult. A very narrow range of vocabulary is present; errors in word choice/formation predominate; spelling errors make the text obscure at times. A limited range of grammatical structures is present; complex language is rare and may be often faulty; punctuation errors can make text understanding difficult. The text has not a relevant effect on the reader. A very narrow range of grammatical structures is present; errors predominate; punctuation errors make the text obscure at times. The text has a negative effect on the reader. MINISTERUL EDUCATIEI CERCETARII SI TINERETULUI OLIMPIADA NATIONALA DE LIMBA ENGLEZA MARKING SCHEME FOR THE NARRATIVE-DESCRIPTIVE ESSAY 10th Grade/ Section B Analytical criteria Exemplary Proficient Partially Proficient Weak Incomplete 10p 8p 6p 4p 2p The essay is completely relevant to topic, describing people/places/events/atmosphere, having a clear development and including the final reactions of the protagonist There is complete logical connection of paragraphs due to a judicious use of linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. A wide range of vocabulary is used appropriately and accurately throughout the essay; precise meaning is conveyed; minor errors are rare; spelling is very well controlled. The register of the descriptive essay is totally relevant to the task, being organically integrated all along the discourse. The essay is fairly completed with the description of people/places/events/atmosphere, having a clear development The essay is partially completed with slight logical impediments in the logical development of the description. The essay is faulty, including serious logical impediments in the sequencing of events. The essay is wholly inadequate the quality of the descriptions failing the requirements of the task. There is a fairly completion of paragraph organization due to scarce misuse of linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. A range of vocabulary is used appropriately and accurately in the essay ; occasional errors in word choice/formation are possible; spelling is well controlled with occasional slips. The register of the descriptive essay is relevant to the task with slightly incongruent lapses within the discourse. There is serious inconsistency in the organization of the paragraphs due to the misuse of the linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. A limited range of vocabulary is present within the essay; less common items of vocabulary are rare and may be often faulty; spelling errors can make text understanding difficult. The register of the narrative is inconsistent due to the mixture of styles. Paragraphs are incomplete, both linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements having been disrespected. A very narrow range of vocabulary is present; errors in word choice/formation predominate; spelling errors can make the essay obscure at times. The register used in the descriptive essay is inappropriate for the type of functional writing. STRUCTURES A wide range of grammatical structures is used accurately and flexibly throughout the essay; minor errors are rare; punctuation is very well controlled. EFFECT ON TARGET READER The interest of the reader is aroused and sustained throughout A range of grammatical structures is used accurately and with some flexibility along the essay; occasional errors are possible; punctuation is well controlled with occasional slips. The text has a good effect on the reader. There is partial completion of the task. Paragraphs are partially complete due to unfinished ideas and scarce use of linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. The range of vocabulary is adequately used in the essay; errors in word choice / Formation are present when more sophisticated items of vocabulary are attempted; spelling can be faulty at times. The register of the descriptive essay is partially relevant to the task with a narrow inconsistency of style, leading to halts in the logical development of ideas A mix of complex and simple grammatical structures is present throughout the essay; errors are present when complex language is attempted; punctuation can be faulty at times. The effect on the reader is satisfactory. A limited range of grammatical structures is present along the essay; complex language is rare and may be often faulty; punctuation errors can make text understanding difficult. The effect on the reader nonrelevant. A very narrow range of grammatical structures is present within the essay; errors predominate; punctuation errors make the text obscure at times. The text has a negative effect on the reader. CONTENT ORGANIZATION AND COHESION VOCABULARY OLIMPIADA NATIONALA DE LIMBA ENGLEZA MARKING SCHEME FOR THE ‘SOLUTIONS TO PROBLEMS’ ESSAY (SECTION B) 11th / 12th Grade Analytical criteria Exemplary Proficient Partially Proficient 10p The essay is completely relevant to topic, all arguments are wellsupported, clearly developing the thesis in the introduction; the solutions are relevant and feasible. 8p The essay is fairly completed, the thesis in the introduction being further developed with arguments and reasonably relevant ideas; the solutions are relevant, but their effectiveness is not clearly highlighted. ORGANIZATION AND COHESION There is complete logical connection of paragraphs due to a judicious use of linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. There is a fairly completion of paragraph organization due to scarce misuse of linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. 6p The essay is partially relevant to topic, there is no clear thesis formulated in the first paragraph, which leads to inconsistencies in the logical development of arguments; the solutions provided are partly or hardly relevant and rather unrealistic There is partial completion of the task. Paragraphs are partially complete due to unfinished ideas and scarce use of linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. VOCABULARY A wide range of vocabulary is used appropriately and accurately throughout the essay; precise meaning is conveyed; minor errors are rare; spelling is very well controlled. The register of the argumentative essay is totally relevant to the task, being organically integrated all along the discourse. A range of vocabulary is used appropriately and accurately in the essay ; occasional errors in word choice/formation are possible; spelling is well controlled with occasional slips. The register of the argumentative essay is relevant to the task with slightly incongruent lapses within the discourse STRUCTURES A wide range of grammatical structures is used accurately and flexibly throughout the essay; minor errors are rare; punctuation is very well controlled. A range of grammatical structures is used accurately and with some flexibility along the essay; occasional errors are possible; punctuation is well controlled with occasional slips. EFFECT ON TARGET READER The interest of the reader is aroused and sustained throughout. The text has a good effect on the reader. CONTENT The range of vocabulary is adequately used in the essay; errors in word choice /formation are present when more sophisticated items of vocabulary are attempted; spelling can be faulty at times. The register is partially relevant to the task with a narrow inconsistency of style, leading to halts in the logical development of ideas A mix of complex and simple grammatical structures is present throughout the essay; errors are present when complex language is attempted; punctuation can be faulty at times. The effect on the reader is satisfactory. Weak Incomplete 4p The essay is faulty, including serious logical impediments in exploring the problem; the solutions are irrelevant and confusing, with little or no supporting explanation. 2p The essay is wholly inadequate, there is no thesis in the first paragraph, while the arguments lack logical development; there are no solutions. There is serious inconsistency in the organization of the paragraphs due to the misuse of the linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements. A limited range of vocabulary is present within the essay; less common items of vocabulary are rare and may be often faulty; spelling errors can make text understanding difficult. The register of the narrative is inconsistent due to the mixture of styles. Paragraphs are incomplete, both linking devices, mechanics, and length requirements having been disrespected. A limited range of grammatical structures is present along the essay; complex language is rare and may be often faulty; punctuation errors can make text understanding difficult. The effect on the reader non-relevant. A very narrow range of grammatical structures is present within the essay; errors predominate; punctuation errors make the text obscure at times. A very narrow range of vocabulary is present; errors in word choice/formation predominate; spelling errors can make the essay obscure at times. The register used in the argumentative essay is inappropriate for the type of functional writing. The text has a negative effect on the reader.
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