Grade 9 English 1 Curriculum - South Orange

School District of South Orange-Maplewood
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 9
The School District of
South Orange-Maplewood
August 2010
THE SCHOOL DISTRICT OF SOUTH ORANGE-MAPLEWOOD
BOARD OF EDUCATION MEMBERS
MARK GLEASON, PRESIDENT
ELIZABETH DAUGHERTY, FIRST VICE-PRESIDENT
SANDRA KARRIEM, SECOND VICE-PRESIDENT
LYNNE CRAWFORD, MEMBER
WAYNE EASTMAN, MEMBER
DAVID R. GILES, MEMBER
RICHARD LAINE, MEMBER
JENNIFER PAYNE-PARRISH, MEMBER
ANDREA WREN-HARDIN, MEMBER
ADMINISTRATION
BRIAN OSBORNE, SUPERINTENDENT
ROSETTA WILSON, ASSISTANT SUPERINTENDENT FOR CURRICULUM
GARY PANKIEWICZ, SUPERVISOR, 6-12 ELA
Committee Credits
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 9 August, 2010
English Language Arts (Grades 6-10)
Susan Barry
Mary Brancaccio
Janet Bustrin
Melissa Butler
Solmaz Calone
Carolyn Campbell
Robert Cohen
Jennifer Dalton
Rebecca Donahue
Nicole Dufault
Danielle Elko
Josh Enyeart
Angela Forero
Sara Griffiths
Xenia Harley
Anna Herstatt
Toi Jackson
Beth Johnson
Carolyn Johnson
Vanessa Jones-Harris
Katerina Karis
Eve Kingsbury
Christine Layne
Danielle Levine
Julia Leider
Sue Logeman
Joe Lombardo
Wendy Lovas
Steve MacPherson
Janet Mandel
Lori Martling
Ryan O’Dell
Maureen O’Sullivan
Carly Orpurt
John Pascarella
Robin Patton
Elisa Pianka
John Poglinco
Eugene Pollioni
Rich Saporita
Dan Savarese
Desiree Spriggs
Ulrike Wiede
Thomas Whitaker
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Draft Philosophy:
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The South Orange Maplewood School District believes students should be engaged in literacy
development which is scaffolded from kindergarten through high school graduation. Students will learn
about the power of words through deep and enduring educational experiences that assist them in
understanding and effectively communicating both the written and spoken language. Through a rich
comprehensive curriculum, students will gain the requisite skills to be dynamic communicators with the
ability to integrate components of English Language Arts Literacy in a manner that allows them to
become powerful users, critics, and creators of information as well as integral contributors to a global
community. The South Orange Maplewood School District supports an English Language Arts curricular
program, which is inclusive of ALL learners and maximizes opportunities for each student to:
Experience a wide range of high quality literature
Appreciate literature as an art form in both fiction and nonfiction works
Achieve a high level of skill in interpreting complex materials
Learn the forms and functions of language
Experience and understand cultural and linguistic diversity
Build upon previous knowledge and intuition about language
Integrate language experiences into other disciplines
Use technology and digital literacy for expression and communication
Share their experiences and interact with adults, peers, and younger learners
Utilize a research based process approach to reading and writing
Examine the relationship between literature and composition
We believe English Language Arts Literacy is essential to the development of all children as life-long
learners. English Language Arts Literacy is a conduit for learning across all content areas that equip
students with the skills and knowledge necessary to be effective contributors and active participants of
the 21st century. English Language Arts Literacy, which integrates reading, writing, listening, and
speaking promotes critical thinking and produces effective communicators who use both printed and
digital technology literacy for expression and communication.
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English Language Arts Curriculum
Grade 9
Table of Contents
Overview of the Literature Units of Study……………………………………………………………………… 4
Units of Study and Grade Level Common Assessments…………………………………………………. 6
Grade 9 Book List………………………………………………………………………………………………………….. 7
Reading Instruction……………………………….………………………………………………………………………. 9
Vocabulary Instruction………………………………………………………………………………………………….. 13
Writing Instruction………………………………………………………………………………………………………… 15
Grade Level Common Assessments……………………………………………………………………………….. 20
Units of Study………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… 21
Self…………………..…………………..…………………………………………………………………………… 22
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Self & Family/Friends..………………………………………………………………………………………. 32
Self & Authority.……………………………………………………………………………………………….. 40
Self & Public Values………………….……………………………………………………………………….
New Jersey/National Core Curriculum Content Standards Alignment………………………….
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Rubrics…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………. 64
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Overview of Literature Units of Study
The South Orange/Maplewood Grade Nine English Language Arts Curriculum
addresses students in transition. Ninth grade students are moving to a new school building, as
well as a new social environment and new life stage. They are seeking to discover identity
through relationships with family, peers, and the larger community. The ninth grade course of
study reflects this ongoing search.
Using a novels-based approach, each of the four thematic units contains numerous formative
and authentic assessments in preparation for a summative student writing piece. In addition,
the Grade Nine ELA experience requires an independent reading project with a book-of-choice
and four grade level common assessments (scored with NJ HSPA rubrics). Each student will also
access and utilize an account on Turnitin.com.
The following expectations are consistent in every unit:
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Driving questions- Created to identify the desired results for deep understanding
around thematic inquiries, the driving questions are a critical component of the
“backward design” model for curriculum writing developed by Grant Wiggins and Jay
McTighe (2005). The driving questions are designed to identify the “big ideas” that
students will grapple with during the course of the unit. After a teacher-driven
introduction to each unit, teachers facilitate the construction of a student-driven driving
question in an effort to be responsive to student interest.
Guided by driving questions, students will explore and examine a variety of texts and
will engage in a variety of language activities. In order for students to be successful, the
exploration must take place within a structured environment, which emphasizes study
and organizational skills. Through this structured inquiry, students will expand their
understanding of themselves in relationship to an increasingly complex and diversified
environment and will learn to communicate this understanding more effectively.
6-8 formative assessments/1 published summative writing piece- In the second stage
of “backward design,” it is important to “determine acceptable evidence.” Formative
assessments drive instruction when they provide information for teachers to adjust
teaching and learning. Formative assessments should also provide effective feedback to
students. The published writing piece is used as a summative assessment or overall unit
evaluation. For example, in the “Self & Public Values” thematic unit of study, each
student will address the question: “How is an individual affected by society’s
expectations?” Ultimately, students will participate in a media center-driven research
project that compares a current social issue to a social context in a core text. The
research project will include a student-driven editorial about a social issue (using a
process approach to writing). Students will practice connections to social contexts in
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literary texts in addition to enhancing persuasive writing skills throughout the marking
period. The research project serves as a summative writing piece that is a culmination
of the entire unit’s course of study.
Various instructional tasks, activities, and experiences- Core text activities within the
thematic units are aligned to the National Common Core Standards for English
Language Arts (http://www.corestandards.org/the-standards/english-language-artsstandards). In addition, all classroom endeavors must be relevant to the driving
questions while building student capacity for a successful summative assessment. At
times, teachers afford students a choice of different reading and writing opportunities
(Many educational experts attest to the connection between student choice, student
engagement, and student success.). Teacher observation of the needs of students is
essential to informing instructional practices thereby maximizing student learning
opportunities. For example, a teacher may recognize that some groups of students
respond better to a particular prewriting activity and, as a result, use the strategy more
often.
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Teachers should include a wide variety of materials, including literary, informational,
and persuasive texts. Similarly, students should write in a variety of modes, with a
balance among literary, informational, and persuasive forms.
High school lesson work emphasizes a process approach to reading and writing to access
an ambitious content knowledge, oftentimes infusing technology- when appropriate.
The following model uses a technology-based prereading activity for students to
connect Shakespeare to their own lives while emphasizing the meaning of tragedy:
http://www.readwritethink.org/lessons/lesson_view.asp?id=1162
The grammar emphasis using Write for College textbooks is outlined in a Curriculum Alignment
with Write for College Resource Text following the thematic units. A model grammar minilesson can be found at:
http://www.readwritethink.org/lessons/lesson_view.asp?id=201
The model grammar lesson is further supported by the grammar rules, authentic
examples, exercises, and writing prompts in the Write for College text. All teachers have
a copy of the Write for College Teacher’s Edition of the Write for College text.
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8-10 English Language Arts
Units of Study & Grade Level Common Assessments
Grade 8:
Thematic Unit
Published
Writing
Piece
Grade 9:
Thematic Unit
Published
Writing
Piece
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Grade 10:
Thematic Unit
Published
Writing
Piece
Historical Fiction &
Independent Reading
Social Justice
Rebellion
Shakespearean and
Greek Tragedy
Historical Research &
Historical Fiction,
NJASK Narrative
Reading Task
Expository Essay,
NJASK Persuasive
Reading Task
Comparison/Contrast
Essay,
NJASK Explanatory
Prompt
Dramatic
Performance Piece,
NJASK Persuasive
Essay Prompt
Self
Self &
Family/Friends
Self & Authority
Self & Public Values
Memoir,
HSPA Persuasive
Essay
Analytical Essay,
HSPA Narrative
Reading Task
Media Center-Driven
Research
Presentation,
HSPA Persuasive
Reading Task
Position Paper,
HSPA Expository
Essay
Innocence to
Experience
Justice and
Revenge
Social Context and
Criticism
Dreams vs. Reality
Analytical Essay
(with an emphasis on
academic essay
structure),
HSPA Informational
Reading Prompt
Analytical Essay
(with an emphasis
on elaborate
textual support),
NJASK Persuasive
Essay
Analytical Essay
(with an emphasis on
MLA in-text citations
and works cited) ,
HSPA Narrative
Reading Task
Expository Essay,
HSPA Expository
Essay
Each grade level incorporates a book-of-choice and a research component.
NJ HSPA-style Grade Level Common Assessments are italicized. The first NJASK-style Grade
Level Common Assessment is completed in September as a diagnostic assessment. All Grade
Level Common Assessments utilize state rubrics.
The Six Traits Scoring Rubric is used as an intermediate tool for feedback on student writing in
select processed writing pieces.
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Grade 9 Book List
An eight-book minimum is a goal for all Grade 9 students. In addition to the books on this list, students
may read different books (approved by their teacher) independently and/or in literature circles.
Consistent non-fiction classroom libraries are housed in each Grade 9 classroom. Students may borrow
books at any point during the school year.
All students are required to read the following two Grade 9 books:
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A Raisin in the Sun by Lorraine Hansberry
Romeo and Juliet or Julius Caesar by William Shakespeare
Maus I by Art Spiegelman
All Quiet on the Western Front
Always Running (with parent permission)
Ask Me No Questions
Betsey Brown
Black Like Me
Bless Me, Ultima
The Chosen
Death Be Not Proud
Fahrenheit 451 by Ray Bradbury
Inherit the Wind
Jane Eyre
Killing Mr. Griffin
The Miracle Worker
Night
A Night to Remember
The Odyssey
The Old Man and the Sea
Oliver Twist
The Pearl
Rebecca
A Tale of Two Cities
And Then There Were None
NP
NP
NP
830L
830L
790L
NA
990L
840L
970L
1060L
890L
850L
1040L
720L
NP
590L
950L
NP
940L
990L
1010L
880L
990L
570L
*Lexile Reading Measure
*A Lexile reading score links a reader’s ability to a text’s difficulty level. More information on The Lexile
Framework for Reading is available at: http://www.lexile.com.
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Short Story Texts:
The Multicultural Reader
Sixteen
Living Up the Street
Reader Response
A+1
*Grade 9 Non-fiction Classroom Library Books:
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(During the school year, the following books reside in Grade 9 classroom libraries. During
the summer months, the classroom library books are loaned to the public libraries. In turn,
these multi-cultural, high-interest selections are accessible to students throughout the
year.)
 Bury My Heart at Wounded Knee by Dee Brown
 Close to Shore: a true story of terror in an age of innocence by Michael Capuzzo
 In My Hands: memories of a Holocaust rescuer by Irene Gut Opdyke
 Funny in Farsi: a memoir of growing up in America by Dumas Firoozeh
 The Jump: Sebastian Telfair and the high stakes business of high school ball by Ian
O’Connor
 Once Upon a Quinceanera: coming of age in the USA by Julia Alvarez
 Shadow Divers: the true adventure of two Americans who risked everything to solve
one of the last mysteries of World War II by Robert Kurson
 7 Habits of Highly Effective Teens by Sean Covey
*A detailed review of these classroom library books can be found on the Language Arts
Department link on the district web site:
http://www.somsd.k12.nj.us/18961012181173773/lib/18961012181173773/Summer_Reading_
Selections_best_copy.pdf
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Reading Instruction
All English Language Arts teachers have a desk copy of Daniels and Zemelman’s Subjects
Matter, a content-area reading guide that focuses on prereading and reading processing
strategies. Subjects Matter is referenced in various core text activities within the thematic
units. Prereading, processing, and postreading strategies are essential to student engagement
and reading comprehension.
In addition, effective questions that may promote active reading are available at:
http://www.pbs.org/teachers/_files/pdf/Microsoft%20Word_FormattedReadDoc.pdf.
Moreover, two professional books, Mosaic of Thought and Strategies That Work, provide a
framework for exemplary strategic reading instruction. Zimmerman, Keene, Harvey, and
Goudvis, the authors of the books (available in the school media centers), examined the
cognitive processes and strategies used commonly by proficient readers.
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Think- Aloud: One of the most important reading comprehension strategies is the “Think
Aloud.” In the “Think Aloud” (Daniels and Zemelman), the teacher models his/her reading
proficiency by reading aloud. The teacher, as the guide to proficient reading, pauses to explain
his/her reflection process to students with respect to key concepts and ideas in reading
passages. Moreover, the teacher “Think Aloud” may serve as a model for a student “Think
Aloud” in pairs or in a whole-class discussion.
Discussion (based on texts): Additionally, providing opportunities for extended discussion of
text meaning and interpretation is proven to improve adolescent literacy. A panel of experts,
chaired by Michael L. Kamil from Stanford University through the National Center for Education
Evaluation and Regional Assistance, published a practice guide for “Improving Adolescent
Literacy: Effective Classroom and Intervention Practices” (2008) to facilitate literacy education.
The practice guide is available at:
http://ies.ed.gov/ncee/wwc/pdf/practiceguides/adlit_pg_082608.pdf. “The goal of the practice
guide is to formulate specific and coherent evidence-based recommendations that educators
can use to improve literacy levels among adolescents in upper elementary, middle and high
schools” (page 1). In brief, the practice guide exhibits that adolescent students need to be
more prepared in reading.
At an October 20, 2009 Rutgers Forum sponsored by the New Jersey Department of Education,
Kamil urged educators to preview passages to formulate some framing questions and unpack
the important facts of the text. Framing questions are used to begin and/or extend relevant
discussion.
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Page 24 of the practice guide also lists the following discussion protocol:
1. Teachers ask questions that require students to explain their positions and the
reasoning behind them.
2. Teachers model reasoning processes by thinking out loud.
3. Discussion participants propose counter arguments or positions.
4. Discussion participants recognize good reasoning when it occurs.
5. Discussion participants summarize the flow and main ideas of a discussion as it draws to
a close.
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Shared Reading: Shared reading is another focus of the SOMSD curriculum. Literature circle
opportunities are specified in each thematic unit. Literature Circles: Choice and Voice in the
Student-Centered Classroom by Harvey Daniels (1994) is available in the high school media
center. Literature circles are small (4-6 students), student led, temporary discussion groups
comprised of students who have chosen to read the same story, poem, informational text, or
novel. Each group determines the portion of the text that they will read, within the constraints
of the teacher’s timeline. The teacher through mini-lessons explicitly teaches skills and
strategies, which are applied to the students’ independent reading and discussed in circle time.
During literature circle sessions, students may assume various “roles” that guide their reading
(Daniels, 1994). Students meet on a regular basis to discuss agreed-upon sections of the text,
rotating the roles among members of the group. The strategy ends with students presenting
their text to their peers in the large group setting. Traditionally, the literature circle strategy
was applied to fiction. Recently, it has been updated and used with a variety of texts, including
nonfiction. Furthermore, Daniels (2006) has recently advocated for the use of alternate ways to
incorporate the roles into literature circles, but many secondary teachers retain the use of
specified roles as a best practice.
Lastly, the English Department administers the Scholastic Reading Assessment (SRI) to assess
for a student’s Lexile Reading Level. This helps to inform instruction and determine
recommendations for independent reading at an appropriate reading level. Moreover, the SRI
assessment helps to identify struggling readers who may require the READ 180 Reading
Intervention Program offered to students in the district in Grades 7, 8, and 9.
More information on the SRI assessment is available at:
http://teacher.scholastic.com/products/fundingconnection/programs_services/pdfs/2009_PO_SRI.pdf
More information on the READ 180 Program is available at:
http://teacher.scholastic.com/products/read180/
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Learning Objectives in Reading Literature as per the National Core
Standards initiative at http://www.corestandards.org/ :
English Language Arts Standards » Reading: Literature » Grade 9 -10
http://www.corestandards.org/the-standards/english-language-arts-standards/readingliterature-6-12/grade-9-10/
The College and Career Readiness Anchor Standards and High School Grade-Specific Standards
work in tandem to define college and career readiness expectations—the former providing
broad standards, the latter providing additional specificity.
Key Ideas and Details
1. Cite strong and thorough textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly
as well as inferences drawn from the text.
2. Determine a theme or central idea of a text and analyze in detail its development over the
course of the text, including how it emerges and is shaped and refined by specific details;
provide an objective summary of the text.
3. Analyze how complex characters (e.g., those with multiple or conflicting motivations)
develop over the course of a text, interact with other characters, and advance the plot or
develop the theme.
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Craft and Str uctur e
4. Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in the text, including
figurative and connotative meanings; analyze the cumulative impact of specific word choices
on meaning and tone (e.g., how the language evokes a sense of time and place; how it sets a
formal or informal tone).
5. Analyze how an author’s choices concerning how to structure a text, order events within it
(e.g., parallel plots), and manipulate time (e.g., pacing, flashbacks) create such effects as
mystery, tension, or surprise.
6. Analyze a particular point of view or cultural experience reflected in a work of literature
from outside the United States, drawing on a wide reading of world literature.
Integrati on of Knowledge and Ideas
7. Analyze the representation of a subject or a key scene in two different artistic mediums,
including what is emphasized or absent in each treatment (e.g., Auden’s “Musée des Beaux
Arts” and Breughel’s Landscape with the Fall of Icarus).
8. (Not applicable to literature)
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9. Analyze how an author draws on and transforms source material in a specific work (e.g.,
how Shakespeare treats a theme or topic from Ovid or the Bible or how a later author draws
on a play by Shakespeare).
Range of Reading and Level of Text Compl exity
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10. By the end of grade 9, read and comprehend literature, including stories, dramas, and
poems, in the grades 9–10 text complexity band proficiently, with scaffolding as needed at
the high end of the range.
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Vocabulary Instruction
Teachers are expected to conduct explicit vocabulary instruction with core texts. To that end,
teachers must preview reading passages to select the vocabulary terms that are critical to
understanding the text. The importance of the words should also be noted. Dr. Kamil (Rutgers
Forum 2009) suggests that by scouting out “target words” and providing rationale for new or
troublesome vocabulary, teachers will provide greater access to the reading material for
students.
In addition, the Sadlier-Oxford Vocabulary Workshop (the new edition with an online audio
program) is utilized in Grade 9 (Level D) and Grade 10 (Level E) to improve student vocabularies
and skills while preparing students for the vocabulary facets of standardized tests.
The following is a summary of the “Introduction” provided in the Teacher’s Edition of the
Sadlier-Oxford Vocabulary Workshop text:
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Key Elements:
300 leveled words, plus hundreds of synonyms, antonyms, and other related words
Research-based “five-step approach to instruction” with regard to word meaning and
usage
Preparation for the SAT and ACT: frequently-used words and formats on standardized
tests
Consistent opportunities for review and assessment
New Features:
Vocabulary for Comprehension: reading passages with comprehension and vocabulary
questions similar to the SAT and ACT
Grammar in Context: grammar and usage skill questions similar to the SAT Writing
Section
Additional Features include: definitions (including synonyms, antonyms, illustrative sentences,
and parts of speech); vocabulary in context (in a reading passage); strategies using context and
word structure for decoding word meanings; as well as Latin and Greek roots.
There is also an online component available at www.vocabularyworkshop.com that provides:
An online audio program
SAT and ACT practice worksheets
Interactive games and puzzles
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Teachers should complete a minimum of 2 vocabulary units per marking period. Teachers
receive professional development in infusing technology into vocabulary instruction and
appropriate pacing of lesson work.
Learning Objectives in Language/Vocabulary Acquisition and Use as per the National Core
Standards Initiave (http://www.corestandards.org/the-standards/english-language-artsstandards/language/grade-9-10/):
4. Determine or clarify the meaning of unknown and multiple-meaning words and phrases
based on grades 9–10 reading and content, choosing flexibly from a range of strategies.
Use context (e.g., the overall meaning of a sentence, paragraph, or text; a word’s
position or function in a sentence) as a clue to the meaning of a word or phrase.
Identify and correctly use patterns of word changes that indicate different meanings or
parts of speech (e.g., analyze, analysis, analytical; advocate, advocacy).
Consult general and specialized reference materials (e.g., dictionaries, glossaries,
thesauruses), both print and digital, to find the pronunciation of a word or determine or
clarify its precise meaning, its part of speech, or its etymology.
Verify the preliminary determination of the meaning of a word or phrase (e.g., by
checking the inferred meaning in context or in a dictionary).
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5. Demonstrate understanding of figurative language, word relationships, and nuances in
word meanings.
Interpret figures of speech (e.g., euphemism, oxymoron) in context and analyze their
role in the text.
Analyze nuances in the meaning of words with similar denotations.
6. Acquire and use accurately general academic and domain-specific words and phrases,
sufficient for reading, writing, speaking, and listening at the college and career readiness
level; demonstrate independence in gathering vocabulary knowledge when considering a
word or phrase important to comprehension or expression.
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Writing Instruction
All major writing assignments include a process approach to writing.
The stages of process-based writing include:
 prewriting
 drafting
 sharing
 revising
 editing
 proofreading
 publishing
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The Write for College text provides explicit instructional lesson work and strategy for teaching
the writing process using the Six Traits of Writing. All students have desk copies of student
copies of Write for College. Teachers are supplied with a Write for College Teacher’s Edition.
Also, the following web site also shares a wealth of graphic organizers to be utilized as
organizational tools:
http://www.heinemann.com/shared/onlineresources/E00464/appendix.pdf.
The six traits of writing include:
 ideas
 organization
 voice
 word choice
 sentence fluency
 conventions
Sheryl Lain’s Six Traits Resource Handbook delineates Six Traits work explicitly. It is available in
the high school media center. The resource handbook is referenced in various core text
activities within the thematic units. The ELA supervisor received exclusive permission to share
the resource handbook with SOMSD teachers by the author.
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Adapted/edited from the North West Regional Education Laboratory, SOMSD created some
Question and Answer explanation of the 6+ 1 Analytical Traits of Writing:
Q: What’s the best thing about the traits?
A: It’s the language, the shared vocabulary that adds such a rich component to our teaching
and assessing of student writing. The traits give us all a common language for talking about and
celebrating writing.
Q: Which trait should I teach first?
A: We think it makes sense to begin with Ideas. After all, this is the foundational trait. Your
idea is your whole reason for writing. All other traits flow out of, and are influenced by, this
one. But with that said, remember we are teaching writing, not the traits.
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Q: Is there ever a time all six traits come together in students’ revision?
A: Yes. Absolutely. They must. The division of the traits in order to do focused revisionworking on one trait at a time- is artificial, we admit. But it’s a way of making revision
manageable for students, who often do not know where to begin. Writing process steps aren’t
really separate either. Prewriting, drafting, revision, and editing aren’t really mutually
exclusive; we separate them to make the writing process easier to understand and put into
practice. Similarly, real writers do think about organization and ideas at the same time; when
they revise ideas, the voice also improves; when they alter the wording, the change affects
fluency, and so on.
Q: Do I have to assess all six traits for each piece of student writing?
A: No! You do what makes sense for the assignment given to students. For example, you
might be working on ideas, voice, and conventions for a period of time and only want to have
students focus on those traits. Or perhaps you will want to take it even more slowly and work
on one revision and one editing trait at a time. Remember that we have grouped ideas,
organization, and voice for the revising process, and sentence fluency, word choice, and
conventions for the editing process. The beauty of an analytic system is you can take the pieces
apart, examine them, and then insert them back into the larger picture.
In addition to using the Six Traits and state assessment rubrics, teachers are responsible for
more specific written feedback to student writing. In the words of Ralph Fletcher, an expert in
Writing Workshop and author of Craft Lessons (2007), teachers should provide a “glow” and a
“grow” to students as feedback during a writing conference or in written feedback. In other
words, in addition to specific marginal notes, students will receive some praise in addition to
some suggestions for improvement in their processed writing pieces. John Bean’s “Writing
Comments on Students’ Papers” in Engaging Ideas (1996) was reviewed with staff as a basis for
effective feedback strategy. The article is available in the school media centers for review.
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Learning Objectives as per the College and Career Readiness Standards for Writing in Grades
9-10 ( http://www.corestandards.org/the-standards/english-language-arts-standards/writing-612/grade-9-10/):
Text Types and Purposes
1.
Write arguments to support claims in an analysis of substantive topics or texts, using valid
reasoning and relevant and sufficient evidence.
Introduce precise claim(s), distinguish the claim(s) from alternate or opposing claims,
and create an organization that establishes clear relationships among claim(s),
counterclaims, reasons, and evidence.
Develop claim(s) and counterclaims fairly, supplying evidence for each while pointing
out the strengths and limitations of both in a manner that anticipates the audience’s
knowledge level and concerns.
Use words, phrases, and clauses to link the major sections of the text, create cohesion,
and clarify the relationships between claim(s) and reasons, between reasons and
evidence, and between claim(s) and counterclaims.
Establish and maintain a formal style and objective tone while attending to the norms
and conventions of the discipline in which they are writing.
Provide a concluding statement or section that follows from and supports the argument
presented.
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2.
Write informative/explanatory texts to examine and convey complex ideas, concepts, and
information clearly and accurately through the effective selection, organization, and
analysis of content.
Introduce a topic; organize complex ideas, concepts, and information to make important
connections and distinctions; include formatting (e.g., headings), graphics (e.g., figures,
tables), and multimedia when useful to aiding comprehension.
Develop the topic with well-chosen, relevant, and sufficient facts, extended definitions,
concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples appropriate to the
audience’s knowledge of the topic.
Use appropriate and varied transitions to link the major sections of the text, create
cohesion, and clarify the relationships among complex ideas and concepts.
Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to manage the complexity of the
topic.
Establish and maintain a formal style and objective tone while attending to the norms
and conventions of the discipline in which they are writing.
Provide a concluding statement or section that follows from and supports the
information or explanation presented (e.g., articulating implications or the significance
of the topic).
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3.
Write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences or events using effective
technique, well-chosen details, and well-structured event sequences.
Engage and orient the reader by setting out a problem, situation, or observation,
establishing one or multiple point(s) of view, and introducing a narrator and/or
characters; create a smooth progression of experiences or events.
Use narrative techniques, such as dialogue, pacing, description, reflection, and multiple
plot lines, to develop experiences, events, and/or characters.
Use a variety of techniques to sequence events so that they build on one another to
create a coherent whole.
Use precise words and phrases, telling details, and sensory language to convey a vivid
picture of the experiences, events, setting, and/or characters.
Provide a conclusion that follows from and reflects on what is experienced, observed, or
resolved over the course of the narrative.
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Production and Distri buti on of Writing
4.
Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style are
appropriate to task, purpose, and audience. (Grade-specific expectations for writing types
are defined in standards 1–3 above.)
5.
Develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying
a new approach, focusing on addressing what is most significant for a specific purpose and
audience.
6.
Use technology, including the Internet, to produce, publish, and update individual or shared
writing products, taking advantage of technology’s capacity to link to other information and
to display information flexibly and dynamically.
Researc h to B uild and Present Knowledge
7.
Conduct short as well as more sustained research projects to answer a question (including a
self-generated question) or solve a problem; narrow or broaden the inquiry when
appropriate; synthesize multiple sources on the subject, demonstrating understanding of
the subject under investigation.
8.
Gather relevant information from multiple authoritative print and digital sources, using
advanced searches effectively; assess the usefulness of each source in answering the
research question; integrate information into the text selectively to maintain the flow of
ideas, avoiding plagiarism and following a standard format for citation.
9.
Draw evidence from literary or informational texts to support analysis, reflection, and
research.
Apply grades 9–10 Reading standards to literature (e.g., “Analyze how an author draws
on and transforms source material in a specific work [e.g., how Shakespeare treats a
theme or topic from Ovid or the Bible or how a later author draws on a play by
Shakespeare]”).
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Apply grades 9–10 Reading standards to literary nonfiction (e.g., “Delineate and
evaluate the argument and specific claims in a text, assessing whether the reasoning is
valid and the evidence is relevant and sufficient; identify false statements and fallacious
reasoning”).
Range of Writing
10. Write routinely over extended time frames (time for research, reflection, and revision) and
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shorter time frames (a single sitting or a day or two) for a range of tasks, purposes, and
audiences.
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Grade Level Common Assessments
Grade Level Common Assessments have been created for all students in Grades 6-12. These
are tests created by grade level teams of teachers that assess the New Jersey Core Curriculum
Content Standards and national core standards, mirror High School Proficiency Assessment
tasks, and utilize grade level content. Assessments were created and revised in grade level
teams. There are two reading tasks (one narrative and one persuasive/non-fiction) and two
essay prompts (one persuasive essay and one expository).
Teacher Expectations for effective implementation of Grade Level Common Assessments:
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 9 August, 2010
A mini-lesson that explicitly explores the state rubric to preview each grade level
common assessment task
Storage of all tasks in Individual student folders provided by the department supervisor
Specific feedback to students in addition to the holistic score. In particular, students
should receive some praise, suggestion(s) for improvement, and an indication of
proofing errors.
Facilitation of a reflection sheet that acts as a cover page to the assessments kept in the
folder
Folders kept in a visible place in the classroom for review by the supervisor and/or
principal (usually at the beginning of each marking period)
Specific review of grade level common assessment tasks the week before the NJASK
(with a special emphasis placed on “Advance Proficient” skills: textual connections in
open-ended questions and compositional risks in essay work)
The Grade Level Common Assessment Folder becomes a portfolio when students have an
opportunity to include additional classroom projects and processed writing pieces in their
folders/portfolios. To that end, students will complete the reflection sheet with respect to their
selected works for their portfolio. Students are provided with an opportunity to include, at
least, two pieces of writing in their Grade Level Common Assessment folders/portfolios.
Folders are collected and monitored by the department supervisor and/or building principal at
the end of the year (to be passed to next year’s English teacher).
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Grade 9
Units of Study
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English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 9 August, 2010
Self
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District of South Orange and Maplewood
English Language Arts Curriculum- Grade 9
Thematic Unit of Study: Self
Thematic Overview:
Driving Questions:
This unit is designed to introduce the ninth
grade theme, self, through texts that focus
on elements that contribute to the
formation of personal identity. Students
will explore literature that asks them to
examine the literary self within texts and
make connections to their developing
selves.
1. How is identity crafted?
2. What do interests, values, and possessions reveal
about the self?
3. TBD- After a teacher-driven introduction to each unit,
teachers facilitate the construction of a student-driven
driving question in an effort to be responsive to student
interest.
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 9 August, 2010
This unit also introduces the following
skills:
Narrative technique
Character analysis
Writing Dialogue
Focus Reading Strategy: “Bookmark Strategy”
Students are instructed to fold a piece of paper in thirds as a
bookmark for reading. When a key idea is encountered,
students should write or sketch thoughts on the bookmark.
Bookmarks should focus on passages that seem especially
important, confusing, or helpful (Daniels and Zemelmen 116).
Materials
Student Texts:
The Pearl
The Odyssey
The Miracle Worker
Fahrenheit 451
Old Man and the Sea
A Raisin in the Sun
“Harlem” (and other select poetry)
“President Cleveland, Where are you?” (and other select short stories)
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Literature Circles:
Short Story Anthologies
Independent Reading/Research:
Summer Reading Initiative peer recommendations
(All summer reading titles are housed in classroom
libraries.)
 Bury My Heart at Wounded Knee by Dee Brown
 Close to Shore: a true story of terror in an age of
innocence by Michael Capuzzo
 In My Hands: memories of a Holocaust rescuer by Irene
Gut Opdyke
 Funny in Farsi: a memoir of growing up in America by
Dumas Firoozeh
 The Jump: Sebastian Telfair and the high stakes business
of high school ball by Ian O’Connor
 Once Upon a Quinceanera: coming of age in the USA by
Julia Alvarez
 Shadow Divers: the true adventure of two Americans
who risked everything to solve one of the last mysteries
of World War II by Robert Kurson
 7 Habits of Highly Effective Teens by Sean Covey
Teacher Resources:
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 9 August, 2010
Daniels, Harvey, and Steven Zemelman. Subjects Matter: Every Teacher's Guide to ContentArea Reading. Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann, 2004. Provides a process approach to reading(All language arts teachers should retain a desk copy.).
Lain, Sheryl, ed. Strengthen Your Students' Writing Using the Six Traits (Grades 6-12). Bellevue,
WA: Bureau of Education & Research, 2008. A resource handbook for Six Traits Writing
Workshop activities (available in the school library).
ReadWriteThink Lesson Plan Index. National Council Teachers of English and International
Reading Association. 7 May 2009 http://www.readwritethink.org/lessons/index.asp.
Grade level appropriate lessons linked to national standards.
Sebranek, Patrick, Verne Meyer, and Dave Kemper, eds. Write for College. N.p.: Great Source
Education Group, 2007. Print.
(All students and teachers have a desk copy of this grade level writing text.)
Audio-Visual:
Audio books
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DELINEATION OF UNIT OBJECTIVES FOR LESSON WORK
Unit: Self
National
Core
Anchor
Standard
College &
Career
Readiness
For
Writing:
Standards
1 – 10
Grade Level Specific
Standards as Student
Objectives for lesson work
(Students will be able to…)
W 3. Write narratives to
develop real or imagined
experiences or events
using effective
technique, well-chosen
details, and wellstructured event
sequences.
W 4. Produce clear and
coherent writing in which
the development,
organization, and style
are appropriate to task,
purpose, and audience.
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 9 August, 2010
College &
Career
Readiness
For
Writing:
Standard
#1
R L 4. Determine the
meaning of words and
phrases as they are
used in the text,
including figurative and
connotative meanings;
analyze the cumulative
impact of specific word
choices on meaning and
tone (e.g., how the
language evokes a
sense of time and place;
how it sets a formal or
informal tone).
Core Text Activities
Use “Preparing for an interview” in Write for College p457-458 and
Write for College Teacher’s Guide p54 “Writing an Interview Report.”
The interview may include an explanation of the origin of the students’
own names.
Facilitate an interview opportunity. Students may interview someone
at home or in the community about some aspect relevant to self or
identity such as name, immigrant experiences, etc.
After giving students an opportunity to write on the topic, ask students
to present findings in a written self-analysis which reflects one’s
personal values at the life stage, possibly accompanied by a collage
visually paralleling the writing.
Additional opportunities for publication may include pair-share, class
discussion, wiki, power point, etc.
Introduce literary terms to be noted in a student literary term
notebook focusing on narrative elements using the “Literary Terms”
section of Write for College p287-294:
 allusion
 antagonist
 characterization
 conflict
 diction
 figurative language
 flashback
 foreshadowing
 genre
 imagery
 irony
 mood
 plot (exposition, rising action, climax, falling action, and
resolution/denouement)









point of view
protagonist
pun
satire
stereotype
style
symbol
theme
tone.
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R I 4. Determine the
meaning of words and
phrases as they are
used in a text, including
figurative, connotative,
and technical meanings;
analyze the cumulative
impact of specific word
choices on meaning and
tone (e.g., how the
language of a court
opinion differs from that
of a newspaper).
College &
S S & L 1. Initiate and
Career
participate effectively in a
Readinessrange of collaborative
For
discussions (one-on-one, in
Writing: groups, and teacher-led) with
Standardsdiverse partners on grades
# 8 & 9 9–10 topics, texts, and
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 9 August, 2010
issues, building on others’
ideas and expressing their
own clearly and
persuasively.
College &
Career
Readiness
For
Writing:
Standards
# 1 - 10
College &
Career
Readiness
For
Writing:
Standards
#2-5
W 10. Write routinely
Utilize the department-issued reproducible teacher’s edition to
Figurative Language Terms: Review and Practice
http://www.teachersdiscoveryenglish.com/item_details.php?item=156+840+X0000042&SBJ=E
nglish
Literature Circle Work with an emphasis on narrative technique“Becoming Me” stories from A Multicultural Reader:
 “A Whole Nation and a People” by Harry Mark Petrakis- p 133
 From Black Boy by Richard Wright- p 140
 “Indian Education” by Sherman Alexie- p 146
 "Chitterling” by Henry Van Dyke- p151
 “Fox Hunt” by Lensey Namioka- p166
over extended time
frames (time for
research, reflection, and
revision) and shorter
time frames (a single
sitting or a day or two)
for a range of tasks,
purposes, and
audiences.
Read models of student memoirs from Active Voices p47-77.
Instruct students to apply narrative techniques in short writing
exercises with respect to a core novel. In particular, the Write for
College Teacher’s Guide p138-139 “Implementing Writing-to-Learn
Activities” includes an explanation of the following: admit slips,
brainstorming, class minutes, clustering, completions, correspondence,
creative definitions, dialogues, dramatic scenarios, exit slips, first
thoughts, focused writing, how-to writing, learning logs, listing,
nutshells, predicting, question of the day, and stop ‘n’ write.
W 9. Draw evidence
from literary or
informational texts to
support analysis,
reflection, and research.
R.I. 2. Determine a
central idea of a text and
analyze its development
over the course of the
text, including how it
emerges and is shaped
and refined by specific
details; provide an
objective summary of the
text.
Utilize the “Bookmark” (Daniels p116) reading comprehension strategy
while reading a core text. This strategy entails folding a piece of paper
that serves as a bookmark as well as a place to write thoughts and
pieces of information encountered in the text. Student bookmarks are
later shared in small groups or with the whole class.
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College &
Career
Readiness
For
Writing:
Standards
#2-5
R.L. 2. Determine a
theme or central idea of
a text and analyze in
detail its development
over the course of the
text, including how it
emerges and is shaped
and refined by specific
details; provide an
objective summary of the
text.
W 4. Produce clear and
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 9 August, 2010
coherent writing in which
the development,
organization, and style
are appropriate to task,
purpose, and audience.
College &
Career
Readiness
For
Writing:
Standards
# 4, 5, 7 &
College &
Career
Readiness
For
Writing:
Standards
# 1 - 10
W 7. Conduct short as
well as more sustained
research projects to
answer a question
(including a selfgenerated question) or
solve a problem; narrow
or broaden the inquiry
when appropriate;
synthesize multiple
sources on the subject,
demonstrating
understanding of the
subject under
investigation.
W. 2. Write
informative/explanatory
texts to examine and
convey complex ideas,
concepts, and
information clearly and
accurately through the
effective selection,
organization,
8 and
analysis of content.
W. 1. Write arguments to
support claims in an
analysis of substantive
topics or texts, using
valid reasoning and
relevant and sufficient
evidence.
Facilitate a passage analysis focusing on a single narrative element
in a core novel such as tone in The Pearl; characterization in Raisin
in the Sun; and/or imagery in Fahrenheit 451.
Question Ideas for Literary Analysis (from Write for College p286):
 Theme: Does the author say something about a time and
place in history?
 Characterization and Plot: What motives determine a
character’s course of action? What are the most revealing
aspects of one of the characters? What external or internal
conflicts challenge the main character?
 Setting: What effect does the setting have on the characters?
The plot? The theme?
 Style: What feeling or tone is created in the selection? How is
it created?
 Author: How does the literary work represent the author’s
particular time, place, and culture?
In pairs or small groups, ask students to define narrative elements and
find examples from core texts. Students should use the text to
support their examples and the final product could be presented.
Guide students to write an “Observation Report” Write for College
p176-179 and Write for College Teacher’s Guide p55. Students will
choose an appealing location (that meets the requirements established
by the teacher) as a subject for a processed writing piece.
Related extending activities in the Write for College Teacher’s Guide
include:
 Organization: Finding a Form, p188
 Fluency: Parallel Structure, p208
Facilitate the creation of a dialogue.
In The Pearl, students could create a dialogue between Kino and
Juana as they return home after Coyotito’s death.
In A Raisin in the Sun, student could create a dialogue between
Beneatha and George after the final scene.
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W 3. Write narratives to
develop real or imagined
experiences or events
using effective
technique, well-chosen
details, and wellstructured event
sequences.
The following ReadWriteThink minilesson supports correct use of
quotations with references to “The Owl at Purdue” web site:
http://www.readwritethink.org/classroom-resources/lessonplans/inside-outside-minilesson-quotation118.html?tab=3#tabs
Short Term Projects:
Writer’s Notebook/Journals- own writing,
non-directed and directed, teacher-driven
create images
“Snapshot writing”
Show Don’t Tell
Text to self- connection
Summative Writing Publication:
Memoir
Focus on writing for a purpose (genre of memoir)
Narrative techniques (theme, characterization, style,
and voice)
Utilize Write for College- Personal Writing guidelines
and models on pages 143-155
Emphasis on High School Proficiency Assessment
“Compositional Risks”
Dialogue writing
Original “I am” poem
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 9 August, 2010
Character sketches
Close readings of author’s style
Letters About Literature letter/essay
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English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 9 August, 2010
Formative Assessments
Informal daily observations
Write for College mini-lessons
Anecdotal notes (literature circles)
Vocabulary quizzes
Reading checks
Homework
“Do Now” activities
Group Work
Small group presentations
Independent oral presentations
Journal writing
Unit quizzes and tests
Close reading analysis
Peer editing and conferencing
Writing conferences
Open-ended scoring rubric (reader responses)
Holistic scoring writing rubric
Six Traits writing rubric
MLA style guide http://library.montclair.edu/guides/mla_style.pdf
MLA style guide for in-text citations http://owl.english.purdue.edu/
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Curriculum Alignment with Write for College Resource Text
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 9 August, 2010
**Refer to this guide for all Grade 9 Units of Study
See Write for College (pages 509-593) for “Proofreader’s Guide” and information related to
punctuation, mechanics, parts of speech and usage. Specifically, find relevant material as
follows:
Page #
Page 509
Page 510
Page 511
Page 516
Page 517
Page 518
Page 520
Page 522
Page 524
Page 525
Page 526
Page 527
Page 528
Topic
Marking Punctuation
Marking Punctuation
Marking Punctuation
Marking Punctuation
Marking Punctuation
Marking Punctuation
Marking Punctuation
Marking Punctuation
Marking Punctuation
Marking Punctuation
Marking Punctuation
Marking Punctuation
Marking Punctuation
Focus/Skill
Page 510
Question Mark + Exclamation Point
Comma
Semicolon
Colon
Hyphen
Apostrophe
Quotation Marks
Italics (Underlining)
Parentheses
Diagonal + Dash
Ellipsis
Brackets
Page 529
Page 532
Page 534
Page 535
Page 537
Checking Mechanics
Checking Mechanics
Checking Mechanics
Checking Mechanics
Checking Mechanics
Capitalization
Plurals
Numbers
Abbreviations
Acronyms and Initials
Page 538
Page 539-543
Page 544
Spelling Rules
Spelling Rules
Spelling Rules
Quick Guide
Commonly Misspelled Words
Steps to Becoming a Better Speller
Page 545
Page 551
Word Usage
Word Usage
Understanding Idioms
Using the Right Word
Page 561
Page 562
Page 563
Page 565
Page 567
Page 569
Page 570-573
Page 571
Page 574
Page 576
Page 577
Parts of Speech
Parts of Speech
Parts of Speech
Parts of Speech
Parts of Speech
Parts of Speech
Parts of Speech
Parts of Speech
Parts of Speech
Parts of Speech
Parts of Speech
Noun
Forms of Nouns
Pronouns
Forms of Personal Pronouns
Verbs
Verbals
Forms of Verbs
Irregular Verbs
Adjectives
Adverbs
Prepositions
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Topic
Parts of Speech
Parts of Speech
Focus/Skill
Conjunctions
Quick Guide – Parts of Speech
Constructing Sentences
Page 580
Page 582-583
Page 584
Page 586
Using the Language
Using the Language
Using the Language
Using the Language
Using Phrases
Using Clauses
Using Sentence Variety
Diagramming Sentences
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Self &
Family/Friends
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District of South Orange and Maplewood
English Language Arts Curriculum- Grade 9
Thematic Unit of Study: Self & Family/Friends
Driving Questions:
1. How do family and friends influence, affect,
and/or relate to the individual?
2. How predetermined is identity by
environmental factors uch as cultural and
socio-economic status?
3. TBD- After a teacher-driven introduction to
This unit also introduces the following skills:
each unit, teachers facilitate the construction
Explicit exploration of self in relation to of a student-driven driving question in an
friends and family through the use of
effort to be responsive to student interest.
poetry, short stories, fiction, and
memoirs
Continuation of thesis writing,
*Focus Reading Strategy: “Double-Entry Journal”
strategy (Daniels and Zemelman 118-119). While
exploring the facets of the six traits
reading a text, students record two sets of
rubric in relationship to analytical
notations in a two-column journal: important
papers
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 9 August, 2010
Thematic Overview:
This unit is designed to continue the Grade 9
theme of self-exploration through texts that
focus on the individual as well as relationships
to, and with, family and friends.
ideas and personal reflections.
Materials
Student texts:
Always Running (with parent permission)
Black Like Me
The Chosen
Death Be Not Proud
Jane Eyre
Julius Caesar or Romeo and Juliet
Killing Mr. Griffin
Maus I
The Pearl
A Raisin in the Sun
“Nikki-Rosa” poem
Roots excerpt
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Literature Circles:
Focus on plot and setting
“The Most Dangerous Game” by
Richard Connell
“Liberty” by Julia Alvarez
“Mother Tongue” by Amy Tan
“Everyday Use” by Alice Walker
Independent Reading/Research:
Book-of-choice
Teacher Resources:
Daniels, Harvey, and Steven Zemelman. Subjects Matter: Every Teacher's Guide to ContentArea Reading. Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann, 2004. Provides a process approach to reading(All language arts teachers should retain a desk copy.).
Lain, Sheryl, ed. Strengthen Your Students' Writing Using the Six Traits (Grades 6-12). Bellevue,
WA: Bureau of Education & Research, 2008. A resource handbook for Six Traits Writing
Workshop activities (available in the school library).
ReadWriteThink Lesson Plan Index. National Council Teachers of English and International
Reading Association. 7 May 2009 http://www.readwritethink.org/lessons/index.asp.
Grade level appropriate lessons linked to national standards.
Sebranek, Patrick, Verne Meyer, and Dave Kemper, eds. Write for College. N.p.: Great Source
Education Group, 2007. Print.
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 9 August, 2010
(All students and teachers have a desk copy of this grade level writing text.)
Audio-Visual:
Audio books
Film excerpts
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DELINEATION OF UNIT OBJECTIVES FOR LESSON WORK
Unit Two: Self & Family and Friends
Grade Level Specific
National
Standards
as Student
Core Anchor
Objectives
for
lesson work
Standard
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 9 August, 2010
College and
Career
Readiness
Anchor
Standards for
Reading
1 – 10
(Students will be able to…)
S&L 4. Present information,
findings, and supporting
evidence clearly, concisely,
and logically such that
listeners can follow the line
of reasoning and the
organization, development,
substance, and style are
appropriate to purpose,
audience, and task.
College and
Career
Readiness
Anchor
Standards for
Reading
#1-3
R L 2. Determine a theme
College and
Career
Readiness
Anchor
Standards for
Reading
#4&5
W 5. Develop and
or central idea of a text and
analyze in detail its
development over the
course of the text, including
how it emerges and is
shaped and refined by
specific details; provide an
objective summary of the
text.
strengthen writing as
needed by planning,
revising, editing, rewriting,
or trying a new approach,
focusing on addressing
what is most significant for
a specific purpose and
audience.
Core Text Activities
Utilize Literature Circles - classes are broken into groups
with delegated tasks including but not limited to creative
connector, character analysis, passage master, question
guider (leads), etc…
Suggested Short Story Text: “The Monkey’s Paw”
Suggested Graphic Novel Text: Maus I
“Post – It Activity” (Daniels p114-115) to trace theme
throughout a core text. At the end of the core text,
consolidate post-its on composition paper. Furthermore,
students should write to explain the evolution of theme
throughout the core text.
After reading a short story, create an opportunity for
students to freewrite an original response to create a
framework for literary analysis. A discussion on solid
thesis statements will scaffold into an outline for a literary
analysis essay. The lesson work with PowerPoint
presentations and handouts is available at:
http://www.readwritethink.org/classroom-resources/lessonplans/creative-outlining-from-freewriting-1071.html?tab=3#tabs
See Write for College Teachers Guide p. 71 (Writing About
Literature) and p. 72 (Writing a Personal Response),
linked to pp. 257-262 in Write for College resource. Also
see Teacher’s Guide p. 74 (Writing a Limited Literary
Analysis) and p. 75 (Writing an Extended Literary Analysis)
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College and
Career
Readiness
Anchor
Standards for
Reading
#3&4
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 9 August, 2010
College and
Career
Readiness
Anchor
Standards for
Reading
#8&9
W 4. Produce clear and
coherent writing in which
the development,
organization, and style are
appropriate to task,
purpose, and audience.
(Grade-specific
expectations for writing
types are defined in
standards 1–3 above.)
W 1. Use words, phrases,
and clauses to link the
major sections of the text,
create cohesion, and clarify
the relationships between
claim(s) and reasons,
between reasons and
evidence, and between
claim(s) and counterclaims.
College and
Career
Readiness
Anchor
Standards for
Reading
# 3 – 6, 8
R I 8. Delineate and
College and
Career
Readiness
Anchor
Standards for
Reading
#7
College and
Career
Readiness
Anchor
Standards for
Reading
# 7 – 10
S&L 6. Adapt speech to a
evaluate the argument and
specific claims in a text,
assessing whether the
reasoning is valid and the
evidence is relevant and
sufficient; identify false
statements and fallacious
reasoning.
variety of contexts and
tasks, demonstrating
command of formal English
when indicated or
appropriate.
R I 5. Analyze in detail how
an author’s ideas or claims
are developed and refined
by particular sentences,
paragraphs, or larger
portions of a text (e.g., a
section or chapter).
Utilize Persuasive open-ended questions as “Do Now”
activities- with follow-up debriefing on the open-ended
scoring rubric and compositional risks. Sample question:
In A Raisin in the Sun, if you were Ruth, would you
support Walter in his efforts to accomplish his goals?
Write for College Teacher’s Guide p138-139 “Implementing
Writing-to-Learn Activities” in response to a core text: admit
slips, brainstorming, class minutes, clustering, completions,
correspondence, creative definitions, dialogues, dramatic
scenarios, exit slips, first thoughts, focused writing, how-to
writing, learning logs, listing, nutshells, predicting, question of
the day, and stop ‘n’ write.
“Admit / Exit Cards” (Daniels 124-12) – suggested use 1 – 5
times per week, for a core text.
Direct students to complete an interview of a friend or family
member. A sample interview framework is available at:
http://www.readwritethink.org/parent-afterschoolresources/printouts/possible-interview-questions-30229.html
Write For College mini lesson p94: “Forming a Thesis
Statement”
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College and
Career
Readiness
Anchor
Standards for
Reading
# 7 - 10
College and
Career
Readiness
Anchor
Standards for
Reading
# 1 - 10
R I 5. Analyze in detail how
an author’s ideas or claims
are developed and refined
by particular sentences,
paragraphs, or larger
portions of a text (e.g., a
section or chapter).
W 2. Develop the topic with
well-chosen, relevant, and
sufficient facts, extended
definitions, concrete
details, quotations, or other
information and examples
appropriate to the
audience’s knowledge of
the topic.
Write For College mini lesson p100-102: “Developing Your
Main Points”
Lesson work on using quotes from literature- including minilessons on the use of punctuation marks, including when
various types of punctuation (comma, period, semicolons,
colons, question marks, and exclamation points) go inside or
outside quotation marks or after parenthetical citations:
http://www.readwritethink.org/classroom-resources/lessonplans/quote-punctuation-proofreading-minilesson1124.html?tab=3#tabs
R L 1. Cite strong and
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 9 August, 2010
thorough textual evidence
to support analysis of what
the text says explicitly as
well as inferences drawn
from the text.
College and
Career
Readiness
Anchor
Standards for
Reading
# 1 - 10
R L 9. Analyze how an
author draws on and
transforms source material
in a specific work.
R I 6. Determine an
After reading various poems, students create a friendship poem
that evidences the sounds of language’s role in meaning and
mood. Resources are provided at:
http://www.readwritethink.org/classroom-resources/lessonplans/poetry-sound-sense-848.html
author’s point of view or
purpose in a text and
analyze how an author
uses rhetoric to advance
that point of view or
purpose.
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Short Term Projects:
Biographical sketch on a family
member or close friend
A letter to Clybourne Park Home
Association (reflection on A Raisin in
the Sun)
Extend the text: Create Act IV to A
Raisin in the Sun or a court scene to
Killing Mr. Griffin
Themed memoir on personal
relationships
Open-ended close reading analysis
regarding the style and/or relationship
of selected author
Expository prompts (using quotes as a
springboard for writing)
Oral histories (interviews with family
members)
Summative Published Writing
Analytical essay
Thesis (original claim, divisible by parts, not obviousmust be proven)
*This essay requires teacher feedback using the Six Traits
of Writing.
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 9 August, 2010
Formative Assessments
Informal daily observations
Write for College mini-lessons
Anecdotal notes (literature circles)
Vocabulary quizzes
Reading checks
Homework
“Do Now” activites
Group Work
Small group presentations
Independent oral presentations
Journal writing
Unit quizzes and tests
Close reading analysis
Peer editing and conferencing
Writing conferences
Open-ended scoring rubric (reader responses)
Holistic scoring writing rubric
Six Traits writing rubric
MLA style guide http://library.montclair.edu/guides/mla_style.pdf
MLA style guide for in-text citations http://owl.english.purdue.edu/
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Appendix
Write for College Alignment – Analytical/Thesis Essay
Focus
Forming a Thesis Statement
Revising for Ideas (6+1 Traits)/Evaluating Your Thesis
Forming a Thesis Statement + Checklist for a Thesis Statement
Analytical Writing
Analytical Writing
Writing an Analysis of a Process
Process Essay
Writing an Essay of Comparison
Essay of Comparison
Writing an Essay of Classification
Essay of Classification
Writing an Essay of Definition
Essay of Definition
Writing a Cause-Effect Essay
Cause-Effect Essay
Writing a Problem-Solution Essay
Problem-Solution essay
Writing an Essay of Evaluation
Essay of Evaluation
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Self &
Authority
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District of South Orange and Maplewood
English Language Arts Curriculum- Grade 9
Thematic Unit of Study: Self & Authority
Thematic Overview:
Focusing on authority in various core texts,
this unit is designed to expand the developing
exploration of self to include the impact of
authority on the individual.
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 9 August, 2010
This unit also introduces the following skills:
Media Center research
Oral report speaking skills
Close Reading
Synthesizing
Driving Questions:
1. How do the various roles of authority and
power in society affect the individual?
2. How is authority shaped by society?
3. What responsibilities do individuals have to
society?
4. TBD- After a teacher-driven introduction to
each unit, teachers facilitate the construction
of a student-driven driving question in an
effort to be responsive to student interest.
* Focus Reading Strategy: “Coding Text” strategy
(Daniels and Zemelman 120). As they read,
students will use symbols to code the following:
character traits, elements of science fiction and
fantasy, cause and effect relationships, literary
conflicts, and textual connections.
Materials
Student Texts:
Ask Me No Questions
Bless Me, Ultima
The Bread Givers
The Chosen
Fahrenheit 451
Julius Caesar or Romeo and Juliet
Killing Mr. Griffin
The Miracle Worker
Maus I
Night
Old Man and the Sea
A Raisin in the Sun
A Tale of Two Cities
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Literature Circles:
Focus on Symbolism and Irony
Short stories:
 “The Scarlet Ibis” by James Hurst
 “The Necklace” by Guy de Maupassant
 “The Gift of the Magi” by O. Henry
 “The Golden Kite, the Silver Wind” by
Ray Bradbury
Independent Reading/Research:
Media Center database articles
Teacher Resources:
Daniels, Harvey, and Steven Zemelman. Subjects Matter: Every Teacher's Guide to ContentArea Reading. Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann, 2004. Provides a process approach to reading(All language arts teachers should retain a desk copy.).
Lain, Sheryl, ed. Strengthen Your Students' Writing Using the Six Traits (Grades 6-12). Bellevue,
WA: Bureau of Education & Research, 2008. A resource handbook for Six Traits Writing
Workshop activities (available in the school library).
ReadWriteThink Lesson Plan Index. National Council Teachers of English and International
Reading Association. 7 May 2009 http://www.readwritethink.org/lessons/index.asp.
Grade level appropriate lessons linked to national standards.
Sebranek, Patrick, Verne Meyer, and Dave Kemper, eds. Write for College. N.p.: Great Source
Education Group, 2007. Print.
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 9 August, 2010
(All students and teachers have a desk copy of this grade level writing text.)
Audio-Visual:
Folger Shakespeare Library links to audio and visual sites:
http://www.folger.edu/eduLesPlanSearch.cfm
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Unit Three:
National
Core
Anchor
Standard
College
and Career
Readiness
Anchor
Standards
for
Language
#1–6
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 9 August, 2010
College
and Career
Readiness
Anchor
Standards
for
Language
#1–6
College
and Career
Readiness
Anchor
Standards
for
Language
#1–6
College
and Career
Readiness
Anchor
Standards
for
Language
#1–6
DELINEATION OF UNIT OBJECTIVES FOR LESSON WORK
Self & Authority
Grade Level Specific Standards
as Student Objectives for
lesson work
(Students will be able to…)
S&L 1. Come to discussions
prepared, having read and
researched material under
study; explicitly draw on that
preparation by referring to
evidence from texts and
other research on the topic
or issue to stimulate a
thoughtful, well-reasoned
exchange of ideas.
W 8. Gather relevant
information from multiple
print and digital sources,
assess the credibility and
accuracy of each source,
and integrate the information
while avoiding plagiarism.
W 9. Draw evidence from
literary or informational texts
to support analysis,
reflection, and research.
W 6. Use technology,
including the Internet, to
produce, publish, and
update individual or shared
writing products, taking
advantage of technology’s
capacity to link to other
information and to display
information flexibly and
dynamically.
RL 3. Analyze how complex
characters (e.g., those with
multiple or conflicting
motivations) develop over
the course of a text, interact
with other characters, and
advance the plot or develop
the theme.
RI 7. Analyze various
accounts of a subject told in
different mediums.
Core Text Activities
Facilitate the use of “KWL Charts” (Daniels 106-107). …For
use with texts such as: A Tale of Two Cities and The French
Revolution; A Raisin in the Sun and Civil Rights; Fahrenheit
451 and censorship; Night or Maus and the Holocaust
Writing for College Introduction to research and prep work
mini lesson p 317-326. Includes note cards and note-taking
relevant to a topic on a core text.
Pre-reading lesson on Shakespeare and tragedy before
reading Romeo and Juliet and/or Julius Caesar:
http://www.readwritethink.org/parent-afterschoolresources/printouts/possible-interview-questions30229.html
After reading a play or novel, assist students to create a
resume for one of the characters. Lesson work is available
at:
http://www.readwritethink.org/classroom-resources/lessonplans/book-report-alternative-characters-198.html
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College
and Career
Readiness
Anchor
Standards
for
Language
#1–6
College
and Career
Readiness
Anchor
Standards
for
Language
#1–6
W 1. Use words, phrases,
and clauses to link the major
sections of the text, create
cohesion, and clarify the
relationships between
claim(s) and reasons,
between reasons and
evidence, and between
claim(s) and counterclaims.
RI 10. By the end of grade 9,
read and comprehend
literary nonfiction in the
grades 9–10 text complexity
band proficiently, with
scaffolding as needed at the
high end of the range.
Write for College Teacher’s Guide p138-139 “Implementing
Writing-to-Learn Activities” in response to a core text: admit
slips, brainstorming, class minutes, clustering, completions,
correspondence, creative definitions, dialogues, dramatic
scenarios, exit slips, first thoughts, focused writing, how-to
writing, learning logs, listing, nutshells, predicting, question of
the day, and stop ‘n’ write.
Create a classroom anchor chart for the MLA style guide for intext citation: http://owl.english.purdue.edu/
W 2. Develop the topic with
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 9 August, 2010
well-chosen, relevant, and
sufficient facts, extended
definitions, concrete details,
quotations, or other
information and examples
appropriate to the
audience’s knowledge of the
topic.
College
and Career
Readiness
Anchor
Standards
for
Language
#1–6
S&L 1. Propel conversations
by posing and responding to
questions that relate the
current discussion to
broader themes or larger
ideas; actively incorporate
others into the discussion;
and clarify, verify, or
challenge ideas and
conclusions.
RI 8. Delineate and evaluate
the argument and specific
claims in a text, assessing
whether the reasoning is
valid and the evidence is
relevant and sufficient;
identify false statements and
fallacious reasoning.
RI 9. Analyze documents of
historical and literary
significance.
Facilitate a study of Langston Hughes poetry to gain a better
understanding of social and historical context:
http://www.readwritethink.org/classroom-resources/lessonplans/discovering-passion-poetry-with-251.html
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Short Term Projects:
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 9 August, 2010
Summarizing and paraphrasing –
summary statements
Library-driven research
Use of databases
Student handbooks
Note-taking for research
Summative Published Writing:
Research paper and presentation
Research driven presentation on social
context
Public speaking skills
MLA citation
Synthesis of library-driven research
Formative Assessments
Formative Assessments
Informal daily observations
Write for College mini-lessons
Anecdotal notes (literature circles)
Vocabulary quizzes
Reading checks
Homework
“Do Now” activites
Group Work
Small group presentations
Independent oral presentations
Journal writing
Unit quizzes and tests
Close reading analysis
Peer editing and conferencing
Writing conferences
Open-ended scoring rubric (reader responses)
Holistic scoring writing rubric
Six Traits writing rubric
MLA style guide http://library.montclair.edu/guides/mla_style.pdf
MLA style guide for in-text citations http://owl.english.purdue.edu/
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English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 9 August, 2010
Self &
Public Values
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District of South Orange and Maplewood
English Language Arts Curriculum- Grade 8
Thematic Unit: The Self & Public Values
Thematic Overview:
This unit uses social and moral issues as a lens
for continuing the theme of self-exploration.
Individuals in these texts experience or endure
societal conflicts that ultimately help and shape
their true character. The issues that arise allow
students to question their own beliefs, in turn
beginning or continuing to shape their own
philosophies.
Driving Questions:
1. How is an individual affected by society’s
expectations?
2. What determines right vs. wrong?
3. How does society privilege individuals?
4. TBD- After a teacher-driven introduction to
each unit, teachers facilitate the construction
of a student-driven driving question in an
effort to be responsive to student interest.
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 9 August, 2010
This unit also introduces the following skills:
Expanding exploration of point of view
Prioritizing important points
Coding text
*Focus Reading Strategy: “RAFT- Retelling in
Various Perspectives and Genres” strategy
(Daniels and Zemelman 118-119). Students are
granted choice to debrief on role, audience,
format, or topic in their reading.
Materials
Student Texts:
All Quiet on the Western Front
Black Like Me
Inherit the Wind
Julius Caesar
The Pearl
Oliver Twist
Romeo and Juliet
Tale of Two Cities
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Literature Circles:
Poetry:
 “Fog” by Carl Sandburg
 “Fire and Ice” by Robert
Frost
 “I Hear America Singing”
by Walt Whitman
 “Possum Crossing” by
Nikki Giovanni
Independent Reading/Research:
The Media Center and English Department have
already partnered to create independent reading
projects with harvested books on the following
topics:
Graphic novels
Holocaust survivors
Science Fiction
Book-of-choice based upon book talks
Teacher Resources:
Daniels, Harvey, and Steven Zemelman. Subjects Matter: Every Teacher's Guide to ContentArea Reading. Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann, 2004. Provides a process approach to reading(all language arts teachers should retain a desk copy).
Lain, Sheryl, ed. Strengthen Your Students' Writing Using the Six Traits (Grades 6-12). Bellevue,
WA: Bureau of Education & Research, 2008. A resource handbook for Six Traits Writing
Workshop activities (available in the school library).
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 9 August, 2010
ReadWriteThink Lesson Plan Index. National Council Teachers of English and International
Reading Association. 7 May 2009 http://www.readwritethink.org/lessons/index.asp.
Grade level appropriate lessons linked to national standards.
Sebranek, Patrick, Verne Meyer, and Dave Kemper, eds. Write for College. N.p.: Great Source
Education Group, 2007. Print.
(All students and teachers have a desk copy of this grade level writing text.)
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DELINEATION OF UNIT OBJECTIVES FOR LESSON WORK
Unit Four: Self & Public Values
National Grade Level Specific Standards
as Student Objectives for
Core
Core Text Activities
lesson
work
Anchor
(Students will be able to…)
Standard
College
RL 2. Determine a theme or
Read a strong model, such as “Letter from a Birmingham Jail”
central idea of a text and
and
aloud and have students identify the a) position, b) support,
analyze in detail its
Career
and c) how the writer addresses the opposing side.
development
over
the
Readiness
Standards course of the text, including
Read-Aloud Brutus and Antony’s funeral speeches in Julius
how it emerges and is
for
Caesar focusing on the difference between emotional and
shaped and refined by
Speaking
rational appeals.
specific details; provide an
and
objective summary of the
Listening
text.
#1-6
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 9 August, 2010
College
and
Career
Readiness
Standards
for
Speaking
and
Listening
#1–6
S&L 1. Initiate and
participate effectively in a
range of collaborative
discussions (one-on-one, in
groups, and teacher-led)
with diverse partners on
grades 9–10 topics, texts,
and issues, building on
others’ ideas and expressing
their own clearly and
persuasively.
Provide a research opportunity for students:
Assist students to choose a relevant controversial topic
from one of the core texts such as:
o Censorship (Fahrenheit 451)
o War (All Quiet on the Western Front)
o Just and unjust laws (Inherit the Wind)
Facilitate research on both sides and instruct students to
ultimately defend one side or the other in a class/group
debate.
RI 8. Delineate and evaluate
College
and
Career
Readiness
Standards
for
Speaking
and
Listening
#1–6
the argument and specific
claims in a text, assessing
whether the reasoning is
valid and the evidence is
relevant and sufficient;
identify false statements and
fallacious reasoning.
RL 4. Determine the
meaning of words and
phrases as they are used in
the text, including figurative
and connotative meanings;
analyze the cumulative
impact of specific word
choices on meaning and
tone (e.g., how the language
evokes a sense of time and
place; how it sets a formal or
informal tone).
While reading a core text, direct students to identify what
aspects of society the author is criticizing with specific
attention to writing style and technique.
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RL 5. Analyze how an
author’s choices concerning
how to structure a text, order
events within it (e.g., parallel
plots), and manipulate time
(e.g., pacing, flashbacks)
create such effects as
mystery, tension, or
surprise.
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 9 August, 2010
College
and
Career
Readiness
Standards
for
Speaking
and
Listening
#1–6
RL 6. Analyze a particular
point of view or cultural
experience reflected in a
work of literature from
outside the United States,
drawing on a wide reading of
world literature.
While reading a core text, direct students to identify what
aspects of society the author is criticizing with specific
attention to writing style, structure, and technique.
After researching various versions of Cinderella (including
the Brothers Grimm version), read Toni Morrison’s
speech: “Cinderella’s Stepsisters.” Facilitate a class
discussion on Morrison’s position and rhetorical strategy.
S&L 2. Integrate multiple
sources of information
presented in diverse media
or formats (e.g., visually,
quantitatively, orally)
evaluating the credibility and
accuracy of each source.
S&L 3. Evaluate a speaker’s
point of view, reasoning, and
use of evidence and
rhetoric, identifying any
fallacious reasoning or
exaggerated or distorted
evidence.
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English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 9 August, 2010
Short Term Projects:
Write from a character’s perspective
and/or point of view- addressing a
particular social context
Write a letter from one character to
another explaining a social conflict
Choose a poetic passage (in prose) in a
core text and change it to a poem
Write an interior monologue for a
character in a specific scene
Comparison/Contrast a social issue in two
different core texts
Debate
Summative Published Writing:
Position Paper
The following unit focuses on writing a strong
argument with respect to environmental
issues
http://www.readwritethink.org/classroomresources/lesson-plans/persuasive-essayenvironmental-issues-268.html?tab=1#tabs
Formative Assessments
Formative Assessments
Informal daily observations
Write for College mini-lessons
Anecdotal notes (literature circles)
Vocabulary quizzes
Reading checks
Homework
“Do Now” activites
Group Work
Small group presentations
Independent oral presentations
Journal writing
Unit quizzes and tests
Close reading analysis
Peer editing and conferencing
Writing conferences
Open-ended scoring rubric (reader responses)
Holistic scoring writing rubric
Six Traits writing rubric
MLA style guide http://library.montclair.edu/guides/mla_style.pdf
MLA style guide for in-text citations http://owl.english.purdue.edu/
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English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 9 August, 2010
Grade 9
National Standards Alignment
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The Common Core Standards
(Adopted by the NJ Department of Education in June 2010)
The following inform ation is from the “The Common Core State Standards
Initiative” web site: http://www.corestandards.org/the -standards/english language-arts-standards-. Specifically, please find the National Anchor
Standards in Reading and Writing - in addition to grade -specific standards for
Reading, Writing, Speaking & Listening, and Language.
A district thematic unit and/or support materials (the Sadlier Oxford Vocabulary Program or
Write for College “Grammar” Program) have been identified and aligned to each Reading and
Writing Anchor Standard and every Grade-Specific Standard using the following key:
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 9 August, 2010
Key:
S
=
Self Unit
FF
=
Self & Family/Friends
A
=
Self & Authority
PV
=
Self & Public Values
R
=
Sadlier Oxford Vocabulary Program
G
=
Write for College “Grammar” Work
S
FF
A
PV
R
G
=
=
=
=
=
=
The Self Unit
The Self & Family/Friends
The Self & Authority
The Self & Public Values
Sadlier Oxford Vocabulary Program
Write for College “Grammar” Work
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English Language Arts Standards » Anchor Standards » College and Career Readiness Anchor
Standards for Reading
Key Ideas and Details
Read closely to determine what the text says explicitly and to make logical inferences from
it; cite specific textual evidence when writing or speaking to support conclusions drawn
from the text. FF, A, PV
2. Determine central ideas or themes of a text and analyze their development; summarize the
key supporting details and ideas. S, FF, A, PV
3. Analyze how and why individuals, events, and ideas develop and interact over the course of
a text. PV
1.
Craft and Structure
Interpret words and phrases as they are used in a text, including determining technical,
connotative, and figurative meanings, and analyze how specific word choices shape
meaning or tone. R, G, S
5. Analyze the structure of texts, including how specific sentences, paragraphs, and larger
portions of the text (e.g., a section, chapter, scene, or stanza) relate to each other and the
whole. S, FF, A, PV
6. Assess how point of view or purpose shapes the content and style of a text. S, FF, PV
4.
Integration of Knowledge and Ideas
Integrate and evaluate content presented in diverse formats and media, including visually
and quantitatively, as well as in words. A, PV, R
8. Delineate and evaluate the argument and specific claims in a text, including the validity of
the reasoning as well as the relevance and sufficiency of the evidence. FF, A, PV
9. Analyze how two or more texts address similar themes or topics in order to build knowledge
or to compare the approaches the authors take. PV
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 9 August, 2010
7.
Range of Reading and Level of Text Complexity
10.
Read and comprehend complex literary and informational texts independently and
proficiently. R, G, S, FF, A, PV
S
FF
A
PV
R
G
=
=
=
=
=
=
The Self Unit
The Self & Family/Friends
The Self & Authority
The Self & Public Values
Sadlier Oxford Vocabulary Program
Write for College “Grammar” Work
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English Language Arts Standards » Reading: Literature » Grade 9-10
Key Ideas and Details
Cite strong and thorough textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says
explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text. S, FF, A, PV
2. Determine a theme or central idea of a text and analyze in detail its development over the
course of the text, including how it emerges and is shaped and refined by specific details;
provide an objective summary of the text. S, FF, A, PV
3. Analyze how complex characters (e.g., those with multiple or conflicting motivations)
develop over the course of a text, interact with other characters, and advance the plot or
develop the theme. S, FF, A, PV
1.
Craft and Structure
Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in the text, including
figurative and connotative meanings; analyze the cumulative impact of specific word
choices on meaning and tone (e.g., how the language evokes a sense of time and place; how
it sets a formal or informal tone). R, G, S, FF, A, PV
5. Analyze how an author’s choices concerning how to structure a text, order events within it
(e.g., parallel plots), and manipulate time (e.g., pacing, flashbacks) create such effects as
mystery, tension, or surprise. FF, A, PV
6. Analyze a particular point of view or cultural experience reflected in a work of literature
from outside the United States, drawing on a wide reading of world literature. A, PV
4.
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 9 August, 2010
Integration of Knowledge and Ideas
Analyze the representation of a subject or a key scene in two different artistic mediums,
including what is emphasized or absent in each treatment (e.g., Auden’s “Musée des Beaux
Arts” and Breughel’s Landscape with the Fall of Icarus). A
8. (Not applicable to literature)
9. Analyze how an author draws on and transforms source material in a specific work (e.g.,
how Shakespeare treats a theme or topic from Ovid or the Bible or how a later author
draws on a play by Shakespeare). A
7.
S
FF
A
PV
R
G
=
=
=
=
=
=
The Self Unit
The Self & Family/Friends
The Self & Authority
The Self & Public Values
Sadlier Oxford Vocabulary Program
Write for College “Grammar” Work
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Range of Reading and Level of Text Complexity
10.
By the end of grade 9, read and comprehend literature, including stories, dramas, and
poems, in the grades 9–10 text complexity band proficiently, with scaffolding as needed at
the high end of the range. S, FF, A, PV
English Language Arts Standards » Reading: Informational Text » Grade 9-10
Key Ideas and Details
Cite strong and thorough textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says
explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text. A, PV
2. Determine a central idea of a text and analyze its development over the course of the text,
including how it emerges and is shaped and refined by specific details; provide an objective
summary of the text. S, PV
3. Analyze how the author unfolds an analysis or series of ideas or events, including the order
in which the points are made, how they are introduced and developed, and the connections
that are drawn between them. FF, A
1.
Craft and Structure
Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in a text, including figurative,
connotative, and technical meanings; analyze the cumulative impact of specific word
choices on meaning and tone (e.g., how the language of a court opinion differs from that of
a newspaper). G, R, S, PV
5. Analyze in detail how an author’s ideas or claims are developed and refined by particular
sentences, paragraphs, or larger portions of a text (e.g., a section or chapter). FF, PV
6. Determine an author’s point of view or purpose in a text and analyze how an author uses
rhetoric to advance that point of view or purpose. FF, PV
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 9 August, 2010
4.
S
FF
A
PV
R
G
=
=
=
=
=
=
The Self Unit
The Self & Family/Friends
The Self & Authority
The Self & Public Values
Sadlier Oxford Vocabulary Program
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Integration of Knowledge and Ideas
Analyze various accounts of a subject told in different mediums (e.g., a person’s life story in
both print and multimedia), determining which details are emphasized in each account. A
8. Delineate and evaluate the argument and specific claims in a text, assessing whether the
reasoning is valid and the evidence is relevant and sufficient; identify false statements and
fallacious reasoning. FF, A
9. Analyze seminal U.S. documents of historical and literary significance (e.g., Washington’s
Farewell Address, the Gettysburg Address, Roosevelt’s Four Freedoms speech, King’s “Letter
from Birmingham Jail”), including how they address related themes and concepts. A, PV
7.
Range of Reading and Level of Text Complexity
10.
By the end of grade 9, read and comprehend literary nonfiction in the grades 9–10 text
complexity band proficiently, with scaffolding as needed at the high end of the range. S, FF,
A, PV
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Text Types and Purposes
Write arguments to support claims in an analysis of substantive topics or texts, using valid
reasoning and relevant and sufficient evidence. FF, A, PV
2. Write informative/explanatory texts to examine and convey complex ideas and information
clearly and accurately through the effective selection, organization, and analysis of content.
FF, PV
3. Write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences or events using effective
technique, well-chosen details, and well-structured event sequences. S
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Production and Distribution of Writing
Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style are
appropriate to task, purpose, and audience. S, FF, A, PV
5. Develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying
a new approach. S, FF, A, PV
6. Use technology, including the Internet, to produce and publish writing and to interact and
collaborate with others. A, PV
4.
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Research to Build and Present Knowledge
Conduct short as well as more sustained research projects based on focused questions,
demonstrating understanding of the subject under investigation. A
8. Gather relevant information from multiple print and digital sources, assess the credibility
and accuracy of each source, and integrate the information while avoiding plagiarism. A
9. Draw evidence from literary or informational texts to support analysis, reflection, and
research. A, PV
7.
Range of Writing
10.
Write routinely over extended time frames (time for research, reflection, and revision) and
shorter time frames (a single sitting or a day or two) for a range of tasks, purposes, and
audiences. S, FF, A, PV
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Text Types and Purposes
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1.
Write arguments to support claims in an analysis of substantive topics or texts, using valid
reasoning and relevant and sufficient evidence. S, FF, A, PV
Introduce precise claim(s), distinguish the claim(s) from alternate or opposing claims,
and create an organization that establishes clear relationships among claim(s),
counterclaims, reasons, and evidence. S, FF, A, PV
Develop claim(s) and counterclaims fairly, supplying evidence for each while pointing
out the strengths and limitations of both in a manner that anticipates the audience’s
knowledge level and concerns. S, FF, A, PV
Use words, phrases, and clauses to link the major sections of the text, create cohesion,
and clarify the relationships between claim(s) and reasons, between reasons and
evidence, and between claim(s) and counterclaims. S, FF, A, PV, G
Establish and maintain a formal style and objective tone while attending to the norms
and conventions of the discipline in which they are writing. S, FF, A, PV, G
Provide a concluding statement or section that follows from and supports the argument
presented. S, FF, A, PV
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2.
Write informative/explanatory texts to examine and convey complex ideas, concepts, and
information clearly and accurately through the effective selection, organization, and
analysis of content. S, FF, A, PV
Introduce a topic; organize complex ideas, concepts, and information to make important
connections and distinctions; include formatting (e.g., headings), graphics (e.g., figures,
tables), and multimedia when useful to aiding comprehension. A, PV
Develop the topic with well-chosen, relevant, and sufficient facts, extended definitions,
concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples appropriate to the
audience’s knowledge of the topic. S, FF, A, PV
Use appropriate and varied transitions to link the major sections of the text, create
cohesion, and clarify the relationships among complex ideas and concepts. S, FF, A, PV
Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to manage the complexity of the
topic. R, S, FF, A, PV
Establish and maintain a formal style and objective tone while attending to the norms
and conventions of the discipline in which they are writing. S, FF, A, PV
Provide a concluding statement or section that follows from and supports the
information or explanation presented (e.g., articulating implications or the significance
of the topic). S, FF, A, PV
Text Types and Purposes (continued)
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3.
Write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences or events using effective
technique, well-chosen details, and well-structured event sequences. S, G, R
Engage and orient the reader by setting out a problem, situation, or observation,
establishing one or multiple point(s) of view, and introducing a narrator and/or
characters; create a smooth progression of experiences or events. S, FF, A
Use narrative techniques, such as dialogue, pacing, description, reflection, and multiple
plot lines, to develop experiences, events, and/or characters. S
Use a variety of techniques to sequence events so that they build on one another to
create a coherent whole. S
Use precise words and phrases, telling details, and sensory language to convey a vivid
picture of the experiences, events, setting, and/or characters. S, FF, A, PV
Provide a conclusion that follows from and reflects on what is experienced, observed, or
resolved over the course of the narrative. S
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Production and Distribution of Writing
4. Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style are
appropriate to task, purpose, and audience. (Grade-specific expectations for writing types
are defined in standards 1–3 above.) S, FF
5. Develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying
a new approach, focusing on addressing what is most significant for a specific purpose and
audience. FF, A, PV
6. Use technology, including the Internet, to produce, publish, and update individual or shared
writing products, taking advantage of technology’s capacity to link to other information and
to display information flexibly and dynamically. A
Research to Build and Present Knowledge
Conduct short as well as more sustained research projects to answer a question (including a
self-generated question) or solve a problem; narrow or broaden the inquiry when
appropriate; synthesize multiple sources on the subject, demonstrating understanding of
the subject under investigation. S, A
8. Gather relevant information from multiple authoritative print and digital sources, using
advanced searches effectively; assess the usefulness of each source in answering the
research question; integrate information into the text selectively to maintain the flow of
ideas, avoiding plagiarism and following a standard format for citation. S, A, PV
9. Draw evidence from literary or informational texts to support analysis, reflection, and
research. S, A
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7.
Apply grades 9–10 Reading standards to literature (e.g., “Analyze how an author draws
on and transforms source material in a specific work [e.g., how Shakespeare treats a
theme or topic from Ovid or the Bible or how a later author draws on a play by
Shakespeare]”). A
Apply grades 9–10 Reading standards to literary nonfiction (e.g., “Delineate and
evaluate the argument and specific claims in a text, assessing whether the reasoning is
valid and the evidence is relevant and sufficient; identify false statements and fallacious
reasoning”). A, S
Range of Writing
10.
Write routinely over extended time frames (time for research, reflection, and revision) and
shorter time frames (a single sitting or a day or two) for a range of tasks, purposes, and
audiences. S, FF, A, PV
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English Language Arts Standards » Speaking & Listening » Grade 9-10
Comprehension and Collaboration
1. Initiate and participate effectively in a range of collaborative discussions (one-on-one, in
groups, and teacher-led) with diverse partners on grades 9–10 topics, texts, and issues,
building on others’ ideas and expressing their own clearly and persuasively. S, FF, R
Come to discussions prepared, having read and researched material under study;
explicitly draw on that preparation by referring to evidence from texts and other
research on the topic or issue to stimulate a thoughtful, well-reasoned exchange of
ideas. S, FF, A, PV
Work with peers to set rules for collegial discussions and decision-making (e.g., informal
consensus, taking votes on key issues, presentation of alternate views), clear goals and
deadlines, and individual roles as needed. S, FF
Propel conversations by posing and responding to questions that relate the current
discussion to broader themes or larger ideas; actively incorporate others into the
discussion; and clarify, verify, or challenge ideas and conclusions. S, FF, A, PV
Respond thoughtfully to diverse perspectives, summarize points of agreement and
disagreement, and, when warranted, qualify or justify their own views and
understanding and make new connections in light of the evidence and reasoning
presented. S, FF, A, PV
Integrate multiple sources of information presented in diverse media or formats (e.g.,
visually, quantitatively, orally) evaluating the credibility and accuracy of each source. PV
3. Evaluate a speaker’s point of view, reasoning, and use of evidence and rhetoric, identifying
any fallacious reasoning or exaggerated or distorted evidence. PV
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2.
Presentation of Knowledge and Ideas
Present information, findings, and supporting evidence clearly, concisely, and logically such
that listeners can follow the line of reasoning and the organization, development,
substance, and style are appropriate to purpose, audience, and task. FF
5. Make strategic use of digital media (e.g., textual, graphical, audio, visual, and interactive
elements) in presentations to enhance understanding of findings, reasoning, and evidence
and to add interest. PV
6. Adapt speech to a variety of contexts and tasks, demonstrating command of formal English
when indicated or appropriate. FF, PV, G
4.
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English Language Arts Standards » Language » Grade 9-10
Conventions of Standard English
1.
Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English grammar and usage when
writing or speaking. S, FF, A, PV, R, G
Use parallel structure.* S, FF, A, PV, R, G
Use various types of phrases (noun, verb, adjectival, adverbial, participial, prepositional,
absolute) and clauses (independent, dependent; noun, relative, adverbial) to convey
specific meanings and add variety and interest to writing or presentations. S, FF, A, PV,
R, G
2.
Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English capitalization, punctuation,
and spelling when writing. R, G
Use a semicolon (and perhaps a conjunctive adverb) to link two or more closely related
independent clauses. G
Use a colon to introduce a list or quotation. G
Spell correctly. V, G
Knowledge of Language
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3.
Apply knowledge of language to understand how language functions in different contexts,
to make effective choices for meaning or style, and to comprehend more fully when reading
or listening. S, FF, A, PV, R, G
Write and edit work so that it conforms to the guidelines in a style manual (e.g., MLA
Handbook, Turabian’s Manual for Writers) appropriate for the discipline and writing
type. S, FF, A, PV, G
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Vocabulary Acquisition and Use
4.
Determine or clarify the meaning of unknown and multiple-meaning words and phrases
based on grades 9–10 reading and content, choosing flexibly from a range of strategies. R, G
Use context (e.g., the overall meaning of a sentence, paragraph, or text; a word’s
position or function in a sentence) as a clue to the meaning of a word or phrase. S, FF, A,
PV, R, G
Identify and correctly use patterns of word changes that indicate different meanings or
parts of speech (e.g., analyze, analysis, analytical; advocate, advocacy). R, G
Consult general and specialized reference materials (e.g., dictionaries, glossaries,
thesauruses), both print and digital, to find the pronunciation of a word or determine or
clarify its precise meaning, its part of speech, or its etymology. S, FF, A, PV, R, G
Verify the preliminary determination of the meaning of a word or phrase (e.g., by
checking the inferred meaning in context or in a dictionary). S, FF, A, PV, R
5.
Demonstrate understanding of figurative language, word relationships, and nuances in
word meanings. S, FF, A, PV, R
Interpret figures of speech (e.g., euphemism, oxymoron) in context and analyze their
role in the text. S, FF, A, PV
Analyze nuances in the meaning of words with similar denotations. R
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6.
Acquire and use accurately general academic and domain-specific words and phrases,
sufficient for reading, writing, speaking, and listening at the college and career readiness
level; demonstrate independence in gathering vocabulary knowledge when considering a
word or phrase important to comprehension or expression. S, FF, A, PV, R, G
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Rubrics:
State and 6 Traits
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The following HSPA Open-Ended Scoring Rubric for Reading and the NJ Registered Holistic Scoring
Rubric for Persuasive and Expository Writing can be found at:
New Jersey Department of Education’s NJ Educational Port http://www.nj.gov/education/njpep/
NJASK/HSPA Open-Ended Scoring Rubric: Reading
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Points
Criteria
4
A 4-point response clearly demonstrates understanding of the task,
completes all requirements, and provides an insightful explanation/opinion
that links to or extends aspects of the text.
3
A 3-point response demonstrates an understanding of the task, completes all
requirements, and provides some explanation/opinion using situations or
ideas from the text as support.
2
A 2-point response may address all of the requirements, but demonstrates a
partial understanding of the task, and uses text incorrectly or with limited
success resulting in an inconsistent or flawed explanation.
1
A 1-point response demonstrates minimal understanding of the task, does
not complete the requirements, and provides only a vague reference to or no
use of the text.
0
A 0-point response is irrelevant or off-topic.
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New Jersey Registe red Holistic Sc oring Rubric: Expository and Persuasive Writi ng
Prompt
Score:
Content and
Organization
Communicates
intended
message to
intended
audience
Relates to topic
Opening/closin
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Focused
Logical
progression of
ideas
Transitions
Appropriate
details and
information
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Usage
Tense
formation
Subject/verb
and pronoun
agreement
Word choice/
meaning
Proper
Modifiers
Sentence
Construction
Variety of type,
structure,
length
Correct
construction
Mechanics
Spelling
Capitalization
Punctuation
Inadequate
Command
1
May lack
opening and/
or closing
Minimal
response to
topic; uncertain
focus
Limited
Command
2
May lack
opening and/ or
closing
Attempts to
focus May drift
or shift focus
Partial
Command
3
May lack
opening and/ or
closing
Usually has
single focus
Adequate
Command
4
Generally has
opening and/
or closing
Single focus
Strong
Command
5
Opening and
closing
Superior
Command
6
Opening and
closing
Single focus
Sense of unity
and coherence
Key ideas
developed
No planning
evident;
disorganized
Attempts
organization
Few, if any,
transitions
between ideas
Some lapses or
flaws in
organization
May lack some
transitions
between ideas
Ideas loosely
connected
Transitions
evident
Details random,
inappropriate,
or barely
apparent
Details lack
elaboration,
i.e., highlight
paper
Repetitious
details Several
unelaborated
details
Uneven
development of
details
Logical
progression of
ideas
Moderately
fluent
Attempts
compositional
risks
Details
appropriate and
varied
Single, distinct
focus
Unified and
coherent
Welldeveloped
Logical
progression of
ideas
Fluent,
cohesive
Compositional
risks successful
No apparent
control Severe/
numerous
errors
Numerous
errors
Errors/ patterns
of errors may
be evident
Some errors
that do not
interfere with
meaning
Few errors
Very few, if
any, errors
Assortment of
incomplete
and/ or
incorrect
sentences
Excessive
monotony/
same structure
Numerous
errors
Little variety in
syntax
Some errors
Some variety
Generally
correct
Variety in
syntax
appropriate and
effective
Few errors
Precision
and/or
sophistication
Very few, if
any, errors
Errors so severe
they detract
from meaning
Numerous
serious errors
Patterns of
errors evident
No consistent
pattern of
errors Some
errors that do
not interfere
with meaning
Few errors
Very few, if
any, errors
Details
effective, vivid,
explicit, and/ or
pertinent
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The Six Trait Analytical Writing Rubric developed by the Northwest Regional Educational
Laboratory (NWREL) identifies and evaluates six traits, or characteristics, of effective writing on
a six point scale, with 5 the highest score and 1 the lowest. This rubric is useful to teachers
primarily because it is research-based, provides specific information about student
performance, and can be supported with classroom instructional activities. It is not specific to a
particular mode or genre of writing; it is designed to provide a consistent scoring method based
on recognized characteristics of effective writing common to all genres. The six trait rubric
provides clear and specific expectations for writing. In addition, it provides not only an
effective, consistent measure of student writing, but also a means to improve writing. The Six
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6 Trait Assessment
ORGANIZATION
IDEAS
1
BEGINNING
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Ideas are the heart of the
message, the content of
the piece, the main
theme, with details that
enrich and develop that
theme.
Key question: Did the
writer stay focused and
share original, fresh
information or perspective
about the topic?
Organization is the internal
structure, the thread of the
central meaning, the
logical and sometimes
intriguing pattern of the
ideas.
The paper has no clear sense of purpose or central
theme. The reader must make inferences based on
sketchy or missing details.
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3
4
5
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DEVELOPING
The writer is beginning to define the topic, even though
development is still basic or general.
5
STRONG
The paper is clear and focused. It holds the reader’s
attention. Relevant anecdotes and details enrich the
central theme.
The topic is fairly broad.
The writer is still in search of a topic.
Information is limited or unclear or the length is not
adequate for development.
The idea is a simple restatement or a simple answer
to the question.
The writer has not begun to define the topic.
Everything seems as important as everything else.
The text may be repetitious, disconnected, and
contains too many random thoughts.
The writing lacks a clear sense of direction.
The paper does not have a recognizable
opening/introduction or closing/conclusion.
Connections between ideas are confusing.
Sequencing needs work.
Pacing feels awkward.
Key question: Does the
organizational structure
enhance the ideas and
make it easier to
understand?
SCORE: 1
The topic is narrow and manageable.
Support is attempted.
Ideas are reasonably clear.
Relevant, telling, quality details go beyond the
obvious.
Writer has difficulty going from general observations
to specifics.
Reasonably accurate details
The reader is left with questions.
Writing from knowledge or experience; ideas are
fresh and original.
The writer generally stays on topic.
Reader’s questions are anticipated and answered.
Insightful
The organizational structure is strong enough to move
the reader through the text without too much
confusion.
The paper has a recognizable opening/introduction
and closing/conclusion.
Transitions often work well.
The organizational structure of the paper enhances
and showcases the central idea or theme of the paper.
It includes a satisfying beginning and ending.
An inviting opening/introduction draws the reader in;
a satisfying closing/conclusion leaves the reader with
a sense of closure and resolution.
Thoughtful transitions
No title is present (if requested).
Sequencing shows some logic, yet structure takes
attention away from the content.
Problems with organization make it hard for the
reader to get a grip on the main point or story line.
Pacing is fairly well controlled.
Pacing is well controlled.
A title (if requested) is present.
The title (if requested) is original
Organization sometimes supports the main point or
story line.
Flows so smoothly the reader hardly thinks about it
Sequencing is logical and effective.
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VOICE
SENTENCE FLUENCY
CONVENTIONS
Voice is the unique
perspective of the writer
evident in the piece
through the use of
compelling ideas,
engaging language, and
revealing details.
The writer seems uninvolved with the topic and the
audience.
The writer seems sincere but not fully engaged or
involved. The result is pleasant or even personable,
but not compelling.
The writer of this paper speaks directly to the reader in
a manner that is individual, compelling, engaging, and
shows respect for the audience.
Fails to connect with the audience
Purpose is unclear.
Writing is risk free, with no sense of the writer.
Expository or persuasive writing is mechanical,
showing no engagement with the topic.
Attempt to connect with audience is earnest but
impersonal.
Uses topic, details, and language to strongly
connect with the audience.
Attempts to include content and structure to reflect
purpose.
Purpose is reflected by content and arrangement of
ideas.
Occasionally reveals personal details, but avoids risk.
The writer takes a risk with revealing details.
Expository or persuasive writing lacks consistent
engagement with the topic.
Expository or persuasive reflects understanding and
commitment to topic.
Narrative writing reflects limited individual
perspective.
Narrative writing is honest, personal, and engaging.
Key question: Would you
keep reading this piece if
it were longer?
Narrative writing lacks development of a point of
view.
Sentence fluency is the
rhythm and flow of the
language, the sound of
word patterns, the way in
which the writing plays to
the ear, not just the eye.
The reader has to practice quite a bit in order to give
this paper a fair interpretive reading.
The text hums along with a steady beat, but tends to
be more pleasant or businesslike than musical.
Sentences are choppy, incomplete, rambling, or
awkward. Phrasing does not sound natural.
Sentences get the job done in a routine fashion.
Sentences enhance the meaning.
Sentences are usually constructed correctly.
Sentences vary in length as well as structure.
Purposeful and varied sentence beginnings
Sentences begin the same way.
Sentence beginnings are not ALL alike; some variety
is attempted.
Endless connectives.
The reader sometimes has to hunt for clues.
Does not invite expressive oral reading.
Parts of the text invite expressive oral reading; others
may be stiff, awkward, choppy, or gangly.
Key question: Can you
FEEL the words and
phrases flow together as
you read it aloud?
Conventions are the
mechanical correctness of
the piece; spelling,
grammar and usage,
paragraphing, use of
capitals, and punctuation.
Key question: How much
editing would have to be
done to be ready to share
with an outside source?
No “sentence sense” present.
Errors in spelling, punctuation, capitalization, usage
and grammar and/or paragraphing repeatedly
distract the reader and make text difficult to read.
The writer shows reasonable control over a limited
range of standard writing conventions.
Spelling errors are frequent.
Spelling is usually correct or reasonably phonetic on
common words.
Punctuation is missing or incorrect.
End punctuation is usually correct.
Capitalization is random.
Most words are capitalized correctly.
Errors in grammar or usage are very noticeable.
Problems with grammar and usage are not serious.
Paragraphing is missing.
Paragraphing is attempted.
The reader must read once to decode, then again
for meaning.
Moderate (a little of this, a little of that) editing.
The writing has an easy flow, rhythm and cadence.
Sentences are well built.
Creative and appropriate connectives
The writing has cadence.
The writer demonstrates a good grasp of standard
writing conventions.
Spelling is generally correct.
Punctuation is accurate.
Capitalization skills are present.
Grammar and usage are correct.
Paragraphing tends to be sound.
The writer may manipulate conventions for stylistic
effect – and it works!
 A whole lot? Score 1 or 2
 Some? Score 3
 Very little? Score 4 or 5
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CHOICE
WORD
Word choice is the use of
rich, colorful, precise
language that moves and
enlightens the reader.
Key question: Do the
words and phrases create
vivid pictures and linger in
your mind?
The writing contains a limited use of vocabulary.
The language is functional, even if it lacks much
energy.
Words convey the intended message in a precise,
interesting, and natural way.
Words are nonspecific or distracting.
Many of the words don’t work.
Language is used incorrectly.
Limited vocabulary, misuse of parts of speech
Words and phrases are unimaginative and lifeless.
Jargon or clichés, persistent redundancy
Words are adequate and correct in a general sense.
Words are specific and accurate.
Familiar words and phrases communicate.
Striking words and phrases
Attempts colorful language.
Natural, effective and appropriate language.
Passive verbs, everyday nouns, mundane modifiers
Lively verbs, specific nouns and modifiers
Functional, with one or two fine moments
Language enhances and clarifies meaning.
Occasionally, the words show refinement and
precision.
Precision is obvious.
Tone is appropriate for genre.
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