Picture Book Retelling Step 2 Designed by speech pathologists for teachers and parents. Includes colour storytelling cards which assist early retelling efforts. A Learning Resource for Key Area: Oral Language Retell summaries for over 40 five year old picture books. e l p m Sa Techniques and strategies are outlined when a child provides poor retell of a story. Includes a story retell assessment screen to monitor progress. © . d t L . n Pty o i t a s i rgan PLD O COPYRIGHT INFORMATION 2012 PLD Organisation Pty. Ltd. (Publisher) - www.pld-literacy.org Contributions by Diana Rigg, Lisa Edenburg and Vanessa Van Ballegooyen Illustrated by Deborah Walter Edited by Diana Rigg First Edition 2012 - Picture Book Retelling - Step 2. ISBN 978-1-921560-98-9 This resource is copyright under the Copyright Act, 1968 (Cth). All rights reserved. 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Overview Of Contents Note From The Authors 3 Why Is Oral Language Important? 4 Overview Of Story Telling Development 5 Promote A Speaking And Listening Environment 6 Establish A Full Year Process Of Developing Story Retelling Skills 7 Instructions For Version A Story Retelling Cards And Poster 8 Instructions For Version B Story Retelling Cards And Poster 9 Guidelines For Structuring As A Whole Class Activity 10 Guidelines For Structuring As A Small Group Activity 11 Guidelines For Structuring As An Individual Activity 12 Modelling Story Retelling 13 Supporting Children’s Story Retells 14 Supporting A Student To Retell A Story At An Individual Or Small Group Level 15 Preparation For The Storytelling Program 16 Recommended Books For Five Year Olds 17 e l p m Sa Story Retell Sheets21 . d t L . Pty Story Retell Sheets Section 1: Term 1 - 2 Story retell Examples using ‘next’ as a joining word Story Retell Sheets Section 2: Term 3 - 4 Story retell Examples using ‘first’ ‘second’ ‘third’ and ‘last’ as joining words n o i t a s rgani O D L ©P Integrating The Storybook Retelling Process And The Comprehension Questions Parent Information Sheets 18 - 46 47 - 71 72 73 - 74 Collecting And Analysing Picture Book Retelling Skills 75 A 5 Year Old Story Retelling Screen 76 Appendix 76 Includes the following cards and posters. •Speaking and Listening Posters. •Story Retelling Posters a and b. •Prompt Cards - Sequence cards - when, who, what, where, first event, second event ... ending - Joining Words cards - But, so, because, next, first, second, third, last 2 •Assessment coloured support cards Picture Book Retelling - Step 2 PLD Organisation Pty. Ltd. Contents Why Is Oral Language Important? Narrative Training Develops “Literate Language” Research has repeatedly shown that there is a significant relationship between language skills and overall academic success (Paul, 2001). Oral language proficiency has been associated with later reading achievement, particularly in the area of comprehension (Pullen & Justice, 2003) and studies have shown a longitudinal relationship between oral language development and later reading achievement within typically developing, language delayed and reading delayed groups (e.g. Bishop & Adams, 1990). In general, children who show early difficulties with the development of vocabulary and grammatical skills are more likely to experience literacy problems relative to children acquiring oral language according to expected milestones (Lombardino et al., 1997). e l p m Sa The literature proposes that narratives (i.e. stories and news) function to bridge the transition between oral and literate language styles in cultures, social classes and for individual children (Westby, 1991). Developmentally narratives are the first form of the language that requires a speaker to produce an extended monologue rather than an interactive (i.e. conversational) dialogue. A narrator’s language must be concise, detailed and clear for listeners to follow and according to Westby (1991): “…narratives involve distancing and generalising from reality. A narrative is produced after an experience and consequently is distanced from that experience. Formal literacy is the ultimate of this distancing and generalising because it often involves reflections of experiences common to many people or an entire culture rather than a single experience.” (p. 341) Thus narrative training programs hold the potential to simulate the literate language requirements for literacy and academic success. “Targeting narrative skills during the developing language phase can also build toward emerging literacy and effect preventative intervention. That’s because narrative is highly correlated with success in literacy”. (Paul, 2001) o i t Literate Language a s i n rga Oral Language O D L P © • “Learning to talk” language. . d t L . n Pty • “Talking to learn” language. • Communication in order to meet their immediate needs. • Language use focused upon reflecting, reasoning and planning. • Contextualised language focussed upon something familiar and present. • De-contextualised language focused upon absent and possibly abstract concepts/items. • Informal conversation based language with familiar people and with non-specific language. • Formal, specific, detailed and concise language use (The language of books) Adapted from: Westby, C.E. (1991) “Learning to talk- Talking to Learn: Oral-Literate Language Difference” In C.S.Simon (Ed.) Communication Skills and Classroom Success: assessment and therapy methodologies for language and learning disabled students. Eau Claire. W.I. Thinking Publications. Pages 334-355. References: Bishop, D. M. V. & Adams, M.J. 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(2003) Enhancing phonological awareness, print awareness and oral language skills in preschool children. Intervention in School and Clinic. 39(2), 87-98. Scarborough, H.S. (1990) Very early language deficits in dyslexic children. Child Development. 61, 1728-1743. Snow, C.; Burns, S.; & Griffin, P. (Eds.) (1998) Preventing Literacy Difficulties in Young Children. Washington DC: National Academy Press. Storch, S. & Whitehurst, G. (2002) Oral language and code-related precursors to reading; Evidence from a longitudinal structural study. Developmental Psychology. 38, 934-947. Westby, C. E. (1991) “Learning to Talk – Talking to Learn: Oral-Literate Language Difference” In C. S. Simon (Ed.) Communication and Classroom Success. Assessment and Therapy Methodologies for Language and Learning Disabled Students. Eau Claire, Publications. Whitehurst, G.J. & Lonigan, C.J. (1998) Child development and emergent literacy. Child Development. 69(3), 848-872. 4 Picture Book Retelling - Step 2 PLD Organisation Pty. Ltd. Why Is Oral Language Important? Establish A Full Year Process Of Developing Story Retelling Skills What is the language focus? How often do children rotate through? TERM 1 Term 1 focus on establishing whole class routines to allow children to settle into a new environment. Commencement of Whole Class Activity Repetitive Adult Modelling of Story Retells - Teacher or EA lead the whole class in preparation for story retells commencing. Focus on: •Introduction: When? Who? What? Where? •3 events using ‘next’ as joining words •Use of other joining words as appropriate: ‘but’, ‘because’, ‘so’ •Ending Preparing for Story Retells • Establish classroom routines. • Teach, model and reward good speaking and listening behaviours using the Speak and Listen Poster to support. Story Retells • Model Version A (using next as a joining word) of 5 year old Story Retells once a day. TERM 2 What is the language focus? How often do children rotate through? Continuation of Whole Class Story Retelling Teacher and/or EA lead the whole class in retells of focused books Commencement of Small Group Activity Supported Child Story Retelling. Option1: Teacher or EA leads a small group of 3-4 children while the rest are engaged in alternative activities Option 2: The class is split into 2 groups one lead by the teacher and the other by the EA Focus on: •Introduction: When? Who? What? Where? •3 events using ‘next’ as joining words •Use of other joining words as appropriate: ‘but’, ‘because’, ‘so’ •Ending Story Retells • Teacher continues to model Version A (using first, second, last as joining words) once a day. • Children are scheduled to retell stories (version A - using next as a joining word). Focus books are used for the period of a week or fortnight. TERM 3 What is the language focus? How often do children rotate through? e l p m Sa . d t L . n Pty io t a s i n a g r O LD Continued Adult Modelling and Supported Child Story Retelling. Focus throughout the term on small group work for children who require significant support with retelling stories. Provide two small group retell sessions per week for the focus groups. Focus on: •Introduction: When? Who? What? Where? •3 events using ‘first’, ‘second’, ‘third’ and ‘last’ as joining words. •Use of other connects as appropriate: ‘but’, ‘because’, ‘so’ •Ending ©P TERM 4 Continued Adult Modelling and Supported Child Story Retelling. Focus throughout the term on small group work for children who require significant support with retelling stories. Provide two small group retell sessions per week for the focus groups. Focus on: •Introduction: When? Who? What? Where? •3 events using ‘first’, ‘second’, ‘third’ and ‘last’ as joining words. •Use of other connects as appropriate: ‘but’, ‘because’, ‘so’ •Ending Establish A Full Year Process Of Developing Story Retelling Skills Story Retells • Teacher models Version B using first, second, last as joining words. • Children are scheduled to retell stories (version B - first, second, last as joining words. Focus books are used for the period of a week or fortnight. End of Term 3 • Record and analyse children doing Story retells (see the Appendix: 5 year old story retelling screen). • For children who require additional support schedule opportunities for further small group teaching in Term 4. What is the language focus? How often do children rotate through? Story Retells • For children receiving focused small group attention it is recommended that the Story Retelling screen is again presented late in Term 4. Picture Book Retelling - Step 2 PLD Organisation Pty. Ltd. 7 Instructions For Version A Story Retelling Cards and Poster (These items are found in the appendix.) BEGINNING When? Story Retelling cards are placed in the hoops. Who? What? VERSION A CARD INSTRUCTIONS EVENTS: Repeat for how many events. Where? e l p m a S Optional 1st Event Picture from the picture book is also placed in the hoop. n o i t a s i n a g r Joining word card O D L P © . d t L Pty. Optional 2nd Event Picture from the picture book is also placed in the hoop. Joining word card Optional 3rd Event ENDING 8 These cards can be used to support whole class, small group or individual story retells. • These cards are best used for teaching and assisting students to retell the 5 year old story structure by providing visual cues to prompt the retells. • The cards also enable a component by component analysis and discussion. • The extra joining word cards can be used as appropriate. Picture Book Retelling - Step 2 Picture from the picture book is also placed in the hoop. Joining word card PLD Organisation Pty. Ltd. VERSION A POSTER INSTRUCTIONS Use the poster to assist and model story retells to students. The poster can also act as a quick reference alongside the teaching manual, to the components of a 5 year old story retell. Instructions For Story Retelling Cards And Poster Instructions For Version B Story Retelling Cards and Poster (These items are found in the appendix.) BEGINNING When? Story Retelling cards are placed in the hoops. Who? What? VERSION B CARD INSTRUCTIONS e l p m Sa Where? EVENTS: Repeat for how many events. These cards can be used to support whole class, small group or individual story retells. • These cards are best used for teaching and assisting students to retell the 5 year old story structure by providing visual cues to prompt the retells. • The cards also enable a component by component analysis and discussion. • The extra joining word cards can be used as appropriate. Joining word card Optional 1st Event Picture from the picture book is also placed in the hoop. . d t L . n Pty o i t a s i rgan O D L P © Joining word card Optional 2nd Event Picture from the picture book is also placed in the hoop. Joining word card Optional 3rd Event Picture from the picture book is also placed in the hoop. ENDING Instructions For Story Retelling Cards And Poster Joining word card VERSION B POSTER INSTRUCTIONS Use the poster to assist and model story retells to students. The poster can also act as a quick reference alongside the teaching manual, to the components of a 5 year old story retell. Picture Book Retelling - Step 2 PLD Organisation Pty. Ltd. 9 Supporting Children’s Story Retells Five year olds will require support with story retelling. However if after a period of teaching they appear anxious or produce inadequate information then they may need additional support and repetition to further develop their skills. Children do not have to provide every event in a story when retelling using no pictures as support but it is important to set a target of the introduction, three events and the ending that children are providing as a base to work up from. Examples Of inadequate Story Retells For 5 Year Olds Cow. Goat. Blue car. Fall down. A cow. Pig got umbrella. All wet. Little mouse. Going for a walk. He’s at the beach. Jumps in boat. All fall in. Story is a collection of unrelated ideas with no cohesive links (e.g. ‘then’ or ‘and then’) used to link the story together. Typical of a 2 year old. There is a central character, topic or setting and events are linked together, however story tends to be a basic description of event with no causal or time links. Typical of a 3 year old. e l p m Sa One day the cow, donkey, pig, sheep, mouse went to get in the boat. The cow got in and then the donkey got in. The boat didn’t sink. The pig got in. Then the sheep jump in. The mouse got in and splash. The boat sank. All wet. Stories contain a central character, topic or setting. They may include emerging story structure elements (i.e. initiating event, actions, consequences), but not a resolution. Basic joining words to link ideas may be used (e.g. and, then). Typical of 4 year olds. Examples Of APPROPRIATE Story Retells For 5 Year Olds One day a baby duck won’t come out of the egg. He rolled away and then he stood on his head. Then he hid. Then two goose came. Then he rolled under a sheep. Then they said “don’t come out”. Then they left. The story is a sequence of events which are linked logically or with a cause-effect relationship. The story is related from one part to the next, but not from beginning to end. The child may now use joining words such as “but” and “because”. Typical of 4 ½ year olds. . d t L . n Pty o i t a s i rgan O D L P © A wombat lost his dummy at his house. He looked in the kitchen and in the bathroom. Then he looked in his mum’s pocket. He found it. Stories contain a central character and a logical sequence of events. Stories have a cause and effect or temporal (time) relationship but the plot does not show the attributes or the motivations of the characters. Endings may be abrupt. Typical of 4 ½ - 5 year olds. There was a little girl. She wanted a fish. She went to the pet shop. She got a fish but dropped it on the ground and the bag broke. The girl cried. A man picked up the fish but it was dead. The girl went home and cried. She told her mum. The next day the girl came home and there was a fish in a bowl with a ribbon. The girl was happy. Stories focus around an incident. There is a true plot, character development and logical sequence of events. Stories contain an initiating event, a problem and the problem in the story is resolved at the end. Typical of 5 ½ - 7 year olds. 14 Picture Book Retelling - Step 2 PLD Organisation Pty. Ltd. Supporting Children’s Story Retells Recommended Books For Five Year Olds The Repetitious Story picture books are characterised by: •Introductions generally include the following information: When? Who? What? Where? •Revises simple cohesive ties e.g. and, then but also introduces more complex cohesive ties such as next, first, second, last, but, so and because. •Increases sentence length. •Increase in the complexity of the message being communicated in the story. Picture Books with Text Alexander’s Outing A Lion In The Night Author Pamela Allen Picture Books with Text (continued) Author Snap Damien Harvey Stickybeak Hazel Edwards Julia Donaldson & Alex Scheffler A New House For A Mouse Petr Horacek The Gruffalo Arthur Amanda Graham & Donna Gynel The Gruffalo’s Child Margaret Wild & Jonathon Bentley e l p m Sa A Sausage Went For A Walk Ellisha Majid Baby Brains Simon James Bear Hunt Anthony Browne Bertie And The Bear Pamela Allen Big Smelly Bear Britta Teckentrup Daisy All-Sorts Pamela Allen Elmer The Little Crocked House The Little Mouse, The Red Ripe Strawberry And The Big Hungry Bear The Pig In The Pond Don & Audrey Wood Martin Waddell The Story Of The Little Mole Werner Holzwarth & Wolf Erlbruch David McKee The Very Hungry Caterpiller Eric Carle Pamela Allen Three Goats Gruff And The Grumpy Troll Emily Gale Giggle Giggle Quack Doreen Cronin Tiny’s Big Adventure Ginger Charlotte Voake Where The Wild Things Are Maurice Sendak Giles Andreae & Guy Parker-Rees Who Sank The Boat? Pamela Allen Wolf’s Sunday Dinner Tania Cox & Greg Holfeld You’ll Wake The Baby Catherine Jinks Fancy That Felix Giraffe’s Can’t Dance o i t a s i rgan O D L P © Handa’s Hen Handa’s Surprise . d t L . n Pty Eileen Browne Textless Picture Books Harry The Dirty Dog Gene Zion Moles In Love David Bedford & Rosalind Beardshaw Are You Hungry? Mr Archimede’s Bath Pamela Allen The Snowman Mr Grumpy’s Outing John Burningham Mutt Dog Stephen Michael King My Cat Maisie Pamela Allen Never Mail An Elephant Mike Thaler Night Noises Mem Fox Owl Babies Martin Waddel Possum Magic Mem Fox Rex Ursula Dubosarsky Please Don’t Chat To The Bus Driver Shen Roddie & Jill Newton Rosie’s Walk Pat Hutchins Russell And The Lost Treasure Russell The Sheep Rob Scotton Sebastian Lives In A Hat Thelma Catterwell Shoes From Grandpa Mem Fox Recommended Books For Five Year Olds Fly Little Bird Martin Waddell Author Tina Burke Raymond Briggs Please note at the time of printing information regarding the availability of books is accurate. PLD Learning Resources takes no responsibility for book availability. Picture Book Retelling - Step 2 PLD Organisation Pty. Ltd. 17 Story Retell Sheets Section 1 Term 1 - Term 2 Story retell Examples using ‘next’ as a joining word e l p m Sa The text outlines the language model teachers should provide to students aged 4½ to 5½ years. Students of this age should be able to produce a retell containing the introduction, three events and an ending. © PLD 18 Picture Book Retelling - Step 2 . d t L . n Pty io t a s i n Orga PLD Organisation Pty. Ltd. Story Retell Sheets Story Retelling For ‘A Sausage Went For A Walk’ by Elisha Marjid The text below outlines the language model teachers should provide for students aged between 4½ to 5 ½ years. Students of this age should be able to produce a retell containing the introduction, three events and an ending and with language (ie sentences and vocabulary) similar to that outlined below. When? Who? What? Where? One morning all of the breakfast foods were put out on the table. EVENTS (Joining words are in bold, underlined text.) e l p m a S The sausage didn’t want to be eaten, so he jumped off the plate and ran away. Next the egg didn’t want to be eaten, so it flew off the plate and waved goodbye. n o i t a s i n a g r . d t L Pty. Next the corn flakes didn’t want to be eaten, so they fluttered out the door. O D L P © Next the baked beans didn’t want to be eaten, so they marched away. Next the toast, butter and jam didn’t want to be eaten so they ran away. ENDING (Joining words are in bold, underlined text.) Next Tim came down to breakfast but the food was gone because it had marched out the gate. Story Retell Sheet Picture Book Retelling - Step 2 PLD Organisation Pty. Ltd. 21 Story Retelling For ‘My Cat Maisie’ by Pamela Allen The text below outlines the language model teachers should provide for students aged between 4½ to 5 ½ years. Students of this age should be able to produce a retell containing the introduction, three events and an ending and with language (ie sentences and vocabulary) similar to that outlined below. When? Who? What? Where? Once upon a time there was a little boy called Andrew who didn’t have anyone to play with at home. e l p m Sa EVENTS (Joining words are in bold, underlined text.) One morning there was a scratch at the door and it was a cat so they gave him some milk. Next Andrew played with the cat but the cat didn’t like it and ran away because he was too rough. . d t L . n Pty o i t a s i rgan O D L P © Next Andrew chased the cat over a gate. Next there was a dog who wanted to play with Andrew but Andrew didn’t want to play because he was too rough. Next Andrew ran home. ENDING (Joining words are in bold, underlined text.) Next the cat came back and Andrew stroked her gently. 34 Picture Book Retelling - Step 2 PLD Organisation Pty. Ltd. Story Retell Sheet Story Retell Sheets Section 2 Term 3 - Term 4 Story retell Examples using ‘first’ ‘second’ ‘third’ and ‘last’ as joining words The text outlines the language model teachers should provide to students aged 4½ to 5½ years. Students of this age should be able to produce a retell containing the introduction, three events and an ending. e l p m a S n o i t a s i n a g r O D L P © Story Retell Sheets . d t L Pty. Picture Book Retelling - Step 2 PLD Organisation Pty. Ltd. 47 Story Retelling For ‘Alexander’s Outing’ by Pamela Allen The text below outlines the language model teachers should provide for students aged between 4½ to 5 ½ years. Students of this age should be able to produce a retell containing the introduction, three events and an ending and with language (ie sentences and vocabulary) similar to that outlined below. When? Who? What? Where? One sunny morning Alexander and his family set out for an adventure in Sydney. e l p m a S EVENTS (Joining words are in bold, underlined text.) “Stay close” quacked mother duck but Alexander did not stay close and he fell down a hole. First a man tried to reach Alexander with his long arms but they were not long enough. Second he tried to reach Alexander with an umbrella but it wasn’t long enough. n o i t a s i n a g r . d t L Pty. Third a lady dropped a sandwich down the hole and it hit Alexander on the head. O D L P © Next a policeman tried to reach Alexander with his whistle on a long piece of string but Alexander did not grab the string. Next a boy tipped his drink down the hole. Next all the people tipped cups of water down the hole. Next Alexander floated up to the top and got out of the hole. ENDING (Joining words are in bold, underlined text.) Last Alexander and his family got home safe in time for tea. 48 Picture Book Retelling - Step 2 PLD Organisation Pty. Ltd. Story Retell Sheet Story Retelling For ‘Arthur’ by Amanda Graham and Donna Gyrell The text below outlines the language model teachers should provide for students aged between 4½ to 5 ½ years. Students of this age should be able to produce a retell containing the introduction, three events and an ending and with language (ie sentences and vocabulary) similar to that outlined below. When? Who? What? Where? There once was an ordinary dog called Arthur who lived in Mrs Humbert’s pet shop. EVENTS (Joining words are in bold, underlined text.) e l p m a S First Arthur tried to be a rabbit but no one took him home. Second Arthur tried to be a snake but no one took him home. n o i t a s i n a g r O D L P © . d t L Pty. Third Arthur tried to be a fish but no one took him home. Next Arthur tried to be a mouse, lizard, hamster, bird, cat and frog but no one took him home. ENDING (Joining words are in bold, underlined text.) Last a girl and her Grandad came in looking for a dog and took Arthur home. 50 Picture Book Retelling - Step 2 PLD Organisation Pty. Ltd. Story Retell Sheet
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