Grade 7 - South Orange-Maplewood School District

School District of South Orange-Maplewood
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 7
The School District of
South Orange-Maplewood
August 2010
THE SCHOOL DISTRICT OF SOUTH ORANGE-MAPLEWOOD
BOARD OF EDUCATION MEMBERS
MARK GLEASON, PRESIDENT
ELIZABETH DAUGHERTY, FIRST VICE-PRESIDENT
SANDRA KARRIEM, SECOND VICE-PRESIDENT
LYNNE CRAWFORD, MEMBER
WAYNE EASTMAN, MEMBER
DAVID R. GILES, MEMBER
RICHARD LAINE, MEMBER
JENNIFER PAYNE-PARRISH, MEMBER
ANDREA WREN-HARDIN, MEMBER
ADMINISTRATION
BRIAN OSBORNE, SUPERINTENDENT
ROSETTA WILSON, ASSISTANT SUPERINTENDENT FOR CURRICULUM
GARY PANKIEWICZ, SUPERVISOR, 6-12 ELA
Committee Credits
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 7 August, 2010
English Language Arts (Grades 6-10)
Susan Barry
Mary Brancaccio
Janet Bustrin
Melissa Butler
Solmaz Calone
Carolyn Campbell
Robert Cohen
Jennifer Dalton
Rebecca Donahue
Nicole Dufault
Danielle Elko
Josh Enyeart
Angela Forero
Sara Griffiths
Xenia Harley
Anna Herstatt
Toi Jackson
Beth Johnson
Carolyn Johnson
Vanessa Jones-Harris
Katerina Karis
Eve Kingsbury
Christine Layne
Danielle Levine
Julia Leider
Sue Logeman
Joe Lombardo
Wendy Lovas
Steve MacPherson
Janet Mandel
Lori Martling
Ryan O’Dell
Maureen O’Sullivan
Carly Orpurt
John Pascarella
Robin Patton
Elisa Pianka
John Poglinco
Eugene Pollioni
Rich Saporita
Dan Savarese
Desiree Spriggs
Ulrike Wiede
Thomas Whitaker
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Draft Philosophy:
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The South Orange Maplewood School District believes students should be engaged in literacy
development which is scaffolded from kindergarten through high school graduation. Students will learn
about the power of words through deep and enduring educational experiences that assist them in
understanding and effectively communicating both the written and spoken language. Through a rich
comprehensive curriculum, students will gain the requisite skills to be dynamic communicators with the
ability to integrate components of English Language Arts Literacy in a manner that allows them to
become powerful users, critics, and creators of information as well as integral contributors to a global
community. The South Orange Maplewood School District supports an English Language Arts curricular
program, which is inclusive of ALL learners and maximizes opportunities for each student to:
Experience a wide range of high quality literature
Appreciate literature as an art form in both fiction and nonfiction works
Achieve a high level of skill in interpreting complex materials
Learn the forms and functions of language
Experience and understand cultural and linguistic diversity
Build upon previous knowledge and intuition about language
Integrate language experiences into other disciplines
Use technology and digital literacy for expression and communication
Share their experiences and interact with adults, peers, and younger learners
Utilize a research based process approach to reading and writing
Examine the relationship between literature and composition
We believe English Language Arts Literacy is essential to the development of all children as life-long
learners. English Language Arts Literacy is a conduit for learning across all content areas that equip
students with the skills and knowledge necessary to be effective contributors and active participants of
the 21st century. English Language Arts Literacy, which integrates reading, writing, listening, and
speaking promotes critical thinking and produces effective communicators who use both printed and
digital technology literacy for expression and communication.
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English Language Arts Curriculum
Grade 7
Table of Contents
Overview of the Literature Units of Study……………………………………………………………………… 4
Units of Study and Grade Level Common Assessments…………………………………………………. 6
Reading Instruction……………………………………………………………………………………………………….. 7
Grade 7 Book List………………………………………………………………………………………………………….. 11
Vocabulary/Reading Instruction……………………………………………………………………………………. 13
Writing Instruction………………………………………………………………………………………………………… 16
Writing Matters…………………………………………………………………………………………………. 18
Grade Level Common Assessments……………………………………………………………………………….. 19
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Units of Study………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… 21
Making Responsible Decisions…………………………………………………………………………… 22
Literacy and Power……………………………………………………………………………………………. 31
Fantasy and Science Fiction: Exploring Alternative……………………………………………
37
New Jersey Core Curriculum Content Standards Alignment………………………………………….
47
Writing Matters National Standards Alignment…………………………………………………………….
57
“Grammar” Alignment………………………………………………………………………………………………….
62
Rubrics…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………. 75
Model Lessons………………………………………………………………………………………………………………. 82
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Overview of Literature Units of Study
The South Orange/Maplewood Grade Seven English Language Arts Curriculum includes a
novels-based approach with an eight book minimum. Each of the four thematic units contains
numerous formative and authentic assessments in preparation for a summative student writing
piece. In addition, the Grade Seven ELA experience requires a research project, book-of-choice,
Ray Bradbury author study, and four grade level common assessments (scored with NJASK
rubrics).
The following expectations are consistent in every unit:
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Driving questions- Created to identify the desired results for deep understanding
around thematic inquiries, the driving questions are a critical component of the
“backward design” model for curriculum writing developed by Grant Wiggins and Jay
McTighe (2005). The driving questions are designed to identify the “big ideas” that
students will grapple with during the course of the unit.
6-8 formative assessments/1 published summative writing piece- In the second stage
of “backward design,” it is important to “determine acceptable evidence.” Formative
assessments drive instruction when they provide information for teachers to adjust
teaching and learning. Formative assessments should also provide effective feedback to
students. The published writing piece is used as a summative assessment or overall unit
evaluation. For example, in the “Fantasy and Science Fiction: Exploring Alternative
Societies” thematic unit of study, each student will address the question: “What can we
learn about our own society by reading about alternative societies?” Ultimately,
students will write a persuasive essay (through a process approach to writing) that takes
a stand on an issue raised in Lois Lowry’s The Giver. Students will practice connections
to science fiction and fantasy models in addition to enhancing persuasive writing skills
throughout the marking period. The summative writing piece is a culmination of the
entire unit’s course of study.
Various instructional tasks, activities, and experiences- Core text activities within the
thematic units are aligned to the New Jersey Core Curriculum Content Standards for
Language Arts Literacy. In addition, all classroom endeavors must be relevant to the
driving questions while building student capacity for a successful summative
assessment. At times, teachers should afford students a choice of different reading and
writing opportunities (Many educational experts attest to the connection between
student choice, student engagement, and student success.). Teacher observation of the
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needs of students is essential to informing instructional practices thereby maximizing
student learning opportunities. For example, a teacher may recognize that some groups
of students respond better to a particular prewriting activity and, as a result, use the
strategy more often.
Content and strategy is taught in mini-lessons. The structure of a mini-lesson remains
constant (lasting approximately 10-12 minutes) but the content changes from day to
day. The following steps exemplify the gradual release of responsibility from teacher to
student:
 Mini-lessons begin with a CONNECTION in which teachers tell students what
they will be teaching them and why.
 Next, TEACHERS TEACH students about a kind of writing work either by giving
students information or by helping students gather information about that work.
 After teachers teach, they often have student “HAVE-A-GO” with the work they
taught them- that is, students give the work a brief try.
 Finally, teachers end the mini-lesson by LINKING the student’s independent
writing to the skill or strategy that was just taught.
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The following model uses a mini-lesson to teach the concept of character traits:
http://www.readwritethink.org/lessons/lesson_view.asp?id=175
The grammar emphasis using Write Source textbooks is outlined in a Grammar
Alignment to the New Jersey Core Curriculum Content Standards following the
thematic units. A model grammar mini-lesson can be found at:
http://www.readwritethink.org/lessons/lesson_view.asp?id=260
The model grammar lesson is further supported by the grammar rules, authentic
examples, exercises, and writing prompts in the Write Source text on pages 542748.
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6-8 English Language Arts
Units of Study & Grade Level Common Assessments
Semester One
Grade 6:
Thematic Unit
Published
Writing
Piece
Grade 7:
Thematic Unit
Published
Writing
Piece
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Grade 8:
Thematic Unit
Published
Writing
Piece
Semester Two
Finding My Place
Out of This World
(Science Fiction
and Fantasy)
Courage
Author Study &
Independent Reading
*Personal
Narrative,
NJASK Narrative
Reading Task
Short Story,
NJASK
Informational
Reading Task
Letter,
NJASK Persuasive
Essay
Author Research &
Biography,
NJASK Explanatory
Essay
Making
Responsible
Decisions
Science Fiction
Non-fiction
Literacy & Power
*Narrative Essay,
NJASK Narrative
Reading Task
Persuasive Essay,
NJASK Persuasive
Essay Prompt
Expository Writing,
NJASK Explanatory
Prompt
Poetry Anthology,
NJASK Informational
Reading Task
Historical Fiction
& Independent
Reading
Social Justice
Rebellion
Shakespearean and
Greek Tragedy
Historical
Research &
Historical Fiction,
NJASK Narrative
Reading Task
*Expository
Essay,
NJASK Persuasive
Reading Prompt
Comparison/Contrast
Essay,
NJASK Explanatory
Prompt
Dramatic
Performance Piece,
NJASK Persuasive
Essay Prompt
Each grade level incorporates an author study, book-of-choice, and research component.
NJASK-style Grade Level Common Assessments are italicized. The first NJASK-style Grade Level
Common Assessment is completed in September as a diagnostic assessment. All Grade Level
Common Assessments utilize state rubrics.
*Indicates that the Six Traits Rubric will be used to provide written feedback.
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Reading Instruction
General Instructional Strategy: All English Language Arts teachers have a desk copy of Daniels and
Zemelman’s Subjects Matter, a content-area reading guide that focuses on pre-reading and reading
processing strategies. Subjects Matter is referenced in various core text activities within the thematic
units.
Moreover, two professional books, Mosaic of Thought and Strategies That Work, provide a framework
for what exemplary strategic reading instruction looks like, sounds like, and feels like. Zimmerman,
Keene, Harvey, and Goudvis, the authors of the books (available in the school media centers), examined
the cognitive processes and strategies used commonly by proficient readers. They suggest:
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Proficient readers…
 Search for connections between what they know and the new information they
encounter in the texts they read (schema).
 Continually ask questions of themselves, the authors they encounter, and the texts they
read.
 Draw inferences during and after reading.
 Distinguish important from less important ideas in text.
 Are adept at synthesizing information within and across texts and reading experiences.
 Repair faulty comprehension.
 Monitor the adequacy of their understanding.
 Visualize and create images to better understand what they’ve read.
Teachers facilitate a wide range of interpretations. Ultimately, students take new meaning away from
those conversations. Some questions to help students become “strategic” readers while they are
reading:
What do I think will happen next? How do I know this?
Are my predictions correct so far?
Does this make sense? If not, what should I do?
What can I do to make sure I understand?
What can I do if I don’t understand what I’m reading? What have I learned so far?
What have I found interesting so far?
Is this easy, or hard, to read? Why do I think so?
What strategies will help me understand this kind of reading? Should I look for a plot? What is
the main idea?
Should I ask questions? Should I paraphrase what I’ve read?
What is the author saying directly? What is the author implying?
Can I visualize what has been described?
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Think-Alouds: In the “Think-Aloud” strategy (Daniels and Zemelman), the teacher models
his/her reading proficiency by reading aloud. The teacher, as the guide to proficient reading,
pauses to explain his/her reflection process to students with respect to key concepts and ideas
in reading passages. Moreover, the teacher “Think-Aloud” may serve as a model for a student
“Think-Aloud” in pairs or in a whole-class discussion.
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Read-Alouds: Read-Alouds are the basis of reading exploration in the R.E.V. It Up! Vocabulary
Program. The R.E.V. It Up! Teacher’s Guide provides explicit Read-Aloud instruction in each
reading lesson. “Tips for Reading Aloud” are available in the Teacher’s Guide. Teachers are
encouraged to use the Read Aloud strategies modeled in Beck and McKeown’s vocabulary
program in their core text activities. In short, the Read-Aloud combines oral reading, ThinkAlouds, and follow-up activities.
Discussion (based on texts) : To that end, providing opportunities for extended discussion of
text meaning and interpretation is proven to improve adolescent literacy. A panel of experts,
chaired by Michael L. Kamil from Stanford University through the National Center for Education
Evaluation and Regional Assistance, published a practice guide for “Improving Adolescent
Literacy: Effective Classroom and Intervention Practices” (2008) to facilitate literacy education.
The practice guide is available at:
http://ies.ed.gov/ncee/wwc/pdf/practiceguides/adlit_pg_082608.pdf. “The goal of the practice
guide is to formulate specific and coherent evidence-based recommendations that educators
can use to improve literacy levels among adolescents in upper elementary, middle and high
schools” (page 1). In brief, the practice guide exhibits that adolescent students need to be
more prepared in reading.
At an October 20, 2009 Rutgers Forum sponsored by the New Jersey Department of Education,
Kamil urged educators to preview passages to formulate some framing questions and unpack
the important facts of the text. Framing questions are used to begin and/or extend relevant
discussion.
Page 24 of the practice guide also lists the following discussion protocol:
1. Teachers ask questions that require students to explain their positions and the
reasoning behind them.
2. Teachers model reasoning processes by thinking out loud.
3. Discussion participants propose counter arguments or positions.
4. Discussion participants recognize good reasoning when it occurs.
5. Discussion participants summarize the flow and main ideas of a discussion as it draws to
a close.
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Vocabulary in text: Kamil also provided direction for explicit vocabulary instruction. He asked
teachers to preview reading passages to select the vocabulary terms that are critical to
understanding the text. The importance of the words should also be noted. By scouting out
“target words” and providing rationale for new or troublesome vocabulary, teachers will
provide greater access to the reading material for students.
In turn, as teachers preview core texts, the creation of framing questions and target vocabulary
lists is imperative.
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Shared Reading: Shared reading is another focus of the SOMSD curriculum. Literature circle
opportunities are specified in each thematic unit. Literature Circles: Choice and Voice in the
Student-Centered Classroom by Harvey Daniels (1994) is available in the middle school media
centers. Literature circles are small (4-6 students), student led, temporary discussion groups
comprised of students who have chosen to read the same story, poem, informational text, or
novel. Each group determines the portion of the text that they will read, within the constraints
of the teacher’s timeline. The teacher through mini-lessons explicitly teaches skills and
strategies, which are applied to the students’ independent reading and discussed in circle time.
During literature circle sessions, students may assume various “roles” that guide their reading
(Daniels, 1994). Students meet on a regular basis to discuss agreed-upon sections of the text,
rotating the roles among members of the group. The strategy ends with students presenting
their text to their peers in the large group setting. Traditionally, the literature circle strategy
was applied to fiction. Recently, it has been updated and used with a variety of texts, including
nonfiction. Furthermore, Daniels (2006) has recently advocated for the use of alternate ways to
incorporate the roles into literature circles, but many secondary teachers retain the use of
specified roles as a best practice.
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In Lori Wilfong’s October 29, 2009 article, “Textmasters” in the Journal of Adolescent and Adult
Literacy, she identifies the following literature circle roles:
Discussion Director Your job is to develop a list of questions that your group might want
to discuss about this part of the book. Don’t worry about the small details; your task is
to help people talk about the big ideas in the reading and share their reactions. Usually
the best discussion questions come from your own thoughts, feelings, and concerns as
you read.
Summarizer Your job is to prepare a brief summary of today’s reading. Your group
discussion will start with your 1–2-minute statement that covers the key points, main
highlights, and general idea of today’s reading assignment.
Vocabulary Enricher Your job is to be on the lookout for a few especially important
words in today’s reading. If you find words that are puzzling or unfamiliar, mark them
while you are reading and then later jot down their definition, either from a dictionary
or from some other source.
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Webmaster Your job is to take all the information that you have read and make a
graphic organizer to show your understanding. Use keywords, phrases, and examples
from your reading to make your organizer. You can use any type of graphic organizer
you would like—e.g., web, pyramid, chart.
Wilfong proposes 20 minutes of silent reading within the group, 20 minutes of sharing roles and
group work on the culminating activity, and 10 minutes on a self-reflection. Although a
literature circle should be more ambitious, this is a good basis for planning a literature circle
within the allotted 50 minute class period. Wilfong’s article is available in the middle school
media centers.
Independent Reading: The English Department administers Scholastic’s SRI assessment to
assess for a student’s Lexile Reading Level. This helps to inform instruction and determine
recommendations for independent reading at an appropriate reading level. Moreover, the SRI
assessment helps to identify struggling readers who may require the READ 180 Reading
Intervention Program offered to students in the district in Grades 7, 8, and 9.
More information on the SRI assessment is available at:
http://teacher.scholastic.com/products/fundingconnection/programs_services/pdfs/2009_PO_
SRI.pdf
More information on the READ 180 Program is available at:
http://teacher.scholastic.com/products/read180/
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Grade 7 Book List
Students will read a minimum of eight books in Grade 7. In addition to the books on this list, students
may read different books (approved by their teacher) independently or in literature circles.
All students are required to read the following two Grade 7 books:
The Giver by Lois Lowry
We Beat the Street by Sampson Davis, Rameck Hunt, and George Jenkins
Contemporary Autobiography
The Adventures of Tom Sawyer
Baseball in April Short Story Anthology
The Bumblebee Flies Anyway
Clover
Social context of Southern life and race relations in the 1980s
The Ear, the Eye, and the Arm
Authentic African tribal folklore
Freak the Mighty
Gathering Blue
Golden Compass
Heat
760L
860L
830L
830L
850L
820L
660L
1000L
680L
930L
940L
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Little League baseball in the proximity of Yankee Stadium
Hoot
The Illustrated Man (a compilation of 18 Ray Bradbury short stories)
Long Way from Chicago
Chicago 1929-1942
Messenger
Nightjohn
Salvery in the 1850s
Pacific Crossing
Text contains italicized words in Spanish and Japanese defined in a glossary
The Adventures of Tom Sawyer
Baseball in April Short Story Anthology
The Bumblebee Flies Anyway
Road to Memphis
Pearl Harbor and World War II
Sarny
Post Civil War and the abolishment of slavery
760L
680L
750L
720L
770L
750L
830L
830L
850L
670L
840L
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Pakistan Social context of modern
So Far from the Bamboo Groove
True account of a Japanese family’s escape from Korea near the end of World War II
Something Strange Short Story Anthology
Taking Sides
Basketball references
Tangerine
A Time for Andrew
20,000 Leagues Under the Sea
Marine ecology
Walkabout
Where the Red Fern Grows
N/A
750L
680L
710L
850L
800L
700L
*Bullets denote a non-fiction connection.
**Lexile Reading Measure
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**A Lexile reading score links a reader’s ability to a text’s difficulty level. More information on The Lexile
Framework for Reading is available at: http://www.lexile.com.
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Vocabulary/Reading Instruction
The Robust Encounters with Vocabulary Program (R.E.V. It Up!)
Authors: Dr. Isabel L. Beck and Dr. Margaret G. McKeown, leading reading and vocabulary experts
All students will complete a minimum of two systematic and interactive units of R.E.V.It Up!
Robust Encounters with Vocabulary Instruction each marking period.
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R.E.V. It Up! is a research-based program that teaches vocabulary as direct preparation for
enhanced achievement in reading and writing. All students should receive their own student
copy of the text at the appropriate grade level (Course 2 for Grade 7). Teachers are responsible
for carrying out a minimum of two vocabulary units each marking period with the support of
the R.E.V. It Up! Teacher’s Guide. There is also a companion web site at:
http://steckvaughn.hmhco.com/en/revitup_home.htm. R.E.V. It Up! is a 10-minute-a-day
program that provides systematic vocabulary instruction that reaches all students through
multiple encounters and multiple contexts. It also focuses on nonfiction texts.
Each new vocabulary unit begins with a “Read Aloud.” To that end, teachers read high-quality
literature aloud as students follow along in their books. Student understanding is supported
through carefully-constructed discussion questions on the literary texts. Although the
Teacher’s Guide provides explicit lesson plan instruction in each lesson, it is helpful to review
the “Tips for Reading Aloud” (in the Teacher’s Guide) to provide an enjoyable reading
experience for students while providing a valuable tool for learning.
Read Aloud Tips:
Practice reading ahead of time.
Introduce the selection.
Build background knowledge.
Have students connect with the selection.
Read expressively.
Read slowly and clearly.
Pace your reading.
Ask questions.
Enjoy yourself!
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The Teacher’s Guide also explains that Read-Alouds are helpful for English Language Learners.
In particular, additional tips are listed and explained in the Teacher’s Guide for a successful ELL
experience:
Build background knowledge.
Read expressively.
Have students follow along.
Have students illustrate or act out the stories.
Use graphic organizers.
After each Read-Aloud lesson, the Teacher’s Guide provides lesson work in an engaging and
authentic way to introduce and explore target vocabulary.
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Concept cards are provided to each teacher to provide students with a visual anchor for each
word. On each concept card, there is a depiction of the word on the front. On the back, each
word is explained and used in a sentence. There are also lists of synonyms and antonyms. The
Teacher’s Guide explains “Fun Ways to Use Concept Cards”:
Story Starters
Story Add-Ons
Categorize Words
Comparing and Contrasting
Matching Games
Pantomimed Games
Word Riddles
Writing Station
Various lessons are provided to deepen understanding through multiple exposures to words in
multiple contexts. The vocabulary words represent concepts that are common in science and
social studies programs, too. When using the high-interest readings, the Teacher’s Guide
explains the following Tips for English Language Learners and Struggling Readers:
Before reading, discuss the topics and themes provided in the readings. Ask questions
to elicit personal connections and provide background information for difficult or
culturally specific concepts.
Have student groups read and discuss selections together to spark conversation that will
help them to develop ideas for their writing.
Pair or group English language learners with native English speakers (page T34).
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Lastly, the Teacher’s Guide provides multiple assessment tools to inform instruction and
measure progress. In addition to written assessments, lesson assessments, and cumulative
assessments, students should be encouraged to use their new vocabulary words in their
summative writing assessment at the end of each marking period.
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Writing Instruction
All major writing assignments include a process approach to writing with respect to the Six
Traits of Writing and Writing Workshop.
The stages of process-based writing include:
 prewriting
 drafting
 sharing
 revising
 editing
 proofreading
 publishing
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The Write Source Text and Write Source Supplemental Teacher Resources Kit provide explicit
instructional lesson work and strategy for teaching the writing process using the Six Traits of
Writing. All students have desk copies of student copies of Write Source. Teachers are supplied
with a Write Source Daily Language Workout Book, a Write Source SkillsBook (for student
editing and proofreading practice handouts), and Write Source overhead transparenciesbenchmark papers and assessment sheets.
The six traits of writing include:
 ideas
 organization
 voice
 word choice
 sentence fluency
 conventions
Sheryl Lain’s Six Traits Resource Handbook delineates Six Traits work explicitly. It is available in
each middle school’s media center. The resource handbook is referenced in various core text
activities within the thematic units. The ELA supervisor received exclusive permission to share
the resource handbook with SOMSD teachers by the author.
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Adapted/edited from the North West Regional Education Laboratory, SOMSD created some
Question and Answer explanation of the 6+ 1 Analytical Traits of Writing:
Q: What’s the best thing about the traits?
A: It’s the language, the shared vocabulary that adds such a rich component to our teaching
and assessing of student writing. The traits give us all a common language for talking about and
celebrating writing.
Q: Which trait should I teach first?
A: We think it makes sense to begin with Ideas. After all, this is the foundational trait. Your
idea is your whole reason for writing. All other traits flow out of, and are influenced by, this
one. But with that said, remember we are teaching writing, not the traits.
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Q: Is there ever a time all six traits come together in students’ revision?
A: Yes. Absolutely. They must. The division of the traits in order to do focused revisionworking on one trait at a time- is artificial, we admit. But it’s a way of making revision
manageable for students, who often do not know where to begin. Writing process steps aren’t
really separate either. Prewriting, drafting, revision, and editing aren’t really mutually
exclusive; we separate them to make the writing process easier to understand and put into
practice. Similarly, real writers do think about organization and ideas at the same time; when
they revise ideas, the voice also improves; when they alter the wording, the change affects
fluency, and so on.
Q: Do I have to assess all six traits for each piece of student writing?
A: No! You do what makes sense for the assignment given to students. For example, you
might be working on ideas, voice, and conventions for a period of time and only want to have
students focus on those traits. Or perhaps you will want to take it even more slowly and work
on one revision and one editing trait at a time. Remember that we have grouped ideas,
organization, and voice for the revising process, and sentence fluency, word choice, and
conventions for the editing process. The beauty of an analytic system is you can take the pieces
apart, examine them, and then insert them back into the larger picture.
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Writing Matters Unit Plan
Grade 7 teachers will facilitate a non-fiction reading and writing unit for one full marking
period. This unit plan will be based upon Writing Matters, a research-based program
presented by Teaching Matters. The unit plan is founded on the principles of Heather
Lattimer’s Thinking Through Genre (2003) and provides a pacing guide for research-driven
lesson work with masterful opportunities for differentiation instruction and the integration of
technological resources (such as engaging PowerPoint animations, plentiful online databases of
nonfiction texts, and personalized online student portfolios that may be accessed by teachers).
During the summer of 2010, Grade 7 teachers attended two days of professional development
at a New York City location with Writing Matters consultants. Moreover, Grade 7 teachers will
receive ongoing professional development and in-class coaching with Writing Matters
consultants throughout the school year to support and facilitate the Writing Matters unit plan.
Each Grade 7 teacher has a Writing Matters Teacher’s Edition for the Writing Matters
Curriculum.
The district has added an MLA Works Cited page to the feature article product. This additional
facet enhances a working knowledge of the MLA research process in Grade 7 for all students.
The unit is described in more detail at http://www.teachingmatters.org/files/wm_unitoverviews.pdf.
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The Feature Writing Unit Objectives (as described in the link above) are:
Student writers will:
• Write a feature article that goes “in depth” by addressing a focused topic
accompanied by a unique angle.
• Apply a variety of craft strategies and structures to bring out the article’s
meaning and grab the attention of readers.
• Effectively execute several steps of the writing process using technology –
drafting, revising, editing and publishing their work.
• Acquire writing strategies that can be generalized across the genres.
More information about the program may be found at http://www.teachingmatters.org/writingmatters.
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Grade Level Common Assessments
Grade Level Common Assessments have been created for all students in Grades 6-10. These
are teacher-generated tests that assess the New Jersey Core Curriculum Content Standards,
mirror NJASK/HSPA tasks, and utilize grade level content. Assessments were created and
revised in grade level teams. There are two reading tasks (one narrative and one
persuasive/non-fiction) and two essay prompts (one persuasive essay and one expository).
Tasks are given within the first 3 weeks of each marking period.
Teacher Expectations for effective implementation of Grade Level Common Assessments:
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 7 August, 2010
A mini-lesson that explicitly explores the state rubric to preview each grade level
common assessment task
Storage of all tasks in Individual student folders provided by the department supervisor
Specific feedback to students in addition to the holistic score. In particular, students
should receive some praise, suggestion(s) for improvement, and an indication of
proofing errors.
Facilitation of a reflection sheet that acts as a cover page to the assessments kept in the
folder
Folders kept in a visible place in the classroom for review by the supervisor and/or
principal (usually at the beginning of each marking period)
Specific review of grade level common assessment tasks the week before the NJASK
(with a special emphasis placed on “Advance Proficient” skills: textual connections in
open-ended questions and compositional risks in essay work)
The Grade Level Common Assessment Folder becomes a portfolio when students have an
opportunity to include additional classroom projects and processed writing pieces in their
folders/portfolios. To that end, students will complete the reflection sheet with respect to their
selected works for their portfolio. Students are provided with an opportunity to include, at
least, two pieces of writing in their Grade Level Common Assessment folders/portfolios.
Folders are collected and monitored by the department supervisor and/or building principal at
the end of the year (to be passed to next year’s English teacher).
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Teacher Feedback to Student Writing
In addition to using the Six Traits and state assessment rubrics, teachers are responsible for
more specific written feedback to student writing. In the words of Ralph Fletcher, an expert in
Writing Workshop and author of Craft Lessons (2007), teachers should provide a “glow” and a
“grow” to students as feedback during a writing conference or in written feedback. In other
words, in addition to specific marginal notes, students will receive some praise in addition to
some suggestions for improvement in their processed writing pieces. John Bean’s “Writing
Comments on Students’ Papers” in Engaging Ideas (1996) was reviewed with staff as a basis for
effective feedback strategy. The article is available in the school media centers for review.
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 7 August, 2010
In an effort to support a partnership with parents/guardians to support student writing, one
processed writing piece (at a minimum) will be sent home for a parent/guardian signature each
marking period.
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Grade 7
Units of Study
Making Responsible Decisions
Literacy and Power
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 7 August, 2010
Exploring Alternative Societies
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District of South Orange and Maplewood
English Language Arts Curriculum- Grade 7
Thematic Unit of Study: Making Responsible Decisions
Thematic Overview:
Driving Questions:
In this unit, students explore how all people
encounter obstacles in their lives and how the
decisions we make to address these challenges
influence our futures. Some students will also
participate in an author study on Gary Soto (other
students will complete their author study in the
“Literacy and Power” unit.
1. Who is responsible for your future?
2. How do the decisions you make
today shape your future?
3. How do your interactions with other
people shape your life and theirs?
4. What strategies do people use to
make informed decisions?
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 7 August, 2010
This unit introduces the following concepts/values:
Responsibility
Decision-making
Interdependence
This unit also introduces the following skills:
Reader response writing
*Focus Reading Strategy:
“Anticipation Guide” strategy (Daniels
and Zemelman 108-109). The activity
entails brief sets of teacher-driven
questions that help students to enter a
text while thinking about prior
knowledge and important issues that
will surface in the reading.
Analysis of different types of conflict
Compositional risks in narrative and
descriptive writing
Materials:
Core readings:
Guaranteed Novel: We Beat the Street by Rameck Hunt, Sampson Davis, and George Jenkins
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Additional Core readings:
Freak the Mighty by Rodman Philbrick
Tangerine by Edward Bloor
Hoot by Carl Hiaasen
Heat by Mike Lupica
Taking Sides by Gary Soto
Pacific Crossing by Gary Soto
A Fire in My Hands, a book of poetry, by Gary Soto
Island of the Blue Dolphins by Scott O’Dell
Twelve Angry Men by Reginald Rose
“"Rumpelstiltskin” by the Brothers Grimm
The Ear, the Eye, the Arm by Nancy Farmer
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 7 August, 2010
Picture Books:
Where the Wild Things Are by Maurice Sendak
Golem by David Wisniewski
The Giving Tree by Shel Silverstein
Literature Circles:
Independent Reading/Research:
“The Party” by Pam Munoz Ryan
Book-of-choice
“Starr” by Angela Johnson
“Navigating the Straight and Narrow” by Terry
McLaughlin
“A Boy and His Dog” by Martha Brooks
Gary Soto’s Baseball in April short stories
“Second Chance” by John Triska from Teaching
Powerful Writing
“My Hero” by Bob Sizoo from Teaching
Powerful Writing
“The Sneeches” by Dr. Seuss
“Rikki-Tikki-Tavi” by Rudyard Kipling
Selections from No Easy Answers: Short Stories
about Teenagers Making Tough Choices,
edited by Donald R. Gallo
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Teacher Resources:
Burke, Jim, ed. Tools for Thought. Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann, 2002. Graphic organizers
provided for classroom use (available in the school library).
Daniels, Harvey, and Steven Zemelman. Subjects Matter: Every Teacher's Guide to ContentArea Reading. Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann, 2004. Provides a process approach to reading(All language arts teachers should retain a desk copy.).
Kemper, Dave, Patrick Sebranek, and Verne Meyer, eds. Write Source Grade 7. New York: Houghton
Mifflin Harcourt, 2009. A text that builds writing skills. A companion web site is available
at: http://www.thewritesource.com/books/textbooks/write_source_7/
(All students and teachers have a desk copy of this grade level writing text.)
Lain, Sheryl, ed. Strengthen Your Students' Writing Using the Six Traits (Grades 6-12). Bellevue,
WA: Bureau of Education & Research, 2008. A resource handbook for Six Traits Writing
Workshop activities (available in the school library).
ReadWriteThink Lesson Plan Index. National Council Teachers of English and International
Reading Association. 7 May 2009 http://www.readwritethink.org/lessons/index.asp.
Grade level appropriate lessons linked to national standards.
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 7 August, 2010
Audio-Visual:
Audio books
“The Mighty” video for Freak the Mighty
Teaching Powerful Writing by Bob Sizoo
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DELINEATION OF UNIT OBJECTIVES FOR LESSON WORK
Unit: Making Responsible Decisions
Student Objectives
NJCCCS
(Students will be able
Core Text Activities
to…)
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 7 August, 2010
3.1.G.5
Analyze ideas and
recurring themes
found in texts, such
as bravery, loyalty,
friendship, and
loneliness.
Identify and analyze
themes across
literary works.
Theme Introduction Activities:
Facilitate the use of a Dependency Web: Students web important
people in their lives upon whom they depend to make responsible
choices. They do the same looking back at their lives in elementary
school. Then, they use a Venn diagram to compare and contrast
these important people in their elementary and middle school lives.
Model the use of a Responsibility Web: (this is similar to the
previous activity, but focuses on the people who depend on the
student, rather than the people upon whom the student depends.)
Students web the people who depend on them to make responsible
choices. They also do this retrospectively thinking about a year of
elementary school. Then, they use a Venn diagram to compare and
contrast their dependents in their elementary and middle school
lives.
Create and introduce an “Anticipation Guide” for a shared text.
Students use the questions to activate their prior knowledge of
subjects and themes addressed in the reading. As a follow-up,
students may develop an anticipation guide for a book-of-choice that
fellow or future students might use to help them make book choices.
Repeated reflection on driving questions with each new text. These
reflections may be recorded in reading response journals so that both
teacher and student can see how these understandings develop in the
course of the unit.
3.1.G.10 Respond critically
Foster a Reading Response using various reading strategies:
to text ideas and
o Save the Last Word for Me (Daniels and Zemelman 133)
author’s craft by
o Bookmarks (Daniels and Zemelman 116)
using textual
o Post-It Responses (Daniels and Zemelman 114)
evidence to support
o Coding Text (Daniels and Zemelman 115)
interpretations.
o Literature Circles/Book Clubs (Daniels and Zemelman 199-215)
3.1.G.7 Locate and analyze
Literature Circle Roles (Burke 140-141, 149-155)
the elements of
Instruct students to complete a chart giving textual evidence to support
setting,
the types of conflict person vs. person, person vs. self, person vs. society,
characterization, and
person vs. nature or environment, and person vs. fate or destiny.
plot to construct
understanding of
how characters
influence the
progression and
resolution of the
plot
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3.5.B.5
3.5.A.3
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 7 August, 2010
3.1.H.5
3.2.A.1
Compare and
contrast media
sources, such as the
film and book
versions of a story.
Analyze and
respond to visual
and print messages
(e.g., setting, plot,
theme, characters)
to understand
media
presentations, such
as film, video,
television, and
theatrical
productions.
Read and compare
at least two works,
including books,
related to the same
genre, topic, or
subject and
produce evidence
of reading (ie.,
compare central
ideas, characters,
themes, plots,
settings.)
Play an excerpt from the video “The Mighty” in a compare and contrast
activity with the written text.
“Reading and Writing Workshop: Freak the Mighty” novel study
http://www.readwritethink.org/lessons/lesson_view.asp?id=41
Write stories or
scripts with welldeveloped
characters, setting,
dialogue, clear
conflict and
resolution, and
sufficient
descriptive detail.
Prompt students to write a one-act, 8-18 scene drama related to any of
the themes of Twelve Angry Men.
Prompt students to write a 10-minute play adaption of a text read in
class: http://www.readwritethink.org/lessons/lesson_view.asp?id=1118
Resources for either assignment
o Craft Lessons p. 65 - Creating a Dramatic Scene (with a bit of
adaptation)
o Craft Lessons p. 112 - Slowing Down the Hot Spot
o Craft Lessons p. 105 - Describing a Character through Gesture
o http://www.readwritethink.org/materials/dramamap/ - this
drama map is intended for analysis drama but could also be used
to plan an original drama
Guide students to write a compare/contrast paragraph comparing a
major character to themselves.
o Students maintain a character tracker for main characters. See
“Who’s Who? The Character Directory” graphic organizer (Burke
166).
o Students identify character traits of major characters and give
supporting textual evidence using the “Post-It Response Notes”
strategy (Daniels and Zemelman 114-115).
Facilitate a compare/contrast essay about a single theme as explored in
two or more works.
o Write Source:
Compare-Contrast Paragraph
p. 157-160
Compare-Contrast Essay
p. 161-198
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English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 7 August, 2010
3.1.G.1
Speculate about
text by generating
literal and
inferential
questions.
3.1.G.6
Develop an
awareness of a
variety of
perspectives on a
single event,
setting, character,
personality, or topic
as expressed by
different authors.
3.1.G.11 Identify and analyze
literary techniques
and elements, such
as figurative
language, meter,
rhetorical and
stylistic features of
text.
3.1.G.13 Identify and
understand the
author’s use of
idioms, analogies,
metaphors, and
similes in prose and
poetry.
3.2.B.2
Write various types
of prose, such as
short stories,
biographies,
autobiographies, or
memoirs that
contain narrative
elements.
Instruct readers to stop at suspenseful points in texts, when a character
has to make a major decision. Direct students to speculate about
possible choices and consequences, recording their thoughts on a
“Decision Tree” (Burke 143).
Predict/Support -- Confirm/Adjust Activity from “Reading and Writing
Workshop: Freak the Mighty” lessons included at end of seventh grade
curriculum.
Utilize the It Says/ I Say activity for making inferences (Daniels and
Zemelman 122)
Instruct students to maintain a character tracker for main characters:
See “Who’s Who? The Character Directory” graphic organizer
(Burke 166).
Identify character traits of major characters and give supporting
textual evidence using the “Post-It Response Notes” strategy
(Daniels and Zemelman 114-115).
Compare and contrast similar characters from two different texts
using a Venn diagram (Burke 176).
Compare work from peers in response to the Literature Circle role of
Illuminator (Burke 149-155) as a springboard for discussion of
multiple perspectives.
Conversational Roundtable (Burke 142)
Hyperbole/Metaphor Activity from “Reading and Writing Workshop:
Freak the Mighty” lessons included at end of seventh grade curriculum.
Writing Mini-Lesson: “Using Surprising Imagery” (Craft Lessons p. 98)
Foster a use of Double-Entry Journals (Daniels and Zemelman 118). In
first column, readers identify literary techniques and elements. In the
second column, they record what the author achieved by using them.
Prompt students to write a narrative essay exploring individual
perspectives on a single event.
o For lesson plans on exploring family memories, see
http://www.readwritethink.org/lessons/lesson_view.asp?id=805
o Additional information for mini-lessons from Write Source
Narrative Paragraph
P. 94
Details
p. 103, 105, 114, 115
Sequencing
p. 104
Adding dialogue
p. 106, 126
(continued on page 28)
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o
3.2.D.13 Develop the use of
a personal style and
voice effectively to
support the
purpose and
engage the
audience of a piece
of writing
Utilize the Writing Connection: Voice from “Reading and Writing
Workshop: Freak the Mighty” lessons included at end of seventh grade
curriculum.
Writing Through a Mask (Craft Lessons 116)
Beware Formulaic Writing (Craft Lessons 123)
Selecting Livelier Adjectives (Craft Lessons 120)
Revising a narrative for voice (Write Source, pp. 118-119)
3.2.C.1
Use Standard
English conventions
in all writing, such
as sentence
structure, grammar
and usage,
punctuation,
capitalization, and
spelling.
Edit writing for
correct grammar,
usage,
capitalization,
punctuation, and
spelling
Have students identify their own weaknesses regarding conventions and
develop personal proofreading checklists. Students can use the Write
Source Proofreader’s Guide (pp. 579- 749) as a reference - focus on one
area at a time.
See Lain p. 193-212 and Write Source for specific mini-lessons to use in
response to student areas of need.
Analyze ideas and
recurring themes
found in texts, such
as bravery, loyalty,
friendship, and
loneliness.
Direct students to read a newspaper article summarizing the key events
from We Beat the Streets, the guaranteed core novel. Brainstorm: What
makes this story different from other stories studied in school?
Facilitate a pair-share on positive role models. Come to a class
consensus on the top three positive role models in student’s life.
Repeated reflection on driving questions with each new text. These
reflections may be recorded in reading response journals so that both
teacher and student can see how these understandings develop in the
course of the unit.
3.2.C.6
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 7 August, 2010
Additional mini-lessons from Craft Lessons:
 Describing a Character
p. 102-103
 Using Interior Monologue
p. 107
 Adding Setting to a Story
p. 109
 Deciding Where to Begin
p. 94
3.1.A.5
3.1.G.12 Identify and analyze
recurring themes
across literary
works.
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3.1.G.8
3.1.G.14
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 7 August, 2010
3.2.D.8
Read critically by
identifying,
analyzing, and
applying knowledge
of the purpose,
structure, and
elements of
nonfiction and
providing support
from the text as
evidence of
understanding.
“Reporter’s Notes” graphic organizer to assist with non-fiction
comprehension (Burke 161).
Facilitate a comparison/contrast of the life of one character
from We Beat the Streets to the life of one character from
another text read in the unit.
Use Conversational Roundtable (Burke 142) to explore
multiple perspectives on a topic addressed in multiple texts.
Compare and
contrast the
perspectives of
authors in a variety
of interdisciplinary
works.
Explore the central
idea or theme of an
informational
reading and
support analysis
with details from
the article and
personal
experiences.
Short Term Projects:
Text-connection based journal
Learning style reflection
Comparison/Contrast essay
Critique The Mighty film text.
Research careers that contribute to
responsible decision-making.
Write a one act, 8-18 scene drama
related to any the themes of Twelve
Angry Men
Summative Published Writing:
Narrative Essay
Topics include those discussed in the
“Driving Questions” for the unit.
All narratives must utilize a process
approach to writing.
The Six Traits writing rubric will be
used to generate teacher feedback and
score essay requirements.
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English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 7 August, 2010
Formative Assessments
Informal daily observations
Grammar Alignment Write Source mini-lessons
Anecdotal notes (literature circles)
Vocabulary quizzes
Reading checks
Homework
Small group presentations
Journal writing
Unit quizzes and tests
Culminating projects
Writing conferences
Open-ended scoring rubric (reader responses)
Holistic scoring writing rubric
Six Traits writing rubric
Speaking Rubric
Oral Presentation-Dramatization
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District of South Orange and Maplewood
English Language Arts Curriculum- Grade 7
Thematic Unit of Study: Literacy and Power
Thematic Overview:
Driving Questions:
In this unit, students read literature that
focuses on the importance of learning, be it
through educational studies or self-discovery.
The lessons learned by characters in this unit
give them a sense of empowerment, courage,
and strength. Students will also produce a
narrative writing piece as part of this unit of
study.
1. What constitutes something as a “learning
experience?”
2. How can one gain a sense of empowerment,
courage, and strength in a troublesome
environment?
3. What are the qualities of a positive role
model?
4. How does a person undergo a change in
attitude that makes a fundamental difference
in the outcome of his/her life?
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 7 August, 2010
This unit also introduces the following
concepts/values:
Empowerment
Inner Strength
Resilience
Personal Growth
This unit also introduces the following skills:
Writing with purpose
Voice and tone
Personal style
Word choice
*Focus Reading Strategy: “Written
Conversation” strategy (Daniels and
Zemelman 130-131). After reading a
selection, pairs of students write short notes
back and forth about the experience.
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Materials:
Core readings:
Sarny by Gary Paulsen
Nightjohn by Gary Paulsen
A Long Way From Chicago by Richard Peck
Where the Red Fern Grows by Wilson Rawls
Tom Sawyer by Mark Twain
Shabanu by Suzanne Fisher Staple
Homecoming by Cynthia Voigt
Road to Memphis by Mildred Taylor
So Far From the Bamboo Grove by Yoko Kawashima Watkins
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 7 August, 2010
Short Stories:
“The Metamorphosis of Justin Jones” by Bruce Coville
“The Japanese Mirror” by Bruce Coville
“Second Chance” by John Triska from Teaching Powerful Writing
“My Hero” by John Triska from Teaching Powerful Writing
Literature Circles:
Independent Reading/Research:
“An Education” by Marie G. Lee from But
that’s another story, edited by Sandy Asher
“The Good Deed” by Marion Dane Bauer from
Shelf Life, Stories by the Book, edited by Gary
Paulson
“Dr. Holiday” and other selected stores from
Bad Boy, a memoir by Walter Dean Myers
“Teenage Wasteland” by Anne Tyler from
Coming of Age by Cruce Emra
See Core reading above.
Teacher Resources:
Burke, Jim, ed. Tools for Thought. Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann, 2002. Graphic organizers
provided for classroom use (available in the school library).
Daniels, Harvey, and Steven Zemelman. Subjects Matter: Every Teacher's Guide to ContentArea Reading. Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann, 2004. Provides a process approach to reading(All language arts teachers should retain a desk copy.).
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Teacher Resources (continued):
Kemper, Dave, Patrick Sebranek, and Verne Meyer, eds. Write Source Grade 7. New York: Houghton
Mifflin Harcourt, 2009. A text that builds writing skills. A companion web site is available
at: http://www.thewritesource.com/books/textbooks/write_source_7/
(All students and teachers have a desk copy of this grade level writing text.)
Lain, Sheryl, ed. Strengthen Your Students' Writing Using the Six Traits (Grades 6-12). Bellevue,
WA: Bureau of Education & Research, 2008. A resource handbook for Six Traits Writing
Workshop activities (available in the school library).
ReadWriteThink Lesson Plan Index. National Council Teachers of English and International
Reading Association. 7 May 2009 http://www.readwritethink.org/lessons/index.asp.
Grade level appropriate lessons linked to national standards.
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 7 August, 2010
Audio-Visual: Audio books
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English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 7 August, 2010
DELINEATION OF UNIT OBJECTIVES FOR LESSON WORK
Unit: Literacy and Power
NJCCCS
Student Objectives
(Students will be
Core Text Activities
able to…)
3.2.D.3
Write responses to
Theme Introduction Activities:
literature and
“Read Aloud” a powerful poem and/or short story selected by the
develop insights
teacher. Next, use the “Written Conversation” strategy (Daniels and
into interpretations
Zemelman 130-131). In short, after reading the selection aloud, pairs
by connecting to
of students write short notes back and forth about the experience.
personal
experiences and
referring to textual
information.
3.2.D.4
Write personal
Prompt students to write a narrative story that tells background on an image
narratives, short
or extends details.
stories, memoirs,
See “A Picture’s Worth a Thousand Words: From Image to Detailed
poetry and
Narrative”
persuasive and
http://www.readwritethink.org/lessons/lesson_view.asp?id=116
expository text that
Complete a “Narrative Planner” (Six Traits Resource Handbook 109relate clear,
110).
coherent events or
Peer writing conference focus. See “Idea: Questions to ask in peer
situations through
conference” (Six Traits Resource Handbook 62).
the use of specific
details
3.2.B.1
Extend knowledge
Create an opportunity for students to write a collection of original poetry.
of specific
See Write Source for a poetry unit (pp. 353-361).
characteristics,
Found poetry/parallel poems:
structures, and
http://www.readwritethink.org/lessons/lesson_view.asp?id=33
appropriate voice
and tone of
selected genres and
use this knowledge
in creating written
work, considering
the purpose,
audience, and
context of the
writing.
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3.2.D.2
Apply knowledge
and strategies for
composing pieces in
a variety of genres
(e.g., narrative,
expository,
persuasive, poetic,
and everyday/
workplace or
technical writing)
3.2.D.13
Develop the use of
a personal style and
voice effectively to
support the
purpose and engage
the audience of a
piece of writing
Write multiparagraph
compositions that
have clear topic
development,
logical organization,
effective use of
detail, and variety
in sentence
structure.
Extend knowledge
of specific
characteristics,
structures, and
appropriate voice
and tone of
selected genres and
use this knowledge
in creating written
work, considering
the purpose,
audience, and
context of the
writing
Review scoring
criteria of relevant
rubrics
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 7 August, 2010
3.2.A.2
3.2.B.1
3.2.B.15
Assign a topical poem for homework.
“I Am” poems:
http://www.edchange.org/multicultural/activities/poetry.html
Craft Lessons that support poetry:
o P. 100 The Recurring Line
o P. 101 Writing Low on the Food Chain
o P. 117 Experimenting with Irony
o P. 118 Experimenting with Symbolism
o P. 122 Refining Your Title
Prompt students to write an explanatory piece modeled after the NJASK
explanatory prompt.
The topic should be a quote extracted from a core text or proverbs
related to a core text. Students should practice with shared studentgenerated prompts.
The essay should be 5-7 paragraphs.
The essay should be scored using the state holistic scoring rubric.
Write Source models an example of a non-fiction narrative written in
connection with a theme:
Writing About a Cultural Experience
p. 144
Guide students to practice with shared student-generated prompts. Students
should also self-assess their work using the state holistic scoring rubric. Minilessons from Write Source, Six Traits, Craft Lessons or other sources should be
used in response to teacher assessment and/or student self-assessment
regarding areas of need.
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Short Term Projects:
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 7 August, 2010
Text-connection based journal
Written conversations on chapter
reading
Oral presentation of a response to a
Driving Question.
An explanatory prompt that mirrors
the NJASK explanatory prompt.
 The topic should be a quote
extracted from a core text or
proverbs related to a core text.
Students should practice with
shared student-generated
prompts.
 The essay should be 5-7
paragraphs.
 The essay should be scored
using the state holistic scoring
rubric.
Summative Published Writing:
Poetry Anthology
Using published poems as models,
create an anthology of original poetry
work that incorporates poetic literary
and sound devices.
Utilize a process approach to writing
poems.
Share poetry in a culminating activity
Formative Assessments
Informal daily observations
Grammar Alignment Write Source mini-lessons
Anecdotal notes (literature circles)
Vocabulary quizzes
Reading checks
Homework
Small group presentations
Journal writing
Unit quizzes and tests
Culminating projects
Writing conferences
Open-ended scoring rubric (reader responses)
Holistic scoring writing rubric
Six Traits writing rubric
Speaking Rubric
Writing Conferences
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District of South Orange and Maplewood
English Language Arts Curriculum- Grade 7
Thematic Unit of Study: Fantasy and Science Fiction: Exploring Alternative Societies
Thematic Overview:
Driving Questions:
In this unit, students read a number of texts
that take place in alternative societies. They
compare these settings with our own world to
develop their understandings of culture,
society, citizenship, and belonging.
1. What can we learn about our own society
by reading about alternative societies?
2. How can we ensure that we are responsible
members of society?
3. Why are some people labeled as outcasts
of a society?
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 7 August, 2010
This unit addresses the following
concepts/values:
Civic responsibility
Group membership
Individuality
Author’s style and voice
This unit also introduces the following skills:
Theme
Prewriting strategies
Persuasive Writing
Perspective
Questioning as inquiry
*Focus Reading Strategy: “Sketching My Way
through the Text” strategy (Daniels and
Zemelman 120). Students will conceptualize
and illustrate scenes visualized during reading
of The Giver and other core texts.
Materials:
Core Readings:
The Giver by Lois Lowry
Gathering Blue by Lois Lowry
The Messenger by Lois Lowry
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Additional Core Readings:
The Golden Compass by Phillip Pullman
The Ear, the Eye, and the Arm by Nancy Farmer
A Time for Andrew: A Ghost Story by Mary Downing Hahn
20,000 Leagues Under the Sea by Jules Verne
Eva by Peter Dickinson
Taking Sides by Gary Soto
Pacific Crossing by Gary Soto
Baseball in April By Gary Soto
A Fire in my Hands By Gary Soto
The Illustrated Man by Ray Bradbury
“Read Aloud” (Daniels and Zemelman 110) the Prologue to The Illustrated Man by Ray Bradbury
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 7 August, 2010
Additional Short Story by Ray Bradbury: “All Summer in a Day”
Literature Circles:
Independent Reading/Research:
“The Veldt” by Ray Bradbury
“The Sound of Thunder” by Ray Bradbury
“The Metamorphosis of Justin Jones” by Bruce Coville
“The Japanese Mirror” by Bruce Coville
“The Elevator” by William Sleator
“Science Fiction” from Best Short Stories
“Biscuits of Glory” by Bruce Coville
Classroom Library
Teacher Resources:
Burke, Jim, ed. Tools for Thought. Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann, 2002. Graphic organizers
provided for classroom use (available in the school library).
Daniels, Harvey, and Steven Zemelman. Subjects Matter: Every Teacher's Guide to ContentArea Reading. Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann, 2004. Provides a process approach to reading(All language arts teachers should retain a desk copy.).
Kemper, Dave, Patrick Sebranek, and Verne Meyer, eds. Write Source Grade 7. New York:
Houghton Mifflin Harcourt, 2009. A text that builds writing skills. A companion web site is
available at: http://www.thewritesource.com/books/textbooks/write_source_7/
(All students and teachers have a desk copy of this grade level writing text.)
Lain, Sheryl, ed. Strengthen Your Students' Writing Using the Six Traits (Grades 6-12). Bellevue,
WA: Bureau of Education & Research, 2008. A resource handbook for Six Traits Writing
Workshop activities (available in the school library).
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Teacher Resources (Continued):
ReadWriteThink Lesson Plan Index. National Council Teachers of English and International
Reading Association. 7 May 2009 http://www.readwritethink.org/lessons/index.asp.
Grade level appropriate lessons linked to national standards.
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Audio-Visual:
Audio books
“The Monsters Are Due on Maple Street” (Twilight Zone)
“Time Enough at Last” (Twilight Zone)
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DELINEATION OF UNIT OBJECTIVES FOR LESSON WORK
Unit: Fantasy and Science Fiction
NJCCCS
Student
Objectives
Core Text Activities
(Students will be
able to…)
3.1.G.12 Identify and
Theme Introduction Activities:
analyze themes
Ask students to complete a “Clustering” activity (Daniels and Zemelman
across literary
105) for the word “outcast.” Similar to brainstorming, students will
works.
make connections to a new topic based upon mental associations
before they read a core text.
Provide a definition for “outcast.” Ask students to write down the
name of an outcast from a literary text, TV show, or movie. List
qualities of outcasts on the board.
Repeated reflection on driving questions with each new text. These
reflections may be recorded in reading response journals so that both
teacher and student can see how these understandings develop in the
course of the unit.
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3.1.E.1
3.1.A.2
Monitor reading
for understanding
by setting a
purpose for
reading, making
and adjusting
predictions,
asking essential
questions, and
relating new
learning to
background
experiences
Develop an
understanding of
the organizational
structure of
printed material
(e.g.
chronological,
sequential,
procedural text).
Focus on visualization:
“Sketching My Way through the Text” strategy (Daniels and
Zemelman 120)
Visual representations of chapter readings
Creation of a model of the community in The Giver
Provide models to students:
Examine newspaper and magazine articles for organizational structure.
Study websites and other electronic media for organizational structure.
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3.1.E.2
Use increasingly
complex text
guides to
understand
different text
structure and
organizational
patterns (e.g.
chronological
sequence or
comparison and
contrast).
Respond critically
to text ideas and
the author’s craft
by using textual
evidence to
support
interpretations.
Instruct students to complete T-charts listing the pros and cons related
to themes in The Giver (Burke 93-96).
Choose one of the following
o Complete a Venn diagram (Burke 176) organizing information
about how our community is similar to and different from
Jonas’s community. Write a compare/contrast essay using the
information.
o Complete a Venn diagram organizing information about how
Jonas is similar to and different from The Giver. Write a
compare/contrast essay using the information.
o Complete a Venn diagram organizing information about how
Jonas is similar to and different from yourself. Write a
compare/contrast essay using the information.
Facilitate the creation of:
 A plot line graphic organizer identifying exposition, rising action,
climax, resolution, and ending. See “Plot Notes” graphic
organizer (Burke 168).
 A chart giving textual evidence to support the types of conflict
person vs. person, person vs. self, person vs. society, person vs.
nature or environment, and person vs. fate or destiny.
 A class debate focused on a central issue from The Giver, such
as the promotion of a society that is free of risk and change vs.
a society of choice and change, Jonas’s ultimate fate, or the
importance of memories and learning from history, using the
Socratic Method.
3.1.H.2
Analyze a work of
literature,
showing how it
reflects the
heritage,
traditions,
attitudes, and
beliefs of its
authors.
Prompt students to:
Consider the freedoms that a science fiction or fantasy writer has in
creating a story world. Write a response about how the author’s craft
in describing a character, setting, or event align with his or her message
or purpose. Use Post-It Responses (Daniels and Zemelman 114) or
Bookmarks (Daniels and Zemelman 116).
Explore perspective using Conversational Roundtables (Burke 142)
3.2.C.5
Use transition
words to
reinforce a logical
progression of
ideas.
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3.1.G.10
Write Source resources:
o Transition words for different genres p. 39
o Varying transition words
p. 304
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3.2.D.10
3.2.D.11
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3.2.D.12
3.1.H.2
3.2.D.8
State a position
clearly in a
persuasive essay
by stating the
issue, giving facts,
examples, and
details to support
the position, and
citing sources
when appropriate.
Present evidence
when writing
persuasive essays,
examples, and
justification to
support
arguments.
Choose an
appropriate
organizing
strategy, such as
cause/effect, pro
and con, or parody
to effectively
present a topic,
point of view, or
argument.
Guide students through the Persuasive Essay writing process: write a
persuasive essay taking a stand on an issue raised during reading of The Giver.
Basics of Persuasive Essays (Lain p. 97)
Nonfiction Craft Lessons, p. 102: Listing the Pros and Cons of an
Argument
Nonfiction Craft Lessons, p. 103: Airing the Opposing Point of View
Organizing Persuasive Writing (Lain p. 112)
Write Source resources:
Persuasive Paragraph
p. 219
Prewriting
p. 221
Persuasive Writing – Proposing a Solution
p. 223
6 Traits of Problem-Solution Writing
p. 224
Keys to Effective Prewriting
p. 227
Keys to Effective Writing
p. 233
Opinion Statements
pp. 232, 235, 265
Selecting a Topic
p. 228-229
Using details to persuade
p. 240
Starting Your Persuasive Essay
p. 235
Developing the Middle Part
p. 236
Ending Your Persuasive Essay
p. 238
Revising
p. 239
Revising for the 6 Traits of Writing
p. 240-250
Editing
p. 251-254
Rubric for Persuasive Writing
p. 256-257
Reflecting on Your Writing
p. 260
Persuasive Writing in Review
p. 281
Analyze a work of
literature, showing
how it reflects the
heritage,
traditions,
attitudes, and
beliefs of its
authors.
Explore the central
idea or theme of
an informational
reading and
support analysis
with details from
the article and
personal
experiences.
Promote research:
Give students the opportunity to research author background. Later,
students should write a brief exploration of how significant biographical
episodes might have contributed to the author’s work.
Give students the opportunity to research the setting of the novel.
Later, students should write a brief exploration of how time, place, and
atmosphere contribute to tone.
Provide KWL charts (Daniels and Zemelman 106) to explore prior
knowledge, generate questions, and establish purposes for reading.
Repeated reflection on driving questions with each new text. These
reflections may be recorded in reading response journals so that both
teacher and student can see how these understandings develop in the
course of the unit.
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3.1.E.1
Monitor reading
for understanding
by setting a
purpose for
reading, making
and adjusting
predictions,
asking essential
questions, and
relating new
learning to
background
experiences.
3.1.G.9
Read critically by
identifying,
analyzing, and
applying
knowledge of the
theme, structure,
style, and literary
elements of
fiction and
providing support
from the text as
evidence of
understanding.
Gather, select,
and organize
information
appropriate to a
topic, task, and
audience
Self-select
materials
appropriately
related to a
research project
Use visual aids,
media, and/or
technology to
support oral
communication.
3.2.D.1
3.2.H.4
3.3.D.2
“Mapping” strategy (Daniels and Zemelman 126-129). Students create
their own graphic structure to represent their thinking.
Close reading activities with core texts. For example, photocopy a
difficult passage from a core text. Ask students to “mark up the text”
noting relevant figurative devices, key concepts, and unclear passages.
Share close readings in small and large group settings.
Create a plot line graphic organizer identifying exposition, rising action,
climax, resolution, and ending (Burke 168)
Provide an opportunity for mini research of aspects related to the
Americans with Disability Act. Compare and Contrast findings to those
referenced in Gathering Blue, a core text. Create a technology-based oral
presentation of the information.
See Lain for resources on Expository writing basics (p. 95) and samples (p.
115-117.)
See Write Source for resources on research skills
o Types of sources
p.364
o Using the internet
p. 365
o Using reference materials
p. 372-375
o Evaluating materials
p. 376
Write Source Unit on Oral Presentations to Inform (pp. 423-430)
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Short Term Projects:
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Text-connection based journal.
Visual representations of chapter
reading
Explanatory task
Write an alternate ending to The Giver
to be shared within small groups.
Create a model of the community in
The Giver
Construct a community newspaper
highlighting the essence of a utopian
society as found in The Giver
Mini research of aspects related to the
Americans with Disability Act.
Compare and Contrast findings to
those referenced in Gathering Blue, a
core text. Create a technology-based
presentation of the information.
Use different graphic organizers to
assist in non-fiction reading (to help
students read with an eye for text
structure).
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Summative Published Writing:
Write a persuasive essay1 taking a stand on an
issue raised during reading of The Giver.
Utilize the short term projects as a
form of prewriting.
Complete a process approach to
writing that is scored with the state
holistic scoring rubric.
Students should read excerpts of their
persuasive essays aloud to the class.
See Appendix for Write Source Resource Alignment
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Formative Assessments
Informal daily observations
Grammar Alignment Write Source mini-lessons
Anecdotal notes (literature circles)
Vocabulary quizzes
Reading checks
Homework
Small group presentations
Journal writing
Unit quizzes and tests
Culminating projects
Writing conferences
Open-ended scoring rubric (reader responses)
Holistic scoring writing rubric
Six Traits writing rubric
Speaking Rubric
Writing Conferences
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Appendix
Great Source Alignment – Persuasive Essay
Persuasive Paragraph
Prewriting
Persuasive Writing – Proposing a Solution
6 Traits of Problem-Solution Writing
Keys to Effective Prewriting
Keys to Effective Writing
Starting Your Persuasive Essay
Developing the Middle Part
Ending Your Persuasive Essay
Revising
Revising for the 6 Traits of Writing
Editing
Rubric for Persuasive Writing
Reflecting on Your Writing
Persuasive Writing in Review
p. 219
p. 221
p. 223
p. 224
p. 227
p. 233
p. 235
p. 236
p. 238
p. 239
p. 240-250
p. 251-254
p. 256-257
p. 260
p. 281
Source: Kemper, Dave, Patrick Sebranek, and Verne Meyer, eds. Write Source Grade 7. New York:
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 7 August, 2010
Houghton Mifflin Harcourt, 2009.
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Grade 7
NJCCS Alignment
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New Jersey Language Arts Literacy Core Curriculum Content Standards specific
to this unit:
The following letters listed after each NJCCCS note where the indicator is aligned in the
curriculum guide:
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STANDARD 3.1 (Reading) All students will understand and apply the knowledge of sounds, letters, and
words in written English to become independent and fluent readers, and will read a variety of materials
and texts with fluency and comprehension.
Strands and Cumulative Progress Indicators
Building upon knowledge and skills gained in preceding grades, by the end of Grade 7, students will:
A. Concepts About Print/Text
1. Identify and use common textual features (e.g., paragraphs, topic, sentence, index, glossary,
table of contents) and graphic features, (e.g., charts, maps, diagrams) to comprehend
information. SF, WM
2. Develop an understanding of the organizational structure of printed material (e.g. chronological,
sequential, procedural text). SF
B. Phonological Awareness
1. No additional indicators at this grade level.
C. Decoding and Word Recognition
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1. Distinguish among the spellings of homophones (e.g. cite, site, sight). V, G
2. Apply spelling rules and syllabication that aid in correct spelling. V, G
3. Continue to use structural analysis and context analysis to decode new words. V
MRD
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D. Fluency
1. Read aloud in selected texts reflecting understanding of the text and engaging the listener. SF
2. Read increasingly difficult texts silently with comprehension and fluency. MRD, WM, SF, LP
3. Apply self-correcting strategies automatically to decode and gain meaning from print both orally
and silently. V
4. Reread informational text for clarity. WM, AS, LP
E. Reading Strategies (before, during, and after reading)
1. Monitor reading for understanding by setting a purpose for reading, making and adjusting
predictions, asking essential questions, and relating new learning to background experiences.
MRD, SF, WM, LP
2. Use increasingly complex text guides to understand different text structure and organizational
patterns (e.g. chronological sequence or comparison and contrast). SF, WM
F. Vocabulary and Concept Development
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1. Develop an extended vocabulary through both listening and independent reading. V
2. Clarify word meanings through the use of a word’s definition, example, restatement, or
contrast. V
3. Clarify pronunciations, meanings, alternate word choice, parts of speech, and etymology of
words using the dictionary, thesaurus, glossary, and technology resources. V
4. Expand reading vocabulary by identifying and correctly using idioms and words with literal and
figurative meanings in their speaking and writing experiences. WM, V
G. Comprehension Skills and Response to Text
1. Speculate about text by generating literal and inferential questions. MRC, WM
2. Distinguish between essential and nonessential information. WM
3. Differentiate between fact, opinion, bias, and propaganda in newspapers, periodicals, and
electronic texts. WM, LP
4. Articulate the purposes and characteristics of different genres. WM, V, LP
5. Analyze ideas and recurring themes found in texts, such as bravery, loyalty, friendship, and
loneliness. MRD, SF
6. Develop an awareness of a variety of perspectives on a single event, setting, character,
personality, or topic as expressed by different authors. MRD, SF, LP
7. Locate and analyze the elements of setting, characterization, and plot to construct
understanding of how characters influence the progression and resolution of the plot. LP
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8. Read critically by identifying, analyzing, and applying knowledge of the purpose, structure, and
elements of nonfiction and providing support from the text as evidence of understanding. WM,
V
9. Read critically by identifying, analyzing, and applying knowledge of the theme, structure, style,
and literary elements of fiction and providing support from the text as evidence of
understanding. MRD, SF, WM
10. Respond critically to text ideas and the author’s craft by using textual evidence to support
interpretations. MRD, WM, SF, WM
11. Identify and analyze literary techniques and elements, such as figurative language, meter,
rhetorical and stylistic features of text. MRD
12. Identify and analyze recurring themes across literary works. MRD, LP
13. Identify and understand the author’s use of idioms, analogies, metaphors, and similes in prose
and poetry. MRD, LP
14. Compare and contrast the perspectives of authors in a variety of interdisciplinary works. MRD,
WM
15. Interpret text ideas through journal writing, discussion, and enactment. WM, WM
16. Demonstrate the use of everyday texts (e.g., train schedules, directions, brochures) and make
judgments about the importance of such documents. AS, V
17. Interpret idiomatic expressions. SF
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H. Inquiry and Research
1. Produce written and oral work that demonstrates comprehension of informational materials.
WM, LP, V
2. Analyze a work of literature, showing how it reflects the heritage, traditions, attitudes, and
beliefs of its authors. SF
3. Collect materials for a portfolio that reflect possible career choices. MRD
4. Self-select materials appropriately related to a research project. WM
5. Read and compare at least two works, including books, related to the same genre, topic, or
subject and produce evidence of reading (e.g., compare central ideas, characters, themes, plots,
settings). MRD, WM, SF, LP
STANDARD 3.2 (Writing) All students will write in clear, concise, organized language that varies in
content and form for different audiences and purposes.
MRD
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Strands and Cumulative Progress Indicators
Building upon knowledge and skills gained in preceding grades, by the end of Grade 7, students will:
A. Writing as a Process (prewriting, drafting, revising, editing, postwriting)
1. Write stories or scripts with well-developed characters, setting, dialogue, clear conflict and
resolution, and sufficient descriptive detail. MRD, LP
2. Write multi-paragraph compositions that have clear topic development, logical organization,
effective use of detail, and variety in sentence structure. MRD, WM, SF
3. Generate and narrow topics by considering purpose, audience, and form with a variety of
strategies (e.g., graphic organizers, brainstorming, or technology-assisted processes). SF, WM
4. Revise and edit drafts by rereading for content and organization, usage, sentence construction,
mechanics, and word choice. MRD, WM, SF, LP
5. Demonstrate understanding of a scoring rubric to improve and evaluate writing. MRD, WM, SF,
LP
6. Compose, revise, edit, and publish writing using appropriate word processing software. MRD,
WM, SF, LP
7. Reflect on own writing, noting strengths and setting goals for improvement. MRD, WM, SF, LP
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B. Writing as a Product (resulting in a formal product or publication)
1. Extend knowledge of specific characteristics, structures, and appropriate voice and tone of
selected genres and use this knowledge in creating written work, considering the purpose,
audience, and context of the writing. MRD, WM, SF, LP
2. Write various types of prose, such as short stories, biographies, autobiographies, or memoirs
that contain narrative elements. LP, SF
3. Write reports and subject-appropriate nonfiction pieces across the curriculum based on
research and including citations, quotations, and a works consulted page. WM
4. Write a range of essays, including persuasive, speculative (picture prompt), descriptive,
personal, or issue-based. MRD, LP, SF
C. Mechanics, Spelling, and Handwriting
1. Use Standard English conventions in all writing, such as sentence structure, grammar and usage,
punctuation, capitalization, and spelling. MRD, LP, SF, WM, G
2. Use a variety of sentence types correctly, including combinations of independent and
dependent clauses, prepositional and adverbial phrases, and varied sentence openings to
develop a lively and effective personal style. LP, SF, WM
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3. Understand and use parallelism, including similar grammatical forms, to present items in a series
or to organize ideas for emphasis. G
4. Experiment in using subordination, coordination, apposition, and other devices to indicate
relationships between ideas. G
5. Use transition words to reinforce a logical progression of ideas. LP, SF, G, WM
6. Edit writing for correct grammar, usage, capitalization, punctuation, and spelling. MRD, LP, SF,
WM, V, G
7. Use a variety of reference materials, such as a dictionary, thesaurus, grammar reference, and/or
internet/software resources to edit written work. MRD, LP, SF, WM
8. Write legibly in manuscript or cursive to meet district standards. MRD, LP, SF, WM
D. Writing Forms, Audiences, and Purposes (exploring a variety of forms)
1. Gather, select, and organize information appropriate to a topic, task, and audience. SF, WM
2. Apply knowledge and strategies for composing pieces in a variety of genres (e.g., narrative,
expository, persuasive, poetic, and everyday/ workplace or technical writing). MRD, LP, SF, WM
3. Write responses to literature and develop insights into interpretations by connecting to personal
experiences and referring to textual information. MRD, LP, SF
4. Write personal narratives, short stories, memoirs, poetry and persuasive and expository text
that relate clear, coherent events or situations through the use of specific details. MRD, LP
5. Use narrative and descriptive writing techniques that show compositional risks (e.g., dialogue,
literary devices, sensory words and phrases, background information, thoughts and feelings of
characters, and comparison and contrast of characters). SF, LP
6. Use primary and secondary sources to understand the value of each when writing a research
report. WM
7. Write reports based on research and include citations, quotations, and works consulted page.
WM
8. Explore the central idea or theme of an informational reading and support analysis with details
from the article and personal experiences. LP, WM
9. Demonstrate writing clarity and supportive evidence when answering open-ended and essay
questions across the curriculum. MRD, LP
10. State a position clearly in a persuasive essay by stating the issue, giving facts, examples, and
details to support the position, and citing sources when appropriate. SF, WM
11. Present evidence when writing persuasive essays, examples, and justification to support
arguments. SF
12. Choose an appropriate organizing strategy, such as cause/effect, pro and con, or parody to
effectively present a topic, point of view, or argument. SF, WM
13. Develop the use of a personal style and voice effectively to support the purpose and engage the
audience of a piece of writing. MRD, LP, SF, WM
14. Maintain a collection of writing (e.g., a literacy folder, or a literacy portfolio). MRD, LP, SF, AS
15. Review scoring criteria of relevant rubrics. MRD, LP, SF, WM
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STANDARD 3.3 (Speaking) All students will speak in clear, concise, organized language that varies in
content and form for different audiences and purposes.
Strands and Cumulative Progress Indicators
Building upon knowledge and skills gained in preceding grades, by the end of Grade 7, students will:
A. Discussion (small group and whole class)
1.
2.
3.
4.
Support a position, acknowledging opposing views. WM
Present ideas and opinions spontaneously in response to a topic or other speakers. WM
Apply rules for cooperative or whole class debate on a controversial issue. WM
Define group roles using consensus to ensure task is understood and completed. MRD, LP, SF,
WM
5. Participate in an informal debate (e.g., small group discussion). WM
6. Respond orally to literature. MRD, LP, SF, AM
7. Participate in class discussions appropriately. MRD, LP, SF
B. Questioning (Inquiry) and Contributing
1.
2.
3.
4.
Paraphrase others' comments to clarify viewpoints. WM
Question to clarify others' opinions. WM
Talk with others to identify and explore issues and problems. MRD, LP, SF, WM
Solve a problem or understand a task through group cooperation. MRD, LP, SF
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C. Word Choice
1.
2.
3.
4.
Paraphrase, illustrate, clarify, and/or expand on a topic or idea. MRD, WM
Develop and use advanced vocabulary related to a topic. MRD, V
Use language that stimulates an audience's interest. LP, V
Incorporate varied sentence structure and correct grammar. LP, SF, WM, G
D. Oral Presentation
1. Use writing to prompt discussion and enhance planning of formal and informal presentations.
MRD, LP
2. Use visual aids, media, and/or technology to support oral communication. SF, WM
3. Give oral presentations to different audiences for various purposes, such as summaries of books
and articles, narratives, and persuasive topics. LP, SF
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4. Acknowledge the audience with eye contact and use appropriate verbal responses to clarify
questions and inquiries. MRD
5. Incorporate peer feedback and teacher suggestions for revisions in content, organization, and
delivery. LP, SF, WM
6. Develop speaking techniques, including voice modulation, inflection, tempo, enunciation, and
eye contact for effective presentations. LP
7. Use a scoring rubric to prepare, evaluate, and improve the oral presentations of self and others.
WM
8. Read aloud with fluency. MRD, LP
STANDARD 3.4 (Listening) All students will listen actively to information from a variety of sources in a
variety of situations.
Strands and Cumulative Progress Indicators
Building upon knowledge and skills gained in preceding grades, by the end of Grade 7, students will:
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 7 August, 2010
A. Active Listening
1. Demonstrate active listening behaviors in a variety of situations (e.g., one-on-one or small
group). MRD, LP, SF
2. Demonstrate active listening by analyzing information, ideas, and opinions to determine
relevancy. MRD, LP, SF
3. Acknowledge the speaker through eye contact and use appropriate feedback and questions to
clarify the speaker’s message. LP
4. Recognize persuasive techniques and credibility in oral communication. SF, WM
5. Listen to determine a speaker's purpose, attitude, and perspective. WM
6. Use, when appropriate, criteria/rubric to evaluate oral presentations, such as purpose, delivery
techniques, content, visual aids, body language, and facial expressions. WM
B. Listening Comprehension
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
Interpret a speaker's verbal and nonverbal messages, purposes, and perspectives. LP
Exhibit proficiency in integrating oral reading with listening, writing, and viewing. LP, WM
Critique information heard or viewed. WM
Critique oral presentations using agreed-upon criteria for evaluation (e.g., rubric). WM
Ask probing questions to elicit information, including evidence to support the speaker’s claims
and conclusions. WM
6. Make inferences based on an oral report or presentation. LP
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“Grammar” Alignment
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STANDARD 3.5 (Viewing and media literacy) All students will access, view, evaluate, and respond to
print, nonprint, and electronic texts and resources.
Strands and Cumulative Progress Indicators
Building upon knowledge and skills gained in preceding grades, by the end of Grade 7, students will:
A. Constructing Meaning
1. Analyze aspects of print and electronic texts that support the author's point of view, opinion, or
attitude. MRD, WM
2. Analyze the use of elements (e.g., setting plot, theme, characters) to understand media
presentations, such as film, video, television, and theatrical productions. MRD
3. Analyze and respond to visual and print messages (e.g., humor, irony, metaphor) and recognize
how words, sounds, and still or moving images are used in each medium to convey the intended
messages. MRD
4. Compare and contrast how the various forms of media (e.g. newspapers, radio, television,
internet news outlets) cover the same topic. MRD, WM
B. Visual and Verbal Messages
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2.
3.
4.
5.
Analyze and compare the pros and cons of visual and verbal advertising. WM
Evaluate various media messages for credibility. WM
Develop criteria/rubric to judge the effectiveness of visual and verbal presentations. WM
Make inferences based upon the content of still images. WM
Compare and contrast media sources, such as film and book versions of a story. WM
C. Living with Media
1. Evaluate media forms, such as television, video, games, music, and film for content
appropriateness (e.g. rating systems, rubric). MRD, WM
2. Analyze media content for emotional effect on audience. WM
3. Create media presentations and written reports, using multi-media resources such as an
overhead projector, computer, and/or a tape recorder to communicate information. WM
MRD
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Making Responsible Decisions Unit
Literacy and Power Unit
Science Fiction Unit
Writing Matters Unit
“RevItUp!” Vocabulary Program
“Grammar” Alignment
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Writing Matters
and National Standards
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Grammar Alignment
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THE SCHILLINGER GROUP
EDUCATION CONSULTANTS
SOUTH ORANGE and MAPLEWOOD SCHOOL DISTRICT
GRAMMAR ALIGNMENT – Grade 7
New Jersey Core Curriculum Content Standard:
STANDARD 3.2 (Writing) All students will write in clear, concise, organized language that varies in
content and form for different audiences and purposes.
STANDARD STRAND
3.2 – C.1
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“WRITE SOURCE”
REFERENCE
Use Standard English conventions in all writing, such as sentence structure,
grammar and usage, punctuation, capitalization, handwriting
I = Introduce
C.1
STANDARD SKILL
DESCRIPTION
Sentence Structure
C = Continue
1st
2nd
3rd
4th
MP
MP MP MP
I
C
p. 500: Writing Complete
Sentences
p. 506: Fixing Sentence
Problems
p. 511: Improving Sentence
Style
C
C
p. 512: Making Sentences
Flow
p. 570: Improving Sentence
Fluency
p. 690: Understanding
Sentences
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New Jersey Core Curriculum Content Standard:
STANDARD 3.2 (Writing) All students will write in clear, concise, organized language that varies in
content and form for different audiences and purposes.
STANDARD STRAND
C.1
Grammar and Usage
STANDARD SKILL
DESCRIPTION
“WRITE SOURCE”
REFERENCE
p. 470: Nouns
p. 474: Pronouns
I
C
C
C
p. 480: Verbs
I
C
C
C
I
C
C
C
p. 486: Adjectives
p. 490: Adverbs
p. 494: Prepositions
p. 496: Conjunctions
C.1
Punctuation
p. 579: End Punctuation
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p. 582: Commas
p. 594: Semicolons
p. 596: Colons
p. 598: Quotation Marks
p. 602: Italics and
Underlining
p. 604: Apostrophes
p. 608: Hyphens
p. 612: Dashes and
Parentheses
p. 614: Ellipses
C.1
Capitalization
p. 618: Capitalization
I
C
C
C
C.1
Spelling
p. 642: Rules for Spelling
I
C
C
C
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New Jersey Core Curriculum Content Standard:
STANDARD 3.2 (Writing) All students will write in clear, concise, organized language that varies in
content and form for different audiences and purposes.
STANDARD STRAND
3.2 – C.2
C.2
STANDARD SKILL
DESCRIPTION
“WRITE SOURCE”
REFERENCE
Use a variety of sentence types correctly, including combinations of independent
and dependent clauses, prepositional phrases, and varied sentence openings to
develop a lively and effective personal style
Using a Variety of Sentence
Types
p. 500: Writing Complete
Sentences
p. 506: Fixing Sentence
Problems
p. 508: Subject-Verb
Agreement
p. 511: Improving Sentence
Style
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p. 515: Writing Simple
Sentences
p. 516: Creating Compound
Sentences
I
C
C
p. 517: Developing Complex
Sentences
p. 519: Expanding
Sentences with
Prepositional Phrases
p. 520: Expanding
Sentences with
Prepositional Phrases
p. 570: Study Sentence
Patterns
p. 571: Practice Sentence
Diagramming
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New Jersey Core Curriculum Content Standard:
STANDARD 3.2 (Writing) All students will write in clear, concise, organized language that varies in
content and form for different audiences and purposes.
STANDARD STRAND
3.2 – C.3
C.3
STANDARD SKILL
DESCRIPTION
“WRITE SOURCE”
REFERENCE
Understand and use parallelism, including similar grammatical forms, to present
items in a series or to organize ideas for emphasis
Organizing Ideas
p. 522: Develop a Sentence
Style
p. 544: Topic-Selecting
Strategy
p. 546: Writing Prompts
I
C
p. 550: Making Lists and
Outlines
p. 551: Using Patterns of
Organization
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3.2 – C.4
C.4
Experiment in using subordination, coordination, apposition, and other devices to
indicate relationships between ideas
Subordination to Indicate
Relationship between Ideas
p. 198: Using Subordinate
Conjunctions to Help
Compare and Contrast
p. 249: Using Complex
Sentences Well
I
C
p. 498: Expanding
Sentences with
Subordinating
Conjunctions
C.4
Parallelism
p. 513: Combining
Sentences with Series of
Words
I
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New Jersey Core Curriculum Content Standard:
STANDARD 3.2 (Writing) All students will write in clear, concise, organized language that varies in
content and form for different audiences and purposes.
STANDARD STRAND
3.2 – C.5
C.5
STANDARD SKILL
DESCRIPTION
“WRITE SOURCE”
REFERENCE
Use transition to reinforce a logical progression of ideas
Transitions
p. 39: How Can Transitions
Help Me Organize My
Writing?
p. 304: Using a Variety of
Transitions
I
C
C
C
p. 572-573: Using
Transitions
3.2 – C.6
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C.6
Edit writing to correct grammar, usage, capitalization, punctuation, and spelling
Editing for Grammar, Usage,
Capitalization, Punctuation and
Spelling
p. 22: Editing for
Conventions
p. 82: Revising and Editing
p. 125: Keys to Effective
Editing (Narrative)
p. 126-128: Editing for
Conventions
I
C
C
C
I
C
C
C
p. 189: Keys to Effective
Editing (Expository)
p. 190-192: Editing for
Conventions
p. 251: Keys to Effective
Editing (Persuasive)
p. 252-254: Editing for
Conventions
p. 313: Keys to Effective
Editing (Response to
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New Jersey Core Curriculum Content Standard:
STANDARD 3.2 (Writing) All students will write in clear, concise, organized language that varies in
content and form for different audiences and purposes.
STANDARD STRAND
3.2 – C.7
“WRITE SOURCE”
REFERENCE
Use a variety of reference materials, such as a dictionary, thesaurus,
grammar reference, and/or internet/software resources to edit work
Using Reference Materials
p. 374-375: Checking a
Dictionary
I
C
C
C
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C.7
STANDARD SKILL
DESCRIPTION
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BASIC RULES OF SPELLING
Grade 7 Mini-lesson
1. Adding Prefixes and Suffixes
In general, adding a prefix such as “mis” or “dis”, or adding suffixes such as “ous” or
“ful”, will not change the spelling of a word.
mis + place = misplace
dis + associate = disassociate
glee + ful = gleeful
disaster + ous = disasterous
2. Adding “ed” to create the past tense
In general, Rule # 1 above holds true with the addition of “ed”:
govern + ed = governed
tax + ed = taxed
confort + ed = comforted
But, if the word ends in “e”, drop the e before adding “ed”:
mate = mated
fascinate = fascinated
generate = generated
For many words, you cannot form the past tense by adding “ed”; the past tense of these
words and their different spelling must be memorized.
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lay = laid
delay = delayed (not “delaid”)
3. Adding “ing”
To add “ing” to a verb that ends in “e”, drop the final “e”:
Fascinate + ing = fascinating grate + ing = grating
believe + ing = believing
4. To add a suffix after a consonant + “y” combination
To add a suffix after a consonant + “y” combination, first change the “y” to “i”:
Hurry + ed = hurried
happy + er = happier
But note, this does not hold true when the suffix begins with “i”:
Apply + ing = applying
baby + ish = babyish
5. Doubling Consonants
If a short one syllable word ends in one consonant and one vowel, double the consonant
if the suffix begins with a vowel (ed, ing, er, est, ish):
Rob = robber
trap = trapping
stop = stoppable
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This rule also holds true for longer words provided the last syllable is stressed:
Permit = permitted
rebel = rebelling
6. Adding “ful”
Remember the “ful” at the end of a word is spelled with one “l”:
Wonder + ful = wonderful (not wonderfull)
7. The “ie” Rule
Remember the rhyme: “i before e except after c”:
Believe
achieve
receive
conceive
But note, the rule doesn’t work if the word sounds like “ay” instead of “ee”:
Neighbor
Weigh
8. The use of “cede”, “ceed” and “sede”
With the exception of just four words which must be memorized
Succeed
proceed
exceed
supersede
All other words with the “seed” sound are spelled “cede”:
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Accede
secede
concede
precede
9. Possessives
To form the possessive of singular nouns, add an apostrophe and the letter s, even if he
word ends in s or is the plural form:
Doctor = doctor’s
dress = dress’s
actress = actress’s
Children = children’s mice = mice’s
10. Contractions
A contraction (a word formed by combining two words into one) is formed by omitting
one or more letters and replacing those missing letters with an apostrophe:
Are not = aren’t
where is = where’s
you have = you’ve
cannot = can’t
she will = she’ll
But beware of sound-alikes:
Who is = who’s (not whose)
you are = you’re (not your)
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SENTENCE STRUCTURE
Grade 7 Mini-lesson
Clauses and Complex Sentences
A clause is a group of words with a subject and a verb. A dependent clause begins with a word
such as because and when. It cannot stand alone as a sentence. An independent clause can
stand alone.
Dependent Clause
when we saw Yosemite
Independent Clause
It was a beautiful fall day.
A sentence made up of a dependent clause and an independent clause is a complex sentence.
When the dependent clause comes first in a sentence, it is followed by a comma.
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When we say Yosemite, it was a beautiful fall day.
It was a beautiful fall day when we say Yosemite.
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SENTENCE STRUCTURE
Grade 7 Mini-lesson
Compound Sentences
A compound sentence is made up of a two simple sentences joined by a comma and a
connecting word such as and, but, or or.
The horned toad looks like a toad. It is really a lizard.
Compound Sentences
The horned toad looks like a toad, but it is really a lizard.
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Simple Sentences
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SUBJECT-VERB AGREEMENT
7th grade
Subject-Verb Agreement:
The subject and the verb in a sentence must work together, or agree. To make most present tense
verbs agree with singular nouns or he, she, or it, add –s or –es. If the subject is a plural noun or
I, you, we, or they, the present tense verb does not end in –s.
Singular Subjects
Night follows day. He watches the sunset.
Plural Subjects
Nights give us darkness. We light a candle. Night and day
differ greatly.
Use is or was to agree with singular nouns. Use are or were to agree with plural nouns. Use am
to agree with I.
Night is cool and dark.
Plural Subjects
The night beasts are free.
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Singular Subjects
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PAST, PRESENT, AND FUTURE TENSES
Grade 7 Mini-lesson
Past, Present, and Future Tenses
The tense of a verb tells when an action happens. A verb in the present tense tells about action
that is happening now. A verb in the past tense tells about action that has already happened.
Many past tense verbs end in –ed. A verb in the future tense tells about action that will happen
in the future. The helping verb will is added to a verb to form the future tense.
Present Tense
The rain pours. We use umbrellas.
Past Tense
It rained last night. We waded in puddles.
Future Tense
The rain will stop tomorrow.
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When a verb ends with e, drop the e before adding -ed: save/saved
When a one-syllable verb ends with one vowel followed by one consonant, double the
final consonant before adding –ed: clap/clapped.
When a verb ends with a consonant followed by a y, change the y to i before adding –ed:
hurry/hurried.
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Rubrics:
State and 6 Traits
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The following NJASK/HSPA Open-Ended Scoring Rubric for Reading and the NJ Registered Holistic
Scoring Rubric for Persuasive and Expository Writing can be found at:
New Jersey Department of Education’s NJ Educational Port
http://www.nj.gov/education/njpep/
NJASK/HSPA Open-Ended Scoring Rubric: Reading
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Points
Criteria
4
A 4-point response clearly demonstrates understanding of the task,
completes all requirements, and provides an insightful explanation/opinion
that links to or extends aspects of the text.
3
A 3-point response demonstrates an understanding of the task, completes all
requirements, and provides some explanation/opinion using situations or
ideas from the text as support.
2
A 2-point response may address all of the requirements, but demonstrates a
partial understanding of the task, and uses text incorrectly or with limited
success resulting in an inconsistent or flawed explanation.
1
A 1-point response demonstrates minimal understanding of the task, does
not complete the requirements, and provides only a vague reference to or no
use of the text.
0
A 0-point response is irrelevant or off-topic.
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New Jersey Registered Holistic Scoring Rubric: Expository and Persuasive Writing Prompt
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Score:
Content and
Organization
Communicates
intended message
to intended
audience
Relates to topic
Opening/closing
Focused
Logical progression
of ideas
Transitions
Appropriate details
and information
Usage
Tense formation
Subject/verb and
pronoun agreement
Word choice/
meaning
Proper Modifiers
Sentence Construction
Variety of type,
structure, length
Correct
construction
Mechanics
Spelling
Capitalization
Punctuation
Inadequate
Command
1
May lack
opening and/
or closing
Minimal
response to
topic;
uncertain
focus
Limited
Command
2
May lack
opening and/
or closing
Attempts to
focus May
drift or shift
focus
Partial
Command
3
May lack
opening and/
or closing
Usually has
single focus
Adequate
Command
4
Generally has
opening and/
or closing
Single focus
Strong
Command
5
Opening and
closing
Superior
Command
6
Opening and
closing
Single focus
Sense of unity
and coherence
Key ideas
developed
No planning
evident;
disorganized
Attempts
organization
Few, if any,
transitions
between ideas
Some lapses or
flaws in
organization
May lack some
transitions
between ideas
Ideas loosely
connected
Transitions
evident
Details
random,
inappropriate,
or barely
apparent
No apparent
control
Severe/
numerous
errors
Details lack
elaboration,
i.e., highlight
paper
Repetitious
details Several
unelaborated
details
Uneven
development
of details
Logical
progression of
ideas
Moderately
fluent
Attempts
compositional
risks
Details
appropriate
and varied
Numerous
errors
Errors/
patterns of
errors may be
evident
Some errors
that do not
interfere with
meaning
Few errors
Single, distinct
focus
Unified and
coherent
Welldeveloped
Logical
progression of
ideas
Fluent,
cohesive
Compositional
risks
successful
Details
effective,
vivid, explicit,
and/ or
pertinent
Very few, if
any, errors
Assortment of
incomplete
and/ or
incorrect
sentences
Errors so
severe they
detract from
meaning
Excessive
monotony/
same structure
Numerous
errors
Little variety in
syntax
Some errors
Some variety
Generally
correct
Numerous
serious errors
Patterns of
errors evident
No consistent
pattern of
errors Some
errors that do
not interfere
with meaning
Variety in
syntax
appropriate
and effective
Few errors
Few errors
Precision
and/or
sophistication
Very few, if
any, errors
Very few, if
any, errors
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USING THE 6 TRAIT ANALYTIC SCORING RUBRIC
Grade 7 Mini-lesson
The Six Trait Analytical Writing Rubric developed by the Northwest Regional Educational
Laboratory (NWREL) identifies and evaluates six traits, or characteristics, of effective writing on
a six point scale, with 5 the highest score and 1 the lowest. This rubric is useful to teachers
primarily because it is research-based, provides specific information about student performance,
and can be supported with classroom instructional activities. It is not specific to a particular
mode or genre of writing; it is designed to provide a consistent scoring method based on
recognized characteristics of effective writing common to all genres. The six trait rubric
provides clear and specific expectations for writing. In addition, it provides not only an
effective, consistent measure of student writing, but also a means to improve writing. The Six
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Trait Analytical Writing Rubric can be found on the following pages of this document.
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STUDENT: __________________________________________________________ TEACHER: ____________________________________________
DATE: _____________________
6 Trait Assessment
1
BEGINNING
ORGANIZATION
IDEAS
Ideas are the heart of the
message, the content of
the piece, the main
theme, with details that
enrich and develop that
theme.
The paper has no clear sense of purpose or central
theme. The reader must make inferences based on
sketchy or missing details.
Organization is the internal
structure, the thread of the
central meaning, the
logical and sometimes
intriguing pattern of the
ideas.
The idea is a simple restatement or a simple answer
to the question.
The writer has not begun to define the topic.
Everything seems as important as everything else.
The text may be repetitious, disconnected, and
contains too many random thoughts.
The writing lacks a clear sense of direction.
The paper does not have a recognizable
opening/introduction or closing/conclusion.
Connections between ideas are confusing.
Sequencing needs work.
Pacing feels awkward.
Key question: Does the
organizational structure
enhance the ideas and
make it easier to
understand?
2
3
4
5
3
DEVELOPING
5
STRONG
The writer is beginning to define the topic, even though
development is still basic or general.
The paper is clear and focused. It holds the reader’s
attention. Relevant anecdotes and details enrich the
central theme.
The topic is fairly broad.
The writer is still in search of a topic.
Information is limited or unclear or the length is not
adequate for development.
Key question: Did the
writer stay focused and
share original, fresh
information or perspective
about the topic?
SCORE: 1
Revised 12/08
The topic is narrow and manageable.
Support is attempted.
Ideas are reasonably clear.
Relevant, telling, quality details go beyond the
obvious.
Writer has difficulty going from general observations
to specifics.
Reasonably accurate details
The reader is left with questions.
Writing from knowledge or experience; ideas are
fresh and original.
The writer generally stays on topic.
Reader’s questions are anticipated and answered.
Insightful
The organizational structure is strong enough to move
the reader through the text without too much
confusion.
The paper has a recognizable opening/introduction
and closing/conclusion.
Transitions often work well.
The organizational structure of the paper enhances
and showcases the central idea or theme of the paper.
It includes a satisfying beginning and ending.
An inviting opening/introduction draws the reader in;
a satisfying closing/conclusion leaves the reader with
a sense of closure and resolution.
Thoughtful transitions
No title is present (if requested).
Sequencing shows some logic, yet structure takes
attention away from the content.
Problems with organization make it hard for the
reader to get a grip on the main point or story line.
Pacing is fairly well controlled.
Pacing is well controlled.
A title (if requested) is present.
The title (if requested) is original
Organization sometimes supports the main point or
story line.
Flows so smoothly the reader hardly thinks about it
Sequencing is logical and effective.
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VOICE
SENTENCE FLUENCY
Voice is the unique
perspective of the writer
evident in the piece
through the use of
compelling ideas,
engaging language, and
revealing details.
The writer of this paper speaks directly to the reader in
a manner that is individual, compelling, engaging, and
shows respect for the audience.
Purpose is unclear.
Writing is risk free, with no sense of the writer.
Attempt to connect with audience is earnest but
impersonal.
Uses topic, details, and language to strongly
connect with the audience.
Attempts to include content and structure to reflect
purpose.
Purpose is reflected by content and arrangement of
ideas.
Occasionally reveals personal details, but avoids risk.
The writer takes a risk with revealing details.
Expository or persuasive writing lacks consistent
engagement with the topic.
Expository or persuasive reflects understanding and
commitment to topic.
Narrative writing reflects limited individual
perspective.
Narrative writing is honest, personal, and engaging.
Key question: Would you
keep reading this piece if
it were longer?
Narrative writing lacks development of a point of
view.
Sentence fluency is the
rhythm and flow of the
language, the sound of
word patterns, the way in
which the writing plays to
the ear, not just the eye.
The reader has to practice quite a bit in order to give
this paper a fair interpretive reading.
The text hums along with a steady beat, but tends to
be more pleasant or businesslike than musical.
Sentences are choppy, incomplete, rambling, or
awkward. Phrasing does not sound natural.
Sentences get the job done in a routine fashion.
Sentences enhance the meaning.
Sentences are usually constructed correctly.
Sentences vary in length as well as structure.
Sentence beginnings are not ALL alike; some variety
is attempted.
Purposeful and varied sentence beginnings
Sentences begin the same way.
Endless connectives.
The reader sometimes has to hunt for clues.
Does not invite expressive oral reading.
Parts of the text invite expressive oral reading; others
may be stiff, awkward, choppy, or gangly.
Key question: Can you
FEEL the words and
phrases flow together as
you read it aloud?
CHOICE
WORD
The writer seems sincere but not fully engaged or
involved. The result is pleasant or even personable,
but not compelling.
Fails to connect with the audience
Expository or persuasive writing is mechanical,
showing no engagement with the topic.
Word choice is the use of
rich, colorful, precise
language that moves and
enlightens the reader.
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The writer seems uninvolved with the topic and the
audience.
Key question: Do the
words and phrases create
vivid pictures and linger in
your mind?
No “sentence sense” present.
The writing contains a limited use of vocabulary.
The language is functional, even if it lacks much
energy.
The writing has an easy flow, rhythm and cadence.
Sentences are well built.
Creative and appropriate connectives
The writing has cadence.
Words convey the intended message in a precise,
interesting, and natural way.
Words are nonspecific or distracting.
Many of the words don’t work.
Language is used incorrectly.
Limited vocabulary, misuse of parts of speech
Words and phrases are unimaginative and lifeless.
Jargon or clichés, persistent redundancy
Words are adequate and correct in a general sense.
Words are specific and accurate.
Familiar words and phrases communicate.
Striking words and phrases
Attempts colorful language.
Natural, effective and appropriate language.
Passive verbs, everyday nouns, mundane modifiers
Lively verbs, specific nouns and modifiers
Functional, with one or two fine moments
Language enhances and clarifies meaning.
Occasionally, the words show refinement and
precision.
Precision is obvious.
Tone is appropriate for genre.
CONVENTIONS
Conventions are the
mechanical correctness of
the piece; spelling,
grammar and usage,
paragraphing, use of
capitals, and punctuation.
Key question: How much
editing would have to be
done to be ready to share
with an outside source?
Errors in spelling, punctuation, capitalization, usage
and grammar and/or paragraphing repeatedly
distract the reader and make text difficult to read.
The writer shows reasonable control over a limited
range of standard writing conventions.
Spelling errors are frequent.
Spelling is usually correct or reasonably phonetic on
common words.
Punctuation is missing or incorrect.
End punctuation is usually correct.
Capitalization is random.
Most words are capitalized correctly.
Errors in grammar or usage are very noticeable.
Problems with grammar and usage are not serious.
Paragraphing is missing.
Paragraphing is attempted.
The reader must read once to decode, then again
for meaning.
Moderate (a little of this, a little of that) editing.
The writer demonstrates a good grasp of standard
writing conventions.
Spelling is generally correct.
Punctuation is accurate.
Capitalization skills are present.
Grammar and usage are correct.
Paragraphing tends to be sound.
The writer may manipulate conventions for stylistic
effect – and it works!
 A whole lot? Score 1 or 2
 Some? Score 3
 Very little? Score 4 or 5
*based upon 6-Trait Condensed Scoring Guide published by Northwest Regional Educational Laboratory
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English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 7 August, 2010
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 7 August, 2010
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Model Lessons:
English Language Arts Curriculum – Grade 7 August, 2010
Please contact Gary Pankieiwcz, ELA Supervisor, for examples of model lessons.
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