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ARTICLE DETAILS TITLE (PROVISIONAL) AUTHORS Measuring Shear-Wave Speed with Point Shear-Wave Elastography and MR Elastography: a Phantom Study Kishimoto, Riwa; Suga, Mikio; Koyama, Atsuhisa; Omatsu, Tokuhiko; Tachibana, Yasuhiko; Ebner, Daniel; Obata, Takayuki VERSION 1 - REVIEW REVIEWER REVIEW RETURNED GENERAL COMMENTS Giovanna Ferraioli Fondazione IRCCS Policlinico San Matteo, University of Pavia, Pavia, Italy Giovanna Ferraioli has served as a speaker for Philips Medical Systems, Hitachi Ltd, Toshiba Medical Systems. 23-Aug-2016 It is not correct to state that “there is a relative paucity of data available regarding the validity and variability of SWE relative TE”. In fact, plenty of studies have compared either pSWE or 2D-SWE with TE. Please delete this sentence. Palmeri et al. have studied the shear wave speed in viscoelatic phantoms using several US equipment and the speed of the shear wave was assessed at different depths. Their study should be cited and commented [Palmeri M, et al. RSNA QIBA ultrasound shear wave speed Phase II phantom study in viscoelastic media. Proceedings of the 2015 IEEE Ultrasonics Symposium, 2015International 2013:397–400]. M&M Page 10: the equation used to compare the values measured by US and MR elastography in this study is missed. Page 10, line 47: VTQ is not a system, it is a proprietary software. It is stated that “SWS was measured by fixing the transducer mechanically to the phantom with a pressure of 10 ± 0.5 kPa, a value obtained by reference to the pressure of clinical examination”. While this condition is true for the assessment of superficial organs, such as thyroid and breast, it doesn’t apply to the liver, which is studied through an intercostal space and a minimal pressure is exerted on the skin and the intercostal muscles but on the liver. Either the authors repeat the experiment also without any pressure or they state in the discussion that these results are not applicable to the study of the liver in vivo. MR elastography stiffness values are reported as shear modulus, while US elastography stiffness values are reported in Young modulus. The Young modulus is three times the shear modulus. Readers who are familiar with the stiffness values obtained with US elastography may get confused. This issue should be clarified. Moreover, the shear wave speed in the softest phantom was 1.41 m/s, and this speed in the liver tissue already indicates a significant Downloaded from http://bmjopen.bmj.com/ on June 18, 2017 - Published by group.bmj.com fibrosis. Using the same US equipment, in a meta-analysis that included nine studies the optimal cutoff values were 1.34, 1.55, and 1.80 m/s, respectively, for staging clinically significant fibrosis, severe fibrosis, and cirrhosis [Friedrich-Rust M, et al. Performance of acoustic radiation force impulse imaging for the staging of liver fibrosis: a pooled meta-analysis. J Viral Hepat 2012; 19:e212–e219]. Please clarify and discuss. REVIEWER REVIEW RETURNED Po-Hsiang Tsui Department of Medical Imaging and Radiological Sciences, Chang Gung University, Taiwan 05-Oct-2016 GENERAL COMMENTS This study compared shear wave speeds (SWS) of phantoms with known shear modulus measured by ultrasound-based point shearwave elastography (pSWE) and magnetic resonance elastography (MRE). The results showed that SWS obtained with both pSWE as well as MRE had a strong correlation with those obtained by rheometer. Note that the authors used commercial scanners for validations. In general, before a formal proposal of a commercial machine, the manufacturers perform testing and calibrations to confirm that the output value is reliable. For this reason, the findings in this work are expectable and not novel. Instead, the authors may be interested in comparing performances of using pSWE and MRE in characterizing clinical diseases. Such an experimental design may be more meaningful. REVIEWER Katarzyna Dobruch-Sobczak Cancer Center, Oncology Institute, Warsaw, Poland 08-Oct-2016 REVIEW RETURNED GENERAL COMMENTS RE: Shear-Wave Speed Measurement with Point Shear-Wave Elastography and MR Elastography: a Phantom Study comparison with rheometer `measurement. Thank you for sending this interesting paper to BMJ Open. REVIEWERS' COMMENTS: An interesting paper about shear wave speed measurement with pSWE and MR elastography, a phantom study General comments In general, this is a well-written paper that presents interesting data. The advantage of this study is that authors compared SW speed measurements in two different techniques. Do you think that these results, which not provide viscoelastic properties like soft tissue, could be the same in in vivo examination? There are some drawbacks in this study. I have the following concerns. Specific comments Introduction The first paragraph should be supported by more references about Downloaded from http://bmjopen.bmj.com/ on June 18, 2017 - Published by group.bmj.com US elastography and MRE (page 6 line 14, 26, page 7 line 18) Discussion: 1.P17 l53, instead the sentence: ” In another clinical study comparing MR and 2D SWE, Yoon et al. suggested that two methods may not be interchangeable, especially in stiffer livers”, is to general. It would be more convinient: In another clinical study comparing MR and 2D SWE, Yoon et al. sugessted that there was a moderate correlation in liver stiffness measurements in both SWE and MR, but both examination presented similar diagnostic performance for excluding hepatic fibrosis” 2.Could you summarise the past work in a table to improve readability? 3.Please add in conclusions how the results influenced on clinical applications. VERSION 1 – AUTHOR RESPONSE Reviewer: 1 Reviewer Name: Giovanna Ferraioli It is not correct to state that “there is a relative paucity of data available regarding the validity and variability of SWE relative TE”. In fact, plenty of studies have compared either pSWE or 2D-SWE with TE. Please delete this sentence. Palmeri et al. have studied the shear wave speed in viscoelatic phantoms using several US equipment and the speed of the shear wave was assessed at different depths. Their study should be cited and commented [Palmeri M, et al. RSNA QIBA ultrasound shear wave speed Phase II phantom study in viscoelastic media. Proceedings of the 2015 IEEE Ultrasonics Symposium, 2015International 2013:397–400]. We deleted that sentence and we have added the article of Dr. Palmeri et al. as Ref #13. M&M Page 10: the equation used to compare the values measured by US and MR elastography in this study is missed. Thank you for your suggestion. We have revised the equation visible. Page 10, line 47: VTQ is not a system, it is a proprietary software. We have changed it to “software”. It is stated that “SWS was measured by fixing the transducer mechanically to the phantom with a pressure of 10 ± 0.5 kPa, a value obtained by reference to the pressure of clinical examination”. While this condition is true for the assessment of superficial organs, such as thyroid and breast, it doesn’t apply to the liver, which is studied through an intercostal space and a minimal pressure is exerted on the skin and the intercostal muscles but on the liver. Either the authors repeat the experiment also without any pressure or they state in the discussion that these results are not applicable to the study of the liver in vivo. Downloaded from http://bmjopen.bmj.com/ on June 18, 2017 - Published by group.bmj.com Thank you for your important comment. We have added some discussion about this in the sixth paragraph in Discussion. MR elastography stiffness values are reported as shear modulus, while US elastography stiffness values are reported in Young modulus. The Young modulus is three times the shear modulus. Readers who are familiar with the stiffness values obtained with US elastography may get confused. This issue should be clarified. We have added some explanation concerning shear modulus and Young modules in “Phantom” part of Materials and Methods. Moreover, the shear wave speed in the softest phantom was 1.41 m/s, and this speed in the liver tissue already indicates a significant fibrosis. Using the same US equipment, in a meta-analysis that included nine studies the optimal cutoff values were 1.34, 1.55, and 1.80 m/s, respectively, for staging clinically significant fibrosis, severe fibrosis, and cirrhosis [Friedrich-Rust M, et al. Performance of acoustic radiation force impulse imaging for the staging of liver fibrosis: a pooled meta-analysis. J Viral Hepat 2012; 19:e212–e219]. Please clarify and discuss. We have added some discussion about this and the article of Friedrich-Rust et al. in the same paragraph discussing transducer pressure above. We think that MR and US elastography are going to be used widely not only for liver but also in variety of organs and diseases. Reviewer: 2 Reviewer Name: Po-Hsiang Tsui This study compared shear wave speeds (SWS) of phantoms with known shear modulus measured by ultrasound-based point shear-wave elastography (pSWE) and magnetic resonance elastography (MRE). The results showed that SWS obtained with both pSWE as well as MRE had a strong correlation with those obtained by rheometer. Note that the authors used commercial scanners for validations. In general, before a formal proposal of a commercial machine, the manufacturers perform testing and calibrations to confirm that the output value is reliable. For this reason, the findings in this work are expectable and not novel. Instead, the authors may be interested in comparing performances of using pSWE and MRE in characterizing clinical diseases. Such an experimental design may be more meaningful. Thank you for your comment. We have added mention of the present situation that manufacturers do not release their measurement specification of devices in the Introduction. Reviewer: 3 Reviewer Name: Katarzyna Dobruch-Sobczak An interesting paper about shear wave speed measurement with pSWE and MR elastography, a phantom study General comments In general, this is a well-written paper that presents interesting data. The advantage of this study is that authors compared SW speed measurements in two different techniques. Do you think that these results, which not provide viscoelastic properties like soft tissue, could be the same in in vivo examination? Downloaded from http://bmjopen.bmj.com/ on June 18, 2017 - Published by group.bmj.com This is a difficult question. As we mentioned in discussion, the same tendencies were demonstrated in some studies measuring liver stiffness. So we expect the same results will be obtained also in other organs providing the appropriate examination, but we have not evaluated that yet. We need to verify that in in-vivo examination. We have added these considerations in Discussion. Specific comments Introduction The first paragraph should be supported by more references about US elastography and MRE (page 6 line 14, 26, page 7 line 18) Thank you for your suggestion. We have added several more references. Discussion: 1.P17 l53, instead the sentence: ” In another clinical study comparing MR and 2D SWE, Yoon et al. suggested that two methods may not be interchangeable, especially in stiffer livers”, is to general. It would be more convinient: In another clinical study comparing MR and 2D SWE, Yoon et al. sugessted that there was a moderate correlation in liver stiffness measurements in both SWE and MR, but both examination presented similar diagnostic performance for excluding hepatic fibrosis” Thank you for your kind comment. We have revised that according your suggestion. 2.Could you summarise the past work in a table to improve readability? Thank you for your suggestion. We have added a supplementary table C, in which similar articles are summarized. 3.Please add in conclusions how the results influenced on clinical applications. We have added some conclusion about the influence in clinical practice. We also have added some consideration in discussion concerning the influences on clinical applications. VERSION 2 – REVIEW REVIEWER REVIEW RETURNED GENERAL COMMENTS Giovanna Ferraioli Researcher, Fondazione IRCCS Policlinico San Matteo, University of Pavia, Italy Speaker for Philips Healthcare; Travel grant from Toshiba Medical Systems, Hitachi Ltd, Esaote SpA 04-Nov-2016 The article is interesting and well written. There is only one minor change that should be made in the discussion, on page 58, line 30: Please delete the phrase “or for assessing the liver subcostally” since the subcostal approach is not recommended for the assessment of liver stiffness. Downloaded from http://bmjopen.bmj.com/ on June 18, 2017 - Published by group.bmj.com VERSION 2 – AUTHOR RESPONSE Reviewer: 1 The article is interesting and well written. There is only one minor change that should be made in the discussion, on page 58, line 30: Please delete the phrase “or for assessing the liver subcostally” since the subcostal approach is not recommended for the assessment of liver stiffness. We have deleted the phrase “or for assessing the liver subcostally”. We have also exchanged Figure 2, because superscript of R2 had been missed. 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