Planning Commentary Write the Planning commentary (of no more than 9 single-spaced pages, including prompts) by providing your response to each of the prompts below. If you are prompted to provide any explanations that can be found in your lesson plans, refer to the appropriate page(s) of those plans. 1. Content Focus Summarize the central focus for the content you will teach this learning segment. The content focus of this learning segment is the content and concept of ballad and narrative poetry. The school has a focus on skill sets, so as I move into this unit it will be with the intent of building the abilities to analyze and formulate opinions on poetry, while having a firm grasp on the vocabulary of poetic devices that will be featured in the poems. By the time this specific lesson is being done, students will already have seen the vocabulary within the lesson. This will simply give them an opportunity to apply it and continue to practice it. Students will develop and apply vocabulary through exposure to texts, apply a conceptual understanding of new words, use a variety of strategies to understand what they read, apply and demonstrate listening skills appropriately in a variety of settings and for a variety of purposes, and analyze elements of narrative texts to facilitate understanding and interpretation of narrative and ballad poetry. Students in my 7th grade Language Arts class will be learning about seven different forms of poetry: haiku, concrete, lyric, haiku, narrative, limerick, and free verse. Thus, this ballad and narrative section is just one piece in an overall unit of about three weeks. Each week is comprised of learning the history and features two to three types of poetry, reading examples, writing them, and then taking a summative assessment in the form of a test. Throughout the unit, students are creating an individual poetry book which features their own poetry as well as profession examples of each type. At the end of the entire unit, another summative assessment will be completed in the form of scoring their poetry books with a rubric, which will additionally give students feedback on their personal work. During the ballad/narrative piece of the unit, we will look at the following: the history and format of ballad and narrative poetry; how the two types of poems compare; review the terms of poetic elements, figurative language, and sound devices featured in poetry; analyze the poem “The Highwayman;” summarize the content and plot structure of the poem; debate opinions based on the content of the poem; write a class ballad; write individual ballad poems; take a test on ballad poetry and various poetic terms. This learning segment will be rigorous as it approaches poetry not only for its forms, but also for its history in a sort of cross-curricular approach. It allows students to orally analyze and physically produce their own work as well as the works of others. 2. Knowledge of Students to Inform Teaching For each of the categories, describe what you know about your students’ prior learning and experience with respect to the central focus of the learning segment. What do they know, what can they do, and what are they learning to do? Consider the variety of learners in your class who may require different strategies/support. a & b. Academic development & Academic language development: My students have touched on poetry in 6th grade, but from pre-assessment, it seems they have only carried over the most basic concepts, such as shape poetry (which they will now learn to call concrete) and some essential poetry vocabulary such as rhyme and onomatopoeia. While many of them still seem to remember the general definition of personification, the concept of the difference between similes and metaphors has been surprisingly lost. Thus, their prior knowledge and general academic development is at entirely different stages, especially across the different leveled classrooms. However, I have come to learn that several of my students are actually gifted poets already. While they lack the ability to break down elements of poetry and explain to me each device they are using, two of my students, one of them being the student considered Gifted and Talented, already have collections of poetry at home. They were quite eager to have an opportunity to put their poems in a poetry book that I would get to see. Ricky (the Gifted/Talented student) writes mostly narrative style poems with consistent meter and rhyme. When I asked him about his poetry, he said, “I can’t write poetry that doesn’t rhyme.” My student Mikayla writes mainly dark free verse style poetry. Her poems do tell stories, but not in the same advanced narrative structure that would be found in a lengthier poem. Instead, hers feature a greater amount of descriptive language and elevated imagery. These two students, of course, are the exception, not the rule. The majority of my students fall somewhere on a spectrum of general inexperience. Some are very eager to learn new forms of poetry. Since we have already completed the initial poetry book making activity, I can say with confidence that many of them are showing pride and ownership over their creations. This simple fact has inspired many students to start asking when we will write poems in class. I am seeing that when students come in, they are going right over to the class piles where their books are kept and retrieving them to keep at their desks for the duration of class. Some students have already brought in their own poems (some of which are from previous academic years, and others that are simple free verse pieces). This is by no means universal, however. I do have students that are completely disinterested in the entire unit. They have put little work into their books and continually ask how long the poetry unit will be and if they have to write poetry. These students feel that there is no “use” for poetry in the “real world,” which I have addressed on an individual basis as needed. c. Family/community/cultural assets: The class I will be focusing on for this unit is a very diverse class compared to my others. We have an interesting and often times volatile dynamic as we have Ricky, the Gifted and Talented student with a 504 for ADHD, along with three students classified by administration and peers (as determined early in the year by anonymous polls and counseling reports) as bullies. The bullies in the class tend to pick on the Gifted and Talented student because he consistently demonstrates his advanced knowledge across various subject areas. Poetry is no exception. Given opportunities in the past to present written work, Ricky has presented poetry, which his peers have made fun of him for. To make the dynamic more interesting, one of the bullies, Myles, has recently been approved for a 504 plan due to his parents continued pushing. Myles’s parents felt that he was treated unfairly for being an African American student in a mostly Caucasian school. The councilors at the school, Myles’s psychologist, and the administrators in charge of IEP/504 plans conversely seem to believe that Myles perceives his peers as viewing him differently as a result of paranoia. At any mention of the words “dark,” “black,” or words with similar color associations that could be used in context to describe African Americans, Myles looks around for reactions. This makes Language Arts interesting as darkness is often a theme discussed in class. When one of his peers treats him in a way he thinks is unfair, he tells any adult nearby that it is “because he is black.” Myles achieves at an all A level and is one of the most intelligent students in my class. He is well received by his peers (except those he targets with bullying), and does not have any major disciplinary concerns, other than those aforementioned. Despite the data demonstrating Myles’s achievements, his parents continued to push through for the 504, which Myles laughs about in class and rolls his eyes at now that is has been approved. One of the actual accommodations in the 504 is that Myles is not to be joked with as any joking could cause him to think he is being made fun of for being African American. This, as one might imagine, create a new set of classroom management concerns. The community this school is in is mostly affluent, so students are very technologically savvy, needing extra media centered supports to maintain interest. They often lose focus when only a text is introduced. They also do significantly better expressing themselves verbally than in any form of writing. For example, if I ask students a prompting question about a text, they can raise their hand, be called on, and explain in detail the answer. On the other hand, given the same prompt and writing an answer yields less detailed responses and demonstrates a generally lower level of thinking. d. Social and emotional development: Socially and emotionally speaking, most of the girls are typical 12 year olds. They love to chat and be social, and take continual probing to work. The boys are social within more specific groups and cliques. They tend to push their limits in concerns with discipline much more so than the girls. Students in this class enjoy working in groups, but need strict time limits to force them to get work done, due to their chattiness. This seems typical of middle school students from my observations. 3. Description of Text Used Provide the title, author (or, if a film, director), and a short discussion (about a paragraph) of salient features of the text(s) that a scorer who is unfamiliar with the text(s) needs to know in order to understand your instruction. These might include such things as the genre, text structure, theme, plot, imagery, This learning segment heavily features the poem “The Highwayman” by Alfred Noyes. This poem is perhaps one of the best examples of a ballad and narrative poem and is a 7th grade level text. The poem is about an 18th century highwayman who is in love with Bess, the daughter of an innkeeper. He tells her he is going to get some gold, then return for her. A jealous stable-man overhears their conversation and reports the highwayman to the Redcoats, who come to the inn and tie the innkeeper’s daughter up as bait for him to return. Knowing he will come to rescue her, Bess kills herself with the gun the Redcoats have strapped beneath her breast, after struggling to get her finger onto the trigger. The highwayman hears the gun shot and turns around. The next morning, he finds out what has happened and returns, only to be killed in the road by the Redcoats. The poem is not written in what I will call “classic ballad form” during instruction, but is nevertheless a powerful example due to its rhyme, musical qualities, and advanced usage of figurative language and poetic devices. As this is both a ballad and narrative poem, it features all five parts of a typical plot structure, which is excellent as the students are very familiar with plot structure and can analyze it. The themes in the text are morality, love, greed, and death, which are additionally symbols the students can analyze in the text and the visual supplement I will be using. During instruction, we will focus on the poetic elements, specifically simile, metaphor, rhyme, meter, onomatopoeia, and symbolism. Students will be encouraged to find other poetic devices in the poem, but mastery over these specifically mentioned will be necessary to do well on the test at the end of this segment. Furthermore, we will analyze how this poem is both a ballad and narrative, and use it to discuss the common features of both types of poems. Students will also discuss their opinions on the content of the poem, particularly whether what Bess did was brave or stupid. My students have very strong opinions, almost all of which will be different in some way. This will open up the potential for debate amongst them. 4. Supporting Student Learning in English-Language Arts: Respond to prompts to explain how your plans support your students’ learning of English-language arts related to the central focus of the learning segment. a. Explain how your understanding of your students’ prior learning, experiences, and development guided your choice or adaptation of learning tasks and materials to develop students’ ability to comprehend, construct meaning from, interpret, and/or respond to a complex task: I understand that my students have read poetry before. However, as I mention, preassessment indicates their knowledge is only partial and has not carried over as much as instructors might hope. Therefore, I am prepared to work on terms and forms from the ground up to ensure that all students will be given the opportunity to access the material in as equal a way as possible. I also know that some of my students are disengaged from poetry. For both of these reasons, Lessons 1, 2, and 3 have many supports to try and engage my students in different ways and provide them with the necessary background to understand and make connections between what they already know and need to know. I am always sure to pose questions before giving answers to see what students already know. We will continually build on the vocabulary that has already been established throughout the unit, as well as the terms they have learned in previous grades. I chose the supplemental materials of the reading, song, and video for “The Highwayman” in order to address student’s media literacy. Since my students are already very intimately acquainted with various uses of media, I try to address that as much as possible. I approached the lesson by looking at the needs of my many learners. As I have students with ADHD, I knew I wanted to have materials that would be different from the “teacher stands and lectures at us” model. Because of this, I chose to have the text be read to everyone, have it in a music form (which really seems to engage a large group of students), and then a completely visual form (another thing the students really love). Instead of reading the selection silently, I chose to ensure that they would see the text multiple times in different forms. To help them construct meaning, I will have students give summarizes of different parts of the text. I will also ask them to consider the emotional effects of different forms of media portrayal. Then, I will pose probing questions and ask for emotional responses to various parts of the text, how various words make them feel, and how that contributes to the mood and tone of the poem. A lot of what inspired this lesson and how to approach it is the concept of flow. “Going with the Flow: How to Engage Boys (and Girls) in Their Literacy Learning” addresses the concept of flow (Smith & Wilhelm). Flow experiences are a concept that researcher Csikszentmihalyi has spent his life looking at. He describes them as times when “people are so involved in an activity that nothing else seems to matter” (4). Furthermore, students need an appropriate challenge. Enjoyment comes to the students whenever the opportunity for action is viewed as equivalent to what they are personally capable of. Content and assessment should be “Neither too difficult, nor too easy” (7). This relates back to the goal of control and competence. In order to demonstrate mastery, students need to have something that is precisely the right challenge level. Of course, it can be difficult to achieve this initially in a classroom setting, but, by getting to know our students, we can provide better assessments and materials. Flow comes with clear goals and is enhanced by immediate feedback (8). Competency needs to be perceived and reflected on at once, ensuring that students are not neglected, but rather recognized for what goals they have achieved. Success for the students should be measurable, both for them, and us, so that we can give them positive feedback and encouragement. They need to feel that their efforts are rewarded. Finally, flow has a focus on immediate experience. The text states that material should be compelling so much that interference does not take away from enjoyment (10). If I am able to have both literal and figurative flow from piece to piece of these lessons, I feel that I can help my students adapt to the needs of the lesson and connect well with the concepts and texts. b. How are the plans for instruction sequence in the learning segment to build connections between students’ learning and experiences and new knowledge?: By this point in the unit, students will have already been exposed at least once or twice to all poetic devices, as we will talk about them in different types of poems; students will already have learned haiku, concrete, and lyric at this point. Additionally, one of the first activities in the overall poetry unit was defining and finding examples of sound devices and types of figurative language. They will already have had one test, written three poems, found three professional examples of given types of poetry, and gotten used to the pattern of learning the history and form prior to reading and writing. We will frequently write examples of poems together, and I will always answer any questions during the writing process. Therefore, I feel that I am providing a proper amount of scaffolding and addressing student needs. In this particular learning segment, students will first learn the history of ballad poetry. They will then take a close look at the rules. We will view examples of the classic ballad form, then move into looking at a poem which is not a classic form, but nonetheless still a very important example of ballad and narrative. This will open up discussion for ballad and narrative poetry and how the terms are interrelated. c: Describe common student errors or misunderstanding within your content focus and how you will address them: Common student errors come in missing specific instructions such as how many stanzas a type of poem should have or where rhyme should fall; i.e. some students will switch odd for even lines. Additionally, some students mistake the requirements I give them in writing their individual poems for what is actually a requirement of the professional form of poetry. For example, my students were asked to pick a symbol and create a concrete poem that addressed the symbol and the ideas/themes/concepts surrounding it. Not all concrete poems have a specific universal symbol or theme. On the test, some students write that a feature is that concrete poems must use a symbol. Therefore, they are mixing up the requirements of their writing with the actual requirements of the form. To address this, whenever I see this error, or a similar error, I approach the student individually with a comment on their test/poem and explain it. I then address it to the class as a common error and explain what the educational value is in asking them to have it as a requirement, but remind them that it is not always a feature in the poetic form. d. Explain how, throughout the learning segment, you will help students make connections between textual references, constructions of meaning, interpretations, and response to text to deepen student learning: As Thoman and Jolls write in their article "Media Literacy Education: Lessons from the Center for Media Literacy," "Today information about the world around us comes to us not only through words on a piece of paper, but more and more through the powerful images and sounds of out multimedia culture" (180). With media comes new ways of learning, thinking, and expressing. Our students today are much more interested in engaging with media on computers, and this is such a technologically advanced school, it seems only appropriate to utilize what the students are most engaged and familiar with. “The Highwayman” is a text that can seem very foreign, so looking at it a few times and then seeing a visual representation can really “seal the deal” for some students. It will really click with them because that is what they know to relate to. Music can be the same for many of them, though music is not as universal based on varying tastes and exposure. My hope here is that auditory and visual learners will be engaged, that seeing the text several times (read, sung, in writing, orally explained, etc) will ensure the basics are grasped, and that the ability to formulate responses in both a spoken and written form will help support their understanding as well. This plan certainly addresses the Universal Design for Learning model in many ways. In concerns with options for comprehension, this lesson does quite a bit by activating background knowledge, focusing on critical features and big ideas, and supporting memory. It provides options for self-regulation, mainly through the use of sticky notes and continual prompting. Students have to reflect on the text to formulate an opinion about it. We look at multiple options for language and symbols through the various forms of media, having frontloaded vocabulary and continuing to touch on it, and decoding the text piece by piece. I feel confident that this lesson does many things to ensure that students will be engaged in some form or another. While it is impossible to guarantee each student will be fully engaged 100% of the time, I think the different methods will appeal at different times. e. Describe instructional strategies planned to support students with specific learning needs. This will vary based on what you know about your students: I have a mix of approaches for students with various needs. We have lecture, writing, discussion, debate, listening, and reading. I hope that throughout this learning segment, I can address many different styles of learning. I have no problems giving my 504 students their additional time on any activities, but otherwise, they are right on level with the rest of the class as far as achievement. Ricky, being both Gifted and Talented and ADHD does need many reminders, but his poetry is his passion, so I have a feeling that he may not need as many reminders as usual. Nonetheless, I will be sure to give them. Again, the primary approach of Lesson 2 is to expose the students to “The Highwayman” text multiple times in multiple forms. They have access to the original text, an audio reading, an audio song, and a visual representation of the storyline. Each builds on the other. First the students get an outline of the story to scaffold them into the actual text. Then, they have a traditional reading (with an audio component for modification). Third, they have a song version, which appeals to students who like to follow patterns or enjoy music. Finally, they get a visual, non-literary or word based representation. These are meant to appeal to different styles of learning. Those that like the text approach have the book in front of them. They also have sticky notes to help them monitor their findings, which can appeal to the few who like to write. There is not a lot of “teacher talking” during this lesson, as Lesson 1 frontloads most of the vocabulary and knowledge necessary to understand the text. Additionally, we will be building on vocabulary already used throughout the rest of the unit. 5. Supporting Student Understanding and Use of Academic Language Respond to the prompts below to explain how your plans support your students’ academic language development. a. Identify the key academic language demand and explain why it is integral to the central focus for the segment and appropriate to students’ academic language development. Consider language functions and language forms, essential vocabulary or phrases for the concepts and skills being taught, and instructional language necessary for students to understand or produce oral and/or written language within learning tasks and activities. Before this learning segment, students will need to have a basic grasp of Language Arts terms such as plot, character, and theme, which will help enhance their ability to discuss the content of poems. This is a very media centered and student centered lesson, which can help them stay on task. It still gets the content across and re-addresses essential vocabulary taught earlier. It also exposes students to a classic text. I feel that this learning segment will help students develop their ability to talk about and analyze figurative language and the elements of poetry. My students need to master the language demands of poetry, specifically the ballad and narrative form. This requires being able to identify, analyze, and use poetic sound devices and figurative language, including but not limited to the following: alliteration, consonance, meter, repetition, rhyme, metaphor, simile, onomatopoeia, symbol, and imagery. Students need to be able to not only write their own examples of various types of poetry, but also analyze how authors why authors make certain language choices and use devices in their poetry to communicate plot, mood, and tone. Within this learning segment, students will have to look at the common features of ballad and narrative poetry and compare and contrast not only the two forms in general, but how the rules of the specific form relate to the poem ”The Highwayman.” Students should be able to look at poetic language forms and recognize, as well as emulate, them in their own writing. b. Explain how planned instructional supports will assist students to understand academic language related to the key language demand to express and develop their content learning. Describe how planned supports vary for students at different levels of academic language development. My planned instructional supports include the front loading and constant review of poetic terms, a scaffolded approach to writing, and multiple examples of poetry (or in this case, multiple forms of the same poem for the purpose of addressing multiple means of learning and repletion of material in new and accessible ways). Orally, they will get to help write a class poem and present their own writing. As far as written work is concerned, they will have workshop time to draft in class, receive feedback, and then will finish their poems at home. They also have to find professional examples, which I will check on a weekly basis. If their professional examples do not meet the requirements of whatever type of poem I have asked them to get, I will catch early on that they do not understand the form. Students will get constant exposure to the necessary terms and will have support from me when it comes to producing their own work. I have answered any questions they ask, provided assistance, aided in brainstorming, and reminded students of rules as I see them being broken. Seeing the elements in use as we find them and demonstrate them as a class will also help to assist students in understanding the academic language. I certainly do not shy away from repetition and reminders. Those that need additional help can also be pulled during my last period tutoring time to receive individual or class help. I have done this once with a type of sentence structure than about 75% of my students understood, but the final quarter did not. I simply pull those students for the tutoring block and given them additional supports and one on one time. Furthermore, I remind students of what we have talked about, use transition words and qualifiers to clarify meaning. I realize that students will produce on different levels, but the important part is their ability to meet whatever requirements I give them. For example, their ballad must have ballad features, but be a narrative as well (all ballads are narratives, but not all narratives are ballads). The requirements I will give them are as follows: 8/6/8/6 syllables per stanza, or close enough that the rhythm is present; 4 quatrains; even lines must rhyme (ABAB or ABCB rhyme scheme); should go to a ballad tune (think Gilligan’s Island) or otherwise be musical. With these requirements, I allow students the freedom of content. However, in order to produce a proper poem, they must understand rhyme schemes, what a quatrain is, and how syllables create rhythm. I find that students naturally begin using the poetic devices that we learn. Although I have not put a specific device as a requirement for their ballad other than rhyme/rhythm, they have had to demonstrate imagery, repetition, alliteration, and other poetic elements in the past, which I believe many will continue to build on. 6. Monitoring Student Learning a. Explain how the informal and formal assessments were selected and/or designed to provide evidence you will use to monitor student progress toward the standards/objectives. Consider how the assessments will provide evidence of students’ abilities to comprehend, construct meaning from, interpret, and/or respond to a complex text. I will be assessing students in both informal and formal ways. During Lesson 1, 2, and 3 formative assessments will be in the form of discussion. Additional formative assessments will be monitoring student writing during workshop times. The formal assessment will be primarily in the final test at the end of the learning segment. After this specific learning segment, students will also be graded on their poems overall (all seven poems in their poetry book) on a rubric, based on the requirements I gave for each type of poem. These various assessments will provide evidence of how well they are taking in the material because I will constantly have a grasp of where they are at given discussions, probing questions, review, and summary activities. Students should demonstrate the ability to identify various devices, interpret “The Highwayman,” comprehend how the author has used devices, and formulate opinions on the content and character motivations. Students should also be able to write their own examples of ballad poetry, after seeing examples, as well as learning rules and features. By the end of this learning segment, students will hopefully be able to identify ballad and narrative poetry, in addition to various poetic devices when given a passage to analyze. The final assessment that I will be analyzing and providing feedback for is how they do in writing their own ballad/narrative poems. I feel that this is the best way to show how they grasped the overall ballad concept because it requires them to engage in creating their own example of a type of work. They need to be able to emulate the type of poetry and use its features proficiently in order to communicate the content of their work and demonstrate mastery of the basic concepts. b. Describe any modifications or accommodations to the planned assessment tools or procedures that allow students with specific needs to demonstrate their learning. The accommodations for my two students with 504s will be additional time, as well as the ability to work in a quiet area. Our school has a room called “Content Mastery,” where students can go work independently without distractions. Myles and Ricky will have the ability to go to Content Mastery to work on their tests and any other formal assessments. With concerns to more informal assessments, they will be given the same amount of attention when it comes to feedback on their personal work. They both have preferential seating close to the board to help them maintain focus. Both are very active students, so I do not worry much about assessing their understanding when it comes to participation in general. Final Notes on Rationale This unit is an essential part of preparing students for the Middle School Assessments, but I also feel it is necessary to expose students to poetry, not just because it is part of the core curriculum, but because they will continue to see it throughout high school and into college if they pursue any humanities degree. Exposing students to poetry in a detailed and rigorous way will challenge them, but will also help them do well in later grades when the content comes up again. I have pushed to expose my students to terms that are not necessarily a part of the curriculum that I know for certain they will see later because I feel that I can approach their zone of proximal development and still have them grasp the concepts they absolutely must have at this level. As a student of education, I have strongly focused on the concept of intrinsic motivation and student choices. This poetry unit and learning segment still offers students choices, as they are given a few rules to follow, but are not limited in what they are able to write (within school appropriate reason, of course). I feel that because I have given students freedom to create their own books and individualized works, they will have a sense of intrinsic motivation because of choices, and extrinsic motivation in trying to impress me with their knowledge of various poetic terms and rules, creativity, and work ethic. The only way to see if this is true is to go ahead and teach the unit all the way through and assess the quality of their work in the end. Works Cited (Within Commentary) Thoman, Elizabeth, and Tessa Jolls. "Media Literacy Education: Lessons From The Center For Media Literacy." Yearbook Of The National Society For The Study Of Education (WileyBlackwell) 104.1 (2005): 180-205. Education Research Complete. Web. 07 Mar. 2012. CAST. “Universal design for learning guidelines version 1.0.” Wakefield, MA. (2008). Print. Smith, M. W., & Wilhelm, J. D. (2006). Going with the flow: how to engage boys (and girls) in their literacy learning. Portsmouth: Heinmann. Lesson 1 Works Cited Anderson, B. (2009, April 25). Teaching poetry: ballads. Retrieved from http://edublahg.blogspot.com/2009/04/teaching-poetry-ballads.html Poets.org. (n.d.). Poetic Form: Ballad. Retrieved from http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/5769 Lesson 2 Works Cited (2009, January 29). "The Highwayman" by Alfred Noyes (poetry reading). Youtube. Retrieved from http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=99UH0JB7m5A (2009, September 03). Loreena Mckennitt-The Highwayman (With lyrics). Youtube. Retrieved from http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=teq2m0BN-Wo (2007, July 09). The Highwayman. Youtube. Retrieved from http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q1OVqAANwJE Noyes, Alfred (4 Oct 2004). The Highwayman. Poetry X, Edited by Jough Dempsey. Retrieved 04 Apr. 2012 from http://poetry.poetryx.com/poems/6982/
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