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Date: 25 October 2014
To Whom It May Concern
REVISION TO MANUSCRIPT HEPATORENAL SYNDROME IN THE EMERGENCY DEPARTMENT: A CASE REPORT
Thank you for reviewing our article.
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Removed all abbreviations in abstract
Added ‘Table 1’ for key points to be noted from this case report in place of the figure
Added ‘Table 2’ for the criteria of HRS from IAC, and added reference via Endnote to paper by Salerno
et al
Added ‘Table 3’ for key findings from CT Scan detailing established liver cirrhosis in place of the figure
of the CT Scan report*
Added appropriate figures below figure headings, and renumbered in sequence
Edited and shortened lines 30-32 under ‘The Case’
Edited and shortened lines 3-9 under ‘Discussion’
Acknowledged and accepted punctuation and grammatical edits
Updated word counts on cover page
*We apologise that we are unable to obtain the actual image from the CT Scan by the stipulated dateline. We have
uploaded a screenshot of the CT Scan report titled ‘Table 3’ under Supplementary Files as a reference.
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Best Regards
Tan Win Jim (Mr)
Year 5 Medical Student
Yong Loo Lin School of Medicine
National University of Singapore