Novel Companion A Girl Named Disaster Barrio Boy Ernesto Galarza Nancy Farmer Picture Bride Yoshiko Uchida Dogsong Gary Paulsen The Story of My Life Helen Keller The Glory Field Walter Dean Myers Photo Credits 7 Joson/zefa/CORBIS; 11 23 Bettmann/CORBIS; 35 William Campbell/Sygma/ CORBIS; 51 Hulton-Deutsch Collection/CORBIS; 55 79 CORBIS; 95 Rob Howard/ CORBIS; 123 Bettmann/CORBIS; 139 Giorgio Viera/CORBIS; 143 155 Bettmann/ CORBIS; 183 CORBIS; 187 199 Bettmann/CORBIS; 227 Brian David Stevens/ CORBIS; 243 Bettmann/CORBIS. Acknowledgments Grateful acknowledgment is given to authors, publishers, photographers, museums, and agents for permission to reprint the following copyrighted material. Every effort has been made to determine copyright owners. In case of any omissions, the Publisher will be pleased to make suitable acknowledgments in future editions. Copyright © by The McGraw-Hill Companies, Inc. All rights reserved. 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Send all inquiries to: Glencoe/McGraw-Hill 8787 Orion Place Columbus, OH 43240-4027 ISBN 13: 978-0-07-889152-6 ISBN 10: 0-07-889152-3 Printed in the United States of America. 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 047 14 13 12 11 10 09 TABLE OF CONTENTS To Students, Parents, Guardians. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 1 Interactive Reading Lessons . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 2 Note-Taking Systems . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 4 Note-Taking Lessons . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 5 A Girl Named Disaster by Nancy Farmer. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 7 Introduction to the Novel . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 8 Meet the Author . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 10 CHAPTERS 1–12 Before You Read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 11 Active Reading Graphic Organizer . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 13 Interactive Reading: Literary Element. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 14 Interactive Reading: Reading Skill or Strategy . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 16 On-Page Note-Taking . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 18 Cornell Note-Taking . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 19 After You Read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 20 CHAPTERS 13–30 Before You Read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 23 Active Reading Graphic Organizer . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 25 Interactive Reading: Literary Element. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 26 Interactive Reading: Reading Skill or Strategy . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 28 On-Page Note-Taking . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 30 Cornell Note-Taking . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 31 After You Read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 32 CHAPTERS 31–42 Before You Read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 35 Active Reading Graphic Organizer . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 37 Interactive Reading: Literary Element. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 38 Interactive Reading: Reading Skill or Strategy . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 40 On-Page Note-Taking . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 42 Cornell Note-Taking . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 43 After You Read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 44 Work with Related Readings . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 47 Connect to Other Literature . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 48 Respond Through Writing . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 50 iii TA BLE OF CONTENTS Picture Bride by Yoshiko Uchida . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 51 Introduction to the Novel . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 52 Meet the Author . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 54 CHAPTERS 1-–9 Before You Read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 55 Active Reading Graphic Organizer . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 57 Interactive Reading: Literary Element. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 58 Interactive Reading: Reading Skill or Strategy . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 60 On-Page Note-Taking . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 62 Cornell Note-Taking . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 63 After You Read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 64 CHAPTERS 10–23 Before You Read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 67 Active Reading Graphic Organizer . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 69 Interactive Reading: Literary Element. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 70 Interactive Reading: Reading Skill or Strategy . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 72 On-Page Note-Taking . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 74 Cornell Note-Taking . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 75 After You Read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 76 CHAPTERS 24–35 Before You Read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 79 Active Reading Graphic Organizer . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 81 Interactive Reading: Literary Element. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 82 Interactive Reading: Reading Skill or Strategy . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 84 On-Page Note-Taking . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 86 Cornell Note-Taking . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 87 After You Read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 88 Work with Related Readings . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 91 Connect to Other Literature . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 92 Respond Through Writing . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 94 iv TABLE OF CONTENTS Dogsong by Gary Paulsen . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 95 Introduction to the Novel . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 96 Meet the Author . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 98 CHAPTERS 1–5 Before You Read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 99 Active Reading Graphic Organizer . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 101 Interactive Reading: Literary Element. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 102 Interactive Reading: Reading Skill or Strategy . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 104 On-Page Note-Taking . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 106 Cornell Note-Taking . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 107 After You Read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 108 CHAPTERS 6–10 Before You Read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 111 Active Reading Graphic Organizer . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 113 Interactive Reading: Literary Element. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 114 Interactive Reading: Reading Skill or Strategy . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 116 On-Page Note-Taking . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 118 Cornell Note-Taking . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 119 After You Read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 120 CHAPTERS 11–PART 3 Before You Read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 123 Active Reading Graphic Organizer . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 125 Interactive Reading: Literary Element. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 126 Interactive Reading: Reading Skill or Strategy . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 128 On-Page Note-Taking . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 130 Cornell Note-Taking . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 131 After You Read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 132 Work with Related Readings . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 135 Connect to Other Literature . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 136 Respond Through Writing . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 138 v TA BLE OF CONTENTS Barrio Boy by Ernesto Galarza . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 139 Introduction to the Novel . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 140 Meet the Author . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 142 CHAPTERS 1–11 Before You Read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 143 Active Reading Graphic Organizer . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 145 Interactive Reading: Literary Element. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 146 Interactive Reading: Reading Skill or Strategy . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 148 On-Page Note-Taking . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 150 Cornell Note-Taking . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 151 After You Read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 152 CHAPTERS 12–21 Before You Read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 155 Active Reading Graphic Organizer . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 157 Interactive Reading: Literary Element. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 158 Interactive Reading: Reading Skill or Strategy . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 160 On-Page Note-Taking . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 162 Cornell Note-Taking . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 163 After You Read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 164 CHAPTERS 22–31 Before You Read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 167 Active Reading Graphic Organizer . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 169 Interactive Reading: Literary Element. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 170 Interactive Reading: Reading Skill or Strategy . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 172 On-Page Note-Taking . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 174 Cornell Note-Taking . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 175 After You Read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 176 Work with Related Readings . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 179 Connect to Other Literature . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 180 Respond Through Writing . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 182 vi TABLE OF CONTENTS The Story of My Life by Helen Keller . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 183 Introduction to the Autobiography . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 184 Meet the Author . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 186 CHAPTERS 1–10 Before You Read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 187 Active Reading Graphic Organizer . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 189 Interactive Reading: Literary Element. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 190 Interactive Reading: Reading Skill or Strategy . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 192 On-Page Note-Taking . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 194 Cornell Note-Taking . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 195 After You Read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 196 CHAPTERS 11–17 Before You Read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 199 Active Reading Graphic Organizer . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 201 Interactive Reading: Literary Element. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 202 Interactive Reading: Reading Skill or Strategy . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 204 On-Page Note-Taking . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 206 Cornell Note-Taking . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 207 After You Read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 208 CHAPTERS 18–23 Before You Read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 211 Active Reading Graphic Organizer . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 213 Interactive Reading: Literary Element. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 214 Interactive Reading: Reading Skill or Strategy . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 216 On-Page Note-Taking . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 218 Cornell Note-Taking . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 219 After You Read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 220 Work with Related Readings . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 223 Connect to Other Literature . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 224 Respond Through Writing . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 226 vii TA BLE OF CONTENTS The Glory Field by Walter Dean Myers . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 227 Introduction to the Autobiography . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 228 Meet the Author . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 230 CHAPTERS JULY 1753–APRIL 1900 Before You Read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 231 Active Reading Graphic Organizer . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 233 Interactive Reading: Literary Element. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 234 Interactive Reading: Reading Skill or Strategy . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 236 On-Page Note-Taking . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 238 Cornell Note-Taking . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 239 After You Read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 240 CHAPTERS MAY 1930–JANUARY 1964 Before You Read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 243 Active Reading Graphic Organizer . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 245 Interactive Reading: Literary Element. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 246 Interactive Reading: Reading Skill or Strategy . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 248 On-Page Note-Taking . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 250 Cornell Note-Taking . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 251 After You Read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 252 CHAPTERS AUGUST 1994–EPILOGUE Before You Read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 255 Active Reading Graphic Organizer . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 257 Interactive Reading: Literary Element. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 258 Interactive Reading: Reading Skill or Strategy . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 260 On-Page Note-Taking . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 262 Cornell Note-Taking . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 263 After You Read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 264 Work with Related Readings . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 267 Connect to Other Literature . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 268 Respond Through Writing . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 270 viii TO STUDENT S, PARENTS, AND GUARDIANS Welcome to the Novel Companion. This portable book is designed for you to write in. It is interactive: The book prompts, and you respond. The Novel Companion encourages, questions, provides space for notes, and invites you to jot down your thoughts and ideas. You can use it to circle and underline words and phrases you think are important, and to write questions that will guide your reading. The Novel Companion helps you develop skills for reading, analyzing, and responding to novels, as well as to autobiographies and plays. These literary works are drawn from Glencoe’s Literature Library. They include some of the most notable works in literature. Many are award-winning modern works; others are classics. The Novel Companion is designed to follow the approach and themes in each unit of your textbook, Glencoe Literature. The Novel Companion includes two types of lessons: • Note-Taking Lessons presents two methods of note-taking to help you connect major themes in Glencoe Literature to the other novels and works you will be reading. Using the book will help you learn these valuable note-taking methods, so you can make effective notes whenever you study. • Interactive Reading Lessons are lessons based on the sequential chapter groupings in each novel. In this part of the book you’ll practice identifying important ideas and themes, analyzing literary elements, applying reading strategies, completing graphic organizers, and mastering vocabulary—all skills that expert readers use to help them comprehend novels and other long works of literature. Note to Parents and Guardians: Ask your students to show you their work periodically, and explain how it helps them study. You might want to talk to them about how the skills they are learning cross over to other subjects. To S tudents, Par ents, and G uardi ans 1 INTERACTIVE READING LESSONS The notes and features in the interactive reading lessons will direct you through the process of reading and making meaning from each set of chapters. As you use these notes and features, you’ll be practicing and mastering the skills and strategies that good readers use whenever they read. : Chapte rs 1–9 BEFOR E YOU READ Get Set to Read NOVEL NOTEBOOK to record Keep a special notebook that you entries about the novels ture Conne ct to the Litera and move to a family and friends behind What might it be like to leave and the way of life were language, the customs, faraway land where the you? completely unfamiliar to After reading about the novel and the author, you will begin to read the novel. You will study it in groupings of chapters, or chapter sets, in the Novel Companion. Each chapter set begins with an activity to connect your personal experience to the literature. You will also read background material to provide context for the chapter set content. read this year. WRITE THE CAPTION Write a caption for the image using below, in the present tense, nd. information from Build Backgrou Freewrite be like to be a writing about what it might Spend five to ten minutes deal with loneliness, Consider how you would stranger in a faraway land. and a new way to learn a new language homesickness, and the need of life. BEF ORE YOU REA D: Cha pter s 1–9 Build Backg round Set Pur pos es for Rea din g tion Early Japanese Immigra in the 1880s. ts came to the United States The first Japanese immigran Oregon, but most Washington, and Portland, Some arrived in Seattle, the first large . Soon, San Francisco was entered through San Francisco were also significant California. By 1890, there Japanese settlement in Oakland, the where County, nearby Alameda numbers of Japanese in is located. setting of much of this story, laborers on the ts worked as farmers or Most early Japanese immigran white settlers ts often farmed land that West Coast. Japanese immigran worked hard and farmers were successful—they did not want. Japanese twenty-five By 1900 there were nearly produced high-quality crops. these early of success The United States. thousand Japanese in the did not escape the numbers g increasin their Japanese immigrants and said they could not particularly farmers who attention of white settlers, ts launched the first farmers. These complain compete against Japanese formed to try to s in the United States. Groups anti-Japanese campaign businesses were and Japanese farms and end Japanese immigration, than farmers’ hostility was fueled by more frequently vandalized. This racism that had intense ion. It reflected the same concerns about competit 1882. in immigration prompted a ban on Chinese You’re invited to interact with the information in Build Background by summarizing content or writing a caption for an image related to the content. 왘 BIG Quest ion Reading: What ’s in It for You? There are lots of reasons to read. Reading can teach spark your emoti ons, and take your you new things , imagination to reasons can you new places. What think of to read? Explore what readin g can do for you. Literary Elem ent Text Struc ture Text structure is the way an autho r organizes inform way that autho rs structure inform ation in a text. One ation is in chron order. When autho ological order rs organize inform , or time about events in ation in chronologic the order in which al order, they tell they occur. To events, look for recognize the order time-order words of and phrases such later, and finally . Dates can also as first, next, then, help you recog nize chronologic al order. Identifying the order of events is important becau how one event se it helps you leads to another. recognize It also helps you and events. find and recall key ideas Vocabulary affluence [af lō¯ōəns] n. abundance; wealt h Their affluence allowed them to buy a new home and a boat. conscientious [kon shē en´sh əs] adj. ethical; princi pled Because Mark was conscientious, he always did his homework. placid [plas id] adj. calm; mild There was no wind, so the lake was placid. pungent [pun jənt] adj. biting ; strong The pungent flavor s of the dish were stronger than those of most foods I eat. As you read, pay attention to the sequence of event time-order words s in Hana’s life. and dates to under Look for stand how one event relates to another. Reading Skill Analyze Cultural vulnerable [vul Context nər ə bəl] adj. The customs, belief exposed; unsaf s, relationships, e and traditions certain region that are typica and time period Don’t build your l of a are the cultural house context in a story. vulnerable to hurric where it is Understanding ane damage. the cultural conte xt of a novel is helps show chara important becau cters, conflicts, se culture and themes. The early Japanese cultural context immigration to the West Coast of a Japanese Amer What They Details and the transition ican community to life is central to Pictur in graphic organizer Tell Me e Bride. Use the on the following immigrant playe s 1–9 55 page to think about Chapter d a role how each Picture Bride: in the Japanese Hana wears a American comm She is dressed unity. silk kimono. As you read, you as a Japanese should also list detail AMthat sugge of the novel. Use 1/23/08 11:42:11 s st the cultural wom graphic organ an, not context izers like the one next page to help to the right and an American you. on the 55 51_94_NC_889152.indd woman. You are then introduced to the targeted skills for the chapter set: the Big Question, the literary element, and the reading skill or strategy. You will also get vocabulary for the chapter set. 56 NOVE L COM PANI ON: Unit 2 51_94_NC_88915 2.indd 56 1/23/08 11:42:11 AM AC TI VE READ I NG : C h a p ter s 1– 9 In the first nine chapters of the novel, readers are introduced to a variety of characters. Most of these characters will play important roles in the remaining sections of the novel. As you read, fill in the chart below with details about each character. Character Role in Japanese American Community Characteristics Hana Taro’s picture bride naive, intelligent, high-spirited Read, Respond, Interpret Every lesson includes an active reading graphic organizer to fill in as you read. This graphic organizer is related to either the literary element or the reading skill or strategy for the chapter set. Taro t ING: Literar y Elemen INTER ACTIV E READ Literary Element and Text Structure In what time What place does the novel open? happened before that? What happens next? Interactive reading pages include text excerpts from the novels that emphasize a literary element or a reading skill or strategy. Questions in the margin help you interact with highlighted portions of the text. 58 2 Reading Skill Analyze Cultu ral Context What does this sente nce tell you about the culture of the Japanese American comm unity? Yamaka ship that the railing of the small Hana Omiya stood at ber sea. a in a turbulent Novem shuddered toward Americ the folds of her silk kimono She shivered as she pulled about her tightened the wool shawl close to her throat and shoulders. The Todas ed in her her dark eyes shadow She was thin and small, dour that piled high in a pompa pale face, her black hair clung to the so slight a woman. She seemed too heavy for into her d the damp salt air deep moist rail and breathe though it leaden and lifeless, as lungs. Her body seemed to a strange transporting her soul were simply the vehicle y to be home with childlike intensit Dr. Kaneda new life, and she longed .. in again in Oka Village. . g, Hana was up and dressed By five the next mornin eat and coat. She could not her finest purple silk kimono st and that appeared for breakfa the bean soup and rice Her the yellow pickled radish. took only a few bites of boarded been touched since she bags, which had scarcely ed were packed for all they contain ship, were easily the51_94_NC_889152.indd The large 57 of her favorite books. her kimonos and some ed under secured by a rope, remain willow basket, tightly it there. her uncle had placed the bunk, untouched since cabin, the other women in her She had not befriended voyage, too bunks for most of the for they had lain in their Hana had fled anyone. Each morning sick to be company to of the g quarters and spent most the closeness of the sleepin the lonely of the deck, listening to day huddled in a corner alien land. s also travelling to an songs of some Russian the to land, Hana hurried up As the ship approached and sky, gray expanse of ocean deck to look out at-the of her new homeland. eager for a first glimpse Unit 2 NOVEL COMPAN ION: 58 51_94_NC_889152.indd INT ERA CTI TER 1 NOVE L EXCER PT: CHAP 1917–1918 One 60 Pic t ur e VE REA DIN G: Rea din g Ski ll NO VEL EXC ERP T: CH AP TER “I would like 3 to introduce from Oka Villa Miss Hana Omiya, who ge near Kyo comes to,” he said Hana heard quietly. the rustle of look at her clothing as in the back everyone turn row. She kne ed to rise and ackn w she was owledge the expecte introductio nearly gave n, but her kne d to way. She clun es g to the chai bowed tow r in front of ard the dign her and ified gentlem warmly at an who now her. smiled “I thank you for your kind beg your kind ness,” she mur indulgence mur ed, “and I in the future.” a corset stay and gasped She felt the as she awk jab of seat. wardly resu med her The women about her smi acknowledg led and bow ement of her ed in words. Soo and all the n the minister women gath , his wife ered around about her trip to greet her, , inquiring asking about her fam One woman ily in Oka Villa B r ide : C ha pte r s 1 – 9drew 57 her aside, informi ge. midwife and ng her that would be hap she was a py to assist need arose. her whenev When, at last, er the moved outs 1/23/08 11:42:12 AM everyone had ide into the spoken to her, thin Novemb they Taro stood er sun. with the othe r men in fron gradually mad t of the chu e his way to rch and Hana’s side toward her . He also stee a tall, lanky man with an red black hair. He abundance was far bett of wavy er looking than “This is Kiy Taro. oshi Yamaka ,” he said. “He together dur ing our earl and I struggle y years in Am d Hana recogniz erica.” ed imm ediately the had encounte handsome red during face she the prayer something and groped proper to say for to excuse hers quickly relie elf. But Yam ved her of furt aka her embarra “I hope you ssment. will be hap py here,” he is a lucky man said .” He had a disarming smi politely. “Taro relax, and he le that mad asked Taro e Hana if he could drive them somewhere. NOV EL COM PAN ION :AM Unit 2 1/23/08 11:42:12 51_94_NC_889 152.indd 60 1/23/08 11:42:1 2 AM INTERACTIVE READING LESSONS Show What You Know : Chapte rs 1–9 AFTER YOU READ After you read the chapters in the chapter set, you will answer questions about the content, including how the background information helped you as you read. You will then demonstrate what you learned from your interactive reading of the excerpts. You will also practice using the vocabulary words you were introduced to and learn a new vocabulary word that can be used in your academic writing. APPLY BACKGROUND Novel Reread Introduction to the on page 52. How did that nd information help you understa read in or appreciate what you the novel? Critic ally Respo nd and Think attitude toward her to marry Taro? What is her 1. Why does Hana agree ize] in the United States? [Summar decision after she arrives 2. Who are the Todas? How is Kiku Toda different from Hana? [Compare] AFT ER YO U REA D: Cha pte rs Do you think their hip between Hana and Taro. 3. Evaluate the relations or why not? [Evaluate] marriage will last? Why Literary Elem ent Text Stru cture 1. How many years have pass ed in the nove far? How do l so you know? [App ly] In addition, you will complete a short writing assignment and other activities related to what you read in the chapter set content. These activities will draw on what you studied in your interactive work on the excerpts from the chapters. 2. Study the table of cont ents pages of Explain the text this book. structure of this novel. [App ly] learned about Japanese for You? What have you ize] 5. Reading: What’s in It -century America? [Synthes picture brides in early twentieth 64 Unit 2 NOVEL COMPAN ION: Prac tice An antonym is a word that has the oppo opposite mean site or nearly ing the boldfaced voca as another word. Match each bulary word below with its a thesaurus antonym. Use or dictionary to check your answers. 1. affluence a. bold 2. conscien tious b. mild 3. placid c. unethical 4. pungent d. intolerable 5. vulnerable e. poverty f. secure g. stormy ? Give evidence takes her new role seriously 4. Do you think that Hana your answer. [Infer] from the novel to support Reading Skill Analyze Cult 1. What have ural Context you learned about the chall faced young enges that Japanese men like Takeda and Yamaka? [Syn thesize] 1–9 Vocabulary Academic Vocabulary When the narra tor explains that Hana’s moth Hana would “indicate an er had hope interest” in one d names her moth of the men whos er mentioned e , she is tellin Hana’s moth g readers that er was hopin g Hana woul that one of the d let her moth men interested er know to figure out her. Using cont the meaning ext clues, try of the word Write your gues in the sente s below. Then dictionary. check your gues nce above. s in a 1/23/08 11:42:12 AM Cha pte rs U REA D: AFT ER YO 64 51_94_NC_889152.indd 1–9 and Rep ort ch the 2. Desc earribe Res Japanese Wr itin g entationAmerican commoften early twenPres tieth-cen al/Media Visuthis tury Oakl pray, Hana unity in s to and want gh ghts went throu onse What thou in Personal Resp read about Hana’s first year and you faces, your mind as enges Hana . e some chall onds to them California? Nam of how she resp on opini give your as it shown she noveWhe n thesi l. [Syn in ze] Taro’s Christian god. Assignment Buddha and other parency, or addresses both uter-slide, trans fs of each Present a comp ing what the basic belie show each was visual report how and and when religion are Japan. introduced to and arch questions e a list of rese ces fit your Get Ideas Mak h type of sour s. Decide whic a general or search term will you use For example, nt web s, governme purpose best. book dia, clope specialized ency ces? r sour sites, or othe mation. sources of infor at least three write 51_94_NC_889 152.indd 65 Research Use s, and carefully your own word n. Take notes in of informatio ce of each bit s: gorie down the sour cate four notes in Organize your Beliefs • Buddhist Beliefs • Christian to Japan of Buddhism • Introduction y to Japan of Christianit • Introduction one has ls. Be sure each te your visua the type of Prepare Crea ifies . ing that ident a clear head large and clear Make headings ted text in a information. mation as bulle infor text you ional Present addit font. Write the , and legible and traditional, large and explain each visual, ent s, pres to slide use will show your king as you rehearse spea ls. , or other visua transparencies mation, explain the infor you display and your Present As Leave time for and clearly. , ask if necessary speak slowly reread, and, , ectful read resp to a ys use audience much t each one. Alwa and make as questions abou ssing religions, ible. tone when discu nce as poss with your audie eye contact After you read the entire novel, you will work with related readings, connect the novel to an excerpt from Glencoe Literature, and finally, write an essay or story that draws upon what you learned by reading. 66 PAN NOV EL COM 2 ION : Unit Pictu re Brid e: Cha pter s 1–9 65 1/23/08 11:42:1 2 AM 2 AM 1/23/08 11:42:1 d 66 NC_889152.ind 51_94_ CON NEC T WI TH RE AD IN RE LA TED LITE RAT URE TO OTH ER GS CON NEC T a ing to Am eric EXC ERP T: Com er was LITE RAT URE d what the teach TO OTH ER LITE RAT URE didn’t understan time I’ve the [toughest] saying. It was een ever had. difference betw But the biggest lonely. Com par e & was that I was Con tras t China and here differently s look at you down1. Text Structure Explain three Some American look ways in which igrant]; they article differs from the text structure [if you’re an imm the text structure friends. In of this of Picture Bride to make all new . a on you. I had as ther s come toge Sak tras A Japanese Otomo No China, teenager pare and con play. Here, my yama Ozawa— nections Com Hana. and go out to p Natsu Oku Make Con grou out g with Zhan to hang Jin Hua this poem didn’t want me Remembers old, Jin Hua’s speaker in or nts s lost pare year get 11 d ias al When she was thought I coul New York June Nam did the raci outside; they and his family to people. nections How experienced before father brought out with bad e friends Make Con wa that to [might] hang Jin Hua has mad rimination on that Oza family decided City. Although discriminati with the disc she still get I know that my war compare well in school, er and I could during the and is doing a. here so my broth e faced? e Chin com Taro in e and China, they mad Hana misses her hom r education. In felt bette r a neve they , in 2. Theme What n of Ting Jiang more easily, but ey ted etow does the theme mon wan hom ys my In ys said of this excerpt they alwa theme have in common a, people alwa y of Picture Bride? it was enough; Chin ever , like tern time with the ic e heas the all sout , like som Rain Mus . Now, they work ’s was very good they] rica t Linh Nguyen Ame contras you could more ight, [because and that Longhang Bride.derland. They said ing until midn s Compare ure tion of] morn won Pict nec ead of in Con [inst my Make . Takeda kind ren college here. So when t me to go to Mr. and Mrs child ese life r wan with Chin thei good t a nts for New mos have pare into hopes factory like s are their er, and I flew working in a feel like I In what way mother, my broth I was so know]. But I Daughter uardia Airport, from Nisei immigrants [we similar? York City’s LaG ght, “This e attitude night, and I thou Monica Son elf an have less. does Mary’s happy. It was .” I knew at if I consider mys nections How ure Bride compare with , so beautiful I don’t know Make Con good Pict . so y more in is ging reall city heritage be chan like I’m toward her my life would American. I feel that moment ude? Sone’s attit ld be great. ese. wou Chin it ght I t. thou I 3. Mood Choos to my apartmen e a scene from But then I came Picture Bride. parents were this excerpt is Tell how the mood the same or differ In China, my of ent from the mood was shocked. Picture Bride. e bricks. of the scene in pany that mad bosses at a com very house; it was big a us had of We four Here, there were comfortable. s [in two small room squeezing into shared—I of Dust Everything is Topaz: City Chinatown]. The next ida hing in private. riences in t, it Yoshiko Uch can’t do anyt tify some expe n to the stree nections Iden n I went dow retold as the ida whe Make Con Uch day, gosh, so of Dust” that e. And, oh, my “Topaz: City Picture Brid was so noisy. too. 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Research shows that students who take good notes perform better on tests, and note-taking skills are crucial if you plan to attend college. When you take notes, you become more actively engaged in what you read by constantly looking for main ideas, supporting details, and key relationships. Note-Taking Lessons and BIG Questions The note-taking lessons in the Novel Companion are focused on helping you find a connection between the main ideas of featured novels (or autobiographies or plays) and the Big Questions, or major themes, of the units in your textbook, Glencoe Literature. By learning the note-taking skills presented in the Novel Companion, you will be able to make such connections more readily and easily. On-Page Note-Taking College students routinely write on the pages of the books they are reading, using the margins to jot down ideas and questions. If you are allowed to mark up your text, you can write notes directly on the page. The On-Page Note-Taking lessons prompt you to make connections to a Big Question by marking up an excerpt using a system of symbols. 4 N OTE-TAKING SYSTEMS The Cornell Note-Taking System The Novel Companion will also train you in the Cornell Note-Taking System, which was developed at Cornell University to help students take more effective notes. In this system, the page is divided into two columns, one wide and one narrow. This format provides a way to organize your thinking. You’ll use the Cornell Note-Taking System to take notes on excerpts from the novels and how the excerpts relate to the Big Questions. The following summarizes the steps of the system: Record First, you will record notes in the right (wide) column as you read. Your notes may include summaries, bulleted lists, and graphic organizers. Reduce Next, you will reduce, or condense, your notes into key words, phrases, questions, and comments in the left (narrow) column. This step will help you clarify meaning, find information within your notes, and trigger your memory when you study. Recap Finally, you will use the bottom portion of the page to recap, or summarize, what you have learned from your notes. This step helps strengthen your grasp of what you just read before you move on to the next section of text. A Life-long Skill Once you become accustomed to using the note-taking skills taught in the Novel Companion, you’ll be able to use these skills when you read other literature, when you listen to a lecture in class, when you attend a meeting, or even as you watch a film. Note-Taki ng Syst ems 5 NOTE-TAKING LESSONS Through the note-taking lessons presented in the Novel Companion, you’ll be learning to record important information in your own words, to reduce it to key words that will help you remember your notes, and to apply your notes as you answer questions and read and write about the novels and other longer works in the program. ON- PA GE NOT E- TA KI NG: BI G Qu e sti on Read, Question, and Mark-Up MARK IT UP Are you allowed to write in your novel? If so, then mark up the pages as you read, or reread, to help with your note-taking. Develop a shorthand system, including symbols, that works for you. Here are some ideas: Underline = important idea Bracket = text to quote Not only will you be interacting with excerpts from the novels as you work with the literary elements and reading skills or strategies assigned to a chapter set, but you will also be working with excerpts that relate to the Big Question assigned to each chapter set. You will take notes on the excerpt—right on the page. With practice, you will devise a short-hand system that works for you. In the meantime, you can use the suggested on-page mark-up system. Asterisk = just what you were looking for Checkmark = might be useful Circle = unfamiliar word or phrase to look up 왘 BIG Question Reading: What’s in It for You? What have you found out about the lives of early Japanese immigrants to America? Mark up the excerpt, looking for evidence of how it expresses or answers the Big Question. 62 NOVEL EXCERPT: CHAPTER 4 Hana nodded. “Oh yes, it was a most eventful day,” she began. “It was my first visit to a Christian church, and there was lunch at a Chinese restaurant and then the lovely drive around the lake.” She recited the day’s activities like a dutiful child reporting to its mother. She paused a moment and added, “I also saw Taro San’s shop.” “Oh. What did you think of it?” “It was . . . well, it was very nice,” Hana began, trying to find some kind words among the misgivings that raged inside her. She saw Kiku’s questioning look, however, and suddenly abandoned all attempts at restraint and control. “No, that’s not true,” she burst out. “It wasn’t nice at all. It was drab and dirty and smelled of stale food. There were cobwebs and mice droppings in the corners, and the shelves were covered with dust. It’s a wonder anyone would want to buy anything there.” Hana swallowed, trying to blink back the tears. Kiku put an arm around her. “You were expecting something a bit finer, I expect.” Hana nodded. Kiku’s openness made it possible to answer her with shameless candor. “I thought he would have a large store on a fine street. I thought there would be American ladies and gentlemen coming to his shop to buy shirts and silks and thread.” She paused, remembering the lonely men on Seventh Street. “Is it only people like those I saw today on his street who go there to shop?” “The fine white American ladies and gentlemen have their own stores,” Kiku explained gently. “They have no need to come to Seventh Street to buy pickled radish or soy sauce.” She turned Hana’s face toward her and said gravely, “You’re going to have to realize something important, Hana. We are foreigners in this country, and there are many white people who resent our presence here. They welcome us only as cooks or houseboys or maids. Why, even if Taro’s store was twice as big and it was on the best corner in downtown Oakland, still his only customers would be the Japanese and the men on Seventh Street. Don’t forget, we are aliens here. We don’t really belong.” Hana recalled the minister’s prayer that morning. “It isn’t such a golden life here in America then, is it?” she said almost to herself. N OV E L C O M PA N I O N : U n i t 2 51_94_NC_889152.indd 62 1/23/08 11:42:12 AM Record, Reduce, and Recap You will also learn the Cornell Note-Taking System, described on the previous page. Here you will take notes on the excerpt you marked-up on the On-Page Note-Taking page. C O R N E L L N O T E - TA K IN G : B I G Q u e s t i o n Use the Cornell Note-Taking system to take notes on the excerpt at the left. Record your notes, Reduce them, and then Recap (summarize) them. Record Reduce Try the following approach as you reduce your notes. MY VIEW Write down your thoughts on the excerpt. Recap Pi ct ur e B r i de: C h a p te r s 1 – 9 51_94_NC_889152.indd 63 6 63 1/23/08 11:42:12 AM A Girl Named Disaster Nancy Farmer A Gir l N amed Di sast er 7 INTRODUCTI ON TO THE NOVEL A Girl Named Disaster Nancy Farmer “ I lived in central Africa for seventeen years. The character, viewpoint and zany sense of humor of the people I met there have had a major effect on my writing. ” —Nancy Farmer in Something About the Author A Girl Named Disaster didn’t start out as a work of fiction. Nancy Farmer intended to mine her intimate knowledge of African life and her expertise as an entomologist to produce a textbook about Africa. The storyteller in her surfaced, however, and the tale of Nhamo, a girl named Disaster, was born. Farmer turned textbook descriptions into a detailed landscape in which the wind whispers with spirits and the grass rustles with unseen dangers: leopards, crocodiles, and deadly insects. Nhamo is a girl right out of the remote Shona villages of Mozambique that Farmer once visited, an area where ancient rituals and strict taboos abound, their magic untouched by the outside world. Farmer found this area to be “the wildest country that exists on the planet,” where the land, with its monsoons and droughts, dominates the villagers’ lives. When Nhamo leaves this isolated, traditional world and arrives in more modern Zimbabwe, she arrives in another place Farmer knew well. Despite 8 NOV E L C O MPA NION: Un it 1 its churches, schools, hospitals, and modern conveniences, Zimbabwe is a country struggling to define itself. It is a place like Nhamo herself, a place leaving childhood for adulthood, shedding old traditions and embracing new ones, yet always shadowed by the past. Shona Life Life in Nhamo’s Shona village takes place during the 1980s, but it is a far cry from the microwaves and malls that are so much a part of modern American life. In fact, the village Farmer describes is little changed from what it was even one hundred years ago. Nhamo’s people depend upon the land for survival, and all of their activities, rituals, and stories center around this relationship with the land. The Shona spend a great part of their day just making sure they have enough to eat, and their cultural system is built around this endeavor. Each family has livestock (that is tended by men) and a plot of tribal land (that is owned by the family’s head male and cultivated by his wives and daughters). The more wives a man has, the more crops he has for himself and his children. A good wife must be able to handle the farming, the cooking, and the housekeeping, but her true value lies in her ability to produce numerous children. When a young girl shows that she can bear children, she immediately gains new status, and her INTRODUCTION TO THE NOVEL fertility is a cause for celebration. Children ensure that life will continue and that a man’s particular totem, or clan identity, will endure. A person who lives to become a grandparent is especially revered, because he or she has contributed to the family’s survival and will soon become an ancestor, a family spirit who watches over the family. A woman who cannot have children has no status and no chance of becoming an esteemed ancestor. The Spirit World To the Shona, spirits are a serious concern. The spirits of the land, animals, and people are important, but the spirits of witches are particularly significant. To be accused of being a witch is the worst insult, one that taints the accused as well as that person’s descendents. A woman who does not bear children or someone who seems to be an outsider may be identified as a witch and accused of crimes such as spreading disease. Not all Shona live as traditionally as Nhamo’s people do, however. When Nhamo reaches Zimbabwe, she discovers Shona people who have been thrust into the twentieth century, working for wages instead of food; learning mathematics and reading instead of listening to myths and folklore; embracing Western ideas such as democracy and Christianity, with its own set of spirits and rituals. For some Shona, this change is a bit like having the floor drop away, leaving them to freefall until they can grasp something. As Nhamo discovers, such a material and spiritual change is both frightening and rewarding. The Price of Marriage Check an American etiquette book, and you’ll find all sorts of rules for weddings. The groom, for example, must pay for certain items, such as the bride’s ring. In Shona society, the groom must pay for the bride herself. A man must pay the bride’s family a roora, or brideprice, that may consist of livestock, crops, or even cloth or tools. An expensive bride can take years to pay for; in some cases, however, the man is given his bride on a “payment plan.” What happens if he fails to keep up payments? The family can repossess the bride. Similarly, a man can return a bride and get his bride-price back, even after years of living with her. A Shona marriage is not considered legal until the full bride-price has been paid. also helps support the bride’s parents in their old age. In addition, the bride’s brothers can use her bride-price to buy brides of their own. Although the custom of paying a brideprice is dying out, it still exists in many countries around the world, particularly in Africa, Asia, and the Middle East. What is the purpose behind bride-price? Paying for a bride is a mark of respect toward the bride’s family, who is giving up a valuable member of society: a fertile woman. The bride-price A Gir l N amed Di sast er 9 MEET THE AUTHOR Nancy Farmer (1941– ) “ Every night until past midnight I listened to stories from truck drivers, cowboys, and railroad workers. My father took me to the American legion hall on bingo nights, and I heard a lot more stories there. People were able to spin tales back then, and they taught me a lot. ” —Nancy Farmer in Contemporary Authors Nancy (Coe) Farmer grew up working in her family’s hotel in Yuma, Arizona, near the Mexican border. The hotel was the perfect place for a young girl to soak up stories. World Traveler After graduating from Reed College in Oregon, Farmer signed on with the Peace Corps to teach English and chemistry in India. In 1971, she decided to see more of the world. She booked passage on a freight ship heading to Africa and ended up in Mozambique, working as an entomologist at a lab on Lake Cabora Bassa. Her job took her around the fringes of the lake and to rural villages, much like the one in A Girl Named Disaster, where she saw firsthand how the Shona lived and witnessed things that were “completely mysterious” to an outsider. When that job ended after two years, Farmer moved on to Zimbabwe, working as an 10 N OV E L C OMPA NION: Un it 1 entomologist at the University of Zimbabwe. At the university, she met and married an English teacher, Harold Farmer. An Unusual Muse Farmer remained in Zimbabwe for twelve more years, becoming intimate with Shona culture and even adopting that culture’s religious belief in animism, or the existence of spiritual beings outside the body. In fact, she believes that her writing began when a shave, or roaming spirit, possessed her. She says that shaves teach their skills to whomever they inhabit, and she was lucky enough to get “a traditional storyteller.” Spinning Tales Farmer published several stories and books in Zimbabwe, winning a prestigious short story contest in 1987. The prize money she won enabled the Farmers to move to the United States. Once there, however, Farmer’s writing sagged when the family faced financial difficulties. Her dry spell didn’t last long, however. One of her novels, The Ear, the Eye, and the Arm, was chosen as a Newbery Honor Book in 1995. Farmer published A Girl Named Disaster in 1996, and it was named a Newbery Honor Book in 1997. Farmer continues to weave stories as varied as those she heard as a child. BEFORE YOU READ: Chapters 1–12 Connect to the Literature Have you ever felt as if you didn’t belong in a certain place or to a certain group? Write a Journal Entry Write about what set you apart from that place or group. Was it your ideas, personality, or clothing that set you apart? How did you react to feeling as if you didn’t belong? How did others treat you? NOVEL NOTEBOOK Keep a special notebook to record entries about the novels that you read this year. WRITE THE CAPTION Write a caption for the image below, in the present tense, using information in Build Background. Read to find out how a young woman reacts when she feels that she doesn’t belong to the family and village in which she’s been raised. Build Background Honoring Transition with Tradition Many cultures have elaborate rituals to mark a child’s passage into adulthood. Imagine having to survive in a remote wilderness with no clothing or tools or having your body shaved, tattooed, or painted to prove that you have become an adult. Such ceremonies show that a person is ready to serve the community by providing food and protection and by having children to replenish the community. Without such life-sustaining acts, the community would perish. As you read, watch for the rituals of Nhamo’s people, the Shona. In Nhamo’s world, religion is not something practiced only on certain days; instead, religion saturates every aspect of life, every day. The Shona express their religion through myths, stories that explain their beliefs and rituals. The daily job of storyteller is an important one because few people can read or write. The storyteller keeps the oral tradition, stories that have been passed down for generations so that children can learn the moral lessons of their culture. A Gir l Nam ed D isaster : C hapters 1–12 11 BEFORE YOU READ: Chapters 1–12 Set Purposes for Reading Vocabulary 왘 BIG Question How Do You Stay True to Yourself? Over the course of your life you have built values and beliefs that define who you are. As you read the first section of A Girl Named Disaster, consider the various ways Nhamo stays true to herself by acting on her values and believing in herself. Literary Element Setting In a literary work, the setting is the time and place during which the events take place. In bringing the setting to life, authors often use sensory details to appeal to the reader’s sense of sight, smell, hearing, touch, and taste. As you read about a story’s setting, you create a picture of it your mind. Often this picture inspires thoughts and feelings that enrich your understanding of the events and characters. As you read the first section of A Girl Named Disaster, note the many sensory details author Nancy Farmer uses to help you create the setting in your mind. Consider the feeling, or mood, that these details create. Reading Skill Analyze Character When you analyze, you look at details in order to better understand the whole. Most authors do not directly state everything there is to know about their characters, plot, and setting. Instead they provide clues that guide readers toward an interactive process of interpreting these elements. Analyzing characters is important because it can help you understand and make predictions about their actions and points of view, which enriches your reading. To analyze character, pay attention to • what the character thinks, says, and does What Nhamo thinks • how the character looks and sounds of herself • what others say about the character • how the character is affected by his or she does not think she is her surroundings As you read the first 12 chapters of A Girl Named Disaster, analyze the character Nhamo to learn about the culture she was born into. You may find it helpful to use graphic organizers like the ones on the next page and at the right. 12 N OV E L C OM PA NION: Un it 1 ugly she uses her imagination she is lonely she is looked down on by some people she is comfortable with the land and with nature calabash [kal ə bash] n. hollowed gourd used as a container Many desert communities use a calabash to store their water. centipedes [sen tə pēdz] n. small invertebrates with many legs When their basement flooded, the Rileys found a lot of centipedes near the drains. chaff [chaf ] n. seed hulls removed by threshing “Separating the wheat from the chaff” is a familiar expression that means “dividing the useful from the useless.“ mortar [môr tər] n. bowl used for grinding Chemists often mix ingredients using a mortar and pestle. totem [tō təm] n. object, animal, or plant that serves as tribal symbol The hockey team’s totem is a grizzly bear. What others think of her How the setting affects her ACT IVE READING: Chapters 1–12 Who is Nhamo? Nhamo knows her spirit makes her different from everyone around her, yet she desperately wants to belong among her people. To better understand the many influences and ideas that define Nhamo, fill in the chart below as you read. How does Nhamo see herself? How do others see her? What expectations does she have for her life? What expectations do others have for her? Who is Nhamo in the family? does all the work while others rest Aunt Chipo calls her lazy. Who is Nhamo in her own mind? spirit like “boiling water,” dissatisfied, restless, keeps occupied by observing things Nhamo and other women must serve men before serving themselves. Nhamo is not a mhandara, so she is still seen as child. Who is Nhamo in the village? A Gir l Nam ed D isaster : C hapters 1–12 13 INTERACTIVE READING: Literar y Element Literary Element Setting How does the setting in the magazine photograph differ from the setting in which Nhamo lives? How does the picture make her feel? 14 N OV E L COMPA NION: Un it 1 NOVEL EXCERPT: CHAPTER 2 At the very top of the hill a perfectly round and deep hole had been worn into the rock. Rain filled it in the rainy season; even now it was half-full of water. Nhamo leaned over and studied her face. She didn’t think she was ugly. Now came the moment she was waiting for. She dragged aside a slab of stone from a smaller, dry hole in the rock. Inside were the treasures Nhamo had managed to collect. She removed pots, wooden spoons, a drinking gourd, an old cloth Aunt Chipo once used to cover her hair, and a knife Uncle Kufa had hurled into a bush when the tip broke off. (He was even angrier when he couldn’t find it again later.) She left a few things inside the hole: a precious box of matches, some glass beads that had come off Aunt Shuvai’s bracelet, some of the copper wire Uncle Kufa used to decorate his snuffboxes. Reverently, Nhamo smoothed out the cloth and put the utensils on it. Last of all, she reached into a pot and removed—a roll of paper. She weighted the edges down with stones. It was a picture torn out of a magazine. Books were unheard of in Nhamo’s village, but very occasionally a magazine found its way from the distant cities of Zimbabwe. Only two men in the village could read. They retold the stories for everyone’s entertainment. The women studied the pictures of clothes and houses, gardens and cars with great interest. They tried to copy the hairstyles in the photographs. Eventually, the magazines fell apart and were used to light fires. This picture had been on the cover, so it was of sturdier paper. The minute Nhamo had seen it, her heart beat so fast it hurt. The picture showed a beautiful woman with braided hair decorated with beads. She wore a flowered dress and a white, white apron. She was cutting a slice of white, white bread, and next to her was a block of yellow margarine. Nhamo didn’t know what margarine was, but Grandmother told her it was even better than peanut butter. INTERACT IVE READING: Literar y Element The room behind the woman was full of wonderful things, but what interested Nhamo most was the little girl. She was wearing a blue dress, and her hair was gathered into two fat puffs over her ears. The woman smiled at her in the kindest way, and Nhamo knew the white bread and yellow margarine were meant for the little girl. She thought the woman looked like Mother. She couldn’t remember Mother, and of course no one had a picture of her, but the way her spirit leaped when she saw that picture told her this was how Mother had looked. . . . Nhamo suddenly realized the light was going. Maiwee! She had been so absorbed, she had forgotten the time. Scrambling, she packed everything and dragged the lid over the hole. She slid down the hill and tied the firewood to her back. Oho! In this light, the trail was almost invisible! The air was a strange, silvery color, and the gray-green trees melted into the sky. It was the moment when the day animals passed the night animals on their way to hunt. Nhamo listened for the stream. The air was so still she couldn’t smell it. Sh, sh—there it was in the distance. She made more noise than usual, smashing through the bushes in her haste. All at once, she was by the stream. The surface of the water gleamed with silver light, and it was impossible to see underneath. Crocodiles liked this time of day. They floated just beneath the water, where their flat, yellow eyes could watch anything that approached. Literary Element Setting Identify the sensory details in this passage. What feelings or emotions do these details create? A Gir l Nam ed D isaster : C hapters 1–12 15 INTERACTIV E READING: Reading Strategy Reading Skill Analyze Character What does this section tell you about Nhamo’s inner life? What does she feel about her future? 16 N OV E L COMPA NION: Un it 1 NOVEL EXCERPT: CHAPTER 10 The other women didn’t speak to her at all, and Nhamo had plenty of time to think about her situation. Her father was a murderer. The ngozi had demanded that she marry a diseased man with several wives. Goré’s brother wouldn’t pay roora for her, so she wouldn’t have any status in her new household. The other wives would beat her. Perhaps her husband would beat her, too, to get revenge for his brother’s death. She wouldn’t see Masvita anymore, or Ruva or Grandmother—if Grandmother even lived. The future was so bleak, Nhamo refused to think about it. She pretended that she lived on the trader’s porch instead. It was what she did in the deserted village back home. She knew, of course, that Mother didn’t really drink tea with her on top of the hill there. She knew she sat with a scrap of paper held down by pebbles—but the pictures in her mind were so real, she thought they must somehow exist. They might live in the underground country where the thrown-away animals and people went. And someday, if she could find the way, she might join them. Nhamo applied herself to caring for Ambuya. When an unpleasant thought occurred, she shook her head to clear it out. Nothing existed for her but the trader’s house, the porch with Grandmother’s bed, and an endless present. Three or four times a day she made up a poultice. The muvuki had provided powdered bark from a tree that had been struck by lightning. This was the correct treatment, he said, for someone who suffered from chikandiwa, or a stroke. Nhamo boiled the powder with water, soaked it in a cloth, and applied it to Grandmother’s paralyzed side. INTERACT IVE READING: Reading Strategy Between times, she rubbed Ambuya’s arms and legs, and told her stories. She couldn’t tell whether the old woman understood her. The other women helped during the day, but they talked to one another and ignored Nhamo. . . . Slowly, Grandmother improved. She could move both sides of her body, although she was too weak to stand and she still couldn’t talk. Her eyes had expression in them now. They followed Nhamo and sometimes they welled over with tears. “Does it hurt, Ambuya?” whispered Nhamo as she wiped the tears away. Grandmother couldn’t answer; the tears continued to flow. One afternoon, Uncle Kufa decided the old woman was well enough to travel. “The basket maker has made a traveling chair for you, Va-Ambuya,” he said. “It hangs on long poles, which we can carry on our shoulders. You should be very comfortable.” He instructed Nhamo to have everything ready to leave the next morning. Nhamo felt stunned as her uncle strode off. All at once, the thoughts she had pushed away came back in a rush. She wasn’t going to live on this porch forever. No one would speak to her kindly anymore or worry about her welfare. She would go to a strange house where the women would hate her and her husband would beat her. Even her own people couldn’t wait to get rid of her. Reading Skill Analyze Character How does what you have learned about Grandmother help you to understand what she is feeling even though she cannot speak? A Gir l Nam ed D isaster : Chapters 1–12 17 ON-PAGE N OTE-TAKING: BIG Question MARK IT UP Are you allowed to write in your novel? If so, then mark up the pages as you read, or reread, to help with your note-taking. Develop a shorthand system, including symbols, that works for you. Here are some ideas: Underline = important idea Bracket = text to quote Asterisk = just what you were looking for Checkmark = might be useful Circle = unfamiliar word or phrase to look up 왘 BIG Question How Do You Stay True to Yourself? What does Nhamo do in preparation for leaving? How do her thoughts and actions reflect her values and beliefs? Mark up the excerpt, looking for evidence of how it expresses the Big Question. 18 N OV E L COMPA NION: Un it 1 NOVEL EXCERPT: CHAPTER 11 All went with amazing smoothness. Crocodile Guts’s boat was still jammed into the reeds, and the mooring rope was still attached. Nhamo removed a sack of already ground and dried mealie meal from the storehouse. She visited Aunt Chipo’s hut and took a box of matches and a bag of beans. Here and there she went, removing odds and ends. It was wicked to steal—she knew that—but worse to disobey an elder. And so she entered into the adventure with a clear conscience. No one bothered her or even stopped to talk. She was a ghost in her own village, already seen as the bride of the ngozi. Only Masvita gave her an uncomfortable moment. “I’ll miss you,” her cousin said tearfully as Nhamo bent over Aunt Shuvai’s baby. “I want you to know . . . if it doesn’t work out . . . if he’s cruel . . . come back. I couldn’t bear to see you suffer. I’ll argue with Father until he lets you stay. You’ll have to return anyway to have your first child.” Nhamo knew that Masvita would never find the courage to argue with Uncle Kufa, but she appreciated the thought. She felt slightly guilty because she had just stolen a pot of the millet-and-honey cakes Aunt Chipo kept to fatten her daughter up. Nhamo stored everything in the boat. In the late afternoon, she went to the ruined village and fetched Mother. “You’ll never guess what I’m going to do,” she whispered to the clay pot. “I know it seems wrong, but Grandmother commanded me to do it.” As the shadows grew and the time for departure approached, however, Nhamo began to have second thoughts. It had been a wonderful plan when the sun was high. Ambuya had seemed full of confidence and even—if such a thing were possible with an elder—mischief. CORNELL NOTE-TAKING: BIG Question Use the Cornell Note-Taking system to take notes on the excerpt at the left. Record your notes, Reduce them, and then Recap (summarize) them. Record Reduce Try the following approach as you reduce your notes. TO THE POINT Write a few key ideas. Recap A Gir l Nam ed D isaster : C hapters 1–12 19 AFTER YOU READ: Chapters 1–12 Respond and Think Critically 1. Why is Nhamo’s father absent? How is his absence a problem for Nhamo? [Identify] 2. What rituals must Masvita undergo when she becomes a mhandara (woman)? How does Masvita seem to feel about these rituals? [Analyze] 3. Why do the villagers wear charms when they journey to the muruvi (healing specialist)? Why isn’t Nhamo given a charm at first? [Analyze] 4. What is the muruvi like? Do you think he is authentic? Why or why not? [Evaluate] 5. How Do You Stay True to Yourself? What is it about Nhamo that makes her unable to fit in among her family and the villagers? Would she fit in even if her parents had not brought shame to the family? [Infer] 20 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 1 APPLY BACKGROUND Reread Introduction to the Novel on pages 8–9. How did that information help you understand or appreciate what you read in the novel? AFTER YOU READ: Chapters 1–12 Literary Element Setting 1. In Chapter 10, Nhamo is befriended by Rosa, the trader’s wife. What is it about Rosa and the porch setting that makes Nhamo feel so safe and happy? [Infer] 2. Do you think Nhamo would have been safe if she had been allowed to move in with the trader and his wife? Why or why not? [Analyze] Vocabulary Practice Write the vocabulary word that correctly completes the sentence. calabash centipede chaff mortar totem 1. My mother ground five different spices together in her _______________. 2. In some cultures nature provides many household utensils, including the lowly _______________. 3. The leopard or jaguar is a powerful ancient _______________. 4. Alegra thinks of her bread crusts as _______________ and she cuts them off and throws them away. 5. A spider has eight legs, but a _______________ has a great many more! Academic Vocabulary Reading Skill Analyze Character 1. In Chapter 3, why does Nhamo tell the others that she saw a leopard on the path? [Analyze] Nhamo appears to derive great personal satisfaction from her storytelling ability. In the preceding sentence, derive means ”to obtain from a specific source.” To become more familiar with the word derive, fill out the graphic organizer below. synonym definition 2. What character details in the earlier part of the story helped you understand this behavior? [Recall] derive antonyms sentence/image A Gir l Nam ed D isaster : Chapters 1–12 21 AFTER YOU READ: Chapters 1–12 Writing Speaking and Listening Personal Response Do you think Nhamo is doing Literature Groups the right thing by running away? Why or why not? Assignment How do you know when you have become an adult? Is it simply a matter of reaching a certain age, getting a diploma, or landing a job? With a small group of classmates, discuss what it takes to become an adult. Prepare Before your group meets, think about the cultural events that mark maturity for Nhamo’s people. Are there similar markers in American culture? Make a list. Then chart the comparisons. Nhamo’s culture When a young girl gets her first period she is considered a woman, and her village celebrates with a party. Your culture When a person graduates from high school, it is an important event, complete with a ceremony and sometimes a party. Discuss During your discussion, respect the views of others by listening carefully and maintaining eye contact. Offer support for your own opinions, without negating the views of others. Pay attention to the views of students who grew up outside the United States, as their input might provide another dimension and insight to the discussion. Report Have one member of your group orally state your consensus to the class or state that no consensus was reached. This group member must speak loudly and clearly enough for all to hear. Evaluate How would you rate your own participation in the discussion? 22 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 1 BEFORE YOU READ: Chapters 13–30 Connect to the Literature If you were suddenly marooned on an uninhabited island, what would you do to survive? Make a Web Write the word “survival” in the center of a piece of paper. Then create a word web listing the things you’d need to do to stay alive. What would be your greatest challenge? NOVEL NOTEBOOK Keep a special notebook to record entries about the novels that you read this year. WRITE THE CAPTION Write a caption for the image below, in the present tense, using information in Build Background. Read to find out how Nhamo survives when her journey to Zimbabwe takes a frightening detour. Build Background Spinning Tales Nhamo has inherited the ability to tell folktales, the short stories handed down orally from her grandmother and others. Folktales, like myths, pass on explanations about the world and cultural values. For Nhamo, the stories are a link to her people and a comfort when something goes wrong. She uses a storytelling technique called anthropomorphism, in which animals and objects can speak or display human characteristics. As you read, notice how Nhamo’s stories relate to the animals and objects she must actually deal with, particularly the baboon troop. Compare Nhamo’s storytelling with other anthropomorphic stories you have read— for example, fables such as “The Tortoise and the Hare” or well-known fairy tales such as “Little Red Riding Hood.” A Gir l Nam ed D isaster : C hapters 13–30 23 BEFORE YOU READ: Chapters 13–30 Set Purposes for Reading 왘 BIG Question How Do You Stay True to Yourself? In the beginning of the section of the novel you are about to read, Nhamo spends many days in her latest home, Crocodile Guts’s boat, as she makes her way along the river. As you read about the challenges to her safety, consider the personal qualities it might take to make such a journey. Literary Element Description Description is writing that conveys to readers the feeling and impression of a setting, a person, an animal, an object, or an event. Writers often use imagery, or sensory details, to make their descriptions more vivid. Sensory details, appeal to the reader’s five senses: hearing, sight, touch, taste, and smell. Description is important because it helps make people, places, and actions in literary works seem real. As you read the next section of the novel, consider the various ways in which author Nancy Farmer uses physical description to bring her story to vivid life. Reading Skill Identify Sequence Sequence is the arrangement or order in which thoughts or events are presented. Identifying sequence is important because it forces you to become a more active and engaged reader. An appropriate sequence is one that is logical, given the ideas of the selection. As you continue to read, pay particular attention to sequence words such as first, then, and next. Sometimes authors interrupt a chronological narrative with a flashback, which presents readers with scenes from events that happened before that point in the story or before the story began. Usually this is done to add meaning to the current action; there is a connection between the events that the narrator or author wants to make clear. Flashbacks may take the form of recollections by the characters, narration by the characters, dream sequences, or daydreams. To identify sequence in the plot of a literary work, take note of the order in which one event follows another. As you read, try using a graphic organizer like the one at the right to help you keep track of the sequence of events, including any flashbacks. 24 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 1 Vocabulary forage [fôr ij] v. to search for food When the campers ran out of supplies, they had to forage for nuts and berries. hapless [hap lis] adj. unlucky The wind was so strong that it blew a hapless bystander all the way across the street. haunches [hônch əz] n. part of the body made up of the hips, buttocks, and thighs The little dog sat up on its haunches begging for a treat. inevitably [i nev ə tə blē] adv. unavoidably Eating too much sugar after dinner inevitably makes the smaller children cranky. pariah [pə r¯ ə] n. outcast Oksana’s bossiness made her a pariah in the drama club. Events Nhamo teaches herself to swim. ACTIVE READING: Chapters 13–30 When Nhamo feels defeated by the enormous challenges she faces, her mother’s spirit tells her that “the paths of the body are long, but the paths of the spirit are short.” Nhamo is, in essence, undergoing her own coming-of-age ritual in which her body and her spirit are proving their readiness for adulthood. On the chart below, trace Nhamo’s spiritual development as she overcomes the physical challenges at each point in her journey. Note whether of not a flashback is used and, if so, what form it takes. Guinea Fowl Camp Physical Challenges must overcome fears of hippos, being alone; afraid of water and crocodiles; starts learning to swim on her own Spiritual Development tells herself hippo myth for comfort Flashback Used? Yes No Form of Flashback: The Rock Physical Challenges Spiritual Development Flashback Used? Yes No Form of Flashback: Njuzu Island Physical Challenges Spiritual Development Flashback Used? Yes No Form of Flashback: Physical Challenges Nhamo’s Island/Garden Island Spiritual Development Flashback Used? Yes No Form of Flashback: A Gir l Nam ed D isaster : C hapters 13–30 25 INTERACTIVE READING: Literar y Element Literary Element Description How does the author use description of silence and sudden sounds to convey the danger the baboons present to Nhamo in this passage? 26 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 1 NOVEL EXCERPT: CHAPTER 29 Oo-AA-hoo! The sound brought her instantly alert. The baboons were back early—and they had come almost silently. Suddenly, they were all around her in a milling crowd. It wasn’t the chaotic, screeching mob she was used to. The animals slipped through the grassland like the vervet monkeys near the leopard cave. Even Tag was impressed with the seriousness of it. He rode on Donkeyberry’s back without a single murmur. Nhamo shivered. The males were unusually irritable. They snapped at one another and threatened the females. Now that the troop was close to the sleeping cliff, the animals spread out and applied themselves to digging in the soil. That in itself was unusual. At the end of the day the baboons preferred social activities: grooming, entertaining infants, lounging in friendly groups. They were clearly ravenous. Something had kept them from feeding. Rumpy sniffed around the smoking-platform, barking as a coal singed his nose. He spotted Nhamo and trotted up, fur bristling, to demand the meager bunch of blackjack leaves. “Go away!” shouted Nhamo. Rumpy slapped the ground. She snatched up a stone and hurled it accurately at his head. Rumpy danced back and forth with fury. He didn’t cower as he usually did when she hit him. She suddenly realized he was dangerous. She grabbed the spear, which was lying against the thorn barrier, and quickly unhooked the ladder. As it flopped down, she thrust the spear at the angry creature to drive him back. Rumpy sprang forward instead. He sent Nhamo crashing to the ground as he rushed to grab the ladder. His foot smashed her face into the dirt. By the time she recovered, he was already on the platform, raging through her possessions. His big teeth crunched into calabashes to get at the food inside. But what he really wanted—and could obviously smell—was the meat. INTERACT IVE READING: Literar y Element He hopped from branch to branch. He caved in the delicate smaller platforms. He found the fish traps hanging from the rope, but he couldn’t reach them. The branch was too slender, and he didn’t have the sense to pull them in with the string. Rumpy bounced up and down in the tree in a perfect fit of rage. Meanwhile, Nhamo had grabbed a burning branch from the fire. She was terrified, but her survival depended on protecting her stores. She swung up the ladder and shoved the flames into Rumpy’s face. He flinched back. She clambered around him, trying to drive him out of the tree. Rumpy was beginning to lose his nerve. Nhamo approached him like a small and utterly reckless honey badger. She screamed insults. She cursed his ancestors. She felt like she wouldn’t mind sinking her teeth into his throat. Wah! shouted Rumpy. He dodged past her. His twisted foot stumbled against Mother’s jar, and he fell with a shriek over the edge of the platform. Mother’s jar rolled after him before Nhamo could teach it. It smashed open, and the picture, caught in the afternoon breeze from the lake, fluttered off and landed in the cook-fire. Nhamo almost fell out of the tree in her haste. She ignored the fallen animal as she raced for the picture. The same puff of wind that had blown it away stirred the coals in the fire. They flared up briefly, caught the paper, and burned it to ashes before Nhamo even got close. She knocked the coals aside with her bare hands, ignoring the searing pain in her fingers. But it was already too late. The picture blew away like the ashes that had been beaten in the mortar so long ago in the village, the day Vatete died. Ambuya . . ., they whispered. Sister Chipo . . . Masvita . . . beloved Nhamo. Please do not be frightened. I must go now. I know you will follow when you can. The ashes floated off on the wind, carrying the message. Literary Element Description What are some of the strongest moments in this description of Nhamo’s battle with Rumpy? What descriptive techniques does the author use to create these moments? A Gir l Nam ed D isaster : C hapters 13–30 27 INTERACTIVE READING: Reading Skill Reading Skill Identify Sequence Paraphrase the sequence that leads to Nhamo finding the island’s edible crops. Use the words first, next, then, and finally. 28 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 1 NOVEL EXCERPT: CHAPTER 17 What would the njuzu like? Here, Nhamo was completely stymied. They seemed to have plenty of food and drink in her dream. They had houses and livestock, too. Really, it was difficult to know what such powerful spirits lacked. Then she had it: They liked jewelry. The snake-girls had been covered with beads. Nhamo hunted in her stores until she found the beads from Aunt Shuvai’s bracelet. She looked at them sadly, remembering when she had gathered them up long ago after her aunt had thrown them away. They were one of her few remaining links to the village. But she must not be cowardly. The njuzu had brought her to this island, and it would be extremely ungrateful not to repay them. Nhamo closed her eyes and flung the beads into the lake. She heard a light patter as they struck the water. “I hope you like them,” she whispered. “They were very beautiful.” Nhamo made ready to climb the fig-tree roots to the top of the island. She packed a cooking pot, mealie meal, and matches into the fish trap. This she tied to her back. Then she filled the calabash with water and began her journey. Step by step, with many rests, she worked her way to the top. The most difficult job was keeping the water in the calabash. She would have to work out a better method for transporting it. Nhamo fought against dizziness, but the promise of cooked food kept her going. She finally hauled herself over the top of the cliff and stopped. And stared, open-mouthed. The island was covered with greenery as far as she could see—not with ordinary forest plants, but with tomatoes, mealies, and bananas. Nhamo’s eyes grew wider and wider as she took in the unbelievable scene. . . . Most of the island’s trees were fairly small; the fig was the main exception. They were scattered here and there among untidy stands of mealies, rioting pumpkin vines, and sweet potatoes. Nhamo found papayas, okra, chilies, onions, and peanuts as well. They were at all stages of development. The mealies grew in clumps as though they INTERACT IVE READING: Reading Skill had sprouted from entire ears dropped from unharvested plants. In some places, though, she could see evidence of systematic farming. In the center of the island was a ruined house, behind which stood a lemon tree. Nhamo walked around the structure. It was a square, Portuguese house, not as grand as Joao and Rosa’s, but not small either. The windows were boarded up, and the remnants of iron grillwork hung from the frames. A door stood slightly open, showing a dark and forbidding interior. Nhamo wasn’t tempted to go inside. She fetched the maheu pot and sat under the lemon tree to think. Grandmother said this area had once been dry land, except for the Zambezi. The Portuguese dammed up the river and flooded the whole valley. Only the high hills poked out above the water now. The villagers who had lived in the Zambezi Valley dug up the bones of their ancestors and carried them to new places beyond the edge of the lake. It would have been unthinkable to leave the bones behind. The ancestors were as much a part of the family as the children, and to abandon them would have been wicked beyond belief. The mud huts of the villagers would perish after several rainy seasons, but a Portuguese house was made of stronger materials and would survive. As this one had. Reading Skill Identify Sequence Why do you think the author used a flashback here? A Gir l Nam ed D isaster : C hapters 13–30 29 ON-PAGE N OTE-TAKING: BIG Question MARK IT UP Are you allowed to write in your novel? If so, then mark up the pages as you read, or reread, to help with your note-taking. Develop a shorthand system, including symbols, that works for you. Here are some ideas: Underline = important idea Bracket = text to quote Asterisk = just what you were looking for Checkmark = might be useful Circle = unfamiliar word or phrase to look up 왘 BIG Question How Do You Stay True to Yourself? How does Nhamo react to having njuzu snakes climb up her tree and pour water into her mouth? How does her reaction show that she is being true to herself? Mark up the excerpt, looking for evidence of how it expresses the Big Question. 30 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 1 NOVEL EXCERPT: CHAPTER 30 One of the snakes carried the wood to the hole in her fangs and the other butted it into place with her head. In a moment the rift was healed. They went on to the next hole, and the next until the trunk was smooth again. Then they came to the ring of birdlime. Nhamo had put it there to discourage the caracal. She watched to see how the njuzu would handle the problem. They slithered down the tree and gathered up dry grass. Back and forth they went, gluing the grass to the birdlime until it was covered up. When they were finished, they glided over it as smoothly as if they were rustling across a rock. Nhamo had to admire their cleverness, but she realized she was about to have njuzu in her bed. She wanted to die, but she did not want snakes crawling all over her first! She crept to the other end of the platform. Her body trembled with the effort. The njuzu coiled over the edge with their eyes glittering in the moonlight. One of them found a calabash Nhamo was certain was empty and dived her head inside. Water droplets twinkled as she rose again. Her mouth brimmed with water. “No!” cried Nhamo, clinging to the trunk. “Go away!” One snake twined around the girl’s body, ssuh, and came up by her face. She lightly caught Nhamo’s lower lip with her fangs and pulled the girl’s mouth open with surprising strength. “Aaugh!” Nhamo gasped. The other snake bent over her mouth and poured the shining water inside. It was cold, cold! It sank into her body like a frog diving into a lake. At once the njuzu shook themselves loose, rippled over the rim of the platform, and disappeared. Nhamo was shocked to the very depths of her being. She clung to the tree, shivering violently. She had swallowed something offered by the njuzu. Did that mean she was condemned to live with them forever? Or did the rule only apply to food? One thing was certain: Her determination to die had completely vanished. Now she passionately wanted to live. She only hoped she wasn’t too late to try. CORNELL NOTE-TAKING: BIG Question Use the Cornell Note-Taking system to take notes on the excerpt at the left. Record your notes, Reduce them, and then Recap (summarize) them. Record Reduce Try the following approach as you reduce your notes. ASK QUESTIONS Write a question about the novel. Can you find the answer in your notes? Recap A Gir l Nam ed D isaster : C hapters 13–30 31 AFTER YOU READ: Chapters 13–30 Respond and Think Critically 1. What does Nhamo hold on to each night as she sleeps? Why does she need to do this? [Interpret] 2. What does Nhamo need to get off the island where the baboons live? Why does it take her so long to meet this need? [Analyze] 3. What does Nhamo do after the picture of “Mother” burns and Crocodile Guts leaves? What changes her mind? [Analyze] 4. What parallels does Nhamo see between herself and the baboon troop? Why does this comparison become so important to her? [Infer] 5. How Do You Stay True to Yourself? Nhamo frequently reminds herself, “I am Nhamo Jongwe, a woman, not a little girl.” How is Nhamo defining womanhood? Do you think her definition is in keeping with the Shona definition or womanhood? Has she been using women’s skills or men’s skills to survive—or both? [Connect] 32 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 1 APPLY BACKGROUND Reread Meet the Author on page 10. How did that information help you understand or appreciate what you read in the novel? AFTER YOU READ: Chapters 13–30 Literary Element Description 1. Aside from Nhamo, which character are you able to picture most clearly? Why? [Recall] Vocabulary Practice Write the vocabulary word that correctly completes the sentence. forage hapless haunches 2. Which descriptive elements helped you to form a complete picture? [Evaluate] inevitably pariah 1. No matter how many times the counselor gave the instruction, one of us would ________________ ask her to repeat it. 2. My little brother likes to ________________ in the cupboard in search of candy. 3. Maryka felt like a social ________________ when she wasn’t asked to dance. 4. There is a(n) ________________ quality to Tomas— strange things always seem to happen to him. 5. To make that old horse go faster, a good slap on the ________________ is often necessary. Reading Skill Identify Sequence 1. In Chapter 18 Nhamo has a dream in which she is back in her village. Why do you think author Nancy Farmer chose to break the story’s chronology with this form of flashback? [Infer] Academic Vocabulary Losing her mother at an early age was what made Nhamo invest so deeply in the magazine photograph. In the preceding sentence, invest means ”to involve and engage emotionally.”Invest also has other meanings. For instance: The village had to invest in the services of the muvuki. What do you think invest means in the preceding sentence? What is the difference between the two meanings? 2. As Chapter 30 ends, so does a particular plot sequence involving Nhamo and Rumpy. What is the end of the sequence? How do you know? [Interpret] A Gir l Nam ed D isaster : C hapters 13–30 33 AFTER YOU READ: Chapters 13–30 Write with Style Research and Report Apply Description Literary Criticism Assignment Review the author’s use of description in the section of the novel you just read. Look for descriptive passages that convey fear, tension, or suspense. Then write a description of an event or situation in which you experienced these emotions. Assignment Evaluate an excerpt of a critical appraisal of A Girl Named Disaster and write a short response explaining whether you believe the criticism applies the novel and to Nhamo. Present your response to the class. Get Ideas Make a list of situations or events that make you tense, afraid, or anxious. What other emotions correspond to these? Look through personal journals and recall recent discussions to complete your list. Choose one event to write about. Prepare Read the following quotation about A Girl Named Disaster by critic Laura Tillotson: Give It Structure Begin your paragraph with a sentence that introduces readers to the event or situation. Use detailed description to bring it to life. Look at Language Description depends on concise use of language to connect with readers. Use a thesaurus to find words that enhance your description. Avoid using strings of adjectives and empty verbs. The right well-placed word will serve you much better than numerous weak words. Example: Bad Huge, black, ominous clouds crossed the sky very quickly, covering the moon completely for a few moments. Better Inky clouds scudded overhead, momentarily eclipsing the moon. 34 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 1 “Farmer marvelously evokes the narrow but hopeful atmosphere of Nhamo’s existence—her pariah status in the village, her constant struggle for survival in the wilderness, and her initial difficulty adjusting to a westernized society.” After considering this praise, craft a thesis statement about your position on it. Then gather details from the story to support your response. Create When you present your response, make sure you speak loudly enough to reach all listeners. Use good posture and avoid making too many gestures. Remember to make eye contact with your audience. Evaluate Write a paragraph evaluating your report. After your classmates’ reports, offer oral feedback on their presentations. BEFORE YOU READ: Chapters 31–42 Connect to the Literature Have you ever given up an older, more traditional way of doing something (a custom, a technique, a habit) to try an updated, modern way of doing things? Share an Experience Think about why you gave up the old way. Did someone persuade you, or did you decide on your own? Did you find the new way better, or did the new way present a different set of problems? Discuss your experience with a partner. Then share your thoughts about the change you made with the class. NOVEL NOTEBOOK Keep a special notebook to record entries about the novels that you read this year. WRITE THE CAPTION Write a caption for the image below, in the present tense, using information from Build Background. Read to find out how Nhamo reacts when she is introduced to the benefits and problems of modern life in Zimbabwe. Build Background War and Progress Look on a map made before 1980 and you won’t find Zimbabwe. Instead, you’ll find Southern Rhodesia, a British territory. In 1963, Southern Rhodesia sought independence, but the question of just who would rule the new country—the European settlers or the native Africans—sparked a civil war between the two groups. After much bloodshed, Southern Rhodesia became the independent nation of Zimbabwe on April 18, 1980. The government was controlled by the black majority. Nhamo enters Zimbabwe in 1981, when tensions still exist between blacks and whites, land mines and soldiers still dot the borders, and the new government is intent on bringing the country into the modern world. As you read, look for evidence of both war and progress. A Gir l Nam ed D isaster : C hapters 31–42 35 BEFORE YOU READ: Chapters 31–42 Set Purposes for Reading Vocabulary 왘 BIG Question How Do You Stay True to Yourself? In the section of the novel you are about to read, Nhamo becomes a part of two very different communities. As you read, consider whether or not her self-concept changes as a result of her new living situations. Literary Element Conflict Conflict is the central struggle between opposing forces in a story or play. It is one of the major elements of plot. An external conflict is the struggle of a character against an outside force, such as fate, nature, society, or another person. An internal conflict exists within the mind of a character. In the final chapters of a Girl Named Disaster, Nhamo is faced with both external and internal conflicts. As you read, ask yourself: Who or what is Nhamo struggling against? What does she want? How does she get it? Reading Strategy Make Predictions About Plot A prediction is an educated guess about a future event. When you make predictions about plot, you put together details about the characters, setting, and situation and use them as the basis for guesses about what will occur in the story. Making predictions about plot is an important part of being an engaged reader. As you read and look for clues that suggest what might happen next, you learn to use these clues to make predictions about the story’s outcome. To make predictions about plot ask yourself what Nhamo and the other characters might do next. Consider the possible outcomes. How will her personality traits, state of mind, and feelings affect the way she acts and reacts to events and situations? Then read on to verify or adjust your predictions. A graphic organizer like the one below can help you make predictions about the plot and then check your predictions. As you read, note each new situation and make a prediction based on clues from the story. Event Nhamo hears a leopard growl 36 Predict Nhamo will kill the leopard. N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 1 Actual outcome Nhamo leaves the island. cloying [kloi´ in] adj. sickeningly sweet My aunt’s perfume always leaves a cloying blast of lilac in the air. deign [dān] v. to condescend; to show one’s superiority We wondered if the rock star would deign to grant an interview to the local paper. exhort [i zôrt´] v. to urge strongly The doctor took the time to exhort her patient to eat more green vegetables. exorcism [ek sôr siz əm] n. a ritual performed to expel evil spirits We used to joke that it would take an exorcism to make Eric give up watching TV. pagan [pā ən] adj. heathen; having to do with a polytheistic religion It is a mistake to assume that another culture is pagan simply because it differs from your own. ACTIVE READING: Chapters 31–42 When Nhamo comes to Zimbabwe, it is a country still trying to define itself, sifting through the old traditions and stirring in new ideas. Like Zimbabwe, Nhamo is in conflict: she must sort through the traditions she’s always known to decide which she Traditional and Mystic Village women Nhamo meets upon arrival: primitive, just like Nhamo’s village; hospitable, polite; offer food and rest; willing to overlook her appearance; willing to listen to her story but afraid of her when they think she’s a witch will keep and which she will discard. Keep track of the people, places, and ideas that influence Nhamo by filling in the chart below as you read. Underline behaviors, attitudes, or ideas that Nhamo decides to keep and those she decides to adopt. Modern and Scientific White family Nhamo spies on: have luxurious house, plenty of food, clothing; not hospitable, have no thought of helping her; speak to Nhamo as if she were an animal; send dogs after her Nhamo’s village in Mozambique: Efifi: Masvita: Dr. Masuku: The muvuki of Nhamo’s tribe: Baba Joseph: Nhamo’s grandmother and her great-grandfather: Jongwe family: A Gir l Nam ed D isaster : C hapters 31–42 37 INTERACTIVE READING: Literar y Element Literary Element Conflict In what way does this action express Nhamo’s internal conflict? 38 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 1 NOVEL EXCERPT: CHAPTER 35 I’M OFF TO HARARE TOMORROW,” Dr. van Heerden told Mother as the sun settled behind the gray-green trees of the forest and a soft dusk stole out of the east. The doctors and about ten villagers, all men, were seated companionably outside Dr. van Heerden’s hut. There was no room for such a crowd inside and besides, it was too hot. Nhamo was hidden by the leaves of a bougainvillea vine the Afrikaner had grown over a frame at the side. It cast a welcome shade against the hut in the afternoon and formed a convenient nook for someone who did not wish to be noticed. Dr. van Heerden had given Nhamo a bottle of orange soda from the refrigerator earlier, but by now had forgotten about her existence. She spun out the pleasure of the cold drink as long as possible. She pressed it against her face and let the juice slide down her throat to make her cool from inside. Now all she had left was a few sugary drops. She applied them to her tongue, one by one. . . . Whenever Dr. van Heerden went to town, everyone made out a list of requests. His Land Rover returned as loaded as the tractor that visited the trading post. “I’m making two quick trips if the weather stays good. I’m taking in bottles of cow smell to be analyzed.”. . . “I think I’ll bring Bliksem back for a few days. We can hunt jackals together.” Who is Bliksem? thought Nhamo. She hadn’t heard of him. “This place is bad for his health,” Mother pointed out. “Ach, a few days won’t hurt. The old fellow needs a vacation.” Bliksem must be an elder relative, Nhamo decided. Perhaps he was Dr. van Heerden’s uncle. INTERACT IVE READING: Literar y Element “Someday we have to send the Wild Child off, you know,” Mother remarked. “It isn’t fair to keep her without an education.” Nhamo’s throat suddenly closed up. Mother said that? Mother wanted to get rid of her? “She’s learning plenty,” said Dr. van Heerden. “Works harder than five of these buggers.” He was into his fifth or sixth beer. The men rolled their eyes. “You know what I mean. She can’t read or add. She’s totally unsuited for modern life—and she’s bright enough to take advantage of good schooling. In fact, she’s brilliant.” Nhamo’s heart burned within her. Mother’s praise meant nothing. She wanted to get rid of her. “Baba Joseph can teach her.” Dr. van Heerden tipped the bottle up over his red, sweaty face. “Baba Joseph!” Mother sounded exasperated. “He’d teach her to speak in tongues. Besides, he doesn’t have time—and neither does Sister Gladys, and neither do I, so don’t ask.” “You’d make such a wonderful mother,” Dr. van Heerden said sentimentally. “Nhamo needs a proper school and a real family. She says she has a father at Mtoroshanga.” “The Old Man is very attached to her.” Petrus offered an opinion for the first time. Everyone knew that the Old Man was Baba Joseph. “She called him Grandfather when she was sick. He lost a granddaughter years ago, and Nhamo reminds him of her.” “Oh, brother! Just what I need. Another one of Baba Joseph’s pets!” groaned Dr. van Heerden. Literary Element Conflict How would you define the external conflict here? What opposing points of view are Dr. van Heerden and Mother expressing? A Gir l Nam ed D isaster : C hapters 31–42 39 INTERACTIV E READING: Reading Strategy Reading Strategy Make Predictions About Plot Using what you already know about Nhamo’s story, how do you predict she will react to the idea that the leopard was acting as friend to her? 40 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 1 NOVEL EXCERPT: CHAPTER 41 “I think there were two spirit leopards involved with your life, Nhamo,” the nganga said suddenly. “Goré Mtoko’s totem was the leopard. So is ours.” “I thought ours was the lion.” Nhamo was appalled. If two people with the same totem married, it was incest. “Ours is both the lion and the leopard. That happens sometimes when two powerful clans combine. Our praise name is Gurundoro, the people who wear the ndoro, the symbol of royalty. The Mtokos, by the way, are very remote relatives with different praise names, so you can relax. The marriage wouldn’t have been incest, although it would certainly have been evil. My understanding is this: Goré Mtoko’s spirit killed your mother and, I believe, caused your father’s mine shaft to collapse. At that time Goré’s revenge was complete. “But your father’s spirit was unsatisfied. He knew he had a child who must be brought to her true family. Proud told your mother his totem was the lion because it made him feel powerful, but he was really more like a leopard. A leopard hunts alone in the shadows. He doesn’t face his enemies openly. I think your father’s first appearance to you was by the stream.” “It might have been a trick of the light,” Nhamo couldn’t help saying. “Yes, but why did you insist on telling everyone about it? He appeared again in the banana grove the night before Vatete got sick, and he left his print on her grave. He was driving you away from your mother’s village.” “But the leopard on the island—” “Tell me, did it ever harm you?” “No,” Nhamo admitted. INTERACT IVE READING: Reading Strategy “From what you told me, it provided you with meat when you most needed it, and killed the baboon that was a danger to you. At the same time, it frightened you off the island. Otherwise, you might have spent the rest of your life there.” Nhamo clasped her hands. That was certainly true. The nganga took the photograph without a word and led Nhamo from the room. “Phew! I need fresh air after that,” said the old man, seating himself by the open dining-room window. The cool smell of lawn sprinklers drifted inside. “They rented the clothes.” He tapped the portrait. “That’s what Catholics wear when they get married.” Nhamo was afraid to look. She had imagined her parents’ appearance for so long, she didn’t want the image destroyed. But she finally had to open her eyes and acknowledge them. They were so young! Mother wore a gauzy white cloth over her hair and held a bunch of flowers trimmed with ribbons. Father was cheerfully at ease in the whiteman clothes, while Mother seemed embarrassed. They were both extremely handsome people. “She looks like Masvita,” murmured Nhamo. “Masvita? Oh, your first cousin. That’s not surprising,” said the old man. “You’re in the picture, too, little Disaster.” “I am?” “Right here.” The nganga pointed at Mother’s stomach, and laughed at Nhamo’s discomfort. “This picture belongs to you. I’ll give you the wedding license tomorrow. It proves you really are a Jongwe, although sometimes I think that’s not such a wonderful thing.” Both Nhamo and the old man winced as the first sounds of fighting erupted from Jongwe Senior’s room. Reading Strategy Make Predictions About Plot Keeping in mind the events of the novel to this point—and what you know about Nhamo—what is your prediction about her future? Explain your answer. A Gir l Nam ed D isaster : C hapters 31–42 41 ON-PAGE N OTE-TAKING: BIG Question MARK IT UP Are you allowed to write in your novel? If so, then mark up the pages as you read, or reread, to help with your note-taking. Develop a shorthand system, including symbols, that works for you. Here are some ideas: Underline = important idea Bracket = text to quote Asterisk = just what you were looking for Checkmark = might be useful Circle = unfamiliar word or phrase to look up 왘 BIG Question How Do You Stay True to Yourself? Why does Nhamo hang around the doctors? How does her behavior and interaction with them express her true nature? Mark up the excerpt, looking for evidence of how it expresses the Big Question. 42 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 1 NOVEL EXCERPT: CHAPTER 34 Dr. Masuku, for her part, was often impatient with the little shadow she had acquired. “Go haunt someone else!” she would cry. “You hang around like a tsetse fly!” And Nhamo would fade away, only to reappear later when she thought Mother wasn’t looking. Nhamo observed Dr. van Heerden as he picked up dead flies with a pair of tweezers and put them into bottles. She was a little afraid of him. He was so big and hairy! His legs were like tree trunks, and nestled in the top of one of his long socks was a comb. Nhamo wondered if he used it to comb his legs. Dr. van Heerden warned her not to make any noise or touch anything or get in his way. Once she had satisfied these conditions, though, he was willing to let her watch. In fact he became so absorbed he often forgot about her altogether. If he was feeling sociable, he called her his Wild Child and insisted she had been raised by jackals. “I saw your brothers near the goat pen, Wild Child. Tell them I’ll make a rug out of them if they get any ideas. Nhamo explained gently that she came from a proper village full of people. “We’ll see what happens when the full moon arrives. I bet you’ll run through the forest with your tongue hanging out.” There was no shaking him. She knew he was trying to be funny, so she didn’t take offense. When Dr. van Heerden’s work went badly, his beard fluffed out like Fat Cheeks’s mane. “What are you smiling at?” he rumbled, peering at her over his bottles. “I am happy,” said Nhamo. “Go be happy somewhere else, Wild Child.” CORNELL NOTE-TAKING: BIG Question Use the Cornell Note-Taking system to take notes on the excerpt at the left. Record your notes, Reduce them, and then Recap (summarize) them. Record Reduce Try the following approach as you reduce your notes. MY VIEW Comment on what you learned from your own notes. Recap A Gir l Nam ed D isaster : C hapters 31–42 43 AFTER YOU READ: Chapters 31–42 Respond and Think Critically 1. What sort of place is Efifi? Why do you think they let Nhamo stay there? [Interpret] 2. How do Nhamo’s relatives react to her presence? Why do they accept her? [Analyze] 3. What happens to Nhamo’s gold nuggets? Why are they important to her future? [Interpret] 4. After the exorcism, Dr. Masuku says “It’s very hard to turn your back on something you learned as a child.” Do you think this is true? Why or why not? [Connect] 5. How Do You Stay True to Yourself? Do you think Nhamo has stayed true to herself by leaving her traditional village and coming to Zimbabwe? What does she have to give up? What does she gain? [Evaluate] 44 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 1 APPLY BACKGROUND Reread Build Background on page 35. How did that information help you understand or appreciate what you read in the novel? AFTER YOU READ: Chapters 31–42 Literary Element Conflict 1. In what ways is Nhamo’s conflict with the Jongwes similar to her conflict in her old village? [Compare] 2. How is Nhamo’s internal conflict resolved? Explain. [Analyze] Vocabulary Practice Identify whether the words in each pair have the same or the opposite meaning. 1. exorcism and insertion ______________________________________________ 2. pagan and monotheistic ______________________________________________ 3. exhort and discourage ______________________________________________ 4. cloying and nauseating ______________________________________________ 5. deign and condescend ______________________________________________ Academic Vocabulary Reading Strategy Make Predictions About Plot Nhamo came from a culture that governed themselves with ancient laws and beliefs. Culture means ”the features of everyday life used by people in a particular time or place.” How would you describe your own culture? What are some of your culture’s core beliefs and laws? 1. Did you predict that the picture of “Mother” in the magazine would turn out to have been an advertisement? If so, what were the clues? If not, what was your prediction? [Predict] 2. Having met Nhamo’s grandmother, Baba Joseph, and the nganga of the Jongwe family, what prediction can you make about the kinds of people Nhamo will be drawn to later in her life? [Analyze] A Gir l Nam ed D isaster : C hapters 31–42 45 AFTER YOU READ: Chapters 31–42 Writing Connect to Content Areas Write an Article Imagine that you are a journalist Art at a magazine for U.S. teenagers. Write an article about Nhamo’s incredible experiences focusing on only one of the story’s settings (Nhamo’s home village, the boat, her garden island, or Efifi). Select one of Nhamo’s conflicts as the main idea of your article. For example: Assignment Throughout the novel, Nhamo’s lion/ leopard totem has been an important part of her. From it she has drawn her family identity and her personal sense of power. If you had a totem, what would it be? Create a poster that reveals your totem. Internal conflict Get Ideas Make a list of your personal qualities. Think about animals or aspects of nature you associate with these qualities. Here is a sample list: fast runner—cheetah, gazelle, lightning fast talker—parrot, squirrel, monkey friendly—turtle, cow, dog, warm summer rain hot tempered—wolf, tiger, grizzly bear, sun, tornado, hurricane patient—turtle, beaver joker—fox, jackal, crow fun loving—otter, dolphin, Nhamo’s need for family, community, and a sense of belonging. External conflict Nhamo against the environment Nhamo against the muvuki Nhamo against Rumpy As you write, keep in mind that your article is for people of your own age. Jot down some notes here first. Research From the list you created, choose an animal or aspect of nature for your totem. (If you know of a real totem or emblem in your family’s history, you might choose that.) Then perform library or Internet research to find out more and to view images of your chosen totem. Prepare Go through the images you have found and select the one that best reflects your personality and identity. You can draw or paint your own version of your totem or use an existing photograph or illustration. Once you have decided on the image, draw it or place a cutout in the center of a large piece of poster board and glue it down. Think about what you want readers to know about you through this totem. On a separate sheet of paper, write a rough draft of your thoughts. When you have edited the draft, fill in your poster using your research information. Present Display your poster for the class. Be prepared to discuss the various aspects of your totem. 46 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 1 WORK WITH RELATE D READINGS A Girl Named Disaster The following questions refer to the Related Readings in Glencoe’s Literature Library edition of this novel. Support your answers with details from the text. Write your answers on a separate sheet of paper, but jot down some notes here first on the lines provided. Abuela; It was a long time before Rosa Elena Ysquierdo; Leslie Marmon Silko Make Connections How are their grandmothers important to Nhamo and to the granddaughters in these two readings? What would these girls miss without such grandmothers? Frank and Stein Eve B. Feldman Make Connections Once Nhamo joins the Jongwes in Zimbabwe, she must learn new customs and she meets new expectations that change her life. How does her great-grandfather comfort her and help her fit in? How is the comfort he provides similar to that provided by Benjy’s grandfather? from Down the Zambezi Paul Theroux Make Connections What are some of the similarities you see between the world Theroux writes about and the world in which Nhamo lives? A Story from Zimbabwe: The Hunters and the Axe folktale Make Connections How do the songs Nhamo sings about herself reflect some of the same values shown in this story/song? Thank You M’am Langston Hughes Make Connections What do you think would have happened to Nhamo if she hadn’t stumbled into the science compound at Efifi? How do the kind people there steer her in a good direction? A Gir l Na med Di sast er 47 CO NNECT TO OTHER LITER AT URE LITERATURE EXCERPT: The People Could Fly The slaves labored in the fields from sunup to sundown. The owner of the slaves callin himself their Master. Say he was a hard lump of clay. A hard, glinty coal. A hard rock pile, wouldn’t be moved. His Overseer on horseback pointed out the slaves who were slowin down. So the one called Driver cracked his whip over the slow ones to make them move faster. That whip was a sliceopen cut of pain. So they did move faster. Had to. Sarah hoed and chopped the row as the babe on her back slept. Say the child grew hungry. That babe started up bawling too loud. Sarah couldn’t stop to feed it. Couldn’t stop to soothe and quiet it down. She let it cry. She didn’t want to. She had no heart to croon to it. “Keep that thing quiet,” called the Overseer. He pointed his finger at the babe. The woman scrunched low. The Driver cracked his whip across the babe anyhow. The babe hollered like any hurt child, and the woman fell to the earth. The old man that was there, Toby, came and helped her to her feet. “I must go soon,” she told him. “Soon,” he said. Sarah couldn’t stand up straight any longer. She was too weak. The sun burned her face. The babe cried and cried, “Pity me, oh, pity me,” say it sounded like. Sarah was so sad and starvin, she sat down in the row. “Get up, you black cow,” called the Overseer. He pointed his hand, and the 48 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 1 Driver’s whip snarled around Sarah’s legs. Her sack dress tore into rags. Her legs bled onto the earth. She couldn’t get up. Toby was there where there was no one to help her and the babe. “Now, before it’s too late,” panted Sarah. “Now, Father!” “Yes, Daughter, the time is come,” Toby answered. “Go, as you know how to go!” He raised his arms, holding them out to her. “Kum . . . yali, kum buba tambe,” and more magic words, said so quickly, they sounded like whispers and sighs. The young woman lifted one foot on the air. Then the other. She flew clumsily at first, with the child now held tightly in her arms. Then she felt the magic, the African mystery. Say she rose just as free as a bird. As light as a feather. The Overseer rode after her, hollerin. Sarah flew over the fences. She flew over the woods. Tall trees could not snag her. Nor could the Overseer. She flew like an eagle now, until she was gone from sight. No one dared speak about it. Couldn’t believe it. But it was, because they that was there saw that it was. Say the next day was dead hot in the fields. A young man slave fell from the heat. The Driver come and whipped him. Toby come over and spoke words to the fallen one. The words of ancient Africa once heard are never remembered completely. The young man forgot them as soon as he heard them. They went way inside him. He got up and rolled over on the air. He rode it awhile. And he flew away. CONNECT TO OTHER LIT ERATURE Compare the novel you have just read with the literature selection at the left, which is excerpted from “The People Could Fly” by Virginia Hamilton in Glencoe Literature. Then answer the questions below. Compare & Contrast 1. Setting As you know, the setting of a story is the time and place during which the events take place. Both “The People Could Fly” and A Girl Named Disaster feature long trips by boat. What were some of the differences between Nhamo’s journey and that of the slaves? WRITE ABOUT IT Although they do so in very different ways, both Nhamo and the old man in “The People Could Fly” find a way to stay true to themselves. Explain how each of them accomplishes this. 2. Description Both the narration in “The People Could Fly” and Nhamo’s songs and stories in A Girl Named Disaster contain descriptions that feature people involved in a struggle. What are the similarities between the two forms of storytelling? 3. Conflict Recall that conflict is the central struggle between opposing forces in a story or play. In both “The People Could Fly” and A Girl Named Disaster, the characters are forced to leave home and go elsewhere. Identify how the journey affects the characters in both works with regard to the idea of the search for freedom. A Gir l Na med Di sast er 49 RES POND THROUGH WRITING Expository Essay Compare and Contrast Characters In “The Medicine Bag,” a story in Glencoe Literature, an elderly Sioux man leaves his home on a reservation and travels to visit his great-grandson to give him a vital piece of their shared heritage. Like Nhamo, he finds himself caught between two worlds—the traditional world of his past on the reservation and the modern world in which his grandchildren and great-grandchildren live. Write an expository essay comparing and contrasting the grandfather in “The Medicine Bag” with Nhamo in A Girl Named Disaster. Prewrite Read the story carefully, taking notes as you read. Then make a plan about what you intend to write. Do not begin the essay until you have figured out a writing strategy. To guide your thinking, create a list of questions like the ones below: • How do both characters feel about the past and their ancestors? • What special items does each character treasure? What is the significance of those items? • What is the role of gender in each of the stories? • Why was each character’s journey necessary? • Did both characters accomplish the goal of their journey? Once you have answered these questions, establish a guiding idea and a general structure for your essay. What overall point do you want to make? In what order will you present your information? Draft As you begin to write your essay, continue to refer to your notes and questions. Using examples from the two texts, try to present the information as clearly, logically, and effectively possible. Revise As you continue to refine your essay, be on the lookout for areas where it might be over- or underwritten. Delete any statements that do not support your guiding idea. Locate and incorporate any missing information. When you feel you have completed your work, exchange papers with a classmate and evaluate each other’s essays. Are the writer’s references to the texts clear and logical? Is the guiding idea strong enough to pull readers in? Keep in mind that your feedback on your classmate’s essay may also relate to your own work. Edit and Proofread Edit your writing so that it expresses your thoughts effectively and is well organized. Carefully proofread for grammar, punctuation, and spelling errors. 50 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 1 UNDERSTAND THE TASK • To compare is to determine how things are alike. • To contrast is to determine how things are different. • Characters are the individuals in a literary work. Grammar Tip Semicolons Semicolons are used to join the parts of a compound sentence when a coordinating conjunction, such as and, or, or but is not used. This makes them especially effective when it comes to compare-and-contrast structures: Nhamo set out on a long and difficult journey by boat; Grandpa’s journey, on the other hand, was by bus. You should also use a semicolon to separate main clauses joined by a conjunctive adverb such as however, therefore, moreover, and nonetheless: Grandpa did not want to leave the reservation; nevertheless, he knew he must. Picture Bride Yoshiko Uchida Pi ct ure Bri de 51 INTRODUCTI ON TO THE NOVEL Picture Bride Yoshiko Uchida “ Tomorrow, at last, the ship would dock in San Francisco and she would meet face to face the man she was soon to marry. Hana was overcome with excitement at the thought of being in America and terrified of the meeting about to take place. What would she say to Taro Takeda when they first met, and for all the days and years after? —Picture Bride, Chapter 1 ” These words reflect the emotions of twenty-one-year-old Hana Omiya, the main character of Picture Bride, as she nears the end of her journey to the United States. Hana not only is traveling alone to an unfamiliar country but also is about to meet for the first time the man she has promised to marry. Hana’s experiences mirror the real experiences of hundreds of young Japanese women who immigrated to the United States as “picture brides” in the early nineteen hundreds. Yoshiko Uchida’s fictional character gives these women a voice—revealing why many journeyed to America and what their lives were truly like after they arrived. Arranged Marriages In many states, marriages between white Americans and people of Japanese descent were outlawed. For that reason Japanese American men often sought arranged marriages. Frequently, the marriages were arranged through family or friends of the woman or the man. The couple, often 52 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 2 strangers to each other, would agree to marriage after exchanging pictures and perhaps some letters. The women who agreed to this arrangement, called picture brides, sometimes saw the marriage as a door to opportunities not available to them in Japan. Like Hana, many were excited by the idea of going to the United States. Facing Prejudice Community, family life, and tradition were important to Japanese women. In the United States, many found that their communities and families were continually threatened by outside problems. In addition to having to adjust to marriage with a virtual stranger, the women quickly learned that many people in the United States were not friendly to Asian immigrants and their families. White Americans felt threatened by the influx of Chinese and Japanese immigrants. Their attitudes often led to open hostility, violence, and the imposition of restrictions on the work that Japanese Americans could do and the places where they could live. In Picture Bride, Hana enters the United States with innocent excitement but, over the course of time, learns some harsh realities about U.S. society. The Drive to Get Ahead What accounts for what the historians call “waves of immigration” when no war or catastrophe causes the movement? The desire to INTRODUCTION TO THE NOVEL improve one’s economic situation is a factor in many large migrations. The migrations of Europeans from the 1600s to the late 1800s were often prompted by the hope of owning land on the large and unsettled North American continent. Some came to establish businesses and begin new careers, often settling in colonies and communities populated by earlier arrivals from their home countries. When Hana arrived in California in 1917, the period of the largest influx of immigrants to the United States was ending. Beginning in 1840 and continuing until the 1920s, 37 million immigrants arrived, mostly from European countries in which the Industrial Revolution was changing the economy. It is estimated that less than 10 percent of the immigrants to the United States over the years were motivated by political or religious reasons. Regardless of their country of origin, the majority of the immigrants faced discrimination in their new country. National laws and official actions often reflected the prejudices of the U.S. electorate, as Hana and her husband discover in the novel. Immigration laws are frequently revised even today, often reflecting the need in the United States for workers and economic development. Despite the annual limits on the number of people who can migrate to this country—usually under 1 million—about 3.6 million names were on the waiting list at the end of the twentieth century. Daughter of a Samurai In the first chapter of Picture Bride, readers are given insight into Hana’s family life and cultural background. She is said to be the daughter of one of her village’s last samurai. Samurai refers to members of the warrior class in Japan’s feudal system, which developed in the twelfth century. From the beginning of the seventeenth century, samurai formed the leading, most respected class in Japanese society. People within this warrior class were often wealthy and powerful, owning large amounts of land. In 1868 a new emperor reorganized Japan’s government. The positions of shogun, daimyo, and samurai were eliminated, so people like Hana’s father found their lives dramatically changed. Some fell into poverty, while others went on to become successful businesspeople or politicians. The fact that Hana’s father was a samurai indicates that her family has had a long and prestigious history in Japan. Also, the values of her family are probably influenced in part by the strict values of the samurai. Pi ct ure Bri de 53 MEET THE AUTHOR Yoshiko Uchida (1921–1992) “ By putting . . . special happenings into words and writing them down, I was trying to hold on to and somehow preserve the magic as well as the joy and sadness of certain moments in my life, and I guess that’s really what books and writing are all about. ” —Yoshiko Uchida Considered one of the most important Japanese American writers of her time, Yoshiko Uchida wrote more than thirty books, including nonfiction for adults and fiction for young people. The daughter of Japanese immigrants, Uchida (pronounced Oo-CHEE-dah) grew up in Berkeley, California. Although her father had a secure job with an international trading company, many of her family’s immigrant friends lived in poverty because anti-Asian discrimination limited job opportunities. While Uchida’s parents provided their two daughters with financial security, many books, and enriching experiences, the outside world—especially school— could be a frightening place for a young girl of Asian ancestry in the 1920s and 1930s. In high school, Japanese American students were excluded from social functions. Anxious to escape from high school, Uchida took a heavy class load in order to graduate early and enter the University of California at Berkeley by the time she was sixteen years old. 54 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 2 World War II and Internment Returning home from her university classes on December 7, 1941, the day Japan attacked Pearl Harbor and the United States entered World War II, Uchida found that her father had been taken away by FBI agents for questioning. This was the beginning of three years of harassment and forced confinement of her family and thousands of other Japanese Americans on the West Coast. U.S. government officials feared that some among the population might be sympathetic to Japan during the war. Universal Values After receiving her master’s degree in education Uchida taught for a while. Supporting herself with office jobs, she began her writing career in New York City. After publishing a collection of Japanese folktales for children, she received a fellowship to study in Japan. Although Uchida focused on Japanese history and the Japanese American experience in much of her writing, she saw a larger purpose: I try to stress the positive aspects of life that I want children to value and cherish. I hope they can be caring human beings who don’t think in terms of labels—foreigners or Asians or whatever—but think of people as human beings. If that comes across, then I’ve accomplished my purpose. BEFORE YOU READ: Chapters 1–9 Connect to the Literature What might it be like to leave family and friends behind and move to a faraway land where the language, the customs, and the way of life were completely unfamiliar to you? Freewrite Spend five to ten minutes writing about what it might be like to be a stranger in a faraway land. Consider how you would deal with loneliness, homesickness, and the need to learn a new language and a new way of life. NOVEL NOTEBOOK Keep a special notebook to record entries about the novels that you read this year. WRITE THE CAPTION Write a caption for the image below, in the present tense, using information from Build Background. Build Background Early Japanese Immigration The first Japanese immigrants came to the United States in the 1880s. Some arrived in Seattle, Washington, and Portland, Oregon, but most entered through San Francisco. Soon, San Francisco was the first large Japanese settlement in California. By 1890, there were also significant numbers of Japanese in nearby Alameda County, where Oakland, the setting of much of this story, is located. Most early Japanese immigrants worked as farmers or laborers on the West Coast. Japanese immigrants often farmed land that white settlers did not want. Japanese farmers were successful—they worked hard and produced high-quality crops. By 1900 there were nearly twenty-five thousand Japanese in the United States. The success of these early Japanese immigrants and their increasing numbers did not escape the attention of white settlers, particularly farmers who said they could not compete against Japanese farmers. These complaints launched the first anti-Japanese campaigns in the United States. Groups formed to try to end Japanese immigration, and Japanese farms and businesses were frequently vandalized. This hostility was fueled by more than farmers’ concerns about competition. It reflected the same intense racism that had prompted a ban on Chinese immigration in 1882. Pictur e B r ide: C hapters 1–9 55 BEFORE YOU READ: Chapters 1–9 Set Purposes for Reading 왘 BIG Question Reading: What’s in It for You? There are lots of reasons to read. Reading can teach you new things, spark your emotions, and take your imagination to new places. What reasons can you think of to read? Explore what reading can do for you. Literary Element Text Structure Text structure is the way an author organizes information in a text. One way that authors structure information is in chronological order, or time order. When authors organize information in chronological order, they tell about events in the order in which they occur. To recognize the order of events, look for time-order words and phrases such as first, next, then, later, and finally. Dates can also help you recognize chronological order. Identifying the order of events is important because it helps you recognize how one event leads to another. It also helps you find and recall key ideas and events. As you read, pay attention to the sequence of events in Hana’s life. Look for time-order words and dates to understand how one event relates to another. Reading Skill Analyze Cultural Context The customs, beliefs, relationships, and traditions that are typical of a certain region and time period are the cultural context in a story. Understanding the cultural context of a novel is important because culture helps show characters, conflicts, and themes. The cultural context of early Japanese immigration to the West Coast and the transition to life in a Japanese American community is central to Picture Bride. Use the graphic organizer on the following page to think about how each immigrant played a role in the Japanese American community. As you read, you should also list details that suggest the cultural context of the novel. Use graphic organizers like the one to the right and on the next page to help you. 56 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 2 Vocabulary affluence [af lō¯ōəns] n. abundance; wealth Their affluence allowed them to buy a new home and a boat. conscientious [kon shē en´shəs] adj. ethical; principled Because Mark was conscientious, he always did his homework. placid [plas id] adj. calm; mild There was no wind, so the lake was placid. pungent [pun jənt] adj. biting; strong The pungent flavors of the dish were stronger than those of most foods I eat. vulnerable [vul nər ə bəl] adj. exposed; unsafe Don’t build your house where it is vulnerable to hurricane damage. Details Hana wears a silk kimono. What They Tell Me She is dressed as a Japanese woman, not an American woman. ACT IVE READING: Chapters 1–9 In the first nine chapters of the novel, readers are introduced to a variety of characters. Most of these characters will play important roles in the remaining sections of the novel. As you read, fill in the chart below with details about each character. Character Role in Japanese American Community Characteristics Hana Taro’s picture bride naive, intelligent, high-spirited Taro Yamaka The Todas Dr. Kaneda Pictur e B r ide: C hapters 1–9 57 INTERACTIVE READING: Literar y Element NOVEL EXCERPT: CHAPTER 1 Literary Element Text Structure In what time and place does the novel open? What happened before that? What happens next? 58 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 2 1917–1918 One Hana Omiya stood at the railing of the small ship that shuddered toward America in a turbulent November sea. She shivered as she pulled the folds of her silk kimono close to her throat and tightened the wool shawl about her shoulders. She was thin and small, her dark eyes shadowed in her pale face, her black hair piled high in a pompadour that seemed too heavy for so slight a woman. She clung to the moist rail and breathed the damp salt air deep into her lungs. Her body seemed leaden and lifeless, as though it were simply the vehicle transporting her soul to a strange new life, and she longed with childlike intensity to be home again in Oka Village. . . . By five the next morning, Hana was up and dressed in her finest purple silk kimono and coat. She could not eat the bean soup and rice that appeared for breakfast and took only a few bites of the yellow pickled radish. Her bags, which had scarcely been touched since she boarded the ship, were easily packed for all they contained were her kimonos and some of her favorite books. The large willow basket, tightly secured by a rope, remained under the bunk, untouched since her uncle had placed it there. She had not befriended the other women in her cabin, for they had lain in their bunks for most of the voyage, too sick to be company to anyone. Each morning Hana had fled the closeness of the sleeping quarters and spent most of the day huddled in a corner of the deck, listening to the lonely songs of some Russians also travelling to an alien land. As the ship approached land, Hana hurried up to the deck to look out at-the gray expanse of ocean and sky, eager for a first glimpse of her new homeland. INTERACT IVE READING: Literar y Element “We won’t be docking until almost noon,” one of the deck hands told her. Hana nodded. “I can wait,” she answered, but the last hours seemed the longest. When she set foot on American soil at last, it was not in the city of San Francisco as she had expected, but on Angel Island, where all third-class passengers were taken. She spent two miserable days and nights waiting, as the immigrants were questioned by officials, examined for trachoma and tuberculosis and tested for hookworm by a woman who collected their stools on tin pie plates. Hana was relieved she could produce her own, not having to borrow a little from someone else, as some of the women had to do. It was a bewildering, degrading beginning, and Hana was sick with anxiety, wondering if she would ever be released. On the third day, a Japanese messenger from San Francisco appeared with a letter for her from Taro. He had written it the day of her arrival, but it had not reached her for two days. Taro welcomed her to America and told her that the bearer of the letter would inform Taro when she was to be released so he could be at the pier to meet her. The letter eased her anxiety for a while, but as soon as she was released and boarded the launch for San Francisco, new fears rose up to smother her with a feeling almost of dread. The early morning mist had become a light chilling rain, and on the pier,-black umbrellas bobbed here and there, making the task of recognition even harder. Hana searched desperately for a face that resembled the photo she-had studied so long and hard. Suppose he hadn’t come. What would she do-then? Literary Element Text Structure Which words and phrases help to show chronological, or time, order from this moment until Hana first speaks with Takeda? Pictur e B r ide: C hapters 1–9 59 INTERACTIVE READING: Reading Skill Reading Skill Analyze Cultural Context What does this sentence tell you about the culture of the Japanese American community? 60 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 2 NOVEL EXCERPT: CHAPTER 3 “I would like to introduce Miss Hana Omiya, who comes from Oka Village near Kyoto,” he said quietly. Hana heard the rustle of clothing as everyone turned to look at her in the back row. She knew she was expected to rise and acknowledge the introduction, but her knees nearly gave way. She clung to the chair in front of her and bowed toward the dignified gentleman who now smiled warmly at her. “I thank you for your kindness,” she murmured, “and I beg your kind indulgence in the future.” She felt the jab of a corset stay and gasped as she awkwardly resumed her seat. The women about her smiled and bowed in acknowledgement of her words. Soon the minister, his wife and all the women gathered around to greet her, asking about her trip, inquiring about her family in Oka Village. One woman drew her aside, informing her that she was a midwife and would be happy to assist her whenever the need arose. When, at last, everyone had spoken to her, they moved outside into the thin November sun. Taro stood with the other men in front of the church and gradually made his way to Hana’s side. He also steered toward her a tall, lanky man with an abundance of wavy black hair. He was far better looking than Taro. “This is Kiyoshi Yamaka,” he said. “He and I struggled together during our early years in America.” Hana recognized immediately the handsome face she had encountered during the prayer and groped for something proper to say to excuse herself. But Yamaka quickly relieved her of further embarrassment. “I hope you will be happy here,” he said politely. “Taro is a lucky man.” He had a disarming smile that made Hana relax, and he asked Taro if he could drive them somewhere. INTERACT IVE READING: Reading Skill “Yamaka is the only member of the church with an automobile,” Taro explained with good-natured envy. “But without a wife,” Yamaka added. “I find the car a great convenience, but not very good company.” He laughed and Taro laughed with him. Much to Hana’s pleasure, Taro accepted Yamaka’s offer, inviting him to join them for lunch at a Chinese restaurant on Seventh Street. The gentleman who had made the announcement now came and touched Taro’s elbow. Taro turned quickly to introduce Hana. “This is Dr. Sojiro Kaneda,” he said, explaining that he was one of the early founders of the church. “Without him we would probably have no church. He is its life and strength.” Taro spoke with grave earnestness and Hana could see that everyone treated Dr. Kaneda with the same deference they extended to the minister himself. Yamaka did most of the talking during lunch, filling the awkward gaps of silence with tales of his early days in Oakland. “I almost killed myself the first week,” he related. “I was only nineteen and hadn’t the sense to say no to anything. Back home I never so much as held a mop or a broom,” he admitted. “I wasn’t even permitted to enter the kitchen or soil my hands with womanly work.” “It surely was another world for us,” Taro agreed. “It scarcely seems real anymore.” “But can you imagine such a boy,” Yamaka continued, “being sent by the Japan Employment Agency to do housework in an elegant white man’s home? The first day I reported for work, the lady of the house gave me a bucket and a sponge and told me to wash all the upstairs windows inside and out.” Reading Skill Analyze Cultural Context What do the details about Yamaka’s first jobs tell you about the culture he came from and the new culture that he had to become a part of? Use details from the text to support your answer. Pictur e B r ide: C hapters 1–9 61 ON-PAGE N OTE-TAKING: BIG Question MARK IT UP Are you allowed to write in your novel? If so, then mark up the pages as you read, or reread, to help with your note-taking. Develop a shorthand system, including symbols, that works for you. Here are some ideas: Underline = important idea Bracket = text to quote Asterisk = just what you were looking for Checkmark = might be useful Circle = unfamiliar word or phrase to look up 왘 BIG Question Reading: What’s in It for You? What have you found out about the lives of early Japanese immigrants to America? Mark up the excerpt, looking for evidence of how it expresses or answers the Big Question. 62 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 2 NOVEL EXCERPT: CHAPTER 4 Hana nodded. “Oh yes, it was a most eventful day,” she began. “It was my first visit to a Christian church, and there was lunch at a Chinese restaurant and then the lovely drive around the lake.” She recited the day’s activities like a dutiful child reporting to its mother. She paused a moment and added, “I also saw Taro San’s shop.” “Oh. What did you think of it?” “It was . . . well, it was very nice,” Hana began, trying to find some kind words among the misgivings that raged inside her. She saw Kiku’s questioning look, however, and suddenly abandoned all attempts at restraint and control. “No, that’s not true,” she burst out. “It wasn’t nice at all. It was drab and dirty and smelled of stale food. There were cobwebs and mice droppings in the corners, and the shelves were covered with dust. It’s a wonder anyone would want to buy anything there.” Hana swallowed, trying to blink back the tears. Kiku put an arm around her. “You were expecting something a bit finer, I expect.” Hana nodded. Kiku’s openness made it possible to answer her with shameless candor. “I thought he would have a large store on a fine street. I thought there would be American ladies and gentlemen coming to his shop to buy shirts and silks and thread.” She paused, remembering the lonely men on Seventh Street. “Is it only people like those I saw today on his street who go there to shop?” “The fine white American ladies and gentlemen have their own stores,” Kiku explained gently. “They have no need to come to Seventh Street to buy pickled radish or soy sauce.” She turned Hana’s face toward her and said gravely, “You’re going to have to realize something important, Hana. We are foreigners in this country, and there are many white people who resent our presence here. They welcome us only as cooks or houseboys or maids. Why, even if Taro’s store was twice as big and it was on the best corner in downtown Oakland, still his only customers would be the Japanese and the men on Seventh Street. Don’t forget, we are aliens here. We don’t really belong.” Hana recalled the minister’s prayer that morning. “It isn’t such a golden life here in America then, is it?” she said almost to herself. CORNELL NOTE-TAKING: BIG Question Use the Cornell Note-Taking system to take notes on the excerpt at the left. Record your notes, Reduce them, and then Recap (summarize) them. Record Reduce Try the following approach as you reduce your notes. MY VIEW Write down your thoughts on the excerpt. Recap Pictur e B r ide: C hapters 1–9 63 AFTER YOU READ: Chapters 1–9 Respond and Think Critically 1. Why does Hana agree to marry Taro? What is her attitude toward her decision after she arrives in the United States? [Summarize] 2. Who are the Todas? How is Kiku Toda different from Hana? [Compare] 3. Evaluate the relationship between Hana and Taro. Do you think their marriage will last? Why or why not? [Evaluate] 4. Do you think that Hana takes her new role seriously? Give evidence from the novel to support your answer. [Infer] 5. Reading: What’s in It for You? What have you learned about Japanese picture brides in early twentieth-century America? [Synthesize] 64 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 2 APPLY BACKGROUND Reread Introduction to the Novel on page 52. How did that information help you understand or appreciate what you read in the novel? AFTER YOU READ: Chapters 1–9 Literary Element Text Structure 1. How many years have passed in the novel so far? How do you know? [Apply] 2. Study the table of contents pages of this book. Explain the text structure of this novel. [Apply] Vocabulary Practice An antonym is a word that has the opposite or nearly the opposite meaning as another word. Match each boldfaced vocabulary word below with its antonym. Use a thesaurus or dictionary to check your answers. 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. affluence conscientious placid pungent vulnerable a. bold b. mild c. unethical d. intolerable e. poverty f. secure g. stormy Academic Vocabulary Reading Skill Analyze Cultural Context 1. What have you learned about the challenges that faced young Japanese men like Takeda and Yamaka? [Synthesize] When the narrator explains that Hana’s mother had hoped Hana would “indicate an interest” in one of the men whose names her mother mentioned, she is telling readers that Hana’s mother was hoping Hana would let her mother know that one of the men interested her. Using context clues, try to figure out the meaning of the word in the sentence above. Write your guess below. Then check your guess in a dictionary. 2. Describe the Japanese American community in early twentieth-century Oakland as it shown in this novel. [Synthesize] Pictur e B r ide: C hapters 1–9 65 AFTER YOU READ: Chapters 1–9 Writing Research and Report Personal Response What thoughts went through Visual/Media Presentation your mind as you read about Hana’s first year in California? Name some challenges Hana faces, and give your opinion of how she responds to them. Assignment When she wants to pray, Hana often addresses both Buddha and Taro’s Christian god. Present a computer-slide, transparency, or other visual report showing what the basic beliefs of each religion are and when and how each was introduced to Japan. Get Ideas Make a list of research questions and search terms. Decide which type of sources fit your purpose best. For example, will you use a general or specialized encyclopedia, books, government web sites, or other sources? Research Use at least three sources of information. Take notes in your own words, and carefully write down the source of each bit of information. Organize your notes in four categories: • Buddhist Beliefs • Christian Beliefs • Introduction of Buddhism to Japan • Introduction of Christianity to Japan Prepare Create your visuals. Be sure each one has a clear heading that identifies the type of information. Make headings large and clear. Present additional information as bulleted text in a traditional, large, and legible font. Write the text you will use to present and explain each visual, and rehearse speaking as you show your slides, transparencies, or other visuals. Present As you display and explain the information, speak slowly and clearly. Leave time for your audience to read, reread, and, if necessary, ask questions about each one. Always use a respectful tone when discussing religions, and make as much eye contact with your audience as possible. 66 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 2 BEFORE YOU READ: Chapters 10–23 Connect to the Literature What are some qualities that can help people solve problems, accept change, or rise above difficult circumstances? Share Ideas In a small group, talk about specific personal qualities that can help people adjust to change and survive difficult times. If possible, refer to individuals you know or have read about. Share your insights with the members of another group. NOVEL NOTEBOOK Keep a special notebook to record entries about the novels that you read this year. SUMMARIZE Summarize in one sentence the most important idea(s) in Build Background. Build Background Prejudice Despite Citizenship People who immigrated to the United States from Japan, like Hana and Taro, were known as Issei. The children of Issei were known as Nisei. Because they were born on U.S. soil, Nisei automatically became citizens of the United States. As citizens, they could own property; thus, parents often would purchase land under their children’s names. United States citizenship, however, could not protect Nisei from racist attitudes. Although they had lived in the United States since birth and usually spoke fluent English, Nisei were seen by many other Americans as outsiders. During the early nineteen hundreds, the U.S. public’s hostility toward Japanese immigrants influenced aspects of government policy. The San Francisco Board of Education, in response to public pressure, voted to racially segregate schools in 1906. All Japanese American schoolchildren were sent to schools in Chinatown. When Japan protested this action, President Theodore Roosevelt proposed a “gentleman’s agreement” whereby he would try to end segregation if Japan would stop Japanese men from immigrating to the United States. Other laws that grew out of anti-Japanese sentiment included the Alien Land Law of 1913, which banned Japanese people from owning land, and the Immigration Act of 1924, which officially halted Japanese immigration to the United States. Pictur e B r ide: C hapters 10–23 67 BEFORE YOU READ: Chapters 10–23 Set Purposes for Reading 왘 BIG Question Reading: What’s in It for You? As you read, ask yourself, how can reading a novel help increase your knowledge of an immigrant experience? Literary Element Theme Theme is the main idea of a story. In most works of literature, the theme is never stated directly. Instead, it is revealed gradually through other elements such as plot, character, setting, or point of view. To understand the theme means to understand the author’s underlying idea. It is what the author wants you to remember most. To gather clues about the author’s main idea, notice the events of the plot and pay attention to what the characters do, say, or learn. As you read, think about what the theme may be. Ask yourself, in general, what do these characters experience? What message about life or about a part of American history do I learn from the characters and events in this novel? Use the graphic organizer on the following page to record information about the novel’s theme. Reading Skill Identify Cause-and-Effect Relationships A cause is an event. An effect is what happens as a result of the cause. For example, Jason hit a baseball (cause) that broke a window (effect). Authors use a cause-and-effect approach to explore the reasons for something and to examine the results of actions or events. It is important to identify cause-and-effect relationships to see how events are connected. To identify cause-and-effect relationships • ask yourself “Why did this event happen?” Your answer will tell you the cause. • ask yourself “What will happen as a result of this event?” Your answer will tell you the effect. • look for signal words such as so, because, and as a result. As you read this section of Picture Bride, identify the reasons or causes for each major choice Hana makes or for each major event in her life. Use a graphic organizer like the one at the right to keep track of cause-andeffect relationships. 68 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 2 Vocabulary dissuade [di swād´] v. to discourage Leah had to win the prize, and no one could dissuade her from trying. effusive [i fū´ siv] adj. expressive; talkative The effusive praise led me to believe I had done a great job. erratically [ə rat´ ik əlē] adv. not consistently Jolene goes to practice erratically so we never know when she will show up. impel [im pel´] v. to move forcefully The gratitude we feel impels us to return the favor. indignation [in´di nā´ shen] n. outrage I felt indignation when Tomás did not invite me to his party. Cause Toda loses his job at the bank and wants a new kind of work. Effect ACTIVE READING: Chapters 10–23 Hana faces many challenges. Some of them are universal challenges—challenges faced by people in every culture. Some, however, result from her status as a Japanese American. List challenges Hana faces in chapters 10–23 because she is a Japanese immigrant. Then reflect on what each challenge says about Japanese immigrants in general at the time the novel is set. Challenges Hana Faces Challenge: Challenge: Challenge: What It Says About Japanese Immigrants: What It Says About Japanese Immigrants: What It Says About Japanese Immigrants: Pictur e B r ide: C hapters 10–23 69 INTERACTIVE READING: Literar y Element Literary Element Theme How are Hana and Taro’s struggles like those of other immigrants at almost any time in American history? 70 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 2 NOVEL EXCERPT: CHAPTER 10 Good news, Hana!” Taro called as he came in. Hana knew by the way he had bounded up the steps and flung open the door that he was excited. She quickly put a finger to her lips to caution him about the baby. “She’s asleep,” Hana whispered. The child, at six months, was still sleeping erratically, not napping when she should and falling asleep at the most inconvenient moments. She was also hopelessly spoiled, often crying for no reason than to be picked up and coddled. However, Hana could not restrain the extravagance of love that Taro lavished on his infant daughter, and she herself found release in a similar outpouring. It was as though the two of them unburdened on the tiny creature the affection they could not seem to show one another. Taro lowered his voice. “I think I’ve finally found a house we can rent,” he whispered. “It’s in a residential area and there’s a school close by.” Actually, the neighborhood was beyond his means, but he had extended himself for the sake of their child. “You’re quite sure it’s all right for us to move in?” By now Hana was well acquainted with the antiJapanese sentiments that burgeoned throughout the state. Too many times Taro had come home discouraged and dismayed at having been refused a house because he was Japanese. The landlords had various ways of letting him know. “The house has just been rented,” they would say, or, “I don’t think you would care for this particular house.” It was difficult for Hana to understand why they should be so despised. She had been both puzzled and vexed when Taro had told her about the Gentlemen’s Agreement, concluded by Theodore Roosevelt and the Japanese government ten years before her arrival, that prevented Japanese laborers from emigrating to America. Hana had frowned. “But that doesn’t seem a very gentlemanly thing for such a big country to do to a small country like Japan. There is so much room here.” Hana could scarcely comprehend the vastness of the United States. She would study a map, trace her finger INTERACT IVE READING: Literar y Element across the breadth of the country, and then compare it with the meager droplets of land that was Japan. She could not understand the hatred and fear of such a giant land. Taro explained that the problem was economic. “When the white men felt that we Asians were threatening their jobs, then words like ‘yellow peril’ began to appear in newspapers, and legislators passed laws discriminating against us.” “Peril?” Hana asked incredulously. “We Japanese are a peril to this enormous country?” It was beyond belief. Taro enjoyed educating his wife to a more complete knowledge of the world. “Do you know we Asians cannot own land in California, even if we have the money to buy it? There is a law called the Alien Land Law that prohibits it.” “But you are a responsible and law-abiding citizen.” Taro interrupted, “I may be responsible and lawabiding, Hana, but this country will not allow me to become a citizen because I am an Asian. That is the law of this land, too.” “Ah, they hate us so much?” Hana wanted to hear no more. It didn’t matter so much for her or Taro, but she did not want her child to be hated simply because she was a Nisei––a second-generation American of Japanese ancestry. “Well, our child is an American citizen, Hana, even if we cannot be,” Taro comforted, “and we will give her a fine American name.” He selected the name Mary because it was honest and forthright. “Mary Takeda.” Hana tried the name on her tongue many times. “That is a good name,” she agreed, “but couldn’t she have a Japanese name as well?” Taro wanted that, too, so they called her Mary Yukari. Hana wondered now about school. “Will Mary be treated all right, do you think?” “I can’t be sure,” Taro admitted. “But maybe by the time she’s old enough to start school things will be better.” He hadn’t told Hana that there had been a time when all the Japanese American children in San Francisco had been forced to attend a segregated school for Asians. Literary Element Theme How were the struggles of Asian immigrants in the early 1900s different from those of other immigrants? Pictur e B r ide: C hapters 10–23 71 INTERACTIVE READING: Reading Skill Reading Skill Identify Cause-and-Effect Relationships What causes Mary to play down her Japanese identity whenever she can? 72 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 2 NOVEL EXCERPT: CHAPTER 21 At Oakland High School where Mary was now a junior, there were only two other Nisei girls. The few Nisei boys were too shy to say more than hello to her, and when she saw them approaching, she usually busied herself at her locker or pretended to be reading something on the bulletin board. She could not imagine herself going out with them, and not in her wildest dreams did she even think of dating a white boy. None, in fact, would have asked her. Mary had a few white girl friends at school, and knew that among themselves they spoke of skating or swimming parties or the spring prom, but she was never included in such discussions and accepted her exclusion as the normal course of events. For some years now, Mary had known that her Japanese face denied her certain privileges. White people had their own special world, and the Japanese Americans were not a part of it, except perhaps as servants, day workers, gardeners or cooks. When she went to the City Plunge with her friends one day, she was told, “We don’t think you’ll enjoy swimming here.” When she made her first appointment for a haircut at Corley’s Beauty Parlor, she called first to ask whether they would cut Japanese hair. Mary knew that’s how life was. She neither questioned it nor resented it, trying only to be unobtrusive, emulating the white American world, hoping desperately to be absorbed into it. She submerged her Japaneseness whenever she could, trying to be less different, shielding herself from hurt by keeping to her own private world. The one after-school activity Mary enjoyed was the International Club, where she was sometimes forced to acknowledge her heritage on such occasions as the special International Day assembly. Miss Nelson, who advised the club, persuaded Mary and the two other Nisei girls to wear kimonos for their part in the program. “Do you think your mother could come help you girls get dressed in your kimonos?” Miss Nelson asked Mary. INTERACT IVE READING: Reading Skill “Sure, if it’s not one of her days to . . . I mean if she’s free.” Mary did not want to admit that her mother did housework and could not come on the days she worked. When Mary spoke of it to her mother, Hana was delighted. “Why, of course, I’ll be glad to help,” she said, circling the date on the Takeda Dry Goods and Grocers calendar that hung on their kitchen wall. On the morning of the assembly, Mary instructed her mother to be at school by two o’clock sharp. “Don’t be late now,” she begged. “You know how to get to my school?” “Yes, I know. I won’t be late.” Hana had already determined the time necessary to get there on the streetcar. She had pressed Mary’s blue-flowered kimono and hung the brocade obi out to air, so it would not smell of moth balls. Both had lain in a trunk since Mary’s grandmother sent them from Japan, and when Hana removed them, she had taken out her best silk furoshiki in which to wrap and carry the kimonos. “Mama,” Mary said just before she left for school. “Yes?” “What will you wear when you come?” “I thought my navy blue suit and hat. Is that all right?” “Uh-huh, I guess so.” Hana felt the uneasy disapproval in her daughter’s voice. “It’s my Sunday suit,” she explained. “It’s the best I can do.” Mary chose not to discuss the matter further. “I’ll meet you at the main entrance at two,” she said, and with a whirl of her pleated serge skirt, she was gone. . . . Hana took a deep breath as she approached the high school, carrying her best blue leather handbag and Mary’s Japanese outfit carefully wrapped in her silk furoshiki. Mary was waiting at the door to meet her. “Mama, you came on the streetcar carrying that thing?” “What, my furoshiki?” Hana was startled. “It’s my best one.” “But you look like you just came off the boat from Japan.” Reading Skill Identify Cause-and-Effect Relationships Why is coming to school a problem for both Mary and Hana? Pictur e B r ide: C hapters 10–23 73 ON-PAGE N OTE-TAKING: BIG Question MARK IT UP Are you allowed to write in your novel? If so, then mark up the pages as you read, or reread, to help with your note-taking. Develop a shorthand system, including symbols, that works for you. Here are some ideas: Underline = important idea Bracket = text to quote Asterisk = just what you were looking for Checkmark = might be useful Circle = unfamiliar word or phrase to look up 왘 BIG Question Reading: What’s in It for You? What did you find out about the reactions of some whites to the Japanese immigrants? Mark up the excerpt, looking for evidence of how it expresses or answers the Big Question. 74 N OV E L C OMPA NION: Un it 2 NOVEL EXCERPT: CHAPTER 10 Promptly at seven the next evening the doorbell rang. “You need not come out to meet them,” Taro told Hana, and he went to the door alone. “Please come in,” he said. The four men filled the living room with their large physical presence and the smell of cigars. “We represent the people of this block,” one of them began. “We’d like to have a talk with you.” “Yes. Please sit down.” The men glanced around the living room which Hana had taken great pains to decorate properly. A new flowered rug lay on the floor, and fresh white curtains that Kiku had helped Hana sew hung at the windows. The first tight buds of the flowering peach in their yard had begun to swell, and knowing there would be callers, Hana had arranged a spray on the mantel. “We’ll come right to the point,” a tall red-headed man said without bothering to sit down. “There’ve been some complaints from the neighborhood about having Japanese on this block.” Taro caught his breath. “I see. Can you tell me who it was that complained?” “Just some of the neighbors.” “What is it we have done to offend them?” “Well, nothing specific.” Taro looked at each of the men in turn and tried to keep his voice steady. “Gentlemen,” he began. “My wife and I looked many, many months to find a home where we might raise our daughter. When the owner said there would be no objection to our moving here, we trusted him. It was a dream come true for us. We have already spent much time and money to make this house our home. And now, you would ask us to leave?” Taro dared not stop before he finished all he wanted to say. “I should like to meet those neighbors who object to us,” he said. “Is it any of you gentlemen?” The men looked uncomfortable. “We’re just here to represent them.” CORNELL NOTE-TAKING: BIG Question Use the Cornell Note-Taking system to take notes on the excerpt at the left. Record your notes, Reduce them, and then Recap (summarize) them. Record Reduce Try the following approach as you reduce your notes. MY VIEW Comment on what you learned from your own notes. Recap Pictur e B r ide: C hapters 10–23 75 AFTER YOU READ: Chapters 10–23 Respond and Think Critically 1. Why do you think Ellen Davis is in the novel? What does she represent? [Analyze] 2. Explain why Nishima is staying in the Takeda home. What do Hana’s actions toward him reveal about her character? [Interpret] 3. Why do you think Mary’s feelings toward her family and her heritage change so much as she grows older? [Infer] 4. In your opinion, how has the relationship between Hana and Taro changed since the early chapters of the novel? [Synthesize] 5. Reading: What’s in It for You? What have you learned so far about why Japanese immigrants stayed together in their own community? [Synthesize] 76 N OV E L C OM PA NION: Un it 2 APPLY BACKGROUND Reread Build Background on page 67. How did that information help you understand or appreciate what you read in the novel? AFTER YOU READ: Chapters 10–23 Literary Element Theme 1. Which scenes do you think show the theme of challenges in adjusting to a new culture best? Why? [Evaluate] 2. In this section, which character besides Hana or Taro best helps you understand the difficulties Japanese immigrants faced? Why? [Evaluate] Vocabulary Practice For each boldfaced vocabulary word in the left column, identify the related word with a shared root in the right column. On a separate sheet of paper, write each word and underline the part they have in common. Use a printed or online dictionary to look up the meaning of the related word. Then explain how it is related to the vocabulary word. 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. dissuade effusive erratically impel indignation a. b. c. d. e. f. g. profuse propelling compensation stoically dignified persuasion erred EXAMPLE: disconsolate, solace Solace means “comfort.” A disconsolate person is one Reading Skill Identify Cause-and-Effect Relationships 1. Why does Taro sink into a depressed state? How do Hana and Nishima help him out of it? [Analyze] Academic Vocabulary Hana becomes a source of embarrassment to Mary. In the preceding sentence, source means “a cause.” Think about how Hana is different from her daughter. Then fill in the blank for this statement: One source of Mary’s negative feelings is ________________________________________ 2. Why do Hana and her family find the visit to Kiku and Henry so enjoyable and uplifting? [Analyze] Pictur e B r ide: C hapters 10–23 77 AFTER YOU READ: Chapters 10–23 Writing Speaking and Listening Write a Letter Imagine that you are a close friend of the Takeda family and you have noticed how Hana and Mary are drifting apart. Write a letter to both Hana and Mary urging them to improve their relationship. Help them see how their differences result more from the stress of their identity as Japanese immigrants than from other problems between them. Encourage them to find common ground. Speech Jot down some notes here first. Assignment Imagine that you live on the Takedas’ block and that you disapprove of the chilly reception that the family has received. Prepare an informal speech to be presented at the next meeting of the block club. Encourage your neighbors to put aside their prejudices and welcome the Takedas to the neighborhood. Prepare Make a list of reasons for welcoming the Takedas. Also, prepare an anecdote, or a brief story, telling about a time when someone took your part and explaining how it felt to be supported. Use your reasons and your anecdote to appeal to your neighbors’ reason and sense of fairness. Frame your anecdote in this way: Example Once, when I ____________________________. As a result, I felt ____________________________. Also, remember your identity as a member of the same group that makes up your audience, and use the pronoun we wherever possible. Identify with your audience as you simultaneously present a different point of view. Deliver This is an informal speech, so keep your tone personal. Remember, however, that all the guidelines of effective delivery still apply: you should speak loudly and clearly enough for everyone to hear. Keep your pace slow enough so that everyone hears every word, but not so slow that you sound unnatural. Evaluate Write one paragraph reflecting on the content of your speech. Was it persuasive? Was it clear? Write another paragraph reflecting on your delivery. Did you keep your audience engaged? Do you think you might have changed any minds? 78 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 2 BEFORE YOU READ: Chapters 24–35 Connect to the Literature What if you were forced to leave your home and your daily routine on short notice and for an indefinite period of time? Quickwrite Describe how you might react if you were suddenly forced to leave your home. What would you take with you? What would you miss most? NOVEL NOTEBOOK Keep a special notebook to record entries about the novels that you read this year. WRITE THE CAPTION Write a caption for the image below, in the present tense, using information in Build Background. Build Background The Internment of American Citizens The bombing of Pearl Harbor, a U.S. naval base in Hawaii, by the Japanese in December 1941 stirred up anti-Japanese feelings based on the idea that people of Japanese ancestry might become a threat to national security. Rumors fueled by racism and irrational fear began to spread. Before long, the entire California coastline was named Military Area One, an area from which Japanese families were told that they should voluntarily move. Although many tried to move, they found that they were unwelcome in other parts of the state. In 1942 President Franklin Roosevelt signed Executive Order No. 9066, which gave the military permission to remove “enemy aliens” and anyone who was believed to be disloyal. People in this area were to be evacuated and moved into relocation camps. In trying to evacuate “enemy aliens” from the West Coast, the government evacuated Japanese Americans. Many of these people had never been to Japan and did not speak Japanese. Ironically, because they were U.S. citizens, the Nisei were the only persons the government allowed to hold positions of authority in the camps. Japanese tradition calls for elders to be treated with respect, yet Issei (people who had immigrated from Japan) were not allowed positions of authority, which caused conflict for many in the camps. Pictur e B r ide: C hapters 24–35 79 BEFORE YOU READ: Chapters 24–35 Set Purposes for Reading 왘 BIG Question Reading: What’s in It for You? As you read, ask yourself, how can reading about immigrants during World War II help you learn about your world? Literary Element Mood Mood is the emotional effect that a story or poem has on a reader. The author creates a mood through the type of words and sentences he or she uses in describing the setting, events, and objects. For example, when a story is set during a dark and stormy night, the mood may be tense or suspenseful. Mood is important in helping a reader become emotionally involved with the story. To identify the mood of a story, look for descriptive words and phrases. What emotions do these words create? As you read this section of the novel, identify the mood and consider how author Yoshiko Uchida uses word choice and sentence structure to create it. Reading Strategy Visualize When you visualize, you picture in your mind what you are reading by using the descriptive details the author provides. Fiction writers and poets often use imagery, or sensory details, to bring the characters and setting of a story or poem to life. Good readers use this imagery to create pictures in their minds of the setting, characters, and events of a narrative. Visualizing can help readers enjoy, understand, and remember a selection. It can also help readers feel the mood and tone of the selection. Vocabulary cursory [kurser ē] adj. hastily done Carla’s cursory work resulted in several careless errors. garrulous [ar ə ləs] adj. talkative After two hours with the garrulous man, I wanted only silence. laud [lôd] v. to praise The coaches laud us for our efforts but not for our losing streak. sabotage [sab ə tazh´] n. deliberate damage The sabotage was planned to stop traffic at the busiest time of day. succor [sukər] v. to aid It was an act of treason to succor the enemy. Description from Novel “Taro removed his glasses blinking wearily. His eyes were red-rimmed and shadowed with dark circles.” As you read, notice sensory details that help you see, hear, smell, taste, and feel what the author describes. You may find it helpful to use a visualization chart like the one at the right. Visualization I can see the worry and shock on Taro’s face; I can feel the tension. This creates a mood of anxiety. 80 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 2 ACTIVE READING: Chapters 24–35 In Chapters 24–35, Uchida creates a vivid picture of the deplorable conditions endured by the Takedas and other Japanese Americans who were forced to live in assembly centers and internment camps. As Tanforan you read, record descriptive details and imagery of the conditions at Tanforan and Topaz in the chart below. Topaz forced to live in cold, dirty horse stalls Pictur e B r ide: C hapters 24–35 81 INTERACTIVE READING: Literar y Element Literary Element Mood Find the details that create the setting. Name the mood they create. 82 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 2 NOVEL EXCERPT: CHAPTER 24 On a cold night in January, Hana awoke to the sound of distant explosions. Had the war come so close? She turned for the comfort of Taro’s arms, but found the bed empty. “Papa?” she called, her voice hollow in the quiet room. Hana put on her bathrobe and went to the kitchen where she found Taro hunched over the ledgers, notes and papers from his shop. They were spread out on the kitchen table in complete disarray. “What in the world are you doing?” Hana asked. “It’s three o’clock in the morning.” Taro removed his glasses, blinking wearily. His eyes were red-rimmed and shadowed with dark circles. “I know, Mama. I couldn’t sleep. I’ve been thinking of what I must do with the shop if we are to be evacuated.” For several weeks now their lives had been laced with disturbing rumors that all the Japanese on the West Coast would be uprooted from their homes and incarcerated in government camps. It was referred to as “the evacuation.” But Taro refused to believe such talk. “The United States government would never do such a thing,” he explained to Hana, recalling the Constitution he had studied long ago. “After all, there is such a thing as due process of law, and our children are citizens.” Still, false stories of sabotage continued to circulate, and anti-Japanese forces exerted political and economic pressure to rid the West Coast of all the Japanese Americans, citizen and non-citizen alike. Hatred and fear of the enemy were increasingly focused on the Japanese American presence along the West Coast, and rumors of an evacuation grew stronger each day. Night after night, Taro lay in bed contemplating the enormity of such an uprooting. What would happen to all the Japanese Americans if it should actually come to pass? What was to become of their businesses, nurtured so carefully over a lifetime? What of the small cleaners and INTERACT IVE READING: Literar y Element shoe repair shops, the laundries, the cafes, the grocery stores, the homes, the farms? What of Dr. Kaneda’s medical equipment and the office he’d been forced to abandon in such haste. And what of his own shop? After thirty long years, at last he’d been able to buy it in Mary’s name and begun to earn a decent living from it, no longer having to depend on Hana’s help. At last, the shop’s success was his own triumph, and only last month, he had told Hana she could stop her day work and enjoy some years of leisure. . . . On the nineteenth of February 1942, the weeks of speculation and uncertainty came to an end. The President of the United States authorized the Secretary of War and his military commanders to prescribe areas from which any or all persons could be excluded. The newspapers carried ominous headlines about the President’s Executive Order 9066. “What does it mean?” Hana asked anxiously. “What will happen to us now?” “It means we are all going to be evacuated one day soon,” Taro explained sadly. “It means we are all going to be uprooted from our homes and-interned without even a trial or hearing.” Evacuated. Hana hated the word. She looked it up again in the dictionary to be sure she understood. “To remove; to send away,” it said. Hana understood. There were those who had always wanted to be rid of all the Japanese Americans in California. Now, at last, they’d gotten their way, and the President himself had made it seem a respectable act. Literary Element Mood Which words and phrases in the last four paragraphs create the mood of sadness and disbelief at injustice? Pictur e B r ide: C hapters 24–35 83 INTERACTIV E READING: Reading Strategy Reading Strategy Visualize Which details best help you see Topaz and Hana and Taro’s living quarters there? 84 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 2 NOVEL EXCERPT: CHAPTER 32 He came back with a slip of paper. “We’re assigned to Block Seven, Barrack Two, Apartment A,” he said. “They told me it’s an end room, for two people.” “You’ll be nearby,” Sumiko said, looking pleased. “We’re in Block Six, next to yours.” Sumiko and Kenji led the way down the long dusty road toward Block Seven. With each step, they sank almost ankle-deep into the fine powdery sand. The army, in its search for a site to deposit the thousands of Japanese Americans uprooted from California, had located this utterly desolate land that had once been a peaceful lake bed. It had sent in its bulldozers and trucks to disturb the creatures that lived among centuries-old bones and stone; it had uprooted the sagebrush that once held down the sand, and it had churned the desert into a seething mass of dust that floated, suspended, everywhere. It had further defiled the desert by building on this loose bed of sand a wretched barrack camp encircled with barbed wire, with guard towers at its four corners. The camp was then called Topaz. Hana felt the dust seep into her nostrils and eyes. Both she and Mrs. Mitosa coughed as they plodded slowly through the drifts of glaring white sand. No one spoke as they walked on. At Block Six, Sumiko and her mother stopped. “We’ll leave you here,” Sumiko said. “Your block is just ahead.” Kenji tried to encourage Hana. “We’ll be there soon,” he said. “Just one more firebreak to cross and we’ll be in Block Seven. That’s the hospital over there to the left, and over in the corner, just beyond the guard tower, are the soldiers’ barracks.” INTERACT IVE READING: Reading Strategy Hana turned her head. She did not want to see the guard towers or the barracks where the soldiers lived. Apartment A was one of the small rooms at the end of each barrack, not much larger than the horse stalls. The rooms in the center were for families of four or more. The barracks were far from complete, and as they arrived, workmen were still pouring tar on the roofs. Dust sifted into the room from every crevice and from the hole in the roof where the stove chimney was to go. Two army cots lay folded on the dusty floor and a single light bulb dangled from the ceiling. “So this is Topaz, ‘jewel of the desert’,” Taro said, recalling the words he had read on the instruction sheet. Hana had no words to utter. She was so exhausted, she could have stretched out on the dusty floor and gone right to sleep. . . . “The only good thing about Topaz,” Hana wrote to Ellen Davis, “is the sunset each evening.” Hana had never seen such an expanse of space as the sky that arched over the desert. As the sun dipped each evening behind the towering mountains that ringed their desert, the entire sky turned a brilliant, flaming red that faded into the lavenders and pinks of dusk. Hana and Taro usually stayed outside long enough to watch the mountains melt into the dark shadows of night. Sometimes they would walk to the hospital to visit Mrs. Mitosa or visit a church friend in another block. By the time they returned home, the first stars would appear, and Hana gazed at the sky until she could see the River of Heaven. It was as though the stars sang out in an explosion of brilliance to console the creatures fenced in beneath them. Reading Strategy Visualize How does the imagery in this excerpt help you see, hear, smell, taste, or feel the family’s experience as they enter the new camp? Pictur e B r ide: C hapters 24–35 85 ON-PAGE N OTE-TAKING: BIG Question MARK IT UP Are you allowed to write in your novel? If so, then mark up the pages as you read, or reread, to help with your note-taking. Develop a shorthand system, including symbols, that works for you. Here are some ideas: Underline = important idea Bracket = text to quote Asterisk = just what you were looking for Checkmark = might be useful Circle = unfamiliar word or phrase to look up 왘 BIG Question What’s in It for You? How has your knowledge of what Japanese immigrants went through deepened? Mark up the excerpt, looking for evidence of how it expresses or answers the Big Question. 86 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 2 NOVEL EXCERPT: CHAPTER 27 There was a pounding at the door. “Mr. and Mrs. Taro Takeda?” Pleased to think one of their friends had somehow found them already, Hana flung open the door. A young boy with a pimpled face held out a yellow envelope. “Telegram,” he said, as he hurried away. It seemed ludicrous that such amenities could follow them to a horse stall behind barbed wire. Hana was reluctant to open it. Telegrams never brought good news, and her fingers shook as she struggled with the envelope. At first, she could not believe what she read. TODA SHOT TO DEATH LAST NIGHT STOP FUNERAL SUNDAY KIKU Hana read the telegram over and over before she understood what it said. Still, she could not believe it. Why would anyone want to kill such a warm, lovable man? Henry never would have harmed another living creature. Hana continued to read the telegram again and again, as though by reading its terse message something of the awful circumstances might be revealed. “Kiku, oh Kiku. I cannot even go to comfort you.” Hana shuddered, suddenly depleted and drained of all feeling. She could not really be here, sitting in this miserable horse stall, shivering on a dusty cot, mourning the loss of an old friend. It just was not happening. She could not even cry. When Taro and Kenji returned with two straw-filled mattresses, their faces streaked with dust and sweat, they found Hana sitting silently on the cot looking stunned. She was still clutching the telegram. CORNELL NOTE-TAKING: BIG Question Use the Cornell Note-Taking system to take notes on the excerpt at the left. Record your notes, Reduce them, and then Recap (summarize) them. Record Reduce Try the following approach as you reduce your notes. MY VIEW Write down your thoughts on the excerpt. Recap Pictur e B r ide: C hapters 24–35 87 AFTER YOU READ: Chapters 24–35 Respond and Think Critically 1. How do Hana and Taro cope with the living conditions at Topaz? What do their responses reveal about the character of each individual? [Analyze] 2. What happens when Taro goes out alone for a walk one evening at Topaz? How does Mary respond to this event? What does her response reveal about her feelings toward her parents? [Analyze] 3. Why do Taro and Hana apologize to each other near the end of the novel? Do you think these apologies are necessary? Why or why not? [Evaluate] 4. Evaluate the decision Hana makes at the end of the book. Do you think it is the right decision? Why or why not? [Evaluate] 5. Reading: What’s in It for You? How has your knowledge of the lives and challenges of the earliest Japanese immigrants changed or deepened as a result of reading this novel? Name specific details from the novel to support your answer. [Synthesize] 88 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 2 APPLY BACKGROUND Reread Meet the Author on page 54. How did that information help you understand or appreciate what you read in the novel? AFTER YOU READ: Chapters 24–35 Literary Element Mood 1. What mood do the details about Dr. Kaneda’s decision to return to Japan create? Use details from the novel to support your answer. [Synthesize] Vocabulary Practice Identify the context clues in the following sentences that help you determine the meaning of each boldfaced vocabulary word. 1. The cursory note was like everything Jim did—rushed and careless. 2. The garrulous child chattered for the entire two-hour ride. 2. What is the mood at the end of the novel? Use details from the novel to support your answer. [Synthesize] 3. We did not know whether our parents would laud us for our courage or criticize us for our risk-tasking. 4. Damaging the electrical plant was an act of sabotage. 5. The agency will succor those in need by providing food and shelter. Reading Strategy Visualize 1. What could you visualize in the scenes in which Hana packs up and cleans out the house? [Analyze] Academic Vocabulary Taro and Hana are forced to reside in a stable. In the preceding sentence, reside means “live or occupy as a home.” Reside also has other meanings. For instance: The answer to prejudice does not reside only in making new laws. What do you think reside means in the preceding sentence? What is the difference between the two meanings? 2. What could you visualize in the scene in which Taro and Hana first arrive at Tanforan? [Analyze] Pictur e B r ide: C hapters 24–35 89 AFTER YOU READ: Chapters 24–35 Write With Style Speaking and Listening Apply Imagery Debate Assignment Choose one place from chapters 29 or 31 that you can see very well in your mind’s eye or experience through your senses. Create one single main impression of the place by describing it in a paragraph. Assignment Although the U.S. government would probably never again act as it did toward the Japanese during World War II, this question remains: Should the government be able to limit freedoms in time of war for reasons of national security? Create two teams, choose a side of the issue, and debate. Get Ideas Make a cluster like the one below to record images about the place or thing. Place Decide on a single main idea that all or most of your images create. Cross out any images that do not contribute to that one main idea. Give It Structure Use spatial order to describe the place. For example, you can start from far away from the scene or object and move closer, describe it from top to bottom or from left to right, or start from the center and work outward. Choose a method of organization that makes sense. Look at Language Select images that allow your reader to see or otherwise experience the place. In addition to visual images that tell shape, size, and color, use words that appeal to other senses, such “air thick with dust” and “the stale air of the crowded car.” 90 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 2 Prepare With your team, review evidence from the novel that supports or refutes your side of the debate. Then use Internet and print sources to read, gather, and develop reasons to support your side. List your arguments and your support for them. Also, list the arguments that you anticipate the other side to offer, or the counterarguments. Make a plan, including evidence and explanation, to meet those counterarguments. Debate Begin with your best arguments. State them clearly and use specific examples to explain them. Listen carefully as the other team presents. Focus on how best to challenge their arguments. Then use specific examples to weaken their opinion and support your own. Evaluate Critique your own participation and skills in the debate by providing examples of and rating how well you met each of the criteria below: Criterion Developed effective arguments beforehand Presented and supported arguments clearly Anticipated and met counterarguments Example Made a list of 4 wellsupported reasons My Rating Good WORK WITH RELATE D READINGS Picture Bride The following questions refer to the Related Readings in Glencoe’s Literature Library edition of this novel. Support your answers with details from the texts. Write your answers on a separate sheet of paper, but jot down some notes first on the lines provided. Natsu Okuyama Ozawa—A Japanese Woman Remembers June Namias Make Connections How did the racial discrimination that Ozawa experienced before and during the war compare with the discrimination that Hana and Taro faced? from Nisei Daughter Monica Sone Make Connections How does Mary’s attitude toward her heritage in Picture Bride compare with Sone’s attitude? Sent from the Capital to Her Elder Daughter Otomo No Sakanoe Make Connections Compare and contrast the speaker in this poem with Hana. Rain Music Longhang Nguyen Make Connections Compare and contrast Linh’s parents with Mr. and Mrs. Takeda in Picture Bride. In what ways are their hopes for their children similar? Topaz: City of Dust Yoshiko Uchida Make Connections Identify some experiences in “Topaz: City of Dust” that Uchida retold as the experiences of Hana in Picture Bride. Pi ct ure Bri de 91 CO NNECT TO OTHER LITER AT URE LITERATURE EXCERPT: Coming to America The United States is a nation built by immigrants. . . . Over 31 million immigrants live in the U.S. They make up about 11.5% of the population. Like those who came before, these immigrants are arriving in hopes of building their own version of the American Dream. . . . Jin Hua Zhang When she was 11 years old, Jin Hua’s father brought his family to New York City. Although Jin Hua has made friends and is doing well in school, she still misses her home in China. In my hometown of Ting Jiang, in southeastern China, people always said that America was very good, like some kind of wonderland. They said you could have a good life here. So when my mother, my brother, and I flew into New York City’s LaGuardia Airport, I was so happy. It was night, and I thought, “This city is so good, so beautiful.” I knew at that moment my life would be changing. I thought it would be great. But then I came to my apartment. I was shocked. In China, my parents were bosses at a company that made bricks. We had a big house; it was very comfortable. Here, there were four of us squeezing into two small rooms [in Chinatown]. Everything is shared—I can’t do anything in private. The next 92 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 2 day, when I went down to the street, it was so noisy. And, oh, my gosh, so stinky! Starting school was hard too. In China, I’d been a good student—I completed every exam perfectly. Here, I didn’t understand what the teacher was saying. It was the [toughest] time I’ve ever had. But the biggest difference between China and here was that I was lonely. Some Americans look at you differently [if you’re an immigrant]; they look down on you. I had to make all new friends. In China, teenagers come together as a group and go out to play. Here, my parents didn’t want me to hang out outside; they thought I could get lost or [might] hang out with bad people. I know that my family decided to come here so my brother and I could get a better education. In China, they made money more easily, but they never felt like it was enough; they always wanted more. Now, they work all the time, every morning until midnight, [because they] want me to go to college [instead of] working in a factory like most Chinese immigrants [we know]. But I feel like I have less. I don’t know if I consider myself an American. I feel like I’m really more Chinese. CONNECT TO OTHER LIT ERATURE Compare the novel you have just read to the literature selection at the left, which is excerpted from “Coming to America” by Joe McGowan, Marisa Wong, Vicki Bane, and Laurie Morice in Glencoe Literature. Then answer the questions below. Compare & Contrast 1. Text Structure Explain three ways in which the text structure of this article differs from the text structure of Picture Bride. TALK ABOUT IT Do the challenges that Jin Hua Zhang faces seem less difficult, more difficult, or about equal to those faced by Hana in Picture Bride? Why? Jot down some notes here first. 2. Theme What does the theme of this excerpt have in common with the theme of Picture Bride? 3. Mood Choose a scene from Picture Bride. Tell how the mood of this excerpt is the same or different from the mood of the scene in Picture Bride. Pi ct ure Bri de 93 RES POND THROUGH WRITING Research Report Investigate Refugee Camps Use the Internet to research the conditions at refugee camps and other types of detainment camps around the world today. Write a research report of about 1,500 words. Focus your report on health and sanitation at the camps. Use at least three sources, including at least one primary source. Prewrite Write four or five questions to guide your research. Use only reliable sources to find the answers, and take notes. Develop a thesis. Then outline the main ideas you will use to develop and support your thesis. Draft Use your introduction to build background and to present your thesis. Use your body paragraphs to present evidence from your notecards, choosing only those details that strengthen your thesis. As you weave in sources, use introductory phrases such as “As ____________ writes in ____________, . . . ” Be sure to correctly cite, or credit, each work you use, both in your paper and in your Works Cited list. Revise Ask yourself: • What information does my reader still need to understand my thesis? UNDERSTAND THE TASK • A research report is an assignment in which you explore a topic by gathering facts from a number of different sources. Using this information, you develop a point of view or draw a conclusion. • Thesis is the main idea of your report. Grammar Tip Parentheses in Citations In the body of your paper, cite online sources by enclosing the author or authors’ names in parentheses: “I did not have any clean water for more than twenty-four hours” (Kashkouri). • Where do I need to give more background information? • Where should I add an introduction or an explanation to make the meaning of each cited bit of information clearer or more relevant to my thesis? If no author is given, enclose the name of the sponsoring institution or the title of the online work in parentheses: • Which terms in my paper might be unfamiliar to my readers? How can I explain them better? Thirty-nine million people now live in refugee camps (Doctors Without Borders). Revise for clarity and to remove any potential misunderstandings. Edit and Proofread Edit your writing so that it expresses your thoughts effectively and is well organized. Carefully proofread for grammar, punctuation, and spelling errors. 94 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 2 Dogsong Gary Paulsen Dogsong 95 INTRODUCTI ON TO THE NOVEL Dogsong Gary Paulsen “ I don’t make stuff up much. Most of the things I write about are based on personal inspection at zero altitude, and I have scars pretty much all over my body to prove those things. ” —Gary Paulsen, National Council of Teachers of English National Convention, 20 November 1993 In 1979, determined to start life anew, Gary Paulsen moved back to Minnesota, where he had spent his youth. To make a living, he trapped coyotes and beavers in the north woods. At first he tended his traps on foot or skis, but one day a neighbor gave him a sled and four sled dogs to use instead. Paulsen didn’t know much about dog sledding, but he took his neighbor’s offer, repaired the sled, and began running his team along the trap line. It was a move that would change his life and rekindle his literary career. In Love With Dog Sledding Paulsen fell in love with dog sledding. The “ancient and beautiful” bond between man and dog, as he described it, possessed his soul. One night, returning with his dogs from trapping, he found himself crossing a frozen lake under a full moon. Thrilled by the scenic beauty, he simply steered away from home and continued running for eight days. “My wife thought I’d gone through the ice,” he says. Paulsen gave up trapping but continued running and racing his dogs. In 1983 he 96 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 3 entered the grueling Iditarod sled race in Alaska. He covered the nearly twelve hundred miles in fewer than eighteen days, enduring injuries, extreme cold, and a lack of sleep. While racing in the Iditarod, Paulsen had an experience that shaped Dogsong. At a stopover along the race, a young Inuit boy who wanted to learn about dog sledding invited Paulsen to stay with his family. “I [was] stunned,” Paulsen recalls, “that an Eskimo boy on the Bering Sea would have to ask someone from Minnesota about dogs.” Dogsong, published in 1985, met with acclaim from critics and readers alike. Paulsen, full of new energy, returned to full-time writing and produced a series of popular books for young adults. But Dogsong remains his first love. Even after it was published, he confesses, he would pull the text up on his computer screen to read and revise passages he enjoyed. “I miss Dogsong,” Paulsen says. “I wish I could keep writing it. It’s like a friend who has gone away.” Real People Living on a thirty-five hundred-mile strip of land from eastern Siberia to Greenland are a people whose way of life is unlike that of any others on Earth. Westerners have traditionally called them Eskimos, but they prefer their own name: Yup’ik, meaning “real people.” Traditional Yup’ik life is ruled by the region’s extreme cold. On the Bering Sea in northernmost Alaska, the average INTRODUCTION TO THE NOVEL temperature is subfreezing for nine months of the year. Open water is a rarity. The land is treeless tundra. Only the first few inches of earth thaw out during the summer. Below that, the ground is frozen hard year round. Yupik Ways of Life Despite these harsh conditions, the Yup’ik devised a way of life that kept them warm and well fed throughout much of their history. They survived mainly on what they could kill: seal, caribou, whale, fish, birds, and sometimes polar bears. They dressed warmly in the skins of the animals they hunted and lived in houses well insulated from the northern gales. In many ways, the cold was their friend. It forced the seals to the surface at ice holes, and it drove the caribou south in great herds during the fall. It also provided a natural freezer for preserving stored meat. During most of the year, dogsleds could glide easily across the frozen terrain. Ironically, life could become harder in summer, when the land was marshy and swarms of biting flies made life uncomfortable. Yupik Today Change has come rapidly to the Yupik, and it has not always been welcomed. Today they live in two worlds: the traditional world and the modern industrial world. In many ways, they have benefited from outside influences. Modern medicine has helped curtail the epidemics that swept through Yup’ik villages when the Europeans first landed. Rifles, outboard motors, and snowmobiles have made the hunt for caribou, whale, and seal easier. Education has enabled their youth to compete in society beyond the far north, and modern, insulated housing has sheltered them from the region’s savage climate. Outside influences have brought disadvantages too. Government programs have divided families and discouraged traditional ways of life, creating aimlessness and unemployment. Though tempted by images of materialism and abundance, the Yup’ik still inhabit a world where survival demands respect for the forces of nature. As you read Dogsong, notice how the clash of cultures, old and new, affects one young Yupik boy living in Alaska. Dog Sledding Most Yupik today are more familiar with tuning an engine than with driving a team of dogs. In the 1930s, an estimated twenty thousand dogs pulled sleds in Canada; by 1970 that number had dwindled to two thousand. Nevertheless, the sled dog remains a remarkable performer. A mixed breed, weighing anywhere from forty to more than a hundred pounds, a sled dog can pull eighty to one hundred pounds of weight over distances of about forty miles a day—all on a daily ration of little more than a pound of meat and fat. The traditional sled was a low structure made of wood and whale or caribou bone. It had a curved front and might be anywhere from twelve to thirty feet long. In these vehicles, a Yupik hunter might travel several hundred miles on a trip, fueling his hardworking dogs with the caribou or seal killed along the way. Dogsong 97 MEET THE AUTHOR Gary Paulsen (1939– ) “ All of our knowledge—everything we are—is locked up in books, and if you can’t read, it’s lost. ” —Gary Paulsen, School Library Journal, June 1997 No one who met Gary Paulsen as a teenager in Minnesota could have predicted that he would become one of the country’s most successful and productive authors. It was rare enough for him to complete an assignment for school. “I just didn’t study and wound up in trouble,” he remembers. “I pretty much flunked the ninth grade.” A Library Card Born in 1939, Paulsen did not have a happy childhood. Both his parents were alcoholics, and young Gary spent his happiest days with relatives in the country. “Every opportunity I would get away from the house,” he recalls. At school, he was miserable: “I was a geek, a nerd, a dweeb. You know, the last kid chosen for sports, or never chosen actually.” One cold night when Gary was fourteen, things began to change. The temperature was twenty degrees below zero, and he took shelter in the local library. To his surprise, the librarian gave him a card and chose a book for him. “When she handed me the card, she handed me the world,” Gary said. That night he became a reader. 98 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 3 Starting to Write Gary got through high school with a D average and flunked out of a local teacher’s college in his second quarter. He next joined the army. But reading had sown the seed for his future career. He loved words. One day, when he was twenty-six years old, he read an article about airplanes and a sudden thought struck him: “What a way to make a living—writing about something you like and getting paid for it! ”From that day, Paulsen devoted his life to writing. Writing Until the End By his sixtieth birthday, Paulsen had written nearly 150 books and was showing no signs of slowing down. His best books concern young people who overcome challenges and learn about themselves in the process. For his novels Dogsong, Hatchet, The Winter Room, and Woodsong, Paulsen was honored with a lifetime achievement award for writing for young adults by the American Library Association in 1997. “The theme of survival is woven throughout, whether it is living through a plane crash or living in an abusive, alcoholic household,” wrote the awards committee. A survivor himself, Gary writes about his own experiences and intends to continue until the end: “When you are an artist, you spend yourself,” he says, “and you hope that you’ve spent yourself just about out when you die.” BEFORE YOU READ: Chapters 1–5 Connect to the Literature What kinds of stories of the past do you enjoy hearing from your elders? Why do you enjoy these stories? Quickwrite Describe a story from the past than an elder relative has shared with you. Share your story with the class. NOVEL NOTEBOOK Keep a special notebook to record entries about the novels that you read this year. SUMMARIZE Summarize in one sentence the most important idea(s) in Build Background. Build Background Traditional Ways of Life In Dogsong, Russel, the main character, goes on a great journey alone. During his journey, Russel lives according to the traditional ways of his people. In this way of living, there is no separation between the natural world, the spiritual world, and the human world. At the time when the novel is set, the fictional present, these traditional ways have been largely lost under the influence of Western and modern culture. At the beginning of the novel, Russel turns to Oogruk, one of the only people who still remembers those traditional ways. Oogruk still knows the old songs, which were not songs in the way we think of them, but more like prayers or spiritual acts. Passed down from generation to generation, the songs were often part of larger rites and traditions. The purpose of many them was to be sure the hunt was successful. Other traditional religious and spiritual acts were performed by shamans, who helped connect the human and spiritual world. Shamans were healers, prophets, and advisors. D ogsong: C hapters 1–5 99 BEFORE YOU READ: Chapters 1–5 Set Purposes for Reading Vocabulary 왘 BIG Question What’s More Important, the Journey or the Destination? It’s important to have a destination, or place you want to go. Sometimes, though, the experience you gain along the way is just as valuable as getting there. Explore how the journey can be just as important as the destination. Literary Element Conflict Conflict is the central struggle between opposing forces in a story. An external conflict is the struggle of a character against an outside force, such as nature, society, fate, or another character. An internal conflict takes place within a character’s mind. For example, he or she might have to make a difficult choice. The events in most stories revolve around conflict. As a reader, you can learn much about life by seeing how people and characters confront and resolve conflicts. As you read, ask yourself, what internal and external conflicts does Russel face? Use the graphic organizer on the following page to help you record information about the conflicts in his life that result from the clash of old ways and new ways of living. Reading Skill Analyze Theme When you analyze, you look at separate parts of something in order to understand the whole thing. A theme is a central message about life in a work of fiction. Some themes are directly stated; others are implied. Analyzing theme helps you understand the messages the author wants to get across. You go beyond knowing what the work is about to understanding how it expresses meaning. Event or Scene To analyze themes, pay attention to • points the author makes directly • underlying messages you get from the work • how the themes work together to help you understand the author’s overall message about life As you read, ask yourself how author Gary Paulsen expresses his themes, such as through a character’s words or a clash of values. You may find it helpful to use a graphic organizer like the one at the right. 10 0 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 3 aloof [ə lō¯ō f] adj. reserved and disinterested; uninvolved; apart The aloof woman never smiled and spoke to no one. grimace [rim is] v. to contort the face, indicating pain or displeasure The pain was so intense that Ted could not help but grimace. lure [loor] v. to draw into danger or difficulty Using a piece of cheese, she will lure the mouse into the trap. rancid [ransid] adj. having the unpleasant odor or taste of a spoiled oily substance As soon as we tasted the nuts, we knew they were rancid and spit them out. wince [wins] v. to draw back as from something painful, dangerous, or unpleasant The wasp’s sting made Tina wince. Message It Communicates How the Message Is Sent ACT IVE READING: Chapters 1–5 Russel’s world is split between the old way of life and the new. In the chart below, fill in examples from this section of Dogsong that represent the old way of life and the new way of life. Topic Old Way of Life New Way of Life Transportation dogsleds snowmachines Hunting Tools Ways of Eating Meat Ways of Learning Clothing Housing Lighting Men in Russel’s Life Religion D ogsong: C hapters 1–5 101 INTERACTIVE READING: Literar y Element Literary Element Conflict Name Russel’s external conflicts. 10 2 N OV E L COMPA NION: Un it 3 NOVEL EXCERPT: CHAPTER 1 RUSSEL SUSSKIT ROLLED OUT of the bunk and put his feet on the floor and listened in the darkness to the sounds of morning. They were the same sounds he had always heard, sounds he used to listen for. Now in the small government house—sixteen by twenty—they grated like the ends of a broken bone. He heard his father get up and hack and cough and spit into the stove. His father smoked cigarettes all day, rolled them with Prince Albert tobacco, and had one hanging on his lip late into the night. In the morning he had to cough the cigarettes up. The sound tore at Russel more than at his father. It meant something that did not belong on the coast of the sea in a small Eskimo village. The coughing came from Outside, came from the tobacco which came from Outside and Russel hated it. After the coughing and spitting there was the sound of the fire being lit, a sound he used to look forward to as he woke. The rustle of paper and kindling and diesel fuel, which was used to start the wood, the scratch of the match, the flame taking and the stink of the diesel oil filling the one room. Russel did not like the smell of the diesel oil but he did not hate it the way he hated his father’s coughing in the morning. Russel heard the wind outside and that was good except that it carried the sounds of the village waking, which meant the sound of snowmachine engines starting up. The snowmachines were loud and scared the seals. To fourteen-year-old Russel the whine of them above the wind hurt as much as the sound of coughing. He was coming to hate them, too. It was still dark in the house because the village generator hadn’t been turned on for the day. The darkness was cut by the light of the oil lamp on the table as his father touched a match to the wick. Flat light filled the room and Russel looked around as he always did. It was a standard government house—a winter house. They would move to summer fishcamps later. INTERACT IVE READING: Literar y Element But in the winter they came into the village and stayed in the government houses. Boxes is what they are, really, he thought: boxes to put people in. . . . Russel smiled. “Raw meat tastes better. You get the blood then.” “That’s true. But you also get the small things to make you sick. It’s better to cook it.” “Yes, Father.” He wanted to go on and say, Father, I am not happy with myself, but he did not. It was not the sort of thing you talked about, this feeling he had, unless you could find out what was causing it. He did not know enough of the feeling to talk. “There were some of the old things that were not bad,” his father said. “I am too young to remember many of them, but I was told a lot of them by my father. You did not meet him because before you were born he died in a bad storm on the sea. His umiak was torn by ice when they were walrus hunting and all the men in the boat died but one who rode to the ice on a sealskin float. It was an awful thing, an awful thing. The women cut themselves deep and bled in grief when they learned. I was just a small boy, but I remember the grief.” His father scratched himself and took some meat, still nearly raw. “I like the blood taste, too.” He bit, cut and chewed and put the ulu back on the stove top. “Father, something is bothering me.” He replied around the meat. “I know. I have seenit.” “But I don’t know what it is.” “I know that, too. It is part that you are fourteen and have thirteen winters and there are things that happen then which are hard to understand. But the other part that is bothering you I cannot say because I lack knowledge. You must get help from some other place.” Literary Element Conflict Quote the words that tell you Russel has an internal conflict. D ogsong: C hapters 1–5 103 INTERACTIVE READING: Reading Skill Reading Skill Analyze Theme What big ideas does Oogruk communicate— through speech or by example— about how to live life? 10 4 N OV E L COMPA NION: Un it 3 NOVEL EXCERPT: CHAPTER 2 Russel opened the door without knocking, as was the custom, and went in and closed the door. Outside there had been bright-light and sea-wind off the frozen sea ice, salt-wind. Inside it was almost pitch-dark. The windows were covered with smoke grime, and the room was full of smoke from the lamp on a box in the corner, a seal-oil lamp with a moss wick that threw a tiny yellow glow around the room. Leaning against the wall were harpoons and lances, hanging on nails were arrow-bags and bows and small ivory carvings. On other nails were skin clothes, squirrelskin undergarments and caribou-skin parkas, some old and some not so old, all hanging loosely and thick with the smoke. Against the far wall sat Oogruk. At first it was hard to know where the smoke ended and Oogruk began. Except for a small breechclout he was nude, and his skin was the same color as the smoke, a tan-brown, rich and oily. His hair had gone white, or would have been white, but it had taken the smoke, too, seemed to have flown into the smoke and become part of the smoke from the lamp. “Hello. Hello. You sit down and we’ll talk for a while.” The voice was strong—it always amazed Russel to hear Oogruk’s voice. He was so old but the voice moved like strong music. “I will talk for you.”. . . “Did you see my dogs when you came in?” Russel nodded, then remembered the blindness and said aloud, “Yes. They are well. They are fat.” “Good. I don’t drive them anymore but they are good dogs and I worry that they don’t get fed enough.” “They are being taken care of by everybody—they are all right.” Oogruk said nothing for a time. The eyes moved back to the flame from the lamp so the thick-white caught the yellow of the light and glowed for a second. “Dogs are like white people,” Oogruk said, looking at the flame. “They do not know how to get a settled mind. They are always turning, looking for a better way to lie down. And if things go wrong they have anger and INTERACT IVE READING: Reading Skill frustration. They are not like us. It is said that dogs and white people come from the same place.” He snorted—a nasal sound, a kind of chaa sound through his nose that could have meant anything from scorn to anger to humor. “I do not know how true that is because white people are clearly not dogs. But they have many of the same ways and so one wonders.” Russel nodded but said nothing. One time he had seen a bushpilot who had crashed his plane near the village. The plane was broken in the middle and the pilot had stood screaming at it and kicking it for failing him and falling from the sky. He treated the plane like a living animal until he got tired, then he walked away as a dog would walk away from a stick he’d been tearing at. Oogruk sighed. “I will tell you about something. We used to have songs for everything, and nobody knows the songs anymore. There were songs for dogs, for good dogs or bad dogs, and songs to make them work or track bear. There were songs for all of everything. I used to know a song that would make the deer come to me so that I could kill it. And I knew a man who could sing a song for whales and make them come to his harpoon.” Reading Skill Analyze Theme What differences do you find between what Oogruk suggests or lives by and the world in which Russel lives? D ogsong: C hapters 1–5 105 ON-PAGE N OTE-TAKING: BIG Question MARK IT UP Are you allowed to write in your novel? If so, then mark up the pages as you read, or reread, to help with your note-taking. Develop a shorthand system, including symbols, that works for you. Here are some ideas: Underline = important idea Bracket = text to quote Asterisk = just what you were looking for Checkmark = might be useful Circle = unfamiliar word or phrase to look up 왘 BIG Question What’s More Important, the Journey or the Destination? Is Oogruk comfortable with his decision and his “journey”? How do you know? Mark up the excerpt, looking for evidence of how it expresses or answers the Big Question. 10 6 N OV E L COMPA NION: Un it 3 NOVEL EXCERPT: CHAPTER 5 “I will leave you with the dogs and go out on foot.” But now Oogruk shook his head. “No. No. It is time to talk one more time and I must leave you. But I wanted to come out here for it because I missed the smell of the sea. I wanted to smell the sea one more time.” Russel looked down in the sled at the old man. “You’re leaving me? “Yes. But first I must tell you what to do . . .” “Where are you going?” “It is time to leave,” Oogruk said simply. “It is my time. But there is a thing you must do now to become a man. You must not go home.” “Not go home? I do not understand.” “You must leave with the dogs. Run long and find yourself. When you leave me you must head north and take meat and see the country. When you do that you will become a man. Run as long as you can. That’s what used to be. Once I ran for a year to find good birds’ eggs. Run with the dogs and become what the dogs will help you become. Do you understand?” Russel remembered now when Oogruk had said he would take a long journey. He spoke quietly. “I think so. But you, what are you to do?” “You will leave me here on the ice, out here by the edge of the sea.” “With respect, Grandfather, I can’t do that. There is a doctor. Things can be done if something is bothering you.” Oogruk shook his head. “An old man knows when death is coming and he should he left to his own on it. You will leave me here on the ice.” “But . . .” “You will leave me here on the ice.” Russel said nothing. He didn’t help Oogruk, but the old man got out of the sled himself. When he was standing on the ice he motioned Russel away. “Go now.” CORNELL NOTE-TAKING: BIG Question Use the Cornell Note-Taking system to take notes on the excerpt at the left. Record your notes, Reduce them, and then Recap (summarize) them. Record Reduce Try the following approach as you reduce your notes. MY VIEW Write down your thoughts on the excerpt. Recap D ogsong: C hapters 1–5 107 AFTER YOU READ: Chapters 1–5 Respond and Think Critically 1. What does Russel do when he wakes up from his sleep at Oogruk’s house? How has he learned so much? [Infer] 2. What does Oogruk instruct Russel to do when he has killed an animal? What does this suggest about the relationship between hunters and their prey in traditional society? [Interpret] 3. What does Russel leave with Oogruk when he discovers that the old man is dead? What might be his reason for doing this? [Infer] 4. Do you sympathize with Russel’s desire to rediscover the old ways? Do people in our society sometimes feel this way? Explain. [Evaluate] 5. What’s More Important, the Journey or the Destination? On what kind of journey does Oogruk send Russel? Is Oogruk interested in Russel’s journey or his destination? Explain your answer using details from the novel. [Conclude] 10 8 N OV E L COMPA NION: Un it 3 APPLY BACKGROUND Reread Build Background on page 99. How did that information help you understand or appreciate what you read in the novel? AFTER YOU READ: Chapters 1–5 Literary Element Conflict 1. How is Russel different from other teens of his own generation? [Compare] Vocabulary Practice Denotation is the literal, or dictionary, meaning of a word. Connotation is the implied, or cultural, meaning of a word. For example, the words scrawny and skeletal have a similar denotation, “being very thin,” but they have different connotations: Negative scrawny 2. In what ways is Russel’s conflict like the conflict of every teen who is growing up? [Synthesize] More Negative skeletal Each of the vocabulary words is listed with a word that has a similar denotation. Choose the word that has a more negative connotation. 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. aloof grimace lure rancid wince apart frown tempt spoiled cringe Academic Vocabulary Reading Skill Analyze Theme 1. What theme have you discovered in the first five chapters of this book? [Synthesize] The structure of this novel consists of three parts: “The Trance,” “The Dreamrun,” and “Dogsong.” In the preceding sentence, structure means “the order or pattern that a writer uses to present ideas.” Structure also has other meanings. For example: Leeann did not think the structure was safe to live in. What do you think structure means in the preceding sentence? What is the difference between the two meanings? 2. How does author Gary Paulsen show the theme you discovered? [Analyze] D ogsong: C hapters 1–5 109 AFTER YOU READ: Chapters 1–5 Writing Speaking and Listening Write an Argument Oogruk explains that his people lost their songs because of missionaries and Western culture. Missionaries and others felt their culture was superior to those of the native people, but was it? Write an argument in which you state and support an opinion on this issue. Jot down some notes here first. Interview Assignment There is little dialogue in Dogsong, yet, there is much going on. Work with a partner to create an interview with Russel that helps explain unspoken feelings and events in the novel. Prepare Make a list of at least ten questions for Russel. Do not frame yes or no questions. Instead, urge him to tell his deepest thoughts by asking questions that probe how and why. Then develop answers to the questions. As you practice the interview, fine-tune each of the following: • Tone Serious questions on a serious subject require a serious, respectful tone. • Pace Thoughtful answers may be given at a relatively slow pace. • Volume Think of your interview as a serious conversation, not a speech, a play, or a broadcast. Speak only as loud as you need to speak to be heard. • Gestures Use gestures that are natural to conversation with someone you do not know well. • Body language Your posture and movements should show that you are involved and interested. Interview Enact the interview using all the verbal and nonverbal techniques that you rehearsed. Remember that you can ask for clarification during the interview or use follow-up questions to help make responses clearer or richer. Report Prepare an oral report for the class on your interview. Evaluate Evaluate an interview done by another pair of classmates. Your evaluation should cover the following: • quality of the questions (Did they probe why and how? Did they elicit rich, full answers?) • verbal techniques (Were the tone and volume appropriate to the subject matter and occasion?) • nonverbal techniques (Were the gestures, body language, and pace appropriate to the subject matter and occasion?) 110 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 3 BEFORE YOU READ: Chapters 6–10 Connect to the Literature Recall a recurring dream (or a series of dreams about the same subject) that you may have had. What do you think they meant? List the Details Think of a vivid dream that you have had more than once and quickly list its key details. What about the dream makes it stand out in your mind? Why do you think it returns? Share your list and your thoughts with a partner. NOVEL NOTEBOOK Keep a special notebook to record entries about the novels that you read this year. SUMMARIZE Summarize in one sentence the most important idea(s) in Build Background. Build Background Hunting for Survival In this section, Russel kills four caribou. Caribou, the deer of the Arctic, were central to traditional Yup’ik culture. Caribou meat was a winter staple for people and dogs. Caribou hides made the warmest parkas and the snuggest tents. Caribou skin covered kayaks and was made into luggage. Caribou bones were fashioned into toggles and spearheads. Caribou sinew was a tough thread, and caribou blood a glue. In this section, Russel burns the caribou fat for light. No part of this precious animal went to waste. In a land where a missed kill could mean hardship or even death for his family, Russel is careful to treat his prey with reverence. Traditional hunters believed that animals, like people, had spirits, which could take revenge upon those who killed without paying due respect. It was common practice, therefore, to put snow in the mouth of a newly killed seal—a final drink of water for the animal that had given itself to the hunter. To a trapped male fox, a Yupik might tie a hunting knife, and to the female fox a needle and thimble. As you read this section of Dogsong, notice how the hunting ritual shows the Yupik’s close connection to the natural world. D ogsong: C hapters 6–10 111 BEFORE YOU READ: Chapters 6–10 Set Purposes for Reading Vocabulary 왘 BIG Question What’s More Important, the Journey or the Destination? When you believe in yourself, you have confidence to do the right thing, even when it is difficult. As you read, decide how Russel’s actions show that he believes in himself. Literary Element Imagery Imagery is language that emphasizes sense impressions to help the reader see, hear, feel, smell, and taste things described in the work. Paying attention to imagery helps you visualize settings and characters in a text. If you try to imagine what is described as you read, you are more likely to understand it. As you read the novel, try to experience what the imagery in it suggests. Reading Skill Evaluate Style When you evaluate, you think critically about the choices an author made. Style is the way an author chooses and arranges words, sentences, paragraphs, and chapters. Style can help reveal an author’s purpose and create the work’s tone and other powerful effects. Evaluating style helps you understand how and why a novel or other work has an effect on you. bluff [bluf] n. broad cliff or headland The girls were exhausted after climbing to the top of the bluff. exultation [e´zul tāshən] n. triumphant joy The troops greeted the news of their victory with exultation. forlorn [fôr lôrn] adj. hopeless; abandoned; deserted Left in the kennel, the dog looked forlorn. liberally [libər əl ē] adv. generously As a daily volunteer for the Red Cross, Sanjeev gave liberally of his time. ravenous [ravə nəs] adj. extremely hungry Because Ella had not eaten all day, she was ravenous at dinner. To evaluate style, make decisions about how well the author • made word choices • used imagery • varied sentences • used chapters, parts, or other methods to tell the story Word Choices Use the organizer on the following page to help you understand one of the author’s major style choices. Sentences As you read, also think about how these separate elements work together to create an overall effect. You may find it helpful to use a graphic organizer like the one at the right. 112 N OV E L COMPA NION: Un it 3 Example or Description Images ACT IVE READING: Chapters 6–10 The chapters in this section of Dogsong alternate between Russel’s own journey (The Run) and his dream of the hunter (The Dream). Alternating between the journey and the dream is an interesting style choice that the author made. In the organizer below, briefly summarize the key events for each chapter. The Run Chapter 6 1. Russel drives his dogs until they are The Dream Chapter 7 1. exhausted. 2. 2. 3. Chapter 8 Chapter 9 1. 1. 2. 2. Chapter 10 1. 2. 3. D ogsong: C hapters 6–10 113 INTERACTIVE READING: Literar y Element Literary Element Imagery Think about the part of the dream that takes place inside the tent. What can you see, hear, smell, or feel? 114 N OV E L COMPA NION: Un it 3 NOVEL EXCERPT: CHAPTER 7 A skin shelter, a tent, on the side of the ocean. Inside there was an oil lamp, much like the one Oogruk had, burning a smoky yellow that lighted the faces of the people in the tent. Two children were there. Small and round and wonderfully fat. They were eating of some fat red meat that Russel could not understand, didn’t know, but knew as being important. He wanted to know what kind of meat they were eating because it was so red and had coarse texture and rich yellow fat. All over the children’s faces and in their hair the grease shone and they were happy with it. On the other side of the lamp sat a woman, young, round and shining beautiful. She was fat and had eaten of the meat but was done now and worked at tending the lamp. There was much honor in tending the lamp and she took pride in it. The flame was even, if smoky, and in the stone lamp-bowl there was the same yellow fat that was so important for him to name. One other person was in the skin tent and he couldn’t see who it was; it was a man, but he kept back in the shadows and would not come forward. They were saying nothing, but the children laughed until the laughter was like a kind of music in the background and the woman looked at the man and smiled often. It was the kind of smile all men look for in women, the kind that reaches inside, and Russel felt warm to see it. But he could not see the man and he did not know the meat, and they were important to him. The fog came again, and this time when it cleared the man was standing near the doorway in a parka. The parka was deerskin and he held a long spear with some form of black stone point, chipped black stone that was deep and shining dark. He was going out hunting and Russel knew, sensed, that he was going to hunt whatever had made the coarse meat and yellow fat and Russel wanted to go with him. INTERACT IVE READING: Literar y Element The woman kept smiling and the children kept laughing but the woman was worried and said something in a language that Russel could not understand. It was words, and they were similar to what he knew, but enough different so they didn’t quite make sense to him. As the man turned to leave the hut the woman said something to him and he stopped and looked at her. Her eyes glowed at him and there was much fear in them, so much that Russel was afraid, and he knew that there was some fear in the man, too, but hidden. Russel would not have known that except that he felt close to the man. More than close somehow. The man left the tent and went out to harness dogs and they were already in harness, waiting for him, and they were dogs but they were more than dogs, too. Great gray sides twitching, they stood like shadows, with wide heads and heavy triangular jaws. Russel had never seen anything like the dogs in the dream. They were higher than the man’s waist and had silent yellow eyes that watched everything the man did while he put his gear in the sled and got ready to leave, and the way they watched it was clear that they could either run or turn and eat him. It was up to the man. He stood to the sled and Russel saw then that it was not of wood but all of bone and ivory, with large rib bones for the runners, and lashed with yellow rawhide. It shone yellow-white and rich in the night light, the color deep and alive, and when the man stepped on the runners the dogs lunged silently but with great speed and power and the fog closed again, swirled in thick and deep. When it lifted the man was alone out on the sweeps. The stretch of land looked familiar, but there was something different in the dream and after a time Russel could see that it was the grass. Where the snow had been blown away the grass was taller and thinner, with pointed ends. It was bent over in wind, but not twisted like the tundra grass. Literary Element Imagery Name three images that describe the dream world outside the tent. D ogsong: C hapters 6–10 115 INTERACTIVE READING: Reading Skill Reading Skill Evaluate Style Describe the sentences that author Gary Paulsen uses at the beginning of this chapter. 116 N OV E L COMPA NION: Un it 3 NOVEL EXCERPT: CHAPTER 6 Out. Into the sweeps, into the great places where the land runs to the sky and into the sky until there is no land and there is no sky. Out. Into the distance where all lines end and all lines begin. Into the white line of the ice-blink where the mother of wind lives to send down the white death of the northern storms. Out. Into the mother of wind and the father of blue ice. Russel went out where there is nothing, into the wide center of everything there is. Into the north. His village lay on the northern edge of the tree line. Here and there in small valleys nearby there were scrub spruce, ugly dwarfed things torn and ripped by the fierce wind. But as the run went north even these trees vanished to be replaced by small brush and gnarled grass. Snow was scarce, blown, and the landscape looked like something from another planet. Still there is beauty, Russel thought. It was hard to believe the beauty of that torn and forlorn place. The small mountains—large hills, really—were sculpted by the wind in shapes of rounded softness, and the light . . . The light was a soft blue-purple during the day, a gentle color that goes into the eyes and becomes part of the mind and goes still deeper and deeper to enter the soul. Soul color is the daylight. At night, Russel knew, often the wind would die and go back to its mother and the cold would come down from the father of ice and the northern lights would come to dance. They went from red to green and back again, moving across the sky in great pulses of joy, rippling the heavens, pushing the stars back, and were so grand to see that many people believed that they were the souls of dead-born children dancing in heaven and playing with balls of grass and leather. INTERACT IVE READING: Reading Skill Even in the wind there was beauty to Russel. The wind came from the north in a steady push that made the dogs work evenly, and the wind made the snow move, change into shapes that blended into the light of day and the soft glow from the sky at night. Out. When he’d gone far enough north along the coast to miss the village, Russel headed back into shore and moved up onto the land in a small gully, headed mostly north but slightly east. He moved into the dark. He ran the dogs out and down. Ran them steadily for a full day, eighteen hours, letting them find the way. He stood on the sled’s runners and moved to get away from what he knew, ran to get away from death sitting on the ice in Oogruk’s form. When the first dog started to weave with exhaustion, still pulling, but slipping back and forth as it pulled, he sensed their tiredness in the black night and stopped the team. He had a piece of meat in the sled, deer meat from a leg and he cut it in six pieces. When he’d pulled them under an overhanging ledge out of the wind and tipped the sled on its side, he fed them. But they were too tired to eat and slept with the meat between their legs. He didn’t know that they could become that tired and the knowledge frightened him. He was north, in the open, and the dogs wouldn’t eat and they were over a hundred and fifty miles to anything. Without the dogs he would die. Without the dogs he was nothing. He’d never felt so alone and for a time fear roared in him. The darkness became an enemy, the cold a killer, the night a ghost from the underworld that would take him down where demons would tear strips off him. He tried a bite of the meat but he wasn’t hungry. Not from tiredness. At least he didn’t think so. But he knew he wasn’t thinking too well, and so he lay down between the two wheel-dogs and pulled them close on either side and took a kind of sleep. Reading Skill Evaluate Style Tell what you like or do not like about the style of this passage. D ogsong: C hapters 6–10 117 ON-PAGE N OTE-TAKING: BIG Question MARK IT UP Are you allowed to write in your novel? If so, then mark up the pages as you read, or reread, to help with your note-taking. Develop a shorthand system, including symbols, that works for you. Here are some ideas: Underline = important idea Bracket = text to quote Asterisk = just what you were looking for Checkmark = might be useful Circle = unfamiliar word or phrase to look up 왘 BIG Question What’s More Important, the Journey or the Destination? What is Russel’s destination? Mark up the excerpt, looking for evidence of how it expresses or answers the Big Question. 118 N OV E L COMPA NION: Un it 3 NOVEL EXCERPT: CHAPTER 10 They started slowly, two of them holding back until he yelled at them again. Then they went to work and headed away from the camp. Light came gently, but the sky was clear and cold and clean and he let the dogs seek their own pace. Once they had shaken out their legs they began an easy lope that covered miles at a fierce clip. They ran into light, then all through the day, easily pulling the sled on the fast snow, grabbing a mouthful when they got thirsty, and Russel watched the new country come. There were few hills now. The land was very flat, and there were no trees of any kind. If he kept going this way for a long time—he was not sure how long it would take with dogs but it took all day with an airplane—he would come to mountains. He thought. But before the mountains he believed the sea came back in again. In the school he had seen a map that showed the sea coming back into the land but he was not sure if that was straight north or north and west and he was not sure how long it would take to get to the sea by dog sled. He did not know how far dogs traveled in a day. Yet it didn’t matter. Oogruk had said, “It isn’t the destination that counts. It is the journey. That is what life is. A journey. Make it the right way and you will fill it correctly with days. Pay attention to the journey.” So Russel ran the team and now the land was so flat that it seemed to rise around him like a great lamp bowl sloping up to the sky. . . . When the short day was gone the dogs didn’t seem to want to stop. He let them run. There was no place to camp anyway and his mind looked now to the run. He had come north a long way but was not sure how long. In the dark they kept up the pace, increased it, and they could cover many more miles before he had to rest them again, running on fresh meat as they were. CORNELL NOTE-TAKING: BIG Question Use the Cornell Note-Taking system to take notes on the excerpt at the left. Record your notes, Reduce them, and then Recap (summarize) them. Record Reduce Try the following approach as you reduce your notes. ASK QUESTIONS Write a question about the novel. Can you find the answer in your notes? Recap D ogsong: C hapters 6–10 119 AFTER YOU READ: Chapters 6–10 Respond and Think Critically 1. What happens when Russel drives his dogs for eighteen hours at a stretch? What does he learn about survival in the Arctic? [Interpret] 2. What does Russel realize when he sees the face of the man in his dream? What does Russel have in common with the man that makes this realization believable? [Synthesize] 3. In Russel’s second dream, what does the hunter pretend to be while Russel is dancing? Why might the hunter be doing this? [Infer] 4. In what ways are Russel’s dreams like your own dreams? Does Russel experience dreams for the same reasons you do? Explain. [Connect] 5. What’s More Important, the Journey or the Destination? Before he died, Oogruk told Russel that the journey is more important than the destination. In what way does this statement express the theme of Dogsong? [Conclude] 120 N OV E L COMPA NION: Un it 3 APPLY BACKGROUND Reread Build Background on page 111. How did that information help you understand or appreciate what you read in the novel? AFTER YOU READ: Chapters 6–10 Literary Element Imagery 1. Which images help to distinguish Russel’s dream world from his real world? [Analyze] Vocabulary Practice Choose the sentence that uses the vocabulary word correctly. 1. A. Jed could see for miles from the bluff. B. Jed could see only three feet ahead of him in the bluff. 2. How well does author Gary Paulsen help you see and otherwise experience Russel’s journey? Explain your answer with details from the novel. [Analyze] 2. A. I felt exultation when I crossed the finish line last. B. I felt exultation when I crossed the finish line first. 3. A. The deserted hall gave Lily a forlorn feeling. B. The party with her all her friends gave Lily a forlorn feeling. Reading Skill Evaluate Style 1. Tone is also part of author Gary Paulsen’s style. How does his tone change as he switches from the real world to the dream world? Cite evidence from the novel in your answer. [Apply] 4. A. The Chins gave liberally to their favorite charity. B. The Chins shopped liberally at their favorite store. 5. A. After eating their fill, the women were ravenous. B. After roofing the house, the women were ravenous. Academic Vocabulary The caribou skins provide considerable warmth in the frozen Arctic. To become more familiar with the word considerable, fill out the graphic organizer below. 2. Describe author Gary Paulsen’s style in presenting the dream and tell what you did or did not like about it. [Evaluate] synonyms definition considerable antonyms sentence/image D ogsong: C hapters 6–10 121 AFTER YOU READ: Chapters 6–10 Write With Style Speaking and Listening Apply Tone Literature Groups Assignment Write a description of a person, place, thing, or event as you see it in real life. Then change your tone and describe it as you might see it in a dream. Assignment The five chapters in this section have only two titles: “The Run” and “The Dream.” With a group, decide what a good title might be for each of the five chapters. Get Ideas Look back at the dream chapters in Dogsong, Chapters 7 and 9. Think about what you hear in author Gary Paulsen’s tone in those chapters. Then jot down the choices the author makes to create the tone you hear. Remember that a tone can come from any choice a writer makes, including sentence types, sentence lengths, word choices, and figures of speech. Prepare Working individually, review each chapter. Decide what is the single most important idea or event in the chapter, or come up with a short phrase that provides a clear overview of the chapter. Make notes for each chapter that include your title ideas as well as quoted words from the novel or reasons for your choice that are based on the novel. Words from Novel Tone I Hear How the Tone Is Created Give It Structure You are going to create two contrasting descriptions, so create two paragraphs. Make an informal outline that begins with the reallife description. Decide on the tone of your first paragraph, and jot down ideas about the sentences, words, and other choices you will make to create it. Then plan a transition to your second paragraph and the dream description. Decide on your tone for that paragraph, and jot down ideas about how you will create it. Use your informal outline to write your draft. Look at Language Look closely at your verbs to see if or how they help suggest a particular feeling or attitude. Also, decide whether poetic techniques, such as repetition, assonance, or alliteration, might help you create a dreamlike tone. For example, if you want to sound matter-of-fact, you might say, “The cat moved across the sofa.” If you want to create a dreamlike tone, you might write, “The cat snaked slowly along the surface of the sofa.” 122 N OV E L COMPA NION: Un it 3 Discuss As a group, discuss the ideas. Decide which are most concise and which truly give the reader the best idea of the content of each chapter. Present logical arguments for why each title is appropriate. Support your arguments with evidence from the novel. By listening carefully to others’ ideas and agreeing or disagreeing based on evidence and logic, arrive at a consensus, or group decision, on the best titles. Report Have one group member present your ideas to the class. Compare your group’s titles with those selected by other groups. Then, as a class, choose the most appropriate titles for the five chapters. Evaluate Evaluate your work in a written paragraph that addresses each of these criteria: • choice of titles • use of logical arguments • use of evidence • ability to reach consensus BEFORE YOU READ: Chapters 11–Par t III Connect to the Literature What is the most difficult thing you have ever done in your life? What did you learn from the experience? Share a Task Think of a difficult task or activity that you did not think that you could accomplish. Share the experience with a partner. NOVEL NOTEBOOK Keep a special notebook to record entries about the novels that you read this year. WRITE THE CAPTION Write a caption for the image below, using information in Build Background. Build Background Becoming a Man In this section of the novel, Russel’s survival, as well as the survival of the girl-woman Nancy and the dog team, depends on Russel’s skill as a hunter. That skill is tested when Russel encounters a polar bear. For the Yup’ik, hunting and killing a polar bear was the ultimate test of manhood. Polar bears are solitary creatures that can weigh more than sixteen hundred pounds. They are the largest bears in the world. The Inuit revered them for their cunning and courage. The traditional hunting method of using a lance, or maybe only a knife, required extraordinary bravery. Hunters would use their dogs to distract and slow the bear before preparing for the face-to-face encounter. The first blow with the lance had to be fatal. A hunter who missed his mark would likely lose his life. The hunter who brought home the huge pelt of a white bear was hailed as a man of courage. D ogsong: C hapter s 11–Part I I I 123 BEFORE YOU READ: Chapters 11–Par t III Set Purposes for Reading 왘 BIG Question What’s More Important, the Journey or the Vocabulary As you read, ask yourself, how does the journey change Russel? clamor [klam ər] v. to make loud, continuous cries The children in the nursery school clamor for attention. Literary Element Motivation Motivation is the reason characters do certain things. A character’s beliefs and perspective or the preceding plot events can be motivations in a story. For example, parents may motivate children to do chores at home by offering rewards. clarity [klar ə tē ] n. quality of being clear Check for clarity to be sure your reader can understand everything you wrote. Destination? Motivation is important because it helps reveal characterization or plot events. To understand a character’s motivation, think about the reasons for his or her thoughts, actions, and words. As you read, think about why the main characters act the way they do. Use the graphic organizer on the following page to record ideas about Russel’s motivation and the hunter’s motivation in the dream. Reading Strategy Make Generalizations About Plot A generalization is a broad statement that applies to many facts or situations. When you make generalizations about plot, you make broad statements based on the events in a story or novel. For example, after reading a novel about growing up in which a character becomes more mature, and thinking about other novels like it, you might generalize that characters become more knowledgeable and confident in novels about growing up. Making generalizations about plot can help you identify the common traits of novels or novels about growing up or coming of age. gore [ôr] n. blood that has been shed, especially when thick or clotted Ilana could not stand all the gore in the butcher shop. impertinent [im purt ən ənt] adj. offensively bold or rude; inappropriate Most students were polite to the visitor, but a few were impertinent. submission [səb mishən] n. act of yielding to some power or authority The well-trained dog sat in perfect submission to its owner. Plot element in this novel. A boy can’t find what he’s To make generalizations about plot, think about looking for in his own home. • what happens in the novel • other novels you’ve read that have similar plots Similar plot element in other • what all of these plot elements may reveal about novels about growing novels about growing up up or coming of age To think about the common plot elements in novels about growing up, you may find it helpful to use a graphic organizer like the one at the right. 124 N OV E L COMPA NION: Un it 3 Generalization about novels about growing up ACTIVE READING: Chapters 11–Par t III Russel’s story and the story of the dream hunter have much in common. There are also important differences. Fill in the Venn diagram below to show how the motivation of the dream hunter is the same as or different from Russel’s motivation. Russel’s Motivation The Hunter’s Motivation Both Both must fight a terrible storm. The hunter is motivated by worry and fear D ogsong: C hapter s 11–Part I I I 125 INTERACTIVE READING: Literar y Element Literary Element Motivation What motivates Russel to go off on his own and leave the girl-woman behind? 126 N OV E L COMPA NION: Un it 3 NOVEL EXCERPT: CHAPTER 14 And these things happened when Russel’s life folded into the dream and the dream folded into his life: It came that they ran past their food. It was true that he perhaps fed the dogs a bit too much, but they were working hard and it took meat and fat to drive them. Three, four, seven more days of running north, stopping at night in the skins with the lamp and the chips of fat and the yellow glow while they ate much and talked little; sat in their own minds until they dozed and he came to know the woman-girl—eight, nine, ten days and nights they ran north toward the mother of wind, and they ran past their food. The first and second day without food there was no trouble. The dogs grew weak, but when they didn’t get fed they went back to work and began to use of the stored fat and meat of their bodies. “They will run to death,” Oogruk had said. “You must not let them.” At the end of the second day Russel’s stomach demanded food and when he didn’t feed it and ignored it his body finally quit asking for food and he went to work and began using the meat and fat of his body. The woman-girl grew weak rapidly because her body fed the baby within. Russel saved the last of the food for her and when that was gone and it was obvious that the dogs could not go much further he stopped. There had been no game. No sign. They had seen nothing and he was worried. No, more than worried—he had been worried when the first two days with no game sighted had come. Now he was afraid. He had to make meat. “I will leave you in the tent and take the team for meat. They will run lighter with only one person.” Nancy agreed, nodding. She got slowly out of the sled and pulled the skins out to make the shelter. They were near the side of a cut bank where a creek had long ago run. They used the dirt bank for one wall and made a lean-to. INTERACT IVE READING: Literar y Element There were some chips for the lamp, and a long strip of fat that he had been saving for fuel—pictures from the dream haunted him and he did not want to leave her without heat. When the shelter was up he returned to the sled. “I’ll be back.” It was as close as he would come to a goodbye and he made the dogs leave. They did not want to go. They thought they should sleep in camp and eat and saw no reason to go out again. But he forced them and when they were away from camp he made them run to the east, up the old creekbed. If there is game, he thought, it will be up the creek run. But they went all of that day into the dark and he saw nothing. No hare, no ptarmigan, no tracks of anything. With dark he stopped and lay on the sled in his parka. There was light wind, but not the vicious cold of the previous days of running. He tried to sleep but it did not come. Instead he lay awake all night thinking of the womangirl back in the tent. If he did not find game she would die. She would die. He would die. The dogs would die. Perhaps I ought to run back to her and kill and eat the dogs, he thought, over and over. If he kept running away from the shelter until the dogs went down he would not get back to her. If there was not game out ahead of him he would not get back to her. If he saw game but his mind was not true and the arrow flew wrong he would not get back. She would die. She would die. He would die. The dogs would die. But if he went back and they ate the dogs they would not be able to leave and they would die anyway. And now when he thought, there was nothing from the ghost of Oogruk. No help. Nothing. Nothing from the trance or the time when they turned to yellow smoke. Literary Element Motivation What motivates Russel to force the dogs to run? D ogsong: C hapter s 11–Part I I I 127 INTERACTIV E READING: Reading Strategy Reading Strategy Make Generalizations About Plot How is this novel like other books you have read about growing up? 128 N OV E L COMPA NION: Un it 3 NOVEL EXCERPT: CHAPTER 14 So began the race. The dogs were strong almost past measuring. Though there were only four left they had been fed meat and run so their legs rippled and were hard to the touch. Their heads were also hard. They had seen and done much and now they knew the man on the sled, knew that he was part of them, knew that no matter what happened he would be there and that made them stronger still. The strength in them came back to Russel and he fed on it and returned it as more strength still. We have fire, he thought as they left the camp and went for meat to begin the final leg of the run. We have fire between us that grows and grows. Fire that will take us north to safety, fire that will save Nancy. So began the race. They took meat from the bear, as much as Russel thought they could carry, but had to leave the hide, the beautiful hide, because it was too heavy. He took the skin from the front legs to make pants, but the rest had to stay. She brightened when they reached the dead bear. “You did this,” she whispered. “With a spear you did this?” He looked away. “And with the dogs. A man does not kill a bear alone. The dogs helped.” “Still. It is a huge thing, is it not?” And now he chose not to answer. The dead bear made him sad, doubly so because they had to leave so much behind. It seemed wrong to talk of it as being a big thing— killing the bear with the lance. He did not wish to speak cheaply of it. Or brag of it. So began the race. They left the bear and headed north again, running in sun and light wind. In the dark and some gentle snow they ran; up the edge of the saucer of light they ran, day into day they ran for six days, stopping only to feed the dogs and rest them in three- and four-hour naps, sleeping on the sled—or Russel sleeping next to it and Nancy on the skins—then up and gone again. INTERACT IVE READING: Reading Strategy I must win this race, Russel thought. I must win. The girl-woman named Nancy got worse, grew weaker, but his strength grew with her weakness, his strength grew and went into the dogs. Now they had more light. Winter was still there, but the sun was coming back and he ran through the sun, grateful for the warmth. Even the nights were not so cold. The dogs did not go down now. They were everything he would have wanted them to be and he drove them with his mind, drove them to the edge of the land, drove them until he felt the land start to tip down and then he smelled it, finally saw the sea ice out ahead. When he got them to the edge of the sea he stopped and leaned over. “See? We are north. We have come to the edge of the land.” She was still, but the edges of her eyes were glowing with life, with happiness, with the pride in his voice at what his dogs had done. She was weak, weak and down, but there was still life, enough life, and the corners of her mouth turned up in a smile, a smile that went into Russel. “See?” he said, raising the team. “We will be in a village soon.” And he brought them up and ran them with his thoughts and on the ice they cut a snowmachine trail and he followed it to the left because that is what his leader said to do and he was the leader and the leader was him. They drove down the coast, drove on the edge of the sea-ice and land-snow, drove into the soft light of the setting spring sun, drove for the coastal village that had to be soon; the man-boy and the woman-girl and the driving mind-dogs that came from Russel’s thoughts and went out and out and came from the dreamfold back. Back. Reading Strategy Make Generalizations About Plot How is this ending like the ending of other books you have read? D ogsong: C hapter s 11–Part I I I 129 ON-PAGE N OTE-TAKING: BIG Question MARK IT UP Are you allowed to write in your novel? If so, then mark up the pages as you read, or reread, to help with your note-taking. Develop a shorthand system, including symbols, that works for you. Here are some ideas: Underline = important idea Bracket = text to quote Asterisk = just what you were looking for Checkmark = might be useful Circle = unfamiliar word or phrase to look up NOVEL EXCERPT: PART III Come, see my dogs. My dogs are what lead me, they are what move me. See my dogs in the steam, in the steam of my life. They are me. Come, see my dogs. I was nothing before them, no man and no wife. Without them, no life, no girl-woman breathing no song. Come, see my dogs. 왘 BIG Question What’s More Important, the Journey or the Destination? How has Russel changed as a result of his journey? Mark up the excerpt, looking for evidence of how it expresses or answers the Big Question. 130 N OV E L COMPA NION: Un it 3 With them I ran, ran north to the sea. I stand by the sea and I sing. I sing of my hunts and of Oogruk. Come, see my dogs. Out before me they go. Out before me they curve in the long line out before me they go, I go, we go. They are me. CORNELL NOTE-TAKING: BIG Question Use the Cornell Note-Taking system to take notes on the excerpt at the left. Record your notes, Reduce them, and then Recap (summarize) them. Record Reduce Try the following approach as you reduce your notes. TO THE POINT Write a few key words. Recap D ogsong: C hapter s 11–Part I I I 131 AFTER YOU READ: Chapters 11–Par t III Respond and Think Critically 1. Why do the dogs stop suddenly when Russel is driving them in the storm? What might have happened if Russel had made them go on? [Infer] 2. What major decision does Russel make without help from Oogruk’s ghost? What is the result of this decision? How does this mark a change in Russel’s life? [Synthesize] 3. What did you think of the way the dream “folded” into Russel’s real life? Did this folding strike you as believable? Do you feel that people can learn from dreams the way Russel does? [Evaluate] 4. What do you think Russel would regard as the most difficult thing he has ever done? What does he gain from his accomplishment? [Conclude] 5. What’s More Important, the Journey or the Destination? What has changed in Russel’s life by the end of the novel? Was it the journey or the destination that created the change? Explain your answer. [Conclude] 132 N OV E L COMPA NION: Un it 3 APPLY BACKGROUND Reread Build Background on page 123. How did that information help you understand or appreciate what you read in the novel? AFTER YOU READ: Chapters 11–Par t III Literary Element Motivation 1. What is Nancy’s motivation for heading into the wilderness? What is her motivation for turning around? [Summarize] Vocabulary Practice Studying the etymology, or origin and history, of a word can help you better understand and explore its meaning. Create a word map, like the one below, for each of these vocabulary words from the selection. Use a dictionary for help. clamor impertinent clarity submission gore Example: scripture 2. What is Russel’s motivation for returning to the village? [Analyze] Definition Etymology any sacred writing Latin scriptura means book or “writing” Sample Sentence Ameena reads Muslim scripture. Reading Strategy Make Generalizations About Plot 1. What is the climax, or point of highest excitement, in this novel? How is it like other climaxes you have read in stories of growing up? [Synthesize] Academic Vocabulary The Arctic region in which Russel lives and travels presents many challenges for survival. In the preceding sentence, region means “a geographical area.” Think of the geographical area you live in. What challenges does it pose in terms of landforms or climate? 2. What plot elements does this novel share with other stories or novels you have read about surviving in nature or making a journey? Cite specific works and details from them. [Synthesize] D ogsong: C hapter s 11–Part I I I 133 AFTER YOU READ: Chapters 11–Par t III Writing Speaking and Listening Personal Response Describe how you reacted to Performance the ending of Dogsong and explain why. Assignment Set the words to Dogsong, found in Part III, to music. Compose original music to go along with the words, using instruments that capture the mood of the lyrics. Prepare Use multiple sources to come up with ideas for your musical composition. Use the Internet, your library catalog, or library databases to locate recordings of native songs of Arctic peoples. Identify characteristics of the melody, the sounds of the musical instruments, and ways in which the songs convey rhythm. Then write the words and music for your own song. Consider using “Come, see my dogs” as a chorus. Decide where to integrate other repeating elements. Prepare by rehearsing several times. Be sure the musical sounds capture the mood of the lyrics. Perform Perform your song for the class. Try to match your facial expression and posture to the mood of the music, as well as the effect you wan to have on your audience. Evaluate Write an evaluation that covers both the content of your song, including the words and music, and the performance. Come up with at least two ideas for what you did well and one idea for what you could have improved. 134 N OV E L COMPA NION: Un it 3 WORK WITH RELATE D READINGS Dogsong The following questions refer to the Related Readings in Glencoe’s Literature Library edition of this novel. Support your answers with details from the texts. Write your answers on a separate sheet of paper, but jot down some notes first on the lines provided. from Woodsong Gary Paulsen Make Connections How would you compare the author’s attitude toward animals to Russel’s relationship with wild creatures in Dogsong? The Iditarod Lucid Interactive Web Site Make Connections Find a passage in this selection that describes the lesson Russel learns about working with dogs in Dogsong. Caribou Girl Claire Rudolf Murphy Make Connections Which character in Dogsong most closely resembles Caribou Girl’s greatgrandmother? Explain your answer. from I Am the Ice Worm MaryAnn Easley Make Connections Which character from Dogsong does Ikayauq remind you of, Russel’s father or Oogruk? Explain your answer. from Songs of the Dream People James Houston, editor Make Connections Which character in Dogsong might have written the song of the Greenland Eskimo? Explain your reasoning. D ogsong 135 CO NNECT TO OTHER LITER AT URE LITERATURE EXCERPT: Woodsong That night, once again, he was awakened by the growling of his dog. A dark figure stood just outside the circle of light. It looked smaller than the night before, and the glow of its eyes was weak. “I am Nyagwahe,” the dark figure said. “Why do you pursue me?” “You cannot escape me,” Swift Runner said. “I am on your trail. You killed my people. You threatened the Great Peace. I will not rest until I catch you.” “Hear me,” said the Nyagwahe. “I see your power is greater than mine. Do not kill me. When you catch me, take my great teeth. They are my power, and you can use them for healing. Spare my life and I will go far to the north and never again bother the People of the Longhouse.” “You cannot escape me,” Swift Runner said. “I am on your trail.” The dark figure faded back into the darkness, and Swift Runner sat for a long time, looking into the night. 136 N OV E L COMPA NION: Un it 3 At the first light of day, the boy and his dog took the trail. They had not gone far when they saw the Nyagwahe ahead of them. Its sides puffed in and out as it ran. The trail was beside a big lake with many alder trees close to the water. As the great bear ran past, the leaves were torn from the trees. Fast as the bear went, the boy and his dog came closer, bit by bit. At last, when the sun was in the middle of the sky, the giant bear could run no longer. It fell heavily to the earth, panting so hard that it stirred up clouds of dust. Swift Runner unslung his grandfather’s bow and notched an arrow to the sinewy string. “Shoot for my heart,” said the Nyagwahe. “Aim well. If you cannot kill me with one arrow, I will take your life.” “No,” Swift Runner said. “I have listened to the stories of my elders. Your only weak spot is the sole of your foot. Hold up your foot and I will kill you.” CONNECT TO OTHER LIT ERATURE Compare the novel you have just read to the literature selection at the left, which is excerpted from “Racing the Great Bear” as retold by Joseph Bruchac in Glencoe Literature. Then answer the questions below. Use the exact words of the text or explain events and ideas in the text to support your answer. TALK ABOUT IT Discuss ways in which Swift Runner and Russel are alike. Discuss ways in which the tone and mood of the two stories are different. Compare & Contrast Jot down some notes here first. 1. Conflict How is the conflict here the same as one of the conflicts Russel faces? How is it different? 2. Imagery How does what you can see and hear in this excerpt differ from what you can see and hear in the scene in which Russel faces a bear? 3. Motivation How is Swift Runner’s motivation for killing the bear different from Russel’s motivation? D ogsong 137 RES POND THROUGH WRITING Review Convince an Audience Dogsong has won the honor of being named a “best book” for young adult readers. Write a review of Dogsong in which you persuade your peers to read the book. To back up your claim that the book is worth reading, explain what is truly special about the characters, setting, theme, style, or other aspects of the novel. Prewrite List reasons to read Dogsong. Select your three best reasons. Use your reasons to write your thesis or opinion statement: Dogsong is worth reading because _____________, _____________, and (reason 2) (reason 1) _____________. (reason 3) Draft Open by creating interest in the book. Also state your thesis or opinion statement near the beginning of your paper. Then present each of your reasons in a separate body paragraph. Fully explain each reason you give by referring to the novel. You can quote the novel as well as describe specific events or information from the novel. Revise As you revise, look for ways to be more precise and to support your claims with evidence. Do not say, for example, simply that the setting is interesting. Instead, you might write, “The setting of this book is unique because ________________.” Then follow this statement with quotations from the story that show the unique setting. Or describe where Russel goes and what he finds along the way. Edit and Proofread Edit your writing so that it expresses your thoughts effectively and is well organized. Carefully proofread for grammar, punctuation, and spelling errors. 138 N OV E L COMPA NION: Un it 3 UNDERSTAND THE TASK • A thesis is a statement of a paper’s main ideas. Grammar Tip Subject-Verb Agreement Always make sure that subjects and verbs agree. When words come between the subject and the verb, make sure the verb still agrees with the subject instead of the noun that comes right before or is closest to the verb: The mother of the children dips her finger in the oil. The stars in the night sky overhead shine brightly. Barrio Boy Ernesto Galarza B arri o Boy 139 INTRODUCTI ON TO THE ME M OIR Barrio Boy Ernesto Galarza “ Far more valuable and persuasive than the many anthropological studies of exotic Mexico . . . Barrio Boy warmheartedly relates everyday images about real country people. ” —“Galarza, Ernesto” by Carlos B. Gil, Chicano Literature: A Reference Guide edited by Julio A. Martinez and Francisco A. Lomelí In Barrio Boy, Ernesto Galarza describes his early years in rural Mexico, his family’s journey to the United States, and his experiences growing up in Sacramento, California. Galarza felt that telling his own story would also provide a general portrait of the Mexicans who came to the United States in a huge wave of immigration during the early twentieth century. The Hardships of the Barrio Hispanics have been living in North America since the 1500s. In 1848, the United States defeated Mexico in war and seized California and most of the Southwest. This event proved disastrous for Hispanics in the conquered territories. Many lost their land and had to work for settlers who came from other parts of the country. In 1900, there were roughly half a million Mexican Americans. Included in this population were immigrants who came here to escape the poverty of rural 140 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 4 Mexico, where nearly all land was held by a small number of wealthy landowners. Mexican Americans were able to find work on the railroads, in factories, and on farms. They usually lived in barrios—segregated sections of towns and cities. The barrios began to swell after the Mexican Revolution broke out in 1910. Violence and economic turmoil brought about 700,000 Mexican immigrants to the United States between 1910 and 1930. During World War I, they helped make up for a worker shortage. Thousands also served in the U.S. military. A Cycle of Poverty Despite their important contributions, Mexican Americans continued to experience harsh discrimination in employment, housing, and education. They were stereotyped as an inferior people who lacked intelligence and ambition. The discrimination worsened during the Depression, when Anglo Americans resented competition for scarce jobs. During the 1930s, the government encouraged immigrants to return to Mexico and deported thousands of them. Mexican migrant laborers, who moved from region to region harvesting crops, were especially vulnerable to mistreatment. Contractors often cheated them out of their wages and housed them in unsanitary conditions. Migrant INTRODUCTION TO THE MEMOIR children had trouble keeping up at school because they moved so frequently and because they worked in the fields to help support their families. Although Galarza overcame great obstacles to achieve a brilliant career, most children of Mexican immigrants in his generation were trapped in a cycle of poverty. Destination: Sacramento The events described in Barrio Boy take place from 1910 to about 1920. Part One is set in Galarza’s birthplace, Jalcocotán, a tiny village in the Sierra Madre Occidental Mountains of western Mexico. “Jalco” is located in the state of Nayarit, whose capital is Tepic. Galarza and his family lived briefly in Tepic and in Mazatlán, a city farther north, on the Pacific coast. After moving to the United States, the Galarzas settled in Sacramento, California. The city attracted many Mexican immigrants and was an important transportation center surrounded by rich farmland. Today, about 16 percent of the city’s population is Hispanic. The Battle for Control of Mexico Mexico has a turbulent history. Several great Native American empires rose and fell before the arrival of Europeans. After Spain defeated the Aztecs in 1521, it colonized Mexico for three centuries. In 1810 the priest Miguel Hidalgo y Costilla led an Indian uprising against the Spanish. Assisted by wealthy Mexican landowners, the Spanish authorities defeated Hidalgo and the revolutionary priest, Jose Maria Morelos y Pavon. These landowners launched their own revolt in 1821 and established Mexico’s independence. During the next few decades heavy debts burdened the new republic, a problem made worse by corrupt officials. Lacking a strong central government, Mexico soon lost nearly half its territory. First, U.S. settlers in Mexico declared Texas’s independence in 1836. Ten years later, war broke out between the United States and Mexico over Texas, which the United States had annexed as a state. After losing this war in 1848, Mexico signed a treaty ceding a huge area that included California, Nevada, Utah, and parts of New Mexico, Arizona, Colorado, and Wyoming to the United States in exchange for $15 million. The United States later purchased the rest of New Mexico and Arizona, establishing the present-day border between the two countries. (A map of Mexico is included in Glencoe’s Literature Library edition of Barrio Boy.) Mexico remained in turmoil until 1876, when the general Porfirio Diaz seized power and established a stable government. Galarza’s story begins in the last years of Diaz’s regime. B arri o Boy 141 MEET THE AUTHOR Ernesto Galarza (1905–1984) What brought me and my family to the “United States from Mexico also brought hundreds of thousands of others like us. In many ways the experiences of a multitude of boys like myself, migrating from countless villages like Jalcocotán and starting life anew in barrios like the one in Sacramento, must have been similar. —Ernesto Galarza, Barrio Boy ” Ernesto Galarza was born in 1905 in Jalcocotán, a tiny village in the Sierra Madre Mountains of western Mexico. He was five years old when the Mexican Revolution broke out. To escape the violence, his mother and two uncles fled to the north. They reached Sacramento, California, in 1911. Galarza won a scholarship to Occidental College and was the only Mexican American student in his class to graduate. Galarza went on to earn a master’s degree in history and political science at Stanford University and a doctorate in economics from Columbia University. While at Stanford, he met his wife, a teacher. From 1932 to 1936, they co-directed a progressive school in New York City, which gave them an opportunity to test their educational theories. Social Activism After World War II, Galarza returned to California and 142 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 4 joined; the then-new National Farm Labor Union. At first he tried to help agricultural workers by leading strikes. However, his efforts at organizing were thwarted by anti-labor laws and by the bracero program, which brought Mexican workers temporarily into the United States. In 1964 he published Merchants of Labor, a history of the abuses of the bracero program. Soon afterward, the program was abolished and farm workers carried out a successful strike. Overcoming Stereotypes Galarza took a special interest in promoting bilingual education. In 1971, the year that he published Barrio Boy, he started a bilingual education program in San Jose, California. At the time, there were few Chicano writers who wrote for children. To fill this need, Galarza wrote a series of brief collections of poems and stories in English and Spanish. In addition to providing students with interesting literature, he hoped to use this series to overcome stereotypes about Chicanos. The books were widely acclaimed. In 1979, Galarza was nominated for the Nobel Prize for Literature. When he died in 1984, an obituary in the Los Angeles Times declared him the “first Chicano Renaissance man.” BEFORE YOU READ: Par t One Connect to the Literature What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community? Make a List With a group of students, brainstorm to create a list of advantages and disadvantages. Then discuss whether you would prefer living in a small community or a city and tell why. NOVEL NOTEBOOK Keep a special notebook to record entries about the novels that you read this year. WRITE THE CAPTION Write a caption for the image below, in the present tense, using information in Build Background. Build Background In the Shadow of Porfirio Diaz Barrio Boy is an autobiography—a person’s written account of his or her own life. Although autobiographies describe true events, they generally are not as objective as other forms of nonfiction, such as history books. On the other hand, autobiographies are often an excellent way for readers to learn how events affect people’s lives. Ernesto Galarza, the author, was born in a village where the residents, most of them Native American, farmed communal land on their mountain. Although poor, they considered themselves better off than workers who lived on haciendas, large plantations. Native Americans on these large plantations could be forced into a type of bondage known as debt peonage. A plantation owner would give workers advances on their wages to buy food and other necessities from the plantation’s store. When the workers fell into debt, they had to continue working for the same employer until they paid off the debt, which often was impossible. Under the dictatorship of Porfirio Diaz, many Native American communities lost their land to hacienda owners. Thus, land reform was a major issue that incited the Mexican Revolution. B arr io B oy: Part O ne 143 BEFOR E YOU READ: Par t One Set Purposes for Reading 왘 BIG Question What’s Worth Fighting For? Vocabulary What are some issues or problems facing your community? How can you decide which issues matter enough to fight for? As you read Part One of Barrio Boy, consider the things Ernesto and his family are fighting for. annihilate [ə n¯ ə lāt ´] v. to reduce to nothing; destroy Our team was able to annihilate the opponent by using shrewd strategy and brute force. Literary Element Narrator and Point of View Point of view is the relationship of the narrator, or storyteller, to the story. In a story with a first-person point of view, all information about the story’s characters and events comes from the narrator, who refers to himself or herself as I. A skillful reader must determine how the narrator’s experience and opinions influence the telling of the story. indolent [ind ə lənt] adj. having or showing a dislike of work Georgia resents being called indolent just because she likes to lounge by the community pool all day. Barrio Boy is a memoir, a type of narrative nonfiction that presents the story of a period in the writers life. Like autobiographies, memoirs are nearly always written from the first-person point of view. The narrator is the author.In Barrio Boy, author Ernesto Galarza is speaking as his younger self. As you read this first section of the memoir, think about how Ernesto’s point of view and age-perspective affects the way in which the story is told. Use the graphic organizer on the next page to help you understand the narrator’s view of other characters. iridescent [ir ə des ənt] adj. displaying shimmering and changing colors like those reflected by soap bubbles The lizard had dry, iridescent green skin. Reading Strategy Make Predictions About Plot A prediction is an educated guess about a future event. When you make predictions about plot, you use your own prior knowledge in combination with what has already happened in a story as the basis for guessing what will happen next. Careful predictions and later verifications and adjustments based on your reading will increase your understanding of the text. As you read Part One of Barrio Boy, make predictions about what will happen to Ernesto’s family. You may find it helpful to use a graphic organizer like the one below. Plot point: A hurricane causes a flood that threatens Jalcocotán. 144 What I predict will happen: Ernesto’s family will lose its home. N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 4 litanies [lit ə nēz] n. prayers consisting of petitions from a priest or minister, alternating with responses from the congregation. Many different religions use litanies as a form of community prayer. surmise [sər m¯z] v. to infer (something) from little or no evidence; to guess “If I had to surmise,” said Bea with a smile, “I’d say I’m getting horseback riding lessons for my birthday.” What actually happens: ACTIVE READING: Par t One This section of the book introduces a first-person narrator, Ernesto, and his relatives. In the boxes below, identify each person’s relationship to Ernesto. Then write down an example from the text that reveals how Ernesto feels about each of them. Doña Henriqueta Relationship: Example: Doña Esther Don Catarino Relationship: Relationship: uncle (mother’s brotherin-law) Example: Example: head of Ernesto household Gustavo José Relationship: Relationship: Example: Example: B arr io B oy: Part O ne 145 INTERACTIVE READING: Literar y Element Literary Element Narrator and Point of View Do you think this is an objective telling of this event? Why or why not? 146 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 4 MEMOIR EXCERPT: PART ONE Coronel and his hens were making their way up the street between scratches. The hens kept their beaks down, pecking; and he paced this way and that, flaunting his comb, his feathers glistening in the sunlight. When they were a few steps from the zopilote, the hens became alert. They stood still, some on both legs, some on one, looking intently at something that lay between the talons of the buzzard, which held his attention completely. He lowered his bald white head and tore at the garbage with his hooked beak. Among the pigs and dogs and chickens there seemed to be an understanding not to bother the zopilotes that came down to scavenge. To all the residents of Jalcocotán, including the domestic animals, the vulture’s looks, not to mention his smell, were enough to discourage sociability. Nerón and I were watching when one of the hens left the flock and went in for a peck at the zopilote’s breakfast. She moved head low, neck forward, more greedy than afraid. The buzzard struck. With a squawk the hen flipped over and scratched the air madly, as if she were pedaling a bicycle. Coronel sailed in. His wings spread, his beak half open and his legs churning over the hard earth, he struck the zopilote full front, doubled forward so that his beak and his spurs were at the zopilote’s breast feathers. The buzzard flapped one great wing over Coronel and bowled him over. The rooster twisted to his feet and began making short passes in cock-fighting style, leaping into the air and snapping his outstretched legs, trying to reach his antagonist with his spurs. Up and down the street the alarm spread. “Coronel is fighting the zopilote. “He is killing Coronel.” “Get him, Coronel. Éntrale, éntrale.” A ring of small children, women, pigs, and dogs had formed around the fighters. Nerón and I had run to the battleground, Nerón snapping at the big bird while I tried to catch Coronel. INTERACT IVE READING: Literar y Element As suddenly as it had started, the fight was over. The zopilote, snatching at the heap of chicken guts that had tempted the hen, wheeled and spread his great wings, lifting himself over the crowd. He headed for a nearby tree, where he perched and finished his spoils. Coronel, standing erect among the litter, gave his wings a powerful stretch, flapped them and crowed like a winning champ. His foe, five times larger, had fled, and all the pueblo could see that he was indeed muy gallo. Seeing that Coronel was out of danger, Nerón and I dashed back to the cottage to tell the epic story. We reported how our rooster had dashed a hundred times against the vulture, how he had driven his spurs into the huge bird inflicting fatal wounds. Nerón, my dumb witness, wagged his tail and barked. My mother had stepped to the door when she heard the tumult. She had seen it all and heard me through my tale solemnly. Coronel himself was strutting home prodding his flock and followed by the children who had seen the fight. That night, after Jesús and Catarino and I were in bed in the tapanco, we heard Doña Esther give the men an account of the battle. Coming through to me in the dark, the story seemed tame, nothing more exciting than throwing the dishwater into the street. “The boys think Coronel was magnificent,” my mother commented. Gustavo chuckled. Don Catarino drew on his cigarette and said: “Coronel is smart. Zopilotes are very chicken. They will fight among themselves, but if it’s alive they won’t even fight a fly.” The next day I asked my mother what it meant that somebody was chicken if he was not a chicken. “It means he is not very brave,” she explained. “Is Coronel chicken?” She guessed what was troubling me. “In no way. He is not chicken. He is the most rooster in Jalco. And I think he is the most rooster from here to Tepic.” Literary Element Narrator and Point of View What does the narrator, Ernesto, reveal about his views on bravery when he tells the story of Coronel? In what way does his view change when he hears the adults talking about it later? B arr io B oy: Part O ne 147 INTERACTIVE READING: Reading Skill Reading Strategy Make Predictions About Plot “Algun dia me la pagan” means “Someday they will pay me.” What is your prediction about how these statements will reflect on the future of Ernesto’s family? 148 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 4 MEMOIR EXCERPT: PART ONE The world of work into which Jacinto and the other seven-year-olds were apprenticed was within sight and sound of the pueblo. It was work under blazing suns, in rainstorms, in pitch-black nights. It was work that you were always walking to or walking from, work without wages and work without end. It was work that gave you a bone-tired feeling at the end of the day, so you learned to swing a machete, to tighten a cinch, and to walk without lost motion. Between seven and twelve you learned all this, each lesson driven home when your jefe said with a scowl: “Así no, hombre; así.” And he showed you how. . . . Boys who went with their fathers to the haciendas soon learned the differences between making a living on the mountain and working for the patrones. One was that on the mountain you took home corn, bananas, peppers, coffee, and anything else you had raised, but never money. From the hacienda, when your contract ended, you never took anything to eat or wear except what you paid for at the tienda de raya, the company store. A peon could make as much as ten pesos a month at hard labor working from dawn to dusk, seven days a week, four weeks every month. It came to about two or three centavos per hour, plus your meals and a place to spread your straw sleeping mat. The most important difference, however, was the capataz, the riding boss who watched the laborers all day long, just as the guardia watched them throughout the night. The business of the capataz was to keep the peonanda, as the crews of field hands were called, hustling at the assigned tasks. He carried a machete slung from his saddle, a whip, and often a pistol: the equipment of a top sergeant of the hacienda. The captain was the Administrador, who in turn took his orders from the patrón who probably lived in Tepic or Guadalajara or perhaps even in La Capital, as everyone called Mexico City. The men who had worked on haciendas knew of these matters. We heard snatches of firsthand reports from them but mostly we learned from Don Catarino, José, Don Cleofas, and the muleteers who passed through Jalco. INTERACT IVE READING: Reading Skill Whoever had been there came back cursing it. The riding boss was the Devil on horseback; in the company store every centavo you earned was taken back by a clerk who kept numbers in a book that proved you always owed him something. If a peon left the hacienda before his contract was over and his debts were paid, he became a fugitive. He either returned to his pueblo, his compadres and his milpa in some far-off place in the mountains, or he scratched for a living, lost in the forest. Old men in the village talked of the time they had worked on a hacienda as if they had served a sentence in prison or on a chain gang. They remembered capataces who had whipped them or cursed them fifty years before, and they still murmured a phrase: “Algún día me la pagan.” There were a hundred blood debts of this kind in Jalcocotán, Doña Esther said, thousands of them in all the villages of the Sierra Madre, and millions in all the pueblos of Mexico. “Algún día me la pagan.” “Tía, what does that mean?” I asked her more than once. She always sent me to my mother with the question. Her answer was: “It means that somebody owes him something.” “But what does somebody owe him?” The anger and the foreboding in “algún día me la pagan” was in my mother’s voice: “Something that hurts.” She did not explain, just as she would not tell me why Catalino the bandit hated the rurales and shot so many of them. Guessing at what people meant, I came to feel certain words rather than to know them. They were words which came from the lips of the jalcocotecanos with an accent of suspicion, of fear, and of hatred. These words were los rurales, the jefe político, the señor gobernador, las autoridades, el gobierno. When a stranger rode into Jalco, people stopped talking. Every detail about him and his horse was observed for a clue as to whether he was one of the autoridades. It was the same with all outsiders. They always came asking questions, which the jalcocotecanos answered politely but roundabout. For me the world began to divide itself into two kinds of people—the men on horseback and the men who walked. Reading Strategy Make Predictions About Plot Based on this statement, what prediction can you make about what will happen to the villagers? B arr io B oy: Part O ne 149 ON-PAGE N OTE-TAKING: BIG Question MARK IT UP Are you allowed to write in your novel? If so, then mark up the pages as you read, or reread, to help with your note-taking. Develop a shorthand system, including symbols, that works for you. Here are some ideas: Underline = important idea Bracket = text to quote Asterisk = just what you were looking for Checkmark = might be useful Circle = unfamiliar word or phrase to look up 왘 BIG Question What’s Worth Fighting For? Are the Galarzas willing to send their family members to fight in the Mexican Revolution? Mark up the excerpt, looking for evidence of how it expresses the Big Question. 150 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 4 MEMOIR EXCERPT: PART ONE José came back to the village a day or two after the rurales left. He had circled the mountain, talking with the peasants. He said that the bolas were forming, and that people were asking whether there would be one in Jalcocotán. Gustavo had not returned. It had been decided that he would go to Tepic and let us know what was happening there. The villagers were still talking about the occupation by the mounted police when Halley’s comet appeared. Only old Don Cleofas claimed that he had seen anything like it before, when he was a boy. Every man, woman, and child gathered in the plaza to stare at the heavenly kite with the bushy tail. Shooting stars we saw every night, streaking across the most unexpected places of the sky. They came in a wink and were gone in another. A comet was something else. Don Cleofas said it was bigger than the earth and that the tail was so long nobody could guess how many millions of kilometers it was from tip to tip. Jesús and Catarino and I were called down from the tapanco the first night the comet appeared. I caught the awe of the older people who were listening to Don Cleofas tell that a comet foretold something important, and serious. He said that this one meant La Revolución. Gustavo returned from Tepic a few days later. He, too, had seen the comet. He said that soldiers had arrived in Tepic, that guards were traveling with the stage coaches, and that the rurales were taking young men to the regimental barracks to be drafted into Don Porfirio’s army. The rumors about Don Francisco Madero were true; in the marketplace he had heard that the maderistas had already fought the porfiristas in the north. A peasant from Escuinapa said that he had himself seen the rurales set fire to a village. Evenings after supper the conversation was about these matters, and important decisions were made. It was agreed that Gustavo was to leave for Tepic. José, my mother, and I would follow him. The four of us would find work and a place to live for the whole family in the city. CORNELL NOTE-TAKING: BIG Question Use the Cornell Note-Taking system to take notes on the excerpt at the left. Record your notes, Reduce them, and then Recap (summarize) them. Record Reduce Try the following approach as you reduce your notes. TO THE POINT Write a few key ideas. Recap B arr io B oy: Part O ne 151 AFTER YOU READ: Par t One Respond and Think Critically 1. Who is in charge of the household where Ernesto lives? How would you describe the attitude of the other family members toward this person? [Evaluate] 2. What conflict makes Ernesto and some of his relatives decide to leave the village? With which of the two sides in the conflict do Ernesto’s relatives sympathize? [Identify] 3. In his introduction, author Ernesto Galarza reveals that his book grew out of anecdotes that he told his family about Jalcocotlán. Why might a parent want to tell such stories as these to his or her children? [Analyze] 4. In your opinion, was Jalcocotán a good place for a child to grow up? [Connect] 5. What’s Worth Fighting For? How does the arrival of the rurales affect villagers’ perception of the conflict going on outside the village? Why? [Infer] 152 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 4 APPLY BACKGROUND Reread Build Background on page 143. How did that information help you understand or appreciate what you read in the memoir? AFTER YOU READ: Par t One Literary Element Narrator and Point of View 1. From his own description, how would you characterize Ernesto’s early childhood in Jalcocotán? [Evaluate] Vocabulary Practice Each of the vocabulary words is listed with a word that has a similar denotation. Choose the word that has the more negative connotation. 1. annihilate 2. indolent 3. surmise 4. iridescent 5. litanies 2. What begins to happen to Ernesto’s family and social network toward the end of Part One? How does he feel about this? [Analyze] Reading Strategy Make Predictions About Plot 1. What predictions can you make about Ernesto’s adjustment to life in Tepic? On what do you base your prediction? Use examples from the story and your own experience to form your response. [Infer] extinguish laid-back presume glittering recitations obliterate lazy conclude flickering invocations Academic Vocabulary Although the rurales’ conduct in Jalcocotán is outwardly civil, the villagers know that they are being threatened with something far beyond unwanted searches of their homes. In the preceding sentence conduct means “behavior.” Conduct also has other meanings. For example: The villagers were unable to conduct themselves normally with the soldiers moving through the village. What do you think conduct means in the preceding sentence? What is the difference between the two meanings? Write your guess below. Then look in a dictionary to check your answer. 2. What predictions did you make about the arrival of the soldiers in Jalcocotán? Did your predictions prove correct? [Identify] B arr io B oy: Part O ne 153 AFTER YOU READ: Par t One Writing Speaking and Listening Write an Article Imagine that you are a reporter who has followed the rurales to Jalcocotán. Write a brief article about this incident. How do the villagers react to the sudden appearance of the rurales? What does their reaction suggest about the political situation in Mexico? Oral Report Jot down some notes here first. Assignment Imagine that you have been sent to Jalcocotán to investigate how children are being raised there. Write a report in which you describe the daily life of the village’s children, including their responsibilities and education. Present an oral report in the style of a radio or television humaninterest story. Prepare Before you begin to structure your report, listen to some television or radio news stories to remind yourself of how they sound. Then skim and scan Part One of Barrio Boy, looking for broad general categories of childcare and development— for example, “Education,” “Family Chores,” and “Social Life.” Create a chart like the one below to keep track of your findings. Family Chores Education Raise the bed Tend the chickens Help with sewing Languages Cooking Report As you collect your information in the chart, take notes about your reactions to the information in each category. Decide which methods and customs of Jalcocotán’s childrearing system you approve of. Try to think beyond your own personal experience to larger underlying issues. In other words, look for the “why” of the village childrearing methods. Are there any elements you strongly disagree with? Think about why you feel as you do. Then organize your notes into a cohesive outline and present your report to the class. Evaluate Write a paragraph in which you assess how effectively you explained each of your points. 154 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 4 BEFORE YOU READ: Par t Two Connect to the Literature Think of a time when you or a friend moved to a different neighborhood. How did you or your friend adjust to new surroundings? Quickwrite Spend one or two minutes writing a response to this question. Build Background NOVEL NOTEBOOK Keep a special notebook to record entries about the novels that you read this year. WRITE THE CAPTION Write a caption for the image below, using information in Build Background. A History of Rebellion In Part Two, Ernesto performs in a Cinco de Mayo (Fifth of May) celebration. This national holiday commemorates the 1862 Battle of Puebla. After Mexico stopped paying its debts to France, the emperor Napoleon III decided to take over the country. As the French army marched toward Mexico City, it was defeated at Puebla by a force of poorly armed Mexican soldiers led by General Ignacio Zaragoza Seguin. A year later, Napoleon was victorious with a much larger army. In 1864, he appointed the Austrian Archduke Maximilian to rule Mexico. Maximilian stayed in power until 1867, when he was captured and executed by the previous Mexican head of state. Mexican Independence Day, another holiday mentioned in the book, is celebrated on September 16. It marks the beginning of Father Miguel Hidalgo y Costilla’s revolt in 1810 against the Spanish colonial rulers of Mexico. B arr io B oy: Part Two 155 BEFORE YOU READ: Par t Two Set Purposes for Reading 왘 BIG Question What’s Worth Fighting For? As you read this next section of the memoir, ask yourself in what ways the author challenges or changes your ideas about what is worth fighting for. Literary Element Style Style is an author’s choice and arrangement of words and sentences in a literary work. Style can reveal an author’s purpose in writing, as well as an attitude toward his or her subject and audience. Part of an author’s style is his or her use of techniques such as description, or writing that seeks to convey a clear impression of a setting, a person, animal, object, or event using concrete who, what, when, where, how and sensory details. Nearly all writing contains description. Ernesto Galarza, the author of Barrio Boy, writes in a clean, straightforward style, using specific concrete details to tell his story. As you read the next section of the memoir, pay attention not only to the story the author is telling but also the way in which he tells it. Use the graphic organizer on the next page to help you. Reading Skill Analyze Conflict When you analyze, you look at the separate parts of something in order to better understand the whole. When you analyze conflict in a story or play, you look at the various components of the central struggle between opposing forces, such as fate, nature, society, or another person. An external conflict exists when a character fights against some outside force, such as another person, nature, or society. An internal conflict refers to a struggle within a character’s mind. Analyzing conflict is important because it helps you understand the relationships among the characters and the forces at work in a literary work. Understanding what the character wants and what opposes him or her will also help you understand the author’s purpose for writing. To analyze conflict, • identify the main problem(s) faced by the character(s) in a story • determine what types of conflict are suggested by the problem • identify the outcome of each conflict and its importance to the story As you read, ask yourself what the main character’s internal conflict tells you about him. To determine the internal conflict, you first need to identify all the external conflicts in the story. You may find it helpful to use a graphic organizer like the one at the right. 156 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 4 Vocabulary consternation [kon stər nā shən] n. dismay or amazement leading to confusion or fear Jared saw with consternation that one of the oars had fallen out of the rowboat. desolate [des ə lit] adj. empty of inhabitants; deserted Many fairy tales are set at the edge of a desolate forest. indelible [in del ə bəl] adj. that cannot be removed, washed out, or obliterated My grandparents have indelible memories of growing up in the 1950s. perfidious [pər fid ē əs] adj. faithless, treacherous The con artist pulled off some perfidious scams while pretending to befriend members of a retirement community. sonorous [sə nôr əs] adj. producing or capable of producing sound, especially deep, full, or rich sound The chapel bell sounded a sonorous refrain. External Conflict(s) The rurales disrupt the lives of the Galarza family Internal Conflict(s) A CTIVE READING: Par t Two In Part Two, Ernesto and his family move from place to place in search of work and safety from the revolutionary conflict. As you read, use the spaces below to record concrete and sensorydetails about descriptions of Ernesto’s life in each neighborhood where he lives. TEPIC Description of Housing: two small adobe rooms in a boarding house Ernesto’s Responsibilities: Ernesto’s Pleasures: ACAPONETA Description of Housing: Ernesto’s Responsibilities: Ernesto’s Pleasures: CASA REDONDA Description of Housing: Ernesto’s Responsibilities: Ernesto’s Pleasures: LEANDRO VALLE Description of Housing: Ernesto’s Responsibilities: Ernesto’s Pleasures: B arr io B oy: Part Two 157 INTERACTIVE READING: Literar y Element Literary Element Style The author reveals a transaction between the Galarzas and the mountain family. Identify several concrete details that help you to understand how the mountain family feels about the travelers. 158 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 4 MEMOIR EXCERPT: PART TWO The ranchero and his wife knew why we had stopped, and just what we would say. We knew that they would give us permission, that they would not take any money for the tortillas, and that we must leave some gift before we left. I had watched these formalities before, the signs of courtesy and hospitality of the mountain people. We said “thank you” all around and retired with the mule and the horse to our camp behind the corral. Don Catarino and José unloaded the mule and unsaddled the horse, fed them and watered them at the brook. The Ajax was unpacked, and with the straw mats and blankets in which it was wrapped my mother made our beds on the ground. Some pots were placed over an open fire to warm our supper. The lady of the rancho appeared with a stack of tortillas wrapped in a napkin. My mother asked her if she would do us the favor of accepting two cones of panocha and some salt. It was nearly dark when my mother returned with the cups and plates she had been washing at the brook. The mats were spread around the coals of the firepit and we covered ourselves with sarapes and blankets. I was told to go to sleep at once, but I had catnapped all along the trail and I wanted to listen to the voices of children in the hut. Sneaking looks from under my covers, I could see the kitchen fire in the center of the dwelling flickering between the palings of the wall. I had seen the rooster and hens in the yard, and a skinny dog, the color of Nerón. I liked the rancho and decided we should stay there instead of going on to Tepic. When my mother awakened me, the mule was already loaded and the horse saddled. There was coffee on the coals, with tortillas and warm bean tacos. Inside the hut the fire was still flickering through the chinks. The rooster crowed and the man came to the back door to see us off. My mother and I mounted and we were on the trail again. It was downhill the rest of the trip, easy for the horses, the trail getting wider until it became a genuine road of hard-packed brown earth. We could see other travelers ahead of us, on burros or horses, but mostly walking. The INTERACT IVE READING: Literar y Element people and the animals carried loads, sacks, crates, earthenware, and huacales filled with chickens. A burro train passed us going the other way. The donkeys carried piles of empty sacks in which charcoal had been delivered to the city. The arrieros, powdered with coal dust, kept them at a trot with shouts and whistles and snapping whips. A boy about my age skipped along the line of burros, helping the two men. The road became busier with foot travelers and pack animals. . . . In the midst of the green and brown fields of sugarcane, corn, and pastureland I saw a checkerboard of white and red, tiny blocks of whitewashed houses with tile roofs. My mother reined the horse and pointed. In the middle of the checkerboard I spotted two grey towers not much longer than my little finger. “Tepic. The cathedral,” my mother said. As we descended, the country road straightened out into a lane enclosed by low walls and one-story houses, their roofs slanting this way and that. The tops of the walls were set with pieces of broken glass and splintered bottles that glistened in the morning sun. Women with blue shawls draped around their heads and shoulders walked close to the adobe walls carrying wicker baskets filled with fruit, meat, and vegetables. They were coming from the market with the day’s food supply for the family—the mandado. Donkeys loaded with straw, firewood, and huacales, charcoal, green bananas, and lumber passed by. Rancheros returning to the mountains cantered on nags that looked too small for the riders. I had never seen that many people in my life. Our horse’s shoes began to clack as we came to a street paved with stones. Along the middle of the street they were flat, at the sides they were cobblestones, rounded and neatly laid. The walls of the houses echoed the clatter of the traffic, so that people indoors could tell whether horses or mules or burros were passing, whether they were coming or going, and how many there were. Everything that passed over such a pavement made a characteristic sound, even the bare feet of people. Literary Element Style In a series of simple sensory details, the author reveals the town of Tepic. What are some of these sensory details? What is the overall effect of this description? B arr io B oy: Part Two 159 INTERACTIVE READING: Reading Skill Reading Skill Analyze Conflict What is the largest external struggle for the Galarzas at this point? 160 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 4 MEMOIR EXCERPT: PART TWO On bad days José just walked in and sat down on the back stairs. “How did it go, brother?” my mother always said, knowing well that it had gone badly, but to make conversation. He always answered: “Like being kicked before breakfast.” Good or bad news, our supper talk was always about the chances of the next day. If he had brought wages home he took a few cents and walked to the plaza for a beer. If he had not, my mother offered the money but he did not take it. Instead he went to bed. José didn’t carry by himself the burden of keeping us in shelter and food very long. Every day I was sent to Doña Florencia’s, our landlady, to ask whether the Ajax had come, and one day I ran home to announce that we could call for it at the railroad terminal. That afternoon José brought it home in a pushcart. He set the sewing machine in the middle of the room and the three of us removed the wrapping of straw mats, rags, and blankets, carefully, like doctors afraid of finding a broken bone. When the machine stood clear my mother tested it, bobbin, treadle, belt and all. “Thanks to God,” she said gratefully. The arrieros, the mules, the mozos, the train and everyone who had anything to do with the safe delivery of the Ajax had performed, in her opinion, a service of the Lord. The Ajax was placed next to the window where Doña Henriqueta sat, day in and day out, bending over the sewing she did for pay. On the windowsill next to the geranium she laid out doilies, blouses, and handkerchiefs so that passersby would see them and spread the word that on Leandro Valle there was a seamstress who did beautiful work. The big pieces, like bedsheets, fell from the machine crumpled on a straw floor mat which we scrubbed every day. As Ajax assistant production and maintenance man I picked up where we had left off in Tepic. Like a regular engineer I squeezed golden drops of oil from a thimblesized can into the bearings of the treadle, the transmission, and the balance wheel. When we ran out of thread I went INTERACT IVE READING: Reading Skill on the double to the corner store of El Chino, half a block down the street. I helped pick up the sheets from the mat and fold them for ironing. Everything from the table top up was dusted and polished by my mother; everything below the deck, by me. Now I heard again above the bustle of the Ajax, the songs she hummed or sang softly, like the one about the seagulls fluttering their wings far over the ocean, as if they were waving handkerchiefs to say good-bye, forever. We had a problem with the sewing in that I balked at my chores if the front door was not kept shut. Sewing was a girl’s work, and my pals in the barrio never let me forget it if they saw me folding sheets or holding a hem. Running for thread and oiling the machinery were dignified things for a boy to do, but not fooling around with stitches. My mother pointed out that the best tailors in the world were men and they all sewed on Ajaxes. The trouble was that Perico and Corchos and the rest of the gang didn’t know or appreciate this. She agreed to my point and we kept the door closed during sewing hours. By a lucky break I found a job myself that put me on a par with José and my mother as breadwinners. An elderly woman who lived two blocks down Rosales from our street needed a boy to help on Friday afternoons. The woman was a pozolera and her business a sidewalk restaurant which specialized in pozole, a chowder made of boiled garbanzo grains, and chopped meat or pig’s knuckles served steaming hot. La Pozolera set up a long table in the street in front of her house, and on the sidewalk the portable charcoal stove, the pots, sauces, and tortilla pan. Sitting on the sidewalk in the midst of her kitchen gear, she served the customers on a wooden table opposite her. My job consisted of throwing buckets of water on the street to settle the dust, helping to put the table and bench in place, carrying the big ollas outdoors, and filling the charcoal basket that she kept handy under the table. Hot pozole was served from late afternoon until after dark, when the restaurant closed and the equipment was moved indoors. Reading Skill Analyze Conflict What is Ernesto’s internal conflict? B arr io B oy: Part Two 161 ON-PAGE N OTE-TAKING: BIG Question MARK IT UP Are you allowed to write in your novel? If so, then mark up the pages as you read, or reread, to help with your note-taking. Develop a shorthand system, including symbols, that works for you. Here are some ideas: Underline = important idea Bracket = text to quote Asterisk = just what you were looking for Checkmark = might be useful Circle = unfamiliar word or phrase to look up 왘 BIG Question What’s Worth Fighting For? What do you learn on this page about Ernesto’s mother’s place within her family? Mark up the excerpt, looking for evidence of how it expresses the Big Question. 162 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 4 MEMOIR EXCERPT: PART TWO My mother looked the patrón level in the eye and said: “The wages—that is all—the wages.” I was afraid. The patron’s face was red with anger and perhaps fear. He called a clerk who counted out fifteen pesos to José. “Thank you, and may you have a good afternoon,” my mother said as she gave us our cue to leave. But José, with the stack of pesos in his hands, said a different sort of goodbye. “The next time you want to kill a man for his wages, you should come and do it yourself, if you are that much of a man.” “José!” It was a sharp command from my mother, and we left. “He knows we know,” she said to José on the way home. “It is better that we leave Mazatlán.” One evening at supper I asked why we had to leave Mazatlán. “It is better,” was all she said, and everything after that showed that that was the way it was going to be. CORNELL NOTE-TAKING: BIG Question Use the Cornell Note-Taking system to take notes on the excerpt at the left. Record your notes, Reduce them, and then Recap (summarize) them. Record Reduce Try the following approach as you reduce your notes. ASK QUESTIONS Write a question about the novel. Can you find the answer in your notes? Recap B arr io B oy: Part Two 163 AFTE R YOU READ: Par t Two Respond and Think Critically 1. How does Ernesto’s family get by when they are short of money? Why would health care be such a big concern for them? [Interpret] 2. How does Ernesto become a member of a gang? What do you think makes him want to become a member? [Infer] 3. Which incident causes Ernesto’s family to leave Leandro Valley? What do you think they decided to move to the United States instead of another part of Mexico? [Analyze] 4. Do you think Ernesto’s mother should have forbidden him from joining the gang? Why or why not? [Evaluate] 5. What’s Worth Fighting For? In what way does Dona Henriqueta’s decision to leave Mazatlán reflect what she believes is worth fighting for? [Infer] 164 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 4 APPLY BACKGROUND Reread Meet the Author on page 142. How did that information help you understand or appreciate what you read in the memoir? AFTE R YOU READ: Par t Two Literary Element Style 1. In your opinion, what were some of the most memorable descriptions of Ernesto’s life in Mazatlán? Cite two examples from this section and identify reasons for your choices. [Identify] 2. Barrio Boy uses many Spanish words, such as puestos, maderistas, soldaderas, and pozole. What is the effect of the author’s decision to retain these words in the story? [Analyze] Reading Skill Analyze Conflict 1. One of the external conflicts the Galarzas face is that of physical illness. Explain why. [Explain] Vocabulary Practice On a separate sheet of paper, write the vocabulary word that correctly completes the sentence. consternation perfidious desolate sonorous indelible 1. There was a notable sense of _______________ when the election failed to produce a clear winner. 2. William Shakespeare’s plays are full of brave heroes, young lovers, and _______________ villains. 3. The English actor had an extremely ___________ ____ voice that was audible in the very back row of the theater. 4. Many people who heard Martin Luther King Jr. speak were left with a(n) _______________ impression. 5. In Scotland we visited a(n) _______________ ruined castle. Academic Vocabulary The Galarza family could not afford to pay for things on credit, so their choice was either to pay in cash or to go without. Using context clues, try to figure out the meaning of the boldfaced word in the sentence above. Write your guess below. Then check your guess in a dictionary. 2. Describe the conflict between Ernesto and El Perico. What was the outcome of the conflict? [Identify] B arr io B oy: Part Two 165 AFTE R YOU READ: Par t Two Write With Style Speaking and Listening Apply Description Literature Groups Assignment Look over some of the descriptions author Ernesto Galarza presented in this section of the memoir. Good examples include the description of crossing the “devil’s backbone,” arriving in Tepic, and the long ride to Mazatlán. Consider Galarza’s simple yet effective use of descriptive techniques. Then, using strong concrete images, write a paragraph about a time when you traveled across town or across the world. Assignment Do you think Ernesto’s family has made the right decision to move to the United States? What do you predict will happen to them when they get there? Discuss these questions in your group and try to reach a consensus. When you are finished, compare your responses with those in another group. Get Ideas Think about the various times you have traveled. Make a list of places you have been and the moments you remember about leaving home, the trip itself, and arriving at your destination. Which memories and images are strongest? Choose one from the list to write about. Give It Structure Begin your paragraph with a topic sentence that introduces the place you traveled to or from. Follow with sentences that support that thesis. End with a sentence that restates it. Look at Language Barrio Boy uses a descriptive style that relies on concrete details, meaning images that help readers see the object or experience itself. This type of description is relatively free of metaphors, similes, sensory details, and emotional language. As you write your paragraph, try to create a strong description without use of these elements. If you need guidance, feel free to look back at Part Two of the memoir as you continue your writing process. Prepare Before your group meets, look back at Part Two of the memoir and review the events that may have led Dona Henriqueta to push for the move to the United States. Divide the reasons into two categories, as shown in the chart below. Personal Reasons Political Reasons Ernesto has joined a gang. There are rumors of shops and factories closing down. Jose is nearly killed by an unscrupulous patron. The Galarzas’ house is the line of fire between the maderistas and pro-Diaz forces. Mazatlán is besieged by proDiaz forces. Discuss Respect the opinions of others by listening attentively. However, do not be shy about sharing your own viewpoint in a normal tone of voice. Provide examples from your chart to support your ideas. Report When you are finished, compare your responses with those in another group. Was there a consensus between the two groups? Evaluate Write a paragraph in which you assess the effectiveness of your discussion, both in your own group and between your group and the other. 166 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 4 BEFORE YOU READ: Par ts Three–Five Connect to the Literature What would you miss the most if you had to move to a country where the dominant culture and traditions are very different from your own? Discuss In a small group, discuss the things that you would miss the most if you had to move to a country whose culture differed from your own. Would you welcome the opportunity, or would you resist it? Why? NOVEL NOTEBOOK Keep a special notebook to record entries about the novels that you read this year. SUMMARIZE Summarize in one sentence the most important idea(s) in Build Background. Build Background The Spanish Flu Epidemic of 1918 Toward the end of the book, Galarza reveals how his family was affected by a tragic event that caused terror throughout the world. The Spanish flu epidemic of 1918–1919 killed at least twenty million people, which was more than the number of people who died in World War I. This flu strain was first detected in a Kansas military camp in March 1918. By autumn, it had spread to every continent. Victims died painful deaths, suffocating as too much fluid built up in their lungs. Normally, children and the elderly are most vulnerable to flu infections, but the Spanish flu killed many healthy young adults. The death rate from this type of influenza for 15- to 34-yearolds was 20 times higher than in previous years. People often contracted the disease before they were aware of it, which caused many to die on the street while, for example, walking home from work. One harrowing story claimed that four women were playing bridge late into the night. By the next morning three of them had died from influenza. Scientists are still trying to figure out what made the epidemic so deadly. B arr io B oy: Parts Three–Fi ve 167 BEFORE YOU READ: Par ts Three–Five Set Purposes for Reading 왘 BIG Question What’s Worth Fighting For? Learning how to adjust to and behave in a new culture can be a struggle. As you read the final section of Barrio Boy, consider two of the things the Galarzas are fighting for: assimilating into American culture and retaining their rich Mexican heritage. Literary Element Diction Diction is a writer’s choice of words and how those words are arranged in phrases and sentences. Barrio Boy contains a unique vision of the world relayed, in part, through the author’s diction. The author, Ernesto Galarza, is an adult looking back on a boyhood that straddled both his native Mexican and his adopted American cultures. Galarza writes with sensitivity and incisiveness about the lives of immigrants—the good, the bad, and everything in between. As you read this section of the memoir, think about how Galarza’s diction, including the use of Spanish words, enriches your understanding of the story. Reading Skill Identify Cause-and-Effect Relationships Literature, like life, is full of cause-and-effect relationships. A cause is the reason behind a thought, action, or event. An effect is the result of a thought, action, or event. A cause may result in one or more effects, which in turn may lead to move effects; so effects can also become causes. Identifying cause-and-effect relationships in an essay or story is important because it allows readers a means to figure out how one event relates to another. To identify cause-and-effect-relationships, • identify significant people and events in the story. Why are they important? • determine the motivation for people’s actions or the reasons behind events • evaluate the consequences of people’s actions or events described in the story As you read the final section of Barrio Boy, ask yourself “What causeand-effect relationships impact the climax and resolution of this memoir?” You may find it helpful to use a graphic organizer like the one on the next page. 168 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 4 Vocabulary acculturation [ə kəl chə rā shən] n. the process by which a person absorbs the culture of a society Sajad told the class that moving from to the United States from India was difficult period of acculturation. contraband [kon trə band] n. goods prohibited by law from being imported or exported Among the contraband they discovered, police found six kinds of illegal fireworks. partisan [par tə zən] n. one who strongly supports an idea, cause, or side, especially one who is an overly zealous adherent Ms. Danzig is a true partisan when it comes to the neighborhood cleanup project. reverie [rev ə rē] n. fanciful musing, especially of happy, pleasant feelings Sugar cookies send me into a reverie of early childhood memories. transient [tran shənt] adj. stopping only for a short time; passing through The doctor said the injury was nothing to worry about and that the pain would be transient. ACT IVE READING: Par ts Three–Five Causes and effects may be discreet: one effect resulting from one cause. More often, there are multiple effects and multiple causes. Sometimes these form a chain of causes and effects. In the graphic organizer below, identify the causes and effects and consider how many of these may be part of a larger cause-and-effect chain. Cause(s) Effect(s) A measles epidemic breaks out on The train is stopped, passengers are the train quarantined. Older Mexicans in the barrio stayed home and did not mix with Americans. Ernesto’s teacher says Homer and Ernesto can vote for each other for president if they like. Ernesto is surrounded by music in the barrio. The Galarza family begins to get larger. The Spanish flu strikes. Ernesto leaves the work camp to look for an inspector in Sacramento. B arr io B oy: Parts Three–Fi ve 169 INTERACTIVE READING: Literar y Element Literary Element Diction In what ways does this discussion of how people in the barrio combined Spanish with English aid your understanding of Ernesto’s world? 17 0 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 4 MEMOIR EXCERPT: PART THREE It took time to realize that when the Americans said “Sackmenna” they meant Sacra-men-to, or that “Kellyphony” was their way of saying Cali-for-nia. Worse yet, the names of many of their towns could not be managed. I tried to teach Gustavo that Woodland was not pronounced “Boor-lan,” and that Walnut Grove was not “Gualen-gro.” A secondhand shop on our block that called itself The Cheap Store sounded to us like the Sheep Store, and the sign did not spell it like the school books. There was no authority at 418 L who could tell us the one proper way to pronounce a word and it would not have done much good if there had been. Try as they did the adults in my family could see no difference between “wood” and “boor.” Words spelled the same way or nearly so in Spanish and English and whose meanings we could guess accurately—words like principal and tomato—were too few to help us in daily usage. The grown-ups adapted the most necessary words and managed to make themselves understood, words like the French loff, yelly-rol, eppel pai, teekett, and kenn meelk. Miss Campbell and her colleagues lost no time in scrubbing out these spots in my own pronunciation. Partly to show off, partly to do my duty to the family, I tried their methods at home. It was hopeless. They listened hard but they couldn’t hear me. Besides, Boor-lan was Boor-lan all over the barrio. Everyone knew what you meant even though you didn’t say Woodland. I gave up giving English lessons at home. The barrio invented its own versions of American talk. And my family, to my disgust, adopted them with no little delight. My mother could tell someone at the door asking for an absent one: “Ess gon.” When some American tried to rush her into conversation she stopped him with: “Yo no pick een-glees.” But at pocho talk my mother drew the line, although José and Gustavo fell into it easily. Such words as yarda for yard, yonque for junk, donas for doughnuts, grocería for grocery store, raite for ride, and borde for meals shocked her and I was drilled to avoid them. Woolworth’s was el fei-en-ten to the barrio but it was el baratillo to her and by command to me also. Gustavo could say droguería INTERACT IVE READING: Literar y Element because there wasn’t anything she could do about it, but for me botica was required. . . . Our family conversations always occurred on our own kitchen porch, away from the gringos. One or the other of the adults would begin: Se han fijado? Had we noticed— that the Americans do not ask permission to leave the room; that they had no respectful way of addressing an elderly person; that they spit brown over the railing of the porch into the yard; that when they laughed they roared; that they never brought saludos to everyone in your family from everyone in their family when they visited; that General Delibree was only a clerk; that zopilotes were not allowed on the streets to collect garbage; that the policemen did not carry lanterns at night; that Americans didn’t keep their feet on the floor when they were sitting; that there was a special automobile for going to jail; that a rancho was not a rancho at all but a very small hacienda; that the saloons served their customers free eggs, pickles, and sandwiches; that instead of bullfighting, the gringos for sport tried to kill each other with gloves? I did not have nearly the strong feelings on these matters that Doña Henriqueta expressed. I felt a vague admiration for the way Mr. Brien could spit brown. Wayne, my classmate, laughed much better than the Mexicans, because he opened his big mouth wide and brayed like a donkey so he could be heard a block away. But it was the kind of laughter that made my mother tremble, and it was not permitted in our house. Rules were laid down to keep me, as far as possible, un muchacho bien educado. If I had to spit I was to do it privately, or if in public, by the curb, with my head down and my back to people. I was never to wear my cap in the house and I was to take it off even on the porch if ladies or elderly gentlemen were sitting. If I wanted to scratch, under no circumstances was I to do it right then and there, in company, like the Americans, but I was to excuse myself. If Catfish or Russell yelled to me from across the street I was not to shout back. I was never to ask for tips for my errands or other services to the tenants of 418 L, for these were atenciones expected of me. Literary Element Diction What does this succinct listing of the rules of etiquette say about Ernesto’s opinion of his mother? B arr io B oy: Parts Three–Fi ve 171 INTERACTIVE READING: Reading Skill Reading Skill Identify Cause-and-Effect Relationships What do you think was the cause of Jose’s wild behavior? 17 2 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 4 MEMOIR EXCERPT: PART FOUR Late one afternoon José came into my room, wrapped me in blankets, pulled a cap over my ears, and carried me to my mother’s bedside. My stepfather was holding a hand mirror to her lips. It didn’t fog. She had stopped breathing. In the next room my sister was singing to the other children, “A birdie with a yellow bill/ hopped upon my windowsill/ cocked a shiny eye and said/ Shame on you you sleepy head.” The day we buried Doña Henriqueta, Mrs. Dodson took the oldest sister home with her. The younger children were sent to a neighbor. That night José went to the barrio, got drunk, borrowed a pistol, and was arrested for shooting up Second Street. We did not find out what had happened until I bicycled the next morning to Mrs. Dodson’s to report that José had not come home. By this time our friends in the barrio knew of José’s arrest and a telephone call to a bartender who knew us supplied the details. Nothing serious, Mrs. Dodson repeated to me. Nobody had been hurt. She left me in charge of my sister and went to bail out my uncle. They returned together. Gently, Mrs. Dodson scolded José, who sat dejectedly, his eyes closed so he would not have to look her in the eye, cracking the joints of his fingers, chewing on his tight lips, a young man compressing years of hard times and the grief of the past days in a show of manhood. When the lecture was nearly over, Mrs. Dodson was not talking of drunkenness and gunplay, but of the future, mostly of mine, and of José’s responsibility for it. She walked with us down the front stairway. Pushing my bicycle I followed him on foot the miles back to Oak Park, keeping my distance, for I knew he did not want me to see his face. As he had often told me, “Men never cry, no matter what.” A month later I made a bundle of the family keepsakes my stepfather allowed me to have, including the butterfly sarape, my books, and some family pictures. With the bundle tied to the bars of my bicycle, I pedaled to the INTERACT IVE READING: Reading Skill basement room José had rented for the two of us on O Street near the corner of Fifth, on the edge of the barrio. José was now working the riverboats and, in the slack season, following the round of odd jobs about the city. In our basement room, with a kitchen closet, bathroom, and laundry tub on the back porch and a woodshed for storage, I kept house. We bought two cots, one for me and the other for José when he was home. Our landlords lived upstairs, a middle-aged brother and sister who worked and rented rooms. As part payment on our rent I kept the yard trim. They were friends of Doña Transito, the grandmother of a Mexican family that lived in a weather-beaten cottage on the corner. Doña Tránsito was in her sixties, round as a barrel, and she wore her gray hair in braids and smoked hand-rolled cigarettes on her rickety front porch. To her tiny parlor chicanos in trouble came for advice, and the firm old lady with the rasping voice and commanding ways often asked me to interpret or translate for them in their encounters with the Autoridades. Since her services were free, so were mine. I soon became a regular visitor and made friends with her son, Kid Felix, a prizefighter who gave free boxing lessons to the boys in the neighborhood. Living only three houses from Doña Tránsito, saying my saludos to her every time I passed the corner, noticing how even the Kid was afraid to break her personal code of barrio manners, I lived inside a circle of security when José was away. . . . It was Doña Tránsito who called in the curandera once when the child of a neighbor was dying. I had brought a doctor to the house and was in the sick room when he told the family there was nothing more he could do. Doña Tránsito ordered me at once to fetch the old crone who lived on the other side of the railroad tracks towards the river and who practiced as a healer. Reading Skill Identify Cause-and-Effect Relationships What were the effects of the doctor’s diagnosis on Dona Transito? B arr io B oy: Parts Three–Fi ve 173 ON-PAGE N OTE-TAKING: BIG Question MARK IT UP Are you allowed to write in your novel? If so, then mark up the pages as you read, or reread, to help with your note-taking. Develop a shorthand system, including symbols, that works for you. Here are some ideas: Underline = important idea Bracket = text to quote Asterisk = just what you were looking for Checkmark = might be useful Circle = unfamiliar word or phrase to look up 왘 BIG Question What’s Worth Fighting For? How does Ernesto deal with the contractor’s abuse of power? Mark up the excerpt, looking for evidence of how it expresses the Big Question. 174 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 4 MEMOIR EXCERPT: PART FIVE There was never any doubt about the contractor and his power over us. He could fire a man and his family on the spot and make them wait days for their wages. A man could be forced to quit by assigning him regularly to the thinnest pickings in the field. The worst thing one could do was to ask for fresh water on the job, regardless of the heat of the day; instead of iced water, given freely, the crews were expected to buy sodas at twice the price in town, sold by the contractor himself. He usually had a pistol—to protect the payroll, so it was said. Through the ranchers for whom he worked, we were certain that he had connections with the Autoridades, for they never showed up in camp to settle wage disputes or listen to our complaints or to go for a doctor when one was needed. Lord of a rag-tag labor camp of Mexicans, the contractor, a Mexican himself, knew that few men would let their anger blow, even when he stung them with curses like, “Orale, San Afabeeches huevones.” As a single worker, I usually ate with some household, paying for my board. I did more work than a child but less than a man, neither the head nor the tail of a family. Unless the camp was a large one I became acquainted with most of the families. Those who could not write asked me to chalk their payroll numbers on the boxes they picked. I counted matches for a man who transferred them from the right pocket of his pants to the left as he tallied the lugs he filled throughout the day. It was his only check on the record the contractor kept of his work. As we worked the rows or the tree blocks during the day, or talked in the evenings where the men gathered in small groups to smoke and rest, I heard about barrios I had never seen but that must have been much like ours in Sacramento. The only way to complain or protest was to leave, but now and then a camp would stand instead of run, and for a few hours or a few days work would slow down or stop. I saw it happen in a pear orchard in Yolo when pay rates were cut without notice to the crew. . . . CORNELL NOTE-TAKING: BIG Question Use the Cornell Note-Taking system to take notes on the excerpt at the left. Record your notes, Reduce them, and then Recap (summarize) them. Record Reduce Try the following approach as you reduce your notes. MY VIEW Comment on what you learned from your own notes. Recap B arr io B oy: Parts Three–Fi ve 175 AFTER YOU READ: Par ts Three–Five Respond and Think Critically 1. Whom does Ernesto’s mother marry in Sacramento? Why do you think the author tells us so little about his stepfather? [Infer] 2. How would you characterize Ernesto’s relationships with his teachers? Why do you think Mrs. Crowley wants to persuade Ernesto to give up his job as a fiddler at a dance hall? [Infer] 3. Why might the author have chosen to end the book after describing Ernesto’s experiences at the camp where workers became ill? Do you consider this a satisfactory ending? [Evaluate] 4. What would you say Ernesto misses most about Mexico? [Evaluate] 5. What’s Worth Fighting For? At the end of the story, what has Ernesto found that is worth fighting for? [Interpret] 176 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 4 APPLY BACKGROUND Reread Build Background on page 167. How did that information help you understand or appreciate what you read in the memoir? AFTER YOU READ: Par ts Three–Five Literary Element Diction 1. Author Ernesto Galarza uses a straightforward style with very few emotionally charged words. Do you think this diction works well? Why or why not? [Evaluate] Vocabulary Practice A synonym is a word that has the same or nearly the same meaning as another word. Match each boldfaced vocabulary word with its synonym. Use a thesaurus or dictionary to check your answers. 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 2. What are some of the techniques Galarza uses to ensure understanding of the many Spanish words he includes in the text? [Explain] acculturation contraband partisan reverie transient adherent trance ephemeral adaptation illegal goods Academic Vocabulary Many of the camps in California were run by owners who tried to restrict the rights of immigrant workers. In the preceding sentence, restrict means, “to limit.” To become more familiar with the word restrict, fill out the graphic organizer below. definition synonyms Reading Skill Identify Cause-and Effect Relationships 1. What was one of the effects of Mrs. Dodson’s lecturing Jose about the drunken shooting incident? [Connect] similarities antonyms sentence/image 2. In the labor camp near Folsom, what was the cause that pulled the workers together? [Identify] B arr io B oy: Parts Three–Fi ve 177 AFTER YOU READ: Par ts Three–Five Write With Style Research and Report Apply Diction Literary Critism Assignment In Barrio Boy, the author’s diction depends upon the intermittent use of Spanish words, including slang and words that have evolved out of combining English and Spanish. Assignment Evaluate a piece of literary criticism about Barrio Boy and write a short response in which you explain why you agree or disagree with the critic’s statements. Present your response to the class. In your own writing there may be forms of language that are unique to your peer group, geographical location, ethnicity, family, or age. Write a letter or an email to a friend in which you tell a story or share a memory. Include language that is specific to one of the groups you belong to. Get Ideas Make a list of words you commonly use when you talk to friends or close family members. You may use informal language and slang. You may even use the kind of abbreviations that are standard in text messages. Think carefully about the context of these kinds of communications. When you have a list of about fifteen or more words, look through them and connect the ones that seem to go together. Think about the group with whom you use that diction. Choose a person from that group as the recipient of your letter. Give It Structure Write your letter or email in an informal style and use the slang and other word choices that you associate with your chosen group. You may tell a brief story, describe a memorable moment, or share some news. Look at Language Remember that not all readers may be familiar with the diction you use in your letter. Use context clues to ensure understanding. Try writing a list of all the unique words and phrases you use. Then check to see that the meaning of each is clearly communicated. Prepare The following quotation about Barrio Boy comes from Maria Montes de Oca Ricks in the Dictionary of Literary Biography: The closely knit family unit in the book is clearly offered as a paradigm of Chicano survival in the United States. The Galarza extended family, faced with seemingly insurmountable obstacles, tries to remain united at all costs and, as a result, triumphs where defeat would appear to be the only logical outcome. . . . Throughout his life Galarza would, in fact, credit the steadfastness of this family bond as peculiarly Mexican: “It was a Mexican family that I lived in. And we made no bones about it…. It was just natural, which is the way it should be.” Get Ideas Carefully analyze the quotation, as well as the quotation within the quotation. What are the points you agree with? Are there any you disagree with? For example, what is your response to the statement that a steadfast family bond is “peculiarly Mexican”? When you have determined your position, write a thesis statement about it. Gather details from the novel to support your argument. Report When you present your response, make eye contact with your audience, pay attention to your volume and enunciation, and present a confident appearance. Look for signs that your audience understands your point of view. Evaluate Write a brief paragraph evaluating your report. Be open to others’ feedback on your presentation. When your classmates present, offer them oral feedback. 17 8 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 4 WORK WITH RELATE D READINGS Barrio Boy The following questions refer to the Related Readings in Glencoe’s Literature Library edition of this memoir. Support your answers with details from the tests. Write your answers on a separate sheet of paper, but jot down some notes first on the lines provided. The Mexican Revolution Mexico Connect Make Connections How does this article explain why author Ernesto Galarza’s family supported the Maderistas? Day in the Barrio ; Linked Judith Ortiz Cofer; Naomi Shihab Nye Make Connections Which of these poems reminds you most of Ernesto’s life in the barrio of Sacramento? Explain your choice. Latinos Gain Visibility in Cultural Life of U.S. The New York Times Make Connections How do you think Galarza might have responded to this article? The Balek Scales Heinrich Böll Make Connections What similarities do you see between Franz and Ernesto of Barrio Boy ? An Hour with Abuelo Judith Ortiz Cofer Make Connections What qualities does Arturo have in common with Ernesto in Barrio Boy ? B arri o Boy 179 CO NNECT TO OTHER LITER AT URE LITERATURE EXCERPT: Escaping I learned about perseverance when my parents decided that they wanted a better life for their children, their threeyear-old son and their six-year-old daughter. We had been living in communist Czechoslovakia and were tired of the life we were living and the system. At first they had doubts, as anyone might, but they would not let their children grow up as prisoners. Leaving Czechoslovakia at that point was very difficult, however. They had to figure out a way to get to Austria, which was a free country. At first the plan was simple: They would claim I needed to see a doctor there for my ear infection. Their spirits were crushed when a border guard gave their request a stern “No.” As we approached a second border crossing, they hoped for a different response. However, as we sat in our car, the guard reached in, yanked out the keys and ordered my parents to turn themselves in to the police. Feeling hopeless, they decided to take one last chance, which would be difficult. We would hike across the Alps into Austria, leaving behind everything we could not carry. It was extremely dangerous, and getting caught meant prison or even death. Yet we marched on because the freedom of America glistened in our souls. As my parents saw the sign welcoming us to Austria, they knew they had succeeded. 18 0 N OV E L COMPA NION: Un it 4 Once in Austria, they found a refugee center and then a hotel. We lived in this overcrowded, infested, dirty hotel for over a year. They often wondered if they had made the right decision leaving their homeland. However, once their time came to go to America and begin new, free lives, their question was answered. Even in America, life was very hard at first. We lived in slums in Boston where my parents had to fight with the landlord to give us heat, and waking up every day was a hard realization. My parents’ perseverance was strong, though, and within a few years my father had gained recertification of his medical degree and my mother, foreign accent and all, finished first in her dental-assistant school. Perseverance is a valuable law of life, imperative to reaching one’s dreams. My parents had little when we lived under Communism, yet they were willing to live with nothing. Realizing that I cannot fully appreciate my parents’ perseverance and indomitable spirit that brought us here, I remain thankful for the chance to live a wonderful life, in which I had boundless opportunities. In my parents’ case, “Perseverance [made] the difference between success and defeat,” and I am glad it did. CONNECT TO OTHER LIT ERATURE Compare the memoir you have just read to the literature selection at the left, which is excerpted from “Escaping” by Zdenko Slobodnik in Glencoe Literature. Then answer the questions below. Compare & Contrast 1. Narrator and Point of View In what ways are the narrators in Barrio Boy and “Escaping” similar . . .? What are the chief differences between them? WRITE ABOUT IT Family and the search for a better way of life are often at the heart of what people find worth fighting for. Both Ernesto Galarza’s Barrio Boy and Zdenko Slobodnik’s “Escaping” reflect this idea in different ways. In a paragraph, compare and contrast the two authors’ view points. 2. Style The style of both these stories favors information over emotion. How would you describe some of their stylistic differences? 3. Diction Although both narrators discuss coming from different countries of origin and emigrate to the United States, Barrio Boy uses the key diction element of Spanish words and phrases. Do you think this technique would be effective for the excerpt of “Escaping” as well? Why or why not? B arri o Boy 181 RES POND THROUGH WRITING Expository Essay Analyze Cause and Effect Barrio Boy is based on the twofold journey of its young narrator, Ernesto—the immigration journey that eventually brings him to the United States, and his internal journey toward adulthood and knowledge. In an essay, analyze the causes of the major changes Ernesto and his family experience—and the various effects of those causes over the course of the memoir. Prewrite Plan carefully before you begin to write. It is a good idea to skim through the novel and make a list of important events, their causes, and the immediate and eventual effects. Use a graphic organizer like the one below to help you keep track of your ideas. Cause(s) The rurales ride in to question and search the people of Jalcocotán. Effects • • • The villagers hide their valuables and lie about where the men are. Ernesto’s family decides to move to Tepic. Ernesto begins to develop a hatred of the rurales. Once you have completed your graphic organizer, use the collected information to establish a controlling idea and structure for your essay. What will your overall point be? Keep in mind that your goal is to encapsulate causes and effects in the memoir overall, not just one segment of it. Draft Create your thesis. Then use a chronological progression through the events of the story to develop a logical sequence of information. Claims must be supported with evidence from the memoir. You may refer to plot events and character traits, or quote directly from the memoir. Revise As you review your first draft, pay close attention to the logic and cohesiveness of your cause-and-effect analyses. Exchange papers with a classmate and evaluate each others’ essays. Is the information well supported with logical assertions and examples from the text? Provide feedback on your classmate’s essay and revise your own according to the comments you receive. Edit and Proofread Carefully proofread for grammar, punctuation, and spelling errors. 18 2 N OV E L COMPA NION: Un it 4 UNDERSTAND THE TASK • To analyze, you must show how the parts create the whole. Because your goal is to encapsulate the major events of the novel, you may find it helpful to break the memoir down by its major locations: Jalcocotán, Tepic, Mazatlan, and Sacramento. Grammar Tip Adverb Clauses An adverb may be a single word such as in this sentence: “We’re going to leave tomorrow.” An adverb may be a phrase, as in “Our friends will come next Thursday.” Adverbs can also be clauses, containing a subject and a full verb. Adverb clauses can be useful when it comes to writing cause-and effect statements. Notice the underlined adverb clause in these examples: After their village is searched, the Galarza family decides to move to Tepic. Because he was mourning two deaths in his family, Jose went on a shooting spree. The Story of My Life Helen Keller The S tor y of My Li f e 183 INTRODUCTI ON TO THE AU T OBIOGRAPHY The Story of My Life Helen Keller “ . . . [T]he children of the future, the men of the future, will understand [her] even better than men do now, for they will be liberated and will know how the spirit can prevail over the senses. ” —Dr. Maria Montessori to Anne Sullivan As a young woman and college student, Helen Keller at first was reluctant to write The Story of My Life. Her blindness and deafness imposed particular demands on her as a student, and the rigors of college life and her unique challenges convinced her that such an undertaking was too difficult. Nevertheless, through the encouragement of those closest to her and the enticement of generous financial compensation, Keller agreed to write her life story. Creating a Classic The Story of My Life first appeared in five installments in the Ladies’ Home Journal and was subsequently published by Doubleday as a complete work with several of her letters. Readers and critics alike raved about the autobiography, and publishers clamored for more works by and about Keller. 184 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 5 If the story seems a bit fragmented at times, this is at least in part because Keller originally wrote the piece to be published in segments. In addition, she labored under unusual circumstances. Producing much of her manuscript on a typewriter, she was unable to go back and reread sections of the work unless someone read them for her and manually spelled back the words into her hand. When she finally finished the work, it was set in Braille for her so that she could make revisions. Many sections of the autobiography come from short themes that Keller had written for her English courses. John Albert Macy, who married Anne Sullivan and served as Helen’s agent and editor, noted that Partly from temperament, partly from the conditions of her work, she has written rather a series of brilliant passages than a unified narrative. In spite of obvious constraints, Keller nevertheless attempted to create as connected a work as possible, working with her teacher and John Macy to give the manuscript a sense of organic unity. INTRODUCTION TO THE AUTOBIOGRAPHY The Story of My Life was destined to become a classic. For decades, it has been hailed as the remarkable achievement of a brilliant and determined individual who sought to inspire others and whose “success has been complete, for in trying to be like other people she has come most fully to be herself” (John Macy). A Love of Travel In the late 1800s, education for persons who were both hearing- and vision-impaired was a field in its infancy. Not many individuals could boast success stories, and schools for hearing- and vision-impaired students were few. Consequently, travel was necessary for Helen Keller to be able to take advantage of the resources available at the time. Keller spent her early life in Tuscumbia, Alabama, and many scenes from The Story of My Life take place there. In addition, Keller and her teacher traveled frequently to Boston to study at the Perkins Institute for the Blind. They traveled by train, often spending winters in the North and summers in the South. Travel is an important element in The Story of My Life because much of Keller’s practical education came from her experiences away from home. Challenging Expectations Women in the early 1900s had far fewer opportunities for higher education than they have now. Only a handful of colleges and universities were coeducational, and most schools refused admission to women. Furthermore, many of the women’s colleges focused heavily on subjects that would aid women in their domestic duties or train them to become teachers. In The Story of My Life, Helen Keller recalls that as a child she proclaimed her desire to attend Harvard. However, Harvard University did not begin admitting women until well into the twentieth century. Instead of attending Harvard, Keller had to settle for admission to Radcliffe College, the “sister school” affiliated with Harvard. Like Harvard, several prestigious schools annexed women’s colleges but did not grant degrees to female students. In view of the limited educational options available to women, Helen Keller’s achievement of a university education was remarkable for any woman of her time. That she achieved it in her unique circumstances is remarkable for anyone at any time. The S tor y of My Li f e 185 MEET THE AUTHOR Helen Keller (1880–1968) “ In a word, literature is my Utopia. Here I am not disfranchised. No barrier of the senses shuts me out from the sweet, gracious discourse of my book-friends. The things I have learned and the things I have been taught seem of ridiculously little importance compared with their “large loves and heavenly charities. ” —Helen Keller, The Story of My Life It is scarcely imaginable that Helen Keller would have achieved so many remarkable feats without her love of literature. Her thirst for knowledge led her to devour writing on virtually all subjects; she read the works she loved so often that she literally wore Brailleprinted words off the page. Learning to Communicate In 1880, Helen Keller was born a healthy child into a typical southern family. But when she was nineteen months old, she was struck with an illness that left her deaf and blind for the rest of her life. She was a clever child, often naughty, and her behavior was left unchecked by indulgent family members. It was not until Anne Mansfield Sullivan arrived that the world opened up for Helen. Teacher, as Helen would call Sullivan throughout her lifetime, bridged the seemingly impassable gulf between Helen and the rest of the world. Teacher taught Helen a form of sign language, 186 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 5 taught her how to read, and instilled in her a love of nature and learning that would carry her through her darkest hours. An “Ambassador for the Blind” Helen’s achievements were remarkable by any standards. She knew several languages and excelled in her academic pursuits. She learned to speak intelligibly and gave public addresses. Active in political and social causes, she served as an “ambassador for the blind.” Helen graduated with honors from Radcliffe College in 1904, the first deaf-blind person ever to receive a college degree. During her years at Radcliffe, Helen wrote The Story of My Life. Traveling and Raising Awareness Traveling was an important part of Helen’s life. Because most of the schools for the deaf and blind were in the North, as a young woman Helen spent a good deal of time there. After World War II, she traveled the world extensively, raising awareness about issues related to disabilities. With many interests and passions, Helen led a full life that spanned nearly eightyeight years. She had numerous friends who filled her life with joy, including Alexander Graham Bell and Mark Twain. BEFORE YOU READ: Chapters 1–10 Connect to the Literature Think of someone who has affected your life (or the life of someone you know) in a positive way. How has this person changed your life or someone else’s life for the better? Write a Journal Entry In your journal, write about someone who has helped you overcome a problem or make a discovery. What were the circumstances surrounding the situation? How did this person influence your actions or feelings? NOVEL NOTEBOOK Keep a special notebook to record entries about the novels that you read this year. WRITE A CAPTION Write a caption for the image below using information in Build Background. Build Background A Dedicated Teacher The Perkins Institute for the Blind, now the Perkins School for the Blind, was chartered in 1829 near Boston, Massachusetts, and was the first school for the vision-impaired in the United States. Dr. Samuel Gridley Howe, the school’s first director, educated Laura Bridgman, who was the first American hearing- and vision-impaired woman to be educated successfully. Her story inspired Helen Keller’s mother to seek a teacher for Helen. Anne Sullivan, Helen’s teacher, was herself blind for periods of her life and attended the Perkins Institute. Sullivan had known Laura Bridgman at Perkins and was familiar with Dr. Howe’s successes. In 1887 Sullivan spent several months studying the records of Dr. Howe’s work with Laura Bridgman. Sullivan then joined the Keller family as Helen’s teacher when Helen was six years old. Helen and her teacher would later spend several periods at the Perkins Institute for the Blind. The S tor y of M y Life: C hapters 1–10 187 BEFORE YOU READ: Chapters 1–10 Set Purposes for Reading 왘 BIG Question What Really Matters? How can you decide what really matters in your life? Are personal connections such as family and friends most important to you, or are you more concerned with important social issues or causes? Reading about other people whose lives were defined by what mattered most to them can be interesting and revealing as you go about the process of discovering and exploring what matters most to you. As you read the first ten chapters of Helen Keller’s The Story of My Life, see if you can answer the question of what really matters to her and to those around her. Literary Element Voice Voice is an author’s distinctive style or the particular speech patterns of a character in a story. Voice is created through the author’s word choice, sentence structure, and attitude toward the subject matter. Voice is on of the elements that makes an author’s work unique. As you read the first ten chapters of The Story of My Life, notice how Helen Keller’s distinctive voice draws you into her experiences. Reading Strategy Connect to Personal Experience When you connect to personal experience, you relate an experience you read about to one you have actually had. For example, the people, feelings, or events that Helen Keller describes may remind you of moments in your own life. Connecting what you read to personal experience is important because it enables you to better understand the author’s ideas. To connect to personal experience when you read, • note any mention of activities you enjoy. • ask yourself if you have known people in your life who are similar to the characters. • think about events and situations that may have made you experience the feelings described in the work. As you read the opening chapters of the autobiography, ask yourself if you can relate to the life lessons that Keller has learned. You may find it helpful to use a graphic organizer like the one on the right. 188 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 5 Vocabulary anecdotes [an ik dōts ] n. brief narratives, usually interesting or humorous My great-aunt has amazing anecdotes about traveling in Tibet. caprice [kə prēs ] n. a sudden, impulsive action or notion; a whim In a fit of caprice, the office workers decided that every Friday they would have a costume party. indulgent [in dul jənt] adj. lenient If Jody’s parents had been less indulgent with her, she wouldn’t have thrown so many tantrums as a child. innate [i nāt] adj. present in an individual from birth Noah has always had an innate talent for getting along with other people. poignancy [poin yən sē] n. the ability to affect deeply or make an impression The music of Mozart often contains remarkable poignancy. Detail from Autobiography My Related Experience ACT IVE READING: Chapters 1–10 Helen Keller describes her early life as a series of events that were important to her. As you read about these events, reflect on how they affect or change Helen’s life in some way. Use the top half of the chart below to describe the effects of important Event in Helen’s Life Helen becomes ill when she is nineteen months old. events on Helen. Use the bottom half of the chart to add events you yourself have experienced—and the effect of those events and experiences on your life. Effect of the Event on Helen and Her Life Helen loses her ability to see and hear. Her family indulges her. She often misbehaves. Anne Sullivan arrives. Helen learns to communicate through sign language. Helen begins to understand the concepts of abstract ideas, such as “think” and “love.” Helen learns to read. Helen and her teacher visit Boston. Event in My Life Effect of the Event on Me and My Life The S tor y of M y Life: C hapters 1–10 189 INTERACTIVE READING: Literar y Element Literary Element Voice What are some of the words choices that make this passage distinctive? How does Keller’s sentence structure enhance your understanding and enjoyment of the passage? 190 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 5 NOVEL EXCERPT: CHAPTER 3 Meanwhile, the desire to express myself grew. The few signs I used became less and less adequate, and my failures to make myself understood were invariably followed by outbursts of passion. I felt as if invisible hands were holding me, and I made frantic efforts to free myself. I struggled—not that struggling helped matters, but the spirit of resistance was strong within me; I generally broke down in tears and physical exhaustion. If my mother happened to be near I crept into her arms, too miserable even to remember the cause of the tempest. After awhile the need of some means of communication became so urgent that these outbursts occurred daily, sometimes hourly. My parents were deeply grieved and perplexed. We lived a long way from any school for the blind or the deaf, and it seemed unlikely that any one would come to such an out-of-the-way place as Tuscumbia to teach a child who was both deaf and blind. Indeed, my friends and relatives sometimes doubted whether I could be taught. My mother’s only ray of hope came from Dickens’s “American Notes.” She had read his account of Laura Bridgman, and remembered vaguely that she was deaf and blind, yet had been educated. But she also remembered with a hopeless pang that Dr. Howe, who had discovered the way to teach the deaf and blind, had been dead many years. His methods had probably died with him; and if they had not, how was a little girl in a far-off town in Alabama to receive the benefit of them? When I was about six years old, my father heard of an eminent oculist in Baltimore, who had been successful in many cases that had seemed hopeless. My parents at once determined to take me to Baltimore to see if anything could be done for my eyes. The journey, which I remember well, was very pleasant. I made friends with many people on the train. One lady gave me a box of shells. My father made holes in these so that I could string them, and for a long time they kept me happy and contented. The conductor, too, was kind. Often INTERACT IVE READING: Literar y Element when he went his rounds I clung to his coat tails while he collected and punched the tickets. His punch, with which he let me play, was a delightful toy. Curled up in a corner of the seat I amused myself for hours making funny little holes in bits of cardboard. . . . When we arrived in Baltimore, Dr. Chisholm received us kindly: but he could do nothing. He said, however, that I could be educated, and advised my father to consult Dr. Alexander Graham Bell, of Washington, who would be able to give him information about schools and teachers of deaf or blind children. Acting on the doctor’s advice, we went immediately to Washington to see Dr. Bell, my father with a sad heart and many misgivings, I wholly unconscious of his anguish, finding pleasure in the excitement of moving from place to place. Child as I was, I at once felt the tenderness and sympathy which endeared Dr. Bell to so many hearts, as his wonderful achievements enlist their admiration. He held me on his knee while I examined his watch, and he made it strike for me. He understood my signs, and I knew it and loved him at once. But I did not dream that that interview would be the door through which I should pass from darkness into light, from isolation to friendship, companionship, knowledge, love. Dr. Bell advised my father to write to Mr. Anagnos, director of the Perkins Institution in Boston, the scene of Dr. Howe’s great labours for the blind, and ask him if he had a teacher competent to begin my education. This my father did at once, and in a few weeks there came a kind letter from Mr. Anagnos with the comforting assurance that a teacher had been found. This was in the summer of 1886. But Miss Sullivan did not arrive until the following March. Thus I came up out of Egypt and stood before Sinai, and a power divine touched my spirit and gave it sight, so that I beheld many wonders. And from the sacred mountain I heard a voice which said, “Knowledge is love and light and vision.” Literary Element Voice Keller gives the arrival of her teacher an almost mystical significance. What does this add to the story for you as a reader? The S tor y of M y Life: C hapters 1–10 191 INTERACTIVE READING: Reading Skill Reading Skill Connect to Personal Experience Think about a cherished childhood toy or other possession you had that was lost or broken. In what ways was your experience similar to what Helen relates about Nancy? 192 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 5 NOVEL EXCERPT: CHAPTER 9 As I shall not have occasion to refer to Nancy again, I wish to tell here a sad experience she had soon after our arrival in Boston. She was covered with dirt—the remains of mud pies I had compelled her to eat, although she had never shown any special liking for them. The laundress at the Perkins Institution secretly carried her off to give her a bath. This was too much for poor Nancy. When I next saw her she was a formless heap of cotton, which I should not have recognized at all except for the two bead eyes which looked out at me reproachfully. When the train at last pulled into the station at Boston it was as if a beautiful fairy tale had come true. The “once upon a time” was now; the “far-away country” was here. We had scarcely arrived at the Perkins Institution for the blind when I began to make friends with the little blind children. It delighted me inexpressibly to find that they knew the manual alphabet. What joy to talk with other children in my own language! Until then I had been like a foreigner speaking through an interpreter. In the school where Laura Bridgman was taught I was in my own country. . . . One day spent with the blind children made me feel thoroughly at home in my new environment, and I looked eagerly from one pleasant experience to another as the days flew swiftly by. I could not quite convince myself that there was much world left, for I regarded Boston as the beginning and the end of creation. While we were in Boston we visited Bunker Hill, and there I had my first lesson in history. The story of the brave men who had fought on the spot where we stood excited me greatly. I climbed the monument, counting the steps, and wondering as I went higher and yet higher if the soldiers had climbed this great stairway and shot at the enemy on the ground below. The next day we went to Plymouth by water. This was my first trip on the ocean and my first voyage in a steamboat. How full of life and motion it was! But the rumble of the machinery made me think it was thundering, and I began to cry, because I feared if it rained we should INTERACT IVE READING: Reading Strategy not be able to have our picnic out of doors. I was more interested, I think, in the great rock on which the Pilgrims landed than in anything else in Plymouth. I could touch it, and perhaps that made the coming of the Pilgrims and their toils and great deeds seem more real to me. I have often held in my hand a little model of the Plymouth Rock which a kind gentleman gave me at Pilgrim Hall, and I have fingered its curves, the split in the centre and the embossed figures “1620,” and turned over in my mind all that I knew about the wonderful story of the Pilgrims. How my childish imagination glowed with the splendour of their enterprise! I idealized them as the bravest and most generous men that ever sought a home in a strange land. I thought they desired the freedom of their fellow men as well as their own. I was keenly surprised and disappointed years later to learn of their acts of persecution that make us tingle with shame, even while we glory in the courage and energy that gave us our “Country Beautiful.” Among the many friends I made in Boston were Mr. William Endicott and his daughter. Their kindness to me was the seed from which many pleasant memories have since grown. One day we visited their beautiful home at Beverly Farms. I remember with delight how I went through their rose-garden, how their dogs, big Leo and little curly-haired Fritz with long ears, came to meet me, and how Nimrod, the swiftest of the horses, poked his nose into my hands for a pat and a lump of sugar. I also remember the beach, where for the first time I played in the sand. It was hard, smooth sand, very different from the loose, sharp sand, mingled with kelp and shells, at Brewster. Mr. Endicott told me about the great ships that came sailing by from Boston, bound for Europe. I saw him many times after that, and he was always a good friend to me; indeed, I was thinking of him when I called Boston “the City of Kind Hearts.” Reading Strategy Connect to Personal Experience Do you have (or have you had in the past) a special place where you love to be? In what way are your feelings for this place similar to Helen’s about Boston? In what way are your feelings different? The S tor y of M y Life: C hapters 1–10 193 ON-PAGE N OTE-TAKING: BIG Question MARK IT UP Are you allowed to write in your novel? If so, then mark up the pages as you read, or reread, to help with your note-taking. Develop a shorthand system, including symbols, that works for you. Here are some ideas: Underline = important idea Bracket = text to quote Asterisk = just what you were looking for Checkmark = might be useful Circle = unfamiliar word or phrase to look up 왘 BIG Question What Really Matters? What is Helen trying to understand in this excerpt? Why is that important to her? Mark up the excerpt, looking for evidence of how it expresses the Big Question. 194 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 5 NOVEL EXCERPT: CHAPTER 6 At first, when my teacher told me about a new thing I asked very few questions. My ideas were vague, and my vocabulary was inadequate; but as my knowledge of things grew, and I learned more and more words, my field of inquiry broadened, and I would return again and again to the same subject, eager for further information. Sometimes a new word revived an image that some earlier experience had engraved on my brain. I remember the morning that I first asked the meaning of the word, “love.” This was before I knew many words. I had found a few early violets in the garden and brought them to my teacher. She tried to kiss me; but at that time I did not like to have any one kiss me except my mother. Miss Sullivan put her arm gently round me and spelled into my hand, “I love Helen.” “What is love?” I asked. She drew me closer to her and said, “It is here,” pointing to my heart, whose beats I was conscious of for the first time. Her words puzzled me very much because I did not then understand anything unless I touched it. I smelt the violets in her hand and asked, half in words, half in signs, a question which meant, “Is love the sweetness of flowers?” “No,” said my teacher. Again I thought. The warm sun was shining on us. “Is this not love?” I asked, pointing in the direction from which the heat came, “Is this not love?” It seemed to me that there could be nothing more beautiful than the sun, whose warmth makes all things grow. But Miss Sullivan shook her head, and I was greatly puzzled and disappointed. I thought it strange that my teacher could not show me love. CORNELL NOTE-TAKING: BIG Question Use the Cornell Note-Taking system to take notes on the excerpt at the left. Record your notes, Reduce them, and then Recap (summarize) them. Record Reduce Try the following approach as you reduce your notes. TO THE POINT Write a few key ideas. Recap The S tor y of M y Life: C hapters 1–10 195 AFTER YOU READ: Chapters 1–10 Respond and Think Critically 1. What event causes Helen to realize that “Everything ha[s] a name”? Why does Helen call this discovery her “soul’s sudden awakening”? [Interpret] 2. How does Miss Sullivan teach Helen to read? How do Miss Sullivan’s creative teaching methods motivate Helen? [Analyze] 3. What places do Helen and Miss Sullivan visit while they are in Boston? Why does Helen call her trip to Boston an important event? [Infer] 4. Describe the relationship between Helen and her teacher. How do your own experiences help you to appreciate or relate to Miss Sullivan’s dedication to Helen? [Connect] 5. What Really Matters? In Chapter 6, Anne teaches Helen about the concept of “love.” Why does Helen’s sudden understanding of this abstract concept have such a profound effect on her? [Infer] 196 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 5 APPLY BACKGROUND Reread Introduction to the Autobiography on page 184. How did that information help you understand or appreciate what you read in the novel? AFTER YOU READ: Chapters 1–10 Literary Element Voice 1. In this section of the autobiography, Helen Keller writes in a series of brief sketches rather than in a straightforward chronological narrative. Do you think this style is effective? Why or why not? [Evaluate] 2. Helen writes passionately about her learning experiences. However, her references to such things as the loss of her beloved doll Nancy and her parakeet Tim use far less emotional language. What do you think might account for the differences in how these emotional moments are written? [Conclude] Reading Skill Connect to Personal Experience 1. Helen’s teacher opened her up to a new and richer life. Have you ever had a special friend, mentor, or teacher who introduced you to ideas and new ways of thinking and feeling? In what way was your experience like and unlike Helen Keller’s? [Connect] Vocabulary Practice On a separate sheet of paper, write the vocabulary word that correctly completes each sentence. anecdote indulgent poignancy caprice innate 1. Some teachers are ____________ about gum chewing during class, but most strictly forbid it. 2. Sometimes Ms. Yatamoto doesn’t get all the way through the history lesson because she tells so many interesting ____________. 3. Having great love of animals is a(n) ____________ characteristic in my family. 4. Like many people, I had a childhood that was a strange blend of comedy and ____________. 5. In a moment of sheer ____________, Edie decided to have ice cream for dinner. Academic Vocabulary Once Helen was able to understand the principle that “everything has a name,” a whole new world revealed itself to her. To learn more about the word principle, fill out the graphic organizer below. definition synonym principle 2. Before her teacher shows her that everything has a name, Helen is profoundly frustrated by her inability to learn. Have you ever felt incapable of learning something despite your desire and strong effort to do so? Describe your experience. [Analyze] antonym sentence/image The S tor y of M y Life: C hapters 1–10 197 AFTER YOU READ: Chapters 1–10 Write with Style Research and Report Apply Sentence Structure Visual Media/Presentation Assignment One of the things that defines Helen Keller’s voice is a strong sense of rhythm. She accomplishes it by using elegantly structured sentences of various lengths. You can create this effect in your own writing. Review the opening chapters of the novel. Using similar sentence structures, write a brief story about something that happened to you when you were a young child. Assignment In a small group, research the different communications technologies that are available to people who are hearing- or vision-impaired. You can gather information from the Internet, through various businesses, or from schools for persons who are hearing- or vision-impaired. Use visual aids to present your findings to the class. Get Ideas Make a list of your early childhood memories. Choose one memory from the list to write about. Give It Structure Begin your paragraph with a topic sentence stating your main idea. Follow with supporting sentences. End with a sentence that restates the main idea. Look at Language Try using the following techniques to add variety to your sentences. • Alternate shorter sentences and longer sentences. • If you have two or three short sentences in a row, try combining them into one longer sentence. • Start with an adjective or adverb: Terrified, I jumped down from the counter. • Start with an adverb phrase: In the silence, I heard my mother’s footsteps coming. • Start with a subordinate clause: As my mother turned the corner toward the kitchen, I slipped on the spilled oil and fell down. Get Ideas Discuss the various techniques you might use to create your visual presentation. Will you create a process diagram to show how a particular technology works? Or will you instead create a timeline to reveal the history of several technologies’? Take notes on any ideas that come up. Research To get your discussion started, make a list of technologies specifically for hearing- and vision-impaired persons. Use an Internet search engine and a chart like the one below to keep track of your findings. Hearing impaired visual fire alarms captioning Vision impaired talking watches and computer programs screen Braille communicator Prepare When you have completed your research, choose the technology or technologies you wish to present. Then go back to your discussion notes and decide which method you will use to present it. Work with your group to create the best possible graphic organizers and visual aids. Present Choose one or two group members to present the group’s findings to the class. The presenters should rehearse the visual presentation and get feedback from their fellow group members. 198 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 5 BEFORE YOU READ: Chapters 11–17 Connect to the Literature If you could visit any place in the world, where would you go? Why? NOVEL NOTEBOOK Keep a special notebook to record entries about the novels that you read this year. Quickwrite Think about your favorite place. What details stand out in your mind? Write a descriptive paragraph about this place, using words that will help someone visualize the place you are describing. WRITE A CAPTION Write a caption for the image below, using information in Build Background. Build Background World’s Columbian Exposition In 1893 the World’s Columbian Exposition—or World’s Fair—that Helen Keller describes in her autobiography was held in Chicago to celebrate the 400th anniversary of Columbus’s arrival in America. The fair went on for six months and boasted over 21 million visitors. The plaster-fronted buildings were lighted at night by electricity, a phenomenon still quite unfamiliar to most Americans. As a result of the illuminated buildings, the exposition came to be known as the “White City.” In addition, the Ferris wheel made its debut at the fair. This wildly popular ride, designed by a Pennsylvania bridge builder named George Ferris, could accommodate more than 2,000 riders at time. Each car was the size of a bus and could hold up to sixty riders. By contemporary standards, this “thrill ride” was pretty slow—it took twenty minutes to perform two complete revolutions! The Midway Plaisance, a favorite with Helen Keller, was a strip of land on which many of the fair’s amusements were located. Keller describes some of her experiences there in The Story of My Life. The S tor y of M y Life: C ha pters 11–17 199 BEFORE YOU READ: Chapters 11–17 Set Purposes for Reading 왘 BIG Question What Really Matters? Do you ever look back on a troublesome event or situation in your life and wonder what made you get so upset over it? Sometimes experience can lead you to new perspectives. You can view what’s really important through three sometimes related perspectives: • personal connections • social issues • scientific matters As you read the next section of the novel, think about which of these perspectives relates to Helen’s view of what really matters—and why. Literary Element Flashback A flashback is a chronological narrative that tells about something that happened before that point in the story or before the story began. Flashbacks give readers information that helps explain the main events of the story. Although Chapters 11–17 take readers chronologically through the events of Helen Keller’s life, the author does include a recollection within a recollection, which serves as a kind of flashback. As you read, identify this use of flashback and evaluate what it adds to the story. Use the graphic organizer on the next page to help you. Reading Strategy Interpret Figurative Language When you interpret figurative language, you use your own prior knowledge and understanding of the world to decide what the author intends to communicate by the use of words and phrases that convey ideas beyond their literal meanings. Some examples of figurative language are • metaphor—a figure of speech that compares or equates seemingly unlike things • simile—a figure of speech using like or as that compares or equates seemingly unlike things • personification—a figure of speech in which an animal, object, or idea is given human form or characteristics Interpreting figurative language is important because it can help you to uncover more complex meanings behind the author’s words and phrases. When you interpret figurative language, you break down figures of speech to derive meaning from the comparison being made. As you interpret figurative language in the next chapters, you may find it helpful to use a graphic organizer like the one at the right. 20 0 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 5 Vocabulary assimilate [ə sim ə lāt] v. to absorb; to take into the mind The speech was stated so quickly that I could not assimilate it. audible [ō də bəl] adj. capable of being heard In the distance, barely audible, came the sound of thunder. intelligible [in tel ə jə bəl] n. capable of being understood If Marty would slow down, his speech would be more intelligible. pinnacle [pin ə kəl] n. the highest point The pinnacle of my brother’s college career was when he made the dean’s list for the fifth straight semester. reproachfully [ri prōch fə lē] adv. in a disapproving or blameful manner “What caused this blue spot on the carpet?” Ginny asked her little sister reproachfully. Figurative Language Gino is a lightning rod for criticism. What I Know A lightning rod attracts lightning to itself. My Interpretation Gino attracts criticism from other people. ACTIVE READING: Chapters 11–17 Sometimes The Story of My Life is difficult to follow because the author moves quickly from one set of recollections to another, at times even incorporating a flashback within a recollection. As you read, use Chapter 11 Setting Alabama, at the summer cottage near Tuscumbia the chart below to keep track of the time and place for each chapter and the specific important events that occur. Note when the author uses flashback to relate the events. Important Events Helen, Mildred, and Miss Sullivan get lost; they climb down the crossbraces of the trestle to avoid being hit by a train. 12 13 14 15 16 17 The S tor y of M y Life: C ha pters 11–17 201 INTERACTIVE READING: Literar y Element Literary Element Flashback Where does the flashback in this passage begin? Why do you think the author used flashback to reveal these events? 20 2 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 5 NOVEL EXCERPT: CHAPTER 14 The winter of 1892 was darkened by the one cloud in my childhood’s bright sky. Joy deserted my heart, and for a long, long time I lived in doubt, anxiety and fear. Books lost their charm for me, and even now the thought of those dreadful days chills my heart. A little story called “The Frost King,” which I wrote and sent to Mr. Anagnos, of the Perkins Institution for the Blind, was at the root of the trouble. In order to make the matter clear, I must set forth the facts connected with this episode, which justice to my teacher and to myself compels me to write. I wrote the story when I was at home, the autumn after I had learned to speak. We had stayed up at Fern Quarry later than usual. While we were there, Miss Sullivan had described to me the beauties of the late foliage, and it seems that her descriptions revived the memory of a story, which must have been read to me, and which I must have unconsciously retained. I thought then that I was “making up a story,” as children say, and I eagerly sat down to write it before the ideas should slip from me. My thoughts flowed easily; I felt a sense of joy in the composition. Words and images came tripping to my finger ends, and as I thought out sentence after sentence, I wrote them on my braille slate. Now, if words and images come to me without effort, it is a pretty sure sign that they are not the offspring of my own mind, but stray waifs that I regretfully dismiss. At that time I eagerly absorbed everything I read without a thought of authorship, and even now I cannot be quite sure of the boundary line between my ideas and those I find in books. I suppose that is because so many of my impressions come to me through the medium of others’ eyes and ears. When the story was finished, I read it to my teacher, and I recall now vividly the pleasure I felt in the more beautiful passages, and my annoyance at being interrupted to have INTERACT IVE READING: Literar y Element the pronunciation of a word corrected. At dinner it was read to the assembled family, who were surprised that I could write so well. Some one asked me if I had read it in a book. This question surprised me very much; for I had not the faintest recollection of having had it read to me. I spoke up and said, “Oh, no, it is my story, and I have written it for Mr. Anagnos.” Accordingly I copied the story and sent it to him for his birthday. It was suggested that I should change the title from “Autumn Leaves” to “The Frost King,” which I did. I carried the little story to the post-office myself, feeling as if I were walking on air. I little dreamed how cruelly I should pay for that birthday gift. Mr. Anagnos was delighted with “The Frost King,” and published it in one of the Perkins Institution reports. This was the pinnacle of my happiness, from which I was in a little while dashed to earth. I had been in Boston only a short time when it was discovered that a story similar to “The Frost King,” called “The Frost Fairies,” by Miss Margaret T. Canby, had appeared before I was born in a book called “Birdie and His Friends.” The two stories were so much alike in thought and language that it was evident Miss Canby’s story had been read to me, and that mine was—a plagiarism. It was difficult to make me understand this; but when I did understand I was astonished and grieved. No child ever drank deeper of the cup of bitterness than I did. I had disgraced myself; I had brought suspicion upon those I loved best. And yet how could it possibly have happened? I racked my brain until I was weary to recall anything about the frost that I had read before I wrote “The Frost King”; but I could remember nothing, except the common reference to Jack Frost, and a poem for children, “The Freaks of the Frost,” and I knew I had not used that in my composition. Literary Element Flashback Why do you think the author used dialogue in the flashback? The S tor y of M y Life: C hapters 11–17 203 INTERACTIV E READING: Reading Strategy Reading Strategy Interpret Figurative Language Identify an example of a metaphor and personification in this passage. How do you interpret the meaning of each? NOVEL EXCERPT: CHAPTER 12 After my first visit to Boston, I spent almost every winter in the North. Once I went on a visit to a New England village with its frozen lakes and vast snow fields. It was then that I had opportunities such as had never been mine to enter into the treasures of the snow. I recall my surprise on discovering that a mysterious hand had stripped the trees and bushes, leaving only here and there a wrinkled leaf. The birds had flown, and their empty nests in the bare trees were filled with snow. Winter was on hill and field. The earth seemed benumbed by his icy touch, and the very spirits of the trees had withdrawn to their roots, and there, curled up in the dark, lay fast asleep. All life seemed to have ebbed away, and even when the sun shone the day was Shrunk and cold, As if her veins were sapless and old, And she rose decrepitly For a last dim look at earth and sea. The withered grass and the bushes were transformed into a forest of icicles. Then came a day when the chill air portended a snowstorm. We rushed out-of-doors to feel the first few tiny flakes descending. Hour by hour the flakes dropped silently, softly from their airy height to the earth, and the country became more and more level. A snowy night closed upon the world, and in the morning one could scarcely recognize a feature of the landscape. All the roads were hidden, not a single landmark was visible, only a waste of snow with trees rising out of it. In the evening a wind from the northeast sprang up, and the flakes rushed hither and thither in furious mêlée. Around the great fire we sat and told merry tales, and frolicked, and quite forgot that we were in the midst of a desolate solitude, shut in from all communication with the outside world. But during the night the fury of the wind increased to such a degree that it thrilled us with a vague terror. The rafters creaked and strained, and the branches 20 4 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 5 INTERACT IVE READING: Reading Strategy of the trees surrounding the house rattled and beat against the windows, as the winds rioted up and down the country. On the third day after the beginning of the storm the snow ceased. The sun broke through the clouds and shone upon a vast, undulating white plain. High mounds, pyramids heaped in fantastic shapes, and impenetrable drifts lay scattered in every direction. Narrow paths were shoveled through the drifts. I put on my cloak and hood and went out. The air stung my cheeks like fire. Half walking in the paths, half working our way through the lesser drifts, we succeeded in reaching a pine grove just outside a broad pasture. The trees stood motionless and white like figures in a marble frieze. There was no odour of pine-needles. The rays of the sun fell upon the trees, so that the twigs sparkled like diamonds and dropped in showers when we touched them. So dazzling was the light, it penetrated even the darkness that veils my eyes. As the days wore on, the drifts gradually shrunk, but before they were wholly gone another storm came, so that I scarcely felt the earth under my feet once all winter. At intervals the trees lost their icy covering, and the bulrushes and underbrush were bare; but the lake lay frozen and hard beneath the sun. Our favourite amusement during that winter was tobogganing. In places the shore of the lake rises abruptly from the water’s edge. Down these steep slopes we used to coast. We would get on our toboggan, a boy would give us a shove, and off we went! Plunging through drifts, leaping hollows, swooping down upon the lake, we would shoot across its gleaming surface to the opposite bank. What joy! What exhilarating madness! For one wild, glad moment we snapped the chain that binds us to earth, and joining hands with the winds we felt ourselves divine! Reading Strategy Interpret Figurative Language What things are being compared in the similes in this passage? The S tor y of M y Life: C hapters 11–17 205 ON-PAGE N OTE-TAKING: BIG Question MARK IT UP Are you allowed to write in your novel? If so, then mark up the pages as you read, or reread, to help with your note-taking. Develop a shorthand system, including symbols, that works for you. Here are some ideas: Underline = important idea Bracket = text to quote Asterisk = just what you were looking for Checkmark = might be useful Circle = unfamiliar word or phrase to look up 왘 BIG Question What Really Matters? Why is writing difficult for the author and why does she keep trying to master it? Mark up the excerpt, looking for evidence of how it expresses the Big Question. 20 6 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 5 NOVEL EXCERPT: CHAPTER 14 I am afraid I have not yet completed this process. It is certain that I cannot always distinguish my own thoughts from those I read, because what I read becomes the very substance and texture of my mind. Consequently, in nearly all that I write, I produce something which very much resembles the crazy patchwork I used to make when I first learned to sew. This patchwork was made of all sorts of odds and ends—pretty bits of silk and velvet; but the coarse pieces that were not pleasant to touch always predominated. Likewise my compositions are made up of crude notions of my own, inlaid with the brighter thoughts and riper opinions of the authors I have read. It seems to me that the difficulty of writing is to make the language of the educated mind express our confused ideas, half feelings, half thoughts, when we are little more than bundles of instinctive tendencies. Trying to write is very much like trying to put a Chinese puzzle together. We have a pattern in mind which we wish to work out in words; but the words will not fit the spaces, or, if they do, they will not match the design. But we keep on trying because we know that others have succeeded, and we are not willing to acknowledge defeat. “There is no way to become original, except to be born so,” says Stevenson, and although I may not be original, I hope sometime to outgrow my artificial, periwigged compositions. Then, perhaps, my own thoughts and experiences will come to the surface. Meanwhile I trust and hope and persevere, and try not to let the bitter memory of “The Frost King” trammel my efforts. So this sad experience may have done me good and set me thinking on some of the problems of composition. My only regret is that it resulted in the loss of one of my dearest friends, Mr. Anagnos. CORNELL NOTE-TAKING: BIG Question Use the Cornell Note-Taking system to take notes on the excerpt at the left. Record your notes, Reduce them, and then Recap (summarize) them. Record Reduce Try the following approach as you reduce your notes. ASK QUESTIONS Write a question about the novel. Can you find the answer in your notes? Recap The S tor y of M y Life: C hapters 11–17 207 AFTER YOU READ: Chapters 11–17 Respond and Think Critically 1. How does Mr. Anagnos react after Helen is accused of plagiarism? Why does he react in this way? [Analyze] 2. How does Helen describe her emotions upon visiting Niagara Falls and the World’s Fair? Why does she call these places wonders? [Evaluate] 3. What is Helen’s apparent attitude toward her education? Why do you think she feels this way? [Infer] 4. Based on Helen’s descriptions of her travels, what do you think she would most enjoy about visiting a place you would like visit? Why? [Connect] 5. What Really Matters? Why is it so important to Helen to clarify the story behind her writing of the “The Frost King”? [Interpret] 20 8 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 5 APPLY BACKGROUND Reread Meet the Author on page 186. How did that information help you understand or appreciate what you read in the novel? AFTER YOU READ: Chapters 11–17 Literary Element Flashback 1. In what ways does the author’s use of flashback in this section differ from the rest of the autobiography’s narrative, which consists entirely of memories of her past? [Analyze] Vocabulary Practice Identify whether the words in each pair have the same or opposite meaning. 1. assimilate and absorb 2. audible and imperceptible 3. intelligible and garbled 2. How does Helen Keller’s use of flashback compare to other flashbacks you have come across in literary works? [Evaluate] 4. pinnacle and apex 5. reproachfully and hopefully Academic Vocabulary Reading Skill Interpret Figurative Language 1. In Chapter 11, Helen Keller says that when she met new people who “talked” into her hand, “The barren places between my mind and the minds of others blossomed like the rose.” What is being compared in this simile and what does it mean? [Interpret] Helen learned to speak by using her sense of touch to understand how the movements of the tongue correspond to the sounds of human language. Using context clues, try to figure out the meaning of the boldfaced word in the sentence above. Write your guess below. Then check it in a dictionary. 2. Keller describes a stream as “frolicsome” and says it “leaps,” “tumbles” and “laughs.” What kind of figurative language is this? What is your interpretation of it? [Interpret] The S tor y of M y Life: C hapters 11–17 209 AFTER YOU READ: Chapters 11–17 Write with Style Speaking and Listening Apply Figurative Language Literature Group Assignment Figurative language is often a part of an author’s distinctive voice. Review some of the metaphors, similes, and examples of personification in the autobiography so far. Write a paragraph about an emotional moment from your recent or distant past using at least one example of each figure of speech. Assignment In this section of the biography, Helen is still quite young—ten to fourteen years old. In a small group, discuss the following questions: How does Helen’s age affect your responses to her experiences? Are you surprised by any of her actions or emotions? How might you react in similar circumstances? Get Ideas Make a list of words you associate with the moment you have selected. Guilt sadness loneliness shame Prepare Before your group meets, review Chapters 11–17 and take notes about Helen’s emotional reactions to such situations as the accusation of plagiarism, her visit to the World’s Fair, and her various teachers. Create a chart like the one below to keep track of your ideas and reactions. Then think about the comparisons you can make from those words. For example: Guilt murky gray fog impenetrable prison cell utter darkness a rat in a cage Choose three strong images from your list and create a simile, a metaphor, and an example of personification from each. Examples Simile: My guilt was like a murky gray fog. Metaphor: Its impenetrable prison walls kept me from talking to my friends and family. Personification: Guilt enveloped me in its arms and made me a constant companion. Give It Structure Begin with a topic sentence that leads readers into your paragraph. Try not to clump your examples of figurative language together. Instead spread them out over the paragraph. Look at Language Once you have completed a draft of your paragraph, reread it very carefully. Is the language as vivid as you would like it to be? If not, use a thesaurus to replace weak words with strong ones. 210 N OV E L COMPA NION: Un it 5 Event/ Situation How Helen Reacts How I Might React Helen is accused of plagiarism. She breaks down emotionally, can’t sleep or eat or have any fun. I might break down at first, but I would try to understand and explain what had happened. Discuss When you meet with your group, use your chart to fuel the discussion. Listen carefully to your fellow group members. If there are disagreements, attempt to resolve them calmly and politely. Be specific in your use of examples from the text. Report Present your group’s findings in a panel discussion that allows each person to contribute his or her thoughts. Be sure each group member speaks loudly enough for the rest of the class to hear. Evaluate Write a paragraph in which you assess the effectiveness of your discussion. BEFORE YOU READ: Chapters 18–23 Connect to the Literature What are some of your long-term goals or ambitions? How do you plan to achieve them? Make a Chart Think of a particular goal you would like to achieve. Create a chart that outlines the steps you will need to follow to achieve the goal. In what sequence must you complete the steps? Which are most important? How long will they take? NOVEL NOTEBOOK Keep a special notebook to record entries about the novels that you read this year. SUMMARIZE Summarize in one sentence the most important idea(s) in Build Background. Build Background Braille’s Gift Louis Braille, a Frenchman who lived in the early 1800s, became blind at the age of four as a result of an injury and ensuing infection. He eventually learned to read through a system of embossing, or pressing letters of the alphabet into sheets of waxed paper. A reader would trace the outlines of the impressions with a finger. The process was laborious, and few embossed books were available. Eventually, Charles Barbier invented a system of raised dots and dashes, to be used by the military for silent communication at night. This system was based on sounds and was complex and difficult. Building on Barbier’s work, the twelve-year-old Braille began to experiment in an effort to simplify it. After years of trial and error, Braille developed a system of raised dots that represented the letters of the alphabet. Braille’s breakthrough opened a new world of possibilities for readers who were vision-impaired. The S tor y of M y Life: C ha pters 18–23 211 BEFORE YOU READ: Chapters 18–23 Set Purposes for Reading Vocabulary 왘 BIG Question What Really Matters? As people grow older and more experienced, their ideas about what matters most often change. As you read the final section of the autobiography, ask yourself whether or not Helen Keller’s view of what matters most in her life changes or stays the same as she enters college and society. Literary Element Anecdote An anecdote is a brief, entertaining story based on a single interesting or humorous incident or event. Anecdotes often reveal some aspect of a person’s character. They can be used to add interest to a person’s life story. Throughout her autobiography, author Helen Keller uses anecdotes to draw readers into the larger world of her experience. As you read the final section of the autobiography, notice which anecdotes engage you most and bring Helen Keller’s story to life. Reading Skill Analyze Historical Context When you analyze historical context in a literary work, you pay attention to details that reveal what life was like for certain groups of people at a particular time in history. This involves examining the political and social factors that influenced the events described in the work. Analyzing historical context is important because it helps you to understand challenges people faced in the past. You can use this knowledge to understand social issues people still face today. When you analyze historical context, you • look for details that tell about a particular time and place. • determine what those details reveal about what it was like to live at that time in history. As you read the final chapters of The Story of My Life, look for details that establish the historical context of Helen Keller’s college days and her journey toward adulthood in the larger world. You may wish to use graphic organizers like the one below and on the next page to keep track of your findings. Society 212 N OV E L COMPA NION: Un it 5 College caricatures [kar ə kə chərz] n. exaggerations through distorted characteristics I didn’t believe one thing about that movie because all the people in it were caricatures. encumbered [en kum bərd] adj. weighed down Mr. Howard is always worried because he’s encumbered by debt. panorama [pan ə ram ə] n. a complete view The panorama of the Australian outback is amazing to behold. remonstrate [rim on strāt] v. to protest; to reprove Dawn ran over a man’s foot with her shopping cart, which made him remonstrate at peak volume. tedium [tē dē əm] n. the quality of being tiresome; boredom The tedium of the country afternoons was too much for Daniel—he just had to get into town once in a while. ACTIVE READING: Chapters 18–23 Helen Keller’s insistent pursuit of her educational and societal goals broke new ground in the early part of the twentieth century. In this section of The Story of My Life, she writes about some of the challenges she faced. Using the web diagram Today: Mr. Gilman tried to hold Helen back. below, which lists some of those challenges, tell how she met and surpassed them. In the bubbles labeled “Today,” add information about how each situation might be different if Helen were attempting to get an education today. Today: Today: Teachers lacked experience with deaf and blind students. Textbooks could not be embossed quickly. Helen Keller’s Challenges The S tor y of M y Life: C hapters 18–23 213 INTERACTIVE READING: Literar y Element Literary Element Anecdote Why does Oliver Wendell Holmes cry when Helen recites the Tennyson poem? What does this anecdote tell you about the effect she has on people? NOVEL EXCERPT: CHAPTER 23 I remember well the first time I saw Dr. Oliver Wendell Holmes. He had invited Miss Sullivan and me to call on him one Sunday afternoon. It was early in the spring, just after I had learned to speak. We were shown at once to his library where we found him seated in a big armchair by an open fire which glowed and crackled on the hearth, thinking, he said, of other days. “And listening to the murmur of the River Charles,” I suggested. “Yes,” he replied, “the Charles has many dear associations for me.” There was an odour of print and leather in the room which told me that it was full of books, and I stretched out my hand instinctively to find them. My fingers lighted upon a beautiful volume of Tennyson’s poems, and when Miss Sullivan told me what it was I began to recite: Break, break, break On thy cold gray stones, O sea! But I stopped suddenly. I felt tears on my hand. I had made my beloved poet weep, and I was greatly distressed. He made me sit in his armchair, while he brought different interesting things for me to examine, and at his request I recited “The Chambered Nautilus,” which was then my favorite poem. After that I saw Dr. Holmes many times and learned to love the man as well as the poet. One beautiful summer day, not long after my meeting with Dr. Holmes, Miss Sullivan and I visited Whittier in his quiet home on the Merrimac. His gentle courtesy and quaint speech won my heart. He had a book of his poems in raised print from which I read “In School Days.” He was delighted that I could pronounce the words so well, and said that he had no difficulty in understanding me. Then I asked many questions about the poem, and read his answers by placing my fingers on his lips. He said he was the little boy in the poem, and that the girl’s name was Sally, and more which I have forgotten. I also recited “Laus 214 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 5 INTERACT IVE READING: Literar y Element Deo,” and as I spoke the concluding verses, he placed in my hands a statue of a slave from whose crouching figure the fetters were falling, even as they fell from Peter’s limbs when the angel led him forth out of prison. Afterward we went into his study, and he wrote his autograph for my teacher and expressed his admiration of her work, saying to me, “She is thy spiritual liberator.” Then he led me to the gate and kissed me tenderly on my forehead. I promised to visit him again the following summer; but he died before the promise was fulfilled. . . . I have already written of my first meeting with Dr. Alexander Graham Bell. Since then I have spent many happy days with him at Washington and at his beautiful home in the heart of Cape Breton Island, near Baddeck, the village made famous by Charles Dudley Warner’s book. Here in Dr. Bell’s laboratory, or in the fields on the shore of the great Bras d’Or, I have spent many delightful hours listening to what he had to tell me about his experiments, and helping him fly kites by means of which he expects to discover the laws that shall govern the future airship. Dr. Bell is proficient in many fields of science, and has the art of making every subject he touches interesting, even the most abstruse theories. He makes you feel that if you only had a little more time, you, too, might be an inventor. He has a humorous and poetic side, too. His dominating passion is his love for children. He is never quite so happy as when he has a little deaf child in his arms. His labours in behalf of the deaf will live on and bless generations of children yet to come; and we love him alike for what he himself has achieved and for what he has evoked from others. Literary Element Anecdote What does this brief anecdote tell you about Alexander Graham Bell’s personality? What does it tell you about Helen Keller’s personality? The S tor y of M y Life: C hapters 18–23 215 INTERACTIVE READING: Reading Skill Reading Skill Analyze Historical Context What does this passage tell you about the social values of the time during which Helen Keller was trying to move forward in her studies? 216 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 5 NOVEL EXCERPT: CHAPTER 19 On the seventeenth of November I was not very well, and did not go to school. Although Miss Sullivan knew that my indisposition was not serious, yet Mr. Gilman, on hearing of it, declared that I was breaking down and made changes in my studies which would have rendered it impossible for me to take my final examinations with my class. In the end the difference of opinion between Mr. Gilman and Miss Sullivan resulted in my mother’s withdrawing my sister Mildred and me from the Cambridge School. After some delay it was arranged that I should continue my studies under a tutor, Mr. Merton S. Keith, of Cambridge. Miss Sullivan and I spent the rest of the winter with our friends, the Chamberlins in Wrentham, twentyfive miles from Boston. From February to July, 1898, Mr. Keith came out to Wrentham twice a week, and taught me algebra, geometry, Greek and Latin. Miss Sullivan interpreted his instruction. In October, 1898, we returned to Boston. For eight months Mr. Keith gave me lessons five times a week, in periods of about an hour. He explained each time what I did not understand in the previous lesson, assigned new work, and took home with him the Greek exercises which I had written during the week on my typewriter, corrected them fully, and returned them to me. In this way my preparation for college went on without interruption. I found it much easier and pleasanter to be taught by myself than to receive instruction in class. There was no hurry, no confusion. My tutor had plenty of time to explain what I did not understand, so I got on faster and did better work than I ever did in school. I still found more difficulty in mastering problems in mathematics than I did in any other of my studies. I wish algebra and geometry had been half as easy as the languages and literature. But even mathematics Mr. Keith made interesting; he succeeded in whittling problems small enough to get through my brain. He kept my mind alert and eager, and trained it to reason clearly, and to seek conclusions calmly and logically, instead of jumping wildly into space and INTERACT IVE READING: Reading Skill arriving nowhere. He was always gentle and forbearing, no matter how dull I might be, and believe me, my stupidity would often have exhausted the patience of Job. On the 29th and 30th of June, 1899, I took my final examinations for Radcliffe College. The first day I had Elementary Greek and Advanced Latin, and the second day Geometry, Algebra and Advanced Greek. The college authorities did not allow Miss Sullivan to read the examination papers to me; so Mr. Eugene C. Vining, one of the instructors at the Perkins Institution for the Blind, was employed to copy the papers for me in American braille. Mr. Vining was a stranger to me, and could not communicate with me, except by writing braille. The proctor was also a stranger, and did not attempt to communicate with me in any way. The braille worked well enough in the languages, but when it came to geometry and algebra, difficulties rose. I was sorely perplexed, and felt discouraged wasting much precious time, especially in algebra. It is true that I was familiar with all literary braille in common use in this country—English, American, and New York Point; but the various signs and symbols in geometry and algebra in the three systems are very different, and I had used only the English braille in my algebra. Two days before the examinations, Mr. Vining sent me a braille copy of one of the old Harvard papers in algebra. To my dismay I found that it was in the American notation. I sat down immediately and wrote to Mr. Vining, asking him to explain the signs. I received another paper and a table of signs by return mail, and I set to work to learn the notation. But on the night before the algebra examination, while I was struggling over some very complicated examples, I could not tell the combinations of bracket, brace and radical. Both Mr. Keith and I were distressed and full of forebodings for the morrow; but we went over to the college a little before the examination began, and had Mr. Vining explain more fully the American symbols. Reading Skill Analyze Historical Context How does this passage illustrate Helen Keller’s fierce determination to make society conform to her goals and ambitions? The S tor y of M y Life: C ha pters 18–23 217 ON-PAGE N OTE-TAKING: BIG Question MARK IT UP Are you allowed to write in your novel? If so, then mark up the pages as you read, or reread, to help with your note-taking. Develop a shorthand system, including symbols, that works for you. Here are some ideas: Underline = important idea Bracket = text to quote Asterisk = just what you were looking for Checkmark = might be useful Circle = unfamiliar word or phrase to look up 왘 BIG Question What Really Matters? Why is the gaining of knowledge so important to Helen’s sense of herself? Mark up the excerpt, looking for evidence of how it expresses the Big Question. 218 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 5 NOVEL EXCERPT: CHAPTER 20 But the examinations are the chief bugbears of my college life. Although I have faced them many times and cast them down and made them bite the dust, yet they rise again and menace me with pale looks, until like Bob Acres I feel my courage oozing out at my finger ends. The days before these ordeals take place are spent in cramming your mind with mystic formulae and indigestible dates— unpalatable diets, until you wish that books and science and you were buried in the depths of the sea. . . . It comes over me that in the last two or three pages of this chapter I have used figures which will turn the laugh against me. Ah, here they are—the mixed metaphors mocking and strutting about before me, pointing to the bull in the china shop assailed by hailstones and the bugbears with pale looks, an unanalyzed species! Let them mock on. The words describe so exactly the atmosphere of jostling, tumbling ideas I live in that I will wink at them for once, and put on a deliberate air to say that my ideas of college have changed. While my days at Radcliffe were still in the future, they were encircled with a halo of romance, which they have lost; but in the transition from romantic to actual I have learned many things I should never have known had I not tried the experiment. One of them is the precious science of patience, which teaches us that we should take our education as we would take a walk in the country, leisurely, our minds hospitably open to impressions of every sort. Such knowledge floods the soul unseen with a soundless tidal wave of deepening thought. “Knowledge is power.” Rather, knowledge is happiness, because to have knowledge—broad, deep knowledge—is to know true ends from false, and lofty things from low. To know the thoughts and deeds that have marked man’s progress is to feel the great heart-throbs of humanity through the centuries; and if one does not feel in these pulsations a heavenward striving, one must indeed be deaf to the harmonies of life. CORNELL NOTE-TAKING: BIG Question Use the Cornell Note-Taking system to take notes on the excerpt at the left. Record your notes, Reduce them, and then Recap (summarize) them. Record Reduce Try the following approach as you reduce your notes. MY VIEW Comment on what you learned from your own notes. Recap The S tor y of M y Life: C hapters 18–23 219 AFTER YOU READ: Chapters 18–23 Respond and Think Critically 1. What types of leisure activities does Helen enjoy? What do her interests reveal about her personality? [Infer] 2. Who are some of the people Helen mentions as special friends who have contributed to her happiness? Why does she hesitate to speak more candidly about her friendships, calling them “things too sacred to set forth in cold print”? [Interpret] 3. Helen is able to achieve many seemingly impossible goals. Do any of her own goals seem impossible to you? What advice do you think Helen might give you to help you achieve your goals? [Connect] 4. Now that you have finished The Story of My Life, what would you suggest was Helen Keller’s purpose in writing the work? What lessons about life does the autobiography attempt to teach? [Analyze] 5. What Really Matters? Now that you have finished reading the autobiography, what, in your view, mattered most to Helen Keller? [Interpret] 22 0 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 5 APPLY BACKGROUND Reread Build Background on page 211. How did that information help you understand or appreciate what you read in the autobiography? AFTER YOU READ: Chapters 18–23 Literary Element Anecdote 1. In a series of anecdotes, Helen Keller describes her encounters with many of the thinkers and artists of her day. Which of these stories affected you most strongly? Why? [Connect] 2. In Chapter 23, Helen Keller reveals that she doesn’t know what it means to be bored with other people as “the hands of people I meet are dumbly eloquent to me.” What does she mean by this? [Interpret] Vocabulary Practice A synonym is a word that has the same or nearly the same meaning as another word. Match each boldfaced vocabulary word below with its synonym. Use a thesaurus or dictionary to check your answers. 1. caricature 2. encumber 3. panorama 4. remonstrate 5. tedium a. squabble b. transformation c. burden d. sketch e. dulled f. vista g. monotony Academic Vocabulary Reading Skill Analyze Historical Context 1. Do you think getting an education would be easier for someone like Helen Keller in today’s world? Why or why not? [Connect] One of the things that has made The Story of My Life so popular over the years is the author’s refusal to allow society to restrict her from doing the things she dreamed of doing. Using context clues, try to figure out the meaning of the boldface word in the sentence above. Write your guess below. Then check it in a dictionary. 2. In Chapter 22, Helen reveals the things she likes to do in her spare time: walk with her dog, play solitaire and other games, visit museums, knit and crochet, read, and so on. In what way is this list similar to and different from what young people like to do today? [Analyze] The S tor y of M y Life: C ha pters 18–23 221 AFTER YOU READ: Chapters 18–23 Writing Research and Report Write a Script Although there is hardly any dialogue in The Story of My Life, many of the events depicted contain their own special kind of drama. Write a short script based on one of the anecdotes in the text. For example, you might choose to portray Helen’s meeting with the famous actor Joseph Jefferson, or her encounter with Oliver Wendell Holmes. Remember that scripted scenes are not just about what the characters say, but also about what they do. Write the stage directions (movements you wish the actors to perform) in parentheses. Internet Connection Example JEFFERSON (in a deep theatrical voice): Welcome, Miss Keller! (Jefferson takes Helen’s hand and puts it on his face near his mouth. Then in the same voice) JEFFERSON: Welcome, Miss Keller! (Helen smiles.) When you have finished writing your scene, proofread it and rehearse it briefly with a classmate. Then perform it for the class. Jot down some notes here first. Assignment Helen Keller meets and even becomes friends with a number of famous literary figures. Choose one of the authors she mentions in Chapter 23, and conduct Internet research to find out about the author’s life. Report on your findings and include a brief sample quote from your chosen author’s work. Get Ideas Before you begin your research, skim through Chapter 23 to read anecdotes about Helen Keller’s meetings with literary figures. Based on these meetings, which author interests you most? Create a web diagram around that author’s name. Make a list of specific research questions to answer: • What are the author’s major works? • For what type of literature is the author best known? • What factors influenced the author’s work? • What are the birth and death dates of the author? Research Remember that the Internet is an amazing resource, but it is filled with information of all kinds—some of which is not factual or reliable. As you research, use the questions below to evaluate the reliability of each Web site. • Is the site associated with a reputable organization? • Can the information be verified in other sources? Are there grammatical or factual errors that make the site seem questionable? • Is the content factual, or does it contain opinion? As you research, record the answers to your research questions in a two-column chart. Put the questions on the left and the answers on the right. When you have found all the relevant information, organize the answers in a logical sequence to prepare your report. Report Use the information from the reputable sources you located on the Internet as the basis of your report. Include your chart as a visual aid. Create a source list of properly formatted citations for any Web sites from which you took information. 22 2 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 5 WORK WITH RELATE D READINGS The Story of My Life The following questions refer to the Related Readings in Glencoe’s Literature Library edition of this autobiography. Support your answers with details from the texts. Write your answers on a separate sheet of paper, but jot down some notes first on the lines provided. Selected Letters Helen Keller Make Connections Evaluate the tone of the letters. Does the tone vary from one letter to another? How is the tone of the letters different from the tone of the autobiography? On His Deafness; Of One Who Neither Sees Nor Hears Robert F. Panara; Richard Watson Gilder Make Connections Evaluate the apparent attitudes toward disability expressed by Panara and Gilder in their poems and by Keller in The Story of My Life. What are their attitudes? What do their attitudes suggest about personal limitations? from The Miracle Worker: A Play for Television William Gibson Make Connections Review Chapter 4 of The Story of My Life. Compare Helen Keller’s account of the water pump scene to its dramatization in The Miracle Worker. How does reading the scene from the play affect your reaction to the event described in the autobiography? from Call Me Anna: The Autobiography of Patty Duke Patty Duke and Kenneth Turan Make Connections How is concentration an important factor in Patty Duke’s preparation for the role of Helen Keller and in Helen Keller’s own life? How are Duke’s learning experiences similar to Keller’s? from The Sound and Silence: What Made Alexander Graham Bell Invent the Telephone? Joseph Epstein Make Connections Review Keller’s brief discussion of Bell in Chapter 23 (pp. 103–104) of The Story of My Life. What does her description reveal about Bell’s character? Why do you think Bell’s friendship was especially important to Keller? The S tor y of My Li f e 223 CO NNECT TO OTHER LITER AT URE LITERATURE EXCERPT: The Night Ghosts Then I realized the light was strange. It glowed and ebbed and seemed to fill too much space to be a regular light source. It was low to the ground, and wide. I was still not frightened, and would probably not have become frightened except that the dogs suddenly started to sing. I have already talked about some of their songs. Rain songs and first-snow songs and meat songs and come-backand-stay-with-us songs and even puppytraining songs, but I had heard this song only once, when an old dog had died in the kennel. It was a death song. And that frightened me. They all sat. I could see them quite well in the glow from the light—the soft glow, the green glow, the ghost glow. It crept into my thinking without my knowing it: the ghost glow. Against my wishes I started thinking of all the things in my life that had scared me. Ghosts and goblins and dark nights and snakes under the bed and sounds I didn’t know and bodies I had found and graveyards under covered pale moons and death, death, death . . . And they sang and sang. The cold song in the strange light. For a time I 22 4 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 5 could do nothing but stand on the back of the wheeled rig and stare at the light with old, dusty terror. But curiosity was stronger. My legs moved without my wanting them to move and my body followed them, alongside the team in the dark, holding to each dog like a security blanket until I reached the next one, moving closer to the light until I was at the front and there were no more dogs to hold. The light had gotten brighter, seemed to pulse and flood back and forth, but I still could not see the source. I took another step, then another, trying to look around the corner, deeply feeling the distance from the dogs, the aloneness. Two more steps, then one more, leaning to see around the corner and at last I saw it and when I did it was worse. It was a form. Not human. A large, standing form glowing in the dark. The light came from within it, a cold-glowing green light with yellow edges that diffused the shape, making it change and grow as I watched. I felt my heart slam up into my throat. CONNECT TO OTHER LIT ERATURE Compare the autobiography you have just read with the literature selection at the left, which is excerpted from “The Night Ghosts” by Gary Paulsen in Glencoe Literature. Then answer the questions below. Compare & Contrast 1. Voice The voices of Gary Paulsen and Helen Keller, narrators of “The Night Ghosts” and The Story of My Life, respectively, share a number of similarities. What are these similarities, and how does each work benefit from them? WRITE ABOUT IT Both Helen Keller’s attempt to gain an education and Gary Paulsen’s travels in remote areas with a pack of dogs reveal clear notions of what each of them feels is truly important. Briefly compare and contrast the inferences you made about the two authors’ views. 2. Flashback You will recall that in Chapter 14 of The Story of My Life, author Helen Keller provides a flashback about her story “The Frost King” and the trouble it caused. Like The Story of My Life, Gary Paulsen’s “The Night Ghosts” is written in the past tense; it is his recollection of a nighttime trip with his dogs. If there were a flashback in this story, what further information or clarification might it provide? 3. Anecdote Think about some of the anecdotes Helen Keller tells about the way she learned to understand, read, and talk. Compare this with Gary Paulsen’s encounter with the strange green light. What common personality trait do these anecdotes reveal about their narrators? The S tor y of My Li f e 225 RES POND THROUGH WRITING Autobiographical Narrative Apply Flashback Helen Keller uses a flashback to examine a situation that has continued to bother her over the years since it happened. Think of a situation in your own past that has stuck with you over the course of time. Using the element of flashback, write an autobiographical narrative of at least 1,500 words about this situation. Prewrite Brainstorm, talk with your family, or read though old journals to stimulate your memory. When you have identified the event or situation you wish to write about, spend 10 or 15 minutes freewriting (writing without stopping or editing) to get the basic events, emotions, and ideas down on paper. Draft To create an effective flashback, introduce the event or situation from a more current perspective. Use a chart like the one below to help you. UNDERSTAND THE TASK • In an autobiographical narrative, the author (in this case, you) tells a sequence of events from his or her life and reveals the personal significance of the experience. • A flashback tells about something that happened before that point in the story or before the story began. Grammar Tip Usage Helen Keller opens many sentences, and even many new paragraphs, with a conjunction: How I Feel Now Why I Feel This Way Based on a Past Event Details: Details: “Then he evidently retracted his favourable judgment, why I do not know. Nor did I know the details of the investigation.” When you have created a vivid flashback scene, transition your writing smoothly back to the present. Be careful about using the conjunctions and, but, or, or nor as the first word in a sentence. Conjunctions by definition are connectors, or words that connect one group of words with another. Revise Check your work to make sure you have smooth transitions into and out of the flashback. Then read your work aloud to clear up any confusing areas or rough spots. Use the following questions when considering opening a sentence using a conjunction: Edit and Proofread Edit your writing so that it expresses your thoughts effectively and is well organized. Carefully proofread for grammar, punctuation, and spelling errors. • Would the sentence function just as well without the introductory conjunction? • Would the sentence beginning with the conjunction be better if added to the end of the previous sentence? Write your initial paragraphs from the perspective of the present or how you feel now. Use this introduction as the jumping-off point for your flashback. Obviously, the past event you note in the chart will be the subject of your flashback. Aim for a clear, straightforward style. 22 6 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 5 The Glory Field Walter Dean Myers The G l ory Fi el d 227 INTRODUCTI ON TO THE NOVEL The Glory Field Walter Dean Myers “ The Lewis family . . . owes its growth— indeed its very survival—to the fortitude of several remarkable teenagers, whose sacrifices and decisions throughout the family’s 250-year history are highlighted in six self-contained but seamlessly interrelated tales. . . . ” —Elizabeth Bush, Bulletin of the Center for Children’s Books, 1994 The Glory Field begins in 1753 when eleven-year-old Muhammad Bilal is kidnapped by slave traders who attack his African village. Though fictional, the character Muhammad could be one of the more than eleven million Africans taken from their homes between the 1400s and the 1800s. Muhammad is forced onto a slave ship, where he struggles to survive a horrific journey that eventually takes him to a plantation on an island off the South Carolina coast. There, as an enslaved worker, he labors on the land that later is called the Glory Field by his descendants. Many of these descendants use the last name of Lewis. A Journey Through Time The Glory Field spans the years from 1753 to 1994. The novel is set in three primary locations: coastal South Carolina, Chicago, and New York City. One location—the South Carolina land that the Lewis family calls the Glory Field—is central to the novel. 22 8 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 6 Family members first work this land as enslaved people on the Live Oaks Plantation. Plantations and Slavery The plantation economy in America began when the southern colonies were first settled. Fertile lands were made into large farms of between two and ten thousand acres. Main crops included tobacco, cotton, sugarcane, rice, hemp, and indigo. To grow these crops, planters needed many workers. By the mid-1700s, plantation owners were getting these workers largely through the trade in enslaved Africans. More than five thousand newly enslaved Africans arrived each year. A typical large Southern plantation usually housed between fifty and two hundred enslaved people. Plantations were mini-villages. Crops were processed through milling or grinding; lumber was treated at the sawmill; and animals were raised, housed, and slaughtered. Enslaved people, some of whom became quite skilled, performed these tasks. They also cleaned the planter’s large manor house, cooked his family’s food, washed the clothing, and performed scores of other daily tasks. Enslaved people also did most of the field work—planting, tending, and harvesting the crops. Because the planter wasn’t paying his workers, he made a great deal of money INTRODUCTION TO THE NOVEL selling his crops and could then buy the manufactured goods he needed. Thus, the South had few factories or cities. Becoming Landowners In the novel, after the Civil War, the Lewis family stays on a piece of land its members farmed as enslaved workers. They become landowners, as some historical African Americans did. These new landowners received their land in one of several ways. Sometimes plantations were split up among formerly enslaved workers. At other times, the government helped freed African Americans buy land at reduced costs. A large number of African Americans ended up working the land but not actually owning it, paying rent or a share of the crops to the former slaveholders. A Long History of Injustice The first Africans brought to this continent came to what is now South Carolina as early as 1526. Over the next three centuries, millions of others were brought by force primarily to the West Indies and to the southern United States. They came from many different nations and cultures within Africa, each with unique characteristics. Once in North America, nearly all became enslaved workers in farming communities. Even after the Civil War ended slavery, African Americans in southern states often faced racism, limited job opportunities, and difficult living conditions. To try to escape these problems, many African Americans left rural areas and moved to northern cities. They went to such places as Chicago’s South Side and New York City’s Harlem, where they built strong and vital communities. Although life was better in many ways for African Americans who moved north, they still faced racism and discrimination. The civil rights movement of the 1950s and 1960s arose in response to the injustices African Americans faced in their everyday lives, both in the South and in the North. African Americans struggled to gain their full civil rights; a number of whites and people of other races joined in the struggle. The civil rights movement resulted in the passage of new laws designed to ensure full civil rights to Americans of all races. The G l ory Fi el d 229 MEET THE AUTHOR Walter Dean Myers (1937– ) “ [Writing for black children] . . . meant capturing the subtle rhythms of language and movement and weaving it all, the sound and the gesture, the sweat and the prayers, into the recognizable fabric of black life. ” —Walter Dean Myers, New York Times Book Review, 1987 Walter Dean Myers was born in 1937 and grew up mostly in the Harlem neighborhood of New York City. He moved there as a young child, after his mother’s death, to live with foster parents. The Harlem of Myers’s childhood was a close-knit community with a strong church presence, many artists, and an abundance of hardworking families. His foster mother taught him to read at the age of four, and soon he was reading the daily newspaper to her. When he was ten or eleven years old, he began to write fiction, filling up notebooks with his stories. Although Myers won several writing contests during high school, family members did not take his writing seriously because they did not consider writing to be a “real” job. Limited Choices Myers’s teenage years, like those of the main characters in The Glory Field, contained an important turning point. He began to feel during 23 0 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 6 high school that his career choices were defined not so much by his abilities as by his family’s finances and by his race. He saw few opportunities for an African American male who was good at writing. As Myers faced this moment of compromise, he became angry. He left school to join the army, though years later he did complete college. After the army, Myers worked at a series of jobs to keep a roof over his head. He married and had two children. He also committed himself to a writing career, writing every day and trying to get published. Myers got his big break in 1968 when his book Where Does the Day Go? won a contest for African American writers. First Novel An encounter at a party was the next important turning point for the author. An editor who had enjoyed one of Myers’s short stories, but thought it was the opening of a novel, asked him how the story continued. Myers made it up right there at the party. That novel, Fast Sam, Cool Clyde, and Stuff (1975), was the first of the many young adult novels that have made Myers so popular. Many of Myers’s books have won awards, including Somewhere in the Darkness (1992) and Now Is Your Time!: The AfricanAmerican Struggle for Freedom (1991). BEFORE YOU READ: July 1753–April 1900 Connect to the Literature What personal characteristics might have helped enslaved African Americans find the courage to survive brutal and dehumanizing conditions? How much courage do you think it took to try to escape from slavery and find freedom? Write a Journal Entry In your journal, explore your responses to the questions above. Try to imagine what it was like to be considered the lawful property of a slaveholder and to have none of the rights that Americans today take for granted. NOVEL NOTEBOOK Keep a special notebook to record entries about the novels that you read this year. SUMMARIZE Summarize in one or two sentences the most important idea(s) in Build Background. Build Background Slavery and Segregation The African slave trade reached its peak in the mid-1700s, not long after colonies such as Virginia passed laws allowing enslaved Africans to be owned as property. Most enslaved workers lived on plantations, often in shacks. Both house and field workers spent their days serving their owners, from dawn until the work was done—often eighteen hours at a stretch. For field workers, this meant backbreaking labor caring for crops. Food supplies from the owner were small, so workers were often hungry. Worst of all, enslaved people had no control over their own lives. Families could be separated at the owner’s whim. Enslaved people could not marry without the owner’s consent. They were not allowed to learn to read, nor could they leave the plantation, or gather in a group, or even hold religious rituals, without the owner’s permission. Following the Civil War, all enslaved African Americans were finally freed. Though African Americans gained many legal rights in the years after the Civil War, they were not always able to truly exercise these rights. “Jim Crow Laws” legally kept African Americans and whites segregated in many parts of the South. For example, African Americans could not attend the same schools as whites or sit with whites in restaurants and theaters. It was not until the 1950s and 1960s that most laws supporting racial segregation were struck down. The Glor y Field: July 1753 –A pri l 190 0 231 BEFORE YOU READ: July 1753–April 1900 Set Purposes for Reading 왘 BIG Question How Do You Keep from Giving Up? Sometimes, you might feel as if the whole world is against you. Other times, you might feel as if a situation is hopeless. What do you do when faced with such enormous challenges? In the beginning of The Glory Field, you will read about one of the greatest personal challenges anyone could face. Think about how Muhammad Bilal found the inner strength to keep going. Literary Element Plot Plot is the sequence of events in narrative works such as stories, novels, plays, and some nonfiction. The plot begins with exposition, which introduces the story’s characters, setting, and situation. The rising action adds complications to the story’s conflicts, or problems. It leads to the climax, or point of greatest interest or suspense. The falling action is the logical result of the climax, and the resolution presents the final outcome. Understanding the plot helps you organize and understand the events in a narrative. It gives you insight into the actions of a central character, or protagonist. As you read each of the separate stories that make up this novel, identify the central character and the plot elements that tell his or her story. Use the graphic organizer on the following page to help you. Reading Skill Analyze Text Features When you analyze, you look closely at the parts of something in order to understand the whole work. Text features are special ways of presenting information. These include titles, heads, subheads, and graphics such as charts, maps, and diagrams. When you analyze text features in a work of fiction, you look for any clues to meaning that are signaled by such features. You also look for any special features that are set off in the novel. In this novel, the family trees and part openers are prominent features. Analyzing text features can help you understand the overall plan of a work, the separate parts of a work, and the places where there is a break in the action. Analyzing the family trees in this work can help you understand the connections between family members over time. As you read, use the family trees to remind you of who is who. Use a chart like the one at the right to record information. 23 2 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 6 Vocabulary forage [fôr ij] v. to search for food Without food, they were forced to forage for berries and roots. sporadic [spə rad ik] adj. occurring occasionally Here, water is always available, but in some places, the supply is sporadic. treacherous [trech ər əs] adj. marked by hidden danger Boulders and roots made the path on the cliff treacherous at night. tussle [tus əl] n. a physical struggle Morgan got a cut lip from the tussle, and Mel got a bloody nose. uppity [up ə tē] adj. acting as if better than others The uppity young man would not clean the table after himself. Character Muhammad Bilal Information from Family Tree ACTIV E READING: July 1753–April 1900 Muhammad, Lizzy, and Elijah each face a challenging obstacle. As you read, identify the main problem or conflict each character faces, note the climax of each character’s battle to overcome the problem, and record how each conflict is resolved. Muhammad kidnapped, imprisoned, aboard slave ship in shackles and chains climax conflict resolution Lizzy climax conflict resolution Elijah climax conflict resolution The Glor y Field: July 1753 –A pri l 190 0 233 INTERACTIVE READING: Literar y Element Literary Element Plot Explain why the highlighted words are part of the rising action of the plot. How does it add complications to the story’s conflicts, or problems? 23 4 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 6 Novel Excerpt: March 1864 “Lem, you think being free means being all excited all the time?” “You excited?” Lem asked. “Or you just scared?” “Little of both, I think,” Lizzy answered. Lem reached out and took her hand. “You and me being scared together is all right,” he said. “I can think of helping to get you some place safe, and that makes me feel good.” “Don’t be thinking too hard on me, Lem.” Lizzy swung the hand that Lem held. “You don’t know what I’m going to be doing—” They had heard it at the same time. The hounds! Lizzy stood stock-still, holding her breath. In the distance she could hear them. Hounds barking in the night air, their yelps coming quickly as they moved along. Lizzy lifted the bottom hem of her dress and started running away from the sound. Lem was running, too. He ran ahead of her and she ran faster, trying to catch up with him. She could feel her face contorting with the fear of the moment, with the panic that she felt. Lem was slowing down. Lizzy could hear him gasping for breath. She felt a sharp pain in her side, but she didn’t stop. She ran and ran until her legs felt heavy and her thighs burned with the effort. She stopped for a moment, leaning heavily against a tree and trying to stop the rushing of her breath, the pounding of her temples, so she could listen for the hounds. She heard them. They sounded further away, but she knew that if the dogs had their scent they would pick it up again. “We got to keep going!” Lem said. “We walk for a while, then run for a while. But we got to keep going!” They pushed on, running for a while, walking when they couldn’t run, stopping as little as possible. But each time they stopped, the dogs seemed closer. . . . “I see the dogs!” Lem said. INTERACT IVE READING: Literar y Element Lizzy turned and looked, but she didn’t see anything. She squinted and pushed her head forward. Then she saw them, four riders on dark horses, carrying torches, the dogs running ahead of them. They weren’t more than a few minutes away, Lizzy thought. She turned and, grabbing Lem’s arm, started off again. They ran toward the lights, which soon were clearly campfires. They stopped. Soldiers weren’t any better than the patrollers. Lizzy turned and looked behind her. The riders had also stopped. “They pointing at us!” Lizzy said. “No, I think they pointing at them fires,” Lem said. He was down on one knee. Lizzy got down with him and looked at the riders behind them. They were still looking in their direction and pointing. But now Lizzy could see they were pointing at the fires. One of them whistled and the dogs stopped in the field. They were whining and circling, eager to get on. There were two more whistles, and the dogs circled one more time and headed back. Lem and Lizzy stayed low as they moved toward the campfires. There were shadows among the fires, and once in a while they could make out a person. They couldn’t see what they looked like. “Hold it!” Lizzy jumped and grabbed her arms. Lem started to run, and two men with rifles jumped in front of him. One swung his rifle, and Lizzy watched as Lem reeled backwards and fell heavily in the dark field. Literary Element Plot Is this the climax, or is it more rising action? Explain your answer. The Glor y Field: July 1753 –A pri l 190 0 235 INTERACTIVE READING: Reading Skill Reading Skill Novel Excerpt: March 1864–April 1900 Analyze Text Features How do the part heading and the family tree help you understand the relationship between each of the characters in this part of the novel and the characters in the first part of the novel? MARCH 1864, LIVE OAKS PLANTATION, CURRY ISLAND, SOUTH CAROLINA THE LEWIS FAMILY, 1864 Dolly ◆ b. 1807 Joshua Lewis ◆ Neela Foster b. 1821 b. 1818 Lem Lewis b. 1847 23 6 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 6 Richard Lewis Lizzy b. 1852 b. 1850 ? Moses Lewis ◆ Saran b. 1825 b. 1827 Yero Lewis b. 1857 INTERACT IVE READING: Reading Skill Reading Skill Analyze Text Features Explain how these text features let you know what has stayed the same and what is different in this section of the novel. APRIL 1900, CURRY ISLAND, SOUTH CAROLINA THE LEWIS FAMILY, 1900 Moses Lewis ◆ Saran b. 1825 b. 1827 Lem Lewis b. 1847 Richard Lewis ◆ Lizzy b. 1852 b. 1850 Elijah Lewis b. 1885 Yero Lewis ◆ Lois Quincy b. 1857 b. 1855 Abby Lewis b. 1885 The Glor y Field: July 1753 –A pri l 190 0 237 ON-PAGE N OTE-TAKING: BIG Question MARK IT UP Are you allowed to write in your novel? If so, then mark up the pages as you read, or reread, to help with your note-taking. Develop a shorthand system, including symbols, that works for you. Here are some ideas: Underline = important idea Bracket = text to quote Asterisk = just what you were looking for Checkmark = might be useful Circle = unfamiliar word or phrase to look up 왘 BIG Question How Do You Keep from Giving Up? What reassurances do the characters give each other about their situation? Mark up the excerpt, looking for evidence of how it expresses or answers the Big Question. 23 8 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 6 Novel Excerpt: April 1900 “Elijah . . . Elijah . . .” Grandma Saran rubbed the back of his hand. “It ain’t about handling a gun. It’s about going on. And looking for a better day. And that’s what you got to do. You a Lewis. And you got something in you what’s been passed down from generation to generation, from man to man. We come a long way, from them shackles to now, but we still got so long to go.” “Everything was so good this morning—” “It’s still good, Elijah,” Grandma Saran said. “It’s still good. As long as God is still ruling heaven, it’s still good. . . . Goldie had helped make the basket of food he was taking. She handed it to him and whispered in his ear that she loved him. Elijah kissed Grandma Saran, who turned quickly away and went to the wagon. “You ain’t going to marry nobody till . . .” “I ain’t going to marry nobody till you get back, Elijah,” Goldie finished the sentence for him. “I won’t even think of nobody or nothing until you get back.” Elijah took her shoulders in his hands and pulled her to him. Her face, as they kissed, was wet with tears and puffy from crying. The kiss itself was quick and salty from the tears. It was the first time that they had kissed like this, like a man and a woman, and both of them knew that it might be the last. He moved away from her and saw her eyes searching his face, looking for some sign that things would be all right. “I know I’ll be back,” Elijah said, softly. “Don’t you worry on it.” There wasn’t a colored car so he had to sit on a crate in one of the boxcars. The conductor said that when they got to Illinois he could ride where he wanted. The train rocked through the darkness, through the night. Elijah Lewis closed his eyes and felt the weariness in his bones come down on him. He closed his eyes and waited for sleep, wondering if he would ever wake to a better day. CORNELL NOTE-TAKING: BIG Question Use the Cornell Note-Taking system to take notes on the excerpt at the left. Record your notes, Reduce them, and then Recap (summarize) them. Record Reduce Try the following approach as you reduce your notes. MY VIEW Write down your thoughts on the excerpt. Recap The Glor y Field: July 1753 –A pri l 190 0 239 AFTER YOU READ: July 1753–April 1900 Respond and Think Critically 1. Explain what happened to Muhammad. What do you learn about his character from his reactions to the experience? [Infer] 2. What happens at Live Oaks Plantation to change Lizzy’s life? How does she feel about her place on the plantation before and after this event? [Compare] 3. What does Elijah do to try to prove his independence and maturity? How does his behavior affect those around him? [Interpret] 4. Why do you think it is so important for Elijah to feel like a man? What does he learn from his experiences? [Evaluate] 5. How Do You Keep from Giving Up? Not giving up is a theme of this novel. Name three characters from the first three parts of this novel who you think show this theme best. Support your choices with evidence from the novel. [Synthesize] 24 0 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 6 APPLY BACKGROUND Reread Introduction to the Novel on pages 228–229. How did that information help you understand or appreciate what you read in the novel? AFTER YOU READ: July 1753–April 1900 Literary Element Plot 1. What is the most important conflict in this novel so far? Do you think there will be a resolution? Explain your answer by referring to events so far. [Synthesize] Vocabulary Practice On a separate sheet of paper, write the vocabulary word that correctly completes each sentence. If none of the words fits the sentence, write none. forage 2. How is the plot of this novel so far the same or different from the plot of other novels you have read? [Compare] Reading Skill Analyze Text Features 1. The part names, such as “JULY 1953, OFF THE COAST OF SIERRA LEONE, WEST AFRICA” tell you the time and place for each part. What do all the part names together tell you about the organization and content of the novel? [Analyze] sporadic treacherous tussle uppity 1. The _______________ woman helped everyone she could. 2 The supply of gasoline was _______________ during the war. 3. The _______________ patron claimed the best seat in the audience for himself. 4 When the deer are hungry, they will sometimes _______________ in suburban yards. 5. After the _______________, the girls were sent home to think about improving their behavior. 6. Matt was too _______________ ever to brag about an achievement. 7. That section of the road can be _______________ during an ice storm. Academic Vocabulary A reader can use the family trees to link the stories and generations of Lewises. In the preceding sentence, what does link mean? To become more familiar with the word link, fill out the graphic organizer below. definition synonyms link 2. Explain why the family trees are a necessary feature of this novel. [Analyze] antonyms sentence The Glor y Field: July 1753 –A pri l 190 0 241 AFTER YOU READ: July 1753–April 1900 Writing Speaking and Listening Personal Response What do you think of the risks Literature Groups that Lizzy and Elijah took? Were their goals worth these risks? Explain by using logical arguments and evidence from the novel. Assignment In the first three parts of the novel, characters are trapped in various ways. The African American characters are physically or economically trapped, while the white characters are trapped by their prejudice. With your group, find and discuss examples of the different kinds of shackles—both literal and figurative—that imprison different characters. Prepare Scan the first three parts of the novel to find examples of being trapped or chained in any way. Assign each member of the group a range of pages to take notes on. Discuss As a group, discuss each possible reference to being trapped or chained in some way. As you present your own ideas, begin with the specific references to the novel and then provide your own interpretation of entrapment. As you listen to others, do so actively by carefully evaluating each point. If you agree, nod politely, or, when the speaker finishes, offer additional evidence to show why the speaker is correct. If you disagree, politely explain why, again using evidence from the novel to support your point. Report Present the results of your group discussion orally to another group. Consider this an informal speaking situation in which you share ideas with an interested audience that is well-acquainted with the topic. You do not have to speak loudly or slowly, but you must speak clearly enough for all to hear and follow. Provide nonverbal signals, such as constant eye contact and natural gestures, to show you are interested both in your topic and your audience’s response. Evaluate Evaluate the individual contributions to the group discussion. Be sure to consider how carefully you looked for references, how clearly you presented your own ideas, how well you used evidence from the novel, and how politely and actively you listened to others. 24 2 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 6 BEFORE YOU READ: May 1930 and Januar y 1964 Connect to the Literature What are some of your goals and dreams? Do you think they will be easy or difficult to achieve? What might be some obstacles or choices you’ll face along the way? Make a List On a sheet of paper, list some of your goals and dreams, reasons you think you can attain that particular goal, and obstacles you may encounter. In addition, list decisions and choices you may have to make as you pursue your ambitions—for example, you might have to give up one goal to fully pursue another. NOVEL NOTEBOOK Keep a special notebook to record entries about the novels that you read this year. WRITE THE CAPTION Write a caption for the image below, using information in Build Background. Build Background The Great Migration and the Civil Rights Era In the early 1900s, many African Americans left the South for northern cities such as New York City and Chicago in search of better jobs, more education, and greater opportunity. Migrating African Americans found jobs, though racism limited the kinds of employment and education African Americans could obtain. Housing was scarce and very expensive. Unlike their southern relatives, African Americans in the North could legally go anywhere. Still, they lived in segregated communities and often were unwelcome in white-owned businesses. During the 1950s and 1960s, Martin Luther King Jr. and other civil rights leaders organized nonviolent protests in the South. Often, police and angry whites responded violently to peaceful protesters. Marchers were attacked and often arrested. The year 1964, when Tommy’s story takes place, held both disaster and triumph for the civil rights movement. Civil rights workers were murdered in Mississippi, while the Civil Rights Act of 1964 brought legal protection against many kinds of discrimination. The Glor y Field: M ay 1930 and Ja nuary 1964 243 BEFORE YOU READ: May 1930 and Januar y 1964 Set Purposes for Reading 왘 BIG Question How Do You Keep from Giving Up? In The Glory Field, you have already met characters who faced one or more great challenges but found the inner strength, the outside help, or both, to keep going. As you read the next parts of this novel, think about what keeps the main character from giving up. Literary Element Setting Setting is the time and place in which a story occurs. The setting includes any elements in which the action takes place: the date and time; geographic region; season; weather; and spaces, such as buildings, rooms, and landscapes. The historical period in which the characters and plot develop is also part of the setting. Setting contributes to the way we feel about a story, helping us understand—and, often, sympathize with—the characters. As you read the next two parts of The Glory Field, think about how the historical setting, including the social, cultural, and political movements of each time period, helps you understand the characters, the plots, and the themes of the novel as a whole. Use the graphic organizer on the following page to record information from the novel. Reading Strategy Question As you read, it helps to take an active role by asking questions. When you question a text, you ask whether information in a selection is important or whether you understand what you’ve read. Sometimes, you question the choices an author makes. Asking questions helps you increase your understanding of a selection. It also helps you remember it better. You can figure out an author’s purpose for writing by asking yourself the right questions. When you question, you • pause to ask questions about parts that puzzle you. • ask why the author made certain choices about organization, characters, setting, and other text elements. • read carefully and look for clues in the text to answer your questions. As you read, think of questions to ask yourself about the novel. Keep track of your questions and any answers or clues to answers you may discover later in the text. You may find it helpful to use a graphic organizer like the one on the right to record your questions. 24 4 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 6 Vocabulary integration [in tə rā shən] n. process of opening schools, businesses, and communities equally to citizens of all races As part of integration, African American students attended the school for the first time. intimidate [in tim ə dāt] v. to frighten The boss used a series of threats to intimidate the workers. predominantly [pri dom ə nənt lē] adv. mostly The area was predominantly suburban, but there were some open spaces. puckish [puk ish] adj. fun; mischievous The puckish girl loved laughter and practical jokes. vitality [v¯ tal ə tē] n. quality of liveliness His vitality amazed us: he was a dad, a marathon runner, and a successful businessman. Question Clues/ Answers ACTIVE READING: May 1930 and Januar y 1964 In both “May 1930” and “January 1964,” aspects of the setting, including social and political movements, pull the main characters in opposing directions. Luvenia feels the pull to leave her Chicago life for the family land on Curry Island. Tommy must choose between personal opportunity and taking a political stand for equal rights. As you read about Luvenia and Tommy, note some of the forces that pull them in these opposing directions. Toward Chicago Toward Curry parents are in Curry and want her to come, too Luvenia Working for Equal Rights Following Personal Dream wants to play college basketball Tommy The Glor y Field: M ay 1930 and Ja nuary 1964 245 INTERACTIVE READING: Literar y Element Literary Element Setting People’s attitudes toward one another are part of a social setting. What attitudes are expressed by this excerpt? 24 6 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 6 Novel Excerpt: January 1964 “With all the mess that’s going on I sure didn’t need this tonight,” Miss Robbins said. “We had to close an hour early.” “What mess?” Tommy asked. “The colored getting ready to march through town and that King coming down here,” Miss Robbins said. “He’s from Atlanta and he should stay in Atlanta. It’s people like him who stirs up the coloreds.” “You take the average one of your black folks around here,” Jed said. He was sitting on a high stool that normally stood on the other side of the counter. “He don’t want race mixing any more than the average white man. But when they start bringing in them people from out of town, things get stirred up. When’s the last time you had any problems between whites and coloreds?” “Negroes can’t get food in here,” Tommy said. “Whoa! They can get anything they want anytime they want it,” Miss Robbins said. “And you’ve been working here long enough to know that. They just can’t sit at the counter and eat it. Most coloreds don’t want to eat here, anyway.” “You can eat in a colored store,” Tommy said. He put the new pipe in place, saw that it fit, and began to handtighten the nuts. “Now I don’t want to eat in a colored store,” Jed said. “And I don’t see why a colored man or woman would want to eat in a white store. And that Reverend King—and I don’t know if he’s a real preacher or not—don’t care where colored people eat. What he wants is race mixing. You hear that speech he made in Washington about little black boys and little white girls playing together?” “Who’s that other one they got up in New York? Malcolm X or something?” Miss Robbins said. “Now he don’t want no race mixing. INTERACT IVE READING: Literar y Element “I don’t trust no man that calls himself ‘X,’ ” Jed said. “That man hates white people something terrible.” . . . “What I think,” Miss Robbins went on, “is that people should leave things the way they were and let people work out what they want to do without people from the outside coming in. Tommy, you certainly don’t have any problems getting along and you never will, because you are a fine young boy. If everybody were like you, we’d all get along just fine.” “Yes, ma’am.” “The truth is that white people are a certain way, and coloreds are a certain way,” Miss Robbins went on. “And Lord knows that doesn’t mean that one race is better than the other. It just means that people are a certain way and get along with people who are like them. You take Jed and you. Jed is better at some things than you are, and you’re better than Jed at some things. If you ask me, I’d rather have you working for me than him any day.” “If I had a big place, would you work for me?” Tommy asked. “Sure I would!” Miss Robbins said. “You being colored would not bother me one bit as long as you paid a decent wage and had decent work. But I would not socialize with you because you are not the kind of person I would socialize with. Everybody has their preferences, and my preferences are for my own people. And don’t you prefer to be around your own people?” “Yes, ma’am.” Literary Element Setting How does this excerpt reflect the social concerns, cultural ideas, and historical events of 1964? The Glor y Field: M ay 1930 and Ja nuary 1964 247 INTERACTIV E READING: Reading Strategy Reading Strategy Question What questions might you ask about the “plot” or Luvenia’s part in it? 24 8 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 6 Novel Excerpt: May 1930 “I once made the mistake of asking Daddy if I could drive the Ford, and he just about laughed in my face,” Florenz continued. “He said that I didn’t know a thing about driving. This is not true, of course, because I’ve driven plenty of times in cars owned by some of the boys at school. Of course, I can’t tell Daddy that, and he wouldn’t count it anyway.” “He should trust you,” Luvenia said. “Of course, he should,” Florenz said. “But, as we were saying before, Daddy doesn’t always do what he’s supposed to do. So we have hatched a small plot.” “And you are part of it!” Katie leaned forward. “Am I going to get into trouble?” Luvenia asked. “Of course not,” Florenz said. “We’ve got this whole thing worked out. Daddy takes this new car—” “The Oldsmobile—” Katie added. “The Oldsmobile,” Florenz went on, “to work almost every day. I think he wants to hire a chauffeur, and I don’t see why he doesn’t, but he hasn’t so far—” “The guilt of the nouveau riche,” Katie chimed in. “How many sugars, Lulu?” “Two, please,” Luvenia added in the same tone as the two white girls. “Anyway,” Florenz clucked at Katie for interrupting, “so what we want to do is to call him and tell him that we have to take you to the hospital.” “Me?” “Right. You’re perfect,” Katie said. “This part is my idea.” “What we’re going to tell him is that you have these terrible cramps and that we have to take you all the way across town to a colored doctor,” Florenz said. “We’re going to tell him that we made a dreadful mistake,” Katie added. “We tried to get a car service to take you, but when they realized that you were colored and that you had ‘female trouble,’ they refused.” “I don’t have female trouble,” Luvenia said. “Of course not,” Florenz said. “But Daddy’s too old- INTERACT IVE READING: Reading Strategy fashioned to ask me questions about it. And there’s five dollars in it for you if we pull it off.” “He won’t be mad at me, will he?” “How can he be mad at your being sick?” Florenz asked. She was already picking up the telephone. “Now, the only possible hitch is if he asks to speak to you. You must just tell him that you feel terrible.” “Then moan a little and give the phone back to Florenz,” Katie said. “Then we’ll all hop into the car, take a spin around the park, and come back!” “And I will have established my driving!” Florenz said. Luvenia wasn’t at all sure about the adventure, but the idea of it was exciting. She put her hands under the table and clasped them tightly. She was hoping for all the world that Mr. Deets would not ask to speak to her. As Florenz dialed and waited for someone to answer the telephone, Katie held her stomach and pretended to be in great distress, which almost made Luvenia laugh aloud. “Hello? Country Star Products?” Florenz exhaled heavily as she got into her part. “Yes, this is Florenz Deets. May I speak to my father? And please hurry. It’s an emergency!” The girl rolled her eyes up as she listened to the secretary on the other end of the telephone. She signaled silence from her co-conspirators with a finger on her lips. “No, I have to speak to my father,” she said in a response to some question from the other end of the telephone, adding just the right touch of authority. She waited again, and then her eyes widened as she got back into her role. “Daddy, I just made the biggest mistake. Lulu’s here and she’s sick. Female trouble. I think she might even be in the family way.” Luvenia swallowed hard. She wasn’t “in the family way” and didn’t want anyone to think she was. Reading Strategy Question What other question could you ask about what happens in this excerpt or the choices the author makes by including it? The Glor y Field: M ay 1930 and Ja nuary 1964 249 ON-PAGE N OTE-TAKING: BIG Question MARK IT UP Are you allowed to write in your novel? If so, then mark up the pages as you read, or reread, to help with your note-taking. Develop a shorthand system, including symbols, that works for you. Here are some ideas: Underline = important idea Bracket = text to quote Asterisk = just what you were looking for Checkmark = might be useful Circle = unfamiliar word or phrase to look up 왘 BIG Question How Do You Keep from Giving Up? Who does not give up in this passage? Why? Mark up the excerpt, looking for evidence of how it expresses or answers the Big Question. 25 0 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 6 Novel Excerpt: May 1930 “Thank you, everybody,” Luvenia said, still looking at Miss Etta. “I really appreciate you coming.” “And this girl can do up some hair!” Miss Etta said. “Soon as she gets her shop together we’ll be letting you know.” “Go on, girl!” Two men were asleep on the coats and had to be wakened. One woman said it was too early to break the party up, and Miss Etta said that she could stay and party by herself if she wanted to. A few people stopped and told Luvenia how nice the party was and how much they had enjoyed themselves. “You ever give another rent party, you be sure to let us know!” a young couple said. The man shook Luvenia’s hand awkwardly. As soon as the last person had left, Miss Etta took off her dress and wriggled out of the girdle. “I think everybody enjoyed themselves,” she said. “What you think?” “That you are the most wonderful friend in the world!” Luvenia said. “Well, that is true,” Miss Etta said. “Now I’m going to get me some serious sleep. We’ll talk later.” Mornings in the black neighborhoods in Chicago started earlier than they did in the white neighborhoods. Black men had to deliver the goods that white shopkeepers would sell; black women had to get to white households to put in a full day’s work. Some men and women had to go downtown to look for work with the army of whites that was also looking. Luvenia walked home slowly, realizing for the first time how tired she was. She held the brown paper bag with the rent party money tightly as she walked. She was trying to remember how much the Madame Walker products were. She had glanced in the bag. There was at least fifteen dollars in bills and God only knew how much in change. She knew that if she could make as much doing hair and selling as she thought she could, things would be all right. CORNELL NOTE-TAKING: BIG Question Use the Cornell Note-Taking system to take notes on the excerpt at the left. Record your notes, Reduce them, and then Recap (summarize) them. Record Reduce Try the following approach as you reduce your notes. TO THE POINT Write a few key ideas. Recap The Glor y Field: M ay 1930 and Ja nuary 1964 251 AFTER YOU READ: May 1930 and Januar y 1964 Respond and Think Critically 1. What steps does Luvenia take to try to achieve her goals? What is the outcome of these efforts? From these events, what do you learn about the whites and African Americans in Luvenia’s community? [Conclude] 2. Do you think Mr. Deets treats Luvenia fairly? Give reasons for your answer. [Evaluate] 3. What important decision does Tommy face? How do the events in Johnson City affect his decision? [Infer] 4. Evaluate the important choice that Tommy makes. What does he sacrifice? What does he gain? Do you think he made the right choice? Why or why not? [Evaluate] 5. How Do You Keep from Giving Up? At what points might Luvenia have given up? Why didn’t she? [Conclude] 25 2 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 6 APPLY BACKGROUND Reread Build Background on page 243. How did that information help you understand or appreciate what you read in the novel? AFTER YOU READ: May 1930 and Januar y 1964 Literary Element Setting 1. What is life like in Chicago in 1930 for African Americans? [Interpret] Vocabulary Practice Identify whether the paired words in each set have the same or the opposite meaning. 1. integration and segregation 2. intimidate and frighten 3. predominantly and mostly 2. How are the lives of African Americans in Johnson City, South Carolina, changing or on the brink of change in 1964? [Interpret] 4. puckish and solemn 5. vitality and liveliness Academic Vocabulary Reading Skill Question 1. Write a question about the way the author chose to organize this novel. [Synthesize] When discussing playing professional basketball with Mr. Chase, Tommy asks, “They offered you a contract and everything?” In effect, Tommy is asking Mr. Chase about how close he actually came to playing professional ball. Using context clues, try to figure out the meaning of the word contract in the sentence above. Write your guess below. Then check your guess in a dictionary. 2. Write a question about a choice the author made about what to include or leave out of the description of 1964. [Synthesize] The Glor y Field: M ay 1930 and Ja nuary 1964 253 AFTER YOU READ: May 1930 and Januar y 1964 Writing Connect to Content Areas Write a Letter Put yourself back in time to January Math 1964 in Johnson City. You have just read a newspaper account of Sheriff Moser’s press conference and the treatment Tommy receives while in jail. Write a letter to the editor of your local newspaper about these events. Do your best to use the facts and reasons that a person who actually lived in that time and place might use. Jot down some notes here first. Assignment The sum of fifteen-plus dollars that Luvenia receives from the rent party seems like a fortune to her. How much do you think she would need in today’s dollars to set up a business in Chicago or another large American city? Investigate Use ads from the newspaper of a major American city to find “For Rent” ads that provide an index to today’s cost of living. Find several examples of what it would cost to rent an apartment or small property zoned for commercial use. Print out, photocopy, or cut out ads to support your calculations. Create Assume Luvenia needs the first month’s rent, the last month’s rent, and one month’s rent for a security deposit to open her business. Calculate the total amount of money that the rent party would have to generate just to cover just those costs of starting a business. Then work backward to propose a per-drink cost and the number of drinks that would have to be sold to raise the sum, as well as the number of guests who might consume them. Report Put your information together in a clear, well-organized report. Reflect on any issues or unpredictable factors you think may exist with the rental costs you found. Attach the source material to your report. Be sure it contains URLs or other bibliographic data so that a reader can verify it. 25 4 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 6 BEFORE YOU READ: August 1994 and Epilogue Connect to the Literature When someone in a family has a problem, are other family members obligated to help that person? What if the person doesn’t want to be helped? What if the problem is the result of bad choices the family member has made? Share Ideas Think about your responses to the questions above. Then meet with a partner to discuss your opinions and ideas. Finally, share your thoughts with the class. NOVEL NOTEBOOK Keep a special notebook to record entries about the novels that you read this year. SUMMARIZE Summarize in one sentence the most important idea(s) in Build Background. Build Background Harlem Malcolm Lewis, the main character in the last part of the novel, lives in Harlem, a neighborhood of New York City. Like Chicago’s South Side, Harlem expanded rapidly during the Great Migration. African Americans from the South flooded into the neighborhood between 1910 and 1930. They created an incredibly vital community, filled with a mix of wealthy professionals, entertainers, and struggling working people. One successful Harlem businesswoman was Madame C. J. Walker, who, like Luvenia Lewis, made her fortune creating beauty products for African American women. Harlem offered African Americans a sense of belonging and of community. A center for African American culture, Harlem was home to many artists, writers, and performers. African Americans all over the country wanted to visit Harlem or to create communities in its image. Over the years, however, the quality of life in Harlem declined. According to one of the novel’s characters, integration caused this decline by making it possible for wealthier African Americans to leave Harlem. Malcolm Lewis has benefited from his neighborhood’s proud history. Yet, in the early 1990s, he finds himself living in a Harlem that is sadly deteriorated. A number of buildings are in disrepair, and many people are unemployed. Drug abuse is a serious problem for some people, including a member of Malcolm’s own family. The Glor y Field: August 1994 and Epi l ogue 255 BEFORE YOU READ: August 1994 and Epilogue Set Purposes for Reading 왘 BIG Question How Do You Keep from Giving Up? In this part of The Glory Field, one character faces the challenge of drug addiction. His cousin faces the challenge of trying to help someone who probably needs professional help. As you read, think about what keeps both characters from giving up. Literary Element Tone Tone is an author’s attitude toward his or her subject matter. To identify tone, think about the language the author uses to describe the characters, events, or setting. In fiction, tone is reflected by the emotional attitudes of the characters. Analyzing the tone can help you better understand both the characters and the theme. As you read the final parts of the novel, looks for words and details in text that reveal the characters’ emotional attitudes. Use the graphic organizer on the next page to help you. Reading Strategy Make Generalizations About Theme When you make generalizations, you combine several facts or ideas to make a broad or general statement. Theme is the central message or meaning of the whole poem or story. A theme is not the work’s specific subject. It is a more universal message about life. Making generalizations about theme helps you bring together different characters and plots and tell how they contribute to a single main idea or focus. Use the graphic organizer on the following page to make a generalization about the theme of family in the final parts of the novel. To make a broader generalization about the whole novel, review part of the book to think about what they have in common in terms of theme. You may find it helpful to use a graphic organizer like the one below. Theme July 1753 March 1864 April 1900 May 1930 January 1964 August 1994 Epilogue 256 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 6 Vocabulary censor [sen sər] v. to remove things that might offend Some words cannot be said on television, so editors censor them. fidget [fij it] v. to move or act restlessly After two hours in the car, the children began to fidget and whine. miff [mif] v. to put in a bad mood; to offend Impolite actions always miff Carla, who is never rude. parched [parchd] adj. dried, from heat and lack of water We were parched by the end of the hike because we had not brought enough water. ventilator [vent əl ā´ tər] n. tool or device for letting in fresh air and removing stale air If the ventilator is working, we will have fresh air soon. ACTIVE READING: August 1994 and Epilogue In the last part of the novel, two young men must define their relationship to the Lewis family. Each has had a different experience with the family and has a distinct view of his link to it. As you read, record some of the ways Malcolm and Shep relate to the Lewis family. What do they want from the family? How do they feel about the family and about their connection to it? Malcolm annoyed by Shep’s behavior but wants to help him The Lewis Family Shep The Glor y Field: August 1994 and Epi l ogue 257 INTERACTIVE READING: Literar y Element Literary Element Tone What do you think the author’s attitude is toward calling the chains “memorabilia”? Explain your answer using ideas from the novel. 25 8 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 6 Novel Excerpt: August 1994 “You know, last year I went down to a sale they had in Johnson City,” Planter said. He leaned into the rake, his angular body complementing its dark angle. “It was supposed to be a sale of stuff the sheriff had. He had a set of slave chains. Everybody round here knew where they came from. They came from the Lewis family. They been in our family since the first one of us put his feet in this soil. “We knowed the sheriff’s office had them, but we never thought we could get them back.” “What happened after you bought them?” “Hey! Who’s telling this story?” “You are, Planter.” Malcolm couldn’t stop the smile that came to his face. “Passed down from generation to generation,” Planter said. “Then, during the civil rights time, we lost them. The sheriff got hold of them, and he held them. They brought them out for sale, long with some stolen radios, a shotgun, and some other stolen stuff that nobody claimed. They were trying to raise money for a gym for the police department. That was a good cause.” “You recognized the chains?” “Yeah, I recognized them. But I had to pay dear to get them. You know what they called them?” “What?” “Black memo—Lord what did they call them things?” Planter pushed his hat to the back of his head. “Black something or the other—memorabilia or something.” “Memorabilia?” Malcolm asked. “That’s like things that remind people of historical events?” INTERACT IVE READING: Literar y Element “Yeah, I guess that was it,” Planter said. “Anyway, they had a bidding for it, and I had to give two hundred and nine dollars to get them.” “But you got them,” Malcolm said. “A black person should have them.” “A black person? Those shackles didn’t rob us of being black, son, they robbed us of being human. Who should own them is a human being.” Planter shielded his eyes from the sun. “’Course it would’ve helped if the human being had a little more money than I had.” Planter turned away and went back to picking the sweet potatoes. Malcolm asked him if they had other memorabilia for sale, but he didn’t answer, and Malcolm figured he didn’t want to. They broke for a lunch that was bigger than the dinners Malcolm had in New York. Someone said that they would probably be finished by the next afternoon, and how good it was to be able to bring in a good crop. . . . “I can just look around and see who the farm people are and who the city people are,” Malcolm said. “I don’t see anybody from the city hopping up to get ready to go back out into the field.” “Child, you can say that again,” a dark-skinned woman wearing brand-new jeans said. “Oh, when you get used to it, it’s real good,” a man said. “You bring in your crops, and you can see what you did for the year. Man, that’s a good feeling.” Several of the city people exchanged glances, figuring out just who they all were. It was Planter who jumped up and said that he thought he heard a sweet potato calling his name, as he put on his hat to go back out to the field. Literary Element Tone What attitude or attitudes do you hear from the different characters here about the work of picking the sweet potatoes? The Glor y Field: August 1994 and Epi l ogue 259 INTERACTIV E READING: Reading Strategy Reading Strategy Make Generalizations About Theme In each part of the novel, at least one character’s attitude toward work, circumstances, or goals shows one of the novel’s themes. How do Malcolm’s feelings about his music help show a theme in this part of the novel? 26 0 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 6 Novel Excerpt: Epilogue He closed his eyes and thought of the group, of Deepak playing his heart out, of Daoud and George and all of them, and of Jenn, sitting on the small stool next to her cello, waiting to come in. She was a challenge, a challenge that always brought out the best in him. They had practiced together the whole week, with her memorizing his compositions, adding touches of Chinese classical music that created an almost unbearable tension. Somehow they had all seemed to understand that the music, their music, was about who they were and the search for who they wanted to be. The music had to mean something for all of them, each according to his or her needs. For Malcolm it meant remembering an old man he had met on Curry Island. His mother had called him and told him the bad news that Planter had died. He had flown to Curry for the funeral, had sat in the third car, too far from Planter’s body, too far from the grin and from the strength of the man. After the funeral, he had gone to the Lewis place and had seen the surveyors lining up their poles where the old slave quarters had been. There were going to be tennis courts behind the hotel. Planter would have liked that, thinking about those courts and the people that had walked on that ground. He would have liked the one field they hadn’t touched and wouldn’t touch. Around the Glory Field they had built a stone walk with live oaks on either side. In the field itself they planted azaleas. It was a small field, and Aunt Luvenia had said the architects didn’t put up too much of a fight when the family didn’t want to change the field into a miniature golf course. In the days after the funeral, Malcolm was making the rounds of the colleges. He had decided to major in history, this despite his mother’s insistence that he looked like a doctor. He didn’t know what he wanted to do with String Theory. The group was better than he thought it ever could be, but they were going to different colleges. They had INTERACT IVE READING: Reading Strategy talked about playing together summers or at least getting together now and then just to jam. Then they were invited to play at two colleges, Oberlin and Brown, and they were all reluctant to give up what they had created. A week after the funeral, on the day before String Theory was supposed to leave New York by train for Brown, Aunt Luvenia called him and asked if he had received the package. “What package?” “Planter’s granddaughter sent you something,” his aunt had said. “She sent me a picture of him, and I guess she sent you one, too.” The thought of having a picture of Planter made Malcolm smile. He hoped it would be one of him grinning as only he could, the straw hat pushed far back on his head, the look in his eye that said he knew things that only a man named after a boat stolen in the Civil War could. But when the package came, it wasn’t a picture. Malcolm knew by the weight and by the shape of it what it was. It was the shackles. They had been passed from generation to generation, and now Planter had entrusted them to him. In the quiet of his room, on a day in which the rain beat with a fury against his Harlem window, he lifted the shackles, felt their weight, ran his fingers along the smoothness of the wellworn iron. He had even thought about putting them around his ankles, but knew that it would never be the same. It wasn’t his to experience, only his to know about, to imagine how hard it had been. The weight of the shackles gave substance to all the people who had worn them, and who had triumphed in spite of them. They gave weight, even, to those who had been broken by them, or by the invisible shackles they had found along their way. Reading Strategy Make Generalizations About Theme How do the shackles, or slave chains, help show the same theme over time in this novel? The Glor y Field: August 1994 and Epi l ogue 261 ON-PAGE N OTE-TAKING: BIG Question MARK IT UP Are you allowed to write in your novel? If so, then mark up the pages as you read, or reread, to help with your note-taking. Develop a shorthand system, including symbols, that works for you. Here are some ideas: Underline = important idea Bracket = text to quote Asterisk = just what you were looking for Checkmark = might be useful Circle = unfamiliar word or phrase to look up 왘 BIG Question How Do You Keep from Giving Up? What keeps Shep from giving up in this passage? Mark up the excerpt, looking for evidence of how it expresses or answers the Big Question. 26 2 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 6 Novel Excerpt: August 1994 There was a half-acre left to go the next day when Planter, who was telling Malcolm the difference between long- and short-grain rice, suddenly stopped and straightened up. Malcolm bent over, looked up and saw Shep on his hands and knees between the rows. He was throwing up. Jennie Lewis went to him, and Malcolm put his hoe down. “Wait a minute, son,” Planter said. He put a big hand on Malcolm’s shoulder. Jennie got down on her knees next to Shep and put her arm around his shoulder. She was talking to him, whispering in his ear. “Planter, he’s got a problem,” Malcolm said. “We got those problems down here the same as you got them in New York,” he said. “We know what they are.” Malcolm looked at the other people in the field. They had all stopped working and were looking toward Jennie and Shep. “What’s she doing?” Malcolm asked. “Trying to get him to stand up,” Planter said. “Trying to get him to take that first step on his own.” The shadows were short. Malcolm’s shadow was less than half his size. Malcolm looked at Shep, then away. The sky was clear. In the distance a jet liner left a long, white vapor trail that spread as the plane moved away. “Planter, I think he needs help,” Malcolm said. “Yeah, he do,” Planter said. “And his help starts from within himself.” The first move was just Shep pushing himself up off his hands, so that he knelt on his knees. Jennie was kneeling with him. Shep’s shoulders lifted and fell, as if he were taking a deep breath, and then he stood. “All right, brother!” a man called out. “All right!” A woman came to him with a cup of water, and he drank it. Then Jennie went back and brought him his hoe. Malcolm was glad that Shep had got back on his feet. He wanted with all of his heart for Shep to make it through just this one reunion, maybe just this one day, maybe just one more row of sweet potatoes. Malcolm looked around and saw that the work had picked up again. They were all glad to see Shep on his feet. CORNELL NOTE-TAKING: BIG Question Use the Cornell Note-Taking system to take notes on the excerpt at the left. Record your notes, Reduce them, and then Recap (summarize) them. Record Reduce Try the following approach as you reduce your notes. MY VIEW Write down your thoughts on the excerpt. Recap The Glor y Field: August 1994 and Epi l ogue 263 AFTER YOU READ: August 1994 and Epilogue Respond and Think Critically 1. Describe Malcolm’s and Shep’s life situations. How are the two similar and different? What do the two boys share? [Compare] 2. What do Malcolm and Shep each learn during their trip and their time on Curry Island? [Synthesize] 3. Why do you think memory and remembering are so important to the Lewis family? [Conclude] 4. Do you think Shep and Malcolm are believable characters? Why or why not? [Evaluate] 5. How Do You Keep from Giving Up? In what ways is Planter a “nevergive-up” character? [Synthesize] 26 4 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 6 APPLY BACKGROUND Reread Meet the Author on page 230. How did that information help you understand or appreciate what you read in the novel? AFTER YOU READ: August 1994 and Epilogue Literary Element Tone 1. What tone, or emotional attitude, does Planter Lewis reflect through his words and actions? Use evidence from the novel in your answer. [Synthesize] Vocabulary Practice Respond to these questions. 1. Which of these would an authority be more likely to censor—a newspaper column or a parking violation? 2. When would you be most likely to fidget—while eating a tasty meal or while waiting in a long line? 2. What is the tone of the ending of the novel? Which words reveal the tone? [Conclude] 3. Which of these might miff your best friend— inviting him to a party or leaving him out of a plan? 4. Where is the soil more likely to be parched—in a forest or in a desert? 5. Where would you expect to find a ventilator—on top of a mountain or in a locker room? Reading Strategy Make Generalizations About Theme 1. What theme do all the separate plots combine to present about the history of African Americans in America? Use details from the novel to support your answer. [Synthesize] Academic Vocabulary Walter Dean Myers incorporates a significant amount of history into his novel. In the preceding sentence, significant refers to a large or substantial amount. When have you poured a significant amount of something into a goal, project, or other undertaking? Why do you think of the amount as significant? 2. What theme do all the separate plots combine to present about family? Use details from the novel to support your answer. [Synthesize] The Glor y Field: August 1994 and Epi l ogue 265 AFTER YOU READ: August 1994 and Epilogue Write with Style Speaking and Listening Apply Tone Performance Assignment In this novel, the shackles from the days of slavery, the sense of family, and the field on Curry Island are all things that the Lewises care about deeply. Think about the people, places, or objects in your own life. Then write a descriptive essay about the person or people, place, or thing that affects you strongly. Use a deeply emotional tone. Assignment In August 1994, Malcolm has to make a series of hard choices that relate to his cousin Shep. With a small group, plan and role-play the outcome of a choice that Malcolm did not make. Get Ideas Begin by identifying your attitude and a single strong impression you wish to create of the people, place, or thing. Then list ideas for two or more body paragraphs in your essay. For example, if you are writing to tell how much you love your grandmother, you might write one body paragraph about your earliest memories of her, one body paragraph about her role in your life during elementary school, and one body paragraph about her role in your life now or in the future. Give It Structure Use the introduction to name the people, place, or object you will focus on and to convey a general sense of your attitude toward them or it. In the body of your essay, explore your topic in a logical order, such as chronological order for a person or spatial order for a place or thing. Look at Language Recall that tone is an attitude toward your subject. Authors can create tone through the details they select and the word choices they make. Revise your language to be sure it shows how deeply something affects you in a positive or negative way. Use a broad range of language, including the following: • describing words, such sacred, sultry, soulful, or cinnamon • active, vivid verbs, such as lured, dismayed, destroyed, exhausted, trampled, or triumphed • figures of speech, such as “the old house beckons,” “like a fearless soldier,” or “an angel of sympathy” 26 6 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 6 Prepare Work together to find all the places where Malcolm might have given up on Shep or acted differently than he did. Think about how these decisions would have ultimately worked out for both characters, including the way in which Malcolm might have been looked on or treated when he reached Curry Island. Develop a sense of each scene and decide which one to present to the class. Then assign roles and write the scene. Rehearse the role-play several times before you present it. Adjust the script as necessary. Perform Present your role-play to the class. Be sure to choose the tone of voice and the type of body language that each character might actually have used in the scene. Watch for clues from the audience that might tell you to speak more loudly or clearly, or to slow down. Evaluate As a group, discuss the rating criteria below. Rate yourself from 1 (not acceptable) to 5 (excellent) on each criterion, and support your rating with an example from your performance. • content, including showing sense of choice and the probable outcome of that choice • voice, including clarity and loudness • body language • ability to read audience clues Then, working individually, write a paragraph evaluating your own part in the performance on the criteria above. WORK WITH RELATE D READINGS The Glory Field The following questions refer to the Related Readings in Glencoe’s Literature Library edition of this novel. Support your answers with details from the text. Write your answers on a separate sheet of paper, but jot down some notes here first on the lines provided. Inheriting Slavery Katie Bacon Make Connections Imagine that Edward Ball’s ancestors owned Live Oaks before the Civil War. How do you think the Lewises would have responded if Edward Ball had approached them in the course of researching his family’s past? characters do you think would best relate to “Lay Freedom Among Us”? Why? from The Promised Land Federal Accounts of the July 18 Assault on Wagner; Glory [Government record]; Roger Ebert Make Connections In The Glory Field, Lem and Joshua join the Northern Army. What differences might they have found between the situations and treatment of the African American soldiers and the people enslaved at Live Oaks? Lay Freedom Among Us; Runagate Runagate Rita Dove; Garrison Keillor Make Connections Which character or characters in The Glory Field do you think would best relate to “Runagate Runagate”? Which character or Nicholas Lemann Make Connections One part of The Glory Field takes place in Chicago in the 1930s. How does the Chicago described in the novel compare to the 1940s Chicago described in the excerpt from The Promised Land? The Sit-In Movement Belinda Rochelle Make Connections Imagine that Tommy Lewis was present at the NAACP Youth Council meeting when Harvey Grantt suggested that the students begin a sit-in movement in Charleston. Would Tommy have participated in the sit-in even if it meant risking his chance to go to college? Explain. The G l ory Fi el d 267 CO NNECT TO OTHER LITER AT URE LITERATURE EXCERPT: The Diary of Anne Frank Act 1—SCENE 5 [It is the first night of the Hanukkah celebration. Mr. Frank is standing at the head of the table on which is the Menorah. He lights the Shamos, or servant candle, and holds it as he says the blessing. Seated listening is all of the “family,” dressed in their best. The men wear hats, Peter wears his cap.] . . . Mr. Van Daan. [Under his breath.] God Almighty! [The only light left comes from the Hanukkah candle. Dussel comes from his room. Mr. Frank creeps over to the stairwell and stands listening. The dog is heard barking excitedly.] Do you hear anything? Mr. Frank. [In a whisper.] No. I think they’ve gone. Mrs. Van Daan. It’s the Green Police. They’ve found us. Mr. Frank. If they had, they wouldn’t have left. They’d be up here by now. Mrs. Van Daan. I know it’s the Green Police. They’ve gone to get help. That’s all. They’ll be back! Mr. Van Daan. Or it may have been the Gestapo, looking for papers . . . Mr. Frank. [Interrupting.] Or a thief, looking for money. Mrs. Van Daan. We’ve got to do something . . . Quick! Quick! Before they come back. 26 8 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 6 Mr. Van Daan. There isn’t anything to do. Just wait. [Mr. Frank holds up his hand for them to be quiet. He is listening intently. There is complete silence as they all strain to hear any sound from below. Suddenly Anne begins to sway. With a low cry she falls to the floor in a faint. Mrs. Frank goes to her quickly, sitting beside her on the floor and taking her in her arms.] Mrs. Frank. Get some water, please! Get some water! [Margot starts for the sink.] Mr. Van Daan. [Grabbing Margot.] No! No! No one’s going to run water! CONNECT TO OTHER LIT ERATURE Compare the novel you have just read to the literature selection at the left, which is excerpted from The Diary of Anne Frank by Frances Goodrich and Albert Hackett in Glencoe Literature. Then answer the questions below. Use the exact words of the text or explain events and ideas in the text to support your answer. Compare & Contrast WRITE ABOUT IT Write a reflection in which you identify either with the Lewises at any part of the novel or with the group in this passage and explain why. Or explain why you cannot identify with either group. 1. Plot What part or parts of the plot are revealed in this passage? What part or parts of the plots of The Glory Field could you compare this passage to? Why? 2. Setting How are the setting of this passage and the setting of The Glory Field alike or different in a historical, cultural, or social way? 3. Tone Describe the emotional attitude of one of the characters in this passage. Tell if or where you hear a similar tone in The Glory Field. The G l ory Fi el d 269 RES POND THROUGH WRITING Short Story Apply Plot Development The Glory Field has several plots, each of which contains an exposition, a conflict, rising action, a climax, and a resolution. Write a short story in which you develop a plot. Prewrite Find story ideas by asking and answering “What if?” questions, such as “What if a mysterious stranger led me back into my family’s past?” “What if the day I planned for for several years changed at the last minute?” “What if someone overcame a great obstacle to change the world or his or her fate?” Make a story map to develop your answer to a “What if?” question. Be sure your story map shows the time and place, or setting, of your story, as well as the main characters. It should also list the conflict, main events in the rising action, the climax of the story, and the resolution. Draft As you draft, remember that you must present a clear sequence of events that leads up to a moment of great excitement and also resolves the conflict in some way. You want the tension, suspense, or excitement to build up during the story, so pace the events so that they don’t all run together or stretch out endlessly. Help your reader follow changes in time and place by using transitional words and phases such as first, later that day, when they reached home, and so on. Revise Exchange your draft with a classmate. Identify the setting, conflict, rising action, climax, and resolution in each other’s stories. Offer at least one suggestion for adding concrete sensory details in order to locate the story in a specific time and place. In addition, give one suggestion for improving the pacing of the plot, such as by adding dialogue in order to build up more slowly to the climax. Edit and Proofread Edit your writing so that it expresses your thoughts effectively and is well organized. Carefully proofread for grammar, punctuation, and spelling errors. UNDERSTAND THE TASK • Exposition is the part of the plot that introduces the characters, setting, and situation. • The rising action adds complications to the story’s conflicts, or problems. • The climax is the point of greatest interest or suspense. • The resolution is the final outcome. Grammar Tip Capitalization Capitalize all proper nouns. In addition to naming particular people, proper nouns name these special places and things. Cities and States, Countries, Regions: Johnson City, South Carolina Sierra Leone West Africa Geographical Places, Specific Locations, Buildings: Curry Island Calhoun Street Tombee Bridge Cadet Park Carnegie Hall Organizations and Institutions: White Citizens Council Committee on Academic Standing 27 0 N OV E L COM PA NION: Un it 6
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