Propriety and Pre-Meditated Murder: The Evolution of Violence in the American Novel of Manners Beth Gier March 31, 2014 Gier 52 Abstract What happens when codes of manners exert too much pressure on an individual? What happens when that individual can no longer stand the pressure of conformity? The answer is violence. For the past two years, I have been enthralled by researching escalating displays of violence in the American novel of manners—a genre that is an inherently violent form. I analyze four novels of manners that depict an evolution of violence in the literary form: Daisy Miller (1878), The Talented Mr. Ripley (1955), Revolutionary Road (1961), and American Psycho (1991). I argue, using Freud’s concepts of civilization, that all of the violence in these novels is the explosive result due to suppression at the hands of the rigid and restrictive upper-class. From the subtle violence of Daisy Miller’s inadvertent death pr April Wheeler’s suicide in Revolutionary Road to the explicit, pre-meditated and gruesome murders committed by Tom Ripley and the American psycho himself, Patrick Bateman, the characters are reacting to the pressures of conformity. I examine the post-war era that began the shift towards more explicit violence, while I conclude with the idea that we are currently in the next shift in literary form of the novel of manners. Gier 53 It’s Hip to be a Homicidal Maniac Bret Easton Ellis’ American Psycho, is in many ways the culmination of the evolution of violence in the American novel of manners…Ellis creates a text notorious for its bloodiness, gruesome depictions of violence, and its extreme satire of consumerism. American Psycho is set in the late 1980s amongst the wealthiest and amoral men of Wall Street. In the center of all of the wealth and high finance, is Patrick Bateman, the poster boy for the 1980s yuppie. Bateman is handsome with a great body, impeccable fashion taste, and a healthy trust fund and lucrative job; he is also a homicidal maniac. Although he seems to have everything, Bateman goes on a murder spree involving nail guns and large rats…American Psycho diverges from the traditional realism that Edith Wharton and Richard Yates use. Ellis opts for a “hyperrealistic” approach that inundates the reader with overly detailed mundane experiences, and then uses extremely graphic depictions of violence to call into question the psychology and manners of the upper class… In American Psycho, people are so concerned with extreme wealth and possessions that at points they do not even refer to themselves as people, but as signifiers of wealth. Timothy Price, a Wall Street man practically identical to Bateman, claims that “society cannot afford to lose me. I’m an asset” (Ellis 3).1 Price’s declaration of his status as a permanent and important figure of society—as a paragon of wealth and desirability—is tested throughout the novel and becomes the greatest source of anxiety and violence for Bateman, who can also be seen as an “asset.” Daniel Cojocaru explains why Price’s position as a human asset does not guarantee a permanent place in society, but results in a constant struggle to remain relevant. As Price becomes known 1 Price’s eerie resemblance to Bateman serves several purposes in the novel. On one hand, his similar appearance, job, and interests illustrate the need for men in the upper class to follow the same codes of manners, dress, and lifestyle. On the other hand, a popular theory about the novel claims that Price is Bateman’s alter-ego, disappearing and resurfacing at certain important moments. This paper does not examine the idea that Price and Bateman are literally one and the same person, but the necessity for Bateman and Price to imitate their coworkers will be discussed shortly. Gier 54 as a “commodity, society can discard him and…does so…So yuppies like Price are under the constant threat of losing their privileged position in society” (Cojocaru 186-7).2 Society views these men as easily disposable, items to simply be replaced when they go out of fashion. To remain a fixture in the upper-class, Bateman and the other men of Wall Street must fight to remain one of the privileged few, not in terms of money, but in terms of relevance and appeal. The struggle these Wall Street hotshots experience occurs solely between members of the social elite who are trying to find ways to avoid being discarded. Bateman’s desperate attempt to remain a part of the social elite manifest itself through the complete suppression (and even elimination) of his true personality through imitation, his entrenchment in a dangerous fantasy, and culminates the evolution of manners when they become a part of the act of violence. One of the most noticeable ways that Bateman asserts his relevance and power within the upper class throughout the novel is his total dependence on buying brand names, eating at the trendiest restaurants, and perfecting his appearance to not only match the other men of the upper class, but to embarrass them with his superiority. Cojocaru explains: His desire to fit in is so strong that he imitates the very ideal of the ‘Everyyuppie.’…Bateman becomes an expert in dressing in style, securing reservations at new and expensive restaurants, and staying in great physical shape—in short, he becomes an expert in adapting to the Baudrillardian hyperreality world of pure signification. His striving is mirrored in the narrative itself, which is largely a collage of restaurant and music-album reviews… exasperating descriptions of in-vogue brand products, and detailed accounts of his murders. (187) 2 In an interesting parallel between Daisy Miller and American Pyscho, Pahl writes that Daisy turns herself into a “desirable commodity” through flirting in his article “’Going Down' with Henry James's Uptown Girl: Genteel Anxiety and the Promiscuous World Of Daisy Miller." Gier 55 As Cojocaru points out, Bateman goes to great lengths to become the ideal representation of the upper class world in which he lives, and Bateman’s preoccupation with brand names can often become overwhelming and “exasperating.” A chapter in American Psycho titled “Morning” begins with a paragraph that goes uninterrupted for four pages with the only topic of this megaparagraph being Bateman’s morning routine. The chapter contains almost nothing but a lot of brand names of the products Bateman uses to beautify himself (e.g., his Kent bristle brush) and his morning workout regimen...A chapter of non-stop lists of the finest items that Bateman’s ungodly amount of money can buy is not enough to illustrate his willingness to adhere to the ideal upper-class yuppie figure. In fact, Bateman’s preoccupation with “things” and brand names becomes so overwhelming that a reader viscerally senses the stifling monotony of luxury. But the reader does not even get a pause from consumerism in Bateman’s descriptions of his murders because brand names begin to infiltrate the violence itself. At one point, Bateman has lunch with his ex-girlfriend from Harvard, Bethany. Bethany causes several issues to resurface for Bateman, including her decision to leave him for a man named Robert Hall. But the biggest mistake that Bethany seems to make is incorrectly identifying the designer of Bateman’s suit. After their meeting, Bateman tortures Bethany with a nail gun and Mace, and he cuts her tongue out. Bateman decides to rectify Bethany’s mistakes while she is in her final death throes. He yells, “‘And another thing…It’s not Garrick Anderson either. The suit is by Armani! Giorgio Armani.’ I pause spitefully and, leaning into her, sneer, ‘And you thought it was Henry Stuart. Jesus.’ I slap her hard across the face and hiss the words ‘Dumb bitch’…” (Ellis 247). Ellis uses this scene to convey the dark humor that pervades the novel (the fact that a case of mistaken suit identity upsets Bateman the most is meant to be comical), but it is crucial to note the infiltration of consumerism into his acts of violence. His final words to his victim are name brands and Gier 56 insults for confusing those name brands. Patrick is so determined to define his upper-class status by the clothes he wears that he is willing to be violent in order to correct any misconceptions about his character. In this way, Bateman elevates Frank Wheeler’s intense desire to appear masculine and presentable with a violent intensity. Bateman uses his appearance as a determinant of his worth as a man, and he attempts to look and perform the act of the refined, cultured yet allAmerican, mannered stock broker of the 1980s, and he is willing to kill to preserve that image. Bateman’s “striving” to remain a paragon of the social elite is not simply “mirrored” in Ellis’ narrative decisions to compose the novel almost entirely of merchandise and restaurant names, but it is literally mirrored in Bateman’s preoccupation with his appearance. Bateman turns Frank Wheeler’s constant staring at a mirror into an unhealthy, paranoid obsession with conformity. From the very beginning of the novel, Bateman’s appearance and self-monitoring through his reflection become a constant presence. When Bateman goes to a sushi party within the first 25 pages of the novel, he introduces himself and offers his “hand, noticing my reflection in the mirror hung on the wall—and smiling at how good I look” (Ellis 11). Immediately, Ellis establishes the importance of appearance and the sense pride that Bateman achieves from looking his best. Much like the way that brand names remain a fixture throughout the novel and become a part of the violence, Bateman’s obsession with his reflection eventually pervades the violence. Once Bateman is done murdering Bethany, things almost return to normal as he goes about his daily routine of pampering. Bateman explains that “earlier, there was so much of Bethany’s blood pooled on the floor that I could make out my reflection in it while I reached for one of my cordless phones, and I watched myself make a haircut appointment at Gio’s” (Ellis 252). Bateman’s preoccupation with his appearance extends into the grotesque aftermath of his vicious killings. He sees himself, not just in a pool of his victim’s blood, but more importantly in Gier 57 a pool of Bethany’s blood, the woman who dared to think that he would wear a Garrick Anderson suit. By not only killing Bethany for her critical error in fashion judgment, but also using her blood as a mirror, Bateman’s intense desire to maintain relevance in the upper class becomes a part of his violent solution to remain a part of the social elite. One might wonder what the psychological reasoning behind why Bateman goes to such extreme lengths to keep up appearances. Cojocaru makes the compelling argument that Bateman desperately wants to fit in because of the constant threat to his status as a part of the upper class. Reading American Psycho through a Freudian lens takes Bateman’s compulsion to conform a step further. 3 As in several of the other texts already discussed, Bateman attempts to avoid unhappiness and human suffering not by submerging himself in art or drink, but by following “another and better path: that of becoming a member of the human community” (Freud 45). 4 This Freudian sentiment should sound familiar by now since it has made its way into several sections of this paper already, but the reasoning behind using this passage from Freud still stands.5 Just as Frank and Tom attempt to become members of the upper-class community by conforming to its standards of propriety, Bateman morphs himself into the “everyyuppie” ideal to remain a relevant part of the social elite. Though Bateman is not jumping over socioeconomic barriers into a different class division, he still tries to avoid the suffering that results from being an outcast by furiously grooming himself (even when his mirror is a puddle of blood) and viciously protecting his reputation by murdering a girl. Bethany—before she makes the critical error of not recognizing a Giorgio Armani suit—even asks Bateman, who reveals that his job and pursuit of perfection stresses him out, why he does not just quit his job. Bateman offers a rather 3 I completely agree with Cojocaru’s argument, and my argument extends his to include a Freudian perspective. Though Bateman does copious amounts of cocaine and makes a point to have his J&B on the rocks. 5 Again, it is important to note that becoming a part of the human community is not necessarily a noble or sympathetic action, especially when it involves violence to oneself or other people—perhaps the most crucial argument this paper makes. 4 Gier 58 pained response and chokes out, “’Because,’ I say, staring directly at her, ‘I…want…to…fit…in’” (Ellis 237). One should note that by employing ellipses, Ellis purposefully creates a sense of hesitation in Bateman’s dialogue, to convey a difficult reckoning with the idea that practically all of his decisions are informed by his manic obsession to fit in. The laborious nature of Bateman’s answer mirrors the painstaking lengths he is willing to go to maintain appearances. After a night of cocaine binges and champagne, Bateman battles with a hangover and the worrisome thought of what the excessiveness may have done to his appearance. However, he avoids any of the normal pitfalls that a person not so concerned about their appearance might experience. Bateman, though still troubled by the idea of looking less than perfect, realizes that he might not be too bad off because he has “been drinking close to twenty liters of Evian water a day and going to the tanning salon regularly and one night of binging hasn’t affected my skin’s smoothness or color tone. My complexion is still excellent. Three drops of Visine clear the eyes. An ice pack tightens the skin. All it comes down to is: I feel like shit but look great” (Ellis 106). No matter how he feels—in this case, Bateman feels like “shit”—Bateman must always look great. His performance of the perfect yuppie forces him to drink obscene amounts of water and devote hours to tanning and home remedies. The second that Bateman lets his guard down, shows any sign of vulnerability in his perfect façade, he faces elimination for the upper echelon, and there is no way that he can ever let that happen. However, Bateman’s total devotion to his performance as the ideal yuppie means that he must sacrifice other important things: his sanity and humanity. While he is entrenched in his maniacal shopping and killing sprees Bateman slowly loses his grip on his sanity, descending deeper and deeper in his commitment to outward appearances. After a particularly intense period of violence and consumerism, Bateman relays that his: Gier 59 Platinum American Express card had gone through so much abuse that it snapped in half, self-destructed…Life remained a blank canvas, a cliché, a soap opera. I felt lethal, on the verge of frenzy. My nightly bloodlust overflowed into my days and I had to leave the city. My mask of sanity was a victim of impending slippage. (Ellis 278-9) His furious bouts of consumerism and murder send him into a frenetic spiral where he destroys his credit card and seriously compromises his sanity, his thirst for murder and brand names forcing him to leave the city before he ruins the image he so carefully constructs. But Bateman is able to compose himself, at least temporarily. However, even though he masks his clearly disintegrating sanity again, this does not change the fact that his grip on reality is in question or the just as critical fact that Patrick Bateman is only an illusion. Bateman himself admits that “there is an idea of a Patrick Bateman, some kind of abstraction, but there is no real me, only an entity, something illusory, and though I can hide my cold gaze and you can shake my hand and feel flesh gripping yours and maybe you can even sense our lifestyles are probably comparable: I simply am not there” (Ellis 376-7). Everything has a price, as Bateman should be familiar with, and he becomes the ideal yuppie at the cost of his own personality. Bateman is a vacuous human being who sacrifices his individuality and personality for the performance of perfection. He can fool the people he interacts with because his physical presence in nice suits is all they care about—the upper-class cares about only the physical presence as characterized by outward appearances, not anything more “abstract” or personal. As he admits: There wasn’t a clear, identifiable emotion within me, except for greed and possibly, total disgust. I had all the characteristics of a human being—flesh, blood, skin, hair—but my depersonalization was so intense, had gone so deep, Gier 60 that the normal ability to feel compassion had been eradicated, the victim of a slow, purposeful erasure. I was simply imitating reality, a rough resemblance of a human being, with only a dim corner of my mind functioning. (Ellis 282) Just as Timothy Price refers to himself as an asset, something inhuman, Bateman does not— cannot—acknowledge his own humanity. Bateman does not even refer to himself as a complete human anymore, but has compartmentalized himself into parts of a human. And perhaps Bateman is right to disassociate himself from humanity since his conscience and the very emotions that distinguish humanity have been “eradicated, the victim of a slow, purposeful erasure.” In his journey to perfection, Bateman does not just suppress his own emotions, but he completely eliminates them. He even admits to his own devotion to imitation, and Bateman brings up the possibility that his imitation of the yuppie ideal is as close to reality as Bateman gets. As Bateman’s sanity grows more suspect throughout the novel, it becomes a distinct possibility that Bateman, though he imitates reality so scrupulously, is actually living in a fantasy of his own creation. Not only can the construction of Bateman’s fantasy world be seen in the way that he describes his murders as though they are straight from a horror movie or the way his sexual exploits read like pornography, but it can be seen in his very own perception of himself as the “everyyuppie.” Bateman, under the pressure of embodying the Wall Street ideal, resorts to creating a fantasy where he is always the supreme yuppie to avoid the unhappiness of not being able to reach perfection. Freud offers a way to interpret Bateman’s construction of a fantasy as a way to circumvent unhappiness and the potential consequences of this construction when he writes: Gier 61 One can try to re-create the world, to build up in its stead another world in which its most unbearable features are eliminated and replaced by others that are in conformity with one’s own wishes. But whoever, in desperate defiance, sets out upon this path to happiness will as a rule attain nothing. Reality is too strong for him. He becomes a madman, who for the most part finds no one to help in carrying through his delusion” (50-1). It is crucial to note in Freud’s assertion that one who attempts to achieve happiness through means of an erasure of reality will “as a rule attain nothing.” Although Bateman obtains lots of physical objects in his pursuit for happiness, he begins to embody nothing when he becomes the “victim of a slow, purposeful erasure” (Ellis 282). When Bateman annihilates his personality and ability to be compassionate, he becomes the opposite of what he aspires to be: a member of the human community. Bateman becomes an asset, comprised of brand names, rather than feelings or a conscious, excluding him from ever gaining total acceptance into human society—though he does look the part. He attains none of the pleasure in his status as an elite human being because he has lost all capacity to feel like a human being. Bateman’s plan to build a world in which he owns a reputation for being the most relevant or appealing yuppie backfires because, as a rule, he will never be able to achieve the kind of complete inclusion he desires. Yet Bateman’s divorce from reality pushes him further and further into his fantasy world as he continuously attempts to preserve the world he has created. There is much speculation about whether the events in American Psycho actually take place, or if they are just figments of Bateman’s imagination. Bateman, either creates a fantasy like Tom or actually acts out a fantasy in which he is a murderer who destroys people who represent a threat to his superiority in the upper-class (or if he cannot murder his opposition, will take out his aggression on someone else). Gier 62 Just as Tom finds that stealing Dickie’s identity has its roadblocks in people like Freddie Miles, Bateman constantly faces opposition from his Wall Street colleagues and girlfriends, who either do not listen to a word he says or become the victims of Bateman’s crimes themselves. Bateman lashes out at his friend Craig McDermott when he and his buddies compare business cards at dinenrs, and Bateman realizes his card is lackluster compared to the rest. When McDermott pesters a crestfallen Bateman to order a pizza, Bateman is “still tranced out on Montgomery’s card—the classy coloring, the thickness, the lettering, the print—and I suddenly raise a fist as if to strike out at Craig and scream, my voice booming, ‘No one wants the fucking red snapper pizza!’” (Ellis 46). Though Bateman does not react with physical violence against opposition to his superiority quite yet, he does react in an explosive manner when his superiority is threatened by the men who have fancier business cards. He is literally screaming about pizza, suddenly snapping at a mundane moment that surely does not warrant the kind of ferocity with which Bateman responds—a ferocity characteristic of a “madman.” Bateman’s response to any doubt about his perfection that arises escalates from an outburst about pizza to what else but a grotesque murder. Freud asserts that men are “creatures whose instinctual endowment is to be reckoned a powerful share of aggressiveness,” and “as a rule this cruel aggressiveness waits for some provocation or puts itself at the service of some other purpose, whose goal might also have been reached by milder measures” (94; 95). Both of Freud’s claims can be seen at work in American Psycho. Wall Street itself is famous for aggressive stock brokers and hedge fund managers, where the aggressive risk-takers are rewarded. But Bateman’s aggression is not just a symbol of his status on Wall Street; he also uses his aggression as a way to meet an end, for example, when his superiority is challenged. Bateman uses his instinctual aggression to protect his fantasy of perfection, resorting to great Gier 63 lengths such as murder to do so. The biggest threat to Bateman’s fantasized superiority is Paul Owen, another Wall Street yuppie who is Bateman’s arch-nemesis. Bateman competes with Owen on everything from clothing to apartment decor to the coveted Fisher account. During a business meeting, Bateman stares at Owen “admiring the way he’s styled and slicked back his hair, with a part so even and sharp it…devastates me” (Ellis 111). Owen’s hair at the business meeting is just one of many perceived transgressions against Bateman’s chokehold over perfection. The attacks on Bateman’s idealism build and build, until Bateman feels he has no choice but to murder Owen with an axe. Cojocaru explains that Bateman feels “his vulnerability is ridiculed by society, so he tries even harder to conform to the yuppie-ideal, by taking it to its logical conclusion—eliminating his rivals” (190). Just as Tom must murder Freddie Miles to protect his fantasy and newfound status, Bateman must kill Paul Owen to maintain his current status and protect himself from humiliation. While Bateman could have found a way to surpass Owen in his quest for total relevance that does not involve murder, Owen provokes Bateman’s natural aggression by threatening his status, and Bateman permanently eliminates Owen as competition. However, Bateman does not simply murder to eliminate his rivals, although he certainly does do that. Bateman also murders to act out the aggression that the upper class as a stratum of society holds against the individual, and as he carries out the aggression of the upper class, the manners he adheres to become a part of the violence. Much like the way Bateman’s obsession with his appearance becomes a reason to kill and a part of the violence when he murders Bethany for mistaking the designer of his suit and then watching himself make an appointment for a haircut in her blood, Bateman’s rigid adherence to propriety makes its way into the violence. When Bateman murders his rival Paul Owen with an ax, he notes that pulling the ax out of Gier 64 Owen’s face “is followed by a rude farting noise caused by a section of his brain, which due to pressure forces itself out, pink and glistening, through the wounds in his face” (Ellis 217). Even while Bateman tries end the status war that he conducts against Owen by murdering him, Bateman cannot help but comment on the rudeness of the noises Owen’s mutilated face makes. In a bout of irony and dark humor, Bateman disregards the fact that he murders a man in cold blood, but he does comment on the rudeness of Owen’s postmortem behavior. The manners and ways that the upper-class are expected to act seep into the act of murder as as Owen’s brain seeps through the wounds in his face. Upholding upper-class manners become so ingrained within Bateman that they become a reason to kill. Freud writes that there exists “a caste or a stratum of the population or a racial group—which, in its turn, behaves like a violent individual towards other, and perhaps more numerous collections of people” (Freud 72). In the case of all of the novels that have been analyzed in this paper including American Psycho, the violent caste of society is the upper-class. While the other characters examined in the paper are often the victims of the violence of the upper-class, Bateman is one of members of this stratum that exacts violence on individuals outside of the upper echelon. Bateman makes a practice of counting the homeless people and prostitutes he sees on the streets, showing just how much they outnumber the members of the upper-class, and the violence he commits, when not against one his upper-class rivals, is against a prostitute or bum. Much like how the Old World upper-class came together to behave as a violent individual against the coquettish Daisy Miller, so Bateman enacts violence against, not only the people he assumes to be threats to himself, but against people he views as threats to the upper-class as a whole. At one point, Bateman brings home a prostitute named Christie to murder. As he goes about his preparation to murder Christie, “she lies on the futon, tied to the Gier 65 legs of the bed, bound up with rope, her arms above her head, ripped pages from last month’s Vanity Fair stuffed into her mouth” (Ellis 290). Not only does Bateman decide to murder Christie because she is a lowly prostitute, he ultimately tries to teach her some manners in the process. He shoves pages from Vanity Fair, a well-know magazine that targets the wealthy into her mouth right before he kills her. But Ellis does not just choose to use Vanity Fair simply because it is a famous magazine, but because it also shares its name with one of the most famous novels of manners, William Thackeray’s Vanity Fair. Where April Wheeler’s “niceness” and politeness only preface her death, Bateman’s devotion and adherence to manners lead up to and exacerbate the violence itself. Most importantly, Bateman murders people to release the pent up emotion and aggression, which comes from restricting himself to his imitation of upper class propriety. Although Bateman eventually succumbs to the “purposeful erasure” of his personality due to his imitation, his murders function as a last grasp at individuality—a way to release the feelings he stifles. During a dinner with his primary girlfriend, Evelyn, Bateman attempts to break-up with her, finally admitting that they are incompatible because his “need to engage in…homicidal behavior on a massive scale cannot be, um, corrected,’ I tell her, measuring each word carefully. ‘But I…have no other way to express my blocked…needs.’ I’m surprised at how emotional this admission makes me, and it wears me down; I feel-light headed” (Ellis 338). Bateman calculates his speech, trying to suppress his admission to committing violence even while he is speaking it. Yet Bateman’s admission provides both a reason for his gruesome deeds and a release itself. Bateman realizes that the aggression his “blocked needs” build within him eventually explode into murder because violence is the only outlet extreme enough and cathartic enough to release the pent-up emotions he suppresses. Even verbally owning his violent nature acts as an outlet for Gier 66 his suppression because he connects himself to an emotionally exhausting event that acts as a release for Bateman. His homicidal urges represent a cycle of suppression and re-surfacing of suppressed emotions. Bateman describes how he feels “aimless, things look cloudy, my homicidal compulsion, which surfaces, disappears, surfaces, leaves again, lies barely dormant during a quiet lunch at Alex Goes to Camp where I have the lamb sausage salad with lobster and white beans sprayed with lime and foie gras vinegar” (Ellis 296). He may murder sporadically, but Bateman’s desire to commit murder constantly hides just below his surface. Bateman compares his homicidal tendency to a hibernating beast; his aggressive instincts might be sleeping, but any slight provocation could reawaken them. When Bateman is at his most aimless, most lost, most suppressed, his “homicidal compulsion” re-emerges to wreak havoc on an unsuspecting prostitute or a Wall Street rival. As Freud asserts, “cruel aggressiveness waits for some provocation or puts itself at the service of some other purpose, whose goal might also have been reached by milder measures” (95). Perhaps if he had attempted to stop his murderous urges sooner, Bateman could have gone to therapy to circumvent his violent reactions to his suppression. But by the time the reader comes in contact with Bateman, his suppression is so complete and synonymous with his “erasure” that no amount of therapy could prevent Bateman from killing. For the all-American psycho, the only true outlet for his suppressed emotions is murder.
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