0. The state of the art in learning how to analyse, plan and write. The Map Thesaurus A Learning & Literacy Solution for the 21st Century Chris Gamble This is the Thesaurus. Level 3 The word lists and blanks are suited, with adaptation, to all levels. Copies should be available to every student who is working independently on the computer tutors. The easier Level 1 and 2 Thesaurus are available in the tutors. Copies of resources and lesson plans etc. can be printed using the START.HTML icon in the CD. This booklet is the appendices to “The Heart of Learning”. It is a resource in its own right but is a summary of the language, literature and thinking processes of the interactive computer tutors “The Mind Kind Way”. The vocabulary lists in this booklet are at Level Three. In the computer tutors they are chunked down to be simpler and appropriate to the different levels. © 1997 by Chris Gamble, Mind Kind Education All rights are reserved. No part of the material protected by this copyright notice may be reproduced or utilised in any form or by any means, electronic or mechanical, including photocopying, recording or by any information storage and retrieval system without the written permission from the copyright owner or a site Licence which is included with the computer programme. history social era Setting plot character setting symbols parallel foils language realism plot character setting naturalism realism fantastic surreal absurd stylised narration Meaning deep collocation symbols feelings & associations paraphrase literal images interpretation tone / state word classification brainstorm symbols collocate realism? connotations (negative, neutral, positive) alludes a microcosm? concrete a macrocosm? emotive r e l e v a n c universal? e evocative abstract Critical Question truth point of view? general analysis impact? success specific quality? roots/prefixes/suffixes/part of speech Type / Genre parallel contrasts message exposition drama sociological psychological domestic thriller political horror ghost satire adventure picaresque detective mystery revenge biographical autobiographical farce historical comedy parody allegory legend fantasy fable journal diary sci-fi period piece romance poetry ballad elegy ode sonnet lyric free verse The Map Thesaurus is Copyright 1993 Chris Gamble Mind Kind Education 139a High Street Farnborough Kent BR6 7EA Ph. 01689 858 953. Mind Kind Education produce accelerated learning to learn resources to make learning and literacy a breeze. Intensive analysis surface plot contrast character setting Character Technique persuade mood relief conflict tension comic relief atmosphere complicate set scene narrative characterisation resolution entertain inform beginning crisis climax physical subplots personality & temper. main plots background Plot denouement intell. & creativ. episode skills anticlimax relationships ending history slice of life roles time social traits sequence values complication point of view crux response how effects /isaffected by plot Purpose Life & literature extensive analysis Text level 3. Extend map with ideas & examples. 2. Emphasis for insight 1, 2, 3. 1. Is ........ an important aspect? Life, Language & Literature THE BIG PICTURE! genre formulaic novel sympathy empathy audience response objectivity time subjectivity Sentence level symbolic voice author comment stream consc. point of view philosophical eye of god Language Word level onomatopoeia antithesis personification pun irony paradox cliched hyperbole political moral physical domestic purpose poetic devices figurative language epigram dialogue understatement diction euphemism imagery assonance man/god caesura justice alliteration man/man rhyme man/nature cadence cacophony euphony metre simile metaphor celebrities movements swings events technology art fashion the powerful wanting power the powerless town country natural unnatural terrain climate 1. 2. The Map Thesaurus A learning solution for the 21st Century © 1994 Chris Gamble, Mind Kind Education The Map Thesaurus places life and literature concepts in an environment that the brain can recognise immediately. Every page gives both a global view of the topic and the detailed view to establish specific links between ideas and vocabulary. A user can immediately analyse with increased understanding. Enough vocabulary is given for independent achievement. Students will be able to understand, analyse and write about behaviour, life, films and literature. They will be able to do these tasks without further assistance from a teacher. Use this Thesaurus with the coloured Literature map. A user should begin by colour coding every image in this booklet. Do not colour for stimulation but to increase thinking processes. There are appropriate colours. Blue, red and yellow can be used symbolically: blue for sadness; red for anger, sexuality or importance; yellow for peace and light. As you code note how it makes the social and psychological ideas more accessible. Patterns will emerge quickly and the Thesaurus becomes easier to use. Colour is a powerful learning aid. Every page is a picture of how vocabulary can be organised and learned. Using the Thesaurus and the mapping methodology will lead quickly to mental literacy. Once students have become mentally literate they should be encouraged to step outside the aspects and vocabulary used in this Thesaurus and explore issues from their own points of reference. We are aware that we are programming particular cultural points of view. Ideas for this Thesaurus are from many sources. Some attempt has been made to keep the vocabulary lists psychologically and sociologically accurate. Consequently much research has been done and world recognised experts have been used. The ideas are in popular use and are accessible to students. Other points of view could have been chosen but we believe that the balance achieved is valid. Educators are free to add to these lists and use other aspects and patterns as appropriate. The author would appreciate hearing about modifications to use improvements if warranted. You may wish to read more about the perspectives used. Plutchik is the psychologist who mapped emotion. Erich Fromm is a social psychologist who has been a big influence in this Thesaurus. He explored and mapped values and social traits. His books ‘The Anatomy of Human Aggressiveness’ and ‘Man For Himself- A Study of Character’ will give further insights. Transactional analysis is used for relationships because students like and find the tools easy to use. ‘T.A. for Teens’ by Alvyn Freen has been an influence as has ‘Games People Play’ by Eric Berne. The ancient Greeks (in particular Galen) and the mediaeval philosophers created maps of personality types which have validity today. A.J. Eysench has researched and refined their theories and has been adapted here. We have considered the historical heritage in using this analysis of personality and temperament. Recognition must also go to Don Holdaway (‘Independence in Reading’). He knew well that vocabulary maps and pointed the way for us to create our critical and response vocabulary lists. We are also grateful to the various contributors in the field of neuro linguistic programming. Their appreciation of the importance of state is a big feature of this Thesaurus. Tony Buzan, writer of ‘The Mind Map Book’, taught the world how to mind map and his contribution is acknowledged. Not all aspects of character have vocabulary lists included in this Thesaurus. Some aspects are of less importance. The range of responses for some aspects can be so vast as to make mapped pages of vocabulary impractical. We encourage students to come up with their own words for the aspects not covered. A regular thesaurus would be useful. We recommend initial mapping is done in pencil. The rules of mapping should be carefully applied— only one word per line, write on line, make word length same as line length. Maps should be refined: images, symbols, responses are added. Colour is used to code. The map can then be transformed into a work of art. Always follow mapping by ‘showing you know’—at the very least talk through maps and power write. The Thesaurus encourages students to use words rather than images in their maps. Maps make writing tasks simple and maps can be understood by everyone. 3. Checklist: Aspects of Character The following aspects are useful to consider when analysing a character. Only consider the most important but always examine the character’s responses and your personal responses to a character. Response maps are very useful for making sense of your character and the ideas you discover will improve your writing. This checklist is also useful for analysing settings. Some aspects of character are closely linked to setting. Those most appropriate are underlined. * These aspects are explored further in this Thesaurus. Physical* p 13 Race, age, size, strength, health, fitness, energy, looks e.g. fat, heavy, old, clumsy ie observable features. Personality and Temperament * p 4 Distinctive behaviours and reactions. These are perceived by others as attitudes. Background * p 5 The immediate setting in which a person grew up e.g. family, parenting, schooling. Consider controlling/permissive, warm/hostile combinations. Relationships * p 6 The way we view and treat another person. Roles * p 7 These are responsibilities that can colour our perception e.g. brother, doctor, king, artist. Always consider where pressure for performing the role comes from, the behavioural expectations and how that role conflicts with other roles. History The real celebrities, events and movements that shape a person’s life. Also consider the era and its influence and the stages and events in an individual’s life. Social Traits * p 8 & 9 Behaviours taught and valued by society. Our families and institutions teach us to assume a character which will help us progress in society. Point of view * p 10 & 11 The angle from which an individual views the world. Values * p. 12 Deeply held beliefs that determine how we choose to behave. Responses * p 13 & 14 Everybody responds—every experience creates a particular state. This Thesaurus can be used to find the words to describe these personal and critical responses, and to make sense of characters by mapping how they respond to the world around them. Intelligence and Creativity * p 13 Manipulative, slow, creative, silly, precise etc. Skills .* p 13 Often tied to roles e.g. washing, conversation, knitting, carpentry. Mannerisms Stutter, tick and other personal displays. Include body language e.g. closed, open. Idiosyncrasies Behaviours peculiar to an individual and rather strange perhaps e.g. neurosis, obsessions. Interests Hobbies, pastimes. These things are pursued by an individual. Likes / Dislikes: Individual tastes and preferences that are less significant, being more particular than values. We can change these preferences easily e.g. pop music, fish and chips, colours, particular looks, styles. 4. Personality and Temperament Personality is the general behaviour we dress ourselves in. We can vary it and even ‘put on’ the style. Personality can change to suit the occasion and the relationship. Temperament describes the way someone reacts. Together they define our attitudes. Temperament includes the idea of emotional reaction. Different societies consider emotions appropriate or not. A passionate Mediterranean type could be considered eccentric in Britain. In the diagram that follows, bold words on the outside of the circle are personality types. The inside circle is made up of the temperaments that result from those personalities. melancholic cold introverted unstable moody anxious (ice) rigid sober pessimistic reserved unsociable passive touchy ruthless (fire) aggressive changeable impulsive optimistic active sociable outgoing talkative responsive easygoing lively carefree (air) leadership careful phlegmatic move with the flow thoughtful peaceful controlled (water) reliable even calm choleric fiery extroverted sanguine breath of fresh air stable Emotional reactions of personality types HOT COLD surprise nervousness pensiveness hatred interest annoyance happiness indifference excitement fear sadness disgust expectancy anger delight tolerance amazement terror grief loathing vigilance rage ecstasy acceptance 2 stable reliable eg * rejected him even eg passive eg introverted reserved eg pers & temp * Forrest Gump Character Forrest Jenny roles 1 relationships Mapping sequence: Aspect: Personality & Temperament / change / personality / temperament / example *Reason for personality change When writing develop each word into a separate sentence. Power write—include response and criticality. 5. Background We can understand characters by thinking about their backgrounds: family, upbringing, schooling, workplace, marriage, social peers Consider also the influence of parents and backgrounds which are combinations of: hostile / warm, controlling / permissive How were your characters motivated, treated or disciplined by their social care givers? What behaviour does a character show in a particular circumstance? Why did your character become that way? Treatment or motivation Some possible effects 1. Reasoned with helpfulness, fairness, friendliness, acceptance, trust, respect, confidence, equality 2. Compared with sibling rivalry, inferiority complex, hatred, jealousy 3. Scared—(what you will miss out neurosis, individualism, competition, worry on. What the ‘real’ world is like) 4. Violence (or threat of) 5. Rewarding/indulging/spoiling 6. Rejection or acceptance 7. Guilt 8. Warmth avoidance, fear, unsureness, irrationality, reduced ability to reason, anger, bullying, inhumanity, meekness selfishness, controlling, precociousness, dependent, unsocialised, suspicious, unsharing, untrusting, uncompromising, exploitative, valuelessness, dependency, unperceptive, unadventurous, patronising, inadequacy, unrealistic, unmotivated, low initiative, compulsive insecurity, coldness, manipulation inferiority, shame, depression warmth, spontaneity, empathy, confidence Mother friendly reasonable e.g. mother confident warm 1 upbringing e.g. unspoiled e.g. background rewards decorated army relationships Title Character Forrest Jenny 2 Mapping sequence: Aspect: Background / background /with whom / treatment / effects / example When writing develop each word into a separate sentence. Power write—include response and criticality. 6. Relationships Here are words useful for describing peoples’ relationships. Add more words. Think carefully to understand the diagrams. (1) Bossy, asserting, controlling, commanding, “you”, powerful, disciplinarian, unrelenting, dominant, tough, abusive, instructing, persuading, ordering, warning, threatening, attacking, interrogating, questioning, probing, distrusting, paternalistic, patronising, lecturing, didactic (teaching), logical, judging, criticising, disagreeing, advising, moralising, preaching, analysing, reassuring, praising, supporting, consoling (2) Reasonable, equal, caring, problem solving, trusting, “I feel”, patient, tolerant, respectful (3) Emotional, immature, unthinking, little, resisting, defensive, pressured, frustrated, blaming, name calling, ridiculing, shaming, obsessive, withdrawing, humouring, distracting, diverting, passive, running away, depressive, opting out (drugs, books, sex, TV), daydreaming, submissive, obedient, compliant, lying, retaliating, cheating, angry, hostile, rebellious, defiant, negativity, having to win, being a loser, courting favours, flattering, tactless (4) (5) Antagonistic, clashing, fighting, unyielding, ungiving (Use list 3) (Use list 1) 1 relationship Title Character Forrest Jenny history 2 caring w. Jenny e.g. patient e.g. emotional w. Jenny e.g. *rejected him background Mapping sequence: Aspect: Relationship / change / with whom / behaviour / example * Reason for relationship change When writing develop each word into a separate sentence. Power write—include response and criticality. 7. Roles Everyone plays different roles in life. Sometimes you have to play the role of a student—this requires that you behave in a certain way (study, co-operate, ask questions etc.) and establish certain relationships with people who have other roles. Roles make demands on people—there are expectations on behaviour. There are often pressures on people to conform to one idea of a particular role (or stereotype). Often one role we play conflicts with another role we are under pressure to play—for example someone who wants to play the role of hippy /beach bum would not like the pressure to be a student. Here are some roles: mother, brother, learner, cook, friend, good girl, mate, spoilt brat, party animal, lover, prince, scholar, Mr Fix It, boyfriend, uncle, nursemaid, idiot, door mat, victim, rescuer, saviour. See how many more you can name. Which roles cause conflict? Some are roles we do not want to act out. Some stop us doing other things. Some are false or even wrong and lower self-esteem. Some are necessary, others are unnecessary. Some roles are totally imposed from the outside and we resent them and the society or person who imposed them. How often do you say “I just want to be myself”? Some roles affect your integrity—your ability to be good or do the right things. Some roles are only required of a male or a female. Here are some roles analysed. Use the model to analyse a character’s roles. Role lover Expectations on Person understand one to one student study, obey rules, uniform etc. Source of Expectations (pressures) human need, partner Conflicts mates school, parents, community, sometimes self child, surfy, etc. scholar use knowledge and reason usually self spoilt brat human compassion self soldier, thief surfy have a good time, use language peers, self human? son respect parents, do duties parents, community etc. relationships girlfriend Mother balanced human e.g. achieve Title Character Forrest society 1 sportsman self roles table tennis diplomat friend e.g. sanity society e.g. fame 2 Mapping sequence: Aspect: Role / role / expectation / pressure from / conflict with other roles / example When writing develop each word into a separate sentence. Power write—include response and criticality. 8. Social Traits Times change. Our grandparents were brought up during the war years when things were hard and people were taught to value particular ways of behaving or traits that helped them live—thrift, saving, national pride and so on. People brought up when the economy is thriving have a different set of behaviours. They are taught to take risks, to have initiative, to sell themselves and consequently waste money on fashion labels much to their grandparents’ disgust. What one era values often conflicts with what another era held dear. Last century family life was very authoritarian. Obedience, devotion, respect for elders and ‘betters’ were drummed in. Many people who were brought up then would have trouble coping with children who are taught to question, leave nothing unchallenged and only to respect when that respect has been earned. When a generation learns a different set of traits and has trouble understanding the behaviours of a group born at a different time, this is called a generation gap. When a group has learned its traits under a different set of conditions, and has trouble either relating to or being understood by another group, this is called a cultural gap. Often one group thinks the other group is rather strange, silly or quaint. What one group calls a ‘virtue’ (the +ve column in the page following) is called a ‘vice’ by another group (the -ve column) . The following sets of vocabulary have been mapped to show how society teaches a particular set of values relevant to its circumstances. The first set shows the traits that are valued and therefore fostered in an authoritarian or hierarchal setting. These words are paired by one which considers the trait from an opposing point of view. For example an authoritarian society values “obedience”. Some of us would call that obedience “spinelessness” and have difficulty understanding such behaviour. The second set of traits follows the same pattern. The +ve column shows the set of traits that are valued during hardship (e.g. a lean time like the Depression). The paired value in the -ve column shows how someone brought up under a different set of conditions might view those traits. The last set shows a set of traits that you might recognise. They are the values promoted by the free market economy when people have to make a mark in their own right. They are paired with the sort of things your grandparents might say about those values as they shake their old grey heads! Demonstrated is a generation gap. Use the vocabulary lists and see if you can identify traits of characters in a work you are studying. Map them into your character mind map. Be aware that other characters may not agree with the behaviours they value. You can understand why that person follows a particular code of behaviour by working out what sort of setting that character grew up in. We are conditioned by our age. Each era exerts pressures on its citizens to behave in certain ways, and to have a code by which to live. We have a social character—brought up to possess a set of common traits. Mother Title Character Forrest roles tenacious hardship e.g. steadfast 40’s/50’s e.g. social traits my opinion stubborn e.g. initiative obsessive e.g. e.g. ...... ...... “J’s” opinion inflexible e.g. point of view Mapping sequence: Aspect: Traits / era / social conditions / traits / example ..... / whose opinion / point of view / example When writing develop each word into a separate sentence. Power write—include response and criticality. 9. +ve Authoritarian Hierarchical -ve +ve Free market -ve active exploitative take initiative aggressive make claims egocentric without pride proud conceited charming parasitical impulsive rash adaptable unprincipled self confident arrogant socially adjusted servile, captivating seductive idealistic unrealistic dedicated fanatical sensitive cowardly purposeful opportunistic polite spineless flexible inconsistent optimistic wishful youthful childish trusting gullible forward looking without future or past tender sentimental open-minded without principles gregarious unable to be alone accepting passive, w.o. responsive opinionless devoted characterless modest +ve initiative , submissive no confidence thinker Hardship practical unimaginative economical stingy, careful suspicious reserved cold patient lethargic cautious anxious tenacious stubborn imperturbable indolent composed inert orderly pedantic methodical obsessive loyal possessive steadfast inflexible -ve experimenting without values undogmatic aimless efficient overactive curious tactless intelligent intellectual adaptable undiscriminating tolerant indifferent witty silly generous wasteful mean-minded Social Traits If -ve as a vice If +ve as a virtue 10. Point of view People see things through their own eyes. What they see or do is coloured in some way by what they value or believe. People have their own perception of the world—a point of view. Some people's point of view is determined by their sweet temperament—they look at the world through rose coloured glasses! If they met you their positive point of view would only see what is good about you. Other people are negative or pessimistic—unfortunately they would tend to find negative things about you! Everyone suffers from that point of view. The above are points of view coloured by an individual's personality and temperament. However points of view are rarely so simple being determined by many factors. politics job education experiences intelligence culture roles skills and so on... religion success and therefore self-esteem home life relationships creativity where you live social character health, genetics, tiredness, playfulness It is fun to put yourself in other people's shoes and to see the world through their eyes (it’s called acting!). What would the following people say, notice and do if they were to see a group of young people. Assume that they are dominated by the point of view determined by their role: a doctor a fond mother a new high school student a beautiful actress used to centre stage an old authoritarian teacher They would behave differently as their responses are determined by their point of view. Is any character in the work you are studying dominated by a point of view? How did the character gain that point of view? How does it affect that character's ability to see reality? Maybe a character changes a point of view. How? Does a character show the ability to look at the world from varying points of view? If so, we say he or she is flexible. Inability to see the world from a variety of points of view can make someone prejudiced or even bigoted. When people try to persuade you that their point of view is the only allowable one, we say they are being dogmatic. Look at the following examples of quite extreme, contrary, yet common points of view. Each is rather fond of one point of view and perhaps intolerant of other people’s perception. What traits (see p 9 for vocabulary) does each group see as being virtuous? free marketeer group of solo mums in a depression hippies right wing government feminist a man's man Can you identify any groups in a work you are studying that have a common point of view? How does it conflict with other points of view? Look at the values vocabulary (see p 12) and determine if a particular value or belief has an effect on an individual or a group’s point of view. 11. Leaning to the right or left Following is a common way of identifying someone’s political, religious or social point of view. The two extremes are noted. Few people are that extreme or fanatical in their point of view. Most fit somewhere in the middle. Political parties are usually groupings of people with a common point of view. See if you can identify the leaning of political parties in the description below. Religions often are groupings of people with similar points of view. Identify the leaning of your local churches. left leaning to left middle leaning to right right Man in God’s image—in grace Man OK—innately good. Man fallen from grace Man not OK Emphasis is on individual growth. If man fails then society is at fault. Emphasis on culture/ society / beliefs most important —without them man fails. Rules / laws not important— equality and consensus the ideal Rulers / rules / laws absolutely necessary Hierarchy is the root of all evil as it encourages the pursuit of power and status. Man is not dangerous in a socially equal world. Hierarchy necessary for stable social order which will control a dangerous mankind Prepared to experiment Traditional and conservative outlook Permissive Authoritarian 12. Values Values are basic beliefs that determine our behaviour. If we know people’s values we can predict how they will behave in a given situation. If we know how they behave we can guess their values. See how many of the following values apply to various characters. Which values are taught by the social system? For example schools teach certain values, churches others. Sometimes what organisations or individuals say they believe is opposite to what they actually practise. When this happens we can say there is hypocrisy. Here are some values that often conflict. What values does your character hold and how do they conflict with other characters’ beliefs? What values do the different social groups (family, school, government, church) teach? Look for inconsistencies and hypocrisy. Understanding Growth Co-operation, service Love of life Reflection Sharing Security by trust and knowledge Intimacy important—reveals self and feelings Perceptive and sensitive to people Reactions are sincere and human Not interfering, accepting yet caring and supportive Change accepted as inevitable and desirable himself loving Value of individual importance and values emphasised Width of vision tends to be embracing and analytical Concerned with truth & reality Poetic in thought and language Accepts all. Understanding and tolerant Non material ‘spiritual’ regard to life Intrinsic motivation. Faith in the rightness of life, nature accomplishing growth (providential). Anything negative or evil is always counterproductive. Human nature weak but good. Human nature fails in a self-asserting patriarchal value system. Respects integrity Love of life, sex, relating Truth, essence, empathy, experience of self motivates is progress. Pain is lack of progress. Sorrow is rejection into aloneness. Joy is unification with the whole Creative (ie life is sustained) Values symbolised by womanliness Title Character Forrest Human nature believed aggressive Respects physical looks Love of sport, war, intrigue Honour,pride, success, dignity, nationalism motivates Pleasure Above are most noble feelings. Fear of failure motivates Destructive self defensive (conflict over ‘egg shells’) Values symbolised by manliness—men most important social traits values Jenny Strength Authority (bureaucratic) Control and Power Love of objects and order Instant action Possessiveness and ownership Security by property Inhibition of intimacy Formalisation & institutionalisation of intimacy, care. Smiles are flashed and polite Interfering—must control others Hierarchy structure more important change&experiment Makes Makes himself loveable Ritualised social standard of dress, procedure, ceremony Narrow vision tends to be prescriptive Concerned with appearances Literal in thought and language Narcissic—loves self and like self—rejects others Death, materialism, techniques, technology all fascinate Extrinsic motivation—gains are material contrasts rightness in life e.g...... give self e.g. ..... parallels “J’s” “M’s” activism e.g. caring e.g. point of view Mapping sequence: Aspect: Values / value / example ....character parallels & comparisons / person or group / value / example When you write develop each word into a separate sentence. Power write—include response and criticality. 13. Mapped Vocabulary Of Criticism And Response A. Response vocabulary 1. States (many words can be reclassified into other states) Mood Manner Tone Attitude & Beliefs Feeling Responses Define subject of your analysis—ask “Whose response am I analysing?”—is it “I” (myself), “he/she” (character, author, narrator, reader, etc.), “it” (being critical & objective), “you” (reader, etc.) “we”, “they” ? (audience, characters, readers, etc.) •Intellectual states— (see also Point of view, Impact, Quality of thought lists) + v e - healthy open sensible able correct reasonable pragmatic reliable sound valid right certain capable knowledgeable considered understanding wondering awed dreaming imagining educated balanced open minded unbiased mature fair astute wise questioning just profound enlightened witty ironic -ve-feeble shallow tame garrulous rambling windy hackneyed clumsy waffly monotonous vague daydreaming tedious muddled puzzled baffled nonplussed obscure unsound inadequate ignorant biased prejudiced pedantic intellectual esoteric disconnected believing gullible ridiculous pathetic bewildered puerile stupid idiotic imaginary idealistic sentimental obsessive silly dreamy illusory flighty scatty dazed delusory baffled foolish trivial stupid •Social states—(see also Relationship, Personality & Temperament, Background list) + v e - pleasant genuine sincere sorry forgiving tactful diplomatic kind considerate appreciative grateful contributing giving fond friendly warm intimate committed gentle caring tender warm sensitive accepting sympathetic empathetic compassionate humane loving reverent careful -ve-romantic eccentric rejecting hostile inconsiderate unkind insincere snobbish boorish having to win being a loser manipulating intimidating strange queer crazy mad resisting defensive withdrawing humouring distracting diverting passive submissive compliant retaliating defiant courting favouring flattering tactless bossy asserting blunt controlling teaching instructing didactic lecturing logical powerful persuading ordering warning probing distrusting paternalistic disciplinarian disagreeing advising moralising preaching •Moral/Spiritual states—(see also Values, Social character—traits, Background lists) +ve-down to earth matter of fact earthy good honest questioning skeptical humble real bold frank full-blooded forceful candid direct unafraid sharing with integrity ethical pure giving principled devout loving -ve-inflexible conventional insincere sophisticated hollow hypocritical feigned dishonest pitying sharp smug proud arrogant envious jealous greedy coveting sour shrewd cynical shifty furtive evasive sly cunning corrupt immoral crude unseemly harsh mean nasty abrupt curt acidic dogmatic mocking blaming name calling ridiculing shaming insulting abusive irreverent profane vengeful aggressive cruel selfish fake phoney twisted illogical blind obsessive withdrawing opting out submissive lying retaliating cheating interrogating distrusting patronising criticising disagreeing judging •Emotional states— (see also Personality & Temperament—Emotional reactions list) + v e - happy glad merry gay blissful cheery bubbly excited surprised delighted elated thrilled ecstatic joyful funny witty relaxed peaceful satisfied calm secure desiring -ve-disappointed annoyed irritable cross disgruntled disgusted angry enraged resenting dejected moody burdened guilty humiliated threatened unsure doubtful shy anxious nervous apprehensive lonely disturbed distressed awful depressed grieving impatient exasperated uncomfortable dismayed fed-up hurt perplexed upset harassed fearful horrified terrified petrified frustrated desperate distraught infuriated irate livid mad outraged riled seething sore hateful disappointed unhappy ashamed guilty down low sad gloomy miserable depressed overwhelmed tense •Activity states—(see also Roles, Social character—traits lists) + v e - optimistic curious inquisitive vigilant adventurous talkative chatty discursive dry poetic confident certain positive healthy vital energetic excited passionate firm assertive determined focused persistent forceful assured growing supporting consoling flexible -ve-pessimistic solemn official pompous sober reserved bored cool intense tentative doubtful suspicious tired drugged drunk escapist aggressive attacking violent stormy uncontrollable tense jumpy shaky hasty distracted chaotic wilful unrelenting dominant tough •Dependency states— (see also Background list) + v e - independent initiating secure powerful lively eager energetic desirable sexy courageous bold brave dramatic erotic boisterous -ve-dependent insecure passive obedient submissive helpless apathetic listless exposed deflated worthless vulnerable defenceless powerless impotent useless disorganised slovenly emasculated cowardly running away hurt ill nauseous misunderstood mixed-up muddled helpless hopeless frail fragile inferior lonely unwanted unloved rejected undecided lost disorientated bewildered •Physical or biological states— (see also Atmosphere list) + v e - relaxed warm full comfortable / co-ordinated fit healthy strong trainable lean young sexy -ve-cold bloated uncoordinated clumsy / hungry starving dying sick worn-out old exhausted impotent fat 14. “It” to techniques rescuing Forrest to character to themes “I” to setting to author Title Response “we” reader “He / She” author character Forrest Jenny “They” “You” emotional admired e.g. gullible e.g. intellectual believing e.g. vague e.g. social gentle e.g. moral humble e.g.calm emotional e.g. Vietnam happy e.g. energetic activity e.g. secure dependency e.g. brave e.g. Mapping sequence: Subject of response / defined / circumstance responded to / state aspects considered / specific state / examples Make sure you have identified the correct subject of response. Use responses to power write. 2. Atmosphere—of places of events of situations +ve- natural warm relaxing welcoming real appropriate academic old fashioned modern futuristic up to date with-it neat tidy orderly solemn delicate graceful refined elegant magnificent exalted stimulating exciting fabulous light colourful -ve- fantastic alienating rejecting cold extravagant artificial pretentious trivial inappropriate lacking reality fake phoney unnatural frightening sombre depressing dangerous in crisis tragic B. Language of criticism How real? are characters? are settings? (Use Response vocabulary ) How relevant? are themes? are messages? are lessons? (Use Response vocabulary ) How truthful? are themes ? is characterisation? is setting? (Use Response, Atmosphere list vocabulary and:) R ealism: +ve- Realistic natural understated complete incomplete dated universal specific plausible -ve-stylised artificial unreal fantasy exaggerated biased restricted selective dated How successful? are themes ? is characterisation? is setting? are techniques? (Use Response vocabulary and: ) Impact: +ve- interesting just fair relevant coherent humane balanced effective vivid plain simple justified genuine comprehensible puzzling forthright direct distinct obvious incomprehensible uninformed sensational uninteresting Quality of thought: +ve- intelligent clear effective depth supported demonstrated proven -ve- vague unintelligible indefinite generalised subjective specious platitudinous mistaken unsupported thinking errors begs question personal attack appeals associates 15. Page 20 Writing from a map: legs e.g. literal e.g. physical handicap Excellent writing has: 1. K n o w l e d g e - e.g. 1. Identify a relevant mental 2. Understanding paragraph. physical reliable explanation & depth. 2. Use colour to identify stable e.g. 3. Criticality - 1,2,3, it weighs strings. even pers and and measures. e.g. passive 3. Where colours join together temp 4. R e s p o n s e - shows that the introverted e.g. put into the topic sentence writer appreciates humanely. reserved with key words from the central e.g. caring task w. Jenny e.g. 1 Create a unique thesis by * rejected him patient relationship * including thinking word (i.e. e.g. emotional friendly because”) and a response 2 w. Jenny e.g. e.g. reasonable (use response thesaurus). mother confident e.g. 4. Where single colours upbringing warm 1 e.g. 1. identify string put each unspoiled background rewards e.g. separate idea into its own decorated medal sentence. army hero e.g. 2 5. Write an example for each soldier Vietnam string 1960’ history s Mother 1 sportsman achieve society balanced human e.g. friend e.g. self society roles table tennis diplomat fame 2 Forrest Gump changed Character Forrest +thinking word “because” +response “secure” tenacious hardship e.g. 3. steadfast 40’s/50’s social traits e.g. upbringing 2. point of view handicap Jenny An ideal 10 sentence paragraph. positive values give self stubborn e.g. initiative initiative e.g. e.g. e.g. “J’s” opinion inflexible e.g. Using the big picture literature map skills e.g. rightness in life ...... ...... my opinion unprejudiced e.g. accepts all e.g. army A response changes a topic sentence into a thesis. sanity e.g. ..... ..... contrasts parallels activism “J’s” e.g. caring “M’s” e.g. cynicism incapable e.g. skepticism low IQ supporting intel. and e.g. Steps to word map: sentencesgullible creat. explanation e.g. believing intellectual 1. Ask “Is the aspect e.g. e.g. e.g. e.g. important?”- put it down onto vague social the map. e.g. gentle depth 2. Emphasis for insight 1, 2, 3. moral e.g. humble 3. Extend map with ideas & Use the Thesaurus for response e.g.calm examples using pencil. (Here vocabulary and to understand emotional e.g. that has been over done for aspects. happy this example only. e.g. energetic Do two maps. First detailed and 4. When writing identify activity e.g. in pencil. The second simpler , paragraphs and write secure dependency e.g. encoded with colour, emotions, systematically along line. Turn brave and symbols. each idea into its own e.g. sentence. (See above.) topic sentence 16. 17. The Sick Rose Series - do a concept per page, poem in middle and surround with responses. Surface - Literal Emphasis 1, 2, or 3 Image (Draw !) The Sick Rose Oh Rose, Thou art sick! The invisible worm, That Flies in the Night, In the howling storm, Has found out thy bed Of crimson joy; And his dark secret love Does thy life destroy. William Blake Paraphrase (Own words translate 1:1) Feelings & Associations Brainstorm with other people. Emphasis 1, 2, or 3 The Sick Rose Oh Rose, Thou art sick! The invisible worm, That Flies in the Night, In the howling storm, Has found out thy bed Of crimson joy; And his dark secret love Does thy life destroy. William Blake Tone / state (Which makes poem make sense) Deeper Emphasis 1, 2, or 3 ( Be Tentative!) Symbols ( Pick words that could stand for something else and state what they stand for.) The Sick Rose Oh Rose, Thou art sick! The invisible worm, That Flies in the Night, In the howling storm, Has found out thy bed Of crimson joy; And his dark secret love Does thy life destroy. William Blake Collocations (what words considered together stand for something) Interpretation (“It could be about, stand for , remind us of....” Now rank data and transfer selected data to process map of analysis so that you create a plan for writing from. 18. Mapping ideas by clustering. Concept: Word types We do not learn ideas by someone telling us a definition. Ideas are learned because we cluster or associate other ideas with that main idea—in other words map. Any subject can be clustered - concepts words as headings , relevant vocabulary listed. Here is some “technical” vocabulary. Look at the headings on the chart below. Map the list onto the spreadsheet below. The Sick Rose Oh Rose, Thou art sick! The invisible worm, That Flies in the Night, In the howling storm, Has found out thy bed Of crimson joy; And his dark secret love Does thy life destroy. William Blake Cluster spreadsheet Concept: (...word types........) evoke alludes emotes concrete abstract general specific connotate -ve neutral collocate symbols +ve Use these all the poetry blanks as models. Copy and paste your own poem in place of the “Sick Rose”. 19. 20. 21. 22. 23. Map blank 24. Hamlet PLOT setting etc. plus response concept 3. 2. 1. aspect explain etc. explain e.g. This skill is called extensive mapping Theme relief comic relief chtersation establish set. tension complication resolution conflict parallel contrast mood atmosphere message narrative exposition apposition use genre for insight. particular or universal message: microcosm macrocosm point of view about: character setting right ? left? coloured by religion, race, class, sex etc.? Life & literature analysis & planning spreadsheet PURPOSE THEMES (Word level) figurative language poetic devices vocab understatement euphemism onomatopoeia antithesis personification pun irony paradox litotes cliché oxymoron hyperbole epigram connotate evoke emotive allude general specific abstract collocate concrete imagery assonance rhythm alliteration caesura rhyme cadence cacophony euphony metre simile metaphor consonance level of a. literal - images meaning b. tone- feelings & assoc. c. deep - symbols ANALYSIS Intensive analysis thought? Simply: “Is ................ an important aspect?” —identify emphasis for insight 1, 2, 3 © 1991 Chris Gamble, Mind Kind Education Ltd. 2. CRITICAL: To what do you respond to most? What response? Question everything—How relevant? How real? How truthful? How successful? Quality of crisis crux 2. 1. 3. narration: eye of God suspect narr. stream of consciousness point of view author comment foils contrast parallel realism symbolism empathy sympathy objectivity figurative poetic dialogue formulaic time flashback diction use of time voice SETTING physical moral social political domestic historical era symbolism philosophical atmosphere (Text level) TECHNIQUE explain e.g beginning explain . beginning crux crisis subplots main plot dénouement episode anticlimax ending slice of life time sequence climax plus “exciting” plot physical personality & temperament background relationships roles history social traits point of view values responses intelligence & creativity mannerisms idiosyncrasies interests like /dislikes how plot affect chter how chter affects plot drama sociological psychological domestic thriller political horror ghost satire adventure picaresque detective mystery revenge biographical autobio. farce historical comedy tragedy parody type character CHARACTER TYPE Extensive analysis 25. 26. 27. Guidelines for mapping a text Tools required: Pencil, rubber, coloured felts or pencils, music and the text you wish to master. Put on some music that will help your learn. Do not begin until you are in a relaxed state. Don’t think too hard but treat each thing you are doing as a separate one step at a time. Chat to yourself—have an intelligent conversation with your chatterbox. Always write from memory. Create images in your head by moving eyes up to right. 1 Using a pencil put image of central theme in circle in the middle of the page. 2 Map out the logic of the article by working out the sections. Put down headings for each line (N.B. use memory!). Use only one word per heading, write on line, make word length same as line length. 3 Count out the paragraphs. Put down maps to indicate the points covered and their logic. Use super logic when you don’t have headings to guide you. 4 Do not read but search for information about the paragraph using the topic sentence. Guess and put down key word. You are in pencil so do not worry about being correct. Our eyes will automatically find the information needed to prove or disprove our guess when doing step 6. 5 (Steps 1—4 are for fast note taking and processing. If you need to know your notes well do the next steps.) Put central theme into 3 colours and draw image. 6 Work outwards along each line of reasoning using your chatterbox and see if you can link the ideas on your map into meaningful sentences. (The talking through is very important. Teach someone else to give practise. Put a doll or teddy bear! on desk and tell it everything.) See if you can guess the detail. If you can’t then read for detail and confirmation. Remember to say “yes” to yourself as you have processed the information and understand it. Then note your success by systematically transferring into colour. Add information you need to know. Leave out the rest. Use symbols, paraphrase and delete information as appropriate. Use movement, drama, emotion and emphasis. 7 Add to map using picture and task blocks. 8 Collect the technical vocabulary and cluster onto a small spread sheet. Learn the principles: pick concepts; relist vocabulary under the multiple headings; emphasis for insight. 9 If you need to memorise notes make separate learning map—be bold and fast and colourful. Words become pictures, pictures become words. Visualise and use synaesthesia. Use journey and memorise six words with theme. Now recall. You are aiming at 100%! Redo maps. Mini maps can be combined into master maps. They can be used to show process and as prompts. They automatically give a paragraphed topic structure when you write. Cluster sheets should be combined into a master spreadsheet. Reduce maps and masters to one page summaries for each subject. Look for ways to show you know and reinforce content. Put up on walls and practise 30 sec. review at intervals one hour, one day, one week—then monthly. Picture maps anywhere to recall them—you don’t need to sit at a desk to study—walk it through at the local park! Look at other people’s maps and develop your own styles. Mapping is a very creative process and as we evolve in it we discover many pleasant surprises. Time flies. We relax and recall is easy. Remember the mapping does many things at once. There is no more efficient method of learning from books. If you learn the simple processes then you are an effective learner. Mapping will become quicker than reading. We learn to comprehend better. Our reading speeds increase dramatically. We read, understand, collect notes, remember, learn to plan and write well all at the same time! It is faster than traditional methods in accomplishing the same learning task and you did it—not your teacher! Mind Kind mapping enables a non-reader to understand articles which are at a much higher reading age. 28. Get motivated Here is a list of tasks which if addressed regularly will result in increased drive and application—persistence! Your goals will be achieved. (Do a Mind Kind juggling course !) 1. What’s in it for me? Tell your brain! Address residual negative thoughts which demotivate. Replace all negative thought with fully imagined positive dreams. • List all the benefits that will result from application. Include higher states, income, status, public recognition, satisfaction, material rewards, relationships, future family etc. • Make a list of perceived costs (time, social, money, lost opportunity.) Realistically gauge the disadvantages. There are so many hours in the day that are available for other pursuits that time is not an issue. Money problems can be solved with reorganisation. With reorganisation social activities will improve! Show your brain there are no costs just advantages. The only cost is not doing what you want to do! Plan away perceived costs Go through the list “What’s in it for me?”. Visualise and use synaesthesia to make your dream real in all its aspects. Use the response list in thesaurus to identify, recreate and make real the emotional states for each detail. Make a wonderful future memory! Feel and experience the price of not following your dream. That experience will drive you in the direction of worthwhile change. 2. Surround yourself constantly with reminders of your dream either concretely or imaginatively by linking your pleasant future memories to your everyday life. 3. Practise relaxation with self-suggestion daily. Affirm your abilities. Do the Mind Kind Genius Immersion—it takes 30 mins! Make conscious your brain’s abilities and how they work together to define your mental states. Learn how to analyse, comprehend, see states and make emotional sense of every experience. Affirm your progress and dream your dream. Become aware of a chatterbox that can discourage you as you day dream. Turn it to off permanently—i.e. for life! Use the chatterbox that is your teacher. 4. Lessen the pain. • Reassess failure. There is no place for this idea anywhere. There are only lessons which will be repeated until learned. If an “event” (i.e. not “success”) make feedback positive. • Learn how to study efficiently. Everyone can learn to be smart. A Mind Kind learning centre can make learning easier and enjoyable. Learn how to use your brain. Learn to use methods that suit your style. Strategies are available to quickly overcome every learning problem . • Reward yourself regularly—after one hour, one day, one week, one month … ! Celebrate progress. When you have worked well,play well. Take time out and keep balance. 5. Learn to be assertive. You are the boss. You know what you want and are the best judge of success. Learn to communicate with others in ways that will bring success. Speak up and make demands—you are surrounded by people employed to help you achieve your dreams. We all benefit. Use the “WHAM!” state—“What About me?” 6. Do a Future Map and chart laterally all possible options and futures. Preferably work in images. Encode all cross-roads and highs and lows. Highlight all goals. Use laterality, and “what if”. Be prepared to constantly rechart this map. Properly done this map will become a part of your thinking processes—you will always see the present defining the future. These maps are a very powerful tool. They will make you entrepreneurial. 7. Use theta sleep! Dream your goals before going to sleep at night. “Sleep on it!” and you will wake up inspired with creative thought, be able to see and take advantage of opportunity and remain persistent. 29. Ideas to improve the quality of writing Critical vocabulary measures the importance of the supporting string that follows: Critical words are used in the final write-up in place of 1, 2, 3 and mark the beginning of each of the two or three supporting strings: very, more, importantly, first, second, third, lastly, it is significant that, considerable, continually, eventually, throughout, sometimes, some, the best thing was, it was amazing that, above all, in particular, especially, so, significantly, indeed, notably, importantly, moreover, finally, too, much etc. Use connectives either to begin sentences or to link sentences together. if sequencing - showing the order that something is done, use: next, then, first, second, third, finally, meanwhile, after, moreover, addition, lastly furthermore, in if emphasising - showing importance of ideas in a report, review, argument or response, use: above all, in particular, especially, significantly, indeed, notably, importantly, moreover, finally if listing or adding - for example when listing points in an argument, use: and, also, as well as, moreover, too, finally if comparing - showing how ideas are similar, use: equally, in the same way, similarly, likewise, as with, like, as if contrasting - showing how ideas are different, use: whereas, instead of, alternatively, otherwise, unlike, on the other hand if explaining cause and effect - showing how one thing is the result of something else, use: because, therefore, so, thus, consequently if qualifying - showing that what you are describing depends on another condition, use: however, although, unless, except, if, as long as, apart from, yet if illustrating - used when adding examples, use: for example, such as, for instance, as revealed by, in the case of, demonstrated by if defining - used to add information about a person place or thing: who, that, which, whom, where, when Additional tips 1. Use _ing words or _ed words to begin sentences. For example Coming home, I saw... Faded, the paint was not to my taste. 2. Use a variety of sentence lengths. 3. Use the passive to add variety or to draw attention away from the original subject of a sentence. Instead of "John made a mistake", write the sentence "backwards". Write, "A mistake was made by John." You can leave the original subject out (John) and write " The mistake was made. " Leave it up to the reader to guess who or what was the original subject. 4. Use multiple verbs to create pace and excitement - e.g. John rushed, yelled and thrusted his banner foward. To add exitement use to take the story forwarsa nd abckwards and then forwards again - e.g. John rushed, fell, regained his feet and thrust his banner foward. 30. Easier Response Word List Words to describe a person's emotions +ve happy glad merry gay blissful cheery bubbly excited surprised delighted elated thrilled ecstatic joyful funny witty relaxed peaceful satisfied calm secure desiring admiring -ve annoyed irritable cross disgruntled disgusted angry enraged resenting dejected moody burdened humiliated threatened unsure doubtful shy anxious nervous apprehensive lonely disturbed distressed awful depressed grieving impatient exasperated uncomfortable dismayed fed-up hurt perplexed upset harassed fearful horrified terrified petrified frustrated desperate distraught infuriated irate livid mad outraged seething sore hateful disappointed unhappy ashamed guilty down.low sad gloomy miserable depressed frightened afraid Words to describe thinking +ve healthy open sensible able correct reasonable reliable sound right certain capable knowledgeable considered understanding wonder dreaming imagining educated balanced open minded unbiased mature fair wise questioning just enlightened interested -ve feeble shallow rambling windy clumsy waffly monotonous vague daydreaming boring muddled puzzled baffled obscure unsound inadequate ignorant biased prejudiced intellectual believing gullible ridiculous pathetic bewildered stupid idiotic imaginary idealistic sentimental obsessive silly dreamy illusory Words to describe how a person relates +ve pleasant genuine sincere sorry forgiving tactful kind considerate appreciative grateful contributing giving fond friendly intimate committed gentle caring tender warm sensitive accepting sympathetic compassionate human loving careful -ve romantic rejecting hostile inconsiderate unkind insincere snobbish having.to.win being.a.loser manipulating intimidating strange crazy mad resisting defensive withdrawing humoring passive submissive retaliation defiance courting.favours flattery tactless boss asserting blunt controlling teaching instructing lecturing logical powerful persuading ordering warning distrusting disciplinarian disagreeing advising Words to describe in what ways a person is good +ve down-to-earth matter-of-fact earthy good honest questioning humble real bold frank full-blooded direct unafraid sharing with.integrity pure giving principled devout loving -ve inflexible conventional insincere sophisticated hollow hypocritical dishonest pitying sharp smug proud arrogant envious jealous greedy sour shrewd cynical shifty evasive sly cunning corrupt immoral crude harsh mean nasty abrupt mocking blaming ridiculing shaming insulting abuse vengeful aggressive cruel selfish fake phony twisted illogical blind obsessive withdrawing opting.out submissive lying weak easily.lead Words to describe a person's activities +ve optimistic curious inquisitive vigilant adventurous talkative chatty dry confident certain positive admiring healthy vital energetic excited passionate firm assertive determined focused persistent forceful assured growing supporting consoling flexible -ve pessimistic solemn official pompous sober reserved bored cool intense tentative doubtful suspicious tired drugged drunk escapist aggressive angry attacking violent stormy uncontrollable tense jumpy shaky hasty distracted willful unrelenting dominant Words to describe how independent a person is +ve independent initiative secure powerful lively eager energetic desire courageous bold brave -ve dependent insecure passive obedient submissive listless deflated worthless vulnerable defenseless powerless useless disorganized cowardly running.away hurt ill nauseous misunderstood mixed-up muddled helpless hopeless frail fragile inferior lonely unwanted unloved rejected undecided lost disorientated bewildered Words to describe how fit or healthy a person is +ve relaxed warm full comfortable coordinated fit healthy strong trainable lean young sexy warm full active energetic vital -ve old bloated uncoordinated clumsy hungry starving dying lethargic 31.
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