® ADWRITETHINKCONNECT TM ® READWRITETHINKCONNECT TM Fiction ® ADWRITETHINKCONNECT TM SHORT FICTION ® READWRITETHINKCONNECT TM THE FOLLOW WATER ILLUSTRATION BY CHRISTOPHER B. SHORT; STOCKTREK IMAGES/GETTY IMAGES (MARS) Is Georgie stuck on Mars forever? BY JENNIFER L. HOLM SCOPE.SCHOLASTIC.COM • SEPTEMBER 2016 11 I the planet had seemed pretty good. a long time ago about what Mars But I can’t stop thinking about They transmitted back maps and might be like for the first colonists. water. Anything to do with water. geological findings and climate data. In the story, the Mars colonists live a Like going for a swim or taking a am floating in water. Next to me, Nana bobs on her back, looking By the time the first 50 people and comfortable life in beautiful domed shower or having a real bath. up at the same blue sky, her white hair tied in a thick braid. She is one dog were sent to Mars, they cities that have amazing views of the wearing her lifeguard-red bathing suit, and her arms trail in the thought they knew the score. landscape. He made it sound not Every two months, a shuttle arrives half bad. with drinking water, but our main Think about what challenges people living on Mars would face. water at her sides in smooth, unhurried motions. Seagulls scream But I suppose it’s not easy to organize the business of living on a Then I got here. source of water is from recycling. trying to get our attention. It is peaceful out here, perfect. deserted rock out in space. There’s Which is why it’s called science The water you spit out when you We are two mermaids enjoying the crazy weather, the subzero cold, “I feel like a lab rat,” I say, baring the freedom of the waves, the tug of my arm reluctantly for the doctor. the undertow, the rush of the water The doctor shrugs. “We have to around us, part of the ocean itself. “Georgie,” Nana says, her voice smiling with pleasure. “It’s heaven to be here with you.” Then a wave comes up from and everybody gets a daily ration. it blows right through the plastic It tastes awful, and there’s never the air in and the UV rays out, but take a sponge bath. Then the doctor yanks the needle out not the dust. It’s everywhere. In That’s why my father’s here. To and slaps on a Band-Aid. your eyes, in your ears, in your find water. Some whiz of a scientist hair. Even your belly button. Most told NASA that they should “follow people get used to it, but not me. the water,” that is, follow the I mean, how do you get used to scientific evidence of where the finding dust up your nose every water has been before, to find new “No more blood!” I say. morning? And it’s impossible to get water. Unfortunately, this planet I put up with a lot on this planet. the taste out of your mouth—rusty, was once covered with an ocean, like you’re losing a tooth. so that’s a lot of territory to cover. I’ve heard this a million times. Only adults over 18 are allowed to go and I guess they want to avoid The doctor pats my arm. “I’m turning us into mutants. I could tell one getting stuck with a needle. filtered and put back in the system, so superfine, so microscopic, that tube of dark red blood is sucked out. “Ouch!” I say. Easy for her to say. She’s not the about the dust right. The dust is on a shuttle like sardines. development.” Mars’ gravity is one-third of Earth’s, “Georgiana,” my mother says, takes six months to get here packed The doctor jabs the needle in my “There. That wasn’t so bad, now was it?” my mother says brightly. “Whoops,” the doctor says. “I need one more tube.” them about their mutant theory Like no friends and rehydrated of gravity though. I’ve grown four food and performing like a pony on inches in the time I’ve been here. transmissions for kids back home. We are the fourth wave of pioneers, known as Fourths. The “Georgiana,” my mother says. “No more!” I run to the door, and second wave erected the medical then stop. Because on this dumb cabin I’m standing in. The cabin is planet, I can’t even make a dramatic 1 I have to put on my stupid “It’s important for us to gather made of thick black plastic, sturdy exit. biological data for future colonists,” enough to protect us from the solar survival suit first. she adds, as if that would somehow radiation, which can kill you—give make this fun. you terrible skin cancer. That’s what father. They live for experiments had to have their noses removed. and collecting data. My parents love Now the whole compound is a rabbit I Mars, which makes sense, since warren of connecting plastic tunnels. than you can imagine. The average My mother is a geologist like my Mars is really just a big rock. They even when you pee—it all gets how the lower gravity will affect your I realize I’m still on Mars. shaking her head. “Come on.” Mr. Robinson did get the part enough to do anything more than they thought I’d finished puberty. I plead. “Look at my arm!” the dust storms, and the fact that it tents we live in. The plastic keeps to Mars. They let me come because “Can we do this another day?” brush your teeth, leftover dishwater, arm again. It stings, and I wince. A up, breathing in stale, musty air. having a hard time finding a vein.” fiction and not reality, I guess. keep an eye on you. We don’t know behind, crashes over us, and I wake the Firsts found out. Some of them There’s nothing like death and head down the plastic hallway. It’s eerily quiet, the way it gets before a bad dust storm hits, and I shiver. It’s cold on Mars, colder temperature is -81 degrees. 2 On the trip here, I read Red Mars spend hours talking about geological disaster to make you figure out formations and whether the Holden how to do things right. But all those by Kim Stanley Robinson. It’s this Crater was once a lake. unmanned robots that explored famous science-fiction book written 12 We don’t have any water here. above our heads, swooping low, diving across the waves as if The only reason I’m even here is that the last batch of geologists SHUTTERSTOCK (ASTRONAUT); STOCKTREK IMAGES/GETTY IMAGES (MARS BACKGROUND) AS YOU READ start fixing up the planet, and then lots of people can come. haven’t been lining up to go to Mars a whole new world for people to mess anymore. up and overpopulate. I mean, I know 3 first exploratory missions. So after when you can’t wash your hair? the Spring Disaster, as the media it in his eyes every time they sent M up a new batch of settlers. His one weren’t going to tell you, but—” wanted to do anyway. You could see condition was that I come. You’d think I’d be happy to go to Mars. It’s every kid’s dream, right? Red Mars is a real book published in 1993. It takes place in 2026. Why might Georgie have been reading it? we’re here for a good reason, but who cares about saving humankind my father to go back, which he INFERENCE It will be Mars than anyone; he was on the called it, the government begged 2 Once they find water, they can dust storm. Since then, geologists My father knows more about What does the first section reveal about how Georgie feels about being on Mars? Which is why they need geologists. they sent up got killed in a spring 1 INFERENCE y parents are waiting when I get back to the cabin. “We got a transmission from Earth,” my mother says. “We 3 INFERENCE What does Georgie mean when she refers to people messing up the world? “But what?” I have a bad feeling. My father takes off his glasses and cleans them COPYRIGHT @2003 BY JENNIFER HOLM. FIRST PUBLISHED BY SIMON & SCHUSTER BOOKS FOR YOUNG READERS. REPRINTED BY PERMISSION OF JILL GRINBERG LITERARY AGENCY, LLC ON BEHALF OF THE PROPRIETOR. SCHOLASTIC SCOPE • SEPTEMBER 2016 SCOPE.SCHOLASTIC.COM SCOPE.SCHOLASTIC.COM • SEPTEMBER • MAY 2016 13 with a corner of his shirt. He puts 4 And every time I dream of get back to Earth. Your legs could been so healthy. She was an Olympic swimmer.” them back on and says wearily, water, I dream of Nana and me shatter from the gravity, and you “Nana’s been diagnosed with together. may never walk again.” stomach cancer.” “She’s dying,” my mother says. Two mermaids in the ocean. I know she’d laugh at the way we scenario?” I ask. “No kidding.” I nod. “She won a gold medal. “You could be in a wheelchair for Backstroke.” the rest of your life,” my mom adds. live in plastic tents. “Why, you all “Didn’t you,” I say, my voice me to swim. All those summers my look like hamsters,” she’d say, and wavering, “didn’t you know about “My parents refuse to go back to parents spent at NASA, or on the she’d be right. She’s just that kind of this before you brought me here?” Earth to see her. They say she’s going International Space Station, I spent person. She tells it like it is. at the Jersey Shore with Nana in her the only person in the whole world sweet little yellow house looking who’s ever believed in me. She’s out on the beach. Those summers “When are we going back?” I ask. were the best parts of my life. “We’re not,” my mom says. Sometimes I wish I could have lived “What are you talking about? We with Nana forever. “Your parents love you,” she always says, and I know they do, can’t leave Nana alone.” Nana is my father’s mother, and he’s an only child. We’re all she has. but they forget I’m here sometimes, “Honey,” my mom says, “the like I’m an experiment that slipped cancer spread to her lymph nodes. massive fractures. You’d spend neither of these brilliant scientists percent of my bones, and my body months in a full body cast. Best- thought this one through. could shatter or something.” case, you’d sustain no breaks and H “ I look up from my holding a tray. Buddy is 21 and a Nana knows everything about breakfast in the mess Good question. on a regimen of IV-delivered drugs. “Maybe you should leave now, After that, you’ll still have to be you know, before it gets worse. Have careful. Physical therapy too.” My parents won’t let me go.” “You can always stow away,” he scientist or in the military. His hair jokes. “Like my grandfather.” is short, and the skin on his face is He purses his lips, considering. “Minimum four months, I imagine, “No,” I say. “But it doesn’t matter. Marine. Everyone here is either a to build up your calcium.” “Why did they bring you here?” you talked to the doc?” “What do you mean?” scientist, says, “Statistically, there’s dry and flaky. Mine is the same way. only a 5 percent chance that Nana When there’s no water, it’s hard to “My grandfather grew up on a “Ah,” he says. “But I’m not you.” And that’s when I realize I’m in this alone. S “ weetie,” my mom says I like Buddy. He’s funny, and he and stowed away aboard a Navy parents. Like how I wanted to get a “Well, I don’t care. I’m going.” doesn’t talk to me like I’m a little kid. ship. Ended up in Hawaii.” Buddy’s you’re feeling down about Nana, place on the swim team (I did), and “You can’t go,” my mom says. He sits down and digs into his beeper goes off, and he looks down. so your dad has a birthday surprise that I was worried my folks would “Your last calcium test came back rehydrated eggs. “Dust storm’s pressure me to become a scientist and”—she takes a deep breath— coming,” he says. (they do), and how I wished a boy “you’ve lost a lot of bone density.” named Chen would like me (he does). Nana is the thing I miss most “So what? I’ll drink lots of milk, OK?” I hate milk, especially the What else is new. I pick up a toffee candy that they leave out in bowls on the tables. “How’s it going?” he asks. from Earth. Sure, I hate the dust powdered stuff we have on Mars, “I’ve had better days,” I say. and not being able to take a bath or but I’ll do anything to get to Nana. “By the way, happy birthday.” have a conversation with someone “You don’t understand,” my “My grandmother has cancer,” I my own age, but there are days dad says. “You’ve lost 30 percent when I go crazy from the loneliness of your bone mass. No one knows He blinks. “Whoa. That’s awful.” of not being able to talk to her. what effect that will have when you I shake my head. “She’s always 14 SCHOLASTIC SCOPE • SEPTEMBER 2016 blurt. “She’s gonna die.” JONATHAN KNOWLES/GETTY IMAGES (WATER DROPLET); ISTOCK/GETTY IMAGES (MONSTER); STOCKTREK IMAGES/GETTY IMAGES (MARS BACKGROUND) keep your skin moist and glowing. This is how they talk. 6 “Gotta go, brat. Talk to the doc.” He stands, pockets a handful of toffees, and winks. “I love this stuff. Takes the taste of dust away.” He buckles into his suit and disappears out the door. N “ obody knows what will happen to the first adolescent to have lived What does this line suggest about Georgie’s relationship with her parents? What other lines provide insight into their relationship? me?” I ask. fears. Stuff I could never tell my would survive longer than that.” 5 INFERENCE “What would you do if you were farm, and he hated it, so he ran away me. My dreams, my goals, my Why does Georgie associate Nana with water? would only require hospitalization “How long would that be?” “No kidding.” ey, brat.” die before we get there.” to be called Georgiana. present.” my dad says quizzically. I wonder if I’m someone else’s baby My dad, ever the compassionate back. “Talk about a lousy birthday “Why would you want to leave?” hall and see Buddy standing there You’re just guessing,” I say. He puts down his fork, sits Mars?” I whisper. never make it back in time. She’ll he still hasn’t figured out that I hate He leans back in his chair, folds won’t let me go because I’ve lost 30 “So how am I ever going to leave 4 CHARACTER could happen?” glance at each other. It’s clear that She’s got five months to live. We’d mistake. I mean, I’m nearly 15, and I let that sink in. “OK, what else his hands. “Your legs would sustain look nothing alike, and sometimes “You don’t know that for sure! you’ll never walk again.” to die before they get there, and they My parents cast a sidelong their minds. Especially my dad. We they picked up in the hospital by “Your leg bones will shatter from the force of Earth’s gravity, and It all comes out in a painful rush. Nana was the one who taught 5 “What’s the worst-case a few days later as I lay in my bunk. “We know for you. Don’t you, honey?” “Well,” he says. “I got permission for us to take a rover!” I roll my eyes. Just what I need. Another rock-hunting expedition. “I’m really not up to looking at 6 CHARACTER rocks,” I say. “But we’re not going to look at rocks,” he says. “It’s even better.” Does Buddy really think Georgie is a brat? How do you know? This should be good. My dad’s on Mars, Georgiana,” the doctor says idea of fun is taking core from behind his big desk. samples. SCOPE.SCHOLASTIC.COM • SEPTEMBER 2016 15 “I promise you’ll like it,” my mom says. “Come on.” W “That is where I found a downward smear of water-soluble mineral deposits in a core sample.” He “Sure,” he says finally. “How “But Georgie,” she says, her eyes about at oh-seven-hundred?” twinkling, “you’re already home.” 8 Then I wake up in the plastic Over his shoulder, I see my “Hey, Buddy,” I blush, holding my duffel. “The closet in the back is e are wearing our survival draws the moment out. “I figure we cabin and hear the storm raging parents enter the cafeteria, holding suits. My dad parks drill 400 meters down, and we’ll hit outside and I can’t help myself. hands and laughing, and something There’s a blanket and some other the rover, gets out, and water,” he says with a wink. inside me goes still. Suddenly, stuff too.” starts walking, but I just stare. We “Really?” I can’t keep the It’s strange how serene it is—the horizon unbroken by buildings or trees or anything but a rolling rockstudded surface, an alien desert. “This way,” my dad calls over his mic. “Race you to the edge!” And then we are bounding across the landscape, and I am leaping over big boulders with an ease I could never have on Earth and it’s such a rush, this feeling excitement out of my voice. “Really,” my mom says, smiling at my dad proudly. “Does anybody know yet?” I ask. “No. We won’t announce it until we know for sure,” my dad says. I stare at my dad. “But how do you know you’ll find water, Dad? I mean, how can you know for sure?” 7 And then he says something that shocks me. “Nothing’s ever certain, B all these little things seem so uddy sidles up to me in the mess hall with a tray of food. smiles, these two strong legs. How He raises a curious eyebrow. can I possibly give this up? “It’s this book,” I say, “about the “You been crying, brat?” I glare at him. Buddy sees where I’m looking. “Did you see the doc?” he presses. “You sure you know what you’re for four months. Worst-case, I’m and I know that I am my father’s crippled for life.” I swallow hard. daughter after all. “You just have to “And Nana’s all alone,” I whisper. have hope.” He clears his throat. “My They gave him three months to live. says. His voice crackles over the mic. Know how long he lasted?” if every cell in me is shouting—so “You just have to have hope.” I stop suddenly, my dad a step ahead. We are standing on the edge of a huge canyon, winding I Nirgal Vallis. We think there was once a big river there.” “Like the Grand Canyon?” I say. “Exactly,” my mom says. “And see there? That red flag?” My dad points to a stretch of cliff where a little red flag waves merrily. “Uh-huh.” He clears his throat importantly. 16 SCHOLASTIC SCOPE • SEPTEMBER 2016 down at my legs. He pats my cheek. “You’ll be he next morning when I wake up in the same hospital as your up, my parents are getting grandmother. That way you can be ready to head out. together.” “Thanks,” I whisper. “A whole year.” captain’s finishing breakfast now.” I’d settle for a week with Nana. says excitedly. “This is it, Georgie.” He gives me a goofy grin. “And hey, the scent of salt in the air. I turn His beeper goes off and he Her face is one big grin. “You’ll have take a swim for me, OK?” “Nana,” I cry, hugging her sturdy “I’ve missed you.” “That,” my dad says, “is the I hesitate for a moment, stare wet hair plastered on my face, movie. It is the most beautiful thing strange peace steals over me. kind of like his version better.” am bobbing in the ocean, my body, comforting like Christmas. its rawness, like the ocean, and a I smile back. “Sort of. Although I back until late tonight,” my mom “I’ve missed you too, Georgie,” she says. “You don’t look like you’re dying.” groans. “Shuttle just got in.” “Shuttle?” “Supply shuttle. I’m helping unload it. It’s dropping off supplies, then heading back to Earth in the morning.” He stands abruptly. The dust storm roars outside, but “Dying? I’m healthy as a horse!” the only thing I hear is that one little Her cheeks are ruddy, her skin word: Earth. is flush with good health, even her eyes are shining. “I want to do something,” I say. “But I’m scared.” “You can do whatever you want to do,” she says. “You always could.” “I want to come home,” I say simply. “And be with you.” I grab his wrist. “Maybe I could bring you coffee in the morning. You know, over at the shuttle,” I say casually, looking him straight in the eye, willing him to hear me. Buddy unwraps a toffee, sticks it in his mouth, chews for a moment, and stares at me. “Only if you take one for me.” We’re finding water today.” “What?” he asks. I smile mysteriously. 9 know what I mean soon enough. I’m leaving this planet just when it’s when I stop him. I hug him hard A too. He’s startled. all that blue water ahead. A whole “I love you, Mom.” My dad’s almost out the door my eyes, imagining Mars disappearing behind me 10 and And then they are gone. of it all, Nana. B the only one there. “Hey, brat,” he says. What does she mean? I settle back and close world of it. And there, in the middle the thermos of coffee. He’s 9 INFERENCE s the engines roar to life, “Good luck,” I say. uddy is waiting when I bring What does Georgie mean when she says “something inside me goes still”? He’ll help but think how ironic it is that getting good. Still, I hug her hard. 8 FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE “You’d better go, brat. The your very own pool in no time. “I know you will,” I say, and can’t Why does his statement shock Georgie? He laughs. “Does he get it right?” team to Nirgal Vallis. We won’t be and there is Nana beside me. 7 INFERENCE first colonists on Mars.” fine. Just have them hook you “We’re going out with the Alpha “How long?” I whisper, hope dog-eared copy of Red Mars. lodged in my throat. and wild, like something out of a I have ever seen. It’s awesome in T grandfather died from cancer too. Georgiana,” my dad, the scientist, body may not support me on Earth. “Nothing’s ever certain,” I say, scenario I have to be in a hospital pounding, my lungs inflating, as inconceivable that this same strong doing?” he asks. “Yeah. Great news. Best-case coursing through me, my heart healthy! so alive!—that it seems “Here,” I say, and give him my important—this candy, those STOCKTREK IMAGES/GETTY IMAGES (MARS BACKGROUND); SHUTTERSTOCK (ALL OTHER PHOTOS) are alone in the middle of Mars. I just cry. cleared out for you. Door’s open. I can almost hear her voice. 10 TEXT FEATURE Explain what the title of the story means. To what does it refer? “Georgie,” she will say. “It’s heaven to be here with you.” They should be finding my note right about now, I figure. • Turn e g the pawhat it out Mars. to find live on o t e k ta would Informational Text 2 Home sweet home! What Would It Take to Live Here? constructing what will be the most possible. ability to explore deep space will be within our reach. Named the Space Launch System, the superfast rocket could get humans to Mars in about nine months! So what is standing in our way? A trip that long would require a fully stocked spacecraft: food 1 (freeze-dried chicken, anyone?), Getting There don’t have the technology to take water, and a lot of fuel. Colonists Mars is about people that deep into space. The would need a decent amount of 140 million miles farthest humans have traveled is living space too; they would be on from Earth. We to the moon, which is only about board for nearly a year, after all. 18 SCHOLASTIC SCOPE • SEPTEMBER 2016 SHUTTERSTOCK (MARS, HOUSE); ISTOCK/GETTY IMAGES (ROCKET) a thrilling conclusion: Sustaining human life on Mars may be powerful rocket ever built, the ISTOCK/GETTY IMAGES (STAR); RENEE COMET/STOCKFOOD/GETTY IMAGES (APPLE); SHUTTERSTOCK (WATER, ASTRONAUT); SERGII GODOVANIUK/HEMERA/GETTY IMAGES (THERMOMETER) barren landscape, and total lack of breathable air. its environment. That information has led some scientists to would live in deep thin atmosphere and lack of strong (ISS): weakened immune systems, space longer than sunlight are two of many reasons extreme fatigue, and substantial anyone ever has. No one is quite gardening would be difficult. muscle and bone loss. sure what that would do to the Crops would need to be grown in human body—but radiation would special greenhouses. ISS for only four to six months 4 at a time. What would happen Here on Earth, we’re protected exactly a hospitable place, with its intense dust storms, sending robots and rovers to Mars to collect information about the International Space Station speeding around space at all times. to NASA, after engineers finish But for the past 50 years, scientists have been low-gravity environment aboard for the indoors. As for food, Mars’s of high-energy particles that are 250,000 miles away. But according what happens to astronauts in a which could be used to provide air to the naked eye, radiation is made olonizing Mars would be a pretty big undertaking. It isn’t to produce oxygen from water, Mars colonists definitely be a problem. Invisible Six challenges that must be solved before humans can move to Mars BY MACKENZIE CARRO C Deadly Radiation Water The good news is that Mars has water. In fact, Most astronauts stay on the to colonists living long-term on Mars? 6 Weather by our planet’s magnetic field. In the planet was once covered with space, however, we’d be exposed. it. The bad news is that most of The effects of radiation exposure that water is frozen underground Though Mars could include severe memory and likely contains toxic gets to a balmy 70 loss, brain damage, and cancer. chemicals. Scientists aren’t sure degrees near its equator during Colonists would need some sort of how the water could be harvested the summer, most of the time shielding on the journey to Mars and purified to make it safe to it’s deathly cold. The average and once they get there. drink. Most likely, colonists would temperature is -81 degrees 3 rely on recycled water, at least at Fahrenheit. Colonists would need first. And yes, that would mean special spacesuits and houses to drinking purified urine. keep them from freezing. Food and Air Mars lacks two important elements: food and oxygen. (OK, two really important elements.) Shipping food and breathable 5 Gravity Mars is smaller Mars is really, really chilly. Then there are the dust storms. These storms kick up lots of thin, sticky dust that could damage than Earth, which equipment and, if a storm were means it has less large enough, block out the sun gravity. This low for days. This would be quite air from Earth would be much too gravity would enable humans to problematic if colonists were to slow and expensive, so colonists jump higher and run faster. Over use solar panels—equipment that would need to make their own. time, however, it would be harmful. turns sunlight into energy—to NASA has already developed a way We have already observed power their colony. • WRITING CONTEST Explain how Jennifer L. Holm draws on scientific information in her story “Follow the Water.” Include details from the story as well as from “What Would It Take to Live Here?” to support your ideas. Send your essay to MARS CONTEST. Five winners will each get One Small Step by P.B. Kerr. See page 2 for details. GET THIS ACTIVITY ONLINE SCOPE.SCHOLASTIC.COM • SEPTEMBER 2016 19
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