“An informal letter” by Azhar Amechat
Hi Carlos,
I know you’re living now in Italy. I want to ask you, how are you going there?
And, are you going on a date with Maria?
How are you doing at school?. I’m very happy because I passed all the English
exams, I love it, it is my favorite subject. I’m fine in Barcelona, but these days
the weather is crazy and it rains a lot. My sister is going to get married with a
Moroccan boy, this boy loves the cuscus and we bought a lot for the
engagement party.
I hope you will answer me soon.
See you soon
Azhar Amechat
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Hi Carlos,
I know you’re living in Italy these days. I wanted to ask you, how are you going
there? And, are you still going on a date with Maria?
How are you doing at school? I’m extremely happy because I passed all the
English exams. I love this language, it is my favorite subject. It was awesome.
I’m fine in Barcelona, but this week the weather is crazy and it is raining a lot.
My sister is going to get married with a Moroccan boy. This boy loves cuscus
and we bought a lot for their engagement party.
I hope you will answer me soon. I haven’t received any news from you in ages.
See you soon
Azhar Amechat
PS. Don’t be like me. Write a longer email. Take your time.
“A Reply to a Previous Email” by Manpreet Singh
Hi,Toni
How have you been? I hope you're well
Thanks for your last email. I think your idea of studying Economics is awesome.
I know you gonna do it good.
Anyway, here is my news. I'm very confused to choose my future studies. I don't
know what to do? I was thinking to join a private academy of languages, to
prove my skills. This is what I'm thinking to do.
Well, I have to go my cousin is waiting for me and I'm short of time.
See you later, Best wishes.
Manpreet
PS, I forgot to ask about your mom, how is she now? I hope she'll recover soon.
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Hi,Toni
How have you been? I hope you have recovered from your illness.
Thanks for your last email. I think your idea of studying Economics is awesome.
I know everything is gonna be alright.
Anyway, here is my news. I'm very confused about choosing my future studies. I
still don't know what to do. I was wondering about joining a private academy of
languages, to prove my skills. This is what I have been thinking about doing.
Well, I have to rush now. My cousin is waiting for me and I'm short of time.
See you later,
Best wishes.
Manpreet
PS, I forgot to ask about your mom, how is she feeling now? I hope she'll
recover from her terrible car accident soon.
“An Informal Letter” by Basanti Shrestha
Hi Selena,
Thank you very much for your kind email of November 5. It was such a pleasure
to hear from you after a long time. I was wondering how you found time to write
to me in the busy schedule of these festivals. I hope you enjoyed a lot.
Anyway, I’m feeling glad and proud to know your plans for future studies. As
you know, I wanted to study medicine since my childhood. But, now as I moved
on here from Nepal, things changed a lot. Studies are extremely hard due to the
difficulties in languages. But still I haven’t given up on my hopes. This is the last
year of my bachelor. And next year I will go to the university, but I have made
change on it. I am thinking to take a gap before going to university so, that I can
improve the difficulties I have in languages and also to make some for it as
universities here are really expensive. However, right now my total focus is to
pass this class with good marks.
Well, there are many things but it’s hard to express through this email. Hope to
see you soon. See you!
Basanti
PS: Sorry to hear about your grandfather. I hope he gets better soon.
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Hi Selena,
Thank you very much for your kind email of November 5. It was such a
pleasure to hear from you after such a long time. I was wondering how
you found enough time to write to me in the busy schedule of these
festivals. I hope you enjoyed your experience a lot.
Anyway, I’m feeling glad and proud to know about your plans for your
future studies. As you know, I have always wanted to study medicine
since my childhood. But, when I moved here from Nepal, things changed
a lot. Studies are extremely hard due to the difficulties I have in the new
languages I must learn. But, still I haven’t given up on my hopes. This is
the last year of my bachelor. And next year I am definitely going to
university, but I have made some changes on my previous decision. I am
thinking about taking a gap before starting up university so, that I can
overcome the difficulties I still have in languages and also to make some
money for my studies as universities here are really and extremely
expensive. However, right now I’m totally focused in passing this year
with the best marks I can manage.
Well, there are many things I could say but it’s hard to express them
through this short email.
Hope to see you soon.
See you!
Basanti
PS: Sorry to hear about your grandfather. I hope he’ll get better in the
coming days.
“An Informal Letter” by Jharana Shrestha
Hi Nishan,
How have you been? I hope you and your family are doing good. It’s been ages
since I’ve heard from you so I thought of writing a few lines to check things with
you. May this is also your last year in school. What have you thought about your
higher studies?
By the way, did you hear about our childhood friend Suman? He is going to the
USA next week for his higher studies and I’m here who still haven’t thought
anything about it. Actually, I’m in two minds about what to do after school. As
iyou know Since childhood I always wanted to be a doctor but my Spanish is not
good enough to pass with good marks to study medicine, so I’ve decided to
take a gap year and try for it. Then I want to get some work experience and
save some money for university.
Anyway I must go and get on with my work. Say hello to your brothers and hope
we’ll meet soon, by.
Love,
Jharana Shrestha
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“An Informal Letter” by Jharana Shrestha
Hi Nishan,
How have you been? I hope you and your family are doing good. It’s been ages
since I’ve heard from you last, so I thought of writing a few lines to check things
out with you. Maybe this is also your last year in school. What have you thought
about your higher studies?
By the way, did you hear about our childhood close friend Suman? He is
traveling to the USA next week for his higher studies. Imagine, he’ll be living
there for four years at least. On the contrary, I’m stuck here: a young girl who
hasn’t decided anything about it yet. Actually, I’m in two minds about what to do
after school. As you know, I had always wanted to be a doctor since childhood,
but my Spanish is not good enough to pass with good marks to study medicine.
That’s why I’ve decided to take a gap year and try for it. At the same time, I
want to get some work experience and save some money for university.
Anyway I must go and get on with my work. I have to rush because I’m terribly
late. I must be studying in the school library in twenty minutes.
Say hello to your brothers and I hope we’ll meet again soon.
Love,
Jharana Shrestha
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