Journeys – Year 9 curriculum pack Route through week 3: Exploring and discovering Work based on the ‘monsters’ images Starter activities 1. Setting the context. Revisit the key quotations for this week. Simply ask student groups to reconsider them and ask themselves: how true are they? What examples can they think of each statement in their own experiences? They could use the additional sheet entitled Week 3 quotations for this task. The resource includes illustrative examples of the sorts of things students might write. Encourage students to cross out examples they disagree with. 2. Ideas about aliens. Ask students to look through the pictures of strange, mysterious monsters. Also show them some pictures of ‘aliens’ as depicted in films. What are the common features of all these ‘aliens’ — both from outer space and from remote corners of the world? What advantages might the ‘monsters’ gain from their ‘alien’ characteristics? 3. Describing accurately. Put students into pairs, and seat them back-to-back. Give one of the partners a picture of one of the monsters. They have to describe the monster so that their partner can draw it accurately. The artist is not allowed to ask questions. The description needs to be careful and accurate. Differentiation: To support those who find it hard to describe accurately (or draw accurately!), you could prepare some outline drawings of some of the monsters. These would be easier to describe and to draw. Main activities 1. Writing accurately. Get students to write a clear description of one of the monsters. Insist they concentrate on clarity and succinctness, and on accuracy of grammar and punctuation. You could model this with one monster. 2. Creative writing. Get students to write an explorer’s account of his/her encounter with one of the tribes depicted. Alternatively, imagine that one of these tribes really does exist and that one of its own explorers ‘discovers’ our area of the world. What would they make of the monsters (us) that they ‘discover’? Get students to write the account of the meeting with ‘us’. To help this process, you could display random pictures of people (including celebrities) and ask students what conclusions about our world/civilisation an outsider might come to on the basis of these people. © www.teachit.co.uk 2014 23696 39 Journeys – Year 9 curriculum pack Differentiation: The alternative suggestion above is likely to be useful for challenging imaginative students, who love alternative viewpoints. On the other hand, less skilled writers would need the main task to be scaffolded. You could generate with them a list of aspects of humans that these explorer monsters would want to deal with in their account. Plenary activities 1. Reader-writer groups. Group all students into threes. Stop the writing every so often and insist that the trios share their work and give each other helpful feedback aimed at making the rest of the writing even better. © www.teachit.co.uk 2014 23696 40 Journeys – Year 9 curriculum pack Work based on ‘Amundsen’s arrival at the South Pole’ Starter activities 1. Pre-reading. Before students read Amundsen's account, get them to imagine the last few miles of the journey. What would the team have been thinking and feeling? What would they be hearing, seeing, smelling? Show them photos and videos of Antarctica to fuel their imaginations. 2. Role play. Ask students to consider what might have motivated these men to go on such a dangerous expedition. Put students into groups of five and get them to develop a drama of the last few miles of the journey and what the explorers say to each other during a pause in their progress. Main activities 1. Character reactions. Ask students to read Amundsen’s account. Prompt them to notice his thoughts and feelings. Ask them to compare what he writes with the content of their group's improvisation. Are they surprised by his actual attitudes and feelings? 2. Reader reactions. Tell students to compare their reactions to the killing of the dog. Prompt them to consider the way Amundsen tells this part of the story. Is he trying to shock the reader? Does the way he writes affect how we feel about the event? Ask students to rewrite part of the description so that it does not come across so bluntly and brutally. What did they have to do to ‘soften’ the writing? Differentiation: Model this for students. Writing part of it with them would help to ensure that less confident students can concentrate on language style, rather than content. 3. Amundsen in depth. Model for students how to write an analysis of Amundsen’s thoughts and feelings and how these are expressed. To prepare for this, you could ask students to identify three parts of the text (each of no more than 15 words) which they find particularly striking in relation to how Amundsen relates the incident and its aftermath. Plenary activities 1. Ping-pong. Put students into two teams. Give members of one team a possible feeling of Amundsen OR of the reader (a mixture would be fine). Tell the other team that when a feeling/reader reaction is called out from the first team, a member of the second team has to quickly find a perfect, very short quotation that has potential for evidence for the offered feeling/reaction. Differentiation: Put weaker students on the team that calls out feelings/reactions. Very able students could form a third team. Their task is to evaluate the relevance and usefulness of pieces of evidence chosen by members of the second team. © www.teachit.co.uk 2014 23696 41 Journeys – Year 9 curriculum pack Work based on ‘A perfect night’ from Travels with a Donkey in the Cévennes by Robert Louis Stevenson Starter activities 1. Moody reading. The atmosphere of this writing is crucial to its effect and purpose: the atmosphere follows the contours of Stevenson's moods, which are so different here than to the previous extracts. Ask students to: identify moods and feelings in the passage, and underline words and short phrases which are key contributors to the mood or atmosphere at those points. Alternatively, you could get groups to identify three key words or phrases each, and then go and look at others’ annotated copies, before returning to their own copy to add up to three extra words or phrases. Differentiation: Group students into mixed ability groups to give support to weaker students, or into same ability groups to encourage an appropriate level of challenge in each group. Main activities 1. Which is best? ‘Amundsen’s arrival at the South Pole’ and ‘A perfect night’ are about very different perfect moments. It is worth getting students to compare how the writers bring these episodes to life for the reader. Which text do the students consider to be better written? Which one do they consider to be more effective? Which one do they find more convincing and ‘authentic’ in conveying the writer's feelings? Obviously they will need to get ready to explain and justify their preferences. 2. Speed dating. If there are equal numbers of students supporting each text you could run a 'speed-dating' debate in which students sit in opposing pairs and have a couple of minutes to explain and discuss their positions. All supporters of one text would then move onto the next table to make a new opposing partnership. 3. Reading assessment. You could use ‘Perfect Night’ as an assessment text to test and sharpen students’ ability to make points and back them up by referring closely to the text. The questions in Teachit resource 23643: A perfect night … comprehension questions are designed to support this approach to assessment. 4. Autobiographical writing. Ask students to talk to each other about perfect moments in their own lives: e.g.: When they won something; when a relative or friend recovered from an illness; when they found themselves in a wonderful place. Encourage them to choose one ‘moment’ (which could actually be as much as a few hours) and tell their partner all about it and how they were feeling. Ask students to write about this ‘moment’ so as to capture its special qualities for a reader. If you are brave enough, you could tell them about your own ‘perfect © www.teachit.co.uk 2014 23696 42 Journeys – Year 9 curriculum pack moment’ and model for them how you would plan and write it in order to convey the mood of the moment. Plenary activities 1. Compare and contrast. Get students to create a Venn diagram in which they compare and contrast the two texts. To do this, you could: a) Ask students to get into groups of four or five. b) Get them to write down five statements about ‘A perfect night’ and five statements about ‘Amundsen’s arrival at the South Pole’. (At this point, students should be clear in their minds about which excerpts their statements relate to, but should keep this separate from the statements themselves.) The statements could relate to any aspects of the texts including: form, structure, theme, style, tone, language, character or setting. c) Groups should then swap statements with each other. They should draw a Venn diagram outline (as below) and position each of the statements that they have been given in the appropriate place of the diagram. ‘A perfect night’ ‘Amundsen’s arrival at the South Pole’ d) Groups should then report their findings, summing up main points of contrast and similarity and resolving differences of opinion. © www.teachit.co.uk 2014 23696 43 Journeys – Year 9 curriculum pack Work based on ‘Still I Rise’ by Maya Angelou Maya Angelou’s poem, ‘Still I Rise’, suggests a metaphorical journey — a movement from one state to another, a transformation. You could ask students to consider what a poem, whose title is ‘Still I Rise’, could be about. Angelou’s poem is easy to find on the web. It is published on the ‘American Academy of Poets’ site here: www.poets.org/poetsorg/poem/still-i-rise. The power of Angelou’s poem comes from its rise of energy and imagery that develops throughout the poem. That comes across very dramatically when Angelou herself performs the poem. You can find her performance on YouTube. However, it is best to save her performance until students have already developed their own response. Starter activities 1. Journey as metaphor. Point out that that we often use the word ‘journey’ when we are talking about something other than physical travel: we are using the word as a metaphor. For example, we say ‘her personal journey’; our ‘learning journey’. A famous American play is called Long Day’s Journey into Night. Reintroduce one of the quotes of the week, Ann Bancroft’s idea that ‘Exploration is about that journey to the interior, into your own heart.’ Ask students what ‘journey’ might mean when it is being used in these sorts of contexts. 2. Appreciating the effect of rhyme. Give students a copy of the poem with the rhymes removed. For example, you could replace ‘lies’ with ‘fibs’, ‘gloom’ with ‘sorrow’, and so on. Reading the poem without its rhymes will allow students to sense the rhythm. Reading it later with the rhymes will help to appreciate how rhyme can enhance rhythm. 3. Metaphors. Alternatively, you could give students a copy of the poem with the most powerful metaphors (or images more generally) removed and replaced in grey with literal synonyms. The students’ job would be to put in a suitable image. This would allow them to compare their versions with Angelou’s later on. For example, you could replace ‘dirt’ with ‘earth’, ‘pumping’ with ‘rising’. Differentiation: Less able students will struggle with this task, so save it for the main part of the lesson and model the process for them before they begin. Main activities 1. Still I surmise: interpretation. Give students time to read the poem. Then put them into small groups to discuss and interpret the poem. To focus their discussions, you could ask them to decide who the narrator is; what can we work out about them? What do they want? How are they feeling? © www.teachit.co.uk 2014 23696 44 Journeys – Year 9 curriculum pack Differentiation: You could direct students’ attention towards particular words/phrases/lines that you want them to concentrate on. For example: ‘bitter, twisted lies’; ‘Weakened by my soulful cries’; ‘You may kill me with your hatefulness’. Teachit resource 23658: ‘Still I Rise’ – group work tasks guides students through this process. 2. Rehearsed performance. Ask students to perform the poem. They could work on their own to develop an effective reading, or they could work with others to develop a reading with movements that dramatically represent some of the poem’s images as a backdrop to the reading. Plenary activities 1. Challenge it. Regroup students so that they share and challenge each other’s interpretations. Arm the ‘challenger’ students with questions and prompts such as: ‘Can you show me any evidence to support that idea?’ ‘I see. We read that bit differently. What we thought was ...’ ‘Perhaps she might also mean ...’ ‘How do you think that shows [idea]?’ © www.teachit.co.uk 2014 23696 45 Journeys – Year 9 curriculum pack Resources week 3 Page number Resource Where it’s used in the pack Week 3 quotations Week 3 — Work based on ‘monsters’ images 47 A perfect night … comprehension questions (23643) Week 3 — Work based on the ‘A perfect night’ excerpt from Travels with a Donkey in the Cévennes by Robert Louis Stevenson 48 ‘Still I Rise’ — group work tasks (23658) Week 3 — Work based on the poem ‘Still I Rise’ by Maya Angelou 51 © www.teachit.co.uk 2014 23696 46 Week 3 quotations Week 3 quotations We should go to remote places that very few people visit ‘We must go beyond textbooks, go out into the bypaths and untrodden depths of the wilderness and travel and explore and tell the world the glories of our journey.’ John Hope Franklin, 1915–2009, black American historian, author of From Slavery to Freedom (1947) When you have to make important decisions you have to explore your own thoughts and feelings © www.teachit.co.uk 2014 People shouldn’t just read about a place: they should go there ‘ … exploration is about that journey to the interior, into your own heart.’ Ann Bancroft, born 1955, American explorer, particularly of the Arctic and Antarctic. 23696 47 A perfect night … comprehension questions (23643) And yet even while I was exulting in my solitude I became aware of a strange lack. I wished a companion to lie near me in the starlight, silent and not moving, but ever within touch. For there is a fellowship more quiet even than solitude, and which, rightly understood, is solitude made perfect. And to live out of doors with the woman a man loves is of all lives the most complete and free. As I thus lay, between content and longing, a faint noise stole towards me through the pines. I thought, at first, it was the crowing of cocks or the barking of dogs at some very distant farm; but steadily and gradually it took articulate shape in my ears, until I became aware that a passenger was going by upon the high-road in the valley, and singing loudly as he went. There was more of good-will than grace in his performance; but he trolled with ample lungs; and the sound of his voice took hold upon the hillside and set the air shaking in the leafy glens. I have heard people passing by night in sleeping cities; some of them sang; one, I remember, played loudly on the bagpipes. I have heard the rattle of a cart or carriage spring up suddenly after hours of stillness, and pass, for some minutes, within the range of my hearing as I lay abed. There is a romance about all who are abroad in the black hours, and with something of a thrill we try to guess their business. But here the romance was double: first, this glad passenger, lighted internally with wine, who sent up his voice in music through the night; and then I, on the other hand, buckled into my sack, and smoking alone in the pine-woods between four and five thousand feet towards the stars. When I awoke again, many of the stars had disappeared; only the stronger companions of the night still burned visibly overhead; and away towards the east I saw a faint haze of light upon the horizon, such as had been the Milky Way when I was last awake. Day © www.teachit.co.uk 2014 23696 48 A perfect night … comprehension questions (23643) was at hand. I lighted my lantern, and by its glow-worm light put on my boots and gaiters; then I broke up some bread for Modestine, filled my can at the water-tap, and lit my spirit-lamp to boil myself some chocolate. The blue darkness lay long in the glade where I had so sweetly slumbered; but soon there was a broad streak of orange melting into gold along the mountain-tops of Vivarais. A solemn glee possessed my mind at this gradual and lovely coming in of day. Nothing had altered but the light, and that, indeed, shed over all a spirit of life and of breathing peace, and moved me to a strange exhilaration. … I strolled here and there, and up and down about the glade. While I was thus delaying, a gush of steady wind, as long as a heavy sigh, poured direct out of the quarter of the morning. It was cold, and set me sneezing … I could see the thin distant spires of pine along the edge of the hill rock slightly to and fro against the golden east. Ten minutes after, the sunlight spread at a gallop along the hillside, scattering shadows, and the day had come completely. I hastened to prepare my pack, and tackle the steep ascent that lay before me; but I had something on my mind … I had been most hospitably received and punctually served in my green caravanserai. The room was airy, the water excellent. I say nothing of the tapestries or the inimitable ceiling, nor yet of the view which I commanded from the windows; but I felt I was in some one’s debt for all this. And so it pleased me, in a halflaughing way, to leave pieces of money on the turf as I went along, until I had left enough for my night’s lodging. I trust that they did not fall to some rich or churlish drover. © www.teachit.co.uk 2014 23696 49 A perfect night … comprehension questions (23643) Read and answer the questions (a-f) on this page. The number after each question shows you how much detail you should go into in your answer: 1 = a very brief answer 5 = an answer you should explain carefully, referring to details in the text to support what you write. Questions a) Look at the word stole in the first sentence. Stevenson (the writer and narrator) could have used another word, such as ‘crept’ or ‘came’. Why do you think the writer used the word stole? (2) b) What is the noise that Stevenson hears? (1) c) How do we know that the man is singing badly? (2) d) Carefully read paragraph three. (This paragraph begins, ‘When I awoke again ...’.) Describe how Stevenson is feeling in this paragraph. Use your own words as far as possible, but do refer to words that Stevenson uses. (4) e) Carefully read the last paragraph. (This paragraph begins, ‘I hastened to prepare my pack...’) In your own words, explain what Stevenson decides to do, and why he does it. (3) f) Read back over the whole passage. Explain the effect the night has had on Stevenson, and how the words he uses help us to understand the effect on him. (5) © www.teachit.co.uk 2014 23696 50 ‘Still I Rise’ – group work tasks (23658) ‘Still I Rise’ is a well-known poem, and many people like it very much. However, there are lots of different ways of interpreting the poem / making sense of it. Perhaps not even the poet, Maya Angelou, was absolutely sure what she meant. Read the poem carefully to yourself. If possible, read it aloud, as it is a poem that is full of wonderful sounds. Now work in a small group. 1. Talk about who the narrator might be. In other words, who is ‘me’ in the first line of verse one, the ‘I’ in the last line? What clues in the poem help you to decide who the narrator is? What sort of person does the narrator sound like by the way they speak to us? What is their attitude, and how is this attitude expressed? What do they want? How are they feeling? 2. Who is the poem talking to: who is ‘you’? 3. How does the narrator want ‘you’ to feel? IMPORTANT ADVICE ... As you talk, try not to be in a hurry to get to ‘right answers’. Instead, explore possibilities. Look at details in the poem that might support your ideas. Here are some of the words and phrases that it would be a good idea to talk about: Words Your thoughts bitter, twisted lies Did you want to see me broken? Weakened by my soulful cries You may kill me with your hatefulness © www.teachit.co.uk 2014 23696 51 Journeys – Accompanying text excerpts Text excerpts week 3 A selection of ‘monsters’ from Histoires Prodigieuses by Pierre Boaistuau, a copy of which was presented to Queen Elizabeth I in 1560 © Wellcome Library, London © Wellcome Library, London Monstrous creature born to honourable parents. Monster with horn like an elephant’s tusk and monkey heads at breasts with dogs at elbows and knees. Monster born on the borders of England and Normandy. © Wellcome Library, London © Wellcome Library, London The monster which appeared by chance to St. Anthony while he was doing penitence in the desert. Little male monster, who has four arms and four legs. © Wellcome Library, London © Wellcome Library, London Man monster who has been seen in France in our time. © www.teachit.co.uk 2014 Wild man or monster born on the borders of England and Normandy. 23696 100 Journeys – Accompanying text excerpts A selection of ‘monsters’ from a compendium about demons and magic, 1766 © Wellcome Library, London © Wellcome Library, London Beelzebub - portrayed with rabbit ears, a tiger's face, scaled body, clawed fingers and a bird’s legs. The keeper of the beasts of hell. © Wellcome Library, London © Wellcome Library, London Illustration of a three-headed creature. © www.teachit.co.uk 2014 A three headed monster in an alchemical flask, representing the composition of the alchemical philosopher’s stone: salt, sulphur, and mercury; from Salomon Trismosin's ‘Splendor solis’. 23696 101 Journeys – Accompanying text excerpts From The South Pole: An Account of the Norwegian Antarctic Expedition in the “Fram”, 1910—1912 by Roald Amundsen. (Translated from the Norwegian by A. G. Chater, 1912.) Amundsen’s arrival at the South Pole Roald Amundsen was a Norwegian explorer. In 1911 he and his team became the first humans to reach the South Pole. Here he writes about the moment they reached the South Pole, how he felt, and how they celebrated. © Wellcome Library, London At three in the afternoon a simultaneous “Halt!” rang out from the drivers … The goal was reached, the journey ended. I cannot say — though I know it would sound much more effective — that the object of my life was attained. That would be romancing rather too bare-facedly. I had better be honest and admit straight out that I have never known any man to be placed in such a diametrically opposite position to the goal of his desires as I was at that moment. The regions around the North Pole — well, yes, the North Pole itself — had attracted me from childhood, and here I was at the South Pole. Can anything more topsy-turvy be imagined? … After we had halted we collected and congratulated each other … After this we proceeded to the greatest and most solemn act of the whole journey — the planting of our flag. Pride and affection shone in the five pairs of eyes that gazed upon the flag, as it unfurled itself with a sharp crack, and waved over the Pole. I had determined that the act of planting it — the historic event — should be equally divided among us all. It was not for one man to do this; it was for all who had staked their lives in the struggle, and held together through thick and thin. This was the only way in which I could show my gratitude to my comrades in this desolate spot. I could see that they understood and © www.teachit.co.uk 2014 23696 102 Journeys – Accompanying text excerpts accepted it in the spirit in which it was offered. Five weather-beaten, frost-bitten fists they were that grasped the pole, raised the waving flag in the air, and planted it as the first at the geographical South Pole. “Thus we plant thee, beloved flag, at the South Pole, and give to the plain on which it lies the name of King Haakon the Seventh’s Plateau.” That moment will certainly be remembered by all of us who stood there. One gets out of the way of protracted ceremonies in those regions — the shorter they are the better. Everyday life began again at once. When we had got the tent up, Hanssen set about slaughtering Helge, and it was hard for him to have to part from his best friend. Helge had been an uncommonly useful and good-natured dog; without making any fuss he had pulled from morning to night, and had been a shining example to the team. But during the last week he had quite fallen away, and on our arrival at the Pole there was only a shadow of the old Helge left. He was only a drag on the others, and did absolutely no work. One blow on the skull, and Helge had ceased to live. “What is death to one is food to another,” is a saying that can scarcely find a better application than these dog meals. Helge was portioned out on the spot, and within a couple of hours there was nothing left of him but his teeth and the tuft at the end of his tail. This was the second of our eighteen dogs that we had lost … We now had sixteen dogs left, and these we intended to divide into two equal teams … Of course, there was a festivity in the tent that evening — not that champagne corks were popping and wine flowing — no, we contented ourselves with a little piece of seal meat each, and it tasted well and did us good. There was no other sign of festival indoors. Outside we heard the flag flapping in the breeze. Conversation was lively in the tent that evening, and we talked of many things. Perhaps, too, our thoughts sent messages home of what we had done. (NB The excerpt is taken from the Cooper Square Publishers Inc 2000 edition.) © www.teachit.co.uk 2014 23696 103 Journeys – Accompanying text excerpts From Travels with a Donkey in the Cévennes by Robert Louis Stevenson A perfect night And yet even while I was exulting in my solitude I became aware of a strange lack. I wished a companion to lie near me in the starlight, silent and not moving, but ever within touch. For there is a fellowship more quiet even than solitude, and which, rightly understood, is solitude made perfect. And to live out of doors with the woman a man loves is of all lives the most complete and free. As I thus lay, between content and longing, a faint noise stole towards me through the pines. I thought, at first, it was the crowing of cocks or the barking of dogs at some very distant farm; but steadily and gradually it took articulate shape in my ears, until I became aware that a passenger was going by upon the high-road in the valley, and singing loudly as he went. There was more of good-will than grace in his performance; but he trolled with ample lungs; and the sound of his voice took hold upon the hillside and set the air shaking in the leafy glens. I have heard people passing by night in sleeping cities; some of them sang; one, I remember, played loudly on the bagpipes. I have heard the rattle of a cart or carriage spring up suddenly after hours of stillness, and pass, for some minutes, within the range of my hearing as I lay abed. There is a romance about all who are abroad in the black hours, and with something of a thrill we try to guess their business. But here the romance was double: first, this glad passenger, lighted internally with wine, who sent up his voice in music through the night; and then I, on the other hand, buckled into my sack, and smoking alone in the pine-woods between four and five thousand feet towards the stars. © www.teachit.co.uk 2014 23696 104 Journeys – Accompanying text excerpts When I awoke again, many of the stars had disappeared; only the stronger companions of the night still burned visibly overhead; and away towards the east I saw a faint haze of light upon the horizon, such as had been the Milky Way when I was last awake. Day was at hand. I lighted my lantern, and by its glow-worm light put on my boots and gaiters; then I broke up some bread for Modestine, filled my can at the water-tap, and lit my spirit-lamp to boil myself some chocolate. The blue darkness lay long in the glade where I had so sweetly slumbered; but soon there was a broad streak of orange melting into gold along the mountain-tops of Vivarais. A solemn glee possessed my mind at this gradual and lovely coming in of day. Nothing had altered but the light, and that, indeed, shed over all a spirit of life and of breathing peace, and moved me to a strange exhilaration. … I strolled here and there, and up and down about the glade. While I was thus delaying, a gush of steady wind, as long as a heavy sigh, poured direct out of the quarter of the morning. It was cold, and set me sneezing … I could see the thin distant spires of pine along the edge of the hill rock slightly to and fro against the golden east. Ten minutes after, the sunlight spread at a gallop along the hillside, scattering shadows, and the day had come completely. I hastened to prepare my pack, and tackle the steep ascent that lay before me; but I had something on my mind … I had been most hospitably received and punctually served in my green caravanserai. The room was airy, the water excellent. I say nothing of the tapestries or the inimitable ceiling, nor yet of the view which I commanded from the windows; but I felt I was in some one’s debt for all this. And so it pleased me, in a halflaughing way, to leave pieces of money on the turf as I went along, until I had left enough for my night’s lodging. I trust that they did not fall to some rich or churlish drover. (NB The excerpt is taken from the 2009 Floating Press edition.) © www.teachit.co.uk 2014 23696 105
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