Traditional Japanese Haiku Poetry Content Analysis Report Marla “Pua” Larson Jayne Omori Leanne Urasaki ETEC 603 Dr. Peter Leong Spring 2008 Instructional Goal The Hawaii Department of Education has established for all courses, standards that define what students will learn, and benchmarks that outline specific expectations by grade and/or level. In terms of Japanese language instruction which falls under the World Languages content area, the standards and benchmarks for a high school, first year course call for instruction in four major areas: verbal communication, cultural comparisons, cultural knowledge, and linguistic/grammatical concepts. Two of the four benchmarks are related to cultural competence in recognition of the importance of cultural competence in foreign language learning. Since the 1960s, there has been a steady increase in importance placed on the teaching of culture in foreign language curriculums. And since the 1990s, when extensive research was done on the connection between language and culture in second language acquisition, the theory that language and culture are inseparable has become widely accepted. It is believed that cultural acquisition is something that can and should occur simultaneously with linguistic acquisition; that learning about culture can help students to understand and appreciate the target language. Literature and poetry are key bridges between language and culture. The instructional goal of this self instructional unit is that a first-year Japanese language student given a specific topic, will be able to compose in English, a haiku poem that adheres to the essential rules and conventions of traditional Japanese haiku poetry. The instruction of this unit is broken into four modules: 1) structure of haiku, 2) choosing a topic, 3) determining keywords, and 4) determining kireji (cutting points). The first module will cover the structure of haiku, including line construction, capitalization and syllable limitations. The second module will provide instruction on selecting an appropriate subject and topic. The third module deals with the selection of proper 1 keywords including imagery, shizen no kotoba (nature words) and kigo (seasonal words). The final module covers the proper use of kireji (cutting points). Upon completion of this unit, the student will be able to apply the proper elements to correctly compose traditional haiku. Target Population The target audience for this instructional model is Kamuela High School students enrolled in a first year Japanese language course. Kamuela High School is a public high school serving students in the central region of the Big Island. Geographically remote, it is part of a unique complex that has only one feeder middle school. Students represent varied ethnic and socio-economic backgrounds, and range in age from 14 to 18 years old. School demographics indicate a multitude of ethnicities represented in the student population including sixteen percent who are of Japanese or part-Japanese descent. However, most students of Japanese or partJapanese descent have not had any prior instruction in Japanese language or culture. From a cognitive standpoint, students exhibit a wide range of intellectual capabilities. There are students currently in accelerated/honors level courses as well as students who have documented learning disabilities and receive services through the special education department. However, this does not present too large a problem with instruction as this is an introductory level course; there are no pre-requisite course requirements. Learners are presumed to have little or no prior experience with the subject. Furthermore, students receiving services through the special education department have individualized educational plans (IEPs) that prescribe reasonable accommodations which will better enable them to succeed in the course. In terms of implications a wide range of abilities will have on the design of instructional materials, examples and written explanations will be constructed carefully to accommodate lower reading levels. 2 No physiological concerns relative to the design of instructional materials have been identified. All students are generally in good health and have the physical capabilities to attend school and complete this print-based instructional unit. Social implications of the target group include two factors: students are teenagers 14 to 18 years old, and come from a close-knit community. Being teenagers, students are typically social and are becoming more interested in coeducational activities. They are influenced by peer pressure, and are more self-conscious. They are also developing a greater need for a sense of independence and autonomy. As a result, instructional materials and strategies will need to be designed to give students some creative control and yet provide support and positive feedback. Secondly, coming from a close-knit community, students are very tolerant of each other’s differences, whether ethnic, academic, social, or otherwise. Since Kamuela High School has only one feeder school system, students attending Kamuela High School grew up and attended school together since they entered kindergarten with very little opportunity to meet other students. In addition, many students are related to each other. This closeness can at times help provide support for self-conscious students, but at the same time can “pigeonhole” students. Instructional materials and strategies will need to be designed to allow students the freedom and security to operate and perform outside of their perceived persona. Affective aspects of the target population include neutral and positive attitudes towards Japanese culture. Most students have not had any prior instruction in Japanese culture, and therefore do not have a preconceived opinion regarding it. At the same time, students who enroll in this first year Japanese class show great interest in learning the Japanese language and culture. They understand that Japanese is recognized to be one of the more complex foreign languages to learn, and that language is deeply rooted in culture. As a result, students understand the 3 importance of studying not only the Japanese language, but the Japanese culture as well. Since there is initial interest, the main challenge in developing instructional materials will be maintaining students’ interest in the subject matter. Instructional Analysis The terminal objective for this self-instructional unit is for the first year Japanese language student to be able to compose a haiku in English that adheres to the essential rules and conventions of traditional Japanese haiku poetry when a specific topic is given. In order to successfully meet this goal, the student will need to work through and become proficient in various discriminations, concepts, and rules. There are also several discriminations that are considered entry level skills. These are skills the student is presumed to already have prior to starting the unit, and will therefore not be included in the instruction. Entry level skills are indicated below the dotted line on the following instructional hierarchy chart. Items above the dotted line represent skills that will be included in the instruction, and are the skills that the student will need to master in order to be able to accomplish the terminal objective. 4 Given a specific topic, the first year Japanese language student will be able to compose in English a haiku poem that adheres to the essential rules and conventions of traditional Japanese haiku poetry. (19) Identify structure (5) Identify three line construction (1) Discriminate lines (EL1) Identify capitalized first word in each line (2) Distinguish capital letters (EL2) Determine topic (8) Identify 5-7-5 syllable structure (4) Determine keywords (15) Determine kireji (18) Identify appropriate subjects Identify single subject Identify imagery Identify shizen no kotoba Identify kigo Identify kireji (6) (7) (10) (12) (14) (17) Define shizen no kotoba (11) Define kigo Define syllables Define imagery (3) (9) (13) Define kireji (cutting points) (16) Distinguish syllables (EL3) 5 Performance Objectives Skill EL1 Distinguish lines. Performance Objectives Given a reading passage, the student will choose the correct number of lines in the passage. EL2 Distinguish capital letters. Given four groups of letters of the alphabet, the student will choose the only group containing all capital letters. EL3 Distinguish syllables. Given four pairs of words between one and four syllables, the student will choose the correct pair of words containing two and three syllables, respectively. 1 Identify three line construction. Given a group of four reading passages, the student will correctly identify the passage with three lines. 2 Identify capitalized first word in each line. Given four reading passages, the student will correctly identify the passage containing a capitalized word at the beginning of each line. 3 Define syllables. Given four choices, the student will accurately define syllable. 4 Identify 5-7-5 syllable structure. Given four examples, the student will correctly identify the example containing the 5-7-5 syllable structure. 5 Identify haiku structure. Given four examples, the student will select the correct example containing all the components of traditional haiku structure. 6 Identify appropriate subjects. Given four examples, the student will select the best example that depicts an appropriate subject. 7 Identify single subject. Given four phrases, the student will choose the best phrase that depicts a single subject. 8 Determine topic. Given a list of four examples, the student will select the best example that portrays an appropriate single subject matter. 9 Define imagery. Given four choices, the student will correctly define imagery. 6 10 Identify imagery. Given four sentences, the student will identify the sentence that best depicts imagery. 11 Define shizen no kotoba. Given four choices, the student will correctly define shizen no kotoba. 12 Identify shizen no kotoba. Given a list of four phrases, the student will identify the phrase that best represents shizen no kotoba. 13 Define kigo. Given a list of four choices, the student will accurately define kigo 14 Identify kigo. Given four words, the student will identify the word that best portrays kigo. 15 Determine keywords. Given two keywords (imagery, shizen no kotoba and/or kigo), the student will select the keyword that best works with the others from a bank of four additional imagery, shizen no kotoba and kigo keywords. 16 Define kireji. Given four definitions, the student will choose the correct definition of kireji. 17 Identify kireji. Given four examples, the student will choose the best example depicting the correct use of kireji. 18 Determine kireji. Given a list of four pairs of symbols, the student will choose the pair containing the two correct symbols used to signify kireji. 19 Given a specific topic, the first year Japanese language student will be able to compose in English a haiku poem that adheres to the essential rules and conventions of traditional Japanese haiku poetry. Given a visual image, the student will compose a properly constructed haiku according to the essentials rules and conventions of traditional Japanese haiku poetry. The rules and conventions include determining an appropriate topic, applying correct structure, selecting complimentary keywords and utilizing kireji. Students will be expected to master all performance objectives with 100% accuracy in sequence prior to advancing on to the subsequent lesson. 7 Sequence and Clustering of Objectives Cluster 1 Structure Objectives 1. Identify three line construction. 2. Identify capitalized first word in each line. 3. Define syllables. 4. Identify 5-7-5 syllable structure. 5. Identify haiku structure. Time 5 minutes 2 Topic 6. Identify appropriate subjects. 7. Identify single subject. 8. Determine topic. 5 minutes 3 Keywords 9. 10. 11. 12. 13. 14. 15. Define imagery. Identify imagery. Define shizen no kotoba. Identify shizen no kotoba. Define kigo. Identify kigo. Determine keywords. 30 minutes 4 Kireji 16. Define kireji. 17. Identify kireji. 18. Determine kireji. 5 minutes 5 Terminal Goal 19. Given a specific topic, the first year Japanese language student will be able to compose in English a haiku poem that adheres to the essential rules and conventions of traditional Japanese haiku poetry. 5 minutes 8 Content Presentation and Learner Participation SKILL: Define imagery #9 OBJECTIVE: Given four choices, the student will correctly define imagery. CONTENT PRESENTATION Information Presentation: Imagery is descriptive language that involves one or more of your five senses (hearing, taste, touch, smell, or sight). It is used to show you what is happening and to affect the reader by stimulating his/her memory of those senses. It is intended to make the reader feel more interested in the work by creating a mental image of the subject. These memories can be positive or negative, and will contribute to the mood of the poem. Also important to note- Just as haiku are written about a specific moment or observation, imagery used in haiku should reflect the present tense. Examples: In the falling snowA laughing boy holds out his palms Until they are white. --by Richard Wright The author descriptively shows the reader what he is seeing or what is happening. The author paints a clear picture for the reader. The reader can “see” the boy enjoying the snow, holding out his hands, and letting it cover his hands. The reader can almost feel the snow on his/her own hand. In this example, the author is trying to evoke a feeling of youth, wonderment and playfulness through his poem. Also note that everything is written in present tense. Non-Examples: Food is good to eatI also like hot fudge Sundaes I want a Sundae --Author unknown This poem is telling us what the author wants. It does not capture in words how something tastes, looks, smells, feels or sounds. 9 Pretest & Embedded: Which of the following best defines imagery? Descriptive language that A. B. *C. D. tells the audience what the author wants. is used to the tell the audience how to feel. deals with one of the five senses. deals with nature. Feedback A. Incorrect. It is not about what the author wants. B. Incorrect. It is not used to tell the audience how to feel. *C. Correct! It is a poem that uses words that captures how something tastes, looks, smells, feels or sounds. D. Incorrect. It may or may not involve nature, but it must involve one of the five senses. Posttest Imagery is descriptive language that A. conveys a place of origin. *B. conveys in words how something tastes, looks, smells, feels or sounds. C. tells the reader what is happening. D. tells the reader what the author is feeling. 10 Content Presentation and Learner Participation SKILL: Identify Imagery #10 OBJECTIVE: Given four sentences, the student will identify the sentence that best depicts imagery. CONTENT PRESENTATION Information Presentation: Remember, imagery is descriptive language that involves one or more of your five senses. It is used to create a mental image of the subject that will contribute to the mood of the poem. Just as haiku are written about a specific moment or observation, imagery used in haiku should reflect the present tense. Imagery allows a writer to show a writer what he/she means instead of just telling them. When using imagery, remember… Show! Don't Tell! Examples: 1. 2. 3. 4. the scent of a damp dog the glow of lava at night the crashing of waves roar of waterfall Each of these phrases plays on one of the senses to create a sharp mental image of the subject. When reading these statements, readers can “smell,” “see,” or “hear” the subject, and a mental image is created that would affect the mood of the poem. Furthermore, they are all written in the present tense. 11 Non-Examples: the dog “The dog” may create a mental image in the reader’s mind, but it is not an exact image…what kind of dog? It does not create a mood. it was raining “It was raining” simply tells the reader what is happening. It does not play on any of the senses. Also, it is written in the past tense. the snow fell silently “The snow fell silently” involves a sense (hearing), and creates a mental image and evokes a mood. However, it would not be considered imagery because it is written in past tense. going to the beach “Going to the beach” does not involve a sense. It just tells the reader about an event. Pretest & Embedded: Which phrase best depicts imagery? A. B. C. *D. Feedback Posttest children playing I hate being late a dog was growling heat of the campfire A. Incorrect. It ells the reader what is happening. It does not involve a sense, evoke an image or create a mood. B. Incorrect. It tells the reader what the author feels. Does not involve a sense, evoke an image or create a mood. C. Incorrect. Although it involves a sense (hearing), evokes a mental image and a mood, it s written in past tense. D. Correct! It involves a sense (feel), creates a mental image and mood, and is written in present tense. Identify the phrase that best depicts imagery. *A. B. C. D. the hot summer sun the water gushed a boy I don’t like apples 12 Content Presentation and Learner Participation SKILL: Define shizen no kotoba #11 OBJECTIVE: Given four choices, the student will correctly define shizen no kotoba. CONTENT PRESENTATION Information Presentation: Shizen no kotoba is a Japanese phrase. In English, shizen means nature, and kotoba means word or phrase. Shizen no kotoba therefore translates as “a word or phrase that deals with nature.” Shizen no kotoba is an important element in haiku. Traditional haiku are written about a single element of nature. Shizen no kotoba focuses on, and conveys a clear image of a particular detail or aspect of an element in nature such as a person, natural location, living thing, or natural occurrence. Also important to note- haiku (and shizen no kotoba) are written to reflect a specific moment or even in the present time, therefore are written in present tense. Examples: autumn leaves falling This example describes the natural occurrence of the autumn leaves falling. a dry river bed This example describes a natural location. Note that both of the examples are written in the present or future tense. Non-Examples: an old tire swing A tire swing is a manmade object, not something that naturally occurs in nature. in a cobweb filled basement Although a cobweb is a natural occurrence, the phrase is not about the cobweb. It simply describes the basement which is not a nature word. 13 Pretest & Embedded: A haiku component that focuses on an aspect of nature in the present moment in time is called *A. B. C. D. Feedback Posttest shizen no kotoba. kigo. imagery. kireji. A. Correct! Shizen no kotoba in haiku poetry is the use of a word or phrase that deals with nature. B. Incorrect. Kigo describes everyday words that are regularly associated with one of the four seasons. C. Incorrect. Imagery is the descriptive language that conveys one or more of the five senses to capture a mental image of the subject. D. Incorrect. Kireji describes a cutting point that indicates a contradiction or change of events. Which of the following statements best defines shizen no kotoba? A. Descriptive language that conveys one or more of the five senses to capture a mental image of the subject. B. Everyday words regularly associated with one of the four seasons. C. Cutting points to indicate a contradiction or change of events. *D. Refers to a word or phrase that focuses on a single element of nature in the present moment in time. 14 Content Presentation and Learner Participation SKILL: Identify shizen no kotoba #12 OBJECTIVE: Given a list of four phrases, the student will identify the phrase that best represents shizen no kotoba. CONTENT PRESENTATION Information Presentation: Shizen no kotoba are nature words used in haiku poetry. Nature words are associated with people, natural locations, living things and organisms, and natural occurrences, including death. Shizen no kotoba also encompasses all physical things and beings, and aspects of things and beings that were once created by nature. Also important to note- haiku (and shizen no kotoba) are written to reflect a specific moment or even in the present time, therefore are written in present tense. Examples: frog pile of rocks rainbow tree in the forest The words and phrases to the left are all shizen no kotoba; associated with people, natural locations, living things and organisms, and natural occurrences. Non-Examples: skydiving computer program bronze statue words Pretest & Embedded: The words and phrases to the left are not associated with people, natural locations, living things and organisms, and natural occurrences. Which of the following phrases is best associated with shizen no kotoba? A. *B. C. D. Feedback A. B. C. D. antique books crashing waves speeding cars school cafeteria at lunchtime Incorrect. Antique books are manmade objects. Correct! Crashing waves are created by nature. Incorrect. A speeding car is a manmade object. Incorrect. A school cafeteria (at lunchtime) is a location, but is not nature made. 15 Posttest Which of the following phrases is considered shizen no kotoba? A. B. *C. D. yoke oozed all over the nest chocolate ice cream earthworms slowly slithering by fortune cookie with money 16 Content Presentation and Learner Participation #13 SKILL: Define kigo OBJECTIVE: Given a list of four choices, the student will accurately define kigo. CONTENT PRESENTATION Information Presentation: Kigo is a Japanese term meaning “seasonal words.” Using kigo allows the author to convey a seasonal reference without having to state the season; a way to say more using less syllables and/or words. Kigo are not special terms, but rather everyday words that are regularly associated with one of the four seasons: winter, spring, summer and autumn. There are two types of kigo. The first are words that are descriptive of the season itself, and the second are words that are related to an attribute or event closely tied to a particular season. Examples: 1. Examples for Summer a. hot b. sun 2. Examples for Autumn a. cool b. apples a. Hot is regularly associated with the summer months. b. Images of summer often include the sun, beach, etc. a. Cool temperatures are normally associated with autumn. b. Apples are closely tied to going back to school, and Halloween, both of which occur in the autumn months. Non-Examples: 1. Olympics 1. The Olympics could be associated with winter or summer. It is not associated with a specific season. 2. ocean 2. Ocean is not affiliated with a specific season. Pretest & Embedded: Which of the following terms describes everyday words that are regularly associated with a particular season? A. B. *C. D. haiku imagery kigo shizen no kotoba 17 Feedback Posttest A. Incorrect. Haiku is a form of Japanese poetry. B. Incorrect. Imagery is the use of words to create mental pictures in the readers’ minds. C. Correct! Kigo are everyday words that are regularly associated with a particular season? D. Incorrect. Shizen no kotoba are words that deal with nature. Which of the following is an accurate definition of kigo? *A. everyday words that are regularly associated with one of the four seasons. B. everyday words that are regularly associated with one of the 12 months. C. everyday words that are sometimes associated with one of the four seasons. D. special words that are regularly associated with one of the four seasons. 18 Content Presentation and Learner Participation SKILL: Identify kigo (seasonal words) #14 OBJECTIVE: Given four words, the student will identify the word that best portrays kigo. CONTENT PRESENTATION Information Presentation: Kigo, or seasonal words, are words that are regularly associated with one of the four seasons: winter, spring, summer and autumn. Kigo can be descriptive of the season itself, or related to an attribute or event closely tied to a particular season. Using kigo allows the author to convey a seasonal reference without having to state the season; a way to say more using less syllables and/or words. Here are two questions you can ask yourself to help you determine if a word is a kigo. 1. Is it a word that quickly comes to mind when you think about a specific season? 2. When think about that word, does one season quickly come to mind (and not others)? Examples: 1. Examples for winter a. snow b. pine tree 2. Examples for spring a. rainy b. Easter eggs a. Snow is typically linked with the winter months. b. Pine trees are generally known for their use as Christmas trees. a. Spring is regularly known for its “April showers.” b. Easter eggs are used in celebrating Easter. Non-Examples: 1. water 1. Water could be associated with spring or summer. It is not associated strongly enough with a specific season. 2. Dog is not affiliated with a specific season. 2. dog Pretest & Embedded: Which one of the following words can be classified as kigo? A. B. C. *D. ball computer green pumpkin 19 Feedback Posttest A. Incorrect. Ball is not linked with any one season. B. Incorrect. Computer is not linked with any season. C. Incorrect. Although people might think of the color green for Christmas, it can also be associated with St. Patrick’s Day which is in a different season. D. Correct! Did you think about jack-o-lanterns and pumpkin pies too? Most people will associate pumpkins with autumn. Which of the following words is a kigo? A. *B. C. D. banana shamrock violin wind 20 Content Presentation and Learner Participation SKILL: Determine keywords #15 OBJECTIVE: Given two keywords (imagery, shizen no kotoba and/or kigo), the student will select the keyword that best works with the others from a bank of four additional imagery, shizen no kotoba and kigo keywords. CONTENT PRESENTATION Information Presentation: Because there are few words in a haiku poem, you will need to rely upon imagery, shizen no kotoba, and kigo to choose keywords that convey the mood and meaning of your poems. 1. Imagery is descriptive language that involves one or more of your senses. It is used to show the reader what is happening and to affect him/her by stimulating a memory of those senses by creating a mental image of the subject. These memories can be positive or negative, and will contribute to the mood of the poem. 2. Shizen no kotoba are nature words that focus on, and convey a clear image of a particular detail or aspect of an element in nature such as a person, natural location, living thing, or natural occurrence. 3. Kigo are not special terms, but rather everyday words that are regularly associated with one of seasons. There are two types of kigo: words that are descriptive of the season itself, and words that are related to an attribute or event closely tied to a particular season. A good way to lay a foundation for a traditional haiku poem is to choose keywords that all work together to establish the mood, image, and meaning of what you are trying to say. Once keywords are selected, you are better able to write a meaningful haiku. Example: 1. imagery: sand between your toes kigo: sunny day shizen no kotoba: beach These three keywords work together. The kigo tells us that it is probably a summer day; the shizen no kotoba is a natural location; and the imagery conveys the feel of the sand and paints a picture for the reader. Non-Examples: 1. imagery: kigo: rain soaked umbrella April showers 21 shizen no kotoba: dry river bed Although each of the three keywords/phrases properly characterizes the conventions, they do not work together. It makes sense and there is a connection between a rain soaked umbrella and April showers (spring), but a dry river bed would contradict the other two phrases. Pretest & Embedded: Analyze the following two conventions and answer the question below. imagery: chilly air shizen no kotoba: ___________________ kigo: pumpkins everywhere Which of the following shizen no kotoba would best fit with the two given conventions? *A. B. C. D. Feedback Posttest falling leaves rainbow butterfly snow-capped mountain A. Correct! Falling leaves would seem natural in the mental image painted by the chilly air and pumpkins of autumn. B. Incorrect. Rainbows are not indicative of autumn, and would not fit with the mental image of falling leaves and the chilly air. C. Incorrect. Butterflies are associated more with spring than autumn. D. Incorrect. Chilly air and pumpkins indicate that it is autumn, not winter when there would most likely be snow-capped mountains. Analyze the following two conventions and answer the question below. imagery: birds playfully chirping shizen no kotoba: fields of flowers kigo: ___________________ Which of the following kigo would best fit with the two given conventions? *A. B. C. D. bunny turkey snow apples 22 Pre-instructional, Assessment and Follow-Through Activities Pre-Instructional Activities Motivation: This unit will be coordinated with a “learning to surf” theme. In the first module, students learn the basics on the beach (learn about haiku structure), and “test the waters” in the second module (learn about subjects and topics). In the third module, students paddle out and get up on their boards (learn about keywords) and in the fourth module, students ride some practice waves (learn about kireji). Finally, they will put all of the pieces together by competing in a surfing contest (completing the terminal objective of composing their own haiku poems). Students will be given opportunities in the beginning of this module to read several haiku poems. They will be asked to visualize and think about the images they “saw” as they read the poems. This process helps to bring learners to a place of creativity and prepares for the unit that will follow. An introduction to the unit will then be presented, and students will be informed of the unit objectives. Objectives: The objective of this instructional model to give first year Japanese language students the necessary skills to compose a haiku poem according to traditional rules and conventions. Assessment Pretest: A multiple choice test will be given to students before instruction to measure and evaluate the students’ knowledge of haiku poetry. Practice Test: Practice test items will be included after each section to provide learners with active participation and facilitate memory of instruction. Posttest: A multiple choice test will be given to learners after each section insures understanding of concepts and to identify any need for improvement in that section of the module. Follow-Through Activities Memory Aids: Haiku poems and description of each poem will be posted around the classroom to help students retain information learned. Transfer: Students will compose a traditional haiku poem to reinforce the learning of this module. As a subsequent follow-up lesson, students will be required to compose another traditional haiku poem and create a complimentary visual component, which will be publicly displayed. 23
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