English 1301: Wr about FT
Writer: ___________________
Reader: ___________________
Peer Review: Draft of Essay #1
1. Which writer has the writer chosen to discuss: Circle: Giamatti or Posnanski
2. In your own words, give the 3 main points the writer has chosen to discuss.
3. Where in the draft do you need more explanation about any of the 3 points? For
example, why does Giamatti or Posnanski think this is important. Is it clear in the
draft what they say about each point, and why? Discuss each of the 3 points in turn,
and tell the writer of the draft what she/he needs to do to make the essay more
clear and to fulfill the assignment. Label your points below, A, B and C to help the
writer understand.
4. Is the writer using correct MLA style to cite any quotations or other parts of the
tales or critical material (e.g., Bettelheim)? YES or NO. Circe one. If NO, what is
the problem? Explain.
5. What else would improve the essay? Be specific. Use other side as needed.