Our School’s Super Sentence Writing
All our classes have been working hard on improving sentence writing. We are trying to get
our students to use more interesting language that is descriptive and creates an image of
what they are writing about. This week I was able to visit some of the classrooms and I was
thrilled at the quality of our students’ work.
Here are just a few examples-
Mrs Frost.
On an exhausting
summer’s day, he
stood staring
suspiciously into
On a haunted afternoon, he walked
cautiously up the very dark road.
By Flynn Ball
1/2H
the crystal clear
ocean.
During the most horrifying
tornado, the old rusty house
glided dangerously through
the dark cloudy sky.
By Jorja Hudson
5/6L
In the wild, the hungry
giraffe happily stretched
his tall neck to eat the
delicious green leaves.
By Shannon Cambridge
3/4R
By April Martin
1/2H
On a beautiful hot day, he stood staring captivated by
the mystical, crystal clear ocean. By Kahlee Bramwell 5/6L
On a clear and starry night, he stood imaginatively
staring into the still, moon lit ocean.
By Daneeka Croker 5/6S
On a windy day, the spotted giraffe longingly
stretched his neck to eat.
On a holiday in Fiji with his family, he stood staring calmly into
the crystal aqua ocean. By Kourtney Ryan 3/4S
After the most furious hurricane the town of Barnsley had ever
seen, the unstable and paintless house flew through the dark
and unheavenly sky.
By Ella-Jane Donelly 3/4R
By Jack Marshall 1/2 H
During the monstrous
tornado, the flaming
brick house glided
through the mystical
and stormy sky.
On a warm autumn day,
he walked slowly and
quietly up the bumpy
road.
By Ryan Mott 3/4R
By Millie Halbert 1/2H
On a dark mystical night, he stood staring crazily into the
brown haunted ocean.
By Noah Fisher 5/6S