EMBO Molecular Medicine Peer Review Process File - EMM-2016-06773 Loss of AXIN1 drives acquired resistance to WNT pathway blockade in colorectal cancers cells carrying RSPO3 fusions Gabriele Picco, Consalvo Petti, Alessia Centonze, Erica Torchiaro, Giovanni Crisafulli, Luca Novara, Andrea Acquaviva, Alberto Bardelli, Enzo Medico Corresponding author: Enzo Medico, University of Torino Review timeline: Submission date: Editorial Decision: Revision received: Editorial Decision: Revision received: Accepted: 04 July 2016 28 July 2016 23 November 2016 06 December 2016 18 December 2016 20 December 2016 Transaction Report: (Note: With the exception of the correction of typographical or spelling errors that could be a source of ambiguity, letters and reports are not edited. The original formatting of letters and referee reports may not be reflected in this compilation.) Editor: Roberto Buccione 1st Editorial Decision 28 July 2016 Thank you for the submission of your manuscript to EMBO Molecular Medicine. We have now heard back from the Reviewers whom we asked to evaluate your manuscript. As you will see, the three reviewers all recognize the interest and importance of your work, but also raise significant, partially overlapping concerns. Although I will not dwell into much detail, I would like to highlight the main points Reviewer 1 has one main concern, i.e. s/he wonders whether it is always axin or other Wnt pathway gene mutated in the resistant clones or if maybe other pathways substitute for can substitute for Wnt signaling. The reviewer suggests a comparative analysis between the outcomes of various selections to establish this point. You will also note that Reviewer 3 has the same fundamental concern, although s/he suggests different experimental approaches to address it. Reviewer 3 also lists a number of other items that require action, and which are important to consolidate the clinical relevance of your findings. Reviewer 2 is less reserved, but does ask for important clarifications on the Axin 1 mutations. After further discussion with my colleagues and reviewer cross-commenting, we have decided to give you the opportunity revise your manuscript. As specifically for the shared concern by Reviewers 1 and 3, we suggest that 1) addressing the clonality of the 2 presented mutations might identify 2 unique clones which may help abrogate the need for lengthy repeat porcupine exposures and re-sequencing and 2) the functional experiments at points 4 and 5 proposed by Reviewer 3 would strengthen your claims and would be achievable in a shorter time frame. © EMBO 1 EMBO Molecular Medicine Peer Review Process File - EMM-2016-06773 In conclusion, while publication of the paper cannot be considered at this stage, we would be pleased to consider a revised submission, with the understanding that the Reviewers' concerns must be addressed with additional experimental data where appropriate and that acceptance of the manuscript will entail a second round of review. 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Provision of the author checklist is mandatory at revision stage; The checklist is designed to enhance and standardize reporting of key information in research papers and to support reanalysis and repetition of experiments by the community. The list covers key information for figure panels and captions and focuses on statistics, the reporting of reagents, animal models and human subject-derived data, as well as guidance to optimise data accessibility. We now mandate that all corresponding authors list an ORCID digital identifier. You may do so though our web platform upon submission and the procedure takes <90 seconds to complete. We also encourage co-authors to supply an ORCID identifier, which will be linked to their name for unambiguous name identification. I look forward to seeing a revised form of your manuscript as soon as possible. ***** Reviewer's comments ***** Referee #1 (Remarks): R-spondins stimulate Wnt signaling at the receptor level. Fusions of R-Spondins with other genes were previously shown to occur in colorectal cancer and are associated with increased R-spondin expression: The authors go the converse way by using high R-spondin expression as a marker to identify tumor samples and cell lines with R-spondin gene fusions. Inhibition of Wnt secretion blocked cell growth, and prolonged inhibition led to the emergence of resistant clones which exhibit de novo mutation of the downstream negative regulator Axin. The approach taken is appealing and the experimentally data are sound and well described. However, with respect to novelty the impact of the story is rather limited. Mutations of R-spondin and sensitivity of R-spondin mutated tumor cells to inhibition of R-spondin or Wnt secretion have been described before. That escapers from inhibition show mutation in downstream regulators such as axin1 might have been expected. It would broaden the impact of the study if the outcome of several selections were compared in order to determine whether it´s always axin (or another gene in the Wnt pathway) that is mutated in resistant clones , suggesting strong addiction of the cells to Wnt signaling, or whether other pathways are affected that substitute for Wnt signaling. Admittedly, such a broad scale analysis is costly but would allow more general statements as to resistance against Wnt signaling inhibition. Minor points Figure 3G suggests that R-spondin associates with LRP5/6 receptors, which is wrong. The consensus is that R-spondin acts by binding to Lgr5 and RNF43, thereby inhibiting the function of RNF43E3 ligase in removing Wnt receptors from the surface. In the axin scheme in appendix Figure 4 the parts labelled "AXI.." were not clear. © EMBO 2 EMBO Molecular Medicine Peer Review Process File - EMM-2016-06773 Referee #2 (Comments on Novelty/Model System): This paper nicely exhibits how novel bioinformatic analysis can be applied to publically available data and linked to relevant functional work to generate clinically translatable and important findings. The only weakness inn the study is with the evaluation of the acquired Axin1 mutations as detailed below Referee #2 (Remarks): This paper uses a logical but novel bioinformatic technique to strip out stromal derived signal from publically available RNA seq data to identify tumours with high epithelial expression of R-Spondin. This is then correlated with the acquisition of R-Spo fusion protein mutations in these tumours. This is a highly relevant finding as these mutations may not be detected with standard exome sequencing yet are associated with a characteristic molecular pathway. Importantly, the ligand dependent nature of Wnt activation in these tumours has been shown to be sensitive to Porcupine inhibition. The paper then goes on to identify 2 cancer cell lines with previously undetected R-Spo fusion protein mutations and shows that they are sensitive to porcupine inhibition, but that escape from this inhibition can occur through the acquisition of other wnt disrupting mutations in Axin1 It is a very nice demonstration of how applied bioinformatics with functional follow up can maximally utilise publically available data to generate clinically translatable and relevant results. I like the paper very much Specific comments and recommendations Major I only have 1 major comment - the identified "escape" Axin1 mutations are not completely characterised or considered 1. The c2503delG mutation looks to me as though it may actually be a c.2499delT mutation. This could be clarified with single strand cloning (using PGEMT or something similar). A c2499delT mutation is not listed in COSMIC, although this doesn't necessarily matter. 2. The identified mutations appear to be in polyC and poly G repeat tracts, was there any evidence of acquired microsatellite instability to explain this? Polymerase slippage could also be excluded with single strand cloning 3. Any copy number changes in the VACO6R cells? 4. The authors have not completed single cell/clone analysis to determine whether these 2 widely spaced frameshift mutations are occurring in the same escaper cell clone. If this is the case why would a cell need to acquire 2 frameshift mutations when the first will suffice to truncate the protein? This should be considered. If the alternative scenario is true, and two different populations of the same escaper line have independently acquired a different Axin1 mutation this would be strong evidence for positive selection and an important functional role of this protein in Porcupine inhibition escape. Why this gene and not other frequently mutated Wnt disrupting mutations such as APC, Ctnnb1 should be considered and commented on. Minor comments How the CAF score was generated should be in the methods. It is too big a part of the story to require referral to a separate paper Page 2 , fig S1. Is the correlation of RSpo expression with the leucocyte and endothelial score because these scores are simply surrogate markers of the volume of tumour stroma. Or do the endothelium and leucocytes act as a source of R-Spo? Page 2 Any idea what causes the high epithelial R-Spo score in the other 8/14 tumours without © EMBO 3 EMBO Molecular Medicine Peer Review Process File - EMM-2016-06773 detected R-Spo fusions? Page 3 'in' needed - and a novel PRPTK(ex13)-RPO3 (ex 2) fusion transcript IN SNU1411 Page 3 - last paragraph A sentence setting out the differences between the ligand dependent Wnt activation caused by RSPO fusions as apposed to the constitutive activation caused by APC for example, would be useful for the non-expert reader Page 4 para 1 - ......previously described for RSPO3 blockade. Not referenced Page 4 para 1 - Last sentence isnt very clear. Do they mean that the long upstream coding sequence from PTPRK does not lessen the pathological activation of R-SPO3 expression? Figure 2C and D Label the cell line on the figure Referee #3 (Remarks): Comments on manuscript number: EMM-2016-06773 Title: Loss of Axin1 drives acquired resistance to WNT pathway blockade in colorectal cancers cells A small, but clinically nonetheless relevant subgroup of colorectal cancers carries RSPO2/3 fusion genes that lead to aberrant activation of Wnt/β-catenin signaling in a manner dependent on the availability of Wnt ligands. Cancers driven by RSPO2/3 fusion gene expression therefore provide a unique opportunity for therapeutic intervention through the inhibition of Wnt ligand production or function. The design and realization of such therapeutic approaches could be fostered enormously by the development of suitable in vitro models. As a first step towards this goal Gabriele Picco and co-workers develop an elegant bioinformatic approach that should allow for high confidence identification of colorectal tumor samples which show high level tumor-specific expression of RSPO3 and which harbor RSPO3 fusion genes. This approach is based on the processing of transcriptome data and involves filtering out interfering gene expression signals from contaminating stromal cells in order to identify outlier samples with RSPO3 overexpression. The major achievement of this study is the successful application of the "outlier expression" approach to identify two colorectal cancer cell lines with PTPRK-RSPO3 fusions. These cell lines are further established as valuable preclinical model systems by demonstrating in vitro and in vivo their sensitivity against an inhibitor of Porcupine, an acyltransferase which is essential for Wnt ligand production. The potential utility of the newly identified cell lines is additionally demonstrated through the identification of mutations in the AXIN1 gene that might be the underlying cause for acquired resistance against the Porcupine inhibitor used. This manuscript is well written, is easy to follow, and provides sufficient background information to convey the significance and the importance of the study also to a non-expert readership. The technical quality is high and the vast majority of the authors' conclusions are strongly supported by the analyses and data presented. In my opinion, there are only two aspects that require further elaboration: These are, first, the reliability of the identification process of cancers with RSPO2/3 fusion genes, and second, the potential mechanisms whereby cancers with RSPO2/3 fusions might acquire resistance against Wnt pathway inhibitors, specifically the role of AXIN1 mutations is in this context. Specific comments 1. By looking at Figure 1A and Appendix Table1A it appears to me that one might have identified tumor samples with RPSO2/3 fusions without further bioinformatic analysis simply by picking the samples with high RSPO3 expression and a low CAF score. I suggest to individually label the 14 tumor samples within the red box in Figure 1A such that they can be tracked throughout the manuscript for example in Figure 1B, Appendix Figure 1A and Appendix Figure 1B. This would help to answer the question whether the same tumor samples are identified after stratification using the endothel and leukocyte gene expression signatures. Furthermore, are there false negatives, i. e. tumor samples with RSPO2/3-fusions that were not identified through the data processing pipeline developed by the authors? © EMBO 4 EMBO Molecular Medicine Peer Review Process File - EMM-2016-06773 2. The difference between the RSPO3 and the (RSPO3-CAF) Z-score for the GSE14333 data set is much less pronounced and clear-cut (Appendix Figure 2) when compared to the analysis of the TCGA data set shown in Figure 1B. So what is the significance of this analysis for the identification with high confidence of tumor samples with RSPO2/3 fusions? Which of the GSE14333 samples are actually positive for RSPO2/3 fusion genes? If this information is not available for GSE14333, how would the analysis for the tumors samples described by Seshagiri and co-authors (Nature 488, 660664, 2012) look like? 3. The authors ponder whether the long upstream portion from the PRPTK gene in the PTPRK(ex13)-RSPO3(ex2) fusion interferes with RSPO3 function. But does this fusion protein actually exist or is it somehow processed to release the RSPO3 portion? This could be addressed by Western blotting to analyze the expression of the RSPO3 fusion protein and its apparent molecular weight. 4. From the manuscript is does not become clear whether the AXIN1 mutations are the only newly acquired genetic alterations in VACO6R cells. This needs to be clarified because if not, the significance of AXIN1 inactivation as resistance mechanism would be dubitable despite the phenocopy by the AXIN1 knockdown. Along the same line, can re-expression of AXIN1 restore sensitivity to LGK-974? Furthermore, it should be clearly shown that the RSPO3-fusion is still present and expressed in LGK-974-resistant cells. 5. After dose escalation for three months the authors isolate a LGK-974-resistant cell population and report the biallelic inactivation of AXIN1 in this population. Is there something special and perhaps unique about AXIN1 with respect to resistance against Porcupine inhibition? This could become import for the development of drugs that break secondary resistance. The authors need to provide information whether their resistant cell population is of monoclonal or polyclonal origin. Did AXIN1 inactivation occur repeatedly and independently in multiple cases? Is AXIN1 inactivation the only way to become insensitive towards LGK-974? The authors should knockdown APC and overexpress mutant β-catenin in VACO6 cells and compare this to AXIN1 knockdown with respect to LGK-974 sensitivity. 6. From a therapeutic point of view it would be interesting and highly relevant to know whether AXIN1 mutation/knockdown confers resistance specifically against LGK-974. How about resistance against other Porcupine and Wnt pathway inhibitors? Did VACO6R cells become resistant against other drugs, unrelated to the Wnt pathway, as well? 7. The authors show that AXIN2 is expressed in VACO6 cells and that AXIN2 is further upregulated in VACO6R cells. AXIN1 and AXIN2 are considered to be functionally redundant and fully interchangeable. In view of this, how do the authors explain that elevated AXIN2 does not compensate the loss of AXIN1? What are the expression ratios of AXIN1:AXIN2? Is AXIN2 expressed at the protein level? 8. The title should be more precise and avoid any kind of generalization that could be misleading. It should be clearly mentioned that the study applies to colorectal cancers with RSPO2/3 fusion genes and the interference with pathway activity at the level of Wnt ligand production/action. 9. The Chartier et al 2015 and Madan et al 2015 references are incomplete in the bibliography. 1st Revision - authors' response 23 November 2016 Point by point reply Referee #1 (Remarks): R-spondins stimulate Wnt signaling at the receptor level. Fusions of R-Spondins with other genes were previously shown to occur in colorectal cancer and are associated with increased R-spondin expression: The authors go the converse way by using high R-spondin expression as a marker to © EMBO 5 EMBO Molecular Medicine Peer Review Process File - EMM-2016-06773 identify tumor samples and cell lines with R-spondin gene fusions. Inhibition of Wnt secretion blocked cell growth, and prolonged inhibition led to the emergence of resistant clones which exhibit de novo mutation of the downstream negative regulator Axin. The approach taken is appealing and the experimentally data are sound and well described. However, with respect to novelty the impact of the story is rather limited. Mutations of R-spondin and sensitivity of R-spondin mutated tumor cells to inhibition of R-spondin or Wnt secretion have been described before. That escapers from inhibition show mutation in downstream regulators such as axin1 might have been expected. It would broaden the impact of the study if the outcome of several selections were compared in order to determine whether it´s always axin (or another gene in the Wnt pathway) that is mutated in resistant clones, suggesting strong addiction of the cells to Wnt signaling, or whether other pathways are affected that substitute for Wnt signaling. Admittedly, such a broad scale analysis is costly but would allow more general statements as to resistance against Wnt signaling inhibition. We thank the Reviewer for his/her general comments and appreciation of the work. Regarding the potential impact of the work, also according to remarks and suggestions by Revewer#3 and by the Editor, we verified that also APC loss or beta-catenin activation, when exogenously induced, may confer resistance to porcupine inhibition. Despite mutation in downstream regulators of WNT pathway might have been expected, this is the first work describing such escaping mechanisms in unique preclinical models suitable to model primary sensitivity and acquired resistance to an innovative terapeutic strategy currently explored in clinical trials. In particular, while APC or Bcatenin mutations are frequent in CRC and potentially expected as cause of primary and secondary resistance to WNT pathway inhibitors, AXIN1 alteration is instead rare and, in the clinical setting, would not be explored as first candidate to confer acquired resistance. In summary, we think that this work strongly support the importance of AXIN1 as negative modulator of WNT signaling pathway in a potentially clinically relevant context. Minor points - Figure 3G suggests that R-spondin associates with LRP5/6 receptors, which is wrong. The consensus is that R-spondin acts by binding to Lgr5 and RNF43, thereby inhibiting the function of RNF43E3 ligase in removing Wnt receptors from the surface. We have now modified Figure 3G accordingly. - In the axin scheme in appendix Figure 4 the parts labelled "AXI.." were not clear. We have now modified Appendix Fig S5. Legends for color-coded rectangles were included to specify the AXIN1 protein domains. Referee #2 (Comments on Novelty/Model System): This paper nicely exhibits how novel bioinformatic analysis can be applied to publically available data and linked to relevant functional work to generate clinically translatable and important findings. The only weakness in the study is with the evaluation of the acquired Axin1 mutations as detailed below Referee #2 (Remarks): This paper uses a logical but novel bioinformatic technique to strip out stromal derived signal from publically available RNA seq data to identify tumours with high epithelial expression of R-Spondin. This is then correlated with the acquisition of R-Spo fusion protein mutations in these tumours. This is a highly relevant finding as these mutations may not be detected with standard exome sequencing yet are associated with a characteristic molecular pathway. Importantly, the ligand dependent nature of Wnt activation in these tumours has been shown to be sensitive to Porcupine inhibition. The paper then goes on to identify 2 cancer cell lines with previously undetected R-Spo fusion protein mutations and shows that they are sensitive to porcupine inhibition, but that escape from this inhibition can occur through the acquisition of other wnt disrupting mutations in Axin1 It is a very nice demonstration of how applied bioinformatics with functional follow up can maximally utilise publically available data to generate clinically translatable and relevant results. I like the paper very much We thank the Reviewer for his/her general comments and appreciation of the work. © EMBO 6 EMBO Molecular Medicine Peer Review Process File - EMM-2016-06773 Specific comments and recommendations Major I only have 1 major comment - the identified "escape" Axin1 mutations are not completely characterised or considered 1. The c2503delG mutation looks to me as though it may actually be a c.2499delT mutation. This could be clarified with single strand cloning (using PGEMT or something similar). A c2499delT mutation is not listed in COSMIC, although this doesn't necessarily matter. Indeed, looking at the Sanger sequencing electropherogram, T2499 seems to be heterozigous with G. However, this double signal could also reflect background noise in the electropherogram. We therefore checked carefully the exome sequencing data and found that all 291 reads covering nucleotide 2499 in VACO6R cells displayed a T, ruling out the hypothesis that the single nucleotide deletion could have occurred in this position. Conversely, the c.2503delG was supported by 90 out of 357 reads, corresponding to an estimated allelic frequency of 25%. Moreover, Sanger sequencing electropherograms from VACO6R clones (see reply at point 4 and Appendix Fig S6) displayed much lower background noise at position 2499, which resulted wild-type in all clones. 2. The identified mutations appear to be in polyC and poly G repeat tracts, was there any evidence of acquired microsatellite instability to explain this? Polymerase slippage could also be excluded with single strand cloning Indeed, VACO6 cells are microsatellite instable. We reported this observation in the Results and Discussion – Section 2. 3. Any copy number changes in the VACO6R cells? We had originally checked for possibly significant copy number changes, with negative results, and did not report it. Indeed, there seems to be a trisomy of the whole chromosome 8 and a heterozygous deletion from 13q21.39 to 13q31.1. This information is now reported in Results ad Discussion, as follows: “Copy number analysis based on exome data only highlighted minor changes of no clear functional meaning in VACO6R cells: a trisomy of the whole chromosome 8 and a heterozygous deletion from 13q21.39 to 13q31.1.” 4. The authors have not completed single cell/clone analysis to determine whether these 2 widely spaced frameshift mutations are occurring in the same escaper cell clone. If this is the case why would a cell need to acquire 2 frameshift mutations when the first will suffice to truncate the protein? This should be considered. If the alternative scenario is true, and two different populations of the same escaper line have independently acquired a different Axin1 mutation this would be strong evidence for positive selection and an important functional role of this protein in Porcupine inhibition escape. Why this gene and not other frequently mutated Wnt disrupting mutations such as APC, Ctnnb1 should be considered and commented on. This is a very interesting point. Indeed, a single frameshift mutation would abrogate Axin1 only partially: the remaining allele would still lead to expression of a functional Axin1 protein. In this view, the second frameshift mutation could result in complete loss of function. To further explore the problem, we isolated 14 independent clones from VACO6R cells by limiting dilution. All clones were grown in the presence of 1µM LGK-974, and subsequently underwent Sanger sequencing of the AXIN1 gene at the two mutation sites, plus western blot analysis of AXIN1 protein expression. We found that both frameshift mutations were present in all clones, each of them being heterozygous, which suggests that the vast majority VACO6R cells emerged from one resistant subclone in which the two AXIN1 alleles were independently inactivated. Accordingly, all clones displayed complete loss of AXIN1 protein, as previously observed for VACO6R (Appendix Fig S6). Regarding the second comment, i.e. “Why this gene and not other frequently mutated Wnt disrupting mutations such as APC, Ctnnb1”, our tentetive response is: “because that was the mutant gene already present in a subclone of VACO6 before selection”. However, we now have further data generated in response to Referee#3, showing that also APC downregulation or CTNNB1 activating mutations may render VACO6 cells resistant to porcupine inhibition. Minor comments © EMBO 7 EMBO Molecular Medicine Peer Review Process File - EMM-2016-06773 How the CAF score was generated should be in the methods. It is too big a part of the story to require referral to a separate paper We now briefly explain in Methods the procedures to calculate the CAF score, as follows: “To accurately trace the stromal content from gene expression profiles of bulk CRC tumor samples, we exploited three stromal signatures (for CAFs, leukocytes and endothelial cells) that we previously developed from sorted CRC cell subpopulations (Isella et al, 2015). Averaging the expression of genes in each signature yielded three stromal scores (CAF-score, Leuko-score and Endo-score, respectively), reporting the abundance of the three stromal cell populations in the sample.” Page 2 , fig S1. Is the correlation of RSpo expression with the leucocyte and endothelial score because these scores are simply surrogate markers of the volume of tumour stroma. Or do the endothelium and leucocytes act as a source of R-Spo? If the endothelium or leucocytes act as a source of RSPO3, then those cases with high Endo- or Leuco-score, but low CAF-score, could still express higher-than average levels of RSPO3. Based on this reasoning, after excluding cases with RSPO3 fusion, we selected TCGA samples with high Endo- or Leuco- score (>70th percentile) but low CAF-score (<30th percentile) and compared RSPO3 mRNA levels with the remaining cases. For both scores, RSPO3 mRNA expression was indeed lower than average, as shown in the dot plots below. This confirms that Leuco- and Endoscores represent weaker surrogate markers of stromal abundance, while endothelium and leucocytes do not seem to be a major source of RSPO3. Page 2 Any idea what causes the high epithelial R-Spo score in the other 8/14 tumours without detected R-Spo fusions? In the other 8/14 tumors, the source of RSPO3 mRNA is mostly stromal rather than epithelial, as these cases have high CAF-score, as now can be clearly seen in the new version of Figure 1A. We mentioned in the introduction that stromal cells have been identified as a source for RSPO3 expression in the intestine (Kabiri et al, 2014). Page 3 'in' needed - and a novel PRPTK(ex13)-RPO3 (ex 2) fusion transcript IN SNU1411 We corrected the text. Page 3 - last paragraph A sentence setting out the differences between the ligand dependent Wnt activation caused by RSPO fusions as apposed to the constitutive activation caused by APC for example, would be useful for the non-expert reader The following sentence has been added: “The vast majority of CRC are affected by loss-offunction mutations in components of the destruction complex (e.g. APC) leading to accumulation of β-catenin and constitutive activation of Wnt target genes. RSPO3 instead promotes WNT pathway © EMBO 8 EMBO Molecular Medicine Peer Review Process File - EMM-2016-06773 activation by binding the LGR4/5 protein and neutralizing RNF43-mediated degradation of LRP5/6 receptor, enhancing therefore the activity of WNT ligands (de Lau et al, 2014)”. Page 4 para 1 - ...previously described for RSPO3 blockade. Not referenced We now included the references in the text. Page 4 para 1 - Last sentence isnt very clear. Do they mean that the long upstream coding sequence from PTPRK does not lessen the pathological activation of R-SPO3 expression? We thank the reviewer for this comment. We corrected the sentence clarifying the concept: “This is particularly interesting for SNU1411 cells with the non canonical RSPO3 fusion, in which the long upstream coding sequence from PTPRK does not seem to lessen the pathological activation of WNT pathway driven by aberrant RSPO3 expression.” Figure 2C and D Label the cell line on the figure The names of the cell lines are now displayed in Figures 2C and D. Referee #3 (Remarks): Comments on manuscript number: EMM-2016-06773 Title: Loss of Axin1 drives acquired resistance to WNT pathway blockade in colorectal cancers cells A small, but clinically nonetheless relevant subgroup of colorectal cancers carries RSPO2/3 fusion genes that lead to aberrant activation of Wnt/β-catenin signaling in a manner dependent on the availability of Wnt ligands. Cancers driven by RSPO2/3 fusion gene expression therefore provide a unique opportunity for therapeutic intervention through the inhibition of Wnt ligand production or function. The design and realization of such therapeutic approaches could be fostered enormously by the development of suitable in vitro models. As a first step towards this goal Gabriele Picco and co-workers develop an elegant bioinformatic approach that should allow for high confidence identification of colorectal tumor samples which show high level tumor-specific expression of RSPO3 and which harbor RSPO3 fusion genes. This approach is based on the processing of transcriptome data and involves filtering out interfering gene expression signals from contaminating stromal cells in order to identify outlier samples with RSPO3 overexpression. The major achievement of this study is the successful application of the "outlier expression" approach to identify two colorectal cancer cell lines with PTPRK-RSPO3 fusions. These cell lines are further established as valuable preclinical model systems by demonstrating in vitro and in vivo their sensitivity against an inhibitor of Porcupine, an acyltransferase which is essential for Wnt ligand production. The potential utility of the newly identified cell lines is additionally demonstrated through the identification of mutations in the AXIN1 gene that might be the underlying cause for acquired resistance against the Porcupine inhibitor used. This manuscript is well written, is easy to follow, and provides sufficient background information to convey the significance and the importance of the study also to a non-expert readership. The technical quality is high and the vast majority of the authors' conclusions are strongly supported by the analyses and data presented. In my opinion, there are only two aspects that require further elaboration: These are, first, the reliability of the identification process of cancers with RSPO2/3 fusion genes, and second, the potential mechanisms whereby cancers with RSPO2/3 fusions might acquire resistance against Wnt pathway inhibitors, specifically the role of AXIN1 mutations is in this context. Specific comments 1. By looking at Figure 1A and Appendix Table1A it appears to me that one might have identified tumor samples with RPSO2/3 fusions without further bioinformatic analysis simply by picking the samples with high RSPO3 expression and a low CAF score. I suggest to individually label the 14 tumor samples within the red box in Figure 1A such that they can be tracked throughout the manuscript for example in Figure 1B, Appendix Figure 1A and Appendix Figure 1B. This would help to answer the question whether the same tumor samples are identified after stratification using the endothel and leukocyte gene expression signatures. Furthermore, are there false negatives, i. e. tumor samples with RSPO2/3-fusions that were not identified through the data processing pipeline developed by the authors? Indeed, the samples highlighted as white and red circles in figure 1B are all those contained in the red box of Figure 1A, but this was not clear. We now modified Figure 1A and highlighted © EMBO 9 EMBO Molecular Medicine Peer Review Process File - EMM-2016-06773 individually the samples included in the red box, to enable their tracking in Figure 2B and also in Appendix Fig S1A and Appendix Fig S1B. In principle, we agree that a simple look at the plot in Figure 1A could allow “hand-picking” of the promising samples. However, the calculation of the RSPO3-CAF score allows non-arbitrary statistical selection of samples based on outlier expression. To define if TCGA samples not identified through our data processing pipeline could carry RSPO3 fusions, we further expanded the search for RSPO3 fusions to 12 additional TCGA RNAseq samples expressing decreasing levels of RSPO3. In particular, for any expression level, we selected the samples with the lowest CAF score (Appendix Fig S3), so that at least a fraction of the RSPO3 reads could theoretically derive from epithelial cells. Samples with further lower levels were not explored because the limited number of RNAseq reads covering RSPO3 was estimated not to allow detection of a fusion transcript. None of the additionally analyzed samples was found to carry a RSPO3 fusion transcript, suggesting that our approach saturated the dataset and captured all the samples carrying RSPO3 rearrangements. These results are now included in the manuscript. 2. The difference between the RSPO3 and the (RSPO3-CAF) Z-score for the GSE14333 data set is much less pronounced and clear-cut (Appendix Figure 2) when compared to the analysis of the TCGA data set shown in Figure 1B. So what is the significance of this analysis for the identification with high confidence of tumor samples with RSPO2/3 fusions? Which of the GSE14333 samples are actually positive for RSPO2/3 fusion genes? If this information is not available for GSE14333, how would the analysis for the tumors samples described by Seshagiri and co-authors (Nature 488, 660664, 2012) look like? Unfortunately RSPO2/3 fusion data are not available for GSE14333. Seshagiri and colleagues published RSPO2/3 expression and fusion data, but not global expression profiles, required to calculate the CAF-score. Access to raw RNAseq data is rescricted, therefore we could not proceed with this analysis. In any case, also the Sehagiri data are based on RNAseq, not microarray. To further validate results already presented in Appendix Figure 2, we have assembled a larger 2140-sample CRC microarray dataset. We have calculated the three stromal scores (CAF, Endo and Leuco) to subsequently compare them with RSPO3 mRNA expression. This analysis confirms our results obtained in CRC TCGA RNAseq dataset, strongly supporting the evidence that the subtraction of CAF-score from RSPO3 mRNA expression clearly highlights the presence of a subgroup of CRC with outlier’s level of epithelial RSPO3 mRNA expression. These samples are high-confidence candidates to carry RSPO3 rearrangements. We now reported these results in the manuscript and we updated Appendix Fig S2 accordingly. 3. The authors ponder whether the long upstream portion from the PRPTK gene in the PTPRK(ex13)-RSPO3(ex2) fusion interferes with RSPO3 function. But does this fusion protein actually exist or is it somehow processed to release the RSPO3 portion? This could be addressed by Western blotting to analyze the expression of the RSPO3 fusion protein and its apparent molecular weight. To address this task, we have tried various commercially available antibodies but unfortunately none of these was functional and reliable, with many background bands in cell extracts and in supernatants. We also tried to silence the RSPO3 transcript by shRNA in VACO6 and SNU1411 cells and despite the fusion transcript was significantly downregulated as seen by RT-PCR, no WB band potentially corresponding to the chimeric RSPO3 protein or to a fragment was downregulated. Indeed, detection of RSPO3 by western blot seems a common problem. Accordingly, to the best of our knowledge, the only published western blot of RSPO3 was performed after exogenous expression of tagged RSPO3 fusions transcripts (Seshagiri et al, 2012). Despite this, the overexpression of the aberrant RSPO3 transcript and the striking addiction of SNU1411 to porcupine blockade strongly prompt us to speculate that the long upstream portion from the PRPTK gene in the PTPRK(ex13)-RSPO3(ex2) fusion does not interfere with RSPO3 function. 4. From the manuscript it does not become clear whether the AXIN1 mutations are the only newly acquired genetic alterations in VACO6R cells. This needs to be clarified because if not, the significance of AXIN1 inactivation as resistance mechanism would be dubitable despite the phenocopy by the AXIN1 knockdown. Along the same line, can re-expression of AXIN1 restore sensitivity to LGK-974? Furthermore, it should be clearly shown that the RSPO3-fusion is still present and expressed in LGK-974-resistant cells. To investigate if AXIN1 mutations were the only alteration acquired in VACO6R cells, we carefully re-analyzed the exome sequencing data and failed to identify other mutated genes known © EMBO 10 EMBO Molecular Medicine Peer Review Process File - EMM-2016-06773 to be involved in WNT signaling. Indeed, a series of additional indels/mutations with high allelic frequency were detected (we now report them in Appendix Table 2). In the context of a MSI cell line, a large set of mutations at low allelic frequency is expected as a conseguence of genetic drift. However, in this case, the number of concurrent mutations at high allelic frequency points to the occurrence of a separated clone, pre-existing to the selection process. We included this information and comment in the manuscript. To confirm the causative role of AXIN1 loss in resistance to LGK974, we re-expressed the wildtype AXIN1 coding sequence in VACO6R cells, to levels comparable to the parental VACO6 cells. Indeed, VACO6R-AXIN1 cells displayed a reversion of the phenotype: reduction of basal WNT pathway activity and re-sensitization to LGK-974 (Figure EV1B-D). Finally, we also verified by qRT-PCR that the RSPO3 fusion transcript is equally expressed in VACO6R cells as in the parental counterparts (Figure EV1A). We now mention all these results in the last section of the Results and Discussion. 5. After dose escalation for three months the authors isolate a LGK-974-resistant cell population and report the biallelic inactivation of AXIN1 in this population. Is there something special and perhaps unique about AXIN1 with respect to resistance against Porcupine inhibition? This could become important for the development of drugs that break secondary resistance. The authors need to provide information whether their resistant cell population is of monoclonal or polyclonal origin. Did AXIN1 inactivation occur repeatedly and independently in multiple cases? Is AXIN1 inactivation the only way to become insensitive towards LGK-974? The authors should knockdown APC and overexpress mutant β-catenin in VACO6 cells and compare this to AXIN1 knockdown with respect to LGK-974 sensitivity. We thank the reviewer for these insightful comments. To address the clonality issue, we isolated 14 independent clones from VACO6R cells by limiting dilution. All clones were grown in the presence of 1µM LGK-974, and subsequently underwent Sanger sequencing of the AXIN1 gene at the two mutation sites and western blot analysis of AXIN1 protein expression. We found that both frameshift mutations were present in all clones, each of them being heterozygous, which suggests that the vast majority VACO6R cells emerged from one resistant subclone in which the two AXIN1 alleles were independently inactivated. Accordingly, all clones displayed complete loss of AXIN1 protein, as previously observed for VACO6R (Appendix Fig S6). To further investigate if AXIN1 inactivation is the only way for VACO6 cells to become resistant to LGK974, we transduced them with an activated β-catenin, which induced basal WNT pathway activation (Figure EV2B and EV3A) and impaired the response to PORCN inhibition by LGK974 and WNT-59 (Figure EV3B). Also transient APC downregulation by RNA interference induced activation of WNT signaling (Figure EV2B and EV3A) and resistance to LGK974 (Figure EV3B). Overall, these results confirm that also the more frequent alterations of WNT pathway components, APC loss and β-catenin activating mutation, can confer resistance to WNT pathway inhibition in CRC cells with RSPO3 rearrangements. We now mention these results in the manuscript in the last section of the Results and Discussion. 6. From a therapeutic point of view it would be interesting and highly relevant to know whether AXIN1 mutation/knockdown confers resistance specifically against LGK-974. How about resistance against other Porcupine and Wnt pathway inhibitors? Did VACO6R cells become resistant against other drugs, unrelated to the Wnt pathway, as well? To address the first point, we assessed sensitivity of VACO6 and VACO6R cells to additional WNT pathway inhibitors: the alternative porcupine inhibitor WNT-C59 and the tankyrase inhibitor XAV939. While VACO6 parental cells were found to be markedly sensitive to WNT-C59 and XAV939, VACO6R were completely resistant to both compounds (Appendix Fig S7). Altogether, these data confirm that CRC cells carrying RSPO3 fusions are addicted to WNT pathway blockade and that AXIN1 loss reverts this dependence. To assess if VACO6R acquired resistance to additional therapeutic compounds, unrelated to the WNT pathway, we tested their sensitivity to two chemotherapeutic agents commonly used to treat CRC patient (5FU and SN38) and Pevonedistat, a NEDD-8 inhibitor recently identified as promising therapeutic strategy for CRCs, to which VACO6 are markedly sensitive (Picco et al., JNCI 2017) (Appendix Fig S7). The observed response of VACO6R cells to these three compounds was superimposable to that of their parental counterparts. We now include these results, in the last section of the Results and Discussion. 7. The authors show that AXIN2 is expressed in VACO6 cells and that AXIN2 is further upregulated in VACO6R cells. AXIN1 and AXIN2 are considered to be functionally redundant and © EMBO 11 EMBO Molecular Medicine Peer Review Process File - EMM-2016-06773 fully interchangeable. In view of this, how do the authors explain that elevated AXIN2 does not compensate the loss of AXIN1? What are the expression ratios of AXIN1:AXIN2? Is AXIN2 expressed at the protein level? It is well known that AXIN2 is involved in a negative feedback loop; indeed, we agree with the reviewer that its upregulation upon AXIN1 loss could mitigate WNT pathway activation. However, not always AXIN1 and AXIN2 are functionally redundant, see e.g. http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/25866367, where “retroviral-mediated overexpression of Axin2 was unable to compensate for knockdown of Axin1”. It should also be noted that AXIN2 upregulation in VACO6R cells, though statistically significant, is only about 1.5-fold, while AXIN1 is completely lost. We now discuss this point in the last section of the Results and Discussion. Regarding the question of the AXIN1:AXIN2 ratio, absolute mRNA expression levels measured by microarray are not completely reliable, due to differences in probe hybridization efficiency and specificity. The situation is even worse for protein quantification, affected by sensitivity and specificity of the antibody, plus the enzymatic amplification of the signal. With this caveat in mind, looking at the mRNA expression of AXIN1 and AXIN2 across the 151 CRC cell line dataset, we observed that the AXIN2 signal is by average 4-fold higher than AXIN1; interestingly, in VACO6, the ratio is less that 2-fold. This indicates that, in VACO6, the contribution of AXIN1 to the total AXIN levels is higher than average. We however do not consider this information reliable enough to include it in the manuscript. 8. The title should be more precise and avoid any kind of generalization that could be misleading. It should be clearly mentioned that the study applies to colorectal cancers with RSPO2/3 fusion genes and the interference with pathway activity at the level of Wnt ligand production/action. We modified the title in relation to the first point. As we now have additional data also relative to a more downstream tankyrase inhibitor, specifying the WNT ligand production/action is not necessary. 9. The Chartier et al 2015 and Madan et al 2015 references are incomplete in the bibliography. We updated the bibliography entering the missing details. 2nd Editorial Decision 06 December 2016 Thank you for the submission of your revised manuscript to EMBO Molecular Medicine. We have now received the enclosed reports from the reviewers that were asked to re-assess it. As you will see, while reviewers 1 and 2 are now globally supportive, reviewer 3, while acknowledging that the manuscript is improved, is still not satisfied. His/her main concern is that the clinical relevance of your finding (quite important given the type of manuscript) is still limited due to the as yet not clarified issue as to whether the RSPO2/3 identification process is thorough enough to detect most if not all RSPO2/3 fusions or just touches the tip of a virtual iceberg. The reviewer suggests that a more appropriate analysis should be performed and is within your reach. S/he also lists a couple of other points. Although I will not be asking you to provide additional experimentation at this stage (although further analysis would be welcome), I do suggest you thoroughly address these concerns with a rebuttal and by appropriately amending the manuscript as necessary. Provided your response is exhaustive, I might be able to make an editorial decision on your manuscript. 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The hypothesis that a preexisting, biallelic Axin1 mutant clone emerges through selective pressure in the VACOr cells is biologically plausible, especially in an MSI setting. I continue to like the paper very much! There is a misspelling of frequent in the last paragraph of the discussion Referee #3 (Remarks): Comments on manuscript number: EMM-2016-06773-V2 Title: Loss of Axin1 drives acquired resistance to WNT pathway blockade in colorectal cancers cells carrying RSPO3 fusions. As in its original version, the study by G. Picco and colleagues follows two main goals. On the one hand, the authors aim to reliably and sensitively identify colon tumors with RSPO2/3 fusions based on transcriptome data. On the other hand, they aim to generate a cell-line based model to evaluate treatment options for tumors with these fusion transcripts and to anticipate potential resistance mechanisms that might develop in response to therapy. Concerning the second aim, the authors performed a substantial amount of additional experiments and added quite a bit of new and valuable information to the revised version of the manuscript. Overall, the manuscript underwent major changes and improved significantly. The main findings and conclusions were substantiated and the work has been put into a wider perspective with respect to its medical and therapeutic relevance. Specifically, the authors clarified that the observed resistance of VACO6R cells against LGK-974 is the result of a singular, clonal event. This notwithstanding, they add as new information that also APC loss-of-function and β-catenin gain-of-function could lead to resistance against LGK-974. In © EMBO 13 EMBO Molecular Medicine Peer Review Process File - EMM-2016-06773 addition, the authors demonstrated Wnt pathway specificity of the resistance mechanism in VACO6R cells. Moreover, despite a large number of additional mutations present in the VACO6R background, AXIN1 mutations are firmly established as causative for acquired resistance. For this, the authors performed the AXIN1 rescue which restored sensitivity against LGK-974. Accordingly, the authors nicely removed most of my previous concerns. The one issue that was not completely solved concerns the reliability and sensitivity of their data processing pipeline for the identification of tumors and cell lines with RSPO2/3 fusion transcripts. The GSE14333 data set was replaced by a much larger collection of transcriptome data which indeed allowed pinpointing many more candidates for carriers of RSPO2/3 fusion transcripts. However, the crucial information, namely which of these actually express such fusions is still missing. Aside from this, in order to find tumors with RSPO2/3 fusions transcripts that escaped detection by their outlier approach, the authors performed a rather restricted analysis and selected a small sample of tumors for additional inspection. The rational for this restriction is not clear to me. In my opinion, a completely unbiased search for samples with RSPO2/3 fusions transcripts across an entire data set would have been feasible and more informative. After all, the authors have established and applied the tools for this kind of search and they have available the transcriptome data from the TCGA collection and their 151 cell line collection both of which would have served the purpose. Minor issues: - The authors should update the Methods section and include the relevant information for the other Wnt pathway inhibitors and additional drugs that were used during the revision. - Response to previous comment 7, AXIN1/AXIN2 ratios in VACO6 cells: the authors' concerns regarding microarray- and antibody-based comparative quantifications are certainly valid. However, a qRT-PCR measurement of the relative expression levels of AXIN1 and AXIN2 transcripts in VACO6 and VACO6R cells could be informative. 2nd Revision - authors' response 18 December 2016 Referee #1 (Remarks): Maybe my initial statement that mutations in downstream regulators "might have been expected" was too harsh and somehow underrates the value of this well performed study. Referee #2 (Remarks): The authors have responded to all my comments to my satisfaction. The hypothesis that a preexisting, biallelic Axin1 mutant clone emerges through selective pressure in the VACOr cells is biologically plausible, especially in an MSI setting. I continue to like the paper very much! There is a misspelling of frequent in the last paragraph of the discussion We corrected the text accordingly. Referee #3 (Remarks): Comments on manuscript number: EMM-2016-06773-V2 Title: Loss of Axin1 drives acquired resistance to WNT pathway blockade in colorectal cancers cells carrying RSPO3 fusions. As in its original version, the study by G. Picco and colleagues follows two main goals. On the one hand, the authors aim to reliably and sensitively identify colon tumors with RSPO2/3 fusions based on transcriptome data. On the other hand, they aim to generate a cell-line based model to evaluate treatment options for tumors with these fusion transcripts and to anticipate potential resistance mechanisms that might develop in response to therapy. Concerning the second aim, the authors performed a substantial amount of additional experiments and added quite a bit of new and valuable information to the revised version of the manuscript. Overall, the manuscript underwent major changes and improved significantly. The main findings and conclusions were substantiated and the work has been put into a wider perspective with respect to its medical and therapeutic relevance. Specifically, the authors clarified that the observed resistance of VACO6R cells against LGK-974 is the result of a singular, clonal event. This notwithstanding, they add as new information that also © EMBO 14 EMBO Molecular Medicine Peer Review Process File - EMM-2016-06773 APC loss-of-function and β-catenin gain-of-function could lead to resistance against LGK-974. In addition, the authors demonstrated Wnt pathway specificity of the resistance mechanism in VACO6R cells. Moreover, despite a large number of additional mutations present in the VACO6R background, AXIN1 mutations are firmly established as causative for acquired resistance. For this, the authors performed the AXIN1 rescue which restored sensitivity against LGK-974. Accordingly, the authors nicely removed most of my previous concerns. The one issue that was not completely solved concerns the reliability and sensitivity of their data processing pipeline for the identification of tumors and cell lines with RSPO2/3 fusion transcripts. The GSE14333 data set was replaced by a much larger collection of transcriptome data which indeed allowed pinpointing many more candidates for carriers of RSPO2/3 fusion transcripts. However, the crucial information, namely which of these actually express such fusions is still missing. Aside from this, in order to find tumors with RSPO2/3 fusions transcripts that escaped detection by their outlier approach, the authors performed a rather restricted analysis and selected a small sample of tumors for additional inspection. The rational for this restriction is not clear to me. In my opinion, a completely unbiased search for samples with RSPO2/3 fusions transcripts across an entire data set would have been feasible and more informative. After all, the authors have established and applied the tools for this kind of search and they have available the transcriptome data from the TCGA collection and their 151 cell line collection both of which would have served the purpose. Regarding the possibility to search systematically for RSPO fusions in our 151 cell lines, it should be noted that these cells have been expression-profiled with microarrays, not RNAseq. Of course a dedicated RNAseq profiling was then performed for SNU1411 and VACO6 cells, but systematic fusion search in the remaining lines was not possible. In the case of TCGA data, our estimated time for downloading ten TCGA RNAseq samples and processing them by the multiple fusion detection algorithms envisioned by our pipeline was around 10 days, and varying depending on bandwidth and computational resources available. Therefore, a complete analysis would have required much more than three months to be performed properly. For this reason we concentrated on the subset displaying RSPO3 expression not completely justified by stromal gene expression, as described in the revised manuscript. To obtain further available information on TCGA RNAseq data, we found a useful resource: the TCGA Fusion Gene Data Portal ( http://54.84.12.177/PanCanFusV2/ ), that provides the results of a systematic fusion transcript analysis across many tumour types from TCGA, including CRC (https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/25500544). Searching this resource for RSPO3 fusions in colorectal cancer (312 colon + 95 rectum adenocarcinoma samples analysed) yielded 7 cases with RSPO3 fusion, all canonical (PTPRK-RSPO3). Of these, three were not included in the 450-sample TCGA RNAseq dataset that we used for outlier expression analysis. The remaining four were all among those that our pipeline identified as high confidence candidates and found to contain the PTPRK-RSPO3 fusion, based on multiple fusion detection algorithms. Interestingly, we found two additional samples with PTPRK-RSPO3 fusion, not included in the TCGA Fusion Gene Data Portal. It is not possible for us to know whether those samples were included in their analysis or not, because the database only shows samples with a detected fusion. This result, based on an independent analysis, demonstrates the efficacy of our strategy to prioritize samples for RSPO3 fusion search, greatly reducing the required effort while maintaining optimal sensitivity. We have now included this information in the manuscript. Minor issues: - The authors should update the Methods section and include the relevant information for the other Wnt pathway inhibitors and additional drugs that were used during the revision. We updated the Methods section as suggested. - Response to previous comment 7, AXIN1/AXIN2 ratios in VACO6 cells: the authors' concerns regarding microarray- and antibody-based comparative quantifications are certainly valid. However, a qRT-PCR measurement of the relative expression levels of AXIN1 and AXIN2 transcripts in VACO6 and VACO6R cells could be informative. In our opinion, this is a “catch-22” situation, where a well-known negative feedback loop would remain confirmed irrespectively of the results of a detailed analysis of AXIN1 vs AXIN2 levels. The system would anyway reach an equilibrium, whereby, in the absence of AXIN1, WNT signaling would raise, and so consequently would AXIN2, that in turn would favour beta-catenin destabilization, leading to WNT signaling downregulation, until the system reaches a new equilibrium in which both WNT signaling and AXIN2 are increased. The possible relevance of the proposed qPCR analysis is further turned down by the experiments in which we used the WNT pathway reporter GFP construct (Figure EV1 C). We transduced with this reporter VACO6, © EMBO 15 EMBO Molecular Medicine Peer Review Process File - EMM-2016-06773 VACO6R and VACO6R-Axin1FL cells, and found that GFP fluorescence is markedly increased in VACO6R (lacking AXIN1), and returns to the initial activity upon transduction of VACO6R with AXIN1 full-length. 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