ACT TEN FOR TEN® act english— punctuation and apostrophe’s Here are some overall guidelines for the ACT English section: 1. Do NOT plan to skip over parts of the passage; about a quarter of the questions are based either on the entire passage or how a sentence or paragraph fits into the passage. 2. Even if the answer choices contain only a word or two, make sure you understand the entire sentence—what the author is trying to say. 3. In any punctuation question, read the simplest choice (that is, the one with the least punctuation) into the sentence. It’s clear that teenagers are very fond of commas, so it’s important that you find a choice that doesn’t force you to decide whether to take commas out. 4. Whenever you see a verb underlined, you must find the subject. It’s likely that the subject, if it’s nowhere nearby, will be singular when the verb is plural, and vice versa. 5. You will never be asked to make a creative decision regarding a verb’s tense. Your tense decisions will be easier if you note the tense of surrounding, non-underlined verbs. 6. Apostrophe’s (did you catch that?) are never used to make noun’s plural! Do we drive car’s and fly on plane’s? 7. The pronouns “they,” “their,” and “them” are plural, even though we regularly use them in everyday conversation to stand in for singular nouns. (“A person shouldn’t leave their backpack on the sidewalk.”) 8. Often, near the end of a question set, you’ll face a very long question that asks about something you read two or three paragraphs ago. If you have a time problem, you should guess and go. 3/12/08 ACT TEN FOR TEN® act english—passage 1 ENGLISH TEST 45 Minutes-75 Questions DIRECTIONS: In the five passages that follow, certain words and phrases are underlined and numbered. In the right-hand column, you will find alternatives for each underlined part. You are to choose the one that best expresses the idea, makes the statement appropriate for standard written English, or is worded most consistently with the style and tone of the passage as a whole. If you think the original version is best, choose “NO CHANGE.” Tessa Finn, Wildlife Biologist [A] 1. They call her Tessa of the Wolves. Wildlife 1 biologist Tessa Finn studies wolves in their native habitat in a remote wilderness in the Northwest. 2. It being her base, Finn’s eighty-year-old cabin is thirty2 five miles from the nearest paved road. It has little 3 running water, electricity, or phone, and Glacier 3. National Park is just across the river that flows past her cabin door. 4 4. 5. [B] Because of her isolation, Finn has had to become self-sufficient. She heats the cabin with 6. 5 firewood, she chops herself, and hunts wild game 6 for food. Much of her time is spent trapping wolves in order to radio-collar (put a tracking device on) them. Once a wolf is collared, its movements are easy to follow and 7 record. And though she often comes across dangerous grizzlies, Finn carries no weapon as she makes the rounds of her traps. While checking her traps, she packs supplies. 8 7. a) b) c) d) NO CHANGE Wolves, wildlife Wolves. Wildlife, Wolves, specializing in wildlife a) b) c) d) NO CHANGE Her base is an eighty-year-old cabin Being an eighty-year-old cabin, it is her base Finn’s cabin, it being an eighty-year-old base, is a) b) c) d) NO CHANGE less few no a) b) c) d) NO CHANGE passed her cabin passed her cabin’s past her cabins’ a) b) c) d) NO CHANGE cabin which is her base cabin, her home base, cabin, which is eighty years old a) b) c) d) NO CHANGE firewood, she chops herself firewood she chops, herself firewood she chops herself a) b) c) d) NO CHANGE whereby its it’s their 8. Which of the alternatives best provides new, specific details about the equipment Tessa Finn uses for the purpose of trapping and collaring wolves? a) NO CHANGE b) To manage the wolves, she packs a four-foot pole, tranquilizers, and a hypodermic needle. c) Safely collaring a wolf requires equipment, which she brings with her when she checks her traps. d) Although she doesn’t bring weapons, she arms herself with equipment. act english—passage 1 2 [C] [1] The first wolf Finn collared was Sage, a big gray wolf so strong he has crossed the Continental Divide twice in the dead of winter. [2] One winter afternoon, on a routine flight to check on her wolves, Finn spotted Sage in 9. a hunter’s trap. [3] She knew that if the hunter didn’t kill him, freezing or starvation soon would. [4] If Sage died, Finn’s research on this animal would end unhappily after 10. only four years, it was after landing, Finn and a 9 fellow, biologist drove fifty miles in a four- wheel-drive 10 pickup. [5] They then traveled through deep snow on snowmobiles in order to reach Sage. 12. him, and wrapped him in a sleeping bag. [2] The sky was dark by the time the two biologists had began working. 12 13 A few days later, Finn noticed Sage and five of his pup’s playful wrestling on the side of a mountain. Sage’s a) b) c) d) before Sentence 1. after Sentence 1. after Sentence 2. after sentence 5. a) b) c) d) NO CHANGE have begun begun began Paragraph D most logical? daylight, they fitted the recovered wolf with a new radio [E] NO CHANGE fellow biologist, drove fifty miles fellow biologist drove fifty miles fellow biologist, drove fifty miles 13. Which of the following sequences of sentences will make circulation to Sage’s frozen right foot. [4] Just before collar and set him free. a) b) c) d) Sage’s name to Paragraph C: “Finn named the wolf for his air of wisdom and experience.” That sentence would most logically be placed: [D] [3] They used the warmth of their bare hands to restore NO CHANGE years so then after years. After years, after 11. The writer wants to add the following explanation of 11 [1] They approached the half-frozen wolf, sedated a) b) c) d) 14. a) b) c) d) 1, 1, 2, 2, 2, 4, 1, 3, 4, 3, 3, 1, 3 2 4 4 a) b) c) d) NO CHANGE pup’s playfully wrestling pups’ wrestling playfully pups wrestling playfully 14 rescue had been a success after all! 15 15. The writer wants to link the essay’s opening and concluding sentences. Which of the alternatives most successfully achieves this effect: a) b) c) d) NO CHANGE success even so. success, which was predictable. success, and Tessa of the Wolves had earned her nickname once again. ACT TEN FOR TEN® ANSWERS AND EXPLANATIONS act english—passage 1 1. A. We cannot connect two independent clauses* with just a comma. In case you liked (b), why would we put a comma between an adjective and the noun the adjective modifies? That would be like saying, “The red, car drove down the dark, street.” 2. B. When in doubt, choose the simplest choice. Also, the verb “being” is overused in America, so if you’re between two choices and one of them features “being” as a verb, pick the other one. 3. D. If you chose (a), note that the adjective applies to three nouns, “water,” “electricity,” and “phone.” I can barely imagine having little running water and little electricity, but little phone? 4. A. “Past,” believe it or not, is one of those preposition answers to, “What can a bee do?” (“A bee can fly over a flower, under a flower, past a flower …”). “Passed” is a verb. 5. A. About once every passage, you’ll be asked to notice redundancy. Weren’t we told back in the first paragraph that the cabin is her base? Don’t tell the same story twice, and don’t let an ACT passage do so, either. 6. D. As we discussed in the preview to this section, when you need to make a decision regarding punctuation, always “read in” the simplest (i.e., least punctuated) answer choice and then ask yourself, “Do I need punctuation? If so, where?” 7. A. Please make sure that you find the antecedent for every pronoun. Here, it’s “a wolf,” which is singular. If you chose (c), note that the pronoun “its” has no apostrophe, but the contraction for “it is,” which is “it’s,” does. 8. B. Questions that ask, “Which of the alternatives …” are about content, not grammar. So, you must slowly read the question. Here, we’re asked to pick an alternative that provides “new, specific details about the equipment.” Only (b) is both new and specific. 9. C. If our job whenever we write is to inform the reader and ease any difficulties she may have, we must learn to separate ideas and actions into their own sentences. The sentence that ends with “years” is about the possible consequences if Sage were to die. The sentence that starts with “After” tells us what actions Finn and her colleague took to save the wolf. 10. C. As we saw back in problem 6, any problem that requires you to make punctuation decisions will be solved most easily by reading the simplest choice into the sentence. Furthermore, if you ever need to guess in such a “punctuation choice” problem (perhaps you’re running out of time), you should guess the least punctuated choice, which will be right more than half the time! Here, that choice is (c). Why would we separate the subject (Finn and a fellow biologist) from the verb (drove) with a comma? 11. B. If the writer chooses to do so, she should explain Sage’s name immediately, before it interferes with the story about how Tessa Finn rescued him. Remember, in English we put modifiers (or explanations) as close as possible to the words they are intended to modify (or explain). 12. D. “The sky was dark” is past tense, as is the entire previous sentence. Is there any reason to think that we need any other tense? * An independent clause is one that could, if need be, stand alone as a sentence. act english—passage 1 answers and explanations 2 13. C. Sentence 1 details some of the “work” the biologists did with Sage, so it logically should follow sentence 2, which sets the scene before they began their work. The rest of the paragraph flows naturally. 14. D. This one can be pretty easy if you’re not under the impression that we make a noun plural by adding “apostrophe s” to it. Do we drive car’s or eat ice cream cone’s? 15. D. Here, you’re asked to refer back to the opening sentence. Which choice “closes the circle” of the story (that is, clearly refers back to the author’s description of “Tessa of the Wolves”)? ACT TEN FOR TEN® act english—passage 2 World Trade: Lost in Translation? 1. As American businesses explore overseas markets. They learn firsthand how language differences 1 2 can stand in the way of trade. After experiencing a period 2. of slow gasoline sales in a new foreign market, an American oil company learned that its name in the foreign nation’s language means “stalled car.” A major American car manufacturer, you see, found out that the name of one 3. 3 of its models being converted into hard cash in South 4 America is a Spanish word meaning “ugly old woman.” Blunders like these illustrate that an important step in 4. breaking down barriers to international trade is to break down language barriers. 5. The many countries of Western Europe have always faced this problem. Overcoming it is one of the tasks of 6. the European Economic Community or Common Market 5 an organization founded at its start to promote trade 6 among nations in that part of the world. But it’s a difficult task. When one of the European Economic Community’s (EEC’s) twelve official languages are used at a meeting, 7 translation must be available to the other delegates. 8 Finding translators for English, French, and German is relatively easy. But finding them for languages like Danish, Portuguese, and especially, Greek has proven more difficult. 7. a) b) c) d) NO CHANGE markets, they markets; they markets and a) b) c) d) NO CHANGE differences, which differences that differences of which a) b) c) d) NO CHANGE manufacturer, as proof, manufacturer manufacturer, consequently, a) b) c) d) NO CHANGE sold over the counter traded for the local currency offered for sale a) b) c) d) NO CHANGE Community, or Common Market; Community, or Common Market, Community or, Common Market a) b) c) d) NO CHANGE which was begun and founded that it organized formed a) b) c) d) NO CHANGE is used are being used are in use 8. At this point, the writer is considering the addition of the following sentence: “Brussels, the home of EEC headquarters, is the lively and modern capital of Belgium.” Would this be a logical and relevant addition to the essay? a) Yes, because it serves to establish the setting for the essay. b) Yes, because it helps to legitimize the EEC by mentioning its main headquarters c) No, because the official languages of Belgium aren’t mentioned as “problem” languages. d) No, because it sheds no new light on the problem of language barriers in the EEC. act english—passage 2 2 9. In fact, when it was almost two decades ago 9 10 becoming clear that Greece would join the Common Market, officials began to look for translators three years in advance. The results of their search were disappointing 10. 11 to this day, it is almost impossible for them to find translators who can turn Greek into, say, Danish. 12 11. 12. 13. Then, a standing joke among language officials at 13 EEC headquarters begins 14. with the interrogation of someone by asking the question, 14 “What is a Great Dane?” With a rueful smile, someone is a) b) c) d) NO CHANGE (Do NOT begin a new paragraph) Furthermore, (Do NOT begin a new paragraph) In fact, (Begin a new paragraph) Furthermore, a) b) c) d) NO CHANGE (Place after clear) (Place after join) (Place after began) a) b) c) d) NO CHANGE disappointing, and disappointing and so disappointing a) b) c) d) NO CHANGE into say, into, say into, a) b) c) d) NO CHANGE A For instance, a Eventually, a a) b) c) d) NO CHANGE by asking someone to answer the by commencing with the introductory with the a) b) c) d) NO CHANGE despair, was despair is despair, would be likely to respond, “Any Dane who knows how to speak Greek?” All that’s needed to turn that smile into a look of despair, is a reminder that Turkey, whose language is not 15 widely studied in Western Europe, may someday become a member of the Common Market. 15. ACT TEN FOR TEN® ANSWERS AND EXPLANATIONS act english—passage 2 1. B. Since this sentence begins with a dependent clause, we can to connect it to the independent clause with a comma. 2. A. As we will see several times in this passage, when in doubt you should choose the shortest and/or simplest answer choice. A good question to ask yourself here (as in all instances when you’d like to identify the subject of a clause) is, “What can stand in the way of trade?” The answer here is “language differences,” 3. C. Again, as in problem 2, we tend to get a high percentage of questions right when we lean toward the shortest/simplest answer choice. Using either “you see” or “as proof” would identify the sentence as primary evidence, when it’s actually just another piece of evidence in support of the author’s point. Using “consequently” would suggest that what’s coming in this sentence is a consequence of what happened in the previous sentence. 4. D. Let’s pledge to always “go simple,” trusting that there aren’t deeper ways to communicate that we just don’t know about. If you chose anything but (d) here, review your choice. Doesn’t it seem like a bad translation (the subject of this essay)? 5. C. Here’s the rule about setting off something “unnecessary” with commas: Put commas immediately before and after the “unnecessary” words. Think of those commas as indicators of where an editor could “cut” the sentence. Here, by putting commas after “Community” and “Market,” we tell any future editor that s/he can shorten the sentence to read: “… one of the tasks of the European Economic Community, an organization …” 6. D. It’s clear that if a non-English speaker who knew only that short answers were right more often than they should be took this test, s/he might score better than some native English speakers who answer on the basis that “complex is good.” 7. B. This problem can be tough if you don’t routinely identify and bracket prepositional phrases, which are descriptive but never necessary to the structure of any sentence. Here, we need to bracket a long prepositional phrase “of [preposition] the European Economic Community’s (EEC’s) twelve official languages” to leave “When one [prepositional phrase] is/are used …” 8. D. The suggested additional sentence is the sort of “filler” that informs the reader that the writer is just trying to fill the required number of pages. Focus on the topic at hand. 9. C. This sentence provides evidence that supports the point the author made right at the end of the “previous” paragraph, so starting a new paragraph could confuse the reader—and we never want to do that. “Furthermore” indicates that we’re about to make another argument or provide new evidence. Neither is true. 10. B. It’s important to get our time sequences straight. What happened almost two decades ago? The sentence makes clear that “officials began to look for translators three years in advance,” so the time in question was at least three years before Greece joined. It must be the realization that came two decades ago, right? 11. B. Here, we have two independent clauses (the first ends with “disappointing”; the second begins with “to this day,”) that we need to punctuate. On standardized tests, there are usually two “best” ways to do so: using a semicolon or a comma/conjunction combination. Here, the semicolon isn’t offered as an option. 12. A. Please review the explanation for problem 5. As we discussed at that time, we can use commas to set off a part of a sentence that is descriptive but not necessary to the act english—passage 2 answers and explanations 2 sentence’s structure. Here, if we eliminate “say” from this sentence, we’ll lose some of the nuance but the sentence structure won’t suffer. So, in order to show an editor where to “cut” the sentence if necessary, we put the commas right before and right after “say.” 13. B. It’s pretty tiresome how often the shortest and/or simplest answer choice turns out to be right. Getting the pattern? 14. D. See the explanation to question 13. Short. Simple. Right. More often than you would think. 15. C. To answer a “commas” question, begin by reading in the least-punctuated choice. Then ask yourself, “OK, do I need commas and, if so, where should I put them?” Most often, you’ll conclude, “No commas are necessary here.” ACT TEN FOR TEN® assorted geometry Efforts have been made to draw the following to scale, but please do not assume that is the case. However, on the ACT any unlabeled drawing IS drawn to scale. 10 feet 1) 5 ft. 5 ft. The parallel sides of the isosceles trapezoid shown to the left are 10 feet long and 16 feet long, respectively. What is the distance, in feet, between these 2 sides? 16 feet a) 3 c) 5 b) 4 d) 10 Evan cuts a board in the shape of a regular hexagon and pounds a nail at an equal distance from each vertex, as shown in the figure to the left. How many rubber bands will he need in order to stretch a different rubber band across every possible pair of nails? 2) 3) e) 16 a) 15 c) 12 b) 14 d) 9 e) 6 The edges of a cube are each 3 inches long. What is the surface area, in square inches, of this cube? a) 9 c) 27 b) 18 d) 36 e) 54 PLEASE READ THE ANSWERS AND EXPLANATIONS FOR PROBLEMS 1 THROUGH 3 NOW assorted geometry 2 In the 8-sided figure to the left, adjacent sides meet at right angles and the lengths given are in meters. What is the perimeter of the figure, in meters? 4 4) 6 10 5) a) 10 c) 30 b) 20 d) 40 e) 100 In the standard (x,y) coordinate plane, the midpoint of line AB is (4, -3) and A is located at (1, -5). If (x,y) are the coordinates of B, what is the value of x + y? a) 19 c) 6 b) 8 d) –1.5 6) e) –3 The formula for the surface area (S) of a rectangular solid (shown below) is S = 2lw + 2lh + 2wh, where l represents the length, w the width, and h the height of the solid. Doubling each of the dimensions (l, w, and h) will increase the surface area to how many times its original size? h w l 4/7/08 a) 2 c) 6 b) 4 d) 8 e) 24 assorted geometry 3 Use the following information to answer questions 7-9. The community center has installed a swimming pool on level ground. The pool is a right circular cylinder with a diameter of 24 feet and a height of 6 feet. A diagram of the pool and its entry ladder is shown below. ladder 6 feet 70 o 24 feet 7) To the nearest cubic foot, what is the volume of water that will be in the pool when it is filled with water to a depth of 5 feet? a) 942 c) 2,262 b) 1,885 d) 9,047 45 A plastic cover is made for the pool. The cover will rest on top of the pool and will include a wedge-shaped flap that forms a 45° angle at the center of the cover, as shown in the figure below. A zipper will go along 1 side of the wedge-shaped flap and around the arc. Which of the following is closest to the length, in feet, of the zipper? o 8) 9) a) 17 c) 24 b) 22 d) 29 e) 57 The directions for assembling the pool state that the ladder should be placed at an angle of 70° relative to level ground. Which of the following expressions involving tangent gives the distance, in feet, that the bottom of the ladder should be placed away from the bottom edge of the pool in order to comply with the directions? a) b) 6 tan70° tan70° 6 4/7/08 e) 11,310 c) 1 6 tan70° d) 6 tan70° e) tan(6 x 70°) assorted geometry 4 X z y 10) Y x Z 4/7/08 a) 2(y + z) + x c) 2 (x + y) b) 2(x + y + z) d) 2 (x + z) The triangle, ▲ XYZ, that is shown to the left has side lengths of x, y, and z inches and is not a right triangle. Let X’ be the image of X when the triangle is reflected across side YZ. Which of the following is an expression for the perimeter, in inches, of quadrilateral X’YXZ? e) 2(y + z) TEN FOR TEN® ANSWERS AND EXPLANATIONS assorted geometry 1) B. Always look for ways to draw on geometry diagrams. Here, if we draw lines straight down from the ends of the top base, we find that each right triangle formed at the left and right has a base of 3. So, if the base is 3 and the hypotenuse is 5, then 52 = 32 + h2, which means that h = 4. 2) A. A student once asked, “Isn’t there a formula for that?” Yes, there’s a formula for everything (within reason), but to do well on standardized tests you have to be willing to get stuff right the most basic way you can. Here, if you label the nails, you’ll find that you can stretch a rubber band from nail A to five other nails; from nail B to four other nails (because you already stretched a rubber band from A to B, right?); from nail C to three other nails; from nail D to two; and from nail E to one. Formula? Who cares? 3) E. Surface area of a cube is six times (think of dice) the area of one side. So, if the area of each side is 9, then six times that is ... PLEASE RETURN AND FINISH PROBLEMS 4 THROUGH 10 4) D. Imagine that your town’s streets are laid out in a grid; every street goes either north/south or east/west. Got that? Now, imagine that you’re going to walk from the southwest end of town to the northeast. You can walk north, then east. You can also walk east, then north. You can “cut across” by walking one block east, the next north, the next east, etc. Every route is the same length! So, how does that help us in this sort of problem? Note that the three horizontal “shelves” (one at the right, one at the top, and the other at the left) must add up to 10. As for the height, the “6” and “4” on the left tell the story; however, can we assume that the vertical lines on the right add up to 10? If they didn’t, wouldn’t the top base be at a slant? It would. 5) C. Since the midpoint’s x-value is 3 away from the endpoint’s x-value, the other endpoint must be 3 away in the other direction. Similarly, if the midpoint’s y-value is 2 away from one endpoint’s y-value, then the other endpoint must be 2 away in the other direction. If you’re still not sure, try drawing it ... which would have been a good idea in the first place. 6) B. This is a great problem to pick numbers for the sides. I made the length 2, the width 3, and the height 5. So, the original block has a surface area of 62 (use the formula given in the problem). When we double the length of each dimension (side), we end up with length 4, width 6, and height 10, or a surface area of 248. Alternatively, you could have considered that surface area, which at first looks like a three-dimensional measurement, is actually an adding-up of two-dimensional measurements. So, doubling each dimension would end up multiplying each side by 4, and so multiply the surface area measurement by 4. Problems like 7-9 that all are based on the same information can be pretty manageable as long as you spend sufficient time so that you have some understanding of the common information. Did you fly past the first explanatory paragraph? assorted geometry answers and explanations 2 7) C. Volume of a cylinder is πr2h, where πr2 is the area of the circular base and h is the given height. We are told that the radius is 12 (diameter of 24), so π(12)2 is the base, and since the pool will be filled to 5 feet, we will multiply that product by 5. 8) B. So, the zipper will define the radius (12) and a portion of the circumference. Which portion? The angle tells the story. Since 45° is one-eighth of 360°, one-eighth of the circumference (which is 24π, right?) will be zipped. So, 3π = a little less than 10. Add that to 12 and you get ... 9) A. We know that the pool is 6 feet high (did you put 6 into the original diagram to define the height of the triangle formed by the ladder?). We want to find the base of that triangle. We know that tangent is defined as opposite/adjacent, so here tan70° = 6/adj. Since we’re solving for adjacent, let’s flip both sides right now, and then multiply both sides by 6. X z y 10) Y x y Z X' 4/7/08 E. Did you draw it? When we reflect (flip) the triangle over the x side, we get the quadrilateral pictured to the left. So, the perimeter consists of two “z” sides and two “y” sides, right? ACT TEN FOR TEN® do the next right thing I cannot overstress how important it is to understand the problem before you begin working on it. So, please plan to read each problem twice—the first time for the story, the second time for the numbers. I know that you think doing so will slow you down, but I predict that it will actually speed you up, since you won’t get confused as often. 1) 2) 3) For a project in Home Economics class, LuAnn is making a tablecloth for a circular table with a radius of 1.5 feet. The finished tablecloth needs to hang down 5 inches over the edge of the table all the way around. To finish the edge of the tablecloth, LuAnn will fold under and sew down 1 inch of the material all around the edge. LuAnn is going to use a single piece of rectangular fabric that is 60 inches wide. What is the shortest length of fabric, in inches, LuAnn could use to make the tablecloth without putting any separate pieces of fabric together? a) 15 c) 30 b) 24 d) 42 e) 48 In teaching a lesson on the concept of thirds, Ms. Fotias uses a divide-and-set-aside procedure. She starts with a certain number of colored disks, divides them into 3 equal groups, and sets 2 groups aside, keeping 1 group, to illustrate the concept of 1/3. She repeats the procedure by taking the disks she had NOT set aside, dividing them into 3 equal groups, and setting 2 of these groups aside. If Ms. Fotias wants to be able to complete the divide-and-set-aside procedure at least 4 times (without breaking any of the disks into pieces), which of the following is the minimum number of colored disks she can start with? a) 12 c) 27 b) 15 d) 54 e) 81 On the first day of school, Mr. Alessandrini gave his third-grade students 5 new words to spell. On each day of school after that, he gave the students 3 new words to spell. In the first 20 days of school, how many new words had he given the students to spell? a) 28 c) 65 b) 62 d) 68 e) 152 PLEASE READ THE ANSWERS AND EXPLANATIONS FOR PROBLEMS 1 THROUGH 3 NOW do the next right thing 2 4) 5) 6) 7) 8) 9) To determine a student’s overall test score for the semester, Ms. Herold throws out the lowest and highest test scores and takes the average of the remaining test scores. Mitchell earned the following test scores in Ms. Herold’s class this semester: 62, 78, 83, 84, 93, and 94. What overall test score did Mitchell earn in Ms. Herold’s class this semester? a) 67.6 c) 83.0 b) 80.0 d) 83.5 TimeBerner Cable, a cable TV provider, charges each customer $120 for installation, plus $25 per month for cable programming. TimeBerner’s competitor, DumCast, charges each customer $60 for installation, plus $35 per month for cable programming. A customer who signs up with TimeBerner will pay the same total amount for cable TV as a customer who signs up with DumCast if each pays for installation and cable programming for how many months? a) 3 c) 10 b) 6 d) 18 e) 30 Toya went into Crazy Richie’s Music to price CDs. All CDs were discounted 22% off the marked price. Toya wanted to program her calculator so she could input the marked price and the discounted price would be the output. Which of the following is an expression for the discounted price on a marked price of d dollars? a) d – 0.22d c) d – 22d b) d – 0.22 d) d – 22 e) 0.22d When the chorus is arranged in rows of 4 people each, the last row is one person short. When it is arranged in rows of 5, the last row is still one person short. When arranged in rows of 6, the last row is still one person short. What is the least possible number of people in the chorus? a) 11 c) 59 b) 14 d) 69 e) 119 A salesperson earns (6h + 0.05t) dollars, where h is the number of hours worked, and t is the total amount of her sales. What does she earn for working 10 hours with $230.80 in sales? a) $71.54 c) $175.40 b) $74.54 d) $251.80 e) $290.80 Doctors use the term maximum heart rate (MHR) when referring to the quantity found by starting with 220 beats per minute and subtracting 1 beat per minute for each year of a person’s age. Doctors recommend exercising 3 or 4 times each week for at least 20 minutes with your heart rate increased from its resting heart rate (RHR) to its training heart rate (THR), where THR = RHR + .65(MHR – RHR) 4/7/08 e) 84.5 do the next right thing 3 Which of the following is closest to the THR of a 43-year-old person whose RHR is 54 beats per minute? 10) a) 197 c) 162 b) 169 d) 134 e) 80 In decorating baskets for a sales convention, Roni needs the following amounts of ribbon for each basket: number of ribbons length (inches) 5 3 2 8 16 10 If the ribbon costs $0.98 per yard, which of the following would be the approximate cost of ribbon for 20 baskets? (Note: 1 yard = 36 inches) 4/7/08 a) $6 c) $60 b) $18 d) $70 e) $180 ACT TEN FOR TEN® ANSWERS AND EXPLANATIONS do the next right thing 1) E. Did you begin by drawing the table? That would be the first Right Thing. So, if you didn’t, please do so now. Next, any time you are told any measure of a circle you can expect you’ll have to convert it into another measure. We’re given radius here when we actually need diameter, which is 3 feet. So far the tablecloth needs to be 3 feet wide. Oh, but it has to hang over 5 inches on all sides, which extends the diameter by 10 inches, right? Also, since she will sew down 1 inch all around the edge, we can add two more inches to the diameter. How about that? When we add it all up, it comes to 4 feet, or 48 inches. 2) E. If you didn’t read this twice, I doubt you understood it. So, Ms. Fotias is dividing into three equal groups, keeping one and setting the other two aside, then repeating. Four times. Well, if we were intuitive we could see that she’d need 34 disks. However, I’m not very intuitive, so I used the answer choices. Let’s start with (c): If she starts with 27, there are 3 groups of 9. So, setting aside two of those groups, she’s left with 9. Then there are 3 groups of 3; setting aside 2 groups leaves 3 disks, which means that she can break the disks into 3 groups and set aside 2/3 of the disks a third time but not a fourth. So, we must need to start with a bigger number. 3) B. Not such a tough problem if you don’t add 60 to 5 (c). Why shouldn’t we do so? Because after the first day, on which he gave the students 5 words to spell, weren’t there only 19 days left—not 20? PLEASE RETURN AND FINISH PROBLEMS 4 THROUGH 10 4) E. We follow directions and throw out the 62 and the 94. Then we take the average, which is 338/4, or 84.5. 5) B. We set it up as: $120 + $25x = $60 + $35x, where x is the number of months. When we subtract $60 from each side, we get $60 + $25x = $35x. Now, we subtract $25x from both sides, giving us $60 = $10x, so x = 6. 6) A. It must be a discount, which eliminates (e). Next, choice (c) would give us a negative number (-21d). Choices (b) and (d) would subtract a number that apparently has nothing to do with our variable of d, right? That leaves (a), which would be 100% of d (which is d), minus 22% of d (which is 0.22d). 7) C. Let’s translate: The number we’re looking for is 1 less than a multiple of 4, 1 less than a multiple of 5, and 1 less than a multiple of 6. So, if we were to calculate the number that’s the least common multiple of 4, 5, and 6, and then subtract 1, we’d probably have our best candidate. Or we can use the answer choices: 11 is 1 less than a multiple of 4 and 6, but not of 5; 14 is 1 less than a multiple of 5, but not 4 and 6; 59 is 1 less than a multiple of 4, 5, and 6 (yes!). Note that if you picked (e), you multiplied 4 times 5 times 6, not noting that 4 and 6 share a factor of 2 (which is why 12—not 24—is their least common multiple). do the next right thing answers and explanations 2 8) A. Sometimes these problems can be pretty simple if you understand what you’re being asked. Here, there are two formulae, one each for hours (6h) and for sales (0.05t). So, we plug hours in for h and sales in for t, and the calculator gives us the answer. 9) D. There is a lot here to take in, so if you try to do so quickly, good luck. In general, problems like this that initially look deeply difficult don’t turn out to be so because the test makers actually tell us how to solve. First, to get the MHR we subtract 1 beat per year the subject’s age of 43 years, giving us 220 – 43 = 177. Then, we plug in the values we’re given (RHR is 54) to get THR = 54 + 0.65(177-54) = 54 + 0.65(123) = 133.95. 10) C. Again, a lot of words, but if you read slowly, you find that if you get the total ribbon length for each basket (5 x 8) + (3 x 16) + (2 x 10) = 108 inches, divide that by 36 (inches in a yard) to get 3 yards per basket (or approximately $3 per basket), you can then multiply by 20! 4/7/08 ACT TEN FOR TEN® act reading— humanities 1 HUMANITIES: This passage is adapted from Annie Dillard’s The Writing Life (©1989 by Annie Dillard). 5 10 15 20 25 30 35 40 45 50 When you write, you lay out a line of words. The line of words is a miner’s pick, a woodcarver’s gouge, a surgeon’s probe. You wield it, and it digs a path you follow. Soon you find yourself deep in new territory. Is it a dead end, or have you located the real subject? You will know tomorrow, or this time next year. You make the path boldly and follow it fearfully. You go where the path leads. At the end of the path, you find a box canyon. You hammer out reports, dispatch bulletins. The writing has changed, in your hands, and in a twinkling, from an expression of your notions to an epistemological tool. The new place interests you because it is not clear. You attend. In your humility, you lay down the words carefully, watching all the angles. Now the earlier writing looks soft and careless. Process is nothing; erase your tracks. The path is not the work. I hope your tracks have grown over; I hope birds ate the crumbs; I hope you will toss it all and not look back. The line of words is a hammer. You hammer against the walls of your house. You tap the walls, lightly, everywhere. After giving many years’ attention to these things, you know what to listen for. Some of the walls are bearing walls; they have to stay, or everything will fall down. Other walls can go with impunity; you can hear the difference. Unfortunately, it is often the bearing wall that has to go. It cannot be helped. There is only one solution, which appalls you, but there it is. Knock it out. Duck. Courage utterly opposes the bold hope that this is such fine stuff the work needs it, or the world. Courage, exhausted, stands on bare reality: this writing weakens the work. You must demolish the work and start over. You can save some of the sentences, like bricks. It will be a miracle if you can save some of the paragraphs, no matter how excellent in themselves or hard-won. You can waste a year worrying about it, or you can get it over with now. (Are you a woman, or a mouse?) The part you must jettison is not only the bestwritten part; it is also, oddly, that part which was to have been the very point. It is the original key passage, the passage on which the rest was to hang, and from which you yourself drew the courage to begin. Putting a book together is interesting and exhilarating. It is sufficiently difficult and complex that it engages all your intelligence. It is life at its most free. Your freedom as a writer is not freedom of expression in the sense of wild blurt- 55 60 65 70 75 80 85 90 95 ing; you may not let it rip. It is life at its most free, if you are fortunate enough to be able to try it, because you select your materials, invent your task, and pace yourself. The obverse of this freedom, of course, is that your work is so meaningless, so fully for yourself alone, and so worthless to the world, that no one except you cares whether you do it well, or ever. You are free to make several thousand close judgment calls a day. Your freedom is a byproduct of your days’ triviality. Here is a fairly sober version of what happens in the small room between the writer and the work itself. It is similar to what happens between a painter and a canvas. First you shape the vision of what the projected work of art will be. The vision, I stress, is no marvelous thing: it is the work’s intellectual structure and aesthetic surface. It is a chip of mind, a pleasing intellectual object. It is a vision of the work, not of the world. It is a glowing thing, a blurred thing of beauty. Its structure is at once luminous and translucent; you can see the world through it. Many aspects of the work are still uncertain, of course; you know that. You know that if you proceed you will change things and learn things, that the form will grow under your hands and develop new and richer lights. But that change will not alter the vision or its deep structures; it will only enrich it. You know that, and you are right. But you are wrong if you think that in the actual writing, or in the actual painting, you are filling in the vision. You cannot fill in the vision. You cannot even bring the vision to light. You are wrong if you think you can in any way take the vision and tame it to the page. The page is jealous and tyrannical; the page is made of time and matter; the page always wins. The vision is not so much destroyed, exactly, as it is, by the time you have finished, forgotten. act reading—humanities 1 2 1. As it is used in line 52, the word engages most nearly means: a. demands b. defeats c. envisions d. ensures 2. The author compares the interaction between writers and their work to that in all of the following occupations EXCEPT: a. surgeon. b. miner. c. painter. d. musician. 3. The author suggests that the best-written part of a piece of writing is often, ironically, the part of a piece of writing that the writer: a. finds most painful. b. must throw away. c. feels is most dramatic. d. produced in a wild burst. 4. Which of the following best states the main point of the passage? a. Writers need to be aggressive and intellectual. b. The path is really the same thing as the work. c. Writing is a humbling and transforming experience. d. In writing, it is crucial that you consider your audience. 5. The main emphasis of the third paragraph (lines 12-23) regarding the nature of the act of writing is on: a. why writers need to learn humility. b. keeping the line of words from being altered. c. how a writer’s perception of her work changes. d. how writing expresses notions of the self. 3/12/08 6. As it is used in lines 10-11, the phrase hammer out most nearly means: a. break b. write c. erase d. remove 7. An analogy made in the passage is that sentences are to writing as: a. courage is to bare reality. b. bearing walls are to vision. c. bricks are to building. d. painting is to freedom. 8. The author claims that putting a book together is life at its most free because: a. you select your own materials, task, and pace. b. you can fully express your inner self. c. nothing is more intellectually demanding. d. you create something valued by the entire world. 9. The author of the passage describes the vision as: I. a chip of mind II. the by-product of your day’s triviality III. a glowing thing a. II only b. III only c. I and II only d. I and III only 10. The author asserts that it will be a miracle if, during the course of revision, the writer is able to salvage: a. some of the bricks. b. any of the words. c. some of the paragraphs. d. all of the path. ACT TEN FOR TEN® ANSWERS AND EXPLANATIONS act reading— humanities 1 First, this: Please note how many of the “Author’s Choice” answers below can be found verbatim in the passage. Get used to the idea that you will never be asked to make a major inference, so if your preferred answer choice ever needs to be preceded by “therefore,” it’s wrong. 1. A. Did you cross out engages in line 52? Did you also cross it out in the question, and then plug in the words in the clues, one by one, until one worked? This is a very silly technique that has one advantage: It works. 2. D. Here, we have to find three references. Luckily, two of them (“surgeon” and “miner”) can be found in lines 2-3; the other, “painter,” is found in lines 68-69. 3. B. As the author states in lines 44-47, “The part you must jettison is not only the bestwritten part; it is also, oddly, that part which was to have been the very point. It is the original key passage, ...” If you chose (a), it’s the throwing away that’s painful, not the writing itself. 4. C. This is a model ACT “big picture” correct answer choice. It states that the writer is a reasonable human being sharing a real experience with us, rather than a dimestore philosopher (choice (b)) or an arguing hack (the other choices). 5. C. As the author states in line 12, “The writing has changed ...” You never know whether you’re looking at an “easy” or a “hard” ACT reading question; what you do know, however, is that there’s only one right answer. So, if you decided to pick (a), consider this: While the author feels that a writer must be humble, does she ever spell out why writers (plural) need to learn humility? ACT language is precise, which is good for you. 6. B. Did you cross out hammer out in lines 10-11? Did you also cross it out in the question, and then plug in the words in the clues, one by one, until one worked? How does one create “reports”? Note that your choice must work with the next verb, “dispatch,” since the author says that a writer does both. 7. C. In lines 38-39, the author states: “You can save some of the sentences, like bricks ...” Note how much of what you’re asked to do is report what the author has said explicitly. 8. A. In lines 57-58, she states: “... you select your materials, ... and pace yourself.” 9. D. In lines 73-76, the author describes the vision: “It is a chip of mind, a pleasing intellectual object. It is a vision of the work, not of the world. It is a glowing thing, ...” She discusses Roman II in lines 64-65; luckily for us who remembered all three, there was no choice that said, “I, II, and III.” 10. C. In lines 39-41, the author states: “It will be a miracle if you can save some of the paragraphs.” ACT TEN FOR TEN® act reading— natural science 1 NATURAL SCIENCE: This passage is adapted from Lana Selfridge and Habib Shakti’s Particles Under Glass (©1993 by Lana Selfridge and Habib Shakti). 5 10 15 20 25 30 35 40 45 50 The detector is a kind of ultimate microscope, which records what happens when a [subatomic] particle strikes another particle, either in a fixed target such as a lump of metal or a chamber filled with a gas or liquid, or in an oncoming beam in a collider. The 1950s and 60s were the age of the bubble chamber, so called because electrically charged particles moving through it produce trails of tiny bubbles in the liquid filling the chamber. [But today most] experiments are based on electronic detectors. Detectors rarely record all the particle collisions that occur in a particular experiment. Usually collisions occur thousands of times a second and no equipment can respond quickly enough to record all the associated data. Moreover, many of the collisions may reveal mundane ‘events’ that are relatively well understood. So the experimenters often define beforehand the types of event that may reveal the particles they are trying to find, and program the detector accordingly. This is what a major part of the electronics in a detector is all about. The electronics form a filter system, which decides within a split second whether a collision has produced the kind of event that the experimenters have defined as interesting and which should therefore be recorded by the computer. Of the thousands of collisions per second, only one may actually be recorded. One of the advantages of this approach is its flexibility: the filter system can always be reprogrammed to select different types of event. Often, computer graphics enable the events to be displayed on computer monitors as images, which help the physicists to discover whether their detector is functioning in the correct way and to interpret complex or novel events. Imaging has always played an important role in particle physics. In earlier days, much of the data was actually recorded in photographic form—in pictures of tracks through cloud chambers and bubble chambers, or even directly in the emulsion of special photographic film. Many of these images have a peculiar aesthetic appeal, resembling abstract art. Even at the subatomic level nature presents images of itself that reflect our own imaginings. The essential clue to understanding the images of particle physics is that they show the tracks of the particles, not the particles themselves. What a pion, for instance, really looks like remains a mystery, but its passage through a substance— solid, liquid, or gas—can be recorded. Particle 55 60 65 70 75 80 85 90 95 physicists have become as adept at interpreting the types of track left by different particles as the American Indians were at interpreting the tracks of an enemy. A number of simple clues immediately narrows down the possibilities. For instance, many detectors are based around a magnet. This is because the tracks of electrically-charged particles are bent in a magnetic field. A curving track is the signature of a charged particle. And if you know the direction of the magnetic field, then the way that the track curves—to left or right, say—tells you whether the particle is positively or negatively charged. The radius of curvature is also important, and depends on the particle’s velocity and mass. Electrons, for instance, which are very lightweight particles, can curve so much in a magnetic field that their tracks form tight little spirals. Most of the subatomic zoo of particles have brief lives, less than a billionth of a second. But this is often long enough for the particle to leave a measurable track. Relatively long-lived particles leave long tracks, which can pass right through the detector. Shorter-lived particles, on the other hand, usually decay visibly, giving birth to two or more new particles. These decays are often easily identified in images: a single track turns into several tracks. Neutral particles present more of a headache to experimenters. Particles without an electric charge leave no tracks in a detector, so their presence can be deduced only from their interactions or their decay products. If you see two tracks starting at a common point, apparently arising from nowhere, you can be almost certain that this is where a neutral particle has decayed into two charged particles. Our perception of nature has deepened not only because the accelerators have increased in power, but also because the detection techniques have grown more sophisticated. The quality of particle imagery and the range of information it provides have both improved over the years. act reading—natural science 1 2 1. The main idea of the passage is that: a. most particle collisions are “mundane” events. b. bubble chambers were constructed to capture high-energy particles. c. the technology for detecting particle images is improving. d. the detection of particle images has direct application to the study of nuclear energy. 2. The passage states that magnets affect atomic particles by: a. influencing the direction particles travel. b. turning particles into negatively charged electrons. c. increasing the life of particles. d. causing positive and negative particles to collide. 3. The passage states that which of the following particles leaves a long track? a. A positively charged particle b. A negatively charged particle c. A short-lived particle d. A long-lived particle 4. As it is used in line 51, the word pion precisely refers to: a. an image. b. a track. c. a particle. d. a molecule. 5. According to the passage, which of the following CANNOT be tracked electronically by experimenters? a. Electrically charged particles b. Pion particles c. Negatively charged particles d. Neutral particles 6. Which of the following statements would the authors most likely agree with? a. Most tracking of electrically charged particles is difficult and inaccurate. b. Tracking of electrically charged particles is still primitive because of unclear photographs. c. Short-lived particles are easier to track than long-lived particles. 3/12/08 d. 7. 8. 9. 10. Electrically charged particles can be tracked with the right equipment and careful observation. What, according to the passage, is one effect of charged particles passing through a bubble chamber? a. Collisions of the particles as they are stopped by the bubbles b. Computer images that can be greatly enhanced c. Photographs of the actual particles d. Patterns of tiny bubbles in the liquid filling the chamber The passage suggests that the greatest difference between experiments done with a bubble chamber and those done with electronic detectors is that: a. bubble chambers are much better at tracking the particles. b. electronic detectors can track pions. c. electronic detectors are more selective of the particle events. d. electronic detectors can photograph the particles themselves. How does the analogy likening the detector to the microscope function in the passage? a. It suggests that the detector, like the microscope, reveals to scientists a part of reality not easily seen. b. It presents the differences and similarities in the way a detector works compared to a microscope. c. It proves that all instruments are ultimately the same in the way that they function in a laboratory. d. It introduces the argument in the passage that all detectors, whether microscope, bubble chamber, or collider, present images that resemble abstract art. What is the main idea of the second paragraph (lines 12-33)? a. Even the best detectors still miss most of the important collisions in an experiment. b. New technology allows scientists to select the collisions they want to record. c. Despite the new technology, detectors still record mostly mundane events. d. Scientists can now use computers to record virtually all the collisions in an experiment. ACT TEN FOR TEN® ANSWERS AND EXPLANATIONS act reading— natural science 1 1. C. The main idea of any non-fiction passage will show up at the beginning of the passage. Here, the Author discusses the detector and the history of how scientists have tracked particles. According to the author, the technology is improving. Choice (a) is a detail that shows up later on, and although (d) is probably true, the author never says so, which means that it can never be right. 2. A. Such particles are positively or negatively charged, so they will respond to a magnetic field (lines 62-67). If you chose (d), you used your imagination. Don’t. 3. D. As the Author states beginning in line 76, “Relatively long-lived particles leave long tracks, ...” If you decided to choose (b) because you read about electrons sometimes spiraling towards the magnet, the Author said nothing about the length of the electron tracks, only the shape. 4. C. Whenever you use “for instance,” aren’t you about to introduce evidence in support of a point you just made? ACT authors use “for instance” in the same way. One of the keys to working on passages is to answer “evidence” questions by identifying the thesis the evidence supports. Here, that thesis is in the previous line: “The essential clue to understanding the images of particle physics is that they show the tracks of the particles, not the particles themselves.” 5. D. The author states beginning in line 82, “Neutral particles ... leave no tracks in a detector, so ...” If you chose (a) or (c), please note that anytime it appears that two choices must be right (because they are so similar), neither one is right. 6. D. Here’s where the Author’s Choice really comes in handy: One of the choices highlights an important point in the passage without overstating anything. If you chose (a), did the author really say that most current tracking is inaccurate? Similarly, if you chose (b), did you confuse the “old” technology with the current technology? 7. D. As the Author stated about the bubble chamber in lines 7-9, “so called because electrically charged particles moving through it produce trails of tiny bubbles in the liquid filling the chamber.” [emphasis added] 8. C. The Author states in the second paragraph that “This is what a major part of the electronics in a detector is all about. The electronics form a filter system, which decides ... whether a collision has produced the kind of event ... which should therefore be recorded by the computer.” Although the Author uses pions as a “for instance,” she never does so in order to distinguish between bubble chambers and particle detectors. 9. A. The answer to this question begins in line 1, “which records what happens when a [subatomic] particle strikes another particle ...” This is about as close to an actual inference as you’ll ever be asked to make, and it’s really not much of an stretch, since both devices let scientists see really small things. act reading—natural science 1 answers and explanations 2 10. B. This question is a reprise of question 8, where the right answer had to do with how scientists can use particle detectors to distinguish between interesting and uninteresting events. If you chose (a), you mistook the Author’s point that scientists choose not to record most collisions to mean that the detectors missed most of the important collisions. By the way, if the detector missed the important collisions, how would anyone know that those collisions even took place? Choice (c) is the opposite of the Author’s point, and choice (d) is denied by the information at the beginning of the second paragraph. 3/12/08 ACT TEN FOR TEN® act science— speed and accuracy The ACT Science section tests how quickly you can work accurately. To do so you must be able to pay attention to what’s important and ignore what’s not. Each passage contains a great deal of information that’s unnecessary to your purposes, so approach each passage with the idea of determining its broad outline rather than trying to understand the “what” or the “why” of any details. Here are some overall guidelines: 1. Scan the passage to see how many tables and figures it contains. The more tables and figures the safer it is to quickly skim any paragraphs that describe the passage. 2. Note the general nature what each table or figure describes, such as, “Table 1 shows the charges and weights of various atomic isotopes.” Then, when you face a question that deals with, say, isotope weight, you know exactly where to go. Don’t ever read the “credits” at the bottom of the table or figure. 3. Anything presented as fact must be taken as fact. 4. Do not be afraid of the passages. Although I am a fairly confident test-taker, I have gone weak in the knees more times than I can count at my first glance at an ACT science passage. They nearly all look deep and mysterious at first glance. The good news is: 5. Nearly all of the questions are as easy as can be, and merely ask you to read a table or a figure and find the corresponding answer. Think about it: If you’re asked to read seven science passages, complete with figures and tables, and answer 40 questions in 35 minutes, could those questions actually be difficult? No way, except: 6. The last question in each set is often much more complex than the previous questions. So, if you’re pressed for time and the last question looks like a bad dream, it’s probably time to guess and move on. 7. Before beginning to answer the questions, scan them to determine whether any refer to a specific experiment, table, or figure. Circle or box any relevant numbers (Experiment 2, for instance) so you use the same research to answer more than one question. 8. Occasionally, a passage will contain no figures or tables. If you’re going to put one passage off until you’ve finished the rest, this is the one! 3/3/08 ACT TEN FOR TEN® act science— attention to detail 1 Glaciers deposit till (a poorly sorted sediment). If glaciers repeatedly advance over an area and then melt back, thick till deposits may form. Figure 1 shows a vertical core taken through layers of till, non-glacial sediments, and bedrock at a site in North Dakota. The resistivity (an electrical property of a material) and CO measurements taken along the core are also shown. Resistivity is related to a sediment's particle sizes, compaction, and mineral composition. Table 1 shows the average percent sand, silt, and clay contents and descriptions of the various till layers. 2 Figure 1 Table 1 Average percent by volume of: Depth of till layer (m) larger particle Description of till sand smaller particle silt clay 4-9 54.1 31.7 14.2 brown (oxidized*) 9-14 gray A 44.8 36.6 18.6 14-19 yellow (oxidized) 43.5 31.7 24.8 19-24 gray B 37.4 34.3 28.3 24-35 olive green and gray 25.5 34.3 40.2 35-55 gray C 31.7 33.6 34.7 55-85 37.5 31.7 30.8 gray D *Oxidized sediments have at some time been exposed to the air. Sediments that have been deprived of oxygen will be gray or green. Figure 1 and Table 1 adapted from S.B. Ritter, "Pleistocene Stratigraphy of the Moontide Area, North Dakota: An Update." ©2005 by the Geological Association of The Upper Midwest. act science—attention to detail 1 2 1. The average resistivity of the bedrock in the core is most similar to the average resistivity of which of the following till layers? a. Yellow till b. Gray till B c. Olive green and gray till d. Gray till C A sample of gray till was recovered from another core. taken from a nearby area. The table below shows the results of an analysis of the sample. 2. Percent by volume of sand silt clay 31.5 33.7 34.8 3. 3/3/08 Resistivity CO2 content (ohms) (mL/g) 85 22 Based on these data and the data provided in Figure 1 and Table 1, the sample of gray till corresponds most closely with which till from Figure 1 ? a. Gray till A b. Gray till B c. Gray till C d. Gray till D According to Figure 1, the oldest glacial advance in this area deposited which of the following till layers? a. Gray till A b. Yellow till c. Olive green and gray till d. Gray till D 4. 5. According to Figure 1, which of the following statements best describes how the resistivity of the sand and gravel layer compares to the resistivity of the till layers? The resistivity measured in the sand and gravel layer is: a. lower than the resistivities measured in any of the till layers. b. higher than the resistivities measured in any of the till layers. c. the same as the resistivities measured in the surface sediments. d. lower than the resistivities measured in the bedrock. The sediments being deposited at the present time at the site where the core was taken have a much higher CO2 content than any of the tills. Given this information and the information in Figure 1, the CO2 content of sediments recently deposited at the site would most likely be in which of the following ranges? a. Less than 10 mL/g b. Between 10 mL/g and 25 mL/g c. Between 25 mL/g and 35 mL/g d. Greater than 35 mL/g ACT TEN FOR TEN® ANSWERS AND EXPLANATIONS act science— attention to detail 1 Please refer to “Speed and Accuracy.” Here, we should skim the opening paragraph— we really don’t need to know any details at this point. Then, we should note that there is a figure and a table. That’s it. When you’ve finished here, note that none of these answer explanations requires that you consult Table 1. Did you spend any time trying to understand Table 1? 1. C. Both bedrock resistivity and olive green and gray till resistivity is right around 50, whereas the other three choices have resistivity well above 50. 2. C. We’ve already had to work on resistivity, so why not start there? Gray tills A, B, and D have resistivity that’s well below 85, whereas gray till C seems to be in that range. To confirm, let’s check CO2 content—gray till C is a little above 20, which puts it in the right range again. Note that we don’t need the three columns on the left, so any time spent trying to make sense of those columns was wasted. Also, please note that we got all the information we needed from the figure—we didn’t need Table 1 at all. 3. D. Since “bedrock” is on the bottom, the oldest sediments would show up just above the bedrock (unless you imagine that glaciers burrow underneath surface sediment). 4. B. The sand and gravel layer has a very high resistivity number (near 150), well above that of any of the other layers. 5. D. Note that gray till A has a CO2 content of approximately 35 mL/g. If the new sediments have a much higher CO2 content, then that reading must be well above 35 mL/g. ACT TEN FOR TEN® act science— attention to detail 2 Motor vehicle exhaust is a significant source of several air pollutants, including the nitrogen oxides, NO2 and NO. Scientists performed two experiments to investigate the levels and behavior of these pollutants and naturally occurring gases in the atmosphere near busy roadways. Experiment 1 Scientists studied how NO2 levels vary with vehicle use. They measured NO2 levels hourly for a 24-hour period, 10 meters (m) downwind from six roadways. Each roadway had a combination of a different speed limit and vehicle usage (approximate number of vehicles per day). An average NO2 value for each roadway was calculated in parts per billion (ppb). The results are in Table 1. Table 1 Vehicle usage (vehicles/day) Average NO2 level (ppb) 60 10,000 20,000 30,000 5 9 13 100 10,000 20,000 30,000 8 13 22 Roadway speed limit (km/hr) Experiment 2 Next, the levels of NO2 and NO were measured at 0, 50, and 100 m(eters) downwind from the 100 km/hr roadway that averaged 30,000 vehicles per day. The level of NO2 decreased from 30 ppb at 0 m to 17 ppb at 100 m. The level of NO decreased from 150 ppb at 0 m to 42 ppb at 100 m. (Note: The levels of NO2 and NO that would be found far from pollution sources are 15 ppb and 35 ppb, respectively.) Experiment 3 Ozone (O3) is a naturally occurring gas in the atmosphere. Levels of ozone, in parts per million (ppm) were taken at various distances downwind from the 100 km/hr roadway which averaged 30,000 vehicles per day. The results are in Table 2. (Note: The naturally occurring ozone concentration is 0.12 ppm.) Table 2 2. 1. Which of the following factors was varied in Experiment 3 ? a. Background concentration of NO2 b. Background level of ozone c. Distance from roadway d. Speed limit Distance from roadway (m) Ozone level (ppm) 0 50 100 150 200 0.0075 0.02 0.04 0.075 0.09 According to the experimental results, one way to reduce levels of NO2 in an area would be to: a. reduce the levels of naturally occurring ozone near roadways. b. lower speed limits on the roadways. c. raise speed limits on the roadways. act science—attention to detail 2 2 d. 3. 4. 5. 6. 4/10/08 require installation of ozone filters in motor vehicle exhaust systems. According to the experimental results, if one compared ozone levels near a major highway to those in a remote wilderness location, ozone levels: a. near the highway would be higher than at the wilderness location. b. near the highway would be lower than at the wilderness location. c. near the highway would be the same as those in the wilderness location. d. would be detectable only near the highway. Carbon monoxide (CO) is another pollutant associated with motor vehicle exhaust. If carbon monoxide behaves like the nitrogen oxides in the experiments, one would expect that carbon monoxide levels: a. would decrease over time. b. would stay the same over time. c. are higher near roadways than farther away from them. d. are lower near roadways than farther away from them. According to the results of the experiments, as distance from the roadway increases: a. NO2 and ozone levels both increase. b. NO2 levels increase and ozone levels decrease. c. NO2 levels increase and ozone levels stay the same. d. NO2 levels decrease and ozone levels increase. A certain roadway has a speed limit of 100 km/hr and an average vehicle usage of 100,000 vehicles per day. One would predict that 10 m downwind from this roadway NO2 levels are: a. less than 8 ppb. b. between 8 and 13 ppb. c. between 13 and 22 ppb. d. above 22 ppb. ACT TEN FOR TEN® ANSWERS AND EXPLANATIONS act science— attention to detail 2 Overall: Here, we should skim the opening paragraph for any definitions then note that there are three experiments described, two of which are accompanied by tables—we really don’t need to know any details at this point. That’s it. 1. C. According to the narrative, “Levels of ozone, in parts per million (ppm) were taken at various distances downwind from the 100 km/hr roadway which averaged 30,000 vehicles per day.” As always, the key to scientific experimentation is to vary one factor while keeping the other factors constant. 2. B. Science often confirms common sense. Table 1 shows that when vehicles are traveling more slowly (60 km/hr), the NO2 level is lower for each number of vehicles. So, if the speed limit were lower still, wouldn’t the trend continue? Science says that trends will always continue unless there’s some reason for them not to. For example, a ball thrown upward would keep going up except for the “reason” for it not to: gravity. 3. B. First, it was news to me that ozone was the “good guy” and, second, that ozone was replaced by the nitrogen oxides. So, ozone levels are depleted when an area is close to a roadway. By that logic, ozone levels would be higher out there in the woods far from the roadway. Note that Table 2 confirms this logic. 4. C. As we saw in question 3, since nitrogen oxides are thicker near the roads than far from them ... 5. D. How many times can they ask us the same question? Note that the same information that helps us get questions 3 and 4 right helps us here. One way or another, nitrogen oxides replace ozone near roads, so areas farther from roads would have more ozone and less nitrogen oxides. 6. D. More cars produce more NO2, right? Since 30,000 vehicles produce 22 ppb, then more than 30,000 vehicles will produce more than 22 ppb. In such questions, if you’re pressed for time, pick the biggest answer choice and move on. ACT TEN FOR TEN act essay notes Two readers each score your 30-minute ACT essay holistically on a 1-6 scale— that means the reader doesn’t take “half a point off here, a quarter point off there,” but rather gives you a number grade that sums up her overall impression of what you’ve written. (Check out how the ACT people rate various essays on pages 120-144 of The Real ACT Prep Guide.) Your score is the sum of those two assessments. What does this mean to you? Your essay grade will depend on how well you identify and develop your arguments on the given topic. Since the best essays will consider both sides of an issue while favoring one, shouldn’t you use an essay template you can customize to the essay question? A sample essay prompt: Some high schools in the United States have considered eliminating “tracking,” an assessment system that assigns more accomplished students to more advanced, and difficult, course loads. Some educators feel that tracking marginalizes1 students they label “slow starters,” that is, those students who are identified early in their high school careers as not having what it takes to perform on the “fast track.” They also feel that the elimination of tracking will not harm more advanced or motivated students, who will be recruited to tutor and mentor those who are moving more slowly. Other educators feel that such a decision will essentially reduce the speed of any class to that of its slowest member, holding back stronger students and so eliminating the chance that the school’s brightest students can distinguish themselves. In your opinion, should high schools eliminate “tracking”? In your essay, take a position on this issue. You may write about either one of the two points of view given, or you may present a different point of view on this question. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position. Do you feel that tracking is a bad thing that should be eliminated? If so, great! Why? 1 According to dictionary.com, “To relegate or confine to a lower or outer limit or edge, as of social standing.” act essay notes 2 Do you feel that tracking is a good thing that should be protected? If so, great! Why? ARGUMENTS First, all arguments are flawed. If they weren’t, they wouldn’t be called arguments—they’d be called facts. So, if you think your arguments are weak, write them down anyway. What looks weak to you could be judged as terrific in this “30-minute essay” format. Start by making a bullet point list that looks something like the following on the page provided: Pro • Argument 1 • Argument 2 • Argument 3 • Argument 1 • Argument 2 • Argument 3 Con You should come up with at least two arguments for each side. If you want to write convincingly, you have to consider the merits of the “other” side as well as “your” side. Why? How are you going to convince anyone to come over to your side if you don’t at least acknowledge their concerns? (Some teachers call this “nodding to the other side.”) So, why don’t you head back up to the bullet points and fill some in? The text there is in gray so you can write over it. Go ahead. I’ll wait right here. act essay notes 3 PICKING A SIDE You might have no opinion one way or another on the essay topic or you might have a very strong opinion. In either case, here’s the same recommendation. Argue the side that’s more enjoyable! What does that mean? It means that you should look at your bullet points and take the side for which you’ve listed stronger evidence. Then argue that side. Some people feel uncomfortable arguing against their natural position. However, the advantage to arguing a position you would never favor in real life is that you cannot rely on emotion to carry you through. The only way to experience this for sure is to purposely choose the “other” side during a practice essay and see how it comes out! Once you’ve chosen your side, choose the order in which you’ll present your arguments. Check to see which of the “other” side’s arguments you can use— we’ll explore how shortly. THE REASONABLE RULE The Reasonable Rule has two prongs: 1) You can’t prove much in a two-page essay so keep your arguments in line with your evidence; and 2) If you get emotional, you will lose the reader, since your mental state will become more interesting than the subject matter. What does this mean? Well, for starters, no universal statements (“Tracking is something that affects everyone.”), since they’re either (a) impossible to prove or (b) obvious to everyone. In the first case, see Rule 1 (don’t claim anything you can’t back up with evidence); in the second case, please don’t tell the reader stuff she already knows. The readers are on the clock. If you take up her time with such homilies2, she will resent you for it. Staying Reasonable is very important, so if this is unclear in any way, ask! INTRO AND CONCLUSION—PART 1 I’ve always believed that writing an introduction before I’ve written the essay it introduces is a waste of time—how do you know what ideas you’ll discover and develop while you’re filling in your bullet points? So, how about leaving some space at the top of the page (maybe five lines; after you’ve done a few 2 According to dictionary.com, “A tedious moralizing lecture or admonition.” act essay notes 4 practice essays, you’ll know how much space you need for your introductory paragraph) and starting with paragraph 2? ARGUMENT AND EVIDENCE Begin fleshing out your bullet points in paragraph 2. In order to do so, you’ll need to use two techniques: (1) evidence from your own reading and experience; and (2) acknowledgement of the validity of the “other” side’s counterargument. Example argument: “While tracking might be helpful to the college prospects of the ‘best and the brightest,’ it has a harmful effect on those students who never make it onto the fast track.” The test maker really values evidence from your own experience, but that’s the hardest stuff to pre-set. Suffice to say that you are encouraged to incorporate information from your reading as well as what you’ve gleaned from your life. Example evidence: “It is unlikely that I could have learned to play the bassoon if I had had to practice in my front yard.” Example evidence: “If my grades could be seen by everyone in my class, I would be concerned that getting good grades might make me unpopular.” Example evidence: “According to Michele Hernandez in her book, A is for Admission, students who do not distinguish themselves as freshmen often never have another chance.” However, the people who grade essays are ordered to punish folks who make stuff up. Example bad evidence: “Four of my siblings were put on the fast track early in high school and they all had nervous breakdowns. So, in 9th grade I pretended not to be able to read.” Example bad evidence: “Getting onto the fast track guarantees that you’ll be accepted to any school you apply to.” Example bad evidence: “My uncle George wrote a book on tracking, saying it’s a Martian invention that, clearly, worked real well on Mars.” These may actually be true, but nobody’s going to believe you. act essay notes 5 INTRODUCTION AND CONCLUSION—PART II Now that you’ve presented the essential parts of your case, you can head back to the beginning of your essay. I suggest you start by writing the introduction using shorthand notes on the inside cover. Once you have done so, you will have a good idea how long the introduction will be. What do you put in your introduction? You state your position: Example introduction: “Whenever people are taught in a group, some will have trouble keeping up while others will be bored. However, ‘tracking’ students is just another way to shuffle individuals into a group. If the goal for educators is to make each class as relevant as possible to each member of the class, ‘tracking’ merely confuses the issue, since relevance can only be achieved if educators combine classroom assessment and individual attention.” You can add to that, but you really don’t have to. When you begin your conclusion, think these words: “In conclusion ...” You can write them if you want, but I think it’s stronger just to think them and then write what comes next: Example conclusion: “While putting students on the ‘fast track’ might help those students get into the ‘right’ colleges, supporting a system that treats the majority of students as somehow second-class is too high a price to pay.” GRAMMAR, SPELLING, AND HANDWRITING It would be great if you put so much thought into your bullet points that as you expanded upon those points you could concentrate merely on grammar and spelling. However, it’s pretty unlikely that in the short time allowed you’ll be able to think through every aspect of your argument—so, since you need to keep thinking as you write, how much of your energy should you spend worrying about grammar, spelling, and handwriting? Well, no matter how good your ideas, if your handwriting argues for medical school you’ll not fare well on the essay. I don’t know about you, but if somebody makes it hard for me to read something, I get mad at that person. Mad readers do not give good grades. As for spelling and grammar, perfection is not vital to a good or great score. If your ideas are organized, you’ll probably write about them grammatically. If you misspell a word or two, it won’t be held against you as long as the reader can figure out what word you intended. act essay notes 6 On another front, let’s consider using transition words, since using them is a great way to guide your reader from idea to idea. Make your reader’s life easy. Example transition: “For instance, if my grades could be seen by everyone in my class, I would be concerned that getting good grades might make me unpopular.” Example transition: “Moreover, It is unlikely that I could have learned to play the bassoon if I had had to do my lessons in my front yard.” Example transition: “Creating a high school ‘master class,’ however, can lead to unreasonable expectations from those favored and a loss of interest from those who feel left out.” Example transition: Furthermore, according to Michele Hernandez in her book, A is for Admission, students who do not distinguish themselves as freshmen often never have another chance.” IN SUM Be organized. Be willing to look at both sides of an issue and take what you would normally consider the “other” side if that side’s arguments are easier to flesh out. Use your first-hand or educational experience to illustrate arguments. Consider and then reject the “other” side’s arguments. Be reasonable. Add your introduction and your conclusion after you’ve put the middle of your essay on the page. The template recommended here is intended to free you up to be as creative and expressive as possible. You can probably get a 4 without injecting a lot of personality into your piece, but to get a 5 or above your viewpoint and writing have to be unique. So, the more you pre-think the process, the less time you’ll need to spend thinking about how to put it all together, the more time you can spend expanding upon what’s unique about your viewpoint—and then supporting that viewpoint with your unique experiences.
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