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Constructed response: Comparison of Freneau and Longfellow poems on the blacksmith:
Both poems present a positive affirmative picture of the blacksmith, yet both writers go about their descriptions in very
different ways. Write a short essay comparing and contrasting the ways in which each poet reveals to us the goodness of
the blacksmith. (Remember R.A.C.E)
Scoring Rubric
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Description
Gives sufficient evidence of the ability to determine and compare and contrast two poets’
methods of revealing the good character of the blacksmith.
Cites evidence from each poem to support claims by providing examples of word choice,
types of figurative language, and tone each of the authors used.
Gives limited evidence of the ability to determine and compare and contrast two poets’
methods of revealing the good character of the blacksmith.
Includes vague/limited examples/details that make reference to the text
Gives no evidence of the ability to determine and compare and contrast two poets’ methods
of revealing the good character of the blacksmith.
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