“Tell Tale Heart” Lesson Plans Stage 1—Desired Results Enduring Understanding: Students will understand that… Guilt affects one’s actions. Objective and Essential Questions: Students will address… Objective: How does guilt affect us? Essential Questions: What is guilt? Why does it happen? Does everyone experience it? How do varying degrees of guilt affect our actions? Outcome: Students will be able to… Make a claim and defend their argument using evidence from the text. Common Core Standards Addressed: Reading: Literature CCSS.ELA-Literacy.RL.8.3 Analyze how particular lines of dialogue or incidents in a story or drama propel the action, reveal aspects of a character, or provoke a decision. CCSS.ELA-Literacy.RL.8.4 Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in a text, including figurative and connotative meanings; analyze the impact of specific word choices on meaning and tone, including analogies or allusions to other texts. CCSS.ELA-Literacy.RL.8.6 Analyze how differences in the points of view of the characters and the audience or reader (e.g., created through the use of dramatic irony) create such effects as suspense or humor. CCSS.ELA-Literacy.RL.8.7 Analyze the extent to which a filmed or live production of a story or drama stays faithful to or departs from the text or script, evaluating the choices made by the director or actors. CCSS.ELA-Literacy.RL.8.10 By the end of the year, read and comprehend literature, including stories, dramas, and poems, at the high end of grades 6–8 text complexity band independently and proficiently. Reading: Informational Text CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.RI.8.2 Determine a central idea of a text and analyze its development over the course of the text, including its relationship to supporting ideas; provide an objective summary of the text. CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.RI.8.10 By the end of the year, read and comprehend literary nonfiction at the high end of the grades 6-8 text complexity Speaking and Listening: CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.SL.8.1.A Come to discussions prepared, having read or researched material under study; explicitly draw on that preparation by referring to evidence on the topic, text, or issue to probe and reflect on ideas under discussion. CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.SL.8.1.B 1 Follow rules for collegial discussions and decision-making, track progress toward specific goals and deadlines, and define individual roles as needed. CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.SL.8.1.C Pose questions that connect the ideas of several speakers and respond to others' questions and comments with relevant evidence, observations, and ideas. CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.SL.8.1.D Acknowledge new information expressed by others, and, when warranted, qualify or justify their own views in light of the evidence presented. Writing: CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.8.1.A Introduce claim(s), acknowledge and distinguish the claim(s) from alternate or opposing claims, and organize the reasons and evidence logically. CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.8.1.B Support claim(s) with logical reasoning and relevant evidence, using accurate, credible sources and demonstrating an understanding of the topic or text. CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.8.1.C Use words, phrases, and clauses to create cohesion and clarify the relationships among claim(s), counterclaims, reasons, and evidence. CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.8.1.D Establish and maintain a formal style. CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.8.1.E Provide a concluding statement or section that follows from and supports the argument presented. ELD Standards: I.A.8.1.(Em) Exchanging information and ideas with others through oral collaborative discussions on a range of social and academic topics I.A.8.2.(Em). Interacting with others in written English in various communicative forms (print, communicative technology, and multimedia I.A.8.3.(Em) Offering and justifying opinions, negotiating with and persuading others in communicative exchanges I.B.8.5. (Em) Listening actively to spoken English in a range of social and academic contexts I.B.8.6. (Em) Reading closely literary and informational texts and viewing multimedia to determine how meaning is conveyed explicitly and implicitly through language I.B.8.7. (Em) Evaluating how well writers and speakers use language to support ideas and arguments with details or evidence depending on modality, text type, purpose, audience, topic, and content area I.C.8.10. (Em) Writing literary and informational texts to present, describe, and explain ideas and information, using appropriate I.C.8.11. (Em) Justifying own arguments and evaluating others’ argument sin writing I.C.8.12. (Em) Selecting and applying varied and precise vocabulary and language structures to effectively convey ideas Stage 2—Assessment Evidence Performance Tasks: Other Evidence: Respond to the objective in essay format. Annotations on the text See rubric below. Notes in spirals Group Discussions Student Self-Assessment and Reflection: Students will assess their thinking by engaging in group discussion. Students will assess their writing on the rubric. See rubric below. Stage 3—Learning Plan 2 Learning Activities: Prior Knowledge: Interpreting Non-Print Activity (See worksheet below.) Texts: 1. “Insanity” photograph Tell Tale Heart Insanity Picture.pptx 2. Read “Tell Tale Heart” by Edgar Allan Poe 3. News article entitled “Secret Service Director Julia Pierson resigns from troubled agency” Analysis: Respond to questions and pull out quotes. (See worksheets below.) Supporting Stimuli: Vocabulary Chart 3 Name: ___________________________ Mrs. Stork – LA: _____ Date: _____________ Interpreting Non-Print What do we see? (List what you can see in the picture.) What can we infer? (What can you figure out from what you’re seeing?) Why does it matter? (What is the meaning behind the picture?) TITLE: 4 Describe five things that you usually find in a scary/horror story: 1. ______________________________________________________________ 2. ______________________________________________________________ 3. _______________________________________________________________ 4. _______________________________________________________________ 5. ________________________________________________________________ Read the following statements. If you agree with them, put a check in the YOU column. Then, AFTER we read the story, we’ll go back and put a check in the AUTHOR column if you think the author agrees with that statement. YOU AUTHOR Statement 1. People who are insane know that they are insane. 2. Sane people sometimes imagine that they hear things. 3. If you commit a crime, the worst punishment is the guilt afterwards. 4. Often, it’s the small annoying things about people that can be the most irritating and infuriating. 5. All people are basically afraid of the same things. 6. When you’ve done something wrong, wondering if you’ll be caught can cause great stress and anxiety. 5 Name: ___________________________ “Tell Tale Heart” Mrs. Stork – LA: _____ Date: _____________ Edgar Allan Poe, 1843 TRUE! --nervous --very, very dreadfully nervous I had been and am; but why will you say that I am mad? The disease had sharpened my senses --not destroyed --not dulled them. Above all was the sense of hearing acute1. I heard all things in the heaven and in the earth. I heard many things in hell. How, then, am I mad? Hearken! and observe how healthily --how calmly I can tell you the whole story. It is impossible to say how first the idea entered my brain; but once conceived, it haunted me day and night. Object there was none. Passion there was none. I loved the old man. He had never wronged me. He had never given me insult. For his gold I had no desire. I think it was his eye! yes, it was this! He had the eye of a vulture --a pale blue eye, with a film over it. Whenever it fell upon me, my blood ran cold; and so by degrees --very gradually --I made up my mind to take the life of the old man, and thus rid myself of the eye forever. Now this is the point. You fancy me mad. Madmen know nothing. But you should have seen me. You should have seen how wisely I proceeded --with what caution --with what foresight -with what dissimulation2 I went to work! I was never kinder to the old man than during the whole week before I killed him. And every night, about midnight, I turned the latch of his door and opened it --oh so gently! And then, when I had made an opening sufficient for my head, I put in a dark lantern, all closed, closed, that no light shone out, and then I thrust in my head. Oh, you would have laughed to see how cunningly I thrust it in! I moved it slowly --very, very slowly, so that I might not disturb the old man's sleep. It took me an hour to place my whole head within the opening so far that I could see him as he lay upon his bed. Ha! would a madman have been so wise as this, And then, when my head was well in the room, I undid the lantern cautiously-oh, so cautiously --cautiously (for the hinges creaked) --I undid it just so much that a single thin ray fell upon the vulture eye. And this I did for seven long nights -every night just at midnight --but I found the eye always closed; and so it was impossible to do the work; for it was not the old man who vexed3 me, but his Evil Eye. And every morning, when the day broke, I went boldly into the chamber, and spoke courageously to him, calling him by name in a hearty tone, and inquiring how he has passed the night. So you see he would have been a very profound4 old man, indeed, to suspect that every night, just at twelve, I looked in upon him while he slept. Upon the eighth night I was more than usually cautious in opening the door. A watch's minute hand moves more quickly than did mine. Never before that night had I felt the extent of my 1 acute [uh-kyoot] adj. sharp and strong or intense dissimulation means “the hiding or disguising of one’s true feelings and intentions.” 3 vex [veks] v. to disturb, annoy, or anger, especially by some small, repeated action 4 Here, profound means “very thoughtful and wise.” 2 6 own powers --of my sagacity5. I could scarcely contain my feelings of triumph. To think that there I was, opening the door, little by little, and he not even to dream of my secret deeds or thoughts. I fairly chuckled at the idea; and perhaps he heard me; for he moved on the bed suddenly, as if startled. Now you may think that I drew back --but no. His room was as black as pitch with the thick darkness, (for the shutters were close fastened, through fear of robbers,) and so I knew that he could not see the opening of the door, and I kept pushing it on steadily, steadily. I had my head in, and was about to open the lantern, when my thumb slipped upon the tin fastening, and the old man sprang up in bed, crying out --"Who's there?" I kept quite still and said nothing. For a whole hour I did not move a muscle, and in the meantime I did not hear him lie down. He was still sitting up in the bed listening; --just as I have done, night after night, hearkening to the death watches 6in the wall. Presently I heard a slight groan, and I knew it was the groan of mortal terror. It was not a groan of pain or of grief --oh, no! --it was the low stifled7 sound that arises from the bottom of the soul when overcharged with awe. I knew the sound well. Many a night, just at midnight, when all the world slept, it has welled up from my own bosom, deepening, with its dreadful echo, the terrors that distracted me. I say I knew it well. I knew what the old man felt, and pitied him, although I chuckled at heart. I knew that he had been lying awake ever since the first slight noise, when he had turned in the bed. His fears had been ever since growing upon him. He had been trying to fancy them causeless, but could not. He had been saying to himself --"It is nothing but the wind in the chimney --it is only a mouse crossing the floor," or "It is merely a cricket which has made a single chirp." Yes, he had been trying to comfort himself with these suppositions8: but he had found all in vain. All in vain; because Death, in approaching him had stalked with his black shadow before him, and enveloped the victim. And it was the mournful influence of the unperceived shadow that caused him to feel --although he neither saw nor heard --to feel the presence of my head within the room. When I had waited a long time, very patiently, without hearing him lie down, I resolved to open a little --a very, very little crevice9 in the lantern. So I opened it --you cannot imagine how stealthily, stealthily --until, at length a simple dim ray, like the thread of the spider, shot from out the crevice and fell full upon the vulture eye. It was open --wide, wide open --and I grew furious as I gazed upon it. I saw it with perfect distinctness --all a dull blue, with a hideous veil over it that chilled the very marrow in my bones; but I could see nothing else of the old man's face or person: for I had directed the ray as if by instinct, precisely upon the damned spot. 5 Sagacity [suh-gas-i-tee] is wisdom and good judgment. Death watches are beetles that bore into wood, especially of old houses and furniture. Some superstitious people believe that these insects’ ticking sounds foretell death. 7 stifled [stahy-fuh l] adj. held back; smothered 8 Suppositions are things one assumes, or supposes, to be true. 9 A crevice [krev-is] is a crack in or through something. 6 7 And have I not told you that what you mistake for madness is but over-acuteness of the sense? --now, I say, there came to my ears a low, dull, quick sound, such as a watch makes when enveloped in cotton. I knew that sound well, too. It was the beating of the old man's heart. It increased my fury, as the beating of a drum stimulates the soldier into courage. But even yet I refrained and kept still. I scarcely breathed. I held the lantern motionless. I tried how steadily I could maintain the ray upon the eve. Meantime the hellish tattoo10 of the heart increased. It grew quicker and quicker, and louder and louder every instant. The old man's terror must have been extreme! It grew louder, I say, louder every moment! --do you mark me well I have told you that I am nervous: so I am. And now at the dead hour of the night, amid the dreadful silence of that old house, so strange a noise as this excited me to uncontrollable terror. Yet, for some minutes longer I refrained and stood still. But the beating grew louder, louder! I thought the heart must burst. And now a new anxiety seized me --the sound would be heard by a neighbour! The old man's hour had come! With a loud yell, I threw open the lantern and leaped into the room. He shrieked once --once only. In an instant I dragged him to the floor, and pulled the heavy bed over him. I then smiled gaily, to find the deed so far done. But, for many minutes, the heart beat on with a muffled sound. This, however, did not vex me; it would not be heard through the wall. At length it ceased. The old man was dead. I removed the bed and examined the corpse. Yes, he was stone, stone dead. I placed my hand upon the heart and held it there many minutes. There was no pulsation. He was stone dead. His eve would trouble me no more. If still you think me mad, you will think so no longer when I describe the wise precautions I took for the concealment of the body. The night waned11, and I worked hastily, but in silence. First of all I dismembered the corpse. I cut off the head and the arms and the legs. I then took up three planks from the flooring of the chamber, and deposited all between the scantlings12. I then replaced the boards so cleverly, so cunningly, that no human eye --not even his --could have detected any thing wrong. There was nothing to wash out --no stain of any kind --no blood-spot whatever. I had been too wary for that. A tub had caught all --ha! ha! When I had made an end of these labors, it was four o'clock --still dark as midnight. As the bell sounded the hour, there came a knocking at the street door. I went down to open it with a light heart, --for what had I now to fear? There entered three men, who introduced themselves, with perfect suavity13, as officers of the police. A shriek had been heard by a neighbour during the night; suspicion of foul play had been aroused; information had been lodged at the police office, and they (the officers) had been deputed to search the premises. 10 The heart was making a drumming or rapping sound. (This tattoo comes from a Dutch word; the other tattoo, a design on the skin, comes from the language of Tahiti, a Pacific Island.) 11 wane [weyn] v. to draw to a close; approach an end 12 The scantlings (more commonly called joists) are the boards that hold up the floor planks. 13 Suavity [swah-vi-tee] is a smooth, polite, gracious manner. The officers were appointed, or deputed [duh-pyooted], by a superior officer. 9This makes them deputies, in effect, although they probably have other official titles.) 8 I smiled, --for what had I to fear? I bade the gentlemen welcome. The shriek, I said, was my own in a dream. The old man, I mentioned, was absent in the country. I took my visitors all over the house. I bade them search --search well. I led them, at length, to his chamber. I showed them his treasures, secure, undisturbed. In the enthusiasm of my confidence, I brought chairs into the room, and desired them here to rest from their fatigues, while I myself, in the wild audacity14 of my perfect triumph, placed my own seat upon the very spot beneath which reposed15 the corpse of the victim. The officers were satisfied. My manner had convinced them. I was singularly16 at ease. They sat, and while I answered cheerily, they chatted of familiar things. But, ere long, I felt myself getting pale and wished them gone. My head ached, and I fancied a ringing in my ears: but still they sat and still chatted. The ringing became more distinct: --It continued and became more distinct: I talked more freely to get rid of the feeling: but it continued and gained definiteness -until, at length, I found that the noise was not within my ears. No doubt I now grew very pale; --but I talked more fluently17, and with a heightened voice. Yet the sound increased --and what could I do? It was a low, dull, quick sound --much such a sound as a watch makes when enveloped in cotton. I gasped for breath --and yet the officers heard it not. I talked more quickly --more vehemently18; but the noise steadily increased. I arose and argued about trifles19, in a high key and with violent gesticulations20; but the noise steadily increased. Why would they not be gone? I paced the floor to and fro with heavy strides, as if excited to fury by the observations of the men --but the noise steadily increased. Oh God! what could I do? I foamed --I raved --I swore! I swung the chair upon which I had been sitting, and grated it upon the boards, but the noise arose over all and continually increased. It grew louder --louder --louder! And still the men chatted pleasantly, and smiled. Was it possible they heard not? Almighty God! --no, no! They heard! --they suspected! --they knew! --they were making a mockery of my horror!-this I thought, and this I think. But anything was better than this agony! Anything was more tolerable than this derision21! I could bear those hypocritical 22smiles no longer! I felt that I must scream or die! and now --again! -hark! louder! louder! louder! louder! "Villains!" I shrieked, "dissemble23 no more! I admit the deed! --tear up the planks! here, here! --It is the beating of his hideous heart!" 14 audacity [aw-das-i-tee] n. reckless boldness; daring Here, reposed means “lay dead.” 16 singularly [sing-gyuh-ler] adv. Unusually or remarkably; extraordinarily 17 To speak fluently is to do so smoothly and effortlessly. 18 vehemently [vee-uh-muh -nt-ly ] adv. strongly; intensely; passionately 19 Trifles are unimportant things. 20 Bold, expressive gestures are gesticulations. 21 Derision is scornful mockery or ridicule. 22 hypocritical [hip-uh-krit-i-kuh l] adj. pretending to be what one is not; fake; insincere 23 Here, dissemble means “to disguise one’s true thoughts or feelings; act in an insincere way.” 15 9 Secret Service Director Julia Pierson resigns from troubled agency By Tribune Washington Bureau, adapted by Newsela staff 10.02.14 Word Count 861 (From left) United States Secret Service Director Julia Pierson; W. Ralph Basham, former director of the Secret Service and a partner at Command Consulting Group, and Todd Keil, former DHS Assistant Secretary for Infrastructure Protection and senior adviser at TorchStone Page, testify at a hearing about the White House perimeter breach at the Rayburn Building in Washington, D.C. Photo: Olivier Douliery/Abaca Press/MCTWASHINGTON — Julia A. Pierson, the director of the Secret Service, resigned on Wednesday following a string of high-profile security lapses. President Barack Obama had lost confidence in her ability to lead the troubled agency. Pierson stepped down following a Sept. 19 incident in which Omar Gonzalez, a U.S. Army veteran, ran into the White House with a knife in his pocket. Pierson, a 30-year Secret Service veteran, was named director only 18 months ago. She was the first woman to head the elite force responsible for protecting the president, his family and visiting foreign leaders. Fresh security breaches, and Pierson’s repeated stumbles during a combative House of Representatives hearing Tuesday, led to growing calls in Congress for her resignation. Obama quickly agreed. 10 “Over the last several days, we’ve seen recent and accumulating reports raising questions about the performance of the agency," said White House spokesman Josh Earnest. "The president concluded that new leadership of that agency was required.” Security Improvements Are Called For In another recent potential threat, officials said, a private security guard armed with a pistol rode in an elevator with the president during a Sept. 16 visit to Atlanta. The incident violated agency rules over who can carry a weapon near the president. The gun was discovered only after agents complained the guard was acting oddly. Officials said they subsequently discovered the guard was a felon, with multiple convictions for assault and battery. Jeh Johnson, secretary of Homeland Security, said he had appointed Joseph Clancy as acting director of the Secret Service. Clancy headed the Secret Service presidential protective unit before retiring in 2011. Johnson also said he had ordered his top deputy, Alejandro Mayorkas, to take charge of the internal Secret Service investigation of the Gonzalez incident. Johnson said he would put together a panel of outside experts to recommend improvements to White House security and Secret Service operations. The House Judiciary Committee will also hold hearings into the Secret Service next month. The Agency Will Be Investigated Pierson said it was painful to quit while the Secret Service was “reeling from a significant security breach.” Leaving, Pierson said, was “the noble thing to do.” She had decided to resign after meeting with Johnson. The two agreed “we were at the point where it was going to be hard for the department and president to have confidence in the Secret Service leadership if I didn’t step down.” Several senior Democrats joined Republicans in saying the next director should come from outside the agency. To bring about needed reforms, Democratic Congressman Bernie Thompson said, “the Secret Service needs a seasoned law enforcement professional." It should be someone "who is not a product of the Secret Service." Pierson’s departure won’t end congressional scrutiny of the agency, several lawmakers said. The Latest In A Series Of Lapses 11 The Secret Service had serious problems even before Pierson became director, said Republican Congressman Darrell Issa. "Her resignation certainly does not resolve them.” Pierson had been appointed in the wake of a 2012 scandal in which a dozen agents allegedly hired prostitutes in Colombia while preparing for a presidential trip. Two other lapses also led to her appointment. The first was a 2011 shooting attack on the White House to which agents failed to respond. The second was a 2009 incident in which an uninvited couple attended a state dinner at the White House. The latest uninvited visitor was Gonzalez. According to court papers, Gonzalez, 42, climbed over the north fence of the White House at 7:19 p.m. on Sept. 19. He sprinted across the lawn without anyone attempting to stop him. He then opened a glass door and a wooden door in the North Portico. He allegedly knocked over an agent inside the door and wrestled with guards who chased him into the East Room. He was finally subdued outside the Green Room. Obama had taken off in Marine One, the presidential helicopter, moments earlier. Slow Release Of Information During her grilling on Capitol Hill on Tuesday, Pierson struggled to explain what had happened. She could give no good reason why agents failed to stop Gonzalez before he entered the executive mansion, and why an alarm was muted. She also had trouble explaining why the agency did not acknowledge for more than a week that Gonzalez had forced his way deep inside the building before he was tackled. Lawmakers from both parties criticized her and her aides for giving misleading or inaccurate information about the incident. Some accused her of being evasive in her answers, and her support quickly evaporated. Secret Service officials initially said Gonzalez was unarmed. In fact, he carried a black folding knife in his pocket, the agency later acknowledged. Investigators also found hundreds of rounds of ammunition for shotguns, pistols and rifles in his car, which was parked nearby. After his arrest, Gonzalez told agents that “he was concerned the atmosphere was collapsed” and that he needed to get the information to Obama. Gonzalez faces a federal charge of entering a restricted building while carrying a deadly weapon, along with other charges connected to the ammunition in his car. If convicted, he could face 16 years in prison. 12 Name: ___________________________ Mrs. Stork – LA: _____ Critical Thinking Chart Date: _____________ I can _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Quotation from Text (Copy the quote from the poem.) Level 1 – Literal (Tell what the quote means.) Level 2 – Interpretive (Interpret the quote in relation to the text.) Level 3 – Explorative and Reflective (Connect this quote to life, personal experience, etc.) Given your discoveries and your understanding of the text, write down a possible theme statement for this short story. Remember, theme is an author’s message for life. (e.g. Untamed darkness within the heart of man can lead to evil deeds.) _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13 Name: ___________________________ Mrs. Stork – LA: _____ VOCABULARY CHART Word Know it well Heard it/ seen it No clue Date: _____________ Definition 14 Name: ___________________________ Mrs. Stork – LA: _____ Analysis of “ Tell Tale Heart” Date: _____________ 1. Who is telling this story (narrating)? Is it first, second, or third person and how do you know? _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 2. What is your first impression of the narrator? What does he try convincing the reader of? _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 3. How does the narrator feel about the old man in general? What, then, specifically, is it about the old man that troubles/bothers the narrator? Why? How often does the narrator mention this “thing” in the story? _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 4. What does the narrator tell us he does every night? Why? _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 15 5. How does the narrator feel immediately after he commits the murder? Do his feelings change? If so, how and why? _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 6. What sound drives the narrator to confess to the crime? What do you think causes his paranoia? _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 7. Give two direct and specific examples from the story that the author uses to create an atmosphere of horror or suspense. These are sentences that set or enhance the MOOD of the story. Give the page number. Pg. ___ Quote: __________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ Pg. ___ Quote: __________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ 8. Give one example where the author uses punctuation or repeated words or phrases in a sentence to show the mood of horror or suspense. Pg. ___ Quote: __________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ 16 Name: ___________________________ Mrs. Stork – LA: _____ One-Pager: Date: _____________ “Tell Tale Heart” Create one-pager that includes: Title and Heading Objective response: How does guilt affect us? o Write a paragraph about how guilt affected the main character of Tell Tale Heart. Use at least two pieces of evidence from the text to support your claim. o Write a paragraph about how guilt affects you personally. o Vocabulary: Use at least two vocabulary words from the text in your objective response and put them in bold. Be creative with your design and layout. RUBRIC 4 = Exemplary, 3 = Sufficient, 2 = Attempted, 1 = Insufficient 1. My Score Peer Score Teacher Score Does the objective response clearly and thoroughly respond to the objective as it relates to the text? (1st paragraph) 2. Does the objective response appropriately include at least two pieces of evidence from the text as support (highlighted)? (1st paragraph) 3. Does the objective response clearly and thoroughly respond to the objective from a personal stance (2nd paragraph)? 4. Does the objective response correctly use two vocabulary words from the story (bold)? Total Score (Total points for the column.) Median Score (Total points divided by 4.) Total Points (Multiply Median Score by 25.) Letter Grade: Comments: _____________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ 17 REFLECTION Writer’s Reflection Comment: I’m proud of the fact that ______________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ Suggestion: On my next writing piece, I plan to______________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ Peer’s Suggestion and Comment – Name of peer: ___________________ Comment: I really liked that _____________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ Suggestion: You can improve your writing by _______________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ Teacher’s Suggestion and Comment Comment: I really liked that _____________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ Suggestion: You can improve your writing by _______________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ 18 EXEMPLAR One-Pager: The Tell Tale Heart A guilty conscience always seems to leak the truth. In Edgar Allan Poe’s “Tell Tale Heart”, the main character, after committing murder, is driven to his own confession of the crime because of his overwhelming guilt. Even though at first the murderer feels no guilt and even “smiled” as the police came into his home to search the premises, the reality of the main character’s killing “the old man” because of his vexing “Evil Eye” begins to fill his mind in the form of the old man’s beating heart. The beating heart, which only the main character hears in his mind, and is perhaps the beating of his own heart because of guilt and anxiety, continues to get “louder—louder—louder” until the main character finally confesses the crime. “Villains!” he shouts, “…I admit the deed!” His guilty conscience led him to confess that the old man lay dismembered beneath the floorboards. Guilt is a heavy burden that often ways on my shoulders if I have done something that I am trying to hide. Oftentimes, I will end up confessing what I’ve done wrong because the guilt weighs so heavily on my heart. One time, I took $20 from my older brother’s top drawer where he keeps all of his money. I used it to buy a brand new T-shirt at the mall. When he saw me wearing the shirt the next day, he said, “Hey, I like that shirt on you!” The guilt began to sink in so deeply that I broke down crying, and I told him that I had taken the money from his drawer to buy the shirt. With suavity, he forgave me, but said that next time, I could just ask for the money. I think in the future, I’ll refrain from acts that might get me into trouble, so that I don’t even have to worry about feeling guilty! 19 Transition Words Sequence Time Comparison (similar) Contrast (different) Example Cause and Effect Place Summary or Conclusion again, also, and, and then, besides, finally, first…second…third, furthermore, last, next after, before, currently, during, eventually, finally, formerly, immediately, initially, lastly, next, previously, simultaneously, until likewise, similarly, in the same way, also, once more, again however, in contrast, on the other hand, at the same time, in spite of this, for example, for instance, specifically, such as, to illustrate, more specifically as a result, therefore, consequently, for this reason, because of this, with this in mind, due to here, there, nearby, beyond, above, adjacent to, further on, closer to, opposite to, to the left or right as a result, as I have said, in summary, therefore, to summarize, in conclusion, on the whole, overall, to put it briefly, given these facts 20
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