gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page i Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ NEW YORK REGENTS PRACTICE EXAMS EMCParadigm Publishing Saint Paul, Minnesota gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page ii Staff Credits Editorial Design Laurie Skiba Managing Editor Shelley Clubb Production Manager Brenda Owens Editor Lisa Beller Design and Production Specialist Nichola Torbett Associate Editor Becky Palmer Associate Editor Jennifer J. Anderson Associate Editor Valerie Murphy Editorial Assistant Soo Jin Link Educational Writer Cover Credits Cover Designer: C. Vern Johnson Watson and the Shark [Detail], 1778. John Singleton Copley. Museum of Fine Arts, Boston. Something on the Eight Ball [Detail], 1953. Stuart Davis. Philadelphia Museum of Art. Aspects of Negro Life: From Slavery through Reconstruction [Detail], 1934. Aaron Douglas. Schomberg Center for Research in Black Culture, New York. 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Published by EMC/Paradigm Publishing 875 Montreal Way St. Paul, Minnesota 55102 800-328-1452 www.emcp.com E-mail: [email protected] Printed in the United States of America. 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 XXX 03 04 05 06 07 08 09 10 11 gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page iii Contents Introduction . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .1 Test-Taking Skills Practice Worksheets . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .3 Understanding the New York Regents Exam . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .3 Answering Multiple-Choice Questions . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .5 Answering Reading and Listening Comprehension Questions . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .7 Succeeding on Session One, Part A . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .9 Succeeding on Session One, Part B . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .19 Succeeding on Session Two, Part A . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .28 Succeeding on Session Two, Part B . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .36 Understanding How Regents Exam Essays Are Scored . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .43 Grade 11 New York Regents Practice Tests . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .47 Unit 1 Test Reading and Writing for Literary Response (Session Two, Part A) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .47 Unit 2 Test Listening and Writing for Information and Understanding (Session One, Part A) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .54 Unit 3 Test Reading and Writing for Critical Analysis (Session Two, Part B) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .60 Unit 4 Test Reading and Writing for Information and Understanding (Session One, Part B) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .64 Unit 5 Test Listening and Writing for Information and Understanding (Session One, Part A) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .72 Unit 6 Test Reading and Writing for Literary Response (Session Two, Part A) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .78 Unit 7 Test Reading and Writing for Literary Response (Session Two, Part A) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .86 Unit 8 Test Reading and Writing for Information and Understanding (Session One, Part B) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .95 Unit 9 Test Listening and Writing for Information and Understanding (Session One, Part A) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .104 © EMC NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E iii gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page iv Unit 10 Test Reading and Writing for Critical Analysis (Session Two, Part B) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .110 Unit 11 Test Reading and Writing for Critical Analysis (Session Two, Part B) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .114 Unit 12 Test Reading and Writing for Information and Understanding (Session One, Part B) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .118 Scoring Guide . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .127 iv NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E © EMC gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 1 Introduction The EMC Masterpiece Series, Literature and the Language Arts textbook program has been designed to address the New York State learning standards assessed by the New York Regents Comprehensive Exam in English. Competencies are developed throughout the program, giving students the opportunity to internalize them through multiple practice opportunities before having to demonstrate them on the actual exam. The Test-Taking Skills Worksheets and New York Regents Practice Exams in this book are only a small part of this practice. An Integrated Approach Carefully constructed practice opportunities for reading, writing, and listening are integrated throughout the Literature and the Language Arts textbook program. Development of these skills is outlined in the Lesson Plans book, located in the Literacy Resource binder. There you will find a comprehensive list of integrated reading, writing, listening, and other language arts activities. The Reading Strategies Resource, also located in the Literacy Resource binder, is specifically designed to help New York students internalize the reading strategies they need, not only to succeed on the Regents Exam and other standardized tests, but to become proficient, lifelong readers. The Reading Strategies Resource covers eight reading strategies that help students monitor their comprehension as they read the selections in the textbook and answer reading comprehension questions after reading. Each Reading Strategy Mini-Lesson helps students work through a textbook selection by focusing on one specific reading strategy that they learn to use before, during, and after reading. A fix-up strategy is provided for students who need extra help. Work with the reading strategy culminates with a Test Practice page in which students are asked to demonstrate their successful use of the reading strategy by answering sample multiple-choice and constructed-response questions. Writing practice can be found in the Guided Writing lessons at the end of each unit, in the Writer’s Journal prompts following each selection, and on the Selection Tests and Unit Tests. Writing tasks stress the importance of prewriting prior to drafting, even in timed writing situations. Speaking and Listening activities can be found in the Integrating the Language Arts activities that follow each literature selection. In addition, the Audio Library contains many selections that can be used for supplementary listening practice. Play the audio selection, and encourage students to take notes on what they hear. Then administer the Selection Check Test from the Unit Resource book to test students’ listening comprehension. New York Regents Exam Practice Book In addition to the assessment practice integrated throughout the core components of Literature and the Language Arts, test practice can be found in New York Regents Exam Practice books, available for grades nine, ten, and eleven in print and downloadable online (www.emcp.com) formats. TEST-TAKING SKILLS WORKSHEETS. This book contains a set of test-taking skills worksheets that help students use the strategies and skills they develop as they work through the Literature and the Language Arts program to succeed on standardized tests. These worksheets introduce students to the format of the New York Regents Exam and give them tips on answering multiple-choice questions, using information from © EMC NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E 1 gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 2 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ texts to respond to writing tasks, and writing critically about literature. Each worksheet contains instruction followed by practice opportunities. SAMPLE NEW YORK REGENTS EXAMS. You will also find in this book twelve practice exam segments integrated with the twelve literature units in the textbook. The four parts of the Regents Exam—Listening and Writing for Information and Understanding, Reading and Writing for Information and Understanding, Reading and Writing for Literary Response, and Reading and Writing for Critical Analysis—are each covered in three units. The Listening and Writing for Information and Understanding segments are based on selections from the Audio Library; teachers should play each selection twice before asking students to answer the multiple-choice questions and write their responses to the task. SCORING GUIDE. The Scoring Guide at the back of this book includes answers to all multiple-choice questions and rubrics for scoring each writing task. 2 NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E © EMC gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 3 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ Test–Taking Skills Practice Worksheets Understanding the New York Regents Exam In order to receive a Regents diploma at graduation, you must pass the New York Regents Exam in English. The Comprehensive English exam consists of two sessions administered over two days. Each session has two parts, and you will have three hours to complete those two parts. In general, each part of the exam asks you to work with a text, answering multiple-choice questions about the text’s key ideas and then using information from the text to write an essay. The exception is Session Two, Part B, which does not involve multiple-choice questions. The following chart outlines the four parts of the test. Day Part Multiple- Writing Task Choice Questions Text Passage(s) 1 A one nonfiction text read aloud twice 5–6 informative or persuasive essay in response to an imaginary situation 1 B two nonfiction texts, one of which is a chart or graph 10 informative or persuasive essay in response to an imaginary situation 2 A two literary texts (excerpts from essays, stories, poems, or plays) 10 unified essay on a theme shared by the two texts 2 B quotation about life or literature 0 unified essay interpreting the quotation by using any two literary texts you have read You can view samples of each part of the test by visiting the New York State Assessment site at http://www.emsc.nysed.gov/ciai/assess.html. Becoming familiar with the test format before the exam will help you feel confident as you go into the exam The most important thing you can do to prepare for the New York Regents Exam is to pay attention in class and complete your assignments. The work you do throughout each year helps you build the skills you need to do well on the exam. Here are some other tips: • Know what to expect. Become familiar with the format of the test and take practice exams. • Understand how the exam will be scored. Your teacher can give you copies of the rubrics that will be used to evaluate your writing. Understanding the criteria used to grade your essay will help you write an essay that will score well. • Get plenty of sleep the night before the test and eat a healthy breakfast in the morning. • Arrive on time for both days. Running late can raise your stress level and hurt your performance. © EMC NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E 3 gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 4 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ • Make a list of literary elements and techniques and review this list several times in the week before the exam. • Make a list of literary works you have read recently and could write about on the last part of the test. Review this list several times in the week before the exam. EXERCISE 1. List the four parts of the Comprehensive English exam. Explain which parts will be administered on each of the two days. 2. Which part of the exam do you expect to be the most difficult for you? How can you prepare for this part? 3. Which of the tips listed above have you used before? 4. Which of the tips above do you think will help you most on the Regents Exam? 5. Summarize how you plan to prepare for the Regents Exam. 4 NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E © EMC gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 5 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ Answering Multiple-Choice Questions Many standardized tests, including three of the four parts of the New York Regents Exam in English, involve multiple-choice questions that have a single correct answer. The guidelines below will help you answer these kinds of questions effectively. Tips for Answering Multiple-Choice Questions Read each question carefully. Pay special attention to any words that are bolded, italicized, written in all capital letters, or otherwise emphasized. Read all choices before deciding on the answer. Eliminate any answers that do not make sense, that disagree with what you remember from the passage, or that seem too extreme. Also, if two answers have exactly the same meaning, you can eliminate both. Beware of distractors. These are incorrect answers that look attractive because they are partially correct, they contain a common misconception, or they apply the right information in the wrong way. Distractors are based on common mistakes students make. Rule out incorrect answers; then choose the answer that is most accurate or complete. Pay special attention to choices such as none of the above or all of the above. If a question seems too difficult, skip it and come back to it later. Keep in mind, though, that most tests allow you to go back only to questions within a section. Make sure that you are marking your answer clearly on the correct line of the answer sheet. EXERCISE Read “We Wear the Mask” by Paul Laurence Dunbar on page 621 of your textbook. Then select the best answer to each of the following questions. 1. The people identified in the poem as “we” feel (1) content (2) agonized (3) joyful (4) terrified 2. The “them” in line 8 refers to (1) people who can’t accept the speaker as he or she is (2) people who torture the speaker and people like him or her (3) the speaker’s friends and family (4) the speaker’s employer © EMC NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E 5 gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 6 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ 3. Which of the following sentences best paraphrases the meaning of line 3, “This debt we pay to human guile”? (1) We must hide our true selves because people are secretive. (2) We must pay a fine for feeling as much joy as we do. (3) We get paid to appear happy. (4) Our suffering is a payment we make toward future happiness. 4. In this poem, the world is (1) torn and bleeding (2) dismayed by the suffering of so many people (3) an awe-inspiring, wonderful place (4) not interested in people’s true selves 5. The mask in this poem is a (1) reflection of people’s true selves (2) ceremonial face covering used in rituals (3) protective covering worn when doing dangerous work (4) superficial personality and feeling displayed to the world 6 NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E © EMC gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 7 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ Answering Reading and Listening Comprehension Questions Reading comprehension questions ask you to read a short piece of writing and answer several questions about it. After listening to a passage that is read or played aloud for you, you might be asked to answer listening comprehension questions. To answer reading and listening comprehension questions, follow these steps: 1. If permitted, read through all the questions quickly. 2. Read or listen to the passage with the questions in mind. 3. Take notes and/or mark up the text as you listen or read. 4. Reread the first question carefully. If you know the answer, select it and move on to step 7. If not, proceed to the next step. 5. Scan the passage or your notes to look for key words related to the question. When you find a key word, slow down and read carefully. 6. Answer the question. 7. Repeat this process to answer the rest of the questions. Sometimes the answers to comprehension questions can be found in the text you have read. Other times, however, you will need to draw conclusions in order to answer the question. Drawing conclusions means putting together the clues given in the text with your own prior knowledge to build ideas. For example, read the following passage: Laurel was glad to see that she’d gotten to work a little early and that the regulars hadn’t yet gathered outside to wait for her to open. She didn’t like to be watched as she put on her apron, scrubbed her hands, ground the first espresso of the day, and unpacked the muffins and scones waiting in a box on the counter. She’d learned a long time ago that you have to be on time opening the door. Never come between a regular and his coffee! What does Laurel do for a living? The passage itself does not say, but it does give you clues: the regulars, the apron, the espresso, and the pastries. By putting these clues together with your prior knowledge, you can be pretty certain that Laurel works in a coffee shop or café. As you draw conclusions, remember that each conclusion needs to fit with all of the clues in the passage and with your prior knowledge. In multiple-choice questions, you can eliminate answers that contradict the text and those for which there is no evidence. Then, from the remaining answers, choose the one that seems most logical. © EMC NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E 7 gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 8 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ EXERCISE Answering Reading Comprehension Questions Read “On the Mall” by Joan Didion on pages 916–920 of your textbook. Then select the best answer to the questions that follow. 1. According to Didion, which of the following had the GREATEST influence on the development of shopping malls? (1) World War II (2) automobiles (3) shopping center theory (4) freedom 2. Didion compares shopping malls to “pyramids to the boom years.” This comparison suggests that (1) many shopping centers are shaped like Egyptian monuments (2) the boom years deserve monuments (3) shopping centers are influenced by Egyptian culture (4) the boom years are over 3. James B. Douglas and David D. Bohannon could BEST be described as (1) loan officers (2) early frontiersmen (3) shopping center theorists (4) avid shoppers 4. The tone of this essay could BEST be described as (1) informative but critical (2) serious and sincere (3) familiar and playful (4) formal and persuasive 5. A shopping center with a supermarket as its biggest store would be classified as a (1) “B” center (2) “C” center (3) Number One location (4) major tenant 8 NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E © EMC gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 9 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ Succeeding on Session One, Part A On the first part of the New York Regents Exam in English, you will be asked to • listen to and take notes on a passage that will be read aloud to you two times • answer five to six multiple-choice questions on key ideas from this passage • use information from the passage to write an essay based on an imaginary situation You can use the reading strategies you have learned to help you understand the listening passage. The following specific steps will help you succeed on this part of the exam. Before the First Listening Read the Overview and the Situation on the first page of the section carefully. The Overview gives you the topic of the passage you are about to hear. Knowing this topic will allow you to make predictions about what the passage will say. The Situation introduces an imaginary scenario for which you will need to write an informative or persuasive essay using information from the passage. Understanding what you will be asked to write will help you recognize and write down key details from the passage as you hear it. Read the following sample Overview and Situation: Overview: For this part of the test, you will listen to a passage about the impact of human beings on their environment, answer some multiple-choice questions, and write a response based on the situation described below. You will hear the account twice. You may take notes on the next page anytime you wish during the readings. The Situation: You are a member of an environmental action club at your school. At the next meeting, your club will choose the issues on which they want to work this year. To help you prepare for that meeting, write an informative essay about current threats to the environment. As you read the Situation, notice the topic, audience, and purpose for the writing task. For the example above, these elements are: Topic: current threats to the environment Audience: members of the environmental action club Purpose: to inform Think about what you already know about the topic of the passage and the topic of the essay you will be asked to write. Begin to visualize what may be described in the passage. Make a plan for taking notes as you listen. During the First Listening Use the reading strategies you have learned this year to increase your comprehension of what you hear. Take notes on the key ideas from the passage. The following tips will help you get as much as possible from this first listening: • Continue making predictions. • Link what you are hearing to what you already know. • Create mind pictures of the things you hear. © EMC NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E 9 gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 10 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ • Write things down. Use abbreviations so that you can write faster. If you miss something important, leave space for it in your notes so that you can catch it on the second reading. Especially write down: • the title of the passage • names • dates • places • keywords about your mind pictures • lists • steps • reasons • any words or phrases that are repeated • interesting quotations • anything signaled by words like “most important,” “in short,” or “in summary” Before the Second Listening • Highlight gaps in your notes that indicate that you missed something important. • Think about the main idea or main ideas of the passage. Then try to identify supporting details for each. On this time through, focus on filling in any supporting details that you missed. • Think about the essay you will have to write. What information are you missing that you should focus on capturing as you listen to the passage again? During the Second Listening • Fill in gaps in what you heard. • Identify supporting details for each main idea. • Draw conclusions from the information you have heard. After Listening Answer the multiple-choice questions. Then turn back to the first page of the section and read Your Task. Your Task: Write an informative paper that outlines current threats to the environment. This sentence summarizes what you are being asked to write. Next, quickly read over the bulleted list of guidelines. You will return to these later to help you revise and proofread your response. Use your notes and the answers to the multiple-choice questions to make an outline of your essay. Use specific details from the passage to support each of your main points. When your outline is complete, draft your essay. Remember that an essay has three main parts: an introduction, a body, and a conclusion. 10 NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E © EMC gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 11 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ Your introduction should contain the following: • a hook • the thesis, or main idea, of your essay Teenagers typically think a lot about relationships, but how often do we think about our relationship to the planet on which we live? This relationship needs our concern and interest in order to remain healthy. There are currently many threats to our environment, including atomic waste, pesticides, and greenhouse gases. Write one body paragraph for each main idea in your essay. In the example above, the writer will have three body paragraphs, one for each threat he or she mentions. Fill each body paragraph with supporting details from your outline. Pesticides are one serious threat to the environment. More than 400 chemicals have been developed to kill plants and animals deemed undesirable by human beings. Applied to insects, weeds, or rodents, these chemicals often kill not only their targets but other, more helpful plants or insects; for this reason, they are often called “nonselective chemicals.” They also enter the food chain and water supply, potentially affecting every living creature in the area. Chemical residue coats the leaves that are eaten by animals and sometimes by humans. Pesticides also run off into our streams and lakes. As Rachel Carson said, pesticides have the power to “still the song of birds and the leaping of fish in the streams,” and many of their long-term effects are not even known yet. The conclusion should contain: • a restatement of the main idea in slightly different words • a final statement that moves the reader to act or think Human-made substances such as atomic waste, pesticides, and greenhouse gases threaten to make our planet unlivable. If we don’t wake up soon and seek more environmental protections, we may be facing our own extinction. It is our responsibility to be caretakers of the planet that sustains us. Once you have drafted your essay, review the guidelines on the first page of the section. Make sure you have met each guideline. Proofread your essay for errors in grammar, spelling, punctuation, capitalization, and usage. © EMC NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E 11 gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 12 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ EXERCISE [Note to teacher: Please read aloud segments of Daniel J. Boorstin’s “Why I Am Optimistic about America.” Begin on page 1006, and read through the first full column on 1007. Then read the section on “Wealth” beginning on page 1009 to the end. Read the selection aloud twice.] Overview: For this part of the text, you will listen to an account of why one man is optimistic about America, answer some multiple-choice questions, and write a response based on the situation described below. You will hear the account twice. You may take notes on the next page anytime you wish during the readings. The Situation: After spending a full year studying American history in your social studies class, your teacher has asked you to write a position paper on whether we should be optimistic or pessimistic about the future of the United States. In preparation for writing your position paper, listen to one man’s perspective on America’s future. Then use relevant information from the account to write your position paper. Your Task: Write a position paper in which you argue that we should be optimistic OR pessimistic about the future of the United States. Guidelines: Be sure to • Tell your audience what they need to know about why we should or should not be optimistic about the future of the United States • Use specific, accurate, and relevant information from the account to support your argument • Use a tone and level of language appropriate for a position paper for a social studies class • Organize your ideas in a logical and coherent manner • Indicate any words taken directly from the account by using quotation marks or referring to the source • Follow the conventions of standard written English 12 NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E © EMC gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 13 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ NOTES DO NOT TURN THIS PAGE UNTIL YOU ARE TOLD TO DO SO © EMC NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E 13 gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 14 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ Multiple-Choice Questions Directions (1–6): Use your notes to answer the following questions about the passage you just heard. Select the best suggested answer. The questions may help you think about ideas and information you might use in your writing. You may return to these questions anytime you wish. 1. All of the following are reasons why the speaker is optimistic about America EXCEPT (1) because he grew up in Oklahoma (2) because he received an education that celebrated America (3) because his father was in the military (4) because of American history 2. American Exceptionalism is the belief that America is (1) the wealthiest country in the world (2) a superpower (3) a unique place (4) not held to international law 3. Which of the following is NOT listed as a cause for concern about the future? (1) wars (2) genocides (3) racism (4) capitalism 4. According to the text, America has redefined wealth to mean (1) more material goods (2) a shared, better way of life (3) freedom (4) something that can be accumulated rapidly 5. Which of the following statements BEST paraphrases the thesis of this essay? (1) We should be optimistic about America because it is an exceptional country. (2) We should be optimistic about America because it is a land of plenty. (3) We should be optimistic about America because it is the land of the free. (4) We should be optimistic about America because it is a superpower. 14 NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E © EMC gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 15 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ 6. The speaker supports his argument by quoting Andrè Malraux who said, “For the first time, a country has become the world’s leader without achieving this through conquest.” Which of the following historical events best contradicts this observation? (1) the oppression of Native Americans (2) environmental pollution (3) cloning (4) the Civil Rights movement After you have finished these questions, review The Situation, Your Task, and the Guidelines. Use scrap paper to plan your response. Then write your response beginning on the next page. © EMC NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E 15 gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 16 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ 16 NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E © EMC gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 17 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ © EMC NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E 17 gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 18 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ 18 NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E © EMC gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 19 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ Succeeding on Session One, Part B On the second part of the New York Regents Exam in English, you will be asked to • read an informational article and a related chart or graph • answer ten multiple-choice questions on key ideas from BOTH the article and the chart or graph • use information from BOTH the article and the chart or graph to write an essay based on an imaginary situation You can use the reading strategies you have learned to help you understand the two texts. The following specific steps will help you succeed on this part of the exam. Before Reading Read the Situation on the first page of the section carefully. The Situation introduces an imaginary scenario for which you will need to write an informative or persuasive essay using information from the both texts. Understanding what you will be asked to write gives you hints about the topic of the article and chart or graph; you can use these hints to make predictions about what you will find in the passages. Understanding the situation will also help you underline or take notes on key details from the passages as you read them. Read the following sample Situation: The Situation: Your school district is suffering from a budget crunch. To save money, school officials are considering eliminating the speech, drama, and creative writing programs, which they consider to be unnecessary. Write a persuasive column for your community newspaper arguing that the school board should or should not eliminate these programs. As you read the Situation, notice the topic, audience, and purpose for the writing task. For the example above, these elements are: Topic: elimination of speech, drama, and creative writing programs Audience: readers of the community newspaper Purpose: to persuade Think about what you already know or believe about the topic of the essay you will be asked to write. Begin to predict what may be described in the passage. Make a plan for capturing important information from the passages as you read. For example, you might choose to underline or circle key details or jot your conclusions in the margin of the text as you read. During Reading Use the reading strategies you have learned throughout the year to read the article and visual element actively. 1. Read with a purpose. 2. Connect to prior knowledge. 3. Write things down. 4. Make predictions. 5. Visualize. 6. Use text organization. © EMC NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E 19 gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 20 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ 7. Tackle difficult vocabulary. 8. Monitor your reading progress. As you read, note key details and draw conclusions about how the article and chart or graph relate to the Situation. After Reading Answer the multiple-choice questions. Then turn back to the first page of the section and read Your Task. Your Task: Using relevant information from both documents, write a persuasive community newspaper column arguing that the school board should or should not eliminate speech, drama, and creative writing programs at your school. This sentence summarizes what you are being asked to write and reminds you to use information from both the article and the chart or graph. Next, quickly read over the bulleted list of guidelines. You will return to these later to help you revise and proofread your response. Use your marked-up copy of the documents and the answers to the multiple-choice questions to make an outline of your essay. Use specific details from the passage to support each of your main points. When your outline is complete, draft your essay. Remember that an essay has three main parts: an introduction, a body, and a conclusion. Your introduction should contain the following: • necessary background information • the thesis, or main idea, of your essay Jamesville Public Schools are facing tight economic times, and the school board has taken on the difficult task of cutting costs. One proposal is to eliminate the speech, drama, and creative writing programs. While I understand the difficulty of finding ways to save money, I urge the school board to reconsider this plan. There is evidence that participating in such programs enhances students’ chances of future success. Write one body paragraph for each main idea in your essay. Fill each body paragraph with supporting details from your outline. Participating in speech, drama, and creative writing increases students’ ability to use language effectively. According to a study sponsored by The 52nd Street Project, a drama mentorship program, students involved in drama programs scored an average of 18% higher on the verbal portion of the SAT than students who had no such experience. In addition, students reported increased self-confidence about public speaking and more comfort in interpersonal interactions after being involved in the program for one year. Students who participated in a creative writing mentorship program scored higher on standardized tests of writing ability than did those who had never taken creative writing. continued 20 NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E © EMC gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 21 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ Students in Jamesville Public Schools deserve an opportunity to develop their verbal abilities, which will be important not just in high school but also in future careers. The conclusion should contain: • a restatement of the main idea in slightly different words • a final statement that moves the reader to act or think Evidence suggests that participation in speech, drama, and creative writing activities help students develop verbal skills, increase their confidence and self-esteem, and succeed in college and beyond. While balancing the district budget is an important priority, education and future student success must be a greater priority. Please attend Monday’s school board meeting and urge board members not to cut speech, drama, and creative writing programs. Once you have drafted your essay, review the guidelines on the first page of the section. Make sure you have met each guideline. Proofread your essay for errors in grammar, spelling, punctuation, capitalization, and usage. EXERCISE Directions: Read “The Susan B. Anthony Dollar” and study the chart, answer the multiple-choice questions, and write a response based on the situation described below. You may use the margins to take notes as you read and scrap paper to plan your response. The Situation: Your economics class has been debating the usefulness of dollar coins. Your team believes that dollar coins save money and that the Treasury Department should reissue them. To prepare for your role on the team that is arguing for the use of dollar coins, choose a dollar coin and write a persuasive speech arguing for the reissuing of it. Your Task: Using relevant information from both documents, write a persuasive speech on why a particular dollar coin should be reissued. Guidelines: Be sure to • Tell your audience what they need to know to be convinced that the dollar coin you have chosen should be reissued • Use specific, accurate, and relevant information from the text and the chart to support your argument • Use a tone and level of language appropriate for a persuasive speech for an economics class • Organize your ideas in a logical and coherent manner • Indicate any words taken directly from the text by using quotation marks or referring to the author • Follow the conventions of standard written English © EMC NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E 21 gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 22 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ “The Susan B. Anthony Dollar” On October 10, 1978, President Jimmy Carter signed into law the Susan B. Anthony Dollar Act, authorizing the United States Mint to manufacture small-sized dollars, dated 1979 to 1981. The historical significance of Susan B. Anthony’s portrait on the silver dollar lies in her contributions to the women’s movement. The coin symbolizes the long and difficult struggle of American women to obtain equal rights, a struggle to which Susan B. Anthony dedicated her life. The United States Mint and the Treasury Department originally intended the new dollar coin to carry a “Flowing Hair Liberty” instead of Anthony’s portrait. A political controversy erupted when Representative Mary Rose Oakar introduced a bill providing for the portrait of Susan B. Anthony. For more than 115 years, the only female images to appear on coins had been allegorical female figures known simply as “Miss Liberty.” The only male figures to appear on currency had all been United States presidents. Despite opposition, both houses of Congress approved the use of Anthony’s portrait. The Anthony dollar quickly earned the nickname the “mini-dollar,” since it was 30 percent smaller than its predecessor, the Eisenhower dollar. The creation of a smaller coin was primarily an economic consideration. The Treasury Department estimated that replacing the Eisenhower dollar with mini-dollars would result in savings of 4.5 million dollars. Even greater savings were projected by replacing circulating paper dollar notes with the mini-dollar coin, since the dollar coin would have a 15-year estimated service life, while a $1 note had only an 18-month life span. It was also intended to broaden the scope of the vending machine industry and increase efficiency of automated coin returns for cashiers. Its eleven-sided inner border was designed to provide physical recognition for the visually challenged. The American Banker’s Association opposed the production of the coin, however, fearing that the Treasury did not have an adequate plan to promote the circulation of the coin. While representatives of the vending-machine industry endorsed the concept of a smaller dollar coin, they failed to convert equipment to accommodate the new coin. Hindsight proved the bankers’ concerns to be justified when the coin failed to catch on with the public. Many people rejected the Anthony dollar because they confused it with the quarter, and the majority of vending machines did not accept the new coin. Production of Susan B. Anthony dollars ceased in 1981. By the late 1990s, the reserves of the Susan B. Anthony dollar were running low and the U.S. Mint determined that a new dollar coin was needed. In December 1997, Congress passed a law entitled “The United States Dollar Coin Act of 1997,” to create a new dollar coin. To learn about the process of selecting and designing the new Sacagawea dollar coin, visit http://www. usmint.gov/,the Internet site of the United States Mint. 22 NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E © EMC gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 23 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ CHART United States Dollar Coins © EMC Coin Mintage Years Weight Interesting Facts Morgan Silver Dollar 1878–1921 26.73 grams What used to be the most common silver dollar is now one of the scarcest, making this coin very desirable among coin collectors. Peace Silver Dollar 1921–1935 26.73 grams This is the first coin to celebrate peace. It was issued following the end of World War I. Eisenhower Silver Dollar 1971–1978 24.59 grams (silver-clad) This coin was conceived to commemorate President Dwight Eisenhower and the Apollo XI space flight, which resulted in mankind’s first landing on the moon. Susan B. Anthony Dollar 1979–1981, 1999 8.1 grams This coin is the first U. S. coin to feature an image of an individual woman. American Eagle Silver Dollar 1986–Present 1 ounce of silver This uncirculated coin is considered the most beautiful coin ever minted as it pictures Adolph A. Weinman’s design of “Walking Liberty.” Sacagawea Dollar 2000–Present 8.1 grams Randy’L He-dow Teton, a twenty-two year old Shoshone Indian from New Mexico, modeled for this new dollar coin (which is also known as the “golden dollar”). NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E 23 gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 24 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ Multiple-Choice Questions Directions (1–10): Select the best suggested answer to each question. The questions may help you think about ideas and information you might want to use in your writing. You may return to these questions anytime you wish. 1. Some consider dollar coins economically wise because 6. The Susan B. Anthony dollar might have been more successful if (1) they stimulate spending (1) it were smaller (2) they are cheaper to make than paper dollars (2) it were made of pure silver (3) they force changes in vending machines (4) vending machines had accommodated it (4) they have a longer lifespan than paper dollar notes (3) it were gold rather than silver 7. According to the chart, the heaviest coin is 2. According to the article, the Susan B. Anthony dollar was a failure because (1) it was poorly designed (2) the American Eagle silver dollar (3) the Eisenhower silver dollar (2) its use was not promoted (4) the Sacagawea dollar (3) it was easily lost (4) men opposed the idea of having a woman’s image on a coin 3. Before the Susan B. Anthony dollar, coins 8. According to the chart, all EXCEPT which of the following coins was conceived to honor something or someone? (1) the Morgan silver dollar (1) never featured a historical woman (2) the Eisenhower silver dollar (2) were imprinted with archetypal images only (3) the Peace silver dollar (3) never featured images of people (4) were rarely used (4) the Susan B. Anthony dollar 9. According to the chart, the Sacagawea dollar is most different from the other dollars because 4. Based on the article, Susan B. Anthony’s portrait was chosen in order to (1) appease angry feminists (2) appease Representative Mary Rose Oakar (3) commemorate Anthony’s contributions to the women’s movement (4) encourage women to spend more money 5. According to the article, the PRIMARY reason why the public rejected the coin was because (1) it was too large (2) the public preferred paper money over coins (3) it was similar to a quarter (4) the picture was unappealing 24 (1) the Morgan silver dollar (1) it is named after a real woman (2) it is gold in color (3) it is the smallest dollar coin (4) it is the first coin to feature a Native American 10. The dollar coin MOST similar to the Susan B. Anthony dollar is the (1) Peace silver dollar (2) American Eagle silver dollar (3) Sacagawea dollar (4) Eisenhower silver dollar After you have finished these questions, review The Situation, Your Task, and the Guidelines. Use scrap paper to plan your response. Then write your response beginning on the next page. NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E © EMC gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 25 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ © EMC NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E 25 gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 26 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ 26 NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E © EMC gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 27 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ © EMC NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E 27 gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 28 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ Succeeding on Session Two, Part A On day two of the New York Regents Exam in English, the first part of the exam will ask you to • read two excerpts from literary texts (poems, essays, plays, or stories) • answer ten multiple-choice questions on key ideas from BOTH texts • use ideas, literary elements, and literary techniques from BOTH texts to write a unified essay on a subject specified in the Your Task section of the instructions. You can use the reading strategies you have learned to help you understand and interpret the two texts. The following specific steps will help you succeed on this part of the exam. Before Reading Read Your Task on the first page of the section carefully. This section contains the topic about which you will be asked to write. Understanding what you will be asked to write gives you hints about the themes of the two passages you will be reading; you can use these hints to make predictions about what you will find in the passages. Knowing the topic of the essay you will be asked to write will also allow you to underline or take notes on key ideas from the passage that you will include in your essay. Read the following sample Your Task: Your Task: After you have read the passages and answered the multiple-choice questions, write a unified essay about relationships and individuality as they are revealed in the passages. In your essay, use ideas from both passages to establish a controlling idea about how individuality is related to relationships. Using evidence from each passage, develop your controlling idea and show how the author uses specific literary elements or techniques to convey that idea. As you read Your Task, underline the topic about which you must write. In the example above, the topic is “relationships and individuality.” This tells you that both passages will have something to do with these two ideas. You can use this information to make your first predictions about what will happen in the texts. You should also keep the essay topic in mind as you read. Make a plan for capturing important information from the passages. For example, you might choose to underline or circle key details and draw conclusions about individuality and relationships in the margins. During Reading Use the reading strategies you have learned throughout the year to read both passages actively. 1. Read with a purpose. 2. Connect to prior knowledge. 3. Write things down. 4. Make predictions. 5. Visualize. 6. Use text organization. 7. Tackle difficult vocabulary. 8. Monitor your reading progress. As you read, note key details and literary elements. Also, draw conclusions about how the passages relate to the essay topic. 28 NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E © EMC gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 29 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ After Reading Answer the multiple-choice questions. Then turn back to the first page of the section and review Your Task. The assignment is to write a “unified essay” on the specified topic. A unified essay is one that is governed by a single controlling idea, or thesis. Your first challenge is to develop a controlling idea, which is a single sentence that sums up what the two passages say about the topic. Relationships that bind too tightly hamper one’s ability to reach one’s full potential as an individual. The controlling idea should apply to both passages. In the example, the two passages are a story about a woman traveling across the country with her dying husband and a poem about a speaker who walks away from the demands of others in order to live her own life. In both passages, protagonists struggle with ties that bind them too closely to others and prevent them from being fully themselves. Once you have expressed your controlling idea, make a graphic organizer like the one below. Under each title, list ideas, details, and literary elements or techniques that support the controlling idea. Controlling idea: Relationships that bind too tightly hamper one’s ability to reach one’s full potential as an individual. “A Journey” by Edith Wharton • main character feels “a sense of separation” from her husband’s illness; she is looking forward to returning to New York even though she knows it will mean his death • personification of their energies: “Now their energies no longer kept step; hers still bounded ahead of life, preempting unclaimed regions of hope and activity, while his lagged behind, vainly struggling to overtake her” • main character has not had a chance to really live “The Journey” by Mary Oliver • voices “shouting their bad advice” synecdoche for all the people making emotional demands on speaker • hyperbole: house trembling and people crying “Mend my life!” • the stars that “began to burn” symbolize speaker’s true life beginning • speaker is “determined to do / the only thing you could do— / determined to save / the only life you could save” • journey to New York a symbol of journey to her renewed life • she feels that “life had a grudge against her: she was never to be allowed to spread her wings” • when husband dies, she has to keep it secret in order to get back to her life in New York • must withdraw from other passengers who try to help • finally withdraws completely by losing consciousness © EMC NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E 29 gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 30 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ When your graphic organizer is complete, draft your essay. Remember that an essay has three main parts: an introduction, a body, and a conclusion. Your introduction should contain the following: • controlling idea • titles and authors of both passages • explanation of how each passage develops the controlling idea Most people value their relationships with friends and family very highly; at the same time, those relationships—and the expectations that come with them—can sometimes feel suffocating. Both “A Journey” by Edith Wharton and “The Journey” by Mary Oliver deal with relationships that bind someone too tightly to another person and hamper that person’s ability to reach her full potential as an individual. Write at least one body paragraph for each passage. Include a topic sentence that explains how the passage develops the controlling idea. Then fill in the supporting details from your graphic organizer. Remember to include only one major idea in each paragraph. The speaker in “The Journey” struggles to do what she needs to do and not what other people want her to do for them. As the poem begins, she forces herself to ignore the voices around her who “keep shouting / their bad advice” and crying out for her to fix their lives. Mary Oliver uses figurative language and striking images to dramatize the inner conflict of the speaker. She writes that needy people “tug” at the speaker’s ankles, and that the very house “trembles” as she tries to leave. The road away is littered with “fallen / branches and stones.” These images are examples of hyperbole that effectively convey how the speaker’s decision to take care of herself is figuratively “earthshaking.” The reader gets the sense that the speaker is walking away from the collective babble and chaos of a crowd or a storm. As the speaker moves away from these demands, she notices that “the stars began to burn / through the sheet of clouds.” The stars symbolize the clean, pure light that the speaker can see now that the clouds of others’ ideas have parted. At the same time, she hears “a new voice,” which she recognizes as her own. Finally, away from those relationships that held her back, she can experience her own individuality and “save / the only life [she] could save,” which is her own. The conclusion should contain: • restatement of the controlling idea in slightly different words • final reference to the titles of both works “A Journey” and “The Journey,” in their language and ideas, trace a person’s journey from restrictive relationships toward individuality. In both works, someone enters a new life that will be based more on personal choice than external demands. Once you have drafted your essay, review the guidelines on the first page of the section. Make sure you have met each guideline. Proofread your essay for errors in grammar, spelling, punctuation, capitalization, and usage. 30 NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E © EMC gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 31 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ EXERCISE Directions: Read “Ambush” on pages 993–995 of your textbook and “I Will Fight No More Forever” on page 433. Then answer the multiple-choice questions that follow. Finally, write the essay described in Your Task below. You may use the margins to take notes as you read and scrap paper to plan your response. Your Task: After you have read the passages and answered the multiple-choice questions, write a unified essay about the effects of war as revealed in the passages. In your essay, use ideas from both passages to establish a controlling idea about how war impacts those who fight. Using evidence from each passage, develop your controlling idea and show how the author uses specific literary elements or techniques to convey that idea. Guidelines: Be sure to • Use ideas from both passages to establish a controlling idea about the effects of war on its survivors • Use specific and relevant evidence from each passage to develop your controlling idea • Show how each author uses specific literary elements (for example: theme, characterization, structure, point of view) or techniques (for example: symbolism, irony, figurative language) to convey the controlling idea • Organize your ideas in a logical and coherent manner • Use language that communicates ideas effectively • Follow the conventions of standard written English © EMC NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E 31 gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 32 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ Multiple-Choice Questions Directions (1–10): Select the best suggested answer to each question. The questions may help you think about the ideas and information you might want to use in your essay. You may return to these questions anytime you wish. Passage I (the short story)—Questions 1–5 refer to Passage I. 1. When his daughter asks him if he has ever killed anyone, the narrator Passage II (the speech)—Questions 6–10 refer to Passage II. 6. All of the following are reasons why the speaker is tired of fighting EXCEPT (1) tells her the story he later wrote as “Ambush” (1) the chiefs are dead (2) lies to her (3) people are starving (3) tells her the truth but then comforts her (4) the young men are dying (2) the old men are dead (4) avoids the question 7. Why does the speaker mention the sun? 2. The man on the trail is described as (1) The sun is a symbol of time. (1) menacing and dangerous (2) The heat has contributed to his surrender. (2) young and unarmed (3) He believes in a sun god. (3) watchful and suspicious (4) He is referring to the east, where the sun is rising. (4) relaxed and vulnerable 3. The imagery in this story contributes to a mood of (1) loneliness (3) confusion (2) joy (4) anger 4. Why does the narrator kill the man? 8. The tone of the speech can be best described as (1) determined (3) confident (2) deceitful (4) resigned 9. What is the effect of the short sentences in this passage? (1) He recognizes him as an enemy. (1) They make the speech choppy. (2) He is afraid of him. (2) They reflect the speaker’s despair. (3) He wants to protect his sleeping partner. (3) They create an energetic, staccato tone. (4) He recognizes that it is his job as a soldier. (4) They make the speaker sound less intelligent than he is. 5. Which of the following details provides the STRONGEST evidence that the narrator regrets having killed the man? (1) writing a story about the experience (2) wanting to tell his daughter about the experience 10. Which of the following statements best describes the speaker’s attitude towards war? (1) War is necessary when you are fighting for your rights. (3) imagining the man surviving the encounter (2) War is justified when you are defending yourself and your family. (4) listening to Kiowa’s justification of what the narrator has done (3) War is the product of one group thinking they are superior to another. (4) War results in senseless killing. After you have finished these questions, review Your Task and the Guidelines. Use scrap paper to plan your response. Then write your response beginning on the next page. 32 NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E © EMC gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 33 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ © EMC NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E 33 gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 34 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ 34 NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E © EMC gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 35 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ © EMC NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E 35 gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 36 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ Succeeding on Session Two, Part B On day two of the New York Regents Exam in English, the second part of the exam will ask you to • read a quotation, called a “critical lens,” about life or literature • think about what this quotation means and whether you agree or disagree with it • write a unified essay about how the critical lens relates to any two works of literature you have read Begin by reading Your Task and the Guidelines. These give you an overview of what you should do. If you follow the Guidelines completely, you will score well on this section of the exam. The Guidelines are always the same: • Provide a valid interpretation of the critical lens that clearly establishes the criteria for analysis • Indicate whether you agree or disagree with the statement as you have interpreted it • Choose two works you have read that you believe best support your opinion • Use the criteria suggested by the critical lens to analyze the works you have chosen • Avoid plot summary. Instead, use specific references to appropriate literary elements (for example: theme, characterization, setting, point of view) to develop your analysis • Organize your ideas in a unified and coherent manner • Specify the titles and authors of the literature you choose • Follow the conventions of standard written English Interpreting the Critical Lens The critical lens is a statement by a writer about literature or life. “All literature is protest. You can’t name a single literary work that isn’t protest.” —Richard Wright (adapted) Read the quotation carefully and think about what it means. Then rewrite the critical lens in your own words. Every work of literature in some way protests against something that is wrong. Decide whether you agree or disagree with the quotation. Think of two works of literature you have read that either support the quotation or show that the quotation is untrue. These works can be novels, short stories, plays, poems, or memoirs. It is true that most works of literature protest against something. Two books that reveal this to be true are Toni Morrison’s Beloved and Elie Wiesel’s Night. Planning Your Essay Once you have identified the two works of literature, you need to gather ideas about them that support the critical lens. One way to gather ideas is to create a graphic organizer in which you list the two works of literature and then, under each, ideas, literary elements, and literary techniques from the work that support the critical lens. 36 NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E © EMC gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 37 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ Critical Lens: “All literature is protest. You can’t name a single literary work that isn’t protest.” —Richard Wright Beloved by Toni Morrison Night by Elie Wiesel • theme of how motherhood was distorted by slavery • characterization of Sethe and Beloved as damaged by slavery and motivated to do horrible things to avoid it • conflict between Sethe and former owner • symbol of scar on Sethe’s back that looked like a tree • theme of inhumanity of the Holocaust • dramatic irony created by reader’s knowledge of what will happen to the characters even when such a fate is unimaginable to them • figurative language such as similes and metaphors comparing unthinkable acts to things more familiar • symbol of “night” as a period of great darkness in history Drafting Your Essay When your graphic organizer is complete, draft your essay. Remember that an essay has three main parts: an introduction, a body, and a conclusion. Your introduction should contain the following: • an interpretation of the critical lens • titles and authors of both works • an explanation of how each work supports the interpretation of the critical lens “All literature is protest. You can’t name a single literary work that isn’t protest.” These words, written by Richard Wright, express the idea that every work of literature protests in some way against a real or perceived injustice. Two works that support this notion are Beloved by Toni Morrison and Night by Elie Wiesel. Toni Morrison’s novel protests against the institution of slavery and the scars it left on those who suffered under it. Elie Wiesel’s memoir of his experiences during the Holocaust gives voice to the atrocities that took place during that time. Write at least one body paragraph for each of your two works. Include a topic sentence that explains how the passage supports your interpretation of the critical lens. Then fill in the supporting details from your graphic organizer. Remember to include only one major idea in each paragraph. Toni Morrison’s novel Beloved is a blazing indictment of the dehumanizing institution of slavery. The theme, characterization, conflict, and symbolism in the book all work to show how slavery has distorted the lives even of slaves who have reached freedom in the North. In this book, Sethe, an escaped slave, slits the throat of her young child rather than have that child taken back into slavery. This action, which would be considered barbaric under other circumstances, shows the reader how slavery has distorted the idea of motherhood, one of the themes of the book. For Sethe, killing her child is an act of motherly love. Many years later, a young woman with the needs and mental abilities of a baby shows up at Sethe’s house, and she and her daughter Denver believe that the continued © EMC NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E 37 gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 38 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ woman is the ghost of the baby Sethe killed, who is known in the book only as Beloved. They call the young woman Beloved as well. Gradually, the needy Beloved begins to take over the household with her intense physical and emotional needs. The primary conflict in the book is between this adult baby Beloved and Sethe, whom she both loves and destroys as she eats up all the food in the house. This conflict shows that both Sethe and Beloved are severely damaged as a result of slavery and the act slavery drove Sethe to take against her baby. This damage is physically symbolized on Sethe’s body by a huge scar on her back. In one of the book’s healing moments, Sethe’s lover says that scar looks to him like a tree, a beautiful living thing. All of these elements come together in Morrison’s novel to raise a powerful protest against slavery and the damage it did to so many people. Remember to write a paragraph like the one above about each work you have chosen. The conclusion should contain: • a restatement of your interpretation of the critical lens • a final reference to the titles of both works Both Beloved and Night protest against injustices perceived by the characters and the authors. Works like these two demonstrate how literature serves to highlight and maybe even to change unjust conditions or situations. Revising and Proofreading Your Essay Once you have drafted your essay, review the guidelines on the first page of the section. Make sure you have met each guideline. Proofread your essay for errors in grammar, spelling, punctuation, capitalization, and usage. 38 NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E © EMC gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 39 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ EXERCISE Your Task: Write a critical essay in which you discuss two works of literature you have read from the particular perspective of the statement that is provided for you in the Critical Lens. In your essay, provide a valid interpretation of the statement, agree or disagree with the statement as you have interpreted it, and support your opinion using specific references to appropriate literary elements from the two works. You may use scrap paper to plan your response. Write your essay beginning on the next page. Critical Lens: “The [writer’s] voice need not merely be the record of man, it can be one of the props, the pillars to help him endure and prevail.” —William Faulkner Guidelines: Be sure to • Provide a valid interpretation of the critical lens that clearly establishes the criteria for analysis • Indicate whether you agree or disagree with the statement as you have interpreted it • Choose two works you have read that you believe best support your opinion • Use the criteria suggested by the critical lens to analyze the works you have chosen • Avoid plot summary. Instead, use specific references to appropriate literary elements (for example: theme, characterization, setting, point of view) to develop your analysis • Organize your ideas in a unified and coherent manner • Specify the titles and authors of the literature you choose • Follow the conventions of standard written English © EMC NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E 39 gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 40 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ 40 NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E © EMC gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 41 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ © EMC NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E 41 gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 42 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ 42 NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E © EMC gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 43 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ Understanding How Regents Exam Essays Are Scored Understanding how your essays will be evaluated will help you score better on the exam. The essays for all four sections are judged by the same five criteria. 1. Meaning: the extent to which the response exhibits sound understanding, interpretation, and analysis of the task and text(s). To do well on this criterion, you must understand the text(s) you are given, understand what the task asks you to do, and draw some conclusions from the text(s) rather than just copying details from it. 2. Development: the extent to which ideas are elaborated using specific and relevant evidence from the texts. To do well on this criterion, you must pick from the text(s) details that fit the task and use those details to make your points. 3. Organization: the extent to which the response exhibits direction, shape, and coherence. To do well on this criterion, you must include an introduction that states the main point of your essay, make each body paragraph support that main idea, use transitional words and phrases to show how your ideas relate to each other, and include a conclusion that restates your main point. 4. Language Use: the extent to which the response reveals an awareness of audience and purpose through effective use of words, sentence structure, and sentence variety. To do well on this criterion, you must use words that are appropriate for the task and audience, use varied sentences (some short and some long, some simple and some more complex), and write in a natural voice. 5. Conventions: the extent to which the response exhibits conventional spelling, punctuation, paragraphing, capitalization, grammar, and usage. To do well on this criterion, you must check your essay for correct spelling, punctuation, paragraphing, capitalization, grammar, and usage. For each of these criteria, your essay will be given a score between one and six. Based on these scores, the essay will be given an overall score. The overall scores on each essay, plus the scores on the multiplechoice sections, are input into a formula that yields your final score on the exam. EXERCISE 1. Examine the scoring rubrics your teacher has photocopied for you (pages 132–135). Then reread one of the practice essays you have written. Use the criteria in the rubric to evaluate your essay. Give yourself a score on each criterion, and then explain the score on the lines provided. Meaning Score: __________________________________________________________________________ Comments: ______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ Development Score: ______________________________________________________________________ Comments: ______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ © EMC NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E 43 gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 44 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ Organization Score: ________________________________________________________________________ Comments: ______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ Language Use Score: ______________________________________________________________________ Comments: ______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ Conventions Score: ________________________________________________________________________ Comments: ______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. Now exchange practice essays with a partner and give your partner a score for each criterion as well as comments to support that score. Meaning Score: ____________________________________________________________________________ Comments: ______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ Development Score: ______________________________________________________________________ Comments: ______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ 44 NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E © EMC gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 45 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ Organization Score: ________________________________________________________________________ Comments: ______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ Language Use Score: ______________________________________________________________________ Comments: ______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ Conventions Score: ________________________________________________________________________ Comments: ______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ © EMC NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E 45 gr11-NY Reg-Prac Wkshts_pi 10/23/03 4:39 PM Page 46 gr11-NY Reg Tests_p47 10/23/03 4:41 PM Page 47 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ New York Regents Exam Practice, Grade 11 — Unit 1 Test — Session Two, Part A Reading and Writing for Literary Response Directions: Read the passages on the following pages (a spiritual and an excerpt from an autobiography). Answer the multiple-choice questions that follow. Then write the essay described in Your Task below. You may use the margins to take notes as you read and scrap paper to plan your response. Your Task: After you have read the passages and answered the multiple-choice questions, write a unified essay about the power of song and singing in African-American culture under slavery. In your essay, use ideas from both passages to establish a controlling idea about the power of song and singing. Using evidence from each passage, develop your controlling idea and show how the author uses specific literary elements or techniques to convey that idea. Guidelines: Be sure to • Use ideas from both passages to establish a controlling idea about the power of song and singing in African-American culture under slavery • Use specific and relevant evidence from each passage to develop your controlling idea • Show how each author uses specific literary elements (for example: theme, characterization, structure, point of view) or techniques (for example: symbolism, irony, figurative language) to convey the controlling idea • Organize your ideas in a logical and coherent manner • Use language that communicates ideas effectively • Follow the conventions of standard written English © EMC NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E 47 gr11-NY Reg Tests_p47 10/23/03 4:41 PM Page 48 Passage I “Steal Away” Anonymous 1 My lord calls me, He calls me by the thunder; The trumpet sounds within my soul, I don’t have long to stay here. Chorus Steal away, steal away, steal away to Jesus. Steal away, steal away home, I don’t have long to stay here. 2 Green trees are bending, poor sinner, they stand trembling, The trumpet sounds within my soul, I don’t have long to stay here. Chorus Steal away, steal away, steal away to Jesus. Steal away, steal away home, I don’t have long to stay here. 3 My Lord he calls me, He calls me by the lightning, The trumpet sounds within my soul, I don’t have long to stay here. Chorus Steal away, steal away, steal away to Jesus. Steal away, steal away home, I don’t have long to stay here. Passage II Excerpt from Narrative of the Life of Frederick Douglass, an American Slave, Written by Himself by Frederick Douglass The slaves selected to go to the Great House Farm, for the monthly allowance for themselves and their fellow slaves, were peculiarly enthusiastic. While on their way, they would make the dense old woods, for miles around, reverberate with their wild songs, revealing at once the highest joy and the deepest sadness. They would compose and sing as they went along, consulting neither time nor tune. The thought that came up, came out—if not in the word, in the sound—and as frequently in the one as in the other. They would sometimes sing the most pathetic sentiment in the most rapturous tone, and the most rapturous sentiment in the most pathetic tone. Into all of their songs they would manage to weave something of the Great House Farm. Especially would they do this when leaving home. They would then sing most exultingly the following words: I am going away to the Great House Farm! O, yea! O, yea! O! 48 NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E © EMC gr11-NY Reg Tests_p47 10/23/03 4:41 PM Page 49 This they would sing, as a chorus, to words which to many would seem unmeaning jargon, but which, nevertheless, were full of meaning to themselves. I have sometimes thought that the mere hearing of those songs would do more to impress some minds with the horrible character of slavery, than the reading of whole volumes of philosophy on the subject could do. I did not, when a slave, understand the deep meaning of those rude and apparently incoherent songs. I was myself within the circle; so that I neither saw nor heard as those without might see and hear. They told a tale of woe which was then altogether beyond my feeble comprehension; they were tones loud, long, and deep; they breathed the prayer and complaint of souls boiling over with the bitterest anguish. Every tone was a testimony against slavery, and a prayer to God for deliverance from chains. The hearing of those wild notes always depressed my spirit, and filled me with ineffable sadness. I have frequently found myself in tears while hearing them. The mere recurrence to those songs, even now, afflicts me; and while I am writing these lines, an expression of feeling has already found its way down my cheek. To those songs I trace my first glimmering conception of the dehumanizing character of slavery. I can never get rid of that conception. Those songs still follow me, to deepen my hatred of slavery, and quicken my sympathies for my brethren in bonds. If any one wishes to be impressed with the soul-killing effects of slavery, let him go to Colonel Lloyd’s plantation, and, on allowance-day, place himself in the deep pine woods; and there let him, in silence, analyze the sounds that shall pass through the chambers of his soul, and if he is not thus impressed, it will only be because “there is no flesh in his obdurate heart.” I have often been utterly astonished, since I came to the north, to find persons who could speak of the singing, among slaves, as evidence of their contentment and happiness. It is impossible to conceive of a greater mistake. Slaves sing most when they are most unhappy. The songs of the slave represent the sorrows of his heart; and he is relieved by them, only as an aching heart is relieved by its tears. At least, such is my experience. I have often sung to drown my sorrow, but seldom to express my happiness. Crying for joy, and singing for joy, were alike uncommon to me while in the jaws of slavery. The singing of a man cast away upon a desolate island might be as appropriately considered as evidence of contentment and happiness, as the singing of a slave; the songs of the one and of the other are prompted by the same emotion. © EMC NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E 49 gr11-NY Reg Tests_p47 10/23/03 4:41 PM Page 50 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ Multiple-Choice Questions Directions (1–10): Select the best suggested answer to each question. The questions may help you think about the ideas and information you might want to use in your essay. You may return to these questions anytime you wish. Passage I (the spiritual)—Questions 1–5 refer to Passage I. 1. This song is about (1) becoming a Christian (2) playing in a jazz band (3) getting ready to move from one town to another (4) dying and going to Heaven 2. The singer sees signs of change coming in (1) (2) (3) (4) music and preaching nature and the speaker’s feelings others’ words and music nature and books sneak without being noticed take something that does not belong to one brace oneself for make out of a hard metal 4. In this song, the singer feels he or she is moving (1) (2) (3) (4) away from a beloved home into a new phase of maturity toward a better life away from a beautiful place 5. When this song was sung by slaves, it MOST LIKELY indicated (1) (2) (3) (4) 6. According to the narrator, the songs the slaves sung in the forest were MOSTLY (1) (2) (3) (4) made up lyrics love songs African folk songs songs learned from books 7. We can infer from the text that the “Great House Farm” symbolizes (1) wealth (2) freedom 3. The word steal in this passage means (1) (2) (3) (4) Passage II (the excerpt from an autobiography)— Questions 6–10 refer to Passage II. contentment with their lives anger at the way they were being treated longing to escape to the free North desire to steal from their masters (3) torment (4) captivity 8. According to the text, which of the following sentences BEST describes the purpose of the slaves’ songs? (1) The songs were an entertaining way to pass the time as they walked through the woods. (2) The songs were designed to persuade masters to free their slaves. (3) The songs expressed the slaves’ joy and contentment. (4) The songs expressed deep sorrow and longing for a better life. 9. The comparison of slave songs to the songs of a man on a deserted island suggests that (1) (2) (3) (4) slave songs are songs of desolation slaves feel deserted African Americans are superior musicians slaves were happier when left alone 10. According to the narrator, slaves sing most when they are (1) happy (2) hungry (3) working (4) sad After you have finished these questions, review Your Task and the Guidelines. Use scrap paper to plan your response. Then write your response beginning on the next page. 50 NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E © EMC gr11-NY Reg Tests_p47 10/23/03 4:41 PM Page 51 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ © EMC NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E 51 gr11-NY Reg Tests_p47 10/23/03 4:41 PM Page 52 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ 52 NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E © EMC gr11-NY Reg Tests_p47 10/23/03 4:41 PM Page 53 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ © EMC NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E 53 gr11-NY Reg Tests_p47 10/23/03 4:41 PM Page 54 New York Regents Exam Practice, Grade 11 — Unit 2 Test — Session One, Part A Listening and Writing for Information and Understanding Overview: For this part of the text, you will listen to an account of the treatment of Native Americans by Spaniards in the New World (from The Very Brief Relation of the Devastation of the Indies; Audio Library Cassette 1, Side B, or CD 1, Track 8). The article you will hear focuses on the treatment of the native inhabitants of Hispaniola, one of Christopher Columbus’s first landing spots. Then you will answer some multiple-choice questions and write a response based on the situation described below. You will hear the account twice. You may take notes on the next page anytime you wish during the readings. The Situation: Every year, the elementary schools in your school district celebrate the discovery and exploration of the New World by Christopher Columbus and other Europeans. Students are taught little about the Native Americans who lived here before Columbus arrived or what happened to them after his arrival. Write a persuasive speech, in which you convince the school board to make this celebration more accurate by reflecting the point of view of Native Americans. In preparation for writing your position paper, listen to this account of the treatment of Native Americans, or “Indians.” Then use relevant information from the account to write your persuasive speech. Your Task: Write a persuasive speech, in which you argue that the elementary school celebrations of Columbus’s discovery of America should be changed. Guidelines: Be sure to • Tell your audience what they need to know to understand why the current celebration of Columbus’s arrival is unbalanced • Use specific, accurate, and relevant information from the account to support your argument • Use a tone and level of language appropriate for a persuasive speech for the school board • Organize your ideas in a logical and coherent manner • Indicate any words taken directly from the account by using quotation marks or referring to the source • Follow the conventions of standard written English 54 NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E © EMC gr11-NY Reg Tests_p47 10/23/03 4:41 PM Page 55 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ NOTES DO NOT TURN THIS PAGE UNTIL YOU ARE TOLD TO DO SO © EMC NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E 55 gr11-NY Reg Tests_p47 10/23/03 4:41 PM Page 56 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ Multiple-Choice Questions Directions (1–6): Use your notes to answer the following questions about the passage you just heard. Select the best suggested answer. The questions may help you think about ideas and information you might use in your writing. You may return to these questions anytime you wish. 4. Indian slaves were used primarily to 1. The setting of this report is (1) (2) (3) (4) the eastern coast of America an island off the coast of the Americas a province in Spain the first land to be populated by slaves 2. How did the native Caribbean peoples react to the arrival of the Spanish? (1) They viciously attacked the explorers. (2) They fled to the mountains to hide from the newcomers. (3) They worshiped the newcomers, believing they were from Heaven. (4) They stole food and supplies from the Spanish ships. 3. Which of the following acts toward the native population does the writer NOT report? (1) The Spanish raped the native wives. (2) The Spanish brought dogs that attacked and devoured native inhabitants. (3) The Spanish converted the natives to Christianity. (4) The Spanish made the natives into slaves. (1) (2) (3) (4) work on plantations serve in Spanish homes work in mines dive for pearls 5. Which of the following sentences BEST describes conditions on the slave ships? (1) Indians are crowded, starved, and deprived of water; the dead are thrown overboard. (2) Excess slaves are thrown overboard and devoured by sharks. (3) Spanish slaves are kept chained in the hold, where they are fed only codfish. (4) Slave ships often encounter the dead bodies of unsuccessful pearl divers in the water. 6. The author of this selection is (1) a Spanish person who witnessed the events described (2) an American historian who has researched these events (3) a native inhabitant of the islands where all of this happened (4) a modern novelist writing historical fiction After you have finished these questions, review The Situation, Your Task, and the Guidelines. Use scrap paper to plan your response. Then write your response beginning on the next page. 56 NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E © EMC gr11-NY Reg Tests_p47 10/23/03 4:41 PM Page 57 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ © EMC NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E 57 gr11-NY Reg Tests_p47 10/23/03 4:41 PM Page 58 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ 58 NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E © EMC gr11-NY Reg Tests_p47 10/23/03 4:41 PM Page 59 Name ________________________________________ Class _____________________ Date ______________________ © EMC NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E 59 gr11-NY Reg Tests_p47 10/23/03 4:41 PM Page 127 Scoring Guide Succeeding on Session One, Part A Test-Taking Skills Practice Worksheets Understanding the New York Regents Exam 1. On the first day, these two segments of the exam are administered: Listening and Writing for Information and Understanding and Reading and Writing for Information and Understanding. On the second day, these two segments of the exam are administered: Reading and Writing for Literary Response and Reading and Writing for Critical Analysis. 2. Responses will vary. 3. Responses will vary. 4. Responses will vary. 5. Responses will vary. Answering Multiple-Choice Questions 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 2 1 1 4 4 Answering Reading and Listening Comprehension Questions 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. © EMC 2 4 3 1 2 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 3 3 4 2 1 1 Writing Task: Help students become familiar with the Session One, Part A Scoring Rubric (page 132). Then have students work in groups to evaluate each other’s papers. Each student’s essay should be evaluated by every other student in the group. Group members can then discuss their understanding of each criterion for evaluation and learn to evaluate their own work more accurately. Sample anchor papers at each scoring level can be found in the scoring guides on the New York State Assessment website at http://www.nysedregents.org/testing/engre/ regenteng.html. Succeeding on Session One, Part B 1. 4 2. 2 3. 1 4. 3 5. 3 6. 4 7. 1 8. 1 9. 2 10. 3 Writing Task: Help students become familiar with the Session One, Part B Scoring Rubric (page 133). Then have students work in groups to evaluate each other’s papers. Each student’s essay should be evaluated by every other student in the group. Group members can then discuss their understanding of each criterion for evaluation and learn to evaluate their own work more accurately. Sample anchor papers at each scoring level can be found in the scoring guides on the New York State Assessment website at http://www.nysedregents.org/testing/engre/ regenteng.html. NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E 127 gr11-NY Reg Tests_p47 10/23/03 4:41 PM Page 128 Succeeding on Session Two, Part A 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10. 2 4 3 2 3 4 1 4 2 4 Grade 11 New York Regents Practice Exams Unit 1 Writing Task: Help students become familiar with the Session Two, Part A Scoring Rubric (page 134). Then have students work in groups to evaluate each other’s papers. Each student’s essay should be evaluated by every other student in the group. Group members can then discuss their understanding of each criterion for evaluation and learn to evaluate their own work more accurately. Sample anchor papers at each scoring level can be found in the scoring guides on the New York State Assessment website at http://www.nysedregents.org/testing/engre/ regenteng.html. 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10. Succeeding on Session Two, Part B Writing Task: Help students become familiar with the Session Two, Part B Scoring Rubric (page 135). Then have students work in groups to evaluate each other’s papers. Each student’s essay should be evaluated by every other student in the group. Group members can then discuss their understanding of each criterion for evaluation and learn to evaluate their own work more accurately. Sample anchor papers at each scoring level can be found in the scoring guides on the New York State Assessment website at http://www.nysedregents.org/testing/engre/ regenteng.html. Understanding How Regents Exam Essays Are Scored 1.–2. Responses will vary. Check to see that students understand each criterion for evaluation and can apply each to their own writing as well as the writing of peers. 128 4 2 1 3 3 1 2 4 1 4 Writing Task: Help students become familiar with the Session Two, Part A Scoring Rubric (page 134). Then have students work in groups to evaluate each other’s papers. Each student’s essay should be evaluated by every other student in the group. Group members can then discuss their understanding of each criterion for evaluation and learn to evaluate their own work more accurately. Sample anchor papers at each scoring level can be found in the scoring guides on the New York State Assessment website at http://www.nysedregents.org/testing/engre/ regenteng.html. Unit 2 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 2 4 3 4 1 2 Writing Task: Help students become familiar with the Session One, Part A Scoring Rubric (page 132). Then have students work in groups to evaluate each other’s papers. Each student’s essay should be evaluated by every other student in the group. Group members can then discuss their understanding of each criterion for evaluation and learn to evaluate their own work more accurately. Sample anchor papers at each scoring level can be found in the scoring guides on the New York State Assessment website at http://www.nysedregents.org/testing/engre/ regenteng.html. NY R E G E N T S E X A M P R A C T I C E © EMC
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