"Harrison Bergeron" Theme Statements
Friday, August 15 2014 04:39 AM
Room: Luella221
Period 2
Student Names
Tyanna Adams
Kimberly Thousand
kamya
Student Answers
The short story Harrison Bergeron by Kurt Vonnegut, Jr, is about rebelling against the government's unfair rules
and reveals that different can be good in a society.
The short story "Harrison Bergeron" by Kurt Vonnegut , Jr. Is about society and reveals that peoples right are being
violated and poeple should do something to get their rights back.
The short story, "Harrison Bergeron" by Kurt Vonnegut Jr, is about equallity because it reveals that they not trying
to be their own person they are trying to fit in with everyone else.
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Does not meet the standard
Approachng the standard
Meets the standard
Exceeds the standard
Score Feedback
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Not in proper format. Topic is ONE word
and an abstract noun!
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Don't write about the plot!
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Don't write about the plot!
Toussaint, Joshua
The short story "Harrison Bergeron" by Kurt Vonnegut, Jr. Is about unfairness, and reveals that even though a law
is passed doesn't make it just or fair, and they should be rebelled against.
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We need to tweak this, but it is on the
right level.
Harris, Kayla
The story "Harrison Bergeron" by Kurt Vonnegut Jr is about dictatorship and reveals that everyone cannot be the
same, and it's not okay to break the law.
The short story "Harrison Bergeron," by Kurt Vonnegut, Jr. is about equality and reveals that being equal isn't as
great as everyone thinks it would be.
The short story Harrison Bergeron by Kurt Vonnegut, Jr. is about a country who tries to make people equal by
adding handicaps to make the advanced citizens more average reveals that its not bad to be diffrent can be a
good thing.
The story Harrison Bergeron by Kurt Vonnegut,jr. is about crime and reveals that everyone can not and never will
be the same.
The short story Harrison Bergeron by Kurt Vonnegut Jr. is about freedom and reveals that people are the same.
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What does that have to do with
dictatorship?
We need to tweak this, but it is on the
right level.
Not in proper format. Topic is ONE word
and an abstract noun! Also, don't write
about the plot.
What does that have to do with crime?
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How does that relate to freedom?
Gabe McDaniel
The story "Harrison Bergeron," by Kurt Vonnegut,Jr. is about humanities anchor of limitation, and reveals that
even a small uprising can be void in the minds of the forgetful.
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Gass Jelani
The short story Harrison Bergeron by Kurt Vonnegut, Jr is about equality and reveals that no one can be equal
because everyone is their own person
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Not in proper format. Topic is ONE word
and an abstract noun! Also, don't write
about the plot.
This is almost there, but it needs some
tweaking to make it relly strong.
porter simons, kianna
The short story "Harrison Bergeron" by Kurt Vonnegut,Jr is about defiance and reveals that there are
concequences to everyone's action no matter how messed up the laws and rules are.
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Does your message about humanity
really fit the topic of defiance?
Halie, Sanders
The story "Harrison Bergeron" by Kurt Vonnegut Jr. is about the lifestyle and equality in 2081. The story reveals
anxious because everyone is forced to be the same and equal and all ways, meaning they have to wear handicap
equipment.
The short story "Harrison Bergeron" by Kurt Vonnegut Jr. is about individuality and reveals that even though
people try to fit in and be like everybody else, everybody is their own person and no two people should be alike.
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Not in proper format. Topic is ONE word
and an abstract noun! Also, don't write
about the plot.
We need to tweak this, but it is on the
right level.
The short story Harrison Bergeron ; by Kurt Vonnegut Jr, is about death and sadness, It reveals that a tragic death
happened and it was sad enough that no one rememebered
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Falberg, Zoe
Tyrique,Knox
haley balke
Powers,Carson
wines,hollie
chyanne nevins
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Not in proper format. Topic is ONE word
and an abstract noun! Also, don't write
about the plot.
Omar Coleman
The short story Harrison Bergerson by Kurt Vonnegut, Jr. is about sadness and reveals that just becuase people are
different does not mean that thwy cant accomplish anything.
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What does your message about
humanity have to do with sadness?
Patel,Hima
The short story "Harrison Bergerson" by Kurt Vonnegut, Jr. is about bravery and reveals that we have to fight for
our freedom.
2
On the right track, but let's tweak it to
make it better. It is really vague.
Julie Vu
The short story Harrison Bergeron by Kurt Vonnegut, Jr. is about equality and reveals that sometimes sameness
isn't always fair.
The short story Harrison Bergeron by Kurt Vonnegut Jr is about society and reveals that even in a completely equal
world there will be someone different.
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We need to tweak this, but it is on the
right level.
We need to tweak this, but it is on the
right level.
Kyle Baptiste
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General Comments
Getting better! Spelling and punctuation is more professional, and the difference is very pleasant to read. Remember, your topic can only be ONE word, and it must be an abstract concept. Don't
try to make it a phrase or to use two or more abstract concepts. The first doens't work and the second makes it harder than you need to attempt.