History 1110 Extended Syllabus (Western Civilization, 1500 to Present) UTAH STATE UNIVERSITY (Update A) Dr. Robert J. Mueller Spring Semester 2014 TABLE OF CONTENTS SECTION A: General Course Information 1. Required Reading . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 2. Course Content & Outcomes . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 3. Method of Instruction . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 4. Discussion Grade . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 5. Quizzes . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 6. Writing Assignments . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 7. Grade Breakdown . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 8. Office Hours . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 9. Academic Dishonesty. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 10. Sexual Harassment . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 11. Students with Disabilities . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 12. Reading Assignments & Schedule . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 4 4-5 5 5 5-6 6-7 7-8 8 8 8 8-9 9-11 SECTION B: Advice for Writing 1. The Essay . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 2. Mueller’s Pet Peeves . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 3. Proper Footnoting . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 4. Plagiarism . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 13-17 18 19-20 21 SECTION C: Unit Outlines and Word Lists Weeks 1 to 15 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 23-37 SECTION D: Documents and Maps 1. How To Read a Document and Use It Effectively . . . . . . . . 39 2. Suggestions for Map Identifications . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 40 2 History 1110 Extended Syllabus Section A General Course Information 3 UTAH STATE UNIVERSITY HISTORY 1110: WESTERN CIVILIZATION: 1500 TO PRESENT Spring Semester 2014 Wednesdays, 5:15-7:45PM LECTURER: Dr. Bob Mueller OFFICE: USU-Tooele Regional Campus, Office 180 OFFICE PHONE & VOICE MAIL: (435) 882-6611 ext. 3180 OFFICE HOURS: Tuesdays & Thursdays 3:00-5:00, and by appt. E-MAIL ADDRESS: [email protected] 1. REQUIRED READING: McKay, Hill, Buckler, Crowston, Wiesner-Hanks, Western Society: A Brief History, Volume II (Bedford/St. Martin’s, 2010) Kishlansky, Sources of the West, Volume 2: 1600 to Present, 8th ed. (Pearson, 2012) Marx & Engels, The Communist Manifesto (Penguin Classics) Readings on Canvas (primary sources) 2. COURSE CONTENT & OUTCOMES: History 1110 is a survey of the history of Western Civilization from the first appearance of the so-called "New Monarchies" of Western European around 1500 to the end of the Cold War in the late twentieth century. It covers the development of a unique civilization -- one that built upon the developments introduced into medieval European society, such things as the origins of the strong centralized state, the power and authority of the institutional Christian Church, and the rise of a more secular society during the Italian Renaissance. We will look at changes in European government, religion, society and intellectual life brought about by such events as the Protestant Reformation, the Enlightenment, the French Revolution, the Industrial Revolution, the growth of such concepts as nationalism, communism and liberalism, the Russian Revolution, the two world wars and the Cold War. The course emphasizes the examination of primary sources as a method of developing the important skill of analysis. In discussion, in papers and on your exams, you will be asked to reach general conclusions through careful use of specific evidence. There will be five main outcomes when you finish this course: 1) You will become a stronger writer and understand better how historians do their work. I do not use midterms and finals to test how well you understand the lectures and readings. Instead I ask you to write four term papers and take a series of short quizzes. Section B of this syllabus is a detailed discussion about writing a strong paper. 2) You will become a more analytical thinker. The papers and terminology quizzes require you to use analysis and reason. 3) You will learn important facts and information about particular periods of history and see how these helped bring about the world we live in today. For example, you will understand why the Protestant Reformation occurred and how it brought about vicious wars of religion which plagued Europe for 150 years. 4) You will see why representative democracies made their appearance and became the predominant form of government in the world by the middle of the twentieth century. 5) You will understand the power of ideas such liberty, equality, nationalism, communism and Nazism and how these ideas forced fundamental changes upon western civilization. 4 3. METHOD OF INSTRUCTION: This course is a mixture of lecture and discussion. It is vitally important that you have the material assigned for the week done by our class meeting. Always bring your Kishlansky sourcebook to class, as well as any special readings I post on Canvas, because I will often lead a discussion of certain primary source documents during the lecture. This is also a writing-intensive class; you will have to demonstrate the analytical skills you practice in the discussions on your writing assignments and your terminology quizzes. Remember that this is an Interactive Video Conferencing (IVC) course. We handle discussion a bit differently in such a class. I will ask questions of different sites during the lecture. Yes, this means I will occasionally ask you to talk, but I’m such a fun (and humble) guy that this should always be a distinct pleasure. If you are not at the site that is being questioned, please hold off answering unless I throw open the question to the whole class. Don’t worry, I’ll give all sites the chance to participate. Likewise, if you have a question during the lecture, I want you to ask it. But please wait for a pause in my lecture (I stop a lot to sip my coffee) and then ask away. Always remember to announce the following things when you address me or the class: 1) Your name 2) Your site This way I can keep track of who is talking and it gives our video technology time to turn on and focus on you. Yes, a camera will be on you when you speak in class. In this way I can see who is talking. 4. DISCUSSION GRADE: Ten percent (10%) of your grade (100 points) will be based on your participation in the discussions in this class. That does not mean simply asking a question or two. I expect you to answer questions which I ask and make substantive comments in our weekly discussions, most of which will be based on the weekly Canvas readings. I keep track of all the substantive comments you make on a control sheet, so make sure you clearly state your name and site before you make your comment. That will give me time to find your name and mark it. If you contribute regularly, you will earn a good discussion grade. If you do not contribute, you could lower your overall grade by as much as an entire grade level (meaning that a B+ grade on the rest of the course assignments could become a C+). The take-away message here is to take part in the discussions during class time. To be able to do this effectively you need to keep up on the readings, especially the primary sources. 5. QUIZZES: There are seven quizzes worth a total of 300 points (or 30% of your total grade): two map quizzes and five terminology quizzes. The purpose of the quizzes is to see how well you are studying the course materials. You are to rely on your memory alone when taking them. You may not use any books, class notes or external websites when taking the quizzes. If you are found using any of these to assist you in taking a quiz you will be guilty of cheating and could fail the course. Each map quiz is worth 25 points and each terminology quiz is worth 50 points. The two map quizzes will be given in class. For each quiz I will give you a blank map of Europe and the Mediterranean and ask you to find ten locations from the list at the end of this syllabus. Why do I do this? It is because maps are crucial to understanding the history of western civilization. I want you to learn the location of two kinds of places. First, you need to know basic geographical features (such as, major rivers, mountains, islands, bodies of water and regions). Second, I want you to how to locate important cities, regions and other political units. Maps of these geographical features and places can be found in the textbook. A list of the possible locations I might ask on these quizzes is at the end of this 5 syllabus. Check the “Grade Breakdown” section of this syllabus for the dates of the map quizzes. The five (5) terminology quizzes will focus on important terms taken from the lecture outlines/word lists in Section C of this syllabus. Each term quiz has the same format. There will be five terms given, one or two from each of the weekly lecture outlines/word lists. A good answer has two parts: 1) Identification. Identify the term in a sentence or two. Answer the questions who?, what? where? and when? as relates to the term. The more specific details you can give, the more points you will score. This part of the answer tests your memorization skills. 2) Historical significance. Tell me why the term is important for this course in a single sentence or two at most. Sometimes there is an obvious reason why a person, place, or concept is significant. Or sometimes you can tie the term to a larger theme or set of ideas in the class. This tests your analytical ability. The quizzes are taken on Canvas and are each timed for 15 minutes, so make sure you do your studying before the quiz. You may take the quizzes any time over a particular two day period, but you only can take each quiz one time. I will not grant any extensions or do-overs for any reason. Please consult the “Grade Breakdown” section below for the days on which each quiz may be taken. Quizzes are computerized and cannot be made up, so please make sure you take them on the days they are available. Remember that quizzes are supposed to be done from memory. Do not make use of any course materials or internet web sites when taking the quizzes. 6. WRITING ASSIGNMENTS: There are three (3) term papers required for this course. Each of the three papers will be worth 200 points (20% of your overall grade). For each paper you will be expected to write an essay of no less than 1500 words (about 5-6 full pages) on the topics below. You may write more (to a maximum of 2000 words), but papers of less than 1500 words will adversely affect your grade. I will expect formal footnotes for this paper. Please see the “Proper Footnoting” pages in Section B of this syllabus for more information. Make sure your papers are typed, double-spaced, have page numbers, and 1" margins all around. Use a 12 pitch font which will make it easy for me to read. Please write your papers using the MSWord word processing program. This will make it easy to upload the paper into Canvas. The Logan campus, USU regional campuses and USU education centers all have computer labs loaded with this program. Do not use MSWorks, since my computer will not open papers written with this program. Only submit papers which have a file suffix of “.doc” or “.docx” (the ones used by MSWord). I cannot read files which end in “.rft” or “.odt” or any other suffix. Also, please give make the first page of your paper a cover sheet which includes the following: 1) title of the paper, 2) your name, 3) the course name and number, 4) your site, 5) and the date. Please consult Section B of this extended syllabus, which is called “Advice for Writing,” before writing your papers. It contains suggestions on how to write a strong essay and reveals the grammatical and other errors I will penalize you for on your paper. Please look at “Mueller’s Pet Peeves” before you write each of your papers. It will give you an idea of the things I look for (or hate to see) in a well-written paper. Here is a hint. One of my biggest pet peeves is a poorly proofread paper. I grade off for errors in spelling, punctuation and grammar -- and typos too. In this age of computers with spelling and grammar 6 checkers there is no excuse for a sloppy paper. Have a friend or family member proofread your paper for you. They can often find errors that you might not see. Finally, since these are such short papers please DO NOT include any long quotations (meaning anything over one line across the page in length). Never quote or cite from an introduction to a document or from the textbook. I want to see how you make use of primary sources as evidence. This forces you to develop the skill of analysis. All of your papers should be submitted on Canvas. The “Start Here” section of Canvas contains information on how to do this. If you have problems posting your paper, please contact me. I will read your papers and offer substantive criticism using Canvas. Do not use any outside books for this paper. I expect you to only make use of course materials, mainly the textbook, documents from the Kishlansky sourcebook, and documents I post on Canvas for these papers. The point of these papers is to see how well you are able to use a limited set of sources as evidence for your views. Never, under any circumstances, should you make use of internet websites for information for your papers. TOPIC for PAPER #1: Using the primary source readings from the first three weeks of the course, write an essay which answers the following questions. Why did Martin Luther break with the Roman Catholic Church? What were the most important parts of his religious message? How did the Catholic authorities respond to his criticisms? How did England respond to the growth of this Protestant message? DUE DATE: Saturday, February 01 by midnight (submitted in Canvas). TOPIC for PAPER #2: Ideas are powerful. What new ideas about government and society developed during the Enlightenment, the French Revolution and Industrial Revolution? Why did these new ideas lead to conflicts in Europe in the nineteenth century and even to the rise of socialism and communism? Why were some people scared of communism and some made very hopeful by it? Please make use of the weeks five through nine readings from the Kishlansky sourcebook and Marx and Engels’s Communist Manifesto as your main sources of evidence for this paper. DUE DATE: Saturday, March 22 by midnight (submitted in Canvas). TOPIC for PAPER #3: Humanity had to endure new horrors in the twentieth century due to the appearance of trench warfare in World War One, the Holocaust in World War Two and the excesses of Soviet-style communism. What were the worst things that humans had to endure in each world war and under the domination of the Soviet Union? Which of these had the greatest impact on the people of the last century? Please use mainly the readings in Kishlansky from weeks 11 through 15 for your evidence. DUE DATE: Saturday, April 26 by midnight (submitted in Canvas). 6. GRADE BREAKDOWN: Discussion Grade 100 pts Map Quiz #1 025 pts Map Quiz #2 025 pts Terminology Quiz #1 050 pts Terminology Quiz #2 050 pts Terminology Quiz #3 050 pts Terminology Quiz #4 050 pts Terminology Quiz #5 050 pts January 15 in class. April 16 in class. Take on Canvas on either Jan 23 or 24 (Wks 1-3) Take on Canvas on either Feb 13 or Feb 14 (Wks 4-6) Take on Canvas on either March 06 or 07 (Wks 7-9) Take on Canvas on either April 03 or 04 (Wks 10-12) Take on Canvas on either April 24 or 25 (Wks 13-15) 7 Paper #1 Paper #2 Paper #3 200 pts 200 pts 200 pts Saturday, Feb 01 by midnight (submit on Canvas) Saturday, March 22 by midnight (submit on Canvas) Saturday, April 26 by midnight (submit on Canvas) Your scores for the papers and the final course grade will be calculated based on the following scale: A AB+ B BC+ C CD+ D F Paper Scores 186-200 180-185 174-179 166-173 160-165 154-159 146-153 140-145 134-139 126-133 000-125 Course Grade 930-1000 pts 900-929 870-899 830-869 800-829 770-799 730-769 700-729 670-699 630-669 000-629 8. OFFICE HOURS: I hold regular weekly office hours, on Tuesday and Thursday afternoons from 3:00 to 5:00PM, which I encourage you to attend, e-mail or call into. Their purpose is to provide you with the time to meet with me to discuss any aspect of the course, whether it be advice on the papers, study suggestions for the quizzes, or questions about the readings or my lectures. Remember, I'm a resource at your disposal. Use me. If my regular hours aren't convenient, make an appointment for a time which is better for you. Students at distance sites should feel free to either call me in my office or contact me by e-mail at any time if they have questions. The e-mail system in Canvas is a good way to get in touch with me quickly. 9. ACADEMIC DISHONESTY: It is a sad commentary on our times but it must be said in advance, I expect you to do your own work. Please read the section on plagiarism in Section B of this syllabus. You are responsible for correctly citing your sources in your three papers. If you are caught cheating on a quiz or turning in work which is not your own, you may fail the course. You will also be reported to the Judicial Officer on the Logan campus of USU and may face expulsion from the university. Face it, it's just not worth the risk to your future. 10. SEXUAL HARASSMENT Sexual Harassment is defined by the Affirmative Action/Equal Employment Opportunity Commission as any “unwelcome sexual advances, requests for sexual favors, and other verbal or physical conduct of a sexual nature.” If you feel you are a victim of sexual harassment, you may talk to or file a complaint with the Affirmative Action/Equal Opportunity Office, located in Old Main, room 161, or call the office at (435) 797-1266. 11. STUDENTS WITH DISABILITIES The Americans with Disabilities Act states: “Reasonable accommodation will be provided for all persons with disabilities in order to ensure equal participation within the program. If a student has a 8 disability that will likely require some accommodation by the instructor, the student must contact the instructor and document the disability through the Disability Resource Center, preferably during the first week of the course. Any request for special consideration relating to attendance, pedagogy, taking of examinations, etc., must be discussed with and approved by the instructor. In cooperation with the Disability Resource Center, course materials can be provided in alternative format, large print, audio, diskette, or Braille.” 12. LECTURES AND READING ASSIGNMENTS: Listed below are the reading assignments for the course. Please have all the reading done before the Tuesday class meeting. I will plan discussions based on this material. “McKay” refers to Western Society: A Brief Edition. Kishlansky refers to the Sources of the West sourcebook, and the number refers to the document number in that book. The Weeks Two and Three Readings are found under the “Course Materials” section of Canvas. WEEK ONE: Jan 08 WEEK TWO: Jan 15 Introduction to the Course/ Criticism of Church in 1500 Reading: None The Lutheran Reformation Reading: McKay, Chapter 14 (Reformations and Religious Wars), Weeks Two & Three Readings (on Canvas), Documents 1-3. MAP QUIZ #1 (in class). WEEK THREE: Jan 22 WEEK FOUR: Jan 29 WEEK FIVE: Feb 05 WEEK SIX: Feb 12 European Wars of Religion Reading: McKay, Chapter 15 (European Exploration and Conquest); Weeks Two & Three Readings (on Canvas), Documents 4-7. TERMINOLOGY QUIZ #1 on January 23 & 24 (On Weeks 01-03 terms) Absolutism & Constitutionalism Reading: McKay, Chapter 16 (Absolutism and Constitutionalism in W. Europe); Kishlansky, #75 (Cardinal Richelieu, The Political Testament) #77 (James I, True Law of a Free Monarchy) #81 (The English Bill of Rights) PAPER #1 DUE Saturday, February 01 by midnight (submitted in Canvas). The Enlightenment Reading: McKay, Chapter 18; Kishlansky, #93 (Rousseau, The Social Contract) #94 (Montesquieu, The Spirit of the Laws) The French Revolution Reading: McKay, Chapter 21 (The Revolution in Politics); 9 Kishlansky, #100 (Abbe de Sieyes, What is the Third Estate) #101 (The Declaration of Rights of Man) TERMINOLOGY QUIZ #2 on February 13 & 14 (On Weeks 04-06 terms) WEEK SEVEN: Feb 19 WEEK EIGHT: Feb 26 WEEK NINE: Mar 05 Industrial Revolution Reading: McKay, Chapter 19 (Expansion of Europe in 18th Century) & McKay, Chapter 22 (Revolution in Energy & Industry) Kishlansky, #106 (Chadwick, Inquiry into Condition of the Poor) Week Seven Readings on Canvas Reaction & Revolution Reading: McKay, Chapter 23 (Ideologies and Upheavals) Kishlansky, #111 (J.S. Mill, On Liberty) #112 (Proudhon, What is Property?) Revolutions & Marxism Reading: McKay, none; Marx & Engels, The Communist Manifesto, all. TERMINOLOGY QUIZ #3 on March 06 or 07 (On Weeks 07 - 09 terms) March 10-14 - SPRING BREAK WEEK: No classes. WEEK TEN: Mar 19 WEEK ELEVEN: Mar 26 Rise of Nationalism Reading: McKay, Chapter 25 (Age of Nationalism); Kishlansky, #117 (Bismarck, Reflections & Speech to Reichstag) PAPER #2 DUE Saturday, March 22 by midnight (submitted in Canvas). Imperialism Reading: McKay, Chapter 26 (The West and the World); Kishlansky, #123 (Hobson, Imperialism) #127 (Kipling, White Man’s Burden) WEEK TWELVE: Apr 02 The Great War (WWI) Reading: McKay, Chapter 27 (Great Break: War and Rev) (pp.698-711) Kishlansky, #129 (Voices from the Battle of the Somme) #130 (Junger, Storm of Steel) #131 (Wilson, The Fourteen Points) TERMINOLOGY QUIZ #4 on April 03 or 04 (On Weeks 10 - 12 terms) 10 WEEK THIRTEEN: Apr 09 The Russian Revolution Reading: McKay, Chapter 27 Great Break: War and Rev (pp.711-725); Kishlansky, #132 (Lenin, What Is to Be Done?) WEEK FOURTEEN: Apr 16 World War II Reading: McKay, Chapter 29 (Dictatorships and the Second World War) Kishlansky, #136 (Hitler, Mein Kampf) #137 (Memories of the Holocaust) #139 (Levi, The Last Christmas of the War) MAP QUIZ #2 in class. WEEK FIFTEEN: Apr 23 The Cold War Reading: McKay, Chapter 30 (Cold War Conflicts and Social Transformations); Kishlansky, #142 (Solzhenitsyn, One Day in Life of Ivan Denisovich)) #146 (Khrushchev, Report to the Communist Party) PAPER #3 DUE Saturday, April 26 by midnight (submitted in Canvas). TERMINOLOGY QUIZ #5 on April 24 or 25 (On Weeks 13 - 15 terms) 11 History 1110 Extended Syllabus Section B Advice for Writing 12 Advice for Writing Good Essays The Essay An essay is a formal piece of writing that has some specific rules, just as haiku poetry has rules as to the number of lines and syllables per line. If you do not follow the rules then you are not writing an essay. The first thing to remember is that at its core an essay is an argument. It is supposed to prove something. An essay is not just an excuse to repeat a lot of the stuff you’ve been reading in the course materials or hearing in the lectures. A good essay is analytical, meaning it argues a point. You should avoid writing a narrative, which merely retells a story. In the writing assignments, I’m not testing your memory, but rather I’m seeing how well you are learning the skill of analysis. Formal essays have a simple but definite three-part structure. First, they begin with an introductory paragraph which introduces the reader to a problem or topic. It also tells the reader exactly what the writer intends to prove. The second part is the body of the essay, where the writer presents his or her evidence in an organized fashion. The final part of an essay is the conclusion. In a conclusion the writer does not present any new evidence or interpretations of evidence. Instead he or she sums up the argument they have just presented in the body. To write a good essay you must be selective about what you discuss. Focus on the topic question(s) which you were given. They are your roadmap to constructing a good argument. Make sure you answer each of the questions and answer them fully. Do not go off on tangents and talk about things not covered in the topic question(s). Bringing in irrelevant information detracts from the core of your argument and distracts the reader. It does not earn you any extra points, so it just wastes your (and your instructor’s) time. Make sure you know exactly what topic you are supposed to write on. A good general rule of thumb is to read the topic question(s) three times in succession before you start writing. Even if you think you know what the instructor wants after the first reading, make yourself read them three times. PART ONE: The Introductory Paragraph As the term suggests the introductory paragraph is the first paragraph of your essay. Many students have difficulties in composing an introductory paragraph, usually because they do not know the purpose of the introduction to an essay. On this we should be clear. The purpose of the introduction is tell the reader what you intend to prove in the essay. It explains briefly how you intend to answer the topic question(s). It contains specific information. How do you write an introductory paragraph that is both strong and effective? Let us examine this systematically. Structure There is no one way to construct an introductory paragraph. But let me suggest a simple two-part structure that will work for most history essays. 1) Background: First, give a small amount of background information so the reader will understand the context of the problem or issue you are exploring. How much you write will vary with the complexity of the issue or questions with which you are dealing. If you are answering a question on one topic, you may not need much background information. However, a longer series of questions may call for more 13 information. The key is to provide the minimum amount of background that your reader will need to understand your argument. For example, if you are asked to explain why Lucretia, the legendary ideal of Roman womanhood, was so important as a role model to early Romans, your introduction might begin with a very short description of how the Romans of the 6th century B.C. were ruled not by their own leaders but by Etruscan kings. You might also mention that Lucretia’s story helps explain why the Romans overthrew the monarchy and instituted a new form of government called the republic. This background material will make your core argument more understandable to the reader. 2) Thesis: Second, tell the reader exactly what you intend to prove in the essay. This is delivered in a thesis statement, a clear and concise declarative sentence (or set of sentences) which outlines the general argument that will be made. The Thesis Statement The thesis statement is considered by many to be the single most important part of an essay. Many students come to the university thinking they know how to write a thesis statement because they follow a simple rule they learned in high school. That rule is to take any question asked and turn it into a statement. For example, you are asked, “why was Lucretia considered such an important role model to early Roman women?” The typical high school strategy would be to turn this question into a statement like, “Lucretia was considered to be an important role model to early Roman women.” But look at how weak a statement this is. It tells the reader nothing. The question asked you to explain why Lucretia was a role model. Your reader is expecting you to give some specific reasons. For a thesis statement to be effective you need to give some specific examples which help answer the question(s) asked. These examples do not need to be long or drawn out or include anything from the actual documents you intend to use as evidence – that is the purpose of the body of the essay. But you do need to provide some short specific examples. Another common mistake made by some students is to tell the reader what they will do in the essay, instead of what they will prove. For example, they might include a statement which says, “In this essay I will show why Lucretia was considered to be such an important role model for early Roman women,” or “By examining documents from the sourcebook it will be shown why Lucretia was a role model for Romans.” The problem with both of these statements is the same as the one mentioned in the paragraph above; they do not say anything specific. You need to provide some actual specific examples. Let’s look at some possible thesis statements and judge their strengths and weaknesses. Examples of Thesis Statements 1) Below Average Thesis. “Lucretia was seen as a role model because she was a good housewife and because she killed herself after being violated by a man.” This is a below average thesis because it is so vague. While it does give two reasons why Lucretia was a role model, it does not explain them or give any specific details. It begs more questions than it answers. Why was being a good housewife important? What made her a good housewife? Why was her death significant? 2) Average Thesis. “Lucretia was seen as a role model because she let herself be raped to protect her family honor. This led her husband and his friend to use her as a reason why the Romans should overthrow the king.” This is an average thesis because it is limited and a bit vague. It gives one reason why Lucretia was seen as a role model, but only one. It also does not include much detail for the reader about why honor might be significant. Nothing at all is said about Lucretia’s importance as an example of duty towards the family. 14 3) Above Average Thesis. “Lucretia became a role model for Roman women because of her concern for duty and honor. She was hardworking in the home, weaving clothes and maintaining the customs of hospitality. She was willing to die rather than let the king’s son sleep with her, and let him violate her in order to prevent him from dishonoring her family.” This is a good thesis because it provides two clear reasons, but it is still vague about the linkages between duty and hard work in the home and between honor and the rape. 4) Excellent thesis. “The story of Lucretia, although a myth, gave the Romans a role model for ideal female behavior. She showed the importance of duty to the family through her careful attention to household management. She worked hard at weaving late into the night alongside her servants, when the wives of other men were out partying. Lucretia also exemplified the importance of the Roman virtue of honor by submitting herself to rape at the hands of the king’s son rather than see her family dishonored. She also maintained her own honor by killing herself after the rape so her example could not be used as an excuse by women of loose morals to justify their own infidelities.” This is an excellent thesis because it offers two specific reasons why Lucretia was seen as a role model and provides many specific details. A strong, clear thesis is essential in any essay. It tells the reader exactly what you intend to prove. Your reader will judge your entire essay by how well or how poorly you defend this thesis. The defense of your thesis is done in the next section of your paper – the body. PART TWO: The Body The second part of an essay is the body, where you support the argument laid out in your thesis by presenting evidence in an organized fashion. This is by far the longest part of the paper. Here you methodically prove your thesis, not just by making general statements, but by presenting specific evidence from various sources. What exactly do I mean by evidence? Well, if you make a statement about a person, idea or event and do not back it up with some form of proof, then you are simply expressing a personal opinion. It may be right or it may be wrong. Without evidence your reader cannot tell the difference. And frankly, opinions are a dime a dozen in our world today -- just look at the huge number of talk shows or news programs with pundits expressing their often contradictory views. Any uninformed person can have an opinion. One purpose of a college essay is to help you develop informed opinions. What makes an opinion informed? It is when it is based on an analysis of evidence. You perform this analysis in the body of the paper. How do you organize this section? Again, there are many ways to do so, but let me offer some suggestions. First, focus on the topic question(s) and let them guide the organization of your essay. Think about what the instructor is asking you to prove. In most college courses there is not just one correct answer to the topic question(s). There are often different approaches to the same question(s). For a history essay most instructors want to see how well you use evidence to back up or support an argument. There are two kinds of evidence. a. Primary source evidence involves documents (letters, government papers, books, paintings and illustrations, etc.) from the time you are studying. It is the strongest form of evidence because it involves the thoughts, ideas and interpretations of people from the time you are studying. b. Secondary source evidence includes the writings of people who came well after the time you are studying. They are usually written by scholars who use primary source documents to form an interpretation of people and events from the past. Textbooks are a good example of a secondary source. So are the introductions to the documents found in most sourcebooks and document readers. They are 15 considered inferior to primary sources because they involve a certain degree of guesswork by the scholar. Two different scholars can look at the exact same documents and sometimes reach widely different interpretations of what they mean or how significant they are. That is why you should always rely on primary sources first when you are arguing your thesis. Do not just rely on what some other person has said. When grading your use of evidence I give most credit for your use of primary source documents and very little for use of secondary sources, like the textbook or the introductions to documents. For the essays required in this course secondary source information is considered so weak that you should avoid making much use of it. And never, ever, for any reason, should secondary sources be quoted in your papers. Before you write the body of your paper it is a good idea to make an outline of the main points of your argument. Consider the evidence you want to use to support these points. Remember to focus on primary source evidence. Try to make the best use possible of your documents. Some students seem to think that a document is only good for one specific example. This is not true. In fact, some documents, especially lengthier ones, are filled with multiple examples which will support your argument. Use them. This may be through presentation of direct quotations. If you do quote, keep your quotations short. Do not include quotations over one line in length. They do not have to include a whole sentence. You may quote just certain phrases or short sections of a sentence. When you quote, please remember that the quotation must be set off with quotation marks. You will sometimes encounter specific examples that are too long to quote, in which case you need to briefly paraphrase the example, meaning put it in your own words. Be careful in how you paraphrase. Just changing a few words in a quotation is not paraphrasing. Most paraphrases sum up and condense a long example into a sentence or two. Every point you make in your argument should be supported by specific evidence. Look at the documents in your sourcebook or weekly readings for examples which illustrate the point you are trying to make. Be selective. Include strong examples which support your thesis. Don’t just include paraphrases. If there is a short quotation (nothing over one line in length) from a document that really expresses your point, put it in the essay. Very importantly, after you present your evidence, you must cite your source for it. This is called giving a citation. It does not matter whether you are giving a quotation or just paraphrasing an author’s ideas. If you use an idea which is not your own, then you must cite where you got it from. There are three common forms of citation: a footnote (which appears at the bottom of a page), an endnote (which appears at the end of the essay) or a parenthetical note (which appears in parentheses directly after the evidence is presented). For this course I will ask you to include footnotes in all of your papers. Students often ask me how many citations they should have in a paper and if every paragraph has to have some citations. My answer is that I cannot say how many you will need. It is completely dependent upon how much evidence you present. The more specific examples you can show to support your argument, the more citations you will need. And since every paragraph (except for your introductory paragraph and concluding paragraph) is supposed to be presenting evidence, then each one must contain citations showing where your evidence comes from. In this way a reader can check out your sources if they so choose. If you do not cite your sources, then you are guilty of the academic crime of plagiarism, passing off someone else’s ideas as your own. See the final page of this section on writing for a more detailed explanation of plagiarism. As I suggested earlier, take the time to outline your argument. The best way to organize the body of your essay is to use a wonderful device called the paragraph. Use a separate paragraph for each main point you wish to make. This does not mean that every single idea should have its own paragraph. Rather, all the ideas related to each main point should be organized in distinct paragraphs. Remember to include primary source evidence to support your point. Don’t be afraid of paragraphs which may be long, even a 16 page in length. But avoid one and two sentence paragraphs. They usually show sloppy thinking or demonstrate that you have not fully developed that particular point. PART THREE: The Conclusion The conclusion is usually the last paragraph of your essay. Its purpose is to remind the reader of your thesis and how you proved it. You should not introduce any new evidence or information in the conclusion. Use it to sum up your argument. Explain the main points of your thesis and remind the reader briefly what your evidence for each point was. Because you are not introducing any new evidence, it is very uncommon to find a footnote in the conclusion. As I mentioned above, this is not the only way to write an essay. Rather it is just one model, but one which has proven to be effective for many students. If you are unfamiliar with writing essays for a history course, I very much suggest you make use of this model. It will help you write an essay which is organized and focused on primary source evidence. 17 Mueller’s Pet Peeve’s Before submitting your papers please proofread them. Use this checklist. 1) Make sure you have a strong thesis statement which says what you will prove in the essay. 2) Make sure you have a conclusion which sums up your argument. 3) Make sure your sources are cited properly after using a quotation or a paraphrase. 4) Do not use contractions. 5) Do not ask rhetorical questions. 6) Do not use colloquial phrases. 7) Beware of run-on sentences. 8) Beware of sentence fragments. 9) Spell out all numbers under 100. 10) No one or two sentence paragraphs. 11) Do not use quotations longer than one line. 12) Never, ever quote from the textbook or the introduction to a document. 18 PROPER FOOTNOTING First, let’s go over a little terminology. A footnote refers to a note in an essay or paper which appears at the bottom of a page. An endnote is a note which appears at the end of a paper. Because most word processing programs (such as Microsoft Word or Corel’s Wordperfect) make it easy to construct either kind of notes, and since footnotes are far easier to follow when reading a paper, I will ask you to include footnotes (and not endnotes) in your paper(s) for this class. Historians use a particular kind of footnoting, popularized by the University of Chicago in its Chicago Manual of Style. It is sometimes known as Turabian style, after Kate Turabian who wrote a famous book, A Manual for Writers of Term Papers, Theses, and Dissertations, which condensed the original 900+ page book into a mere 300 pages. My goal is to further condense these rules down to just a few pages, including only the most common rules for citation of sources. There are two main kinds of footnotes: 1) Reference footnotes: These are used to identify one’s source for a quotation or idea used in a paper or to make cross-references. These are the most common kind of footnotes expected of college students. It is the kind of footnote I want to see in your papers. 2) Content footnotes: These are used to make less significant comments on the argument or on a particular source which are seen as important but might detract from the main argument if left in the text. They are also used to acknowledge individuals who have assisted the author in his or her research. These are not necessary in the papers for this course. REFERENCE FOOTNOTES The basic rules of reference footnoting are relatively simple. A reference footnote should be used any time a writer uses a quotation from another author or a paraphrase (puting into one’s own words) of an idea, concept or story from another writer. In essence, whenever you use the intellectual property of someone else, either a quotation or a paraphrase, you should use a reference footnote immediately after the quotation or idea. This is known as giving a citation or “citing one’s sources.” There is a particular style for correctly giving a citation. The first time you make use of a source in a footnote you should give a full citation. This includes the author’s name, the title of the work, publication information and the page or pages on which the quotation or information is to be found. Every time afterwards when you cite this source you should give a short citation. This includes only the last name of the author and the page number, if this is the only work of that author which you are using in your paper. If you are using two or more works by the same author then you must distinguish between them by also including a short version of the title. Let’s look at a few examples of proper citation for sources from books and articles. EXAMPLE #1: (for a book with multiple authors) Full citation: John P. McKay, et al, Western Society: A Brief History : Volume II, (Boston & New York: Bedford/St. Martin’s, 2010), 203. Short citation: McKay et al, 203. 19 [Nota bene: the term et al is short for the Latin phrase et alia, meaning “and others.” Thus it is not necessary to name all the authors of a textbook.] EXAMPLE #2: (for a document by a known author in Weekly Readings on Canvas) Full citation: Martin Luther, “Luther on the Nature of Man,” in History 1110 Week Two & Three Readings, 2. Short citation: Week Two & Three Readings, 2. EXAMPLE #3: (for a document by a known author in a sourcebook) Full citation: Cardinal Richelieu, The Political Testament, in Mark Kishlansky, ed., Sources of the West: Readings in Western Civilization: Volume 2 (Pearson, 2012), 6. Short citation: Kishlansky, 6. EXAMPLE #4: (for a document by an unknown author in a sourcebook) Full citation: “The Declaration of the Rights of Man,” in Mark Kishlansky, ed., Sources of the West: Readings in Western Civilization: Volume 2 (Pearson, 2012), 114. Short citation: Kishlansky, 114. 20 PLAGIARISM One of the most common violations of academic honesty is plagiarism. Misunderstanding of this subject is especially apparent among undergraduates. The following statement should help clarify the matter. A writer’s facts, ideas and phraseology should be regarded as his/her property. Any person who uses a writer’s facts, ideas or phraseology without giving due credit is guilty of plagiarism. Information may be put in a paper without a footnote or other form of citation only if it meets all the following conditions: 1. It may be found in several books on the subject. 2. It is written in the words of the student. 3. It is not paraphrased from any particular source. 4. It therefore belongs to common knowledge. Generally, if you write while looking at a source or even while looking at notes taken from a source, a citation should be given. Whenever any idea is taken from a specific work, even when you write the idea entirely in your own words, there must be a footnote giving credit to the author. Of course, methods of documentation vary, and it is possible to cite a source in the text itself or in an endnote instead of a footnote. For the short essays you encounter in my course, citation by means of a page reference in parenthesis is recommended. The point is that you should give credit when due and that the credit be given in a manner specified by the instructor. You are entirely responsible for knowing and following the principles of paraphrasing. You should never retain a sentence pattern and substitute synonyms for the original words nor retain the original words and alter the sentence pattern. In other words, paraphrasing means changing both the words and the sentence pattern. Frequently, a source should be cited even if no words are put in quotation marks. All direct quotations should be footnoted. Even when you use only one unusual or key word from a passage, that word should be placed in quotation marks and cited. When using sources, remember that the very act of using a book or an article should be considered as a pledge that the material will be used according to the principles stated above. 21 History 1110 Extended Syllabus Section C Unit Outlines and Word Lists 22 Week #1 Introduction/Criticism of the Church in 1500 I. Introduction to the Course II. Criticism of the Church in 1500 III. Erasmus & Christian Humanism ------------------------------------------------------------------------salvation pope cardinals bishops Great Schism Council of Constance (1415) general council dispensations indulgences remission Purgatory grace vernacular Erasmus of Rotterdam Praise of Folly 23 Week #2 The Protestant Reformation I. The Lutheran Reformation A. Germany in 1500 B. Martin Luther C. The Ninety-Five Theses D. Frederick the Wise E. The Impact of Luther II. John Calvin and Geneva --------------------------------------------------------------------Great Schism Council of Constance dispensation indulgence Purgatory – grace Diet – Seven Electors Wittenberg sola fides sola scriptura Johann Tetzel “priesthood of all believers” Frederick the Wise Saxony Emperor Charles V pastors/doctors elders/deacons Consistory predestination Huguenots Lord’s Supper Eucharist 24 Week #3 European Wars of Religion I. The Counter or Catholic Reformation A. Ignatius of Loyola & the Jesuits B. Council of Trent II. The English Reformation A. Henry VIII (1509-1547) B. Edward VI (1547-1553) C. Mary I (1553-1558) D. Elizabeth I (1558-1603) “The Protestant Wind” Spiritual Exercises Society of Jesus Pope Paul III annulment Catherine of Aragon Anne Boleyn Supreme Head Parliament statute law Archbishop Thomas Cranmer Book of Common Prayer repeal Marian Exiles Puritans Religious Settlement of 1559 Spanish Armada King Philip II of Spain 25 Week #4 Absolutism and Constitutionalism I. Social Order in France in 17th Century II. The Theory of Absolutism III. The Road to Absolutism A. Henry IV B. Louis XIII & Cardinal Richelieu C. Louis XIV IV. Constitutional Monarchy in England A. James I (1603-1625) B. Charles I (1625-1649) C. The Interregnum (1649-1660) D. Charles II (1660-1685) E. James II (1685-1688) F. William & Mary (1688-1702) estates Estates General nobles of the sword nobles of the robe taille = a land tax provincial governors parlement edict La Rochelle intendants The Fronde Versailles lit de justice ship money Arminianism Oliver Cromwell dispensing power Test Act Glorious Revolution Triennial Act 26 Week #5 The Enlightenment I. The Enlightenment A. Philosophes B. Growth of Literacy C. Popularizers D. Salons E. Diderot's Encyclopedia II. The Big Three A. Charles de Secondat, Baron de Montesquieu B. Voltaire (Francois Marie Arouet) C. Jean-Jacques Rousseau Age of Reason rationality Bernard de Fontenelle Plurality of Worlds Madame Geoffrin Denis Diderot The Spirit of Laws separation of powers Candide state of nature natural law The Social Contract general will sovereign 27 Week #6 French Revolution and Napoleon I. French Peasantry in the Eighteenth Century II. French Revolution A. Financial Crisis B. Estates General to National Assembly C. Declaration of the Rights of Man and Citizen III. Reign of Terror IV. Napoleon Bonaparte A. The Directory B. The Consulate V. Emperor Napoleon VI. Congress of Vienna seigneurial system Safety Old Regime guillotine Seven Years War levee en masse “doubling the third” Thermidorean Reaction Abbe Sieyes Napoleonic Code King Louis XVI guerrilla warfare Oath of the Tennis Court The Grand Army Fall of the Bastille General Winter Marquis de Lafayette Battle of Waterloo Great Fear status quo ante liberty, equality, fraternity Flight to Varennes Maximilian Robespierre Committee of Public 28 Week #7 Industrial Revolution I. Industrial Revolution in Britain II. Agricultural Revolution III. New Inventions IV. Social Consequences capitalism/capital entrepreneur drill seeder turnips/clover enclosure acts wages fly shuttle spinning jenny water frame Richard Arkwright cotton gin Eli Whitney steam engine James Watt factory system The Rocket Manchester “putting out” system Edwin Chadwick time clock First Factory Act (1802) 29 Week #8 Reaction and Revolution I. II. III. IV. V. Romanticism Classical Liberalism Radicalism Socialism Nationalism A. Germany VI. Forces of Reaction Ludwig von Beethoven genius Volk Volksgeist laissez-faire economics free trade tariff Jeremy Bentham republicanism Robert Owen New Lanark Louis Blanc social workshops J.G. Fichte Louis XVIII -- Charles X white terror Burschenschaft Count Clemens von Metternich Carlsbad Decrees The Corn Law Peterloo Massacre The Six Acts (1819) 30 Week #9 Revolutions and Marxism I. Forces of Reaction II. Revolutions of 1830 A. France B. Great Britain III. Revolutions of 1848 IV. Marx and Marxism Charles X of France July Revolution King Louis Philippe Robert Peel bobbies pocket borough Old Sarum Reform Bill of 1832 Factory Act of 1833 Louis Napoleon realism Auguste Comte Friedrich Engels means of production The Communist Manifesto bourgeousie proletariat dialectic “inevitable” class struggle 31 Week #10 Rise of Nationalism I. Unification of Italy A. Guiseppe Mazzini (1805-1872) B. Camillo di Cavour (1810-1857) C. Guiseppe Garibaldi (1807-1882) II. Unification of Germany A. Otto von Bismarck (1815-1898) B. Schleswig-Holstein C. Austro-Prussian War (1866) D. Franco-Prussian War (1870) Kingdom of Sardinia Piedmont & Savoy Risorgimento King Victor Emmanuel Crimean War (1856) Battle of Magenta Red Shirts Zollverein (customs union) Junker “constitutional struggle” “blood and iron” Helmuth von Moltke Kaiser Wilhelm I Reichstag 32 Week #11 Imperialism I. Imperialism A. Social Darwinism B. Colonialism II. Road to World War I A. Alliance System B. Arms Race C. Balkans Crisis colonialism new imperialism sphere of influence Social Darwinism Charles Darwin Origin of Species “white man’s burden” Cecil Rhodes Africaaners Boer War “sick man of Europe” Alsace-Lorraine Balkans Triple Alliance entente cordiale Triple Entente Wilhelm II Admiral Mahan Serbia Franz Ferdinand Sarajevo Black Hand 33 Week #12 The Great War (WWI) I. Schlieffen Plan II. Changing Face of War A. New weapons B. War at Sea III. The Butcher’s Bill IV. Treaty of Versailles risk fleet Black Hand Sarajevo Franz Ferdinand Gavrilo Princip “blank check” mobilization Battle of the Marne Battle of Masurian Lakes machine gun artillery shell mustard gas grenade trench warfare Verdun (1916) Battle of the Somme u-boat Lusitania (1915) Woodrow Wilson armistice Fourteen Points self-determination war guilt clause 34 Week #13 Russian Revolution & Interwar Years I. Revolutionaries A. Vladimir Ilyich Lenin B. Bolsheviks & Mensheviks II. Revolution of 1917 III. Bolshevik Revolution IV. Joseph Stalin A. Five Year Plans B. Purges ----------------------------------------------------------------mir Policy Duma planned economy Leon Trotsky collectivization Masurian Lakes Alexander Kerensky November Revolution nationalization Red Army war communism Red Terror U.S.S.R. (Union of Soviet Socialist Republics) (NEP) - New Economic 35 Week #14 World War II I. Hitler and the Nazi State II. Road to WWII III. Axis Triumphs IV. Nazi Invasion of Russia V. Entrance of the U.S into WWII National Socialist German Workers Party (Nazi) Weimar Republic Mein Kampf (My Struggle) hyperinflation Reichstag Führer Gestapo Maginot Line Anschluss Czechoslovakia Sudetenland Munich Conference Neville Chamberlain appeasement blitzkreig Non-Aggression Pact Phoney War Battle of Britain Winston Churchill Battle of Stalingrad Pearl Harbor “pocket battleships” Battle of Midway air superiority island hopping Normandy Invasion Hiroshima/Nagasaki 36 Week #15 The Cold War I. II. III. IV. V. The United Nations Origins of the Cold War Korean War The Communist World Collapse of Communism General Assembly Security Council Kremlin Truman Doctrine containment Marshall Plan Berlin Airlift NATO People’s Republic of China Gen. Douglas MacArthur Boris Yeltsin Demilitarized Zone (DMZ) Nikita Khrushchev Cuban Missile Crisis Leonid Brezhnev detente Mikhail Gorbachev perestroika glasnost 37 History 1110 Extended Syllabus Section D Document & Map Section 38 HOW TO READ A DOCUMENT AND USE IT EFFECTIVELY The long essays you will write on your exams in this course and on Paper #2 will test your ability to use primary source documents as evidence. Primary source documents are written works, whether letters, religious writings or any kind of government paperwork, which come from the actual time we are studying. For History 1110 most of our primary sources are found in the Kishlansky sourcebook. Primary sources are crucial to the study of history because they are the strongest evidence a historian can use to interpret a period of time. Why? Because these documents are like windows which look out into another time. They let us hear the voices of the people of the past. Historians have to read documents and understand what is important in them before they can use them to write about a person, event or period of time. Since historians are individuals, sometimes they disagree about what a document means or what in it is important. This is why different historians can read the same documents and sometimes come up with a different interpretation, or explanation, of why things happened. History is not written in stone; there is no one right interpretation of history, only stronger or weaker arguments. What makes a particular argument strong or weak? The answer is evidence. The best arguments make the best use of primary sources as evidence. How can you learn to make good use of primary sources? The secret is to know how to read a document effectively. The best way to do this is to answer four questions about it: 1) Author? Who wrote the document? Was the author one person or a group of people? Who was the author? Was it a man or a woman, a slave or free man, a rich person or poor? Answer these questions and you may begin to learn why they wrote what they did. 2) Audience? Who was the document written for? Was it for one person or a particular group of people? Knowing the audience helps you understand why the document was written in the way it was, and why it says certain things and not others. 3) Purpose? Why was the document written? This is a much harder question to answer. You need to know the author and the audience to have a chance to answer this one. Sometimes the document comes out and tells you the reason, but often you have to speculate (a fancy word for “guess”) on the purpose. The more you know about the document, the better chance you have of guessing the purpose for its being written. 4) Importance? Why is this document important? What is the most significant thing it tells us? This is the hardest question of all to answer because different documents have different importance to different people. The key here is to discover what is most important about the document so YOU can use it for your purposes. In the case of the documents in our course reader you need to understand what they tell you about the main themes (or objectives) of this course. Answering the first three questions helps you determine the answer to this last one. Remember, the goal is to really understand the documents in the course reader. Ask the above four questions about each one of these documents. Write down your answers. When you write a paper in this class, think about how you can arrange your evidence in a carefully constructed argument. Each document will contain multiple examples which you can use as evidence. Make sure you use each document and use it fully -- pull more than one example from it. 39 SUGGESTIONS FOR MAP IDENTIFICATIONS FOR HISTORY 1110 SEAS Greece Versailles Adriatic Sea Ireland Vienna Aegean Sea Italy Wittenberg Baltic Sea Netherlands Bay of Biscay Poland RIVERS Black Sea Portugal Danube River Caspian Sea Prussia Elbe River English Channel Russia Euphrates River Irish Sea Scotland Nile River Mediterranean Sea Serbia Oder River North Sea Spain Po River Tyrrhenian Sea Switzerland Rhine River Turkey Seine River Thames River ISLANDS Corsica CITIES Crete Athens MOUNTAINS Cyprus Berlin Alps Mtns. Sardinia Geneva Balkan Mtns. Sicily Istanbul Caucasus Mtns. Jerusalem Pyrenees Mtns. POLITICAL UNITS Lisbon Taurus Mtns Albania London Austria-Hungary Madrid SPECIAL REGIONS Belgium Moscow The Balkans Denmark Paris The Crimea Egypt Plymouth Palestine England Rome Piedmont-Savoy Finland Sarajevo Saxony France Stalingrad Syria Germany 40
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