512 McGRAW-HILL’S SAT Lesson 1: Subject-Verb Disagreement Finding Verbs The verb is the most important part of a sentence, but verbs aren’t always easy to spot. Consider the word swim in the sentences The ducks swim in the pond and The ducks love to swim. In the first sentence, swim is the verb. In the second sentence, swim is part of a noun phrase. (To swim is the thing that the ducks love.) So how do we spot verbs? A verb is what conveys the essential meaning of a clause (a string of words that convey an idea). Every idea requires a verb. The sentence The ducks swim in the pond says that Something swims somewhere, so the verb is swim. The sentence The ducks love to swim says that Something loves something, so the verb is love. Every verb requires a subject, that is, what does the verb. In both sentences, the subject is ducks. A verb may also require an object, that is, what receives the verb. In The ducks love to swim, the object is to swim, because that is the thing that is loved. Example: When David approached third base, the coach waved him home. This sentence contains two related ideas, so it contains two clauses, and therefore two verbs: Clause 1: When David approached third base Verb: approached Subject: David Object: third base Clause 2: the coach waved him home Verb: waved Subject: the coach Object: him Subject-Verb Disagreement (SVD) Every verb must agree in number (singular or plural) with its subject. Subject-verb disagreement is one of the most common errors tested for on the SAT. If you are a native speaker of English, the best way to check for subject-verb disagreement is to find the subject and verb (ignoring all the intervening words) and say them together. “third person singular” form—as in he spends—but people is plural, so the phrase should be people spend. Tricky Plurals and Singulars These rules will help you to check whether a verb agrees in “number” with its subject: Phrases like Sam and Bob are plural, but phrases like Sam, in addition to Bob, are singular. Phrases that start as well as . . . , together with . . . , along with . . . , or in addition to . . . are interrupters, which are not part of the main subject. These words are singular: each, anyone, anybody, anything, another, neither, either, every, everyone, someone, no one, somebody, everything, little, and much. To check for SVD, you can replace any of them with it. These words are plural: phenomena (singular: phenomenon), media (singular: medium), data (singular: datum), and criteria (singular: criterion). To check for SVD, you can replace any of them with they. All of the following can be either singular or plural, according to the noun that follows the of: none (of), any (of), some (of), most (of), more (of), and all (of). Verbs that follow subjects of the form either A or B and neither A nor B must agree with B, the noun closer to the verb. Inverted Sentences Usually the subject comes before the verb, but inverted clauses have the subject after the verb. For instance, sentences that start There is . . . or There are . . . are inverted. To check subject-verb agreement in these sentences, first “uninvert” them. Example: The people, who are easily persuaded by corporatesponsored media, spends very little time analyzing issues. The subject of the verb spends is people. But people spends sounds wrong, because spends is the Example: There are many flies in the barn. (inverted) V S Many flies are in the barn. (uninverted) S V CHAPTER 15 / ESSENTIAL GRAMMAR SKILLS 513 Concept Review 1: Subject-Verb Disagreement Next to each noun or noun phrase, write “S” if it is singular or “P” if it is plural. 1. Neither rain nor snow __________ 2. Crowd of rowdy fans __________ 3. Media __________ 4. Criterion __________ 5. One or two __________ 6. Everything __________ 7. Either of the candidates __________ 8. Phenomena __________ Circle the subject in each sentence, and choose the correct verb. 9. Neither of the cars (is/are) equipped with antilock brakes. 10. The flock of geese (was/were) startled by the shotgun blast. 11. The data on my computer (was/were) completely erased when the power failed. 12. Mathematics and history (is/are) my favorite subjects. 13. None of the roast (was/were) eaten. 14. All of the games (was/were) played on real grass fields. 15. Pride and Prejudice (is/are) my favorite Jane Austen novel. 16. Neither of the twins (is/are) allergic to penicillin. 17. Much of what I hear in those lectures (goes/go) in one ear and out the other. 18. Amy, along with Jamie and Jen, (is/are) applying to Mount Holyoke. 19. None of the books (was/were) considered fit for public consumption. 20. All of the eggplant (was/were) used to make the sauce. 21. Amid the lilies and wildflowers (was/were) one solitary rose. 22. Either Ben or his brothers (is/are) in charge of bringing the drinks. 23. There (is/are) hardly even a speck of dirt left on the carpet. 24. “Stop right there!” (shouts/shout) the Bailey brothers, who are standing in front of me. 25. Either the Donovans or Dave (is/are) going to bring the plates. 26. There (is/are) at least a hundred people here. “Uninvert” the following sentences so that the verb follows the subject, then choose the correct verb form. 27. There (is/are), in my opinion, far too many smokers in this restaurant. _________________________________________________________________________________________________ 28. Over that hill (is/are) thousands of bison. _________________________________________________________________________________________________ 29. Riding on the bus among the children (was/were) over a dozen commuters. _________________________________________________________________________________________________ 30. Never before (has/have) there been such voices heard here. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 31. Absent from the article (was/were) any mention of the director’s previous Broadway failures. _________________________________________________________________________________________________ 514 MCGRAW-HILL’S SAT Worksheet 1: Subject-Verb Disagreement Label each verb in the following sentences with a “V” and each subject with an “S.” If any verbs are incorrect, cross them out and write the correct form in the blank. 1. We were horrified to discover that there was more than three mice living in the attic. _______________ 2. Either the president or one of her aides are going to coordinate the project. _______________ 3. There is nearly always two or three guards posted at each entrance. _______________ 4. Every player on both the Falcons and the Rockets were at the party after the game. _______________ 5. There has been a theater and a toy store in the mall ever since it opened. _______________ 6. Either Eric or his brother is hosting the party this year. _______________ 7. There is no fewer than six crayons in this box. _______________ 8. The therapy can resume as planned because neither of the twins are allergic to penicillin. _______________ 9. The proceeds from the sale of every auctioned item goes to charity. _______________ 10. Economics, particularly with its dependence on the behavior of consumers and producers, has always struck me as more of a human science than a mathematical one. _______________ 11. There is more than three years remaining on her contract. _______________ 12. Neither of the girls were frightened by the wild animals that scurried incessantly past their tent. _______________ 13. The technology behind high-definition television, DVDs, and CDs have transformed nearly every aspect of the home entertainment industry. _______________ 14. Every player on both teams were concerned about the goalie’s injury. _______________ 15. The company’s sponsorship of charitable foundations and mentorship programs have garnered many commendations from philanthropic organizations. _______________ 16. Neither the children nor their parents utters a word when Mrs. Denny tells her stories. _______________ 17. How important is your strength training and your diet to your daily regimen? _______________ 520 MCGRAW-HILL’S SAT Lesson 3: Parallelism The Law of Parallelism I like pizza. I like to swim. When you compare or list items in a sentence, the items should have the same grammatical form. That is, if the first item is an infinitive (or a gerund, or an adjective, etc.), the other item(s) should be, too. Wrong: She hated to take charge, draw attention to herself, and she hated seeming like a know-it-all. The three items have different forms. The sentence sounds best if they are all gerunds. Right: Wrong: She hated taking charge, drawing attention to herself, and seeming like a know-it-all. Believe it or not, I like to read more than I like going to parties. The first item is an infinitive, but the second is a gerund. Make them the same form. Right: Believe it or not, I like to read more than I like to go to parties. Also right: Believe it or not, I like reading more than I like going to parties. Parallel Constructions What kind of word is pizza? Obviously a noun. But notice that in the sentences above, to swim (infinitive) and swimming (gerund) are playing the same role as pizza did in the first sentence. So they must be nouns too! Usually, gerunds and infinitives are interchangeable. But in some situations, one is preferable to the other. • The gerund often indicates a general class of activity, while the infinitive indicates a specific activity. Good: Kayaking (not to kayak) is a healthful sport, but can sometimes be dangerous. Good: Curtis and Dan want to kayak (not kayaking) this afternoon. • The infinitive indicates a stronger connection between subject and action than does the gerund. Unclear: A is like B neither A nor B the more A, the less B not A but B A more than B either A or B the better A, the better B less A than B prefer A to B both A and B not only A, but also B more A than B Infinitives vs. Gerunds Infinitives are verblike phrases like to run, to see, and to think, which usually act as nouns. Gerunds are also verblike words, like running, seeing, and thinking, and they also often act as nouns. Cara has always loved dancing. Does Cara simply like to watch dancing, or does she herself do the dancing? Clearer: In all constructions like the following, the words or phrases that replace A and B must be parallel. I like swimming. Cara has always loved to dance. This sentence clearly indicates that Cara herself dances. • The infinitive often indicates purpose or intention better than does the gerund. Awkward: We have supplied cars for transporting the guests back to their hotel rooms. Better: We have supplied cars to transport the guests back to their hotel rooms. CHAPTER 15 / ESSENTIAL GRAMMAR SKILLS 521 Concept Review 3: Parallelism 1. In what situations do you have to obey the law of parallelism? In each of the sentences below, circle the words or phrases that are parallel, then write the form of those words or phrases (adjectives, prepositional phrases, gerunds, infinitives, nouns, etc.) in the blank. 2. You can register for the test by mail, by phone, or on the Web. ____________________ 3. Having good study practices is even more important than working hard. ____________________ 4. The more you get to know her, the more you will like her. ____________________ 5. The produce is not only exceptionally fresh but also reasonably priced. ____________________ 6. The show is less a concert than it is a 3-hour nightmare. ____________________ Complete each of the sentences below with the appropriate word or phrase—infinitive or gerund—using the given verb. 7. (exercise) ____________________ is essential, but so is (eat) ____________________ intelligently. 8. The purpose of this trip is (show) ____________________ you what life was like in the 18th century. 9. I have always loved (dance) ____________________, although my condition has always prevented me from doing it myself. 10. Is it better (study) ____________________ a little each night, or a lot the night before? 11. The director called a meeting (discuss) ____________________ the coordination of the marketing phase. Correct any infinitive/gerund problems in the sentences below. 12. The defendant was unwilling to give up his right of having his lawyer present at all questioning. 13. I would not dream to try out for the team until I have learned to throw a football. 14. Even the reinforced concrete breakwater could not prevent the water to inundate the village. 15. Within the next three weeks, we plan having all of the work on the roof completed. Fix the parallelism errors in the following sentences. 16. I like working with Miss Bennett because she is very supportive and has a lot of knowledge. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 17. I can’t decide whether I should give Maria the tickets or Caitlyn. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 18. The movie was both beautifully directed and the acting was a joy to watch. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 524 MCGRAW-HILL’S SAT Lesson 4: Comparison Problems Illogical Comparisons Any items being compared in a sentence must be logically comparable, that is, in the same general category. Always compare apples to apples, not apples to car batteries! Also, comparisons must obey the law of parallelism. Wrong: Her chances of getting an A aren’t much better than the lottery. Chances and the lottery aren’t comparable things! We must compare chances to chances. Right: Her chances of getting an A aren’t much better than her chances of winning the lottery. It is always illogical to say that something is different from itself. Watch out for sneaky contrasts like this: Wrong: She has played in more concerts than any cellist in her school. Of course, she hasn’t played in more concerts than herself! Right: She has played in more concerts than any other cellist in her school. Fewer/Less, Number/Amount, and Many/Much Use the words fewer, number, or many only in reference to countable things (like cars, dollars, and popsicles) and less, amount, or much only in reference to uncountable things (like traffic, money, and food). It is a common mistake to use less when you should use fewer. Wrong: There have been a lot less fans at the games ever since the owners raised ticket prices. Since fans can be counted, less doesn’t work. Use fewer instead. Right: There have been a lot fewer fans at the games ever since the owners raised ticket prices. Wrong: The team owners showed concern about the increasing amount of dangerously rowdy fans. Right: The team owners showed concern about the increasing number of dangerously rowdy fans. Between/Among, More/Most, and -er/-est Use between, more, and any -er adjectives only when comparing exactly two things. Use among, most, and -est adjectives when comparing more than two things. Wrong: The two superpowers seemed to be in a constant battle to see who was strongest. Right: The two superpowers seemed to be in a constant battle to see who was stronger. Wrong: Of the dozens of students in the club, Deborah was the more popular. Right: Of the dozens of students in the club, Deborah was the most popular. Number Shift Things that you compare should, if possible, agree in number. Be sure they are both plural or both singular. Wrong: They were both hoping to be a winner. Right: They were both hoping to be winners. Wrong: The sailors’ main point of reference was the two lighthouse beacons. Right: The sailors’ main points of reference were the two lighthouse beacons. CHAPTER 15 / ESSENTIAL GRAMMAR SKILLS 525 Concept Review 4: Comparison Problems 1. How do you know whether to use fewer or less in a comparison? 2. How do you know whether to use more or most in a comparison? In each sentence, underline any items that are being compared or equated. Below the sentence, state whether the comparison is logical or illogical. If it is illogical or contains another error in comparison, correct the sentence. 3. The critics’ guild praised the show, saying that it was consistently more intelligent and provocative than anything on the air. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4. Team unity and commitment to practice were regarded by the players as the key to their success. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5. Mathematics lessons in Japanese classrooms, unlike American classrooms, are often focused on solving a single complex problem rather than many simplistic problems. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6. Increasingly, modern singers, like Gregorian chanters, are becoming adept at melisma, the singing of many notes on a single syllable. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7. The electric-combustion engines of the new hybrid cars burn much more cleanly and efficiently than conventional cars. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. To the critics of the time, the surrealists were as inscrutable, if not more so, than the dadaists. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. In modern warfare, unlike the past, combatants rarely meet face to face, and are detected as often by video as by sight. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10. Most people vastly prefer turning the pages of a real book to scrolling through the screens of an electronic novel. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 526 MCGRAW-HILL’S SAT Worksheet 4: Comparison Problems Correct any errors in the comparisons in the following sentences. 1. I prefer a lot of modern poetry to Shakespeare. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. Her suitcase would not close because she had packed too much of her towels into it. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. The year-end bonus was equally divided between Parker, Herriot, and me. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4. Many students wanted to be a lifeguard at the club. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5. The toughest thing about her class is you have to do tons of homework every night. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6. Mr. Forstadt’s comments, like so many coaches, didn’t spare the players’ feelings in the least. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7. After several days in the woods, we became concerned that we had packed a lot less meals than we would need. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. Even in the 21st century, women throughout the globe are treated like a slave, or, worse yet, like a nonperson. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. I’ve always preferred observational humor to those quirky prop comedians. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10. It was remarkable that the children had donated so much toys to others who were barely needier than they. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11. The formal structure of the sonnet imposes far more discipline on the mind of the poet than formless free verse. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12. The theories of true anarchists, unlike modern antistatists, do not promote social chaos, but rather organization without authority. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13. Those passengers with a disability will be permitted to board the plane first. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14. The reason we lost the game is because our captain had torn his ACL. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15. Voter apathy and cold weather were a reason that turnout was so poor at this year’s election. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 16. Having studied Faulkner and Hemingway, I’ve come to believe that Hemingway is the best writer, although Faulkner tells the best stories. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 528 MCGRAW-HILL’S SAT Lesson 5: Pronoun-Antecedent Disagreement Pronouns A pronoun is a word (such as it, he, she, what, or that) that substitutes for a noun. A pronoun is either definite (like it, you, she, and I) and refers to a specified thing (or person or place or idea) or indefinite (like anyone, neither, and those), and does not refer to a specific thing (or person or place or idea). Definite Pronouns and Antecedents Every definite pronoun refers to (or takes the place of) a noun in the sentence, called the pronoun antecedent. The pronoun must agree in number (singular or plural) and kind (personal or impersonal) with its antecedent. unknown, as in Where are my keys? But sometimes it can be used as a definite pronoun. When it is, remember two points: Use what only to refer to a thing, where to refer to a place, when to refer to a time, why to refer to a reason, who to refer to a person, and how to refer to an explanation. Wrong: An anachronism is when something doesn’t fit in with its time period. An anachronism isn’t a time, is it? It’s a thing. Right: An anachronism is something that doesn’t fit in with its time period. Wrong: Everyone should brush their teeth three times a day. Because everyone is singular, their is the wrong pronoun. When following a comma, an interrogative pronoun usually takes the immediately preceding noun as its antecedent. Everyone should brush his or her teeth three times a day. Wrong: The actors will design their own sets, who are participating in the workshop. This is awkward because the sets are not what the pronoun who is logically referring to. Right: Wrong: David was the one that first spotted the error. The pronoun that is impersonal, but of course, David is a person. Right: David was the one who first spotted the error. The antecedent of a definite pronoun should be clear, not ambiguous. Wrong: Roger told Mike that he was going to start the next game. Who was going to start? Roger or Mike? Right: Mike learned that he was going to start the next game when Roger told him so. Interrogative Pronouns An interrogative pronoun (like what, where, why, and when) usually asks a question or refers to an Right: The actors who are participating in the workshop will design their own sets. Pronoun Consistency Be consistent with any pronouns you use to refer to the same thing more than once in a sentence. Wrong: Even when one is dieting, you should always try to get enough vitamins. It sounds like we can’t make up our minds about whom we’re talking to! Right: Even when one is dieting, one should always try to get enough vitamins. CHAPTER 15 / ESSENTIAL GRAMMAR SKILLS 529 Concept Review 5: Pronoun-Antecedent Disagreement 1. Name three definite pronouns: ______________________________ 2. Name three indefinite pronouns: ______________________________ 3. Every ____________________ pronoun requires a specific antecedent. 4. What is an antecedent? __________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________ After each interrogative pronoun, write what kind of noun it must represent. 5. what ____________________ 6. where ____________________ 7. how ____________________ 8. when ____________________ 9. why ____________________ 10. who ____________________ Circle all pronouns in the following sentences, and make any corrections that may be necessary. 11. There are too many legal situations where misrepresentation seems to be standard practice. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12. If a student wants to memorize the meaning of a word, you should begin by understanding the concept it represents. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13. Caroline passed the phone to Julia, but she couldn’t bring herself to speak. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14. Neither of the dogs wanted to give up their territory to the other. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15. David volunteered to be a ticket taker, not wanting to be the one that cleaned the aisles after the show. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 16. They lost the game, which is why they didn’t celebrate afterwards. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 544 MCGRAW-HILL’S SAT Lesson 9: Tricky Tenses Verb Tenses Example: The tense of a verb is what indicates its place and extent in time. There are two common situations in which tenses can be tricky: those with “perfect” verbs and those with “timeless” verbs. “Perfect” Verbs You use the perfect tenses whenever you need to indicate that some event is completed before some other point in time. (Here, the word perfect means complete, not flawless.) They are usually relative tenses, that is, they show a particular relationship to another verb or reference to time within the sentence. All perfect tenses use the helping verb to have, as in we had walked, we have walked, and we will have walked. We have taken only two tests this semester. (The taking of the tests did not happen at one specific time, but over an extended time in the past.) The future perfect tense shows that something will have been completed before some time in the future. Example: By Friday, we will have completed the entire project. now future perfect future will have completed Friday time The past perfect tense shows that an event had been completed before another point in the past. You can think of it as the “past past” tense. Participles must be “perfect,” too, when they indicate an action completed before another action. Example: By the time we arrived at the reception, Glen had already given the toast. past perfect past Example: now time had given arrived When a sentence contains two past-tense verbs, check whether one event was completed before the other. If so, the earlier event should be given the past perfect tense. The present perfect tense, unlike the other perfect tenses, usually does not show completion, but that an event either extends from the past to the present or occurs at an extended or unspecified time in the past. You can think of it as the “past plus present” tense or the “unspecific past.” Example: She has been so nice to me. (This means she was nice to me and also she still is nice to me. It combines past and present.) Having walked all night, we were desperate to find rest at dawn. (The walking was completed by dawn, so the participle is “past perfect.”) “Timeless” Verbs When you need to discuss a theory, an artistic work, or a general nonhistorical fact, the verb that describes it is “timeless” and should take the present tense by default. Wrong: The ancient Greek philosopher Zeno believed that all motion was an illusion. Right: The ancient Greek philosopher Zeno believed that all motion is an illusion. The believing is in the past, since Zeno’s long gone, but the theory is timeless. CHAPTER 15 / ESSENTIAL GRAMMAR SKILLS 545 Concept Review 9: Tricky Tenses 1. When are the perfect tenses used? 2. What kinds of ideas are conveyed by “timeless” present-tense verbs? Circle the correct verb in each of the following sentences. 3. Glen (came/has come) to work exhausted this morning because he (stayed/had stayed) up all last night. 4. Already, and without (spending/having spent) so much as an hour on research, Dale (wrote/has written) the first draft of her essay. 5. (Developing/Having developed) the first compressed-air automobile, he (hoped/had hoped) to reveal it to the world at the exposition. 6. Shakespeare’s tragedies (were/are) concerned with the deepest aspects of the human condition. The meaning of the following sentence is ambiguous. His legs ached because he ran farther than he ever had [run] before. Rewrite it using the correct tenses to indicate that 7. The aching started before he finished running: _______________________________________________________ 8. The aching started after he finished running: _________________________________________________________ Fix any tense problems in the following sentences. 9. Right after school, we had gone to Mario’s for a pizza and a few Cokes. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10. Finding no evidence against the accused, the detective had to release him. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11. Being captured by the rebels, David soon began to fear he would never escape. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12. When I got home, I wrote an essay on the baseball game that I saw that afternoon. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ PowerScore SAT Sentence Improvement Practice The following sentences test correctness and effectiveness of expression. Part of each sentence or the entire sentence is underlined; beneath each sentence are five ways of phrasing the underlined material. Choice (A) repeats the original phrasing; the other four choices are different. If you think the original phrasing produces a better sentence than any of the alternatives, select choice (A); if not, select one of the other choices. In making your selection, follow the requirements of standard written English; that is, pay attention to grammar, choice of words, sentence construction, and punctuation. Your selection should result in the most effective sentence—clear and precise, without awkwardness or ambiguity. 1. Due to last year’s active hurricane season, the National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration has urged coastal residents to develop a family evacuation plan, organize important documents and valuables, creating a disaster supply kit for use in the car and at the evacuation destination. (A) (B) (C) (D) (E) 2. 4. (A) Freud’s belief that the unconscious was solely a storehouse of repressed memories (B) Freud and his belief that the unconscious was solely a storehouse of repressed memories (C) the belief of Freud that states the unconscious is solely a storehouse of repressed memories (D) Freud, who believed that the unconscious was solely a storehouse of repressed memories (E) Freud and the belief that the unconscious solely stores of repressed memories creating a disaster supply kit for use to create a disaster supply kit for use creating a disaster supply kit for using and create a disaster supply kit for using and create a disaster supply kit for use While global warming has already made the Hudson River a seeming fragile ecosystem, the introduction of invasive species has the potential to destroy nearly all of the aquatic plants and animals that inhabit the river. 5. (A) While global warming has already made the Hudson River a seeming fragile ecosystem (B) While global warming has already made the Hudson River a seemingly fragile ecosystem (C) Global warming has already made the Hudson River a seemingly fragile ecosystem (D) Global warming has already made the Hudson River a seeming fragile ecosystem; (E) Although global warming has made the Hudson River a seemingly fragile ecosystem 3. Reports from New York and Paris indicate that this season’s style is an eclectic mix of fashions from past decades, ranging from the empire-waist dresses of the relaxed and liberated 1960s and the legwarmers of the excessive and indulgent 1980s. (A) (B) (C) (D) (E) and with to and to from Copyright © 2006 by PowerScore Unlike Freud’s belief that the unconscious was solely a storehouse of repressed memories, Jung asserted that the unconscious also contained creative reservoirs. The blue whale was thriving in all of the world’s oceans until the turn of the century, at which time they became hunted to the point of extinction. (A) The blue whale was thriving in all of the world’s oceans until the turn of the century (B) Blue whales were thriving in all of the world’s oceans until the turn of the century (C) The blue whale had been thriving in all of the world’s oceans until the turn of the century (D) At the turn of the century, blue whales were thriving in all of the world’s oceans (E) Blue whales had been thriving in all of the world’s oceans up until the turn of the century 6. Scientists believe that all domestic dogs originally have descended from three dogs that lived in China over 15,000 years ago. (A) have descended from three dogs that lived in China (B) descended by three dogs that lived in China (C) descended from three dogs that lived in China (D) have descended from three dogs living in China (E) descended from three dogs that had lived in China Page 1 06_Part06B 8/16/05 2:58 PM Page 239 PRACTICE TEST B 10. Reciting poems, one of the earliest forms of entertainment, it increased in complexity as well as sophistication as time went on. (A) entertainment, it increased in complexity as well as sophistication (B) entertainment, they increased in both complexity and sophistication (C) entertainment which both increased in complexity as well as sophistication (D) entertainment, and they increased in their complexity as well as growing more sophisticated (E) entertainment, increased in complexity and sophistication 239 11. Thomas Wolfe, the early 20th-century American writer often confused with the contemporary novelist Tom Wolfe, grew up in Asheville, North Carolina. (A) writer often confused with the contemporary novelist Tom Wolfe, grew up in Asheville, North Carolina (B) writer, having grown up in Asheville, North Carolina, is often mistaken with the contemporary novelist Tom Wolfe (C) writer, grew up in Asheville, North Carolina, but is often confused with the contemporary novelist Tom Wolfe (D) writer has often been confused with Tom Wolfe, the contemporary novelist, growing up in Asheville, North Carolina (E) writer, while growing up in Asheville, North Carolina, was often confused with the contemporary novelist Tom Wolfe IDENTIFYING SENTENCE ERRORS Directions: The underlined and lettered parts of each sentence below may contain an error in grammar, usage, word choice (diction), or expression (idiom). Read each sentence carefully and identify which item, if any, contains an error. Indicate your choice by filling in the corresponding space on the answer sheet. No sentence contains more than one error. Some sentences may contain no error. In that case, the correct choice will always be E (No error). EXAMPLE Jill went speedily to the crest of the A B hill in a more faster time than her C D friend, Jack. No error. E 12. If Toby McGuire was alive during the heyday A B of Hollywood’s debonair leading actors, he probably would have been considered too naïve and boyish to succeed as a big star. C D No error. E ANSWER A B C D E 13. Of the two Hemingway novels I have read, A I like A Farewell to Arms the best, not only B because of its structure but also because of C its fascinating story. No error. D E 06_Part06B 240 8/16/05 2:58 PM Page 240 WRITING WORKBOOK FOR THE NEW SAT 14. Telemarketers are finding greater success A making sales when they phoned customers B C in the morning rather than late in the day. D No error. E 15. Child psychologists will tell you that young A children which are pushed into activities B C prematurely may suffer the pain of failure D and frustration. No error. E 16. Although Martin Luther King’s birthday is A B January 15th, it is celebrated on the third C Monday of January, regardless of the date. D No error. E 17. Work in specialized fields such as bacteriology, A public health, and physics require at least a B bachelor’s degree, and for a career in management or research, a master’s degree or even a doctorate is required. No error. C D E 18. The governor has often proposed reductions A in the sales tax because consumers can benefit B from this whenever they go to the store. C D No error. E 19. In his memoir, Baker tells stories about the time A B before he entered high school, when he is having to deliver newspapers to the huge C estates and mansions that lined the riverfront. D No error. E 20. Even after Elvis died it was rumored that A B he was seen roaming the land, driving his car, showing up unexpectedly at rock-n-roll C concerts, and he made his countless fans very D excited. No error. E 21. To the disappointment of the crowd, neither A B the president nor any of his aides were able to C D attend the ceremony. No error. E 22. Melissa was taught early in life that, A regardless about her feelings, she should B always wear a smile, try to be cheerful and C upbeat, and never say anything bad about someone else. No error. D E 23. As a freshman becomes adjusted to the A routines and demands of college life, one may B realize that the rigors of high school were C D good preparation. No error. E 06_Part06B 8/16/05 2:58 PM Page 241 PRACTICE TEST B 24. The collective thoughts, reflections, memories, and opinions expressed by the seniors in the A pages of the student magazine reveal the B C diversity and uniqueness that characterizes D Brookdale High School. No error. E 25. Many teachers advocate changing the way A young children learn to read, theorizing that B C they will be more successful in the long run. D No error. E 26. No matter how careful passengers are A B screened at the airport, a determined terrorist C will inevitably find a way to board an D airplane. No error. E 241 27. At the start of the hockey season, the coach A paid a visit to my parents and I to explain B C why he cut me from the varsity. No error. D E 28. When Annie set out to buy an affordable A automobile, she decided to look for a car B different than those that her friends were C D driving. No error. E 29. The award-winning Sound of Music has been seen by more moviegoers than A B any musical film in the history of the movies. C D No error. E 06_Part06B 244 8/16/05 2:58 PM Page 244 WRITING WORKBOOK FOR THE NEW SAT Section 3 Multiple-Choice Questions TIME—10 MINUTES IMPROVING SENTENCES Directions: The underlined sentences and sentence parts below may contain errors in standard English, including awkward or ambiguous expression, poor word choice (diction), incorrect sentence structure, or faulty grammar, usage, and punctuation. Read each sentence carefully and identify which of the five alternative versions most effectively and correctly expresses the meaning of the underlined material. Indicate your choice by filling in the corresponding space on the answer sheet. Choice A always repeats the original. Choose A if none of the other choices improves the original sentence. 1. A teacher’s job is to set a good example for children as well as teaching them the material they need to know. (A) (B) (C) (D) (E) as well as teaching them as well as to teach them and they also teach them and as well, teach them also also teaching them 2. The strength and appearance of denim fabric account for its popularity among campers, hikers, and other outdoor enthusiasts. (A) (B) (C) (D) (E) account for its popularity accounts for its popularity account for their popularity explains why it is popular are the reasons for their popularity 3. In his speech, the candidate made a comment of spending sleepless nights worrying over the large number of people without health insurance. (A) (B) (C) (D) (E) made a comment of spending commented on the spending of his gave a comment that he spent commented on his spending made a comment stating about spending 4. As the sales of SUVs continue to rise, automakers asserting that it is working on the improvement of gas mileage by spending profits on research and development. (A) asserting that it is working on the improvement of gas mileage by (B) asserting that work on improving gas mileage by (C) assert that they will improve gas mileage and (D) asserts that improving gas mileage by (E) assert that they will improve gas mileage by 5. During Andy’s freshman year in college, his academic advisor suggested that he consider majoring in music, English, creative writing, or studying medicine. (A) (B) (C) (D) (E) or studying medicine or working in the field of medicine or a medical field or a profession in medicine and to think about attending medical school 06_Part06B 8/16/05 2:58 PM Page 245 PRACTICE TEST B 6. The game warden believes that bow-hunting is safer than a rifle. (A) bow-hunting is safer than a rifle (B) hunting with a bow is safer than hunting with a rifle (C) bows is more safe than rifles in hunting (D) bow-hunting is more safe than hunting with a rifle (E) a bow in hunting is safer than a rifle in hunting. 7. Convinced that her all-night study sessions on Thursdays enabled her to pass math tests on Friday, Susan is shocked to learn that last week she got an F. (A) Susan is shocked to learn that last week she got an F. (B) Susan was shocked to learn that she got an F last week (C) shock is what Susan had when learning that last week she got an F (D) it is a shock for Susan to learn that last week she receives an F (E) last week’s F shocked Susan 8. When someone works as a ranger in a national park, you will be employed by the U.S. Department of the Interior, a branch of the federal government. (A) (B) (C) (D) (E) you will be employed by it is being employed by you would be an employee of he or she is employed by the employment is being by 9. Having ordered a cup of black coffee at the Starbucks counter, the fumes smelled pleasing to Howard. (A) (B) (C) (D) (E) the fumes smelled pleasing to Howard the fumes’ smell pleased Howard smells from the fumes pleased Howard Howard smelled the fumes pleasingly Howard was pleased by the smell of the fumes 245 10. When Charlotte arrived at school on Tuesday morning, her friend Thalia told her that her first period class had been cancelled. (A) Thalia told her that her first period class had been cancelled (B) from Thalia she learned that her first period class had been cancelled (C) Charlotte was told by Thalia that her first period class had been cancelled (D) Thalia said that Charlotte’s first period class had been cancelled (E) hearing from Thalia about the cancellation of her first period class 11. When you plan a plane trip, you choose a flight, make a reservation, and then that reservation entitles you to a seat on the aircraft. (A) make a reservation, and then that reservation entitles you to a seat (B) and make a reservation that entitles you to a seat (C) and make a reservation, then you are entitled to a seat (D) and make a reservation, then entitling you to a seat (E) and make a reservation, you are entitled to a seat then 12. Better military equipment, such as stronger bullet-proof vests, has been valuable so that it helps soldiers feel more secure when they go into battle. (A) (B) (C) (D) (E) valuable so that it helps valuable because it helps valuable, even though it will help valuable in order that they help valuable for it to help 06_Part06B 246 8/16/05 2:58 PM Page 246 WRITING WORKBOOK FOR THE NEW SAT 13. The president of the company grew up in poverty, he gradually turned his life around. (A) company grew up in poverty, he gradually (B) company, having his growing up in poverty, gradually (C) company grew up in poverty, but he gradually (D) company, having grown up poor, but he gradually (E) company, poverty stricken while he grew up, he gradually 14. This book shows readers not only what might happen if they try to deal with the problem by themselves but it’s all right to seek help. (A) (B) (C) (D) but it’s all right to seek help but explains that help is all right to seek explaining that it’s all right to seek help and also explains that it’s all right to seek help (E) but also explains that it’s all right to seek help End of Section 3. Do not return to Sections 1 or 2. END OF WRITING TEST. 06_Part06C 272 8/16/05 2:59 PM Page 272 WRITING WORKBOOK FOR THE NEW SAT Section 3 Multiple-Choice Questions TIME—10 MINUTES IMPROVING SENTENCES Directions: The underlined sentences and sentence parts below may contain errors in standard English, including awkward or ambiguous expression, poor word choice (diction), incorrect sentence structure, or faulty grammar, usage, and punctuation. Read each sentence carefully and identify which of the five alternative versions most effectively and correctly expresses the meaning of the underlined material. Indicate your choice by filling in the corresponding space on the answer sheet. Choice A always repeats the original. Choose A if none of the other choices improves the original sentence. 1. During this decade, paying for a college education is more difficult for the average family than it was in the past. (A) (B) (C) (D) (E) than it was in the past than for past families than the past than families in the past than it used to be in the past 2. Gwen Harper, one of the most popular students in the school, winning the election for class president three years in a row. (A) school, winning the election for class president three years in a row (B) school, winning the election for class president, which she won three years in a row (C) school, and she won the election for class president three years in a row (D) school, won the election for class president three years in a row (E) school, three years in a row she won the election for class president. 3. The novel as we know it today came into being early in the 17th century with Don Quixote by Miguel Cervantes, and Cervantes was clearly ahead of his time. (A) Cervantes, and Cervantes was clearly ahead of his time (B) Cervantes, who was clearly ahead of his time (C) Cervantes, being clearly ahead of his time (D) Cervantes, which novel was clearly ahead of its time (E) Cervantes, Cervantes was clearly ahead of his time 4. Not all athletes who have high motivation or are significantly talented in a sport can be assured of a place on an Olympic team. (A) have high motivation or are significantly talented (B) have either high motivation or else talent in significant amounts (C) are highly motivated or who have significant talent instead (D) are highly motivated or significantly talented (E) have high motivation or else significant amounts of talent 06_Part06C 8/16/05 2:59 PM Page 273 PRACTICE TEST C 5. Although she dislikes city living and has never been east of the Mississippi, Sarah intends to move to New York or Boston after she graduates from college. (A) she dislikes city living and has never been east of the Mississippi (B) she is without liking for city living nor having been east of the Mississippi (C) she dislikes city living nor has she visited there (D) she does not like city living and has never been a visitor (E) it is without a liking for city living nor having visited there 6. When you visit a foreign country, we can almost always find someone who speaks English. (A) (B) (C) (D) When you visit a foreign country, we can When visiting a foreign country, one can When we visit a foreign country, one can While you are on a visit to a foreign country, one can (E) During our visiting of a foreign country, we 7. Having Kelly Collins as our talented coordinator and the enthusiastic support of the community and the Chamber of Commerce helped to make the town’s Octoberfest a rousing success. (A) Having Kelly Collins as our talented coordinator (B) The having of the coordinating talent of Kelly Collins (C) Kelly Collins as our talented coordinator (D) To be coordinated by talented Kelly Collins (E) The coordination talents of Kelly Collins 273 8. When Beethoven’s music was introduced to the public for the first time, they found it difficult to understand and unpleasant to listen to. (A) When Beethoven’s music was introduced to the public for the first time, they found it (B) When it was introduced to the public for the first time, they found Beethoven’s music (C) When the music of Beethoven was introduced, the public found it (D) When they were introduced to Beethoven’s music, the public had found it (E) Introducing Beethoven’s music for the first time, the public found it 9. Two Coast Guard crews were dispatched to check an anonymous informant’s warning, and he had observed a boatload of illegal immigrants approaching Florida’s west coast. (A) an anonymous informant’s warning, and he (B) the warning of an anonymous informant that he (C) that an anonymous warning of an informant he (D) the anonymous informant’s warning saying he (E) information anonymously warning that he 10. Therefore, I admire organizations that speak up for fairness and democratic principles, even if it is motivated by selfishness. (A) even if it is motivated by selfishness (B) even when their motives are selfish (C) even when the motive is to be for its own selfish aims (D) whether or not it’s for their own selfish aims (E) whether their motive is for selfish aims or not for selfish aims 06_Part06C 274 8/16/05 2:59 PM Page 274 WRITING WORKBOOK FOR THE NEW SAT 11. If you wish to study transcendental meditation, which is when a person completely relaxes their mind and body, you will find several relevant books on the shelf. (A) which is when a person completely relaxes their mind and body (B) which is when a person completely relaxes his mind and body (C) which is when someone completely relax their mind and body (D) the complete relaxation of the mind and body (E) which completely relaxes their mind and body 12. Women in a hunter-gatherer society led demanding lives, the reason was that they collected plant food for the family while protecting herself and her children from wild beasts. (A) lives, the reason was that they collected plant food for the family while protecting herself and her children (B) lives, it was that she had to collect plant food for the family while also protecting herself and her children (C) lives; collecting plant food for the family while protecting herself and her children (D) lives because its responsibilities included collecting plant food for the family while protecting themselves and their children (E) lives because they not only collected plant food for the family but also protected themselves and their children 13. Nursing homes that violate regulations have become an important statewide problem, and it has become a hot political issue. (A) an important statewide problem, and it has become (B) a problem of statewide importance, that is (C) a problem of statewide importance; it was, therefore (D) an important statewide problem that is (E) an important statewide problem, which they have become 14. Of all the roads making up America’s Interstate Highway System, more people drive on I-95 than any highway. (A) more people drive on I-95 than any highway (B) travelers are driving on I-95 in the largest amount (C) the largest amount of drivers are on 1-95 (D) I-95 is the more heavily traveled (E) I-95 is the most heavily traveled End of Section 3. Do not return to Sections 1 or 2. END OF WRITING TEST. Chapter 1 1. She hadn’t eaten all day, and by the time she got home she was ______. a. blighted b. confutative c. ravenous d. ostentatious e. blissful 2. The movie offended many of the parents of its younger viewers by including unnecessary ______ in the dialogue. a. vulgarity b. verbosity c. vocalizations d. garishness e. tonality 1 501 Sentence Completion Questions 3. His neighbors found his ______ manner bossy and irritating, and they stopped inviting him to backyard barbeques. a. insentient b. magisterial c. reparatory d. restorative e. modest 4. Steven is always ______ about showing up for work because he feels that tardiness is a sign of irresponsibility. a. legible b. tolerable c. punctual d. literal e. belligerent 5. Candace would ______ her little sister into an argument by teasing her and calling her names. a. advocate b. provoke c. perforate d. lamente e. expunge 6. The dress Ariel wore ______ with small, glassy beads, creating a shimmering effect. a. titillated b. reiterated c. scintillated d. enthralled e. striated 7. Being able to afford this luxury car will ______ getting a better- paying job. a. maximize b. recombinant c. reiterate d. necessitate e. reciprocate 2 501 Sentence Completion Questions 8. Levina unknowingly ______ the thief by holding open the elevator doors and ensuring his escape. a. coerced b. proclaimed c. abetted d. sanctioned e. solicited 9. Shakespeare, a(n) ______ writer, entertained audiences by writing many tragic and comic plays. a. numeric b. obstinate c. dutiful d. prolific e. generic 10. I had the ______ experience of sitting next to an over-talkative passenger on my flight home from Brussels. a. satisfactory b. commendable c. galling d. acceptable e. acute 11. Prince Phillip had to choose: marry the woman he loved and ______ his right to the throne, or marry Lady Fiona and inherit the crown. a. reprimand b. upbraid c. abdicate d. winnow e. extol 12. If you will not do your work of your own ______, I have no choice but to penalize you if it is not done on time. a. predilection b. coercion c. excursion d. volition e. infusion 3 501 Sentence Completion Questions 13. After sitting in the sink for several days, the dirty, food-encrusted dishes became ______. a. malodorous b. prevalent c. imposing d. perforated e. emphatic 14. Giulia soon discovered the source of the ______ smell in the room: a week-old tuna sandwich that one of the children had hidden in the closet. a. quaint b. fastidious c. clandestine d. laconic e. fetid 15. After making ______ remarks to the President, the reporter was not invited to return to the White House pressroom. a. hospitable b. itinerant c. enterprising d. chivalrous e. irreverent 16. With her ______ eyesight, Krystyna spotted a trio of deer on the hillside and she reduced the speed of her car. a. inferior b. keen c. impressionable d. ductile e. conspiratorial 4 501 Sentence Completion Questions 17. With a(n) ______ grin, the boy quickly slipped the candy into his pocket without his mother’s knowledge. a. jaundiced b. nefarious c. stereotypical d. sentimental e. impartial 18. Her ______ display of tears at work did not impress her new boss, who felt she should try to control her emotions. a. maudlin b. meritorious c. precarious d. plausible e. schematic 19. Johan argued, “If you know about a crime but don’t report it, you are ______ in that crime because you allowed it to happen.” a. acquitted b. steadfast c. tenuous d. complicit e. nullified 20. The authorities, fearing a ______ of their power, called for a military state in the hopes of restoring order. a. subversion b. premonition c. predilection d. infusion e. inversion 21. The story’s bitter antagonist felt such great ______ for all of the other characters that as a result, his life was very lonely and he died alone. a. insurgence b. malevolence c. reciprocation d. declamation e. preference 5 501 Sentence Completion Questions 22. It is difficult to believe that charging 20% on an outstanding credit card balance isn’t ______! a. bankruptcy b. usury c. novice d. kleptomania e. flagrancy 23. The ______ weather patterns of the tropical island meant tourists had to carry both umbrellas and sunglasses. a. impertinent b. supplicant c. preeminent d. illustrative e. kaleidoscopic 24. Wedding ceremonies often include the exchange of ______ rings to symbolize the couple’s promises to each other. a. hirsute b. acrimonious c. plaintive d. deciduous e. votive 25. Kym was ______ in choosing her friends, so her parties were attended by vastly different and sometimes bizarre personalities. a. indispensable b. indiscriminate c. commensurate d. propulsive e. indisputable 6 Chapter 2 26. Phillip’s ______ tone endeared him to his comical friends, but irritated his serious father. a. aloof b. jesting c. grave d. earnest e. conservative 27. Brian’s pale Irish skin was ______ to burn if he spent too much time in the sun. a. prone b. urbane c. eminent d. erect e. daunted 9 501 Sentence Completion Questions 28. A fan of historical fiction, Joline is now reading a novel about slavery in the ______ South. a. decorous b. rogue c. droll d. antebellum e. onerous 29. Over the years the Wilsons slowly ______ upon the Jacksons’ property, moving the stone markers that divided their lots farther and farther onto the Jacksons’ land. a. encroached b. jettisoned c. conjoined d. repudiated e. teemed 30. Mary became ______ at typing because she practiced every day for six months. a. proficient b. reflective c. dormant d. redundant e. valiant 31. To find out what her husband bought for her birthday, Susan attempted to ______ his family members about his recent shopping excursions. a. prescribe b. probe c. alienate d. converge e. revere 10 501 Sentence Completion Questions 32. Juan’s friends found him in a ______ mood after he learned he would be homecoming king. a. jovial b. stealthy c. paltry d. gullible e. depleted 33. His suit of armor made the knight ______ to his enemy’s attack, and he was able to escape safely to his castle. a. vulnerable b. churlish c. invulnerable d. static e. imprudent 34. Choosing a small, fuel-efficient car is a ______ purchase for a recent college graduate. a. corrupt b. tedious c. unhallowed d. sardonic e. judicious 35. Such a ______ violation of school policy should be punished by nothing less than expulsion. a. copious b. flagrant c. raucous d. nominal e. morose 36. With all of the recent negative events in her life, she felt ______ forces must be at work. a. resurgent b. premature c. malignant d. punctilious e. antecedent 11 501 Sentence Completion Questions 37. The ______ rumors did a great deal of damage even though they turned out to be false. a. bemused b. prosaic c. apocryphal d. ebullient e. tantamount 38. When her schoolwork got to be too much, Pam had a tendency to ______, which always put her further behind. a. dedicate b. rejuvenate c. ponder d. excel e. procrastinate 39. Racha’s glance was a ______ invitation to speak later in private about events of the meeting. a. trecherous b. scintillating c. tactful d. tacit e. taboo 40. She reached the ______ of her career with her fourth novel, which won the Pulitzer Prize. a. harbinger b. apogee c. metamorphosis d. dictum e. synthesis 41. The ______ townspeople celebrated the soldier’s return to his home by adorning trees with yellow ribbons and balloons. a. somber b. jubilant c. pitiless d. cunning e. unsullied 12 501 Sentence Completion Questions 42. The governor-elect was hounded by a group of ______ lobbyists and others hoping to gain favor with her administration. a. facetious b. abstruse c. magnanimous d. fawning e. saccharine 43. The mock graduation ceremony—with a trained skunk posing as the college president—was a complete ______ that offended many college officials. a. tempest b. epitome c. quintessence d. travesty e. recitative 44. The busy, ______ fabric of the clown’s tie matched his oversized jacket, which was equally atrocious. a. mottled b. bleak c. credible d. malleable e. communicable 45. Kendrick’s talent ______ under the tutelage of Anya Kowalonek, who as a young woman had been the most accomplished pianist in her native Lithuania. a. bantered b. touted c. flourished d. embellished e. colluded 13 501 Sentence Completion Questions 46. The children were ______ by the seemingly nonsensical clues until Kinan pointed out that the messages were in code. a. censured b. striated c. feigned d. prevaricated e. flummoxed 47. As the ______ in Romeo and Juliet, Romeo is a hero able to capture the audience’s sympathy by continually professing his love for Juliet. a. protagonist b. enigma c. facade d. activist e. catechist 48. The chess master promised to ______ havoc upon his opponent’s pawns for taking his bishop. a. wreak b. warrant c. ensue d. placate e. endow 49. I have always admired Seymour’s ______; I’ve never seen him rattled by anything. a. aplomb b. confluence c. propriety d. compunction e. nostalgia 50. The soldiers received a military ______ to inspect all their vehicles before traveling. a. allotment b. dominion c. affectation d. calculation e. mandate 14 Chapter 3 51. As ______ beings we live each day conscious of our shortcomings and victories. a. sensational b. sentient c. sentimental d. static e. senile 52. The curious crowd gathered to watch the irate customer ______ about the poor service he received in the restaurant. a. antiquate b. trivialize c. rant d. placate e. fetter 17 501 Sentence Completion Questions 53. The man’s ______ driving resulted in a four-car pile-up on the freeway. a. burdensome b. charismatic c. exceptional d. boastful e. negligent 54. Ron didn’t know the rules of rugby, but he could tell by the crowd’s reaction that it was a critical ______ in the game. a. acclamation b. conviction c. juncture d. enigma e. revelation 55. My ancestor who lost his life in the Revolutionary War was a ______ for American independence. a. knave b. reactionary c. compatriot d. nonconformist e. martyr 56. The ______ sound of the radiator as it released steam became an increasingly annoying distraction. a. sibilant b. scintillating c. diverting d. sinuous e. scurrilous 57. It is helpful for salesmen to develop a good ______ with their customers in order to gain their trust. a. platitude b. rapport c. ire d. tribute e. disinclination 18 501 Sentence Completion Questions 58. In such a small office setting, the office manager found he had ______ responsibilities that required knowledge in a variety of different topics. a. heedless b. complementary c. mutual d. manifold e. correlative 59. David’s ______ entrance on stage disrupted the scene and caused the actors to flub their lines. a. untimely b. precise c. lithe d. fortuitous e. tensile 60. The settlers found an ideal location with plenty of ______ land for farming and a mountain stream for fresh water and irrigation. a. candid b. provincial c. arable d. timid e. quaint 61. The ______ seventh-grader towered over the other players on his basketball team. a. gangling b. studious c. mimetic d. abject e. reserved 19 501 Sentence Completion Questions 62. Carson was at first flattered by the ______ of his new colleagues, but he soon realized that their admiration rested chiefly on his connections, not his accomplishments. a. reprisal b. adulation c. bulwark d. rapport e. retinue 63. For a(n) ______ fee, it is possible to upgrade from regular gasoline to premium. a. nominal b. judgmental c. existential d. bountiful e. jovial 64. Searching frantically to find the hidden jewels, the thieves proceeded to ______ the entire house. a. justify b. darken c. amplify d. ransack e. glorify 65. The ______ deer stuck close to its mother when venturing out into the open field. a. starling b. foundling c. yearling d. begrudging e. hatchling 20 501 Sentence Completion Questions 66. The police officer ______ the crowd to step back from the fire so that no one would get hurt. a. undulated b. enjoined c. stagnated d. permeated e. delineated 67. Jackson’s poor typing skills were a ______ to finding employment at the nearby office complex. a. benefit b. hindrance c. partiality d. temptation e. canon 68. Through ______, the chef created a creamy sauce by combining brown sugar, butter, and cinnamon in a pan and cooking them over medium-high heat. a. impasse b. obscurity c. decadence d. diversion e. liquefaction 69. The defendant claimed that he was innocent and that his confession was ______. a. coerced b. flagrant c. terse d. benign e. futile 21 501 Sentence Completion Questions 70. Harvey was discouraged that his visa application was ______ due to his six convictions. a. lethargic b. immeasurable c. nullified d. segregated e. aggravated 71. The rebel spies were charged with ______ and put on trial. a. b. c. d. e. sedition attrition interaction reiteration perdition 72. Keith was ______ in his giving to friends and charities throughout the year, not just during the holidays. a. munificent b. portly c. amphibious d. guileful e. forensic 73. Calvin reached the ______ of his career in his early thirties when he became president and CEO of a software company. a. zephyr b. plethora c. vale d. nocturne e. zenith 74. Although I’d asked a simple “yes” or “no” question, Irfan’s reply was ______, and I didn’t know how to interpret it. a. prodigal b. irate c. equivocal d. voracious e. harrowing 22 501 Sentence Completion Questions 75. The high-profile company CEO was given an ______ for speaking at the monthly meeting of the area business leaders’ society. a. expiation b. honorarium c. inoculation d. interpretation e. inquisition 23 Chapter 4 76. Zachary was doomed to a miserable life, for no matter how much he had, he always ______ the possessions of others. a. protracted b. exalted c. engendered d. coveted e. filibustered 77. Sheila’s grueling hike included passing through numerous ______. a. b. c. d. e. terrariums neoprene jurisdictions ravines belfries 27 501 Sentence Completion Questions 78. The college professor was known on campus as a ______ character—bland but harmless and noble in his ideals. a. staid b. stagnant c. auspicious d. sterile e. dogmatic 79. Because he was so ______, the athlete was able to complete the obstacle course in record time. a. belligerent b. nimble c. demure d. volatile e. speculative 80. The toy store’s extensive inventory offered a ______ of toys from baby items to video games for teenagers. a. manifold b. lexicon c. burrow d. gamut e. motif 81. With sunscreen and a good book, April ______ by the pool in her lounge chair while the children swam. a. ensconced b. sustained c. expelled d. transcended e. lolled 28 501 Sentence Completion Questions 82. NaQuan had a terrible habit of boasting so much about his smallest accomplishments that his ______ became renowned throughout the small college campus. a. vainglory b. timidity c. diffidence d. tempestuousness e. mockery 83. Only a small number of people in the audience laughed at the comic’s ______ sense of humor, while the rest found him to be too sarcastic. a. consequential b. avaricious c. venturous d. dauntless e. mordant 84. He has long been a(n) ______ of year-round school, believing it would significantly improve learning and ease the burden on working parents. a. advocate b. levity c. detractor d. epiphany e. connoisseur 85. Tired of hearing the child whine for more candy, the babysitter finally ______ and offered him a piece of chocolate. a. relented b. abated c. rendered d. placated e. enumerated 29 501 Sentence Completion Questions 86. Dogs growl and show their teeth in an attempt to ______ the animal or person they perceive as a threat. a. bolster b. waylay c. cow d. exacerbate e. appease 87. In biology class, Sabine observed the slug’s ______, its barely discernible movement in the tank. a. parody b. prescience c. torpor d. insight e. vigor 88. The ______ instinct of a watchdog is to attack strangers who enter its home. a. judicious b. intimate c. pragmatic d. melancholy e. primal 89. The battalion’s ______ was a well-fortified structure near the enemy lines. a. labyrinth b. summary c. villa d. vinculum e. garrison 90. Much to my surprise, my teenage daughter was ______ to the idea of going out with me on Friday night instead of with her friends. a. contrite b. impartial c. partisan d. deferential e. amenable 30 501 Sentence Completion Questions 91. The enormous waves forced the lobster boat to ______ heavily to the starboard side, causing crates of lobsters to topple and fall into the ocean. a. trifle b. degenerate c. list d. expedite e. disseminate 92. Walking through the ______ forest in spring was a welcome escape from the cold, gray winter we had spent in the city. a. pliant b. verdant c. factious d. bland e. innocuous 93. Nina called the humane society when she saw her neighbor ______ his dog. a. mandate b. forebode c. maltreat d. stipulate e. peruse 94. Meredith used the ______ to steer the horse and keep him in line. a. b. c. d. e. jolt bristle chine quirt hearth 95. Oliver was unable to ______ himself from the difficulties he had caused by forging the documents. a. reprove b. pique c. oust d. extricate e. broach 31 501 Sentence Completion Questions 96. The ______ of our expedition was still so far away that I felt we would never get there. a. nadir b. terminus c. speculation d. apex e. dungeon 97. If he expected to ______ as a doctor, Lou knew he would have to study hard in medical school and work long hours to gain experience and skill. a. perpetrate b. palliate c. palpitate d. prosper e. mediate 98. Doc Wilson grew up in Florida and was not prepared to face the ______ climate of the Alaskan winter. a. freshwater b. gelid c. compendious d. subsidiary e. improvident 99. Marvin’s ______ prevented him from finishing his work and was evidenced in his large phone bills. a. loquacity b. heroism c. decadence d. depreciation e. rescission 32 501 Sentence Completion Questions 100. The graph clearly showed the company reaching the ______ in profits during the 1980s when the economy was in a boom period. a. narthex b. gullet c. gamut d. quiescence e. vertex 33 Chapter Nine Reading Passage Mastery: Analyze the Answer Choices Just like Sentence Completion questions, Passage-Based Reading questions have two parts: a question stem and five answer choices: Question Stem Answer Choices In lines 9-13 (“Although . . . wonderful”), the author’s tone is best described as (A) (B) (C) (D) (E) critical hostile disappointed sardonic appreciative You are likely wondering why we are “putting the cart before the horse” and discussing the answer choices before covering the question stem. By reviewing answer choices now, you will have more opportunities to practice selecting the right answers and eliminating the wrong ones in the problem sets in the following chapter. We can also point to answers in our explanations for those problem sets and state “This is an Extreme Answer” without explaining that concept over and over because you will know what an Extreme Answer is after reading this chapter. Finally, these strategies are universal to all types of Passage-Based Reading questions, so it is convenient to discuss them here before looking at the specific types of questions. Understanding the construction of wrong answers goes a long way in helping you select the right answers. There are two types of answers on the SAT: right answers and wrong answers. But you already knew that, right? In this chapter, we will discuss the characteristics of right and wrong answer choices in greater detail: 1. 2. Right Answers Wrong Answers t$PQZDBUT t0QQPTJUFT t&YUSFNFT t5SVF#VU8SPOH t5SVF5P"1PJOU t5SVF5P:PV Let’s get started! Chapter Nine 225 Passage Based Reading Mastery Right Answers There is a certain comfort in multiple choice questions, knowing that the right answer is there on the page staring up at you. In Passage-Based Reading questions, the right answer is the only answer that can be proven true. TIPS and TRICKS The right answer tends to use synonyms for the words in the passage. If the question asks you to interpret a phrase or sentence from the passage, the right answer will be a paraphrase of the actual passage. Consider an example: Line 5 While the United States was fighting the War of 1812 with Britain, a series of violent incidents occurred when authorities entered Seminole territory to recapture runaway slaves, which aggravated the Seminole and increased hostility. 1. According to the passage, the “hostility” (line 5) between the United States and the Seminole was intensified by which of the following? (A) Wrong answer (B) 0GGJDJBMTJOWBEJOH/BUJWF"NFSJDBOUFSSJUPSZUP reclaim escaped slaves. (C) Wrong answer (D) Wrong answer (E) Wrong answer The correct answer, choice (B), is a reworded version of lines 3 and 4. Compare the wording of the passage and the correct answer: Words from Passage Confidence Quotation “Two trucks loaded with a thousand copies of Roget’s Thesaurus collided as they left a New York publishing house last week, according to the Associated Press. Witnesses were stunned, startled, aghast, taken aback, stupefied, appalled, surprised, shocked and rattled.” -Alan Schlein 226 authorities entered Seminole territory recapture runaway slaves Words from Correct Answer officials invaded /BUJWF"NFSJDBO territory reclaim escaped slaves When adjectives and verbs are used in the original passage, expect the correct answer to use synonyms for these words. Even some of the nouns may be replaced with synonyms, although you should not discount an answer for using the same nouns that were used in the passage. After all, there are only so many ways you can say spaghetti or elephant or pants! If a noun does not have many recognizable synonyms, the test makers will reuse the word in the answer choice. But since adjectives and verbs have many alternatives, they will likely be replaced with different words. The PowerScore SAT Reading Bible Analyze the Answer Choices Even questions that ask you to draw conclusions about the passage will have right answer choices that prefer synonyms over the actual words from the text. It’s one way that the test makers can actually assess whether you understand the passage or are just regurgitating words you happened to read. The right answer will also include all of the important ideas from the cited line reference, unlike some wrong answers that only provide a portion of the information. Study another example: Melner attributes the decline in school enrollment to several factors. For one, families are moving out of the area to find work. For another, lackluster test results cause some existing and most new families to choose other districts. 2. According to the passage, enrollment in the school district has decreased because of families’ (A) (B) (C) (D) (E) TIPS and TRICKS The correct answer incorporates all of the important ideas from the line reference. Wrong answer Wrong answer Wrong answer Wrong answer emphasis on jobs and performance The correct answer includes both moving out of the area to find work (emphasis on jobs) and lackluster test results (emphasis on performance). As we will discuss in the next section, wrong answers may address only one of those reasons. The right answer includes all of the important ideas. Another characteristic of right answers is that they tend to be more general than wrong answers: Line 5 The festival allowed us to acknowledge our German heritage after hiding our ancestry the rest of the year. For one weekend, my sisters and I could feast on mettwurst and maultaschen, dance the landler, and play Topfschlagen without worrying about the anti-German sentiments permeating the country after the war. It was our most memorable weekend of 1946. 3. According to the passage, the narrator remembers the “festival” (line 1) with fondness because (A) (B) (C) (D) (E) Chapter Nine he learned a German dance called the landler Wrong answer Wrong answer it allowed him to celebrate his culture German sausages were prepared for the first time that year TIPS and TRICKS Right answers tend to be more general than wrong answers. 227 Passage Based Reading Mastery The correct answer, (D), uses the broad term culture to describe the German food, dance, and game that were a part of the festival. The two wrong answers use more specific language. Choice (A) is wrong because it claims the narrator learned a dance; the passage just states that he danced the landler, not that he learned it. But notice that this answer is quite specific. As is (E). The answer in (E) is wrong because the passage only says that he ate mettwurst, not that it was the first time they were prepared that year. But again, the use of German sausages is quite specific. Sometimes the correct answer is this particular, too, especially if the question asks about a specific event, but when in doubt, select the most general answer choice. The right answer can be proven using the passage. The right answer is the only answer that can be defended or proven in the text. While many questions ask you which answer best characterizes or most effectively supports an argument in the passage, there is only one choice that completely and correctly answers the question. As we will see, something makes the other four answer choices wrong. When you select an answer, you should be pretty confident that it is correct because you can point to a specific portion of the text that proves the answer. /PXUIBUZPVLOPXXIBUUPMPPLGPSJOUIFSJHIUBOTXFSTMFUTMPPLNPSF closely at common wrong answers! 228 The PowerScore SAT Reading Bible Analyze the Answer Choices Wrong Answers If only one answer can be right, then four others are wrong. The test makers carefully write these wrong answer choices, intentionally using language and ideas that trick unsuspecting test takers. Learning how these incorrect answers are crafted can help you spot them, which is why eliminating wrong answers can sometimes be easier than determining the right answer. TIPS and TRICKS Eliminating wrong answers is sometimes easier than determining the right one. Copycat Answers The most common characteristic of wrong answers is that they copy words or phrases from the passage. These are Copycat Answers. Consider an example from earlier in the chapter: Line 5 While the United States was fighting the War of 1812 with Britain, a series of violent incidents occurred when authorities entered Seminole territory to recapture runaway slaves, which aggravated the Seminole and increased hostility. 1. According to the passage, the “hostility” (line 5) between the United States and the Seminole was intensified by which of the following? (A) Wrong answer (B) 0GGJDJBMTJOWBEJOH/BUJWF"NFSJDBOUFSSJUPSZUP reclaim escaped slaves. (C) Wrong answer (D) A violent incident that aggravated the American government. (E) Wrong answer CAUTION: SAT TRAP! Copycat answers use words and phrases directly from the passage. We have already looked at how the right answer, choice (B), uses synonyms for words in the text. But consider the choice of words used by answer (D): Words from Wrong Answer violent incident aggravated Words from Passage violent incidents (line 2) aggravated (line 4) The answer uses two words or phrases directly from the text! Sadly, this simple tactic will trick a lot of test takers into choosing this answer. The reason that this answer is incorrect is because it expresses an opposite idea, which we will discuss in the next section. The Seminole were aggravated, not the American government as the answer choice states. Copycat Answers are usually combined with another answer trap from the following pages, which is why we discussed Copycats first in this section. Always be leery of answer choices that use several words or phrases from the passage. Chapter Nine 229 Passage Based Reading Mastery Opposite Answers Just as Sentence Completion questions often have a wrong answer choice that is opposite of your prephrase, so may Passage-Based Reading questions. The College Board is playing on students’ self-doubt, as many test takers will assume they misunderstood the passage and that it actually said the opposite of what they originally understood. Do not doubt your initial reading unless you reread the text and have a new understanding! The question that we studied on the previous page is a good example of an 0QQPTJUF"OTXFSXIFSFUIFTUBUFNFOUJOUIFBOTXFSDIPJDFIBEUIFPQQPTJUF meaning as the passage. Let’s look at another from a previous passage: Line 5 CAUTION: SAT TRAP! Opposite Answers present an idea that is opposite the meaning of your prephrase or the meaning of a portion of the text. The festival allowed us to acknowledge our German heritage after hiding our ancestry the rest of the year. For one weekend, my sisters and I could feast on mettwurst and maultaschen, dance the landler, and play Topfschlagen without worrying about the anti-German sentiments permeating the country after the war. It was our most memorable weekend of 1946. 3. According to the passage, the narrator remembers the “festival” (line 1) with fondness because (A) (B) (C) (D) (E) he learned a German dance called the landler he was able to conceal his German heritage Wrong answer it allowed him to celebrate his culture German sausages were prepared for the first time that year We have already determined that answer choice (D) is correct: he liked the festival because he was able to celebrate his German heritage. But look at choice (B). This presents an idea opposite of the correct answer: that instead PGBDLOPXMFEHJOHIJTDVMUVSFIFIJEJU/PUJDFUIBUJUBMTPVTFTUIFQISBTF German heritage from lines 1-2. Sadly, some students will read this answer choice and assume they misread the passage. They select (B) without ever reading the last three answer choices. CAUTION: SAT TRAP! Test makers often place the “best” wrong answer choice above the right answer choice. 230 You should note that the test makers often put the most attractive wrong answer choice above the right answer for this very reason. If they can trick you into selecting an answer before reading the correct one, then they helped colleges weed out students who are careless and inattentive to detail. Always read all five answer choices before making your selection. And steer clear of any answer choice that presents an idea directly opposite of your predicted answer. The PowerScore SAT Reading Bible Analyze the Answer Choices Extreme Answers In an SAT answer choice, every word counts, and each of those words should be read literally. Let’s analyze the meaning of the following answer choice: (A) People in the neighborhood think that Mr. Wilson is mean. Because this answer choice has no modifiers, it states that ALL people in the neighborhood think that Mr. Wilson is mean—including Mrs. Wilson, neighboring infants and children, and Mr. Wilson’s friends. Because statements like this one are so extreme, the makers of the SAT are likely to use modifiers to subdue the meaning. Consider some examples: CAUTION: SAT TRAP! Extreme Answers use words that make the answer difficult to defend. (B) Most people in the neighborhood think that Mr. Wilson is mean. (C) Many people in the neighborhood think that Mr. Wilson is mean. (D) Some people in the neighborhood think that Mr. Wilson is mean. Each of these answer choices added an adjective modifier to people, making them easier to defend than the original answer in (A). However, choices (B) and (C) are still somewhat Extreme Answers; the qualifiers most and many include a lot of people, making these answers difficult to prove. But answer choice (D) is much more moderate. With the use of some, you only need to find two people who think Mr. Wilson is mean in order for this answer choice to be true. Sometimes the right answer will also use somewhat: (E) The neighbor thinks that Mr. Wilson is somewhat mean. In this answer choice, somewhat tempers the meaning of mean. Instead of proving that Mr. Wilson is always cruel, you only need to find one instance of meanness to make him somewhat mean. Also watch for Extreme verbs. Consider the difference between these three answer choices: (A) Henry must go to the wedding. (B) Henry needs to go to the wedding. (C) Henry should go to the wedding. It is difficult to defend must go and needs to go, and it is quite unlikely that the author was that straightforward in the passage. However, should go is much easier to prove. Chapter Nine 231 Passage Based Reading Mastery For most SAT questions, avoid answers that use most, many, must, needs, or these other Extreme words: tall, total, only, solely, exclusively, completely, entirely, thoroughly tNBJOMZDIJFGMZQSJNBSJMZMBSHFMZNPTUMZ tJOWBSJBCMZDFSUBJOMZBCTPMVUFMZVORVFTUJPOBCMZ tBMXBZTOFWFSOPU tXPSETUIBUFOEJOest (greatest, largest, etc.) tXPSETUIBUFOEJOless (worthless, useless, etc.) tXPSETUIBUBSFQSFDFEFECZmost (most accurate, most important, etc.) tXPSETUIBUBSFQSFDFEFECZleast (least significant, least truthful, etc.) Some Extreme Words are more difficult to pinpoint. Consider these two answers: (A) Penelope was surprised by her mother’s vicious reply. (B) Penelope was surprised by her mother’s insensitive reply. Extreme Words are usually modifiers. Which answer choice is easiest to defend? The word vicious makes answer choice (A) the least likely answer. In order for the reply to be vicious, the mother would have had to have been spiteful, cruel, and severe. But the word insensitive is much easier to defend. She simply had to say something that was mildly unkind in order to be called insensitive. Consider the difference between these moderate and extreme word pairs: Moderate Word unfriendly happy sad excited impolite mischievous opposition unrealistic challenge foolish anxious unlikely criticize Extreme Word hostile elated despairing hysterical barbaric sinister malice outrageous mock ludicrous frantic impossible chastise You would be wise to avoid answers with these extreme words and others like them. 232 The PowerScore SAT Reading Bible Analyze the Answer Choices 0OF&YUSFNF8PSEUIBUPGUFOBWPJETEFUFDUJPOJTnostalgic. The definition maintains that a person who is nostalgic desires to return to a happier time in the past. Someone who remembers his childhood is not necessarily nostalgic; he would have to express his longing for the happiness from that childhood in order to be considered nostalgic. So unless an author or narrator plans to build a time machine and return to the past, try to avoid an answer choice with the word nostalgic or nostalgia on the SAT. TIPS and TRICKS Avoid the answer nostalgic on the SAT because it’s likely an Extreme answer choice. Let’s look at a previous passage with a question utilizing some Extreme Answers: Line 5 Melner attributes the decline in school enrollment to several factors. For one, families are moving out of the area to find work. For another, lackluster test results cause some existing and most new families to choose other districts. 2. According to the passage, enrollment in the school district has decreased because of families’ (A) (B) (C) (D) (E) complete confidence in standardized tests Wrong answer outrage over the lack of employment Wrong answer emphasis on jobs and performance We previously determined that the correct answer is (E). But examine choice (A). Aside from being totally inaccurate, it uses the word complete. This is an Extreme Word, and so the answer choice should be avoided. Choice (C) uses the Extreme Word outrage. In order to prove this word is justified, the families would have had to have shown show powerful feelings of anger and resentment. The passage does not indicate they expressed these feelings, let alone even felt them. Both (A) and (C) are Extreme Answers. Extreme Answers are almost always incorrect on the SAT. But notice that we’ve used the modifier almost in the previous sentence. That’s because there is a slight chance you may encounter an extreme passage. Perhaps you will find a passage where the author detests snakes or adamantly defends the Constitution. If you have an extreme passage, written by an author who is forceful about her beliefs, you can expect some Extreme Answers. These answer choices should be easy to defend, however. If the author states that snakes are wicked and she wishes a plague would wipe them off the face of the Earth, then answer choices with the words sinister and malice become attractive and defendable. Given the temperate nature of the SAT, though, it is unlikely you will encounter such an extreme passage. When in doubt, avoid all answer choices with extreme words. Chapter Nine GRATUITOUS VOCAB temperate (adj): moderate; not extreme 233 Passage Based Reading Mastery True But Wrong Answers True But Wrong Answers are especially tricky because they provide a true statement or conclusion based on the passage; however, they do not answer the specific question at hand. They pull a fact or inference from an earlier or later portion of text, but have little to do with the line reference in question. Let’s consider an example from a previous passage: This passage is taken from a novel set in 2001. *UQSFTFOUTUXPDIBSBDUFST3PCFSUB.FYJDBO American painter in New York, and his father, an immigrant and retiree who achieved success in UIFCBOLJOHCVTJOFTT3PCFSUIBTUSBWFMFEIPNFUP .JDIJHBOUPWJTJUIJTQBSFOUT CAUTION: SAT TRAP! True But Wrong Answers highlight a truth from part of the passage, but they do not answer the question about a specific line reference. Line 5 10 15 20 25 30 35 234 “Did you hear about your brother?” my father asked, knowing full well that Mother had already told me about Peter’s promotion at the bank. “He’s really making something of himself, I tell you. I always knew that boy would go far.” I drank from my iced tea to avoid having to answer. I had been compared to my twin for nearly twentyfive years and I was still coming up short. “So, Robert,” he began, “when are you going to get promoted at the art gallery?” Here it was again. A comparison. “Dad, I am a painter,” I said. “I don’t get promoted. I don’t even work for the gallery. Just being displayed there is a tremendous honor.” “Hmph,” he grunted. He stirred his cocktail with a finger. “Honor doesn’t mean the same thing today as it did in my day then, I guess. Being recognized for saving three men on the battlefield, that was an honor.” I could not win. I was never going to please my father because I was never going to succeed at what he considered honorable. My father was a young child when my grandparents came to America. They were migrant workers, who only planned on staying the summer at the tomato farm, but when my Uncle Miguel contracted polio, they decided to remain through the winter—a decision that changed the course of my family’s history. My grandparents never returned to Mexico after the farmer hired them full time, and my father was raised along with the white children on the farm. He enlisted in the marines upon graduating high school with honors and was sent to Vietnam, years he rarely talks about except to define honor, courage, and fear. When he came home from the war, he went to the University of Michigan on a scholarship which led The PowerScore SAT Reading Bible Analyze the Answer Choices 40 45 to a job with the largest bank in the county. Within 10 years, he was vice president of the bank, and within IFXBTSVOOJOHJU"TIFMJLFEUPTBZi/PUCBEGPS a poor immigrant from Mexico.” My brother had taken a similar road. He was valedictorian of his high school class, a Gulf War veteran, and a college graduate. He was a banker at the same bank that my father had worked. And I was none of these things. I was an artist, a career that helped free me from my father and imprison me in his judgment at the same time. 2. Lines 7-8 (“I had . . . up short”) indicate that (A) Peter is taller than Robert (B) Robert’s father had a successful career (C) Robert’s mother does not consider art an honorable pursuit (D) Peter’s choices have been favored over Robert’s decisions by their father (E) it is impossible to raise twins without showing favoritism Confidence Quotation “What counts is not necessarily the size of the dog in the fight— it’s the size of the fight in the dog.” -Dwight D. Eisenhower, 34th President of the United States In the previous chapter, we determined that the correct answer for #2 is (D). But notice choice (B). This is a true statement, as indicated in lines 37-39. However, although it is true, it is wrong, as it does not answer the specific question about lines 7-8. 3. The father responds to Robert’s comments in lines 12-14 by doing which of the following? (A) (B) (C) (D) Challenging Robert’s definition of honor Asserting his power over Robert Recalling the challenges he faced growing up Agreeing that Robert’s successful endeavors are different than Peter’s accomplishments (E) Denying one son equal treatment The third question also has a True But Wrong Answer in (E). The entire passage indicates that Robert is not viewed as favorably as his brother by their father. However, only choice (A) correctly identifies the father’s reaction to the comments in lines 12-14. His reaction has nothing to do with the brother. As you can see, these True But Wrong answer choices are especially attractive given that they provide a true statement from the passage. But you must be certain that the answer choice you select corresponds with the line reference in the question. True But Wrong Answers are common in Paired Passage question sets. The answer might be true about Passage 2, but the question is asking about Passage 1 or about both passages. This is why it is extremely important to answer questions about Passage 1 before reading the second passage. Chapter Nine True But Wrong Answers are especially common in questions about paired passages. The truth is often from the passage that is not being addressed in the question. 235 Passage Based Reading Mastery True To A Point Answers True to a Point Answers are very attractive choices because they usually start out seemingly correct. Careless test takers might not notice, though, that at some point in the answer choice they become blatantly wrong. CAUTION: SAT TRAP! True To A Point Answers contain halftruths, but at some point they become indisputably wrong. Sometimes these answer choices add new, irrelevant information causing them to be incorrect. For example, if the passage discusses the feeding habits of monarch butterflies, be wary of any answer choice that details the feeding habits of swallowtail butterflies. This answer will appear to be correct when explaining the feeding habits, but once it cites a different butterfly type, it is clearly incorrect. Let’s study some examples: 5 10 15 Unlike the Tango, a dance which can trace its roots directly back to Argentina and Uruguay, Ballroom Tango saw significant changes in both structure and technique as the dance traveled to the United States and Europe. Film star Rudolph Valentino first brought Ballroom Tango to Hollywood in the early 1920s, and the famous dance instructor Arthur Murray later helped popularize a standardized version which incorporated steps that were common to the US during that period. This incarnation of Ballroom Tango was generally considered somewhat less formal and referred to as the “American Style” by the English, who wished to distinguish this informal approach from their own International Style—a technique that was taught in countries throughout Europe and had already become the de facto standard in competitions around the world. 1. The standardized version of the Ballroom Tango features which of the following? (A) (B) (C) (D) (E) steps that were common in American film Answer B conventional American movements Answer D Answer E Choice (A) is appealing because it is True to a Point: steps that were common, the phrase in the answer choice, comes right from line 9. But then the answer makes a wrong turn with the phrase in American film. The passage does not mention American film in connection with the Ballroom Tango, other than the fact that a film star was responsible for bringing the dance to Hollywood. It does not state that these steps were common in movies, so choice (A) is incorrect. 236 The PowerScore SAT Reading Bible Analyze the Answer Choices Astute test takers would also avoid choice (A) because it is a Copycat Answer, using text right from the passage. Choice (C) uses synonyms to express the idea in lines 8-9, and is in fact correct. The most tempting True to a Point Answers have a single word that sabotages the entire answer choice. Consider an example using the passage on the previous page: 2. According to the passage, the Ballroom Tango is different from the Tango because the Ballroom Tango (A) Answer A (B) was slightly altered once it became popular in America (C) Answer C (D) Answer D (E) underwent a transformation upon entering countries in the US and Europe Choice (B) is incorrect because of a single word: slightly. The passage states that the Ballroom Tango saw significant changes (line 3) making slightly alteredTJHOJGJDBOUMZJODPSSFDU/PUFUPPUIBUUIFBOTXFSPOMZJODMVEFT America, omitting Europe as stated in the passage (line 5). Remember, the correct answer will include all of the important ideas, as does choice (E). Every word counts in an SAT answer choice. You must carefully read each possibility, looking for reasons that the answer choice is incorrect. Be sure to eliminate any answer that is only True to a Point, and cross the letter out in your test booklet. Chapter Nine One word can make an SAT answer choice incorrect, so it is important to read each answer choice carefully. 237 Passage Based Reading Mastery True To You Answers 0OFPGUIFCJHHFTUNJTUBLFTUIBUBTUVEFOUDBONBLFJTUPCSJOHUIFJS experience and expectations into the SAT. Your opinions are not relevant on the Reading portion of the test, and you should be careful not to let them influence your understanding of a text. CAUTION: SAT TRAP! True To You Answers trick you into applying prior knowledge or experience to the passage. True to You Answers are designed to take advantage of your personal beliefs and prior knowledge. Let’s study an example that plays on a common opinion about slavery: Line 5 10 By 1750, slavery was a legal institution in all of the American colonies, the profits of which amounted to 5% of the British economy at the time of the Industrial Revolution. The Transatlantic slave trade peaked in the late 18th century, when the largest number of slaves were captured on raiding expeditions into the interior of West Africa. The slaves were shipped to the Americas in the hulls of large boats, where they experienced extremely cramped quarters, lack of ventilation, and unsanitary conditions; a large percentage of the captives died in transit. 1. The author of the passage implies that (A) the hazardous conditions in which the slaves were shipped resulted in a high mortality rate (B) Wrong answer (C) Wrong answer (D) slavery is uncivilized and immoral (E) Wrong answer In the 21st century, we know that slavery is uncivilized and immoral. That is part of the reason why the Civil War was fought and why the 13th amendment to the Constitution was passed. But it is never stated or even implied in the passage, so you cannot assume that the author shares this belief. The passage itself is very matter-of-fact, presenting data and information, but not imparting the author’s opinions. Even the sentence about the death of slaves in transit is emotionless and objective. So if the author does not state his opinion, any feelings assigned to him are untrue, no matter how you feel about the subject yourself. After all, the passage could have been written in 1850 by a plantation owner in Georgia. Do not apply your personal beliefs to any SAT passage or answer choice! 238 The PowerScore SAT Reading Bible Analyze the Answer Choices The test makers might also try to trick you into applying your prior knowledge to a passage: Line 5 In late summer, black bears begin gorging on carbohydrate-rich foods in order to put on significant weight and body fat. They can gain as much as 30 QPVOETJOBTJOHMFXFFL0ODFGBMMBSSJWFTUIFCFBS prepares its den, lining it with leaves and other plants to form a nest. 1. According to the passage, black bears seek “carbohydrate-rich foods” (line 2) primarily because they (A) (B) (C) (D) (E) Wrong answer are preparing to hibernate need to considerably increase their body mass Wrong answer Wrong answer Unless you skipped kindergarten and most of elementary school, it’s likely that you know bears hibernate. Answer choice (B) is depending on this knowledge to seduce you into selecting it as the right answer choice. But you would be wrong. The passage never mentions hibernation. The reason it provides for the black bears gorging on carbs is UPQVUPOTJHOJGJDBOUXFJHIUBOECPEZGBU. The correct answer is (C). But many, many test takers would choose (B) because they applied their prior knowledge to the passage and failed to read all five answer choices. Remember, if the author does not state or imply an idea, it simply is not true. Chapter Nine 239 Passage Based Reading Mastery Analyzing the Answer Choices Problem Set In the following exercise, reread the passages from the previous chapter. For each question, select the correct answer DIPJDFBOEJGQPTTJCMFMBCFMUIFXSPOHBOTXFSDIPJDFTBT$PQZDBUT0QQPTJUFT&YUSFNFT5SVF#VU8SPOH5SVFUPB Point, True to You, or a combination of answer types. The first one has been done for you. Answers begin on page 246. The following passages discuss the commemoration PG$ISJTUPQIFS$PMVNCVTBSSJWBMJO/PSUI"NFSJDB 1BTTBHFJTGSPNBBSUJDMFXSJUUFOCZB/BUJWF "NFSJDBOBDUJWJTU1BTTBHFJTGSPNBCMPHCZB political commentator. 40 45 Passage 1 Line 5 10 15 20 25 30 35 In 1492, Columbus sailed the ocean blue, resulting in the annihilation of my people. Upon his “discovery,” UIFSFXFSFNPSFUIBONJMMJPO/BUJWF"NFSJDBOT populating the continent, but by 1900, that number had diminished to 230,000. Such atrocities might be somewhat less offensive or at least mitigated if he had only inadvertently spread European germs that wiped out so many tribes, but Columbus was a murderous tyrant. He kidnapped and enslaved hundreds of natives, allowed his crew to abuse men, women, and children, and mortally wounded those slaves who could not produce gold and riches fit for Spain. Eventually, his BSSJWBMJO/PSUI"NFSJDBMFEUPGVSUIFSHFOPDJEFXIFO the government cleared our lands for the white man’s pursuit of manifest destiny. It is deplorable that the American dream of homestead ownership is founded POUIFTMBVHIUFSPG/BUJWF"NFSJDBOTBOEUIFMBSDFOZPG their land. What makes Columbus’ savage crimes more unsettling is the honor that is still being bestowed upon him some 500 years later. Christopher Columbus is a national hero; he is exalted in elementary school text books, glorified in the names of our cities and capitals, and commemorated FWFSZZFBSPOUIFTFDPOE.POEBZJO0DUPCFS*OUIJT era of political correctness, it is baffling how the United States government can continue to ignore the cries of my people who demand the forsaking of Columbus Day in favor of Indigenous Peoples’ Day. Can you imagine the repercussions if national holidays were issued for PUIFSCSVUBMMFBEFSTTVDIBT"EPMG)JUMFSPS/BUIBO Bedford Forrest? Fortunately, these tyrants will never be celebrated because the United States recognizes their atrocities and assisted or at least apologized to their victims. In the meantime, though, hundreds of thousands PG/BUJWF"NFSJDBOTBSFJHOPSFEJOTVMUFEBOEFYQFDUFE to “just get over it.” I suppose we shouldn’t expect much from our government. To make changes to school textbooks and national holidays demands accepting responsibility and making 240 50 reparations, two acts that threaten the culture, economy, and status quo of the nation. Plus, the ashes of nineteenth century manifest destiny still smolder, as most Americans believe that their leaders have a right to invade and take any land as long as the goal is the common good of the American people and the betterment of the natives PGUIFUIBUMBOE/FWFSNJOEXIBUUIFDVMUVSFPGUIPTF natives dictates; Americans, after all, know best. While JUNBZCFQPJOUMFTTUPFYQFDUDIBOHF/BUJWF"NFSJcans will undoubtedly hold on to hope that one day our leaders will recognize the heinousness that our ancestors endured, and take the necessary steps to reduce a historical figure from national hero to national villain. Passage 2 55 60 65 70 75 80 Columbus Day is in danger of extinction. In several cities in California, it has been replaced by Indigenous Peoples’ Day. Parades in honor of the explorer have not PDDVSSFEJO$PMVNCVT0IJPTJODFUIFT"OE4PVUI %BLPLBIBTSFOBNFEUIFIPMJEBZi/BUJWF"NFSJDBO Day.” Even where the holiday is preserved, many people lack enthusiasm for the celebration in fear of offending descendents of native peoples. All Americans need to reclaim this national holiday. Honoring the incredible achievement of Columbus is not the same as reveling in the hardship and sorrow of native peoples. In addition, historians have exaggerated the facts surrounding Columbus’ discovery while de-emphasizing the barbarism and poverty into which IFTUVNCMFEJO/PSUI"NFSJDB$PMVNCVTXBTBUUJNFT brutal and did take hostages to Spain, but in his journal, Columbus reported cannibalism, warfare, and slavery among the natives, and upon his second journey, he learned that the crew members he left behind were slaughtered by local inhabitants. Enslavement, brutality, and conquest were not exclusive to Europeans—these atrocities were rampant all over the world—but the remarkable discovery of two continents was something only Columbus accomplished. It’s also worth noting that Columbus made his quest not for riches or fame but to honor his adopted country and spread its religion. His intentions were pure. Some would argue that he and his men engaged in warfare with some of the natives that they encountered, but this happened rarely and only because it was a “kill or be killed” situation. The victims were so deficient in iron The PowerScore SAT Reading Bible Analyze the Answer Choices 85 90 95 100 1. that they did not have the strength to effectively fight the Europeans. Columbus described most of the people he encountered as “gentle” and “free from wickedness,” and his design for them included conversion to Christianity, development of a written language, and freedom from poverty. These goals were ultimately realized, but historians are hesitant to place value on the results. They would rather look at the negative impact of Columbus EJTDPWFSJOH"NFSJDBUIBOUIFQPTJUJWFJNQBDUPG/BUJWF Americans discovering Europe. Columbus’s discovery was the first great chapter in our nation’s history. His accomplishment was a catalyst for excellence; enlightenment, democracy, reason, and individualism are just a few of the core values that are BEJSFDUSFTVMUPGUIFWPZBHFPGUIF/JOB1JOUBBOE Santa Maria. We are not only entitled, but patriotically obligated, to honor the great explorer. Both authors would most likely agree that (A) Columbus’ voyage was sanctioned by the king and queen of Spain (B) Columbus Day should be abandoned in favor of Indigenous Peoples’ Day (C) Columbus exhibited ruthlessness in the Americas (D) celebrating Columbus Day is an entitlement for Americans & $PMVNCVTJTWJFXFEBTBWJMMBJOCZNPTU/BUJWF Americans 2. In response to the claim made in lines 21-24 i$PMVNCVT0DUPCFS UIFBVUIPSPG1BTTBHF would most likely assert that (A) Columbus Day honors a murderous tyrant # $PMVNCVTIBEUIFQVSFTUPGJOUFOUJPOTGPS/BUJWF Americans (C) Columbus Day celebrations should be continued in elementary schools (D) the repercussions from Columbus Day celebrations are financially draining (E) brutality was universal and should not detract from Columbus’ accomplishment Chapter Nine (A) True to You? (B) True But Wrong (P1)/Copycat (line 28) (C) Correct (lines 8-12 and 67-68) (D) True But Wrong (Passage 2) (E) Extreme (A) (B) (C) (D) (E) 241 Passage Based Reading Mastery 3. The author of Passage 1 mentions Adolf Hitler and /BUIBO#FEGPSE'PSFTUMJOFT QSJNBSJMZUP suggest that " TBWBHFOFTTXBTOPUFYDMVTJWFUPUIF/FX World (B) national holidays honoring other villians would cause an uproar by Europeans (C) Columbus is the only person responsible for decimating a population of people (D) Columbus’ wrongdoings were as terrible as the crimes of two other historical figures (E) the government is not likely to abolish Columbus Day 4. (A) (B) (C) (D) (E) According to the author of Passage 2, there is a lack of “enthusiasm” (line 59) for Columbus Day because (A) many Americans worry that the celebration is an BGGSPOUUP/BUJWF"NFSJDBOT (B) most people view Columbus as a savage tyrant (C) few private businesses close for the national holiday (D) Columbus’ voyage is considered a Spanish accomplishment rather than an American one & BOPWFSXIFMNJOHNBKPSJUZPG/BUJWF"NFSJDBOT would prefer to celebrate Indigenous People’s Day 5. (A) (B) (C) (D) (E) The author of Passage 1 does not “expect much” (line 37) because (A) most people do not believe that the United States has a right to invade foreign lands (B) the government fears the cultural and financial consequences of change (C) Americans choose to celebrate Columbus’ quest to free natives from poverty and illiteracy (D) home ownership has replaced freedom as the American dream (E) history has proven that the American government JHOPSFT/BUJWF"NFSJDBOTSFRVFTUT 242 (A) (B) (C) (D) (E) The PowerScore SAT Reading Bible Analyze the Answer Choices 6. Line 47 (“Americans . . . best”) suggests that Americans (A) support the government in conducting foreign invasions (B) celebrate Columbus Day because it benefits the common good (C) acknowledge that their country is the most powerful in the Western hemisphere (D) refuse to make changes to their national holidays (E) believe that their judgment concerning appropriate behavior is better than that of /BUJWF"NFSJDBOT 7. In lines 64-67 (“In addition . . . America”), the passage implies that (A) Columbus mistakenly believed that he had landed in the Spice Islands (B) Columbus was not as barbaric as other European explorers $ /BUJWF"NFSJDBOTUISFBUFOFEUPLJMM$PMVNCVT and his men (D) historians are partly responsible for Columbus’ villainous reputation (E) all European explorers reported that the natives in the new world engaged in cannibalism and warfare 8. (A) (B) (C) (D) (E) (A) (B) (C) (D) (E) The author of Passage 1 and the “historians” (line 90) in Passage 2 would most likely agree that the voyage of Christopher Columbus (A) resulted from Spain’s devotion to spreading Christianity (B) led to the development of a written language for /BUJWF"NFSJDBOT $ IBEEFUSJNFOUBMDPOTFRVFODFTGPS/BUJWF Americans (D) was the first great accomplishment in our nation’s history (E) should be commemorated with pride by all Americans Chapter Nine (A) (B) (C) (D) (E) 243 Passage Based Reading Mastery Chapter Summary There are two types of answers on the SAT: right answers and wrong answers. Right Answers t6TFTZOPOZNT t*ODMVEFBMMPGUIFJNQPSUBOUJEFBTGSPNUIFMJOFSFGFSFODFPSQBTTBHF t5FOEUPVTFNPSFHFOFSBMMBOHVBHFPSJEFBT t$BOCFQSPWFOCZUIFUFYU t"SFQSPWJEFECFMPXUIFRVFTUJPO:PVTJNQMZIBWFUPMPDBUFUIFN Wrong Answers t$BOOPUCFQSPWFOCZUIFSFGFSFODFEQPSUJPOPGUIFUFYU t5FOEUPVTFNPSFTQFDJGJDMBOHVBHFCVUPGUFOGBJMUPJODMVEFBMMJNQPSUBOU ideas from the line reference or passage. t"SFPGUFOFBTJFSUPEFUFSNJOFUIBOUIFSJHIUBOTXFS Confidence Quotation “Many of life’s failures are people who did not realize how close they were to success when they gave up.” -Thomas Edison, American inventor 244 t"SFPGUFOQMBDFEBCPWFUIFDPSSFDUBOTXFSXIFOUIFZBSFFTQFDJBMMZ attractive to fool you into selecting the wrong answer without reading all five answer choices. t$PNFJOTFWFSBMTUZMFTUIBUBSFEFTJHOFEUPUSBQZPV Copycat Answers t6TFXPSETBOEQISBTFTEJSFDUMZGSPNUIFUFYU Opposite Answers t1SFTFOUBOJEFBUIBUJTPQQPTJUFPGUIFSJHIUBOTXFSBOEZPVS prephrase. Extreme Answers t6TFXPSETUIBUBSFEJGGJDVMUUPEFGFOE5IFXPSETNBZCFRVBMJGJFST like most and always, or adjectives and verbs, like malicious and mock. True But Wrong Answers t.BLFUSVFTUBUFNFOUTBCPVUBQPSUJPOPGUIFQBTTBHFUIBUJTOPUUIF subject of the question. True To A Point Answers t1SPWJEFBOBOTXFSUIBUJTiIBMGSJHIUw t0GUFOJOUSPEVDFOFXJOGPSNBUJPOOPUEJTDVTTFEJOUIFQBTTBHF t.BZIBWFBTJOHMFXPSEUIFNBLFTUIFBOTXFSDIPJDFXSPOH True to You Answers t1SFTFOUDPNNPOCFMJFGTUIBUXFSFOPUQSPWJEFEJOUIFQBTTBHF t6TFGBDUTUIBUBSFMJLFMZBQBSUPGZPVSQSJPSLOPXMFEHFCVUXFSFOPU provided in the passage. The PowerScore SAT Reading Bible Analyze the Answer Choices Notes: Chapter Nine 245 Passage Based Reading Mastery Analyze the Answer Choices Answer Key Analyzing the Answer Choices Problem Set—Page 240 2. (E) (A) (B) (C) (D) 3. (D) (A) (B) (C) (E) 4. Medium Prephrase: Everyone was brutal, including the natives. But he is the only one to sail to the Americas so he should still be celebrated. Opposite Answer and Copycat Answer. This is the opinion of the author of Passage 1 and the opposite opinion of the author of Passage 2. It uses text from lines 8-9 to try to trick you. Extreme and True But Wrong. The word purest makes it extreme. The author of Passage 2 does cite Columbus’ pure intentions, though, but this is not the argument he would use to refute the claim in lines 21-24. True to a Point. The author of Passage 2 does believe Columbus Day celebrations should continue, but nowhere in the passage does it say anything about elementary school. Slight Copycat Answer. The idea of this answer is off-base and not mentioned in either passage, but it uses the word repercussions, as does the passage in line 29. Prephrase: Two other tyrants are considered terrible so national holidays in their honor do not exist. True But Wrong, Opposite, and Copycat. The author of Passage 1 makes this point in lines 72-73, but he makes it about exclusivity to Europeans. True to a Point. This answer is correct until you get to the word Europeans. According to lines 28-30, it would cause serious repercussions in America (and likely all over the world). Extreme and Opposite. The author implies that Hitler and Forrest have shown similar brutality, so the idea in the passage is opposite the idea in the answer choice. The extreme word only should cause you to avoid it, too. True But Wrong. The author of Passage 1 makes this point in lines 37-41, but it is not related to the line reference. (A) Medium Medium Prephrase: Many people fear offending descendents of native peoples (lines 59-60). (B) Extreme. The word most makes this answer extreme. Even the author of Passage 1 does not go so far as to say this. (C) True to You. This is not discussed in either passage but may be true given your own experiences. (D) This answer does not fit any of the Wrong Answer categories, but is wrong nonetheless. This idea is not discussed in the passage. (E) Extreme. This idea is again more suitable for the author of Passage 1, but even then, the phrase overwhelming majority makes it extreme. 5. (B) Medium Prephrase: Government does not want to admit responsibility nor change the status quo. (A) Opposite. According to lines 42-45, most Americans believe the opposite of this statement. (C) True to a Point. Columbus did look to free natives from poverty and illiteracy, but this is not the full reason he is celebrated or why the author does not expect much. (D) Copycat0UIFSUIBOVTJOHXPSETGSPN1BTTBHFUIJTBOTXFSIBTOPSFMBUJPOUPUIFQBTTBHF (E) This answer does not fit any of the Wrong Answer categories, but is wrong nonetheless. This idea is not discussed in the passage. 246 The PowerScore SAT Reading Bible Analyze the Answer Choices & )BSE 1SFQISBTF5IJOLUIFZLOPXXIBUJTCFTUGPS/BUJWF"NFSJDBOT (A) True But Wrong. The author states this in lines 42-45, but it is not suggested in line 47. (B) Copycat. The phrase common good might trick you into selecting this answer that is never stated or implied in the passage. (C) This answer does not fit any of the Wrong Answer categories, but is wrong nonetheless. This idea is not discussed in the passage and presents new information (Western hemisphere). (D) Extreme. The verb refuse is extreme, as it applies to all Americans. The answer also uses national holidays, rather than just Columbus Day, and nothing is noted about other national holidays in the passage. 7. (D) Medium Prephrase: This answer is difficult to prephrase. (A) True to You. It’s likely that you know this fact from your history classes, but it is not stated or implied in the passage. (B) True to a Point5IFBVUIPSJTNBLJOHUIFQPJOUUIBUUIF/FX8PSMEXBTOPTUSBOHFSUPCSVUBMJUZXIFSF the natives had even resorted to cannibalism. But the use of other explorers makes it untrue. (C) This answer does not fit any of the Wrong Answer categories, but is wrong nonetheless. This idea is not discussed in the passage. Columbus claims that the natives practiced cannibalism, warfare, and slavery among themselves, never indicating that he himself was in danger. (E) Extreme and Copycat. The modifier all should be immediately suspect, and again, this answer involves other explorers, who were not mentioned in the passage. 8. (C) Medium Prephrase: Columbus engaged in warfare and brutal behavior (A) True to You and True to a Point. This is not discussed in the passage, but may be something you remember from history class. The passage does state that Columbus made the voyage to spread religion, but not that this was Spain’s reason for the funding the voyage. (B) Opposite. The author of Passage 2 would make this point, not the author of Passage 1 or the historians. (D) Opposite. The author of Passage 2 would make this point, not the author of Passage 1 or the historians. (E) Opposite. The author of Passage 2 would make this point, not the author of Passage 1 or the historians Chapter Nine 247 Passage Based Reading Mastery Analyzing the Answer Choices Problem Set In the following exercise, reread the passages from the previous chapter. For each question, select the correct answer DIPJDFBOEJGQPTTJCMFMBCFMUIFXSPOHBOTXFSDIPJDFTBT$PQZDBUT0QQPTJUFT&YUSFNFT5SVF#VU8SPOH5SVFUPB Point, True to You, or a combination of answer types. The first one has been done for you. Answers begin on page 246. The following passages discuss the commemoration PG$ISJTUPQIFS$PMVNCVTBSSJWBMJO/PSUI"NFSJDB 1BTTBHFJTGSPNBBSUJDMFXSJUUFOCZB/BUJWF "NFSJDBOBDUJWJTU1BTTBHFJTGSPNBCMPHCZB political commentator. 40 45 Passage 1 Line 5 10 15 20 25 30 35 In 1492, Columbus sailed the ocean blue, resulting in the annihilation of my people. Upon his “discovery,” UIFSFXFSFNPSFUIBONJMMJPO/BUJWF"NFSJDBOT populating the continent, but by 1900, that number had diminished to 230,000. Such atrocities might be somewhat less offensive or at least mitigated if he had only inadvertently spread European germs that wiped out so many tribes, but Columbus was a murderous tyrant. He kidnapped and enslaved hundreds of natives, allowed his crew to abuse men, women, and children, and mortally wounded those slaves who could not produce gold and riches fit for Spain. Eventually, his BSSJWBMJO/PSUI"NFSJDBMFEUPGVSUIFSHFOPDJEFXIFO the government cleared our lands for the white man’s pursuit of manifest destiny. It is deplorable that the American dream of homestead ownership is founded POUIFTMBVHIUFSPG/BUJWF"NFSJDBOTBOEUIFMBSDFOZPG their land. What makes Columbus’ savage crimes more unsettling is the honor that is still being bestowed upon him some 500 years later. Christopher Columbus is a national hero; he is exalted in elementary school text books, glorified in the names of our cities and capitals, and commemorated FWFSZZFBSPOUIFTFDPOE.POEBZJO0DUPCFS*OUIJT era of political correctness, it is baffling how the United States government can continue to ignore the cries of my people who demand the forsaking of Columbus Day in favor of Indigenous Peoples’ Day. Can you imagine the repercussions if national holidays were issued for PUIFSCSVUBMMFBEFSTTVDIBT"EPMG)JUMFSPS/BUIBO Bedford Forrest? Fortunately, these tyrants will never be celebrated because the United States recognizes their atrocities and assisted or at least apologized to their victims. In the meantime, though, hundreds of thousands PG/BUJWF"NFSJDBOTBSFJHOPSFEJOTVMUFEBOEFYQFDUFE to “just get over it.” I suppose we shouldn’t expect much from our government. To make changes to school textbooks and national holidays demands accepting responsibility and making 240 50 reparations, two acts that threaten the culture, economy, and status quo of the nation. Plus, the ashes of nineteenth century manifest destiny still smolder, as most Americans believe that their leaders have a right to invade and take any land as long as the goal is the common good of the American people and the betterment of the natives PGUIFUIBUMBOE/FWFSNJOEXIBUUIFDVMUVSFPGUIPTF natives dictates; Americans, after all, know best. While JUNBZCFQPJOUMFTTUPFYQFDUDIBOHF/BUJWF"NFSJcans will undoubtedly hold on to hope that one day our leaders will recognize the heinousness that our ancestors endured, and take the necessary steps to reduce a historical figure from national hero to national villain. Passage 2 55 60 65 70 75 80 Columbus Day is in danger of extinction. In several cities in California, it has been replaced by Indigenous Peoples’ Day. Parades in honor of the explorer have not PDDVSSFEJO$PMVNCVT0IJPTJODFUIFT"OE4PVUI %BLPLBIBTSFOBNFEUIFIPMJEBZi/BUJWF"NFSJDBO Day.” Even where the holiday is preserved, many people lack enthusiasm for the celebration in fear of offending descendents of native peoples. All Americans need to reclaim this national holiday. Honoring the incredible achievement of Columbus is not the same as reveling in the hardship and sorrow of native peoples. In addition, historians have exaggerated the facts surrounding Columbus’ discovery while de-emphasizing the barbarism and poverty into which IFTUVNCMFEJO/PSUI"NFSJDB$PMVNCVTXBTBUUJNFT brutal and did take hostages to Spain, but in his journal, Columbus reported cannibalism, warfare, and slavery among the natives, and upon his second journey, he learned that the crew members he left behind were slaughtered by local inhabitants. Enslavement, brutality, and conquest were not exclusive to Europeans—these atrocities were rampant all over the world—but the remarkable discovery of two continents was something only Columbus accomplished. It’s also worth noting that Columbus made his quest not for riches or fame but to honor his adopted country and spread its religion. His intentions were pure. Some would argue that he and his men engaged in warfare with some of the natives that they encountered, but this happened rarely and only because it was a “kill or be killed” situation. The victims were so deficient in iron The PowerScore SAT Reading Bible Analyze the Answer Choices 85 90 95 100 1. that they did not have the strength to effectively fight the Europeans. Columbus described most of the people he encountered as “gentle” and “free from wickedness,” and his design for them included conversion to Christianity, development of a written language, and freedom from poverty. These goals were ultimately realized, but historians are hesitant to place value on the results. They would rather look at the negative impact of Columbus EJTDPWFSJOH"NFSJDBUIBOUIFQPTJUJWFJNQBDUPG/BUJWF Americans discovering Europe. Columbus’s discovery was the first great chapter in our nation’s history. His accomplishment was a catalyst for excellence; enlightenment, democracy, reason, and individualism are just a few of the core values that are BEJSFDUSFTVMUPGUIFWPZBHFPGUIF/JOB1JOUBBOE Santa Maria. We are not only entitled, but patriotically obligated, to honor the great explorer. Both authors would most likely agree that (A) Columbus’ voyage was sanctioned by the king and queen of Spain (B) Columbus Day should be abandoned in favor of Indigenous Peoples’ Day (C) Columbus exhibited ruthlessness in the Americas (D) celebrating Columbus Day is an entitlement for Americans & $PMVNCVTJTWJFXFEBTBWJMMBJOCZNPTU/BUJWF Americans 2. In response to the claim made in lines 21-24 i$PMVNCVT0DUPCFS UIFBVUIPSPG1BTTBHF would most likely assert that (A) Columbus Day honors a murderous tyrant # $PMVNCVTIBEUIFQVSFTUPGJOUFOUJPOTGPS/BUJWF Americans (C) Columbus Day celebrations should be continued in elementary schools (D) the repercussions from Columbus Day celebrations are financially draining (E) brutality was universal and should not detract from Columbus’ accomplishment Chapter Nine (A) True to You? (B) True But Wrong (P1)/Copycat (line 28) (C) Correct (lines 8-12 and 67-68) (D) True But Wrong (Passage 2) (E) Extreme (A) (B) (C) (D) (E) 241 Passage Based Reading Mastery 3. The author of Passage 1 mentions Adolf Hitler and /BUIBO#FEGPSE'PSFTUMJOFT QSJNBSJMZUP suggest that " TBWBHFOFTTXBTOPUFYDMVTJWFUPUIF/FX World (B) national holidays honoring other villians would cause an uproar by Europeans (C) Columbus is the only person responsible for decimating a population of people (D) Columbus’ wrongdoings were as terrible as the crimes of two other historical figures (E) the government is not likely to abolish Columbus Day 4. (A) (B) (C) (D) (E) According to the author of Passage 2, there is a lack of “enthusiasm” (line 59) for Columbus Day because (A) many Americans worry that the celebration is an BGGSPOUUP/BUJWF"NFSJDBOT (B) most people view Columbus as a savage tyrant (C) few private businesses close for the national holiday (D) Columbus’ voyage is considered a Spanish accomplishment rather than an American one & BOPWFSXIFMNJOHNBKPSJUZPG/BUJWF"NFSJDBOT would prefer to celebrate Indigenous People’s Day 5. (A) (B) (C) (D) (E) The author of Passage 1 does not “expect much” (line 37) because (A) most people do not believe that the United States has a right to invade foreign lands (B) the government fears the cultural and financial consequences of change (C) Americans choose to celebrate Columbus’ quest to free natives from poverty and illiteracy (D) home ownership has replaced freedom as the American dream (E) history has proven that the American government JHOPSFT/BUJWF"NFSJDBOTSFRVFTUT 242 (A) (B) (C) (D) (E) The PowerScore SAT Reading Bible Analyze the Answer Choices 6. Line 47 (“Americans . . . best”) suggests that Americans (A) support the government in conducting foreign invasions (B) celebrate Columbus Day because it benefits the common good (C) acknowledge that their country is the most powerful in the Western hemisphere (D) refuse to make changes to their national holidays (E) believe that their judgment concerning appropriate behavior is better than that of /BUJWF"NFSJDBOT 7. In lines 64-67 (“In addition . . . America”), the passage implies that (A) Columbus mistakenly believed that he had landed in the Spice Islands (B) Columbus was not as barbaric as other European explorers $ /BUJWF"NFSJDBOTUISFBUFOFEUPLJMM$PMVNCVT and his men (D) historians are partly responsible for Columbus’ villainous reputation (E) all European explorers reported that the natives in the new world engaged in cannibalism and warfare 8. (A) (B) (C) (D) (E) (A) (B) (C) (D) (E) The author of Passage 1 and the “historians” (line 90) in Passage 2 would most likely agree that the voyage of Christopher Columbus (A) resulted from Spain’s devotion to spreading Christianity (B) led to the development of a written language for /BUJWF"NFSJDBOT $ IBEEFUSJNFOUBMDPOTFRVFODFTGPS/BUJWF Americans (D) was the first great accomplishment in our nation’s history (E) should be commemorated with pride by all Americans Chapter Nine (A) (B) (C) (D) (E) 243 Short Reading Comprehension Review Questions Short Reading Comprehension Skill Set One Note: Skill sets may contain more questions than the actual SAT to show the potential range of questioning. The passages below are followed by questions based on their content; questions following a pair of related passages may also be based on the relationship between the paired passages. Answer the questions on the basis of what is stated or implied in the passages and in any introductory material that may be provided. Questions 1–4 are based on the following passage. (5) But in the main, I feel like a brown bag of miscellany propped against a wall. Against a wall in company with other bags, white, red, and yellow. Pour out the contents, and there is discovered a jumble of small things: priceless lengths of string, a key to a door long since crumbled away, a rusty knife-blade, old shoes saved for a road that never was and never will be, a nail bent under the weight of things too heavy for any nail, a dried flower or two still a little fragrant. In your hand is the brown bag. On the ground before you is the jumble it held—so much like the jumble in the bags, could they be emptied, that all might be dumped in a single heap and the bags refilled without altering the content of any greatly. A bit of colored glass more or less would not matter. Perhaps that is how the Great Stuffer of Bags filled them in the first place—who knows? 1. The primary purpose of the passage is to A. B. C. D. E. describe the contents of bags. suggest people are not predisposed to prejudice. recommend all people share wealth with others. purport that all people have some value. identify that even with age, memories are valued. 2. What statement best describes the author’s meaning of the phrase “a nail bent under the weight of things too heavy for any nail?” (line 4) A. B. C. D. E. Life presents hardships that will test the mettle of any individual. There are times in life when a curved object is a better tool than a straight one. Planning will help the individual have the correct equipment for the job at hand. People tend to keep items that are no longer useful. The nail is simply another article to place in the bag. 3. “Great Stuffer of Bags” is an example of what literary device? A. B. C. D. E. onomatopoeia personification allusion assonance alliteration 4. The entire passage qualifies as which of the following devices? A. B. C. D. E. allegory extended metaphor epic litotes hyperbole 67 Part II: Reading Comprehension Questions 5–7 are based on the following passage. (5) It seemed to me, as I kept remembering all this, that those times and those summers had been infinitely precious and worth saving. There had been jollity and peace and goodness. The arriving (at the beginning of August) had been so big a business in itself; at the railway station the farm wagon drawn up, the first smell of the pine-laden air, the first glimpse of the smiling farmer, and the great importance of the trunks and your father’s enormous authority in such matters, and the feel of the wagon under you for the long ten-mile haul, and at the top of the last long hill catching the first view of the lake after eleven months of not seeing this cherished body of water. The shouts and cries of the other campers when they saw you, and the trunks to be unpacked, to give up their rich burden. (Arriving was less exciting nowadays, when you sneaked up in your car and parked it under a tree near the damp and took out the bags and in five minutes it was all over, no fuss, no loud wonderful fuss about trunks.) 5. The device used by the author in this passage is called A. B. C. D. E. foreshadowing. deja vu. flashback. flash forward. recollection. 7. The overall tone of the passage is A. B. C. D. E. melancholy. sad. angry. sedate. soothing. 6. In the passage, the author emphasizes which aspect of the childhood memory? A. B. C. D. E. the anticipation the aromas enjoying friends wagon rides the arrival Questions 8–10 are based on the following passage. (4) I fretted the other night at the hotel at the stranger who broke into my chamber after midnight, claiming to share it. But after his lamp had smoked the chamber full and I had turned round to the wall in despair, the man blew out his lamp, knelt down at his bedside, and made in low whisper a long earnest prayer. Then was the relation entirely changed between us. I fretted no more, but respected and liked him. 8. In line 1, “fretted” most nearly means A. B. C. D. E. wondered. considered. vaguely recognized. worried. panicked. 9. The probable purpose of the author using the phrase, “lamp had smoked the chamber full” is to A. B. C. D. E. 68 establish a period of time. show a low grade fuel was used. establish the faultiness of the lamp. indicate the lamp was turned up too high. utilize figurative language. 10. What can the reader infer about the speaker based on the passage? A. B. C. D. E. He is a brave man. He is used to sharing his room with strangers. He easily overcomes fear. He is a religious man. He is easily put off. Long Reading Comprehension Review Questions Long Reading Comprehension Skill Set Six Note: Skill sets may contain more questions than the actual SAT to show the potential range of questioning. The passages below are followed by questions based on their content; questions following a pair of related passages may also be based on the relationship between the paired passages. Answer the questions on the basis of what is stated or implied in the passages and in any introductory material that may be provided. Questions 1–10 are based on the following passage. The following is an excerpt from Life on the Mississippi by Mark Twain. Twain spent considerable time on the Mississippi River and was well versed in the perils of navigating this body of water. (5) (10) (15) (20) (25) (30) (35) Now on very dark nights, light is a deadly enemy to piloting; you are aware that if you stand in a lighted room, on such a night, you cannot see things in the street to any purpose; but if you put out the lights and stand in the gloom you can make out objects in the street pretty well. So, on very dark nights, pilots do not smoke; they allow no fire in the pilot-house stove if there is a crack which can allow the least ray to escape; they order the furnaces to be curtained with huge tarpaulins and the sky-lights to be closely blinded. Then no light whatever issues from the boat. The undefinable shape that now entered the pilot-house had Mr. X.’s voice. This said— ‘Let me take her, George; I’ve seen this place since you have, and it is so crooked that I reckon I can run it myself easier than I could tell you how to do it.’ ‘It is kind of you, and I swear—I—am willing. I haven’t got another drop of perspiration left in me. I have been spinning around and around the wheel like a squirrel. It is so dark I can’t tell which way she is swinging till she is coming around like a whirligig.’ So Ealer took a seat on the bench, panting and breathless. The black phantom assumed the wheel without saying anything, steadied the waltzing steamer with a turn or two, and then stood at ease, coaxing her a little to this side and then to that, as gently and as sweetly as if the time had been noonday. When Ealer observed this marvel of steering, he wished he had not confessed! He stared, and wondered, and finally said— ‘Well, I thought I knew how to steer a steamboat, but that was another mistake of mine.’ X. said nothing, but went serenely on with his work. He rang for the leads; he rang to slow down the steam; he worked the boat carefully and neatly into invisible marks, then stood at the center of the wheel and peered blandly out into the blackness, fore and aft, to verify his position; as the leads shoaled more and more, he stopped the engines entirely, and the dead silence and suspense of ‘drifting’ followed when the shoalest water was struck, he cracked on the steam, carried her handsomely over, and then began to work her warily into the next system of shoal marks; the same patient, heedful use of leads and engines followed, the boat slipped through without touching bottom, and entered upon the third and last intricacy of the crossing; imperceptibly she moved through the gloom, crept by inches into her marks, drifted tediously till the shoalest water was cried, and then, under a tremendous head of steam, went swinging over the reef and away into deep water and safety! Ealer let his long-pent breath pour out in a great, relieving sigh, and said— ‘That’s the sweetest piece of piloting that was ever done on the Mississippi River! I wouldn’t believed it could be done, if I hadn’t seen it.’ There was no reply, and he added— ‘Just hold her five minutes longer, partner, and let me run down and get a cup of coffee.’ A minute later Ealer was biting into a pie, down in the ‘texas,’ and comforting himself with coffee. Just then the night watchman happened in, and was about to happen out again, when he noticed Ealer and exclaimed— ‘Who is at the wheel, sir?’ ‘X.’ ‘Dart for the pilot-house, quicker than lightning!’ The next moment both men were flying up the pilot-house companion way, three steps at a jump! Nobody there! The great steamer was whistling down the middle of the river at her own sweet will! The watchman shot out of the place again; Ealer seized the wheel, set an engine back with power, and held his breath while the boat reluctantly swung away from a ‘towhead’ which she was about to knock into the middle of the Gulf of Mexico! 131 Part II: Reading Comprehension (40) (45) By and by the watchman came back and said— ‘Didn’t that lunatic tell you he was asleep, when he first came up here?’ ‘NO.’ ‘Well, he was. I found him walking along on top of the railings just as unconcerned as another man would walk a pavement; and I put him to bed; now just this minute there he was again, away astern, going through that sort of tight-rope deviltry the same as before.’ ‘Well, I think I’ll stay by, next time he has one of those fits. But I hope he’ll have them often. You just ought to have seen him take this boat through Helena crossing. I never saw anything so gaudy before. And if he can do such gold-leaf, kid-glove, diamond-breastpin piloting when he is sound asleep, what COULDN’T he do if he was dead!’ 1. What is the primary purpose for the first paragraph lines (1–6)? A. B. C. D. E. to explain what lengths pilots go to keep the pilot-house to explain that even though freezing, no furnace is burned at night in the pilot-house to explain that pilots do not even smoke in the pilot-house to keep it dark to explain the dangers of piloting at night to explain that it was difficult to identify anyone entering the pilot-house at night 2. What can the reader infer by the comment of Mr. X., “I’ve seen this place since you have” line (7)? A. B. C. D. E. It was simply a nice way to take over the wheel of the boat. It implies it had been a very long time since George had seen this part of the river. It suggests that due to the current, the river shifts with some frequency. It is simply a form of boasting by Mr. X. that he pilots more frequently than George. It means that Mr. X. has been in the pilothouse more recently than George and can better pilot. 3. Which statement best summarizes George’s statements in lines (9–11)? A. B. C. D. E. 4. Why does the phrase, “It is so dark I can’t tell which way she is swinging” line (10) seem strange? A. B. C. D. E. 132 He is upset at the suggestion and swears at Mr. X. albeit he acquiesces in the end. He has fought the darkness and over-steered such that he has sweat to the point of dehydration. The currents are so strong that the wheel was very difficult to turn making him sweat profusely. He is disgusted that it is so dark in the pilothouse that he over-steers because he can’t see the instruments. He has been spinning around the wheel like a squirrel runs around a tree getting nowhere. because a dark pilot-house is supposed to help pilot the boat, not confuse the pilot because darker is supposed to be better, so it could not be too dark because at first glance you don’t know he is speaking of the outside and it doesn’t match with the desire for total darkness in the pilot-house because you would initially think that darkness was a friend to the pilot in the pilothouse and now he is saying it was too dark to know which way the boat was turning because of the discussions about it being dark in the pilot-house and it being very dark at night and that if light is deadly, why is it now a problem Long Reading Comprehension Review Questions 5. Which device is evidenced with the phrase, “waltzing steamer” in line (13)? A. B. C. D. E. symbolism anachronism anaphora assonance personification 6. What can be inferred by the phrase “he wished he had not confessed” line (15)? A. B. C. D. E. He felt childish for having not been tougher during a tense situation and thought that Mr. X. would think less of him as a comrade. Given the ease with which Mr. X. traversed the river, George was more than a little embarrassed with his confession that he could not do nearly so well. Because Mr. X. was not engaged in conversation with him, George thought he was upset that his companion could not have managed this piece of the river, particularly given the ease with which it obviously could be done. He felt like since he so easily relinquished the wheel to Mr. X. that now Mr. X. would think that he was unwilling to pull his own weight aboard the boat. He was fearful the Mr. X. would share his confession and inadequacy with the other hands or even the captain. 8. What literary device is used when it is disclosed that Mr. X. was asleep? A. B. C. D. E. twist of fate dénouement surprise ending flashback foreshadowing 9. In line (48), the word “gaudy” most nearly means A. B. C. D. E. professional. expertly done. flawlessly. showy. amazing. 10. What is most likely the main purpose for writing the story? A. B. C. D. E. to inform to argue a point to persuade to entertain to dissuade 7. Which of the following would not be a reasonable deduction as a result of Mr. X. not speaking to George the whole of the relief piloting episode lines (12–29)? A. B. C. D. E. Mr. X. was fully focused on the task at hand and did not wish to engage in conversation. Mr. X. was offended by the readiness George demonstrated by giving up the wheel so readily. George was a less tendered mate and Mr. X. did not choose to engage in social conversation with someone of lesser position. Mr. X. had a hearing impairment and simply didn’t hear George. Mr. X. was answering George but George was hearing impaired. 133 Part II: Reading Comprehension Long Reading Comprehension Skill Set Eight Note: Skill sets may contain more questions than the actual SAT to show the potential range of questioning. The passages below are followed by questions based on their content; questions following a pair of related passages may also be based on the relationship between the paired passages. Answer the questions on the basis of what is stated or implied in the passages and in any introductory material that may be provided. Questions 1–10 are based on the following passage. The following is an excerpt from Persuasion by Jane Austen. (5) (10) (15) (20) (25) (30) (35) (40) 140 Vanity was the beginning and the end of Sir Walter Elliot’s character; vanity of person and of situation. He had been remarkably handsome in his youth; and, at fifty-four, was still a very fine man. Few women could think more of their personal appearance than he did, nor could the valet of any new made lord be more delighted with the place he held in society. He considered the blessing of beauty as inferior only to the blessing of a baronetcy; and the Sir Walter Elliot, who united these gifts, was the constant object of his warmest respect and devotion. His good looks and his rank had one fair claim on his attachment; since to them he must have owed a wife of very superior character to any thing deserved by his own. Lady Elliot had been an excellent woman, sensible and amiable; whose judgement [sic] and conduct, if they might be pardoned the youthful infatuation which made her Lady Elliot, had never required indulgence afterwards. She had humoured [sic], or softened, or concealed his failings, and promoted his real respectability for seventeen years; and though not the very happiest being in the world herself, had found enough in her duties, her friends, and her children, to attach her to life, and make it no matter of indifference to her when she was called on to quit them. Three girls, the two eldest sixteen and fourteen, was an awful legacy for a mother to bequeath, an awful charge rather, to confide to the authority and guidance of a conceited, silly father. She had, however, one very intimate friend, a sensible, deserving woman, who had been brought, by strong attachment to herself, to settle close by her, in the village of Kellynch; and on her kindness and advice, Lady Elliot mainly relied for the best help and maintenance of the good principles and instruction which she had been anxiously giving her daughters. This friend, and Sir Walter, did not marry, whatever might have been anticipated on that head by their acquaintance. Thirteen years had passed away since Lady Elliot’s death, and they were still near neighbours [sic] and intimate friends, and one remained a widower, the other a widow. That Lady Russell, of steady age and character, and extremely well provided for, should have no thought of a second marriage, needs no apology to the public, which is rather apt to be unreasonably discontented when a woman does marry again, than when she does not; but Sir Walter’s continuing in singleness requires explanation. Be it known then, that Sir Walter, like a good father, (having met with one or two private disappointments in very unreasonable applications), prided himself on remaining single for his dear daughters’ sake. For one daughter, his eldest, he would really have given up any thing, which he had not been very much tempted to do. Elizabeth had succeeded, at sixteen, to all that was possible, of her mother’s rights and consequence; and being very handsome, and very like himself, her influence had always been great, and they had gone on together most happily. His two other children were of very inferior value. Mary had acquired a little artificial importance, by becoming Mrs. Charles Musgrove; but Anne, with an elegance of mind and sweetness of character, which must have placed her high with any people of real understanding, was nobody with either father or sister; her word had no weight, her convenience was always to give way—she was only Anne. To Lady Russell, indeed, she was a most dear and highly valued god-daughter, favourite [sic], and friend. Lady Russell loved them all; but it was only in Anne that she could fancy the mother to revive again. A few years before, Anne Elliot had been a very pretty girl, but her bloom had vanished early; and as even in its height, her father had found little to admire in her (so totally different were her delicate features and mild dark eyes from his own), there could be nothing in them, now that she was faded and thin, to excite his esteem. He had never indulged much hope, he had now none, of ever reading her name in any other page of his favourite [sic] work. All equality of alliance must rest with Elizabeth, for Mary had merely connected herself with an old country family of respectability and large fortune, and had therefore given all the honour [sic] and received none: Elizabeth would, one day or other, marry suitably. Long Reading Comprehension Review Questions 1. What is the author’s purpose in the first paragraph, lines (1–5)? A. B. C. D. E. to establish a time frame for the story to establish a setting for the story to establish an overall tone in the story to establish the character of Sir Elliot in the story to establish the financial condition of Sir Elliot in the story 2. Which selection properly identifies the “fair claim” in line (6)? A. B. C. D. E. His wealth stemmed from looks and rank. His birthright gave him looks and rank attainable. His possession of looks and rank commanded respect. He got his wife because of looks and rank. He was held high in society because of looks and rank. 3. What does “his own” refer to as used in line (7)? A. B. C. D. E. his own wife his own looks his own character his own rank his own claim 4. The device evidenced in line (7) by eliminating the word “character” after “his own” is known as A. B. C. D. E. parasynthesis. mythopoetics. monosemy. ellipsis. interpolation. 5. Which statement best defines the meaning of the phrase “attach her to life” line (11), as used in this passage? A. B. C. D. E. Make her feel alive due to all the social activities resulting from her husband’s rank. Her duties, friends, and children were constantly attached to her demanding attention. She found reason to live in her duties, friends, and children. Her entire life was relegated to her duties, friends, and children. Ensure that she lived well when she could not attend to her duties or be with her friends or children. 6. The phrase “no matter of indifference” lines (11–12) is best represented as an example of A. B. C. D. E. hyperbole. understatement. exaggeration. assonance. litotes. 7. The phrase “called on to quit them” line (12) qualifies as A. B. C. D. E. a metaphor. a simile. hyperbole. anaphora. ellipses. 8. Which selection best represents the dichotomous views of Anne as demonstrated in lines (35–38)? A. B. C. D. E. Elliot believes she will marry one day— Russell believes she does not. Elliot believes she is still fair—Russell believes she has inward qualities. Elliot believes she has nothing to offer— Russell believes she has her mother’s qualities. Elliot believes she had worth—Russell believes she had no worth. Elliot believes she resembles his looks— Russell believes she does not. 141 Part II: Reading Comprehension 9. What is the author telling us that Elliot believes of his daughters as it concerns marriage in lines (25–41)? A. B. C. D. E. 142 Anne will eventually marry to good stock; Elizabeth will stay and attend estate needs; Mary married for convenience. Anne married, but not well; Elizabeth will marry well; Mary will never marry as she is too thin. Anne won’t marry; Elizabeth married, but not well; Mary will marry well. Anne lost what little looks she had so will marry into a bad alliance; Elizabeth will marry a good alliance; Mary married into a lower level family. Anne was too thin and homely so won’t marry; Elizabeth is best suited and will marry with good alliance; Mary married into a family that adds nothing to the Elliot alliance. 10. Which selection best describes the relationship between the first and last paragraphs? A. B. C. D. E. Information presented in paragraph one is contradictory to the last paragraph. Information presented in paragraph one is opposite to what is presented in the last paragraph. Information presented in paragraph one is validated in the final paragraph. Information presented in paragraph one is similar to that in the final paragraph. Information presented in paragraph one is basically the same as that in the final paragraph. Sentence Completion Review Questions Sentence Completion Skill Set Two Each sentence below has one or two blanks, each blank indicating that something has been omitted. Beneath the sentence are five words or sets of words labeled A through E. Choose the word or set of words that, when inserted in the sentence, best fits the meaning of the sentence as a whole. 1. Her ______ demeanor was understandable given the loss of her brother; indeed, most of us were rather ______. A. B. C. D. E. lachyromose. . . dolorous reprehensible. . . enigmatic subtle. . . raucous determined. . . committed displaced. . . focused 2. It was a rather ______ mystery, full of twists and turns and surprises and ______ most difficult to predict. A. B. C. D. E. tawdry. . .foreshadowing knotty. . .nuances subtle. . .characters obvious. . .reversals easily understood. . .clever redirections 3. He is the ______ of evil; he lies, cheats, steals, murders, and boasts of his anti-societal behavior. A. B. C. D. E. antithesis plaintiff epitome harbinger picture 4. It is commonly believed that statesman Frederick Douglass ______ patterned his autobiography after the ______ of the former slave Olaudah Equiano. A. B. C. D. E. effectively. . . notations knowingly. . . diary accidentally. . . writings intentionally. . . narrative expectantly. . . accomplishments 5. Legislative leaders found it desirable to ______ prohibition, partially in order to recover revenue from taxation on spirits. A. B. C. D. E. enforce abrogate stave modify obdurate 6. It is incomprehensible that the tax codes should be such a ______ instead of a straightforward bracket based on gross earnings, notwithstanding deductions. A. B. C. D. E. farce joke labyrinth calamity malfeasance 7. The editorial, in obvious opposition to the article appearing in yesterday’s newspaper, was wellwritten, well-documented, factual, and nonconfrontational, the only intent of which seemed to be to ______ the article. A. B. C. D. E. repudiate contradict correct lend credence show support 8. It is within the ______ years that wisdom evidences itself, when those long in tooth, grayed in hair, and physically feeble demonstrate knowledge that is only paid for with the price of age. A. B. C. D. E. latent dormant transcended tenacious crepuscular 23 Part I: Sentence Completion 9. Now is not the time for ______ decisions, but ______ in our cause for freedom. A. B. C. D. E. 24 difficult. . . acquiescence peaceful. . . tenacity austere. . . commitment tentative. . . resolution weak. . . discourse 10. In order to ______ ratings, the incumbent directed party loyalists to flood the media with ______ about recent developments in job creation. A. B. C. D. E. bolster. . . accolades improve. . . talk explain. . . data nullify. . . falsehoods mollify. . . rumors Part II: Reading Comprehension Short Reading Comprehension Skill Set Seven The passages below are followed by questions based on their content; questions following a pair of related passages may also be based on the relationship between the paired passages. Answer the questions on the basis of what is stated or implied in the passages and in any introductory material that may be provided. Questions 1–5 are based on the following passage. Perhaps the quickest way to understand the elements of what a novelist is doing is not to read, but to write; to make your own experiment with the dangers and difficulties of words. Recall, then, some event that has left a distinct impression on you—how at the corner of the street, perhaps, you passed two people talking. A tree shook; an electric light danced; the tone of the talk was comic, but also tragic; a whole vision, an entire conception, seemed contained in that moment. But when you attempt to reconstruct it in words, you will find that it breaks into a thousand conflicting impressions. Some must be subdued; others emphasized; in the process you will lose, probably, all grasp upon the emotion itself. Then turn from your blurred and littered pages to the opening pages of some great novelist—Defoe, Jane Austen, Hardy. Now you will be better able to appreciate their mastery. (5) 1. Which of the following best reflects the author’s purpose for writing this passage? A. B. C. D. E. to instruct the reader how to write as a master to inform the reader that writing is a process requiring plot to suggest ways to better enjoy the reading material of the masters to help the reader better appreciate the toils involved in writing to assist a new writer in better understanding what a novelist goes through 2. Why would the author suggest writing would encounter, “dangers and difficulties of words,” line (2)? A. B. C. D. E. 92 As an experienced writer, she knows all too well, the dangers and difficulties encountered when trying to convey a specific vision, emotion, or experience. In order to dissuade people from taking up a profession in writing that would serve only to create more competition in an already maximized field. Choosing the wrong words can cause animosity and stir emotions leading to a dangerous situation. Partially due to a lack of understanding of how specific styles are developed with words and what trouble they can get the writer in. Often the specific choice of words an author uses can convey double meanings that can get the author into some trouble with publishers. 3. What does the author say, “breaks into a thousand conflicting impressions,” lines (6 and 7)? A. B. C. D. E. the words you are attempting to reconstruct the event that you experienced the emotion you are trying to recapture and convey the entire setting as it is fractioned the overall intonation due to the complexity of the process 4. Why does the author call your pages, “blurred and littered,” line (8)? A. B. C. D. E. because she understands that anyone going through this process will enjoy the experience to such a degree that they will litter the floor with page after page and will write until their vision blurs because she believes the task assigned is of such difficulty that pages will blur and corrections will fully litter the pages because she understands the inherent love of writing and can envision the work area of the novice writer just beginning to enjoy the experience because she believes it will take the novice writer sufficient time to complete the task at hand that they will have eaten at their desk littering everywhere because she understands that most beginning writers will not be a neat as experienced masters Short Reading Comprehension Review Questions 5. Why doesn’t the author suggest the reader simply read more masters to gain an appreciation of their art? A. B. C. D. E. The author understands that reading would take such a long time before a partial understanding of the process could be understood and people would give up on learning. The author realizes that in order to truly understand the process a good writer goes through requires being with him/her as they formulate a storyline. The author knows that the passages written by masters are much too difficult for the reader to understand how it was developed. The author wants the reader to know how easy it is to get confused when you try to write. The author believes teaching the elements a great novelist employs is best done through experiencing the process as the author does. Questions 6–10 are based on the following passage. (5) Being told I would be expected to talk here, I inquired what sort of a talk I ought to make. They said it should be something suitable to youth—something didactic, instructive, or something in the nature of good advice. Very well. I have a few things in my mind which I have often longed to say for the instruction of the young; for it is one’s tender early years that such things will best take root and be most enduring and most valuable. First, then, I will say to you, my young friends—and I say it beseechingly, urgingly— Always obey your parents, when they are present. This is the best policy in the long run, because if you don’t they will make you. Most parents think they know better than you do, and you can generally make more by humoring that superstition than you can by acting on your own better judgment. 6. As used in line (2), the term “didactic” most nearly means which of the following A. B. C. D. E. intended to be inspirational received as comical seen as fatherly teaching a moral lesson sharing an informational experience 7. What device does the author decide to use to present his talk? A. B. C. D. E. irony humor satire inference logic 93 Part II: Reading Comprehension 8. Why does the author suggest that it is “superstition” that “parents think they know better than you do,” line (7)? A. B. C. D. E. The author is preparing the audience for his presentation of modern day superstitions and he is hopeful this engagement will help keep their attention. The author understands the importance of keeping an audience actively listening and by acknowledging that the statement is ludicrous, he aligns his thoughts to those of the audience. The author is making light of the proposition that parents might know more than youth which helps captivate the audience allowing the speaker to make his actual points. The author appreciates that less than 10 percent of what is spoken is retained by the listener unless the listener is entertained. The author notices that the audience is very young and in order to make a lasting impression, revelations of this nature are imperative. 9. How does the author suggest the young might make more as it relates to the main instruction given in the speech? A. B. C. D. E. 94 by obeying parents when they are present and reserving your own actions until you are not with them by agreeing that they know much more than you and provide superior advice by playing along and fostering the idea that parents know better than you by setting rules that you are no longer subject to their charge and act independently by acknowledging that you live in a dichotomous world with divergent aspirations 10. What likely would have been the audience response to the speaker’s beseeching and urging? A. B. C. D. E. As the audience was young, it is likely they would have wondered what the words meant and listened attentively. Without further instruction, the audience response would have likely been one of completely ignoring the speaker, unless their parents were present. It is unlikely they would have listened to their neighbor and been attentive to the speaker. Given the pre-established notion that the speech would be instructive, it is likely the audience would have diverted their attention. As a result of the speaker sharing the background of how he came to speak to the group, they likely would have already determined what the speech would be about and began talking to neighbors.
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