Example Text: Exposition
More Bike Racks
Our class believes that the school needs to buy more bike
racks.
Firstly, there are not enough bike racks for everyone to use.
This means that students just dump their bikes on the ground
for other people to trip over. It is really dangerous. Last week,
Ahmed from 2B tripped over a bike and he got a very nasty
cut on his shin.
Another reason for getting more bike racks is that it is not
safe. They can be stolen or damaged by other people. If they
were in a proper bike rack, owners could lock their bike up and
they would be secure.
Finally, if the school bought more bike racks, it would encourage students to exercise. Riding to school is healthier than
driving to school in a car. It would also help the traffic jams
outside school in the mornings and afternoons with fewer
parents picking up their children.
So it is obvious that our school needs more bike racks. Keep
the students of Peddalin Public School safe!
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