Chapter 4 Writing Process Phase 1: Analyze, Anticipate, Adapt

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Chapter 4
Writing Process Phase 1:
Analyze, Anticipate, Adapt
Business Communication: Process and Product, 6e
Mary Ellen Guffey
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Business Writing Is…
Purposeful
Persuasive
Economical
Reader-oriented
It conveys information and
solves problems.
Its goal is to make the
audience accept the
message.
It is concise and doesn’t
waste the reader’s time.
It focuses on the receiver,
not the sender.
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Ch. 4, Slide 2
Guffey’s 3-x-3 Writing Process
Prewriting
Writing
Analyze
Anticipate
Adapt
25%
Research
Organize
Compose
45%
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Revising
Edit
Proofread
Evaluate
25% (revise)
5% (proof)
Ch. 4, Slide 3
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Phase 1: Prewriting
Analyze
Anticipate
Adapt
Team members
work closely to
determine purpose,
audience, content,
organization
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Ch. 4, Slide 4
1. Analyze the Task
 Identify the purpose.
 Why am I sending this message?
 What do I hope to achieve?
 Select the best channel: e-mail, fax, letter,
memo, phone call?
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Ch. 4, Slide 5
2. Anticipate the Audience
 Visualize primary audience.
 Visualize secondary audience.
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Ch. 4, Slide 6
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Anticipating Three Typical Business Audiences
Superiors
Colleagues
Customers
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Ch. 4, Slide 7
3. Adapting to the Audience
 Develop audience benefits.
The warranty starts working for you immediately.
 Cultivate “you attitude.”
You will receive your order.
 Be conversational but professional.
Your report was excellent vs. your report was totally awesome!
 Express yourself positively.
You will be happy that … vs. you won't be sorry that ….
Ch. 5, Slide 8
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Guffey, Business
Communication:
Process and
Product, 5e
3. Adapting to the Audience
 Be courteous.
Please complete the report vs. you must complete the report!
 Choose bias-free language (avoiding gender,
race, age, and disability biases).
office workers, not office girls
 Simplify your language.—Use familiar words.
salary, not remuneration
 Use precise, vigorous words.
fax me, not contact me
Ch. 5, Slide 9
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Guffey, Business
Communication:
Process and
Product, 5e
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Developing Reader Benefits and “You” Attitude
Sender-Focused
Receiver-Focused
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Ch. 4, Slide 10
Developing Reader Benefits and “You” Attitude
“I” and “We” View
“You” View
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Ch. 4, Slide 11
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