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Table of Contents
Introduction. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 3
How to Use This Book. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 4
Standards Correlations . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 13
Daily Practice Pages . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 14
Answer Key. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 194
Writing Rubrics . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 202
Writing Analyses. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 205
The Writing Process. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 208
Editing Marks. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 209
Writing Tips. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 210
Writing Signs. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 213
Contents of the Digital Resource CD. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 216
Introduction
The Need for Practice
To be successful in today’s writing classrooms, students must deeply understand both concepts
and procedures so that they can discuss and demonstrate their understanding. Demonstrating
understanding is a process that must be continually practiced for students to be successful. Practice
is especially important to help students apply their concrete, conceptual understanding of each
particular writing skill.
Understanding Assessment
In addition to providing opportunities for frequent practice, teachers must be able to assess students’
writing skills. This is important so that teachers can adequately address students’ misconceptions,
build on their current understandings, and challenge them appropriately. Assessment is a longterm process that involves careful analysis of student responses from a discussion, project, practice
sheet, or test. When analyzing the data, it is important for teachers to reflect on how their
teaching practices may have influenced students’ responses and to identify those areas where
additional instruction may be required. In short, the data gathered from assessments should be
used to inform instruction: slow down, speed up, or reteach. This type of assessment is called
formative assessment.
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Using the Practice Pages
The activity pages provide practice and assessment opportunities for each day of the school year.
Teachers may wish to prepare packets of weekly practice pages for the classroom or for homework.
As outlined on pages 5–6, each two-week unit is aligned to one writing standard. Note: Before
implementing each week’s activity pages, review the corresponding prompt on pages 7–8 with
students and have students brainstorm thoughts about each topic.
On odd weeks, students practice the daily skills
using mentor texts. On even weeks, students use
what they have learned in the previous week and
apply it to their own writing.
Week 1
DAY
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Name: _____________________________ Date:___________________
Prewriting
Hieroglyphics
Directions: Read the sentences about Egyptian hieroglyphics. Place check
marks next to the sentences that have specific information about hieroglyphics.
_____ Hieroglyphics use symbols and pictures.
_____ Symbols point to the beginning of a line to let the reader
know where to start reading.
_____ The writing contains no punctuation.
Each day focuses on one of the steps in the writing
process: prewriting, drafting, revising, editing, and
publishing.
_____ Egyptians believed cats were sacred and lucky animals.
_____ There are more than 700 symbols.
_____ Both men and women wore makeup.
_____ The Rosetta Stone helped people learn how to read
the symbols.
_____ Egyptians wrote hieroglyphics on paper called papyrus.
There are 18 overarching themes. Each odd week
and the following even week focus on unique
themes that fit under one overarching theme. For
a list of the overarching themes and individual
weekly themes, see pages 5–6.
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Rubrics for the three genres of writing (opinion,
informative/explanatory, and narrative) can be
found on pages 202–204. Use the rubrics to assess
students' writing at the end of each even week. Be
sure to share these rubrics with students often so
that they know what is expected of them.
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The following resources will be helpful to students
as they complete the activity pages. Print copies
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Using the Resources (cont.)
The Writing Process
The Writing Process can be found on page 208 and on
the Digital Resource CD (filename: writingprocess.pdf ).
Students can reference each step of the writing process
as they move through each week.
Step 1: Prewriting
Think about the topic . Brainstorm ideas, and plan what
you want to include in your writing .
Step 2: Drafting
Use your brainstormed ideas to write a first draft .
Don’t worry about errors . This will be a rough draft .
Step 3: Revising
Read your rough draft . Think about the vocabulary you
used and how your writing is organized . Then, make the
appropriate changes to improve your written piece .
Step 4: Editing
Reread your revised draft . Check for errors in spelling,
punctuation, and grammar . Use editing marks to correct
the errors .
Step 5: Publishing
Create a final version of your piece, including the
corrections from the edited version . Be sure to reread
your work for any errors .
Editing Marks can be found
on page 209 and on the Digital
Resource CD (filename:
editingmarks.pdf ). Students
may need to reference this
page as they work on the
editing activities (Day 4s).
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I have two cats, two dogs and a
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That's amazing, she shouted.
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Will you call call me on the phone
tonight?
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Peer/Self-Editing Checklist
Directions: Place a check mark in front of each item as you check it.
q The writing clearly states an opinion.
(opinion writing only)
q The writing clearly states the topic.
(informative/explanatory writing only)
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q The writing has an engaging beginning.
If you wish to have students peer
or self-edit their writing, a Peer/
Self-Editing Checklist is provided
on the Digital Resource CD
(filename: editingchecklist.pdf ).
Writing Signs for each of the writing genres
are on pages 213–215 and on the Digital
Resource CD (filename: writingsigns.pdf ).
Hang the signs up during the appropriate
two‑week units to remind students which
type of writing they are focusing on.
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Week 7
DAY
1
Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Skeleton
Prewriting
Directions: Read the information in the web about the human skeleton. Place
check marks in the bubbles that relate to the topic.
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Babies
have 300
bones, but
adults have
206.
Bones
in the hands
and feet make
up over half of
the body’s
bones.
The smallest
bone in the body
is in the ear. It is
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and ears
are made of
cartilage.
The
longest bone
in the body is the
thighbone, which
is called the
femur.
Many
insects have
exoskeletons.
Human
Skeleton
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are not
considered
part of the
skeleton.
Humans
have many
parts to their
bodies.
Birds
have hollow
bones.
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Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Directions: Imagine you are taking a tour of the Grand Canyon on horseback.
Describe the experience, including details about how you feel and what
the scenery looks like. Use your notes from page 79 to help you draft your
narrative paragraph.
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Remember! A strong narrative paragraph
tells a story with a beginning,
a middle, and an end.
Cursive Practice Directions: Use cursive to answer the following question: Would you want to visit
the Grand Canyon or the beach? Why?
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Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Snowboarding
Revising
Directions: Read the sentences. Write an idiom from the Idiom Bank that could
replace the underlined words in each one.
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costs an arm and a leg Idiom Bank
back to square one best of both worlds
1. He fell down over and over, and each time he felt like he was at the
beginning.
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2. That stuff is expensive she exclaimed.
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3. Since he loves the snow and loves being active, snowboarding has all
of the advantages.
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Boost Your Learning! An idiom is an expression that cannot be understood literally.
Its meaning is something different.
Example: The answer was on the tip of his tongue. This means
he knows the answer, but cannot think of it at that moment.
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DAY
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Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Mount Kilimanjaro
_____ 1. With whom are you hiking?
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_____ 2. Whom is wearing the boots?
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_____ 3. Who is going to be our guide?
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_____ 4. To who will you give the pack?
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_____ 5. Who will take our picture?
Editing
Directions: Read each sentence. If it uses who or whom correctly, write a C on
the line. If it is incorrect, write I and rewrite the sentence correctly.
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Time to Improve! Remember! Look over the paragraph you
wrote on page 150 about
Mount Kilimanjaro for who and
whom. Use the replacement
tips to make sure you used
these words correctly!
• Replace who with
he or they to see if it
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DAY
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Name:______________________________ Date:____________________
Camping
Publishing
Directions: Read the paragraph. Think about what you have learned this week.
Write in the margins to explain three ways the author could improve the paragraph.
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I had been looking forward to my first camping
trip for weeks. I was very excited when we finally left
Friday after school. Things started off smoothly, but it
didn’t take long before everything seemed to go wrong.
We pulled our brand new tent out of its bag and began
setting it up. We realized a pole was missing, so it
was impossible to put together. My dad said we could
sleep under the beautiful sky. We were hungry for
dinner. My dad started building a fire, but it took him
over an hour to get it going. I was not waiting patiently.
My mom went to get the cooler with drinks out of
the truck but came back empty-handed. She forgot
the cooler at home. As darkness began to fall, I was
hungry, thirsty, and cranky. I laid out my sleeping bag,
feeling hopeful I could see the stars. It’s too cloudy
I said to myself, and that’s when the first raindrop
splashed on my cheek.
This week I learned: • to include interesting information in narratives
• about different suffixes
• to use quotation marks correctly
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Informative/explanatory
Writing Tips
Ask yourself . . .
Remember . . .
Do I provide enough information
on the topic?
Make sure to include facts about
the topic in your writing so that
the reader is informed.
Have I narrowed the focus of
the topic?
Choose one aspect of the topic
that you want to write about.
Does my writing have a hook?
Begin with a strong topic
sentence that grabs the
reader’s attention.
Is my information presented in a
logical order?
Do not bounce around. Present
each topic sentence at the
beginning of a paragraph and
add details.
Have I included enough
information that the reader will be
interested in learning even more?
End with a strong sentence that
makes the reader want to learn
more about the subject.
Have I used correct spelling,
grammar, and punctuation?
Revisit what you have written.
Then, check for mistakes.
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