1.
if i have been that reporter claimed jose id have
found out the whole story
a.
the whole truth are often hard too discover
deirdre replied
b.
a. “If I had been that reporter,” claimed Jose, “I’d have found out the whole
story!”
b. “The whole truth is often hard to discover,” Deirdre replied.
2.
their’s were a tuff assinement ours was more
easy
a.
my brothers and his inlisted in the Army last
tuseday
b.
a. Theirs was a tough assignment; ours was easier.
b. His brothers and mine enlisted in the Army last Tuesday.
3.
a. ive been doin some research bout whales suzette
told her freinds
the sperm whales brain size are greater then any
creatures she said
b.
a. “I’ve been doing some research about whales,” Suzette told her friends.
b. “The sperm whale’s brain size is greater than any other creature’s,” she said.
4.
a. the
quite calm in the neighborhood were
shattered by the exploshun
b. each
of the workers were scaired when
they herd the noise
a. The quiet calm in the neighborhood was shattered by the explosion.
b. Each of the workers was scared when he or she heard the noise.
5.
a. thier is to sides too every storie
b. its usually best too listen two both sides
a. There are two sides to every story.
b. It’s usually best to listen to both sides.
6.
the pilot had no alternative, stowaways must
face judgment
a.
b.
did the nasa pilot exaust everyone of his options
a. The pilot had no alternative; stowaways must face judgment.
b. Did the NASA pilot exhaust every one of his options?
7.
bartons ship lurched slowed and suddenly
accelerated agin
a.
in 1954 when the short story The cold equations
were written no people had yet went in to outer
space
b.
a. Barton’s ship lurched, slowed, and suddenly accelerated again.
b. In 1954, when the short story “The Cold Equations” was written, no
people had yet gone into outer space.
8.
wethertons tempting fate when he kept trying to
get more gold
a.
even if i be really poor i would never risk my
life for money
b.
a. Wetherton’s tempting fate when he keeps trying to get more gold.
b. Even if I were really poor, I would never risk my life for money.
9.
a. 55
years ago a friend give me some good
advise began uncle fred
b. my
friend said Fred the key to a good life are
a quite life uncle fred continued
a. “Fifty-five years ago a friend gave me some good advice,” began Uncle Fred.
b. “My friend said, ‘Fred, the key to a good life is a quiet life,’ ” Uncle Fred continued.
10.
a. gary sotos poem oranges are the first poem i
ever read allowed in class
b. i were afraid i would have stage frite but i take 3
deep breaths before I begun and felt better
a. Gary Soto’s poem “Oranges” is the first poem I ever read aloud in class.
b. I was afraid I would have stage fright, but I took three deep breaths
before I began and felt better.