8th Grade Poetry Unit Final Content Area Assesment Plan Jennifer Sommer Sommer 1 Table of Contents: Overview……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….2 Standards and Objectives……………………………………………………………………………………………..3-4 Student Portfolio Development…………………………………………………………………………………..5-10 Data Collection and Evaluation…………………………….…………………………………………………..11-14 Teaching Self-Regulation………………………………………………………….............................................15-18 Materials and Sample Data Collection: Journal Do Now Assignment………………………………………………………………………………19 Journal Do Now Prompts…………………………………………………………………….…………20-21 Sample Daily Journal Grade Sheet…………………………………………………….…………………22 Strengths and Weaknesses Exploration Worksheet……………………………..………………23 Strategies Dictionary……………………………………………………………………………………..24-25 Five Paragraph Guided Outline Graphic Organizer…………..…………………………………..26 Goal Worksheet………………………………………………………………………...…………………..27-28 Strategy Log……………………………………………………………………………...…………………..29-30 Poetic Terms Definition Worksheet……………………………………………………………….31-33 Poetry Terms Example Data……………………………………………………………………………….34 Class Poetry Dictionary…………………………………………………………………………………35-38 Dictionary Example Data…………………………………………………………………………………….39 Poetry Draft Assignment…………………………………………………………………………………….40 Workshop Etiquette Contract……………………………………………………………………………..41 Workshop Notes Assignment……………………………………………………………………………...42 Workshop Rubric………………………………………………………………………………………….43-44 Poetry Unit Final Assignment……………………………………………………………………………..45 Poetry Unit Final Project Rubrics…………………………………………………………………...46-49 Poetry Unit Final Project Grade Sheet………………………………………………………………….50 Poetry Slam Flyer……………………………………………………………………………………………….51 Reflection Worksheet……………………………………………………………………………………52-53 Strategy Tool Box…………………………………………………………………………………………54-55 Sample Favorites Strategies World Cloud Poll……………………………………………………..56 References………………………………………………………………………………………………………...…….57-58 Sommer 2 Overview: This content area assessment plan is for a month long 8th grade English Language Arts poetry unit, ideally but necessarily, during April (National Poetry Month). It uses a combination of authentic and traditional assessments and strives to evaluate students based on eight learning outcomes created in regards to the NYS Reading and Writing Standards for 8th graders. This unit also gives students practice with self-regulatory strategies to increase metacognition. *All classroom materials created for this unit are at the end of this document. Sommer 3 Standards and Objectives Why did you choose the specific learning standards and objectives you will be assessing? I choose the following NYS Reading and Writing standards because they are developmentally appropriate and state mandated: Learning Standards: This unit satisfies the following NYS Reading and Writing Standards for 8th graders: Reading Standards: 1. Cite the textual evidence that most strongly supports an analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text. 4. Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in a text, including figurative and connotative meanings; analyze the impact of specific word choices on meaning and tone, including analogies or allusions to other texts. 5. Compare and contrast the structure of two or more texts and analyze how the differing structure of each text contributes to its meaning and style. 11. Interpret, analyze, and evaluate narratives, poetry, and drama, artistically and ethically by making connections to: other texts, ideas, cultural perspectives, eras, personal events, and situations. Writing Standards: 4. Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style are appropriate to task, purpose, and audience. (Grade-specific expectations for writing types are defined in standards 1–3 above.) 5. With some guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach, focusing on how well purpose and audience have been addressed. (Editing for conventions should demonstrate command of Language standards 1–3 up to and including grade 8 on page 66.) 11. Create a presentation, art work, or text in response to a literary work with a commentary that identifies connections and explains divergences from the original. Sommer 4 b. Create poetry, stories, plays, and other literary forms (e.g. videos, art work). I also choose these specific standards because they are well supported by an 8th grade poetry unit. They are supported because poetic analysis encourages the development of critical thinking, use of textual evidence, writing, comparison of texts, use of poetic language and terms, creativity, and the expression and analysis of art. What learning outcomes were you looking for, and what makes them important? The following eight learning outcomes were created based on the above NYS Reading and Writing Standards: Learning Outcomes: 1. Students will be able to interpret, analyze, and evaluate poems. 2. Students will clearly present opinions on poem meanings in a coherent and well formatted manner. 3. Students will use relevant evidence to support their claims. 4. Students will examine and critique each other’s work. 5. Students will practice revising, editing, and rewriting with peer and adult support. 6. Students will create original poems. 7. Students will practice free writing and learn about the creative process. 8. Students will learn poetic terminology. Not only were these outcomes created to help meet NYS standards but each one represents clear goals for the unit that can be communicated to students, administrators, colleagues, and parents and that can be accurately assessed. What I mean by accurately assessed is that the outcomes can be measured for achievement (Moskal 2003). For example I can show how my students are able to use relevant evidence to support their claims through their reflection papers, workshops, and self-regulatory activities. This is a measureable outcome and as result is set up well for evaluation. These eight learning outcomes also cover multiple levels of Bloom’s Taxonomy. Outcomes 1 and 2 require students to Analyze, Outcomes 2, 6, and 7 have students Create, Outcome 3, 4, 5, and 7 ask students to Evaluate, and Outcome 8 has students Remember, Apply, and Understand. Thus in this unit students will pull from all six levels of Bloom’s Taxonomy (Smart Tutor). It is important to keep Bloom’s Taxonomy in mind when creating outcomes because it encourages multiple levels of thinking and creates outcomes that are multifaceted and do not merely aim at basic recall. As a result the classroom becomes a place of discovery and the focus moves away from teaching and back to student learning (DuFour, 2004, p. 8). Sommer 5 Student Portfolio Development What is the purpose and audience for the portfolio? My students will maintain portfolios that catalog their growth in ELA over the entire school year so that students, parents, administrators, and I can see how students have progressed over the year in my class. I want to use the growth portfolio model because it forces students to examine both their successes and failures (Rolheiser, Bower, & Stevahn, 2000). Thus it develops student selfefficacy and metacognition and helps students see how achievement is a result of their capability to self-evaluate, set goals, and work over time (Rolheiser et al,. 2000). The focus will become the learning process and not the end product. Helping students to see the importance of the process and what attributes to their successes and failures makes them better learners. To not teach students these skills means you run the risk of creating students who attribute success to fixed intelligence, not effort, and as a result negatively impact student self-worth and educational potential (Medina, 2010). As previously stated the audience for the portfolios will be students, peers, administrators, colleagues, and parents. I will use the portfolio to show parents student progress during parent-teacher conferences. I will reference the portfolios to show my administrators and colleagues growth and to reflect on whether or not I accomplished my objectives as a teacher. As a teacher I will also be able to use the reflections students place in their portfolios as a way to get to know them better, receive a fuller picture of the student’s learning process and values, and to grade them. Furthermore students can present parts of their portfolios to their peers for evaluation throughout the year. Thus encouraging peer feedback and giving the students another audience. Finally students can present their portfolios at the end of the year to all of the audiences mentioned as a celebration of what they have accomplished. What assessments will you have students put in their portfolios? I will have students including the following in their portfolios: Introductory Letter explaining what is in their portfolio and what they feel they learned from the portfolio process. Goal Worksheets/Plan of action outlining all goals made for the year and what the student did to meet those goals and whether or not they felt successful and why. 4 Writing Samples, both successful and not so successful, including any planning, rough drafts with editing, and final drafts. Students can choose which four pieces of writing they would like to include but I will ask them to try to provide a variety and include pieces that showcase both their weaknesses and strengths. Sommer 6 Reflections for Each Sample that discuss what the student did well and what they can work on. List of Books Read with a short review (about a paragraph) on the student’s thoughts on each. From this unit, students can pull their Goals, Strengths and Weaknesses Explorations, and Reflection Worksheets, Poem Draft, Final Poem and Reflection Paper, and some of their classmates’ notes from the workshop. I will evaluate the portfolio as a whole based on the following four criteria: Completeness Self-Assessment Communication of Ideas Evidence of Understanding I believe these criteria and the learning samples I am asking students for will help show that students have met many of the NYS Learning Standards and my learning outcomes for this unit. The portfolio will help show that students know how to use relevant evidence to support their claims (Learning Outcome 3) because reflections and goal worksheets require them to explain why they are successful and unsuccessful. It also supports Learning Outcome 5: Students will practice revising, editing, and rewriting with peer and adult support. The portfolio shows evidence of this by having students show multiple drafts with edits of their work. The portfolio also supports my self-regulatory outcomes for this unit because it encourages students to explain their goals, evaluate the techniques they used to meet these goals, and show evidence of their successes or failures. To what extent do your assessments fit the principles of authentic assessment? I believe that my assessments fit well into the principals of authentic assessment: connecting, reflecting, and feedback (Scott, 2000, p.33). Scott (2000) defines connecting as the process of students linking “facts, concepts, and principles together in a unique way to solve problems or produce products” (p. 33). My summative assessment (Poetry Unit Final Project) accomplishes this because it asks students to take a poem we read in class, analyze the poetic techniques used, and then apply them to the creation of their own original poem. Scott (2000) also mentions that authentic assessments are generally scaffolded from simple to complex in order to improve student learning and success (p. 34). My unit does this well because it starts by teaching students the definitions of poetic terms, then moves on to finding these techniques in Sommer 7 poems and analyzing the poems in class, and eventually builds up to translating these analyses into a product. My assessments also support the principal of reflection or the development of metacognition (Scott, 2000, p. 34). I provide students with opportunities to reflect on their thinking and learning through my self-regulatory materials and their final unit reflection paper. Finally I incorporated feedback in a few ways. First I give students the opportunity to receive feedback from one another in workshop and their goal settings groups. I also give myself multiple opportunities throughout the unit to give students more detailed feedback that is user-friendly and invites students to talk to me more in depth about their plans and ideas for the summative assessment. This is clear when looking at the sample teacher comments section of the Daily Journal Sample Grade Sheet (reproduced below): Teacher Comments: Nice work. You really took your time to answer the prompts thoroughly. I thought your answer to prompt 15 was particularly imaginative and would be a great basis for your original poem; I’d love to take the time to discuss your ideas for the poem with you in more depth. My goal with feedback is to give students multiple perspectives through peer, self, and teacher evaluations. I want to make sure that my students receive feedback that they can use and that goes beyond cryptic messages of awkward wording or try harder next time. In doing so, I hope to create an environment that supports authentic assessment and allows the teacher and student to become partners in the learning process (Scott, 2000, p. 36). How well do they cover all levels of Bloom’s taxonomy? My assessments cover every level of Bloom’s Taxonomy because they are based on my eight Learning Outcomes, which as I mentioned earlier incorporate all components of Bloom’s Taxonomy. I have reproduced that paragraph below for that previous question for the reader’s convenience: These eight learning outcomes also cover multiple levels of Bloom’s Taxonomy. Outcomes 1 and 2 require students to Analyze, Outcomes 2, 6, and 7 have students Create, Outcome 3, 4, 5, and 7 ask students to Evaluate, and Outcome 8 has students Remember, Apply, and Understand. Thus in this unit students will pull from all six levels of Bloom’s Taxonomy (Smart Tutor). Sommer 8 The following chart maps all of my assessments to my outcomes as well as the NYS Standards so you can easily see which assignments assess which outcomes and thus cover the above mentioned level(s) of Bloom’s Taxonomy: Learning Outcome NYS Standard Addressed Reading Materials/Assessments Used Writing 1 11 4 Student Poetry Workshop, Poem Reflection Paper, Poetic Terms Student Dictionary 2 1, 5, 11 4 Poem Reflection Paper 3 1 4 11 5 Student Poetry Workshop 5 11 5 Student Poetry Workshop, Strength/Weakness Graphic Organizer 6 11 11, 11 b Poem Draft 1, Final Poem 5, 11, 11 b Journals/Do Nows, Student Poetry Workshop, Poetry Slam 7 8 4 Student Poetry Workshop, Poem Reflection Paper, Poetic Terms Student Dictionary, Goal Worksheet Poetic Terms Definition Worksheet, Poetic Terms Student Dictionary How will the information gained from the assessments be useful to you? To your students? They will be useful to me because I will be better able to inform my teaching by looking at data from assignments such as the Poetry Terms Worksheet or the Class Poetry Dictionary. Secondly I feel that through the Journal Do Nows, poem, and self-regulatory worksheets I will learn a lot about my students’ interests, values, and how they see themselves as learners. The Reflection Paper and Reflection Worksheet will also give me insight on how Sommer 9 students feel they did during the unit and allow me to examine how well they synthesized the information. All of these items will help me learn more about my students and their learning habits so I can better inform and improve my teaching. I think the information will be useful to students because throughout the unit I will give them feedback on their formative assessments so they have a good idea of how they are doing and how they can improve. I think by allowing many opportunities for teacher student communication I am reinforcing the idea that we are partners in the learning process and am increasing their chances of success. Furthermore they will be able to use this feedback in the future to inform their strength and weakness evaluations, goal setting, and to work on their portfolios. How will you keep the portfolio – will it be electronic or paper? What storage/organization system or software will you use to keep the portfolio? Why? I believe that the portfolio organization will ultimately need to be determined when I enter my future school and meet my students. School environments, student populations, and classrooms vary so greatly that is would be hard to predict what would work best. That being said, I have listed below three possible ways of organizing this type of portfolio depending on school resources and the students I am teaching: 1. Three Ring Binder with Clear Page Protectors – This option is ideal if you have the space available to store a binder for each of your students because it gives students the ability to quickly and easily reorganize their portfolio while protecting the pages within the portfolio. 2. Manila Folder with Stapled Sides – I like this option because it is simple and does not take up many resources. Manila folders are relatively inexpensive and they do not take up a large amount of classroom space. 3. Electronic (Flash Drive, Google Doc, etc) – I like the idea of incorporating technology in the classroom because technological literacy is a necessary skill for success in today’s society and I believe it will continue to be one in the future. That being said, it can be expensive and difficult to implement in the classroom, especially if resources are limited. No matter what organizational system I choose I will be sure to provide my students with a Table of Contents Check List that they can keep in the front of their binders, folders, or electronically. This check list will include all the components/categories students will need to complete the portfolio as well as space for students to write which paper, assignment, or test they choose to use to fulfill each component. I want students to have some choice in what goes into their portfolio because Rolheiser, Bower, and Stevahan (2000) state that choice makes portfolios more meaningful for students and provides them with more pride than a portfolio made from teacher suggestions/choices. Sommer 10 How will you “publish” the portfolio? I would like my students to present their completed portfolios to other teachers in the school, administrators, their peers and families, and me at a portfolio exhibition. It would be set up so that students could be stationed around the event space with their portfolios and people could cycle around the room asking questions. I like this setup because it gives students a chance to show off all their hard work and thus increases student pride and selfworth. Furthermore students will be continuing to practice metacognition as people come to speak to them about their portfolios. It would also be nice to have students write a short letter to their next year’s ELA teacher that can be sent off with their portfolio. This will help the teacher because it gives her more information about the students she will encounter in her class next year, what they learned, and what they may still need to work on. It also gives students a chance to personally introduce themselves as learners; thus allowing them to influence their future learning environments before they enter their new classrooms. Sommer 11 Data Collection and Evaluation How will you evaluate and collect data on the assessments you will be using? I varied my evaluation and data collection techniques depending on the assessment. Below is an explanation of both for each assessment: Journal Do Nows – Student do nows/writing prompts will be factored into their class participation grade for the semester. Students will hand in their journals at the end of every week and I will use a Daily Journal Grade Sheet for each student to record which Do Nows were completed (+ mark) or were not completed (- mark). These grade sheets will also include teacher comments with a suggestion of a possible prompt response the student can use as inspiration for his poem. It should be noted that journals will not be graded for grammar, spelling, or punctuation. The goal here is to get the students to be inspired and write down as many ideas as possible, not to focus on grammatically correct writing. Self-Regulation Worksheets (Strengths and Weaknesses Exploration Worksheet, Strategy Dictionary, Goal Worksheet, Strategy Log, Strategy Tool Box, Reflection Worksheet)– These sheets will be looked over by me and counted as complete or incomplete. They will be used as a way for me to check in with the students and give them feedback on their self-evaluations. This way I can guide students to create challenging yet achievable goals. Poetic Terms Definitions – These packets will be graded so that each correct answer is worth one point. For the answer to be correct the student needs to correctly define the term is his own words. The definition will be marked incorrect if it is wrong or if it is merely copied from the back of the book. Next I will mark which definitions each student defined correctly and incorrectly in excel and I will graph the data so that I can see what the most misunderstood terms are. I will review the most misused terms with the class to be sure that they understand all of the material. If you look at the Poetry Terms Example Data you will see a sample of this type of Excel sheet. In this case, for example, I would try to focus future poetry analysis on the term connotation because the majority of the class misunderstood it. I will also use student answers to create the Class Poetry Dictionary, which is the next assignment. Class Poetry Dictionary – This assignment will be graded similarly to the Poetic Terms Definitions and the data will also be stored and used in the same way. An example of this data can be seen on the Dictionary Example Data Sheet. If I was looking at this data sheet, I would proceed to review the terms blank verse and connotation as well as a few others that were often marked incorrect with the class. Poetry Draft Assignment & Notes Assignment – For the Poetry Draft Assignment students will receive feedback from each other through the Notes Assignment and workshop. The guidelines for this feedback can be found on the Workshop Etiquette Sommer 12 Contract and the Notes Assignment. I will look over the responses to the Notes Assignment and factor these responses into each student’s workshop grade. This is further explained on the Workshop Rubric. I will also hand all the notes back to each student poet so that they can see what others commented on their poem that may not have been mentioned in workshop and incorporate some of these ideas into their revisions. Workshop – I will use the Workshop Rubric to grade students and give them feedback. I have chosen to include some form of written feedback along with my grades because students generally benefit from a combination of both. Poetry Unit Final Assignment (Poem & Reflection Paper) – These assignments will be handed back with comments and will be graded based on the Poetry Unit Final Project Rubrics. All of this info will be handed back to each student individually on the Poetry Unit Final Project Grade Sheet. Sample Favorite Strategies Word Cloud Poll – I will be using Wordle as a fun visual way for students to send in their favorite strategies to achieve their goals during this unit. The program creates a word cloud with the most popular answers appearing larger and in the forefront. This is a great way for students to see other strategies they may not have tried and gives us an opportunity to share why students found certain strategies to be so helpful. Why did you choose to create your rubric(s) the way you did? I mapped my rubrics to ensure that they were assessing the eight learning outcomes I set out for my students because this is the only way that I will be able to properly assess if my students met the outcomes I set for them. To base my rubrics on anything but these outcomes would mean I would be unable to properly asses if my outcomes were met. Thus I would be unable to properly inform my teaching with the data I gleaned from assessment and would not be supporting data driven teaching. I believe that it is extremely important to use data driven teaching because teachers need to be able to adapt their teaching to the needs of the students in their classes. If they do not do so they are not helping the students reach their full potential and are not fulfilling their obligation as educators. Furthermore I tried to make my rubrics as straightforward and clear as possible; this is evident when looking at the Capturing a Style/Artist section of the Final Poem Rubric (reproduced below): Category Capturing a Style/Artist (60%) 40 Student poem consistently and correctly uses 3 or more similar poetic techniques to 30 Student poem uses 1-2 similar poetic techniques correctly. 20 Student has used only 1 similar poetic technique correctly. 10 No similar poetic techniques have been used or all have been Sommer 13 the original poem to enhance meaning. used incorrectly. Rather than state students will receive a 40 when they consistently use poetic techniques, I listed a specific number of techniques, 3 or more, necessary to receive that score. This kind of straight forward language is important for a few reasons. First this makes rubrics more user-friendly to students when they are peer editing each other’s work or trying to prepare an assignment. The rubric acts as a clear guideline for success by taking the guesswork out of what is necessary to succeed. Second by setting clear criteria I will be able to justify any grades to students, parents, and administrators. Overall I aimed to create rubrics that deliver clear expectations that could be used by a variety of reviewers and still produce consistent results while removing as much bias and subjectivity as possible, which is particularly important when using authentic assessment (Moskal 2003). Why did you choose to collect data the way you did? I choose to collect the data primarily in Excel because I like the compactness and ease of everything being electronic. Excel enables me to use a variety of functions so that I can look at the data from various angles and through various visuals. It also lets me see the class as a whole so that I can target my teaching on concepts the majority of the class is missing and give more individualized instruction to those students missing more commonly understood concepts. How do you expect the data to be useful to you and to your students? As I have previously stated I believe that I will be able to better teach my students with the data through data driven teaching. I also feel that by examining the data in this way I can assess not only what concepts students may be finding more difficult but whether or not a teaching technique or lesson I used was successful. I can use this information to inform further instruction. For example if I realize that my students learn terms much better through examples than straight definitions, I can make sure future worksheets and lessons always include an example when I provide a definition to the students. I think the data will be useful to students because they are receiving feedback from both their classmates and me. Thus they are learning to use each other as resources (another self-regulation strategy) and they are receiving a variety of opinions. I also hope through the use of the self-regulation strategy Wordle poll students will be able to see first-hand how their classmates accomplish their goals and either be inspired to work harder or to try a new strategy. Sommer 14 How will you translate your data into summary grades for report cards? Why did you decide to do it that way? My data will be translated into letter grades for each assignment so that they are easily translated on to the student report cards and are easy for parents and students to understand. Letter grades will be determined as follows: A+ = 97-100 A = 93-96 A- = 90-92 B+ = 87- 89 B = 83-86 B- = 80-83 C+ = 77-79 C = 73-76 C- = 70-72 D+ = 67-69 D = 63-66 D- = 60-62 F = Below 60 The following assignments from this unit along with assignments from the units I teach during that quarter will be combined to determine the numeric value and thus the final letter grade for that quarter. Self-Regulation Worksheets (Strengths and Weaknesses Exploration Worksheet, Strategy Dictionary, Goal Worksheet, Strategy Log, Strategy Tool Box, Reflection Worksheet), Journal Do Nows, and the Poem Draft will be looked at only for completion as these assignments are meant to be used as a communication point between student and teacher. The focus here is on the process not the end product. The Poetic Terms Definition Worksheet and Class Poetry Dictionary will receive grades out of 18 points for each correct answer. Workshop grades and the Poetry Unit Final Assignment will be graded based on the attached rubrics. For the average quarter I will weight my grades as follows: 20% Participation, 30% Homework, 15% Tests & Quizzes, 35% Large Scale Papers, Projects, and Other Assignments. Sommer 15 Teaching Self-Regulation How will you teach self-regulation as part of this assessment? Throughout this unit I intend to address the five self-regulatory outcomes below: Self-Regulatory Outcomes: 1. Students will identify personal strengths and weaknesses. 2. Students will set at least one personal goal for the unit. 3. Students will work with others students and with the teacher to brainstorm strategies or steps to accomplish their goals. 4. Students will note techniques used and evaluate which were most effective. 5. Students will place their most successful strategy or strategies in their study tool box (a document they will update throughout the year). I choose these outcomes because I believe that they can be easily incorporated into this unit and will reinforce some of my learning outcomes. For example, one of my outcomes is to have students use textual evidence to back up their claims; the idea of using evidence to back up one’s opinion, evaluation, or argument can be further supported through selfregulation. This skill is supported in the Strengths and Weaknesses Exploration Sheet, Goal Worksheet, and Reflection Worksheet. All of these worksheets require students to use evidence to explain what their weaknesses and strengths are or why they are choosing the goal(s) they have for themselves. Furthermore students are asked to brainstorm in their goal setting groups strategies to reach their goals. This supports Learning Outcome 7 because brainstorming can be a useful part of the creative process. The following table maps how the self-regulatory materials I plan to incorporate in this unit address each self-regulatory outcome: Self-Regulatory Outcome Materials 1 Strengths and Weaknesses Exploration Sheet 2 Goal Worksheet 3 Goal Worksheet, Strategy Dictionary 4 Study Tool Log Sheet 5 Study Tool Box Sheet Sommer 16 What aspect of self-regulation will you be addressing in particular? I am addressing the reflection/metacognition aspect of self-regulation because I believe these skills will help students meet my self-regulatory objectives, my learning objectives, and excel in the future. As you can see from my worksheets, I am having students assess their strengths and weaknesses, set goals based on that information, research strategies, choose a plan of action, and evaluate strategies and goal success or failure. All of these items fall under metacognition because as Rolhesier, Bower, and Stevahn (2000) state metacognition has two dimensions: knowledge of cognition (what helps me learn, what strategies are available, when and why do I use these strategies) and regulation of cognition (effectively selecting strategies to achieve goals, self-monitoring, and self-evaluating). What self-regulation strategies will your students be learning, and how will you teach them? Students will be reviewing a variety of strategies within teacher made goal setting groups. They will brainstorm and look up strategy definitions with the help of the teacher, their Strategies Dictionaries, peers, and based on previous strategies reviewed in other units. In particular we will focus on the use of Guided Outlines and BOTEK because these two strategies will help students structure their reflection papers. We will review these strategies through in class modeling, dissection of previous essays or example essays to work backwards and fill out the steps of a guided outline or BOTEK, and strategy research in goal setting groups. That being said, I realize that every class has a diverse group of students so it is hard to simply teach one strategy and hope that it fits all. Thus students will work with their goal setting groups and my help to fill out a scaffolded set of worksheets (Strengths and Weaknesses Exploration Sheet, Goal Worksheet, Strategy Log, and Reflection Worksheet) to walk them through the steps of strategy evaluation and goal setting. This way each student can choose strategies that he believes will addresses his unique goal(s) and needs. Why did you choose those strategies and that way of teaching them? I choose to focus on those two strategies in particular because I believe they will help students successfully write reflection papers and improve student writing. I particularly like the way the guided outline explains to students what to do at each step because it nicely scaffolds the writing process for students who are having a bit more trouble by offering them a clear graphic organizer. BOTEK on the other hand is a good choice for students who might not like using a graphic organizer and are more skilled at writing essays. Overall I think 8th grades will benefit from the structure these two strategies give to the writing process. Sommer 17 Furthermore I choose to break students into groups so to work on goal setting and strategy planning so that students who are more adept at self-regulation can help guide other students. This type of interaction also helps build community within the classroom (Landson-Billings, 2009, p. 130). I also believe that all students are unique and have different needs. By allowing them to choose strategies and test various ones out I am diversifying learning for everyone while giving them choice. Choice is important because it helps increase student investment in the task. This in turn creates an environment where students feel like they are valued members of the learning process. What kinds of questions will you ask to get students to reflect? How will you ask them? Students will use the Reflection Worksheet to reflect on the unit. This worksheet asks each student to reiterate his original goal for the unit, cite which strategies were tested, and then use his Strategy Log to evaluate which strategy was best, if there was one, and add it to his Strategy Tool Box. The Strategy Tool Box is a self-regulation document that students will be using throughout the year. As we learn about new self-regulation strategies, students will record which ones they like and what they used them for so that they can reference the sheet in the future. The worksheet also asks students to reflect on whether or not they accomplished their goal(s) and to choose a goal(s) that they may focus on in the next unit as well as possible strategies to reach it. Finally a class discussion will be prompted by the Wordle world cloud poll of favorite strategies. Students will be able to share with the class which strategies worked well for them and why and I will ask the class questions based on the poll such as “Text tagging is the most popular strategy; why do you think that is?” Overall I tried to give students a variety of reflection questions and scaffold them from simple to more thought-provoking open ended questions that encourage metacognition. How do these questions relate to the aspects of self-regulation you are teaching? Why did you choose them? These questions relate well because they bring students back to their original goals and ask them to evaluate whether or not they succeeded. By following the Reflection Worksheet a student who perhaps did not meet his goal because he did not test out the strategies easily sees that. Furthermore it reinforces Learning Outcome 3 because it asks students to support their assessments with evidence. Sommer 18 I choose these questions because I want my students to be reflective learners. I want to foster within them a sense of self awareness and responsibility for their actions. I believe that my self-regulation plan helps accomplish these goals and helps students see the cause and effect relationship between effort and accomplishing their goals. Educational success is not merely based on intelligence. I want my students to understand that it is based on effort and hard work because they all have the potential to succeed (Medina, 2010). Finally metacognitive skills such as reflection and goal setting are necessary for success in education and the real world. Sommer 19 Journal Do Now Instructions: During this unit each of you will be keeping a writing journal, which you will bring to class every day. This journal should either be a separate section of your ELA binder or another notebook entirely. At the beginning of every class a numbered Do Now writing prompt will be on the board for you to complete. Journals will be collected weekly and each Do Now should be numbered in the journal as it is on the board. Each journal entry will be marked as completed with a + or incomplete with a – and be factored into your class participation grade. Grammar, punctuation, handwriting, and spelling do not count. If you are an ELL student, please feel free to write in your native language for these activities. This journal is for your benefit and can be later used as inspiration for your original poetry writing assignment. Sommer 20 Journal Do Nows/Prompts: To be put on the board: 1. Describe someone who looks bored without using the words bored, yawned, stared or sighed. 2. Describe your best friend without using any physical characteristics. 3. Write 10 food and people similes. In other words, compare a person (real or imagined) to food. Try to create a very clear image of the person. Example: Matt is dull like a potato or Francine blushed as bright as a ripe tomato. 4. Write only in rhyme. 5. Make up at least 5 metaphors to describe two of the following feelings: sadness, anger, joy, pride, and guilt. Example: Love is a rose or my guilt sat on my shoulders with the weight of a heavy backpack. 6. Describe the sound of rain when it falls. 7. What color is love? What about hate? Or sorrow? Choose a feeling and describe it in terms of color. 8. Look at the following picture and write about what is going on in it: 9. Describe a first in your life such as the first time you tied your shoes, your first vacation, or the first time you scored the winning goal. 10. What did you eat for breakfast this morning? Write down as much sensory information as you can remember. Sommer 21 11. Grab a sheet of paper and start two columns. In one column list ten nouns and in the other column list ten verbs. Pair them up randomly and write a sentence for each pair. 12. Write a poem that is 26 lines long. Each sentence should begin with a different letter in the alphabet from A to Z. 13. Write 10 hyperboles. 14. Write an ode (a poem of enthusiastic praise towards something or someone) to a common object such as your socks or a pencil. 15. Listen to the following song and write what it makes you think of? How does it make you feel? Let your mood follow the song. Don’t stop writing until the song is over. Sommer 22 Sample Daily Journal Grade Sheet Do Now # Grade (+/-) 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 Total + + + + _ _ + + + + + + + + 12/15 Teacher Comments: Nice work. You really took your time to answer the prompts thoroughly. I thought your answer to prompt 15 was particularly imaginative and would be a great basis for your original poem; I’d love to take the time to discuss your ideas for the poem with you in more depth. Sommer 23 Strengths and Weaknesses Exploration Sheet: Look at three or more of your past papers and log teacher comments as either strengths or weaknesses. Strengths Weaknesses Sommer 24 Strategies Dictionary Below are a few strategies you may find helpful during this unit. Feel free to look up additional strategies with your group and add them to this worksheet or your goal worksheet. Unsure what other strategies to look up? Choose one from the list below and record the definition in your chart or talk with your group and the teacher. POW TREE Strategy Dictionary Changing My Study Environment Description BOTEK Brainstorming, Organizing, generating a Topic sentence (or Thesis), providing supportive Evidence (or Elaborating), and generating a Conclusion. Brainstorm Writing down as many ideas as possible. These ideas could vary from topics for a paper, characters in a story or poem, or solutions to a problem. Graphic Organizer A visual representation of knowledge, concepts, or ideas. Highlighting Essay Based on Rubric Using a rubric, highlight key points in your essay such as each piece of textual evidence used or topic sentence/thesis. Then compare this to the rubric and see if you are meeting the standards. You can also switch papers with a peer to get a different perspective. Outline Guided (look in your packet) or writer created, an outline is a plan for writing. Think of it as directions or a recipe for your essay. It lists all the pieces and the order they go in. An Sommer 25 Peer Support Text Tagging Thesaurus outline can guide you as you write. Look to your peers for help on editing, opinions on ideas, or help using these self-regulatory strategies. It always helps to get another perspective on things. Using colored tabs, mark the key ideas in each paragraph. Then go back with sticky notes and summarize sections of the text, chapters, or stanzas of the poem to see if you understand the material. You can also use text tagging to highlight any words you don’t know. Use this tool to look up synonyms or antonyms for any word. Sommer 26 Sommer 27 Goal Worksheet Name: ________________________________________ One weakness I have is _______________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ I know this is a weakness because (Cite evidence below to back up your claim): 1. ___________________________________________________________________________________ 2. ___________________________________________________________________________________ 3. ___________________________________________________________________________________ With your group, look at the below strategies and look up or ask about any you do not know. Circle which strategies you are interested in. BOTEK Outline/Guided Outline Text Tagging Thesaurus Highlighting Rubric Conditions in Essay Peer Support Brainstorm Ideas Other: _____________________ Graphic Organizer Sommer 28 Choose at least 3 of the above strategies that you will try to implement and fill in the blanks below: The first strategy I will try is ___________________________ and this will help me overcome ____________________________________ because _______________________________. The second strategy I will try is ___________________________ and this will help me overcome ____________________________________ because _______________________________. The third strategy I will try is ___________________________ and this will help me overcome ____________________________________ because _______________________________. Teacher Comments: __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ Sommer 29 Sommer 30 Sommer 31 Poetic Terms Definition Worksheet Look up the following poetic terms in your textbook and define them in your own words. Alliteration: Connotation: Couplet: Denotation: Fixed Form: Free Verse: Hyperbole: Sommer 32 Imagery: Metaphor: Meter: Onomatopoeia: Repetition: Rhyme: Rhyme Scheme: Rhythm: Sommer 33 Simile: Stanza: Theme: Sommer 34 Poetry Terms Example Data Sommer 35 Class Poetry Dictionary Find examples of the following poetic terms in one of the following poems or create your own. Write your examples in the blue section and try to explain the poet’s reasoning for using each technique. “Because I Could Not Stop for Death…” by Emily Dickenson “I, Too” by Langston Hughes “Our Other Sister” by Jeffery Harrison “The Raven” by Edgar Allen Poe “Sonnet #18” by William Shakespeare Alliteration: Repetition of consonant sounds, particularly at the beginning of words. Connotation: Associations a word has beyond its dictionary definition. Couplet: A pair of rhymed lines. Denotation: Dictionary meaning of a word. Sommer 36 Fixed Form: Poem characterized by a consistent pattern of such elements such as rhyme, line length, and meter. Free Verse: Poem without a regular patter. It is not bound by poetic conventions such as meter and rhyme scheme. Hyperbole: Figure of speech involving exaggeration. Imagery: Pattern of related comparative aspects of language, particularly of images. Metaphor: Comparison between two essentially unlike things without explicit comparison words such as like or as. Meter: The measured pattern of rhythmic accents in a poem. Sommer 37 Onomatopoeia: Use of words to imitate the sound they describe such as buzz or crack. Repetition: Repeating a word on line for emphasis. Rhyme: Matching the final vowel or consonant sound in two or more words. Rhyme Scheme: The rhyme pattern of a poem comparing one line to another, generally based on the end word of a line. Rhyme scheme is labeled in a poem line by line in a pattern such as ABABBA. This indicates that end words in A lines rhyme together and end words in B lines rhyme together. Rhythm: The reoccurrence of accent or stresses in verse. Sommer 38 Simile: A comparison of two unlike things using like, as, or as though. Stanza: A subsection of a poem. Theme: The idea or meaning behind the literary work or poem; what the author wants the reader to take away. Sommer 39 Dictionary Example Data Sommer 40 Poetry Draft Assignment: To prepare for our upcoming workshop and final assignment, you must write an original poem based on one of the poems we read in class so far or another poem of your choice. You must use at least 3 poetic techniques found in your chosen poem in your original poem. Below is a list of possible poetic techniques that we have learned about that you may encounter and want to emulate: Alliteration, Connotation, Couplet, Hyperbole, Imagery, Metaphor, Simile, Onomatopoeia, Repetition, Rhyme Please only choose techniques from the above list. Remember to make sure your poem has a theme and that the techniques used support that message. Please refer to the Poem Rubric as you write your poem. It will be used in the future to assess your final poem. When you are ready to hand in your poem, please hand in a typed copy of your original poem as well as a copy of the poem it is based on. Due Date: _______________________ Sommer 41 Workshop Etiquette Contract I agree to the following workshop etiquette rules: 1. I will hand in my draft poem by the due date so that my teacher can make copies for the class. 2. I will listen to whoever is speaking and not talk when someone else is speaking. 3. If my poem is being discussed, I will remain silent until the end when the teacher invites me to ask any final questions. 4. While my poem is being discussed I will take notes. 5. I will read all poems prior to class and make relevant notes so that I can offer constructive comments. 6. I will offer up positive and constructive feedback and will back up my feedback with evidence from the poem. 7. I will not make fun of other people’s poems or writing skills. Instead I will contribute to a supportive environment. Sign here: ____________________________________________________________________________ Sommer 42 Workshop Notes Assignment To prepare for our upcoming workshop you are required to make notes on each of your classmates’ poems so that you can participate in a productive workshop. Please read each poem at least twice before making liner notes and final comments (about a paragraph at the end); this should look like the models you were shown in class. You may hand write these notes directly on your copy of the poem. You do not need to use complete sentences for liner notes. Your noted copies will be collected after the workshop is completed. Comments will be assessed and calculated into your workshop grade as seen in the critique category of the Workshop rubric. All poets will receive these peer noted copies of their poems so that they can receive additional feedback. Please use your Class Poetry Dictionary to help you when making thoughtful comments and critiques. Sommer 43 Workshop Rubric Student: __________________________________________ Category 40 Participation Focused on tasks at all times; asks thoughtful questions; gives peers valuable feedback all of the time. Critique 30 20 Focused on tasks most of the time; asks good questions; gives peers valuable feedback most of the time. Student Student writes writes thoughtful thoughtful liner and end liner and end notes on each notes on student poem most student and makes use poems and of correct makes use of poetic correct poetic vocabulary. vocabulary. Adherence to Workshop Etiquette Contract Student adheres to the workshop etiquette guidelines 90100% of the time. Preparedness Student brings a copy of each peer poem with thoughtful notes 90100% of the time. Focused on tasks some of the time (may need redirection); asks questions at times; gives peers feedback sometimes. Student attempts to make thoughtful liner and end notes on most student poems but does not always use correct poetic vocabulary. Student Student adheres to adheres to the the workshop workshop etiquette etiquette guidelines guidelines 7080-89% of 79% of the the time. time. Student brings a copy of each peer poem with thoughtful notes 80-89% of the time. Student brings a copy of each peer poem with thoughtful notes 70-79% of the time. 10 Often unfocused on tasks; needs redirection; rarely asks questions; rarely offers feedback Student fails to make thoughtful comments on many student poems and either does not use or misuses poetic vocabulary. Student adheres to the workshop etiquette guidelines less than 70% of the time. Student brings a copy of each peer poem with thoughtful notes less than 70% of the time Sommer 44 Teacher Comments: __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ Sommer 45 Poetry Unit Final Assignment For your final project you will be handing in a final copy of your student poem along with a reflection comparing the poetic devices used in your poem that are also used in the emulated poem and how both contribute to each poems meaning. The reflection paper should be 2-3 pages in length, typed in 12 point Times New Roman, and double spaced. Please use MLA format when citing lines from the emulated poem and include a reference page with an MLA citation for the poem. You do not need to write a citation for your original poem. Please refer to the rubric as you complete your assignment. As always plagiarism of any kind in the poem or reflection will result in an automatic failing grade. Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns. Due Date: _______________________ Sommer 46 Poetry Unit Final Project Rubrics Student: __________________________________________ Poem Rubric (20%) Category 40 30 20 Creativity (10%) Poem has a clear theme and uses supportive poetic techniques, unique imagery, and diverse language that enhance the meaning of the poem. Poem has a clear theme supported by creative use of poetic techniques, imagery, and diverse language but also uses many clichés. Poet attempts to use creative techniques, diverse language and imagery. However these efforts often contradict or obscure the poem’s theme. Poem shows little creativity. Poet often uses clichés and does not use diverse language or imagery. Poem has no clear theme. Capturing a Style/Artist (60%) Student poem consistently and correctly uses 3 or more similar poetic techniques to the original poem to enhance meaning. Student makes thoughtful changes to poem, above and beyond what was suggested in workshop. Student poem uses 1-2 similar poetic techniques correctly. Student has used only 1 similar poetic technique correctly. No similar poetic techniques have been used or all have been used incorrectly. Student makes changes to poem based on workshop critique but does not go beyond these suggestions. Student attempts to make changes to his/her poem but changes seem haphazard and without reason. Student makes little attempt to change his/her poem after workshop critique. Draft1 and the final draft look nearly identically, except for a few superficial changes. Writing Process (10%) 10 Sommer 47 Grammar Usage, Mechanics, and Spelling (20%) There are no errors in mechanics, usage, grammar, or spelling. There are 1-2 errors in mechanics, usage, grammar, or spelling. The poem is difficult to understand at times because of errors in mechanics, usage, grammar, or spelling. The poem is consistently difficult to understand because of errors in mechanics, usage, grammar, or spelling. *Plagiarism of any kind will not be tolerated and will result in an automatic failing grade. Sommer 48 Reflection Paper Rubric (80%) Student: __________________________________________ Category 40 30 20 10 Poetic Comparison/Analysis (50%) Student accurately describes the three or more poetic techniques used in his/her poem and their relation to the emulated poem and how both relate to meaning. Student accurately describes 2 poetic techniques used in his/her poem and their relation to the emulated poem and how both relate to meaning. Student does not accurately describe poetic techniques used and how they relate to the original poem. Student fails to draw conclusions between techniques and poem meaning. Textual Evidence (20%) Student thoughtfully chooses textual evidence, using direct quotes, from both poems that support analysis. Student uses some textual evidence, using direct quotes, to support analysis but does not use evidence from both poems when comparing. There are one to two errors using MLA format. Student accurately describes 1 poetic techniques used in his/her poem and it’s relation to the emulated poem and/or only relates the techniques used to one of the poem’s meanings. Student fails to use direct textual evidence and rather obscurely refers to the poems. Often these references do not back up claims. There are three to four errors using MLA format. Reflection is difficult to follow due to poor organization. Transitions are used but often choppy. Paragraphs and sentences in reflection seem to be organized haphazardly. Transitions are absent all Format (5%) Organization (15%) There are no errors using MLA format. Reflection is well organized. Paragraphs and sentences logically follow one another and transitions are clear and Reflection is organized. Transitions are clear but one or two organizational errors occur. Student does not use textual evidence in paper to support his/her analysis. The final draft has more than four errors using MLA format. Sommer 49 strong. Grammar Usage, Mechanics, and Spelling (10%) There are no errors in mechanics, usage, grammar, or spelling. together. There are 1-3 errors in mechanics, usage, grammar, or spelling. There are 4-5 errors in mechanics, usage, grammar, or spelling. There are more than 5 errors in mechanics, usage, grammar, or spelling. *Plagiarism of any kind will not be tolerated and will result in an automatic failing grade. Sommer 50 Poetry Unit Final Project Grade Sheet Student: __________________________________________ Poem Final Draft Score (20%) ______ Reflection Paper Score (80%) ______ Total (100%) ______ Teacher Comments: __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ Sommer 51 Celebrate National Poetry Month with Us! Join us for the annual 8th Grade Poetry Slam. Friday, April 26th at 1:00 pm At Middle School 888 School Drive North Town, NY Students will be reading their original poems. Light refreshments will be served. Please RSVP to Ms. Sommer at 555-0123 or [email protected] We look forward to seeing you there. Sommer 53 Looking at your strengths and weaknesses worksheet, write down some goals you can work on in future units. If you did not reach your goal this time around feel free to focus on this goal again but remember you may want to test out different strategies: ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ Choose one the above goals and brainstorm some ideas to reach your goal in the future: ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ Teacher Comments: __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ Sommer 54 Sommer 55 Sommer 56 Sample Favorite Strategies Word Cloud Poll Sommer 57 References DiYanni, R. 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