NCEA Level 2 Classical Studies (90247) 2011 — page 1 of 15 Assessment Schedule – 2011 Classical Studies: Examine a passage from a work of classical literature in translation (90247) Candidate chooses TWO questions from ONE topic. A holistic judgement on the level of achievement attained will be made over the two questions answered. Judgement Statement Achievement Achievement with Merit Achievement with Excellence A M E Achievement with Merit Achievement with Excellence Generic Schedule Achievement The candidate examines literary features by identifying, describing, clarifying, giving reasons for, and / or placing in context aspects of passages from a work of literature. The candidate examines literary features by identifying, describing, clarifying, giving reasons for, and / or placing in context aspects of passages from a work of literature. Supporting evidence is present. The candidate discusses literary features of the work by showing a detailed understanding of the wider context and / or a depth of understanding of the literary features. Supporting evidence is present. The candidate provides a general examination of the literary features. Knowledge and interpretation of textual detail is at a basic level and specific references may be lacking. One or more parts of questions are underdeveloped or omitted. The candidate incorporates greater detail, qualitative or quantitative as required, in an answer based on sound knowledge of the literary works. Most parts of the question are covered, but treatment may be unbalanced. Relevant supporting evidence is present, but may not be consistently provided. The candidate’s answers have an analytical focus. They are based on a thorough knowledge of the literary works themselves, as well as the wider context in which they were produced. All parts of the question are answered in detail. Supporting evidence is relevant, accurate and consistently provided. The candidate: The candidate: The candidate: • must show some knowledge and understanding • must show sound knowledge and understanding • must show depth of knowledge and understanding • must briefly respond to both bullet points • respond to both bullet points but answers may be unbalanced • must respond to all parts of the question • must provide some relevant supporting evidence but evidence may be general • must provide some relevant and specific supporting evidence • must show some analysis. • may provide factual rather than analytical answers. • must provide relevant, specific, accurate and detailed supporting evidence • must have an analytical focus. NCEA Level 2 Classical Studies (90247) 2011 — page 2 of 15 Evidence Statement TOPIC ONE: HOMER’S ODYSSEY Question One Achievement Achievement with Merit Achievement with Excellence Here is a sample of part of a response at Achievement level. Here is a sample of part of a response at Merit level. Here is a sample of part of a response at Excellence level. The ways in which Odysseus outwits the Cyclops Odysseus outwits the Cyclops by getting him drunk so he can blind him. Then, he and his men hide under the sheep so they can escape from the Cyclops who sits at the entrance of the cave attempting to catch them as they go out. The ways in which Odysseus outwits the Cyclops Odysseus outwits the Cyclops by devising a plan that enables him and his men to escape from the Cyclops’ cave. Firstly, he gets the Cyclops drunk knowing that this is a good way to put him to sleep. This enables Odysseus and his men to blind the giant so they can escape more easily. Finally, in order to get out of the cave, Odysseus and his men cleverly hide under the bellies of the Cyclops’ sheep and therefore outwit the blind Polyphemus who sits at the exit of the cave attempting to catch the men as they go out. The ways in which Odysseus outwits the Cyclops From the moment he meets the Cyclops, Odysseus is cautious and realises that in order to survive and save his men he must outwit the giant. Therefore, he cunningly lies about his name (saying his name is Nobody) and the location of his ship; his lies pay off when the Cyclops calls out for help to the other Cyclopes and foolishly says “Nobody has blinded me”. As a result, no one comes to help the Cyclops and Odysseus and his men are able to escape. Odysseus also outwits the Cyclops by devising a plan that enables him and his men to escape from the Cyclops’ cave. Firstly, he gets the Cyclops drunk knowing that this is a good way to put him to sleep and overcome his superior strength. This enables Odysseus and his men to then blind the giant so they can escape more easily. Finally, in order to get out of the cave, Odysseus and his men cleverly hide under the bellies of the Cyclops’ sheep and therefore outwit the blind Polyphemus who sits at the exit of the cave attempting to catch the men as they go out. Reasons why Odysseus feels the need to reveal his true identity Odysseus must reveal his true identity so that everyone knows the name of the man who blinded the Cyclops and escaped from him. Other answers possible Reasons why Odysseus feels the need to reveal his true identity. The hero can only achieve fame and glory through famous deeds; therefore, Odysseus must announce his victory and reveal his true identity so that everyone knows the name of the man who outwitted the Cyclops. Other answers possible Reasons why Odysseus feels the need to reveal his true identity. The driving force behind the hero was the need to achieve fame and glory, and so it is not enough for Odysseus to simply escape from the Cyclops. The hero can only achieve fame and glory through famous deeds and his achievements are his only chance for immortality; therefore, Odysseus must announce his victory and reveal his true identity (even though this endangers him and his men) so that everyone knows the name of the man who outwitted the Cyclops. Other answers possible NCEA Level 2 Classical Studies (90247) 2011 — page 3 of 15 Achievement Achievement with Merit Achievement with Excellence Discuss, with supporting evidence from this extract and / or other parts of book 9, the differences and / or similarities between the Cyclopes’ way of doing things and Odysseus’ way. Differences The Cyclopes’: • rely on the gods’ bounty; Odysseus acts for himself • ignore / abuse the rules of hospitality; Odysseus follows them • show no respect for the gods; Odysseus does • live independently with no social organisation; Odysseus is part of a community • live quietly on their island, Odysseus seeks adventure and challenges. Similarities The Cyclopes’ and Odysseus: • worship the same gods • live pastoral lives • show cruelty and uncivilised behaviour towards each other. (Note: the supporting evidence must be from book 9 and can include, but is not limited to, evidence from the extract. Evidence from outside book 9 should be disregarded. Candidates can address either the similarities or the differences, or may address both.) Discuss, with supporting evidence from this extract and / or other parts of book 9, the ways in which Odysseus outwits Polyphemus Odysseus: • gives his name as “Nobody” • uses a gift of wine to put Polyphemus to sleep • hides his men and himself under Polyphemus’ sheep in order to escape the cave. and why he feels the need to reveal his true identity. As a Homeric hero Odysseus seeks fame and glory and cannot achieve it if his name is not attached to his deeds. (Note: the supporting evidence must be from book 9 and can include, but is not limited to, evidence from the extract. Evidence from outside book 9 should be disregarded. Candidates must address both the points above to have fully answered this bullet point.) NCEA Level 2 Classical Studies (90247) 2011 — page 4 of 15 TOPIC ONE: HOMER’S ODYSSEY Question Two Achievement Achievement with Merit Achievement with Excellence Here is a sample of part of a response at Achievement level. Here is a sample of part of a response at Merit level. Here is a sample of part of a response at Excellence level. Discuss Homer’s concept of justice and revenge as it relates to the killing of the Suitors and the punishment of the disloyal slaves Odysseus has the right to punish the Suitors for abusing his son and wife and for eating his food and drinking his wine. He also has the right to punish the disloyal slaves and so he hangs the maids and chops off the male slave’s genitals. Discuss Homer’s concept of justice and revenge as it relates to the killing of the Suitors and the punishment of the disloyal slaves Odysseus has the right to take revenge on the Suitors for disrespecting him and also for disrespecting his son and his wife and abusing his household. For example, the Suitors kick and push the beggar around, plot to kill Telemachus and call out obscenities at Penelope. Odysseus has to punish the Suitors in order to restore order in his household and regain his and his family’s honour. Similarly, both Odysseus and Telemachus have the right to punish the disloyal slaves and their punishment is vicious. For example, the female slaves are made to clean the hall of the bodies of their lovers before Telemachus hangs them; similarly, Telemachus punishes the disrespectful male slave by chopping off his genitals. Discuss Homer’s concept of justice and revenge as it relates to the killing of the Suitors and the punishment of the disloyal slaves Odysseus is expected to and in fact has the right to take revenge on the insolent Suitors for repeatedly harassing and disrespecting him when he was disguised as a beggar and also for disrespecting his son and his wife and abusing his household. For example, the Suitors kick and push the beggar around, plot to kill Telemachus and call out obscenities when Penelope speaks to the bard at the symposium. Furthermore, they abuse the customs of guest friendship by overstaying in Odysseus’ house, wasting his property and sleeping with his maids. Odysseus has to punish the insolent Suitors in order to restore order in his household and regain his and his family’s honour. The Suitors deserve to suffer for their unjust and inappropriate behaviour and so when Odysseus kills them viciously, his actions are justified. Similarly, the ruthless killing of the disloyal slaves is both justified and necessary so that both Odysseus and Telemachus will regain their honour and restore order in the palace. And so, the female slaves are made to clean the hall and remove the bodies of their lovers before Telemachus hangs them; the insolent male slave Melanthius was also punished severely: “with a pitiless knife they sliced his nose and ears off; they ripped away his genitals as raw meat for the dogs, and in their fury they lopped off his hands and feet”. Other answers possible. Other answers possible. Other answers possible. Explain what the image of the hound and fawn represents • The hound represents Odysseus, and the fawn represents the Suitors. • The hound is an individual animal known for courage and loyalty, which is why it is used to represent Odysseus. • The fawn represents the Suitors because it is seen as weak and it is part of a group or herd. NCEA Level 2 Classical Studies (90247) 2011 — page 5 of 15 Achievement Achievement with Merit Achievement with Excellence and discuss, with supporting evidence, the ways in which this image foreshadows events that will take place later in the poem • The image represents the final battle in the hall where Odysseus crushes and kills the Suitors. • The desperation of the scrabbling fawn foreshadows the cornered Suitors and their attempts to escape Odysseus’ revenge. • The blood thirsty nature of the image foreshadows the violence of the final battle in the hall. (Note: Candidates must address both the points above to have fully answered this bullet point.) Discuss, with supporting evidence, Homer’s concept of justice and revenge as it relates to the killing of the Suitors and the punishment of the disloyal slaves. • It was Odysseus’ right and responsibility to punish those who had betrayed him in his absence. • As a hero he cannot allow such disregard for his rights to go unpunished. • As a ruler Odysseus needs to reinstate his authority by exacting swift justice on the Suitors and slaves. • The disloyal slaves were punished more harshly as their loyalty was more expected and more important. • Homer’s concept of justice and revenge does not sit well with a modern audience, as it seems excessive for the crime committed, but for his audience it would seem appropriate and was expected. NCEA Level 2 Classical Studies (90247) 2011 — page 6 of 15 TOPIC ONE: HOMER’S ODYSSEY Question Three Achievement Achievement with Merit Achievement with Excellence Here is a sample of part of a response at Achievement level. Here is a sample of part of a response at Merit level. Here is a sample of part of a response at Excellence level. Discuss reasons why Penelope is the ideal wife for Odysseus Discuss reasons why Penelope is the ideal wife for Odysseus Discuss reasons why Penelope is the ideal wife for Odysseus • She remains faithful to Odysseus even though he has been gone for so long. • Penelope is cunning like Odysseus; for example, she outsmarts the Suitors with her weaving trick, saying she will only marry one of them when she has completed a shroud for her father-in-law. • She still loves him and remains faithful to Odysseus even though he has been gone for 20 years. • Penelope is most proper in the way she behaves in front of her Suitors; for example, when she is in their presence she always covers her face and is escorted by her maids. She does this when she comes into the hall where the Suitors are dining in Book 1. Other answers possible. • • She remains faithful to Odysseus even though he has been gone for 20 years and she is constantly pressured by the Suitors to remarry. After all these years, she still cries about him and speaks candidly about her love for Odysseus and how much she misses him; for example, when she enters the symposium to tell the bard to stop singing this sad song. • Penelope is most proper in the way she behaves in front of her Suitors. Not only does she not flirt with them, but when she is in their presence she always covers her face and is escorted by her maids. She does this when she comes into the hall where the Suitors are dining in Book 1 and then again in Book 21 when she brings Odysseus’ bow to the Suitors in order to begin the contest. • Penelope is a good match for Odysseus. Like Odysseus she is wise and cunning; for example, she outsmarts the Suitors with her weaving trick, saying she will only marry one of them when she has completed a shroud for Laertes, her father-in-law. Instead, she unravels the weaving every night to avoid remarrying. • Penelope even outwits Odysseus with the bed test in Book 23. • Like Odysseus, Penelope is also very cautious, for example when she talks to the beggar in Book 19, she carefully checks his identity and asks for proof of his background before she trusts him and opens her heart. Penelope is a good match for Odysseus. Like Odysseus she is wise and cunning; for example, she outsmarts the Suitors with her weaving trick, saying she will only marry one of them when she has completed a shroud for her father-in-law. Instead, she unravels the weaving every night to avoid remarrying. Other answers possible. Other answers possible NCEA Level 2 Classical Studies (90247) 2011 — page 7 of 15 Achievement Achievement with Merit Achievement with Excellence Discuss, with supporting evidence, the character of Penelope as she is portrayed in this extract • Bewildered, shocked, confused, lost, doubting, faithful, perceptive, wise, cunning. Hard-hearted or unmotherly are acceptable with evidence from Penelope’s character / behaviour in the extract – NOT just quoting Telemachus’ view. (Note: the supporting evidence for this point must be from the extract. Evidence from outside the extract should be disregarded.) and whether Telemachus’ accusations of hard-heartedness are justified. Yes • • She has not leapt into Odysseus’ arms but is holding herself aloof. No • Her wider character as seen in earlier books, eg she cries for Odysseus repeatedly. (Note: the supporting evidence for this point can come from anywhere in the Odyssey but may be drawn only from the extract. Where candidates choose to draw their evidence from will affect their answer, so both yes and no are acceptable answers with valid supporting evidence.) (Note: Candidates must address both the points above to have fully answered this bullet point.) Discuss, with supporting evidence, the reasons why Penelope is the ideal wife for Odysseus. • Penelope matches many of Odysseus’ characteristics, such as being cautious, wise, cunning, pious and following society’s rules (examples / evidence should be given for both characters) • She is loyal and faithful to Odysseus throughout his long absence. • Penelope adheres to society’s rules for her rank and position as Odysseus’ wife. NCEA Level 2 Classical Studies (90247) 2011 — page 8 of 15 TOPIC TWO: GREEK TRAGEDY Question One Achievement Achievement with Merit Achievement with Excellence Here is a sample of part of a response at Achievement level. Here is a sample of part of a response at Merit level. Here is a sample of part of a response at Excellence level. Discuss with supporting evidence the tone of Teiresias’ speech in lines 10–22 The tone of Teiresias’ speech is angry. He angrily reveals that in fact it was Oedipus himself who had committed the crime; for example, he says, “rich now, then a beggar”. Other answers possible. Discuss with supporting evidence the tone of Teiresias’ speech in lines 10–22 The tone of Teiresias’ speech is extremely aggravated. He has been provoked to anger by Oedipus' accusation, and this is evident in his initial words; for example, he begins by saying very firmly that he will only go when he has finished, not because he has been dismissed by Oedipus. His aggravated tone is also shown when he finally reveals that in fact it was Oedipus himself who had (unwittingly) committed the crime. Other answers possible. Discuss with supporting evidence the tone of Teiresias’ speech in lines 10–22 The tone of Teiresias’ speech is extremely aggravated. He has been provoked to anger by Oedipus' accusation, first that he has no foresight and then that he has had a hand in the murder by collaborating with Creon. Teiresias’ initial words show the aggravated tone of his speech; for example, he begins by saying very firmly that he will only go when he has finished, not because he has been dismissed by Oedipus and then he continues, quietly but again firmly, to say that he is not afraid of what Oedipus might do to him. When he finally reveals that in fact it was Oedipus himself who had (unwittingly) committed the crime, his choice of harsh words again reflects his anger: “rich now but then a beggar”, “groping his way to a land of exile”. And finally, Teiresias angrily spits out the words “go in and think of this”. Other answers possible Discuss, with supporting evidence, the ways in which Oedipus’ skill at solving riddles proves to be the gift that is his greatness and the cause of his great misfortune and downfall. • Solving the riddle of the Sphinx made him king, which gave him greatness, but married him to his mother, which was part of his great misfortune. • Solving the riddle of his parentage answered his questions about who he was and cleared him from his fear of doing harm to his adoptive parents. Solving the riddle also made him king by birth, but this knowledge led to him blinding and exiling himself and losing his wife / mother. • Solving the riddle of the plague ended the pollution that caused the plague making him a great king; but forced him to blind and exile himself. Discuss, with supporting evidence, the tone of Teiresias’ speech in lines 10–22 (Note: ‘tone’ will mainly deal with emotions such as those listed below, but take a broad approach to defining this term and focus on the justification of any answer based on the supporting evidence.) • Angry, frustrated, arrogant, spiteful, vehement, patronising, courageous, warning etc. NCEA Level 2 Classical Studies (90247) 2011 — page 9 of 15 TOPIC TWO: GREEK TRAGEDY Question Two Achievement Achievement with Merit Achievement with Excellence Here is a sample of part of a response at Achievement level. Here is a sample of part of a response at Merit level. Here is a sample of part of a response at Excellence level. Discuss the differences in the characters of Ismene and Antigone as they are portrayed in this extract Antigone is strong-willed and courageous. This is reflected in her words “I will bury my brother”; she is even prepared to die for her brother. Ismene on the other hand, is weak and appears to be lacking in courage; she says it would be crazy to stand up to men. Other answers possible. Discuss the differences in the characters of Ismene and Antigone as they are portrayed in this extract Antigone is strong-willed and this is reflected in her words “I will bury my brother”. Ismene on the other hand, is weak and timid, and this is reflected in her words “I can do no other but as I am commanded”. Antigone is a courageous tragic hero who is willing to suffer the consequences in order to do what she believes in. Her courage is shown in her defiance of the king and most importantly in her fearlessness of death. Ismene, in this extract, appears to be lacking in courage; she is afraid to stand up for what she believes in and she simply justifies her fear by saying “we are women…. To do more is madness”. Other answers possible. Discuss the differences in the characters of Ismene and Antigone as they are portrayed in this extract Antigone is strong-willed and resistant, a woman of thrasos (daring); she believes in her moral duty to the gods over her duty to the state and so she firmly declares “I will bury my brother”. Ismene on the other hand, is weak and timid, and this is reflected in her words “I can do no other but as I am commanded”. Antigone is tough and some might even say she is hard; for example she says, “if I die for it, what happiness”. Her hard nature is also seen in the way she rejects Ismene. Ismene is feminine, and appears to be softer. She knows what she cannot do as a woman, and is happy with her limitations; “we must obey in this, or in worse than this”. Antigone is a courageous tragic hero who is willing to suffer the consequences in order to do what is morally right, what she believes in. Her courage is shown in her defiance of the king and his edict and most importantly in her fearlessness of death. Ismene, in this extract, appears to be lacking in courage; she is afraid to stand up to men, afraid to stand up for what she believes in and she simply justifies her fear by saying “we are women…. To do more is madness”. Other answers possible Discuss, with supporting evidence, the reasons why Ismene refuses to help bury her brother. • Ismene states that “we are women” and thus unable to defy the male patriarch. • She states that it is wrong to go against the state. Discuss, with supporting evidence, the differences in the characters of Ismene and Antigone as portrayed in this extract. Ismene NCEA Level 2 Classical Studies (90247) 2011 — page 10 of 15 Achievement • Achievement with Merit Achievement with Excellence represents the superiority of the state laws; Antigone the superiority of religious devotion • makes rational logical arguments; Antigone’s arguments are based on emotion and passion Antigone • is in love with death; Ismene wants to live • is determined to play the role of a martyr; Ismene wants an ordinary life • is loyal to her family over her own needs; Ismene puts herself first. (Note: The candidates need to directly compare the two characters. Giving a description of one and not the other, or describing both in a way that does not relate does not answer the question.) NCEA Level 2 Classical Studies (90247) 2011 — page 11 of 15 TOPIC TWO: GREEK TRAGEDY Question Three Achievement Achievement with Merit Achievement with Excellence Here is a sample of part of a response at Achievement level. Here is a sample of part of a response at Merit level. Here is a sample of part of a response at Excellence level. Discuss the ways in which Creon’s character changes and develops in this play When we first meet Creon he is a confident, strong leader who is determined to uphold his edicts. However, in the end, Creon changes and becomes weak and lacking in confidence. Discuss the ways in which Creon’s character changes and develops in this play When we first meet Creon, he shows himself to be a confident, self-controlled leader who believes that his decrees are consistent with the will of the gods and is determined to uphold them in order to protect his people. However, when Teiresias makes his prophecies, Creon changes direction and even asks his councillors what he should do; this shows he is weak and no longer in control as a leader. Other answers possible. Discuss the ways in which Creon’s character has changed since the beginning of the play When we first meet Creon he is addressing the Theban councillors, explaining to them his edict and reasons for it. During this speech he shows himself to be a confident, self-controlled and calm leader who believes that his decrees are consistent with the will of the gods and is determined to uphold them in order to protect his people. His explanations are plausible and his values appear noble; therefore he commands their respect. When a legitimate argument is raised against his course of action by Teiresias, Creon is completely open to changing course. The tone of his voice also changes and this shows that he is no longer confident and in command. Instead, he now appears worried and he even asks his councillors what he should do. This shows him to be a weak leader and therefore a far cry from the strong king that speaks confidently and with authority to his councillors at the beginning of the play. Other answers possible. Other answers possible. Discuss, with supporting evidence, how this scene may have been staged in Sophoclean Athens with reference to how the actors would have made use of the theatre during the performance: • the speaking actors on stage • the chorus in the orchestra • Creon probably entered through the doors in the skene • Creon may have been dragging the body of Haemon using the ekkyklema. theatrical conventions: • no death shown on stage • role of the chorus in drawing out key themes and moving the plot forward • use of non-speaking actors (the attendants) • three speaking actors, changing roles – note: in this play Creon was played by one actor throughout. costuming: • masks with a large mouth and overstated expression with generic features such as ‘young man’ • generic robes (Haemon) to allow character change • more elaborate robes for the protagonist if it was the only role played by an actor (eg Creon) • soft actors’ boots NCEA Level 2 Classical Studies (90247) 2011 — page 12 of 15 Achievement • Achievement with Merit Achievement with Excellence masks and costumes as Theban elders for the chorus. Discuss, with supporting evidence, the ways in which Creon’s character has changed since the beginning of the play. • He was arrogant and is now humble. • He was ignorant and now has knowledge of himself and the gods. • He was obsessed by the power of the state and now respects the gods. • He thought power was the most important part of life but now realises family is more important. NCEA Level 2 Classical Studies (90247) 2011 — page 13 of 15 TOPIC THREE: ROMAN COMEDY Question One Achievement Achievement with Merit Achievement with Excellence Here is a sample of part of a response at Achievement level. Here is a sample of part of a response at Merit level. Here is a sample of part of a response at Excellence level. The characterisation of Tranio in this extract and from other parts of The Ghost The characterisation of Tranio in this extract and from other parts of The Ghost The characterisation of Tranio in this extract and from other parts of The Ghost • Tranio has a superior city attitude especially when dealing with a country slave he thinks is beneath him. • Tranio has a superior city attitude especially when dealing with a country slave he thinks is beneath him, eg he talks down to Grumio when he asks “haven’t you got any cattle to look after in the country?” • Tranio is depicted as smartmouthed and quick in his responses, eg pointing out the lack of logic in Grumio’s comment about “eating the life out of him.” • Grumio implies that Tranio is an extravagant layabout when he claims that he “drinks with his friends all day and night.” • Grumio also implies that Tranio is not a good slave. • Tranio shows inventiveness when he has to explain to Theopropides why a voice is calling from the haunted house. • Tranio is cunning / manipulative, when he succeeds in diverting his master’s anger towards him. Other answers possible. • Grumio implies that Tranio is an extravagant layabout when claims that he “drinks with his friends all day and night.” • Grumio also implies that Tranio is not a good slave because he is not looking after his master’s house and son. • Tranio shows inventiveness when he has to explain to Theopropides why a voice is calling from the haunted house. • Tranio is cunning / manipulative, when he succeeds in diverting his master’s anger towards him by making him leave what he says is the haunted house. Other answers possible. • He has a superior city attitude especially when dealing with a country slave he thinks is beneath him, eg he talks down to Grumio when he asks “haven’t you got any cattle to look after in the country?” • Grumio implies that Tranio is an extravagant layabout when claims that he “drinks with his friends all day and night.” • He also implies that he is not a good slave because he is not looking after his master’s house and son the way he has been entrusted to. • When Theopropides returns unexpectedly, Tranio has to think quickly to get himself out of trouble with his master, eg he shows inventiveness when he has to explain to Theopropides why a voice is calling from the haunted house, saying it was “a dead man crying out because you knocked at the door”. • He is disrespectful to his master when he says “Really, you are so dense”. • Tranio is cunning / manipulative, when he succeeds in diverting his master’s anger towards him by making him leave what he says is the haunted house, then asking the gods to look down on his “wonderful wickedness”. Other answers are possible. NCEA Level 2 Classical Studies (90247) 2011 — page 14 of 15 TOPIC THREE: ROMAN COMEDY Question Two Achievement Achievement with Merit Achievement with Excellence Here is a sample of part of a response at Achievement level. Here is a sample of part of a response at Merit level. Here is a sample of part of a response at Excellence level. The ways in which Philolaches claims that he and a house are similar and how these characteristics are illustrated in the rest of the play The ways in which Philolaches claims that he and a house are similar and how these characteristics are illustrated in the rest of the play The ways in which Philolaches claims that he and a house are similar and how these characteristics are illustrated in the rest of the play • Once a house is complete, it needs maintenance. In the play, Philolaches’ father has been overseas and Philolaches has spent this time drinking and partying. • “Rainy weather” sapped the timbers of a house. Philolaches equates this with his own “idleness”. Philolaches has parties for three or four days on end and has not considered what will happen on his father’s return. • • Once a house is complete, it needs maintenance or will become “a ruin”. In the play, Philolaches’ father has been overseas for three years and Philolaches has spent this time drinking and partying. • “Rainy weather” sapped the timbers of a house. Philolaches equates this with his own “idleness”, doing nothing to repair his character when things went wrong. Philolaches has done nothing to restore his earlier good behaviour, has parties for three or four days on end and has not considered what will happen on his father’s return. The flood of the “wet season” damaging the house was like love pouring into his soul. In the play, he has fallen in love with the slave girl. • Other answers possible. • Once a house is complete, it needs maintenance or will become “a ruin” – a young man left to his “own devices” will undo “all the builders’ work”. In the play, Philolaches’ father has been overseas for three years and Philolaches has spent this time drinking and partying, destroying the character – building his parents had done in his youth. • “Rainy weather” sapped the timbers of a house. Philolaches equates this with his own “idleness”, “showers” with his “sloth” and “hailstorms” with his “carelessness”, doing nothing to repair his character when things went wrong. Philolaches has done nothing to restore his earlier good behaviour, has parties for three or four days on end, allows people to stay in his house and has not considered what will happen on his father’s return. The flood of the “wet season” damaging the house was like love pouring into his soul. In the play, he has fallen in love with the slave girl Philematium. Other answers possible. The flood of the “wet season” damaging the house was like love pouring into his soul. In the play, he has fallen in love with the slave girl Philematium and paid for her freedom. Love for her has left him “fit for nothing” just as “wear and tear” do the same to a house. Other points are possible. • NCEA Level 2 Classical Studies (90247) 2011 — page 15 of 15 TOPIC THREE: ROMAN COMEDY Question Three Achievement Achievement with Merit Achievement with Excellence Here is a sample of part of a response at Achievement level. Here is a sample of part of a response at Merit level. Here is a sample of part of a response at Excellence level. What happens to Palaestra and Ampelisca at the end of the play and why Roman audiences would approve of such an outcome for both the young women and other characters What happens to Palaestra and Ampelisca at the end of the play and why Roman audiences would approve of such an outcome for both the young women and other characters What happens to Palaestra and Ampelisca at the end of the play and why Roman audiences would approve of such an outcome for both the young women and other characters Palaestra is reunited with her parents, who had lost her when she was a baby. Palaestra is able to marry Plesidippus. Plesidippus set free his slave Trachalio who married Palaestra’s friend Ampelisca. The unlikeliness of the events would have appealed to the Roman audience. For example: Palaestra is reunited with her parents, who had lost her when she was a baby. They knew she was their daughter because she had the trinkets that they had given her. Palaestra is able to marry Plesidippus. Plesidippus set free his slave Trachalio who married Palaestra’s friend Ampelisca. The unlikeliness of the events would have appealed to the Roman audience. For example: Palaestra is reunited with her parents Daemones and Daedalis, who had lost her when she was a baby. They knew she was their daughter because she had the trinkets that they had given her, such as the sword and axe with her parents’ names on them. Palaestra is able to marry Plesidippus, the Athenian citizen who had fallen in love with her earlier. Plesidippus set free his slave Trachalio who married Palaestra’s friend Ampelisca, for whose freedom Daemones had paid the pimp, Labrax. • the happy reunion of parents and child after so long • the young people Palaestra and Plesidippus, who were in love, could be together Gripus the slave gained his freedom, because he had indirectly reunited Daemones with Palaestra by finding the trunk. Other answers possible. • • the happy reunion of parents and child after so long • the young people, Palaestra and Plesidippus, who were in love, could be together • the pimp, a character universally disliked by Roman audiences, lost his girl Palaestra Gripus the slave gained his freedom, because he had indirectly reunited Daemones with Palaestra by finding the trunk. The good luck coming to the slave would have appealed to the audience. Other answers possible. • The unlikeliness of the events would have appealed to the Roman audience. For example • the happy reunion of parents and child after so long • the young people Palaestra and Plesidippus, who were in love, could be together when it had seemed impossible • the pimp, a character universally disliked by Roman audiences, lost his girl Palaestra • Gripus the slave gained his freedom, because he had indirectly reunited Daemones with Palaestra by finding the trunk. The good luck coming to the slave, when in real life this was not common, would have appealed to the audience Other answers are possible.
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