teachingenglish M A G A Z I N E W i n t e r 2 0 0 4 - 2 0 0 5 PERMISSION TO WRITE KERR’S ASS We borrowed the loan of Kerr’s big ass To go to Dundalk with butter, Brought him home the evening before the market An exile that night in Mucker. We heeled up the cart before the door, We took the harness inside – The straw-stuffed straddle, the broken breeching With bits of bull-wire tied; The winkers that had no choke-band, The collar and the reins… In Ealing Broadway, London Town I name their several names Until a world comes to life – Morning, the silent bog, And the god of imagination waking In a Mucker fog. Patrick Kavanagh PERMISSION TO WRITE This year, we celebrate the centenary of Patrick Kavanagh, arguably the most influential Irish poet of the 20th century. On the face of it, Kavanagh was an unlikely poet. He had little formal education and his reading was hit-and-miss. He lacked the social poise and cultural confidence of a Yeats or a St John Gogarty. In the literary circles of the cultural establishment, he was a wild man, a perpetual outsider, a clod-hopper. Kavanagh wrote to live and made a precarious living from writing. He reviewed films and contributed articles and poems to whatever publication would pay him. Many of his poems were jobbing pieces, sent out in hope of quick-payment. My father, who worked as barman in Dublin from the early 1940’s, remembered Kavanagh as the customer he did not want to see enter the bar. In my father’s version, Kavanagh was rude and difficult, whose hacking and hawking put many decent customers off their drink. The wonder of Kavanagh is the transformation he undergoes in his best poetry. There the rough edges disappear and Kavanagh creates poems of great eloquence out of the material – personal, social and linguistic – to hand. Seamus Heaney says of him, "Kavanagh gave you permission to dwell without cultural anxiety among the usual landmarks of your life." This is what makes Kavangh such an exciting example for teachers of English. He demonstrates that the language of poetry is no different from the language of daily life and that the sources of poetry are the stuff of ordinary lives, lived in ordinary places. At both Junior Certificate and Leaving Certificate level, the aim of the English syllabus is to develop the students’ capacity to use and shape language. However, by-in-large, students are invited to respond to poetry in discursive essays. Relatively speaking, there is little invitation to students to respond in kind to poetry. If Kavanagh teaches us anything it is that students have the resources, in their lives and their language, to create poetry. Perhaps what they need is permission to dwell without anxiety among the landmarks of their lives and record those landmarks in their poetry. Teachers of English can grant that permission. In marking Kavanagh’s centenary, this issue of the Teaching English magazine celebrates Irish Writers and writing. Dr Kevin Mc Dermott is co-ordinator of English for the Second Level Support Service. If you would like to respond to this or any other article in the magazine, please contact the Teaching English magazine. See back page for contact details. MEET THE WRITER Poet Eavan Boland writes about her poem, ‘This Moment’. ‘This Moment’ is about a time in my life when my children were very young. We lived in a suburb which faced the Dublin hills and where the summer light lasted a long time into the evening. When I went out to call in my daughter she would run into my arms, just as the light was going. If I apply it to “This Moment” I can see one particular place in the poem where if not the soul then the centre of the action sits. It’s the line about the window and the butter. It’s the most deliberate and intent image in the poem. I have a clear memory of hesitating before I used it. But I went ahead anyway. This is a very short poem. Its space is limited. If I wanted to convey both magic and ordinariness, and I did, I needed an image which would put the light of that first window into the context of the downright and plainspoken image of yellow butter. The effect of the first needed the solidity of the second. So I went ahead and did it, and it’s still the part of this poem I remain most satisfied with. This poem remembers that time, but in an impressionistic way. I wanted to convey the stillness, the waiting, the about-to-happen feeling of summer light going. Most of those details in the poem are taken from my life at that time: the moths of late summer always caught my eye as they banged against our kitchen window, and the first house lights through the summer twilight were always an evocative sight to me. Eavan Boland But it’s the mother and child who are the focus of the poem. It’s as if the child’s reunion with the mother makes the summer twilight shift and stumble into real night. The stars, the moths, the sweetening of the apples all happen as a result of the encounter. Eavan Boland’s poem, ‘This Moment’ is from the list of prescribed poems for examination in 2005. Eavan’s latest collection (her tenth) Journey with Two Maps is published by Carcanet. And that’s my real subject. This is a poem which puts human nature and actual nature beside each other. It also puts nature under the control of human nature, which of course it’s not in the real world. But by suggesting it is in this poem I was able to convey something of the power and beauty of the meeting between the child and the mother. And that’s what I wanted to do. THIS MOMENT The form of the poem is fairly open. The short lines helped me create a sort of staccato effect. Small as the space was, I wanted a hint of drama, of an event getting ready to happen. But this kind of poem – which is over almost before it’s begun – depends most on its images. Stars and moths. And rinds slanting around fruit. A neighbourhood. At dusk. Things are getting ready to happen out of sight. But not yet. One tree is black. One window is yellow as butter. As a young poet, I was influenced by my mother. She was a painter and had studied in Paris in the thirties. She was taught by a Russian artist called Leo Survage, who spoke a strange and memorable phrase to her. “There is a place in the painting” he used to say “where the soul sits”. Despite the slight quirkiness of the phrase, my mother remembered it and often quoted it to me. Even now, I find some truth in it when I think about a particular poem. A woman leans down to catch a child who has run into her arms this moment. Stars rise. Moths flutter. Apples sweeten in the dark. Eavan Boland 2 DEATH AND NIGHTINGALES The novelist, Eugene McCabe, has kindly given the Teaching English magazine permission to reproduce his reply to two questions asked of him by a Leaving Certificate student on his novel, Death and Nightingales. History. Held under chieftancy of Brian Maguire (disaffected) crown escheated 1610. Original house built by Thomas Winters under tenant of Sir John Hume of Tully Castle. Burned in 1641 rebellion. Rebuilt by Clement Winters 1660. Extended by Captain William Hudson Winters (sea) 1793. Gates, yard, gate lodge and the hamlet at Clonoula, etc. Reverting back to your initial question. The first word of the title is ‘Death’. The novel is permeated by death itself and thoughts of death from the opening paragraph where Beth is woken by the blaring of a bloated, dying animal and then standing in Billy Winters bedroom imagining him getting a heart attack, and by the description early on of her mother and unborn infant being killed by a frenzied bull. The use of the bull in this chapter is designed to echo the brown bull of Cooley and the “Pillow Talk” in that enduring myth about pride of ownership (land and cattle) and the never ending power between the sexes, then and now. Following on that, Liam (Gaelic for Billy!) Ward loses a calf and is preoccupied throughout by his plan to murder and bury Beth and abscond with the stolen gold to save his own skin. He represents a callous greed and selfishness not unlike that of Billy Winters and his colonising forbears, the point being that, given power, we, the Irish, would behave in a similar manner given half a chance! Q. Why did you write the novel? A. “Why did I write it?” Nuala Ó Faolain chairing a book programme (Booklines) on RTÉ asked the same question with negative emphasis: “I don’t know why he wrote it!” I wrote it because I was fascinated by what seemed an incredible tale and wanted to explore and make it not only credible but relevant to present day readers. You’ll see after the title page, the dedication, For J.C. who gave me the bones of this tale in an April garden Q. What is the meaning of Beth’s final reply to Billy Winters, “Unto death, Mr Winters ... unto death.” J.C. was John Collins (dead since, alas) a mountainy, Fermanagh, cross-border neighbour and small farmer who lived out by Carn Rock and sometimes helped us in the Garden. Quite casually one April day he pointed across the lake towards the old Clones road where there is now a large area of scrubland adjoining the lake. Away back at the time of the land war a drunk, he told us, sleeping off excess one night in the middle of the scrub land woke up to overhear two men talking and digging what was clearly a grave. A girl’s name was mentioned. He crept away, stopped the girl and told her what he had seen and overheard. She had no reason to disbelieve him. She went home and returned the stolen money. When I asked what happened her he told me went off to America a short time after. A. Like her mother the unwanted foetus in Beth’s womb is/was a foreshadowing of future political trouble. That of course was easy to be wise about in 1990 after two decades of 20th century sectarian murder in Ulster! Early on in the novel, there is a description of the house, lands and ownership of Clonoula (taken from Farms, Families and Dwelling Houses of Fermanagh, London: Longmans, 1883) where you can read details about the history of the Ulster plantation, which is at the heart of this story. The following quote contains the loaded, historical word “escheated” (confiscated) and a reference to the rebellion of 1641. The sense of a colonial class digging in to stay is well defined: 3 All empires steal in the name of progress, justice and civilisation! And they are all alike in this. The brown envelopes in our Tribunals are a follow on of this: grubby theft, impure and simple. The examples are endless. To me the key chapter in the novel is Chapter ten, portraying Percy French, himself the product of a Big House (French Park Co. Roscommon) and, in his own way, as beloved and as enduring as Parnell. It tries to convey the historical reality of the time, to show the complexity and human contradiction involved when the enormous power of Empire bears down on the simmering resentment of centuries. I hope these few comments are helpful. I’d hate to try to write a piece about Death and Nightingales under examination pressure. Good Luck! The Film Rights of Death and Nightingales In response to a question on the possibility of a film version of the novel, Eugene McCabe told the Teaching English magazine that the film rights were sold within a month of the novel’s publication in 1992 to the company which made, among other things, Bridget Jones’s Diary. A number of screenplays have been written, including one by Eugene himself. One “Hollywood hot-shot” was paid an exorbitant amount of money “for setting it among wealthy, Irish emigrants in a 19th Century Montana mining Town”, though this, too, was turned down by “the fat men with fat cigars. ‘Too Irish, too down beat!’ They want happy endings to all stories.” Interestingly the company involved made a really good film of Sam Hanna Bell’s December Bride, though, by their standards, it was not a commercial success. Eugene says he believes only one in twenty of the film rights purchased is made into a film and it will be lucky to clear its costs. That of course, was a dead end, story wise. The families involved were still, he told us, in the Carn Rock area. He named no names. I didn’t ask for them or want to hear them. I was more than fascinated by details, by the gross betrayal at the heart of this unlikely tale. Clearly betrayal, and its devastating effect, is the major theme in the novel. Critics quite rightly fasten on that. For example, at the outset Catherine deliberately betrays Billy Winters by marrying him while pregnant by one of two men. Mercy Boyle tells (betrays) details about her master to her constable friend which a loyal servant would not disclose. Beth, his stepdaughter, betrays his absolute trust by stealing his gold. The really profound betrayal is Liam Ward’s betrayal of Beth and his intention to murder her. If you want to elaborate this list, you could say Parnell was betrayed by catholic bishops (who preached love and forgiveness and were so blatantly loveless and unforgiving), turning huge numbers of their flock against Parnell’s brilliant leadership, simply because he “loved not wisely but too well”, thereby crippling what might have been the peaceful independence of the entire island. Theft and human greed are not alluded to especially by commentators. Billy Winter’s old gold and land stem from a double theft, the stealing by an ancestor of a shipload of beaver pelts and, then, his moving in on escheated (confiscated) land after The Flight of the Earls. Eugene McCabe’s Death and Nightingales is on the list of texts prescribed for comparative study for examination in 2006. The novel may also be studied as a single text, at both ordinary and higher level, for the 2006 examination. Eugene’s latest collection of stories, Heaven Lies About Us (2004) is published by Bloomsbury. 4 AN AMISH RUG Poet Michael Longley writes about his poem ‘An Amish Rug’ in the context of some other poems he has written about quilts. AN AMISH RUG In my last four collections there are several poems about domestic artefacts (mainly quilts) from the last century and further back. Although they were intended for everyday use, sometimes these quilts turned out to be artistic masterpieces. In most cases we don’t know who the quilters were. My quilt poems (and my Amish rug poem) are a way of celebrating these modest anonymous geniuses (mainly women), and casting the light of imagination on to heads bowed in concentration at a kitchen table. They spent long evenings with needle and thread, between household chores, and in the midst of familial hubbub. In their designs and patterns they reflected their lives as farmers, their religious festivals, the seasons, the countryside. In one of my poems I quote a quilter who Thought her quilt as beautiful As the wild flowers that grew in the wood And along the edge of the road . . . Like poets they gave their patterns beautifully suggestive names: “Hole in the Barn Door”, “Sun Dial”, “Grandmother’s Flower Garden”, “Cathedral Window”. They made quilts for special occasions. A young brideto-be would create a quilt for her wedding night (and for the rest of her married life) and conceal behind the cloth love letters and other secret things. Here is the whole poem “The Design”: trimmings and leftovers, a radiantly colourful rug out of a pile of old rags. Lancaster County in Pennsylvania is famous for the communities of Amish folk who live and farm there. This severe Protestant sect eschews all modern inventions and contraptions, happily doing without fridges, TVs, radios, electric light. They travel in horse-drawn buggies, and wear exceptionally plain, old-fashioned clothes, often black. They are brilliant farmers who don’t ruin the soil with heavy machinery and chemicals. The Amish also sell to tourists lovely quilts and rugs which in their rainbow-burst colours contrast disturbingly with the austere appearance of their makers. Although I could never join their religion, I admire these people. Their way of life is a reprimand to our present-day lust for possessions, our greedy destruction of this beautiful planet. When I was last in Lancaster County in the 1980’s, I bought an Amish rug as a gift for my wife. I wrote a poem about it some time later, a love poem which is in a way also religious. There is something devout about making anything well. The Amish rug-maker who pieced together our bedroom rug out of rags all those years ago, now lights up our lives every day. He really has created for us a cathedral window. Michael Longley Michael Longley’s poem, ‘An Amish Rug’ is from the list of prescribed poems for examination in 2005 & 2006. Michael’s latest collection, Snow Water (2004), is published by Jonathan Cape. AN AMISH RUG Sometimes the quilts were white for weddings, the design Made up of stitches and the shadows cast by stitches. And the quilts for funerals? How do you sew the night? The quilts and rugs also impress me because they are created out of nothing more than bits and pieces of material, odds and ends that are transformed and given a second life. To quote another of my poems (“The Sunburst”) Made out of uniforms, coat linings, petticoats, Waistcoats, flannel shirts, ball gowns, by Mother Or Grandmother, twenty stitches to every inch... All art is to a greater or lesser extent improvisatory, conjuring something out of nothing – a quilt out of As if a one-room schoolhouse were all we knew And our clothes were black, our underclothes black, Marriage a horse and buggy going to church And the children silhouettes in a snowy field, I bring you this patchwork like a smallholding Where I served as the hired boy behind a harrow, Its threads the colour of cantaloupe and cherry Securing hay bales, corn cobs, tobacco leaves. You may hang it on the wall, a cathedral window, Or lay it out on the floor beside our bed So that whenever we undress for sleep or love We shall step over it as over a flowerbed. Michael Longley · WRITE A POEM · WRITE A POEM · WRITE A POEM · THIRD ANNUAL ‘WRITE A POEM’ COMPETITION CALLING ALL POETS Last Year, the Teaching English Support Service Poetry Competition attracted over 1000 entries. This year the Teaching English Magazine is again inviting students to Write a Poem. There are two categories: Junior Cycle and Senior Cycle. We hope that the competition will encourage young writers to compose poetry and encourage teachers to support the writing of poetry. Poems written in response to poems studied for Junior Certificate and Leaving Certificate English are especially welcome. We encourage teachers to send a selection of the most promising work from their classes. RULES OF THE COMPETITION Each entrant may submit one poem. Each entry must typed or written clearly in legible handwriting Each entry must contain: The title of the Poem. The Name of the Entrant, The Name and Address of the School. The Category. Each entry must be stamped by the school or signed by an English Teacher. Where an entry is modelled on, or written in response to, or a poem, the name of the poem and the poet must be clearly stated on the entry. All entries must be sent to Esther Herlihy, English Administrator, SLSS, Navan Education Centre, Athlumney, Navan, Co. Meath. Please note that entrants should keep a copy of their poems, as no poems will be returned. Winners and highly commended will be published in the Summer 2005 issue of the Teaching English Magazine. Winners will receive book tokens and a commemorative plaque. Closing date for receipt of entries is Friday 18th February 2005. POETRY AND CREATIVE IMITATION The new Leaving Certificate English syllabus, examined for the first time in 2001, encourages the idea of creative imitation as a means of developing the art of writing. In essence, this involves the young writer, in this instance the young poet, · reading a poem to discover what it can teach him or her in his own efforts at writing. Seamus Heaney, writing on the way we come to poetry, observes: In practice you hear it coming from somebody else, you hear something in another’s writer’s sounds that flows in through your ear and enters the echo chamber of your head and delights your whole nervous system in such a way that your reaction will be ‘Ah, I wish I had said that in that particular way.’ This other writer, in fact, has spoken something essential to you, something you recognise instinctively as a true sounding of aspects of yourself and your experience. And your first steps as a writer will be to imitate, consciously or unconsciously, these sounds that flowed in, that influence. Many of the winning entries in last year’s competition were written in response to a poem, and that is how the writing of poetry often begins: you find your voice in response to another voice; you read a poem and you write one of your own. However finding your voice is not enough to make a poet – there’s something else needed. Raymond Carver the great American Poet, writes of that something else. He tells how, as a teenager, working as a delivery boy, he delivered something to a customer in a small town in Washington. As he was waiting for this elderly man to write a cheque, he began to notice the books all around him, and he saw an anthology and a poetry magazine. He’d never seen a magazine devoted to poetry, and he was astounded. The older man saw his interest and gave him the magazine and anthology as a gift, saying: “Maybe you’ll write something yourself someday. If you do, you’ll need to know where to send it.” Carver continues: ‘Where to send it.’ Something – I don’t know just what, but I felt something momentous happening. I was eighteen or nineteen years old, obsessed with the need “to write something,” and by then I’d made a few clumsy attempts at poems. But it had never really occurred to me that there might be a place where one actually sent these efforts in hopes that they would be read and even, just possibly – incredibly, or so it seemed – considered for publication. The competition hopes to offer students the opportunity to see their efforts published in a magazine that will be posted to every second-level school in the country. WRITE A POEM · WRITE A POEM · WRITE A POEM · · WRITE A POEM · WRITE A POEM · WRITE A POEM · THE WINNING POEMS FROM THE 2004 COMPETITION 1st Prize Junior Senior 1st Prize SHORT STORY ON A SEVILLE POSTER CONNEMARA – IMPRESSIONS They are in an elegant pose, Under the blossoming tree. He has his left arm around her shoulder Gripping it tightly. Her gown is pink, And puffs out like a bed of flowers. The sky is green with passion, Like emeralds in the blazing sun. He is dressed in black and white And sings to her, His hands crimped around his castanet. He longs, in the Sevilla sunset. It was the pine tree That welcomed my arrival, Mimicking the wrath of the sea In its wind tossed rustling. Modelled on ‘Short Story on a Painting of Gustav Klimt’ by Lawrence Ferlinghetti Jennifer Baxter Community School, Carrigaline Co. Cork Just beyond a monster sleeps, Hidden under a blanket Of moss and wilful weeds, Asleep for ten thousand years, In a grey endless dream. The wind blows with a force That could frighten the weak Or give life to the inspired, Transforming the hues of the world, And exhaling into the sea The ferocity of wakefulness. The waves multiply Till the sea becomes enslaved To the surface movements Of thousands of minions, Moving like troops In unison, and with lives short-lived, Dying in beautiful white foamy bursts. Around the anonymous harbour Grow tufts of green grass, amid the vestiges Of burnt umber hay. Across the bay Stand masses of crosses, Bequeathing to their owners Eternal landscapes of beauty. The wind blows stronger, Reaching into the worn crevices, Of Fahy’s forlorn castle, Now forsaken to nettles, Thanks to the ambitions of foreign lords, And a last resistance, drowning under time. A solitary figure, Standing vulnerable on the slip, Tendrils of hair obscuring my vision. I am small, and overwhelmed by these Impressions of nature, The vastness of time, And my position in it. Treasa Ní Dhubhluachra, Coláiste Chillian Cluain Dolcáin, Baile Atha Cliath 22 · WRITE A POEM · WRITE A POEM · WRITE A POEM · THE IRISH TIMES SCHOOL MAGAZINE COMPETITION TO LAUNCH IN JANUARY 2005 New Second Level Competition to Teach Students How to Construct a Magazine will be especially useful as a resource tool for teachers of media studies and graphic design. Sponsored by The Irish Times, this new competition gives secondary school students the opportunity to study what goes into making a magazine while also learning about current events and other topics of interest. It will be launched in January 2005 with an Irish Times supplement covering different aspects of creating a magazine (design and layout, research methods, journalistic skills, editing, feature writing, etc.) Any type of magazine can be made as part of the competition and it can therefore be anchored in any subject area; English, Art, History, Science, etc. Prizes will be awarded to both the junior and the senior sections of the school. In each section there will be five writing categories (e.g. best film review, social commentary, etc.) and three artistic categories (e.g. best cover, cartoon, etc.) A special supplement will be published in The Irish Times in May showcasing the winning magazines (Junior and Senior), the category winners, along with highlights from a selection of other magazines entered. The winning teams will receive their prizes at a prestigious awards day in Dublin in May 2005 attended by students, family, and the press. Each fortnight after the competition launch an article about the project will appear in The Irish Times’ ‘Transition Times’. In addition to offering additional information and tips, the pieces will focus on one school’s progress (St. Vincent’s, Dundalk). The features The deadline for entries is 18 March 2005. All entries should be sent to Real Event Solutions, 54 Ballyhooley Rd, St Luke’s, Cork. Contact: Real Event Solutions, [email protected], 021 455 0434 INIS A VALUABLE RESOURCE FOR TEACHERS OF ENGLISH INIS Autumn 2004 Inis is the magazine of Children’s Books Ireland, aimed at teachers, writers, librarians, booksellers, publishers, academics, anyone, in fact, with an interest in children’s books. It is an interesting, useful and well-produced magazine. The content includes: An extensive Review Section The reviews cover fiction and non-fiction as well as professional and academic books on the subject. The reviews go far beyond publishers’ blurbs to offer thorough and thoughtful accounts of each book. With at least twenty reviewers featured in the magazine, there is no shortage of expertise or opinion in the reviews. A Country Profile In the autumn issue, the focus is on Scandinavian literature which, apart from offering an overview of young people’s taste in literature, alerts readers to work which is available in translation. There are also interesting comparisons between the reading habits of children in Norway, Sweden and Denmark and insights into why some children give up the habit of reading when they reach fourteen or fifteen. 8 Profile of a Classic Author Hans Christian Andersen is the featured author in this section and the article is academic and wellresearched, without being too solemn. It raises the extent to which Andersen sought to addresses both an adult and a children’s audience in his writing, and the degree to which his playful, ironic stance is lost in translation. Sam McBratney Mark Time (1976) Aubrey Flegg Wings over Delft (2003) Carlo Gebler August 44 (2003) Elizabeth O’ Hara The Hiring Fair (1993) Aubrey Flegg gives the background to his three novels, Katie’s War, The Cinnamon Tree and his award–winning Wings over Delft. As you would expect, Aubrey writes with warmth and good-humour. After four years as editors, Siobhan Parkinson and Valerie Coughlan are stepping down as the editors of Inis , and are leaving the magazine in splendid health. This is a magazine produced with real flair by people who know their subject and know how to present it. Special Feature – Robert Dunbar’s Top Fifty Irish Children’s Novels In the special feature, Robert Dunbar takes the bull by the horns and nominates his personal list of the best Irish fiction written for children and young adults. Keeping in mind the criteria of ‘greatness’ and ‘pleasure’, Robert offers a list of fifty titles and accompanies the list with a useful essay in support of his choices. It’s a terrific list that could easily form the basis of a class library for first and second year students in secondary schools. Robert’s top ten are: The magazine is produced quarterly and is available to members of Children’s Books Ireland. Details of membership can be obtained from CBI, First Floor, 17 Lr Camden Street, Dublin 2 or from the website, www.childrensbooksireland.com Sam McBratney The Chieftain’s Daughter (1993) Kate Thompson Annan Water (2004) Mark O’ Sullivan Angels Without Wings (1997) Kate Thompson The Alchemsit’s Apprentice (2002) Siobhan Parkinson Call of the Whales (2000) Maeve Friel The Lantern Moon (1996) 9 JENNIFER JOHNSTON – ON WRITING Acclaimed Novelist, Jennifer Johnston, author of How Many Miles to Babylon?, looks back on thirty years of writing and offers some advice to the young writer. and in the bookshops in Dublin and the shelves of University libraries and thought to myself that everything that had to be written had already been written and where was the point in me taking on the onerous job of making the shelves even fuller than they were. So I stopped writing and felt no pain in the stopping. The pain I felt at the age of thirty-five troubled me and I bought myself a typewriter to try and see if I could write the pain out of myself. It took my three years to teach myself to write; I filled wastepaper basket after basket with unfinished novels and stories, never satisfied, tearing them up without giving them the chance to become real finished works. Then one day when I was about to throw out a half finished novel a voice spoke in my head, quite loud and clear: “Finish it, you fool. Finish something. You must finish something.” It was then I discovered that when the joy and pleasure you get when you start something new is over, the work starts. You have to then use your head, your heart, your imagination, your native wit. That is the moment that divides the sheep from the goats. That was lesson number one. ON BEING A WRITER I find it hard to speak or write about writing. I have never worked out why this should be; possibly because it is like breathing to me and I couldn’t find much to say about breathing except I know I have to do it. My life was a mess or rather, I should say, the inside of my head was a mess until I discovered what I wanted to do with my life ... at about the age of thirty five. I had for several years been wondering what I should do with my life, which had made me snarly and somewhat difficult to live with. I knew I wanted to do something that other people didn’t do. I didn’t want my life in any way to belong to a corporation, I really wanted to be my own person, making my own rules as I went along. I have never wanted to be pushed around nor have I wanted to push other people, beyond of course the common or garden pushing that all mothers and wives have to do from time to time, such as “If you don’t tidy your room I’ll kill you.” Looking back from here I can consider what I have learnt through thirty years of writing: reading is probably the most important thing that any writer can do. Every great writer has his own individual way of saying things. Like every painting the work is textured and rich with meaning, wit, charm, anger, sorrow and style. You learn about the techniques and the passion of other writers as you read their work. You learn about the subjects they dare to broach, the idiotic mistakes they make. You feel the human being behind each book; your understanding is expanded with everything you read. It didn’t occur to me at that time that I might become a writer. Years before writing was the only subject at which I had excelled at school - it had never seemed like work to me, writing and reading had been pure pleasure. Ever since I had been able to read I had devoured books and from the age of about eight I had written plays that we had acted in school and stories that I kept firmly to myself. At about eighteen I looked at the books in my home 10 Jennifer Johnston’s How Many Miles to Babylon? is on the list of texts prescribed for comparative study for the examination in 2006. It is also one of the texts which may be studied as a single text at Ordinary Level, for the 2006 examination. In her 2002 novel, This Is Not a Novel, Jennifer returns to the subject of the First World War. Listening to people, not just to idle chatter, but also to real talk. You have to learn the rhythms and patterns of speaking. There are many quite successful writers who are totally incapable of writing dialogue – they drop dull, lifeless words onto the page and the characters never become alive. The reader has to be able to believe in the reality of the characters, that one day somewhere you might meet one of them, that they have real lives beyond the confines of the pages of a book. Grammar is important, no matter how many people tell you that it is not. It truly is worth stewing over the grammar books until it is all in your head and when you know the rules so well that you have forgotten them – like riding a bicycle – you may then break them as long as you know why you are dong it. There is nothing uglier on the page then an illconstructed sentence. There is nothing more infuriating that a lack of clarity in writing. It is totally allowable to write sentences without verbs and such like, but only if you know why you are doing it. Rules were made to be broken, but you can only break them if you know and understand them. Words are our magic invention: we, human beings, invented them and continue to do so. Language is a growing, changing living thing. Our wonderful servant. We must never be afraid to use words and experiment with them, play games with them and build magical castles in the air with them. Jennifer Johnston COURSES FOR TEACHERS OF ENGLISH IN SPRING 2005 APPROACHES TO THE TEACHING OF FILM IN THE ENGLISH CLASSROOM THEATRE AND THE ENGLISH CLASSROOM This popular course, offered in partnership with the Irish Film Institute, will be repeated in two venues in Spring. One course will take place in Waterford Education Centre and one will take place in Blackrock Education Centre, Co Dublin. This new course, developed in partnership with the outreach/education department of the Abbey Theatre, will be offered in Drumcondra Education Centre and Dublin West Education Centre in Spring 2005. Full details will be posted to all schools. Full Details will be posted to all schools. 11 MEET THE WRITERS WHO TEACH In this issue of the Teaching English magazine, we feature four writers who are also teachers Mary Rose Callan teaches English in Colaiste Bride in Clondalkin Dublin 22. Mary Rose grew up in Sligo, overlooking Benbulben and feels that living in a place so rich in natural beauty and literary associations made it almost inevitable that she would fall into writing. She has fond memories of her time in the Ursuline secondary school, where there was an emphasis on writing and the arts. All students were encouraged to enter writing competitions and compete in feiseanna. A prize for an essay in a competition sponsored by The Sligo Champion was an important source of recognition and encouragement. Learning poetry and Shakespeare by heart was a feature of her education and she believes it tutored her ear to the rhythms of various forms of verse. However, it was the discovery of contemporary American poets, in particular, Elizabeth Bishop, that really quickened her interest in poetry. In researching the life and work of Elizabeth Bowen and reading the biographies of others writers, Mary Rose was tempted to begin writing herself in a serious way. feels her own interest in learning from the poetry, and the excitement she finds in examining how, for example, a poem is constructed, communicates itself to the students. A workshop in Creative Writing, facilitated by John Kelly in New Park Comprehensive School, set her on the road. Mary Rose is currently a member of the Thornfield Writers Group at U.C.D. This group of ten or so poets meets every two weeks and has a visiting poet or critic as moderator once a month. Being part of a writing group helps to maintain focus and to stay disciplined. In teaching writing, Mary Rose believes that her students want to create and experience the pleasure of their creativity. The best thing about teaching writing is being able to publicly acknowledge the work of students. However, she is quite happy to set writing exercises that the students may show or keep private as they feel appropriate. The sources for her poetry are random and varied. She quotes with approval Michael Longley’s observation that if he knew where he got his ideas for poetry, he’d go and live there. Every new poem, she feels, is a jump into the dark. For Mary Rose the most enjoyable part of writing is the working and reworking of a draft, the shaping and figuring that lies at the heart of writing. To help students over the fright of the blank page, Mary Rose encourages them to use the first line of their favourite poem from an anthology like Niall MacMonagle’s Real Cool to get things going. To help students write tightly focused stories, she often uses the example of the story based on a character outside of a phone-box overhearing the conversation of the person on the phone. It’s a simple way of suggesting the unities of time, place and action. Her interest in writing influences how she teaches English. Reading the poetry of Bishop or Boland or Frost is an education for herself as a writer, and she 12 Transition Year, she believes, is an important year to catch the students on the wing and give them confidence in their ability to write. The hardest thing for a young writer is believing that they have something worthwhile to communicate. Mary Rose believes that students can be drawn into reading and writing through good novels. Her Junior Certificate class respond to the crystal-clear prose and the short paragraphs and chapters of Seamus Deane’s Reading in the Dark, while her second year students enjoy the quirky humour of Mark Haddon’s The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night Time. These works provide starting points for the students’ own work. POEM FOR APRIL Your helpless cry comes in the faltering minutes before the bell, when the girl with the best voice reads a poem that ends with a four foot box, with snowdrops, paler than the dead child’s skin. Too late, I remember the story you told of your sister, knocked down before you were born, whose name you were given. April, murmurs the boldest girl cradling your head, as I cannot, on the unloved blue jumper that flattens her chest. as if she knows the overspill of snowdrop flooding the trail that brought you here, its sudden, enormous petals choking all that’s left of your cry in the emptying room. Mary Rose Callan ‘Poem for April’ comes form Mary Rose Callan’s second collection, Footfalls of Snow, which will be published by Bradshaw Press in March 2005, during Cork’s tenure as European Capital of Culture. ‘Poem for April’ is one of the poems in a sequence written from the perspective of a teacher. Her first collection, The Mermaid’s Head (2001) is also published by Bradshaw Books. Noel Monahan teaches English at St Clare’s College, Ballyjamesduff, Co. Cavan. Noel grew up on a farm, near Granard, County Longford and went to secondary school in neighbouring County Cavan. In his current writing, he is discovering the extent to which his childhood on the family farm is lodged in both memory and imagination. His parents were avid readers and reading, even after the advent of television, was their preferred pastime. Noel remembers his father coming home from the local library with works by Plato and Aristotle. Not surprisingly, given this background, Noel believes that reading is, as he puts it, “essential”. In school Noel did not consider himself a writer-inthe making. In fact, he showed no precocity in relation to literature and describes his schooldays as a period of “observing and storing.” He enjoyed English in secondary school but Latin was his favourite subject. The Latin teacher had a passionate enthusiasm for the subject and the students learned by heart the odes of Horace (‘Dulce et decorum est ...’) and passages of Virgil’s Aeneid. Like many of his contemporaries, Noel took four languages for his Leaving Certificate. In French he was introduced to the poetry of Baudelaire, while O Direain and O Riordain were on the syllabus for Irish. When these are added to the poets he read on the English course, then his apprenticeship in writing may be traced to his schooldays, though he was not aware of it, at the time. Noel went to Maynooth to study English, History and Philosophy. While he wrote some drama reviews for a college magazine, his main interest was in music. When he began teaching in Ballyjamesduff, he tried his hand at writing a musical for the school, based on the story of Deirdre of the Sorrows. The lyrics he wrote were, in effect, his first poems. Over the years, the relationship between school and writing has remained close. Each year he writes and directs a play for his Transition Year students. A recent one, Exits and Entrances, was developed from Jacques’ ‘Seven Ages of Man’ speech in Shakespeare’s As You like It. The Transition Year plays are performed in the Ramor Theatre, in nearby Virginia. Noel writes or reads for an hour first thing every morning. The interest in mythology, which goes back to his study of Latin in secondary school, is as strong as ever. He is also drawn to Jungian psychology and its mythic symbolism, which, as he expresses it, “feeds the imagination.” A number of his poems interpret contemporary life in symbolic or mythic terms. Noel was heartened by the response of Jessie Lendennie of Salmon publishers to the first poems he submitted to her. He tries to offer the same spirit of encouragement to his own students. THE FUNERAL GAME That winter we came to terms with death. Every shoe-box was a coffin For anything small and dead And we wrapped them in calicoes, velvets … We grabbed hats, coats, umbrellas, From the hallway to dress as mourners, Someone struck an iron girder in the hay-shed To sound the funeral bell, John Joe beat the dead march on a saucepan. We held wakes, issued death certificates To old crows, kittens, chickens … Lined the graves with stones, Erected crosses with ash sticks. We pretended to cry, struggled with Latin prayers, Filled the wet graves in the clover field, Genuflected in the direction of a whin bush, The rain pelting down, We left by a side-gap, Back to the hay-shed for tea, bread, butter … For all who travelled long journeys. Among his favourite poets are William Blake and Patrick Kavanagh. He regards ‘The Great Hunger’ as one of the great poems of the last century. He suggests that Kavangh has much in common with the dispossessed poets of the Gaelic tradition, poets like O Bruadair or O Rathaille. Noel is also interested in the poetry of the Russian poets, Osip Mandelstam and Anna Akmatova. Noel Monahan ‘The Funeral Game’ gives the title to Noel Monahan’s fourth collection of poetry, The Funeral Game (2004), published by Salmon Poetry. His previous collections – Opposite Walls, Snowfire and Curse of the Birds – are all published by Salmon. With Heather Brett, Noel runs Windows Publishing. The annual Windows Poetry Competition is a major national competition. Full details can be obtained from the Arts Office of Cavan County Council. Noel believes that teaching and writing complement each other. He believes that the more he reads and writes the better teacher he becomes. In teaching poetry, he teaches as a poet, sharing his enthusiasm for the poet’s guile and craft. He feels that poets like Sylvia Plath, Emily Dickinson and Patrick Kavangh speak directly and powerfully to his students. They provide models for the students’ own work at a time in their lives when they, the students, have much to say. Transition Year is a golden opportunity to offer the students an introduction to a wide range of poets and, at the same time, to explore the work of individual poets in some detail. In encouraging the students to write, he shares his own writing processes with them. A poem can begin with a single word, a feeling or an image. Once the first element is caught, the students are invited to work with it, to test and develop it and to put down images. Noel loves the energy that comes with this first phase of writing and the sense of possibility that attends it. When the writing and testing phase is over, the challenge is to shape and edit the material. Most writers, Noel says, overwrite and, therefore, the paring back of work is essential. However, it is important that young writers find their personal voice and decide if their writing needs to be restricted and curtailed or released and set loose. 15 she prepared her first collection, Eating Baby Jesus. Enda Wyley is a primary school teacher, who works in an inner-city school in Dublin’s Sean McDermott Street. Along the way to becoming a writer there was much encouragement from parents, tutors, editors and established writers. However, that encouragement was meet with an equal determination to put her work into the public domain. Today, writing takes up two to three hours of every day, and, in addition, there is the writing that is done in the back of the mind, as well as the notes and ideas scribbled in notebooks. The worst times are when nothing happens. The best are when a poem comes as a finished piece. She likes Michael Hartnett’s view that “the poet is the poem’s first critic.” The working towards an achieved poem demands a toughness and a willingness to edit out every spare phrase. Sometimes whole poems have to be let go. Enda quotes Yeats’s practice of writing out in prose what he wanted to say in a poem. She understands and admires the desire for clarity that underlies the practice. Enda grew up in Glenageary, Co Dublin and went to school in Dalkey, which she remembers as a small fishing village. It was a beautiful place to go to school. The primary school looked out on the sea and there was a swimming pool cut into the rocks. To her young imagination, being there was like attending Malory Towers, the school featured in Enid Blyton’s series of novels. Enda remembers a teacher – Mrs Healy- encouraging the students to look out at the rocks and asking them, ‘What do you imagine the rocks to be?’ It came as a pleasurable shock to realise that you could imagine them to be anything you chose. As she began to write, her parents, both of whom adored reading, encouraged her and entered one of her poems in the poetry competition of the North Cork Literary Festival in Doneraile. To their delight, their nine-year-old daughter won first prize. From then on, Enda was “the one in the family who writes poetry.” Both the success and the encouragement she received emboldened her and she sent a sample of her work to David Marcus, editor of the New Irish Writing page in The Irish Press. He offered advice and later published three of her poems, alongside the poetry of Paul Durcan, when she was just sixteen. In teaching, Enda tries to bring her enthusiasm and love of writing into the classroom. In undertaking writing projects she feels it is important to create a sense of everyone working together. She thinks there are three stages in the process. The first is a warming up stage; the second is the showing stage; and the third is the writing. The sense of free imagining nurtured in primary school was curtailed by the academic demands of secondary school, though there was an outlet for her writing in co-editing a student magazine. After her Leaving Certificate, Enda trained as a primary teacher in Carysfort College and took English and History as her B.ED subjects. She found the study of English at Carysfort to be stimulating. She read to learn and to observe how others write. Heaney’s North and the poetry of Philip Larkin, with its quirky humour, were revelatory. An MA in creative writing, at the University of Lancaster, was undertaken in answer to that desire to learn as much as possible about the craft of writing. It was in Lancaster that When the students have written their first drafts, Enda does some work on editing. She uses Ezra Pound’s ‘In a Station of the Metro’ to illustrate what she means. The poem started out as thirty lines, which the poet whittled down to the one startling image: “I’m a real believer that you shouldn’t ever patronise children,” Enda says. It’s important that the children hear and read the best work so that they can write their best work. Thus, in a recent project, she used a recording of Rainer Maria Rilke’s Letters to a Young Poet first published in 1904, as part of the warming up phase. She took Rilke’s encouragement to the young poet as the starting point with the students. Rilke also suggests that to write you must observe. When Rilke found himself unable to write he took the advice of the sculptor, Auguste Rodin, to visit the zoo. This led to the writing of one of Rilke’s most celebrated poems, ‘The Panther’. The class read this poem and then did a writing exercise based on close observation. By the end of the process the children had learned about Rilke, read a poem and written something of their own. The apparition of these faces in a crowd Petals on a wet, black bough. Visits to an art gallery or a public garden are ideal for developing the connection between writing and observing. Enda feels that it is important that the teacher be willing to participate in the writing exercise given to the students. This heightens the sense of everyone working to the same end. 16 The bringing in of a beautiful object, like an amethyst stone or a colourful feather, is useful in the warming up phase. Enda also uses a recording of a TV documentary in which the late Michael Hartnett speaks about his writing, as well as a recording of Gillian Clarke speaking about her poetry. All classes respond to Clarke’s belief that ‘Everyone needs someone to say ‘yes’ to you’. POEMS FOR BREAKFAST Another morning shaking us. The young potted willow is creased with thirst, the cat is its purring roots. Under our chipped window the frail orange flowers grow. Now the garden gate clicks. Now footsteps on the path. Letters fall like weather reports. Our dog barks, his collar clinks, he scrambles, and we follow, stumble over Catullus, MacUser, Ancient Greek for Beginners, cold half-finished mugs of tea, last week’s clothes at the bed’s edge. Then the old stairs begin to creak. And there are the poems for breakfast – favourites left out on the long glass table. We take turns to place them there bent open with the pepper pot, marmalade jar, a sugar bowl – the weight of kitchen things. Secret gifts to wake up with, rhythms to last the whole day long, surprises that net the cat, the dog, these days that we wake together in – our door forever opening. Enda Wyley ‘Poems for Breakfast’ is the title poem of Enda Wyley’s third collection, Poems for Breakfast (2004), which is published by Dedalus Press. Her earlier collections, Eating Baby Jesus and Socrates in the Garden are also published by Dedalus. THE PANTHER His vision, from the constantly passing bars, has grown so weary that it cannot hold anything else. It seems to him there are a thousand bars; and behind the bars, no world. As he paces in cramped circles, over and over, the movement of his powerful soft strides is like a ritual dance around a center in which a mighty will stands paralyzed. Only at times, the curtain of the pupils lifts, quietly— An image enters in, rushes down through the tensed, arrested muscles, plunges into the heart and is gone. Rainer Maria Rilke Niall Williams teaches English in St Michael’s Vocational School Kilmihill, County Clare. Niall grew up in Mount Merrion, County Dublin and attended the local CBS. As a student in secondary school, he rarely sought to draw attention to himself and, for the most part, was an anonymous figure in class. However, in fifth year, in reading Macbeth, the richness of the text drew his response and he spoke up in class, almost in spite of himself. He can remember the moment, in the same year, when the possibility of writing presented itself to him. His English teacher, Mr Mason, gave the class an essay title, ‘An Elephant in the Sitting Room’ which caught Niall’s imagination. The teacher responded generously to his essay and praised the creativity it displayed. In his own teaching he is alert to students’ intuitive response to literature and to their intuitive sense of feeling in language. He tries to recognise and encourage the germs of imagination that students display in their writing, in the way that his own juvenile effort was encouraged. His father was a reader and often took Niall to the local Pembroke Library. Those visits, imaginatively transformed, find their way into his new novel, Only Say the Word. In UCD he studied English and French. College provided the luxury of reading. Within the English department there were lecturers like Jim O’ Malley, Michael Paul Gallagher, Declan Kiberd and Denis O’ Donoghue who believed that books and literature mattered and conveyed this belief to him as a student. As an undergraduate, he fell in love with the writing of William Faulkner and was astonished by the opening section of The Sound and the Fury. He immersed himself in Faulkner, reading both the fiction and the letters of the novelist. In Faulkner he found the example of a life dedicated to writing, irrespective of public success or failure. Niall’s college essays expressed his personal response to the literature he read, without recourse to the views of critics or commentators. Perhaps, because his efforts were not only encouraged but also rewarded by his tutors, he finds himself today in sympathy with students who approach literature from what he refers to as “outside the correctable criteria”. After college he spent a year teaching in France and commenced work on a ‘Faulknerian’ novel, which he completed though it was never published. He settled in New York and married Christine Breen whom he had met in UCD. In 1985, he and Christine moved to West Clare to live in the cottage that Christine’s grandfather had left to make hi life in America. Niall’s intention was to make a living as a writer. His first four books were co-written with Christine and recount their life in their new surroundings. Niall regards this period as his apprenticeship in writing. He discovered that you could write about what you saw and that there was no limit to writing. What he and Christine saw was a way of life that was fast disappearing. They tried to capture that life as honestly as they could, without embellishment. In returning to Christine’s ancestral home, Christine and Niall were acting out the dream of many Irish Americans and the books sold well in America. position and the resting of a case. Logic, consistency of argument, comprehensiveness of approach are the mainstays of examination writing. Within this context, he encourages the personal response of his students in their writing. Niall sees his role as helping the students to read well and to recognise the craft of writing. He wants the students to have confidence in their intuitive response to literature. He muses out loud that he doesn’t really know how he learned to write and find a voice, though he suggest that the writing developed under the surface of the reading. He hopes the same is true for his students. In addition to creating the preconditions for writing, he offers the students the example of his own writing life. Some of the texts he enjoys teaching include Barbra Kingsolver’s The Poisonwood Bible, (taught with Dancing at Lughnasa and Dances with Wolves for the comparative section of the 2005 examination) and Margaret Atwood’s Cat’s Eye. He is aware that the Kingsolver novel is challenging but, as he expresses it, “you make a mark and invite the students to step up to it.” He meets their willingness to step up with his own enthusiasm for the text. The pleasure is in seeing the students find their response. He compares the feeling to an actor reaching his or her audience. If living in West Clare provided the subject-matter of his first books, then the experience of directing the local drama group acted as a catalyst to the writing of his first play, which was accepted by the Abbey. In addition to working with the drama group, Niall also began to direct the school musical in St Michael’s, the local second-level school. Currently, Niall’s day is split between teaching in St Michael’s and writing. He writes in the morning and teaches in the afternoon. He does not adhere to a strict writing regime. Writing, he says, is like a relationship – it will blossom if you give it attention. Being attentive can be when you are driving or swimming. At this stage he has no fear of not being able to write. He describes being a writer as being akin to a chestnut tree being itself. Being a writer is simply who and what he is. However, the questioning of the merit of everything he writes never ceases. The hardest thing, he observes, is having faith in your work. The joy and exhilaration comes from the freedom “to surf the imagination.” Great Expectations From Only Say the Word The rest of the evening is mine now and the anticipation of it is like something deep and delicious inside me. I go up the stairs to my room and on the steps my feet are not my own and I am not going to my room [...] ‘Go in,’ she says. And then there is that that hauntingly unbearable exchange when Pip says politely, ‘After you, miss,’ and Estella burns his face with the reply: ‘Don’t be ridiculous, boy, I am not going in,’ and walks scornfully away with the candle plunging him into that dark. Because his students know that he is a writer he believes that they attach weight and authority to his judgement. In reading texts, he stresses the labour and craft of writing as something almost physical or mechanical. He reads to learn and to admire and the students are invited to do likewise. He refers, for example, to Dickinson’s use of ‘interpose’ in ‘I heard a fly buzz’ or Kavanagh’s ‘niagarously’ and ‘stilly greeny’ in ‘Lines Written on a Seat on the Grand Canal, Dublin’. On the other hand, he is not afraid to show that he is sometimes unsure before a word or a line, and that uncertainty is an important part of the drama of the classroom. He wants the students to see that reading involves a continuing responsiveness to the words on the page. I lie in my room and the words of G r e a t Expecations capture my imagination more than any I have ever read. Niall Williams new novel Only Say the Word is published by Picador. His three other novels are: The Fall of Light (2001); As It Is in Heaven (1999); and Four Letters of Love (1997). A new play, commissioned during the Abbey’s centenary year, will be staged next year. The focus of the Leaving Certificate examination demands, he believes, a training in argument, along the lines of a barrister. He refers to the making of argument using evidence, the defending of a 19 SUMMER ISSUE OF THE TEACHING ENGLISH MAGAZINE In the Summer issue of the Teaching English Magazine Tracy Chevalier answers some questions on her novel, Girl with a Pearl Earring Teachers discuss combinations of texts for the Comparative Study section of the Leaving Certificate Course. A Guide to all of the Texts on the Comparative list for examination in 2007 David Little of TCD on Language Teaching in the English classroom. Results of the Teaching English Poetry Competition and publication of the winning entries. Mary Shine Thompson on literature for young adults. Ray Frawley of the Sate Examination Commission speaks to the Teaching English Magazine A review of the resource pack on The Playboy of the Western World produced by The Abbey Theatre Education and Outreach Department A report on the pilot project, The Teacher as Writer And more… Administration Esther Herlihy, The Teaching English Magazine Navan Education Centre, Athlumney, Navan, Co. Meath 046-9078382 [email protected] This issue of the Teaching English Magazine was compiled by Kevin Mc Dermott (087 2937302) on behalf of the Second Level Support Service. Design by Artmark. Printed by Staybro Printing Ltd. 20
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