GCE EXAMINERS' REPORTS RELIGIOUS STUDIES AS/Advanced SUMMER 2014 © WJEC CBAC Ltd. Grade boundary information for this subject is available on the WJEC public website at: https://www.wjecservices.co.uk/MarkToUMS/default.aspx?l=en Online results analysis WJEC provides information to examination centres via the WJEC secure website. This is restricted to centre staff only. Access is granted to centre staff by the Examinations Officer at the centre. Annual Statistical Report The annual Statistical Report (issued in the second half of the Autumn Term) gives overall outcomes of all examinations administered by WJEC. Unit Page RS1/2 CS 1 RS1/2 ETH 4 RS1/2 PHIL 9 RS1/2 BS 13 RS1/2 CHR 15 RS1/2 ER 17 RS1/2 WR 20 RS3 CS 24 RS3 ETH 27 RS3 PHIL 31 RS3 BS 33 RS3 CHR 35 RS3 ER 38 RS3 WR 43 RS4 HE 46 © WJEC CBAC Ltd. RELIGIOUS STUDIES General Certificate of Education Summer 2014 Advanced Subsidiary/Advanced RS1/2 CS AN INTRODUCTION TO CONTEMPORARY SOCIETY Principal Examiner: Gordon Reid The standard of answers was in line with previous years. The majority of candidates answered question 1, followed fairly equally by questions 3 and 4. Very few candidates answered question 2. There were some excellent answers at the top end and an improvement in exam technique this year, particularly within (b) questions, though it is still true that too many candidates treat them as GCSE style evaluations. Q.1 Q.2 (a) This was by far the most popular question. Higher level answers included a range of moral and religious arguments in favour of euthanasia (such as the doctrine of double effect, or honour your father and mother), and included useful evidence such as scriptural quotations, case studies and scholarly thoughts. Mid- level answers tended to state a variety of arguments (such as personal autonomy or quality of life), but failed to go into much depth or add relevant evidence. At the lower level, candidates tended to spend too much time on long introductions defining the types of euthanasia or offering lengthy recounts of case studies without effectively linking them back to the question. It would be good to see more scholarly thought included on this topic. (b) At the higher level there were some very good answers which covered many religious and moral arguments and weighed them up against one another, using analysis to come to well informed conclusions. Mid-level answers offered well -argued points regarding the sanctity of life, quality of life, ahimsa and the dichotomy between different believers in the same faith, but often resorted to generalisations rather than specific evidence. Lower level answers often appeared in GCSE style, tending to be one-sided and backed up with very basic reasoning. (a) There was a slight rise in the number of candidates who answered this question, but, as ever, there were few strong answers. At the higher level, candidates recognised the stereotyping that takes place and used scholars such as Pinsky to explain the reasons behind this. They also focussed on how realistic some religious beliefs and practices were within ‘The Simpsons’. Mid-level candidates focussed on certain episodes, popularly ‘Homer the Heretic’ and ‘She of little faith’ and linked them to characters such as Reverend Lovejoy, Ned Flanders and Krusty the Clown. However, more could have been done to refer these narratives back to the question about how the beliefs were portrayed. At the lowest level, candidates simply re-told the episodes offering sporadic and unsubstantiated comment. (b) This tended to be well answered at the higher level as candidates drew distinctions between Religious Specific Broadcasting and other types of broadcasting which include religion. They compared different styles of programme and analysed how useful their portrayal of religion was. Middle and lower level answers tended to focus on one genre of programming, often soaps, and recount instances of good or bad portrayals of religion and heavy emphasis on narrative. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 1 Q.3 Q.3 (i) (ii) FUNDAMENTALISM (a) Higher level answers focussed on the 9 characteristics of Fundamentalism and offered examples such as the Westboro Baptist Church and the Amish community, although very few offered any concise scholarly opinion. Mid-level answers tended to focus on a few features, often strict rules and selectivity, but did not provide detailed enough examples or scholarly support. Lower level answers dealt generally about fundamentalists and the beliefs of particular groups without ever really going into depth about the characteristics. There were a number of rants about terrorism. (b) Higher level candidates showed awareness of more than one point of view and produced an answer based on well-remembered strengths and weaknesses of fundamentalism, backed up with evidence from fundamentalist groups, and some scholarly input. Mid-level answers were rather generalised, lacking good examples and often concentrating on simplistic views of terrorism and not fitting in with society. At the lowest level, candidates wrote very generally on issues such as terrorism, but without supporting examples or evidence. NEW RELIGIOUS MOVEMENTS (a) At the higher level, the 7 characteristics were well recounted and accompanied by good examples often the Amish community or Scientology. In mid-level answers, the characteristic was stated, but with limited depth and few examples or scholarly viewpoints. Lower level candidates produced answers that were a hybrid of causes and characteristics and some became confused between the two. A number wrote brief expositions on the merits or otherwise of joining cults. (b) Higher level answers compared the various causes of NRMs and analysed how significant a range of causes were, with references to scholars such as Wilson and Sorokin. Mid-level answers compared social change to one other cause, often disillusionment, but sometimes without sufficient scholarly input or examples. At the lowest level, many repeated information already given and some wrote on secularisation, which largely missed the point of the question. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 2 Q.4 (a) This was something of a mixed bag with relatively few really good answers. This was, in part, due to the fact that many candidates did not fully address the question and instead wrote a version of ‘tell me everything you know about Freud.’ Only candidates at the highest level were able to adequately relate their answer to religion as illusion. In the mid-range, candidates recounted many of Freud’s theories and talked at length about religion as a neurosis or as wish fulfilment, but barely mentioned their links to illusion. At the lower level, answers were typified by long story telling sections of the Primal Horde theory and the myth of Oedipus. (b) Most candidates had a better understanding of religion as neurosis compared to religion as illusion. At the higher level, answers related neurosis and other views of religion, for example those of Jung. Often reference was made to Argyle’s research about the neurotic tendencies of religious believers, and criticisms were backed up with reasoning and evidence. Mid-level answers often compared the idea of neurosis to the reality of those religious acts, but lacked depth of detail. At the lower level, answers included some general criticisms of Freud, alongside weak and very general explanations of his theories. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 3 RELIGIOUS STUDIES General Certificate of Education Summer 2014 Advanced Subsidiary/Advanced RS1/2 ETH INTRODUCTION TO RELIGION AND ETHICS Principal Examiner: Andrew Pearce The paper appeared to be accessible to the majority of candidates. Good use of terminology was generally demonstrated by the candidates attempting the paper through the medium of Welsh. There were a few outstanding scripts from students who demonstrated a thorough knowledge and understanding of the topics in the specification along with the ability to maturely analyse and evaluate different issues. These candidates also demonstrated high levels of ‘SPaG’ and made accurate use of specialist vocabulary. Weaker candidates however, often failed to address the questions set particularly in part (b) or they gave a list of relevant but very brief points. In their part (b) questions they would be better advised to develop, analyse and evaluate their arguments in greater depth. Some candidates appeared to have rote learnt answers which limited some able candidates who might have otherwise shown some independence of thought in their responses and should not be encouraged. Other inadvisable traits shown by some candidates were the constant use of abbreviations and poor grammar throughout their responses. Candidates are clearly reminded about the need for good English and about the quality of their written communication on the front of each examination paper. Q.1 (a) Outline Aquinas’ version of the theory known as ‘Natural Law.’ [A01 30] Good candidates recognised the ‘outline’ trigger word and were able to give a coherent summary. They used terminology correctly such as ‘deontological’, ‘absolutist’ and ‘legalistic.’ They demonstrated a holistic view of the theory e.g. how the types of laws identified by Aquinas linked with the different precepts or how the virtues linked to the concepts of real and apparent goods. A pleasing feature was the number of candidates who were able to quote accurately from Aquinas’ original works and this feature should be encouraged by centres. Weaker candidates appeared to have rote learnt ‘Natural Law’ and often failed to recognise the trigger word ‘outline’ in the question. This also meant they were often only able to demonstrate a superficial and fragmented understanding of Natural Law. These candidates often confused real and apparent goods with interior and exterior acts. Very few understood the significance of the virtues within the theory itself. Some also provided irrelevant historical information on the background to Natural Law. Many candidates also misunderstood the term “deontological.” © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 4 (b) ‘Natural Law’s absolutist approach to ethics promotes justice.’ Assess this view [A02 15] Good candidates focussed on the issue of ‘justice’ and were able to provide mature responses, some even referred to figures such as Lord Devlin, Gareth Moore and Harry Harlow. They also provided reasoning and or evidence to support their arguments. For example, a number of candidates argued successfully that the U.N. declaration of Human Rights can be traced back to the idea of Natural Law promoting justice e.g. the right to life, the right to education, etc. Another popular argument was that the absolutist approach of the theory provides clear guidelines for humanity which in turn promotes justice. Counter arguments included the fact that as Natural Law fails to adopt a relativistic approach to ethics it actually promotes injustice e.g. a man stealing to provide food for his family is treated the same as a gang who steal ‘high tech’ equipment for profit. Many were also able to provide an appropriate conclusion. Weaker candidates often failed to address the question set and attempted to answer it as if it referred to the strengths and weaknesses of Natural Law. Subsequently much of their answer was irrelevant. Arguments given were often too brief and lacked supporting evidence or reasoning. These candidates often failed to evaluate or analyse the brief points they had given, e.g. Natural Law promotes injustice. The majority provided no conclusion in their response. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 5 Q.2 (a) Outline Fletcher’s Situation Ethics [AO1 30] Good candidates recognised the ‘outline’ trigger word and were able to give a coherent summary. They used terminology correctly such as ‘teleological’, ‘consequential’ and ‘relativistic.’ Many demonstrated a holistic view of the theory e.g. a clear definition of ‘agape’, why Situation Ethics is considered to be the middle way between antinomianism and legalism, how the four working principles link to the six fundamental principles, the theory’s links to the teachings of religious leaders, etc. A pleasing feature was the number of candidates who were able to quote accurately from Fletcher’s original text and this feature should be encouraged by centres. Weaker candidates appeared to have rote learnt ‘Situation Ethics’ and often failed to recognise the trigger word ‘outline’ in the question. This also meant they were often only able to demonstrate a superficial and fragmented understanding of Situation Ethics. Weaker candidates often listed some or all of the ten principles of Situation Ethics. They often misunderstood ‘positivism’ and other key terms such as ‘teleological’ and ‘consequentialist.’ Some even erroneously referred to the precepts found in Natural Law or the hedonic calculus from Utilitarianism. (b) ‘Situation Ethics works.’ Assess this view [A02 20] Good candidates focussed on the issue that Situation Ethics ‘works’ and were able to provide mature responses. They gave reasons and/or evidence to support their arguments. For example many argued in support of the statement stating that Situation Ethics works because it forces people to consider the consequences of their actions. Counter arguments included the fact that Situation Ethics doesn’t work because you cannot accurately predict the consequences of any action. Weaker candidates often failed to address the question set and answered the question if it was about the strengths and weaknesses of Situation Ethics and subsequently much of their answer was irrelevant. Arguments given were often too brief and lacked supporting evidence or reasoning. These candidates often failed to evaluate or analyse the brief points they had given, e.g. Situation Ethics does not work as love is subjective. The majority provided no conclusion in their response. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 6 Q3 (a) Explain Bentham’s Principle of Utility [AO1 30] Good candidates addressed the question set and were able to use relevant terminology correctly e.g. relativism, teleological, consequential, hedone, etc. They accurately defined the Principle of Utility and were able to explain what ‘utility’ means. Good candidates were able to place the Principle of Utility in the context of Act Utilitarianism. They were able to use appropriate examples to explain how the hedonic calculus works in reality. Weaker candidates simply wrote elements what they had learnt about Utilitarianism often including irrelevant material on Mill and Rule Utilitarianism. Many were unable to accurately recall the seven criteria of the hedonic calculus. Others confused Utilitarianism with Situation Ethics. (b) ‘Utilitarianism is compatible with a religious approach to ethics.’ [A02 20] Good candidates addressed the question. Arguments in favour of the statement included the fact that Mill claimed that his form of Utilitarianism was based on Jesus’ Golden Rule "Do to others what you want them to do to you” (Matthew 7:12). Arguments put forward against the statement included the fact that Utilitarianism would allow a minority to suffer which goes against the altruistic nature of many world religions. Weaker candidates attempted to answer a different question to the one set. Generally, they simply listed the strengths and weaknesses of Utilitarianism. Unfortunately this meant that much of their response was irrelevant. The majority provided no conclusion in their response. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 7 Q.4 (a) Examine the religious principles involved in the teaching of one major world religion on sex outside marriage. [A01 30] Good candidates were often able to show a diversity of views to the issue under consideration. Many recognised that adultery, sex before marriage and homosexuality could all be legitimately referred to in response to this question. Some even recognised that sacred texts referring to this issue were often open to interpretation in a number of ways. They also made reference to the sanctity of marriage (which is considered to be a sacrament by many denominations). Some good candidates referred to a number of ethical theories such as Natural Law and Situation Ethics which are used by believers from different denominations. Several candidates referred to a wide range of sources of authority such as leaders, texts, traditions, etc. Weaker candidates gave very basic answers and often unhelpfully stereotyped groups of religious believers. They also tended to just refer to sex before marriage in their response rather than the variety of other forms of sex outside marriage. Many weaker candidates made basic statements without any supporting evidence e.g. the Bible says sex before marriage is wrong. (b) ‘Religious responses towards sex outside marriage are no longer relevant.’ [A02 15] Good candidates addressed the question. Arguments against the statement included the fact that many religious believers still hold that only sex within marriage is a sacred gift (based on holy texts) and that adherents to some faiths believe this in total obedience to the words of God. Arguments against the statement included the idea that some religious responses are more relativistic than traditional ones and tend to reflect the views of society e.g. some Quakers believe that sex before marriage as an act of loving union as being acceptable. Weaker candidates they simply listed the strengths and weaknesses of sex before marriage. They seemed unfamiliar with the word ‘relevant’, unfortunately this meant that much of their response was irrelevant. Any arguments that were given often lacked supporting evidence or reasoning. These candidates often failed to evaluate or analyse the brief points they had given, e.g. society is more secular now. The majority provided no conclusion in their response. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 8 RELIGIOUS STUDIES General Certificate of Education Summer 2014 Advanced Subsidiary/Advanced RS1/2 PHIL INTRODUCTION TO PHILOSOPHY OF RELIGION Principal Examiner: Karl Lawson General Comments All questions were attempted and there was a range of responses within each question, demonstrating appropriate differentiation according to candidate ability. Issues that may be considered of concern are the, seemingly increasing number, of candidates who record responses that are often entirely illegible. It is recommended that centres make use of the various support measures already in place within the examination system to support such candidates with either transcript services or access to typing their examination response. It was also noted that some centres had prepared candidates for questions to the extent that several candidates had virtually identical responses – occasionally with the same errors. It is important that accuracy on materials being presented to candidates is always checked within the centre as candidates are otherwise disadvantaged by this practise. Q.1 (a) There were a lot of very strong answers to this question and candidates were clearly well prepared, with most able to go beyond Aquinas and make good use of Leibniz’ Principle of Sufficient Reason and the Kalam version as updated by William Lane Craig. Very few candidates mixed up the Cosmological and Teleological arguments wholesale, although there was some confusion about points of detail at times. Most candidates recognised the demand to show how the versions proved the existence of God but some were unclear about how to move from relating examples to illustrate the versions to the existence of God. Weaker answers tended to use the examples as the argument itself and could not relate, for example, the marble example to proving God’s existence. While many candidates could say something about movement from potentiality to actuality, very few could explain how this related to proving the existence of God. In terms of Aquinas, the first two ways were better known than the third, but many candidates believed that the first two ways were identical with just a change in wording from motion or change to cause. The third way was not explained clearly by many candidates, with even better answers struggling here. They understand the definition of contingency and necessity but do not always recognise why Aquinas states the need for a necessary being. Leibniz was explained well by a wide range of candidates as was the Kalam version, with a range of examples being used to illustrate the impossibility of infinity. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 9 (b) Some candidates chose to simply list pros and cons, rather than engage in proper analysis of points raised, but many were schooled to follow a template response (3 points, each with analysis, plus conclusion). Even so, analysis was frequently brief/lacking. A favourite point here, was Hume’s fallacy of composition, but many candidates seemed hampered by feeling that they should deal with it using terminology that they did not fully understand. So, instead of saying (as some did) that we can’t argue that the universe has a cause/designer simply because individual objects do, they talked about a priori and a posteriori statements (often confusing what examples of these were, even though they understood the basis of Hume’s fallacy - and to be fair, this is a tricky distinction at times). Other points included Kant on the limits of knowledge, the anthropic principle (though few distinguished between strong and weak versions), and Stephen Hawking’s account of the Big Bang. Kant was also commonly misunderstood (see my comments on question 2). The ‘principle of plenitude’ was also commonly mentioned, as a counter argument to the improbability of the Big Bang, but without any real understanding that this principle in fact springs from a religious conception of the ‘fullness’ of creation (springing from Plato and the Great Chain of Being) most candidates therefore used it in a secular sense, equivalent to the idea that an infinite amount of monkeys with typewriters could write Shakespeare! Some version of the weak anthropic principle (failed universes) might have been more appropriate here. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 10 Q.2 Q.3 (a) There was/will be much weeping, wailing and gnashing of teeth, either as the candidate left the exam room and then read the question or upon sight of the script finding out that they ought to have read the question. L2 for the ‘informed answer but missing the point of the question’ was repeatedly applied, and to answers that, if provided to a different question, would have been upper levels. Expected grades will have been lost over the candidates not reading the question. Thereafter, even if read this was not a question that was generally liked. This could become more obvious in centres where the specification is clearly taught and restricted to just two question areas and so the candidate had no escape. Mill was frequently mentioned but not related (to the question of) design but in terms of the inconsistent triad. (b) Despite some candidates being unable to do little more than rehash what they had presented in part a there were good answers to this question, with better candidates distinguishing between classic versions and more modern versions of the arguments and assessing the relative persuasiveness of each. Good use made of the anthropic and aesthetic principles and Swinburne’s arguments from probability. Interestingly, better use was made of the scientific challenges to design in this section of the question than in the part a). Some common weaknesses included seeing all inductive arguments as automatically bad and weak, rather than as establishing probability rather than certainty. Swin(e)burne (sic!) was widely identified as a scientist who supported the argument. Overall though significantly more candidates were creating arguments and directly evaluating the persuasiveness of the points. (a) If not a case of reading the question it certainly is a case of use the material you have to answer the question! All too many answers simply dived into relating all they knew about the problem of evil, especially the inconsistent triad. This was totally unrelated to animal, innocent or immense suffering, which all too often were then used as exemplars to what they had written. Candidates who read the question and considered their material undertook the necessary weaving of what they may have learnt as two separate parts of a question. Surprisingly examples were often missing from one or all types of suffering thereby restricting the marking level possible. This also applied when some candidates discussed natural and moral evil (outside of the 3 types of suffering) but without an example made no link to the question. The book of Job was relaid over a page or more by some candidates. (b) This was often the better part of this question, especially from the poorer candidates who entered into a discursive answer. Many were able to offer the strengths and weaknesses of the theodicy and relate these to specific types of suffering. Some did not recognise that the idea of original sin leaves no human innocent. Most challenged Augustine on the grounds of animal suffering being unjustified, and some good use was made of D.Z.Phillips’ point about suffering of innocents being an unacceptable way to show love. Weaker answers simply considered the strengths and weaknesses of Augustine’s theodicy without addressing the types of suffering at all – there were a lot of these. Some candidates still mixed up the theodicies of Augustine and Irenaeus in this answer. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 11 Q.4 (a) Candidates that responded to this area did so mostly referencing St Teresa of Avila, while a few candidates attempted to describe the lives of Rumi, Eckhart and Luria. Although biographical details were mainly accurate there was an acute inability to explain how these mystics exhibited mysticism in practice. As in previous years, most responses exhibited a lack of understanding about the nature of mysticism itself, demonstrating only a bare outline, and merely regurgitating information about the life-experiences of mystics without relating them to more general features of mystical experiences. (b) Some good responses here referring to arguments around subjectivity and positive impact on a person's life. Decent use of scholars on the whole, often using Freud and many using the 'God Helmet'. Pleasing to see that the better answers didn't assume these discredited experiences but evaluated them in the light of these points. A fair minority referred to the likes of Swinburne's Credulity and Testimony and James's pragmatism regarding the positive impact of experiences. Some thoughtful answers, again on the whole attempted by those that had some confidence in the issues. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 12 RELIGIOUS STUDIES General Certificate of Education Summer 2014 Advanced Subsidiary/Advanced RS1/2 BS INTRODUCTION TO BIBLICAL STUDIES Principal Examiner: Gwynn Ap Gwilym There were no candidates for Section A. It is pleasing to report that the standard for Section B was good. There were many excellent scripts, with a substantial number of candidates scoring marks in the 60s and 70s. There were, however, two recurring problems. One was that poor legibility made the marking of a few scripts almost impossible. Candidates need to be aware that illegibility is almost certain to lose them marks. The other was the use made of modern biblical criticisms, such as Form Criticism and Redaction Criticism. In the A02 part of the questions on parables and miracles, many candidates used these tools as if their sole object was to render the text of little value. It should be remembered that AO2 responses require objectivity – the ability to consider more than one approach to debatable issues. Q.1 Q.2 (a) There were many good answers showing accuracy of knowledge and understanding of the Jewish Christian provenance of Matthew, as well as its universal appeal. The stronger responses linked the narrative to the doctrine of the Incarnation. Weak answers strayed into Luke’s account. (b) Some candidates responded that the unacceptability lies in Matthew’s account being too similar or too dissimilar to that of Luke to be credible. This argument was given some credit. Most responses, however, focused, as expected, on the supernatural elements in Matthew and the call for demythologisation. A few perceptively original answers suggested that Matthew’s account would be too male-oriented for today’s society. (a) Some spent too much time giving an introductory account of the nature of parables.Others took the question to be a discussion of types of parables rather than themes. There was, however, much creditable analysis of parables about God’s grace, the cost of discipleship, judgement, and the kingdom of God. Discussions of the latter often included commendable references to the eschatological aspects of the kingdom. (b) While the majority of candidates were aware of the allegations that the parables were written or redacted by the gospel writers to suit the practical needs of the church, it was disappointing that so many lacked a balanced view of these claims. Very few realised that if the parables are not the words of Jesus, they lack dominical authority. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 13 Q.3 Q.4 (a) There were many good responses bringing out the unique characteristics of the miracle. A number made useful reference to the similar miracle of Elijah (and, in some cases, Elisha, too), but some gratuitously saw the connection in a negative way and dismissed the miracle at Nain as a fabrication based on the story of Elijah. (b) Most candidates grasped that the question was about the incomprehensible nature of miracles being a possible stumbling block to would-be believers in a scientific age. Some, however, understood the question in the past tense, suggesting that people at the time of Jesus were deterred because of fear (e.g. the herdsmen at Gadara). (a) This was not a popular question, probably because it required an accurate, if not a detailed, comparative account of the crucifixion. Some were able to select well the distinctive elements in the three accounts prescribed, such as the coincidence in the Fourth Gospel of the crucifixion and the slaughter of the paschal lambs. (b) This was a big challenge to some. While there were few competent discussions of the various theories of the Atonement (penal substitution, moral influence, Christus Victor), there was frequent recognition that the Atonement is important to believers and that unbelievers might see some virtue in the example of suffering. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 14 RELIGIOUS STUDIES General Certificate of Education Summer 2014 Advanced Subsidiary/Advanced RS1/2 CHR INTRODUCTION TO CHRISTIANITY Principal Examiner: Gwynn ap Gwilym The candidature was small, the general standard decent, but undistinguished. Marks ranged from 11 to 80 out of a possible 90, with the majority of candidates scoring between 25 and 45. There was one outstanding script, and only a handful of very poor ones. In some cases, poor legibility and spelling (in particular, ‘crucifiction’) was a cause for concern. Q.1 Q.2 (a) While there was a general awareness of the significance of the Resurrection for Christians, most candidates focused on the event being a proof of Jesus’ divinity, and made little or no reference to the belief that it guarantees eternal life. Equally, while it was almost universally acknowledged that the Resurrection completed the process of human salvation, there was little or no admission that it thus demonstrates the justice of God. (b) In support of the contention, the injustice of punishing the innocent and letting the guilty go free was well understood. Some responses went further, arguing that the severity of crucifixion as a punishment showed a tyrannical God. The general argument against the contention was that the crucifixion led to the resurrection, but there was little further exploration of the meaning of this event. (a) With the exception of a few candidates who interpreted the question as an invitation to write on irrelevant aspects of the Reformation (the eucharist, for instance, or baptism), this was well answered. Responses focused on the ubiquitous nature of the medieval Roman Catholic Church and the infallibility of the Pope’s decrees, Luther’s assertion that religious authority must be founded on scripture alone, his doctrine of salvation through faith and the priesthood of all believers, and his translation of the Bible (albeit that a few thought that he translated it into English!). The stronger responses also mentioned Calvin’s theocracy and the Anabaptist position. (b) Candidates were able to pick up marks here. Almost everyone was aware that the Reformation was essentially a theological movement concerned with several aspects of Christian belief and practice, but that it was soon commandeered to serve the political purposes of local princes. What was lacking was any concrete examples of those who took political advantage, e.g. Frederick the Wise, who supported Luther, but remained a Catholic all his life. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 15 Q.3 Q.4 (a) There was a general tendency to write that Catholics believe in transubstantiation and Protestants in consubstantiation, and to leave it at that, with perhaps a few other comments to the effect that Catholics celebrate the eucharist every Sunday whereas Protestants do so less frequently, or that Catholics celebrate with pomp, Protestants with simplicity. Even those who knew that not all Protestants believe in consubstantiation were hazy about who actually believes what (Calvinists in virtualism; Zwinglians in memorialism). No one seemed to know that Luther himself never used the term ‘consubstantiation’, but rather expressed his understanding of the eucharist in the term ‘real presence’. (b) There were some prejudiced responses. Candidates must be discouraged from writing such sentences as ‘The Protestant understanding of the eucharist is quite different to the Christian understanding’. Arguments in favour of the contention focused on the literal understanding of Jesus’ words and on the fact that some Protestant denominations do not celebrate the eucharist at all. No one seemed to think that Protestantism has removed much of the rite’s solemnity, beauty and mystery. Many were hard pressed to find any arguments against the contention, except that Jesus’ words can be interpreted metaphorically. No one thought that the Protestant celebration of the eucharist aims at recreating the purity of early Christianity or that partaking of it less frequently is designed to enhance its importance. (a) Apart from the occasional candidate who mixed them up, everyone knew that Christmas celebrates Jesus’ birth, Good Friday his death and Easter his Resurrection. Weaker candidates added little more. The stronger ones went on to link Christmas with the doctrine of the Incarnation, Good Friday with the doctrine of the Atonement and Easter with the doctrine of eternal life. The best also described how these festivals are celebrated and made reference to the biblical accounts on which they are founded. (b) There was some wholehearted (and probably hypocritical!) agreement with the contention, berating modern society for its ignorant secularity and consumerism. Against the contention, most responses took comfort in the allegation that most people know what the festivals are about, whether they celebrate them appropriately or not. No one seemed to be aware that their celebration had any evangelistic opportunities. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 16 RELIGIOUS STUDIES General Certificate of Education Summer 2014 Advanced Subsidiary/Advanced RS1/2 ER INTRODUCTION TO EASTERN RELIGIONS Principal Examiner: Huw Dylan Jones Generally the overall standard was good which is a true reflection of the high standard of teaching of this module in most centres. The range of marks awarded across all three religions shows that the paper was accesible to the vast majority of the candidates. Although a number of papers were poor, there were some excellent papers at the top end of the scale which showed great depth of knowledge and understanding. It is important that centres and candidates realise that it is not the length of the answer which is important but the quality. It was noted by more than one examiner that some centres clearly used a writing frame for the (b) part of the question which limited the answers candidates were giving. They seemed unable to fully develop points and show independent thinking and rather than enhancing their work it limited the higher level candidates. On the other hand some candidates need to focus more on the requirements of the question. A number of candidates identify the main aspect of the question eg the sangha and then proceed to write all they know about the sangha making no effort to link their answer to the question. The answer although creditworthy cannot attain the higher levels. There is also an issue this year about the legibility of the handwriting of a significant number of candidates. It is the responsibility of centres not examiners to ensure that the work of their candidates is legible. However some weaknesses seem to be passed on from year to year with some candidates choosing to describe instead of explaining and answering how instead of why. BUDDHISM Q.1 (a) This question was well answered by the majority of candidates and was approached in several ways. Some answered by going through the events of the Buddha’s life and relating this to what it revealed to the Buddha. However quite a number of papers contained a description of the Buddha’s life without relating it to what it taught the Buddha. The better answers were those that focused on the religious and social aspects within the Vedic tradition – atman, reincarnation, moksha, Brahman, caste system and renunciation. Although some candidates emphasised in their answers the different traditions that existed such as the Vedic religion and the Shramanic movement, there was a tendency to describe the background and development of these groups rather than focusing on specific religious and social aspects. (b) Generally this was not well answered. A number of candidates did not relate it in any way to 1(b) and focused on what was new in Buddhism eg the Four Noble Truths. This was of course a legitimate point but needed to be related to what and why he accepted or rejected many of the beliefs and practices of his age. Higher level answers were able to do this. Other candidates delved into narrative without relating to the question e.g. long explanations of the Noble Eightfold path. A few candidates misunderstood the question as was Buddhism new or distinctive now compared to different religions, with long comparisons with Christianity. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 17 Q.2 Q.3 Q.4 (a) This was a question where a number of candidates failed to attain the higher levels because they could not structure their answers to the requirement of the question. Many explained what suffering is and what brought it to the Buddha’s attention i.e. the Four Sights before explaining his reaction to it ie the Noble Eightfold Path. They did not relate the information to the causes of suffering. Higher level answers referred to the teaching on the Three Marks of Existence and the Wheel of Life. (b) This was generally well argued. However candidates found it easier to argue against the statement by referring to the importance of teachings such as the Three Jewels and the Four Noble Truths. Arguments for the statement tended to be rather superficial. However many candidates made the point that much of the material is interlinked and that the Buddha’s teaching should be seen as a whole. (a) A number of candidates failed to attain the higher levels because they focused on the features of the sangha rather than its role. This could have been avoided by using the question as a structure to their answers e.g. ‘One role of the sangha is ...........’ Although reference to the features was relevant they needed to be used as an explanation or further development of the role of the sangha. Other candidates put too much emphasis on describing the daily routine of members of the monastic sangha without explaining why what they did was important to their role. Higher level answers referred to the role of the sangha as educator, provider of hospitality, advice and the heart of the community in many countries. (b) This was generally well answered. Many candidates pointed out that the Buddha himself achieved enlightenment without the sangha and many quoted the Buddha’s words ‘be a lamp unto yourselves’. On the other hand candidates argued that the sangha interprets and keeps alive the dharma, offers refuge and is one of the Three Jewels. However some candidates did not focus on the question as set and argued which of the Three Jewels is most important. (a) The majority of candidates who attempted this question were able to explain a number of different features of puja within the different Buddhist traditions. There were many excellent and well structured answers. However some candidates were very vague in their explanations of the reasons for these features. (b) A generally well answered question with higher level answers recognising the difference in attitude between the Therevada and Mahayana traditions. However some candidates found it difficult to give arguments in favour of the statement. HINDUISM Q.1 (a) Candidates were able to refer to the range of different beliefs about whether there was one God, Monism, henotheism and polytheism, all supported with thorough examples. However some candidates only included a brief discussion about whether there was one god or in fact many. Higher level answers were also able to note that the ideas of Hinduism that have been presented to many have been of Brahmanism and for many Hindus their experience can be quite different. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 18 Q.2 Q.3 Q.4 (b) Generally this was answered well with many candidates arguing that whilst there are many gods that they could also be expressions of the one spirit/God/essence. However in some answers the arguments against the statement tended to be weaker with answers tending to be one sided. (a) This was a popular question. Some candidates discussed a range of rites of passage rather than just one and therefore did not give enough detail to attain the higher grades. Popular choices were the sacred thread ceremony and marriage, with a few discussing funeral rites. However some candidates just listed features without explaining their meaning, but most addressed the meaning and significance to some extent. (b) This question was generally answered well and many were able to argue whether or not they were still relevant. Many referred to the idea that there were timeless ceremonies in the course of the universe and that many people still participated in rites to mark birth, marriage and death. On the other hand, it was argued that the rites of passage were not relevant as many Hindus did not participate in them. Candidates referred to the idea that we are living in a more secular world and also that the ceremonies mean very little to many. However some answers were confused and shallow. (a) This was a very popular question. However the standard of the answers varied greatly. Many candidates were able to relate two or three stories about gods and goddesses but did not relate them to specific Hindu beliefs and teachings. However, higher level answers were able to explain the meaning more extensively. A number of papers had answers where the characteristics and beliefs of Hinduism were addressed with brief examples but the stories were not really referred to. (b) A number of students found this question problematic because they were looking for literal arguments against the statement. The nature of myth was discussed by higher level answers. Examples stories about Shiva etc and Ganesh were brought up and the idea of their incredible nature discussed. On the other hand the reality of such stories if gods existed was brought up and that such things are a matter of faith. However some arguments, especially against the statement tended to be very thin. (a) Answers tended to focus more on the nature of Puja rather than the importance of Puja to Hindus. Various features such as ringing the bell, cleaning the house, bathing the statue, making offerings was mentioned together with some chanting. Some candidates mentioned characteristics in more detail and were able to explain their individual and overall importance. (b) Most of the answers to this question were quite extensive and argued about the nature of Puja as a religious experience when it involved the deity, devotion, experience within a community as a communal religious experience, connecting with the divine etc. On the other hand it was suggested that taking part in puja is not necessarily a religious experience as it can be a mundane experience with no real significance to the participant when living in a culture. Also answers suggested that there is no guarantee of the way that an individual may feel when taking part in Puja. Higher level of answers were able to argue about the different aspects of puja and whether or not they were religious experiences. Some were also able to argue about the nature of religious experience. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 19 RELIGIOUS STUDIES General Certificate of Education Summer 2014 Advanced Subsidiary/Advanced RS1/2 WR INTRODUCTION TO WESTERN RELIGIONS Principal Examiner: Peter Jaques General Examiners reported an excellent response to these papers – the standard being better than that seen in previous series. Although there still remain areas that can be improved, the quality and depth of perception evident in many scripts was most impressive. There is still reluctance on the part of some candidates to pay attention to the specific wording of questions and as a result it is difficult for them to achieve the higher levels. Generally speaking, questions that referred to matters of practice and worship were answered more confidently than those which required knowledge of beliefs and specific religious teaching. Centres are reminded that bullet point answers are not acceptable – the information for candidates on the front of the Question Paper states ‘All questions should be answered in continuous prose.’ Section A: Introduction to Islam Q.1 Q.2 (a) The majority of candidates demonstrated good knowledge and understanding of the Muslim belief in risalah as the method of communication between Allah and mankind. Although some were content to merely concentrate on the role of Muhammad as the final prophet, the majority were able to highlight the role of prophecy, books, angels and the importance of the will of Allah as guides to bring Muslims a good life and reward on the Day of Judgement. (b) Nearly all candidates were able to stress the everlasting importance of the Qur’an as a guide to life – a book that has been used by many generations as the basis for Islamic law and as a guidance for most issues of debate. Scripts achieving the higher levels showed a development of debate with reference to the important role of Muhammad as an example to follow, as well as the impact of the ijma (consensus), the Imam, the mosque and the family. (a) Too many responses were limited to a general outline of the life of Muhammad, whereas the thrust of the question was intended to focus on the importance of Makkah and Madinah and their impact on the prophet’s life viz. Makkah Threats, violence, mockery. Rejection of Muhammad’s message. Very little support. Banned from preaching. Monotheism rather than polytheism. Deaths of Khadijah and Abu Talib. Night Journey. Eventual control of Makkah in 630 C.E. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 20 Madinah Hijrah and welcome. Start of Muslim calendar. First mosque and Islamic community state – 622 C.E. Creation of the ummah – Muhammad as leader. Rights and duties of citizens. Various battles e.g. Badr, Uhud and Trench. Q.3 (b) Very few candidates achieved the higher levels. Too many responses failed to distinguish between the roles of messenger and leader and as a result there were many ‘rambling’ answers! In general there was good evaluation of Muhammad as a messenger but poor understanding of his role as a leader. Evidence of his leadership skills can be seen in his gathering of followers to go to Madinah, forming an army to conquer Makkah and his political and management skills especially evident in Madinah. (a) There was a disappointing response to what appeared to be a straightforward question – the main weakness being a lack of reference to beliefs i.e. personal submission to Allah and renewal of religious commitment based on the story of Ibrahim. Too many candidates digressed from the set question and gave irrelevant details about hajj and halal food. (b) Most candidates were comfortable in supporting the statement of festivals appearing outdated in society today. However, many struggled to come to terms with the positive aspects of the debate i.e. Q.4 Celebrating festivals to praise and thank Allah. Enjoying religion. Religious and social occasions – unity. Importance of the ummah – helping less fortunate. Religion built on history and tradition. Teaching through festival observance. (a) Although there were many good responses to this question, too many candidates wrote in general about Muslim family life. The question specifically asked for knowledge and understanding of the specific roles of men and women within the family. (b) Candidates generally responded well to this debate. Those achieving the higher levels were able to examine the pressure and problems caused by cultural and religious differences that impact upon Muslim family life in modern Britain. Relevant examples referred to secular society, impact of Jihad, tensions in the family due to different culture and lifestyle, Western media presentation and the negativity surrounding Islam as a world religion. Alternative views were well presented – candidates referring to the importance of personal jihad, the strength of the Muslim family, the importance of the mosque and the ummah and the strong bonds built through beliefs and practices. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 21 Section B: Introduction to Judaism Q.1 Q.2 (a) Most answers to this question were of a disappointing standard. Many candidates failed to differentiate between ‘nature’ and ‘authority’ and wrote in general terms about the origin and contents of the Torah with basic comments about the written and oral Torah. Primarily, the Torah is teaching – God’s direction for the people of Israel. It outlines the role of God and the obligations laid on the Jewish people – rules to enable the people to attain holiness. Candidates achieving the higher levels were able to go on and demonstrate the authority of the Torah as given by God and its role in synagogue worship, in education, during festivals etc. (b) Although a minority of answers merely reflected the Biblical account of Moses on Mt. Sinai, there was some relevant debate about the authorship of the Torah i.e. the whole Torah written by Moses and the alternative view that it was written by divinely inspired humans. Excellent use was made of critical scholarship – duplication of stories, anachronisms, concepts of God etc. and the Graf – Wellhausen theory involving the sources J.E.D.P. (a) Many answers showed confusion between the covenants. Only candidates achieving the higher levels were able to develop their responses beyond the idea of covenant being agreements with Abraham and Moses. These answers were able to highlight the distinctive implications of the covenant for Judaism viz. Q.3 Covenant renewed with every Jew in every generation. Covenant is conditional – if – then. Israel chosen for a special role in history – holy nation. The role of mitzvoth. Privilege v Responsibility. Purpose of life is to fulfil the covenant. (b) There were some high quality answers to this question. The difficulties and relevance of keeping the covenant were outlined as being outdated and a heavy burden. The observance and relevance of following the mitzvoth and the pressure of living in a secular society sitting uneasily with the idea of the covenant as a privilege! On the other hand, candidates achieving the higher levels argued for the covenant as still being the driving force of Judaism – the strength gained from Torah observance, the promise for the future etc. Some also concluded that the covenant idea was more realistic for Orthodox Jews. (a) Although there were many high quality answers, it was of some concern that some responses showed confusion between the practices observed during Shabbat and those of Pesach. In general, however, responses reflected excellent knowledge and understanding of the significance of the celebrations at Pesach. Candidates who failed to reach the higher levels showed only a superficial knowledge and basic account of the Seder meal without reference to the preparations, the dialogue, the symbolism of the items on the table and the Haggadah. Weaker candidates also spent too long writing about the story of Moses and the history of Pesach. (b) The high level of response to (a) was generally maintained with some excellent evaluative comment with regard to Pesach and other festivals within Judaism. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 22 Examiners were asked to credit the following key areas: Pesach is important because it is a celebration of the past, present and future. Shows the centrality of God’s redemption of Israel. Emphasises the importance of history. Unites Jewish people. Stresses the central role of the family. On the other hand, there were some excellent answers emphasising the importance of Shabbat, Rosh Hashanah and Yom Kippur. Q.4 (a) The majority of answers showed good knowledge and understanding of the importance of family life in Judaism. However, many candidates chose to ignore the key words in the question i.e. ‘family life is changing’. As a result, it was difficult for them to achieve a satisfactory level of response. Key areas of change include: (b) Marrying out. Rites of passage. The relevance of circumcision. Changes in the practice of divorce. Role of women in synagogue worship. Observance of Shabbat. Observance of Kashrut. Excellent evaluation from most candidates with regard to the importance of the family in Judaism viz. Family as a place of learning. Family as a place of support and stability. Physical, religious and emotional base. Importance of rites of passage and festivals. Importance of observance of mitzvoth. Candidates were also able to support alternative strengths within Judaism i.e. the synagogue, the Torah, traditions etc. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 23 RELIGIOUS STUDIES General Certificate of Education Summer 2014 Advanced Subsidiary/Advanced RS3 CS STUDIES IN CONTEMPORARY SOCIETY Principal Examiner: Gordon Reid This year more candidates answered on questions 3 and 4 and, as a result, the overall standard seemed a little higher this year. There were relatively few answers to question 2. Q.1 (a) This question was variably done. Higher range students were able to explain the main principles behind dress, speech and worship and a significant number listed real-life examples to support their answers. There were also good references to legislation, notably the Human Rights and Religious Hatred Acts and comparisons with the situation in other countries. The candidates linked this well with scholarly argument and debate. In the midrange, candidates often allowed themselves to be side-tracked into writing too much on individual examples – the British Airways crucifix incident being retold copiously and some spent unnecessary time on one aspect as the expense of others. A number of candidates failed to write about all three aspects. Greater focus on the real thrust of the question, coupled with relevant scholarship was needed for the highest marks. Lower range candidates offered mainly lengthy narrative accounts of incidents and off-thecuff responses to religious dress codes, the unfairness of legislation and general discussions about freedom of choice, but offering limited relevance to the question. (b) Most higher range candidates focussed on the arguments for and against, highlighting the issues of community, understanding and appreciation of others, Christian values and religious freedom. There was good use of scholarship and discussion on the compassionate influence on harmony and culture, shown by real-life examples. In the mid-range, there were rather more vague references to community cohesion and social harmony and the problems of secular legislation. More scholarship and in-depth analysis would have improved answers. At the lower range, many wrote GCSE-style answers on the pros and cons of community cohesion and religious freedom but many were vague and offered limited supportive argument, repetitious of (a) and largely missing the point of the question. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 24 Q.2 Q.3 (a) This question was less popular than in previous years. The higher range candidates were successful because they wrote about the ways in which one or two named films – most popularly ‘Bend it like Beckham’ and ‘East is East’ – conveyed the various ways in which faith communities are represented. They offered serious scholarly debate and positive analysis on issues such as behaviour, morality and culture. In the mid-range, however, few were able to really analyse how film conveyed faith communities and relationships and the majority of answers relied on re-telling events from the films they had chosen. Few made really successful arguments concerning films and the various faith communities and could have made more of moral and cultural issues. At the lower range, candidates anecdotally recalled the films and tended to offer rather vague comments about religious communities and film in general. Some used rather light-weight films as examples, which lacked the scope and depth needed for this level. (b) A number of candidates wrote significantly longer answers to (b) than they did for (a). That said, there were few really good answers to this question. The higher range candidates were able to offer a reasoned analysis of how effective, or not, films teach about religious heritage and offered a range of film material highlighting the portrayal of religious events – with some interesting comparisons between traditional films such as ‘West is West’ and more modern offerings such as ‘Bruce Almighty’. The better candidates offered interesting evaluations for and against. In the mid-range, there were many vague generalisations about how religious events were portrayed in films like, ‘Narnia’ and ‘The Passion of the Christ.’ However, these were rarely developed fully, and too much narrative was offered, though there were some interesting arguments on both sides. Candidates really need to concentrate far more on what is behind the film, rather than discuss the contents of the film itself. At the lower end, candidates tended to concentrate on re-telling the film narrative and making vague references to the significance of certain incidents, with a lot of repeated material from (a). Few even mentioned the word ‘heritage’. (a) This question was generally well-done and candidates at the higher end clearly understood Marx’s views and linked them with religion. There were well-argued responses on the link to illusion, emotion, economic need and happiness. There were useful examples offered together with a range of scholarly opinion. However, in the mid-range, there were limited scholarly references to religion/ oppression and a general lack of supporting evidence. Most students talked about religion and wishful thinking/hallucination or linked it to poverty, but did not fully support the issues raised. A greater depth of analysis, linked to good examples, would improve marks in this area. At the lowest range, candidates wrote all they knew about Marx and used very general material and basic arguments. Some used anecdotal evidence or stories of greed and suffering, vaguely linked to poverty and oppression, but offered little scholarly depth. (b) There were a number of good answers to this question. Higher range candidates highlighted functionalist explanations beside Marx as well as linking religion to oppression, hope and avoiding the harsh realities of life and double-standards. Some compared Marx views with those of others, such as Weber. However, in the mid-range, criticism of Marx was often more tenuous. There were discussions concerning the development of economic theory, the role of the Church and Marx’s focus on Christianity, but with a lack of sound empirical evidence. In the lower range, students either ignored the need for evaluation or tended to fill their answer with anecdotal accounts and unsubstantiated criticism of Marx. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 25 Q. 4 (a) This was more popular than usual and by far the best-answered question of all with higher range students referring comprehensively and well to James’s views. The very best explained these views on both healthy mind and sick soul in considerable detail, supported by good examples and scholarship and many were able to link the views very clearly with religious belief. In the midrange, candidates wrote down what they had learned about James, but often contented themselves with writing a relatively simple narrative on healthy mind/ sick soul, with little supporting explanation or evidence. Many answers would have been better with a little more understanding and depth. The few students at the lower range offered some disjointed views on the nature of either healthy mind or sick soul but only spoke of James in simple terms and said little about links with religion and the human condition. (b) There were many interesting and well-developed answers to this question. The higher range candidates offered a good variety of examples of different evaluative views, supported by scholarly analysis and viewpoints. Many were able to challenge traditional viewpoints on religion and positivity and compared views by Fowler, Goldman and others. References to world faiths were useful and impressive. In the mid-range candidates offered more general evaluations which, in some cases, needed greater depth and clearer analysis. A number commented on the nature of joy and happiness and compared to issues of sadness and the melancholy, but answers would improve with greater depth of analysis and a better range of scholarly opinion and support. The few lower range candidates concentrated on vague comments on religious beliefs and human emotions, but displayed little relevant analysis and often seemed to miss the point of the question. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 26 RELIGIOUS STUDIES General Certificate of Education Summer 2014 Advanced Subsidiary/Advanced RS3 ETH STUDIES IN RELIGION AND ETHICS Principal Examiner: Andrew Pearce General Comments The paper appeared to be accessible to the majority of candidates with very few scripts at Grade E or below. There were a few outstanding scripts from students who demonstrated a thorough knowledge and understanding of the topics in the specification (many also referred to elements of the AS specification). They also demonstrated the ability to maturely analyse and evaluate different issues. Good candidates were able to provide evidence of independent learning, high levels of ‘SPaG’ and made accurate use of specialist vocabulary. Weaker candidates however, often failed to address the questions set. Some candidates appeared to have rote learnt answers which limited candidates who might have otherwise shown some independence of thought in their responses and should not be encouraged. In their part (b) responses they often gave a list of relevant but very brief points. They would be better advised to develop, analyse and evaluate their arguments in greater depth. Other inadvisable traits shown were the constant use of abbreviations, a lack of capital letters and generally poor grammar. Candidates are clearly reminded about the need for good English and about the quality of their written communication on the front of each examination paper. Whilst some centres made good use of the available provision for those with Additional Learning Needs there were a number of scripts that were almost illegible. If centres are concerned that this may be an issue for their candidates then they should make better use of the available provision. Q.1 (a) Explain the teleological and deontological features of Aristotle’s Virtue Theory. [A01 30] Good candidates understood the terminology (‘teleological’ and ‘deontological’) and were able to clearly define these terms. Many candidates successfully explained that holistically Virtue Ethics is neither a deontological or teleological theory as the focus is on “what type of person am I?” It does however demonstrate aspects of both types of theories - deontological aspects e.g. ‘duty’ based - to be virtuous, to follow the doctrine of the mean, to develop certain virtues, to provide happiness for the community, to reach eudaimonia, etc. It is somewhat teleological in that it is ‘goal’ based – humans aim to achieve eudaimonia, every subordinate aim fulfils a superior aim which eventually leads to eudaimonia, aim to achieve perfect friendships, etc. Weaker candidates simply wrote what they knew about Virtue Theory with little or no reference to the question set. Many appeared to have simply rote learnt their notes and were unable to apply their knowledge to the question. Some candidates (and it was also clear from candidates’ responses some centres) did not understand the difference between the terms ‘teleological’ (aiming for a certain goal) and ‘consequentialist’ (the morality of an act is determined by its effects). © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 27 (b) ‘It is more important to be a good person that to carry out good acts.’ Evaluate this question. [A02 20] Good candidates referred to modern scholars who would support this view such as MacIntyre, Anscombe, Foot, etc. and were able to provide reason and/or evidence to support the points they raised. For example, a bad person can perform a ‘one-off’ good deed, whereas a good person has the moral ‘nous’ to understand why as a ‘good’ person they must act in a way that develops their character. Even if a good person does a ‘bad’ act they will learn from it and develop as a person. Some candidates perceptively argued that a good person should as a matter of course perform good acts. Arguments against the contention tended to focus on deontological approaches such as Kant’s Moral Law and Natural Law both of which focus on performing duty-based acts. Some candidates were also able to link this idea to religious approaches to ethics e.g. the Ten Commandments. Others legitimately referred to consequentialist theories and their focus on the effects of an act being the overriding priority. Weaker candidates tended to list the strengths and weakness of Virtue Ethics with little or no reference to the question or to other ethical theories. As a result of this much of their response tended to be irrelevant. Q.2 (a) Examine Kant’s attempt to define ethics without reference to God. [A01 30] Good candidates were able to show thorough knowledge and understanding of Kant’s theory and were able to demonstrate why Kant rejected a heteronomous approach to ethics. Kant insisted that in order to be moral agents humans had to act autonomously and out of duty, whilst using their ability to reason. However many perceptively noted that Kant failed in his attempt to completely define ethics without reference to God as he said that the existence of God was one of the three postulates of practical reason. He stated that good people must be rewarded and the bad punished in a just universe, therefore (as this is not always the case in an earthly lifetime) there must be an afterlife and subsequently God must exist. Weaker candidates simply wrote what they could remember about Kant’s Moral Law theory without really addressing the question set. Many appeared to have simply rote learnt their notes and were unable to apply their knowledge to the question. (b) Kant’s definition of moral statements as ‘a priori’, and therefore absolute, is unhelpful.’ Evaluate this contention. [AO2 20] Good candidates clearly understood the terms ‘a priori’ and ‘absolute’ and were able to tailor their answer accordingly. Arguments against the contention included the idea that ‘a priori’ moral statements promote the value of rational thought and that universalizing rules and making them absolute provides people with clear guidance. However, some perceptively argued that you need to be in a particular situation before deciding which actions are right or wrong. For example Utilitarians would say that ethical knowledge comes from the consequences of an action. It must therefore be ‘a posteriori’ – after experience. If we take the statement “war is wrong” it could be an example of ‘a priori’ knowledge, yet observation from history shows that may have been times when it was the right response. Weaker candidates often had little or no idea what ‘a priori’ means and often listed the advantages and disadvantages of Kant’s Moral Law theory. They also made little or no reference to the ‘absolutist’ nature of Kant’s Moral Law. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 28 Q.3 (a) Examine the main features of pacifism with reference to one major world religion. [AO1 30] Good candidates were able to define pacifism and referred to the several different forms of pacifism e.g. absolute, conditional, selective and nuclear. They were also able to provide pertinent examples from religious texts (e.g. Isaiah 2v4, Exodus 20v13, Matthew 5, etc.) and religious leaders (e.g. Gandhi, Jesus, and Martin Luther King). A number of candidates were able to link the more relativistic forms of pacifism to some of the Just War principles. Weaker candidates tended to right only about the ‘absolute’ form of pacifism and provided limited responses. Some candidates wrote all they knew about the ‘Just War’ principles with little or no reference to the question. (b) ‘Pacifism does not work in the modern world.’ Evaluate this contention. [A02 20] Good candidates addressed the question and supported their arguments with scholarly opinion. Arguments they provided in favour of the contention included the idea that the Just War principles were developed because pacifism on an international scale fails to protect a nation from attack. Other arguments included Bonhoeffer’s attempt to assassinate Hitler as example that absolute pacifism does not work. He realised that in the face of great evil absolute pacifism fails to protect the innocent from an evil dictator. Arguments against the contention included the idea that pacifism has worked in the past as people such as Gandhi have demonstrated by achieving their goal through non-violent protest. Some candidates argued for a ‘middle way’ and argued that personal pacifism is more practical and realistic than pacifism on an international scale because of the threat posed by nuclear weapons. Weaker candidates tended to focus on just absolute pacifism and to pacifism throughout history rather than in the ‘modern world’ as referred to in the question. Some candidates mistakenly used this as an opportunity to write all they knew about Just War rather than address the question. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 29 Q.4 (a) Examine the medical dilemmas of abortion and the welfare of very premature babies. [A01 30] Good candidates referred to issues raised by both abortion and the welfare of premature babies, but not necessarily in a balanced way. They also supported the points they raised with scholarly opinion including those of Jarvis Thompson, Singer, etc., as well as referring to current medical/legal guidelines. Some noted that what is legal is not necessarily what is considered to be right from a religious perspective. Common features of good responses included the concept of personhood, the rights of the foetus/baby v the rights of other interested parties, the financial implications of these issues and the sanctity of life v quality of life. Some candidates perceptively raised the issue that some premature babies now survive at a time which is currently inside the legal limit for abortion and questioned how can the legal limit remain at 24 weeks? A number of candidates made good use of current and pertinent examples to support the points they expressed. Weaker candidates tended to focus almost entirely on abortion, with many just referring to religious views and as a result only partially addressed the question set. Some clearly were unaware what the term ‘premature’ meant. Others relied too heavily on repetitive examples to illustrate the same point. (b) ‘A very premature baby should never be allowed to die if human intervention could keep it alive.’ Evaluate this contention with reference to at least one major world religion. [AO2 20] Good candidates supported the points they raised with reasons and/or evidence with many referring to scholarly opinion. Several high profile cases of premature babies were used in order to support a number of different viewpoints. For example the case of Charlotte Wyatt was often used to highlight the sanctity v qualify of life debate in this area. Arguments in favour of the contention included the idea that the U.N. declaration of Human Rights states “Everyone has the right to life ….” Arguments against the contention often included religious statements made by some religious leaders that argued against the use of ‘disproportionate’ or ‘extraordinary’ means to keep a premature baby alive at all costs. Weaker candidates often made brief points which lacked further development e.g. “a premature baby might have a poor quality of life” or “every baby has the right to life.” Some candidates referred to abortion throughout their answers as they were unaware what the term ‘premature’ meant and subsequently much of their response was irrelevant. Others simply repeated information they has used in (a) with little or no analysis/evaluation. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 30 RELIGIOUS STUDIES General Certificate of Education Summer 2014 Advanced Subsidiary/Advanced RS3 PHIL STUDIES IN PHILIOSOPHY OF RELIGION Principal Examiner: Delyth Ellerton-Harris In General We would request as an examining team that candidates write the question number on the front of the script. There was a range of scripts with some excellent answers showing a clear understanding, mature thought and a good degree of revision. Many students used AS Religious Studies in their answers showing a comprehensive approach. Pertinent examples and scholarly views were prevalent. However, many part b answers were longer that part a answers. The mark scheme shows the need for appropriate weighting between these two parts and shorter part a questions is a concern. Also, there was a trend this year of candidates in part a giving a summary at the end of that part of information written previously. Whilst it is understood that a rounding-off is intended to show a grasp of the subject there simply is not the time under examination constraints. In fact, it becomes repetitious and does nothing to improve the candidate’s mark. Q.1 When dealing with propositional revelation, we would expect examples of such, from sacred texts, a creed or a Papal declaration, for example. Many understood that non-propositional revelation involved the interpretation of events by humans. Likewise, examples would be expected. Candidates seem to be misinterpreting both Barth and Kierkegaard on occasion as if these scholars were suggesting that faith should be based on reason; absolutely not! It should also be borne in mind that Pascal’s God was the God of the Bible, not the God of the philosophers. More could be used of ‘faith seeking understanding’ with candidates referring to the views of Augustine, Anselm and Aquinas. This would give an interesting point of reference to the direction that an answer could take. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 31 Q.2 There were some long explanations of verification and falsification and understanding was generally shown. However, some candidates failed to mention either analytic or synthetic statements. If they did, many did not relate the verification principle to the challenge that it presented to religious language. Instead of giving ‘general’ examples, time would be better spent using religious examples. Some used the concepts of religious language as analogy, language games and symbol in their responses to part b and this was valid if they referred to the challenge presented to religious language by verification and falsification. It was pleasing to read so many philosophers in part b such as Swinburne, Hick, Hare and Mitchell. However, on occasion the candidate showed, right at the end of their point that they may not have really understood what a philosopher was saying about religious language. So, understanding needs to be checked here. Q.3 Many part a questions were incredibly short and this was a disappointment. Scripts were often restricted to an ‘outline answer’ merely stating that there are two stories in Genesis and referring to Young and Old earth Creationists. Expanded answers included the examination of issues raised by these accounts, the anthropic principle and Intelligent Design to name a few. There was misunderstanding of continuous creation and the anthropic principle. Very few candidates made use of Creation stories from other religions. Of course, there is no compulsion to do this but it would certainly have helped those who had very brief answers. Candidates should also bear in mind that the question was about the origins of human life, therefore references to the Big Bang were not relevant unless they somehow directed them on to the start of human life. Q.4 In part a, references to Ayer, Stace and Hume abounded. But, the general impression was that these had been learned by rote with little understanding present. Script after script followed the same patter and the same words. In that part, some erroneously spent much time on Arminius and/or Pelagius, material suited to part b. Case studies were presented which are normally associated with hard determinism. This is fine if the candidate used these to illustrate what a soft determinist would say about that case. However, this was not always done hence the material was irrelevant. Similarly, they needed to refer specifically to theological determinism. It is not acceptable to use a hard determinist example and manipulate it to an example in which God’s predestination is stated. We often had candidates saying that God was responsible for the kleptomaniac’s behaviour! Part b was also not an evaluation of the validity of free-will or predestination per se. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 32 RELIGIOUS STUDIES General Certificate of Education Summer 2014 Advanced Subsidiary/Advanced RS3 BS STUDIES IN BIBLICAL STUDIES Principal Examiner: Gwynn ap Gwilym There were no candidates for Section A. The candidature for Section B was small, but the general standard was good, with only a handful of candidates scoring less than 47%. There were a few excellent scripts at the top end of the scale. Legibility was a problem in some cases, as was spelling – there were, for instance, several inaccurate versions of the name ‘Ananias’. Students need also to be informed that what is delivered by a preacher is a ‘sermon’, not a ‘preach’ (plural ‘preaches’) and that those who study theology are ‘theologians’, not ‘theologists’. Q.1 Q.2 (a) What was expected was some exploration of how the Jerusalem Church exercised self-control and responded to various problems, e.g. the demise of Judas Iscariot; the Ananias and Sapphira incident; the Hebrew/Hellenist controversy. While most candidates did indeed address these issues, some focused on the community’s breaking of bread and attending the Temple to pray. These things are examples not of the community’s discipline but of its worship. Nevertheless, on the grounds that they demonstrate a disciplined approach to worship, candidates who mentioned them were given some credit. (b) In favour of the contention, there was general agreement that Peter’s position gave the Jerusalem Church the aura of an autocracy. It was, however, unclear why several candidates maintained that his healing of the lame man at the Temple gate was proof of this. Against the contention, there were frequent references to democratic elements, e.g. the election of the Seven, and to theocratic factors, e.g. the casting of lots to appoint Judas’ successor. A few candidates erroneously believed that the church’s care of the destitute was an early form of communism. It was not. There was no attempt at a systematic redistribution of wealth. (a) This, despite being a very straightforward question, elicited only one response, which seemed to be aware of the main points – the title Son of David denotes that Jesus is the Messiah; Son of Man is used by Jesus to emphasise his humanity and later by others to denote Jesus as the representative human being; Son of God expresses Jesus’ divinity. (b) What was expected was some discussion of the historicity of the gospel accounts which may, or may not, have attributed to Jesus words that he did not say, and of whether or not his actions in themselves constitute a claim to be the Messiah. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 33 Q.3 Q.4 (a) By and large, this question was well answered. There were some good expositions of Paul’s activities and writings, the Judaizers’ position and the Council at Jerusalem.The main weakness was to focus entirely on Paul’s mission, all but ignoring the Peter-Cornelius incident and ignoring entirely Gentile converts made by others, e.g. Philip. (b) This too earned good marks for those who attempted it. In favour of the contention, there was a general awareness of Paul’s quarrels with the Judaizers and with Peter and James. Some referred to the Lesser Commission. While arguments against the contention correctly cited the Great Commission and the accomodating decisions made by the Council at Jerusalem, few examples were given of any outreach to Gentiles by anyone other than Paul. (a) There was evidence of a detailed study of the relevant texts in Romans 7:1-6 and I Corinthians 7. Most candidates were able not only to summarise Paul’s arguments, but also to provide some appropriate analysis. The background in Jewish and Greco-Roman culture was well understood, as was Paul’s traditional view of marriage as a divine institution that must not be broken. There was a general awareness that Paul’s views were guided by a mistaken belief in an imminent parousia (the spelling of the word ‘parousia’ was often flamboyantly innovative). Several responses referred to Paul’s alleged failed marriage, for which there is not one iota of concrete evidence. (b) The relevant issues were adequately addressed by most. The argument in favour of the contention, namely that Paul adds a second exception clause to Jesus’ teaching on divorce, was justly countered by an assertion that Paul makes no mention of a first exception clause, that the exception which he makes is aimed at a new dilemma and that he is careful to distinguish between his own teaching and that of Jesus. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 34 RELIGIOUS STUDIES General Certificate of Education Summer 2014 Advanced Subsidiary/Advanced RS3 CHR STUDIES IN CHRISTIANITY Principal Examiner: Gwynn ap Gwilym The general standard was good, with all but one of the candidates scoring over 50% of the marks available. However, the candidature was so small that meaningful comment is difficult. The following remarks may be of some assistance to future students Q.1 Q.2 Q.3 (a) While the threefold ministry practised in the Orthodox, Roman Catholic and Anglican Churches was well understood, there was little awareness that Nonconformist ministers may be ordained to serve a connexion (Methodism) or a congregation (Congregationalism), or that in some denominations (e.g. Presbyterianism), church elders, as well as ministers, are ordained. There was a tendency to put far more emphasis on the pastoral than the sacramental role of ministry. (b) There was a general consensus against the contention. However, it was often unclear what distinguished ordained ministry from lay ministry, especially in traditions that allow lay ministers to consecrate the eucharistic elements. In most traditions, the ordained minister has a special calling to teach, to sanctify and to govern. (a) Candidates who responded were well aware of the First Quest for the Historical Jesus (Reimarus to Schweitzer), and with the Second Quest (Käsemann and Bornkamm), which began in response to Bultmann. There was, however, little exploration of recent developments, the so-called Third Quest, e.g. E.P.Sanders and others. Reimarus’ name was often misspelled. (b) In favour of the contention, the call for demythologisation was well understood. Arguments against the contention were weaker. No one referred to claims made by Jesus himself, e.g. in response to Peter’s Confession, or explored the divine power attributed to him in the gospels. (a) Several candidates made reference to the works of specific feminist theologians. There were some good examples of how the church’s patriarchal and androcentric culture has influenced its scriptures (male language and imagery), theology (the denigration of women) and practice (banning women from ordination). Paul was often roundly criticised for asserting that women should be silent in church, but given little credit for writing that in Christ there is no male or female. There was little mention of female church leaders in the New Testament, or that the discipleship of women in the gospels often excels that of men. (b) This was well answered. Arguments in favour of the contention, namely that feminist theology causes divisiveness, and is itself divided, and that the church has more pressing problems, were adequately balanced with counter arguments based on the claim that the marginalisation of women is unacceptable in a Christian context. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 35 Q.4 (a) The one candidate who responded to this question wrote competently about Liberation Theology, Pentecostalism and Feminist Theology (which was fine, as Question 3 had not been attempted). Oddly, no mention was made of perhaps the most obvious development of all, the growth of the Ecumenical Movement. (b) While there was an attempt to construct an argument here, there was little appreciation of what appears to be the church’s innate conservatism and introverted attitude. Neither was there any mention of its prophetic utterances in the twentieth century on such issues as communism, apartheid, discrimination and poverty. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 36 RELIGIOUS STUDIES General Certificate of Education Summer 2014 Advanced Subsidiary/Advanced RS3 ER STUDIES IN EASTERN RELIGIONS Principal Examiner: Wendy Dossett General Comments The poor use of scholarly sources appears to be a growing weakness. Whilst in previous years it seemed that a small minority of candidates made quotes up, this problem seems to becoming much more widespread. This practice seriously undermines the credibility of answers and centres should warn against it in strong terms. Candidates may be assisted by some training in how to use scholars. More discernment in the appropriate selection of sources for the question set and the argument being proposed should be developed. Candidates could also engage more deeply with the scholarship, developing and reflecting on scholarly ideas. Too often quotes are randomly 'thrown in' without any relevance or context thus making no contribution to enhancing the answers. Candidates should be reminded that part of the purpose of an exam is to provide an opportunity for them to show examiners that they have read and reflected on scholarship, not simply that they can rehearse information or defend arguments. Candidates should be encouraged to draw on their entire knowledge of the specification in order to answer questions. Some answers were needlessly narrow in scope because of a strongly compartmentalised approach to revision (or teaching). The levels of response descriptors encourage candidates to make ‘connections between elements of the course of study.’ The strongest candidates do this as a matter of course, but the lower scoring candidates could be encouraged to do it more effectively than they do. There was less evidence of this year of overly selective teaching, missing sections of the specification, but still little evidence that candidates, other than the very strongest, really see the connections between topics. As in previous years, evaluation still needs to be more tightly organised, and AO2 skills more clearly evidenced. Arguments should be presented, supported by reasoning and evidence, counter arguments analysed, and the piece concluded. Some still take a GCSE ‘arguments for and arguments against’ approach, which greatly limits their ability to demonstrate AO2 skills. We even saw an example of the GCSE acronym FARM (for, against, religion, me) jotted in a margin. Too often answers are 'lost', swaying from a 'yes' argument to a 'no' argument and back again, with an 'I don't know' argument somewhere in between. This often leads to confusion in which the candidate is apparently unsure with what they are agreeing or disagreeing. There were some unfortunate failures to properly take account of trigger words this year, which led to the underperformance of some candidates. These are dealt with in the reports on the relevant questions, but it is a general point that the skill of reading and responding to the question as it is written should be highly valued and highlighted at every opportunity. Overly long introductions to answers giving background information usually mean there is not enough time to address the trigger words and properly answer the question. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 37 Section A: Studies in Buddhism Q.1 (a) Outline the main features of the Pali Canon. This was the most popular question on the paper. It was generally well answered with the majority of the candidates showing satisfactory to good knowledge of the Pali Canon. Few candidates were able to demonstrate the ‘mature’ understanding required for Level 7, however some of the best candidates did outline the significance of features of the Pali Canon and explained some of the different genres found within it, sometimes using appropriate examples to illustrate their answers and demonstrate their knowledge and understanding. (b) ‘The Pali Canon is the most important body of scripture in Buddhism.’ Evaluate this view. The major weakness here was the artificial limitation of answers to a comparison of the relative significance of the Pali Canon and the Lotus Sutra. Some students seemed to think that all Mahayana Buddhists read the Lotus Sutra. Students missed opportunities to talk about a range of other scriptures, or of traditions which eschew scriptures. The better answers demonstrated an awareness of diversity and the complex role of scriptures within Buddhist traditions. Candidates need to be encouraged to think more deeply about evaluation questions and to draw on knowledge they have of the tradition more generally rather than to stick to a simply GCSE style one-dimensional approach. Q.2 (a) Examine who it is in Buddhism that achieves nirvana. The main weakness here was that many candidates, and not only the weak ones, failed to understand the overall requirement of the question. They focused on defining nirvana rather than focusing on who reaches it. The best candidates were able to balance their answer between defining Samsara and Nirvana and using their understanding to show who achieves Nirvana. The majority of candidates wrote about the Arhat and Bodhisattva and the best candidates referred to modern day enlightened beings, celestial Buddhas and the historical Buddha. Some candidates explored the personal identity issue behind the question (i.e. what is the definition of a person when there is no soul), and some candidates explored the philosophical complexities of the trajectory of the bodhisattva (does a bodhisattva reach enlightenment if they have put saving others in front of their enlightenment?) and used Paul Williams to good effect here. Some candidates showed knowledge of the three bodies of the Buddha, and many candidates were able to successfully explore the notion of Buddha-nature . (b) Assess the view that the attainment of enlightenment is an unusual event in Buddhism. Some poorer answers skimmed the surface of this question and failed to go much further than asserting that it was rare in Theravada and common in Mahayana. Better answers not only offered explanations for this view, but presented it in a more nuanced fashion, explaining the diversity within Mahayana Buddhism, drawing on knowledge of Zen and Pure Land from their work in other sections of the specification, and critically reflecting on the problems of defining enlightenment in the first place. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 38 Q.3 (a) Explain the significance in Buddhism of ‘going for refuge.’ Most candidates gave an account of the importance of the three jewels as cornerstones of Buddhism, the formal practice of going for refuge in ritual contexts and its significance for Buddhists. Some of the best candidates wrote very persuasively and sensitively about the emotional dimensions of going for refuge and what it means in the context of a world which seems to be otherwise run on consumerism. Good answers included references to the diversity within Buddhism and wrote about the practice of the nembutsu as going for refuge in the Buddha Amitabha, the Lotus Sutra and the daimoku, and the centrality of the practice of going for refuge in FWBO/Triratna. Weaker candidates wrote only on the three jewels, missing the point of the question which was about the significance of ‘going for refuge.’ (b) ‘The Buddha is the most important refuge in Buddhism.’ Assess this view. Weaker candidates offered answers that would have scored highly on a three jewels question at AS, but missed the focus on ‘refuge’. The majority of candidates however were able to offer nuanced answers which reflected a grasp of the complexity of the notion of ‘Buddha’ in Buddhism. Q.4 (a) Examine the lifestyle of members of the FWBO/Triratna. The main weakness here was a failure to read the question. Far too many otherwise able candidates focused on the history of the FWBO/Triratna. There were long accounts of Sangharakshita’s life story, only tiny parts of which were relevant. The best answers explored what was meant by commitment being more important than lifestyle, right livelihood, the three jewels, the centrality of the practice of certain types of meditation, the role of the emotions in the religious life, spiritual friendship, etc. (b) ‘In trying to appeal to British people, Buddhism has adapted too much.’ Evaluate this view. Mixed answers with many candidates writing about why Buddhism appeals in the West rather than showing how the process of appealing often leads to adaptation. Some candidates were able to refer to traditional Buddhist organisations in the West who strive to preserve the traditions found in Buddhist countries. Some stronger candidates made an argument that adaptation was inevitable and had always occurred throughout the spread of Buddhism, and had a scriptural precedent in the concept of upaya – skilful means. The very best candidates explored the values mismatch between western consumerism and Buddhist ideals. Weaker answers tended to focus on robes and alms-round issues rather than anything more substantial. This question offered many examples of the failure to get off the ground with evaluation and AO2 skills. Lots followed the pattern of ‘yes in some ways Buddhism has adapted (sometimes these ways were listed), but in my opinion it’s not too much.’ This approach led to superficial answers which showed no quality awareness of diversity nor of its implications. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 39 Section B: Studies in Hinduism Q.1 (a) Examine the reasons why it is difficult to determine how Hinduism began. This was a very popular question which was generally well answered. Stronger candidates critically examined the evidence throughout and whether it was significant in determining the beginnings of Hinduism. They also explained problems with the term Hinduism. Weaker candidates just described the archaeological record without the discussion needed. (b) ‘Modern Hinduism is completely different to Vedic religion.’ Evaluate this contention. Most candidates were able to show how aspects the Vedic period underpinned modern Hinduism but how it has also moved on and some also gave examples of later developments, The best candidates drew on their overall knowledge of the specification. Q.2 (a) Explain, with reference to the text, what the Bhagavad Gita teaches about Bhakti Yoga Only a handful of candidates attempted this question but those that did had a good understanding of the place of Bhakti in the Bhagavad Gita. Quotes were appropriate and commented upon. Some candidates linked Bhakti in the Gita with the practice of Bhakti in modern movements such as ISKCON. A very small minority of weaker candidates recounted the story of the Gita and failed to focus on the question. (b) Evaluate the view that the complex nature of Krishna makes the Bhagavad Gita a difficult text. Candidates referred to the theological complexity of Krishna in his role of avatar and Supreme Being. They also explored features of the Theophany as presented in chpt 11. They demonstrated awareness of the different levels of interpretation of the Gita’s story, but also highlighted its popularity and clear messages about dharma, karma and bhakti. This was for the most part a well answered question. Q.3 (a) Examine the relationship between Hindu religion and politics. Very few candidates answered this question. Where it was answered some answered it extremely well, drawing on quotations from Gandhi, knowledge of independence and partition, and notions of a religiously plural India. Some however merely gave a history of Hindutva . (b) ‘Hindutva (Hindu nationalism) has had no impact at all on modern Hindu religion.’ Assess this view. Those that chose to answer this question were able to do so reasonably well, though they tended to focus on an evaluation of the legitimacy of Hindutva rather than assessing its impact on the religion. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 40 Q.4 (a) Examine the challenges faced by Hindu women. This was by far the most popular question on the paper. The question always draws strong opinions from candidates but the very strongest are able to demonstrate some reflexivity by reflecting on gender issues in their own culture whilst expressing opinions about another. It would be good to see more of this, and of an awareness of the ironies and limitations of any culture judging the values of another. It would also be good to see more awareness of the diversity in the treatment of women, and the role of reform groups (religious, social and political) in the reconstruction of gender in India. Strong candidates examined the changes through history of the challenges faced by women. Most candidates saw the role of women negatively and focused on the Manusmiriti, stridharma, arranged marriage, female foeticide/infanticide and sati/widowhood. Knowledge of these was varied and understanding even more so, although generally this was a well answered question. (b) ‘The treatment of women in Hinduism is unjustifiable, especially when Hindus worship the feminine divine. Evaluate this contention. This was less well answered than part (a). Some candidates merely wrote about the treatment of women (often repeating material submitted in (a)) without referring to the feminine divine. The best answers described the ambivalence of goddesses as role models either for empowering women or for reinforcing patriarchy; and explored the complex relationship between theology and practice. Section C – Studies in Sikhism Only one centre submitted candidates who answered this section so it would not be appropriate to report on the standard reached. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 41 RELIGIOUS STUDIES General Certificate of Education Summer 2014 Advanced Subsidiary/Advanced RS3 WR STUDIES IN WESTERN RELIGIONS Principal Examiner: Richard Gray General Comments As in previous years, the paper proved accessible with all questions being attempted for Judaism and the full range of marks being awarded. There was a very low entry overall again this year and again a slight decrease on last year, and this was most noticeable in the Islam option for which only a very few candidates were entered. Not all questions were attempted for Islam and as such it is very difficult to ascertain the success of the questions overall on such minimal evidence. For Judaism, all questions were answered by the spread of candidates, although the most popular questions were 2-4 with 2 (Reform Judaism) being the most answered. There were some excellent responses that selected from and presented a range of knowledge, giving detailed evidence and examples to support explanation. In addition, some evaluations displayed a mature and comprehensive understanding of the issues. With the (a) questions however, there were candidates that, despite presenting the relevant materials, offered a limited focus in relation to the specific demands of the question set. This was sometimes the same with the (b) answers, although as always the strongest candidates focused on the precise view for evaluation. Some candidates tended to have a slightly different focus (possibly prepared) or discussed generally rather than specifically around the issues. Despite this, there were very few answers that had little understanding or no real focus for evaluation. Section A: Islam Q.1 There was only 1 answer for question 1 and this was reasonably weak. Although just a basic understanding of the sources of shari’a law was presented in a there was some appreciation of the issues surrounding the view presented in the statement for (b) such as divine revelation and human rigour in compilation, although there was for the latter no mention or awareness of the isnad (narrator) or matn (text) rulings. Q.2 This question was not answered. Q.3 (a) The question on the role of women was answered reasonably, although it would have been better to draw upon more specific Islamic teachings beyond simply the traditional views that related more to status (more relevant to b). Best answers really focused on the significance of a woman as key to the success of both the family and the wider Islamic community. 3b gave plenty of opportunity to explore the challenges that modern day ‘Western’ life brings, although some candidates drew from examples further afield from the ‘Western’ focus. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 42 Q.4 This question provided the opportunity to explore the early relationship between Islamic principles established by Muhammad as both ‘prophet and statesman’. This relationship was not really explored to its full extent. The b answers were better in that the sense of equality in Islam was used to good effect in relation to democracy, although the full extent of democratic principles across society and religion were not drawn out. Section B: Judaism Q.1 Q.2 Q.3 (a) Very ‘hit and miss’. Some answers were weak and others strong. Best answers had a firm understanding of the historical context and sequence of events as they unfolded in relation to the emergence of Hasidism. Weaker answers tended to miss the significance of the latter and instead focus on tradition differences between Hasidism and other forms of Judaism and associated debates. (b) Some good weighing up of the pros and cons between maintaining a strict separateness and identity against the issues that are involved with assimilation. Good answers overall appreciating the role of Hasidism within Judaism. (a) The question asked for both beliefs and practices distinctive of Reform Judaism. As expected, candidates were very knowledgeable about the beliefs and made good use of the historical background to the emergence of Reform Judaism to illustrate the principles behind these. Quite naturally, these then fed into the practices as clear exemplification. Overall, balance between belief and practice was achieved although it is important to note that in such a question balance is not a necessary prerequisite for highest marks, as long as both aspects of belief and practice were dealt with in the answer in some way. (b) Most answers used the basic notion of ‘law’ or ‘tradition’ in understanding the term ‘covenant’ and points made were very general making the overall argument evenly divided between two main views. The best candidates explored the notion of ‘covenant’ and used it to debate both the contextual and hermeneutical relevance of the issue. (a) There were some very good and detailed answers in relation to Shabbat observance and its importance; however, the question asked for this to be explained in the context of “family life in Judaism”. Unfortunately, many answers either missed this or merely dealt with it superficially, although answers that gave detail in explanation regarding the importance of Shabbat were highly credited. As expected, the highest levels were awarded to the few answers that actually answered the question in its fullest sense by explaining the role of Shabbat in family life. One or two very perceptive observations hinted at ‘family’ not just being the immediate Jewish biological unit but embracing the whole Jewish tradition as the ‘family of God’. (b) Some good answers in general with most focusing on the crucial role a mother has in Shabbat and balancing this against her wider role within and beyond the family. Many answers pointed out that education, personal religious observance and matriarchal lineage were just as vital. Overall, some good, balanced assessments. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 43 Q.4 (a) Despite the question asking for three different views of Jewish suffering, most answers used specific named theologians to highlight each distinctive response. This did not in anyway impair the quality of some answers. A few answers focused on specific responses and then used the theologians as examples. Either way there were some very detailed and highly accurate answers presented. Q.4 (b) As always, with evaluative responses to the Holocaust, it is difficult not to be moved by the personal and reflective responses offered by candidates in response to such a human tragedy. It is a privilege to read and share the thoughts of some very mature and sensitive young minds on this issue. This year was no exception and there were some very considered answers offered that explored the desperation of some to make sense of events and salvage meaning in relation to their faith. This was pitted against the feeling of absolute dejection, horror and disbelief by some to see any value in traditional Jewish beliefs about God and who embraced the view of the futility of religion. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 44 RELIGIOUS STUDIES General Certificate of Education Summer 2014 Advanced Subsidiary/Advanced RS4 HE HUMAN EXPERIENCE Principal Examiner: Karl Lawson General Comments The paper included a range in the quality of responses, showing that candidates found this paper to be accessible. As with previous years, some centres entered candidates en masse for a particular question, and larger centres’ answers were structured quite similarly. This is to be discouraged as this has a limiting effect of directing students to memorize set answers. Some centres, as in previous years, did this to the extent that word for word repetition of examples, scriptural references and comparisons were seen. In these centres better candidates wrote clearly yet without the flair or freedom of expression normally associated with the higher levels. It was obvious that some candidates were presenting knowledge that they barely understood. Many candidates and therefore centres still believe in the old adage ‘never mind the quality feel the width’ or in this case length. Some candidates wrote at great length and included in their answer an A-Z of a particular religion whether it was relevant or not. Many answers especially in the (b) questions were entirely unfocused. It was impossible to follow their train of thought and the relevance to the question was completely lost. The best answers were concise and focused on the question. The majority of candidates used quotations either by scholars or from religious texts. However candidates need to realise that credit is given for relevant quotations that are used in support of arguments or knowledge presented. Many seem to believe that it is acceptable to quote anything from a particular religion relevant or not. Candidates should also be aware of the difference between quoting and paraphrasing. There continues to be a somewhat alarming rise in the level of misunderstanding from many candidates entering this examination. Some candidates wrote as if they’d been misled – Moses according to one candidate received the 10 Commandments on Mount Shanghai and according to a number of candidates the soul enters the body at the moment of contraception!! It was of note that a fair number of students had difficulty with their presentation/handwriting to the extent that writing was often very difficult to read and they should be encouraged to work to their best advantage by ensuring that their work can be read. Another general feature of this year was the tendency to write as much (sometimes more) for part b than for part a. Repetition of answers across both parts was very common. Finally, students using Christianity as a source of scholarship and understanding in their writing seemed remarkably unaware of the significance of the person and work of Jesus Christ. It seems that individuals are being taught that heaven is achieved, or won, by moral action alone that misses much of what Christianity teaches. Again, this leads to a feeling of a diminishing understanding of what makes the world religions distinct and unique. Preference is being shown for mining religion as a source of RS4 examples rather than understanding the wider context of what the religion teaches. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 45 Q.1 Q.2 (a) On the whole answers tended to be descriptive rather than supported through scholarship. Political leadership was not accepted as a form of religious authority. Candidates wrote at length in a general fashion rather than focus on the demands of the higher level descriptor, consequently answers tended to be low level. It was a common feature for candidates to provide in depth explanations of ethical theories as if it was an AS ethics question. This tendency was also true elsewhere, when individuals would describe aspects of religion e.g. what is the bible, who is the pope, what is conscience without applying this to the question. Some candidates discussed how the different forms of authority may give differing answers to the same ethical dilemma and were able to talk about the weight given to each form of authority by different denominations. Some good responses included examinations of the different approaches taken by the current and previous Popes and the current and previous Archbishops of Canterbury, showing excellent awareness of contemporary religious authority. Weaker responses tended to explain the different forms of authority with very brief comments about how these would influence believers. Most candidates were able to identify legitimate types of religious authority. However many were too descriptive and gave a lengthy narrative of how these authorities developed e.g. the development of the Qur’an. The main weakness however was in dealing with their influence on religious believers. Many examples were very superficial e.g. the Bible is used in church services without really getting to grips with how the Bible really influences the lives of Christians. (b) Analysis tended to be limited and examples limited to secularisation of society with regards to issues that affected the general populace or to religious authority that had lost support because of extremist viewpoints such as those represented by the Westboro Baptist Church. Few distinguished the subtleties of Islamic thought. Several discussed religious authority in Buddhism and related it to teachings. Many discussed the influence of religion upon law. Some referred to conscience and most argued against, with religion against science and talked about the decline in religion especially due to scandals and the decrease in tradition. Referring to Buddhism there was arguing about the authority of the monastic order and comparison of Mahayana against Theravada. Again there was reference to the Dalai Lama and Thich Nahn Hahn. Some scripts argued very effectively for and against Hindu and Christian Scriptures with excellent comparison of similarities and differences between them. Weaker responses tended to miss the word ‘authority’ in the question and simply focused on respect for religion as a whole. (a) The standards of response varied. Many seemed to try and cover too much (various typologies of religious experience, combined with a whole range of things from visions to NDEs. Like last year, some candidates did not clearly link NDEs to religion. As with last year, there were also a few inaccuracies – for example, describing and applying James’ mystical experience typology as applicable to religious experience in general. Several candidates tended to bring in a lot of information from the A2 Philosophy specification – i.e., verification, falsification, Aquinas and analogies, Hume’s critique of miracles (applied to religious experience), Swinburne’s credulity defence, Hick’s eschatological verification, etc. Some candidates also provided a paragraph on Freud’s negative psychological view, although answers here tended to be very general and basic here. The best candidates were the ones who took the time to construct a clear introduction in which they interrogated the question; they explained how the terms would be interpreted, and the parameters of their answer. © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 46 Q.3 (b) The most significant issue here was that answers were not always focussed on God. Arguments against referred to James, Freud, delusion, Dawkins. References were made Buddhism not proving God with religious experiences, together with references to Buddha nature, Bodhisattvas and some belief in divine beings in Tibetan Buddhism in more subtle and distinguished answers. Arguments against included references to Schleiermacher. There were a great number of spelling errors of basic words e.g. ‘religeon’ and ‘interiprit’, with no capitals for Bible or God and candidates should be encouraged to learn these essential spellings. Simplistic criticisms of religion by Freud were quoted and explained inaccurately. There was sometimes a large amount of narrative with Mahayana and Theravada getting back to reality. The classic religious experiences were argued about against Swinburne, Freud and arguing about forms of Buddhism. Commonly abbreviations were used such as RE for religious experience and this should not be done. Many references were made to Teresa of Avila, Kierkegaard, Hay and some referred to HD Lewis, Peter Sutcliffe, AJ Ayer, Wiles, Alston. Swinburne’s principle of testimony and credibility were extensively referred to and there was some good use of Tillich talking about the need for revelation. (a) Candidates who had a clear grasp of the difference between nature and purpose tended to do fairly well, even without a massively detailed grasp of all the ideas they mentioned. Breadth was often a feature. However a significant number did not appear to grasp the difference between nature and purpose, which given the fact that this is a pre-release paper I found surprising. A few managed to write an entire essay without including the words nature or purpose at all. Some candidates who had studied philosophy used the Irenaean theodicy to good effect in answering the question. Areas commonly discussed also included the sanctity of life, the mind/body debate, human sin, stewardship and the free will/determinism debate. Better responses included a wide range of quotations from holy books and reference to large numbers of scholars. Educational visits had clearly been a prominent part of preparation for this question and candidates used responses from contemporary religious leaders to good effect. Some candidates made excellent reference to Natural Law and Situation Ethics as part of their answers, but weaker responses tried to combine religious purpose and ethical theory in very tortuous ways that were not entirely convincing. Some candidates stated one purpose of life within one religion at the beginning and proceeded to give a very long response focused entirely on this purpose, for example, stating that the purpose of life in Islam is to follow the 5 Pillars followed by a five page account of the five pillars with no reference to nature of life or any other purpose. Other candidates gave a general response from one religious perspective which, while often accurate, demonstrated no scholarship or diversity whatsoever. Candidates who have not studied Buddhism as part of their other units would often be well advised to avoid referring to Buddhism for unit 4 as more errors in understanding were shown here than in all the other religions put together. One common error worth mentioning was the assertion of far too many candidates that the Christian's main purpose in life is to follow the Ten Commandments. These candidates should be reminded that the teaching in Christianity is actually that the Christians's main purpose in life is to model their life on Christ – but the clue in the word was hardly ever identified as to a Christian's purpose in a way that was not replicated for the Muslim or Hindu. Consequently it was the rare script that got to any concept of faith being part of the nature of life and faith in Christ as the purpose for a Christian as the nature looks to be fulfilled in eternal life. Pelagianism is alive and well in many a classroom! © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 47 Q.3 (b) There was once again a significant amount of mistaken understanding and writing about Augustine and freewill, together with predestination. There was a some misunderstanding about the purpose of predestination and how this though developed through different scholars. Augustine and Calvin’s thinking was mixed up and not clearly discerned. Atheists, Hume, Hick were all referred to. The parable of the celestial city was not used effectively, nor the feat of judgement. Some discussion considered that we are just influence by love with references to the work of the grey nuns of Montreal who provide medical care and shelter for abused women, as well as references to Hick’s soul making. A number of scripts referred to Epicurus and a quote on ancient Greek tombstones as well, together with references to Durkheim and Smart. Stronger scripts points out that the law is influenced by Christianity and stated that people can live happy lives now. Some talked purely about Hinduism in b and the answers were disappointingly limited in comparison to a. Answers comparing Christianity, Judaism and Buddhism were very descriptive and the subtleties of different beliefs e.g. some belief in reincarnation in mystical/orthodox Judaism were not referred to. There was lots of AO1 type of material on the world religions which was put in AO2 and candidates need to distinguish where material should be best put e.g. festivals, karma and judgement. Religion vs ethics was a common theme and the arguing about ethics tended to be very weak indeed concentrating mostly on Dawkins and science, and rarely to anything else. There were lots of references to fundamentalists and 9/11. References to Sheol were often wrong and simplistic, but Karma references were accurate. GCE Religious Studies Examiners' Report - Summer 2014/GH © WJEC CBAC Ltd. 48 WJEC 245 Western Avenue Cardiff CF5 2YX Tel No 029 2026 5000 Fax 029 2057 5994 E-mail: [email protected] website: www.wjec.co.uk © WJEC CBAC Ltd.
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