CAHAYALinguaVol. 01, No. 01, September 2012 BambangYudiCahyono Helping EFL Learners to Develop Ideas in Writing Using the “Cubing” Technique BambangYudiCahyono State University of Malang, East Java [email protected] Abstract The article presents one of the techniques in the teaching of writing, namely “cubing.” As the name may suggest, the technique is based on the physical appearance of idea of a cube that has six sides. The six stages in cubing represents the six sides of the cube. The six sides or perspectives of cubing are: Describe, Compare, Associate, Analyze, Apply, and Argue. This article is also based on the author’s exprience in applying the cubing technique in the teaching of both paragraph and essay writing. It turns out that most of the students were able to apply the stages quite well. From the experience in applying the technique, it is expected that EFL learners, especially those at the tertiary level, and English teachers can use the technique to write their own ideas. It is also expected that this the technique can be shared so that more EFL learners or English teachers can be helped to develop ideas into written products. Keywords:Cubing, cubing technique, the teaching of writing, EFL learners, English teachers INTRODUCTION In the teaching of writing for learners of English as a Foreign Language (EFL learners) in Indonesia, teachers can use various techniques to help the learners write. For example, the EFL learners can be helped to write by using interactive activities such as those proposed by Ariyanti (2010) and Taselin (2010). Ariyanti applied the Think-Pair-Share (TPS) technique to develop the students’ writing ability in terms of generic structures and language features. The result of her research shows that the students made progress in both aspects of writing in their descriptive texts following the implementation of the TPS technique. Meanwhile, Taselin proposed the BACK and DRAW technique in teaching writing. This technique represents an elaborated way of writing proses through Brainstorming, Attaching, Correcting, Keeping, Developing, Revising, Arranging, and “Wonderful,” with its acronym BACK and DRAW. EFL learners may also be helped to write by using techniques based on blended learning of the writing process and application of Information and Communication Technology. For example, Agustin (2011) conducted action research in her secondary school classroom to solve the students’ problem in writing narrative texts. She taught writing using animation stories taken from Bookbox collection published in YouTube, a popular video-based website. She found out that the students could improve their ability in writing narrative texts after being exposed to a series of animation stories. In a research study that I conducted (see Cahyono, 2011), I investigated how the process of writing in the classroom could be integrated with online writing. Thus, I assigned the students to do a series of writing process varying from planning, drafting, revising, to editing in the classroom and asked them to publish their work in their “Album Application” in Facebook. The results show that the students’ final products in writing improved and they apreciated very much the use of the online social network. A more extensive review of various other techniques in the teaching of writing and their efficacy in improving the EFL learners’ ability in writing can be seen in a book that I wrote in collaboration with a colleague (see Cahyono & Widiati, 2011). In this paper, in particular, I will present cubing, a technique in writing which has been introduced in the literature but rarely applied in the teaching of writing to Indonesian learners of EFL. THEORETICAL BASIS Cubing is a technique in writing whose application was inspired by the shape of a cube which has six sides. This technique was introduced by Elizabeth and Gregory Cowan in their textbook entitled “Writing” (Scott, n.d.). It requires someone to see an object or a topic from six different perspectives. Thus, this technique is “a way in approaching a topic, or to combine methods of understanding and treating a topic” (Ferris & Hedgcock, 1998: 106). To apply STBACahaya Surya Kediri 43 CAHAYALinguaVol. 01, No. 01, September 2012 cubing is to write according to the following six stages: Describe it. Compare it. Associate it. Analyze it. Apply it. Argue (for or against it). The “six-stage” formula can be used as a basis to write a paragraph or and essay. “It” represents an object, a person, a place, or an abstract concept. Thus, cubing can be used to write an ordinary thing like a “candy bar” and a complex idea such as “bilingualism”. For example, Leki (1998: 30) provided an example of how to develop ideas through cubing by choosing a candy bar as the “it”. She stated, “First, go and buy a candy bar. Then consider your candy bar from all six points of view. When you have finished, jot down the ideas you found that you like.” Meanwhile, Ferris and Hedgcock (1998: 108) gave an example of how to write about “bilingualism” by using a cubing technique. Regarding the application of cubing, they stated, “thinking carefully about a single issue or problem from multiple angles offers the writer a range of rhetorical directions to follow before planning a piece of writing.” SAMPLE MATERIALS Because cubing can be used as a means to generate ideas and to write them in the form of a paragraph or an essay, EFL learners can be trained to develop a paragraph first and then, when their paragraph is done, they can be asked to develop their paragraph into an essay. When it is written in the form of a paragraph, each side of the cube can be written in one sentence or more. In the following example, each sentence in the paragraph represents each side of the cube. My Keychain shiny, Red and Heart-shaped Since the time I bought the shiny, red and heart-shaped keychain, it has become my favorite souvenir (Describe). This keychain has beaten the one I liked before not only in terms of color and shape, but also because of its appealing written message: “I left my heart in Washington, D. C” (Compare). It always reminds me of the clean and beautiful city which is rich of monuments and historical sites (Associate). As the name suggest, the keychain has a chain and it BambangYudiCahyono connects the frame of the heart and a hook to hold keys (Analyze). Yes, I never want to bring the keychain everywhere I go, or have the intention to use it to hold keys (Apply). Instead, I put is a display item and I guess, if you see it, you’ll leave your heart in the keychain (Argue for). In the following, a paragraph about “Richard Gere,” a famous Hollywood film star, is shown as another example. Richard Gere At the first time I saw this brilliant actor, I fell in love with him immediately! His name is Richard Gere. Richard Gere is different from other Hollywood actors that I have known. He has his own unique side that others do not have, especially his smile. Remembering him, I will remember a good actor and generous man. Richard Gere has acted in some incredible and famous movies such as “Sommersby”, “Autumn in New York”, “Run away Bride.” With his personality, he is absolutely terrific and genius in playing a gentleman in a romantic movie. However, these characteristics are not suitable for other kinds of movies, especially in horror or action. By the way Mr Gere, don’t really think about that because I’m still your number one fan; you still got the magic. (By Ayu Chandra Astari) In the paragraph above, all of the sides of the cube has been stated, regardless of the number of sentences in each perspective. The paragraph contains “Describe” (2 sentences), “Compare” (2 sentences), “Associate” (1 sentence), “Analyze” (1 sentence), “Apply” (1 sentence), and “Argue” (2 sentences). The paragraph, then can be developed into an essay. with the same topic “Richard Gere” (see Appendix 1). TEACHING PROCEDURES In this section, the procedures in teaching the cubing technique to EFL learners are elaborated. In the teaching process, it is necessary to make sure that each of the stages of cubing is elaborated and given a clear example. STBACahaya Surya Kediri 44 CAHAYALinguaVol. 01, No. 01, September 2012 BambangYudiCahyono Pre-teaching 1. 2. Introduce to the students the concept of “cube” by giving them some examples. The example can be a dice or a rubic cube. It is also important to open all sides of the cube to show that there are six sides. Explain that the six sides of the cube represent six “perspective” containing “Describe,” “Compare,” “Associate,” “Analyze,” “Apply,” and “Argue (for or agains it)” (see Figure 1). Figure 2. The red, shiny, heart-shaped keychain. #2 Compare it. For this second side of cube, you need to compare (and/or contrast) the topic with another thing. Are the two things similar or are they different from each other? If so, you need to point this out and identify the connection between the two objects or issues. For example, This keychain has beaten the one I liked before not only in terms of color and shape, but also because of its appealing written message: “I left my heart in Washington, D.C”. Figure 1. The six sides of cubes for the six perspectives in writing. Whilst-teaching 3. Ask the students to pay attention to the stages of the cubing technique. While explaining, give the students example from the first sample material (My red, shiny, heartshaped keychain). The picture or the real object of the keychain can be shown (see Figure 2). #1 Describe it. At this first stage, you should introduce the topic and describe it so that it appeals to (any of) the five senses (sight, sound, taste, touch, and/or smell). For example, Since the time I bought the shiny, red and heart-shaped keychain, it has become my favorite souvenir. #3 Associate it. At this stage of writing, think of or reflect on a pleasant memory regarding the object. You might ask yourself: What sort of impression do I have when I look at the object? Does it symbolize or have a connection with something else? For example, It always reminds me of the clean and beautiful city which is rich of monuments and historical sites #4 Analyze it. For this fourth side of cube, you need to break down, elaborate, or specify the objects. For example, As the name suggest, the keychain has a chain and it connects the frame of the heart and a hook to hold keys. #5 Apply it. After breaking down the objects into some aspects, you need to show the value of the objects. You might want to mention the function, the use, or how the objects could be effective. Tell what STBACahaya Surya Kediri 45 CAHAYALinguaVol. 01, No. 01, September 2012 you can (cannot) do with it. For example, Yet, I never want to bring the keychain everywhere I go, or have the intention to use it to hold keys. #6 Argue (for or against it). For the final side of the cube, you might highlight the strong or the poor feature of the objects. In short, you make argue for or against it. For example, Instead, I put it as a display item and I guess, if you see it, you’ll leave your heart in the keychain. 4. 5. 6. Explain that the combination of all sentences developed through the six phases result in the production of a cubing-based paragraph. Then show the complete paragraph. Give more examples by showing the paragraph on “Richard Gere” so that the students can understand that a cubing paragraph can be developed into an essay by adding some more sentences to the existing sentences. Explain two rules that have to be followed in cubing. To apply this technique, there are two rules that have to be followed: Rule #1 All six sides of the cubes must be used and they should be done in the proper sequence. Rule #2 Move fast. For writing and essay, use between 3 and 5 minutes for each of the first five sides and use five full minutes for the last side. 7. Ask the students to develop their own paragraph using the cubing technique by distributing the Worksheet (see Appendix 2). Set the timing and give 2 minutes for each side of the cube. Post-teaching 8. Remind the students that after they have finished writing all six sides of the BambangYudiCahyono cube, ask them to reread the draft and revise any parts which need to be improved. 9. Ask them to submit the text that they have written. REFLECTION I applied the cubing technique in the teaching of writing at the undergraduate level in the English Department of State University of Malang. I found that in general the students could develop the ideas about the topic they had chosen well. One of the examples of their products of writing using cubing technique is the text on “Richard Gere.” The text fits the six perspectives employed in the technique. In addition, they were also able to expand the ideas from the paragraph to essay form. When looking at the students more specifically, I noticed that the most difficult part of the cubing technique is the third phase, that is “associating.” Some students failed in stating the association which is resulted from the “it”. Thus, the associating part is not about the “it” per se, but about something else that comes to mind because of the “it”. In order to cope with this problem, I advised the students to state the association more explicitly by using words such as remind, remember, make me think, and come to mind. I also introduced the technique in “the Teaching of Writing” Course at the graduate level of students of the same university, where most of the students were English lecturers, English teachers, or English instructors. From the presented materials as I have outlined in the Teaching Procedures section above, they could understand about the concept of cubing and learn one of the ways in presenting the materials. As I also assigned these teachers to actually write about the topic of their choice, they experienced in applying the cubing technique. Later, the teachers’ writing products were submitted to me and I evaluated their works on the basis of the completeness of the six perspectives. Although none of these teachers could get the perfect score which can be gained by applying all the six perspectives successfully, most of the teachers developed the topic with most of the six perspectives appropriately. CONCLUSION This paper has dealt with one of the techniques in developing ideas in writing which is called “cubing”. The name of the technique entails the necessity to include all of the six perspectives in the writing products. Thus, STBACahaya Surya Kediri 46 CAHAYALinguaVol. 01, No. 01, September 2012 although a particular writing product is long enough to be called a paragraph (for example, the paragraph has a topic sentence and has a number of supporting sentences), when one of the perspectives is missing, the paragraph cannot be called as a cubing paragraph. Similarly, when a text is long enough to be called an essay (for instance it contains five paragraphs), it is not a cubing essay when the paragraphs focus on some of the six perspectives. On the other hand, for a free writing, a writer may use some of the six perspectives to develop their ideas to make up an paragraph or an essay. The perspective may also be applied not in the prescribed order. 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