The Talk
Mr Tumnus poured his tea into the cup and sat down
in his relaxing arm chair.
Mr Tumnus was happily drinking his scrumptious tea
when he heard a zapping sound. He turned around
(still holding his kettle) and to his horror his door was
sealed shut and it was ice blue. Then CRASH! A silver
wand with a point at the end appeared who do you
think it is? Mr Tumnus was so surprised he dropped
his tea. “How dare you lose the girl!!” screamed the
Queen ear-piercingly, “W-what girl your majesty?”
replied the terrified Faun. “The girl that you let go…I
am so tempted to turn you into stone but I won’t!”
“There is a beardless dwarf running round my
house and it’s been stealing my food I can’t catch
it but it ran near the lamp post” Added Mr Tumnus
quickly. The Queen was not satisfied, “Is that how
you address a queen!” said the Queen, stomachchurningly. She raised her wand just about to turn
him into stone when “Bang bang!!”
“What was that?” screamed the Queen.
Samuel Davis 3.2.16
Mr Tumnus and the White Witch
As Mr Tumnus sipped his tea, as he usually did each
afternoon in the peaceful atmosphere of his cosy
home, he felt an unusual shiver down his spine.
“Crunch” he heard a branch breaking fiercely outside
the door to his cottage. What could it be? An owl
hooted from the inky blackness outside of the forest
it seemed to say “beware!” Suddenly Mr Tumnus
spotted a light shining through the Window. As he
got up to find out what it was, then his door flew off
its hinges and crashed into Mr Tumnus’ room…
“p –p please your Majesty, I did not mean to let the
girl go”, said Mr Tumnus politely.
Fiercely the witch swung her wand and destroyed
Mr Tumnus table.
Mr Tumnus got really petrified and cried out, timidly.
The White Witch got really frustrated she was about
to turn Mr Tumnus into stone.
Mr Tumnus thought she was going to chop his tail
off.
The White Witch was turning every single thing cold
in Mr Tumnus’ house even the fire into an ice statue.
Zikriya RAMZAN 4SF 3/2/16
Brentwood School Preparatory
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