At least 7 sentences: 1 Topic Sentence 3 Supporting Details 1

At least 7 sentences:
1 Topic Sentence
3 Supporting Details
1 Concluding Sentence
What Mrs. Peko is looking for in a ¶:
*Correct grammar, spelling, & punctuation
*Topic sentence
*Concluding sentence
*Examples
*Transitions
1. Topic Sentence:
2. Supporting Detail or Example:
3. Supporting Detail or Example:
4. Supporting Detail or Example:
5. Supporting Detail or Example:
6. Supporting Detail or Example:
7. Rephrase Topic Sentence:
1. Topic Sentence:
2.
The Backstreet Boys are my favorite music group.
Supporting Detail or Example:
They sing well.
I love to go to their concerts. I’ve seen
them live 17 times in 7 different states.
3. Supporting Detail or Example:
4. Supporting Detail or Example:
They really know how to dance.
5. Supporting Detail or Example:
I have all of their CDs and I listen to
them all the time.
6.
Supporting Detail or Example:
They are also good looking.
7. Rephrase Topic Sentence: The Backstreet Boys are
an amazing group
in my eyes.
The Backstreet Boys are my favorite music group. They are
really great singers. I love to go to their concerts; I’ve seen them
live 17 times in 7 different states. During their concerts, they
really know how to dance. The Backstreet Boys always put on a
good show. Not only are they good performers, but they also
release great music. I have all of their CDs and I listen to them all
the time. Lastly, all the Backstreet Boys are good looking. They
are talented and attractive. In conclusion, the Backstreet Boys
are an amazing group in my eyes.