Watch must have a backlight which can be controlled by the user. The user must be able to push a
"backlight" button and the light must stay on for a short time after the button has been depressed.
Commenté [Lelie1]: the user must be able to push a
"backlight "button and the light must stay on for a
short ERROR: fuzzy term time after the button has
been depressed .
1 Market Needs
Price range $200 to $300
In order to adhere to safety regulations and match the water depth resistance of competitors, the
watch must be waterproof to a depth of 100m. The following table outlines the products of our
competitors in the same price range:
Company
abc
xyz
ddd
zzz
Waterproof
to... (m)
80
100
100
115
The following is a feature needed because of the recent shift in DST. In order to avoid any such
problems in the future, the following is needed:
Watch has feature to automatically update itself during daylight savings shifts. In case of changes in
the date of Daylight Savings Time, this feature must have a "manual mode" whereby the user can set
the DST mode to "on" or "off" without the watch adjusting the time on its own.
The following is in accordance with competition benchmarks. All major competitors carry watches that
run continously for 5 years.
The watch must be able to run continuously for a period of five (5) years with the assumption of one
use of the backlight per day for those five years, each being three hundred sixty-five (365) days in
length.
Commenté [Lelie2]: in order to adhere to safety
regulations and match ADVICE: vague the water
depth resistance of competitors , the watch must be
waterproof to a depth of 100 m .
Commenté [Lelie3]: the following table outlines the
products of our CHECK: possible unclear pronoun
reference competitors in the same price range :
Commenté [Lelie4]: the following is a feature needed
AVOID: passive voice without actor because of the
recent shift in dst .
Commenté [Lelie5]: in order to avoid any such
problems in the future , the following is needed
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Commenté [Lelie6]: in case of changes in the date of
daylight savings time, this CHECK: possible unclear
pronoun reference feature must have a "manual
mode "whereby the user can set the dst mode to "on
"or "off "without the watch adjusting the time on its
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AVOID: sentence longer than 40 words .
Commenté [Lelie7]: all major ERROR: fuzzy term
competitors carry watches that run continously for 5
years .
Commenté [Lelie8]: the watch must be able to run
continuously for a period of five (5 ) years with the
assumption of one use of the backlight per day for
those five years, each being three hundred sixty-five
(365 ) days in length_AVOID: sentence longer than
40 words .