Table of Contents Introduction . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 4 About the CD-ROM . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 5 About the Book . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 7 Example Standards . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 8 at io n Grammar Rules . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 9 Unit Sentences (the grammar rules introduced in each unit are listed in parentheses) Unit 1: Sentences 1–9 (end punctuation, capitalisation, abbreviations, dates, locations) . . . . . . . 14 Unit 2: Sentences 10–18 (using commas in a series) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 17 Unit 3: Sentences 19–27 (articles, singular and plural nouns). . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 20 uc Unit 4: Sentences 28–36 (pluralising nouns ending in y, f or fe) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 23 Unit 5: Sentences 37–45 (apostrophes, possessive nouns) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 26 Ed Unit 6: Sentences 46–54 (personal pronouns, possessive pronouns) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 29 Unit 7: Sentences 55–63 (contractions) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 32 Unit 8: Sentences 64–72 (action verbs, “to be” verbs, helping verbs, verb tenses) . . . . . . . . . . . . 35 ow Unit 9: Sentences 73–81 (comparative adjectives) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 38 Unit 10: Sentences 82–90 (more comma usage). . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 41 nl Unit 11: Sentences 91–99 (quotations) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 44 Unit 12: Sentences 100–108 (titles of works) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 47 ow Unit 13: Sentences 109–117 (homophones)ç . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 50 Unit 14: Sentences 118–126 (avoiding double negatives) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 53 Br Unit 15: Sentences 127–135 (avoiding run-on sentences, making compound sentences) . . . . . . 56 Unit 16: Sentences 136–144 (review of rules introduced in Units 1–15) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 59 Unit 17: Sentences 145–153 (review of rules introduced in Units 1–15) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 62 ke r Unit 18: Sentences 154–162 (review of rules introduced in Units 1–15) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 65 Unit 19: Sentences 163–171 (review of rules introduced in Units 1–15) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 68 aw Unit 20: Sentences 172–180 (review of rules introduced in Units 1–15) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 71 Unit 21: Sentences 180–189 (review of rules introduced in Units 1–15) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 74 Unit 22: Sentences 190–198 (review of rules introduced in Units 1–15) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 77 H Unit 23: Sentences 199–207 (review of rules introduced in Units 1–15) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 80 Unit 24: Sentences 208–216 (review of rules introduced in Units 1–15) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 83 © Unit 25: Sentences 217–225 (review of rules introduced in Units 1–15) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 86 Unit 26: Sentences 226–234 (review of rules introduced in Units 1–15) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 89 Unit 27: Sentences 235–243 (review of rules introduced in Units 1–15) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 92 Unit 28: Sentences 244–252 (review of rules introduced in Units 1–15) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 95 Unit 29: Sentences 253–261 (review of rules introduced in Units 1–15) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 98 Unit 30: Sentences 262–270 (review of rules introduced in Units 1–15) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 101 Answer Key . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 104 © 2013 Hawker Brownlow Education • 9781743305454 • TCR5454 4 Interactive Learning: Daily Sentence Editing, Year 5 Introduction at io n Imagine a classroom tool that could make grammar and spelling interesting and involving for your students, a tool that could get your entire class excited and engaged in learning proper punctuation. Daily Sentence Editing is a program that has been designed to do all of this and more. Compatible with all interactive whiteboards, Daily Sentence Editing offers the many advantages of touchscreen technology and allows your students to participate in learning like never before. Ed uc Each Daily Sentence Editing CD-ROM comes pre-loaded with the entire slate of sentences from the accompanying book. The book contains 30 units worth of sentences, allowing you to teach one unit per week, if desired. New grammar rules are incorporated into each of the first 15 units. In this way, grammar, punctuation and spelling concepts are introduced and then reinforced in a systematic manner, allowing students to practise each concept before learning a new one. The final 15 units of each book and CD-ROM offer a cumulative reinforcement of all of the rules and concepts learned. ow These sentences can be accessed and printed from the CD-ROM or copied from the book. They can be done as in-class work or assigned as homework. Corrections to these sentences can then be made on individual computers or on an interactive whiteboard in front of the class. All it takes is a finger or a special pen, depending on the interactive board you use. You and your students can correct the sentences in several ways: nl ☞ by writing and drawing directly onto the interactive whiteboard ow ☞ by grabbing punctuation stamps built into the program and dragging them over the corresponding errors ☞ by switching to typewriter mode and retyping the sentence correctly on the screen. ke r Br An intuitive array of buttons and menus allows you to do (and undo) every correction quickly and easily and in six custom colours. Best of all, it takes just one quick click of a button for teachers and students to see the correct answers. And as an added teaching tool, another touch of a button will show students the locations of the sentence’s errors without revealing the actual answers. © H aw In addition to the sentences that come pre-loaded on the CD-ROM, the Daily Sentence Editing program allows you to create and save thousands of custom sentences or paragraphs. With one time-saving touch of a button, the program can even make incorrect versions of your custom creations by adding punctuation and capitalisation errors for you. An “Instant Sentence” function allows sentences and paragraphs of up to 200 characters in length to be made instantly, giving even greater in-class flexibility. Teachers can use this tool to tap into their class’s creativity with student-generated sentences and peer-editing exercises. Best of all, installation is a snap. In no time, you will have the power of interactive learning at your students’ fingertips . . . and yours. TCR5454 • 9781743305454 • © 2013 Hawker Brownlow Education About the CD-ROM 5 About the CD-ROM The real flexibility and interactivity of the Daily Sentence Editing program shines through in the resources included on the CD-ROM. ☞ Install the CD-ROM at io n Just pop the CD-ROM that accompanies this book into your PC or Mac, and you and your students can begin editing sentences at individual computers or on the interactive whiteboard in your classroom. (Quick Tip: If needed, step-by-step installation instructions are provided on the inside front cover of this book.) ☞ The Main Menu ow Ed uc Once you have installed the CD-ROM, the Main Menu will appear on your computer screen or interactive whiteboard. (Quick Tip: The Main Menu will open up in full-screen mode. If you wish to resize the Main Menu screen, hit the ESC button. This will allow you to adjust it as needed.) From the Main Menu, you can access all of the features and resources available in the program. To get a detailed explanation of these features, click on the Guide button. This will take you to the Daily Sentence Editing User’s Guide. nl Main Menu Screen ow ☞ The User’s Guide aw ke r Br Everything you need to know in order to use and operate the Daily Sentence Editing CD-ROM and program can be found in the User’s Guide. This is also where you will find useful reproducibles that you may wish to hand out to your students. These include . . . • a one-page handout of the editing symbols used in the program. These marks are available as punctuation stamps on the editing screen for each sentence. • a one-page overview for each of the 30 units in the book. Each overview includes a list of the grammar rules and concepts that are introduced in the unit, as well as a list of the rules reviewed in the unit. A complete list of the ready-to-be edited sentences in the unit is also included here. iew Unit 7 Overv Editing Marks H The following editing marks have been included as stamps on each side of the editing screen in the Daily Sentence Editing program. Delete Place this mark over a letter or group of letters to show that they should be deleted, or taken out. lisation rules, uation, capita in a series using commas with dates and locations, d: ed nouns to make Add s to most Place these lines under a lowercase letter that should be capitalised. Add es to Lowercase Use a before Use an before words them plural. that end make plural nouns in s, ch, sh, x a consonant that begin with words that begin with a vowel or and z. sound. © Use this mark to add a comma wherever it is needed in a sentence. . Add Full stop ? Add Question Mark ! Add Exclamation Point : Add Colon ޕ މ Ǝ 73. 7 3. andy andy fryed the ich and two apple box of biscuit es buttons was come 39. both shirt win a race blue r 76. tany tanya nya as au aunt unt is b bakei ng two cake Insert (Top) e class this Spring in the oven ing two scienc teach 40. mr terry is Add Apostrophe 77. i wond derr if th thatt hatt b burd Use this mark to add an apostrophe in a contraction or when showing ownership. a egg 41. allie had and two slice fast 78. kim and lleah ea e ah Copyright © 2013 by Hawker Brownlow Education. 9781743305416 TCR5416 All rights reserved. Reprinted from Interactive Learning: Daily Sentence Editing, Year 1. Melbourne, Vic: Hawker Brownlow Education, www.hbe.com.au. To the extent not permitted by Part VB of the Copyright Act 1968, and subject to the terms of use for this resource, the purchaser of this resource may photocopy this page for their teaching purposes. Reproduction authorised only for use in the school site that has purchased the book. © 2013 Hawker Brownlow Education • 9781743305454 • TCR5454 flys north every of bacon for break lion and monkey three 42. we saw two 14 present past tense. nt sizes and colou in three differe Use this mark when introducing a list of three or more items. Use this mark to add quotation marks at the beginning and ending of a quotation or the title of a story, poem or song. es to form the ed to form the oil whenever he 75. a alllll o off the th dress Use this mark to add an exclamation point at the end of a sentence or quotation. y to i and add y to i and add at the store Use this mark to add a question mark at the end of a sentence or quotation. Add Quotation Marks chips in hot change the for lunch 74. 74 4. n nicks ickks Mother crys two 38. please buy nant and y, tences ten s sandw 37. seth ate a with a conso Unit 13 Sen Unit 7 Sentence Use this mark to add a full stop at the end of a sentence or abbreviation or when writing initials. Place this mark above and in between a space where a letter, word or punctuation mark (such as an apostrophe) needs to be inserted, or added. If a verb ends with a conso nant and y, tense. change the If a verb ends . a vowel sound Insert (Bottom) Place this mark below and in between a space where a letter, word or punctuation mark (such as a comma) needs to be inserted, or added. Add Comma Unit 13 Ov erview end punctuatio nouns, using n, capitalisatio a and a an, irregu n, nouns, time, lar plurals, apos abbreviations, verbs, “to be” trophes, posse verb , verb tense verbs comma usag ssive nouns, e, plural s personal prono uns, action Rules Introdu duc d Rules Introduce Capitalise Place this mark over a capital letter that should be lowercased. Rules Review iewe as s, using comm viation nouns, time, abbre : end punct Rules Reviewed a elephant at the Zoo Editing, Year 1. Daily Sentence use for this Interactive Learning: to the terms of Reprinted from 1968, and subject the book. All rights reserved. Copyright Act that has purchased 5416 TCR5416 Part VB of the the school site Education. 978174330 To the extent not permitted by only for use in om.au. by Hawker Brownlow Reproduction authorised Copyright © 2013 Education, www.hbe.c teaching purposes. Hawker Brownlow this page for their Melbourne, Vic: may photocopy of this resource resource, the purchaser dress dre ressd up as winter witchs last hallow een Copyright 21 © 2013 by Hawker Brownlow Education Melbourne, Vic: Hawker Brownlow . 9781743305416 resource, the Education, www.hbe. Edu TCR5416 All purchaser of rights reserved. com.au. To the this resource Reprinted from may photocopy extent not permitted Interactive Learning: this page for by Part VB of their teaching Daily Sentence the Copyright purposes. Reproduct Editing, Year Act 1968, and 1. ion authorised subject to the only for use in terms of use for the school site this that has purchased the book. 27 6 Interactive Learning: Daily Sentence Editing, Year 5 About the CD-ROM (cont.) The User’s Guide on the CD-ROM contains a lot of important and helpful information. However, you may wish to immediately begin editing and/or creating sentences with your students. The following Quick-Start Guides will help you do just that. at io n Quick-Start Guide for Editing Sentences uc 1. Launch the Program: Load the CD-ROM and launch the program. If needed, follow the installation instructions on the imprint page of this book. ow Ed 2. Click the Start Button: You can access the Start button from the Main Menu screen. (See the graphic to the right.) This will take you directly to the editing screen. (See the graphic at the bottom of the page.) ow nl 3. Edit the Sentences: Write, draw or paint directly onto the screen. You may also use the punctuation stamps located on either side of the screen. Grab, drag and drop these stamps onto, above or below the sentence to correct the errors. Br 4. Check Your Work: Click on the Show Errors button to give your students hints about where the errors can be found in the sentence. Click on the Show Correct button to reveal the correct version of the sentence. © H aw ke r 5. Edit a New Sentence: Click on the Next button to continue the editing lesson with a new sentence. TCR5454 • 9781743305454 • © 2013 Hawker Brownlow Education About the Book 7 About the Book There are two main components to the Daily Sentence Editing program: a book and a CDROM. These two parts were designed to be complementary, but they can also be used independently of one another. This exercise book is a good place to begin the program. It contains the following: at io n ☞ Tips for Using the CD-ROM (pages 5–6) The following two pages include tips for getting started with the CD-ROM that accompanies this book. ☞ Standards and Benchmarks (page 8) uc The grammar rules and concepts reviewed in this book meet example standards and benchmarks for year-level appropriateness. Ed ☞ Grammar Rules (pages 9–13) ow nl ow This book includes a comprehensive list of the punctuation, capitalisation and usage rules students will need to know in order to correct the sentences. New rules are introduced in each of the first 15 units, allowing students to learn increasingly difficult grammar concepts at a measured pace, while reviewing the ones they have previously learned. The final 15 units serve as a cumulative review of the rules learned in the first 15 units. ☞ Ready-To-Be-Edited Sentences (pages 14–103) ke r aw ☞ Answer Key (pages 104–113) H A complete answer key is included at the back of the book. This key contains the corrected versions of all 270 sentences found in the book. © (Quick Tip: Each answer in the key represents the best or most-likely correction of the sentence. In some instances, however, there may be alternate ways in which to correct a sentence. Please accept suitable responses when comparing student answers to the key.) © 2013 Hawker Brownlow Education • 9781743305454 • TCR5454 9 The following pages include most of the grammar, usage and punctuation rules students will need to know to edit the sentences in this book. The units in which these rules are applicable are listed in parentheses after each rule. Rule 1: A sentence is a group of words that tells a complete thought. Capitalise the first word in a sentence. A statement is a sentence that tells something. Put a full stop at the end of a telling sentence. (Units 1–30) • My dog is black. Rule 2: A question is a sentence that asks something. Put a question mark at the end of an asking sentence. (Units 1–30) • Do you have a pet? Rule 3: Capitalise the word “I”. (Units 1–30) • Scott and I are friends. Rule 4: Nouns are words that name people, places, things and ideas. (Units 1–30) • The doctor sat in his office. • Honesty is the best policy. Rule 5: Proper nouns name specific people, places, things and ideas. Proper nouns begin with a capital letter. Common nouns are not specific. Common nouns do not begin with a capital letter. (Units 1–30) • That dog is named Max. (common noun = dog; proper noun = Max) • The Johnson family went to New York on holiday. Rule 6: An exclamation is a sentence that shows feeling. It ends with an exclamation mark. (Units 2–30) • We won the game! Rule 7: A command is a sentence that tells someone to do something. It ends with a full stop or an exclamation mark. (Units 2–30) • Please print your name. • Get out of the street! Br In all, there are 270 sentences, each of which contains multiple errors. These sentences are divided into 30 units, which allows you to teach one unit’s worth of sentences per week, if desired. Each sentence in the book is followed by plenty of space for your students to rewrite the sentence correctly. These pages can be copied and used as in-class assignments or sent home as homework. Grammar Rules Grammar Rules © 2013 Hawker Brownlow Education • 9781743305416 • TCR5416 104 Interactive Learning: Daily Sentence Editing, Year 1 Answer Key Unit 1 Sentence 1: I see Tom. Sentence 2: We saw Lucy. Sentence 3: I will go with Dan. Sentence 4: We can play with Jill. Sentence 5: Do you see Rex? Sentence 6: Can Bill get the ball? Unit 2 Sentence 7: Give me that toy. Sentence 8: Megan and I are friends. Sentence 9: My team won the game! Sentence 10: The house is on fire! Sentence 11: Will I see Ann on Friday? Sentence 12: A new season begins on Thursday. Unit 3 Sentence 13: My teacher is Mrs Smith. Sentence 14: Is Dr King your dentist? Sentence 15: Miss Peters has a dog named Penny. Sentence 16: This Friday is 30 September. Sentence 17: My uncle lives in Perth, Western Australia. Sentence 18: Will you visit New Zealand this summer? Copyright © 2012 by Hawker Brownlow Education. 9781743305416 TCR5416 All rights reserved. Reprinted from Interactive Learning: Daily Sentence Editing, Year 1. Melbourne, Vic: Hawker Brownlow Education, www.hbe.com.au. 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Reproduction authorised only for use in the school site that has purchased the book. 14 Interactive Learning: Daily Sentence Editing, Year 5 Name: _____________________________________ Date: ________________________ Unit arnold and sam went to the super market 1 Sentence at io n 1 _____________________________________________________________________ uc _____________________________________________________________________ Unit 1 Sentence 2 ow nl sandra went to the dentist on monday ow Ed _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ Br _____________________________________________________________________ aw ke r _____________________________________________________________________ Unit 1 Sentence 3 © H there is an enormous spider on yur back _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ Copyright © 2013 by Hawker Brownlow Education. 9781743305454 TCR5454 All rights reserved. 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Reproduction authorised only for use in the school site that has purchased the book. 28 Interactive Learning: Daily Sentence Editing, Year 5 Name: _____________________________________ Date: ________________________ Unit my favorite Summer activities are swimming hiking and going to albert park 5 Sentence at io n 43 _____________________________________________________________________ uc _____________________________________________________________________ ow Ed _____________________________________________________________________ Unit 5 Sentence 44 ow nl mr donald smith teaches english at stephen foster secondary school in auckland new zealand _____________________________________________________________________ Br _____________________________________________________________________ aw ke r _____________________________________________________________________ Unit 5 Sentence 45 © H sarah gave away two old backpacks when she finnished year fiv at linden junior school _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ Copyright © 2013 by Hawker Brownlow Education. 9781743305454 TCR5454 All rights reserved. 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Reproduction authorised only for use in the school site that has purchased the book. 44 Interactive Learning: Daily Sentence Editing, Year 5 Name: _____________________________________ Date: ________________________ Unit judy cryed i think my new bike has been stoled 11 Sentence at io n 91 _____________________________________________________________________ uc _____________________________________________________________________ ow Ed _____________________________________________________________________ Unit 11 Sentence 92 ow nl does anyone know the combination to this locker asked owen _____________________________________________________________________ Br _____________________________________________________________________ aw ke r _____________________________________________________________________ Unit 11 Sentence 93 © H joey asked how many student is there at our School _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ Copyright © 2013 by Hawker Brownlow Education. 9781743305454 TCR5454 All rights reserved. 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Reproduction authorised only for use in the school site that has purchased the book. 86 Interactive Learning: Daily Sentence Editing, Year 5 Name: _____________________________________ Date: ________________________ Unit have you ever herd of bodys of water called the yellow rivver and the black see 25 Sentence at io n 217 _____________________________________________________________________ uc _____________________________________________________________________ ow Ed _____________________________________________________________________ 25 Sentence 218 ow nl the rio grande river seperates mexico from the united states of america Unit _____________________________________________________________________ Br _____________________________________________________________________ aw ke r _____________________________________________________________________ 25 Sentence 219 © H no i cant play know i have too watch my little sister until 330 Unit _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ Copyright © 2013 by Hawker Brownlow Education. 9781743305454 TCR5454 All rights reserved. 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Reproduction authorised only for use in the school site that has purchased the book. 102 Interactive Learning: Daily Sentence Editing, Year 5 Name: _____________________________________ Date: ________________________ Unit 30 pablo picasso is probabley the most famos painter of the hole century Sentence at io n 265 _____________________________________________________________________ uc _____________________________________________________________________ ow Ed _____________________________________________________________________ Unit 30 Sentence 266 ow nl some of picassos paintings look strang but they is interresting when you studdy them _____________________________________________________________________ Br _____________________________________________________________________ aw ke r _____________________________________________________________________ Unit 30 Sentence 267 © H to of his gratest paintings are guernica and the guitar i think their amazeing _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ Copyright © 2013 by Hawker Brownlow Education. 9781743305454 TCR5454 All rights reserved. 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